#critisim is welcome

[echosofhorrorxx]

Bloodletting

Kerry, a vampire, stalks his prey. He's hungry. Starving. And the blood of a corrupt police officer would be the perfect way to satisfy his hunger. "The more corrupt the person is, the richer, and thick their blood is. Which is perfect for a hungry vampire...." -Unknown ⚠️⚠️TW for themes/Mentions of; Catcalling, verbal harassment, blood, vampirism, violence, death, and NS/FW themes! ⚠️⚠️ please do not use/steal my work for AI <3

Word count: 471

October 1st, {REDACTED}

As the vampire, Kerry, stalked his victim an officer by the name of James Smith, he could feel his inner darkness begin to manifest within his soul. He didn't know why. But it didn't matter. He was hungry, starving, almost. It had to have been almost a month since he had fresh blood. He licked his lips. The officer he was stalking, was a fascist. Officer James Smith would have a brutal death. He growled, loud enough for the officer to be able to hear him. Oh how fun this would be. The officer shot around in a panic, hand reaching for his gun.

"Excuse me, did you just fucking growl at me?"

"What if I did, Officer Smith?" Kerry purred, becoming increasingly excited.

"Are we going to have a problem, queer?" Smith shook his head in frustration. "Because catcalling an officer won't end well for you."

"What if I am? You should know perfectly well that all forms of verbal harassment are legal, officer." Kerry flashed a fanged smile towards Smith, slowly tilting his head to the side. His smile made Officer Smith uneasy. Smith tried his best to keep his composure. Kerry could smell his fear, which made him audibly lick his lips. Oh, how his fear smelled beautiful. It made Kerry's stomach growl with hunger.

"I heard that shit you said to that young woman back there. How would this be any different, pig?" Kerry spat, as Smith chuckled to himself and shook his head. "Put your hands on your back, fucker." "Fine, as you wish, Officer Smith," Kerry spoke, placing his arms on his back.

Before the officer placed the cuffs on Kerry's wrists, the vampire swung around, baring his fangs. Kerry roared in exhilaration as he lunged toward Smith's neck before Smith could retaliate. The vampire sunk his large fangs into the officer's neck. Smith howled in pain and fear, screaming and begging. Kerry easily overpowered him, falling onto the pavement, scraping the skin on his cheek as he struggled. But the officer's struggle didn't last long, as the vampire quite literally sucked the life force from Smith as he became weaker by the second. It was only moments afterward that the officer died quickly. The vampire began to slowly sip at the blood, ravishing in the policeman's fear, and his life.

Oh how divine his fear and blood tasted, Kerry purred at the feeling of the warm, thick liquid slipping down his throat.

Kerry stood up, the hot blood dripping from his fangs and chin.

He licked the blood off his arm, very slowly dragging his tongue up his arm, up to his wrist, the blood dripping down his chin. He sighed and kicked the dead body towards the curb. "Have fun in hell, and don't forget to save me a seat, little pig~"

[mantas-ray]

summary. viktor is distracting and you give him a taste of his own medicine

tags. gn!reader, academic rivals to ???, kissing, no smut. i’ve never written for vik so this is me pre-gaming for the request i got. constructive critisim is welcomed !

You’ve been staring at the 71 on the paper for the entire class, and your frown deepens each minute that ticks by. You can feel Viktor’s gaze on you as he periodically glances back. It irritates you further.

The bastard knew he got a better mark than you, judging by the grimace on your face. However, he isn’t aware that your grade is way worse than either of you expected. You are better than this. This was your best class. You’ve averaged in your 90s, never dipping below 80. It was your best class until Viktor decided to take the same course at the start of the new academic year.

When class is over, you crumble the offending test in your hand. It was his fault. The way his pretty eyes light up and the stupid smirk on his face when he one-ups you. It was all you thought about during the midterm. You refuse to blame yourself for your own thoughts.

The look he gave you before your last midterm has been stuck in your mind for the past few days. Viktor knows what he does to you. He had to. He’s intelligent, but so were you. There’s no way he didn’t like you at least a little. He enjoyed ‘annoying’ you. That’s what he likes to think it was. Viktor’s bothersome nature to you, since he thought of you as competition, was an excuse to get closer to you. Maybe it was delusional, but you think you were vigilant.

The lecture hall was almost empty, yet Viktor waited for you. You slung your bag over one of your shoulders as you approached him.

“You seem pleased with yourself,” you grumbled, and Viktor’s smirk widened.

“Why would I be?” he responds. You roll your eyes and give your paper ball to him. In return, he passes you his exam, pristine with only one fold. You open it, revealing a nearly perfect score — a 97. No way.

You look at him as he unravels the crumpled-up piece of paper, smoothing out the creases. His brows quirk in surprise at the mediocre mark, and you wince, definitely not your best work.

“This is your fault, you know,” you say, handing him his exam paper. “You’re distracting.”

“I fail to see how that’s my problem,” Viktor replies. You wanted simultaneously to throttle and kiss him.

You weren’t mad. You knew your head wasn’t in the game when you wrote that paper, but it didn’t hurt any less. It was still a decent mark, given the class’ average of 53. However, you weren’t slightly better than average. You were supposed to excel.

He gives you back yours, and you ball it up again, shoving it into the pocket of your uniform trousers. You intended to throw it out on your way to your next class, and coincidentally, Viktor had a midterm afterwards. It makes it all the more confusing why he’d wait for you if he had better matters to attend to.

“Why don’t I even the playing field?” you asked. You shuffled closer to him, but he didn’t back away; instead, he leaned closer as he supported himself on his cane. Your faces were mere inches apart.

Viktor was curious about what you meant by your words. However, he didn’t expect your lips to brush against his as you moved closer. Viktor’s eyes widen, yet he refuses to shift away. You took it as a sign and pressed your lips to his.

Viktor’s lashes flutter close, and his cane drops to the floor with a faint clack emanating throughout the empty lecture hall as he cups your face. You taste coffee on his tongue and desperation on his lips. The kiss was swift, ending as quickly as it happened, and weakly, he tried to chase you as you parted from him.

As you bend down to retrieve his fallen cane, Viktor tries to process the situation. His eyes follow your every move. If you planned to temporarily rewire his brain, you succeeded.

You return his cane to his grasp and walk to the exit of the room, your shoulder brushing against his as you call out, “Good luck in your midterm, Vik.”

[imliterallyjustablackgirl]

AYO EDIBIRI

I will say this once and once only: You all need to stop expecting black women to be y'all messiah, saviour, and pRoTeCtOr of all. Ayo Edibiri has barely started and most of her criticism has roots in racism and misogyny. A wonderful case study for misogynoir

*sarcasm*

I saw a post criticizing Ayo for keeping her college friends, who are white. Supposedly, she doesn't have any black friends, hasn't used her platform to platform black people. Despite the same post pointing Quinta into it, in almost a weird attempt to draw a comparison yet., these women have worked together- Isn't Abott Elementary ''a black show''.The idea of letting her do her seems horrendous to the most self-righteous people who backhandedly support her. It's giving early Lizzo, loving and hating - lmfao. The one of annoying part of it is how it uses another black person, specifically a black woman to validate their argument. I won't say much anymore except how disappointing that in such a historic moment where 3 black women won Golden Globes, you can find bitterness to point out. Critisim is welcome but Ayo has been nothing but a sweetheart and acclaimed from her peers - white and black, because she deserves her fucking flowers. Her association with whiteness in the post seems to underline that she allines herself with white people as if some of theses people weren't her literal coworkers. Some of you are truly the aunties you hated when you were younger. Ayo doesn't own us other than to do her job, and she did it quite well, Golden Globes and People Critics Award, chew it out, taste it in your mouth and swallow it. I will leave you on my two faves,theses two are a true stample for all awkward black girls everywhere! : Cheers, mes amours!

Cred: @editsbytariah tiktok

[annawayne]

https://www.tumblr.com/annawayne/758795739911634944/why-do-you-keep-bringing-r-talentless-writing-when?source=share

Imagine going on someone's blog and telling them to stop posting their content 🤡

For real!

So many option what to do in life (and even with that you don't like something/someone, like blocking, muting, unfollowing etc) but nah, this person just decided to be an asshole. Tsh, honestly, pathetic.

I welcome criticism, but, lol, it wasn't a critisim, so yes, just 🤡 behaviour.

But I also wanted to thank all of you once again who reblogged and left words of support under this post! This is what more important, and I appreciate all of you so much, and thank you, thank you, thank you, all of you🫂

[glozzavid]

Welcome to glozzavid! ❥

About Me:

Hey there! I’m glozzavid, and this is my little corner of the internet dedicated to fanfiction. If you’re a fan of diving into alternate realities, exploring untold stories, or just enjoying a fresh take on your favorite characters, you’re in the right place!

I’ve been passionate about storytelling since I could read. This bunny hole started at eleven (From the interactive game Episode, to Wattpad and it just got worse). Besides writing I’m always up for a good conversation about anime’s, books, writing, and movies or any and all type of art forms!

What You’ll Find Here:

•Fresh Stories: Dive into original fan fiction that reimagines your favorite characters and worlds. From thrilling adventures to tender romances, there's a tale for every mood.

•Character Deep Dives: Explore detailed character studies and alternative perspectives that add depth and new layers to beloved figures.

•Prompt Fulfilling: I take on prompts from the community, so if you have a wild idea or a what-if scenario, let me know, and it might just become the next story!

•Community Interaction: Join discussions, share your thoughts, and connect with other fans who share your passion for these characters and worlds. Warning: Constructive Critisim and hate are different, and I know which is which. Any type of hate, towards me, my work, or others on my page will get you blocked and reported. Be nice, don’t like? Just scroll.

Get Involved: I’d love to hear from you! Feel free to drop a message or comment with your thoughts, suggestions, or just to say hi. I’m always open to discussing ideas or collaborating on projects.

Thanks for stopping by, and I hope you enjoy the stories as much as I enjoy writing them!

Happy reading, Glozzavid!

p.s. my requests are always open💋

[emerald-emerlad]

hear me out - tma (the magnus archives) pixel game

I'm not a good pixel artist nor experienced game coder, but I do feel like if I continue learning those sort of hobbies a magnus archives game would be pretty epic. I do have some experience on Scratch, so that could also work if I made some art and then put it in there. Also I do know there's a rp game coming up (which I totally didn't just figure out) but this is just my ideas for a single-player game.

in my opinion it'd be pretty cool to see jon going around solving puzzles with the help of various avatars and the archival assistants, and maybe even some combat ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ (i keep envisioning it as pokemon style lol, or other metroidvania style :D)

(many more thoughts/ideas under the cut! I may update)

for the whole statement thing, there could be 'side quests' or people who need your help getting rid of the entity that's stalking them? I haven't fully fleshed out the idea (wink wink) but it should definitely have something about statements and statement givers.

it could follow the canon timeline or a completely different AU, or you could even choose your characters (or change them, like Omori kinda), and each has their own ability that relates to the entity they serve. For example, Martin or Peter could go invisible (the lonely), Melanie could have a combat boost or something (the slaughter), and Daisy could transform into a wolf or dog for reasons (the hunt).

It could be a 'choose your story' sorta style, where you make a character and there are multiple endings depending on your choices. I figured the character designs would be made by what the majority of the fandom sees the characters as, but the layout of the institute would also have to be thought out but it would hopefully be open world.

Oh oh oh - what if you could romance different assistants :o? This is less likely but sorta like a Hades style, where the more tasks you complete the more they help you? If you were an OC, you could probably romance any of them (pg-13 guys), but if you played as Jon it'd probably be martin, tim, and maybe a few others.

Maybe like Omori or Stardew Valley in terms of style (i promise those are not the only pixel games I know-)?? Metroidvania action adventure stylish, but simplified. Like, Jon would need a specific keycard or something to go to another floor, or enhance his Eye abilities to do learn specific.

I would love to start learning pixel art and could do 'fake screenshots' if this got enough attention and/or people wanted to see that sorta stuff. I know my art isn't the best (😅) but this would be a fun project that I could actually devote myself to, though it would take a lot of time. I think if I do do this, I'd have to git gud (double wink) at the pixel style and then get more advanced at Scratch coding.

There is an archives sim out there, and I was pretty inspired by that. Go check it out!: https://dashingdon.com/play/sazandorable/archives-sim/mygame/index.php

(PS: IDEAS VERY MUCH WELCOME!!! COMPLIMENTS AND MILD CRITISIM TOO (cause idk how far this will go))

(likes and reblogs appreciated)

[duckynoodles]

🌿Welcome to my writing and art blog🌿

🌿Hello im Ducky/Aubrey - 22 - an Autistic ADHD gal who loves writing and art🌿 🌿welcome to my writbler,Art and other random interest tumbler,i hope you enjoy your stay🌿 🌿im open to critisim regarding my writing and art,and my DMs are open for anyone who would like to interact with me🌿

Tags: #Duckys Art #Duckys writing #Duckys OCs

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Instagram: DuckyNoodles (empty and no longer active due to AI bs)

My simbler: ColorMeberry

[treakaluigi]

I am mixed, and I am a person of color and as a furry artist along with that I have considered that some of my OCs are Black Coded in some ways etc and I've always wanted to have some of my characters have black charactestics and features especially with hair so I've decided to update Andrew with some Braid like curls this is my first time ever drawing this so critisim is welcomed! It helps me Improve as an artist

[cynthiaendergirl]

stuff completed in stream today! (critisim welcomed

[idunno5829573910]

Ever had a bunch of fanfic ideas but no motivation to write? Or just wanted to dump a bunch of running ideas for fanfics?

well I did and so I made this to just dump a bunch of ideas. I probably won't ever make a story out of it but maybe if I get motivated I'll write a headcannon type of book for it? The ideas are for anyone else to use I just ask for credit of the initial idea or inspiration. But otherwise go one ahead!

Critisims and add ons are also welcome!

https://www.quotev.com/story/16515627/Ideas-for-books-I-have-no-motivation-to-write

[dancinglifeboat]

Scott after Sausage and Jimmy kiss;

(Image desc.

There is a picture of Spiderman from Spiderman;into the spider verse crying in the shower with his suit on. Scott's Smajor's empires minecraft skin is edited over spider man's head. The subtitles read "I handled it like a champ".)

[heldvisionsarch]

selene combat talents ! minus ascen ones bc im having a hard time figuring those out </3

Pew! Pew! Pew! / / NORMAL ATTACK.

Normal Attack: Performs up to 4 consecutive shots with a bow.

Charged Attack: Consumes a certain amount of Stamina to perform an upward slash.

Tying Ribbons: Selene will enter a "Tying Ribbons" state after spending 5s out of combat, which will cause her next Charged Aimed Shot to have 75% decreased charge time, and once charged, she can fire a "Tangled Bow" that will deal AoE Anemo DMG based on Selene's Energy Recharge..

Plunging Attack: Fires off a shower of arrows in mid-air before falling and striking the ground, dealing AoE DMG upon impact

Bound Bows. // ELEMENTAL SKILL

Fires off a Bound Bow that allows Selene to move rapidly, entangling and marking opponents along its path.

When this rapid movement ends, the Bound Bow will explode, dealing Anemo DMG to the marked opponents based on Selene's Max Energy Recharge.

Tap :               Moves a certain distance forward swiftly.

Hold :              Engages in continuous, swift movement, during which Selene's resistance to interruption is increased.

During this time, Selene can control this rapid movement and end it by using this Skill again. Additionally, each opponent marked by a Bound Bow when it explodes grants Selene a 25% chance to reset her Tying Ribbon state.

Sweethearted Suprise! // ELEMENTAL BURST.

Deals AoE Anemo DMG and creates a "Super Duper Special Gift," which aids Selene and her teammates in battle.

Super Duper Special Gift!

Follows the character around and will initiate a coordinated attack under the following circumstances, dealing Anemo DMG based on Selene's Max Energy Recharge:

Can occur once every second when your active character uses a Normal Attack.

Will occur each time Selene's Bound Bow explodes and hits opponents.

Will heal the active party member based on Selene’s Energy Recharge.

adds an Anemo DMG Bonus to all Anemo characters in the party, that scales off of Selene’s Crit Rate.

[thisarthurandeames]

I’ve done it again.

I’ve written something and released it out into the wild.

College/University AU 👀

https://archiveofourown.org/works/25432639

Arthur/Eames

Gen. 860 words.

Mild Hurt/Comfort for the @inceptionbingo

[revol-lover]

2020 goal (pre covid) : CONNECT! TALK TO PEOPLE GET OUT OF THE HOUSE AND MAKE FRIENDS.  (was truly fed up with sahm isolation and was ready to find ~myself~ again and i had accountability set up and everything)

2020 reality: tumbleweeds and isolation because of covid [did kind of find *me* again though which was probably the right first step thought]

1 week into 2021: this isnt ending soon so i should be more comfortable sticking my head out more! even if it’s just socializing/connecting online!

*does the above*

*immediately feels sick, annoying, incapable of socializing, awkward and like my interaction was not desired*

and somehow ive come to the realization that sticking my head out online is as hard and awkward as in person because while in person the face-to-face is scary, online the evidence of your interaction just sits there in plain text staring back at you, asking to be read and read again, so the voice in your head can laugh and call you stupid and awkward.

fun

[constellationleo-art]

Another post next day? Yep.

Meet Zen, a changeling boy who loves music. This is the first time I use unnatural skin color to make an oc.

Supplies used: Arteza and Micron Pens

[fanfictionsrookie]

Would Any One Be Interested In Proof Reading My Steven Universe Fanfiction?

It's essentially just the first chapter and whether I'll publish it is up for debate. I'm new and super late to the fandom and kinda got into it on my own so I don't wanna force any of my friends into reading it.

It's a pretty long first chapter.

As for the fanfic itself:

It is centered around Blue and Yellow Pearl in a Modern AU. Specifically a private Dance/Art Institution/College setting.

The genre would essentially be Slice of Life, I suppose a bit of Drama with a later focus on Magical Realism and eventual Romance. But that won't be until much later.

It would also be nice to discuss the work, share some ideas, questions or theories.

It's a lot of to randomly dump on someone, but if anyone's interested you're welcome to message me.

Here's the first few paragraphs if any of you want to give it a read...

...

Yellow Pearl - Dahlia Kingsley

Dahlia Kingsley strutted ahead, with her head held high, as if the world belonged to her.

It very well might have…if she decided to put her mind to it, but for now conquering the world would have to wait.

Nothing would...could hold any greater weight in the young woman's mind, than the fact that, she was finally attending her first year at a world renowned institute. One fully dedicated to the art of dance.

Not just any old dancing school either. With her chest puffed out in pride, the young woman strutted through the gates of the Damonte Institute of Higher Arts. One of three from the same branch. It was here where Dahlia Kingsley would establish her skill as rivaling even the best of the best.

Nothing was more important. Nothing else was worth her attention.

...