#Warrior cats rewrite

[javatello]

Wc rewrite doodles, my rewrite ideas can be found here!

[official-darkforest]

Sparrow/White Family Tree - Mick’s Rewrite

for the sake of de-cluttering the family tree:

cinderlion only have their first litter

sorrelstripe’s mate is undisclosed

speckletail and whitefog/one-eye are no longer sisters

larksong is now stormcloud’s kit- his other parent is undisclosed

other misc. notes:

jayfeather has been moved to a different tree

sandstorm is now spsrrowpelt (halftail) and whitefog’s youngest daughter

longtail and runningwind had a budding interest in one another but runningwind was murdered before it could blossom

longtail and mousefur bonded over the loss of runningwind and even further when they were in the elder’s den. longtail would admit he may have felt romsntic feelings towards her while mousefur kept her perspective under lock and key. nobody knows how she really feels about longtail, but regardless of what it was she cared deeply for him

longtail is intersex and uses he/him pronouns. in a human-esque culture he would identify as nonbinary.

fernsong uses he/him and she/her pronoun. in a human-esque culture she would identify as bigender

sparrowpelt snd his kits carry the cinnamon gene. this also carries on through sandstorm -> leafpool -> lionblaze, skips sorrelstripe and hollytuft (chocolate) and returns with bayshine + myrtlebloom

cinderheart is a cryptic tortie, hence fernsong’s vibrant golden-cream color

lion and holly (both)’s manes are important to their designs so theyre drawn with them.

[warrior-cats-rewritten]

I've realized what one of the flaws in the series is now that's a more subtle flaw.

Aside from Purdy... No one has a "way of speaking". Everyone sounds the same. So much formal speak is used now, and mind you with cats in leader positions I imagine there would be an expectation of sorts, I can't imagine Mistystar accepting anything less than PERFECT grammar.

But a cat like Graystripe? He'd love weird contraction words! Man says "y'ain't" unironically!

Dovewing using big words and long complex phrases until she leaves Thunderclan and challenges herself to use as few words as possible for a while to break the habit...

Hollyleaf The Nerd accidentally taught her the habit in the first place, mind. Get a chair and some water when Holly gives a speech, you'll be there for a while.

Jayfeather on the other hand? Learn to speak grunt.

Lionblaze picks up mannerisms from EVERYONE. Slang from Daisy and Berrynose, a little "y'know?" From Cinderheart, and you can catch him say "um" the same way Leafpool does from his brief time as Cleric apprentice.

Squirrelflight would often speak too quickly so sometimesshetalkslikethis...

Hmm... Bit hard to read.

I'll-write-it-like-this! Squirrelflight!

Skybranch (Twigbranch) stumbles over words and tries to pick them as carefully as possible. A-uh A lot of the time, she'll kinda talk like this? I think, uh, I think that's good. Right? Yeah. Should be okay.

Where cats like, say, the aforementioned Mistystar, take a very high-class tone. A cat like Mistystar would not lower herself to using foul language, like the Thunderclan warrior, Spotfur. There would simply be no need for it.

And Spotfur thinks that that's badger bullocks! Swears express your passion, dammit!

But... Yeah. The way people speak and talk, tells you a LOT about them.

[dayz-ina-daze]

In a Warriors rewrite or generalized cat xenofiction/xenomoggy setting…

[skyscratch-wc]

Skyfall Power of 5 Family Tree

[skyclan-funny-name-squad]

I think the main problem with warriors rewrites is they get so bogged down in ‘trying to make sense’ or ‘make them act like actual cats’ is they forget to make things COOL AS SHIT. Like yes your bloodclan has 200 pages of foreshadowing but is it still COOL AS SHIT? Does scourge still steal the show and be awesome as he fucking obliterates tigerstar? I don’t care if dog teeth claws makes no actual sense it’s COOL AS SHIT! If your warrior cats rewrite wouldn’t result in 200 scourge animations of him being cool as shit if it was the canon material you have failed. Having cool as shit moments and awesome dramatic scenes should be a priority in any rewrite as it’s a very important part of what keeps people into the series.

[morningstar-warriors]

Have you ever wanted to play Warrior cats D&D…? You guys should take a look at my book! Check my pinned. I’ve got the book, and other nifty resources inside.

- This book is an extension off of the works of the Warriors Adventure Game.

- This book is only in its second version and has aspects that are still unrefined or in need of further testing.

- You are free to use any of these things, change them, and so on. Please feel free to PM me or leave a message in my inbox in regards to what could be improved or what you liked!

[frozenpinees]

I made this in less than a day 😅

This is a pmv for my rewrite au! Specifically about Mothwing.

Lionblaze is now a Riverclan cat. He’s visited by Hawkfrost in his dreams and eventually grows afraid of his powers, not wanting to hurt anyone. He starts training as a medicine cat, and grows close with his new mentor Mothwing. She becomes like a mother to him. This pmv shows Mothwings nightmares, where Hawkfrost comes to her and threatens her and Lionpaw. Mothwing wakes up and tries to convince herself that seeing her brother again was just a dream

Characters -

Mothwing (yellow)

Hawkfrost (blue)

Lionpaw/mane (orange)

[shummthechumm]

sol and his guard, jingo (aka rewrite ramblings)

[rainsnap]

Wouldn’t it be neat if Nightheart is kicked out of all the clans? Like, he tries to join Shadowclan but really overstepped Sunbeam’s boundaries so then he goes to Riverclan and pretends to be the leader and gets the boot, Skyclan and Windclan turn him away without giving him a chance.

So Nightheart leaves the clans and pulls a reverse Firestar and becomes a kittypet for a bit, then begins to simply wander. He ends up back at the old territories where he meets a super old Smudge who upon seeing him says “you know, you remind me of someone…” and Smudge tells Nightheart of everything he knows of the clan cats.

Nightheart even gets to meet Warriorclan and learns what it really means to be part of a clan. He returns home to Thunderclan a changed cat and grows to be a wise old warrior.

[oldfacesnewdawnoffical]

Cat Age Guide

Not a direct match, as nothing really can be, but here’s my personal approximation for cat-human equivalent ages! ^^

The cats of the Fourtrees Fealty track age by months, or “moons”, as cats typically reach growth milestones at the height of each month.

0-1 months = newborn to 1 years old in human time

2 months = 2 human years

3 months = 4 human years

4 months = 6 human years

5 months = 8 human years

6 months = 10 human years; it’s around this time that a cat will begin to form a solid sense of identity for themself

7 months = 12 human years

12 months / 1 year = 16 to 17 human years; it’s around this time that a cat will earn their full names, and are viewed as an “adult” by their community’s standards

18 months / 1 year = 21 human years

24 months / 2 years = 24 human years; up until they turn 2 years old, a cat’s human-equivalent age is equal to that time. Once they turn 2, you add 4 years for every year afterwards!

36 moons / 3 years = 28 human years

48 moons / 4 years = 32 human years

60 moons / 5 years = 36 human years

72 moons / 6 years = 40 human years

84 moons / 7 years = 44 human years

96 moons / 8 years = 48 human years

108 moons / 9 years = 52 human years

120 moons / 10 years = 56 human years

132 moons / 11 years = 60 human years; it’s around this time that a cat is considered “old”, or at least somewhat geriatric. They typically debate retirement around this age

144 moons / 12 years = 64 human years

156 moons / 13 years = 68 human years

168 moons / 14 years = 72 human years

180 moons / 15 years = 76 human years

192 moons / 16 years = 80 human years

195 moons / 17 years = 84 human years

216 moons / 18 years = 88 human years

228 moons / 19 years = 92 human years

240 moons / 20 years = 96 human years

This is just an extended chart for ease of convenience ^^’

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[mothbriars]

been planning on rewritten warriors, and had thought up of the possibility of having blue x crooked rather than blue x oak being a more interesting idea... (sorry to the blueoak enjoyers) i wanna flesh out this idea more and reread bluestar's prophecy and crookedstar's promise to get a more feel of how this will work out. this is only concept (dont worry abt stonefur I can somehow fit him in somewhere)

[hickorytwist]

id: a digital headshot drawing of a multicolored cat that has a hairless head and fluffy fur around its neck and nose. it has big, shiny, dilated eyes and an expression of awe. its skin is pink with patches of orange and blue. its neck fur is orange tabby with a patch of grey tabby and white down the middle. it has a tear in one of its ears, which are large and pointy like a bat’s. end id.

Headshot commission for my good friend @planefood! This is Galaxy, a kittypet featured in a fully original arc from a huge Warriors rewrite/AU we work on (@wtwcr-rewrite)!

These are still open for $10 each! Here’s the tumblr ad about it and here’s the toyhouse ad about it, each with their own slots.

[warrior-cats-rewritten]

Leaders can choose which life they want to lose in order. The will experience something related to that cat's death or, rarely, have a talk with them. When the leader dies, they go into a misty, swirling meadow, surrounded by the cats who gave them their lives.

Pinestar chose Harepounce first, wanting to brave it. He felt the aching in her stomach, but also the intense love for her daughter, Whitekit. It is a looming feeling, especially when he first eats kibble, his belly full while other cats go hungry that night.

Bluestar chose Mosskit last, and instead of feeling the winter's chill, she felt nothing but safety and love, the snow becoming a blanket to settle into. Mosskit allowed her to spend her last moments lucid, seeing all of her children on the bank as she passed.

Crookedstar chose Appleshine for his first, and felt the intense pain she had felt as she died, and the pain gave him determination to keep going during a battle with Thunderclan. (Guess what they were fighting over!)

Tallstar's second to last life was lost after the Bloodclan battle, he chose Dawnstripe's life. She showed him the thrill of the battle she had passed away in, but that while sometimes fighting for something is necessary, it isn't always the only option. It sticks hard with him.

Brokenstar picked Sagewhisker to get rid of it first, he felt the intense pain of the heart attack that killed her, from that point on he made other cats fight his battles more, wanting to hold onto his lives.

Leopardstar's final life was with Brightsky, who she had been avoiding. She watched her mother's life slip away, and the heartbreak that her mother had felt seeing that 2 of her children had been born sleeping. She realized as the world faded to cold darkness that she'd made a mistake.

Losing all his lives at once, Tigerstar had begged each of them to save him, one by one. But they could not, even if they wanted to. The last lost was the tiny warrior, Olivetail, showing her death was at the claws of his own ancestor, Gorsestar, in the same way he himself bleeds out now.

Firestar choses Swiftclaw first to get that over with. It is agonizing pain but all the Might of Lionclan in his bones keeps him going and fighting even when the literal jaws of death clamp down. He remembers Swiftclaw, and all the young cats he is fighting for when he comes back to the living world.

Blackstar chooses to lose the life Blizzardwing gives him, wanting to be rid of it as fast as possible. He feels sickness claw at him, and rage at an unfulfilled life full of regrets. It's... sobering, especially when he just lost the life due to a branch falling on him.

Leafstar choses Dawnstar (who gives a life for Selflessness) during Skyclan's Destiny to see if she is doing the right thing by helping the rogues. It is calm and cold and quiet, her lungs feel tight but she can feel guilt baring down on her as she watches herself through Dawnstar's eyes denying herself catmint to make sure the other cats can live through the greencough epidemic, seeing a Starclan cat looming over a kitten, knowing he will be a heroic leader.

Onestar's final life was Brushclaw, who didn't show him his death, but only talked about how disappointed he was. He gave Onestar a life for friendship, and Onestar chose to isolate himself afterwards, acting unfriendly towards even his own clanmates.

Mistystar's first life was Crookedstar, and she spoke with him about what happened to Leopardstar, and if she was a bad cat for it. He gives her reassuring words, and tells her that he is proud if her.

Bramblestar's first life lost is for Longtail, he feels the terror as he loses his sight, reliving Longtail's last moments before the tree crashes down, all he can think of is the last though in Longtail's head: I can't let prey go to waste, I'm sorry Poppydawn. It rattles him completely.

Rowanstar chooses Cedarheart during a Yellowcough life loss, who fought with all his might to protect the Riverclan nursery, dying for them just as the retreat order was called. It fills him with vigor and strength.

As Harestar lays dying of Blackcough, he picks Barkface. They talk, and Barkface confirms that, no, he will not recover from this. But not to lose hope, for Windclan's future is still bright, have faith. As he gazes over at Breezepelt, he feels a glimmer of hope.

Tigerstar's second life lost after Rowanstar was Flametail, he missed his brother too much to save it for later. The water made him afraid, but when he saw how Jayfeather had tried to SAVE his brother, he personally traveled to Thunderclan and invited Jayfeather to a feast, re-building a bridge that had been hanging in threads.

[skyscratch-wc]

Sometimes I go back to my warriors AU/rewrite and today is one of those days. I redid the Thunderclan family tree and one of things i did was make Rosetail Longtail’s mom. I also gave him a brother, Branchear, to have more eligable toms in the clan later on.