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inkdheart17 · 2 years ago

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Gochi angst:

Oh you thought it was just Vegebul? Lol no I'm here to make everyone cry

He had always been hard to understand. Perhaps it was because he was never human to begin with, or maybe perhaps due to his isolation as a child. She prayed it had nothing to do with his head injury from childhood. Regardless, it was safe to say her husband was an odd one. Even so, she understood most of his actions. Most.

Nothing could prepare her for the news that he would never come back. Not because the miracle wish orbs had failed, but because he himself had refused. Refused. As though returning to her was worthless. Even their son was of little importance, and yet she understood. It was a horrid twist of irony. The first time she understood her husband perfectly was the last time she would hear from him.

There would be no celebration for their second child.

Keeping that last bit of information to herself, thoughts of whether bringing a second child to a fatherless home plagued her mind. Was it a good idea? She still had her father, and everyone knew that her husband had done little in their son's academic life. She had practically raised the boy herself, but she could see her husband's influence in him. His kindness reflected in their son's ebony eyes. The man's overwhelming drive to protect those he loves had their son disobeying her orders every now and again. Even her husband's handsome features were starting to pop out over the years as their son grew. It was painful.

The thought of another boy popped in her head. A tiny version of her husband. Perhaps their child would have her eyes this time, or maybe even look more like her than her husband, but she knew. Deep down she knew that this second child would look like him. Just like their eldest, this child would be a constant reminder of her deceased husband, and oh how that hurt. How painful it was for her to imagine another reminder. Another child just like the man she would never see again.

She hated it.

Not the child. No, she could never hate anything that resembled that man, but the resemblance itself. Perhaps if she had a girl, one that looked like her and had no traces of her husband, perhaps then she could look at her child without an upset stomach. Perhaps only then could she avoid hearing the child ask if she hated them, because the answer would be no. She did not hate her child, their child, but she was deeply wounded by the man they looked like. The man she loved. The man who left her.

She figured she had little room to complain. Had she been faced with the same decision, she knew she would also choose her family's safety over their love. She would rather them hate her than expose them to another monster. Conjured only because she existed. So, he did. He left them to avoid putting them in danger once again. Whether it be due to his insatiable desire for combat, or his mere existence, it was safer for him to leave...and yet she disagreed.

The green alien that was now washing dishes in her kitchen next to her son, smiling as he heard the boy praddle on about his dragon friend, and the alien like her husband, currently living with her best friend who was now a father as well, were proof enough of her husband's influence. Only he could accomplish transforming two of their greatest enemies into family. As a matter of fact, her husband's best friend had been hostile to him when they first met. Most everyone he interacted with had attacked him in one way or another, and yet they had all attended his funeral. Heartbroken to know that the man that changed them would never come back. The glue that had united them was now gone.

A small movement in her stomach caused her to frown. Their second child would never get the chance to meet such a great man. They would hear stories, but it would be the same as hearing stories of a great superhero. Their father would just be some character from the past. Even if time travel was possible, it was a reality far into the future that her best friend was still incapable of achieving. Would their second child be an adult the first time they got to meet their father? Would they even get the chance?

She pressed her palms to her eyes and let out a shuddering breath. She had never agreed with the idea, had abhorred it, but it was so tempting now that she was alone. She had no desire to kill, but she also held no desire for another child. Not without him. Still, as she looked around, she knew she was incapable of destroying anything that came from him. She would hate herself if she ever did, and so she kept her pregnancy. It would be a secret, though, just until she was no longer able to hide it. Just until then, she wanted to forget. She wanted to pretend he had not abandoned her. Just until then.

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Her dilema was resolved quickly, and she was appalled at herself for having once thought to end her pregnancy. Seeing the second wave of shocked expressions at the full set of hair that came with the newborn, she could only laugh. Reaching for her child with shaking arms, she held the boy close. Tears of heartbreak and pure bliss burning her eyes as she glanced down at her second boy. An exact replica of her husband. Having lost most of her energy to the labor, she could only sob as she kissed her child. Whispering how much he looked like his father, and how his father would have a silly face if he were to be there. She was sure he would call his son a "little me", and it bubbled another laugh out of her, because he would be right. Their little Goten was a little him, and she would raise him to be just as kind. She would allow him to explore the martial arts his father loved so much, and she would make sure the boy grew up with the extended family his father had collected since he was a child himself. Even that grumpy prince that refused to call her husband by his human name.

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It was a bittersweet reality to see her youngest grow up almost identically to his father. Her son was rowdy and kind, and he was surpassing his own barriers with little effort. So young and already he possessed the terrifying ability to go "super". She panicked the first time she saw him transform, but only because she knew what it meant. He was too alike his father when it came to fighting, and she knew he too would one day look for trouble and, with that, would one day find himself in a fight he could not win. However, she decided it was a far away day. With the right preparation and training, perhaps it would be a day where her son would end up badly hurt, yes, but still be alive.

The strangest thing about her youngest, however, was how his relationship with his best friend worked. The two boys were almost mirrors of how their parents interacted. The friendship of their mothers and the rivalry of their fathers. Of course, she and her best friend had a rivalry of their own but, unlike their husbands, they were able to set aside their prides when they had to. Her best friend's husband was notorious for being both unwilling and unable to set aside his pride. Likewise, her son's friend was the last to put aside his pride. Often times her son was the one to cave, but she was happy to know there were still some things he refused to budge on. His morals were high like hers, but his kindness was endless like his father's.

So, to see him now, carried on his father's shoulder, rambling about his latest mischief with his best friend, was a miracle she never expected to witness.

Her husband was laughing as he added his own mischief. Talking about the strange trainings the turtle hermit had him and his best friend doing. Including the time he was denied dinner despite being the real winner of a race. To her embarrassment and absolute joy, the talk had shifted as she saw her husband glance back at her with a soft smile. He was talking about their first date.

It had only been after his miraculous revival. He had learned the hard way that being around his family was far less dangerous than being away from them, and had graciously accepted a second chance to be on Earth. It was the greatest battle to date. One that demanded he unite entirely with the princely warrior that matched him so well. Doubling their strengths and then some. She had been fearful of the whole battle from the beginning, when her sons had to face the magical beast, and even after when she woke up to an empty bed. Her sobs only stopping after her husband had picked her up in his arms after a late night snack. Apologizing and promising he would never choose to leave her again. It was during one of those nights that he spoke to her about his feelings. Unable to do so before he truly understood what he had lost.

She was almost too distracted by his hands, which were rubbing soothing patterns on her back and legs. She had missed his touch terribly, and it was far more than she was accustomed to in the past. It was jarringly obvious that he had missed her as well. He pulled her in close, unwilling to be apart again, and she finally heard a frown in his voice. He never frowned with her. Not in private like this, when it was just them. Not during their intimate sessions did he ever frown, but he did now.

He apologized again for leaving her and their two sons. While she already knew his reasoning, he explained himself again, and then pressed his cheek to her hand. Sighing as he fixed his thoughts. Then, he spoke about their date. About how often he thought back on that day, even as a child. How he had tried to replicate what he felt that day through different sparring matches. Unaware of what had made his match with her that day so different.

At first, he thought it was because she was a girl, but later battles would prove that gender was inconsequential to him. It was also obvious that it had nothing to do with it being a "fresh" battle with someone new, or because he was battling a close friend. He had fought a number of people after. Both strangers and friends alike, but he was never able to feel that same rush of excitement. "Maybe it's because you described it as the most pleasurable thing to do." He had laughed. Still unsure if what he felt was all that different from the rush of adrenaline he always felt with a new challenger, but he was learning. He knew now it was her, and that only she had that effect on him. The prince had once told him about how their people chose their partners, and that was how her husband knew.

She was almost breathless when he admitted the secret to her. What he had seen in her was something she had thought was lost long ago. A strong woman, a fighter capable of raising a family, and a burning spirit he was sure would never give out. His seven year absence definitive proof of that.

By the end of his monologue, they had shifted to where she was in his lap with her back to him. Leaning against him as he played with her hands. His slid down over her stomach and she was surprised to hear a soft growl escape him. He huffed about not being there for her when she really needed him, and apologized for not knowing about the pregnancy, even though he was quick to notice the first time around. She hardly blamed him. He was busy preparing for the fight that would end his life. Although neither of them knew it at the time. He promised he would have preferred to stay with her if he knew, and that gave her solace enough to admit her darkest thoughts from her pregnancy.

That was when he cried. Quietly, behind her. Face buried in the crook of her neck. The only indications of his sadness were the tremble that vibrated her own body, and the warmth that came from the tears that spilled onto her. She had expected him to be furious. Disappointed, even, in knowing what she was almost capable of doing, but not heartbroken. All he could do was curl her into him. Wrapping himself entirely around her as he cried out more apologies and promises to never leave her.

She slid a hand into his hair. Petting him for a moment before guiding him forward. His eyes were far too glossy for the amount of light the pale moon offered. "I'm so sorry, Chi." He cried once more before her lips met his. She swallowed whatever sobs fell out of him after. Shifting in his embrace without breaking their kiss. She was now over him, standing on her knees and cradling his face in her hands. She pulled away with a smile and wiped away his tears before drying her own face.

Touching foreheads, she breathed in his pain before a gentle laugh bubbled out of her. "Just stay with us, Goku. From now on."

He smiled again after that. One hand pushing back the raven hair he loved to play with as he pulled her back down for another kiss.

They laid back down in each other's arms. Eyes puffy from their emotional conversation. She had almost fallen asleep when one more word fell from his lips. One last promise: "always."

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ksandraws57 · 7 days ago

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Kisses 🥰

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sacachorch0vo · 6 months ago

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Fan de su relación 🥰🫀

Hola chiccolo community

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bumblebriez · 5 months ago

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In Heat

(Goku x Fem!Reader)

NSFW

⚠️⚠️⚠️: Just a hint of blood play, Saiyan mating bites. Swearing. Feral Goku. Intense smuttyness.

Summary: You are experiencing some sort of intense feeling, though you try to hide it. Goku notices it.

This is written in the first person view, but majority will not be. It's a very old one, which you can probably tell, the more you read. My writing is a little bit shitty but I'm trying. So what I'm saying is there will be some mistakes, don't mind them :)

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I cross my legs as I feel a sudden rush through my body, a tingling sensation. More towards my lower region. It's felt uncomfortable. Really uncomfortable.

I scrunch my face up as I feel another wave hit me.

"You okay?" I quickly look up at see my best friend BF/N, standing in the kitchen doorway.

"Yeah. I'm fine. Just don't feel too good." She grabs the milk out of the fridge, eyeing me.

"You think it's a good idea to train today?" She asks as she grabs a bowl as well.

"I'll be fine. Think it's just cramps." She just nodded in realisation.

This was nothing like cramps.

But how was I suppose to sit there and explain this feeling.

"So how you're training with Goku anyway."

At the mention of his name, I feel a wave hit me again.

"Slow. I have no idea what I'm doing. He thinks I'm doing good tho." I explain as I try to position myself.

"I'm sure. Probably staring at your ass the whole time."

Another wave.

"Hate to break it to you love. He's nothing like that. Sadly." I state, eating a heaping of my yogurt.

"I don't know girl. I've seen those stares, even he can't resist." I roll my eyes, pushing myself up from the table.

"He might be naive but he isn't dumb. If a guys likes what he sees.."

Another wave.

"Stop it." I exclaim, placing my bowl into the sink.

"Are you sure you're okay?" BF/N asks, worry washing over her face.

"I'll be fine. I promise." I reassure her, giving her a kiss on the forehead "I gotta go. Can't keep the naive man waiting."

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I look down at my phone as I stand in the middle of the field, waiting.

Shit. I'm early.

I sigh, closing my eyes, trying to ignore the trembling feeling in my legs.

As another wave hits me, I moan lightly.

My eyes widen, I quickly cover my mouth. Embarrassed.

I shake my head, before taking a seat on the grass below me. Trying to take control of my body.

What the fuck is going on with me? I've never once had this experience. It's like.. it's like I'm edging to an orgasm...

I feel myself get wetter and wetter by the second.

What the fuck.

"Good morning Y/N!" The tingling sensation amplifies as soon as I heard his voice.

I look up at him, as he towers over me. I stare up at him, feeling myself start to heat up.

"You okay?" He asks softly. He kneels down, not taking his eyes off me. I notice his pupils dilate, the closer he gets to me.

"I'm- fin-e" I stutter out.

His eyes bore into mine, the innocent eyes replaced with unfamiliar ones.

Without any warning, Goku learns forwards on his toes, inhaling deeply.

"You smell.. incredible." My lower region tingles, sending shivers throughout my whole body. His voice was deep. Nothing I was use too. The innocent Goku was gone and replace by something more feral.

I lean back on my palms as he falls on his knees, I unconsciously open my legs. Almost like I was inviting him in.

He moves in between, I let out a breathless moan. It's feels as if he was stalking me, he was the predator, I was his prey.

I lean back on my elbows, staring up at him as he leans over me, pressing himself against me. I let out another breathless moan as I feel his hard press against my lower region.

"Goku? What's happening right now." I whisper as our faces are mere inches away from each other.

I feel him slowly start thrusting his hips against my pelvis bone.

"I don't know what's happening but all I know right now is I need you. I need to be inside you. Feel you around me as I fuck my seed into you." I gasp lightly as he continues to thrust against me.

"I want to fuck you until you fall apart in my hands" he growls softly, as he rest his forehead against mine. Our lips nearly touching.

I moan in bliss as I move my hips to match his, spreading my legs wider.

As moans flow from both parties, I take the opportunity to licks his lips, making him release another growl before capturing my lips with his.

I moan into his aggressive kiss, our tongues moving in sync which each others, teeth clanking.

He presses his hand on my neck, gripping roughly. His thrust become harder. Almost slamming into me, making me jump as I feel the fabric rubbing my already overstimulated clit over and over again.

As our kiss gets more sloppier and aggressive, I wrap my arms around his neck, pulling him down with me as I rest my back on the ground. Trying to pull him closer to me. Needing him to be close to me.

I feel one of his hands paw at my over sensitive breast, squeezing it. I moan into his mouth, biting down on his lip, hard enough to draw blood. He growls at the action, pulling away to look to at me. I lean up lick the blood from his lip.

Without any warn he rips apart my top, one clean rip. Along with my bra. Freeing my breasts. He quickly captures my left breast in his mouth. I moan sharply; shoving my hands through his hair, gripping tightly.

His teeth scrap my sensitive bud, making me shiver, he slowly moves up my chest, leaving sweet kiss on my bare skin.

His lips glide over my collarbone, towards my neck. I run my hands up his back, pulling tightly at his shirt as he starts to nibble on my neck.

I gasp sharply as I feel his teeth break through the skin, he lifts his head to look me in my eyes.

I stare back at him, staring at the blood that was on his lips. As like a big tidal wave of pleasure flows through me, seeing him there with my blood coating his luscious lips, the fact that he had left a mark.

I quickly captured his lips with mine. He swallows all of my moans and whimpers as I cannot not stop extreme pleasure coursing through me.

I quickly push him back, making him sit up on his knees, him still planted nicely between my legs. I lean forward and rip apart the top of his Gi. Showing his gorgeous muscles. Abs. He lets out the most attractive, feral growl I have ever heard and rips apart my pants, along with my panties.

I quickly sit up and sit on his knees, grinding my hips. Smashing my lips against his once again.

My hands pathetically pull at the bottom of his Gi; Wanting it gone. Wanting to feel our skin touch.

I let out a soft whimper, when he starts to descend down my body, painfully slowly. Leaving sloppy kisses in his wake. Sending uncomfortable waves of pleasure through my whole body. My clit quite literally throbbing; painfully.

"Goku please~" A harsh whisper escaped my lips, having trouble forming any kind of words.

Our eyes met as Goku stared at my desperate form, his eyes more dilated than before. Without any hesitation, he was now bare in front of me. His cock hung, large and veiny. I could see it throbbing as pre cum was slowly dripping from the tip.

If I was in my normal state of mind, I'd be terrified at the size but not right now. I was determined to take him. No matter the cost. He was by far the most gorgeous thing, I had ever laid my eyes on.

Before I could process any further, Goku had roughly pushed my legs apart; lining up at my entrance. My hands dancing over his defined muscles, lightly scratching.

Without any warning or any time to think, Goku pushed into me, Hard. His hips slammed straight into my pelvis, causing a loud cried to erupt from my lips; my eyes widen at the searing pain and pleasure that rushed through my core. Goku let out a feral loud roar as I squeezed around him.

He gave me no time to accommodate his size before he started to plow into me, his hands gripping my waist tightly; knuckles starting to go white. Most likely leaving a bruise.

The pain quickly diminished, leaving me completely in utter bliss, my eyes rolled back as he continued to fuck me hard. I felt like I was on cloud nine. I couldn't put into words how good this felt. I've never felt anything like this.

I didn't care who heard at the time, I let the cries and moans leave my mouth loudly as he continued to hit the same spot over and over again.

Goku threw his head back, groans escaping his lips as he picked up his pace, which I never thought would be possible. My hands gripped his forearms tightly; my nails embedded into his skins as my eyes started to fill with tears, becoming overwhelmed with this welcomed pleasure.

My hands traveled up his arms, reaching to his neck. I pull myself up, wrapping around him. Needing to be closer. Needing to feel his skin on my mine.

Goku quickly captured his lips with mine, teeth clashing against each others. He positioned us, so that I was now sitting on his lap, pathetically moving my hips. The pace slowed for a bit as Goku let me take control. Only for a few seconds.

"Get on all fours." I swear I could've came from just how huskily and sexy his voice sounded. This wasn't the Goku that everyone knew. This was something more primal and I loved it.

I made no hesitation to listen. I simply did as I was told. As soon as I turned around to get on my knees, Goku pushes me down, my face pressed against the ground. It was only seconds he wasn't inside me. For the time I was bare I was whimpering, pressing against him. Wanting him in me now. Missing the feeling his cock gave me.

He didn't let me struggle any longer, before his harshly pushed himself in me. I screamed out as he fucked me harder than he has been, my ass bouncing back against his hips. His hand pressed against the back of my neck, holding me in place.

"This is mine." He growled lowly, causing me to shiver.

"You're mine. All mine." I couldn't form any words, they just came out in cries. I started to whimper when I felt his pace slowly, torturing slow.

"I want to hear you say it." My breathing started to catch up to me, I didn't realise what I had done.

I let out a cry as Goku pulled me up, his hand placed tightly around my neck, holding me up against him. Slowly rocking his hips against my ass, his cock pumping in and out of me slowly.

"Say it." He murmured into my ear, I tried to focus on him but all I could focus on was his cock filling me full.

"Please. I need you~" I moan quietly, as my hand travels up his forearm, resting on his hand.

"Say I'm yours." He halts his movements, causing me to whimper once again.

"I'm yours. No one else's. I'm all yours Goku. All yours." He lets out a low chuckle as he listens to my breathless words.

"That's a good girl."

As soon as those words left his mouth, he started to fuck me, harder than he has. I could feel myself coming to, his cock was slamming to right spot and I could feel myself ready to burst. All of my decency went out the window and I didn't care. I didn't care what I looked like, I didn't care how I sounded. All I cared about was this man and he was quite literally fucking the life out of me.

"I want you to cum. I want to feel you lose control all over my cock." I followed his voice, because that's exactly what I was going to do.

"You feel so good honey. You feel so amazing around my cock. It's all yours." As he continued to moan words into my ear that was my tipping point, I could feel myself cumming and I was welcoming it. I was so ready.

"Goku- I'm gonna-!" He picked up the pace once again, going at super speed.

"That's right honey. Cum." I did as I was commanded, my body started to lose control; starting to shaking as I came all over his cock. He held me close and tightly as my body thrashed around in his arms. My cries and moans echoed through the trees.

Goku continued to plow into me, bringing me my release but he wasn't done.

"I'm not done with you yet. I told you I'm going to fuck my seed into you. You are going to be full of my cum." I laid against him as he continued to use me as his fuck toy. The moans and cries never seizing.

Before too long, his thrusts became harder and stronger, letting me know he was close but to my surprise, so was I. I've never came with a man before let alone twice, this was truly something else.

Goku turned my head so that our lips could connected, his mouth engulfed mine, capturing all of my moans that continued to fall out. I could feel him become desperate as he chased his own high, before I could expect. Goku let out another feral growl before I felt his load release into me, causing my eyes to roll to the back and that was exactly what I needed for my own release. He continued to pump in me as he rode us through our highs, they were basically in sync. It was pure bliss. Heavenly.

We tumbled to the ground, me landing softly onto his chest. Both parties are struggling to catch their breath.

In all that 'commotion', I didn't even notice Goku had transformed; into his Super Saiyan glow.

"Goku?"

"Hmm?"

I point up towards his hair "You're Yellow." Goku pulled at a strand of his locks, his wide goofy smile return to his face "Huh. I didn't even notice." His head rolled back to rest against the ground, his hand tracing little patterns into my shoulder as I copy the same action on his chest.

He powers down, leaving him laying there with his usual spiky black hair. A small soft smile makes its way on my lips as I rest my chin on the top of my intertwined hands; staring up at the gorgeous man.

"Wanna go again?" He suddenly asks, lifting his head back up to look down at me. A shock expression makes it way on to my face. Though it seemed such an innocent suggestion, behind those eyes was something more sinister that I experienced only moments ago.

"Now? Jesus Goku. You fucked me raw." He smiles cheekily, pulling me up so that our faces are barely touching; noses brushing.

"But you're so addicting. I don't think I could get enough of you. You are so much better than training and You're mine. All mine." I felt my cheeks heat up as he squeezed me in the tight embrace.

Oh.

He was serious.

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carnal-lnstinct · 1 year ago

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for the halloween event

turles/bardock/goku (saiyans probably lol) reacting to a fem reader with a moo-costume (cow) lmao (or a dinosaur 😭)

It could be nsfw or not, as you like!

✦✦Content: M/18. MINORS DNI. afab reader. established relationships. domesticated bardock and turles. costume sex. oral - female receiving. nipple play/teasing. reference breeding kink. humor ✦✦Warning: explicit language

BARDOCK X READER

It’s cute. He thinks? What is he supposed to think of it staring down the tall, foam headdress of your costume as you came “face to face” with him.

It gives Bardock some conflicting feelings about seeing you walk around in your dinosaur costume and playfully roaring at him.

He vocalizes absentmindedly on how the costume reminds him of something he ate once upon a time while looking down at you in it.

The creature wore that same unnerving expression you were giving him now once he expressed that, taking him back to that moment from his past.

…May he does like your costume.

Only a saiyan could correlate eating a conquered beast for survival to eating out his overstimulated lover and not see anything wrong with that.

By the squint in his eyes, his growing smirk, and the grip on the tail of your costume when you thought you could now slink away, your Halloween plans quickly changed.

He ended up ruining the shape of the tail and the suit of your costume to get to where he wanted, having first “ripped out your belly” to free your breasts while you squirmed underneath him, hungrily latching onto your nipple, shaping your other breast playfully in his hand.

The beast put up more of a “fight” than you were but he delighted in the taste of your supple skin regardless, gently pulling your sensitive button between his teeth until it popped free and he sucked it back between his lips to do it again.

Next thing you knew you were on all fours and crying out at the waves of pleasure, gloved “claws” and matching boots unable to get a solid grip on anything when he tore out the back of the costume and licked into your exposed folds.

GOKU X READER

Halloween was supposed to be spooky or scary, and Goku doesn’t quite get where a cow falls into those categories.

Unless you were giving out tasty meat treats instead of candy for Halloween, then it would certainly fit the theme.

Either way, there had to be better costume options before you settled on this. Not that he’s complaining if it makes you happy and you’re having fun.

You playfully teased making it a couple costume theme and how he could be your “breeding bull”. And he blushed at that, sheepishly laughing it off.

You’d thought your relationship had outgrown those bashful responses by now but it truthfully turned you on knowing you could still get that kind of reaction out of him.

Further teasing him, you placed the headband of small cow horns on his head and filled your hands with his broad chest, complimenting how well they looked against his crown of wild hair. Naturally, Goku let out an aroused sound from your fondling and sweet words. However, he knows how this game goes and tried to scold you for your one-sided teasing.

You smirked at him in response and moved in closer, his heart skipping a beat when you purposely circled your fingers over the sensitive buds of his chest through his shirt and pressed your lips into his neck.

He crumbled within minutes of your hand at his hardening cock while you were making idle comments of "milking" a strong and healthy bull like him. The dirtier your words, the more complacent he grew underneath your touch like a moth to a flame.

You managed to get his gi loose to get his shirt over his chest for a more direct touch to his skin your mouth wrapped around his nipple as he trembled pressing up against you.

You continued to pump at his weeping cock through his loose pants, his eyes rolling back slightly from all the stimulation and a dark, wet stain appearing in his clothing where it shaped the tip of his cock.

TURLES X READER

Thinks you look ridiculous upon first glance and the double take that followed with his brow arched and a surprised stare.

When you initially said you were going to be a cow, Turles can admit he doesn’t know of earth animals enough to think much of it, until he saw you prance out in the inflated plastic suit and platform boots

Then he can’t help but give you his honest opinion when you ask him how you looked, accompanied by a wry smile as if it would cushion the blow of his words. If this was some sort of a joke, he just didn’t get it.

But then you asked him to help you out of the suit. Upon letting the air out of it when he unzips the back, he finds you in a matching cow-print lingerie set with a cowbell around your neck and faux-fur ears. The underwear was stitched with a cow tail hanging off the back as well.

And he…he still doesn’t get what you’re going for. You’re just wearing one of your matching underwear sets now. The bra barely covered your breasts, not to mention how they were straining the thin strings keeping it tied up around you. This costume was impractical.

You dropped a few annoyed hints to get your intentions across and then he just stared at you silently, eyes scanning over your body as his head tilted and the tip of his loose tail flicked.

Turles’ eyes narrow when he looks back up to yours. He can’t deny that in theory, it was a cunning attempt to seduce him even though you failed at it. But he doesn’t like being on the receiving end of tricks.

Now, the bell around your neck is ringing constantly from the way he has you bouncing off the snap of his hips into yours, balancing you in his hold with your legs dangling off his large forearms. Accompanied by your moans, it’s all encouraging music to his ears.

There’s a string of drool falling down the side of your mouth that makes him smirk, the harsh yet delicious pumps of his cock inside you making you ache with pleasure and pain as relentlessly fucks you through your orgasm.

Is not the darkness sweet ?

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Constructive criticism: Dragonball Evolution

Ah yes, Dragonball Evolution.

Back in 1984 Mangaka Akira Toriyama created Dragon Ball, a manga inspired by the classical 16th-century Chinese novel: Journey to the west, which became a big hit.

Many years later, in the 2000s, Hollywood realized that not just western superherocomics can be turned into movies and milked for money. And so, 20th Century Fox (as they were called before Disney devoured them) bought the movierights to Dragon Ball and tried to make a live-action movie out of it. The film began development in 2002.

Stephen Chow was approached to direct the film, and although he said he was deeply interested because he is a fan of Dragon Ball, Chow declined the chance to direct. Instead, he accepted a role as a producer via his company Star Overseas. Chow`s reason for his decision is that he believes that he should only direct stories he had created. Robert Rodriguez, Mark A.Z. Dippé and Zack Snyder were offered to direct but passed. 20th Century Fox then went on to send the script to writer/director James Wong who accepted. Ben Ramsey, the movie`s writer, wrote the first draft which was deemed too expensive to shoot, and in the end, he wrote about five different drafts of the script following notes from the studio. James Wong wrote the last draft, again according to notes from the studio, but decided to remain uncredited as the co-screenwriter. James Marsters, who was cast as the movie`s villain Piccolo, was a big fan of the manga. Justin Chatwin, who was cast as Son Goku, prepared for his role by reading several volumes of the manga and even the novel it was based on.

When the movie finally came out it was... not good. It wasn`t very faithful to the source material. But if you ignore the sourcematerial (like the movie did) it wasn`t good even standing on it`s own. Characters and plot were both pretty bland and the CGI didn`t look very good. You could tell that this was rushed and made on an unnecessarily low budget.

This movie was made when Tom Rothman was one of the big guys at 20th Century Fox, infamous for micromanaging and rushing movies. Remember, this was the same studio that gave us X-Men Origins: Wolverine.

Before the film's release, Dragon Ball creator Akira Toriyama suggested fans treat it as an alternate universe version of his work. In a 2013 interview with Asahi Shimbun, Toriyama revealed that he had felt the script did not "capture the world or the characteristics" of his series and was "bland" and not interesting, so he cautioned and gave suggestions for changes. But the Hollywood producers did not heed his advice, "And just as I thought, the result was a movie I cannot call Dragon Ball."

So... if I had a wish-granting dragon that would allow me to travel back in time and change this movie... what would I have changed?

Son Goku

Nothing against Justin Chatwin, but like I said in my CC of Shyamalan`s Last Airbender; In a time where there are so few roles for asian actors to play, why cast a white actor to play a character who`s name clearly screams "I`m asian! I`m asian!"?

Also: I`d make his personality more like how it was in the Manga: a naive guy who loves food, fighting and improving his fighting skills.

Plot

It starts with a short little man (Prins Pilaf) and his helpers (Shu, an anthropomorphic dog in a ninja outfit and Mai, a black-haired, human woman) finding an ancient teapot, hidden in a wall in a temple. After this we get a little exposition in the form of old, Japanese paintings and a voice-over.

The narrator tells us that according to the old legends there are seven mystical orbs known as "Dragon Balls" in the world. When assembled, they could be used to summon Shenron, a mighty dragon who would grant one wish to the one who summoned him. After the wish is granted, the Dragon Balls are scattered again across the world and become inert for one year.

There once was a powerful devil known as Piccolo who wanted to use the Dragon Balls to take over the world. He fought and lost to a great fighter who used a secret technique to imprison him in a teapot (like the one we saw earlier). And so, the world was saved... at least for a while.

The present: We see a house, about 40 feet away from the house there`s a giant footprint, it looks like it has been there for a few years. In the backyard of this house we see a teenage Son Goku (16 or 17 years old) practicing martial arts. Then he does some other stuff like chopping wood with his bare hands and cooking and eating food. He tells a crystalball with four stars in it: "My first day at school tomorrow granpa. Wish me luck." He goes to sleep.

Next day: Goku, being homeschooled by his granpa his entire life, is a fish out of water. The ugly furbelt that he has around his waist isn`t helping either.

Two bullies harass a meek little guy. Chi-Chi, a girl walking the hallway with her best friend sees them and wants to stop them. Her friend tells her: "No Chi-Chi! Remember what the principal said, if you get in one more fight you`ll be expelled!"

Chi-Chi considers this for a second... then decides to help the little guy anyway, she refuses to stand by when someone is being bullied. Fortunately she doesn`t have do anything because the bullies get distracted by a new guy with crazy, untamed hair, an ugly belt made out of fur who looks completely lost; it`s Son Goku. The bullies try to mess with Goku but he beats them up with zero effort. Later, Goku and Chi-Chi meet in the school cafeteria. They talk a little and Chi-Chi offers to help Goku with his studies so he won`t fall behind. Montage: Chi-Chi helps Goku with his studies, they practice martial arts together and other stuff. Goku reveals to Chi-Chi that the ugly furbelt he keeps wearing is actually his tail, this is why he`s been home-schooled for most of his life. He tells her that once, when he was little, another kid pulled his tail and it weakened him, so the tail is basically his achilles heel. That`s why he has it around his waist so that people can`t easily grab it.

Later in the evening, elsewhere: A girl with her hair dyed blue, about Son Goku`s age, appears to be looking for something. She has some kind of hand-held radar. She wears some kind of utility belt around her waist and stands next to a car.

Saturday: Goku decides to go fishing and meets the girl with blue hair, her name is Bulma and she tells him that she`s looking for something that could lead to a breakthrough in the field of renewable energy. Goku invites her to his house where she finds that he has a Dragon Ball. She pulls out her own two Dragon Balls and holds them close to Goku`s. The closer the Dragon Balls are to each other the stronger the energy that they emit get. Bulma believes that if she can get all Dragon Balls together she can tap them for a source of unlimited energy. And if it turns out that the old legends about a wish-granting dragon being true then heck, she could just wish for an unlimited energy source. Goku is unwilling to part with the only memory he has of his grandpa but Bulma makes a deal with him, he can join her in her search for the other Dragon Balls, and as soon as she has gotten what she wants he`ll get his four star Dragon Ball back. It`s a deal.

Goku: "Wait, is there any full moon tonight?"

Bulma (checks her digital calender): "No. Why?"

Goku: "Bad things happen when there`s a full moon"

Bulma: "Like what?"

Goku: "That giant footprint outside my backyard. It was caused by a giant monster who appeared when there was a full moon. It stepped on my grandpa and... crushed him."

Bulma: "...Oh."

They go outside. Bulma takes out a capsule from her utility belt, pushes a button on it and drops it on the ground. The tiny capsule turns into a car, Goku is amazed. They get in and drive away. They meet Chi-Chi, Goku tells her everything, Chi-Chi is intrigued and joins them. Road Trip!

Elsewhere, a rural town: People are doing their things, hanging up laundry, old ladies are gossiping, children are playing. One of the kids sees something in the sky; an airship. A Red Ribbon Army airship to be precise! (In this version the Red Ribbon Army works for Pilaf.) Piccolo, an old, green, bald, pointy-eared man with antennaes on his forehead is on board this airship. He senses that this town is hiding a Dragon Ball. He raises his hand, charges it with energy and fires. A quarter of the town is destroyed, people run in panic. Piccolo is disappointed in himself, back when he was in his prime a blast like that would have been enough to destroy the entire town.

Prince Pilaf: "Don`t worry, when we have all the Dragon Balls you can wish yourself young again, and then help me take over the world."

Piccolo: "Yes... Of course."

(Piccolo has no intention of helping Pilaf, as soon as he has gotten his full strength back he`ll throw out Pilaf like yesterday`s garbage and take over the world himself.) Piccolo fires more energy blasts at the town, he hates to leave a work half-done.

Act 2: Elsewhere, in the middle of nowhere: Bulma stops the car, she, Goku and Chi-Chi get out and stretch their legs. There is a Dragon Ball not far from where they are. They enter a cave, inside the cave is a temple. We get something similar to the beginning of Raiders of the lost ark and they get their next Dragon Ball.

Bulma takes out a capsule that turns into a futuristic house. They will set up camp here for the night. Little do they know that they are being watched... by Yamcha, a thief, and his shapeshifting, Pokémon-like cat sidekick named Pool. Goku goes to hunt for food, Bulma thinks he`s an idiot since they already have food with them, but Goku is not much for that prepackaged microwave stuff, with it`s tiny little portions and prefers to do it his way. When he is gone Yamcha and Pool sees this as a perfect opportunity to strike. They sneak in and try to steal as much as possible but are discovered by Bulma and Chi-Chi who defend themselves. Yamcha and Pool gets the upper hand but then Goku comes back with a wild boar the size of a car and beats them. Yamcha and Pool flee. Goku, Chi-Chi and Bulma hear the sound of someone clapping their hands, it comes from an old, bald, bearded man wearing clothes with turtle motif. Bulma thinks he looks familiar. The old man saw them fighting and is impressed by Goku`s fighting style and wonders who taught him. Goku tells him that it was his grandpa, Son Gohan. The old man recognizes that name, he was his old classmate back when he studied martial arts. He wonders what his old classmate is doing these days and is a little saddened to hear that he`s dead. The old man offers to teach Son Goku and reveals that his name is Master Roshi. Bulma recognizes that name!

Bulma: "You`re that peeping tom! You spied on women in the bath house a few years ago!"

Master Roshi: "That... that wasn`t me! You... must be thinking about... a completely different person! Who is definetly not me!"

A little later Goku eats his boar and shares it with Master Roshi who shares some stories with him. He tells him that when he was young he studied under the great Master Mutaito, who in turn studied under Master Korin. He shows Goku a "cool trick" that he learned from his old master: an energy projection attack called the Kamehameha. Goku really wants to learn that technique. Bulma and Chi-Chi refuses to let Roshi sleep in the same house as them. Roshi is OK with that and takes out his own capsule that turns into an RV.

Next day: A little montage of the gang travelling and Master Roshi helping Goku to improve his fighting skills. Goku tries several times to do a Kamehameha but fails, Roshi tells him to be patient, it takes time. All this time they are being followed by Yamcha and Pool.

They reach the town that Piccolo destroyed earlier. Yamcha is devastated, his uncle lived there! He joins Goku`s gang, now they have a common enemy.

Their journey continues. Goku and Yamcha trains under Master Roshi. Goku keeps trying to do a Kamehameha, he is doing slightly better now. After hours of focusing he manages, for a fraction of a second, to create a tiny little spark. Yamcha and Bulma bonds a little.

The gang reaches a temple carved out a mountain. Master Roshi has a bad feeling about this, he believes something bad will happen. Mai, Shu and several soldiers from the Red Ribbon Army show up. Fightscene. (Bulma is not a martial artist like the others, but she has guns though.) Piccolo emerges from the temple opening holding a Dragon Ball in his hand. Master Roshi recognizes him. He`s the devil that his old Master Mutaito sealed away years ago! (We get a little flashback: Roshi and Son Gohan were in their mid-twenties when it happened. The technique that defeated Piccolo took so much strength out of Mutaito that it cost him his life.) Yamcha, filled with anger, attacks Piccolo and is swatted way as if he was a fly. Goku attacks Piccolo, their fight lasts longer than ten seconds but Goku is defeated, Roshi fights fights Piccolo but is also defeated. Chi-Chi and Bulma knows that they are outmatched. Mai takes their Dragon Balls, the Dragon Radar and all of Bulma`s capsules. Piccolo plans to kill them but Bulma uses a smoke bomb. Chi-Chi takes the Dragon Balls back from Mai, Goku gets up and picks up Roshi and Yamcha. Bulma gets an idea: run towards the temple! They run. Mai takes back the Dragon Balls from Chi-Chi. Inside the temple entrance Roshi gather what`s left of his strength to fire a Kamehameha that makes the entrance collapse. They are now trapped inside. Piccolo finds their plan foolish, nothing awaits them there except a slow death. He could have finished them off quickly. But he can`t stay to do so, he has used up too much power, doesn`t have time to wait and he has their Dragon Balls, so there`s no reason for him to stay. He leaves, Mai and the Red Ribbon Army soldiers follow him. Goku`s gang wait a while to recover their strength and for Yamcha to regain consciousness. Master Roshi uses a kamehameha to clear the debris, after a few blasts they`re finally out. It`s night... and there`s a full moon. Goku sees the moon and starts to change. He transforms into a giant weregorilla with a tail and starts going berserk. Bulma sees the giant footprint that the monster leaves, it looks just like the one in Goku`s backyard. She puts two and two together; the monster that killed Goku`s grandpa... was Goku himself! Chi-Chi remembers what Goku said to her a few days ago, about his tail being his achilles heel. She tells the others that they have cut of his tail! Pool turns into a sword that Yamcha uses to cut the tail off. Goku turns back to his old self. He is exhausted, both physically and mentally, he sees the giant footprint in the ground. He puts two and two together... and faints.

The next day: Goku remains unconscious. Roshi knows what they should do, he takes them to a wooded area where there`s a very, very, VERY hightower. Pool turns himself into a big monkey and climbs the tower with his hands and feet while holding Goku`s unconscious body with his tail. The others climb after him.

Master Roshi: "I`m getting too old for this."

At the top of the tower there`s a round, almost saucer-like building. Inside the building they meet a short, chubby, talking cat carrying a big staff. It takes them a few seconds to realize that THIS is Master Korin. If Roshi is a (dirty minded) Obi-Wan Kenobi Korin is like Yoda. The gang is tired, exhausted and hungry, Korin gives them Senzu beans that restores their stamina, vitality and gives them full nourishment. He performs a telepathic mind-meld with Son Goku. He goes deep into his subconscious and helps him get over the shock and guilt of accidentally killing his own grandpa. (It`s kinda like that episode of Avatar: The Last Airbender with the guru.) Goku finally wakes up, he is hungry.

How are they gonna find and stop Piccolo? They have no Dragon Radar or means of transportation. Korin helps them by giving them a small cloud called Flying Nimbus that can transport them. It`s a very sensitive cloud though, it only allows Goku and Chi-Chi to ride it. Korin also knows where Piccolo is and points them in the right direction. Goku and Chi-Chi flies away on the Flying Nimbus, Pool transforms himself into a big bird that Roshi, Bulma and Yamcha can ride as he flies after the Nimbus.

Act 3: Mai finds the last Dragon Ball at the bottom of the ocean and gives it to Piccolo. Now he has all seven!

Prince Pilaf: "Now you can help me take over the world!"

Piccolo: "About that... I lied."

Piccolo plans to throw Pilaf overboard but Mai and Shu stands between him and Pilaf.

Mai: "If you want Pilaf..."

Shu: "... You`re gonna have to go through us!"

Piccolo: (shrugs) "OK."

He casually tosses all three of them overboard like they were yesterday`s garbage. They land in the ocean and survive. Piccolo gives a meaningful look to the soldiers around him. They gulp and understand that they are now under new management and quickly adapt to that fact. Piccolo takes the Dragon Balls, jumps off the ship and lands on the ground. He summons the mighty Shenron and speaks his wish. Shenron makes him young again. Piccolo gets ready to destroy Shenron but Goku arrives in the nick of time and interrupts him. Shenron disappears, the Dragon Balls fly up in the air and scatter. Piccolo and Goku fight. The Red Ribbon soldiers try to assist Piccolo but Chi-Chi fights them to prevent them from doing so. Unfortunately the soldiers outnumber her, but fortunately Roshi shows up and evens the odds. Pool drops Bulma and Yamcha off on the ship. Bulma runs through the ship looking for her utility belt, Yamcha fights off any guards who try to stop her. Goku keeps fighting Piccolo. Bulma finds her utility belt, takes a capsule that turns into a rocket launcher and fires it at Piccolo. It doesn`t do much damage. Piccolo fires an energy blast at her but Goku jumps in front of her and takes the hit. Goku gets up, musters all his strength and for a moment, it is as if his grandfather is there with him in spirit to give him extra strength. Goku fires a POWERFUL kamehameha at Piccolo.

Piccolo is (seemingly) obliterated and Goku collapses from exhaustion. He wakes up and we get to the movie`s denouement. Since the Dragon Balls have been used and are now inert for a year there isn`t any big, important, adventurous stuff left for the gang to do for a while. Bulma and Yamcha have grown close and plan to go on a date, Roshi leaves in his RV and Chi-Chi suggests to Goku that the two of them should go on a date. As long as their date is in a restaurant Goku is all for it. He and Chi-Chi fly away on the Nimbus.

THE END

Mid-Credit scene: One year later: Bulma, searching the bottom of the ocean in a Mini-Submarine finds Goku`s Dragon Ball with the four stars.

Post-Credit scene: A flashback/dream sequence: Piccolo, standing in a palace above the clouds meets a doppleganger of himself, wearing a white robe with a blue collar. On his robe he has a red colored kanji that means "God". The doppleganger bids him farewell. Piccolo wakes up, injured but alive.

Now, I could stop here... but I wanna pitch the sequels too.

Dragon Ball 2

Nine years have passed. Bulma`s dream of unlimited global energy has become a reality. Goku now has a seven year old son named Son Gohan. Master Roshi has taken in three new students: Krillin, Tien Shinhan and Chiaotzu. Three aliens called Saiyans visit Earth with plans to take over it, their names are Vegeta, Nappa and Raditz, they look human except they all have tails... Just like Goku used to have! Goku is a Saiyan! Piccolo`s doppleganger reveals himself to Goku and the gang (and is now much older than Piccolo himself). He reveals that he is Kami, the guardian of Earth, he is originally from a planet called Namek. It was he who created the Dragon Balls and that he and Piccolo were once one. If he or Piccolo dies the Dragon Balls will cease to function. Kami also reveals that it is possible to wish a person back from the dead, but a person can only be resurrected once, you only get one chance, not infinite chances. Speaking of Piccolo, he starts to work with the heroes now that they have a common enemy, but he insists it`s only temporary. Anyway, the gang fights the aliens. Piccolo dies in the battle as does Nappa and Raditz. Vegeta survives and leaves Earth in his escape pod.

Dragon Ball 3

Goku and the gang travels to Namek, saves a bunch of Namekians, Vegeta switches sides and Piccolo comes back to life. Goku goes super Saiyan, fights and defeats Frieza.

Dragon Ball 4

A young man from the future, (named Trunks) shows up and warns Goku and the gang about a monster named Cell who will threaten the world in one year. The gang prepare themselves for Cell, but they were not prepared for the three androids (16, 17 and 18) who would show up before Cell. They fight the androids, Vegeta learns how to go Super saiyan, Cell shows up, absorbs the androids and become stronger because of it. The gang fights Cell, and manages to pull android 18 out of him. They fight and defeat Cell.

Dragon Ball 5

Goku and the gang fights a Monster/Demon named Buu.

Aand that`s how I would do it. Not great but hopefully something that Akira Toriyama would be OK with.

It is of course very easy for me to write these because I have the luxury of hindsight. And I didn`t have Tom Rothman standing over me, micromanaging the movie to death and pressuring me to get it made before a deadline.

Why do I write these?

For several reasons. I`m nitpicky. Sometimes the movies I criticize aren`t bad, I just like my own ideas better. Sometimes the movies I critize are bad. I care about good storytelling and it`s a fun excerize in creativity and script doctoring.

But also because I have a lot of of free time.

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Written stuff: 60

Started writing this 2024-07-13

I`ve had this on my to-do list for a while now. After I heard of Akira Toriyamas passing I felt that now is the time for me to start writing this, but then for some reason I did my little CC/movie pitch of Spider-Man in the MCU instead. This was originally gonna be my Written stuff number 59.

Comments are appreciated.

Other movies on my Constructive Criticism list that you can look forward to

Supergirl (1984) Jonah Hex (2010) The Spirit (2008) The Dark Knight trilogy

And as usual: English is not my first language, so if my writing doesn`t seem to flow naturally, you know why.

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