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*takes off grad cap* alright . here we go.Â
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Youâve been very gloomy these past couple of months.Â
You hadnât stopped thinking about Ellie since you left her home that morning, up until you and Arya jumped on the train to return to campus.Â
Youâd never be able to express to Arya how much you appreciated her presence: she allowed you to cry, whine, pout, and sniffle about how much you missed Ellie, and she comforted you through all of it with gentle whispers of youâre gonna be fine, bitch! youâre gonna get piped down soon! I promise! Although you felt a bit selfish dumping your girl problems on her, she never made you feel guilty and justified that you always listened to her ramble about her hook-ups and high rambles. The only time sheâd ever complained about anything related to your sorrowful monologues about missing Ellieâs laugh and smile and tongue was when you two had to work on your Music & Production Theory assignment (Iâm gonna kill you if we fail and youâll die dickless! Donât play with me!).Â
âŚBut other than that, sheâs been so sweet!
Ellie has also been keeping in touch ever since you left. She sent you snaps of Duchess zooming around the house, her meals for the day, and three-second voice memos of her new project she was working on. You knew that sheâd been flying back and forth to California and had a packed schedule with her producer friends whenever she was there, but your heart couldnât help but turn gray when you wouldnât hear from her for a few days.Â
Now it's March, and you and Arya are sitting on the floor as you glared searing holes into your phone. Ellie sent you a text when you were in class earlier saying that she missed your voice and was going to call you the second she had the opportunity. And you werenât going to miss it. Ellie was worth wasting your Saturday night on!Â
âIâm not gonna lie girl,â Arya's voice cut through your intense phone-staring. âIâve definitely had my dickmatized moments but youâre kinda crazy.âÂ
You looked up at Arya as she carefully packed her blunt to get ready for her smoke sesh with her friends, concerned look on her face. It made you frown.Â
âWhat, why? Whatâd I do?â You asked with your brows pulled down.Â
And before you could hear her answer, you got a notification. You nearly snapped your wrists at the speed your hands flew to grab your phone to see if it was Ellie, your eyes bulging at your screen, only to see that your sister snapped you. You sighed in slight disappointment before opening it.Â
You ignored Aryaâs snickering.Â
Your sister sent you a picture of her with hairspray and a lighter in her hand with a caption IM MOVING TF OUT I CANT TAKE THIS SHIT NO MORE BUGS R EVERYWHERE WHAT IN THE FUCK.
You couldnât hold in your laugh as you snapped her back before Arya stood and went to the bathroom with a change of clothes in hand.Â
You heard the shower turn on as you got up and onto your bed to mindlessly scroll through Twitter.Â
After ten minutes of scrolling through a Best Euphoria Character breakdown thread, you got a text from Ellie, and you nearly squealed in excitement.Â
hiiii im sorry i havent been able to b on my phone like that :( been super busy with this sample
i just wanted 2 let u know that i might have 2 call u another time we still have a bunch of layering to do for this track n weâre on a timer. i miss u so fucking badÂ
You couldnât ignore the sadness in your chest, but you texted back understandingly anyway.Â
itâs ok :( i miss u too. miss ur voice :(Â
Her reply bubble immediately popped up.Â
i know baby fuckkkk i miss ur voice so fucking bad im ab to start asking 4 daily voice memos đ¤¨
You smiled at your screen so wide.Â
LOOOOOOOL ur annoyingÂ
You typed and sent a follow up before she could.Â
go back 2 work đĽ°đĽ°
kiss :(Â
mwahÂ
mwah mwah mwah
You put your phone on your chest, and you couldnât stop the smile that grew on your face. She made you so, so happy.Â
The bathroom door opened, steam from the warm water exiting the room along with a towel-clad Arya.Â
âWhat you cheesinâ so hard for, girl?â She said as she grabbed her edge control off her desk.Â
âNothinâ,â you said with a dreamy sigh as you stared off past her.Â
ââŚUh huh, Iâm heading out soon, Iâll be back late tonight, so donât wait up.â She said with a smirk.Â
âDonât forget to send me your location,â you reminded her.Â
She let out a quick course, baby before she went back into the bathroom.Â
You went back to scrolling through Twitter until your eyelids got heavy. A comfortably dressed Aryaâsheâs definitely getting someâ kissed your forehead and dimmed your dorm lights before she left, and you dozed off.Â
You jolted awake as Rotation blasted in your ears. You drowsily picked your phone up and saw a el:3đ˛ and 2:34AM across your home screen.Â
You perked up immediately to answer, sitting up so fast that you went lightheaded for a second.Â
âHello?âÂ
âHi, you,â Ellieâs light voice rang through the phone. âWere you sleep? Mâsorry, we can talk laâ â
âNo! No, Iâm up, I was just napping, hi,â you said as you grinned softly at her laugh, laying on your back. âYouâre up late. Did you guys finish?âÂ
âNo, but we were exhausted, so we called off for the night. And one of my partners kept rambling about this girl he needed to call, so,â Her voice was already making you squirm. Thank god she couldnât see you. âBut I wanted to talk to you, couldnât help myself.âÂ
âOh my god, youâre so obsessed, damn,â you said with a giggle.Â
âFuuuuck yeah, sooo obsessed, need to drink your bath water, shit, I think Iâm dying!â she said in an overly desperate, dried out tone, making you laugh harder.Â
Both of your laughs calmed down before she started talking, âIâve been meaning to ask you something.âÂ
âYeah?âÂ
âUmmâŚâ She sounded a bit nervous, and it instantly made you antsy. âI know youâre not gonna be back for a couple weeks or whatever, but I just⌠like I was gonna ask if you wanted to do something, like just the two of usâŚâÂ
And a sly grin grew on your face. âEllie⌠are you asking me out, right now?âÂ
The other line was silent as you heard her move around and sigh before she spoke. ââŚThis was literally the worst way to ask a girl out, fuck, mâsorryâ â
You cut through her jittery rambles. âEllie, stop apologizing! Thatâs so cute! Of course, Iâll go out with you!âÂ
You heard her release a deep breath as she said, âFuck, thank god, holy shit, I was so nervous. Itâs been so long since Iâve done that. Almost shoved my vape down my throat.âÂ
You laughed as your heart beat quickened. âYou really gonna wine and dine me when I come home? Weâre that serious?âÂ
âOhhh, we're that serious, you're eating nothing but lobster and pasta when I see you, swear to god.âÂ
You snorted at her, âOkay, sugar daddy, get me a new car while you're at it. With insurance.âÂ
âAnything you want, baby.â She said with a sleazy laugh.Â
You hummed at her offer in attempts to mask the pounding of your heart, but she mocked you, humming back at you in a higher tone.Â
âShut up! Iâm just thinking!âÂ
âOh, yeah? About what?âÂ
You suddenly felt shy as her voice lowered. It was so much deeper. âJust⌠just you, I guess, I dunno, miss you.âÂ
You heard her shuffle again before she asked softly, a smirk evident in her tone, âYou miss me?â
You let out a quiet, but eager mhm! as your tummy swirled with want.Â
You listened to her gentle breathing before she asked, âYour roomie home?âÂ
And your heartbeat picked up, your eyes fluttering as your blinking slowed.Â
âN-no, sheâs gone.âÂ
âThen lay down for me, baby.âÂ
You instantly fell on your back, your scarfed head hitting your silk pillows. Your face was boiling hot, âI am.âÂ
âYou sound nervous, you good?â she asked you gently.Â
âMâgreat, just⌠yeah, Iâm okay, want you to keep talking.âÂ
âStop me whenever, you understand?â Her tone was much more serious, and it made your thighs clench, your boyshorts growing wetter.Â
You whined out a uhhuh!, but she corrected you immediately, âSay you understand.âÂ
âI understand! I get it, El!â Fuck, you wished she were here to touch you. To scold you in person.Â
You heard giggling and more shuffling around through the speaker, âYou gotta shirt on?âÂ
âMhm.âÂ
She chuckled lightly, âTake it off, take off everything while you're at it.âÂ
Your heartbeat spiked, âBut Arya might come back.âÂ
âThatâs why you have a blanket, honey.âÂ
âŚFair.Â
You quickly set your phone on your pillow, reaching for the hem of your shirt, lifting it up to pull it over your head, tossing it to the floor. You arched your ass up to pull your boyshorts off and kicked them to the foot of your bed. You reached for your phone again.Â
âOkay, mâready now.âÂ
âSuch a cutie,â she cooed at you. You could hear the grin through her words. âGonna make you cum so hard the second I get my hands on you.âÂ
You whimpered into the speaker as your walls squeezed. Fuck, fuckfuck.Â
âYou make me go fuckinâ crazy, canât stop thinking about you.âÂ
âM-me, too.âÂ
âYeah? What dâyou think about?âÂ
Say it! your brain yelled at you. She already knows youâre a slut, just say what you want!Â
â...UmmâŚâÂ
âTalk to me, baby, about anything you want.âÂ
You gulped, heart pounding in your ears, âYour⌠your hands? Theyâre⌠really nice.âÂ
âYeah? What about âem is nice?âÂ
âEllieâŚâÂ
âLike when they touch you all over, when they hold you down?âÂ
âYes,â you barely whispered as your free hand traveled down your body. Not touching anywhere specifically, just roaming.Â
âKnow you do, they get you so fuckinâ hot,â She breathed through the line. âWanna touch yourself?âÂ
âYeah, wâna so bad.âÂ
âSay please.âÂ
âEllieeeâ âÂ
She cut off your embarrassed whines with a nastily casual tone, âI'll hang up right now. Ask nicely.âÂ
You balled your traveling hand up in a fist as you pleaded with an upset pout, âPlease, Ellie.âÂ
âPlease what.âÂ
â⌠Please help me?âÂ
ââŚ.â
âCâmon Ellie! Please make me cum! I wanna cum!âÂ
Her condescending laugh pierced through your ears, âTouch those pretty fuckinâ tits since I didnât get to before you left.âÂ
You moaned out as your pointer finger and thumb rolled your stiffened nipple as you squirmed.Â
âTheyâre so fucking sensitive, got my sheets so wet when I played with âem. Wanâem in my mouth again, shit.âÂ
You pulled at your other nipple, and you let out a moan into the speaker.Â
âYouâre so fucking beautiful, miss you so fucking bad.âÂ
âMiss you so much, Ellie, canât wait tâsee you.â You cried out quietly. Your pussy was clenching with need.Â
âTouch your pussy, babygirl, rub your clit. Get it nice and wet fâme.âÂ
You followed her instructions at a lightning speed, spreading your legs wider and reaching your hand all the way down to bring your slick to your clit. Your breathing picked up as you slowly rubbed it into your bud, hips jerking.Â
âTell me how wet it is,â you could hear how shaky her voice was getting, breathing labored. She was touching herself to you touching yourself, and it was making you wetter. It made you burn. It made you want to get her there.Â
âMâreally wet, El,â you mewled out to her, trying to ignore your bashfulness.Â
âYeah? Sâdripping on your bed like it did on mine?âÂ
âShit, yes, I feel it.âÂ
âFuuuck, bet itâs so fucking tight, gonna break that pretty pussy in so good.âÂ
âWant you to. Want you inside me sâbad, please.âÂ
âGonna give you whatever you want, promise, shit.â
You felt that feeling coming over you before you could think, âThink mâgonna cum, babyââ
âAlready? Always cum so fucking quickââ
âI-I just miss you!âÂ
âThen cum for me, love.âÂ
âGâna, daddy!â You heard her groan at the name.Â
âFuuuuck!â You heard the wet sounds from her pussy over her groans and whines of your name, and that swelling feeling in your gut exploded.
All you could get out was a garbled cumming! as your thighs shook in your pleasure, your fingers quickly rubbing your clit as your hips bucked towards the friction. It felt so much better because you knew she was listening.Â
âDonât fucking stop, youâre gonna cum again.â She scolded when your fingers slowed and your breathing slowed.
âE-Ellieeeâ!â
âYou wanted to cum so bad, right? Then fucking cum, fuck that pussy,â she mustâve been close: her breathing was heavier and shaky, the wet sounds from her side increasing.Â
You put your phone on speaker and set it on your pillow, propping yourself up on your elbow so you could fuck yourself easier. Youâve never successfully made yourself cum like this, but you slid your middle finger in experimentally anyway. You released a light gasp at the stretch. You were so soft and slippery on the inside, your clit twitching as you wiggled around in search for that spot that Ellie found so easily.Â
âD-Do me a favor?â she gasped out to you.Â
âU-Uh huh?âÂ
She let out a breathy laugh, âPut your pussy on the phone so I can nut?âÂ
You laughed with her, shaking your head as you grabbed it with your free hand. You placed it between your legs, thrusting your finger in and out, âCan you hear it?âÂ
âYeah, babe, fuck.âÂ
You let out a moan with her, slowly fucking yourself and bringing your other hand over to rub your clit, hips jolting at the sensitivity. You both were moaning each other's name as you chased your pleasure in unison. You let out a loud moan when you prodded that squishy spot that made you black out the last time you saw Ellie. You hit it as hard as you could, pussy squelching around your fingers and belly swirling.Â
âGonna make me cum, shit, sounds so fucking hot,â she whined out in between heavy pants.Â
âCum with me, El? Please?â You rubbed your clit faster.
âGonnagonna, fuck, mâso closeâ!â
You let out a shout of her name as it hit you, your fingers trapped between the tight grip of your walls. You rubbed your clit as you grinded into your pussy, your head falling back as your hips rocked back and forth to ride it out. You tried to quiet your wails as Ellie came with you, letting out obscenities while she talked you through it. You could hear how fast her fingers were moving and it made another wave wash over you, your cunt giving one last bone-crushing squeeze as its twitching calmed.Â
You pulled your drenched fingers out and slowly rubbed your clit as you came down, listening to Ellieâs quieting gasps of pleasure. You reached to grab a couple tissues from your work desk, wiping your fingers and pussy before grabbing your phone to set on your pillow. You heard her shuffle before she spoke.Â
âYou okay, babe?â
âYeah⌠wish you were here,â you answered with a pout.Â
âI know, a couple more weeksân Iâm all yours.âÂ
âSâall Iâm thinking about,â you said gently. âGo get some rest.âÂ
âDonât want you to gooooo,â you heard her pouting. It made your heart skip. âStay on the phone with me?
âDonât you have to get up early tomorrow?âÂ
ââŚYeahâŚâ
âRight. You had a long day, go to bed.â Even though the sound of her breathing would lull you to sleep faster, you could only imagine how drained she mustâve been.Â
âFine,â you heard her sigh in resignation.Â
âSleep well,â you cheesed widely.Â
âIâll try, promise. Mmmmwaaah!â she sent a goofy kiss through the speaker. You sent one back.Â
âNight, El.âÂ
âNight, baby.âÂ
You hung up your line, throwing your phone on your pillow as you sat up to go to the bathroom.Â
You missed her scent so much.Â
Your sister was very in love. And lonely.Â
Itâs been almost three weeks since sheâs seen Isaiah.Â
She was typically good at keeping her sneaky links on the low, only calling them to fulfill her needs in the middle of the night, buy her drinks, smoke her the fuck out whenever she wanted, but she never expected to miss one of them or wait for their calls. Fuck time zones!
When Isaiah and your sister first started hooking up, it started off normal. Quick, but nastily satisfying fucks in hotel rooms (that he paid for, city girl shit), smashing in his rental car before his studio session, in her car before she went to work; it was strictly sexual for months, and she was fine with him constantly flying back and forth!Â
Until he returned from California with a new strain that he said reminded him of her. She damn near bought a ring to propose to him herself. He smoked her out, she had one of the best highs of her life, and he gave her the craziest head on her couch, how could she not want him?!Â
And now heâs gone, making beats in California again as she sat and thought about his voice. His scent.
Why did California always keep the most important people away from her?!Â
Thinking about that city always gives her a headache. She ignited the packed bowl of her pipe, staring holes into the black screen of her phone as she waited for his call.Â
You were editing another compilation of you playing all four seasons of Vivaldi as Arya snored on your shoulder. Your subs were going to eat this one up!Â
The train Wi-Fi was kicking your ass and was this close to fucking up your render, but you were managing.Â
You stretched your wrists, and you leaned back from your small tray table, resting against your head against the rest and grabbing your phone.Â
You got a text from Ellie!Â
hiiiii baby canât wait 2 c uÂ
got smth cute planned :)
You didnât notice the smile that spread on your face as you typed.Â
so excited :( wanna smell u so badÂ
You were about to set your phone down, but a text bubble popped up.Â
yeah? wna smell u tooÂ
gonna shove my nose in that pussy and inhale đ
IMMA EAT IT RAAAHH
Your entire body flushed hot as you shook your head.Â
AYOOOOO??
UR FUCKDIGNNSTUPIDD GET OFF MY PHONE
LFMAKOAAOOAAOÂ
kissie b4 i go? :(
mwahmwahmwah
mmmmmwwah
You set your phone down as you cheesed dumbly.Â
You wished this train would hurry the fuck up!Â
Your mom had come to pick you and Arya up from the station with slices of her freshly baked pineapple upside-down cake, kisses, and strong hugs. You never got used to being away from her months at a time; You'd missed her warm embrace so much.Â
You had a couple of days to yourself before you and Ellie's first date and⌠just thinking about it made your heart beat faster.Â
Sheâd texted you when you got home, telling you to dress up in something fancy. Would she buy you a fancy dinner? Take you to an art gallery? A night on the town in the city? The possibilities were endless with her!Â
Arya had been telling you that you needed to buy some⌠things for when the two of you get âfreak nastyâ, so she offered to drive you to the mall (no more fruit panties, you're an adult now!, sheâd scolded you). While you were excited for what happened after your date, you didnât want it to be narrowed down to that; You loved spending time with Ellie. You just got her back in your life, and you wanted to appreciate every moment that you could get with her when she wasn't working. You felt so happy when she was around.Â
⌠But of course, Arya wasnât hearing that.Â
âGirl, you can save all that sappy shit for the wedding, do you want crotchless panties under yourââ She paused her waving of the⌠very exposed pair of pink underwear as she remembered something. âOh fuck, you donât have a dress!âÂ
ââŚI was thinking about just wearing my prom drâ â
âDonât even finish that fuckinâ sentence, are you serious?! Your prom dress? On your first date? You needa be slapped for that!â She said, irritated as she glared at you. You glared back at her attitude, now just as annoyed.Â
âWhat do you expect me to do?! Iâm not⌠Iâm not like you guys, okay? This typa shit is easy for yâall. You know how hard it is for me to⌠do things like this. Why do you think Iâve been single this whole time?!â You said with a hurt frown.Â
You knew she never meant any harm whenever she scolded you about your romantic situations, âor lack thereofâbut that didnât mean it hurt your feelings any less. Youâre just starting to come into yourself and your appearance, and you need her, and everyone else, to be patient with you.Â
Arya mustâve sensed the pain and discomfort in your voice because her glare slowly fell, a gentle replacement immediately overtaking her expression. She set the panties back down onto the display table and grabbed your shoulders.Â
âMâsorry babe, okay?â She said softly, and you nodded as you looked off into the distance in rigid forgiveness; You knew she didnât like that. âLook at me.âÂ
Your eyes slowly met hers before she quietly spoke. âIâm sorry, I want the best for you, thatâs all.âÂ
She continued as your eyes watered. Just a little glisten! âYouâre such a beautiful personâinsideân out and I want you to feel that way, even more so now because of that dick-slanginâ girlfriend of yours!âÂ
âYouâre annoying,â you joked as you laughed quietly, making her smile.Â
âItâs true! Youâre my babyân I love you.âÂ
âLove you,â you mumbled into her shoulder as she pulled you into a tight hug, pressing a light kiss to the side of your head before pulling back.Â
She spun around and pointed towards the 30% off on all thongs! sign at the front of the store.Â
âCan you buy one, at least?â she said in half-joking exasperation, pout on her face.Â
ââŚSure,â You relented with a sigh. âI might not wear it for the date, though!âÂ
âThatâs fine, mama! Just wanna make sure you got one for safe keeping!â She said slyly as she stuck her tongue out.Â
You shook your head as you made your way over to the rack, eyeing the pine green thong on the mannequin.Â
Two days passed and you were getting ready for your first date! You couldnât believe it!Â
After Arya drove the two of you to the airport to pick up Kris and Starr, theyâd spent the night at your place so they could see you off before Ellie came to pick you up.Â
Starr helped you wax your eyebrows and legs: she offered to wax your cooch, but you were scared and a little embarrassed at the thought of your friends seeing you so⌠exposed. You knew your friends didnât care about seeing you naked, but you were still a bit sheltered with them. Iâll stick to my razor! you'd said.Â
Kris was pressing your hair while Arya helped you glue your lashes on as you frantically checked the time with a bouncy knee. 6:33⌠6:34⌠6:36!
Even though Ellie said that your reservation was at seven-thirty, you still needed to get dressed, had to count for the drive, potential stops for gas⌠and what if there was an accident on the road and it made you both late⌠oh, god what if you both caused the accidentâ!
âBro, can you calm the hell downâ âÂ
âYâknow, Iâm getting really sick of yâall asking the girl with anxiety to calm downâ!â
âStop moving and hold your ear down!âÂ
You thanked god your mom was out on a wine night; She didnât need her night ruined with you and your friends bickering.Â
You grabbed your ear in a tight downward pinch with a harsh sigh, moving it so Kris could straighten your baby hairs. Even with all this frantic movement from everyone in the room, they made it clear that they didnât want you to see your final look until the very end, blocking all mirrors available with their bodies.Â
After fifteen minutes of⌠pure chaos, your hair laid flat, and your face was beat. You pressed kisses all over your friendsâ faces with breathy iloveyouthankyouâs before grabbing your dress and undergarments to sprint to your bathroom, making sure not to look at yourself even though you desperately wanted to.Â
You shut the door with a deep and heavy exhale. You looked at your dress with pounding in your ears: it was a floor length, black velvet maxi dress with lace detailed sleeves. It accentuated your bust so a little cleavage was showing (I, personally, would have my nipples out, but this is cute, too! you recalled Arya saying in the dressing room); It was so⌠classy. You felt like an adult when you tried it on. You hope Ellie likes it.Â
You shook off your insecurities before they could terrorize you and removed your tee, underwear, and sweatpants. You put your pine green, lacy strapless bra on with the thong to match, adjusting it so⌠your pussy could fucking breathe how do people wear this shit everywhere they go!Â
You grabbed your dress and stepped into it, carefully pulling it up and over your shoulders. You straightened it out with your hand, making sure no wrinkles were in it before you took a breath, opened the door, and walked out to your bedroom.
Starr was the first one you made eye-contact with and she damn near fell out of your desk chair and onto the floor. Your eyes widened as the other two turned with excited gasps and shrieks.Â
âOH MY FUCKINâ GOD WHAT THEFUCKâ!â
âYouâre so fucking fine, holy shitâ!â
âIf it donât work out with olâ girl, you know where to find meâ!â
You shook your head at them before dropping your gaze to your floor so that they couldnât see your small smile, your face flushed, âOkay, okay, can I look now?âÂ
âYeah baby, turn around!â Kris said excitedly as she grabbed your shoulders with an encouraging squeeze.Â
You spun around and was immediately met with someone who⌠did not look like you. At all. Even your brain was too stunned to speak. What the fuck?Â
The girls' excited expressions slowly dropped when they witnessed your shocked reaction, but you werenât upset at all. Just⌠surprised. In a good way.Â
âWhatâs the matter, honey?â Kris asked you gently from behind with concerned eyes, meeting yours in the mirror.Â
ââŚIâm just reallyâ âÂ
THROW IT IN ROTATION! (THRâ)
You jumped towards your phone on your dresser, nearly knocking your lamp off it. You answered immediately when you saw who it was.Â
âHello?âÂ
âHiiiii, mâdownstairs!â Ellie said giddily, and your spirit brightened. You smiled widely, and the girls followed.Â
âIâm coming down right now, just needa put my shoes on!âÂ
âOk, is it fine if I come in for a sec or?âÂ
âYeah, itâs fine. The girls wanna meet you!â And they nodded eagerly in agreement.Â
â⌠Fuck, now Iâm scared.âÂ
âDonât be! Theyâre so sweet, câmon.âÂ
âK, gimme a sec, mmmmmwah!â she said goofily, you sending one back just as dopily before you ended the call.Â
âYâall gay as shit,â Starr said with a headshake, making the other girls snicker and jump in excitement.Â
You, heels in hand, and your friends nearly jumped down the staircase to rip the front door off the hinges.Â
The minute your eyes connected with Ellieâs, you had to stop yourself from dropping to your knees and doing something crazy. Fuck.
She was dressed in an all-black suit with a⌠fucking turtleneck underneath her jacket. Her sleeves were rolled up so her forearm tattoo was exposed. She hadâŚCuban links around her neck and wrists. Her hair was cut into a mulletâwhen the fuck did that happen, holy shit?!â and the two slits in her brow were more prominent. You noticed one of her hands was behind her back, but you couldnât even bring yourself to care about what she was hiding. You were, by all means, ready to fuck right now. You nearly said fuck the date.Â
And by the darkening of her eyes as she took you in from head to toe, you could tell she was ready, too.Â
ââŚHey,â she said to all of you, but she kept eye contact with you. You stared back.Â
âHi! Nice to finally meet you, Iâm Arya,â your best friend interrupted as she stuck her hand out towards your date. Her eyes left yours to politely greet your friends with cute smiles and handshakes.Â
And then she turned to you, bringing her hidden arm around to hand you a burgundy sunflower wrapped in gold and pink ribbons and plastic. Evening sun!Â
She stepped inside and into your spaceâshe always smelled so fucking good! â as you took it from her hand with a gentle thank you. Her cheeks were so red as she whispered back of course before planting a soft kiss to your lips. You heard your friends squeal quietly. Neither of you cared, sucked into your own little universe.Â
âReady?â she whispered. You nodded excitedly with a toothy grin, stepping into your heels. She smiled back before taking your hand in hers.Â
âOh fuck, wait a second!â Kris said loudly before running upstairs. You looked at your two friends, confused. Starr smirked as Arya shrugged.Â
Kris came running back down the stairs with a small backpack in her hand, giving it to you.Â
âPacked you some⌠things. Might not see you for a few days,â she said slyly as she winked, causing Starr to snicker. What the hell was in this bag?Â
âBe careful with our little baby, now! Sheâs fragile!â Starr called out.Â
âWill do, donât worry,â Ellie replied with a light laugh before turning to you to whisper, âCâmon, baby.âÂ
âDonât forget to lock the door before you guys head out, keys under the mat,â you turned to say to your friends as you slowly walked out. âI love yâall!âÂ
Shouts of love you! and be safe! rung through your ears before you gently shut the door. Your back was immediately pressed up against it before you could think, Ellie craning her neck to connect your lips in a hot kiss. Your knees went weak.Â
She pulled away before you could protest, looking you up and down, âHad to do that, fuck, you look gorgeous.â Your cheeks were so hot as you mumbled a quiet you, too!
âThink Iâm gorgeous?â She hummed out with a small smile. You saw her cheeks shine a darker shade of pink.
You nodded with an mhm!, wrapping your arms around her neck to pull her in for another kiss. She grabbed your forearms and moved back with a shake of her head.
âOkay. No more bullshit, weâre classy tonight!â She said with a clap of her hands.Â
âJust one more,â you shook your head with a pout as you attempted to move her closer.Â
You shut your eyes when you saw her face move closer to yours before you heard her whisper a no against your lips.Â
âCâmon, weâre gonna be late,â She said with a foxy grin. She took your hand in hers to lead you to her⌠sleek ass car, fucking shit!Â
The heartbeat in your ears nearly deafened you.Â
The restaurant was⌠impeccable. You thought Cheesecake Factory was fancy; They were nothing compared to this spot. It was dimly lit, crystal chandeliers hanging from the ceiling, tables draped in a black cloth, marble plates, candles, bottles of champagne⌠This is wealth!
Ellie hadnât let your hand go the entire car ride, all the way up until you reached the front desk to confirm your reservation. You both were led to an exclusive spot on the second-floor outdoor balcony so that the two of you were alone. You teared up at the sight in front of you.
Your small section was filled with lit lanterns, the decorative trees around your table wrapped in fairy lights, and your table was surrounded with rose petals. There was even a small flowerpot with an evening sun sticking out of it. The gesture was so simple, but your eyes watered with gratitude. You couldnât believe she organized this for you.
âLike it?â She sounded so nervous next to you. You turned to face her and nodded with a sniffle.
âSuch a crybaby, jesus,â she mumbled with a shaky laugh, reaching towards a napkin on the table to hand to you. You dabbed your eyes, minding your liner.
âThis is so sweet, Ellie, oh my god,â you watched her expression fill with affection and doting before she pulled you in to kiss your forehead as she led you over to the table.
She grabbed the back of your chair to pull it out for you with an over-exaggerated call of mâlady!, ushering you to sit down. You laughed wetly before you sat with a thank you!
âI wasnât joking when I said you can get whatever you want,â She stated as she circled the small table to get to her seat. âIâll buy this place out if you ask, donât give a fuck.âÂ
Fuckfuckfuckâ!
âEllie, this is prettiest place Iâve ever fucking been in, oh my god!â You said as you glanced around the room.Â
âEhhh, itâs alright,â she said with a cocky smirk, shrugging as she shook her jacket off her shoulders. You tried not to look at her toned arms too closely as you rolled your eyes. âWant some wine?âÂ
âIs⌠is that allowed?âÂ
â⌠It is tonight, shitâ â
A man dressed in a black shirt, slacks, and apron cut her off with an introduction as your server, bowing his head in greeting. You noticed how he kept returning his gaze to you as he described the specials, but you paid it no extra mind.
After Ellie asked for the most expensive wine, the server departed with a stiff nod in her direction. You noticed her intense gaze as she watched him leave.Â
âYou okay?â you asked gently. She silently shook her head yes before reaching out to you to grab your hand, playing with your fingers.Â
Hm. That was weird.Â
Dinner was fucking incredible. Shrimps shouldâve never been called the âroaches of the seaâ, they tasted too good!Â
You were two glasses of wine in, ânursing your thirdâand you were starting to feel warm and fuzzy, a smile permanently painted on your face as Ellie went on about astrology; You didnât know what the fuck a mercury retrograde was, but you supported anything that kept that impassioned look in her eyes! She looked so excited!Â
ââthat fucker thought that because Iâm a fucking Libra I wasnât gonna say anything. Like, I literally have an Aquarius rising, you cunt! Iâll fuckinâ run you ovâ â
âHowâs everything?âÂ
You looked to your side and made eye contact with your server, you sipped from your glass as you eagerly nodded, âOh my god, it was fucking incredible. Who knew shrimps could be that goddamn huge! Are we allowed to say bad words in here?!âÂ
He laughed while nodding, âYes maâam, youâre allowed to do whatever you want in here. Would you like any dessert with the rest of your wine?âÂ
âYes, please!â You got giddy at the mention of sweets, âI saw this chocolate molten lava cake lookinâ thing on the menu, but there was no ice cream on top. Can yâall⌠à la mode it?âÂ
âCourse we can, the Chocolate Fondant with ice cream!â He said as he pulled out his notepad from his apron pocket, scribbling before turning to Ellie. You noticed how tense she looked: she was sitting back in her chair with her legs crossed, her finger tapping on the arm rest, and her shoulders were stiff. You didnât comment on it, but something was off. âAnd for you?âÂ
She didnât answer, and her lack of response concerned you. You reached over to gently place your hand on top of her⌠clenched fist on the table, âEl? You donât have to get a whole one. You wanna share with me?âÂ
She hadnât looked at you since he arrived, though: she continued to glare at the waiter, and when you turned to look at him, you saw him glare at her. What the hell?Â
âWeâre gonna get that to go, actually.â She demanded, her gaze sharp like knives. You recognized that tone of hers instantly. She was this close to swinging. Oh no.Â
âI think that would be best. Cash or card?â He snarked. You whipped your head to glare at his tone.Â
You felt the table shake as Ellie moved to stand. You jumped up and stood in front of herâalmost breaking your damn ankle in these heelsâ before she could lunge at the waiter, letting out soft warnings of nononono as you blocked her off. This was an elitist establishment; youâre not trying to get arrested! The waiter scoffed and stomped off.Â
You watched Ellie seethe in her chair as she pulled her wallet out of her slack pocket, throwing a stack of hundreds on the table before grabbing her jacket. She wrapped her hand around yours before pulling you towards the restaurant's staircase.Â
She harshly pushed the doors of the restaurant open to lead you to the parking garage. You werenât having it, though.Â
âEllie! Ellie, wait! What the hell just happened?â You asked, grabbing her wrist with your free hand to stop her pacing.Â
âDoesnât matterâ â
âYes, it does!â You said louder as you yanked your hand from hers. You grabbed her flushed face in your hands, but she wasnât looking at you. She just continued to whisper obscenities under her breath.Â
âBaby, look at me please, talk to me,â you said gently, rubbing her cheeks with your thumbs in an attempt to soothe her.Â
She finally looked down at you, before looking around again, âLetâs get in the car first, câmon.âÂ
You released her face from your grasp with a nod, letting her guide you.Â
She let out a deep sigh when she shut her door. You leaned over to rub her knee comfortingly.Â
She looked down at your hand as her expression softened, âMâsorry, Iâ â
You shook your head, âItâs okay, just, what was that? Iâm so confused right nowââÂ
âMotherfucker wouldnât stop glaring at me, pissed me the fuck off,â She said between grit teeth. âKept lookinâ at you, the fuck was he smiling so hard for anywayââ
âA-at me?âÂ
âYes, at you,â She said like it was obvious. Your brows furrowed in confusion. âThe bastard almost broke his neck trying to show you the menu, ohhh of course I'll put ice cream on the chocolate fountain, sexy, I'll make sure the chocolateâs extra hot for you, like what the fuckâ â
You couldnât hold in your laughter at her exaggerated impressions, and you felt her relax as she scoffed a laugh out. You watched as she reached into her jacket pocket and pulled out her mint vape, pulling from it. She turned her head to blow the smoke away from your face. You leaned over the center console, grabbing the side of her face to turn towards you. You planted soft kisses to her cheek in between your chuckles as she shook her head, licking her chapped lips.Â
âDinner was really good,â you said in between kisses.Â
She hummed before she sighed, âSorry I ruined it, you didnât even get your chocolate fountain.âÂ
You giggled, âFondant, baby.âÂ
She grumbled out a whatever, making you laugh harder, âI had so much fun, El, love spending time with you.âÂ
She turned her face towards yours to whisper, âMe too babe. Missed you so much.âÂ
âYou smell so fucking good,â you whispered against her mouth before you could think.
âYeah?â You felt her smirk.Â
You hummed in agreement before pressing your mouth to hers. She instantly reciprocated, turning her body so she could place a hand on the back of your neck to pull you closer. The kiss deepened, her tongue swiping against your bottom lip before she sucked on it. You let out a whine when her tongue licked into your mouth. Tongueringtongueringtongueriâ
But then she pulled away. You followed her mouth with yours, making her smile.Â
âLetâs go home.âÂ
You nodded so hard, you almost snapped your neck.Â
The minute you stepped foot into Ellieâs place, her mouth was on yours.Â
Her strong hands were gripping your hips, your arms around her neck as you moaned in her mouth.Â
Jinglejinglejinglejingleâ
You pulled away from her and turned the second you heard Duchess coming, her small, fluffy body descending the stairs. You pushed Ellieâs grabby, traveling hands away.Â
âBaby! Oh my god! I missed you so much!â You squealed in excitement as you rushed over to her as quickly as your heeled feet would allow. She started purring and rubbing against your leg. You bent over to pet her little head as she nuzzled into your hand.Â
âYou really chose her over me, wow, okay,â Ellie called out from behind you as you heard the fridge open along with some clinking glass.Â
Of course, Duchessâs demons took over as she whipped her head off into the distance, seemingly shocked by something, before sprinting back upstairs. There had to be a ghost or something in this bitch!
You shook your head before standing straight to turn towards the kitchen. You noticed Ellie shamelessly staring at your ass before she slowly dragged her eyes up connected with yours. And she just took a shot of pure vodka. No chaser. Fuck.
âYou always talk about me staring, look at you!âÂ
âYouâre lucky thatâs all I did,â She said as she poured another shot for herself. âWas thiiis close to doing something outta pocket.âÂ
âOh yeah? Like what?â you challenged. Yup, that wine was still kicking.
âShoving my tongue in your ass,â she said casually with a shrug before leaning over the counter, taking sips from her shot glass.Â
That familiar swirl in your gut quickly turned into a tornado. Your pussy clenched tight with want. Oh. Oh, wow.Â
âOh.â
âUh huh.âÂ
Do something! Say something sexy, youâre boring her! your brain shouted.Â
âT-that guy was trash, huh?â you said with a sheepish laugh.Â
ââŚYup,â she said deeply as she watched you. Every breath you took, every nervous twitch of your body with that nasty little glint in her eyes. The one you recognized from New Yearâs. You stepped out of your heels and took a stumbly step towards the counter.Â
Confidence! Confidence, dammit!Â
âCan I have some?â You said as you pointed towards the bottle of Absolut.Â
She snorted a laugh before shrugging, âI dunno. Can you?âÂ
âShut up, gimme some,â you said as you folded your arms over your chest. Her eyes dropped to your tits as she licked her lips; She wasnât moving to get your drink, she just stared at your pushed up breasts. Your manicured nails dug into your lacy sleeve, but you stood your ground. âRight now.âÂ
She smirked at your tone before returning her gaze to yours, shaking her head no. She tilted her head condescendingly, lifting her brow at you. She was⌠fucking testing you! The goddamn nerve!Â
âEllie.âÂ
âHm?âÂ
âPour me a shot!âÂ
âOr what?â Her tone was so low, so relaxed. You could feel yourself getting so wet.
âOr mâgonnaâŚâ Come up with something, what the fuck! âMâgonnaâŚuh⌠fight you!âÂ
ââŚYouâre gonna fight me?â She squinted her eyes at you, setting the small glass down on the counter before folding her hands.Â
ââŚYeah! Yâknow what?! Iâm actually mad, you ruined our first date because you thought some guy was staring at me!â There was a shakiness in your voice, but you waved your arms in anger as you started pacing, your bare feet stomping on the dark tile. Along with soft jingles. Duchess was back! âIâve never been stared at by a stranger in my life!âÂ
Ellie wasnât retaliating, but you noticed her jaw clenching. It made you clench, but you pressed anyway.Â
âAnd you didnât even get me my dessert! Maybe I wanted him to stare at me! Maybe I wanted the attention, for once! For fucking onâ!âÂ
You hadnât noticed Ellie circle the counter during your toothless rampage, but you felt a sharp tug of hair at the back of your head. Your neck forcibly craned up at her as you let out a wet gasp and pained whined, your fist clenching in your shock and⌠arousal. Your eyes met her dark, fiery ones, her lips slightly parted as her breath hit your face. You couldnât stop fucking squirming, your thighs rubbing together to ease the sudden tightness of your core.Â
âDonât start acting like a fuckinâ brat,â She said lowly between grit teeth. âYouâre cute, keep it that way.âÂ
Despite your eagerness for⌠her everything, you spat back, âS-Screw you, Ellie! Youâre mean!âÂ
âKnow I am. Seems like you donât, though.âÂ
Your body involuntarily shuddered against her, and you mentally cursed yourself for being your biggest enemy! Your tough act faltered the second you put it on, and she smirked. âSo fuckinâ easy, you wanna screw me, baby?â
You were easy. You were, you were, all for her! Fuck, youâd do anything she asked of you. You hadnât even realized that your hands were slowly lifting your dress up on their own accord, bunching the fabric around your hips. She looked down and scoffed out a laugh, her grip in your hair tightening. You were moaning aloud already, what the fuck!Â
âGivinâ it up like that? Like a filthy slut?âÂ
You nodded, your head filled with nothing but desire. Need. Instinct. You needed her to fuck you right now!Â
âGet up those fucking stairs, gonna put the baby in the guest room.â You could hear her jingling on the couch.Â
Her grip on you loosened as she backed away to walk towards Duchess with a soft hi, baby! missed you!Â
That was a fast switch up!Â
You turned towards the counter and downed the rest of Ellieâs discarded shot before you bolted up the steps. You never ran so fast in your life.Â
After Ellie took care of Duchess, you heard her tread up the stairs. You were sitting on the edge of her made bed with your hands folded in your lap and slick pooling your thong. She met your eyes from where she stood by the top of the steps.
âLook at you, already so well behaved,â she cooed at you. She sounded so demeaning, and you loved it. You were so embarrassed that you did.Â
You didnât reply but watched her slowly walk towards you. Your breathing picked up and your heart pounded in your ears and head and clitâ
âYou used to be so fuckinâ sweet,â she said down at you, her lustful eyes twinkling under the green and blue hues in her room. She shook her head at you. âYou get some alcohol in youân start acting out? Thatâs what you wanna do?âÂ
You slowly shook your head no, jutting your bottom lip out.Â
âTalk.âÂ
âNo, Ellie,â you could barely whisper.Â
âTake this off,â she ordered abruptly, her pointer finger pulling at the bust of your dress.Â
You stood at her command, pulling your arms out of your sleeves to pull the dress down your body. Was it always this tight?!Â
After wrestling with your garb, it pooled at your feet. You stepped out of it clumsily as Ellie took in your appearance. You watched her rake her eyes over your body, chuckling softly at your undergarments.Â
âThese are cute,â she said as she snapped the band of your thong against your skin. It made you flinch⌠and wetter! âGiveâem to me.âÂ
Your breath hitched, curling in on yourself slightly.Â
She gently cut through your thoughts before you could gather them, âDonât think about it, just do what I ask.âÂ
You hesitantly hooked your thumbs into your underwear and pulled them down on autopilot, cringing slightly at the large wet spot on the little triangle. You pressed your thighs together to help alleviate some tension. It didnât help.Â
âGet up there,â she nodded her head towards her bed frame. You sat on the bed to scoot up the mattress, but she stopped you, tightly gripping your ankle.
âNuh uh, handsân kneesâ câmon,â she scolded, âWanna see that wet fuckinâ pussy.âÂ
You clumsily got up onto your knees, hands sinking into her pine-scented blankets. Your erratic breaths picked up as you nervously looked back at her over your shoulder. Her expression softened slightly, whispering okay, baby? and you nodded enthusiastically. You never wouldâve thought that you would enjoy Ellie being mean to you, but it was making you drip. She smirked and her gaze dropped to stare at your wet cunt, and it squeezed in excitement.Â
Be sexy! you thought. Make her want you!Â
You deepened the arch in your back slightly before you slowly crawled up her bed like a cat until you were faced with her black, detailed bed frame. You boldly shoved your face into her pillows, âyou sniffed them very deeplyâ making sure to keep your ass up as far as you could.Â
âItâs like that?â You heard her scoff out. Your pussy twitched at her voice; You hoped she noticed.
You took a deep breath, âIs it?âÂ
âFucking smartass. Show me your pussy.âÂ
Your body burned at her vulgarity; she had no shame! You whimpered before you reached your arms behind you to spread your asscheeks, both holes pulsing in excitement.Â
You felt her move onto the bed before you heard the ripping of fabric. She grabbed both your wrists in one hand, knotting your soaking wet panties around them before dropping your bound hands onto your back.Â
âELLâ â
You were going to scold her for ripping your new pair, but you were cut off by a stinging slap on your ass. You let out a pained groan in the pillow as your nails dug into your palms. Oh, you liked that. A lot. You wanted more. Fuck, you want her to hurt you.Â
âGotta beat it into you, huh? Thatâs the type of shit you like?â Ellie said in a nasty timbre. âThe only way tâget you to behave?âÂ
You didnât even get to lift your head to say yes! before another harsh slap landed on your other cheek and you let out a muffled squeal again. You knew your pussy was dripping onto her duvet in a puddle!Â
âYouâre lucky youâre only getting my fucking hand. Fuckinâ slut.âÂ
Why was the disgusting part of you wishing that she were using something more? Something that she could etch into your skin forever?
âE-Ellâ â
âBe quiet.âÂ
You shut up. You shut up so quickly.Â
âFuuck, look at this fucking ass.â You felt her calloused hands massage both cheeks. She spread them, made them jiggle. Hit you again.Â
âGonna let me play with it, babygirl? Hm? Gonna let me touch you how I want to?â She cooed out at you. You knew she knew your answer, but you nodded your sweaty head into her pillow anyway.Â
You felt her place a light kiss on the back of your thigh, right under your asscheek, before she got up. You heard a drawer slide open. Her⌠special drawer. Fuck, she was going to destroy you.Â
You craned your neck as best as you could
to watch as she pulled out some items. She set them on the dresser before she undid her chains, bracelets, and earrings. She took her turtleneck and slacks off, leaving her with mussed hair and a black sports bra with matching boyshorts. Her back, her fucking back, holy fuckâ
Your thoughts were halted by a thud near the edge of the bed: you couldnât see anything that she chose, but you saw that familiar shade of purple in the middle of the small pile.
âYou comfortable in that position?â She questioned you suddenly, her softness returning.Â
âUmm⌠I like it, but my arms hurt a little, not gonna lie.âÂ
She tsked at you, âWhy didnât you tell me?âÂ
âMâsorry! I was really into the âdonât talkâ thingâ â
âIf the don't talk thing makes you not tell me when you're uncomfortable, Iâm not doing it. You gotta tell me when you feel off, I donât care why or when it is,â She crawled up to you and undid the knot from your wrists before grabbing your hip to help move you onto your back. âHere, stretch out.âÂ
You laid your head on her pillow as you extended your arms and legs, sighing in relief before you rested, limbs spread out on the mattress, âMâokay now.âÂ
She hummed in acknowledgement, but she wasnât looking at your face. She was staring at your wet cunt, and it made you squeeze hard. She licked her lips as more slick pooled at your hole before meeting your eyes. âI like you better like this actually.âÂ
You nodded as you offered her your wrists, signaling her to tie them again with a wide grin.Â
She laughed at you before crawling up to pull at your bra wire, âWait, take this off first.âÂ
âWant you to do it,â you sighed out dreamily.
She hummed at you, moving up to straddle your waist, âI meant it when I said this was cute, by the way.âÂ
âExactly, was cute! You saw my panties for three seconds and ripped them to shreds,â you cackled out.Â
âI was excited, felt a little frisky!â She laughed with you.Â
You both slowed your giggles when she started rubbing them through the fabric, both hands massaging you through the cups.Â
Your eyes fluttered when your nipples brushed up against the lace, your back arching into her touch. She slowly bent down to take one of them into her mouth, the bulb in her mouth circling the peak. You gasped sharply, arching deeper as your hand flew to the back of her head. You gently scratched her scalp with your nails, and she sucked on it.Â
You jerked and your grip on her hair tightened, and she moaned around you. You moaned at the vibrations on your sensitive skin.Â
You hadnât noticed her hands snuck under you to undo the clasp of your bra as she pulled away from you, discarding the flimsy cloth and tossing it somewhere.Â
âSo much for a surprise,â you playfully rolled your eyes at her. Calloused fingers dug into your cheeks. Your smile dropped and your eyes fluttered as hers burned into yours.
âYouâre not off the fuckinâ hook. Watch your mouth, you understand?â She said lowly, breath hitting your face. You nodded quickly.
âI understand,â you whimpered out.Â
âAtta girl, you're learning,â she patronized with a satisfied grin, patting your cheek a couple times. You blushed harder. âGimme those hands.âÂ
She sat up to reach for your destroyed panties, your wrists connected at the veins as she bound them together, much tighter than the first time.Â
You rested your arms on the pillow behind you. She adjusted them so that your head was propped up and your neck was supported. You poked your chest out more as your tits jiggled with your movements.Â
âI do anything you donât like, you tell me.â She said in a hushed, but stern tone.Â
âI will, El, promise.âÂ
âOkay,â she bent down to press a soft kiss to your mouth before moving off you and towards the pile of toys.Â
She grabbed one of⌠what is that?Â
It was a teal circle with a small hole at the top of it. Technology is so interestingâ
âItâs clean, promise,â she mustâve noticed your furrowed brows and stare. You shook your head.
âSânot that, what⌠what is it?âÂ
âA vibrator, babe,â she said simply.Â
ââŚHm, never seen one like that before.âÂ
âI hadnât either. It was a gift,â she snorted before she clicked a button on the top of it. A low vibration filled the room, âIt feels good, though.âÂ
âWhatâs it feel like?âÂ
âItâs supposed to feel like youâre getting head⌠sorta,â She said in thought, âIt kinda does, like a little bit⌠wanna see if you like it?âÂ
âYeah, p-please?âÂ
âThatâs cute.âÂ
She brought her free hand up to roll your nipples between her thumb and pointer finger, making you whine out and squirm and arch your back. Your eyes fluttered closed.
You felt the gentle vibrations on your inner thigh before they slowly trailed up with every twist and pinch Ellie gave your nipples. Your hips started bucking up before she brought her hand down to slap your pussy. You let out a loud moan as your eyes shot open to meet her dark ones.
âStop moving.âÂ
âC-can't help it,â you said with pout.Â
âYeah, you can.âÂ
You let out a huff, and she gave your cunt another wet slap, much harder. You squealed loudly as your legs squeezed shut. Â
âDonât get a fuckinâ attitude.âÂ
You whimpered a sloppy slew of apologies, but you knew she wasnât hearing it as she pried your legs apart with one strong hand to slap it one more time before slowly rubbing your clit. Your hips jerked, but you forced them not to lift.
âYou get so fuckinâ wet,â she whispered in awe, the sticky noises of your pussy filling the room as she played with it. âHear that? Shit.â
âMissed you s-so muchâ âÂ
âKnow you did.âÂ
You moaned her name, and she mockingly moaned yours back. It made you leak more.Â
You felt her spread your lips open so she could watch your clit throb and jerk in need. You looked down and saw her eyes glued to your cunt, her freckled cheeks tinted red and her wet, pink lips parted. She looked up at you, smirking when she met your intrigued, needy eyes as she placed the vacant part of the vibrator over your clit.
âLike watching?âÂ
âThink so,â you shyly mumbled out.Â
And then you felt the vibrations on your soaked bud. You gasped as your eyes closed.Â
You felt her pull the toy away before she slapped your clit. You cried out as your eyes shot open to meet hers again.
âWatch me. Donât close your eyes.âÂ
You jerkily nodded; You watched her so closely. She kissed your clit before spreading them with her fingers to bring the open part of the toy to your clit, trapping it inside once more.Â
Your bud was surrounded by the pulsing sensations of the soft silicone and your eyes almost rolled back into your head, but you craved Ellieâs praise, her reassurance. You wanted to be good for her.
All you could do was moan and shudder and watch her.
âFeels good?âÂ
âFeels sâgood, babyââÂ
âYeah? Want some more?â she said fondly with a filthy glare.Â
You mumbled out a quiet yeah, waâmore! in between your pleas.Â
She pressed another button on the toy, and the vibrations got stronger. Your cries got louder.
âSloppy fucking pussy.âÂ
The tight pull in your gut was building, but you needed more. You wanted to pull on your nipples so bad but you fucking couldnât! Why did you want your hands tied so badly?Â
âEl,â you barely got out between your heavy pants, âcan youâmmh!âÂ
âWhat?âÂ
âT-ouch my tits? Please, mâright there!âÂ
She snickered at you before reaching up to slap one of them, leaving remnants of your slick on the soft skin. That wasnât what you were expecting, but you want more of that!Â
âHit me more?â you keened, your eyes glossy.
âYou asking?â she snickered, and you nodded so fast.Â
She shook her head at you, âYouâre gross.âÂ
For her! Youâre so nasty for her her herâ
You received another slap. And another. Then she reached up to dig her nails into your brown bud. You couldnât stop your eyes from rolling back, it hurt so good.
âShit, mâgonna cum!âÂ
âUh huh.âÂ
All you could do was moan out warnings of sâcoming! and I feel it! and yes! It built and built until you could taste it andâ
 ⌠Everything you felt stopped. And Ellie was laughing. You were going to cry.Â
No⌠nononoâ
âTold you to keep your eyes open.âÂ
âE-Ellie, please no, I canâtâ â
âYâknow, I was hoping you could follow simple instructions,â she cut you off as she moved towards the pile again, grabbing her⌠fat fucking dick, yes finally yesyesyesâ
And lube⌠and an emerald green buttplug with a matching⌠remote? Oh, fuckâ
âYou donât know how to fucking listen, do you?â She tossed the items next to you before grabbing your shaky thighs to pull you closer to her, your head dropping onto the soft mattress. You laid flat on your back as she loomed over you, your legs on either side of her.Â
She watched your twitchy hole produce more slick, âDonât even need to get you ready, could just slip right in and fuck you how I want.âÂ
âWanâyou to! Wannâit so badâ âÂ
âYeah? Want me tâuse you?âÂ
âFuck yes! Yeah!âÂ
âKeep these fuckinâ legs open, then,â she grabbed her dick and stood to step into it, adjusting the straps securing them around her hips. She climbed back between your legs as she intensely stared at your tits. She looked so deep in thought, brows furrowed with her bottom lip between her teeth; What the hell was her evil brain conjuring up?!
She gave your breast one last burning slap that made you cry out before grabbing the lube off the bed. You watched as she ripped the cap off, pouring some into the palm of her hand to bring down to her dick to massage it into the ridges. Your walls were squeezing so tight, your pussy begging for whatever she was about to do.
You almost flatlined on her bed when she straddled you, climbing up your body until her dick rested between your tits, the lube she smeared all over it transferring to your skin. Her thick, wet tip was almost touching your chin, and all you could do was gape at it before slowly blinking up at her, meeting her burning gaze. She bit her lip as she slowly tipped the bottle of lube, letting the thick consistency land your chest before she rubbed it into your skin with her cock. You felt so fucking dirty!Â
âStick that tongue out,â she ordered deeply as she closed and tossed the lube bottle.Â
Your lips parted on command, your tongue slowly sliding between the two of them. She grabbed your face in a tight grip before letting a line of spit slip out of her mouth and onto your tongue. You felt it slide down your tongue before you happily swallowed
it. You lolled your tongue out, silently asking for more with pleading eyes.Â
She sneered at you before she did it again, getting it all over your chin and cheeks. You couldnât stop the whimper that left your mouth. She let a blob out onto your tits, mixing with the lube.Â
But then you felt a fiery hand come down on your cheek, your head flying to the side as you let out a choked gasp. Your thighs clamped together on instinct as your walls quivered at the sting. You felt her place a hand on the side of your head, keeping it still as her nails dug into your scalp.Â
âGâna fuck these tits sâgood,â you heard her groan out. Your cunt throbbed in desperation.Â
âWanâ you to!âÂ
âBeg me to,â she hissed at you.Â
âPlease, baby, pleasefuckâem!ââ
You felt her squeeze both your wet tits in one tight hand before she forced her dick between them, both of you letting out moans in between the squelchy noises from your bodies.
Her grip in your hair tightened as you heard her pleased sighs, her slurred curses, her whines of your name, why were you getting so tight, why did it feel like you were about to cumâ
âFuuuck, babygirl, feels sâfuckinâ goodâ!â
âE-El, pleaseâ â
âYeah? What does my girl need? Wanâ some fuckinâ attention?â You hated how hard your core squeezed at her belittling tone. You nodded as fast as you could in her tight grasp.Â
âNot gâna til I cum, youâre gonna fuckinâ lay thereân let me do what I want, thaâs what you wanted right? Huh?âÂ
More hot tears were falling to your hairline as you quietly sobbed and pleaded for her to touch your pussy, but she wasnât hearing any of it. She released the grip she had on your head, but she just shoved her drenched, lubricated fingers into your mouth. Your eyes fluttered shut as you hummed around them, sucking them deeper.
âGonna fuck that throat so hard one day, swear to god.âÂ
You hummed and garbled pleas around them in excitement.Â
âShit! Need that? Just wanâ something in that pretty mouth?â Â
You nodded, you kept nodding, you want anything sheâll give you.Â
âGâna fucking cum, all over that gorgeous face,â she gritted out as she snatched her fingers from your mouth. Her wet hand flew to your tits, pushing them closer together so that she could fuck her dick into the little hole she tightened.Â
âW-Wanâ your cum, daddy!â you encouraged her as you watched, you needed her to cum!
âShit, baby, stick your tongue out,â she whined out as she grinded her dick between your tits. Your eyes opened and your tongue immediately started swiping across her tip whenever it came up to your mouth. Her hips jolted and stuttered on top of you as she watched you, and you watched her. You hurriedly sucked her rubber tip into your mouth and sucked sloppily like you were trying to milk her. You knew she couldnât feel the suctions, but you saw her eyes roll back into her skull as she let out a loud moan. She was bucking her hips into her strap as her nails dug into your tits. You kept the tip in your mouth as she rode out her pleasure.Â
She looked so pretty and soft: fluttery lids, swollen lips, and her dotted cheeks flushed as quiet whines left her mouth. So pretty, sheâs so fucking prettyâ
Her tip suddenly slipped from your mouth as she scooted down your body.Â
âK-Kiss?â you asked softly, voice unsteady.
She didnât say anything as she leaned down to connect your lips. It was light and careful, both of you breathing into each other's whines. She made sure to check on you, mumbling an okay? against your mouth. You whined out a yesyeah mâokay before you reconnected your lips.Â
You kissed for what felt like hours before she sat up to move off you.Â
âW-Wanâmore,â you mumbled with pleading expression.Â
âOkay, babe.âÂ
You watched as she scooted down, shuffling until she was between your legs. She held one of them up with a hand under your knee to press it to your chest, playing with your entrance with her free hand. You felt her slide a finger in and your mouth fell open, your walls clinging to her the deeper she prodded. You were stunned at how fast she found that spongy spot inside you, and you squeezed her tighter.Â
âLoosen up, can barely fucking move.â
You couldnât do anything except wail out incoherencies about how fast you were going to cum, and you felt her slide another finger in.Â
âNuh uh, hold it.âÂ
âCanât, Ellie, fuckâ â
âYeah you can, hold that shit.âÂ
You tried you tried, but you couldnât. All you could get out was a cry of stop, baby! stopstopstop before your peak washed over you.Â
But the pleasure left as fast as it came as she pulled out with a tsk, another slap landing on your pulsing clit. You sobbed her name, tears running down your temples.
âCouldnât even hold it for a few seconds?â She scolded, and it made you and your pussy cry harder.Â
âStop crying,â you felt her releasing the tight grip from under your knee to softly wipe your tears off your face. âLook at me.âÂ
Your glossy eyes slowly peeled open, taking in the sight above you.
âGood?â she asked softly, and you nodded with a whimper of mâokay, El, I like it so much! please fuck me!
âYeah? Babygirl wants some dick?âÂ
âYes! Pleasefuckmeeâ!â
You let out a groan when you felt her dick slap on your pulsing bud. You were spewing pleas and curses and cries of her name; you wanted her inside! Wanted to feel her so deep in your stomach!Â
You couldnât help but lift your head to look down at her cock sliding between your folds, her thick tip nudging your clit with every thrust.
How were you about to cum from that alone? Your eyes were fluttering from the pleasure. You whimpered out a warning of your impending orgasm.
âYou gonna cum from this? Mâbarely doing anything.âÂ
You couldnât speak, you just nodded. Your mind was hazy and racing with thoughts of her at the same time, your core clenching tight. Yeah, you were going to cum!Â
âDaddyâ!âÂ
âFuuuck yeah, need me, baby?âÂ
Your eyes rolled back so far back you swore you could see your brain shaking its head at you in disappointment, and you came so fucking hard. You felt her tip push past your spasming entrance as she quickly rubbed your clit with her thumb as it hit you. That stretch made you scream, and your head fell back.Â
âSâso big!â You couldnât even register what you were saying, your burning orgasm taking over your mouth.Â
âGonna be my good girlân take it? Gonna make me proud?â Her voice sent another wave through your body as it shook in painful pleasure.Â
âYeah, daddy, mâyour good girl!âÂ
âThen lemme in, love, câmon,â she whispered out over your moans and groans and squeals. Your orgasm was still ripping through your body, your wetness dripping down your ass and onto the new puddle on the blanket. She was tearing you open with every shallow thrust, but you took every ridged, veiny inch like you were meant to.Â
âGood, baby? Talk tâme,â she said gently, halting her thrusts as she caressed your thigh.
âMâstiâmâstillcummimgâ! â
She scoffed a wet laugh at you and went even deeper, âI feel it, squeezing the fuck outta me. Dirty fucking whore.âÂ
You felt the balls of the strap resting against your ass as you slowly came down. She was all the way in, slowly pulling out only to push back in. Her tits were slightly jiggling in her bra every time she bottomed out. Your hands wriggled in the fabric; you wanted them in your mouth so bad.Â
âWanâtouch you, daddy, please?â you moaned out in a gasp as she fucked back into you, stretching you out.Â
âTouch me where?â She asked, thrusting deeper.Â
âMmh! Your tits, please!â
She huffed smugly before fucking into you faster. She brought her hand up to her chest, squeezing one of them through her bra, âThese tits?âÂ
âYeaah, fuck!â You could already feel another orgasm twisting in your gut at the painful stretch.Â
She mumbled out an uh huh as she slowly pulled the elastic up, her breasts slowly dropping out. She slowed her thrusts and brought her other hand to pull the cotton over her head, throwing her head back as both hands played with her nipples. Her moaning made you moan and fuck, you were in love!Â
âLemme go, El, fuck!â you pleaded, your hands pulling at the restraints. How was such fragile cloth so resistant!
âShit, baby, feels sâfucking good,â you watched her pull and twist them as she whimpered your name as she ignored you. Sheâd stopped thrusting to play with herself, only slowly grinding her hips into you, so you planted your feet on the bed to thrust your hips downward, clumsily bouncing up and down on her dick as you watched her.Â
She looked down at you and sneered, âYeah? Wanna fuck me?âÂ
âYes, wâna make you cum, daddy.âÂ
âHere, baby, gimme your hands,â you halted your movements bringing your arms to hers. She tore the knot in your panties and tossed them before slowly pulling out fully, a nasty shhlck! filling the room. You were so wet.Â
She leaned above you, reaching over your head to grab some pillows, setting them beside you. Her tits were in your face, so you slowly brought an inexperienced hand up to touch one softly. You gave it a gentle squeeze, bringing your other hand up to rub into the other. She let out a satisfied sigh of your name. You leaned up, boldly taking a soft nipple into your mouth. You sucked at it softly as your eyes fluttered shut, swirling your tongue around the sensitive skin.Â
âShit, thaâs so good,â she moaned out before pulling at your now sweated out hair. You gave her one last hard suck before your head fell back on the bed, her mouth instantly connecting with yours in a spit-filled, smacking kiss. Her tongue was sliding all over yours before you sucked it into your mouth, making her moan into your mouth. She brought her hand up to wrap around your throat, gently squeezing the sides. She pulled back with a look of concern on her face, grip immediately loosening at your whimper, but you brought a hand up to cover hers on your throat, squeezing tighter. Your eyes nearly crossed when she hummed with a knowing smirk, pressing her middle finger and thumb into the sides again. She pulled away, licking your bottom lip before bending down to whisper in your ear.Â
âTurn over.âÂ
You stumblingly flipped onto your stomach as she shoved two plush pillows under your hips to support them, even though you were poking your ass out towards her anyway. You felt her slap it playfully before kissing it.Â
You felt her hands pulling your cheeks apart like she told you to do to yourself earlier. You felt her staring and it made your heart beat faster.Â
âOkay, El?âÂ
âMhm, just looking.âÂ
You looked at her over your shoulder, âYou can⌠um⌠yâknow?âÂ
âNo, I donât know,â she snickered.Â
âWhat⌠what you said earlier?âÂ
âWhatâd I say?âÂ
âAbout me! The thing you said!âÂ
âWant me tâeat your ass?â She said in between kisses on your cheek. She was grinning so hard.Â
ââŚY-yes?âÂ
âThen ask me.âÂ
You looked forward with a harsh sigh, âYouâre so annoyiâ â
A tight hand grabbed your hair to pull your head back roughly. You let out a pained moan at the ceiling before you felt her lips at your ear, âWhatâd I tell you about that fuckinâ mouth?âÂ
You instinctively pushed back on her with a whine of mâsorry daddy!
âNo, youâre not, you keep talking shitân itâs pissing me off. Iâve been trying to be nice tâyou.âÂ
Nice?! She almost made you black out with one orgasm!Â
You didnât have a response, but your eyes actually did cross when you felt a thumb prod your ass.Â
âShould just shove mâdick in here, huh? I bet thatâd get you to shut the fuck up,â she spat out and your back arched deeper at her proposal.
You felt another glob of spit land on your other hole, her thumb immediately circling it before popping the tip of it in. You let out a loud moan at the intrusive sting.Â
âBeen wanting me to fuck this ass since I said it, havenât you?â She rasped at you.Â
âYeah!â
âYeah!â She mocked you in a squeaky tone. âYouâre disgusting, who woulda thought you would like this type of shit.âÂ
Her thumb was fucking in and out of your hole as fast as she could manage. You shouldnât like how much it hurts, that burn shouldnât be making your orgasm build up again.Â
She let your hair go and your head flopped onto the pillow in front of you. Your nails dug into it when you felt her dick line up at the entrance of your pussy before she shoved it in. You let out a muffled shout.
You didnât have a chance to adjust before she started fucking into you hard. Squelchy noises, slaps of skin, and your screams of pleasure immediately filled the room, her headboard knocking against the black walls. It was so fast and hot and made you feel cheap, and you fucking loved it. It made you feel desired.Â
âThis is what you wanted me to do in that fuckinâ closet?âÂ
âYeah, daddy, fuck!âÂ
âWanted me tâfuck you up? Make you mâfucking bitch?âÂ
âUggh! Elâ!â
âShouldnât even be fucking you in this bed,â She groaned out, grinding her thumb deep into your ass.
âShouldâve bent you over that dinner table, right in front of that fucker.âÂ
The imagery of Ellie fucking into you in front of your asshole of a waiter, making you scream out in front of everyone eating and drinking, claiming you as hers so that they know who you belong to made you see white. You bit down on the pillow in front of you as bursts of wetness left your cunt and splattered onto your thighs, the pillows, and Ellieâs dick. But she didnât stop, you felt her go faster. Hit deeper.
âMâcu-mming!â you screamed, shouts of prickling pleasure muffled by the material in your mouth.
âYeah? Thaâs making you cum? Wanna get fucked in public like a whore?âÂ
âD-ahh! Fuckme!â
âBabyâs so stupid for this dick,â Her tip was hitting your fucking cervix and it hurt so good. You were about to cum again! âWhoâs pussy is this?âÂ
âSâyour pussy! Sâdaddyâs pussy!âÂ
âKeep sayinâ that, sâgonna make me cum so hard,â she groaned out, her thumb leaving your ass and ripping the pillows from underneath you, your hips dropping onto the bed. You felt her push back into you, her chest on your back as she grinded deep into you. Her arm came around your neck, your throat right in the crevice of her elbow as you let the pillow fall from your mouth. Your nails were digging into the covers as your cunt gushed on her.
âYouâre getting so fucking wet. Like when I fuck you up? Treat you like shit?âÂ
âYeah yeahyeahâ!âÂ
âMake me cum, babygirl,â she whispered in your ear. âFuck me back, câmon.âÂ
You pushed back onto her as best as you could as she grinded forward, even though it was quick and sloppy and desperate. She started moaning out fucks and like thats and all you could mumble out was slurry sâyours, daddy! because you knew she liked it. Her voice on its own was getting you there.
âFuck, mâgonna fucking cumâ â
âUh huh! Cum in me, daddy pleasepleaseplease!â you squealed out in dazed excitement. You want her cum you want her cum!Â
âFuuuck, babygirl, sâcomingâ!â
âPlease make my p-pussy sloppy?â you could barely get your pleas out as your mind fogged. You couldnât even bring yourself to feel embarrassed at your eagerness for her cum, and by the way Ellie shouted your name in your ear as her body shook on top of yours, she mustâve somewhat liked it? Right?Â
Your second thoughts quickly died as you fucked back onto her, helping her ride out her orgasm. She was crying out as her nails dug into your shoulder, and the sharp pierce made you cum again! You let out babbles of her name in your pleasure. You were both messes in each other's arms, you pushing back while she pushed forward, trying to make it last as long as you could before it died down.
You let out wet groans as she grinded you both to the ends of your orgasms, and you collapsed.Â
You felt a light kiss on your shoulder before Ellie gently pulled out of you, falling onto the bed so that you were side by side. You both tried to catch your breath in your exhaustion.Â
After minutes of heavy breathing and light caresses from Ellie, you reached under to grab the object that was digging into your side. When you saw what it was, your eyes widened, and stomach twisted.Â
You heard Ellie laugh softly next to you, âWe didnât get to use it.âÂ
You paused as you stared at the buttplug that sheâd thrown on the bed, the faux emerald at the end of it shining under the green fairy lights.Â
âItâs pretty,â you said in a hoarse whisper.Â
âMhm,â she nodded. âFeels good, too.âÂ
Your toes curled.
âWhatâs it feel like?âÂ
She smiled, âYou sound cute when you ask that.âÂ
You shook your head and grinned shyly, âIâm just curious, I assume itâs⌠nice, or whatever! People on Twitter always talk about it.âÂ
âYeah, itâs really fucking nice.âÂ
âHave you used it?â She nodded.Â
âCourse I have, used all of âem.âÂ
âTell me what happened!â you said, dropping the toy on the bed before giddily flipping onto your side to face her. It made her giggle; You loved that sound.Â
âI was⌠like in this sex shop in Cali, and the cashier was like âheyyy, your orders over a hundred dollars, you can get a free item, blah blah blahââ âÂ
âNot that, you bonehead! I mean when you use it!â You both let out loud laughs.Â
Her smile dropped slowly before she whispered, âCame really fuckinâ hard the first time I tried it, like⌠really hard. Swore I saw god.âÂ
Your core squeezed in intrigue. You listened closely as she continued, âLike, I was still cumming even after I switched it off. There was a giant puddle on the floor when I finally stoppâ.âÂ
âEllie?â you softly cut her off.
âYeah, honey?âÂ
âCan you⌠will you⌠I wanna try?â you said as your face burned, hoping she would accept your poor proposal to take your⌠other virginity.Â
You watched a sly grin slowly grow on her face.
âLemme go check on Duchessân smoke.âÂ
You nodded slowly with a fluttery blink.Â
It was almost midnight, and you were laying next to Ellie on her couch in her Lauryn Hill shirt as you nursed a bottle of water. You watched as she exhaled the smoke from her pre-roll.Â
After chasing Duchess around the kitchen and living room, you both covered her in kisses before filling her food bowl and shutting the guest door as she ate.Â
âSuch a nice view,â you mumbled as you gazed out the large window. Youâd never been fond of the city: you always appreciated the stillness of your town, the close community where everyone knew each other, but the scenery in front of you almost makes you want to change your mind. It was always so lively and bright, even in the darkness.Â
âRight? When I first moved in, I slept in front of the window for weeks. The noise helped me sleep a bit better and the lights are pretty,â She said quietly before taking a puff. You listened and watched as she exhaled the smoke. You sat your bottle on the floor before speaking.
âCan I try?âÂ
âYou know how?â She asked impishly with a raise of her brow as the remnants of her puff left her mouth and nose.Â
âFuck you! I know how to smoke, I just choose not to!âÂ
âRight,â she said with an eye roll, gently tapping the ashes off on the ashtray in front of her before passing the joint to you.Â
You propped yourself up on your elbows before taking it between your thumb and pointer finger, watching the smoke leave the lit end before sticking it between your lips. You only inhaled for a couple seconds before pulling it from your mouth, softly coughing.Â
You slowly turned your head to look at her for approval, finding that she was already watching you. Her hair was still damp from earlier, her lips were swollen, and she was still in her boyshorts.Â
âMeh. Still a fucking rookie,â she said in a light tone as she wet her lips. You shoved her shoulder with yours, making her laugh.Â
âThat strainâs supposed to make you horny,â she whispered, attempting to grab the joint from you. Something nasty curled in your gut at her tone, mindlessly bringing the joint back to your lips and inhaled some more before she could snatch it. You held it much longer than the first puff before choking on the carbon, making her laugh at you. You felt her pat your back gently through your coughs. You passed it back to her and she took it with a shake of her head.Â
After she smoked her joint down, she bolted upstairs, swiftly returning to the couch with full hands.Â
You flipped onto your back as she pressed the button on the buttplug remote, and it immediately started pulsing. She smirked down at you.Â
âThereâs a couple settings, we can try âem all and see which one you like the most, âkay?âÂ
You nodded eagerly as she switched it off and threw the toy on the couch next to her dick and flavored lube. She straddled you, grabbing your face in both hands to connect your lips in a soft kiss. You hummed into her mouth before she pulled away.Â
âLemme give you head first, though.âÂ
âS-sure.âÂ
She hummed before smacking her wet lips onto yours. She planted wet, sucking kisses on your jaw, neck, and shoulder before she moved down your body. She lifted the shirt you had on just under your tits before she went crazy on your clit. She was flicking and licking and sucking between your legs as your fingers ran through her soft hair to pull her closer. Your moans and noises of your pussy as she fucked you with her tongue and fingers filled the entire first floor of her home. You came so quickly on her tongue, squeezing the muscle and fingers in a bone-crushing grip. You could tell she liked it as much as you did by how she moaned into your cunt.Â
After you came down, Ellie instructed you to hold your legs up so she could see your ass. They were pressed to your chest, both your arms tucked into the crevice of your knees as Ellie prepped you for the toy.Â
Sheâd rubbed some of your cum in before she spat on it, and now she was drenching her fingers and opening in the lubricant as you watched.Â
âJust relax, âkay?âÂ
âYeah,â you nodded. You were a bit nervous, but your walls were clenching with want.Â
She nodded before gently rubbing your drenched hole with her pointer and middle finger, making you sigh. You felt her slowly push a finger in and you immediately started to squirm. Your body was so hot already.Â
âOkay?â She asked you gently.Â
âYeah mâgood,â you said in a wanton sigh.Â
She grinned before kissing the back of your thigh. You felt another finger at your entrance before a burning sensation took over when she slowly pressed it in, and your head dropped onto the cushion in a choked gasp.Â
âYeah? You like this shit?â She asked snarkily, but shock was evident in her voice.Â
âY-yeah, El, like it!â
âSo fucking cute, gonna fuck this ass so hard,â she whispered out, grinding her fingers deeper before pulling them out to squirt more lube on them.Â
She slowly pushed them back in and the lack of resistance made your toes curl.Â
âDo me a favor?âÂ
âM-mhm?â
âGet that niceân wet for me,â she said, shoving the emerald plug in between your twitchy fingers. You gripped it tight, releasing the hold you had on your legs so you could spread them. You brought your free hand down to your drippy cunt to spread the lips, exposing your clit. You slowly dragged the toy up and down your folds, a quiet, squishy sound joining the already sloppy noises in the room from Ellieâs fingers in your ass.Â
You could see her watching with a blush on her face, licking her lips as she prodded another finger at your clenching opening. You could feel the stretch more as she slowly popped the tip of it in, so you distracted yourself. You propped yourself on one elbow to bring the plug down to the entrance of your cunt, slowly fucking it into you. The silicone ridges dragged on your walls, and it made your eyes roll as you moaned softly. Ellie let out a shocked moan as she watched you fuck the plug in and out of your pussy. She leaned forward to spit on your clit, and you brought your shaky hand down to rub it. She mumbled curses out.Â
âThinking about me fucking this pretty pussy? Wanâme tâsplit you open again?â She hummed out messily. She was just as fucked up as you were, and it made you squeeze.Â
âYeah, daddy,â you moaned out softly, fucking the toy into yourself faster as Ellie fucked three fingers into your ass. âShit!âÂ
âUh huh, nasty slut, look at you milking that fuckinâ toy.âÂ
You picked up the pace of your shallow thrusts and she matched you, fucking even harder into your ass. You brainlessly brought your wet fingers up to your tits, roughly grabbing at both your nipples in attempts to mimic Ellieâs hands on you. You felt the familiar pull in your gut, but it was so much stronger, and you knew it was going to hit you hard. You were going to cum so quick!Â
âEllie,â you could barely get your squeaky warning out, âThi-think mâgonna, gâna make a m-ess!âÂ
âYeah, wanâit baby, make me wetâ â
âMâgonnaâ!â
You cut yourself off with a sharp gasp as colors exploded behind your eyelids, the hand at your tits slamming onto the cushion to dig your nails into it. Your shouts of pleasure overtook the sputtering sounds of wetness that shot out of you. You pulled the toy out and rubbed quick circles on your clit with it, making you release more juices all over Ellieâs expensive couch. She didnât even seem to care with how hard she was still fucking your ass, whispering nasty curses at you, talking you through it, calling you sloppy, calling you hers. Your legs were trembling as both holes quivered in release.Â
Your sprays were starting to die down with the circles on your clit, Ellieâs fingers slowing.Â
Your eyes slowly peeled open, and you were met with her⌠high ass ceiling! You smiled as you felt her place kisses all over your thighs.Â
âTired?â she mumbled out against your knee.Â
You slowly shook your head when you regained your ability to move.
âWanâmore.â
And she smirked.Â
Ellie moved you onto your stomach, âif she kept fucking you like this, you were going to die! â your face shoved into her cushion so you were surrounded by her scent. Your ass was, once again, propped up on Ellieâs expensive fucking pillows that you were about to stain with your sopping cunt, but neither of you cared. She was lubricating the plug from behind you, the gooey noises from the slippery liquid filling your ears.Â
You shouldâve never hit that fucking aphrodisiac of a joint when she passed it to you: you never wanted to have sex so fucking bad in your life. You just lost your virginity a few hours ago; Whatâs happening to you?!
You couldnât think of anything except Ellie and cumming and Ellieâs cum! You wanted her cum inside you so bad, you want to drown in her with every chance sheâd give youâ
âReady, baby?âÂ
âYes, daddy, mâready, need it sâbad,â you muffled into the cushion, your cheek squished against it. You sounded so⌠far away.Â
âListen tâyou, all floaty,â she murmured. You could hear her grin through it, it made your toes curl, âFeelinâ good?âÂ
âSâgood, daddy, fuck me please?âÂ
ââŚLook at me, babe.âÂ
You used all your energy to lift yourself up onto your elbows turning your sweaty, thoughtless head towards her, gazing over your shoulder and into her gentle, concerned eyes. Sheâs so beautifulâ
âBaby?âÂ
âHm?âÂ
âWhy're you smilinâ?âÂ
âMâhappy,â you felt yourself grin harder.Â
âYeah?âÂ
âMhm,â you nodded lightly. âWâna fuck.âÂ
ââKay,â she nodded, her searching gaze still lingering on your face. âTap my thigh twice.âÂ
You reached a limp hand behind you, immediately following her instructions.Â
âYou do that when you wanna stop, okay?â You nodded, you felt like a bobble head. You want her in your guts now.Â
âWhat're you gonna do when you wanna stop?âÂ
You paused.
Then tapped her thigh twice. You dropped your head on the cushion again.Â
You felt her kiss down your back. You sighed happily.Â
She slowly rubbed your clit and you jolted, before pushing your hips back onto her fingers. She was planting gentle kisses all over your back and shoulders to relax you. You let out a whine at the feel of her lips on you.Â
Then you felt the silicone on your hole. You moaned into the cushion in excitement and anticipation, you needed it to pulse inside you so badly.Â
âWhatâre gonna do when you wanna stop?â She repeated, her breathing heavy.Â
You slapped her thigh a bunch of times. You needed her to know you wanted it. You needed this so badly! You needed to know she wanted you!
Then you felt her pop the tip of it inside you. You cried out in appreciation as your holes clenched tight, trying to suck the toy deeper into you. She was pressing soft kisses all over your spine as she slowly pushed it in. You hadnât realized that you were grinding your clit into the soft fabric of the pillow under you. Â
âSuch a good girl, taking it so easy,â You felt her push the last little part of it inside your ass before the little jewel at the end of it was poking out of you. It was so foreign, but you couldnât help the satisfied sighs and soft cries as you pussy dripped all over her pillows and couch.Â
You felt her plant one more kiss at the end of your spine before you felt the vibrations stir in your ass.Â
âFuck, oh god! Mââaah!â
âYeah? Feels fucking good, doesnât it?âÂ
You didnât even have the ability to think of an answer before you felt her dick poke at the entrance of your cunt, slowly sliding in. Every wire in your brain went into overdrive as the pulsing of the toy and her cock rattled your insides in unison. She was slowly fucking her dick into you, sliding in deep so her tip bumped into your cervix, making you let out a muffled shout into the couch cushion.Â
âFuckmedaddywanâitharderâ!â
Your quick babbles were cut off as she sped up her thrusts, both her hands planted at the end of your back so she could rock you back and forth on her dick. She was drilling you, your slick coating the balls of her strap. You felt yourself slowly drifting away, your eyes crossed in your head and drool spilling down your cheek. All you could think about was Ellie. EllieEllieEllieâ!
âMâright here, babygirl, I gotchu,â she cooed at you as she dug you out and you went limp. You heard the gushy sounds of your pussy and fuck, you were going to squirt so hard you felt it in your toesâ
You felt the vibrations in your ass increase and you let out shouts of bliss, her tip beating your cervix just how you needed with every thrust. For the first time in your life, your brain was silent: no doubt, no loathing, no anxiety. Just pure ecstasy. You felt so fucking full. Full of her and joy and love! You love her and you never wanted her to leave you again. You love her you love herâ
âMâyours, daddy, promise!â Tears pricked at your eyes as that hot feeling grew in your stomach. Your heart was pounding, and you couldnât think, you just rambled as pleasure and happiness and love rushed through you. You were about to cum, all over her, all for herâ!
âShhh, I know, baby, itâs okayâ â
âDonât wanâanyone else! Mâyours, always yours!â
You donât remember when, but Ellie had pulled out of you. And the vibrations stopped. But you were still riding that edge, this close to your peak. Your fists clenched tight, and your hips bucked back to meet hers even though she wasnât there to catch them. You heard Ellie gently call out your name from your side as she rubbed your back in attempts to slow your fuzzy babbling, âLook at mâ â
âAlways loved you, daddy, always been you, mâyours, mâall youâ â
You cut yourself off with moans of her name and incoherent shouts and sobs of love you so much! I love you! as your orgasm ripped through you. Your thighs trembled as colorful specs of glitter exploded in your vision. You heard yourself screaming out as wetness splattered all over you and the couch and everywhere, and it didnât stop. Your euphoria was so strong, your clenching cunt spraying as your ass squeezed around the plug shoved deep inside you. You were just shaking and crying and cumming and cumming and cummingâ
You donât know how much time passed, but you were still shaking as tears rolled down your cheeks. You couldnât feel the plug inside you and Ellieâs strap was gone: you were pressed against her bare chest, your tits pressed together as she held you close. She was rubbing your back as she pressed gentle kisses to the side of your sweaty head, gently humming in your ear. You slowly brought your arm up to limply throw around her waist. You couldnât say anything.
âHi, honey,â She barely whispered in your ear. âCan you look at me?âÂ
You slowly shook your head. You felt her kiss your head again.Â
âSâfine, just breath, okay?âÂ
You nodded again. And your eyes welled up some more.Â
She mustâve heard your sniffling because she immediately pulled back to gently caress your cheek. You tried to turn your head to hide in the cushion, but she wasnât having it.Â
âCâmon angel, itâs just me, okay?â
You slowly redirected your gaze to hers, your vision blurry as you studied her features. You cried harder, sobbing as you nestled into her shoulder.Â
She didnât press you after that, she only held you tighter. She whispered gentle shhhs and sâokay, baby, mâheres as you wept into her sweaty skin.Â
You know she heard your confession of your long-lasting feelings for her, and even though she didnât seem upset with you, you couldnât shake the embarrassment, confusion, and despair that overtook you.Â
But she held you. She held you so tight.Â
After your gasped sobs eased into soft whimpers and shaky exhales, Ellie guided you upstairs and into her bathroom, strong arms wrapped around your waist to steady your uncoordinated movements.Â
She lifted you onto the counter and pressed a soft kiss to your forehead before moving to the shower to turn it on. All you did was stare at her black towel hanging from the wall rack. You still couldnât think.Â
You heard her shuffling around before she moved back to you, easily easing you off the counter and into the shower, making sure to place you under the warm water first.Â
You gaped at the droplets sliding down the shower wall and she rubbed the lathered sponge into your skin softly. She littered you with kisses the entire time: on your face, shoulder, fingers, anywhere she could reach. But you couldnât move, and neither of you said anything.Â
After Ellie rinsed you off, she gently dried your coils and face while kissing your nose. You allowed her to wrap you in a towel, gently drying off the rest of your body as you looked off into nothing.Â
âCâmon, honey,â she whispered into your ear as she moved behind you, holding onto your waist and walking you to her bed to sit you down, her soiled blanket already discarded on the floor.Â
It seemed like everything was moving in slow motion as you gazed around her room: the lights were twinkling like fireflies, her fan in the corner of the room whirring like gusts of wind in your ears, the strings of the rug under your feet reminding you of clouds.Â
She softly called your name as she walked in front of you. Your legs fell open so she could stand between them, âLook at me.âÂ
You took a deep breath before meeting her tender gaze. She cupped your cheeks, softly rubbing her thumbs into them, âYou needa eat and drink something, okay? Want some water?âÂ
You nodded.
âIs it okay if I leave for a secâ â
You shook your head quickly as tears filled your eyes at the thought of her leaving. You need her close, you need her here with youâ
âShhh, not gonna go, not leaving, Iâm right here,â she comforted immediately, planting more kisses all over your face.Â
âWant some clothes?â You shook your head, and she nodded gently. She gave your lips one more kiss before ushering you to stand. She walked over to her dresser and grabbed her pine-scented lotion and ointment. She moved behind you, rubbing the soothing cream on your ass before moisturizing your skin, the pine surrounding you. You calmed down at the smell.
âOkay, baby, come lay down.âÂ
She grabbed your wrist gently as she moved you to your side, telling you to lay on your stomach as she pulled a new blanket from her linen cabinet. You obeyed silently.Â
You were instantly surrounded by warmth as she tucked you into her forest-scented covers. You heard her shuffling behind you before she walked around to her side in a new pair of boxers.Â
She laid next to you, pulling you into her chest as you breathed her in, sighing contently into her skin. She smelled so fucking good! You grinned.
She mustâve felt it as she pressed kisses to your head, âWhatâre you cheesing for?âÂ
You shook your head and grinned harder, nestling deeper into her neck. She laughed lightly.Â
âWeâll talk in the morning, okay?â She whispered out to you.
You nodded, eyes shut.Â
You dreamt of pine-filled meadows.Â
OOOOOOWEEEE alright bookies thatâs it :p i already got ideas 4 the next part LOOOOOL so yeah gonna start writing that soon. hope yâall liked it and the wait 4 the real smut was worth it. lots to comeeeeÂ
hope its proofread enough lol i always think that it is n then i go back and see a bunch of errors
pt. 6
shoutout to my wittle taglist𼺠love yall so bad n thank u for being interested in this little project i created :D @fandomshitpostingqueen, @nymphetkoo, @sawaagyapong , @gold-dustwomxn , @amitycat , @nil-eena , @elsivy , @constellieationn , @letsreadsomesins-shallwe :3
#ellie williams smut#ellie x fem reader#ellie williams#black!oc#black!reader#ellie x reader#ellie williams x reader#ellie williams au#ellie williams x black!reader#lesbian#works đ§§ŕŁŞ#ellie tlou#ellie the last of us#scent of the pine. ĚĽ*ŕł
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staying in the north because thatâs home
weâre doing theon chapters next lads itâs about to get very sad in here. also theon has more chapters so this one is a little longer. tldr on theonâs adwd arc:
FIRSTLY I kept track of his reek rhymes it goes leek bleak meek leek squeak cheek leak weak freak sneak wreak peek freak shriek meek peek weak sneak
Secondly, just for reference, his chapter names are Reek I, Reek II, Reek III, The Prince of Winterfell, The Turncloack, A Ghost in Winterfell, and Theon. When I saw âTheonâ I genuinely cheered out loud.
I like these chapters a lot because thereâs a lot to analyze without (at least to me) being all that plot heavy. They just like, go to a wedding then hang out at Winterfell. Meanwhile Theon is losing his mind and also connecting spiritually with a nine year old.
I think itâs soooo funny that everyone is like âoh that Tully Temperâ as if the northmen arenât just as unpleasant as cat hoster lysa edmure and blackfish lol. like these are the bitchiest people in the world omg.
letâs goo
we are just opening with eating a alive rat letâs get into this shit.
kyra story is horrifying. the characterization for her is interesting as she introduces us to ramsay's little most dangerous game playground - ramsay truly sets her free to give her a headstart and she realizes she won't be able to find her way home on her own so she goes to the one person she knows is both skilled enough to help and likely willing to help, which is theon. but theon in that moment is still just steeped in his selfishness; he's almost more angry at kyra for not splitting up so he could get away than at ramsay for hunting them down and gruesomely murdering her.
Ramsay was clad in black and pinkâblack boots, black belt and scabbard, black leather jerkin over a pink velvet doublet slashed with dark red satin. In his right ear gleamed a garnet cut in the shape of a drop of blood.
the DRIP omg once again angry that the Northerners all wear the exact same ugly outfit when we could have gotten THIS
THEONSA QUOTE
but also his "she is only a girl" about arya marrying ramsay....that hurt me too
No. I never thought we would. Theyâre dead. Lord Wyman had them killed. Thatâs what I would have done if I was him.
first of all - i love this evil little kid lmao
second of all - i love that he very pragmatically is like "yeah those bitches should have realized they were gonna get got"
third of all - kinda love that he hangs around talking to theon. as i've been thinking about who will get the twins at the end, I think what's interesting here is that Little Walder, the "stupid" one, is the Frey that latches onto Ramsay while Big Walder, the "smart" one, seems to talk to everyone there, more intent on gathering information than purposefully currying favor with any one person, even from lowly, broken little Reek.
After the scratch the Young Wolf gave Lord Rickard, that may be somewhat less true than formerly. Be that as it may. Lord Stannis has taken Deepwood Motte from the ironmen and restored it to House Glover. Worse, the mountain clans have joined him, Wull and Norrey and Liddle and the rest. His strength is growing.
so weâre at Winterfell. This is how it shakes out-
WINTERFELL, STARK LOYALISTS: Manderly, Hornwood, Cerwyn, Tallhart, Locke, Hothor âWhoresbaneâ Umber WINTERFELL, BOLTON LOYALISTS: Bolton, Frey WINTERFELL, SHADY GROUPS: Ryswell, Dustin, FF Flints, Stout WITH STANNIS: Mors âCrowsfoodâ Umber, Mountain Clans (First Flints, Wulls, Liddles, Harclays, etc), Mormont, Glover, possibly WW Flints as well? IN THE WIND: Reed, Karstark, Skagosi
just listing that here so i have it somewhere.
"Has my bastard ever told you how I got him?â That he did know, to his relief. âYes, my ⌠mâlord. You met his mother whilst out riding and were smitten by her beauty.â âSmitten?â Bolton laughed. âDid he use that word? Why, the boy has a singerâs soul."
this one hurt my feelings. Especially in conjunction with Roose's "don't make me regret the day I raped your mother" and the way that's the comment that really gets under Ramsay's skin - I think he much prefers to tell himself that Roose was simply ~overcome with lust~ for his mother's beauty rather than Roose thinking she wasn't even worth the time it took to rape her
"You could be my man." "I'm no one's man."
screaming
interesting how both Barbrey and Wyman distrust Maesters
"And be quick about it. If sheâs not wet by the time Iâm done disrobing, I will cut off that tongue of yours and nail it to the wall.â Somewhere in the godswood, a raven screamed.
that's Bran btw
âPlease,â he murmured through his broken teeth, âI never meant âŚâ The words caught in his throat. âSave me,â he finally managed. âGive me âŚâ What? Strength? Courage? Mercy? Snow fell around him, pale and silent, keeping its own counsel. The only sound was a faint soft sobbing. Jeyne, he thought. It is her, sobbing in her bridal bed. Who else could it be? Gods do not weep. Or do they? The sound was too painful to endure. Theon grabbed hold of a branch and pulled himself back to his feet, knocked the snow off his legs, and limped back toward the lights. There are ghosts in Winterfell, he thought, and I am one of them.
THAT'S BRAN TOO. GODS WEEP AND THEY WEEP FOR YOU AND JEYNE THEON!!!!
The girls were glad to see him. They knew him by his smell. Red Jeyne loped over to lick at his hand, and Helicent slipped under the table and curled up by his feet, gnawing at a bone. They were good dogs.
i'm curious if this will come up again - that Ramsay's dogs know Theon (because he sleeps with them) and they seem to like him, and they're fairly well behaved despite being raised by Ramsay.
The gods could not kill Bran any more than I could. It was a strange thought and stranger still to remember that Bran might still be alive.
screaming
so there's the murdery mystery plot. what's interesting to me here is that once we get to the Prince of Winterfell, Theon stops referring to himself as Reek (until Ramsay rapes Theon & Jeyne on their wedding night). But in the Turncloak, he goes back to being his usual prickly self; he's picking up on what people aren't saying, he starts with his "jeyne jeyne rhymes with pain" as a substitute for the reek bit, and even when he's doing the reek bit he's not just using random words, he's using insults for himself - meek, weak, freak, etc. By the murder mystery, he's straight up snapping at people, interacting with people, actively lying for no real reason, and he seems to start really resenting the idea that he'll have to go back to being Reek. There's a level of barely concealed rage more an anything but it's not directed at the people around him, it's directed at Ramsay for the first time and it's directed at himself.
anyways, thereâs this clear shift as Theon starts breaking out of the brainwashing effect the torture has on him but it's not a shift into being mentally well it's just a shift back into being Theon Greyjoy and that means prickly, and that means weird magic stuff too.
The poetry. of theonâs chapters starting with his thoughts on kyra, mad at her for needing his help, to theon lying to get jeyne out of there, and grabbing her before he jumps, without even a thought in his head about leaving her behind.
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Ket: Ay, Ari!
Arya: What now? Kinda busy at the moment.
Ket: Nah, nah, I know. Just was wondering what we should do with this.
Ket: *wave/flops IslanzadĂâs removed arm around*
Arya: *unintelligable curse in about eight different languages and dialects* PUT THAT BACK WHERE YOU FOUND IT YOU FREAK OF NATUREâ
Ket: BITCH! THIS THING IS JUST IN A FUCKING METAPHORICAL CARDBOARD BOX RIGHT NOW, WHAT THE FUCK DO ELVES DO WITH THEIR REMOVED LIMBS?!
Arya: ONCE AGAIN, /ASK GLEN!/
Glen: I DONâT KNOW EITHER SHE HASNâT WRITTEN THAT PART FOR ME YET!
Arya: JUST PUT IT BACK
Ket: *angry noise of frustrated author and 3 point swish shoots Islanzadiâs arm into the same box as Glaedrâs leg*
Ket: You two better come up with something elfy by the time I get off work.
Glen: we are literally the least elfy elves out there what the hell
Arya: Go find Brom. Brom always knows what to do. Even if heâs wrong he knows to do SOMETHING.
#ket talks to the characters#eragon#inheritance cycle#the cyclists#modern inheritance#the inheritance cycle#ket's modern inheritance cycle#the world of eragon
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If you had the chance to change something about the dance of the dragons (TV show or book), what would it be? For example, how a character dies, which team a house is on,or an entire character personally. How would you change it to make the story better, in your opinion?âĽď¸đ¤đđ
wow i almost missed this question! book wise i'm kinda okay with everything although i would say some people deserved to die more brutally than what they got ..
on the show however i would change so much⌠i would keep most of the book plot. if we have to do the rhaelicent friendship i would make it more in depth but keep it as toxic as it is. i would keep the book part where laena and rhaenyra are very close and possibly lovers. . it would be a good contrast to show the difference between real friendship and toxic friendship. i would give rhaneyra and alicent more conviction and agency. alot of times they are going back and forth instead of making decisions they want or for themselves. i would keep daemon more like book daemon, yes hes mercurial and hot tempered but he loves his family and various women, on the show it seems he only loves himself, not even his own kids. i would have kept how he got laena which was killing her fiance to have her, i'd show how much he loved her instead of treating her like shit and i would keep rhaenyra and laenor frequent visits to her and daemon and how she flied her personal maester to try to save her, and i would get rid of her stupid death scene, and keep the book version where he carries her to her dragon and him and rhaenyra stayed vigil over her body, that way when they fuck at her funeral it can be in grief instead of the most disrespectful shit ever, maybe then their kids wont look so fucking dejected at their wedding. oh yea i would make it seem like daemon actually loves his daughters instead of walking away from them after their mom dies and ignoring them after they got punched and pushed by a boy instead of smiling in the corner like a jackass... wait why am i rewriting everything?
i would have kept the scene where younger rhaenyra plays with baby aegon, i would have rhaenyra and aegon actually interact at least ONCE before they decide to go to war with each other. id have rhae actually have a moment or two with harwin so ppl won't be shocked she has 3 kids by him without even a kiss.i would like aemond to actually interact with helaena!
i would have like to known how cripsy was able to kill a guest at a wedding IN FRONT OF EVERYONE
i would have alicent smother viserys in his sleep, sorry.. or perhaps poisoning him this whole time, not this OOPS i heard a prophecy wrong
also fuck that prophecy, its worthless in the end, since arya fucking stark kills the NK she never knew or met before, truly aegon,viserys and rhaenyra are following a prophecy that ENDS HOUSE TARGARYEN, why the fuck would they even keep it in the show. my ass itches everytime they mention it
i would like to know how jace and luke feel being bastards , i would actually like to get to know them and the dragon twins. id let the older dragon twins actually have LINES instead of cutting them or nothing at all. also how stupid to cut baela scene, because when rhaenys joins you have no fucking idea why cause she was jjust like 'bye bitch this not my problem' after coming out the fucking ground after doing a terrorist attack
I would like to know why the velaryons are such fucking doormats for targaryens, corlys brother died and hes like WHOOPS. bitch your daughter is dead and you think they killed your son, what you mean oops.
i would have kept or had laena claiming of vhagar to see how its different than aemond. since they want him to be making mistakes and shit and having statements like we don't control dragons or not to be played with, well we see laena use her dragon for playing and fun even shooting fire and the dragon does eventually obey her and kill her (stupid shit) so we may as know why she had a better hold on vhagar. i wouldn't have made storms end a complete accident but rather a crime of passion.. so like the book he meant to kill him but once its over, 'what have i done?' its a Pyrrhic victory, he's drawn first blood and everyone will pay.. 'what did i do?'
season 2, no way i would merge rhaena with nettles, they have nothing AND I MEAN NOTHING in common .. a rich privileged timid girl whose already entitled to dragon and doesn't really need to pavlov dog a dragon vs a poor orphan who has nothing, possibly not even blood..just intelligence... can you imagine rhaena grabbing a sheep and slaughtering it ? i'm not even royalty or rich and i can't imagine grabbing one and bringing it anywhere for any purpose even if its a gain. and if shes getting shepherds help, even more boring. it doesn't hit the same but nice to know that just because addam and rhaena are black in the show, they are some how interchangeable with her, also cutting her has alot of consequences for battle scenes, for motivations,for changes in characters personality, for questions about blood and magic of targaryens and what she later becomes for the future which appears in later game of thrones books.
so for the long rant perhaps this was too much..
#hotd#game of thrones#house of the dragon#aemond targaryen#nettles#rhaena targaryen#daemon#rhaenyra#hotd critical#house of the dragon fanfic#house of the dragon season 2#laena velaryon#house targaryen
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recents tag game !
Thank you to @frstcorinthians for the tag! These seem real interesting...
Last Song - In The Airplane Over The Sea by Neutral Milk Hotel. When I told ya'll I was in an Indie Folksy mood I wasn't kidding.
Currently Watching - Just finished the latest episode of Loot on AppleTV+. I just love me some Maya Rudolph.
Three Ships - Arya/Gendry from Game of Thrones, before the show did, well... whatever it did with them. They were MAH BABIES and deserved so much more/better. I wish I had saved all those wonderful fics I had read.
Ned/Chuck from Pushing Daisies. I MISS THAT SHOW SO MUCH. It was amazing and if you haven't watched it yet, you should really give it a try.
And because I'm totally blanking on another ship that had taken over my life, how about Me/Sleep. I really need a new mattress...
Fav Colors - Lately I've been really into greens. Just give me a forest or something and I'll be happy.
Currently Reading - Masters Of The Air by Donald Miller (the audiobook). I can at least get some listening done during work. I've got about 7 hours left.
Currently Consuming - Black cherry seltzer water. Crisp.
Ya'll still reading this? NOICE.
Place of Birth - Portugal. It is what it is.
Current Location - JERSEY BITCHES. I'll be obnoxious about it only because we get so much shit for it.
Relationship Status - happily single with my cats to keep me company. Kinda over these dudes.
Last Movie - Tramps on Netflix. Just had to watch some baby faced Callum Turner.
Currently Working On - Packing for my Amsterdam trip! I promise when I get back I'll work on getting a new laptop battery and attempt to relearn gif making.
I see alot of my moots have already been previously tagged, so I'm tagging a few I didn't see: @staud, @shoshiwrites, @easycompanys, @harrycrozby @bobparkhurst, @violaobanion and @wexhappyxfew.
Enjoy! ⨠⨠â¨
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i donât think any asoiaf shippers have taken a fatter L than braimes lol brienne writing about jaime in that book after he left her crying and begging to go back to his sister is so cruel đ
After the finale, in the midst of our bitch fest, some of us did acknowledge that our ship got off kinda light? Arya fucked and then rejected Gendry, Jaime fucked and then abandoned Brienne, Jon fucked and then killed DanyâŚat least our couple protected each other, loved each other, and circumstances, not their desires, prevented them from being together. As I always say, even when we lose we win! đ.
I have wondered if D&D had some special antipathy for Braime though because they made it so demeaning for Brienne. Instead of evolving - heated convo into a kiss and then sex or something somewhat natural, they led into the sex scene by mocking Brienne for being a virgin and then made poor Brienne beg Jaime to stayâŚit was such a shitty thing to do to her after her highpoint of being knighted. Leaving it there would have been so much more respectful of the characters. D&D made so many choices in the end that felt cruel, cruel to the characters and to the fans. So strange.
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My Boyfriends Predicts each Game of Thrones Season Finale pt.3
A/N: My man get back from his cruise tomorrowww!!! Then itâs on to season 4! Also he told his his dads favorite episode is the red wedding đđđ my baby donât know what that is and was like âyeah I canât wait to watch that episode thenâ đ¤Śââď¸
- Catelyn will stay prisoner for a little while longer until Robb finds out the Kingslayer is back in custody andâŚidk
- Robb is gonna go talk to whatâs his face (Walder Frey) and get the other half of his army and march on Lannister Land [ohhhhhđŹ; if only thatâs how this show worked]
- Jon is either gonna link up with his buddies and escape or march on the wall and be like âIâm free nowâ[He said if I was him I wouldnât want to be any part of that march between five different people]
- Sansa might go back and hang out with her old lady friend at some point, he thinks she also want to get the fuck out of there. But isnât she about to be betrothed to whatâs-his-face? (Loras). Sansa will either do that or the queen will Marry Loras and maybe sheâll go with little finger. Whoâs this bitch gettin married to?đ¤ [Lmao kinda but we take the long routeđ]
- Arya will get dropped at Riverrun until her mom and Robb come to pick her up (probably get bullied a bit along the way) [baby have you learned nothing smh đ¤Śââď¸ ]
- Jamie, things are starting to look up for him. That guy might return Jamie for money. And he thinks someoneâs gonna try to rape Brienne again (sheâs gonna beat the shit out of them) [I donât care what anyone as to say to me, I will die on the Jamie/Brienne ship]
- Cersei is probably gonna have Ser Loras killed that way she doesnât have to marry him. [only in her dreams;for nowđĽ]
- Joffrey is gonna go, closer, like more and more insane. But at the same time heâs going to be controlled by his new wife. Joffrey is, uhâŚletâs seeâŚidk
- Margaery is doing really good. She manipulating Joffrey real good with that crossbow scene đ you know you like to kill people đ
- Tywin is gonna bonk his two kids on the head when they donât marry the people theyâre supposed to fuckâŚi mean marry. And heâs going to assume the more political side of the Kings job, likes heâs just going to be doing the kings political shit
- Tyrion, I think bro is actually going to like fumble to kingdoms bag. Like heâs gonna drop a bag of money in the street and make some poor kid rich. Heâs not gonna marry Sansa. Heâs gonna be like no dad, Iâm gonna marry this woman
- Loras should pick correctly𤌠careful who you pick [đđđ]
- And the old lady (Olenna) lit [Same, she my favđ
]
- Dany is coming back with a vengeance. Sheâs got an army, three dragons, and sheâs gaining armyâs as she conquers cityâs. So, yeah⌠sheâs winning in this game of chess [from a certain standpoint I suppose]
- Sam, bro might get fucking murdered. He might find Jon and be like âBuddy?!â And Jon gonna be like fuck theyâre gonna make me kill him⌠[I swear to god this boy is always thinking Sam is going to die, like let that man live in as much peace as he can find]
Add on after episode 6 bc I forgotâŚđŤ˘
- Bran is gonna go to the wall and be like đąđąwhereâs Jon?!?! But Jonâs gonna be out there with the bad guys, doing bad guy things like climbing the wall. And Brans gonna grow up and be big boy and control his wolf through his eyeballs⌠in his wheelchair ( someoneâs gonna get that man a wheelchair) [he not wrong about the wheelchair]
- Theon, broâs gonna die đ though he deserves it [Nah not death, though Iâd argue what he went through might have been worseâŚ]
Afterthoughts:
Shit is crazyyyyy but good
Same as alwayssssâŚDany is a Goddess đ and Joffrey is a Joke đ
#game of throne#game of thrones season 3#asoiaf#robb stark#jon snow#theon greyjoy#catelyn stark#catelyn tully#arya stark#sansa stark#bran stark#jamie lannister#tyrion lannister#tywin lannister#cersei lannister#stannis baratheon#joffrey baratheon#joffrey lannister#olenna tyrell#margaery tyrell#loras tyrell#danaerys targaryen#samwell tarly
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Thank you for kind words, it means a lot. I mean insecurities about art is kinda tricky because i mean nearly every artist is kinda insecure about their art sometimes, but almost like when a person people think as pretty or handsome talk about their insecurities and people see that as a "fishing for compliment", sometimes people look at your art and think it is nice and brush of your insecurities and it is kinda annoying. Anyway, thank you for kind words! I like to draw my favourite characters and scenes i like but hold back with fear of fucking up but i start to think use my blog as its original purpose again nowadays, after a little bit more practise! Here is the stech by the way
Lines are kinda rough and domerics expression came out a little bit colder than i wanted but i will try to correct those when i draw this as a decent artwork lol
Woman is ramsays mom btw, i like to think her as a bit chubby as well like her son.
About the discussion, jeyne is in fact a nice girl but i dont like the fact that she is constantly putting people (especially arya) down, i got really annoyed while reading the chapters that with sansa they mock arya, call her names and even after Jory, a man they know their whole life and always nice and kind to them gets killed brutally, they think about how much more handsome new guard that replaced jory, and even during her wedding she managed to squeeze how she is more prettier and cuter than real arya and she was the one who calls her arya horseface, COME ON GIRL! I don't think that nothing that happened to her is deserved, no one deserves that, she was just not one of my favourites (and sansa too)
And i absolutely hated theons guts too especially after reading how he treated captains daughter and kyra, he is a misogynist little bitch, but as i said, no one deserves to be flayed and raped
And for ramsay, yeah i think he would like to get claimed but be like the scene from scream "ooooh please dont kill me mr ghostface~" lol
I would love to see domeric and ramsays dynamics because domeric was longing for a sibling and ramsay was alone, i think if they would be in different circumtances, they could work as friends
By the way I AM ALSO A HUGE FAN OF TRUE CRIME TOO! I used to watch a lot of documentaries about serial killers while i was studying for uni and i still like to see content but i dont really have time nowadays which is sad. I used to talk nonstop about serial killer cases to my friends lol
Oh and you can call me she/her, i am afab,but thanks for kindness!
Okay, most of it i answered in dms, but once again, this art is gorgeous.
And yeah, about Ramsay and Domeric i often think that if Ramsay had someone close while growing up - someone different than Reek - like, if he was raised with Domeric, or even if he was somehow raised with other Roose's bastard, he would turn out differently. Of course, he would still be sadistic and all that but perhaps he would be better at controling himself and maybe slightly less unhinged? To quote Roose, he would just be less of a rabid dog, who can't control his instincts. Maybe i am too soft with characters but i would like him to have a friend in childhood, someone close.
Me when a character commits crimes against humanity and flays people alive: idc bruh đ¤ˇââď¸đŤŁđ
Me when that character is lonely and looked down at as kid because his a bastard: i need to hug himđ
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If Jon and his Baratheon darling were to have a girl I can think of a few names that would work:
Cassana - After Cassana Estermont, Robert's mother
Lyarra - After Lyarra Stark, Jon's grandmother
Arya - After Arya Stark, Jon's beloved little sister
Alysanne - After Good Queen Alysanne, shared ancestor for the two and a generally popular name in Westeros
Betha - After Queen Betha Blackwood, shared ancestor for the two and an Old Gods worshipper
I think we can rule out Cersei (any Lannister names really) or Lyanna because of the potential political headache
I kinda wanted it to be Cassana just to spite Rhaegar and Lyanna even more.
Since he is naming his daughter after the mother of the bitch who killed his dad đ
#ask#a song of ice and fire#yandere concept#yandere x reader#game of thrones#yandere imagine#house targaryen#house stark#jon snow#house baratheon#baratheon!reader
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10, 11, 13, 21 for the hate game?
worst part of fanon
more a general fandom thing but when characters are boiled down to a trope. happens a lot in m/m fanfic because its all like romcoms essentially and since theyre gay they cant just have a gay best friend character they need a girl best friend. often the girl best friend is the canonical girlfriend of one of the guys in the pairing cos the author feels bad about ignoring her. and she is either super nice and cute or she is the sassy bitch. (example for the les mis freaks: cosette is the former, eponine is the latter. IYKYK) HATE this shit soooo much. sansa arya margaery ygritte The Jeynes all fall victim to this. they'll be there to quip and say 'đ you boys are so stupid im #smartgirl you guys are obviously in love' basically becoming an author surrogate. cringe and evil and sexist despite being a transparent attempt at staying feminist cos you feel bad about ignoring women in favour of yaoi.
number of fandom-related words you've filtered
specifically asoiaf:
i just find them particularly annoying. looking through i realised i dont have much asoiaf stuff blacklisted... i think its because i like looking at things that make me mad. i like the adrenaline đ remind me to spend an hour blocking all the x reader tags im sick of seeing them and they never just tag it x reader. eugh.
worst blorboficiation
look. as a maegor the rapist and joffrey the psychopath blorbofier i really cant judge. i mean THEON is problematique and also a rapist. but its honestly aegon ii.... i dont get it!!! the eldest son thing + I GUESS jilted by his father is the only parts i get. he's just boring and lame and sucks idk đ!!! he's just a incel to me im sowwy.... maybe if i actually watched hotd id like him Who knows. god and he doesnt even fuck a milf... the actor is cute though i like his british face.
for the main series. im sorry its roose!!! i follow and am followed by wonderful roosegirls but ill never understand it. girl WHY. roosefuckers i understand but roose as ur meow meow? ur poor meow meow?? genuinely please explain to me i am so curious...
part of canon you think is overhyped
idk if im answering this right but azor ahai/prince that was promised. i cant get into it. there are prophecies i love like the valonqar or the quaithe stuff but AA/PTWP are kinda mid... i think its because people too often use it as a way to go like MY guy is the most important no its MY guy. and its like guys thats so fckn lame!!! you cannot convince me that aa/ptwp are the Main point of the story
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it fucking sucks that like 50% of fire and blood volume I is weird sex rumors but I just realized that if grrm wanted to be truthful to how historians in the past smeared political figures they hated, there should've been more Gay Sex Rumors. it happened to julius caesar and marie antoinette. now I want f&b volume II to have the pro blackfyres claim that daeron ii's half dornish sons fornicate with each other and grrm will let the audience argue endlessly if this means baelor/maekar is canon.
No literally okay obviously i am more of a History Enjoyer than a History Understander but generally when youâre trying to smear someone you accuse them of a) incest or b) being gay and the targs are RIPE for that shit why WOULDNT their enemies accuse them of being gay incest motherfuckers???? WHY DID NO ONE ACCUSE RHAENA THE LESBIAN OF FUCKING ALYSANNE???? personally i think roose bolton should have been like âand you KNOW alysanne only outlawed prima noctus bc she was flicking her sister and wanted to be left alone to lez in peave by her CUCK brotherâ like come on. mushroom should have accused aegon and aemond of having a sick nasty affair!! why did people not focus in on rhaenyra and laena fucking more!!!! gyldayn quotes every single man in the realm who ever called rhaenyra a whore just to be like âwell theyâre probably being dramaticâ YOU ARENT SLICK YOU RAGGEDY BITCH WHY DID I NOT GET THE DETAILS.
but anyways iâve said before that rhaena being a lesbian was george actually realizing that People Are Gay kinda late in his life (i forgive him, he is after all just an old man from jersey named george) and trying to rectify his mistake of making asoiaf so het and iâm so serious about that tbh. george has always prided himself on being historically accurate especially when it comes to the incel crowd (for lack of a better term here) getting mad that Brown People And Women Exist. like, heâs very insistent that female warriors like arya brienne asha are not ahistorical, that women were vicious and politically active just like catelyn and cersei and rhaenyra and alicent etc etc so i do think that as the culture changed and people started more openly speaking of how gay people got along in history, george really started thinking about the way heâs portrayed queerness in his own story. iâm not saying i think weâre gonna get dick sucking on page but i AM saying i think he goes more hardcore about the queer subtext & probably weâre likely to see more queerness in f&b ii: 2 fire 2 blood the way we got all this subtextual stuff and main queer characters in f&b.
so yes. baelor and maekar WILL be fucking thanks!!!!!!
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Towel Gremlin went from 'I have the Arya Brainrot' last week to 'Okay, but I can kinda see where theyre coming from when they say Murtagh is a horse girl and I think I'm starting to really like him.'
Guys, I NEVER talk about Murtagh at length, except for today.
HOW DOES THIS WET CAT OF A MAN DO IT?!
Oh, she also said that Brom is very much a silver fox and probably got lots of bitches (my translation, not her words, the meaning stays the same) while he was in Carvahall.
#modern inheritance#inheritance cycle#eragon#the cyclists#the world of eragon#murtagh#murtagh morzanson#murtagh morzansson#murtagh thornsrider
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Slutty Robyn au.
Joffrey being her childhood bully whom she couldn't report cause that fucker was the city mayor's son and his mother was a crazy bitch who'd prolly run you over for looking at her baby boy wrong.
Robyn kinda just tried to stay away from him all middleschool and then high school comes on and he sees Robyn (puberty hit her like a truck and she finally stopped hanging out with Arya tomboy and more with babygirl sansa) and he's hooked.
He tries to approach her softly but she's scared and refuses to come near him. He asks his mother for help cause he's a goner. Crazy Cersei just going like 'threaten her to become yours, you can have anything baby.'
And Joffrey just traps Robyn in an empty classroom oneday after school as promises to get her thrown out of school (most prestigious private school that she's in because of scholarship) under cheating allegations unless she becomes his gf and kisses him.
Poor Robyn has no choice. She's his now.
Joffrey is a toxic possessive controlling and too touchy feely bastard but Robyn is his obsession so what do?
Ooh, that's a way to go about it. He would be obsessed so easily and just want to have her
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This is What I Call, the Start of Season 3 of Libertys Kids
Sybil Ludington
I first learned about her from Rejected Princesses and have fallen if love with her. Sheâs like Arya Stark.
Funny because Sarah and Sybil would have a Sansa and Arya dynamic
James is a natural horseman now
Sybil straight up ready to kill
âIâm so proud of my daddy who has a target on his headâ
âBut why arenât you fighting?â Imagine Sarah heard that and said âListen bitch,â
Sarahs ballgown should just be solid pink
Of course Arnold sees Sarah right away. Thank goodness she has a chaperone. I bet Mrs. Adams knows heâs kinda flirty with her and keeps an eye on them.
âI had hoped our paths would cross paths again Ms. Phillips, away from the field of battleâ GOD why arenât they waltzing while heâs saying this, that would be intense.
In fact their entire conversation could have been discussed while they were waltzing but that would take the animators way more work.
Imagine Benedict starting his passionate rant while dancing and then dancing
Sybil gotta be starting shit for no reason
I bet Sarah and Hannah would bond tho.
âIâm comingâ âLike hell you areâ
Sybils eager af to fight
Sheâs that girl at school that would punch the bully for me
The last shot of the entire city on fire before the dramatic music plays đąđą
They just shot a fucking cannonball at a house
Sneaking out to go report hell yeah
Imagine getting to storm into a place on a horse. Kickass.
Once again, Sarah stalks Arnold into a danger zone
The horse even went into the water
Itâs like that scene from home alone
Stupid af but it worked
Arnold is done with this army shit. He worked hard to earn that rank.
âIâve come to think of you as like a daughter.â
âHeâs destroying himself with his own bitterness and anger.â
I feel like Sybil would be mean af to Sarah just because sheâs British and Sarahs doing her best to stay civil and in control. And then James would yell âEnough Sybil! Sheâs my friend!â
Lafayette Arrives
The drag episode đ
Course Bens surrounded by bitches
Instant connection between Henri and Lafayette. You know heâs gonna adopt this child.
How old is Henri supposed to be by now? Thirteen Iâd say. He should be growing.
Henris like I adopted this French guy
I need a dramatic retelling of Lafayettes drag escapade
LiberTAY
Lafayette would be the most anticipated
Why is Henri allowed in Congress
Wtf just a second ago yaâll didnât want him
What if politicians gathered for meetings in bars?
Lafayette is an America fanboy
Theyâre like ewwww itâs French
Omg heâs coming this way
Pretend itâs chicken and dumplins
RETREAT CALMLY
Ben is cunning af
Weâre French but weâre American Yay
The Hessians Are Coming
Those girls arenât the Schuyler sisters are they
Those laughs are not believable
No, theyâre German girls
When heâs an asshole but his horse loves you
Here he goes ranting again.
âI learned it from school lolâ âWho needs to go to school to build fortsâ
âAre you trying to sway the Hessians into leaving us?â âIâm a reporter jackassâ
âIâm not a soldier, Iâm a musicianâ Yeah like how Tom was not a soldier but a scientist
âYour witness is dead so youâre guiltyâ
Another victory for Arnold that will be ignored
James and this German dude had to puss next to each other for weeks.
âYou guys are cannibalsâ whut
Will both of you stop acting like dicks please.
Thatâs more like it.
Arnold gets screwed over so much
That poor little german boy. Of course he didnât want this James.
Arnold marching into battle shamelessly without permission.
Arnold saved James life without knowing it
Yeah we all quit
Sarahs reaction to Arnold having his leg shot is not realistic at all. L
Polish guy said go to school
Oh his name is Gunther
The last line of this episode did not age well at all.
Valley Forge
Arnold (the ARNOLD) is in this!?
Oh look mini log cabins
Von Strudel really came in on a sled like the white witch
âNo meat! No meat!â
RIP Aaron Carter. This poor kid.
So its like diet bread
I can feel the cold
Girl went outside in the cold after being outside for stays
Where did the gust of wind go?
I love Lafayettes loyalty
Imagine having to poop outside in the snow
Bare ass exposed to the snow cold
âCorporal, yell at him for me.â
âHow can I appreciate what you donât have?â
Henri would definitely become a soldier in the adult version of the show
Henris the mascot. I need him in an eagle mascot costume now.
Imagine an eagle sports mascot fighting a king george mascot.
This dude is obnoxious
Ok now not so much
Omg Franklin sent Von Strudel
George Washington being a dad
Slide to the left. Slide to the left. Cha cha real smooth.
Sarah why arenât you more worried
Allies at Last
Here comes Peggy Shippen
Nice dress Ben
That excited little barefoot leap on the cold concrete ground
Smart move on James and Moses
So without Ben or Moses around, that would put Sarah in charge. Since sheâs still loyalist Iâm sure she welcomed Andre at first
âThe less I say about her, the better.â
Sarah, are you dancing with tory guys at these balls? I bet you are.
And now she wants Andre and Peggy out and I donât blame her.
Oh look, hats
Oh no Moses the white guy your name is on the list
âIâm suddenly in the mood for English teaâ petty Ben
Why are they telling Sarah all this stuff, sheâs friends with Americans
Poor Henri being laughed at
âHave you forgotten that you are English?â âNot in the slightest.â
But Moses seems like such a nice guy
SIGN A PUBLIC OATH OF LOYALTY
âThis is because Iâm Jewish.â
Pop off White Moses
Oh you motherfucker
Oh now you wanna sign it
âA lot more people will have to stand up for equality to come true.â
And now France is their ally.
#sarah phillips#libertys kids#james hiller#liberty's kids#ben franklin#benedict arnold#peggy shippen#john andre#henri lefebvre#general howe#amrev#american history#sybil ludington#lafayette#george washington
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Not saying all Zuko or Sansa stans are like this, but as a fan of both characters it does kinda annoy me when the give parts of Aang or Arya's storyline to their so-called faves ("The Cave of Two Lovers", Appa/Momo, Nymeria, being Jon's favorite sister, etc). Zuko and Sansa don't need Arya and Aang's accessories; they're already interesting enough on their own.
PREACH! I keep saying, the Avatar fandom doesn't like the real, complex, deep character Zuko is. They like the awkward turtle duck that is scared of everything and wouldn't hurt a fly, can have all of his issues resolved by getting a hug from whatever girl they ship him with/use as a self-insert to fantasize about him. Plus, a lot of people are REALLY butthurt that Aang is the protagonist, not him.
As for Sansa, oh my God, the fandom is fucking stupid when it comes to her. Like, I've seen people try to give her Arya's, Lyanna's, Dany's, Jon's, and even Cersei's and Littlefinger's traits/plots. And ALL these people claim to like her, which is clearly not true.
Also, the way GOT essentially validated that by doing dumb shit like making her wear armor for no real to show she's "badass", praise her brilliance for "discovering" nonsensical plots, and, more important, completely dropping her Vale plot and instead gave her Jeyne's story so she could be abused again, to an even worse degree.
Then they had the fucking nerve of having her saying "Well, if I had not been imprisoned, humiliated, beaten, raped and nearly killed, I wouldn't be this cynical, bitchy, arrogant, stupid, fake shell of a 'cool character' the showrunners want me to be, so I'm happy all of that happened" and SOMEHOW didn't realize what they're saying is just "put the dumb bitch in her place", not them making her a stronger character.
I REALLY could make a whole meta on how GOT ruined Sansa and Arya as characters by completely missing the point of their arcs.
Arya's went from "The lone wolf dies, but the pack survives" to "Fuck you, got mine". Sansa's went from "Hope and kindness are the only things that can lead to the end of all this horrors" to "I'm grateful to my abusers for showing me how the world works."
Like I said before, these people saw all of the Stark girls interactions with the Hound and didn't realize that their dynamics are about the girls defeating his cynism, proving him wrong, and saving him from himself - Sansa even explicitly prays that the gods will gentle the rage inside of him, and last we hear of Sandor, we are told "The Hound is dead, Sandor Clegane is at rest"
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Thank you so much for posting these chapters. I have no idea what you were talking about when you said we should keep our expectations low. This was absolute perfection and surpassed any expectations I ever had. Rhaena and Bealaâs Picknick was so beautifully written, you wrote Beala perfectly and I loved her spontaneous haircut moment which will explain whatever that was that she had on her hair in the last dinner episode. You created such chemistry between them and really brought across the feel of how they have grown estranged yet are still familiar with each other. I loved everything they said about Deamon, that was such an accurate portrayal of his motivations. My favorite part of their dialogue was Rheana roasting the Strong boys like grilled chickpeas like Jesus Christ that was so satisfying to read thank you for including that. On another note their conversation made me cry when they talked about Leana and again, you really understood the assignment. Her letters were so heartbreaking to read and everything the twins went through because of the blacks made me so angry. Them plotting together was awesome and the plans they came up with seemed very logical and plausible. I officially became a Beala fan the moment she said she planned on killing Daemon. I would pay so much money to see that.
Maegora the cat was so cool and Rheanaâs take on how the blacks younger dragons are stunted was so good.
And oh my god AEMOND!!! Adult Aemond is so amazing and I loved how you showed how different he is from Daemon through Bealaâs eyes ( I hate it when people compare them ). I swear, your take on Aemonds character is better than any other I have ever seen. Your Aemond is canon now. I love him. He seems to human and I just love him and Rheana together. Heâs such a sweetie and you actually give him a personality unlike most fanfic writers. Him telling Beala what helps Helaena with her moonblood was so sweet I love love love him. He would be such a good husband to Rhaena, please let them marry and band together with Beala, Veamond and Leanor and the greens against Deamon and the blacks.
Honestly, I will probably reread these chapters a dozen times over, if this were a book these chapters would be the ones Iâd annotate with with five different colors because theyâre brilliant in so many different ways. There were so many phrases that made me giggle or want to cry and they were all so wonderful.
You absolutely DESTROYED team black in these chapters. My brain is now filled with Aemond and Rhaena and all I want is to see them talk and be happy together. Thank you so much đđđ
Thank you!!!
Idk, I kinda hate it still, but it's there. Lol thank you (and everyone) for reading! It is zero fun to just have chapters in draft mode that no one's read. Idk, it's like, I get ambitious sometimes and start things on impulse, and then I have Editor Me who's just like "This is shit!!! Delete!!!" so yeah, the feedback is really nice. Thanks for staying with it after a 3-month wait and for reading a 20k conversation with no complaints đš
Team Black is fine! I have destroyed no one. Lololol. đ
I didn't want to make Rhaena a "hater," but they went out of their way to have Rhaena voice that she felt neglected. Are we assuming that her relationship with Daemon improved with the addition of a stepmother and five boys? They went out of their way to have Laena say out loud that she was a placeholder wife, that she was unhappy in Pentos, and they sat down and agreed that "kill this bitch with fire and have celebratory funeral sex on her grave while the ashes are warm" was how they were going to treat Laena. It's too in-your-face to ignore, and in light of that, I just couldn't write Baela as "Yay, lemme go risk my life fighting for my stepmother. Marrying Jace is peak goals." I was literally unable to write that. I want to do happy shipping, but it's also a fix-it fic.
Daenerys, Sansa, Arya, Brienne, Asha, Cersei, Catelyn, Margaery and Olenna didn't exist and do schemes and burn shit down just for Rhaena and Baela to stand in the background like invisible elevator bellboy people saying âWine, my queen," while being married off to randos. Nope.
I just want them to be on the same page when it comes to destroying their enemies. If their in-canon enemies happen to be the bulk of the characters on Team Black then đ¤ˇđžââď¸ đ Rhaena's just sort of giving Baela the hard sales pitch to join a side that's not Team Black or Team Green but a third, secret two-woman operation like
Thank you for liking my version of Aemond!đ He's a ton of fun to write.
To be fair, he doesn't have a ton of personality in the show. He and Aegon have a little bit more meat on them than the other kids, but they're mostly just there. Like 90% of these hotd characters are just 1-d stick figures with wigs on imo. It took me three months to figure out a personality for Baela that made sense. đ Like, on one hand, you're doing a fanfic and anything goes, but on the other hand, like I'm always worrying about what's ooc?
I'm going with "Teenage boy who was raised by a knight templar and his sister-mother. Used to be a nerd. Had a glow-up but is still a nerd. Wants to be a jock but doesn't really like sports. Is considering his career options."
I have no idea why the Daemon comparisons are so popular. All the Targaryen men have the same "Draco in leather pants" look. Daemon's been living his life one 10-year exile at a time and Aemond's a post time-skip baby. The first time he's even meeting his uncle is during his eye-gouging incident.
I mean, is this the face of someone looking for a role model to emulate or someone making a kill list?
Daemon actually did very little during that scene. He's really just standing there spectating for the most part. And then he and Rhaenyra exile themselves to Dragonstone for 6+ more years. Why would Aemond care about Daemon?
I honestly just think Martin and the writers (and half of the fandom, I guess) believe that Daemon is so cool that all the young kids in Westeros have Morally Grey Rogue Prince⢠collectible action figures, (dead wives sold separately).
I sort of assume it's just a thing from F&B where Daemon wasn't banished from King's Landing and was around doing a ton of cool shit while Aemond was growing up???
In swhhw, Aemond's only interest in Daemon is killing him.
I wanted Rhaena to sort of just have a hypersensitive "I'm allergic to Targ bullshit" reaction to Aemond because she's been on Dragonstone for years and needs time to decompress, while Baela has the more objective stance, while Aemond's mostly just sort of offended that she's comparing him to her deadbeat hobo dad.
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