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🌙 Moon Phases 🌙
Agatha Harkness X Fem!Reader
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
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Chapter 3
The sun had almost set by the time you found yourself in Westview, the paper with Agatha's adress tucked into your pants' pocket.
You walked the empty road, feeling eyes on you behind pulled curtains. The neighbours were uneasy, having chosen to lock themselves into their houses; but you could not blame them.
If what Agatha said was true and had managed to gather a coven, those poor people must have seen a few odd figures heading the same way as you.
Witches could not help it. They always had this aura, making them easier to stand out. Sometimes, their energy was enough to make someone have this uneasy feeling deep within their guts; though being as ignorant to the supernatural, they could never truly understand why.
At last, you reached the house that seemed to belong to Agatha.
The first thing you noticed was the lack of a door, but you speculated that some unfriendly visitor had found Agatha earlier that day. It would explain this sudden and urgent need to go down the Road in such short notice.
Stepping inside, you could hear voices in the background; indicating that you might be the last one to arrive. Your eyes barely glanced at the rather odd decoration of the house. None of it was screaming Agatha; you knew cause you had lived with her even for a short amount of times.
"Wait," you heard the voice of the teenage boy calling, putting a pause at the overlapping voices of the other witches. "We are one witch short," he pointed out, clearly talking about you.
You decided to make yourself present by letting your steps sound a little harder against the wooden floor, earning different pair of eyes on your form.
"No, you are not," you corrected him, one hand in your pocket.
You quickly scanned the room, sensing the different magical signatures while quickly studying them as well.
They were very different from one another, from their ages to their outfits and, of course, their magic affinity.
Yet again, it was often needed for a coven to be diverse. Though you could not help but wonder if such intense diversity would actually work, the tension between the witches and Agatha was thick enough to almost be visible.
"Sugar," Agatha greeted with a small smirk, not caring that she used your nickname in public.
She never hesitated to do it before, even though you had tried to argue a lot of times. You preferred privacy, and such nicknames, in your opinion, should exist behind close rooms and during intimate moments between two people.
Of course, Agatha never truly took into consideration your opinion and continued. There was something powerful, possessive even when she was the only one to call you such a name. Not to mention, it showed others that in a way, you were hers; some sort of invisible claim that warned others not to test their luck.
Agatha had not changed ever since, at least with that part. Despite the years you two had spent away, despite the rather unknown nature of your relationship; she still kept claiming you, often impressing even herself with ways she could find.
She studied you for a moment as your eyes connected and took notice of your outfit. While other witches chose dresses, skirts, or hippie pants; you went to the other side of the spectrum.
You had chosen a white professional shirt whose shade was bright enough to draw attention from afar. However, that was the only white thing on you.
Your buttoned up vest had white lines, but the base was black, a matching shade with your well tailored pants. Even your tie was at the colour of black, giving you a more unisex and professional look.
Needles to say you had impressed her, since for centuries you were a big fan of simple white clothing. You barely chose any other colour to wear, always having a strong connection to the bright shade.
Yet here you were now, the dark on you, almost fully covering you; the darkness of your solitude and hurt past casting a shadow to your once brighter and naive self.
It tempted Agatha, curious for a moment to test your reaction by having her hand drag across your body; testing if you would stop her when she would try unbutton your vest and take off your tie...oh, and what she could do to you with that tie.
The intense staring and sudden silence had drawn curious looks on you, some wondering what your connection to the dark Witch that had gathered them all.
The moment was interrupted by Lilia, who had been watching between the two of you until her mind and gaze trailed off.
"Two of swords!" She gasped, earning everyone's attention on her.
She did not say anything else, as if she was not conscious she had said anything or not. That alone quickly made you realize which role she played in this coven, a divination witch that was always needed in almost every mission; especially one as dangerous as the one you all had chosen to participate in.
Before any more questions or comments could be thrown, Agatha clapped her hands once.
"Well, gang's all here. Let's hit The Road." She said, trying to change the topic.
However, Jen was not done yet. "Wait," she exclaimed, and Agatha immediately knew this was not going to be good. "Where's our Green Witch?"
"Oh, do we really need one of those?"
"Of course we do." Jen argued and then looked at you. "Unless you are a Green Witch, though you definitely don't look like one," She continued, her tone judging you as did their eyes; going up and down your form.
"I am not," you corrected her, unfazed by her gaze.
You had this passive expression on your face, a cold mask that nothing could truly penetrate. Your aura was calm but hid danger behind it, like a dark peaceful sea whose waters were far deeper than they looked; dangerous creatures lurking within, waiting.
Your answer only fueled the argument between Jen and Agatha, one insisting on the importance of a Green Witch and the other arguing there was no need.
Eventually, Teen joined by referring to one member they had not invited from the list; a black heart.
This made you arch an eyebrow and look at Agatha, who at that moment did the mistake of looking at you as well.
Once again, you quickly saw right through her facade and saw both the fear and annoyance she tried so hard to hide. Whoever this black heart meant to represent was a deep scar from Agatha's past; one she did not wish to bring up.
In the end, Agatha left; excusing herself she was going to bring back the last member so they could all start the ritual and open the door to the Road.
The moment she left, the main attention fell on you; each individual in the room had different thoughts, but you were part of all of them.
In the end, it was the boy who chose to speak up. "Wait, I am confused." he even lifted his hand, like a student asking permission from the teacher to voice his question. "Jen is Potions, Lilia is Divination, Alice is Protection... what are you?"
Jen nodded her head. "The boy is right. What are you?"
That judging look once again.
It made you wonder if she looked at others the same or she felt both offended but also threatened by your presence.
It would not be the first time a witch had reacted negatively against you, especially once they realised your affiliation. Your type was not often welcomed, the duality of your nature often a wildcard that no one wished to possess.
"Backup," you explained, choosing to remain vague with your answer.
There was no need to go into detail, at least not now. You barely knew one another, and it was evident there was no trust between any of you. A common goal brought you forward, but it was not kindness or the need to find a coven.
It was selfish, and you knew that too well. Even your reasons for joining could be considered selfish.
After all, no one else chose to walk the Road unless they had a deep selfish goal in mind. Ironically, this one was what was tested the most during the trials that awaited down the Wicked Path.
You turned to the boy, realizing he was still confused by your presence. Sure, your name was on the list, but you did not seem to be part of the main four needed; according to both the Ballad and Agatha.
"To walk down the Road, you need four basic witch paths to help you and also unlock the door. Anything else is extra help, " you explained, your tone slightly softer
You could not help it. Just by seeing into his dark, innocent eyes, your defences dropped. He was a young boy, too young to choose such a path, and it made you wonder what he truly needed to take such a decision.
Jen opened her mouth to argue when Agatha walked into the room, dragging with her an older woman.
You could immediately tell she was a human woman, no drop of magic within her, and something told you the others realised that too.
Looking at Agatha, you saw her silently asking you to remain quiet on the topic, and you obeyed. Though deep down, you could not help but wonder how this would truly work.
A green witch would be needed for the trial, and only after it was passed, she would no longer be of need.
You did wonder how this would work out, but your trail of thoughts was interrupted by the faint sound of a wold howling. Your head immediately snapped to the side, eyes distantly gazing out the window as the darkness of the night covered the sky.
Agatha must have realised it, too, for she clapped her hands yet again. "No time to waste, vamos!" She said and started to walk towards the stairs leading to her basement, leaving you all no choice but to follow.
Chapter 4
#agatha harkness#agatha spoilers#agatha all along#agatha x reader#agatha fanfictiom#feedback is greatly appreciated#let me know if you like it and that I have not butchered any character#will definitely write more chapters later#do not ask me when#scedule unclear#never stable#moon phases fanfic
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no one could ever make me hate Bobby like you have this man so excited to participate and compete over a haunted house at the fire station for kids and he’s all dressed up as a vampire doing the voice and narrating for the children as “Cap Dracula” as they enter the 118’s version of their own spooky haunted house with Hen, Chimney, Eddie and Buck also participating because Bobby is competitive and wants to be better than all the other firehouses and it gets ruined by Bobby’s pseudo son of all people yk ordering an actual dead body as decor and then he’s convinced he has a curse like again this show is something else I swear lmao
#911 spoilers#bobby i love you so much#I enjoyed last night’s episode I know feedback from many has been negative but I think there was definitely some good moments in the episod#like not my favorite episode so far of the season or in general but it was a solid episode nonetheless#more of steph’s random thoughts#911#911 abc#911 on abc#911 season 8#911 s8#bobby nash#hen wilson#chimney han#eddie diaz#evan buckley
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Work in progress got some places I need to tidy up (plus I need to learn how to do pants better because it looked so much better uncropped if I had the skill) but this is probably the closest I've come to actually finishing a drawing EVER so before my imposter syndrome hits I've gotta post it. The Wind Breaker hyperfixation is real. When I tell you this man lives rent-free in my head and I'll happily continue to let him free load.
#but doesn't he look so cuddly#wind breaker#togame jo#I blame all you writers for spoiling me#was really hard to choose between long or short hair#purple is definitely his color#first post#if you dont like my art please be nice im sensitive#wind breaker togame#please give me feedback though i want to improve#i have a umm.. certain drawing half done... but i need some better skills first
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*lovingly tackles Aine*
Read my Yandere! Pierro longfics first ♪( ´▽`)
Last week, my beloved mutual @ainescribe surprised me with Savior! Darling fan art and AHAI9232@2-!/! CRYING SCREAMING I WANT TO LOOK AT THIS ART AND WORSHIP YOUR VERSION OF SAVIOR THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR BLESSING ME WITH YOUR ART—
*clears throat* Anyway, now that I finally have the time to properly sit down and comment on the fan art, I’ll do just that. Feedback will be in the tags and it will be unhinged. Once again, thank you so much to Aine for drawing this <3
#feedback#fan art#ainescribe#AIIINE ;-; once again. thank you so much!! it rlly means a lot to me that you enjoyed my writing and felt inspired to draw this :'>#and as someone who loves fashion and character design. it's so so interesting to analyze your version of savior#there's so much symbolism and visual storytelling in each sketch/ outfit and i shall now proceed to pick apart each detail as best as i can#her snezhnayan fit.....god i love it. it's regal. distinctively snezhnayan. and draws attention to her--and you just know that was pierro's#intention when he dressed her in those garments. IT'S JUST SO...!! savior's wardrobe scrubbed clean of her original culture and preferences#replaced with the foreign garments of her captor's nations.....in line with this. i love how her kokoshnik and khaenri'ahn earrings are big#and attention-grabbing. you can't look at her without taking note of those accessories. it begs the question:: how many times has savior#looked at the mirror after being dressed up in snezhnaya and was unable to recognize her own reflection?? :'>#also shoutout to some details aine shared with me: 1) the face marks are inspired by weeping angels 2) the kokoshnik was traditionally worn#by married noblewomen BUT the veil was normally for unmarried women so savior's outfit can be seen as a form of compliance + rebellion#(though later on in history it became accepted for married women to also wear that veil. also my apologies if what i said is inaccurate)#lastly shoutout to savior's expression!! very poised and mysterious....due to her emotional state or pierro's rules on how to act as his#spouse in public?? we'll never know~ the first drawing hits even harder when you compare it to the next one!! such an interesting contrast~#savior in her plain attire. casual and domestic with a smile on her face....i'm guessing this is her pre-fatui version?? she looks so warm#and friendly. and i can definitely understand why pierro fell for her smile <3#also i fucking love the caption. sorry pierro but you are cursed to be a loser/ simp/ pathetic man in all of my fics and AUs xD#NOW ONTO GODDESS! SAVIOR AAAHHHH!! i love the greek goddess motifs. she looks so regal and awe-inspiring but in a different way from her#snezhnayan attire--archaic. divine. and more suited to her personal style.....yet both versions of her look so painfully isolated :'>#her blank eyes. emotionless face. and veil give me the vibes of a spooky victorian ghost...or would a statue/ portrait be more fitting??#the lack of a necklace is also an interesting design choice given what happens in the fic. and now i realized i forgot to comment on your#version of her snezhnayan necklace oops. similar to the kokoshnik and earrings. the size + grandeur makes it impossible to ignore#that and big jewels = expensive af. ohhh and i love the sparkles on her veil!! pierro rlly spared no expense in dressing up his wifey <3#it's also funny how all of these outfits are similar to my own version in terms of 'savior wore grand clothing during her glory days as a#goddess -> wore simple attire after her decline for practicality and to blend in with humans/ disassociate from her old identity -> is now#dressed in even grander clothing as the harbinger's spouse. but it's used to reinforce her new identity and pierro's control over her'#tldr:: your design is so creative and i can see the effort you put in analyzing her character and depicting her based on your interpretatio#thank you for being my mutual + reader and i hope we can share even more harbinger/darling brainrot in the future :>
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Paulie to complete the trio ❤
#Thank you for all of your feedback and comments I read them while smiling super big#paulie lombardo#mafia definitive edition#mde#sketch
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Who's the man with the plan? Skizz-le-man!
#lot's of diamonds in hand#skizzleman#hermitaday#hermitcraft#hermitaday prev jev prev mumbo prev xb#feedback is motivating! witness me!#pffft there will definitely be late submissions on my part but that's okay#mutual lateness it's meant to be frien#also hope you got some rest!#my art
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— 𝐢 𝐥𝐨𝐯𝐞 𝐲𝐨𝐮 𝐥𝐢𝐤𝐞 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐬𝐮𝐧.
✦ info: this is a piece for @soleillunne's event, saudade. the first half was written by @llovelessly and i picked it up from there.
✦ featuring: kamisato ayato.
✦ warnings: some angst (?), not proofread.
✦ notes: hi hello my apologies for the lateness life has been life-ing real hard </3 i've done my best, but i still think it could've been better lmao
it’s strange, you think.
you sit in the comforts of expensive silk and lustrous linen, being doused into the arms of sleep and the soft sheets bit by bit—yet your eyes are laden with everything anxiousness has to offer. with a stifled sigh, your hand moves to lift you off the bed, and your feet start its nightly spiel. wooden floorboards creak beneath your step, and you do your best to focus on the crevices of your timber footing rather than the unease that begins the prelude of many, many endless and sleepless nights.
the hands of the clock by your bedside dance between the hour of midnight and eleven thirty, with a sharp yet almost inaudible tick when each second passes by.
it’s driving deeper into your anxious spiral.
why is your lover, ayato―not home yet? oh, but he promised he’d be here some time after dinner, saying in-between a quiet laugh that by the time he greets you with a sarcastic bow the food is still warm and you’d have plenty of time to ramble on about what happened in the midst of your day—however he’s nowhere to be seen. your ears are accustomed to the sound of his grimy soles, always noticing the close sound even in a crowded room—so he couldn’t be inside the house (and the chances of him toying with you were low since he loves you like the sun).
but—of course, finally—the impeccable timing of the clicking of key and lock never fail to snap you out of your strung-out haze, a welcomed arm pulling you by the waist into a quick hug before your lover places his muddy shoes under your shared bed and asks,
“how was your day, darling?” with that familiar, august tone you know dearly. you pull him into a sweet yet short, kiss—and glance at his soiled shoes.
you note they’re less dirtier than usual, and when you check upon the doormat by the entrance, it’s smeared with less sod and ground than the night after you washed it.
“. . . it was nice.”
a smooth, somnolent voice drawls between your worry and gut; reminding you that the carpet doesn’t matter more than the hours of slow dawn with your lover—so you prompt yourself to bed and forget anything but him the next morning. . . . . . it’s strange, you draw out on the patterned cloth, leg bouncing up and down from both stress and strain.
ayato has yet to arrive at the restaurant you sat in—with your hair done the way he likes it and clothed expensively in his gifts from various other nations. you bit your bottom lip each time the rusted bell that hung atop the door jingled, only to signal someone else entering and not him.
you straightened your posture, feeling your spine protest while you shift in your seat; moving your hands to either fidget below the table on your lap or on the table, where the knitted red material creases because of your awaiting and nervous actions.
just when will he arrive and kiss you like the sun?
it was as if time had grown languid with a single flutter of your lashes, watching painfully as each shift and hail had amounted to mere seconds when even just one breath had begun to feel like it weighed an hour of misspent moments on your shoulders. the quick veers from an edginess bordered by humiliation to a forced politeness (that you try to keep as light as possible to make it more believable), become more and more habitual with the minor bow of your head at the waitress checking in on your table, asking if you’d like to order something or be served more water—to which you answer that you’re good,
you’re fine,
you’re just waiting for someone—and she asks who it is—but your vocals thin to prevent you from saying anything other than,
“oh, just someone i know.”
then she nods and goes back to the mazes of the dirty kitchen, leaving you to count how many minutes it’ll take for her to come back again and ask the same questions again.
—
and so the ticks continue to sound in your head, a clock of your mind’s own making reminding you of the passage of time far better than the sounds that chime through the restaurant. and your presence feels like a statue made of stone, weighing heavily into the fabric of your surroundings. the eyes of people who entered long after you linger on the empty seat in front of yours, pity and curiosity dancing together in their gaze.
it’s strange, you think. he promised to be here before eight.
you’re intimately acquainted with waiting for him, the sounds of time passing by a bosom friend, the silent agony of anticipating his presence a slowly compressive pressure on your being. but he’s never made you wait this long.
not without a message, a lick of correspondence, an apology via one of his assistants, something, anything.
where is he?
anticipation twirls and swirls until it turns to anxiety, a glossy spill of viscous worry atop clear thought.
where are you, ayato?
the grandfather clock made of gilded oak chimes nine, and you rise. you cannot bear the waitressess’ pitying looks anymore. to wait alone is easy enough, but under eyes that glow with condolence?
there is lighter torture in hell.
tears prick the back of your own eyes, and you cannot tell if they’re of frustration, worry or a combination of both. nevertheless, you hold your head high. the screech of the chair as you move it back rattles your skull.
the wait makes the journey home feel as if it merely flew by, as fast as lightning, the briefest flash of white in stormy skies. yet the ticks of the clock you cannot see haunt you all the same.
hours later, long after you reach home, the hurried footsteps beyond the door, the click of the keys in the lock and the turn of the handle alerts you to his arrival.
“kamisato ayato.” you say, without bothering to turn. “where were you?” a waver betrays your emotions, your concern, your worry.
he rushes to grasp your hands in his, rare sincerity in his eyes. the raw emotion etched across his face, a clay tablet engraved by a stylus, is uncharacteristic. “look at me, please.” his voice breaks.
slowly, you raise your gaze to meet his own.
“darling, i—” he pauses to swallow at the sight of sadness lining the rims of your eyes. “i’m so sorry.”
“you said you’d be there before eight.” your words sit heavily in the air, laden with emotion you can’t quite verbalize. “i waited.” like i always do, you think, bitterness sharpening the edges of your thought.
“i know.” he hangs his head, moving to look at the silken lavender sheets. “i…i fell asleep. on my desk, after a meeting.”
the admission takes you by surprise.
you glance at the shoes by the fireplace. though the luster of shoe-polish is no longer as distinct, you cannot see any evidence of dirt or sod or sand marring the sleek blackness. he really was in the office, you think.
he loves you like the sun. you know he does. but not all of us have the luxury of basking in it when we want to. life binds our hands and our feet together in the dark.
and just like that, your heart softens against the resolution of your mind. the bags under his eyes are heavier than you’ve last seen them. “you look tired,” you murmur.
“i’m never tired for you,” he replies.
“i was worried.” you say, holding his hand tighter. i was worried about you not sending a message. i was worried that you forgot about me. i was worried that i’m not as important to you as the things that occupied your mind.
he pulls you closer. i’m sorry for making you feel that way, he says wordlessly, with the way he draws circles on your skin.
and at last, his lips are upon yours, desperate, wanting, rushed despite exhaustion, so unlike the thorough, careful, controlled man he is.
“i’m sorry,” he whispers fervently, over and over, as his hands worship your skin with reverence.
“i’m sorry,” he whispers against your shoulder when you lay fast asleep.
“i’m sorry,” he whispers to your hair, in hopes you hear his apologies in your dreams.
this time, he makes another promise. to never promise you time out of his schedule that he cannot give. to never make you wait longer than you should. to learn to put his burdens into the hands of those willing to help, so he can swear to devote days to you, and only you. he knows both his happiness and his love revolve around you, and they will for as long as the heart in his chest beats.
after all, he is but the earth to your sun.
#saudade; milestone#—🖋#genshin x reader#genshin impact x reader#ayato x reader#kamisato ayato x reader#genshin impact x you#genshin x you#ayato x you#kamisato ayato x you#so uh this definitely could've been better#but i tried my best#as always feedback is always appreciated <3
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Digital painting I did of my dog
I put hours into this one layer drawing (didn’t take any wip pics) and all I got was this lousy timelapse;
#trying out a new style cuz I love digital painting#5hrs of work and we have this#bottom left one is definitely my favourite#if you see this please give me some feedback in the comments#I’d really appreciate it thank you#I tried to give each Merry a different texture which I think turned out ok#merry#lotr merry#digital art#dog#digital illustration#digital painting#stariel posts#my art#rendered art#colour#fave#artists on tumblr#artwork#original art#animal art#animal#cute animals#my dog#sheltie#drawing#painting#mini lassie#2024#timelapse
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that one scene where megamind gets worked up and roxanne is like "sorry, sorry. he's just not used to positive feedback."
i imagine that scene as raeda.
#like THINK ABOUT IT#after decades of being treated as shameful for not joining a coven#suddenly everyone starts treating you like a national hero??#and raine has definitely heard positive feedback#at least from the aspiring bards they've met#they would definitely help eda deal with this new sudden wave of positive attention shes getting#i mean its pretty much canon that for the longest time the only positive attention she got#was from luz and king#the owl house#raeda#eda clawthorne#raine whispers#daisysraedabrainrot
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#here i am overthinking my paper again#i've already been writing here and there and i've gotten feedback for the introduction and i still need to rework a few things out#but god isn't it annoying#when you find yourself not doing much for it on a given day#that it makes you feel guilty#i know there's definitely a balance needed for academics and leisure time#and i've been doing my best to stay on par#nevertheless the guilt gets annoying lol#this also kinda applies to me when it comes to writing in general#whether it's for my studies or just for fun#sighhhh#just need someone to tell me it will be alright#and that i'm going to pay it off in the end lmao#personal#maria rambles
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Hi all! Wanted to survey y'all about the idea of potentially creating a nice little social Discord server. It would foster discussions of Delta BW, of course, but also general Pokemon discussion :-) Would also be a space for me to provide smaller updates that I might not post on the blog, post art, as well as field questions. This server would be firmly SFW, and would be open to people of all ages. Any major updates would still be posted to the blog, to be clear, so joining the Discord would not be necessary to stay up to date. It would just be a fun little thing for anybody wanting another little Pokemon community!
If you have any additional comments, questions, or suggestions, feel free to leave them in the replies! I'd be happy to hear your feedback ^^ Thanks!
#delete later#(going to let this run for a week to try and gather as much feedback as i can!)#(please vote honestly--I won't be offended if you say no haha)#(personally not even certain this will come to fruition since moderating a discord can be a bit of work)#(but if people are interested than I'd definitely like to try!)
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I have so many projects that I need to start working on but ended up drawing more of these two
#had trouble trying to pist these two so i just ended up reposting#anyway thank you so much for all the super nice feedback i got for them :-)#it really means the world to me#definitely gonna draw more of them and also my tfp soundwave#when i have time ofc#art#digital art#my art#transformers#maccadam#tfp#starscream#soundwave#humanformers
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Smarter than me people of Tumblr, I need answers/opinions/facts.
I got into an argument with my Brother-in-law and now I need answers. Said argument was about the definitions of Wizard, Sorcerer, and Warlock.
Mow, according to Google (i know, not always the best source of information but this is important for the argument) DND was created in 1974 and the first known uses of Wizard, Sorcerer, and Warlock were in the 1400s-1600s.
He was trying to use the dungeon and dragons definitions (which I'm not against using for somethings and I'm not entirely sure I understand the DND definitions as he sucks at explaining sometimes but idk) to say that the sorcerer from the Disney movie Wish was not actually a Sorcerer but a Wizard and that the wizards of Harry Potter were not Wizards but actually Sorcerers (he talked about some others too but I don't completely remember) while I was arguing that the terms Wizard, Sorcerer, and Warlock were in use long before DND was created and there those definitions should be the go to ones should we have to define them.
This is where you all come in. Give me your opinions or any facts you might have. Tell me how you'd define them. Discuss with me. Let's see where it goes and if I'm wrong then correct me.
And don't forget to share so we get more opinions and what not!
#Wizard#Sorcerer#warlock#dnd#definition#let’s discuss#argument#give me your opinions#give me feedback#tell me what you think#correct me if i'm wrong
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You know what? I'm done with people critiquing media and art like they are professionals. You don't personally like a song, band, singer, movie, TV show, actor, book, painting, photograph, whatever else? Great. You're entitled to your personal opinion. You're not, however, most probably qualified to tell if that specific thing is, in fact, objectively good or bad.
Something not being to your personal taste ≠ it not being objectively good.
Normalize saying, "You know what, this isn't up to my personal liking" instead of "this is bad".
#it's so fucking funny to me#like you hear people trashing singers for example#and then professional vocal coaches on youtube actually give them quite nice feedback#THE PEOPLE WHO IN FACT DO KNOW A LITTLE SOMETHING ABOUT THE TOPIC#anyway#your personal taste is not the same as the universal definition of good or bad#art#media#music#drama#tv#tv shows#movies
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fuck it genderqueer genderfluid sirius black from now on
who uses all pronouns but also no pronouns
who has breakdowns after every haircut bc suddenly gender is weird
who is so used to conforming as a child that they dont use/hates lables 90% of a time
who prefers to not have a name some days but other times sirius is fine bc sometimes it feels like nothing else fits
who gets so tired of having gender expectations they have regular angry freakouts
#am i projecting?#yes#yes i am#fight me i dare you#shoutout to you if you feel like this#me too me too#sirius black#genderqueer sirius black#genderfluid sirius black#genderqueer#genderfluid#wolfstar#tbh if anyone has a better definition for whatever the fuck this is#i’d appreciate the feedback#shoutout to bestie peri for telling me to post this love you bestie#asher says :)
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Here's 10 recommendations from me, in no particular order
1] More Than A Sidekick, by Jason_Todds_Thigh_Holster (Henry Danger)
Oh, the classic "I have to pretend I don't care about you at all to save you, meanwhile I would give the whole word to you"-trope (totally official name). Mixed with the character in danger having relatively low self-worth and a usual "rough around the edges"-caretaker/mentor, it's just HMMMM (/pos)! I'm already a sucker for characters in hostage situations, so pairing these together is Such Good Soup. I personally didn't even keep up much with Henry Danger after my childhood, but the characters are already so nicely characterized within the fic itself, that you truly don't feel like you miss anything.
2] [injury] of a salesman, by becki (Deltarune)
It's only a one shot, but everything that happens is so well organized and shown that I keep forgetting. "basically just lots of spamton getting the love and care he needs" (author's tag) describes it well, and I am HERE for it. Especially the part where the two eat together tugs at my heartstrings, I love characters with some form of food-insecurity being allowed to eat freely. Swatch as a character is also such a delight.
3] URL not found, by Aster269 (@aster269) (Deltarune)
Quite a long one, this time; I read it while it was still going, and it was worth waiting for every update! The Addisons have very clearly established personalities and beliefs that are explained through their backstory. It's also very interesting to see every facet of their life, from childhood, to Big Shot Era to reunion. And personally, I can't get enough of the Addison Family unconditionally loving and supporting each other <3
4] The Wake-Up Call, by cookiescrumbles (Wander Over Yonder)
Wander. Has. Issues. And they are very well acknowledged here.
His personality really shines through here, both in the way he acts and talks. The entire concept is also very sweet; and I love Sylvia's and Wander's relationship. Shout out to the Hat, for getting Wander what he needs!
5] Tiny Reverberations, by Sylphidine_Gallimaufry (@sylphidine) (Deltarune)
SO! CUTE! Very short, but that just contributes to how fun of a read it is. It's pure fluff, and that mixed with Spam's reaction due to his low self-worth is balm for the soul <3 It's just so adorable; love the kitty <3
6] Mourning Dove, by LynnCanigula15 (@moonbeam-dragon) (Darkwing Duck)
I must say, I'm always a fan of people talking about the kinda messed-up stuff that happens in DW sometimes. And I think how the other three members of the F4 react to this - relatively complicated - situation is very much in character for who they are. Big fan of angst, and Bushroot's state of mind is especially interestingly described and established in chapter 2.
7] Back Alley Beatdown, by SwoodMaxProductions (@swoodthis) (Deltarune)
I love seeing Spamton fighting tooth and nail, knowing his own advantages. Sweet Cap'n Cakes are also very sweet and considered to the Spam Man here; making sure to reassure him when necessary. The description of the parts carefully placed beside him is a personal favourite of mine here! It also has a very nice conclusion.
8] Last of your Kind, by Vanyel (@boonbeenblade) (Cult of the Lamb)
It manages to say what it wants so clearly and concisely, seeing the length that it is. The use of language is truly phenomenal, and it shows a very cool outlook on the relationship between the Lamb and TOWW. Even though the fic depicts events that you literally play yourself, it manages to give an interesting outlook on them, making one able to experience them again as if from fresh eyes, from the perspective of the character. The second-person writing comes off as very natural.
9] Ever so slightly, by Pancakes_for_Dragons (Deltarune)
Sometimes I need a story that is just unapologetic angst. The fic gives Rouxls a very clear persona that reflects on his literal state as the "Rules Card" very well. How his relationship with Lancer grows is really sweet; and especially "I’m thoust Lesser father, surely that musteth count for something." and the whole event around it, still has a space in my mind, since the first time I read it!
10] breathe, breathe, by SteveSmackdown2014 (School for Vampires)
Again, just a very sweet story. It's very easy to see it both from Oskar's (with all the knowledge we have as viewers) and from Sunshine's (with a more 'normal', human outlook) perspective; and why they both react the way they do. Oskar's fear is shown as so very real, but the actual moment is just as sweet.
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