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SO! I was very ah,,, inspired by @ajoure s au 4cmit and his most recent post Proceed with Caution so I made a quick song of the dialogue. I don't have the lyrics in currently, but here's the music
#i did this in like 30 minutes so it might be bad#but feedback is welcome! :)#and yes i know some of the notes clash- i meant for them to so it would signify his struggle as well as the heartbeats#also absolutely love ajoures au and artstyle#go check them out if you haven't seen it#definitely NOT inspired by Epic the Musical.... /sarcasm#also yall i had to convert and compress this file so much i think it has become a ship of theseus itself#harley sawyer#harley sawyer poppy playtime#rewindrambles#the doctor#poppy playtime#poppy playtime harley sawyer#the doctor poppy playtime#music#rwrx music#4cmit music
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i think peps raised finn more than you think
#you know in fionna and cake when peptank is doing sword training with the baby finn. that lodged itself in my brain#adventure time#peppermint butler#digital#finn the human#finn#i also think pep having raised finn makes the babypep thing soft. finn returned the favor for sure for definitely.#howeevr what baby pep needs is like. someone to tuck him into bed. and baby finn needed someone to chase him around the halls#teaching him the very important lesson 'guys in suits can still flip your shit with a well-cast magic spell no matter how good you can stab#i keep drawing people with too long arms. oh well#peps watching jake loot bikes by the bar when finn isnt aroudn: this kid needs a positive male role model. ill do it. (is terrible at it)#anyways where do u think finn and peps get their infinite feedback horrible bitch tendencies from. each other.
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🌙 Moon Phases 🌙
Agatha Harkness X Fem!Reader
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Words: 1699
Chapter 3
The sun had almost set by the time you found yourself in Westview, the paper with Agatha's adress tucked into your pants' pocket.
You walked the empty road, feeling eyes on you behind pulled curtains. The neighbours were uneasy, having chosen to lock themselves into their houses; but you could not blame them.
If what Agatha said was true and had managed to gather a coven, those poor people must have seen a few odd figures heading the same way as you.
Witches could not help it. They always had this aura, making them easier to stand out. Sometimes, their energy was enough to make someone have this uneasy feeling deep within their guts; though being as ignorant to the supernatural, they could never truly understand why.
At last, you reached the house that seemed to belong to Agatha.
The first thing you noticed was the lack of a door, but you speculated that some unfriendly visitor had found Agatha earlier that day. It would explain this sudden and urgent need to go down the Road in such short notice.
Stepping inside, you could hear voices in the background; indicating that you might be the last one to arrive. Your eyes barely glanced at the rather odd decoration of the house. None of it was screaming Agatha; you knew cause you had lived with her even for a short amount of times.
"Wait," you heard the voice of the teenage boy calling, putting a pause at the overlapping voices of the other witches. "We are one witch short," he pointed out, clearly talking about you.
You decided to make yourself present by letting your steps sound a little harder against the wooden floor, earning different pair of eyes on your form.
"No, you are not," you corrected him, one hand in your pocket.
You quickly scanned the room, sensing the different magical signatures while quickly studying them as well.
They were very different from one another, from their ages to their outfits and, of course, their magic affinity.
Yet again, it was often needed for a coven to be diverse. Though you could not help but wonder if such intense diversity would actually work, the tension between the witches and Agatha was thick enough to almost be visible.
"Sugar," Agatha greeted with a small smirk, not caring that she used your nickname in public.
She never hesitated to do it before, even though you had tried to argue a lot of times. You preferred privacy, and such nicknames, in your opinion, should exist behind close rooms and during intimate moments between two people.
Of course, Agatha never truly took into consideration your opinion and continued. There was something powerful, possessive even when she was the only one to call you such a name. Not to mention, it showed others that in a way, you were hers; some sort of invisible claim that warned others not to test their luck.
Agatha had not changed ever since, at least with that part. Despite the years you two had spent away, despite the rather unknown nature of your relationship; she still kept claiming you, often impressing even herself with ways she could find.
She studied you for a moment as your eyes connected and took notice of your outfit. While other witches chose dresses, skirts, or hippie pants; you went to the other side of the spectrum.

You had chosen a white professional shirt whose shade was bright enough to draw attention from afar. However, that was the only white thing on you.
Your buttoned up vest had white lines, but the base was black, a matching shade with your well tailored pants. Even your tie was at the colour of black, giving you a more unisex and professional look.
Needles to say you had impressed her, since for centuries you were a big fan of simple white clothing. You barely chose any other colour to wear, always having a strong connection to the bright shade.
Yet here you were now, the dark on you, almost fully covering you; the darkness of your solitude and hurt past casting a shadow to your once brighter and naive self.
It tempted Agatha, curious for a moment to test your reaction by having her hand drag across your body; testing if you would stop her when she would try unbutton your vest and take off your tie...oh, and what she could do to you with that tie.
The intense staring and sudden silence had drawn curious looks on you, some wondering what your connection to the dark Witch that had gathered them all.
The moment was interrupted by Lilia, who had been watching between the two of you until her mind and gaze trailed off.
"Two of swords!" She gasped, earning everyone's attention on her.
She did not say anything else, as if she was not conscious she had said anything or not. That alone quickly made you realize which role she played in this coven, a divination witch that was always needed in almost every mission; especially one as dangerous as the one you all had chosen to participate in.
Before any more questions or comments could be thrown, Agatha clapped her hands once.
"Well, gang's all here. Let's hit The Road." She said, trying to change the topic.
However, Jen was not done yet. "Wait," she exclaimed, and Agatha immediately knew this was not going to be good. "Where's our Green Witch?"
"Oh, do we really need one of those?"
"Of course we do." Jen argued and then looked at you. "Unless you are a Green Witch, though you definitely don't look like one," She continued, her tone judging you as did their eyes; going up and down your form.
"I am not," you corrected her, unfazed by her gaze.
You had this passive expression on your face, a cold mask that nothing could truly penetrate. Your aura was calm but hid danger behind it, like a dark peaceful sea whose waters were far deeper than they looked; dangerous creatures lurking within, waiting.
Your answer only fueled the argument between Jen and Agatha, one insisting on the importance of a Green Witch and the other arguing there was no need.
Eventually, Teen joined by referring to one member they had not invited from the list; a black heart.
This made you arch an eyebrow and look at Agatha, who at that moment did the mistake of looking at you as well.
Once again, you quickly saw right through her facade and saw both the fear and annoyance she tried so hard to hide. Whoever this black heart meant to represent was a deep scar from Agatha's past; one she did not wish to bring up.
In the end, Agatha left; excusing herself she was going to bring back the last member so they could all start the ritual and open the door to the Road.
The moment she left, the main attention fell on you; each individual in the room had different thoughts, but you were part of all of them.
In the end, it was the boy who chose to speak up. "Wait, I am confused." he even lifted his hand, like a student asking permission from the teacher to voice his question. "Jen is Potions, Lilia is Divination, Alice is Protection... what are you?"
Jen nodded her head. "The boy is right. What are you?"
That judging look once again.
It made you wonder if she looked at others the same or she felt both offended but also threatened by your presence.
It would not be the first time a witch had reacted negatively against you, especially once they realised your affiliation. Your type was not often welcomed, the duality of your nature often a wildcard that no one wished to possess.
"Backup," you explained, choosing to remain vague with your answer.
There was no need to go into detail, at least not now. You barely knew one another, and it was evident there was no trust between any of you. A common goal brought you forward, but it was not kindness or the need to find a coven.
It was selfish, and you knew that too well. Even your reasons for joining could be considered selfish.
After all, no one else chose to walk the Road unless they had a deep selfish goal in mind. Ironically, this one was what was tested the most during the trials that awaited down the Wicked Path.
You turned to the boy, realizing he was still confused by your presence. Sure, your name was on the list, but you did not seem to be part of the main four needed; according to both the Ballad and Agatha.
"To walk down the Road, you need four basic witch paths to help you and also unlock the door. Anything else is extra help, " you explained, your tone slightly softer
You could not help it. Just by seeing into his dark, innocent eyes, your defences dropped. He was a young boy, too young to choose such a path, and it made you wonder what he truly needed to take such a decision.
Jen opened her mouth to argue when Agatha walked into the room, dragging with her an older woman.
You could immediately tell she was a human woman, no drop of magic within her, and something told you the others realised that too.
Looking at Agatha, you saw her silently asking you to remain quiet on the topic, and you obeyed. Though deep down, you could not help but wonder how this would truly work.
A green witch would be needed for the trial, and only after it was passed, she would no longer be of need.
You did wonder how this would work out, but your trail of thoughts was interrupted by the faint sound of a wold howling. Your head immediately snapped to the side, eyes distantly gazing out the window as the darkness of the night covered the sky.
Agatha must have realised it, too, for she clapped her hands yet again. "No time to waste, vamos!" She said and started to walk towards the stairs leading to her basement, leaving you all no choice but to follow.
Chapter 4
#agatha harkness#agatha spoilers#agatha all along#agatha x reader#agatha fanfictiom#feedback is greatly appreciated#let me know if you like it and that I have not butchered any character#will definitely write more chapters later#do not ask me when#scedule unclear#never stable#moon phases fanfic
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Happy Valentines, horndogs! Zukka Café is open for business! 💖
We're back with ZUKKA THIRST in 2025, so keep your eyes peeled for the sweetest, creamiest, and most decadent Zukka content on your dash.
#more news incoming!#we have a couple of things to figure out but zukka thirst 2 2hornt2furious is definitely happening so stay tuned!#last year was incredible we hope you're as excited as us for a new edition of the event#and thank you so much for all the feedback and the attention!!!#happy valentines day babeess#zukka thirst#zukka thirst 2025#zukka thirst mod post
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Work in progress got some places I need to tidy up (plus I need to learn how to do pants better because it looked so much better uncropped if I had the skill) but this is probably the closest I've come to actually finishing a drawing EVER so before my imposter syndrome hits I've gotta post it. The Wind Breaker hyperfixation is real. When I tell you this man lives rent-free in my head and I'll happily continue to let him free load.
#but doesn't he look so cuddly#wind breaker#togame jo#I blame all you writers for spoiling me#was really hard to choose between long or short hair#purple is definitely his color#first post#if you dont like my art please be nice im sensitive#wind breaker togame#please give me feedback though i want to improve#i have a umm.. certain drawing half done... but i need some better skills first
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you know, it would have been cool if ben had fought malware as upgrade, for the novelty of an alien fighting a very different member of their species
but also I know that if that had happened, ben probably would have lost upgrade too
#ben 10#if malware could destroy feedback he definitely could have obliterated upgrade#you think he wouldn’t have enjoyed destroying the representation of one of azmuth’s creations in front of him?#literally the only one he would have liked destroying more would be the galvan transformation if he had that same effect on it#as he did on feedback or most likely upgrade#who knows what other aliens he could have ripped out if he had gotten the chance#and/or if ben hadn’t been so obsessed with this one specific guy#anyway. still yapping
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*lovingly tackles Aine*
Read my Yandere! Pierro longfics first ♪( ´▽`)
Last week, my beloved mutual @ainescribe surprised me with Savior! Darling fan art and AHAI9232@2-!/! CRYING SCREAMING I WANT TO LOOK AT THIS ART AND WORSHIP YOUR VERSION OF SAVIOR THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR BLESSING ME WITH YOUR ART—
*clears throat* Anyway, now that I finally have the time to properly sit down and comment on the fan art, I’ll do just that. Feedback will be in the tags and it will be unhinged. Once again, thank you so much to Aine for drawing this <3
#feedback#fan art#pranabefall#AIIINE ;-; once again. thank you so much!! it rlly means a lot to me that you enjoyed my writing and felt inspired to draw this :'>#and as someone who loves fashion and character design. it's so so interesting to analyze your version of savior#there's so much symbolism and visual storytelling in each sketch/ outfit and i shall now proceed to pick apart each detail as best as i can#her snezhnayan fit.....god i love it. it's regal. distinctively snezhnayan. and draws attention to her--and you just know that was pierro's#intention when he dressed her in those garments. IT'S JUST SO...!! savior's wardrobe scrubbed clean of her original culture and preferences#replaced with the foreign garments of her captor's nations.....in line with this. i love how her kokoshnik and khaenri'ahn earrings are big#and attention-grabbing. you can't look at her without taking note of those accessories. it begs the question:: how many times has savior#looked at the mirror after being dressed up in snezhnaya and was unable to recognize her own reflection?? :'>#also shoutout to some details aine shared with me: 1) the face marks are inspired by weeping angels 2) the kokoshnik was traditionally worn#by married noblewomen BUT the veil was normally for unmarried women so savior's outfit can be seen as a form of compliance + rebellion#(though later on in history it became accepted for married women to also wear that veil. also my apologies if what i said is inaccurate)#lastly shoutout to savior's expression!! very poised and mysterious....due to her emotional state or pierro's rules on how to act as his#spouse in public?? we'll never know~ the first drawing hits even harder when you compare it to the next one!! such an interesting contrast~#savior in her plain attire. casual and domestic with a smile on her face....i'm guessing this is her pre-fatui version?? she looks so warm#and friendly. and i can definitely understand why pierro fell for her smile <3#also i fucking love the caption. sorry pierro but you are cursed to be a loser/ simp/ pathetic man in all of my fics and AUs xD#NOW ONTO GODDESS! SAVIOR AAAHHHH!! i love the greek goddess motifs. she looks so regal and awe-inspiring but in a different way from her#snezhnayan attire--archaic. divine. and more suited to her personal style.....yet both versions of her look so painfully isolated :'>#her blank eyes. emotionless face. and veil give me the vibes of a spooky victorian ghost...or would a statue/ portrait be more fitting??#the lack of a necklace is also an interesting design choice given what happens in the fic. and now i realized i forgot to comment on your#version of her snezhnayan necklace oops. similar to the kokoshnik and earrings. the size + grandeur makes it impossible to ignore#that and big jewels = expensive af. ohhh and i love the sparkles on her veil!! pierro rlly spared no expense in dressing up his wifey <3#it's also funny how all of these outfits are similar to my own version in terms of 'savior wore grand clothing during her glory days as a#goddess -> wore simple attire after her decline for practicality and to blend in with humans/ disassociate from her old identity -> is now#dressed in even grander clothing as the harbinger's spouse. but it's used to reinforce her new identity and pierro's control over her'#tldr:: your design is so creative and i can see the effort you put in analyzing her character and depicting her based on your interpretatio#thank you for being my mutual + reader and i hope we can share even more harbinger/darling brainrot in the future :>
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Paulie to complete the trio ❤
#Thank you for all of your feedback and comments I read them while smiling super big#paulie lombardo#mafia definitive edition#mde#sketch
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just wanted to say thanks to folks who reblogged the nice post today; been feeling very rough lately, stressed out to hell and so on. Lots happening in life atm that's objectively not bad stuff (mostly), but big. So, yknow, anyone with the amount of mental illness I have is gonna find themselves getting symptoms. on top of that I've just not been feeling it on tumblr much or social media in general, lots of feeling kind of unseen or misunderstood... yknow the whole deal. So, aye, thanks for the nice reblogs. Made me feel a bit better :D
#chatter#life stuff#I'll probably be away for a while longer#idk if I'll post much when I do get back#if anyone wants to see art you're free to ask cause I /am/ still making stuff#but I'm just not posting it#feeling pretty dispirited and with the rise of people convincing themselves that it's 'okay' to use genai to produce images etc#just ain't a good environment#my art has definitively already been both scraped and stolen#from various places online#I'm not keen on continuing to worry about that#(also in general I'm probably just gonna work on sundogs and folks can ask about it more personally if you get me)#(I'd love to show off what I have so far. soon. get some feedback and find my folks yknow?)#and I hope folks read my tags#cause I do much thinking in here
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— 𝐢 𝐥𝐨𝐯𝐞 𝐲𝐨𝐮 𝐥𝐢𝐤𝐞 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐬𝐮𝐧.
✦ info: this is a piece for @soleillunne's event, saudade. the first half was written by @llovelessly and i picked it up from there.
✦ featuring: kamisato ayato.
✦ warnings: some angst (?), not proofread.
✦ notes: hi hello my apologies for the lateness life has been life-ing real hard </3 i've done my best, but i still think it could've been better lmao
it’s strange, you think.
you sit in the comforts of expensive silk and lustrous linen, being doused into the arms of sleep and the soft sheets bit by bit—yet your eyes are laden with everything anxiousness has to offer. with a stifled sigh, your hand moves to lift you off the bed, and your feet start its nightly spiel. wooden floorboards creak beneath your step, and you do your best to focus on the crevices of your timber footing rather than the unease that begins the prelude of many, many endless and sleepless nights.
the hands of the clock by your bedside dance between the hour of midnight and eleven thirty, with a sharp yet almost inaudible tick when each second passes by.
it’s driving deeper into your anxious spiral.
why is your lover, ayato―not home yet? oh, but he promised he’d be here some time after dinner, saying in-between a quiet laugh that by the time he greets you with a sarcastic bow the food is still warm and you’d have plenty of time to ramble on about what happened in the midst of your day—however he’s nowhere to be seen. your ears are accustomed to the sound of his grimy soles, always noticing the close sound even in a crowded room—so he couldn’t be inside the house (and the chances of him toying with you were low since he loves you like the sun).
but—of course, finally—the impeccable timing of the clicking of key and lock never fail to snap you out of your strung-out haze, a welcomed arm pulling you by the waist into a quick hug before your lover places his muddy shoes under your shared bed and asks,
“how was your day, darling?” with that familiar, august tone you know dearly. you pull him into a sweet yet short, kiss—and glance at his soiled shoes.
you note they’re less dirtier than usual, and when you check upon the doormat by the entrance, it’s smeared with less sod and ground than the night after you washed it.
“. . . it was nice.”
a smooth, somnolent voice drawls between your worry and gut; reminding you that the carpet doesn’t matter more than the hours of slow dawn with your lover—so you prompt yourself to bed and forget anything but him the next morning. . . . . . it’s strange, you draw out on the patterned cloth, leg bouncing up and down from both stress and strain.
ayato has yet to arrive at the restaurant you sat in—with your hair done the way he likes it and clothed expensively in his gifts from various other nations. you bit your bottom lip each time the rusted bell that hung atop the door jingled, only to signal someone else entering and not him.
you straightened your posture, feeling your spine protest while you shift in your seat; moving your hands to either fidget below the table on your lap or on the table, where the knitted red material creases because of your awaiting and nervous actions.
just when will he arrive and kiss you like the sun?
it was as if time had grown languid with a single flutter of your lashes, watching painfully as each shift and hail had amounted to mere seconds when even just one breath had begun to feel like it weighed an hour of misspent moments on your shoulders. the quick veers from an edginess bordered by humiliation to a forced politeness (that you try to keep as light as possible to make it more believable), become more and more habitual with the minor bow of your head at the waitress checking in on your table, asking if you’d like to order something or be served more water—to which you answer that you’re good,
you’re fine,
you’re just waiting for someone—and she asks who it is—but your vocals thin to prevent you from saying anything other than,
“oh, just someone i know.”
then she nods and goes back to the mazes of the dirty kitchen, leaving you to count how many minutes it’ll take for her to come back again and ask the same questions again.
—
and so the ticks continue to sound in your head, a clock of your mind’s own making reminding you of the passage of time far better than the sounds that chime through the restaurant. and your presence feels like a statue made of stone, weighing heavily into the fabric of your surroundings. the eyes of people who entered long after you linger on the empty seat in front of yours, pity and curiosity dancing together in their gaze.
it’s strange, you think. he promised to be here before eight.
you’re intimately acquainted with waiting for him, the sounds of time passing by a bosom friend, the silent agony of anticipating his presence a slowly compressive pressure on your being. but he’s never made you wait this long.
not without a message, a lick of correspondence, an apology via one of his assistants, something, anything.
where is he?
anticipation twirls and swirls until it turns to anxiety, a glossy spill of viscous worry atop clear thought.
where are you, ayato?
the grandfather clock made of gilded oak chimes nine, and you rise. you cannot bear the waitressess’ pitying looks anymore. to wait alone is easy enough, but under eyes that glow with condolence?
there is lighter torture in hell.
tears prick the back of your own eyes, and you cannot tell if they’re of frustration, worry or a combination of both. nevertheless, you hold your head high. the screech of the chair as you move it back rattles your skull.
the wait makes the journey home feel as if it merely flew by, as fast as lightning, the briefest flash of white in stormy skies. yet the ticks of the clock you cannot see haunt you all the same.
hours later, long after you reach home, the hurried footsteps beyond the door, the click of the keys in the lock and the turn of the handle alerts you to his arrival.
“kamisato ayato.” you say, without bothering to turn. “where were you?” a waver betrays your emotions, your concern, your worry.
he rushes to grasp your hands in his, rare sincerity in his eyes. the raw emotion etched across his face, a clay tablet engraved by a stylus, is uncharacteristic. “look at me, please.” his voice breaks.
slowly, you raise your gaze to meet his own.
“darling, i—” he pauses to swallow at the sight of sadness lining the rims of your eyes. “i’m so sorry.”
“you said you’d be there before eight.” your words sit heavily in the air, laden with emotion you can’t quite verbalize. “i waited.” like i always do, you think, bitterness sharpening the edges of your thought.
“i know.” he hangs his head, moving to look at the silken lavender sheets. “i…i fell asleep. on my desk, after a meeting.”
the admission takes you by surprise.
you glance at the shoes by the fireplace. though the luster of shoe-polish is no longer as distinct, you cannot see any evidence of dirt or sod or sand marring the sleek blackness. he really was in the office, you think.
he loves you like the sun. you know he does. but not all of us have the luxury of basking in it when we want to. life binds our hands and our feet together in the dark.
and just like that, your heart softens against the resolution of your mind. the bags under his eyes are heavier than you’ve last seen them. “you look tired,” you murmur.
“i’m never tired for you,” he replies.
“i was worried.” you say, holding his hand tighter. i was worried about you not sending a message. i was worried that you forgot about me. i was worried that i’m not as important to you as the things that occupied your mind.
he pulls you closer. i’m sorry for making you feel that way, he says wordlessly, with the way he draws circles on your skin.
and at last, his lips are upon yours, desperate, wanting, rushed despite exhaustion, so unlike the thorough, careful, controlled man he is.
“i’m sorry,” he whispers fervently, over and over, as his hands worship your skin with reverence.
“i’m sorry,” he whispers against your shoulder when you lay fast asleep.
“i’m sorry,” he whispers to your hair, in hopes you hear his apologies in your dreams.
this time, he makes another promise. to never promise you time out of his schedule that he cannot give. to never make you wait longer than you should. to learn to put his burdens into the hands of those willing to help, so he can swear to devote days to you, and only you. he knows both his happiness and his love revolve around you, and they will for as long as the heart in his chest beats.
after all, he is but the earth to your sun.
#saudade; milestone#—🖋#genshin x reader#genshin impact x reader#ayato x reader#kamisato ayato x reader#genshin impact x you#genshin x you#ayato x you#kamisato ayato x you#so uh this definitely could've been better#but i tried my best#as always feedback is always appreciated <3
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Digital painting I did of my dog
I put hours into this one layer drawing (didn’t take any wip pics) and all I got was this lousy timelapse;
#trying out a new style cuz I love digital painting#5hrs of work and we have this#bottom left one is definitely my favourite#if you see this please give me some feedback in the comments#I’d really appreciate it thank you#I tried to give each Merry a different texture which I think turned out ok#merry#lotr merry#digital art#dog#digital illustration#digital painting#stariel posts#my art#rendered art#colour#fave#artists on tumblr#artwork#original art#animal art#animal#cute animals#my dog#sheltie#drawing#painting#mini lassie#2024#timelapse
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I sometimes think of that awful Scooby Doo Loch Ness movie, and how I would set a story in Scotland that more accurately reflects my country. I wind up losing it at the idea of Fred accidentally starting a fight by walking into a Celtic pub wearing white orange and blue on Old Firm match day, Shaggy and Scooby unable to help as they're busy scranning a whole Blue Lagoon out of business.
Velma and Daphne take a museum tour; Velma pesters the guide about all the different ways to say mystery-related words in Scots and Gàidhlig, Daphne wields a broadsword with one hand and tans a whole 2 litre irn bru with the other.
In the countryside Scooby gets accidentally carried away by a flock of sheep and is taken across 3 fields before the gang get him back. In the city Shaggy gets accidentally carried away by a flock of ravers and is taken across 3 nightclubs before the gang get him back.
They go to Edinburgh so Velma can get lost in the National Library archives and Daphne gets into a fistfight with some snobby university students.
Fred really struggles with the narrower roads and the Mystery Machine winds up in a hedge.
#they find out about Scottish folklore stop a greedy landlord and altogether have a great time#no disrespect if you like the original movie it's just very definitely not for me#scotland#scottish#scooby doo#mystery inc#submitted this to my siblings for peer review and got no feedback so now it's being thrown into the tumblr wilderness
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#here i am overthinking my paper again#i've already been writing here and there and i've gotten feedback for the introduction and i still need to rework a few things out#but god isn't it annoying#when you find yourself not doing much for it on a given day#that it makes you feel guilty#i know there's definitely a balance needed for academics and leisure time#and i've been doing my best to stay on par#nevertheless the guilt gets annoying lol#this also kinda applies to me when it comes to writing in general#whether it's for my studies or just for fun#sighhhh#just need someone to tell me it will be alright#and that i'm going to pay it off in the end lmao#personal#maria rambles
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Hi all! Wanted to survey y'all about the idea of potentially creating a nice little social Discord server. It would foster discussions of Delta BW, of course, but also general Pokemon discussion :-) Would also be a space for me to provide smaller updates that I might not post on the blog, post art, as well as field questions. This server would be firmly SFW, and would be open to people of all ages. Any major updates would still be posted to the blog, to be clear, so joining the Discord would not be necessary to stay up to date. It would just be a fun little thing for anybody wanting another little Pokemon community!
If you have any additional comments, questions, or suggestions, feel free to leave them in the replies! I'd be happy to hear your feedback ^^ Thanks!
#delete later#(going to let this run for a week to try and gather as much feedback as i can!)#(please vote honestly--I won't be offended if you say no haha)#(personally not even certain this will come to fruition since moderating a discord can be a bit of work)#(but if people are interested than I'd definitely like to try!)
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I'm really into both Dylan and Xacari's stories but I haven't quite developed the characters all the way, and I was wondering if you guys would mind me using Tumblr to do that, and getting some feedback on the little bits I post as I go
I'm giving you guys a week to answer this one because I want feedback from as many people as I can get. There's like 28 of you following me and 26 aren't bots so I'm expecting 26 votes by the end of the week 😡/j
#by feedback i mean constructive criticism#not 'i dont like that this character is this'#but like 'hey im part of this demographic you're trying to portray and this here is actually wrong/harmful heres the truth'#because almost all of these characters are part of minorities that im not#or have conditions that i dont have#like xacari has a cleft palette#Dylan is black#xacari is also black but like you get my point#hayden is black too#ronnie is latina and native#Dimitri is russian#hes still technically 'white' but like if i write anything for his family#theyre immigrants soi wouldnt know how to write that#banshee is albino#banshee is his nickname i promise i didnt name my albino character banshee its actually completely unrelated#banshee and Xacari's boyfriend is a white country boy so i know how to write him lol#but theyre mutual friend is black with vitiligo so that's another thing i dont know how to write#like out of all 9 characters i have i only know how to write 2 of them and even then thats pushing it#obviously I'll be doing my own research but some assistance would be wonderful#also forgot about rudy#rudy is trans mtf so while i do share some experiences with her like gender dysphoria and the likes#but im trans the opposite direction which is most definitely different so there will be bits about her story that i wont know how to write#delphi's ocs
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As someone who loves Andrew as a character and doesn’t hate on Ashley and recognize both of their flaws unlike most people, I feel like the fandom coddles and sympathizes Andrew even more after Chapter 3 because of his backstory.
Ashley’s behavior is largely a result of her parents’ neglect and lack of effort in raising her. They never made her go to therapy or address her issues, instead enabling her behavior and shifting the blame onto her brother. She never had birthdays celebrated, and her fake friends only used her to get closer to Andy. As a result, no one really supports her, and she never learned how to behave in a healthy way. So, it makes sense why she’d become so dependent on Andy when he’s the only one who’s actually tried to care for her and make her happy.
What people often overlook is that Ashley grew up in the same toxic, abusive environment as Andrew, but instead of being labeled as “evil” or “manipulative,” she’s simply a product of the neglect and lack of guidance she experienced. She craves unconditional love, doesn’t understand relationships, and wears her emotions on her sleeve. Meanwhile, Andrew sees through it, lets her behavior slide, and ends up blaming her for his own actions.
There’s a lot of sympathy for Andrew, to the point where people overlook some of his less admirable qualities—like how he treats Ashley, Julia, Nina, and others. But when it comes to Ashley, she’s dismissed just because her personality is harder for people to like. She grew up in the same neglectful and abusive environment as Andrew, but their personalities turned out differently because she was completely neglected, while Andrew was suppressed. This explains why Ashley tends to act out and demand attention, while Andrew keeps things bottled up. Yet people forget this, and only see Ashley as a product of the same toxic environment that worsened Andrew, without considering that there was nothing in that environment that could’ve helped her improve. She doesn’t know how to initiate positive, prosocial behavior because she wasn’t taught how to.
In many ways, Andrew’s behavior is just as problematic—he rarely does anything genuinely prosocial and sometimes behaves horribly toward people who care about him, like Julia. But because he’s more inward in his attitude and has a more fleshed-out backstory, people tend to accept him more easily. Ashley, on the other hand, hasn’t been given the same explanation or “justification” for her actions.
Ashley is clearly wrong for abusing and raping Andrew, and it's understandable that people sympathize with him because of it. However, let’s not pretend Andrew is some “innocent” person. He’s spied on his sister while she was changing, emotionally manipulated others, used Julia to vent his sexual frustrations about Ashley, cared more about the consequences of his actions than the lives he took, faked nightmares to sleep next to his sister, and continues to engage in inappropriate touching or flirting with her.
In the Shots and Such ending, Andrew wanted Ashley to get drunk with him so they could have "accidental" sex, and he ended up assaulting her while she was intoxicated, trying to repeat what he considered the best sex he ever had. In the Cliffhanger ending, it is implied that Andrew intended to assault his imaginary sister.
In the story, Andrew makes many sexual comments to Ashley but later takes back his consent. Despite this, Ashley continues to press him, which leads to the conclusion that this is rape.
Then Andrew has sex with a wasted Ashley. When she finds out, she has a breakdown. Andrew argues that she "wanted it," suggesting it wasn't rape?
Andrew violently beats Ashley and then becomes drunk. Ashley forces him to have sex with her. Later, Andrew admits he likes to get Ashley drunk to have sex with her and has been trying to recreate it over and over again.
Both individuals are terrible, but it frustrates me that Andrew is not held accountable for anything.
Ashley and Andrew both have difficult personalities shaped by their neglectful upbringing. Ashley seeks attention and is often criticized for her behavior, while Andrew is more reserved and people overlook his flaws. The key point is that both are shaped by their environment and should not be labeled as simply a "monster" or a "victim. "
If you feel sympathy for one sibling, you should show the same sympathy to the other. Similarly, if you dislike one sibling, you should also have the same feelings toward the other.
i don’t know what world you live in where people are sympathizing with andrew after decay and refusing to hold him accountable, nor why you’re dropping all these paragraphs in my inbox to tell me how much andrew sucks and ashley should be coddled more like i’m one of those people.
not a fan of anything you said on the topic of rape, either. mentioning it in passing only to bring up examples of andrew disregarding ashley’s lack of genuine consent after he was raped by ashley and she forced him into a sexual relationship as if to show that andrew is a worse rapist, even comparing his deeply repressed thoughts in cliffhanger to the act of rape by claiming thoughts = intent to act, all of that strongly comes off as trying to justify what was done to him and i am not here for it.
and making sexual comments does not in any way equal consent to sex, so andrew didn’t withdraw consent that he’s never given when ashley raped him. you’re definitely in “andrew wanted it so the rape wasn’t that bad” territory here and it’s extremely uncomfortable.
#filed under; q&a#we can indeed all agree that andrew is no saint#he is awful#but man is there a lot in here that requires far more nuance than it’s given#and a lot is flat out dismissive of context and crucial situational factors#they’re in a cycle of mutual reactive abuse they perpetuate consciously#definitely not getting the impression that this is what you’re describing#i do not have the time or energy today to unpack this paragraph for paragraph so i will leave this reply as it is#i would absolutely do so to point out what i think is wrong cause i don’t believe you have ill intent#but alas i’m extremely busy at the moment#there’s been a very strange uptick in people word vomiting their takes into my inbox and jesse’s inbox for approval or disapproval#then seething when we (especially her) do not take hours out of our day to pick apart and analyze every point made in the message#y’all are so entitled to our time and energy and if we do not give it you lash out and call us rude and dismissive#claiming we don’t want to play ball with you and that this means we do not care for the input of others#we’re grown adults with tumblr blogs and analyze this game as a hobby#we don’t work for nemlei#to clarify this absolutely does not apply for those who respectfully ask for our thoughts and wait patiently for our replies#but point being we have jobs and responsibilities and time and energy consuming lives outside of tcoaal fandom tumblr#and sorry y’all but i can’t grade essays like a college professor and offer lengthy feedback in response#if you’re just ranting in response to something i’ve posted that’s perfectly fine cause i don’t have to give more food for thought#issue is when you drop a take that reads like a whole new post you may as well drop in the tcoaal tags#there’s not even a question in here and i can’t even tell if this is directed at me or… everybody
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