#i am rewriting it eventually dw!!!!!!
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pinep-ne · 18 days ago
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most of all, though, he wishes for nothing.
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excerpts from a fic i .deleted.
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phenphoenix · 10 months ago
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in your au does velvette reveal that vaggie is an angel instead of sera?
It's still Sera and Emily for Al and Anthony. Charlotte is suspicious from the start, but it doesn't get confirmed until a confrontation with velvette. However, it's more like the scene between Mammon, ozzy, and Fizz. Where Vel tries to hold leverage over vaggie but fails. For those that don't watch helluva and have no clue what I'm talking about, here's a quick dialog rewrite -
Vel: because if you try to leave I can tell everyone here that-
Vaggie: What!? That I'm an angel!? WELL. I. AM!
[All surrounding demons gasp, some yelling out "I KNEW IT" others staring in shock and horror]
Vel: ah....well...fuck ya dirty bitch.
[Vel leans in coming face to face with vaggie. Charlie's grip on her staff tightening]
Vel: You are gonna regret revealing that Vag.
[Vel starts to laugh slowly, backing away into the growing crowd, creating a thick cloud of magenta mist. Eventually leading to the disperse of the crowd as sinners start to cough from the polluted air.]
I will draw this dw
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anglercrit · 1 month ago
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I never was a fan of CherriSnake at all, mainly because the dynamic was just like the others: Fanservice.
None of these characters have the SPARK needed for me to ship them. I usually don't mind canon ships as I would with crackships. But I've recently gotten to the Demisexual Logic when it comes to shipping characters.
Like if a character has a few moments type deal. Or if it's a Dating Sim type deal where 3 integeral moments happen for me to consider "Hey, this is it. This is ENDGAME" but with Saint Repentious in Heaven (That was not an idea of mine, I wanna clarify his name was inspired by Journey of The Light and possibly others.) and Cherri in Hell. I don't think that CherriSnake is ever gonna be a thing.
It was just like Martha and Mayberry. Completely there just to go "There, you got your silly WLW relationship! Now shut up!" It feels like any remote relationships that doesn't consist of MLM or Gay is often the centerpoint of attention while the other letters of our rainbow is often sidelined for Men.
I mean, I myself is Orientated AroAce. The feeling of validation is wonderful! But the fact Viv does not give a damn other than to reuse plots from Yoai BL infuriates me.
This was not a main point of mine, as this is leading to an idea, I wanted to say my peace before introducing this.
I am working on a Hazbin Hotel Rewrite (It's commonly referred to as "Left To Rot" but the working title is Redeeming The Hotel AU or known as Hazbin: Rewritten.) currently, Sir Pentious is the main characters love interest (as with Husk) and the storyline is:
Main Character is not Charlie, as she eventually loses her "interest" in the Hotel, after being belittled, taking after her father.
This leads to the MC taking over as the actual owner/founder of the Hotel in her wake, attempting to try and help with regaining Charlie's hope.
The Hotel is called Happy Hotel, but as time went on, she refers it as Hazbin as she believes it was a space for "has beens" and not "want to bes"
So the way I had the MC know Sir Pentious was interacting as his "Guardian Angel" (Although at this rate, the MC was being created in the Angel Ethereal pool) she was his guardian angel. When she was left in Hell, and she meets with Sir Pentious he recognizes her which led to Husk getting jealous.
Poly, Husk x OC x Pentious?
ok I have a lot of thoughts here (dw all of them good) so I'll just bullet point this
I honestly REALLY like the dating sim approach- I feel like cherrisnake COULD have worked, I like the idea of pent trying to seem cool to impress her but it really did feel fanservicey. And Cherri being in Hell and Pentious in heaven has some angst potential but I doubt it'll be explored.
even as someone who admittedly enjoys some trashy gay romance novels, yea the way viv handles her gay relationships frustrates me. It's probably because she hypes up how good the gay rep will be and then just recycles Hayes code era stereotypes.
your rewrite seems neat! I like the idea of someone else trying to reignite that hope in Charlie- honestly instead of the war against heaven the season 1 finale being Charlie beginning to lose hope and the hotel gang working to convince her that a sinner COULD be redeemed would be a sweet moment. Also I'm all for poly relationships so hell yea
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LORE POST #1
Redesign of my Chat Noir redesign to go together with my rewrite which I will talk a lot about under the cut. I'm pretty set on this design too and will link it at the beginning of the fic when I get ten chapters completed and ready to post :3
What is different from canon, why I am changing some things, etc. Feel free to just read my thoughts around the design if you want to read my fic without any guidelines of what I'm planning so far for him
BUT I won't spoil anything major dw
The design:
I've changed chat noir's design so it would blend in more at night. The preferred the sleek black tones over the glow in the dark green I gave him before. I take a whole lot of inspiration from the PV of miraculous ladybug in these designs so of course his hair is still floofy.
When initially designing Chat noir, the tips of his hair are darker since I really liked that trait some other redesigns gave him so I included it without making his whole head of hair black.
I got the idea to base his design off of rust and RAN with it! He still has some greens in his design but they've shifted closer to yellow green and gold for the color scheme!
I've liked the idea about the clothes in the hero designs looking more cloth like too so I've incorporated that into the design with pockets and a zipper cause I can. Since Adrien has been thinking about being a superhero for a while, his design is more thought out were it could be.
EDIT: Forgot to mention!! Ladybelle has a lil more black in her design and now chat has a little more red! :3 matching
I saw some concept art of Chat Noir with a hat at one point and I loved it so much I wanted to keep it in to a certain extent, SO Marichat moment all the way. I decided to add the bells back into his design (I missed them) and took inspiration from @/callimara's Chat Noir design.
Chat noir will still be very cat like in this and I thought it'd be funky if his feat were like a cat's
Overall it isn't much of a design change for some aspects but I really like how it turned out!
K story stuff now:
I want to get ten chapters done before I post chapters again on the first fic since I don't think I did the best job introducing what I've changed. This isn't talking about adrien agreste's life this is more his role as Chat Noir. I'll get to adrien when I get his redesign sheet finished
(any part of this section might be edited in the future but this is basically part of my ideas)
Honestly a whole lot of the fic(s) is(are)
Fault of canon? -> Solution
I've been developing for two years now and I just gotta write it out... Entirely hinging on my execution sigh
Chat noir's powers are now on a more equal footing with Ladybug's (Ladybelle now) and I'll get more indepth when I post Ladybug's redesign and stuff but basically
The miracle box is a mix mash of several miraculous's from other boxes due to an event Guardian Marianne caused. Supposedly, she unleashed the Rabbit kwami of time on the guardians in an act of defiance. Resulting in rips in time eating away the members present for such an event, burning to death in fire. Marianne managed to run away with the miraculous's she could obtain and do her best to live her life knowing what she's done.
The Ladybug and Cat miraculous are a duo pair. Strongest when used in a partnership. Many are tempted to use both at the same time for what the powers merge to become but this isn't the strongest path.
Tikki and Plagg are soulmates you could say. They aren't really romantic but they are bonded for life. Never one without the other.
They are the only miraculous pairing in the new mixmash of the guardian box. Eventually Marianne gives the responsibility to Master Fu, her lover, before the rabbit comes after her as well.
I'll talk more about the changes I've made to Tikki's character in Ladybelle's post but as a part of the Miraculous cure, something all pairing miraculous's have to purify evils and darkness, it requires both parties to be present. Usually some form of touch or communication initiates the Miraculous cure
"Pound it!"
Chat noir can use his power alone to defeat evils but it's like cauterizing a wound. He doesn't figure this out for a bit.
I'll talk more about the miraculous cure in Ladybelle's post
This is still a part of the story I'm working on but:
the miraculous of destruction gets more powerful the longer the user wields it. With techniques and familiarity, Chat noir will be able to make black pockets of nothing just from a touch. Yes I'm including this from the concept art. Though he'll only get this later down the road
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Chat noir is still a form of escapism to Adrien and part of his character arc is realizing he can't rely on it like that. A large part of adrien's character I'll talk about in adrien's post ties into Chat Noir too
I'm still figuring out some plot points for him so this is where I'll end this off. But I will say I'm planning on Chat Noir getting more time with the kwamis and more of a role in the Guardian arc and guardian stuff in general
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dannifielding · 10 months ago
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Hi are you still here? I just want to say that I've just got into the fan fiction side of the DW fandom (stumbled across you on the fanfiction.net app) but I've been a fan of the show since I was about 6 years old. My favourite Doctor will always be Eleven, and I was wondering if you were ever going to bring him back? You did a fantastic job and I cried (I know, sad right?) You would make my say if you brought him back and I particularly love your writing of long stories and chapters. I hope you get this. Please let me know, you will make my day!
Hi :) I feel like I should put a warning for entitlement on this reply :) I am still here, as in I am still alive.
I'm still very much trying to write Danni, but it's not what it used to be.
I still have plans up to and including the 60th specials and I want so badly to get it out.
And I really wanna continue Echoes and the rewrite of the original trilogy (which would include Eleven, who is also my Doctor XD).
The reason I dropped off is twofold. One, which I own, is my mental health. I started taking medication and my motivation tanked.
But a large part of it was feedback. Or, rather, lack thereof.
People's interactions tanked. I still got favourites, and follows, but actually reviews actually took a nosedive and it's just so hard to keep going when no one wants you to do so.
When you're speaking into a void and no one replies, why would you keep talking?
If you're speaking and people reply, then suddenly they don't, what else does that say but they don't like your words?
So, to be honest, Danni mainly lives in my head now. We spend so much time together, but none of it gets put down. It's taken me almost the last two years to get to the point where I can open Word and actually put my thoughts down again.
I can't promise updates anytime soon. But eventually I want to finish Danni's story. Or, at least, finish the stories I've got going.
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scp-ao3-author · 1 year ago
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Hi! Do you have any stories about the origin of something you wrote?
OH OH OH OH OKAY
SO UHHH LETS JUST DO THEM ALL
Lightning:
Lightning was my first attempt at a 100k fic. its currently on anonymous because I have a firm belief that A Certain Author is reading my work and that is very scary. There was an actual draft that made it TO 100k, but the plot sucked?
Like I detailed every moment of Y/N from birth to SCP Foundation because I was a very "Grrr... Accuracy" guy. and then I had an entire subplot between y/n and kondraki, which inevitably fails. there was a whole thing of Y/n's brain being fried from amnestics and someone was like "this is actually stupid :/" so i ended up rewriting it with whatever I pulled from my ass.
Confession booth:
Confession booth was supposed to be a crack fic. surprise surprise. my (ex) friend wanted me to write a crack fic of clef in a priest outfit. but he didnt seem... like the kind of guy to just do that for no reason? at least back then I figured him to be like that guy. since then, I have grown to learn more about clef so in hindsight, I would like to rewrite some of my older stories to be more fitting. But I made a plot to rationalize Priest Clef and well. thats what was created.
Hold The Line:
I was maladaptive Daydreaming to Give and Take by Poor Mans Poison and i thought I was going to die if i didnt share the thoughts in my head.
The Only World You Know:
I got tired of Iceberg being shitty and pathetic with no backstory. Had to flesh that sad little milkshake
Take the seeds:
Fin.
Memory:
I always had the headcanon that Francis had legitimately worked in the Foundation as a system well before taking control as Dr. Clef. But one of the questions that always begged in my head was like... How would he have reacted with the other staff? I experimented with Kondraki, who also went through his original change. The idea of Kondraki being part of the Montauk Procedure and spiraling actually came from Author Kondraki's old blog. the rest I pulled out my ass with the help of a few friends. The original story was supposed to be "They hate each other, but begrudgingly are forced to get along. thats it." but people were ADAMANT about making them fall in love. it was mildly uncomfortable but i rolled with it and i will admit. I kind of like how it turned out apart from the last chapter.
Its Like Dying:
I wanted to write a followup to Memory about how Francis affected Kondraki's life in such a way that when Kondraki finally realized he cared, it had been too late to actually follow through on that. He takes this out towards Clef, the man who suddenly appeared after Francis Dissapeared, but eventually learns to accept when something is gone forever, and hopefully when i get around to it again, he will move towards actually accpeting clef into his life, not knowing that hes the only other person who will treat him like hes not insane for knowing Francis Existed.
I Am Ready To See You Again:
its supposed to be like a ressurection idea not FOR resurrection but similar. they wake up, everything is new and strange. and different. but as they explore the memory of their previous lifetime goes away, and they have to adjust to their own world. It centers mainly around A Major what with their multi universal knowledge? the idea was SUPPOSED to be that at least. I got the intro out and.... I lost all my notes apart from "Gears finds 173"
They Dont Even Have Dental:
This was supposed to be a silly joke seminar about Clef hating the GOC for not having dental, a running gag between some of my friend groups. its like an unspoken agreement. that place sucks, they dont have dental. and then i planted a cute little bit of plot at the end for an... upcoming show im working on. dw. ill share the script.
when its done.
Francis Disturbed:
OH BOY OH BOY OH BOY THIS IS WHERE IT GETS INTERESTING.
HHHH OKAY SO.
this was built off of a million headcanons swirling in my little head, but the final headcanon that broke the google doc was this:
Francis was a premature baby.
lemme break this one down im a bit excited lol
in 4231, Francis loved lily. alot. and it hurt him because she hurt him, but he stayed nonetheless. that, plus having DID? probably meant that it was VERY unlikely he had a stable family life growing up. dads out of the picture, type greenery adapted at a young age... you know? it adds up. then there was the stuff about agora. I thought...
I honestly thought that Agora was laying the self-shaming and "I should have killed my son" stuff a bit... i hated it. Like it was good but it rubbed me the wrong way a little and after a moment im like... "What if... i worked with that idea?" and created a story about Francis' childhood dynamic. this is where it gets fun:
Ive been planning the next chapter for a little while now, but this all happened during a time period in which I did not EXIST, so i have to go around my writing carefully. the next chapter is going to be the after effects of what... Agora... Did... and after THAT we get to see Francis entering the GOC, and what happened to him in the Ichabod Campaign.
it gets a little funny there was going to be a bit where ukulele gets a balloon tied to his arm so his team can find him off-missions.
Now. this wont make sense, until you SEE the chapter but... I cant continue writing the story until I get a physical copy of IT by stephen king....
and i dont live near a library or book shop OR thrift store that has it.
And I hate amazon.
A Different Shade OF Green:
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH OH GOD
HHHHH lemme grab my notes uhhhh ADSOG has been planned for a WHILE
ACTUALLY HERES THE DRAFT
FAIR WARNING: TREAT this story like it is NOT the actual bones of ADSOG on AO3. I kind of just kept rambling, I wanted an arc for a story where Blackbird takes an interest into Francis, but it ultimately doesn't work out, ukulele appears more. Adam is a dick. Ten is more active in the story too. there's SO many differences between this and the actual story. AND the format is FUCKED
ADSOG was supposed to be a single one shot, where seven confronted clef about his issues. She responds to his dickish behavior by shoving a spoon into his face, and he replies by biting into it and slowly chewing it while they make eye contact. that was ALL the story was supposed to be. then i was like "I like the barber scene." that is actually a one shot on its own that i just blended into the draft and main story. there are SO gonna be more scenes in the main story where francis is stimmming. at some point or another though i had at one point built SO many one shot stories on them that i just said fuck it and made it all one big story and
oh my god.
you are going to cry at the ending.
Orangechild:
uhh this was actually a full narrative but then i hit up @tickedtimebomb and was like "give me a line that fucks and ill turn it into a poem" and that's how I got "and then i fed the world my soul" WHICH IS ALSO REFRENCED IN THE DRAFT OF ADSOG
idk if anyone's noticed or not but i have a million little red strings tying all of my story together. :D
intervention:
fin
eye for an eye:
Eye for an eye was created with the ongoing concept of "4231-a comes back, how will clef react?" but instead of the "he would cry and die" I decided to go for a "He's going to be pissed."
it is a vacation:
I had a silly idea of the doctors being sent to antarctica and i played with it a little with mattastr0phic because I wanted myriad in the story. I had another friend who helped me with the iceberg bit too. <3
in cod we trust:
I just wanted to give Cimmerian some shit.
apples and oranges:
I take commissions for writing. I was paid to make this, that doesn't mean I don't love it though i have EVERY chapter preplanned. as of right now, unfortunately, I am on pause for my writing because I burned myself a little bit on regular writing and am just sticking to script writing for some *cough* shows.
Ketchup and Mustard:
I am preparing for something called a "Kingson bomb" which is: whenever i have an extra amount of money laying around, I grab some artists and nab them to make Kingson commissions, thus making a small vault of Kingson art. when I reach an unholy large amount, I'm going to blast @finiffy with it and fucking kill them. one of the people I commissioned said something along the lines of "They are so ketchup and mustard to me" and well. I had to do it.
Bear your tombstone:
The idea for this story was actually the fact that it was supposed to be its own chapter in Francis disturbed, but i got WAY to excited making it to the point I just uploaded it on its own.
Seventeen minutes:
i wanted to autism code kondraki and have others see my vision.
Something New:
I want a story similar to Memory, I am specifically making this in honor of Amones, who has absolutely INCREDIBLE art!!!!!
THEY ARE ALSO MAKING A REALLY COOL VIDEO GAME AKFSJDKLF
tales of a greyhound stranger:
THIS story was inspired by 4231 and personal experience, but not in a sad way. 4231 briefly mentions that Francis rides on the Greyhound, a bus station that's prominent in Europe and America. I also ride greyhound (and will be going partially across country in about a month) and sometimes when you use the bus system, you come across some... REALLY interesting people. I think Francis had a beautiful time traveling and ended up having fun once in a while with others. I think he deserves nice things.
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yuerikoko · 2 years ago
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Just gonna share a CC canon divergence AU I wrote couple years back where Lars is the mole instead of Angela. It has since been deleted because reasons (it’s all chill now dw). Also a few changes because my writing… wasn’t the best back then. VERY Angela centric with not very subtle gay because that’s what 13 year old me thought was a great idea.
So basically;
-Everything happens as it is except that Lars gets exposed as the mole. This, in turn, leads to Angela taking a break as Lars did in canon.
-Initially, I wrote that Lars’s mom was the one who took her in since she still had no parents and had the thought of him joining SOMBRA for shit and giggles. Since that probably wouldn’t make sense, I’ve now decided that she would probably return to Busan for a bit and kinda relax there for the time being, and that the triplets were being taken care of by a distant relative instead of Lars’s mother.
-There, she’d probably start questioning everything at first; since Lars would still kinda be the “artistic” type maybe she’d question the likelihood of hidden meanings in love songs/poems he’s made or even stuff he’s said to her in the past. At this point everyone checks up on her, especially Carmen, Marina, and sometimes Michelle and Ripley.
-Michelle also apologized for “ruining her perfect family”. Angela eventually accepted it; though later on realized something.
-Meanwhile in Antarctica, Grace is hired as the new forensics expert; but just like in canon, did autopsies for now.
-Sanjay got bored and ended up doodling and stuff. He ended up drawing a picture of a typical nuclear family (essentially a mom dad and kid family).
-Upon seeing the drawing, Carmen smiled. At the family part, but not exactly the part where she has to have a husband in order for it to be the perfect family. (Personal hc time: I, too, am a firm believer of lesbian Carmen propaganda 🙏)
-In this AU, she had internalized feelings for a certain someone; which she essentially repressed out of respect for them. Always tried to keep herself busy with other important stuff, but after the whole ordeal happened, she now has mixed feelings about them. Still decided not to tell anyone, though, due to her expecting potential rejection.
-Some time later, they get to Argentina. Angela also comes back from her hiatus (which in the original fic, ended up in her and Carmen confessing and then kissing.)
-I didn’t write anything after that, though, but just imagine Carmen getting out of her comfort zone in order to take Angela on mini dates and them overall just showing a lot of concern for each other when dangerous missions arise. Esp for Carmen, since she used to be a no-nonsense, implied lone wolf character in the beginning. She would also literally punch anyone who messes with her gf fr.
Basically that’s kinda it,,, yeah I’m aware it’s not the best, but it was honestly one of my favorite ideas and fanfics amongst all I have written back then that I felt like sharing. Will I rewrite this? Probably not; but the idea lives on here now.
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bushkit · 4 months ago
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Yo! How you doing?
I'm really interested in your rewrite, but i have a question about the age of ur character Jaiden. (Srry if i spelled it wrong, or got the name wrong altogether.)
Why have you made your character so young? (13 yrs old) dw i dont mind! I am just rather curious.
(Thk u if you answer! and have a good day 👍😎)
Thank you so much for the question! I have covid right now but I'm slowly getting better haha
I made her so young because I feel like younger characters have a lot of interesting opportunities to learn and grow from their experiences and become mature once they reach the end of their stories. Jaiden is going to start off obviously immature and childish but eventually become more grown up in her mannerisms due to what she will go though and how the daemos influence her.
This is super inspired by tv shows who have young protagonists, such as Gravity Falls, Jujutsu Kaisen, and Avatar: The Last Airbender. I also think kids are just fun to write.
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thesternest · 8 days ago
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Hello everybody who reads callbringers and those who im going to convince to read callbringers eventually I am here to announce that I have just uploaded the first batch of the callbringers rewrite over to Campfire for you to read So go do that @il3x @nightlist @dragonwishes @mixmangosmangoverse @arg0t @dw-flagler @vikugnavikugna @estavionpira @cpericardium @ameliacf13
ok so for anybody who wants to read callbringers here is a link
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askfallenroyalty · 4 years ago
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tbh i think the main reason for people misinterpreting the story/how you write the characters is because a lot of it was just,,, not written. there’s a sizable chunk of stuff that we’re supposed to know about that just happened off screen, which makes a lot of things just not make sense when looking at the overall story :/
Mentioned this 2 asks ago but again, stressing this comic is all done by me and for free. I can only do so much with the free time and energy I have.
-regarding the time between the timeskip:
Will be covered in the rewrite to be a better experience. Frankly that was so hard to deal with that I gave up on the blog and considering that as an alternative, I'm fine with the messy timeskip for now. Esp when I know it'll be fixed
-chrisrmas is way more time sensitive to being around Christmas but I was very busy this year compared to last year, and I was too ambitious. I'd rather drop a storyline than die trying. Plus, I wasn't getting much response and wasn't happy with how I was writing it and I tend to panic when that happens. With IRL, the time limit, and my not-satisifed with my writing, I'd rather just drop it than work when I'm uncertain. Ultimately I figured I could cover those details later in story with Mew Mew but like, nobody asked Mew mew things? So now I think it's safe to assume not doing this arc was for the best. People don't care. 🤷
-dw arc will be a fangame. I don't want complaints on that when it's literally a huge project and treat for you guys. Dw was worthwhile for character development, but overall a filler arc in terms of characters who don't come back once its over. I'll be real, I don't want to be making comic forever and would rather just do this to finish the blog with. 
Like I know some of these are excuses and that's frustrating, but I really did intend to focus on those things but I am but one man. I want AFR's main plot to finish so I don't need to worry about it anymore. I'll be back in school next year. Angel's Lullaby needs more attention eventually. I have to cut content because things get in the way or it's turning out impossible for me to continue and sadly, it’s just like that sometimes.
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l-u-v-d · 4 years ago
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hey folks! to keep this,, as short as possible, ive been pretty lacking in the executive function/mental health/motivation departments as of late, but am trying to get back in the swing of things- particularly in regards to the au I want to put on paper somehow (no clue how that’s gonna happen yet. fic? art? both??), but dont have a good starting point for.* the whole thing is pretty much ready to go, and i dont think im gonna change the stupid name (/j because actually the hordak loredak is a bop), but i honestly dont think im going to be able to get the ball rolling entirely on my own.
in short, if anyone’s interested, i’d really appreciate some asks with questions/thoughts about the au! (dw about coming up with any if you just.. dont have them though lmao) i’ll include a bunch of non-spoiler-y context below the cut, and i’ll be trying to give every ask a relatively detailed answer, unless i happen to get a ton?? either way, i’ll definitely get around to it.... eventually, in the vague future- but having some discussion and prompts to go off of could probably be a huge help in that process, too ^^
so!! the hordak loredak, my beloved pet project au that aims to fill in the blanks of Hordak’s history and also rewrite way more than half the show in the process. the vague plan so far is to follow Hordak, from the moment he gains consciousness in the galactic horde to some time “post-canon,” and is guaranteed to go a little apeshit bonkers on the characterization in some ways because im embracing the fact that this is just. the story i want to do. it probably wont feel much like canon because it’s not supposed to, and it’s fine if it’s not your thing!
some important things do stay consistent: hordak is a defect, and gets banished to etheria; adora is she-ra; micah gets sent to beast island; shadow weaver joins the horde, albeit slightly later than she does in canon; entrapdak is... an entire thing.
the differences are where it’s at though: catra and adora are never placed under shadow weaver’s care; scorpion people lore also happens, and hordak winds up caring for baby scorpia; the galactic horde gets such a huge overhaul im gonna give it its own paragraph.
the galactic horde is fucking bonkers huge here, easily billions strong, and we take a way deeper look at how that works (ie... barely). prime is still at the head, but even with the hivemind, his grip on the clones falters in some ways. it’s a system running way, way beyond max capacity, to the point that even prime has to be willing to let things slide or turn a blind eye on occasion in order to keep things moving. the vast majority of clones are defective in some way, but it’s rarely immediately noticeable (if it were, they would’t still be there). i also do some fun and wacky things with hordak’s defects, specifically- including eventually losing his legs up to the knee (prosthetics headcanon my beloved <3), going blind at a very inconvenient time (and then rolling a 20 for luck for the next multiple weeks), and good ol’ organ failure. tl;dr for that paragraph - galactic horde culture is fucked up, and hordak even moreso.
i’d dump more but ive been trying to ‘finish’ this post for hours and i just need to call it done at this point, hopefully that sounds intriguing?? maybe?? shrugs
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krazy-ky-sta-hatter · 3 years ago
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I wonder if you will ever write any more DW stories especially with RTD coming back? The show under Chibnall has become woke garbage.
Hey!
I'm actually in the very slow process of rewriting all of my old works for DW as well as updating and finishing some of the unfinished ones. I started writing for the fandom over 10 years ago, and my writing has improved a lot in that time, so I want to update some of my favourites to my current standard.
I also have many fics that I never posted that will hopefully eventually make it. However, I am not a fan of Moffat and his era, and stopped watching the show entirely shortly after the 50th. So, I will continue to write solely in the RTD era ignoring everything following that.
Not sure if I will get back into watching RTD's new run considering I've missed so many seasons, but I do continue to write this fandom. Though, you probably won't see any for a while as I no longer post to FF.net and I am going to post each one to AO3 only once they're completed.
But one day...
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furbyloveb0t · 6 months ago
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oh my god i was writing this whole big thing but Tumblr glitched so i have to rewrite it again. YAY. /sarcasm
anyways, i don’t want anyone to feel like i’m bragging or trying to flex my new acquisition. my relationship with computers/laptops has been ever changing since my childhood and i just wanted to document some of the devices i’ve used in the past. this laptop will be my first ever personal computer/laptop that is JUST FOR ME.
- my first computer was a secondhand gaming PC my dad purchased from a coworker. my dad, mom, brother and i all used it. my dad used it for working from home, so i didn’t really have much access to it during the week (except after 5pm). my brother and i spent countless hours playing ROBLOX, Minecraft, Pet Pet Park, Club Penguin, and basically any game I could get my hands on. it ran Windows 7 and it’s still my favorite OS. a really cool thing is that Windows 7 didn’t require a virtual box to play old/retro games. it automatically just made itself compatible with the game, which was great because i was still using it when i was 11 and getting into retro/older games (SimTown, Roller Coaster Tycoon, Captain Bible, Zoombinis, etc.). my dad took it in the divorce then eventually donated it lol. still mad about that.
- i had some access to a lot of laptops over the years, but they were my parents’. they both worked from home a lot (my dad has done so for the past 15 years) so obviously having a stable PC/laptop was important. most of them were low quality, due to my mom and brother and i’s lack of computer knowledge back then. one in particular could barely run Spotify, ON A GOOD DAY. it was basically impossible to play any games except Club Penguin and Movie Star Planet. ROBLOX was a headache. Minecraft wasn’t even considered an option.
- when i was in middle school, they gave everyone my grade or older in the district access to Chromebooks. this was great, but obviously i couldn’t play any games. everything was limited. when i got grounded i’d use the school email to email my friends haha. i couldn’t customize it at all, and stuff such as YouTube was even blocked. i gave this back the end of my senior year.
- i purchased an iPad maybe a year and a half ago now. i’ve been using it as my laptop up until this point, but obviously some stuff just isn’t formatted for iPad. i love my iPad to death and use it to draw, play ROBLOX, play Minecraft, watch YouTube, write, etc. there is nothing wrong with my iPad, there are just so many games out there i want to play but are PC/console only.
- my brother got a gaming PC for Christmas a few years back, and it was supposed to be for both him and i. it has not worked out this way. it’s a fantastic gaming PC, especially for around $500, but he is on it all the fucking time. eight hours a day during the summer, probably about four hours a day during the school year. i have to beg him to use it, because my mom isn’t interested in getting in between our fights about it. i am so so so excited to finally be able to use my own laptop. i am so happy it’s unbelievable.
ALSO, i just want to note that i am grateful for every laptop/computer i’ve ever had access to. i know a lot of people don’t even have one laptop or computer, much less one of their own, and i am glad my family is in a place where we can buy these things. however, owning my own personal PC/laptop has been a dream of mine since i was a kid. the customization, the freedom of being able to download however many games you want because you no longer have to share space, i am so excited. i will take pictures of it when i get home from the store, dw. i am so so so excited. thank you for everyone who helped give me advice on what brand/specs i should be looking for. thank you world. thank you universe.
oh my god guys i get the gaming laptop soon I AM SO EXCITED
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drawlfoy · 3 years ago
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awh why is it going to be the last draco x reader fanfic you're going to write? :( i really hope it's because you want to try something new/take a break, and not because of those weird pathetic anons you have been getting lately :\ (whatever is the reason i will always support you and wait for you to come back <3)
also, bestie i am not gonna lie it's been HARD to stop myself from reading the first part of the finale i am kind of suffering here lmfao, but i know it will be worth it when the 2nd part comes out and i get to read them together hehehe
sending you another hug because i have to end my messages to you with a hug lol x
-🌟
i've been playing around with the idea of at least taking a long hiatus/leaving this community in general for quite some time, even before the weird anons! honestly, if i wasn't planning on it before, i probably wouldn't ever stop writing on here just out of spite lmfao...anyways the reason why is because i've really wanted to expand into longer slowburn pieces that focus a lot on character development/would require me to mature in my writing, and i feel like finding an audience who wants that in reader insert is hard (esp in the draco fandom rn bc i feel like there's just so much smut that it's hard to compete). obviously i don't just write for an audience but it is definitely more fun to know that what i'm posting is what people want to read, so i've been thinking about moving over to ao3 and writing dramione.
i'm not sure though! i haven't written much for dramione before and i would like to eventually rewrite some of the series i have going on here. one thing i do know is that i'm not abandoning this blog and that i'll be around for quite some time :) i probably just won't post anything here until i have a good portion of the work done, but i'll keep everyone updated ;)
also dw you'll be able to read both finales soon!!! it won't be long at all and im so excited to share it with you fkdjs;afljsad
also ty for the hug if you feel anything its bc im sending you a hug right back
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knoxhq · 4 years ago
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► ( rudy pankow & cis male ) according to the school’s records, knox drury is a 22-YEAR-OLD senior studying political science, and he lives over in moriarty. he is a gemini, so that must be why others describe him as dignified, humorous, cowardly and naive. when i see him, i’m reminded of walking into class an hour late with sunglasses on, the feeling of anticipation as you wait for a firework to fully blossom, the sound of party music leaking through the walls of a bathroom. ( gibby, 20, they/them, est. ) ◄
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hello everyone !! so i won’t even lie to u guys, i am NERVOUS and it’s literally only bc this is the first group i’ve joined in so long like dfdhkjsfjad the last group i was in was almost a year ago but i ended up having to leave due to personal reasons and didn’t get to write so like !!! idk i’m excited !! anyways w that in mind, pls bARE with me bc i have like one (1) braincell and i forgot how to write intros. anyways enough of me rambling, lemme give you knox !!
also this is a bad intro pls dont judge me im trying 2 like. rewrite what i had b4 the storm took it out n like, i lost the braincell
basics. 
full name: knox hale drury.
nicknames: drury.
age: twenty two.
gender and pronouns: cis male and he/him
sexual & romantic orientations: bisexual, biromantic, femme leaning.
major: political science.
housing: moriarty.
backstory.
triggers: implied bullying, police and incarceration ( dw i didn’t make him jj 2.0 ).
nobody gets to pick their beginnings. it’s something that people tell knox all the time, hell, it’s plastered in every stupid coming of age movie, book, film, everything he’s ever seen. you don’t pick who your born into, you don’t pick who you get to be. and to an extent, he does think that this is true but he can’t help but wonder if maybe, if people could pick, if they’d pick differently. because he knows he certainly would pick differently.
it’s not that he even came from a bad home - hell no, he had the most loving family ever. his mother was a saint, a warm sensation bubbling up in his chest when he thinks about her warm cookies or the way she tried to still tuck him in even as a teenager. his father had his flaws, we all do, but he was a good and honest man. hardworking, he showed knox what that stupid american dream is that everyone likes to preach about. 
no, it had nothing to do with them but rather the overall opinion on him and his family. see, the drury’s weren’t well liked - they were seen as lowlives and as shady, the kind of people who you’d only go to if you wanted to get stabbed in the back. generations of drury’s fit this narrative but no, his father was determined to change that. and so was he, even if nobody around him seemed to want to give him a chance. 
knox would go throughout school with this name attached to him like a dagger to his throat - whisperings in the hallway of, “oh, my mom said the drury boy might be steal things if you let him over,” and other random, rude remarks. of course, the people that get close to him know better - they see him for who he really is.
that person is knox. he’s a golden light, often more selfless than the rich pricks who run that small town. he’d give his jacket or umbrella to people even if they didn’t ask if it just so happened to be raining outside, and despite the fact that his family didn’t have a lot, he’d still go out of his way to try to give when he could. 
he eventually graduated high school - one of the top people in his class due to his father’s encouragement, and after a lot of debate, settled on attending haddon university - miles away from that sweet, small little hometown he knew, but a fresh start where he didn’t have to work for anything. he could just go in being him, with nobody attaching a new narrative to him. it was what he wanted, what he dreamed of.
and he loved it. his first semester there was memorable as he found himself surrounded by new friends and people he even considered family. back home, however, things were slipping.
the drury family was never rich, ever by any means, but business was low. nobody wanted to go there, fearing that his father was just as shady as his grandfather. as things got worse, his father had to resort to other needs - stealing, lying about taxes, and doing everything he could to try to make it by. 
it finally caught up to him when knox came home for spring break - red and blue lights flashing outside as loud noises went on throughout the house, until finally someone swung knox’s door open and briefly blinded him with a flashlight, demanding to know where his father was. by the time knox got a grasp on the situation, his father was being rushed off in the back of a cop car. 
he plead guilty almost immediately and for the next few months, knox did school from home to stay with his mother. it was then that he switched his major from what had initially been just a vague, business degree to political science in hopes of going into law after getting that degree - a way of changing things, of helping people so they never got to that point. 
for now though, he’s gone back to haddon’s campus where he study’s away and occasionally finds himself slipping and partying, glasses always covering his eyes as he slinks back class, getting almost nO sleep every night.
study.
so i need u to know right now... knox is baby, FDSHJDFSHAJK
like he’s not by any means like he’s kinda a gross dude like, absolutely randomly burps n is like lol oops n shit, very little manners, will grab clothes off of the floor to put them on kind of man BUT LIKE as a whole ?? he means very well FDSJFAHJ he’s very gentle and will sit there and admire flowers on a bush and then get mad if u pick one bc ur hurting it like. he’s baby.
he also is very loyal to the ppl he’s friends w tbh like. damn he will never leave ur side
that also makes him kinda... super, actually, naive. you see, while knox is incredibly loyal, he often finds himself ignoring signs of toxicity for the sake of preserving a friendship - he fights for people who won’t fight for him, he lets people back in too easily, he just. he sees the good in everyone, even if there isn’t any good.
regardless, he’s not easy to just... manipulate to an extent. while he’ll fall for you being innocent, you can’t ever try to make him think he’s something he’s not - he knows his intentions and he knows they’re usually pure and he’s not gonna fold for anyone if it comes down to him or them. 
bt like again he’s baby
like i dont think he ever gets mad but damn when he does its probs scary as shit like bc he nEVER gets mad !!! hes like. a golden retriever ig
if u cannot tell im trying really hard not to make him too much like jj bc i realize that might be a big thing ppl do n i dont think jj is baby bt like. knox? knox is baby DSFHJKFDHKJ 
he’s just. idk. he’s very protective and cares about his friends a lot and will walk you home even if you went to HIS place and like is always ready to give you a jacket if it’s raining and he’s just lowkey a big, kinda dumb at times, teddy bear and i think that’s valid tyvm 
wanted connections.
friends. — please. knox will lOVE ur muses just let him be their friend tyvm plus he’s a bit of a social butterfly now and i think he’d honestly have a lot of friends.
best friend. — i’m gonna keep this to one muse bc idk i think it’d be really cute if knox got to have his own like, ride or die where they care abt him as much as he cares about them and they’re always there for each other and like !!! that’s cute !!! also found family trope bc i think that is.. again, kyoot, ty
frienemies. — so these are always like, super fun to plot out and i think there’s a lot to work w here... like give me ppl who are happy that knox is loyal and would defend them but would push knox to the side n not do the same for him... also friendships where knox fucked up ?? where knox, despite his goodness, couldn’t keep his mouth shut and revealed a secret to their friend group bc u see he can kinda be a gossip fsjfdaskj. idk there’s a lot u can do n i’d love to brainstorm!
enemies. — pls. like. we can brainstorm this too so i dont just ramble but pLEASE?? please.
flings. — honestly romantic ships are not the point of rps but romantic flings and stuff can be really fun to plot and i love getting soft about them so like ?? idk dude lets fling it up n have muses date for two weeks n then break up like thats swexi, dramatic, 10/10
exes. — i mean this is kind of like flings but i have an idea... give me an ex of knox’s who really was like. everything knox wanted. hell, the two had a really good relationship - they were in love and etc etc gushy details but they ended up breaking up bc they just. they weren’t meant to be! as sad as it is like it was as simple as that! and then the angst comes in after they break up bc god they still love each other so much but they just aren’t meant to be and they see them with other people and oh it just hurts but like, bonus points if they manage to become good friends even after this !! (sidenote, idk i wouldn’t want this to be a full ship tht gets back together bc idk i think there’s a bittersweetness in stuff like this n its just. like. its ok !!! idk !!! )
roommates. — and they were roomates- fdshjkfdsahjk
other things. — honestly these are half assed plots but i’m down for anything !!! i’m still fleshing out knox a lil too bc i really did make him on the spot so pls bare w me :)
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vypridae · 6 months ago
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OK OK HI DW ABOUT HOW LONG IT TOOK TO ANSWER I WROTE A LOT MYSELF BAHAHSDJKFHASJKFG ANYWAY !!! ANSWERING TIME
HOORAYYY I GET KIRUKIYO !!!! i wonder how much we could go into it tho, like maybe its just implied but like maybe korekiyo after the gang is like "we must Tie Him Up !!" realizes that what his sister felt wasnt love he realized he didnt love her yadda yadda but he realizes in part because of kirumi? because what he felt for when his sister died was different than what he felt when kirumi died?? DUDE??? MAYBE???
OOHOHOHOH WE COULD SO HAVE MIU KILL SOMEONE INSTEAD DUDE THAT WOULD BE SO COOL AUAUGHA, OH MY GOD WHAT IF . OKAY HEAR ME OUT WHAT IF MIU TRIES TO GET KIIBO TO KILL SOMEONE AND IMPLEMENTS A THING TO TRY TO GET THAT TO HAPPEN BUT IT JUST SORT OF BREAKS HIM (AS IN HE LITERALLY CANT FUNCTION BECAUSE IT CONTRASTS WITH SOMETHING IN HIS SYSTEM OR SMTH) AND SO SHE HAS TO COMMIT MURDER HERSELF AND THATS EVIDENCE OR SOMETHING AAUGUAUH AM I SMART
YESS IM SO GLAD U AGREE OMG, rantaro was such an interesting character and ik he was killed first for mystery reasons but like it woudl have been sOO COOL !! TO SEE HIM LIVE EVEN A LITTLE LONGER AND GIVE US MORE OF A REASON TO WONDER ABOUT HIS CHARACTER!!! and yess !! i love that idea actually too, about whatever he tries just failing, auGUUHG !!!
YES I LOVE THE FAKEOUT PROTAGONIST, honestly i wish we had kaede as a protag longer so i had the idea that maybe shuichi get killed off earlier on and haunt kaede like that?? and that eventually delves into a "what would shuichi do" sort of thing when she has to investigate?? idk idk i love the fakeout protag idea tho (in a fangan i was writing with an ex friend we made the protagonist get killed in the first chapter, switch to another character for the investigation, and then the initial protagonist ended up being the mastermind, i was trying to think of a way we could do that but DFGJS i dont think we could)
we could throw out that plotline btw yeah !! im neutral on it (i love the idea that it was a simulation and theyre all still alive and happy and besties irl) but we can come up with another idea!! i have none tho ERNFJKGH i dont have many legitimate criticisms with danganronpa surprisingly (im incapable), including v3's ending, so ive never really thought of stuff like that
WE CAN CHANGE HOW MANY SURVIVORS WE HAVE!! the most we'd be able to have would be 5 if we follow the format of the games (one kill, one blackened, minus chapter 3 with two kills and a blackened) but we could definitely have something different to canon. this is OUR rewrite we get to do what we want :3
i like the case ideas btw !!! personally i say ryoma victim (what if he finds a reason to live and then dies right after? angst <3), himiko killer could be super cool and i feel like we'd have an ishimondo situation if tenko isnt dead yet where she loses it after himiko is discovered, and if we make tenko a victim right after that would be kinda neat :3, tsumugi being a killer also YES btw i love thinking about ideas for her executions
we could have angie survive!! but i also like the idea of her being a blackened idk, i made her a blackened in my personal rewrite (i need to tell u about chapter 5 its so good dude), we can figure that out more when we have other ideas !!! we can so have shinounaga found family tho !!
OK HI SODA HI HI HI I HAD IDEAS FOR THE V3 REWRITE THAT I WANT TO SHARE (IDK IF U WANTED TO SEE THE GENIUS IDEA FOR THE REWRITE WITH THE OC BUT ILL SEND THIS AND THEN IF U WANNA SEE JUS TELL ME) ANYWAY !!!
ok i dont acgtually have too much but!! but but but i do have some ideas right
as of rn ive got two survivors (korekiyo, kokichi), a potential mastermind (miu?), chapter 3's first victim (kirumi), chapter 3's second blackened (korekiyo), and chapter 5's victim (rantaro). idk if this is good or not biut like !!!! ebehebh !!!!
miu being the mastermind is something i had for my own rewrite like with my oc but also i really like the idea, we could also have her do something with kiibo at some point like install a virus on him or wtvr that would make him kill someone? because she operates on him in the game anyway so having her do so and then have that fall into place later but like not give him time to say somethingabout it is really fun to me
kirumi i dont really have a reason for her being the first victim other than im a sucker for kirukiyo and i think he'd be pretty distressed that she died (im being very self indulgent here but we can change this if u want to, idk ur opinions on kirukiyo so !!! its up to u), we could also do something where the murders happened at almost the exact same time so he could have saved her if he had just been somewhere instead of trying to kill someone for his sister to have another "friend" in the afterlife
kokichi i want to live because i love him. end of explanation
rantaro i wanted to die at some point but not at the start, in part bc i love him but also because i think itd be really interesting if he was killed in ch 5 instead of kokichi because he has a lot of importance too, right? so i think a killing with him could be just as good, he could have helped the killer because he wanted them to try to find out the mastermind during his trial or something idk. still in speculation but i think it would be cool
as for like, protagonists and stuff, i have zero idea, but !!!!!! i think it would be super mega awesome to have both kaede and shuichi survive but also that is like not possible because kaede's death made shuichi actually be able to be good and smart at things and not feel bad IDK WE CAN FIGURE THIS OUT AT SOME POINT BUT HERES MY IDEAS SORRY THIS IS A LOT OF PARAGRAPHS
starting out i’m gonna be all over the place with this <33
first off: THE KIRUKIYO ISEA IS SO COOL THO honestly i never thought of that ship, and im not a huge shipper myself outside of bsd so im super neutral about most ships <33 so yeah!!!! we can ahve kirukiyo!!!! i like that!!!! :3 <- since you asked about my opinion on it
ALSO ARE YOU IN MY HEAD OR SOMETHING. MIU MASTERMIND!!! MIU MASTERMIND!!! or if not a mastermind, then in the very least a killer. i can’t tell you how many times i’ve ranted to my rl friends about how miu should’ve gotten to kill somebody. like ik in canon she was supposed to be the killer for 4 but that got swapped last minute but SHE SHOULDVE BEEN ALLOWED TO KILL SOMEBDIY and yes yes yes yes yes she should do something with kiibo that’d be very fun
YOURE SO CORRDCT ON RANTARO BTW his character generally suffers from the fact he was killed off way at the beginning, and ugshdh he could have done. so much. if he was left alive a little longer. i’ve said this before but that’s a common issue just in general with the type of game danganronpa is especially with the writers not adjusting the arcs for their allotted time which causes me PAIN. yeah leave him alive for longer for sure. and oooo i like rantaro, i think he could go either way being a killer or victim. especially if at the end of it all no matter how it goes down, hes wrong. whether he kills the wrong person, or if he’s caught in the middle of a planned murder and happens to be collateral damage/the mistaken victim while he’s trying to go after the mastermind and either way their only lead to the mastermind is now just gone
one of the things i do really like about v3 despite all my criticisms against it, is the fake-out protagonist. i’m not saying we have kaede die again or shuichi goes in her place, but i think it’d be cool to include something like that with one of the cast members? maybe kaito? idk im throwing things at the wall rn but basically im trying to figure out a way to have a character haunt the narrative like kaede did
yeah i ahev no clue about protags either yet, we can always just figure that out down the line sometime����🎉🎉
also side note but i propose to throw out the real fiction plotline or whatever it was called that v3 went down in the game, thoughts?
also also second unrelated side note: do we have to keep the 3 survivors? not like the literal characters, just the number. like obviously we wont have everyone survive, but idk let’s not confine ourselves to a number yet
for my input regarding cases: in no particular order/killer - ryoma -> victim/survivor ; himiko -> killer/victim [i think it’d be cool to have her as a killer but i’m not sure how she’d even go about it or even why] ; tenko -> victim ; tsumugi -> killer [i think her execution would be super interesting] aaaand i ahve yet to think about the rest
inout regarding survivors: idk i really want angie to survive and i am shooting you with shinounaga found family propaganda
anyways!!! give your opinion!!! sorry this took me forever to type!!!!!
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