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JORDAN SPENCE NEW CONTRACT REAL???
#edit: phrasing change#ARE WE SEEING THIS#2yr/1.5M#<- shit tier deal to me they should’ve sold doughty for peanuts and gave spence 8x8#unfortunate that mayors manor is the one breaking the news </3#don’t give them the clicks just trust me on this one#lak lb#los angeles kings#la kings#jordan spence
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Vampire yuri! I repeat, vampire yuri!!!!
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Have you all imagined the days where Kaeya would scream in frustration when he tries to create a Khaenri'ahn dish, but the dish just doesn't taste quite right?
How about the helpless feeling he gets when he barely remembers what ingredients go in his homeland's dishes?
And what about the cravings that have never been satisfied since he was a child because his father didn't teach him how to make them?
For an adventurous food lover... perhaps forever losing your nation's food might just be the most painful thing.
#kaeya#kaeya alberich#gi kaeya#hi i wanted to hurt yall today coz this is how i show how much i missed you guys#tw: food#i come back only to bring kaeyangst...#so...have you guys ever noticed how much he LOVES good food?#he is not exactly a picky eater BUT he does know the specifics of what he wants#surprisingly has a ton of information on him regarding food too#oddly specific steak preferences#asking diloo to add food to the menu#glaringly obvious sweet tooth#BUT... he can't talk about Khaenri'ah...#him cutting four-pointed stars on his mushrooms when he makes his skewers...#anyway did yall miss me?#think again. ive only got angst in my notes#edit: changed phrasing into something I'm more happy with
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No idea how plausible this idea is but in the Moon & Sun Minecraft, they apparently have been very clear that Sun and Moon are not brothers. And Eclipse was just introduced as also not family to them (I think). So did they make this show for the celestialcest shippers to explore different relationship dynamics for the characters in hopes the community would go chill in their separate corners?
This is all secondhand information as I haven't seen any of the show (nor have I kept up to date with sams and other sbs lore in general) and me speculating with no actual facts.
this is basically solely based off of these two screenshots I saw on twitter
#Moon and Sun minecraft#moon and sun minecraft speculation#masm#masm speculation#it's almost 3 in the morning- I'm tired- I also haven't looked at my dash in days so maybe this is common knowledge at this point#this might be a terrible decision to post#edit: changing my phrasing because celestialcest implied shipping family members which wasn't what I meant
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I really hope nobody notices that after I post something I will very often go back and edit the post within the first few minutes of posting
#mole talks#if you ever notice somehting that sounds weird in a post ive made#thats probably because i went through ten different ways of phrasing it while actually making the post#and then right after posting i realised i picked the worst possible way to phrase the sentence so i go back and change it#and also after i post art i sometimes notice small mistakes that are not visible to anybody apart from myself#so i go back onto firealpaca and fix the mistakes as quickly as possible#im glad im a tumblr user and not a twitter user because i don't think you can edit posts on there or something..?#tumblr post editing has saved my life many times#edit: i just changed the wording of this post slightly
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my biggest pet peeve with web 2.0 dying is that people really think that the cryptobro web 3.0 is the inevitable next step. like it's written in stone that the internet will take the form of NFTs and cryptocurrency and the "metaverse" in the future.
like. come on. when was the last time you've actually seen anything NFT related in the year of our lord 2023? has ANYONE other than the cryptobros and their bots on twitter been talking about it?? what about the "metaverse"??? im pretty sure Meta itself even dropped their vr "metaverse" crap.
also even if the "mainstream" internet DOES go in that direction, that doesn't mean we need to follow? Despite the total takeover of web 2.0 and social media, personal sites and forums DO still exist. there are still IRC chats and MUCKs and MUDs. We will still have websites and web browsers in a web 3.0-dominated internet. even if those become niche.
plus, i think the whole reason web 2.0 and social media took off in the first place was because it was convenient. rather than building your own website from scratch, you instead had your own profile that you can easily upload photos to and set your mood and make small posts. people saw it as a way to easily keep up with friends, so they flocked to it.
what the fuck does web 3.0 offer to the average person? needing to put on a clunky, expensive set of goggles to virtually attend a work meeting? artificial scarcity assigned to shitty monkey jpegs?? other than techbros and billionares creating artificial hype around this shit to get people flocking there, what actually has people staying?
#twitter#web 2.0#web 1.0#old web#web 3.0#please dont fucking despair about this shit yall#it is not an inevitability just because billionares wanna make money off of it#web 3.0 is the juicero of internet bullshittery#like if the entire NFT bubble can be popped by a single guy making a youtube video#then it is not as inevitable as you think#on that note: go watch Dan Olson's 'line goes up' and 'decentraland' videos to get you out of this doomed mindset#theyre great#lab notes#edit: some slight changes to how i phrase things bc its 2am and im tired#also: watch the Factually interview with Dan Olson after ur sone watching those videos i recommended too#its also rly good#old man yells at the cloud
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boy in silly sitting positions compilation
#cats#I especially like the last one where he just has one single paw poking out of that box for some reason lol#I still have costumes to post and like a billion other things.... grr... constantly failing at staying active on social media aughh#I think because currently my Main Focus is on trying to get my game done and stuff.. which basically just means sitting and writing all day#so there's not much to post about. Though I know the Good At Social Media thing to do would be to post about the#writing and share progress and talk about the game and characters or whatever to try to build interest or something but that is SOOO weird#to me.. I could maybe get it if it was like a tiny tiny discord groupchat of playtesters with like 5 people in#it.. But something about talking openly about things before they happen is weird to me?? Like presumptuous feeling or something#''oooo guess whats gonna happen LATER!!!'' like.. how do you know.. what if it doesnt. what if you dont finish it. what if its not the way#you think it's going to be. what if something changes. etc. Like I literally avoid movie trailers and game trailers for the same reason ghj#Even if it's not ME doing it it just feels... weird.. Maybe it has to do with my OCD and how I just don't like talking about ''future''#things in Certain Terms. Like if I was going to say ''Oh yeah sure. come over to my house in a few months''. I would have to follow it up#with like ''HOPEFULLY you can come over to my house in a few months'' or 'They'll come over in a few months MOST LIKELY''. Because just#stating that something will happen matter of factly takes for granted like.. what if somehting horrible happens and I DONT have a house#in a few months? or what if something bad happens to me. or to the person coming over? I can't ever DEFINITELY say with 100% certainty#that one could ACTUALLY come to my house in a few months. anything could change. So I have to allot for that in my phrasing. hbjjkn#There are a lot of situations where you're expected to just Assume Things but for some reason that bothers me. My brain literally does not#even Assume the most basic things.. like how do *I* know that just because it's someones birthday that they want to be wished a happy#birthday? what if they dont? everyone is different and has different preferences. I should check with them first. or wait until they public#ly announce that theyre accepting birthday wishes. I have to allot for all 5034859069 rare possibilities at any given time and never take#anything for certain. etc. ghjbjhbh.... ANYWAY.. I have been feeling a bit sick lately as usual.. but still slowly making progress on some#things. Moslty I need to edit costume photos. make sculptures. and work on the game. Going back reading some of the old writing from like#2018 and suprisingly I don't have to change that much of it? In fact I like it mostly. so that's good. I would be very interested if I were#playing the game myself. Though that doesnt mean much since my tastes are so niche lol..#Still really want to clear some of my million tumblr drafts as well... alas and aughh and ooughh and so on and so forth. Between all of my#evil appointments other such things...why cant I have one billion dollar to retire into relaxed hermit artist life of no stressors.. bleas
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the only ppl who rlly get what im talking about are other lesbians but i think the whole top/bottom thing has to stop because 1) i don't think topping/bottoming really translates as well for lesbian sex as it does for sex between gay men, like for lesbians i think people use top/bottom when they mean dominant/submissive a lot of the time. unless you're stone most lesbians are vers even if it's not evenly split. 2) everyone assumes i'm exclusively a bottom bc i'm 5'3 and it hurts my feefees...
#edit the first sentence is phrased rlly poorly but i can’t change it bc#i have another post thats a reblog of this one#i meant more like when i try to have conversations with lgbt people irl who aren’t lesbians they don’t get it
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Milgram’s concept art principles and illustration style (polished mainstream anime-ish style with softened shading and colour vibrancy) works in favour of Es more than on other characters - they look like a doll AND quite a doll
You won’t have a cognitive dissonance if I said that they’re created by an eldritch bunny-like creature so a trial broadcast style of entertainment can be made
#milgram es#Guys stop liking it I was nearly delirious while writing it#EDIT: the phrasing was finally changed
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this poll was submitted by an anonymous user. if you have a poll you want boosted feel free to submit it to me or post it and @ me in the replies or send me the link in an ask!
#our second submission :)!!!!#submitted poll#note to the person who submitted this i made it anonymous because your icon showed up as the anonymous guy so i wasnt sure if that was#something you selected on your end or a glitch of some kind#if you want your username attached i can edit and fix it i just wanted to lean on the safer side :)#i changed the phrasing a little bit just to make it more clear and added an extra option 👍
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HoV but HoT color palette and horns because I was bored
#i did this quickly so please ignore the mess and don't worry i know it's there too#the white didn't change much just became creamier.#wait hold up#nvm ignore the phrasing please#honkai impact#honkaiposting#honkaimpact3rd#herrscher of the void#👾edit
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i think one of my biggest gripes with TSATS is the sentence structure and the way that things are phrased.
Sentence structure: the book is CONSTANTLY using ", and", or "then", or "but" instead of splitting up a phrase into two separate sentences. Once I noticed it, I couldn't stop noticing it. In some places it works fine, but right out the gate, as the first line of chapter one, it 1) caught my attention in a negative way and 2) felt immediately clunky and awkward.
The way that the book demonstrates action also feels unnatural and doesn't flow as well as it could. Things are described as happening "now", such as when Kayla takes her lolipop out of her mouth and holds it at her side, the book narrates it as "now holding the lolipop at her side". We didn't SEE that action occur, we're just being described the RESULT of the action, does that make sense? As a reader, you want to SEE the action, you want to SEE her tug the lolipop out of her mouth, see her hand hang by her side as her expression pinches with anxiety over the discussion. We don't want to just be told that "now" her lolipop is out of her mouth, y'know?
There are also sentences that just feel flat out unedited, phrases that have too many words for what they want to accomplish, or with a structure that doesn't make sense - like on page 56, the sentence "They raced up the steps to the platform, Nico easily outrunning his boyfriend, though that was mostly due to Will having to get his land legs again."
First of all - why are they running up the platform? In the previous line, where we're told their cab driver got them to the station with 6 minutes to spare, the specific choice of saying "to spare" makes it sound like there is plenty of time to make it to their train. In the sentences after, we even learn that Nico and Will wound up waiting for their train anyway, so, the fact that they're running when Will feels sick reads...weird, to me. If I was car sick, and then somebody forced me to run for no reason, I would not be a happy camper.
Second of all - The addition of the final third of the sentence, after the second comma, should be it's own phrase. It should be given it's own space, like "(though that was mostly because Will didn't have his land legs back yet)." because it's not important information, just an offhanded comment Nico is making.
Third of all - "though that was mostly due to" and "having to get his" are clunky and wordy. It could've just been "Nico easily outrunning his boyfriend, who didn't have his land legs back yet." It's a smoother sentence that doesn't get bogged down by the extra words.
And that's just one instance. This book is LOADED with moments like this, where action will get lost in a sentence's wordiness. The book tries to be quick and snappy, in Riordan's style, but it fails because it can't quite nail down the phrasing.
There are also moments where the only thing the characters are interacting with is each other, only grinning, grimacing, sighing, glancing at one another, etc etc, instead of doing actions while they speak. Fidgeting with their hands, shifting from side to side, looking away at their surroundings, that kind of stuff is how you convey a MOOD. Body language is important when writing character conversations!! Is somebody relaxed, or are their shoulders tensed up, arms folded across their chest with their muscles flexed, leaning back on one leg with their body halfway tilted away, as if they were ready to flee at a moment's notice? These are the kind of details that I'm missing in TSATS, the kind of things that feel like they're missing.
I also have a lot of gripes with the dialogue itself.
People don't talk like they do in TSATS. The content of what they're saying is realistic enough, sure, yeah, but the specific way that a lot of the dialogue is phrased? It doesn't feel natural. Try reading some of the sentences out loud without editing any of the words. It doesn't sound the way a human being SPEAKS.
THAT'S what I mean when I say these characters are OOC. The way that they're speaking is uncomfortable and feels as if they're being used as a puppet, or a mouthpiece for what somebody ELSE wants them to say.
#tsats#tsats spoilers#like just from a reader's standpoint this book feels offputting and weird!!!#it makes me genuinely want to do a rewrite where I go through and I don't change any of the plot#I don't change any of how anything goes#I just edit the phrasing and dialogue to make it more natural#the book sets no mood!!!! it doesn't commit to itself!!! it tries to be too many things at once and doesn't fully settle onto any of them#and then comes out SWINGING when it does try to do something which just comes across as heavy handed pandering !!!!!#GAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!#like I want Nico and Will to be consistent with how they feel throughout the book. I want them to DEMONSTRATE#Consistency and not constantly swinging between their extremes of being scared or angry or sad#I want them to slowly become more and more skeptical of each other until they're forced to come to terms with the fact that#they both have darkness inside of themselves and each other that they have to accept and love!!!#I see so many people who are like 'omg but they talk to each other about their feeligns!!!! it's so sweet!!!!' when the 'talking' they do#isn't anything SUBSTANTIAL. Throughout the whole beginning of the book Nico is writing off Will's fears about tartarus and ignoring#everybody being concerned for him and he doesn't talk about any of it! THAT'S NOT HEALTHY!!!!#ugh. just. ugh.#pjo#nico di angelo#will solace
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A Hoshino Childhood T-Ai-mline
This was initially just supposed to be an idle ramble about how I was curious about Ai's time in the children's home but it ballooned a bit in scope lol so enjoy me attempting to work out a rough timeline for when Ai was taken into care after her mother's arrest and how long she was in care for.
we know she was around twelve when she was scouted for and debuted in B-Komachi - Sarina says in chapter 1 that Ai is 'the same age' as her and Gorou confirms she was twelve when she passed away.
in the flashback to Saitou scouting her, Ai describes herself as having 'grown up' in a children's home and that her mother was arrested 'when [Ai] was little'. twelve years old is pretty young in the grand scheme of things so she must have been especially small when she arrived for her to describe that span of time as 'growing up' in the children's home.
in this same flashback, Ai notes that her mother was arrested for theft (likely shoplifting, specifically, as it's one of the most common crimes in Japan) but did not come to collect her daughter when she was released. Prison sentences for shoplifting in Japan can be as long as ten years, but it's unlikely that Ai's mother served a sentence that long - that would have made Ai two years old or younger when her mother was arrested; according to Article 41 of Japan's Child Welfare Act she would have been placed in an infant home and likely adopted out sooner from there.
in 45510, it's mentioned that Ai once recounted an instance of physical abuse from her mother in childhood. according to studies by childhood psychologists, kids don't really start developing beat-by-beat memories of events as we understand them until around ages six to seven... but it's also true that memories of trauma and negative events will be much more vivid and long lasting, even in childhood.
in Viewpoint B, Ai is fourteen years old when she mentions she is on the verge of aging out of her children's home. This lines up with the fact that, while children who attend high school are safe until age eighteen, children who do not attend high school age out of the system at fifteen. According to a survey taken in 2020, going from middle school directly into work is not uncommon for children in the care system and we know that Ai was working for Strawberry Productions at this time and never attended high school.
Ichigo confirms in chapter 1 that he is Ai's father "on paper", meaning that he is her legal guardian. He clarifies that this is due to her growing up in a children's home, so it's likely that rather than aging out of the system, Ichigo adopted or fostered her at the last minute.
This last point is a bit more of a stretch which is why I'm separating it from the rest of the list, but something I've always been curious about is why the Ai biopic was titled 15 Year Lie. The only stretch of time this number matches is from Ai's murder to the twins' current age at the start of the movie arc, which is eighteen. They would have been around three or four when Ai died and well, 18 - 15 = 3. It does seem like a weird period of time to pick, though, because... well, it's not like the lies only started when Ai died.
However, if Ai was five years old when she first entered a children's home, that fifteen year number would match up nicely. 20 - 15 = 5.
I don't necessarily think it's intentional but the niceness of that coincidence coupled with the fact that it slots in so neatly in with the existing evidence that I'm inclined to go with it. It also means that both Ai and Sarina would have been around the same age when they essentially lost their mothers - five and four respectively.
tl;dr: My best guess based on current evidence is that Ai was five years old when she was taken into care and just shy of fifteen when she was taken in by Ichigo, meaning she spend nine or ten years in a children's home.
#oshi no ko#ai hoshino#hoshino ai#oshi no posting#EDIT: i used the phrase 'foster care' on auto pilot once or twice here which isn't quite applicable to japanese children's homes#so i changed it
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Dear God, this is bleak
"One of my spiritual advisors on tiktok" bro they convinced you to stay on a Boat as the Storm Of The Century hits Tampa? Storm surge up to (currently predicted) 13 *feet*?
Man.
#speculation nation#hurricane milton#ive been. keeping an eye on the situation. checking for updates.#i may not be directly affected by this but ive got a friend in florida (thankfully not in the direct hit area)#so im. worried about it. and also just worried for these people in general.#so ive been checking this update article and theres This story and im just like#the phrase 'spiritual advisors on tiktok' made my soul just Shudder.#especially since theyre convincing him to stay on a BOAT through the worst storm of the region in a CENTURY.#this man is probably going to die. and nothing anyone said could change his mind.#i know i have no connection to this man at all. but i really find it so sad.#edit: according to a different source authorities say that he agreed to go to a shelter?? i do hope so. itd be bleak chances if he didnt.
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Found an FGO AMV made by fans using their own arts (feat one of my favorite Aimer songs "Ninelie") ! Contains spoilers for Lostbelt no.1-7, emphasize on no.7.
I’ve always thought Ninelie is fitting for a fight at the end of the world, even without reading the actual lyrics.
#fate grand order#cosmos in the lostbelt#fgo spoilers#type moon#random saying#music#and IT IS SO BEAUTIFUL#THE IMAGES THE EDITING PRETTY#the scenes of the dinos fighting the ufo is my fav#when i phrase it like that its so weird huh lol#oh and little olgamarie changing to U Olgamarie too#tbh i like the original version of Ninelie more#but it is still so fitting
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for the fanfic ask game, 🏅 and 🌙 !!
🏅 What is something you recently felt proud of in regard to your writing (finished a fic, actually planned for once, etc).
Honestly finishing the gift for saph was huge I haven’t really written anything since April 😭
🌙 What time of day do you prefer to write? Why?
When I had a job it was during my shifts 🤭 but now that I’m unemployed…. Probably evening/nighttime? I honestly don’t usually use my computer during the day often 😂 but we’ll see once school starts again and I’m on my computer more if that shifts
#ask#asks#ask game orionsstory#I still have mad writer imposter syndrome but hey I posted something that’s a#victory#anyways I should go edit#my editor and I are beefing bc she wants to remove my favorite line and I refuse#so every round of edits is her going cut this it’s bad and me going no :)#so if you read the chapter and don’t like the line suck my ass actually I think it’s funny!#might fuck around and change it back to its original phrasing just to piss her off even more (she’s asleep rn)#also for legal purposes that is a JOKE if I change it back it’s bc I like the original phrasing best#n e ways#ignore my rambles :)
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