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dalekofchaos · 3 years ago

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Things I would change about FNAF

Reposting cause it wouldn’t show up in the tags the first time, but here we go again

The direction of William Afton wouldn’t change. What I mean is that SL changed William from a creepy psychopathic killer to a mad scientist. To put it simply. William’s character would be more in line with how he is portrayed in FNAF 2-4 and The Silver Eyes rather than The Fourth Closet. The difference being that William’s motivation is killing the kids to put his family back together in their own animatronic forms.

Nothing storywise for FNAF 1, the only thing I would change is Foxy’s jumpscare. Compared to the other animatronics, Foxy’s is a bit weird. Where Freddy, Bonnie and Chica are out to kill you, Foxy is like “Arr matey, can I bother ye for a cup of sugar” so I’d just make Foxy’s jumpscare like the others or since he’s sprinting towards the door, do something with the running gimmick and have Foxy have a lunging jumpscare

FNAF 2. After completing Night 6, we would be treated to another atari styled minigame. As Jeremy Fitzgerald, we would be walking through the Pizzeria doing our rounds and at the last part of the minigame, Mangle would pop out and bite us, thus revealing the Bite Of 87

FNAF 3.

There would be a Phantom Bonnie

Springtrap would move like he does and do a jumpscare like in Two Evil Eyes

FNAF 4,

I simply would just reveal Crying Child's name in the game. The bullies or the kids around the neighborhood would call him Chris

The neighborhood kids would be revealed as the Missing Kids

Not only would there be a Nightmare Fredbear on Night 5, but also Nightmare Spring Bonnie

Sister's Location.

Would reveal that Ballora was Mrs Afton. "I found them, Mother and Elizabeth"

Funtime Foxy would have his UCN voice here

There would be two minigames. One would be the CIrcus Baby game we got and the other for Ballora. Would be a dancing minigame with Ballora and Minireenas, if you get the minigame right, there would be a flash revealing a car accident.

Pizzeria SImulator.

Michael and Henry would be willing partners to end it all. Okay this always bothered me. There is no way whatsoever Michael wouldn't have tried to find Henry after everything that's happened. There is no way that Henry wouldn't attempt to find Michael in the hopes of bringing an end to the nightmare. But to make it clear that they were partners, I would edit Henry's speech. "And to you my brave partner, Michael. I'm sorry for the suffering you've gone through. I wanted you to live free after all this was over. There was a way out planned for you, I have a feeling that's not what you want. I have a feeling that you are right where you want to be.

During Henry’s speech, Henry would address Charlie by name. “Charlie, my daughter if you can hear me. I knew you would return as well. It's in your nature to protect the innocent. I'm sorry that on that day. The day you were shut out and left to die. No one was there to lift you up in their arms. The way you lifted others into yours. And then, what became of you? I should have known, you wouldn't be content to disappear. Not my daughter. I couldn't save you then, so let me save you now.” It's time to rest, for you, and for those you have carried in your arms.

Midnight Motorist would reveal the fate of Mrs Afton. In the section of the minigame where we visit the mound of dirt near the Afton home. We would see a tombstone with the name “Clara Afton” William at first says “....” Then he’d say “I’m sorry. I will put you back together”

Molten Freddy, would actually feel like all the Funtimes rolled up into one. Art by circusmantis. Description is how I how Molten Freddy should’ve been “Out of the 4 characters in FNaF 6 (Scrap Baby, Molten Freddy, Scraptrap and Lefty) Molten Freddy is by far the least interesting of the group, I feel like Molten Freddy was a big wasted opportunity as there was so much more Scott could’ve done with him, he could’ve easily include Ballora, Funtime Foxy and Bon-Bon as part of its design and personality but I feel like Scott tossed them aside to put Funtime Freddy front and centre due to his popularity and I honestly think he’s only popular because of his voice and maybe his design (if there are any other reason please let me know because that’s all I can see).So, I decided to create my own version of Molten Freddy and put a different spin on him, to try and make the character more interesting. This is my own interpretation of Molten Freddy, which I’ve named Scrap Ennard.Since Scrap Ennard is made out of at least 3 animatronics: Funtime Freddy, Funtime Foxy and Ballora (or 4 if you count Bon-Bon), I wanted to show that in its design, instead of having 3 or 4 sperate heads like some people seem to interpret their version of Scrap Ennard (or just one head with Ennard’s mask), I wanted to just have one big head but with 4 faces fused together into a mangled mess, I think this would look a lot more horrifying and scary rather than just having 4 separate heads on long necks which to me is a bit cliché when making a character with multiple heads.I gave Scrap Ennard 4 arms because not only does it look cool but since it’s made out of 4 animatronics, it makes sense for it to have 4 arms, these arms are controlled by a different animatronic, with Ballora controlling its right arm, Funtime Freddy controlling its left arm, Funtime Foxy controlling it’s hook arm and Bon-Bon controlling the claw arm. I only gave Scrap Ennard 2 legs because I felt 4 legs would overcomplicate the design a bit, these 2 legs are controlled by Ballora and Funtime Freddy.With 4 characters in one, this can give Scrap Ennard multiple personalities, with each one having their own voice and behaviours, there would be a total of 5 personalities: Funtime Freddy, Ballora, Funtime Foxy, Bon-Bon and Ennard which will be all of them combined, the personalities would change between nights. Other than Funtime Foxy, each character would have their original voices and it will active with whatever personality is in front, Ballora would still have her singing voice and Funtime Freddy would still have his laughter, for Ennard’s voice it would be all the voices talking at the same time, similar to the Delightful Children from Kids Next Door, that kind of voice coming from an animatronic like this would sound really creepy and unique.Its vocabulary would also change depending on which personality is in front, with the 3 individual personalities with voices addressing itself is “me” or “I” or “he” or “she” but with Ennard’s personality it will address itself as “we” or “us” or “ours”, similar to Ermac from Mortal Kombat.I like the idea of the animatronics working together to navigate and manoeuvre rather the just letting one-character take command, I think it just makes the character more unique, plus it makes more sense within the story, isn’t the reason the 4 remaining characters kicked Circus Baby out of Ennard was because they got tired of taking orders from her, but they’re perfectly okay with taking orders from Funtime Freddy, that doesn’t really make sense to me.” I will say Ballora would be more active and actually be fighting Funtime Freddy for the more dominant personality just so we can have the whole Afton family reunion.

Scraptrap would look better. Only addition is I would include a visible voice box so it would make more sense to hear him speak. Art by LiterallyMiguel

Scraptrap would be more bloodthirsty instead of arrogantly stupid. “"What a deceptive calling. I knew it was a lie the moment I heard it, obviously, but it is intriguing nonetheless." It’s generally agreed Afton is stupid for saying this, I have no idea what I’d have him say, but it has more to do with wanting to kill Michael and Henry. Maybe instead he could say. “Tell me, my dear old friend. Did you think I wouldn’t know it was you? I’m coming for you, the children and you, my son.”

Insanity Ending would explore William’s motivation. Along with the Remnant extractor, on Henry’s computer would be what Henry believes to be why William did what he did. WHat would be stated is William was a good friend, but after the death of his wife, son and daughter, William killed Charlie and the missing kids.

Golden Freddy would've appeared in the game as Scrap Golden Freddy. CC would be in complete control. Cassidy's spirit would've passed on in the Happiest Day. Consumed by grief and rage over what Michael did and what William did to the missing kids, Golden Freddy's goal is to kill Michael and Willaim(moreso William, CC lets go of his hatred of Michael during the ending) Jumpscare wise, when we are trying to do our tasks, your computer shuts off and IT’S ME… flashes before we get jumpscared. Scrap Golden Freddy would be the final Animatronic we would salvage. His noise is Fredbear's laugh from FNAF 4. He came back for William more than Michael. art by Shadowof1987

With Scrap Ennard(with Ballora) and Golden Freddy in the game alongside William, Molten Freddy and Lefty, it would truly be the Afton and Emily Family Reunion and the ending to their story.

Before Scrap Baby corners Michael, maybe Michael could actually speak to his siblings, mother and father “Little brother, Chris. I don’t know if you can hear me or even remember me or your name. But I’m sorry and I love you. Elizabeth, sister. I know you betrayed me and I know you’re the reason why I’m like this. But I forgive you and I love you. Mother. I'm sorry I couldn't set your soul free, but I love you. Father. it’s me Michael. I found you. And I’m going to make sure we all die together, as a family”

The Lorekeeper ending would be like the Happiest Day in FNAF World. There would be two screens for the ending. Showing the graves we got, then doing something similar with FNAF 4 where the plushies and CC’s pass one by one. We would see Atari sprites of the Missing Kids, Charlie, Mrs Afton, and Henry passing one by one. Then the final image we’d see is Michael holding onto Chris and Elizabeth mirroring FNAF World’s Happiest Day and their spirits at peace ascending to the afterlife

UCN.

I would simply just have Cassidy looking like she’s described in the books as TOYSKHK

Fredbear would look like this instead of a repaint of Golden Freddy

Security Breach

Glamrock Freddy would have clothes like his bandmates. Source

Glamrock Chica would look something like this

Roxanne would looks something like this

Monty would look like this

Actually making Vanny the threat they were advertising and building up to since Help Wanted and AR. We have like a few main appearances from Vanny and they were all very weak. Keep in the Vanny meter and give Vanny back her knife. Even better. Use Vanny the same way Nemesis was used in RE3 or The Huntress in Dead By Daylight. Someone who constantly stalks us nd keeps coming. So constant appearances to make her feel like a big deal. Oh and while we’re at it, here is all you had to do for Vanny. How about not cutting her content from the trailers? How about not cutting the Vanny meter. How about keeping the cut lines and original jumpscare in the trailer? You know what also would’ve helped Vanny? NOT REMOVING THE FUCKING KNIFE, YOU MORONS! Vanny has her knife and uses it in her jumpscares. Like Vanny as an Afton cultist was really good and they squandered it. Vanessa being a reluctant follower had potential, but they instead removed that plotline and made Vanessa and Vanny not so different from each other. Really doesn’t make the whole “save Vanessa” ending feasible. Actually showing Vanessa as this person who wants to help Gregory escape alongside Freddy, but slowly having her mind being consumed by Vanny and the only means to save Vanessa being the Princess Quest games would’ve been much better than what we got. But if we chose not to save Vanessa altogether, we could’ve gotten a scene of Gregory reaching out to Vanessa and Vanny would only reply “There is no more Vanessa, only Vanny” and thus making us fight Vanny in the finale all the more harder.

The ability to save and recruit the Animatronics. It would work similar to saving or harvesting the Little Sisters in Bioshock. If we save Chica, Roxy and Monty, they will help us and Freddy. If you shatter them, then it goes how it does in the game, but giving us the choice to not murder Freddy’s friends. Oh and because you saved Monty and Roxy from Afton’s control, they could help you get access to the Afton ending and as a special treat, they give us a special performance.

We'd have encounters with Glitchtrap. Glitchtrap would appear on the monitors, computers, arcade machines and be in trolling Malhare mode. Hacking the Fazwatch to make hiding and surviving the Animatronics all the more difficult. Hacking the Bots to make encounters with them lethal. And everytime Glitchtrap hacks near by technology? VANNY APPEARS. Also to actually give us an indicator that we’d encounter Burntrap in the true ending, everytime we shatter or save the Glamrocks, Glitchtrap would appear congratulating Gregory for shattering them or enraged if we free them from being glitched, either way Glitchtrap will simply tell Gregory “come find me, Gregory and be sure to bring your pal Freddy, we have so much to talk about.” also a big sign that Glam Freddy could be possessed by Michael.

Give Burntrap a jumpscare

The Burntrap ending would be similar to this video to make Burntrap a bigger threat. Only I would make it clear on what happens to Vanny. You could tie the good ending into the Afton ending which gives us Gregory, Freddy, Vanessa and the Animatronics fleeing together after Burntrap is defeated or Vanny would remain as Vanny and we'd see her flee so to tease what happens in a possible DLC

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