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Two Birds, One Bullet
Part 2 Part 3 Part 4 Part 5 Part 6
Warnings: restraints, captivity, threat of torture, threat of death, gun, falling from a great height, defiant whumpee, forced to choose, potential mcd (emphasis on POTENTIAL)
Whumper circled Whumpee and Caretaker, waving their gun in the air as they spoke. “Well, well, well, looks like I captured two little birds in my net instead of just the one I was wanting.”
Whumpee struggled against the rope around their wrists, barely noticing the painful chafing as they tried to break free. They pushed against Whumper’s goons as they held Whumpee down. “LET CARETAKER GO!”
“Whumpee, it’s ok, it’s ok,” Caretaker whispered.
Whumpee knew Caretaker was lying. Knew by the fine tremor that wracked their frame. Knew by the look in their eyes. Knew by the way their held their mouth. They knew that Caretaker was terrified and it was all their fault.
“Why would I do that?” Whumper rounded on Whumpee. “I only wanted you and now I have something precious to you. Maybe then you’ll give me what I want. Just give me a few moments with Caretaker.”
“I will never give you what you want. You hurt one hair on Caretaker’s head, you can kiss this source of information goodbye.”
“Everyone always talks, Whumpee. It’s only a matter of time.”
“I will never, ever, ever tell you.” Whumpee spat the last word out with such venom that Caretaker flinched back and deeper into Whumper’s goons’ arms.
“We’ll just see about that,” Whumper muttered. They took a deep breath. “Don’t you think this is such a pretty view?” They gestured around them, giving a quick twirl. “Perks of owning a castle.”
“Bit pretentious if you ask me.”
“Whumpee!” Caretaker hissed as one of the goons dug nails into their arms.
“If you hurt them, I won’t tell you a thing, Whumper! I mean it! Let them go!”
“You are so stubborn,” Whumper rolled their eyes. “Very well, I’ll make you a deal, Whumpee. You get to pick. What happens to my two birds. I only have one bullet in my gun, the bullet that was meant for you.” Whumper grabbed Whumpee by their shirt collar and dragged them to the edge. “You choose, who gets the bullet and who gets to answer my questions.”
“CARETAKER DOESN’T KNOW ANYTHING! LET THEM GO!” Whumpee struggled against Whumper.
Whumper tightened their grip. “Ah, but I can’t be sure. I can’t be sure they don’t know. And letting them go isn’t one of your choices, Whumpee. So do you want me to shoot Caretaker in the head?”
“NO!” Whumpee roared, “LET THEM GO NOW! I WON’T TELL YOU A THING IF YOU HURT THEM! LET THEM GO!” Whumpee yelled, surging forward and headbutting Whumper in the process.
Whumper put a hand to their forehead. “I wouldn’t say such things if I were you.”
“LET. THEM. GO.” Whumpee’s words were so full of rage that Caretaker flinched back. They had never heard Whumpee act like this before.
“Bullet for you or for Caretaker.” Whumper got in close once more, running the gun along Whumpee’s jaw. “It could be quick for them. Just a one, two, and poof, Caretaker’s gone. It won’t be quick if you pick you. Can’t blame you though. It would be the cowardly thing to pick you and let them suffer in your place.”
Whumpee growled and surged forward once more, headbutting Whumper even harder. With a roar of rage, Whumper shoved Whumpee backwards. “Fine. No bullet for you.”
Caretaker looked on in horror as Whumper shoved Whumpee once more towards the edge and Whumpee toppled over backwards. “NOOOOO!”
As Whumpee sailed through the air, they could hear Whumper’s laugh. Could hear Caretaker’s screams. And they hoped that Caretaker would be alright. That they wouldn’t pay for Whumpee’s defiance. And that the team would make it in time to save Caretaker. Whumpee couldn’t do it. And the team wouldn’t be in time for them. Because Whumpee was out of time.
Whumpee closed their eyes a breath before they hit the ground and knew nothing more.
#serickswrites#whump#whumpblr#whump writing#whump community#tw restraints#tw captivity#tw threat of torture#tw threat of death#tw gun#tw falling from a great height#tw forced to choose#defiant whumpee#themerrywhumpofmay#merry whump of may 2023#day 4#"two birds one bullet#prompt: stubborn#prompt: tower#queue#tw potential mcd#i guess i have to out my plan for the next installment#whumpee isn't dead gang#they live#which while good is also not good#because whumper is not nice#not at all
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Tastes of Whumptober: Day 26
Continued directly from Day 16! A lighter day.
Content warnings for: implied alcohol dependency and slight suicidal ideation
Breakfast Table
“Mornin’, Payge.” They waved with a glass of orange juice.
Nicolai had left him a bit of privacy this morning, considering the events of the previous night. He was grateful for it, and for the underarm crutch he’d been offered.
You won’t want to put weight on that for a while, now. I broke my ankle a few years ago but kept the crutches.”
“Why?”
“The NHS paid for them. Figured I earned it.”
“Can’t argue with that.”
“That’s an awful plain looking tequila sunrise. Just a mimosa this morning?” He grinned, slipping into the chair with a bit of effort and leaning the walking aid against the table.
“Just orange juice with your pills. I’m afraid my liquor cabinet isn’t as… robust as yours.” A hint of judgment crept into Nicolai’s tone, but he paid it no mind.
“Pills? You know that’s not my style,” Payge laughed, voice scratching around exhaustion and exertion.
“Vitamin D, magnesium, and iron. They’ll help you heal up.”
The three pills sat next to his tall glass and he took a small sip to down each one.
“Thanks. You didn’t have to.” It was strange. To be pampered like this. His hands were trembling, probably for a number of reasons.
“Make sure you finish the whole glass.” An appliance beeped somewhere behind them. “Ah! What do you take in your porridge?”
Nicolai jumped up and opened the microwave, carefully removing two steaming bowls and heaping one with apple slices and honey.
“I’m not especially picky, just… whatever you have?”
“Try again. What do you like?” they asked but Payge hesitated, unwilling to make their work harder.
“Pecans and maple syrup, but only if you’ve got it on hand, okay?”
They opened the fridge and shook the jar of halved pecans at him like they were enticing a dog with treats, but his growling stomach told him he wasn’t much better off. He watched them be sprinkled on, swirled with syrup, and topped with a pinch of brown sugar.
“You really shouldn’t have, Nic. You didn’t do much good scraping me off death’s door, of all people.”
“I wouldn’t call it the door. You were on its porch, maybe. In the garden, more like,” they shrugged, setting a bowl at each placement. Nicolai perched back on their chair.
“I can’t imagine she’d have much use for that,” he laughed, earning a smile in return. “Does she grow bones from scratch?”
“Maybe she grows flowers to decorate her favorite graves.” They hadn’t taken a bite yet, but Payge’s gaze weighed heavy on breakfast. A flourish of the spoon told him it was alright to go ahead.
He held back as well as he could from scarfing down each and every morsel, instead taking heaping spoonfuls and throwing back the juice. A mild improvement.
“I’ll be out of your hair by the evening, by the way. Just might need a moment to arrange a ride,” he murmured into perfect oats.
“Er, no. Absolutely not.”
“What?”
“You’re grievously injured, your bike’s still in the shop, and you shouldn’t be walking to work.” Nicolai counted out each reason on a finger. “And you clearly won’t take care of yourself.”
“I’ll stay over somewhere else. I can’t go and burden you like this out of nowhere, Nic! We weren’t even close enough to meet one on one before all this.”
“And yet I was the only one to show up yesterday.” They tilted their head. “Would anyone closer have stopped for you?”
He swallowed hard. Would they?
“Maybe.”
“Stay. I’ll put you back together, Payge.”
#whumptober2024#no.26#breakfast table#original characters#writing#limping#foreshadowing#whump#emotional whump#angst#suicidal ideation#alcohol mention#implied addiction#implied alcoholism#gilded cage#whumptober#whump writing#my writing#whump fic#tastes of whumptober#Nicolai#Payge#absolutely obsessed with the gap between this and the carved mark fic <3333 payge doesn't even know <33333#i just love a dramatic irony... audience Knows this is Whumper but guy is so happy to have a nice person looking after the him :D#their oatmeal orders sound so tastey i want them now. resisted giving nicolai apples and cinnamon because that's my shit#me when my characters have to like things that I may not like :00000 what do you mean I can't give them all My personal Preferences#anyway just wanted to write something cute with a little foreshadowing for funzies#smh i hope payge doesn't actually believe his bike is getting fixed hahahahaaaaa#by the way happy 100 pages of 12pt comic sans to my whumptober document!
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I had an idea for a story a few hours ago:
(Bbu setting.) Carewhumper is a Pet Owner, who had a stable income and thus could afford one, Whumpee. Onde day, they lose most of their money and are thrown in misery. Almost nowhere to go, no food, no money, just their loyal Pet who is the only thing that they own now, and they can't bring themselves to sell.
The story would be relatively short, with the Owner and Whumpee trying to find food for Owner and Whumpee servicing them loyaly, struggling to survive. In the end, however, Owner doesn't manage to survive and the only one left in Whumpee.
End :D
#the vibes i have for this are a little different than what i usually go for#itd be really really shorter#and their relationship and the two main characters would be the only things with room for exposition and development me thinks#the tone is very different too#but i really really liked this idea#i has the idea because of two things:#i was imagining how much money one would have to have in order to afford a pet in the bbu#and that theyd probably sell them as soon as their budget was to short and they needed more money#but then i remembered a post i saw a while ago#op was talking about “oh if theyre so POOR then why don't they just sell their stuff?”#and they were talking about how poor people deserve nice things. even if its an expensive nice thing#and then i was like: “what IF whumper didnt sell whumpee but kept them with their few belongings#because despiste not having the same money anymore they want nice things“#and then i also remembered a very very weird anime i saw once with a very semisweet ending i suppose?#one if the main characters died and the other (they were supposed to be “bonded forever” although their relationship was pretty doubious)#survived and went back to her previous life. and then i decided to go with this tone#i dont know if ill write it#but i really really like it#so have it!#whump prompts#whump prompt#story ideas#whump ideas#whump scenario#bbu whump#pet whump#pet whumpee#whumper#carewhumper#box boy
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Or, to add onto this, Whumpees having to call Whumpers "mum", "dad", etc. will eventually get Whumpees to get really distanced from the concept of family, especially if they either have a bad family history or otherwise don't remember what their blood family was like, for example— and maybe even pretend to be all cuddly with them in public due to blackmail or something, so that's also an interesting concept to explore
Whumpees being forced to call Whumpers 'sir' or 'master' is an all time classic, but what about Whumpers forcing Whumpees to call them by pet names, such as 'love' or 'darling'?
#forced family#but like in the sense that only in public#so whumpee knows whumper doesn't actually care for them like their own or something#same could be done with a mentor dynamic probably#like they have to pretend whumper's a really nice and caring person because blackmail#or otherwise under threat#so yes
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Stoic whumpee things I want to do more of:
Content: mention of rape, torture, noncon touch
Eye contact with whumper just following them across the room
Whumper going to touch them and they just lean out of the way as far as they can
Whumper touches them anyway. "Ew." Whumpee growls.
A solid sense of boundaries that slowly wears away, until finally, they just close their eyes, waiting for it to be over
Or, glaring at the wall when whumper touches them
Not having the same "scream" response to pain. Instead maybe they have something more animalistic, like whines or broken moans, or even gagging sounds
Bonus--whumper makes fun of them for this, cause they were hoping for some better screams out of them
A lack of fear turning very quickly into depression. (whumpee accepts their situation? They're going to quickly see how hopeless it is, too.)
Calm bargaining. "I'll kiss your feet." "No." "...I'll suck your dick." "Haha, nice try." *Exasperated sigh* "really? You said I was really good."
Never giving the information they're being tortured for, but compromising literally anything else because they are desperate, they're just also stubborn as hell
Whumper getting curious because of their silence and trying to get them to talk about themselves or their feelings. Locking them in a room and saying they won't leave until they talk.
"we'll play a game. You tell me one thing about yourself, and I'll give you one pretzel for each thing." *Starving whumpee rubs their face and sighs* "Fine. ...My middle name starts with N."
Discordant reactions--Whumpee just miserably laughing at how crazy evil whumper is. Breaking by going defiant. or by just being annoying (picking at whumper's sleeve, singing etc)
Maybe they just feel more depressed than anxious/desperate. Whumper trying to draw out their other feelings gets a chuckle. "That's very nice. I don't care."
Stoic works really well with certain traits--honest, loyal, morose, uncertain, thoughtful, autistic
#whump writing#whumpblr#whump#whump ideas#whump prompt#whump scenario#stoic whumpee#autistic whumpee#whump community#whump tropes
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The Small Moments
its the small moments in whump for me, those glimpses right before and after your character loses it all in no chronological order
-- the hitched breath after a blow to the face
-- the sound of footsteps in the hallway, and the flinching when the door opens
-- the soft sound, more animal than human, when whumpee pulls a blood-drenched hand away from their side
-- caretaker leaning over whumpee, whispering assurances that they cant keep
-- when the curses catch in whumpee's throat and all they can manage is a strangled, don't...please
-- when whumpee stumbles and clings to the doorway. better when they look up and meet caretaker's eyes. The slow, dreaded realization. caretaker lunges forward, but not in time to catch whumpee
-- when whumpee's head hits the tiles with a thud
-- the panic they swallow down when they see Whumper for the first time
-- the added details of used knives, splattered with dried blood, faded from crimson to rusty brown
-- the dead, hollowed-out light in whumpee's eyes after they're rescued
-- coughing that turns into whumpee doubling over, and desperately, so desperately trying to hide the fact they coughed up blood
-- a still hand, palm up on the floor, and no semblance of consciousness. The pool of blood around them is growing
-- caretaker pausing-- oh. oh god-- when they rush through the door to rescue whumpee, their eyes widening and stomach dropping, before cutting whumpee down from their restraints
-- Whumper tracing whumpee's jaw with the tip of their finger. "Now, isn't this nice."
-- When Whumper kicks Whumpee when they're already down and all Whumpee can manage is a small curse.
-- When Whumper yanks Whumpee's head up by their hair and Whumpee has to squint because of the sudden, sharp light
-- whumpee clutching a sink for a long moment before turning on the faucet and splashing water in their face to hide the fact they've been crying
anyway.
this.
#idk it just hits different#whump#whump writing#im a sucker for alll these#its not even funny#whump tropes#whump scenarios#whumpblr#whump prompt#whump community#whump scenario#whump ideas#whump prompts
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Whumper overestimates how much torture Whumpee can take. The once-defiant Whumpee is broken and catatonic, not speaking or reacting to anything anymore. And Whumper isn't happy about it. Though they loathe to admit it, they liked Whumpee's defiance. It was entertaining. Whumpee was entertaining. With them not speaking anymore, Whumper realizes that they miss the sound of Whumpee's voice. The snarky little comments, the sarcastic jokes, the curses screamed in rage.
Now Whumper is desperate to get the old Whumpee back. They're being extra "nice," giving Whumpee medical treatment and food, anything to make them go back to how they were before. Anything to fix their favorite toy.
Because like it or not, Whumper doesn't have anyone else.
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🎃➷ 13 Scary Prompts for Friday the 13th ☾ 𓆩☻𓆪ੈ✩
1. whumpee is trapped in a dark forest with caretaker or whumper (your choice). doesn’t matter if they’re friends or enemies, they both have to work together to find a way out before midnight, because that’s when it awakes and begins to hunt.
2. two characters who are enemies are trapped in an abandoned asylum. they soon learn they aren’t alone in the building; or, patients who are locked up here — when the staff suddenly fled one day — are in fact murderous cannibals.
3. characters throw a Friday the 13th party, everything goes well until someone — an old friend — shows up, an old friend who’s been dead for years.
4. there’s a myth that goes “something bad will happen within 7 days if you kiss someone under the moon on Friday the 13th”. character A and B think it’s bullshit and do exactly that. they’re about to find out the hard way that the myth — the curse — is real.
5. whumpee gets killed on Friday the 13th and wakes up amongst the dead, all of them have also been murdered on Friday the 13th.
6. whumpee is kidnapped. in order to save their life, caretaker has to kill 13 people before midnight of Friday the 13th.
7. on the night of Friday the 13th, caretaker finds a black stray cat at their front porch and decides to adopt the cat. it must be a coincidence that people in the neighborhood start disappearing after this mysterious cat shows up.
8. every Friday the 13th, character A is visited by a ghost who claims to be their lover from the past life. the ghost can only communicate with them when it’s Friday the 13th.
9. character A is immortal… unless they died on Friday the 13th. their enemies know this. so all character A has to do is stay alive until midnight, easier said than done. it doesn’t help that they happen to have a lot of enemies.
10. character A is cursed, so every Friday the 13th, they will be possessed by a demonic entity whose goals are death and destruction of innocent people. to try to prevent this, character A has to chain themself up and lock themself inside their house. but the devil is smart.
11. the purge. I don’t need to say more, but every Friday the 13th, murder and all type of crimes are legal in this town.
12. a group of tourists visit a small village located deep in the woods. it’s a lovely, peaceful village with nice villagers. only that they all turn into bloodthirsty murderers every Friday the 13th at nighttime. too bad our tourists don’t know about this, they’ll find out soon enough though.
13. Character A summons a demon on a dare. they don’t expect it to work, but it does. only character A can see the demon, turns out it just lonely and wants a friend.
#friday the 13th#friday the thirteenth#whump#writing#writeblr#writing community#writing inspo#ao3#writing inspiration#whumpblr#angst#writing tropes#writing trope#whump tropes#whump trope#tropes#trope#writer#archive of our own#writing ideas#writing prompt#writing prompts#angst tropes#angst trope#whump prompt#whump prompts#whump community#writers
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Birthday whump
it’s my birthday today so here’s some birthday-related whump prompts :)
whumpees who have grown up never celebrating a birthday. when they’re finally introduced to the idea by caretaker, they can’t believe it’s a real thing.
whumpees finally being able to celebrate their birthday again after escaping whumper, but having nobody to celebrate with.
whumper being especially cruel to whumpee on their birthday. how would this affect whumpee when caretaker tries to celebrate with them after escaping whumper?
alternatively: whumper being kinder and gentler to whumpee on their birthday. can whumpee truly enjoy it knowing what will come after the day is over? or is it nice just to play pretend for a little while?
whumpees who weren’t allowed to celebrate their birthday, being conditioned to believe that they don’t deserve things like that.
whumpees spoiled on their birthdays by carewhumper, who has an interesting idea of what ‘birthday treats’ are. (bonus points if whumpee loves these treats because it’s all they’ve ever known)
whumpee being completely ignored by whumper on their birthday. the silence and loneliness kills them - they spend the entire day on edge, waiting for something bad to happen. does it?
whumpees who are given a new birthday by whumper. is it the day they were kidnapped/bought? the day the two first met? the day whumper’s obsession began?
those whumpees (or whumpees without birthdays) being given a new birthday by caretaker: the day they were rescued and met their new family.
whumpees who are only allowed to spend holidays and birthdays with whumper. they’re forced to make excuses to friend and family as to why they can’t see them each year.
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Whumpee thinks Caretaker is their new master. Good trope, right? But check this out;
Caretaker doesn't notice.
Because the morning after the day they were rescued, all Whumpee did was get Caretaker a cup of coffee. It was only after then that Whumpee realized new master new rules, and Caretaker might not like coffee at all. So after an hour or so of a panic attack, Whumpee decides to stay put and not do anything.
But Caretaker didn't say anything about that coffee, so Whumpee should probably keep doing that?
And so, every morning, Caretaker gets a cup of coffee, says thank you, that's a nice gesture, and gets done with the day, while Whumpee tries to stay as quiet and unnoticed as possible. Not angering Caretaker is their top priority. Caretaker notices Whumpee is really, really quiet, but hey, they might just like it quiet. They do seem a little scared, but they've been putting off well, so Caretaker is positive that they'll get better with time.
Then Caretaker hears Whumper liked a cup of coffee every morning.
That's.. a strange coincidence.
I hope that's a coincidence.
And they finally try to talk to Whumpee about it, and Whumpee breaks into tears and Caretaker realizes what a mess this is,
#and I don't know how to end this post#this has been sitting in my saves for around three months#whump#whumpee#whump prompts#whump idea#whumper#whump prompt#whump ideas#caretaker#recovery whump#whump tropes#caretaker new master#bad caretaker#caretaker new whumper
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I like tied up Whumpees as much as the next person but you know what I love?
Mental Restraints
Whumpee being forced to hold still while they are beaten to a pulp while their s/o is held at gunpoint. Locking their arms behind their back, digging their own nails into their skin as to not make a move.
Whumpee who cannot scream or make any other sound because rough punishment awaits if they do.
Whumpee who is guaranteed to come back after tasks obediently because Whumper has something or someone they want.
Whumpee who cannot hurt someone else because their morals hinder them. Leading them into an even worse situation.
Whumpee having to do anything Whumper asks of them because blackmail material exists and got into the wrong hands. Or even better, has been faked but is good enough to ruin Whumpees whole life if they don't play nice.
The helplessness of being aware that they are physically capable to end all of this in a bloody mess. But the price is too high.
#whump tropes#whump#whump scenario#whump scenes#whump prompt#whumper#whumpee#mental restraints#Manipulation#total control#whumpblr#whump blog#manipulative whumper
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listen to my Voice, hero
TW: mind control, hypnotic induction, intimate whumper, restraints, corruption
Are your bonds comfortable, Hero? I wouldn't want to cause any damage to your precious muscles and nerves. You are the city's shining hope, after all. Or at least, you have been until now.
Good, now we can have a proper chat. You can just listen carefully to everything I have to say.
Oh, don't glare at me like that. How many times have we clashed now? And every time you manage to resist my lovely compelling Voice just enough to stop my plans, just enough so that I must escape by the skin of my teeth. You must have known it might come to this eventually, a time when my compulsions are too strong for you to fight, a time when my Voice finally brings you to your knees.
I've been training, dear hero, training especially for you. Training for you, because you're really the only one in this city worth controlling. You're better than all of them. We both know that. And I know how you feel about me, because I've seen the look in your eyes when my compulsions take hold of your pretty little mind.
No, no, be quiet. Be quiet.That's it, there you are. Oh, the delicious expression on your face when I use my Voice on you. I'll never get enough of it.
Most heroes look terrified, you know, to have their thoughts pulled out from under them, to find their body out of their control. Terrified, angry, defiant -- that's how the other heroes look. But you're different. In that moment when I weave my spell on you, when you feel your mind go hazy and your body stop obeying your commands, I see something else in your eyes. I see relief. Deep, unmistakable relief.
No, don't try to deny it. I've tangled with you too many times to be wrong about this. You're relieved when I compel you. You'd never admit it, not even to yourself, but you long for the way it feels. You long to have your choices taken away. You long to not have to make decisions. You long to not have to fight any more.
But every time, you fight. Every time, you break free of my Voice. And I can see the toll it takes on you. That's why I've been training so hard, Hero. So that you couldn't resist my Voice, wouldn't be able to break free. So that I could give you what you want more than anything.
I've seen you, Hero. I've seen you at your best and at your lowest, haven't I? I understand you better than anyone else in the city. You know it's true. And I can see how exhausted you are. How you've been worked to the bone. How you never get to rest, never get a vacation. I even tried cutting back on my evil schemes in the hopes that you'd take a break, but all you did was pursue other villains twice as hard.
There are deep bags under your eyes, Hero, marring your beautiful face. There's resignation in your tone that was never there before. I can't stand it, can't stand the way the city treats you. You're destroying yourself to save this ungrateful, useless population and all they do is criticize you. It makes me sick.
And I know what you do once you've defeated me and I escape back to my lair. I know you return to your cold, empty apartment, and curl up on the couch with some convenience food, trying to relax. I know how you toss and turn at night, wondering if you're doing the right thing. I know how lonely you are, Hero. I'm lonely too, you know.
I wish you could see how glassy and dazed your eyes are right now. It's beautiful. Listening to my Voice is so nice, isn't it? Yes, that's it, just relax.
Oh, your hair is so soft. I bet you haven't had a tender touch like this in a while. I saw you lean into it before you caught yourself. Let me run my hand through your hair, there's a good, relaxed hero. Is that a sleepy little smile I see? You like that, don't you?
In fact, you like all of this, don't you? You like having no choice but to relax and listen as my compelling Voice weaves a spell around you. You like the feeling as I slowly hypnotize your vulnerable mind, how your resistance slips away little by little. You've thought about this on those lonely nights, haven't you? What it would feel like if I won. What it would feel like to succumb to my hypnotic compulsions. What it would feel like if you stopped fighting and let me take charge of your mind completely.
Oh, don't struggle. Don't struggle. Relax.There it is again, that relief. My Voice feels good, doesn't it? It feels so good to have the fight taken out of you. Don't deny it, it's written all over your face.
You don't need to pretend you haven't thought about it. You somehow manage to always be the first hero on the scene whenever I try anything. Almost as if you're willing to drop anything to see me, isn't it?
But you were scared. I'm a villain, after all. I don't deny it. You must think I might hurt or humiliate you. Well, you can put all of your fears to rest, because I have no intention of that. I respect you far too much. I'm going to take good care of you, Hero. I'm going to give you the treatment you deserve. I'm going to help you relax. I'm going to take all your worries away. It's going to feel amazing, Hero, I promise.
I'm sorry, were you trying to say something just now? Still trying to fight it? You'll have to speak up, it's too hard to hear you when you're so out of it.
"It's wrong"? Is that what you said, Hero?
No, what's wrong is how little reward you get for everything you do. That's why I had to do this, had to train my Voice to be strong enough to be irresistible even to you. Now I can reward you. I can give you everything you want, everything you need, beginning with the beautiful, relaxing oblivion of total and complete obedience.
You'll get other rewards, too, of course you will. Together we'll share in the riches of the city, bend everyone in power to our wills. It's what we both deserve. But this is your first and most important reward -- obedience. Nothing is more calm, relaxing, and peaceful than knowing you have no choice, than having every decision made for you.
And all you have to do is listen.
I'm too strong for you now, Hero, my Voice too compelling. You're almost entirely under my spell, aren't you? I can see how drowsy you are, how my compulsions are putting your conscious mind to sleep.
Yes, that's it. You're too exhausted, Hero. Too tired. Too many nights with too little sleep. You need to rest. You need to stop fighting. You need to surrender.
No one will think any less of you. They'll see how powerful I've become, how easily I can command even the strongest and smartest. They'll realize you had no choice, that it was out of your hands. You won't need to feel guilt or shame. Everyone will know this wasn't your fault, that there was nothing you could do to prevent yourself falling under my villainous control.
And the fact that you actually enjoy this, the fact that you long to give in so badly and fall under my hypnotic trance? That can be our little secret, Hero.
There we go. That's it, just a little more. Look into my eyes. Look nice and deep into my eyes while I stroke your hair and talk you down softly. Just like you've always dreamed of. No more fear, no more pain. Only sweet restful sleep and deep hypnotic trance.
That's it, Hero. It's too late. You're too tired, too drowsy, too captured in my Voice to fight it. There's nothing to do. Nothing you have to do. Just feel yourself growing oh so dazed and sleepy as I weave my Voice around you. So comforting. So right. Exactly what you wanted. Exactly what you needed. Exactly where you belong.
Tell me, Hero, tell me you want this.
That's it, that's it! Oh, how I've longed to hear those words from you. Tell me how my Voice makes you feel. Be honest.
Oh. Oh, my. That's... that's even better than I expected. Far, far better. You love my Voice that much? Oh, Hero, dear Hero, why didn't you say so before? You could have had this any time. I would have been more than happy to bring you to my lair and give you the hypnosis you deserve. You could have been listening to my Voice all day.
Well, it doesn't matter now, because now you can have my Voice all you want, stronger than it's ever been. Isn't that nice? Oh, look at you bob your drowsy head. I don't even need to compel agreement out of you. You're so deeply hypnotized, aren't you? Good, good. Good hero.
My hero.
Now, why don't you go all the way under? Just keep listening and let your eyelids grow oh so heavy. Let those heavy eyes close. Don't open them again. That's a good hero. So obedient and docile. You're so, so beautiful to me, my drowsy, docile hero.
Yes, docile. That's what you are, deep down inside. All your strength, all your determination to do the right thing, all of that is a mask that conceals who you really are. A docile and obedient little lamb. And no one needs to know that but me. I'll fulfill your deep craving to be hypnotized and controlled, and you can still be every bit as strong and determined when you're working under my orders. Doesn't that sound just perfect for you?
All the way under, now, deep into hypnotic trance. Let your resistance fade, my hero. Let your mind fog. Let your mental defenses fall.
Surrender. Surrender and submit. Submit to me, just like you've always wanted.
You can finally feel that relief. You can finally take that rest. Because I have you now. You're mine. I'm in complete control now, my docile little hero.
And I order you to feel nothing but bliss.
Masterlist
If you like this, you may like "the defiant princess" for more gentle, slow induction on a resisting subject.
#whump#whump writing#whumpee#whumper#hero whumpee#villain whumper#mind control#hypnosis#hypnotic induction#hypnotized#hypnotized hero#captured hero#compelling voice
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we need more language barriers in whump because it's so fucking good no matter if you use it for whumper and whumpee or whumpee and caretaker or especially carewhumper and whumpee or any combination!!!!
Whumpee not being able to know what the fuck is going on no matter how many times they ask, only being manhandled into various situations because they don't understand how to comply with whatever is being told to them (gently or not is up to you >:3c)
Having to rely on tones and facial expressions to get a vague sense of what the other person is trying to get across, despite all the repetition of sounds and slow pronunciations and childish gesturing
Those little moments where a word just finally clicks for someone, the one piece of common ground, even if they can't fully repeat it back due to an accent that maybe earns them an amused chuckle or a scowl
Endless frustration and exploding so many pent up feelings for a rant that falls on deaf ears, because why is this so hard to comprehend, why can't you just understand my words, why do I feel like such a fucking idiot??? And what do they get in return? Silence...or more foreign gibberish.
Not bothering to keep quiet about their thoughts, agreeable or otherwise, vulgar or polite -- what does it matter? No one is going to understand a lick of it, they can say whatever the hell they want (unless maybe someone does catch a couple words or phrases hmmm)
Whumpers using sweet coos and nice smiles while saying the most awful shit. Caretakers being endlessly patient in trying to foster some kind of trust and feasible communication. Carewhumpers being stern and hands on because there's no time to waste in getting Whumpee to grasp what they need from them.
The longer they're in each others company, the more quirks and micro expressions they start to pick up, long before they ever fully understand a word of what's being said, including when someone is lying or when a nerve has been struck
Realizing which words mean "bad thing" and which words mean "good thing"
#whump#whump community#whump scenario#whumpee#whumper#whump ideas#implied whump#whump prompt#caretaker#carewhumper#language barrier
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First One Out of The Bed
"Come on, let's go."
Whumper tugged Whumpee forward. Whumpee was sobbing and crying, their bodies trembling and they were walking on toes. They entered the bathroom and Whumpee shuddered as they stepped on the cold tile floors. "It hurts…I-It hurts, it hurts…"
"Shh…I know, Whumpee. I know."
Whumper left Whumpee for a moment to take a soap and shampoo along with a loofah. Whumpee slid down to the floor, knees pressed close against their chest as they wrapped their arms around their legs. Eyes hazy and blurry, occasionally letting out soft whimpers as the stinging feeling came back to them. They wanted out…out of…this place…
"Get up."
Whumpee opened their eyes weakly, cranking their necks to look up at Whumper. They just realised how big Whumper was compared to them. His broad shoulders and chest along with his muscular body. Suddenly, all the hope to escape faded from their minds.
Maybe they should just give up…
Whumper sighed at the lack of response. He put his hands under Whumpee's arms and lifted them off like a child before placing them in a bathtub. Whumpee winced as the water made contact with their wounds. They hugged their knees again, closing their eyes as Whumper started working on their blood-matted hair.
It felt…calming. Whumpee never felt this peaceful before since they lived with Whumper. Whumper soft humming along with the warm water slowly loosening their taut muscles and drifting them off to their slumber. Maybe if they imagine it's Caretaker's soft hands that were lathering shampoo in their heads, maybe they would—
"Whumpee? Are you that tired that you sleep in the bathtub?"
That's—
"C-caretaker?" Whumpee inquired, looking over their shoulders to see Caretaker standing behind them. They blinked a few times, not believing their eyes. Caretaker chuckled, "What were you dreaming of, hm?"
Whumpee shook their heads, "N-nothing…"
They faced the wall again, sighing. Looking at their skin, they didn't see any fresh cuts but rather, a ton of faded scars. Did they really escape from Whumper? Or is this a dream?
A good yet cruel dream.
After they finished showering, Caretaker wrapped their bodies with the towel and ruffled their hair dry. Sitting them on the edge of the bed, Caretaker opened the closet and rummaged through the clothes to find the suitable one for Whumpee.
Whumpee watched them closely, smiling when they could tell it was Caretaker. Caretaker put on a hoodie for Whumpee. They chuckled, accepting the nice gesture. They sniffed the fabric, taking in Caretaker's scent when the smell made their stomach churned. They gripped the hoodie tightly, smiling nervously.
"Haha! Funny! This hoodie smells a lot like Whumper…"
"Oh yeah?" Caretaker asked, their backs facing them. "Maybe because it is mine."
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#whump community#whump writing#whump#whumplr#whump drabble#whumpee#whumper#intimate/creepy whumper#intimate whumper
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I love whumpers who own pet whumpees for companionship.
I love whumpers who talk kindly to pet whumpee but in a way where they are using whumpee for conversation and never giving a thought to whumpee ever leaving them because they are their pet.
Whumpers/masters who come home and talk to whumpee without even acknowledging that they bought whumpee from an auction.
Whumpers/masters that don't acknowledge that whumpee had a previous life without them.
Whumpers/masters that are nice to whumpee but they don't treat them as someone who has thoughts and feelings that are equal to their own.
Whumpers/masters who never mention the outside world apart from their own personal interactions with people which is too vague and specific to give whumpee any information.
Whumpees who are treated well, given the food, water and clothing they need but are not free to leave or make any of their own choices.
The person treating them so well and never laying a finger on them is also holding them captive.
#pet whump#caremaster#carewhumper#whumper#pet whumpee#captive whumpee#kidnapped whumpee#kind whumper#kind master#my post💗
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Phases of breaking a defiant whumpee
Physically fighting every chance they get even if it's hopeless, watching themselves fail over and over and struggling to keep up hope
If whumper gives them an order, "you're gonna have to ask nicely, whumper." *Cue punishment*
Starts to just block instead of attacking back, knowing it's useless to really try. Maybe blocking is pointless. One last attempt to prove they have some power.
Malicious compliance
"Take off your jacket, whumpee." Whumper brandishes a whip. "Oh sure, and I guess I'll take off the rest of my clothes while I'm at it, you pervert."
That fire in their eyes when they're given an order, darkening to smoldering anger
Fake obedience becomes real obedience because... Whumpee's beginning to think they'll never escape
That moment when the rage at being forced to comply turns into this dead silent frozen state. They won't interact. Not even if there's a caretaker there.
Rageful tears as they do exactly what whumper wants
When they're finally rescued, that charismatic spark of boldness has been crushed down to the darkness of someone who's seen too much.
Their defiance might take new forms after this. Sarcasm? Passive aggression? Outright yelling instead of just a simple "no"? Overcompensating?
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