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alevolpe · 1 day ago
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Hello! I plan on doing a Sailor Moon rewrite later on next year (bc i have a lot of shit to do in the entirety of my 3rd year of university) and I'd like to know what issues you have with each season of sailor moon. You don't have to name all of them, just name the biggest problem(s) you have with each season!! I hope I am not troubling you :3
Hi! You're no trouble at all! Thank you for asking, I'm humbled you're interested in hearing my opinion.
Ok, let's see. Before I start I wanna say, these are MY opinions based on also how I'm doing my own rewrite AU thingy, so don't take it personally if I don't want to include elements or characters you love. (Most fo the time it doesn't even mean I don't like those characters in canon, I just don't think they'd fit with the specific narrative I have in my mind)
I'll say for Season 1, my biggest issue is the amount of time it takes to get everyone in the cast. By the time we get Mina it's like what, over 3/4ths of the season in? I like that the show takes its time introducing everyone and giving the girls some organic bonding time in the filler, but there's better ways to do it imo. That's why I have Usagi be the last to awaken and meet an already tranformed Ami and Rei, so we don't totally break from Usagi being the center at first. We can use her as a vessel to get to know these new people and this crazy new identity at the same time she does, letting us know more about her too in the process, while not slowing the pace of the story to a crawl. As we get to know more, you can introduce the rest of the girls and break from the main group to catch glimpses of Mako and Mina, to later unite them. But that's my fix, there's other ways to fix the slow introductions, just.. don't maybe go manga style and spend only one ep per girl and immediately move on to the next, give them time to breathe.
My main issue with Season 2 is the time travel. The show does NOT know its own rules and that is a recipe for disaster, once you introduce an ally that is able to time travel, you got a LOT in your hands. Everything in the show could be solved with one travel through time, but they never do. Why? Cause otherwise the show wouldn’t exist. It leaves too many possibilities and questions that is not ready to answer. Idk how one could fix it, I'm sure there's many ways you could, I just have 0 interest in incorporating time travel in sm.
With Season 3 I'd say it's the introduction of the whole Pharaoh 90 or Mistress 9 thing. I don’t know, I know they are the main baddies, but like.. just make Saturn the main threat, she already basically is. That's my problem with it, I'm sure a ton of people disagree, but I'd rather the season just focus more on Saturn, Haruka, Michiru and Pluto, I don't need another "queen Nehellenia" type villain that gets introduced 2 seconds before the end. And I lovee Eudial and Mimete, but we don't need 5 of them. I'd just make those 2 Tomoe's assistants and that's that. Too many villains, especially if you're not going to do a motw format.
With Season 4.. uff where do I even begin. Tbh I scratch the whole season and do a ground up rebuilding project, but if I HAVE to stick with the canon structure I'll say make Nehellenia more present. She's THE BEST part of SuperS, make her more present and more threatening. Give her that mirror power from the get go, make her appear in mirrors, reflections, show her subtly , in the background, give the season a subtle but palpable atmosphere of unease, make her scary. I WANT TO BE SCARED of her! Also unrelated, but get RID of the S*A metaphor with the 3 eyes.
With Stars the whole pacing the season is a mess. The start is way too slow and the end is rushed as fuck. Introduce Galaxia as a present threat earlier, again idk how you'd do that exactly while keeping the episodic tempo of the show, but my solution is. Don't! Lol
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crossbowwwdotcom · 15 days ago
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camilo's bllk fic reccs pt 2 (as of december 24, 2024):
- are we dancing after death? by calmgeyama ... 9.5k words and 1/1 chapters. read tags! gantz tabiori au where they all die and have to fight monsters to continue living... so terrifyingly written!!
- laced drill bits to my pointe shoes by ethereally ... 4k words and 1/1 chapters. kunigiri as old men fighting for their right to be married in jp. GREAT formatting and story and i love this so much
- conception by missiletoe .., 1.8k words and 1/1 chapters. egonoa character study pre-blue lock. its cute and short and they are just so Interesting.
- never let you come apart by ethereally ... 9k words and 1/1 chapters. i cant believe i almost forgot this one omfg. its so good! bachisagi fic set post canon with aroace isagi again. i fw it so much ughhh
- the sweetest flower by lockedskies ... 20k words and 5/? chapters. allsagi bachelor au!!! all the interactions between everyone is so good. i never realized how interesting the bachelor au could be...
- what we stand to win by raindrops_0 ... 6k words and 1/1 chapters. gen fic centered around isagi when theyre starting at bastard munchen. its just great hurt/comfort with some very relatable themes. love!
- GHOST OPERATIVES by shiryurealest13 ... 41.5k words and 23/30 chapters (chapter cap fluctuates). read tags! chatfic and still currently updating. not central focus but rinsagi, shidousae, nagireo, and tabieita. its about part of the bllk cast who are assasins are given the mission to kill reos dad and have to infiltrate reos fg (the rest of bllk) to get close to him. SO funny and the plot is actually so engaging. someone pls talk to me ab this its one of my favs rn 😭
- finding passion by strawberrytiramisu3773 ... 100k and 11/? chapters. read tags! VERY interesting canon divergence rewrite! i fear im a huge angst and whump fan and reading this was soooo good for me lol
- spoiled by vett .. 5k words and 1/1 chapters. rinsagi future fic that had me GIGGLING OMG. rin being a clingy drunk and isagi being so embarrased was so funny and i was literally freaking out lol. second hand embarrassment almost killed me but its ok!
- the language of losing by raindrops_0 ... 10.4k and 2/3 chapters. socmed kaisagi fic staged in the nel where each team gets more of a social media presence. im such a sucker for socmed fics and this one is so funny lol
- three is a charm by mistresssleepless ... 6k words and 1/1 chapters. ahhhhh i love bachirinsagi and this was so good. them having sex is referenced a lot but it isnt explicitly written (still teen+ though). theyre so cute together and i love these three together
- six facts about lobsters by smallghosts ... 3.7k words and 1/1 chapters. bachisagi kinda character study fic written from second person pov. one of the most well written things ive ever read
- fixation by celestee (jenjaemrens) ... 5k words and 1/1 chapters. rinsagi fic where isagi lives in spain and is part of re al with sae. SUCH a cool concept and im so obsessed with it
- good luck rin! by cyberialyr1 ... 60k words and 12/18 chapters. rinsagi highschool au where isagi is the new kid and rins the football team captain. very cute with internalized homophobia and angsty backstory isagi! i havent caught up since like ch9 though but its really good
- like glass from sandy ground by ethereally ... 7k words and 1/1 chapters. such a GOOD bachisagi ff where isagi is aroace but loves bachira and bachira loves him anf theyre just. struggling to figure things out. wonderfully written to portray the love of someone aroace! if ure gonna read anything on this list then read this one Please
- oat milk (and other irredeemable vices) by caluette .., 26k words and 3/3 chapters. kaisagi coffee shop au where kaiser is the frustrating customer with a long and specific order and isagi is a struggling employee. banter and light hearted enemies to lovers!
- of intrusive thoughts and sickly sweet smiles by zhiruiii ... 14k words and 4/4 chapters. soft rinsagi with isagi being a social butterfly and rin being insecure about it. cute!!!
- pretrichor by flowersforaliens... 3k words and 1/1 chapters. i LOVE. karasu centric angst fic with tabiori about karasu having an injury and having to retire. so good!
- i cant stay on your morphine (cause its making me ill) by witchcoded ... 22k words and 4/6 chapters. FEM LESBIANS ryurin!!!! perhaps the best??? the emotional constipation of rin is so good and the intimacy of them is so well written (or^o). great side roles too!
- to lose yourself in the world by thecurrator .. 25k words and 21/? chapters. egonoa fic where ego is a daycare worker, noa is his roommate, and bllk are the kids. so funny and pretty fluffy!
- art of momentum by illicitly ... 4.9k words and 1/1 chapters. cute little nagireo oneshot w nagi being protective!
- kintsukoroi by laylayli ... 54k and 3/3 chapters. read tags! kaisagi fic set after nel where kaiser finds out his dad is dead. lots of interesting grieving and well-written character study! loved this and i swear by this author
- maybe it was ego swinging by sopenation ... 3k words and 1/1 chapters. kunigiri w protective bllk and kunigami over chigiri. yk i love to see it!
- invincible like ive never been by mkat1020 ... 2k and 1/1 chapters. gen and chigiri whump during the u20. i looooove this one and isagi is such a good friend in this and its just. Good
- love you like oxygen by sweetdreamers... 12k and 1/1 chapters. kaisagi breakup and makeup fic. they have a generally toxic relationship and isagi is super sad and pathetic in this but the rest of the bllk cast comforts him and they figure shit out
- l'amour est bleu by laylayli ... 40k words and 5/5 chapters. perhaps my FAVORITE kaisagi ff and one of my fav bllk fics oat. its about isagi starting to babysit for kaisers younger sister and them falling in love during it. isagi just cares so much for kaisers younger sister and kaiser slowly starts loving him so much for it and isagi cant help but fall for kaiser its just. so endearing and i love it <3.
- world class hypocrite by aashimar ... 80.5k words and 9/10 chapters (EPILOGUE PLEASE PLEASE UPLOAD). read tags! explicit sex scenes throughout but its staged post-canon. this fic made me SICK. rinsagi au where isagi was outed as gay by rin before the wc and his life was basically ruined afterwards. the LONGING and RESENTMENT in this is the absolute peak of society. both rin and isagis characters are written so amazingly like theyre so flawed and theyre very messy people but theyre like really actually in love with each other. they say a lot of fucked up shit to each other but i still swear by this fic! the plot was SO SO intriguing and the way its written is really realistic. the chemistry is absolutely INSANE in this fic. my personal fav bllk fic and one of my fav fics ever! belongs in the hof tbh
see pt 1 here!
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mediumgayitalian · 10 months ago
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Im writing a ficlet to post here on tumblr and I got inspired by ur writing but everytime I read the mere start it's just a big no no What do i do???
first of all send it my way if you like!! second of all you have a few options:
1. Just Keep Going
remember you can go back and fix things!! if you keep writing you’ll stumble into a flow, and then you can go back and edit the beginning or middle to fit your vision.
2. Fuck Beginnings
the number one obstacle i had with writint when i was first starting out is that i could never think of a damn beginning. even now i struggle with it. best way to handle that: fuck beginnings. wherever you have a scene, start: in the middle of an argument, the middle of a scene, hell, the middle of a damn sentence. wherever the start of your idea is is the start of your story! don’t force something that doesn’t exist. (that 10k will angst fic i just wrote? started w the sherman & will argument scene! i had Nothing beforehand! and you’ll notice a lot of my stuff starts in the middle of a conversation, cause it’s easier!*)
3. Start Over
sometimes i’ll try so hard to make something i’ve already written work, even if i’m stuck, because i’ve already sunk so much time in it that starting again feels like a waste of time. but, dude, trust me — if you’re that stuck, just start over. maybe not the whole damn piece, but you can definitely rewrite a paragraph or chapter. personally, i tend to cut and paste whatever isn’t working into a new doc so i don’t lose it (in case i manage to reuse it elsewhere) and then i begin again, with uncluttered space.
4. Post What You Have
i should really link y’all to the first post i ever made. it was Hot Stinky Garbage. i don’t care. it Helped, you know? it started me out. maybe your thing isnt perfect — post it anyway. maybe nobody cares — post it anyway. (took like two weeks for someone to care about what i was posting on this account, and i posted daily. my first fic had zero notes for eight days.) you might even find that you’re just being too hard on yourself!
5. Dialogue Prompts My Beloved
dialogue is so so easy for me to write. it’s WAY easier for me to script a conversation and then build facial expressions, emotions, actions, and intention behind it, because i never shut up! i have a lot of practice. as you may have noticed i’ve been using the @p0ck3tf0x 100 ways to say i love you list — i’ve put it in a spinner wheel lol. so i spin the wheel and write the prompt, then i don’t have to make a decision. if i don’t like what comes up i spin again.
good luck!! wish you all the best!!
*it is a thousand times easier to build exposition through context. example:
Kayla walked up to her brother, who was sitting morosely on the porch. “Hey, Will. You good?”
Will shrugged. “I’m okay.”
vs.:
“Will. Hey. You good?”
“‘M okay.” He tried for a smile. “Thanks though, Kayla.”
see the difference? in the first, i am outright telling you that 1) kayla is walking over to will 2) he is sitting on the porch 3) he is sad 4) he is answering her question. this are all stated things, either by the narrator or by the dialogue. this is clunky! this is so clunky!
but why?
you know all these things. you know ‘hey’ is a greeting — so obviously kayla is newly approaching will. kayla calls will by name — you know who she’s talking to. will mumbles, and ‘tries for a smile’ — both things that indicate he’s feeling morose. he responds to kayla by name, so you know who he’s responding to. when you over-explain or state too much in your writing, you’re telling your readers twice, which can feel awkward.
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hoes4hoseok · 2 years ago
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enhypen as emails i can't send
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y'all i'm having so much fun doing these w my cat in my lap and the rain pouring outside 🤧 so good. anyways i'm literally seeing sabrina in 2 weeks! i'm so excited <3 maybe i'll post the txt version after the concert 😊
heeseung as tornado warnings
"i guess maybe that's why i'm lying to my therapist, i keep saying things like 'i never saw him & we never kissed'"
clinging to a relationship or situationship with heeseung despite the red flags is something i feel in my bones. i'd do that.
&& that's essentially what the song is about...lying to your therapist because you know hee is a walking red flag & isn't good for you, yet you're doing it anyways (come on y'all,, self-respect!!)
but admittedly, i even do that for people who aren't heeseung, so for him, i could overlook quite a bit.
my point is...heeseung would make moving on hard by existing
also...don't lie to your therapist. it's a waste of money.
sunghoon as how many things
"i wonder how many things you wanna do, you think i'm in-between"
i can see sunghoon getting over you faster than you do him. or at least him being able to hide it better.
&& yeah he might care about you...but he is not thinking about you nearly as much as you are him (even when you're trying your absolute hardest to limit it)
the feeling is even worse if you're still technically dating which would literally be the worst because it's a slowburn break-up who wants that?!
&& it sucks, the feeling sucks & my point is that sunghoon would probably make you feel it 🙂💔
this song makes me SICK sometimes because it's painfully relatable & this connection makes it kinda better?? or worse?? proably worse. 🤧
jungwon as nonsense
"lookin' at you got me thinkin' nonsense, cartwheels in my stomach when you walk in"
before you jump me...yes, i considered jake. i thought he fit bad for business better though 👊 so jungwon got nonsense 🫶🏽
&& i will stand by my decision!! because i just know he's the type of guy who (while very approachable) would be so hard to talk to if you had a crush on him
it's such a cute song & i can vividly picture tripping over my words in front of him & having zero personality because i can't think straight
if any of y'all get a shot with him...good luck soldier 🫡
ni-ki as fast times
"these are fast times & fast nights, yeah, no time for rewrites, we couldn't help it"
this song is about a youthful & impulsive relationship,, so ni-ki was the obvious fit
i can imagine ni-ki & his partner making really bad decisions while dating, at least at the very beginning
like he'd probably convince you to climb on a private rooftop or crash an engagement party with him
&& the relationship might just go way faster than intended
sometimes they're really shitty decisions, but sometimes they're not which is what matters!! sort of??
jake as bad for business
"he's good for my heart, but he's bad for business, tears me apart when he grants my wishes"
if people hated you for dating jake...you probably wouldn't care lmfaooo you're the one cuddling with him 🫶🏽
now, if you were both idols (let's put on our imagination caps 🧢) & it was affecting your job like in the song -- that sucks, & he'd try his best to make sure it doesn't hurt you, but...there's not much to be done sometimes
you're strong though you got through it :)
"never been so glad to be so tired" yeah. that checks out.
it's just such a cute song & it almost always reminds me of him now hehe
jay as opposite
"i know now, that even if i try to change, that somehow, you'd end up with her anyway"
this song makes me sick because it's so relatable (part 2)
the whole idea that ur partner isn't actually attracted to you while you're dating is so scary
clearly, there's no proof of that being the case in this song...but it's the conclusion she jumped to when they dated someone who looked nothing like her right after
i think jay might do that. probably unintentionally, but still.
if the relationship went sour, he might want change & go for someone different, whether in personality or in looks
&& it would feel so shitty, but you'd make it out & do the same thing eventually :D
sunoo as feather
"i feel so much lighter like a feather with you out my life"
to whoever is reading this...sorry. you're the problem he's the one who feels lighter after dropping YOU 🙄🤷‍♀️
okay but for real...sunoo would take a hot minute to calibrate & get over you but after that period he is DONE
he's gonna be civil with you but he's cackling with his buddies afterwards. he's FINE.
i hope you are too ;)
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silverjurors · 9 months ago
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Hii!
So, I wanted to ask, how did Janus lose his eye in ur rewrite/what's ur hc?
(PS. Finals are killing me, send help.)
Hiiii I want you to know that I love this question and I wish you the very best of luck with the results of your final exams (I have mocks soon AAAA) because the education system is hell and I too cannot wait to escape it
Okay. So in my rewrite, Janus lost their eye when they were about 19-ish. I have already said on one of my previous headcannon dumps that they lost it preventing an assassination attempt. This is still true! But here is some elaboration on it and the aftermath that occurs :3
- Yes they lost their eye protecting Zane (Yes I am aware that I base a significant amount of their character around Zane it's the ONLY CANON THING WE KNOW ABOUT THEM OKAY DON'T JUDGE ME)
- Once again, all of this (and by this I mean trauma) is for Zane because they have exactly 3 people they care about and Zane is top of that list
- Zane wasn't actually the target of the assassination attempt (it was Vylad) but they look rlly similar in my re-write so the assassins decided that it would just be easier to try and kill both of them
- These assassins were a small group of premature Shadow Knights who were working as mercenaries that may or may not have been hired by Garte
- Vylad did in fact die (v sad rip Vylad u will be missed bestie) but Zane gets to live and was mostly unharmed because, unlike Vylad's personal Guard who saw Shadow Knights and promptly bailed, Janus has no self preservation instinct and went "OK we fight until either I die or you all die"
- So Janus then proceeded to straight up beast-mode 2 premature Shadow Knights in 1V2 combat and got a poisoned arrow to the eye for their service
- The minute the adrenaline ran out they collapsed because OW
- This did actually put them in a medically induced coma for like two weeks afterwards while they got healed
- Also this did have a slightly weird shift on their biology, like sharper teeth, that definitely has nothing to do with my eventual plan to make Janus a Shadow Knight by my S3 definitely not but that's not relevant so let's just collectively ignore it like they did when they woke up
- Janus spent a good chunk of time afterwards re-learning how to fight and use their swords because their depth perception was terrible
- He also walked into several walls and almost fell down several flights of stairs a few times
- This was the incident that gave them the idea that they can't die
- Which led to reckless behavior when they could finally re-join the battlefield, but it's totally fine because for some reason they seem a lot less affected by pain than they used to be
- Sometimes they have Visions in that eye. They are convinced these are probably PTSD nightmares (they aren't)
- Their eyes also get tired really easily after all that, because ow, so they don't read very much
- Chronic pain. Like, holy shit, so much chronic pain in that eye specifically
Uhhhh that's all I got I think, thank you for the ask I love to talk and never ever shut up <3
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lovebytz · 3 months ago
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hi valentine! i love your sailor moon redesigns sooo much!!
i found this cute sailor style blazer on pinterest! i was thinking of using it for my own redesigns in the future, but i had to share it with you too!! i think it would suit rei or maybe haruka or makoto!
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ur so cool and i love seeing how your redesigns have changed and improved over time!!
omg hi tysm!!! i could definitely see one of my rewrite designs wearing this :-DD good luck with your own redesigns! they’re so fun to make and i absolutely adore seeing other people doing them
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tapwater118 · 4 months ago
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Its simultaneously bfdia 13 and bfdia 1.5
See the problem is
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ah the classic too many birds in the bushes folly. thats definitely a metaphor that makes sense. too many good ideas and not enough space to fit them in. probably not the best comparison but i had to cut out a whole part in the leafpin among us fic where they go to navigation just because i could fit it anywhere.
honestly if i were doing this the moment i would need to move it somewhere else in the timeline i would drop it being a rewrite and just make it fully original. but hey, i dont know what ur cookin. maybe it’ll turn out better that way idk. regardless, good luck with that amigo
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maygrcnt · 2 years ago
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hi, you seem to have incredibly Correct buddie fic takes so would you like to list some fic recommendations? (I'm relatively new to the fandom and digging through the ao3 tag is Rough lmao)
this is such a crazy thing to find in my inbox but thank you thank you. what ur gonna find from me is a LOTTT of codas, one’s shots, and getting together fluff fics. i sifted through my history to find some recent ones that i really enjoyed so i hope this list finds you well :))
(also i’m sorry and i don’t know many author’s tumblr urls so if ur fic is here lmk and i’ll tag you <33)
“totally not interrupting. at all.” Maddie’s POV of a famous buddie friday night dinner. some good old fashioned buckley siblings comfort and good banter !
“We All Fall Down” A 6x18 rewrite that focuses mostly on the buddie of it all. very healing for the soul after watching the canon events.
“tell your baby that i’m your baby” post season six, it hits on all cylinders. we’ve got drunken love confessions, jealous eddie, some minor emotional cheating ohhhh so good.
“take my hand (knot your fingers through mine)” another 6x18 rewrite in which the plot lina actually connect in the ways that make sense instead of … that
“far away (from the one that i love)” and one wild card for good luck, a major diversion from the fluffy one shots above, an au where buck moved to chicago and eddie goes to get him back
hope this is good !! <33
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mochami-mochi · 9 months ago
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writer mocha i have a qwestion
what do you do before writing? like how do you get in the zone? also do you reread your chapter before writing the next or?
im tryna write but i feel so disconnected from my story 😞😞
it really depends on my mood! tbh, it takes a good two hours to actually START writing 😔
some things i tend to do are:
- consume smth that serves as an inspiration for the story (fics with similar vibes, youtube clips of the shows that may have inspired you, songs that can be used to get u in the specific mood for the scene ur writing)
- talk abt ur idea with someone else, as their passion can motivate u !! if u have no one to talk to then u can plan out ur story using dot points and summaries
- reread ur chapter to get an idea of where u can go next
- delete whatever u have so far and rewrite it — maybe ur struggling because u unintentionally backed urself into a corner (happens to the best of us)
- if nothing seems to help, take a step back. maybe work on another fic or rethink ur intended plan.
i hope this helps and good luck, have fun!
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stevie-petey · 6 months ago
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You are so good at writing dude. Even tho I’ve watched Stranger Things countless times, this rewrite has me excited and on my toes about what’s to come. I’m kind of scared about season 4, not only because it has some of the most emotionally charged scenes and I’m scared to what you have in mind, I think it’s gonna be a challenge to write, especially with the transition from silly little Russians being mischievous, to not so silly Russians being menaces and fighting a multidimensional tentacle boy, but I’m sure you’ll ace it as per usual. Overall I am so sure you’ll do such a great job and PLEASE TAKE UR TIME, DONT FEEL PRESSURED OR FORCED TO DO ANYTHING!!!
I absolutely adore you, you have NO idea how important your fic is to me.
dude im also scared of season 4 its gonna be SO MUCH to unpack ,,,, good luck to you guys <3
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miguelhugger2099 · 8 months ago
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I've read through everything you've written over the last four days and I'm obsessed with how good you are. Your writing is so thoughtful, you always manage to keep it in-character, and your descriptions are so good! I've been thinking about giving writing a shot but nothing I come up with is even half as good as what you write. Do you have any advice or tips? You're practically professional level in quality, so I figure if anyone has the hook up on how to write better, it'd be you. Thank you for giving us readers so many wonderful pieces of writing. I hope for nothing but the best for you in all your endeavors in life. You're awesome.
p…professional quality is a bit of a stretch but thank u for the kind words😭🫶
comparison is the thief of joy my dear anonie. based on this ask alone i think you’d do just fine writing some of your own stuff :) it doesn’t hurt to start somewhere
and as for giving advice i’ll try !!
i really like being descriptive so for that, u want to know what’s happening and the personalities of the characters by how they interact with the room and other people. for me, i close my eyes or sit and think to feel myself in those scenes and figuring out all my senses in those moments,,, if that makes sense haha
if you want ur character to stay in character, i kinda act…like them ??? like i have my scene/scenario and i’ll be like ok how would he react to this? how would he look like? if he does this then what does it lead to? is that something they would say? type of stuff yknow ?
don’t be afraid to google synonyms and antonyms, metaphors/similies u can’t remember, certain eras in history or cultures, pop culture. sometimes i go on reddit to see if anyone has the same problem as me and sometimes i google fanfics of the things im writing if im feeling a block or i want an example/ inspiration :)
a lot of the times, i usually cut my story into parts so i’ll write down the part i have clear in my head and i’ll leave the hard part for last like transitions haha. but that’s what i do when writing seems overwhelming or so i don’t burn out and i want to write the thing i had in mind….if that makes sense haha
now that im rereading and rewriting this answer i think a lot of it is just imagination. i like being in the story whether its an x reader or not, so being as detailed as possible is uberrrr important to me to immerse myself in the story as much as i can.
but !!! at the end of the day that’s just me :3 take this advice with a grain of salt (im horrible at giving advice ;∇; ) as long as you write SOMETHING it’s good enough and ur on your way to be even better !!
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good luck and remember to have fun writing !! 💕
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randomlifex · 1 year ago
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hellooo!! so um, im making stories rn, and ive read all of ur stories (and actually loved it❤️❤️) could you give me some advice in writing thankdssss
Hi dear!
I’m flattered by your request💕
My advices are the following:don’t be scared of trying and experimenting. Writing is all about finding your own language and expressing yourself. Just be sure to use a clear and simple language, and always remember that people need to understand the logic behind your thoughts; so try to sort them out before writing. Usually, I make schemes (they don’t have to be written, you can have a mental scheme as long as it is effective) as they help me giving an order to my ideas and making them more detailed.
For what’s left, like characters, plots and events just use your fantasy!
Don’t be scared to write and rewrite a whole story or chapter, the first try is always just a draft.
Good luck💕
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kthyg · 8 months ago
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Hi author,
I'm came from your youtube and wattpad. I had read your oldest fics but sad thing is you deleted your youtube channel and your not active in wattpad too but thanks to let us know that your here. I tbh miss some of your old ffs and one shot. Maybe you gonna find this crazy and different but i really miss your taehyung hybrid one shot that really blew my mind haha. And another one is jimin siren ff which i can see you re-posted and thank you so much. I just wanna ask when will you re-post that taehyung hybrid ff?? Because I used to read that repeatedly as if i read it several times then something will change maybe a little more or maybe some different will happen haha. I hope your doing good in your life.
hi!
i actually hv no words for this. i’m js flabbergasted. 😭 i love u for this. thank you in all seriousness. :) thank you for spending some of ur precious time to write this down to my inbox. given that i’ve been way too inactive since last year.
in my initial planning, i had planned to repost hybrid tae fic but sadly i lost all the drafts. 😞 i hv a rough outline of the story but it’s probably going to take time. (time and time management are my biggest enemies). but for now, i’ll see what i can do with it! i will be changing a LOT, i js know it. since after quitting youtube and joining tumblr, i’ve only been focusing on improvisation for my writing! so i’m very detail oriented with my own work nowadays.
im glad u liked the siren jimin too! it’s one of my fav tropes. <3 there should be another version of siren jimin fic. as per on yt, it’s called undeniable bond. i’ve been on and off trying to rewrite it. so do wish me luck so i can at least finish it this year and try to focus on my other fics :)
ps: this kind of ask really motivated me. it reminds me that some people still enjoy reading my works and perhaps still waiting for me. ill try my best! ^^
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livingincolorsagain · 1 year ago
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hello it is i with the answers to thy questions
1) so hard 😔 I like everything. hmm rn probavly must've been a deadly kiss im obsessed with the song and the fic what else could u ask for
4) i have to be real it's rarry for me 🙏 being the r eason im on tumblr and all nothing else ever stood a chance tbh
6) bucky sacrificing himself for the soul stone. in be together ����
8) ur descriptions of stuff are so cool very nice I enjoy 👍 love how u just casually drop amazing lines and leave like u didn't alter people's brain chemistry
9) careless whisper fic ofc hmm about posting probably the soulmate au 👁️
10) ok confession. half the reason I care about sambucky is u 😔 I would be mostly normal about them if I didn't love u heuheu
11) the rarry titanic au 😔/jkjk unless
12) a lot of them 😭 most recent reread was deadly kiss I think
ok bye I have to study for the exam on tuesday (I haven't done anything 😹 help)
well hello there, thanks for thy answers
from this list
1. deadly kiss is your fav now! yay!! also the song fucking slaps cant blame you
4. you’re so real for saying rarry actually, it’s how we became mutuals and friends and it’s very special
6. oh yeah very understandable (the urge to rewrite that fic is so strong)
8. awwww stop 😭😭 thank you so much!!! love love love altering people’s brain chemistry
9. careless whisper and soulmates au again. hmmm gonna have to something about this
10. that’s actually ridiculously sweet omg. i love you so much
11. COME ON 😭😭
good luck with your exam!!!!!
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tundra1029 · 2 years ago
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Hey hey! Tundra here to spice things up a bit because why not? So I have a challenge, so this is how it will go:
Think of your favorite anime, TV series or game that has a power lore kinda like One Piece and its haji and devil fruits
Try to incorporate the power lore into the Wednesday TV series
You can make head cannons, one shots, series rewrite, etc. etc. It will be ur choice.
Any genre is welcome in this challenge
You can put in 2 or more power lores in your stories but please don't bite off more than you can chew
If you do make a story with this challenge, please tag me because I am seriously craving for more Wednesday fics
Any ships are welcome for this, not just the ones in my tag list
No weird shit like inc*st, p*doph*lia, etc. etc.
Good luck and have fun Writers! You are not obligated to join as this is only for fun so don't stress about it
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youngpettyqueen · 2 years ago
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basically rewriting my own tags here but. AU where The Joker is Wild is a more serious character exploration of BJ set in season 4
this got quite away from me and also long so. under the cut to save ur dashes
the point of the episode here would be to establish BJ more as his own character early on, by directly dealing with the idea of him being jealous of Trapper, and resentful of being compared to him. it also makes for an isolated sort of feel with him- he hasn't built these connections with the rest of the cast yet, and this is a cast who knew Trapper and so far dont really know him. by taking this more seriously it allows for some exploration of BJ's character, some room for him to grow, an opportunity for him and Hawkeye to strengthen their bond, and even some room to drop hints for the anger the bubbles underneath the surface for him
it starts off fairly similarly- BJ pranking Hawkeye and Hawkeye not being particularly impressed, leading to him launching into reminiscing about the "golden days" of him and Trapper's schemes. its implied here that this is something Hawkeye does often; comparing BJ to Trapper, often unfavourably, often bringing up how Trapper did things better and how he misses that. Hawkeye doesnt mean any harm here, he's just trying to reminisce and handling his best friend's departure as best he can, but this understandably still gets under BJ's skin. BJ, clearly unhappy, promises to show Hawkeye he's just as good as Trapper was, maybe even better. Hawkeye, not seeing that BJ is legitimately upset here, doesnt take it too seriously and just wishes him luck
no bet element. nobody else is in on it. BJ is still new to the 4077 and hasn't quite found his footing yet, further cementing his insecurities related to where he stands with everyone. he starts off small, simple, harmless. gag cigars, swapping the salt and the sugar and the like. Hawkeye continues to be unimpressed, goading BJ on, not realizing BJ is genuinely getting more and more upset and therefore not taking him seriously. until finally BJ starts to get outright mean, lashing out more obviously, and Hawkeye realizes something might actually be wrong. still, he doesnt think much of it- he doesnt know BJ, he doesnt know him angry, and he decides to wait until he's cooled down to talk to him about it and see what's up
well, that doesnt happen. Potter sits BJ down in his office at one point and tells him he needs to knock off the childish tantrum and speak up if something's upsetting him. he points out BJ's been lashing out at everyone, acting uncharacteristically mean, and watching Hawkeye be bombarded with a bunch of pranks is exhausting. he warns BJ to stop now before he goes too far. BJ agrees, but then typical sort of TV show dialogue moment- leaves the office and says to himself "after I get him with this one"
one last prank and then he's done. its all harmless, after all, he'll just get this last one out of his system and then this all becomes a funny memory. except that's not what happens. something goes wrong. it was supposed to be harmless, of course it was supposed to be harmless, but something goes wrong and Hawkeye ends up hurt. he was told to stop, he didnt listen, and now his best friend is hurt and its all his fault. nobody will even let him help, and he cant even blame them
once things settle, thats when they lay into him. Potter is the most livid anyone's ever seen him, nearly rips his damn head off because he fucking told him so. Margaret is furious, demanding what the hell's wrong with him, and Mulcahy's right beside her. even Klinger and Radar look ready to kill, Klinger holding Radar by the shoulders while Radar demands how anyone could do something like that to someone like Hawkeye. and BJ's feeling so horrible, so guilty, so angry at himself, it all just rushes out of him. he's so sick of being compared to Trapper, so sick of everyone treating him like he's just Trapper's replacement, all he wanted was to show them that he isn't just a sub-par replacement. he just wanted to be respected as his own person, he just wanted the comparisons to stop, he just wanted to stop being stuck in the shadow of someone he never even met. at this point BJ storms off before they can say anything else, goes to the only place he can go; the Swamp
that doesnt make it right, of course. but that forces some reflection. it makes a bit more sense, now. and the others can reflect on that- its implied they've been doing it, too. comparing BJ to Trapper. they comment on it a bit- Margaret saying she sometimes does it without thinking in OR, Klinger agreeing that he's brought it up when BJ reacts to one of his outfits differently than Trapper did, etc. Potter understands BJ's anger, having struggled with slotting in himself, especially seeing as he's replacing a dead man. everyone's anger softens a bit
meanwhile, BJ finds Frank in the Swamp, the only one that didnt tear him a new one. Frank, for his part, is completely unbothered. says he's on BJ's side, actually. says Hawkeye needed to be humbled. BJ snaps back that that wasn't the point, and Frank asks him what the point of it all was, then. and BJ starts to explain like he did to the others, but it starts to fall apart. and he admits that maybe it became about just taking his anger out on Hawkeye, because he didnt want to talk about it, didnt want to admit how much it hurt. he knows Hawkeye misses Trapper, and he's not mad at him for that, he just wishes Hawkeye would see him for him, see him for a real friend, not just a cookie cutter replacement. Frank makes a remark about how he definitely did their friendship no favours by putting him in the infirmary. BJ, wallowing in his guilt, agrees and makes his exit. one of those instances where frank is unintentionally and obliviously kinda deep?
bit of a time jump. its been a few days. Hawkeye's fine, recovering without a problem- it wasn't anything serious. BJ hasn't gone by, though. things are tense between him and the others, and he feels way too guilty to see Hawkeye. finally, he's eating his lunch in the Swamp, really just avoiding everyone, when Hawkeye comes in with his own tray. he parks himself right beside BJ and asks if he plans on talking to him about it, or just avoiding him forever. BJ tries to say there's nothing to talk about, but Hawkeye doesnt let him off the hook
so, they have a heart to heart. BJ opens up, admits how he hates how much he's compared to Trapper, admits he feels this ridiculous jealousy towards him. explains that he just wants Hawkeye to see him as his own person, as a friend, but he feels like every time Hawkeye looks at him he's just seeing Trapper in his place. he says he's done a lousy job at being the friend he wants to be seen as, and that he's been fucking stupid, and apologizes
Hawkeye, for his part, agrees that BJ's acted stupid. but he goes on to say that he himself was acting stupid, because he didnt see how much he was hurting BJ by constantly comparing him to Trapper. he admits he's struggling with Trapper's departure, and that he misses him a lot, but he also knows thats no excuse for the comparisons. he apologizes for making BJ feel like he was nothing more than Trapper's replacement, and tells him in no uncertain terms that he does like him a lot for who he really is, and values him as a friend. he promises to stop comparing BJ to Trapper, so long as BJ promises to stop with the pranks- at least, the pranks on him. BJ agrees, and they shake on it, both of them smiling now
an undetermined amount of time later, Frank is the victim of a devastating prank by the both of them. while he rages on, Hawkeye and BJ fall into each other laughing hysterically. their friendship has come out of this stronger than ever, and we end on an optimistic note
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