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Update for The Rod That Blocks the Lightning: I will be posting the first few chapters Sunday or Monday evening
Summary: With the destruction of the main forces of the invading Weasel Army, the surviving enemy factions feud against each other for control. Geumsaegi’s assumptions on easily continuing his mission is dashed by the competence of the new-coming leaders, as well as the continued survival of his nemesis, Mulmangcho. However, between the ineptitude of the general ranks and the infighting, Geumsaegi can still see a slim chance at success. With a new order of espionage and scout hunters coming into play, will the disguised squirrel be able to protect his beloved Flower Hill without sacrifice?
#The Rod That Blocks the Lightning#possibly will post Wednesday if something urgent comes up#or if I really dislike how this one conversation is written#might depend on the possible manhwa update#I really want to read that#oh boy am I getting some world-building in#looking forward to writing some actual romance and relationships in this one#not full lemon though that's going too far#squirrel and hedgehog#sah#SaH#Geumsaegi#Flower Hill#probably won't do the tiger empire as the main villain again#or maybe I will or just include it somewhere as a faction#but I have better ideas that probably fit better with canon#Don't worry it is not a somewhat darkfic like the other one#yet#already at 12K words?#well on my way to beating 145K words for the other one I guess#but I would need to add some plots
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i think it could be really fun to write a crowmonster!philza and warrior!etoiles au for the soul purpose of writing their little "sparring" matches where instead of beating each other with sticks it's just etoiles wrestling his big ol dragon-esque monster friend. etoiles clinging onto phil's back/tail feathers as phil tries to buck him off. phil holding etoiles in his beak and shaking him around like a chew toy. etoiles hooking an arm/rope around phil's throat and phil doing this great big dramatic roaring cry as he stumbles and flops onto his back and "dies", talons in the air, twitching, also crushing etoiles in the process. everyone else looking on with bewildered concern as phil seems to be gnawing etoiles' arm off and etoiles is just lying there declaring deadpan, "ohhh no he is too strong, the monster has defeated me, he is killing me, it is so slow and painful, i am dying, ggs bro, ggs." (<-he is perfectly fine, phil is only play-mauling)
other fun points:
phil tossing etoiles around in the air like he weighs literally nothing
etoiles pinning one of phil's wing-arms behind his back like its no big deal
etoiles ripping out some of phil's feathers during one of their play fights and phil freezing mid-thrash just to shoot him the flattest, most offended look to ever come from a non-human creature
phil accidentally going too far and ripping up etoiles' shoulder and phil just becoming the biggest, most whimpery apologetic mass of feathers and spikes as etoiles pats his beak and tells him it's no problem, it doesn't even hurt that bad (and phil just wails louder)
both of them nudging/bugging/poking each other when they're bored to goad the other into a play fight, with varying degrees of success
#codebreakers#qsmp philza#qsmp etoiles#i would write a fic i just gotta figure out some more plot#and like a setting#and you know literally everything else you need to write a story#i might add more later for now i have to force myself away to go study#dont mind me im just rambling#i also take suggestions dont be shy pspspspps come brainrot with me#crowmonster phil au
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Even just reordering the songs in bway hadestown so that Eurydice is on stage during Why We Build The Wall and Our Lady of the Underground would improve things so much….you have the “step into my office” bit, you have Persephone react to that, then you have the song where Eurydice meets the other workers and sees what’s actually going on, then Why We Build the Wall is her having apparently given up and lost her identity like the others…..THEN at the end of Why We Build the Wall, Hades leaves the stage and the other workers turn to Eurydice and take her by the hands and smile, and they bring her to Persephone’s bar and they’re all in the chorus for Our Lady and Eurydice realizes that the people here ARE still people and they do have somewhere to talk where Hades isn’t listening (and all the lyrics to Our Lady actually make sense again lmao, ESPECIALLY “there’s a crack in the wall”)
Also I just really want to see Persephone and Eurydice interact on stage in this context….like Eurydice is a little wary bc she’s pretty sure Persephone is jealous of her, but Persephone knows what’s up and sees the new girl that Hades tricked and discarded and picks her out of the crowd during the musical interlude, and twirls her around while the rest of the cast cheers, and gives her a drink and sends her back to her seat…Eurydice stares at her like she’s entranced…idk. Just a little something that sets up how close they are in “I Raise My Cup to Him” as well as Persephone’s sympathy for Orpheus and Eurydice specifically
#obviously the simplest changes would be like. giving everyone their concept album verses in 'way down' and 'doubt comes in'#but 'our lady' is still the thing that makes me angriest lmao#i know there needs to more more connective plot in the show and i actually LIKE some of it during this part#but in the album you can HEAR anais singing on 'why we build the wall' and 'our lady of the underground'#bc her voice is so distinctive! so you know eurydice is there!#and that's how you know she's seeing the two different worlds that exist inside hadestown. just hearing anais in the chorus#the stage show adds so much stuff and yet restricts the world of the story in a major way. ugh#(i saw the touring production and it was very beautiful! not quite as frustrating as bway because i was prepared for the changes)#(but still deeply frustrating. also the orpheus singer was WAY better than reeve but the eurydice singer was very inferior to eva)#(so i have still never seen a production where i really liked both leads. rip)#hadestown
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getting an iced pumpkin chai in the morning and then my personal goal is to spend the whole day writing and i hope i can come back to this post tomorrow and rb w how much progress i’ve made!!!
#i have a love/hate relationship w this fic and i’m gonna rant to myself bc hehe it’s almost midnight so why not :>#okay SO. i for some reason just didn’t create any proper outline for this story and i think that’s why it’s taken me so long to write it#because i don’t necessarily have a why/a REASON for this story or plot… like even thinking abt doing the dialogue and trying to find flow +#cohesion is making me so 😐 and also honestly… i’m terrible at doing drafts in the first place#i don’t write linearly i jump all over the place while writing and SOMETIMES i can connect things but this time i could NOT#and i would focus on one tiny part for SO long and make no progress anywhere else like GIRL……… ENOUGH#but hmmmm yeah i also for some reason feel like esp w my writing it’s super robotic and doesn’t have emotion#like i’m not writing w suguru’s voice and instead i’m writing as the author and it’s kinda irking me#if that makes sense… hmmmm……….. also i might be doing dual pov so hopefully it doesn’t look too wonky#but yeah 😭 i need to work on scene setting & describing things effectively + doing show not tell#like i just made a mini outline rn and wow . it’s Not it at all 😭😭😭 there’s no WHY to the story and it’s making it hard to write#okay not necessarily a ‘why’ but like . What’s The Point of the story#sigh. i need to figure that out#also there’s so much stuff i want to add but i feel like it’ll be clunky + it’ll move fast or be weird#but my goal for tomorrow is truly and honestly write the meat and bones of it and then i can edit ruthlessly later on#i was thinking of getting it out this week but i forgot election week/don’t have anything really written either 😭#but hopefully next week if i try hard enough! the goal is before december bc i want this to be a november fic#but yeah that’s my mini vent @ me i’m glad to just talk abt in the tags#feels like for this story specifically it’s been a lot of looking at my docs instead of writing which is WHACK 🤨#also i don’t like my writing style + i want to write better in GENERAL#that’ll come w practice & doing it often though 😭#ALSO . SIDENOTE but why does tumblr not let me link things anymore like NDNDNDND SO STUPID#OOOOH AND . i need to start/finish selfship moodboards & also create wip lists for geto/gojo/toji but for REAL#as in wipe i’ll actually plan to write next not just ones i like the sound of 😭#ANYWAYS I’M SO SLEEBY……… honk shoo mimimi cult leader geto please pat my head to sleep and be kind to me#GIRL THIS IS LONG AS HELL OMFG . silence @ me 🤫 what a YAPPER#personal
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Today on: which of my family members said that, we have:
"I dont care about people, I just shoot them to get gold"
#answer is my mom#family game night was a bad idea#honestly surprised none of my siblings have been murdered yet#at least i dont think so#my parents are old enough that they couldve had a secret older kid#imagine that as the plot for a book#mc finds out they had a secret older sibling who was murdered because they beat their parents in a board game#is this why my friends tell me i need therapy#but it would be an interesting book#add in a gazillion extra siblings and a secret twin and youre good to go#maybe adding in like a vampire love interest for some extra spice#not that kind of spice#have the mc eating garlic bread constantly#how did we get here#im blaming my mom
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Hi I know I’m a random stranger but I NEED to know what movie the Truman show reminded you of please 🙏
I'm. Not gonna say 😭 I'm really sorry, but I really don't wanna open that can of worms
What I will say is that it has almost nothing in common with The Truman Show. So if you seek a movie with similar vibes, this is not it AT ALL. The cinematography, the plot, the motifs, the actors, the location, the genre are all completely different. The thin thread that I think connects them is the framing of the film viewer as an oppressive, voyeuristic presence. But it's very possible that I'm just reading way too much into things and I don't feel like starting any sort of discourse (because this might start discourse, to be honest with you 😶)
#I didn't know anyone would read those tags oh god#The thing is... What if I'm wrong? I think I would need to watch this movie again to be able to give my opinion on it with my whole chest#I rewatch The Truman Show very often. But I have not rewatched this other movie in 3 or 4 years#And idk... I think if I were to name the movie I'd have to argue my point. Add some snippets from interviews with the director#Bring up film theory on which my knowledge is very rusty...#But if you want some more hints: there is a character that fulfills the role of Sylvia in a way#Although#As I said#The plots could not be more different#So any similarities I see between these two movies is most likely a stretch
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Okay I super over-estimated how fast I'd line-art this so wip time 🫡
#light's spot#yeah I'm back on my Lucio kick 😔#I never thought I'd actually draw this loser but I'm *really* proud of how he looks here and I really need to finidh this now lmao#also at some point I just kinda solidified that Light would end up w/#Lucio in their variation of the world. idk why. if they're not with the MC then they're the one eho keeps Lucio out of the plot#and idk I'm insane.#i just like mimicking the game's style and Lucio is going to be the first member of the cast I draw#just like he was my first route#(his hand on the bottom left is holding a sword btw. I just didn't add it to the clean-up sketch by mistake)
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300 to 10k words is so devastating i am literally so close
#✧— series: hydrangeas.#PLEASEEE#hmm. shinjuro maybe.#what would bro even say to reader though LMAO#he's going to be mean asf to them later (dw kyojuro won't tolerate that shit. his dad can be mean to him but not one of his best friends)#kagaya and amane already have their interactions#maybeeee obanai again? BUT WHAT WOULD HE HAVE TO SAY THAT PROGRESSES THE PLOT. AUGH#(<- every sentence scene etc in every one of my fics adds to the plot in some way. it's my preferred style of writing! +#+ not everyone has to do it of course but i like doing it this way. i need all my scenes to have meaning or i will implode /j)
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thinking of "rewriting" / making my own headcanon versions of the main knk boys bc trying to write anything for them as-is is torture,,, eve. pookie. ily but u r giving me so little to work with here TTOTT
#kiwi is eveposting...#fr out of the tobireinagiyuki group. 3 of the 4 r basically just “soft nice boy w anxiety and / or trauma”#and only 2 of the 4 actually have at least one canon hobby. and neither is the literal PROTAG of knk...#eve pleaseeeee this is NOT how u write characters.... ik ur doing ur best but like...#even a single SHRED of extra info ab any of them outside of the plot would be SOOO HELPFUL#this is why i soo need a slice of life knk spinoff. rn the characters we have just have nothing going for them#im not even sure i can constitute nagi as a character atp. hes just a guy that things happen to sometimes if eve remembers to add him#and honestly. same for rei even.... which is not how u write a likable protag tbh#i just want SOMETHING to go off of. ANYTHING. PLEASEEE#sorry for the rant yall and im srry for basically rehashing the same complaints ive made in the past#im just. rlly almost frustrated. bc knk and its characters have so much potential and its clearly not rlly being utilized the best way#or maybe im just dense as a rock and my media literacy is shit and theres some super deep character stuff behind them i didnt notice#im not even sure atp. who knows....
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watched dead boy detectives recently and the show has been simmering in my brain in the most frustrating way. like its not bad its not a bad show. but for all the elements where i was like YES!! YES!!! i also thought i could have done this better. AUUGHH!!!!!!! AUGHH
#spoilers for dead boy detectives in the next tags#this is a post for literally no one else but me. i want to rant#TIME LOOP MURDER HOUSE. THATS HORROR ENOUGH WHY TF DID U NEED TO ADD ANOTHER MONSTER THERE THE TIME LOOP IS ENOUGH#FUCKING. RUAGHHHHH GIANT ANGLERFISH LURING PEOPLE TO DEATH. SO GOOD WHY DIDNT YOU PUSH IT TO THE MAXIMUM WHY DID U CUT THE TENSION SO SOON#HOW DOES THAT MEGAFAUNA SURVIVE IF UR PUTTING IT TO SLEEP AND IT HASNT EATEN ENOUGH.#WHY IS CHARLES ANGRILY TELLING EDWIN ABT HIS TRAUMA. KEEP IT BOTTLED UP LONGER UR A CHARACTER NOT EXPOSITION DIALOGUE#wheres that post like he would not fucking say that but its about a character being too emotionally aware. he would not fucking know that#about himself. stop the therapy talk#why is edwins hell a giant doll baby spider thing. i mean that was fine and scary and whatever but COME ON ITS LITERALLY HELL#cant you personalize it a bit more......dig into his deep rooted fear of abandonment or rejection or something TWIST THE FKN KNIFE.#like i understand maybe its plot related like hes not meant to be in hell so he doesnt have a personalized torture chamber but still. STILL#YOU COULD SQUEEZE SO MUCH MORE CHARACTER OUT OF THIS SCENARIO COME ONNN#ok thats it for now. like its not a bad show its fun and all and theres a lot of potential#the writings not great in some places but its fine its just hitting. this very particular annoying spot in my head#where its like if i just changed a couple things this could be fucking fantastic. for me personally of course#i could write such good fanfiction for this show . i probably wont but i need you to know i could
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WIP WSATURDAY HOW IS IT SATURDAY ALREADY
oh dear oh dear @lovelylonerliterature i'm SO sorry i'm so late!! i've been staring at this bloody thing for so long i'm starting to think it's ceased to be a wip and it's literally just what this inside of my entire brain looks like 😵💫😵💫 it's probably illegal to tag for wip wednesday on a saturday, so consider this an open tag for whatever weekday wip you prefer!
surprise surprise, it's vega. it's always vega at this point you know the drill
(this fic will eventually be 18+, but this particular snippet is not! there's some implied violence and a teeny bit of blood here, but it's not that bad)
#redacted asmr#redacted audio#i did consider putting this under a cut but actually i think its not that bad#although if u would like me to i can#it's warden and vega on their murder date and im enjoying it immensely 🥰🥰#made some good progress today!!#there's about 8.6k thats actually DONE#and then another 3.3k or so that's written but not cohesive or finished#plus new stuff will be needed to sew it all up and add the final few plot points i need to hit#'plot points' is in heavy quotation marks there lol#i don't think you can call what they're going to do 'plot' but ykwim 😈😈#i love these two so much 💕💕#ginger writes
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rpgs are kinda like comfort food to me where theyre very cozy to come back to and just indulge in, especially pokemon where no one team is gonna be exactly the same, but dear god i need to take a break from them every once in a while or it risks feeling samey anyways
#yeah im immediately taking a break from X cause after cassette beasts idk if i can go back to regular pokemon quite as quickly#i still need to finish gti. insert sad clown noises#i might try to hype myself up to finish the file by doing more brainstorming for my own interpretation (?) of it#honestly if it felt worth it id love to do comic or prose adaptations of the story like several people do#like obt and milos from home where the story eventually gets drastically different from the original#but im also not sure how much i would change. like. idk i like a lot of pmd2's story as-is#if i did have the energy or the time to do it tho id probably pick gti or psmd#those have big changes that i think change the contexts of some scenes quite a bit so getting into those could be cool#rt also has changes in my brain but i dont think itd be as fun to actually write out#notably my ''psmd!hero is also a reincarnation'' and ''the gti team is the HAPPI organization'' bits#cause i havent totally thought those out yet with the rest of the plot or anything and itd be fun to divulge in those#the con with doing gti tho is like... that game is already full of characters skldfdslfs#so how many ocs could i add without feeling overwhelmed...#echoed voice
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fighting the powerful urge to just like. go ahead and post the next chapter. because i am so happy about a scene i've added and like. i know that this fic has a tiny readership but i really love this scene.
#objects in space rewrite#i had actually always intended it to have happened#more or less#but i never considered actually like. writing this scene happening. for some reason i thought i couldn't fit it in to the fic.#although tbh 19-year-old me probably just didn't really know how to write it#same with another scene in the following chapter and another in the next#i just didn't have the experience with storycraft to actually write the scene i wanted#ugh the only downside to this rewrite is that it's going to require a lot of tweaking in the next two books#nothing approaching the depth of this one but there's at least one scene i'll need to change whole-cloth#and some elements of backstory#and i'll have to tweak things so that actions and character development carries through#those will function better as simple edits; the changes aren't *remotely* significant enough to require a new story#i mean this rewrite has been. like i'm thinking i may need a whole extra chapter in addition to everything that's already been added#this one was already the longest of the series and now it is going to be significantly so. like. 30k+ moreso. almost double.#everything in me recoils at such uneven lengths#but this one already had to set up the world and it already had the most plot happening#it would just be padding to add more to the others and that's totally unnecessary#the only changes needed are for continuity's sake and one scene that will realistically need to go in the denoument of this one#and have a slightly altered one during that book#anyway.#i really like the next few chapters. like a lot. i love what i've changed and added.
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my very honest opinion is that ian holm did not need to be in that new alien movie
#uhhhh me#i don't understand why they put out the whole practical effects ad campaign if they were going to use cgi to uncannily recreate someone#or maybe the ad campaign was to offset the potential audience reaction to it idk#his character didn't add anything to the plot. he did not need to be there.#if anything i think it would be much more suspenseful if the characters had to figure everything out themselves#or they could just say rook got uploaded into the ship and had just a voice actor speaking over the computers#we did not need to see his shockingly distracting cgi face#anyway basic review of the actual movie#it was fine#in terms of acting and effects and production it was good#in terms of an entry in the alien franchise i think it's just below prometheus and high above every other sequel after aliens#but it does feel like it's repeating some plot elements that was already done before#maybe relying a bit too much on grossout birth horror but that's probably just not the type of horror i'm into#i know it's wild to complain about birthing horror in the alien franchise lmao the entire franchise IS birthing horror#i just feel like this one is a little too unsubtle about it
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Is there anybody wanna be my beta reader for Law x oc? Because i need more eyes to know if there's a plot hole or not
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#beta reader#i wanna revise my fanfic on ao3 and a beta reader would help#maybe give me some point which part of the story have same word and if i should search synonyms#about plot hole and the flow#and typo#ah and also if there's part i need to add more details#trafalgar law x oc
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hmmmmmm rotating idea for a new skyrem character......
#i've been itching to create a new oc lately. not vibing with most of the current ones. idk why but it'll pass im sure#anyway. last night in bed while trying to sleep off a migraine i started thinking abt isabeau#and wondering if she should be the dragonborn after all#like shes already a criminal mastermind and (in my homebrew timeline) by 4e 201 which is when the main plot takes place#she has restored the thieves guild's power and influence and expanded her criminal network across the whole province#add to that the dragonborn thing and being basically a demigod destined to save the world n all. its a bit much innit#dont get me wrong i like my silly little viddy game ocs ridiculously overpowered every now n then. its good for the soul#but still. i remembered this nord character i had ages ago for like two weeks maybe. named vigdis bear-arm#very textbook stereotypical dumb muscle heavy armor wearing greatsword wielding nord#i wanna remake her as the dragonborn... with some tweaks... she will still be a heavy armor wearing nord but also a spellsword mayhap#oc: isabeau#oc: heidrun#the original vigdis did not use magic at all but i already have isabeau who does not use magic at all#and its like a Big Part of her character so im not abt to change it#also it creates a funny contrast between beau and vigdis.#beau whose people are known for their natural magical talent doesnt understand jack shit abt magic#and vigdis whose people often mistrust magic is fine with it and a talented spellcaster 😌#i also Need to reinstall that game i miss it so much !!!#OH also i wanna try out the gore follower mod. i never had any followers with isabeau bc i just cant see her hanging with any of em#but. based on what i know of gore i think he would work well with vigdis.. hm... hmmmm
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