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surshica · 2 years ago

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NINTENDO SWITCH !

FOURTEEN - you’re so annoying

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AN : enjoy or not (evil emoji) HAHAHAHAH

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“CHISHIYA SHUNTARO.” Yn yelled whispered, she was mad at him for having her stress over studying for the test when it got postponed till Tuesday; she was looking around for him when he saw a figure laying down on the couch. She let out a huff, she felt like the big bad wolf. She ended up cracking her knuckles storming over to chishiya whom was peacefully watching banana fish on his TV. “You. Should watch banana fish, its a good anime.” He lifted himself up on his elbows watching the mad women storm her way to him.n

He grinned as he looked at her standing in front of him, “why hello dearest Yn,” “what can i do for you in this fine hour.” The silence was evident but yet it was too funny to chishiya; yn inhaled deeply trying to calm herself down but looking at his stupid cat like smirk made her even more pissed off. She grabbed him by the shirt pushing him back down onto the couch. “You’re so annoying chishiya!” She sprawled over him.

“You know chishiya, it would’ve been nice to know it got postponed a day.” “I could’ve relaxed today and studied tomorrow but you had me over here stressing over a mid-term THAT WAS AAAAAAAH” she was mad enough she couldn’t even think properly. Chishiya’s face was so unemotional besides the grin formed on his lips, it made her want to punch him even more. “Why’d you think that was funny or even a good idea?!” Her right twitched as her grip around his shirt tightened even more. “Like I said it merely slipped my mind.” His grin started to disappear as his lips formed a thin line.

“Slipped my mind..bullshit” she called him out on it rolling her eyes. She was not having any of that bullshit. “You know..I’m starting to think you have a crush on me based on how many times we always get into situations.” He smirked, yn rolled her eyes again. “I dont like you. You’re annoying and you make me annoyed”. Her tone became softer and her breathing calmed down. “You know if you did want a kiss that’s all you had to say” that sentence left chishiya’s smirk made her feel something flutter but it made her upset. “I came here to take my anger out on you because you like to fuck around with me.”

“That sounds rather kinky” he lowed a chuckle, the vibration of the low chuckle , made the small butterflies flutter in her stomach. “What..NO! You know it’s not like that.” Her grip loosened because of the comment he said, a slight blush rushed across her face; she furrowed her eyebrows shaking her head. “Do i know that yn? Do I really know that?” He questioned the mad blushing lady, he propped himself up on his elbows. From any other angle the position they were in would make people jump into conclusions. “You’re like my personal fan,” his grin turned into a small smile inching his face closer to hers. Yn’s lips agaped slightly, opening and closing and opening again. “You’re so annoying chishiya..” it was a breathless like whisper.

“Hmm, you are quite always telling me that” he felt her now calm untensed breathing tickle his skin, his small smile turned into a slightly larger genuine smile. Their eyes never left eachother; chishiya was quiet mesmerized in their gaze. The sunlight gleamed down onto them, it was something that look like it was ripped straight out of a Japanese romance drama. “Chishiya…” her voice was a soft yet sterner whisper, words couldn’t escape his lips but a small hum. Their faces inched closer slowly, their noses and foreheads were slightly touching eachother. Both of their eyes were closed yet in the moment they couldn’t find a place in their heart to stop what could spur in the moment.

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After Yn zoomed out her room with arisu’s keys it took him a moment to process the whole situation, it was like the lagging symbol spinning in his head before he finally realized what happened. His eyes widened before quickly standing up but he ended up getting dizzy and fell back down into the chair. He inhaled before standing up quickly leaving Yn’s room. Entering the living room seeing Mira watching saiki k on the small tv they had.

“Where did yn go?!” Arisu’s breathless voice questioned the calm not concerned Mira, “she left already.” “she looked like she was in a rush” Mira held her hand over her mouth a little giggle escaped her lips. “Motherfucker…” he groaned realizing he is going to have to run after her so she doesn’t destroy his dorm. He quickly put on his shoes looking at the. Unconcerned Mira who was watching all of this go down, “you might want to hurry who knows what they are doing in that dorm as of right now.” Mira shrugged showing her phone to arisu. It was Yn’s tweets and how she was struggling to open his dorms door.

Arisu’s brows furrowed wondering how the fuck she got there so quickly?! The dorm wasnt far but it was that close either. “She’s going to be the death of me” he groaned before closing the door to yn and Mira’s dorm. He started to quickly run after the what was left tracks of yn to his dorm. He kept groaning because he wasnt the most athletic and man he hated yn for having some sort of running spirit now. He really needed to go on the morning runs with usagi. He made it to the floor where their dorm is letting out huffs and puffs.

He couldn’t run anymore so he just decided to speed walk his way to the dorm, he thought he would have to get out his spare key from his pocket but to his surprise the door was open. It was closed but it wasnt locked. He lifted one of his eyebrows grabbing the door handle. The one thing he noticed was that it was quiet..he expected to hear Yn’s yelling since she seemed angry in the tweets. He slowly turned the door handle walking quietly into the dorm closing the door behind him. taking off his shoes he went to the living room and his face turned into pure shock at what he is seeing. “WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON?!?” A screamed like gasp escaped causing yn to jump away from chishiya. Chishiya didnt even budge; his face was still neutral with some slight blush but yn she was red in the face.

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thankchaosforspellcheck · 5 years ago

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Recently, Gotham’s talk radio show (102.9 THE LAB!) got a new radio host.

Now, something to keep in mind is that not too many people listen to LAB radio anymore, or radio in general. Villains are much more likely to hijack a news broadcast, where they can show their face as well as their voice, for actual announcements while using the radio for straight schemes. Listening to an AM station is more likely to get you hypnotized then it is to keep you up-to-date, so the majority of Gothamites just switch on the news or put in a CD if they need something to listen to.

There are still some that do, however. Some can’t afford a TV and need to have some way of knowing which Rogues are in which part of town, others are new to town and haven’t experienced one of the more radio wave-oriented plots yet. Most are just stubborn, as Gothamites tend to be.

But that all changed with the new host.

“Hey there, Labrats! This is 102.9 THE LAB! with your host: The Technician!”

The few people listening at the time knew something about The Technician just seemed... off. It wasn’t necessarily in a villainous sort of way, but it wasn’t in a heroic way either. He seemed to know where every super, criminal or otherwise, was while in costume, though their locations seemed to be vaguer if they were not doing anything “important” at that point.

“...and for your usual 10 PM Bat Update: Batman is still running the maze! He hasn’t run into anything interesting as of yet it see- OH HOLD ON TO YOUR CHEESE FOLKS! IT LOOKS AS IF TWO FACE IS ATTEMPTING A ROBBERY AT THE 5/3RD BANK ON 27TH AND GUESS WHAT STREET OUR DEAR DARK KNIGHT JUST LANDED ON~!”

As word travels, his popularity grows. He’s a great resource for the common civilian and c-list criminal alike, and invaluable if you need to avoid a certain villains crushing vines or a certain heroes batarangs. Of course, changing the game makes all of the other players take notice, so a few of the folks lower on the ladder decide to... give him a welcome party.

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“Ya sure this is the place, boss?” One of the three testers asks, shifting from one foot to the other with a nervous look on her rat-like face, as she peers up at the radio tower.

“Of course I am sure, t-*Bleep*! This is where we track him down to, so this is where he must be!” The Russian hollers back at him. However, he sounds much more confident then he feels, as he too looks at the ramshackle building. It has clearly been abandoned for quite some time, and the tower looks like it is about to fall over any minute now.

“Look, is easy job: get in, get punk, get out.” he continued, in a gruff, smirking voice “If he is really able to see all that he says he can, then he will make life much easier. If not, then I get ...stress relief.” The Russian finished darkly.

They both walk up to the gate, bolt cutter in the hands of a quiet tester. The second he starts in on his job, however, an electric current runs up the tool to the man holding it, stunning him with the force of 50,000 volts.

“*Bleep*! Not another one!” The Russian angrily exclaims, assuming the tester was dead.

“Actually, boss, I think ‘e’s just knocked out! Don’ look like he stopped breathin’!�� The third tester exclaimed. She’s working on a medical degree right now, so she would know.

“Oh? Huh. Still, very rude! Will have to teach punk lesson once found.” He grumbles, his surprise quickly turning back to irritation “*Bleep*, go drag him to alley down street, we do not need dead weight. *Bleep*, come with me!” The Russian orders, already turning back to survey the fence. After he spotted a fuse box just on the other side and a high enough tree, he ordered tester 1, who has some electrical work in her background, to hop the fence.

“O-okay, just a liiiittle further aaaaand I’m over-aaaAAAAH!” *THWIP!* Tester 1 had indeed made it over the fence, but unfortunately she did not spot the net trap below. She now hung over a pit revealed to be right where she would have landed. It was quite lucky that the trap was there, honestly. A fall like that could have broken her neck...

“*BEEEEEEEEEEP*! This is the *bleep* *bleep* job I ever do! Is like *bleep*-ing Tom and Jerry cartoon!” The Russian ranted, more and more fed up with these traps. They were just supposed to be going after some newbie, after all, not a proper cape. Oi! *Bleep*! You done with *Bleep* yet?” He calls, stomping over to the alley. “I swear if you decided to take smoke brea-” *TWANG* The russian is cut off one last time by the sudden hit of a tranquilizer dart, one of which had already taken care of poor Tester 3.

“All four of them were later picked up by police after an anonymous tip relayed their locations...and how to avoid those *specific* traps.”

“This all happened about four hours ago outside of our lovely radio station (which only looks abandoned, promise!) but worry not, my little labrats!”

“I wasn’t even in the building at the time!”

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Shortly after this The Technician reveals that he has a newsvan he uses for “fieldwork”. He does interviews (most of them don’t even realize they’re being interviewed until he’s already left) and reports on new shops and restaurants in between all of the fights and crimes. He doesn’t seem to have a rhyme or reason for why he leaves the radiostation, but after the first few attempts to break in criminal and hero alike realize that it would be much easier taking a van down then an entire station filled with traps.

The problem with this is, of course, finding the van.

He seems to have less of a... range while out and about, but as a trade off he is much better at getting the specifics of what is in that range. A few capes have even gotten close to catching him, but they can never quite stay off of his radar for long enough to trap him.

However, since he hasn’t caught any of the major player’s attention, and he isn’t doing anything technically illegal, this has been more because of luck and a lack of interest then anything else.

...but that will all change soon enough.

#batman #gotham city #only in gotham #batman oc #the technician

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johannepetereric · 4 years ago

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Emi, You’re Not A Stalker!

Again, I am using dialogue from the anime. I don’t own CFV. I am using it because I can’t think of any other dialogue to put in its place.

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Aichi greeted Emi a yawned “Good morning” from the kitchen table, right after being slapped awake by Kaa-san.

What? He was up since 5 this morning cooking breakfast! It’s only been a few days; his body has yet to adjust yet!

Well, at least the blueberry muffins taste good.

“If I didn’t know any better, I’d say you didn’t even have a alarm clock.”

Aichi stretched himself back, a longer, more drawn-out yawn escaping like ghosts, tilting the chair slightly. “Emi, I was up since five in the morning baking! What did you think I was doing?” He whispered-yawned. “I went to bed at eight for this.”

Emi looked furious, face colored the pigments of the tomatoes he sliced and diced today.

“That’s right, Emi. Please respect your brother. He is next-in-line to be the Matriarch, after all.” Shizuka Sendou, the current Matriarch, reminded the daughter. As stated in a previous post, Emi was booted out of queue as soon as Aichi declared that he found his mate (future boyfriend!). So now, Emi is the one subject to sleeping in! “And Aichi! Eat your waffles!”

Indeed, three waffles were stacked in the future-matriarch’s plate, two more than on the other two, saturated with syrup and butter and berries--and a dash of whipped cream!

Aichi’s tried eyes awoke as he remembered this. He popped a super-sugary waffle fork into his mouth, salivating at its sweet, sweet, pick-me-up texture and essence of home. While Aichi was finishing up the muffins earlier, she was making extra waffles for her new apprentice! Although Aichi barely managed to slag through the motions, the produce did turn out as advertised!

“Aichi, hurry up! I don’t have to drive you to school, do I?” Indeed, the Sendou Matriarch has a motorcycle (legally licensed, of course) in the garage (or out back).

“No, Kaa-san!” He filled himself as much as he could, earning himself a tummyache and vomiting into a trash can near school, but he at least wasn’t late this time!

Right after Aichi left, the girls had about the same talk as in the anime:

“Aichi’s been working hard this morning. He’s been going to bed later and is now rising just as earlier. He only had five hours of sleep last night.” The mother shook her head fondly. “I hope he found something fun after school.”

This was a lie by omission, one could say. Shizuka does know, but Emi is a troublesome girl to deal with in the affairs of love. The mother could only sigh in contempt. Emi questioned why, but the other said to “let it be. Your brother has enough worry on his shoulders as it is.” And shuffled away to do whatever it is she does.

Emi pondered this lateness.

Right on time, she stalked her brother.

“Hold it right there, Aichi. You’re not going home yet!” A menacing voice shrieked.

“Morikawa, I told you you’re not my type!” Aichi squealed back. The bully looked seriously offended and just threatened him more.

She saw her brother being threatened by the two boys (”Morikawa” and who must be his lackey), talking about plans, and she saw that they weren’t touching the new lunchbag her brother was bringing the past few days.

I hope that they’re both all right! She thought. She knew it wrong to be worried about the food, but Mom would be sad if they were ruined!

I hope they’re not going to assault him!

The threatening of a beating continued, and she fussed over why in the world he’d play along with them why isn’t he scrambling to safety?!

Card Capital, the place they entered read. Must be their evil lair!

“Stop right there!” she yelled through the automatic door, only to be met with reverberating silence.

A green-hared man in glasses led up to her with, “Eh--how can I help you, young lady?”

“What? Eh? I’m here for my brother?”

“Well-” she was given a whole spiel, a guided tour of the place. She spied Aichi smiling and untouched and seemingly ignoring her, and she finally looked around.

Little kids about her age leaning around little tables; a cashier next to her; a glass case beyond there; cards on display; a bored-looking lady, previously reading a book at the register, staring an icy death into the little girl.

This really is a safe space. But what if it’s just money-laundering?

“Oh, those two are about to start a Cardfight. You want to see?” One most menacing bully and Aichi had locked eyes on the table, seemingly ignoring the girl who dared to believe this a bad place.

Emi nodded. The lunchbox was between Aichi’s feet, seemingly unopened. Looking at the floor, she didn’t see any crumbs.

What she didn’t know was that Misaki was hiding her half-eaten muffin under the counter, to be slowly devoured over the course of the day XD!

She watched Aichi ride “Blaster Blade,” the one he’s the reincarnation of. The face, it looked so...so...

A True Leader.

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“Why do I never draw the cards I need?”

“Uh, because Morikawa is stupid?” Aichi offered.

“Aaaaaaah!” Izaki held back the bully--Morikawa--by the collar. The dumb*** was choking.

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“bUT i SCORED ANOTHER AWESOME gRADE 3!” (Yaaaas, I’m keeping it like this!)

“You’ll have to discard them eventually...”

“DO YOU NOT BELIEVE YOUR MASTER?!”

Aichi sweatdropped. “Morikawa, this is why you’re not my type.”

Emi snickered at that. Her big brother can be so picky sometimes.

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“Gallatin attacks Barr!”

Aichi...you’re so different. Your eyes have no sense of hardening here. You don’t look as afraid as before. Compared to you now, Aichi, he looks so weak. Bark but no bite.

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“--I attack Barr for the win!” Aichi has changed so much. Did Kaa-san know about this?

Yes, it must be...finally playing Vanguard, as he’s so desperately wanted. The drive, the sparkle, the matriarchal glimmer that Kaa-san has chasing a cornered “Karen.” And Psyqualia looks unnecessary.

“Eh?? Why isn’t the attack going through?”

Aichi sighed in exasperation. She feels it completely. What a mood. He responded in monotone, dead-eyed again, “Blaster Blade initially had 19000 power. I boosted with Wingal, which gives Blaster Blade an 4000 power. I now have to check the drive trigger.”

Critical. 4 damage. Add +1 damage to Blaster Blade, and...

“Aaaaaaaah!” Emi covered her ears for this one, her brother wincing.

“I looooooost!”

“And look! He took zero damage!” A smug glimmer appeared in her brother’s eyes, a look so often used every week. Someone pointed it out--Aichi was squirming and twitching in anticipation for the moment when he could fold his arm like an egotistical champ again. Forehead furrowed trying to hold back as villainous face. Well,

“DON’T LOOK AT ME LIKE THAT, YOU PUNK! I JUST LOST ON PURPOSE!” Aichi sweatdropped, never once losing that smug expression--which juts out more prominently now that he’s taken his opponent down an emotional peg.

His jaw twitched in the desire to smirk.

Emi’s had enough of this bull****.

“Aichi!”

“Emi?! What are you doing here?!”

“Me?! You’re the one who’s abandoning your duties.”...Oops.

Aichi stormed over to her cross-eyes, ready to give the middle finger and A Lesson About Respect.

“Now you listen here, young lady!”

“Aichi, stop.” A snappish, stern voice snapped them out of their oncoming tirade--which is bad for public relations.

Aichi veered this particular maniac look at the teen. Misaki-san looked slightly unsettled but glared back with equal virility.

An staring contest ensued, lightning sparking between them, Aichi’s eyes slightly turned downward--of course. It’s a girl.

“So,” Emi crossed her arms in contempt. “You’ve been coming here to play games.”

Aichi’s eyes narrowed, attention twisted toward the imouto again, back straightened. Time to Defend. “What can you do about it?” He answered in equal condescension.

This killed the mood--if it already wasn’t when Emi caused a reaction from the blunet.

“Yes, Kaa-san knows. We knew you’d freak out. But to pull a stunt like this?” Tsk, tsk, tsk, he clicked as he shook his flowy, clean sea. “This is beneath even you.”

“You are aware your friends know of your true nature, right?”

“I revealed it to them the day after I met Kai-kun.”

“Merciless.” She agreed, calmer now, for it is factual. The feminine male had grown a cruel side, not totally unlike your stereotypical tsundere or yandere.

Aichi must’ve been brutal, so worked up like that. She can sense the romantic feels spiraling out of his soul, his heart. The mere moment of affection from one breath was enough to suppress a bit of her killer curiosity--one of many reasons as to why we fight.

“So is Vanguard fun to play for you?”

“Yes!” He shouted with no hesitation, face now morphed back to when he rode his Avatar. “So much fun! I don’t have to worry about losing!” He pushed out two fingers--Too-dles! It doesn’t matter whether I win or lose. I’m going to have fun, anyway.

Emi smiled.

“Might I play sometime?”

Aichi grunted, maternal smile gleaming naturally.

Indeed, he’ll be a wonderful mother and waifu. The Perfect Matriarch.

“Ok. Bye! I expect your lasagna tonight!” Emi headed out towards home.

She could hear clamor about Aichi’s “secret” cooking abilities. Emi is proud of her brother. He has much room to grow, and he has finally opened the floodgates to reaching that level of maturity required to be a mature--emotionally mature--adult.

Indeed, Emi will love meeting this new, dormant Aichi.

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lavendermagikwrites · 5 years ago

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Once Upon a Time: An Agent Carter Sims Story Chapter 3 - A Story About Daniel

Are you ready? No, seriously, hold on to your knickers, because this is almost too much.

So this is Daniel.

He’s hardworking. He’s a romantic. He’s a generally nice guy. And if you make out with him, you’ll get a positive moodlet for three hours. Daniel is great.

Maybe that was the problem...

Anyway, things go okay for Daniel. He befriends Peggy.

And they’re weirdos together.

They have full-on conversations as Jack tries to sleep.

And then Peggy reads a romance novel in his bed, still while Jack tries to sleep.

Like a creep.

So everything is going great.

And then...

AND THEN...

ALIENS!

Now this isn’t my first rodeo. I’ve been abducted before. He’ll come back feeling probed and we’ll all move on with our lives.

But then...

BUT THEN...

AAAAAAAH! This! This has not happened to me before!

If you don’t know what this means, come along with me.

We’ve got a countdown.

Hmm, seems like you’ve got a little hitch in your giddyup there, Daniel.

The countdown hits 1 min, and Daniel left work early, which stresses him out.

But wait...

What’s this??

What the heck is this, Daniel? What are you doing?

You’re having an alien baby, Daniel. In the backyard. An alien baby in the backyard, Daniel.

Do we... do we want to raise the alien baby? I don’t know! We didn’t expect to have one! There’s not a lot of room! And should Howard really be given unhindered access to a newborn?

Eh, screw it. Let’s keep the probe baby. We’ll name him Obed. Because that’s the first thing that comes to mind.

Unfortunately, because Daniel left work early to give birth, Jack got a promotion and he didn’t.

Typical.

Okay, so now we have an alien baby. We can handle this. Life should proceed pretty normally from here.

Unless...

Daniel...

No, Daniel, don’t...

Why?? Why did you investigate the strange phenomenon AGAIN???

Well, nothing to worry about. We don’t have room for any more people, so this time he’ll definitely get rid of the probed moodlet and everything will be fine.

Daniel... Daniel... Daniel, why?

In other news, dude totally went hot-tubbing while preggers, what a terrible father.

#agent carter #the sims 3 #reader insert #I Take Thee Sims

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thelittlehansy · 5 years ago

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Anna is on the southern isles for a diplomatic visist years after arendelle she knows about hans horrible family

Anna : something i dont get why you never try to run away from your home after your punishement ?

Hans : i....

Last years.......

The king : *furious* where is HE i want HIM now ! 2 HOURS LATE ?

Caleb : father....this is...

KING : you go find your brother NOW !

Alphonse 12th : *whispered* he is not here....

King : what ?

Lars : this is really funny..it is just that he left...

King : *surprise and shocked* just like that ?

His sons : just like that !

..............

Hans with a hug bag on him and several suits on him

Lars : hans what what are ypu doing ?

Others brothers : yeah !

Hans : well , today i have big newq for everyone ! *huge smile* i m moving i m not gonna stay anymore in the castle *excited* you will not have to see me again !

Lars : wait where you gonna live ?

Hans : well , in the street ! *smile*

Caleb : but you dont even have enough money...

Lars : yes how are you gonna live in the cold and with no food ?

Emile : yes its winter !

Rudi : you are also a rich spoiled boy i give only 2 days !

The queen : yes honey ! Stop being silly please....

Hans : oh this is not a joke i m already Sleeping in the cold in the stable and since i m little i m used to being straved...so i prefered endure that without seing your face !

Hans : *emotional look at his family* so well , i guess this is the moment to say a defintive goodbye...my brothers *look at them* i really hope things would have been different so i m justing hoping you will meet the devil if hell exist ! Lars...love you bro..girls ( to his sister in laws)dont beleive when you dont have options suicide is always an options and kiddos...well i love you but not the spoiled brat i m not gonna told names ! *look at caleb son*

Nephew : but me i dont want you to leave...

Hans : you will always be in my heart my little grimlin and mother *bow*

Queen : *look at hans tears fallen from her face*

Hans : mother...*took 2 bottle of wine* i will always drink each day d 3 bottles of wine at your memory

Queen : ooh my baby please dont go..*try to hug him*

Hans : *reject her* its ok mother !*give her a smile* well Goodbye tell sitron i m gonna missed him..a lot !

Hans leave the queen cried hysterically Caleb wife tried to comfort her.

Caleb's wife : its ok i m sure is he gonna go back home before this night !

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2 hours after hans pulled by his father guards in the castle

Hans : aaaaaaah leave me alone i dont what to get back in this crazy catsle for crazy people....

Guards : his majesty your father has aksed for you in the dinner room now!

Hans : what does he want again ! *nearly yelled angry*

Hans entered and notice a whole table with a lot of food on it only one person is here his dad at the head of the table.

King : oh you have found him i was so worried you have found my little last one ! I...i dont know what i would have done if something happened to him. I was so worrried pictured him alone in the cold no food !

Hans is confuse the guards pround they bow and leave

King : thank you again !

He put a possesive hand on hans shoulder who makes hans paralized by fear.

King : *whispered in his ears* i m the reason your even exist in this world you really tought you could get rid of me so easily ? *chuckle*

Hans : *angry wants to strangle his dad*

King : *look at hans evily he knows what his son think and chuckle* oh you have an table of food just for you ! Here *to the maid* prepare a confortable room for prince hans ! Please !

Maid : yes your magesty!

King : you see no reason for you to go on the street and dishonor the name of the family....again !

Hans : *want to struggle his dad again*

King : *chuckle again*

...............

Anna : so ?

Hans : i m dangerous !very dangerous ! *lied*

#hans #prince hans of the southern isles #prince hans #hans weestergraad #frozen disney

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serendipitousrambles · 5 years ago

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One Summer Can Change Everything

Chapter six: New Beginnings

Lucas woke up shivering in his sleeping bag despite it being summer. The morning chill hadn't fully disappeared. He barely slept, Dustin's snoring keeping him up most of the night. He sat up rubbing his eyes and looked over at where Dustin was lying on his back, one arm behind his head and mouth hanging open.

Mike was practically hidden from sight having buried himself deep in his sleeping bag, hoodie over his head so only his eyes and nose were visible as he slept. At least someone could sleep through the snoring.

Lucas slowly crept out of the tent, throwing on a sweater. He had no clue what time it was but he supposed it was early considering the sun had barely risen. He sat down on the damp grass.

The zipper on the other tent (where Max, Will, and El had been sleeping) slowly opened. Lucas looked over his shoulder and felt cold when Max sheepishly stepped out, her hair in two braids and hugging her sweater to herself.

"Hey…" she sat down next to him like she was sitting next to some woodland creature, like he would take off at any moment. "I…" she didn't know what to say to him.

He didn't look at her, he looked down at his hands instead. But he didn't move away.

"I'm sorry I didn't talk to you about it…" she said. "About what I was feeling."

He shrugged.

"It's just...being apart will be too hard. If we're just friends it'll be easier to cope. Long distance relationships are hard, but long distance friendships aren't quite as hard."

"I get it," he sighed, finally facing her. "I just wished it hadn't happened like that."

"I'm sorry…"

He gave her a weak smile, lightly touching her arm, "Hey, we'll always be friends. No matter where we are."

She smiled back, but felt a sinking feeling in her stomach. He was taking this surprisingly well? "Always, Stalker. "

They laughed, the first time in a while. But it was nice. It felt natural again. There was somehow less pressure now they were just friends. Now they could just focus on being themselves.

"Do you wanna scare Dustin and Mike?" Lucas nodded towards the tent.

A cheeky grin slowly crept it's way across Max's face. "Definitely."

They tiptoed over to the boys' tent, standing either side. Max held up her fingers to her lips, silently counting down, "3...2...1!"

"Aaaaaaah!" They both screamed, shaking the sides of the tent.

From inside they could hear Dustin and Mike shouting, scrambling about over each other.

"Shit!"

"What is that?!"

"Dude get off!"

"I can't breathe!"

Max fell to the floor laughing, clutching her sides. Lucas doubled over, trying to catch his breath.

A sleepy El's head appeared from the gap in the other tent, her eyes barely open. She wasn't a morning person. Will also poked his head out, but he began joining in the laughter when Mike and Dustin fell out the tent, crashing to the ground.

"Morning sleeping beauties." Lucas waved jokingly at them, and Dustin gave him the middle finger.

///

"I think I'm gonna puke." Mike rolled down the window, sticking his head out into the breeze.

"Stop overreacting." Max said from the driver's seat. She wasn't bad exactly….it was perhaps a less smooth ride with her driving. But she was the Zoomer after all, and whilst now her driving was legal, it was still fast.

They were en route to the grand canyon, and then they'd have fourth of July on the beach in California watching the fireworks.

"How much further?" Mike said, head still out the window. They'd been driving for hours.

"Not too far." El was navigating from shotgun. "I think we're almost there."

In the back, Dustin and Lucas had fallen asleep with their heads leaning on each other and Will snapped a quick photo of them.

They'd stopped earlier in a diner for some food and had taken it in turns to drive and sleep so they could keep driving as long as possible.

Dawn had broken a few hours ago, just after Dustin had finished his shift of driving and Max had taken over.

"There!" She suddenly shouted, waking up Dustin and Lucas - who awkwardly jumped apart from each other.

"What?!"

Will pointed to a sign that said " Grand Canyon: National Park ".

They parked up, rushing out of the van to one of the look out points, suddenly stopping still in their tracks.

"Wow…" Dustin said, a smile slowly growing on his face. "Holy shit."

They stood at the edge of the canyon looking out as far as they could see. The sun had risen above the edge high enough to cast a warm glow across the rocks.

For once, they were all speechless. El reached out and grabbed Mike's hand, still looking out at the canyon. Never in her life had she imagined she be able to see something like this with her own eyes.

6 years ago, the thought that the world was so big had never really entered her mind. But here she was, with the people she loved the most in the world.

Mike looked over at El, watching her. He was stood in front of one of the natural wonders of the world, but she still managed to outshine it. He knew that there would never be anyone else for him but her.

The thought that in a few short weeks they'd be separated again was enough to break him.

Looking at her, he realised he'd never been more certain on anything in his life.

El felt him squeeze her hand back, and she smiled over her shoulder at him, turning to hug him instead as they stared out at the canyon.

"Let's go look from here." Lucas pointed to a different viewing platform, but Mike hung back.

"We'll uh, be there in a minute."

El raised an eyebrow at him.

"They're probably sneaking off to kiss or something." Will scrunched up his nose and Max rolled her eyes.

"They're in love, does it matter?"

He shrugged and followed after Lucas and Dustin, Max slowly coming up the rear.

///

"Mike what are you doing?" El laughed, holding one of his hands in both of hers as he quickly lead her away from their friends.

He suddenly stopped walking, taking both her hands in his. "I…"

The words got stuck in his throat when he looked into her eyes. He felt like he was 14 again, and struggling to tell her he loved her.

"Mike?" Her smile encouraged him, reminding him that he had gotten there eventually. He had told her he loved her, even if she had to do it first. But this time, this was something he wanted to do for himself.

"I've been thinking a lot. About the future," he said slowly. "Specifically... our future."

El's eyes grew wide with worry. "Mike…"

"No, it's...it's good." He quickly put his palm to her face, brushing his thumb lightly against her cheek to try and calm her. After a pause he nervously laughed, "At least I hope so."

He let go and held her hands again. "I know we're still young but I think," he shook his head, "no, I know that I'm not going to cope with us being apart when I'm at college."

She nodded along to his clumsy speech.

"And I was thinking what if we didn't have to be apart?"

She tilted her head, "You're staying in Hawkins?"

"No, I meant like...what if you were there with me?"

"Like a sleepover?"

He sighed, why was he so bad at expressing what he meant? "In a way but like...a permanent one?"

"Permanent sleepover?"

"Yeah, uh…you and me, we could get a place together."

"Live together?"

"Yeah." His eyes lit up when she finally understood his awkward, clumsy rambling. "I'm asking if you will, if you want to, maybe move in with me?"

She looked at him in silence and he dropped her hands. He'd freaked her out. He knows he has. They're 18 what was he thinking? Well he wasn't thinking, he just knew that there was no way he could cope being apart for any longer.

"Live...with you? Just you?"

"I'm being crazy, right?" He awkwardly scratched his neck. "Hop would never...I'm sorry I shouldn't have... I just...I don't know what's happening in the future, other than that you're always a part of it."

She closed her eyes and took a breath, before stepping forward and kissing him, stopping his panicked rambling...again.

When they broke apart, she pressed on her tiptoes to press her forehead against his.

"We'll be together?" She asked and he nodded, moving her head with him. "Then...I say yes."

"Really?"

"We've been pulled apart too many times, but this time we won't let it happen again."

#oscce #mileven #mike wheeler #el hopper #lucas sinclair #max mayfield #will byers #dustin henderson

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February 24th-March 1st, 2020 CTP Archive

The archive for the Comic Tea Party week long chat that occurred from February 24th, 2020 to March 1st, 2020. The chat focused on Whispers of the Past by Crona J.

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BOOK CLUB START!

Hello and welcome everyone to Comic Tea Party’s Book Club~! This week we’ll be focusing on Whispers of the Past by Crona J.~! (https://www.webtoons.com/en/challenge/whispers-of-the-past/list?title_no=191366)

You are free to read and comment about the comic all week at your own pace until March 1st, so stop on by whenever it suits your schedule! Discussions are freeform, but we do offer discussion prompts in the pins for those who’d like to have them. Additionally, remember that while constructive criticism is allowed, our focus is to have fun and appreciate the comic! Whether you finish the comic or can only read a few pages, everyone is welcome to join and chat with us!

DISCUSSION PROMPTS – PART 1

1. What did you like about the beginning of the comic?

2. What has been your favorite moment in the comic (so far)?

3. Who is your favorite character?

4. Which characters do like seeing interact the most?

5. What is something you like about the art? If you have a favorite illustration, please share it!

6. What is a theme you like that the comic explores?

7. What do you like about the comic’s story or overall related content?

8. Overall, what do you think the comic’s strengths are?

Don’t feel inspired by the prompts? Feel free to discuss anything else that interested you!

FeatheryJustice

So far, first impressions, holy cow the art is amazing.

Ash🦀

1. My favorite part about the beginning was the style. It immediately drew me in how everything was lovingly rendered in color that made me feel like I was seeing the world for the first time. It made me want to paint, too! 2. When we first see the man. Whoo buddy. Whoooooooo buddy. That was... a finely sculpted painting there. I could’ve framed him and hung him on my wall if the artist would let me. WHOOOO BUDDY. 3. My favorite character so far is Martel. I don’t write them often, but I love seeing kids in media, and I love the design of her hair. I know it’s a random thing to make me like her but I just... really like her hairstyle. She’s cute, and I’d guess she’ll be a breath of much-needed light air later in the story. 4. Mystery man and Martel are precious. 5. I point to answer 2 here. That lovingly sculpted chest? My heart was a-flutter I tell you what. 6. The art style is just... SO LOVINGLY RENDERED. The quiet moments of baking bread juxtaposed against a chaotic battle was SO. GOOD. Aaaaaah Could also be that that particular part is my favorite part of making bread so it was extra special aaaaaaah 7-8 I haven’t seen enough of the story to answer these yet! But the art is banging and I can’t wait to read more. Subscribed.

Eightfish (Puppeteer)

I've read this before and the art and story aren't really my thing. Since critique is allowed I could give art comments if CronaJ would find that kind of thing helpful? But even though I won't be following the story I was still impressed by how much care the author puts into it. Both from looking at their comic and from reading their comments on this discord and on the tap forum it's clear they've put a ton of effort into the art and story, and haven't cut any corner.s And all the panels are so rendered. I wonder how long it takes to draw a page?(edited)

Cronaj (Whispers of the Past)

Hey everyone! I'm the artist and writer of Whispers of the Past. I want to thank you all for your kind comments and observations so far. It really means a lot to me to hear what others think of this heartfelt project. I know that the story is in the beginning stages right now. But I'm looking to post the end of the first chapter this week, so hopefully a bit more will be revealed soon. Please feel free to ask me questions about anything, or (to answer @Eightfish (Puppeteer)'s question), to offer critiques for how I can improve what I'm doing.(edited)

Cronaj (Whispers of the Past)

@FeatheryJustice & @Ash🦀 I'm glad you enjoy the artwork. The painting process is probably what takes me the longest when it comes to pages. In response to @Eightfish (Puppeteer)... It takes me around 30-40 hours per page, and I try to post 2-3 page updates. Obviously, the amount of time spent per page varies depending on several factors, such as: the number of panels, the level of complication of poses, how many characters/background elements there are, and sometimes just whatever weird reason my brain isn't working that day ^^; So for my average 5-7 panel pages, they typically take longer than, say, a full-page spread. @Ash🦀 I'm so happy that the first few pages pulled you in! I spent a lot of time deciding on how I wanted to draw those panels, and what style to use, etc. I actually redrew the first 3 pages at least 5 times before settling on them as they are. And, you can hang and frame the image of our male MC if you want, haha, I actually don't have prints of it, but it is something to consider That particular panel was a one-page spread, so I was able to dedicate a bit more detail to it. Maret is a worthy favorite character. She is too pure and precious, and she just wants to make friends with everybody. Even when the "strange man" is kind of curt and unfriendly to her, she wants to befriend him. Also, I am SO unbelievably glad that you picked up on the juxtaposition in the bread-making scene! Ahhhh! I had a lot of fun with that one

FeatheryJustice

1. The Pacing, I love slow starts to comics because I get to absorb it and learn more. 2. Favourite Moment? Dude trying to climb out the window and failing. That was really funny XD 3. Mysterious dude from the water of course. He has pointed ears, you know something is up. 4. I like Maret and the mysterious man, it seems like a child being like 'this is new and I want to learn more' Also thank you for not writing a grating child character. They sometimes turn up too pure to be real, or too grating because they are too real. Maret at least has that nice balance of a healthy child will not acted spoiled but still want things because child like the scene where she was shoo'ed out of the room. 5. I think we talked about htis a long time ago, but I love the way you draw hands and feet! 6. Nothing so far, not sure where the story will head so I can't answer this. 7. I like the start of the mystery and the slow ramp up. We are just getting comfortable and I'm sure we are going to get rocky soon! 8. Art, from seeing Cronaj spend so much time on it, it's freaking amazing. I can almost feel the characters come to life.

Also on a side note, I want Maret to hear from the Conch shell (As a memey joke) "Under the sea, under the sea" XD

(Mysterious man has red hair, I wouldn't be surprised he turned out to be a mermaid XD Sorry I'm just on slight crack theory mode right now. He didn't sell his voice though)

Cronaj (Whispers of the Past)

When I was first writing and planning this comic, I was a little scared about how slow the start was, but I'm glad that it has been interesting despite the slow nature of the exposition.

2. Favourite Moment? Dude trying to climb out the window and failing. That was really funny XD

@FeatheryJustice Accurate! He's kind of an idiot, and he panics over nothing. For Maret... I actually based her character partially off of my two younger sisters, so that might be a lot of what contributes to her personality and realism. We did talk about hands and feet before! I love drawing hands, because they are so expressive and complex, but hate drawing feet because they are complicated. But I did study from life to draw Maret's feet, because I felt like I would mess it up otherwise ^^;

Hahahaha! I could definitely make an edit of that, tbh.

FeatheryJustice

That would be a funny joke panel if you ever want to do one. XD It's like replace the diaolgue memes XD

Cronaj (Whispers of the Past)

And I was partially making a mermaid joke when I had the reference to mermaids in the comic because he is a redhead

Definitely an idea....

I would title the episode "Whispers of the Crack"

FeatheryJustice

OMG YES I would love to see that XD

Cronaj (Whispers of the Past)

I have a WotP meme folder on my computer already

carcarchu

1. What did you like about the beginning of the comic? Mystery man pretty 2. What has been your favorite moment in the comic (so far)? i liked the part where maret was listening to the conch for mermaids, had a lovely magical charm to it 3. Who is your favorite character? mystery man 4. Which characters do like seeing interact the most? not too many interactions so far but maret and the mystery man were cute 5. What is something you like about the art? If you have a favorite illustration, please share it! the sunset scenery had a nice vibe

also i can see why people were saying it reminded them of ruroni kenshin, mystery guy especially with his hair up and on the cover image is reminiscent of kenshin but storywise doesn't remind me of it at all

carcarchu

I have some critiques that i'll cover in case you don't want to see them. SPOILER The anime-ish emotes (the blush and the anger vein) to me clash against the realistic artsyle and detracts from the moments, some more subtlety with them would be appreciated. And Maret doesn't really look like a child to me, her face is very mature so it makes her look older than she is. Moreover the 3 characters that have been introduced thus far have very similar facial features. For maret and agatha they are siblings so it makes sense but the mystery man is (presumably?) not related to them so i'm not sure if that's intentional. In any case more facial diversity would be appreciated going forward (if it's just your style that's fine too). And this is a really small nit-pick but the first panel of chapter 6 has horse hooves with the sfx thump thump thump. In my opinion this sfx should be clip clop clip clop END SPOILER

Cronaj (Whispers of the Past)

@carcarchu Thanks for the notes! I actually had a hard time deciding how to portray blush noticeably in a more realistic style, haha, but I can definitely see why it's jarring. Do you have any tips for how to depict blushing without anime emotes? I would just make it more reddish/pink, but it always looks weird to me (or too unnoticeable). As for Maret... She looks like a child to me? She's six, so she isn't quite a toddler, so I don't know if that changes your perception of her. She actually resembles my youngest sister a great deal, and my youngest sister was 5, almost six, when I designed her. (I just looked through the pages again, and there's maybe one panel that I think she looks slightly older in, so if anything, I'll try to fix that panel.) So yes, obviously Agatha and Maret look very similar, hahaha. They are biological sisters, so that makes sense. There will be at least two more characters introduced that are also related to them (and look fairly similar as well) and one character who will be mentioned who is also related and looks just like Agatha. Other than that, Izrekiel does look somewhat similar, I suppose, but it might also be partially that he canonically has a very feminine face as opposed to other male characters to be introduced later. It could be that and also a bit as a result of my style. I'm not sure. Ahhhh, sound effects! I also struggled with deciding what to do here. I wanted to do something different than "clip clop," mostly for a stupid personal hang-up. (I don't know why, but "clip clop" always looks so comical to me.) But if it helps translate the sound better, I might just have to bite the bullet and change it. Thanks for your feedback! Even if I don't agree with all of it, it does help me to take a closer look at what I've done with some different eyes. (edited)

carcarchu

That's fair! You don't have to accept anything just my thoughts (i hope nothing i said was too harsh) for me thump thump is a dull sound whereas clip clop or clippity clop is a sharper and harsher sound

Cronaj (Whispers of the Past)

yeah, I think you're right about that

thump is more like a heartbeat

or someone falling on carpet or something

carcarchu

and as for the blush question i think there are ways to depict a similar emotion without relying on the blush itself as a short hand like the softening of the eyes, the shape of the eyebrows, looking down and heck even body language can help with this. expression is more than what is shown on just the face

Cronaj (Whispers of the Past)

Thank you. I always feel like my characters look too stiff, like mannequins. ^^; I'm probably not going to completely redraw any old panels at this point, but I might make a few alterations to these panels to make it more consistent with later panels down the line.

carcarchu

i also noticed that a lot of your panels are the characters looking straight towards the "camera" and i would appreciate more varied angles and perspectives

Cronaj (Whispers of the Past)

Particularly with the first ten pages, that is certainly true

I got that note before, but I didn't redraw every panel, only some which looked particularly bad.

carcarchu

personally i never edit old chapters unless i 1. forgot to draw something important 2. there's a huge typo 3. it's missing a panel

any critique you can just keep in your heart and implement if you choose to do so moving forward

keii'ii (Heart of Keol)

2. I really liked "what if it's mama?" - a lot of hints condensed there: family history, how the topic of deaths/ disappearances are handled around children (either in that family specifically, or in that culture), and also a moment that shows a glimpse of Agatha's sisterly love instead of having the readers assume it.

snuffysam (Super Galaxy Knights)

Really loving the comic so far! Right now, I'm most interested to learn about this family situation. I'm guessing their mother is dead or missing, but what about their father? I suppose his clothes were still in the house so maybe he just went out? Or maybe they're both missing and it was just fairly recent?

Also, the paint-y style of this comic is just incredible

Cronaj (Whispers of the Past)

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I'm so happy that you guys picked up on the clues about their mother. It alludes to some pretty plot heavy stuff that very few people have really commented on so far.

eli [a winged tale]

Oooh I’m so excited for your story Cronaj! Here are my answers~ 1) I love the beach scene! Maret with the shell is adorable and you established their relationship right away 2) Fav moment is probably the scene transition to our lad waking up with Agatha going about her day. It’s very peaceful and I’m a sucker for slice of life stuff. 3) Can’t pick just yet~ I like Agatha as a solid protagonist though. 4) More Agatha x mystery man please 5) I loooove the illustration aesthetics. Bold colours! 6) haven’t gotten to the core theme yet I’m sure but first impressions/meeting are always exciting. 7) I’m excited for what is to come. Can’t wait for the call to adventure. 8) Strength is definitely the art - beautiful and bold. Keep up the wonderful work!

Cronaj (Whispers of the Past)

@eli [a winged tale] Woah!!! You're the first person I've heard say that they like Agatha! She's mah girl! (And don't you worry, there will definitely be a lot more Agatha x Mystery Man ) Thanks for participating

eli [a winged tale]

she’s a solid sister!

sagaholmgaard

1. What did you like about the beginning of the comic? I like how the intro had a nice balance between art and text. Usually if there’s a lot of text on the first page I can get deterred from heading a comic, but here I think it worked really well! And the loverly painting of the ocean sunset also reeled me in and fit really well with the poetic text! 2. What has been your favorite moment in the comic (so far)? ”He’s the prettiest man I’ve ever seen!” LOL (and she’s right too…) 3. Who is your favorite character? I like the kid! But I’m excited to learn more about the other characters as the story goes on! 4. Which characters do like seeing interact the most? I liked Agatha and Mystery Man interacting, it felt very natural and I’m curious to see what comes of it. But the dialogue felt pretty strong which I gotta applaud 5. What is something you like about the art? If you have a favorite illustration, please share it! The beautiful shot of Mystery Man on the beach of course, lol! I love the way the hair is rendered, it really feels like it’s has weight and is spread out in the sand, if that makes sense? 6. What is a theme you like that the comic explores? It seems like it will explore a lot of interesting themes in the future, such as grief and finding where you belong, so again I’m interested to see what the story brings! I’m sure it’ll be good no matter what :D Overall I like what I’ve read so far! It’s not the type of art style I usually gravitate towards, but I can tell a lot of love is going into rendering and I think we’ll be seeing Crona’s art improve a lot as the story goes on, which is always exciting to see!

RebelVampire

What I like about the beginning of the comic, which also goes for what I like about the art in general, is the attention to detail in the background colors and lighting. I've never seen such a beautifully rendered (what I assume is) a sunset. It really makes everything have this great almost mystical atmosphere to it. In general, though, the art so far is definitely the comic's strength because you can see the sheer passion in every drop of it. My favorite moment so far is when Maret gives Izrekiel some flowers and then drags him off and he's just meekly protesting. It was both cute and comedic and the preciousness hurt my heart. This is also why this is my favorite pair of characters interacting so far. I think the age gap combined with the context of Izrekiel's situation is gonna lead to lots of awkwardness that I look forward to. As for fave character, though, I would have to go with Agatha right now. I don't know what it is about her, but everytime I see her I feel like I'm looking at an old soul. Like maybe someone who still has a lot to learn about the world, but is wise beyond her years in other regards. And it makes her a captivating character for me.

While I'm not sure if this will be an overall theme throughout, I like that the comic starts to deal with the theme of loss and hope. On one side you have Agatha who just kind of accepts loss and deals with it, and then you have Maret who just lives on in hope. And I kind of feel they represent two dynamic sides to the issue about whether its better to cling to hope or just move on and deal and how both can be harmful if not expressed in the correct way. As for overall story content, while we're not that deep in, I do like it starts with a multitude of mysteries cause mysteries are always great for making ppl want answers

Eightfish (Puppeteer)

Since Crona said they were good with art critique: The main thing I noticed when I first saw the art was that, though lovingly rendered, the characters' faces and bodies are kind of stiff. They don't really scrunch up their eyes and faces when they emote- it's mostly just the eyebrows (this was especially noticable when Maret was crying, or on the latest page, first panel, where Agatha's face doesn't really match her body language or words). And characters often don't seem to twist their bodies as much as they should. Oh- also the same camera angles of faces and bodies are repeated a lot. Front, 3/4, and profile. It'd be cool to see some shots with foreshortening from above or below the characters. Also the lighting is pretty diffuse- the characters seem to be shaded about the same way, and with the same colors, regardless of the lighting situation. I can still tell where the light is coming from, because there are those strong bright highlights in the direction of the light, but other than the bright highlights everything else seems to be shaded as if there was another light source coming from straight ahead. Also, sometimes characters seem to lose their shadows? Like on this page https://www.webtoons.com/en/challenge/whispers-of-the-past/ch-1-what-the-waves-left-behind-pt-3/viewer?title_no=191366&episode_no=4 where Agatha doesn't cast a shadow on the man, or this page https://www.webtoons.com/en/challenge/whispers-of-the-past/ch-1-what-the-waves-left-behind-pt-8/viewer?title_no=191366&episode_no=10 where they're running.

Those things being said though, I was still very impressed by the sheer amount of effort put into this comic. 100 hours/ update is absolutely insane. And you pay so much attention to the inanimate objects of this world. It makes the story feel grounded. About what someone else said: I agree that the cartoonish blush looks out of place. But I disagree about Maret- I think she does look like a child. 5. Favorite illustration? Definitely Agatha's hands when making dough. Not a critique but just a question: I was confused on the location of the story. Where is this?

Cronaj (Whispers of the Past)

Ooof. Finally got a chance to sit down and respond to all these comments. I keep rereading them over and over again, so thank you so much for sharing your thoughts everyone! I've noticed a few themes with what people have commented so far: Maret is most people's favorite character, the panel of Izrekiel on the beach is also very popular, and the theme of loss/grief is apparent to the readers (which I'm very happy about.)

@sagaholmgaard I'm glad that you mentioned the theme of "finding where you belong" too, because it is and will be a very prevalent theme in the comic. And reading your comment about how the dialogue seems natural made my day. I used to worry about how the dialogue came off constantly, and to hear that it's strong is so encouraging.

@RebelVampire As is expected, your comments are very thought-out. The interaction between Izrekiel and Maret after he falls from the window is one of my favorite moments so far as well. I'm happy that Izrekiel's behavior came off as meek in this scene, because that is one of the defining traits of his personality. I'm glad for another Agatha fan! She is such a fun (and difficult) character for me to portray. There are so many layers about her that even I am still discovering. She is definitely an old soul, and he experiences growing up have definitely matured her beyond her years. As I mentioned before, the theme of loss is definitely a major theme of the comic overall. And hope as well, since I think the two are very connected.

Cronaj (Whispers of the Past)

@Eightfish (Puppeteer) Thank you for offering your critiques! Character stiffness is definitely one of my major problems that I'm working at. I definitely see what you mean about Agatha's face in the latest update. Her eyebrows look painted on (pun not intended). I have been looking forward to having some more dynamic poses, especially foreshortening, but I do find it somewhat difficult when most of what the characters are doing so far are standing, sitting, talking, and maybe doing something with their hands. ^^; Hopefully, in the future, when more "action" happens, it will be easier to do this. As for bird's eye or worm's eye shots, I'm not gonna lie, I struggle with them so much. I had two bird's eye panels, and those took so much time, and I still don't know how I feel about them. If you have any tips for exercises, I would be so grateful. (Finding reference isn't always possible.) I also would love some tips/resources on how to get better at lighting. Again, lighting reference isn't always possible for specific panels, so it would help me a lot to learn how light works in general. OOOOOOF! I don't know how I missed the lack of shadow on Izrekiel in that panel. That was 100% a stupid oversight on my part. The scene with Agatha making dough had some of my personal favorite illustrations for a while. :) Also, your question about the location, I'm not entirely sure how to answer it?(edited)

It's a high fantasy story, so the location is entirely fictional.

Cronaj (Whispers of the Past)

The best I can answer that is to say that the story takes place in a country called Shai-Ryam, consisting of four major "districts" in a semi-tropical temperate peninsula called "The Aka Peninsula," named after the native people who originally lived there. As of right now, they are in a city called Gon Atam, a seaside village on the western shore of the Nuata District, near the Ocean of Saturuna. It is a city heavy in trade and with a long history, yet quaint and small due to a disaster several hundred years ago. It is only now being repopulated.

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DISCUSSION PROMPTS – PART 2

9. Where do you think Izrekiel comes from, and what is his past history that seems to haunt him? Additionally, how do you think he wound up with amnesia and seemingly abandoned by the sea?

10. How will Izrekiel’s past history affect events of the story? In particular, how will revelations about his past affect his relationship with Agatha and other characters?

11. How do you think Agatha’s life will change from her encounter with Izrekiel? Will it somehow lead her to a more exciting life? If so, will it make her miss her simpler life with her family?

12. What are the biggest questions you have so far and are hoping to see answered over the course of the story? Also, what do you think will happen in the story in general?

Don’t feel inspired by the prompts? Feel free to discuss anything else that interested you!

Ash🦀

9. Okay, so, here’s my theory. Just a guess. So Izrekiel is from a very war-friendly people up north who need land. Izzy just isn’t all about that life, but feels like he has no choice. Then he gets hurt fighting someone close to him (I’m putting money on brother or cousin who lives on the “wrong” side of things, hurt because he just couldn’t fight them at full strength. And then he realizes he can’t do it, while on the ship bound for new fight zones. His captain gets wind of it and is like “oh no I can’t let Mutiny Happen” so HeS all long ike “either fall in line or get off my ship” and Izzy is like “no I don’t wanna fight anymore heck you guys” and the captain proceeds to yeet him off the ship, leading him to the island, which, unbeknownst to him, is the next target. That’s my guess. Might be wildly off. He might be part mermaid. (Merman? Is mermaid gender neutral?) 10. Izzy or his bros probably killed one of Agatha’s family members, possibly the mom? Possibly violently? Which is why she never told babygirl what’s up. It’s probably going to be remembered in the buds of their relationship, hes going to try to hide it but it’ll come to light and she’s gonna be like “Izzy I hate you” and it’s going to make me cry. 11. She’s going to have a bread making partner in the end. They’re going to have adventures and go back to a domestic bread making existence, I speak it into being now /smacks table That may just be what I want to happen, though, as I very much enjoy bread making and wish others the same simple joy of giving dough a good smacking. 12. IS THE MOTHER REALLY A MERMAID OR WHAT Is Agatha a mermaid Are they like Selkies where they can come onto land a little Is babygirl a mermaid too(edited)

Cronaj (Whispers of the Past)

Omg... I love reading these theories. I won't say you're wrong or right, but this is a riot. I'm thoroughly enjoying this.

FeatheryJustice

9. Pulls out my Crack Theory brain Okay, so Iz is actually not a very hot man, but actually a really hot princess, transformed into a man since she was exciled from her country but their rules are to give the exiled a new life so they shape shift them into something else. Iz got shifted into a man, and the lovely wide bare chest was because their top was lost to the ocean like how someone would lose their bathing suit top to the sea. Anyways, knowing nothing about themselves, Iz now lives their life as a man never remembering they were a princess in the first place. Ends Crack Theory 10. Don't know, can't say for now. 11. She could always politely kick him out later, so I can't say for now. XD 12. I want to know if there are monsters in this story or just like different species warring it out.

RT|NitghVision

^ I like this theory

Eightfish (Puppeteer)

@Cronaj (Whispers of the Past) Oh! I missed that it was high fantasy. I thought the story was historical fiction. No wonder mystery man has pointed ears. I was so confused- I kept thinking, oh, she looks Polynesian and lives by the ocean. But wait, her name is Agatha and she makes bread? And the houses look Japanese? What culture are her clothes from? The world being completely fictional explains all that. I think I was confused by the real names in a high fantasy story- you don't really see that a lot. Finding the right reference for lighting or pose is impossible for me. I have no tips. The only way I've found is to make my own references. I will sit in front of a window, or take a lamp into a dark room or something, and prop my phone up and take photos of myself in the poses and lighting direction I need. But hey, at least that way I don't have to worry about stealing someone else's work?

(i also like feathery's theory)

Cronaj (Whispers of the Past)

@FeatheryJustice Crack theories are best theories.

@Eightfish (Puppeteer) Oh! I had no idea you thought it was historical fiction No wonder you were confused! There's a lot of weird cultural-mixing shenanigans going on in the setting, and it's a bit confusing.

I should try that, for now the lighting has been primarily sunlight, or diffused sunlight (which I don't think I depicted correctly).

RebelVampire

Time to crack story theory. I don't know enough about the world to guess a name to where Izrekiel is from. However, wherever it's from, I get the impression its embroiled in a bloody war that is suffering heavy casualties. I imagine that Izrekiel mightve been in a battle and just wound up in the sea by circumstance - like maybe was taken as a prisoner of war and jumped overboard to escape. Something like that. As for the amnesia, well, Imma chock that up to PTSD cause the brief flashbacks we got don't look pleasant. However, I definitely think someone will come looking for him, and that these someone's will make trouble with the people he's just met - perhaps even forcing them to abandon their home with people in pursuit. And I'm sure as Izrekiel remembers more, others are going to really view him as potentially dangerous and blame him (but then get over it cause he's pretty O_O) Given that, I do think Agatha is gonna leave home because of Izrekiel's past running after them. I do think she's inevitably gonna miss the simpler life. Not to the point she won't rise to the challenge, but to the point that she's gonna be like "wait theres danger out here and i didnt even get a sword from an old man in a cave!" As for biggest questions, right now I'm just kind of hoping to see more of the world cause current world events really are gonna dictate a lot where the story could go.

Eightfish (Puppeteer)

Dude I was literally googling the names to see what country they were from because I thought they were from some obscure real island with a history of cultural mixing that I hadn't heard about before.

Cronaj (Whispers of the Past)

Hahaha! Yeah, Agatha is an English name. Maret and Kelan (a character that hasn't been introduced yet) are Irish names. Aalia (another character that isn't introduced yet) is an Arabic name. Kehhasan (another character) is a made-up name. Izrekiel is a made-up name inspired by the biblical names Israel and Ezekiel (although technically it is often spelled in their alphabet as "Isarikieru," which has a particular meaning and pronunciation in an even older—fictional—language). Ryukou (another character), is a real-ish name, based off of the Japanese names "Ryu" and "Kou," which mean "dragon" and "peace/light" respectively. Four other characters have fictional names: Ia, Tammamori, Soro, Ghita (although technically it's a Greek name, that wasn't my inspiration). And of course there are hundreds of side characters with a combination of weird names and name origins.

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DISCUSSION PROMPTS – PART 3

13. What are you most looking forward to seeing in regards to the comic?

14. Any final words of encouragement for the comic?

Don’t feel inspired by the prompts? Feel free to discuss anything else that interested you!

Deo101 [Millennium]

So! I don't really do so well with answering questions, but I do want to say it's inspiring to me to see just how much WORK is put into this comic. It's really lovely to see so clearly how much you care for it. Just want to give some general words of encouragement, keep it up!

Ash🦀

I’m most looking forward to seeing more of Izzy how the story develops along with your painting. There are so many hints and peeks at the world, and I can’t really guess where it’s going. I feel like I already care for these characters, and I can’t wait to see their journey. I am also not good at encouragement, as generally I’m fueled by spite. But I just wanted to say, keep going! You got this! We believe in you!

eli [a winged tale]

Keep up the good work Cronaj! Your art is beautiful and I can’t wait till we start rolling into act 2!

FeatheryJustice

I'm excited to see what else comes up next!

Cronaj (Whispers of the Past)

Thanks for all the kind words and encouragement everyone! I'm so happy to know that you are enjoying the story so far!

RebelVampire

I'm most looking to learning a bit more about the world structure I think. Since I think current events are really gonna hint at a lot what's going on. As for final words, this is an artistically wonderful comic with a lot of love put in, and I can only imagine how things will improve in the future!

snuffysam (Super Galaxy Knights)

I'm just really looking forward to seeing these characters grow! This is a beautiful comic, and I can't wait to get more of it!

Cronaj (Whispers of the Past)

Before the book club ends, I just wanted to pop back in and say thank you to everyone for their participation. Your kindness, insight, and critiques will stay with me for years to come. I'm so happy to have found a supportive community of readers and fellow creators!

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“Are you okay down there?!,” a female voice boomed from above. “Don´t move! I called 911, help is on the way!”

Jared looked up but the darkness which had fallen over the Malibu hills shielded the owner of the voice from his gaze. Thank god she was there tho, whoever this saving angel was!

“Thanks,” he replied with a huff.

“Are you badly hurt? Can you move?,” the voice inquired. He could just about make out her shape hovering somewhere in the distance above him.

“Yeah I´m okay, but I think my ankle is broken.”

“Okay don´t move around, you´ll only make it worse. The medics will know what to do!”

“Thanks,” Jared sighed quietly from the pit.

Great. A broken ankle...

There goes that tour then.

How could he have been so careless?! He had been so deep in thought, so angry over Alice´s baby bombshell that he simply failed to notice that massive hole in his path before it was too late.

Before he now found himself sitting in a dark pit with a shattered ankle.😭

“Wow you really took a tumble, didn´t you?!”, the voice from above quizzed, snapping Jared back to reality.

"Yeah... I got distracted I guess...”

“Well don´t you worry, dude. You´ll be good as new in no time,” she continued as she laid down on the ground next to the hole.

“I´ll be up here keeping you company until the medics get here.”

“Thanks, I appreciate it,” Jared answered back, feeling gratitude that this saving angel happened to be near in his time of need. Without her, this thing could have ended pretty badly!

“So what got you so distracted that you didn´t spot a huge hole in the ground, dude?”

"Eh... Nothing... Just preoccupied, I guess...”

“I get that,” the angel replied. “I sometimes come here too, to get away from... well, “nothing””.

“Yeah...,” Jared chuckled.

She seems cool.

“What’s your name?”

Ah… the dreaded question rang from above.

He didn’t want to tell her the truth.

What if she’s some crazy echelon psycho who loses her shit and jumps in the pit too? No room for heifers down here! 🐴

Or she could be a fame-hungry LA pap chaser who sells this story to the TMZ for 20 bucks… 😒💰

No, better play it safe and keep it neutral.

“I’m… uhm… Joseph.”

“You don’t sound sure, Joseph.”

She was very quick and alert, he noticed. Damn.

Maybe play it cool. She seems like she could take a joke.

“Well… I figured since we don’t know each other and I’m kinda at your mercy here… what if you’re like Kathy Bates in Misery and I gotta make a run for it?!”

“Oh… Well would be a kind of a sllllooooow run for it tho,” she quipped back with a giggle.

Phew! She got it.

She’s cool. She’s very cool.

“It’s actually my middle name. I sometimes use it when I wanna escape real life,” he continued.

“That’s smart, Joseph. I might start doing that too!,” the voice from above yelped excitedly.

“In fact: imma start right now!”

She rolled on her stomach and peeked her head in the pit, but in the pitch blackness there was no seeing her face from below ground. Only a few blonde-ish locks waving in the soft evening breeze.

“Hi, Joseph. I’m Michelle.”

Michelle.

Lovely name.

“Hi, Michelle.”

“Hi.” 😊

They both giggled and then fell silent. Michelle’s head disappeared from above as she retreated back to lie on her back next to the pit.

“Sooo… Did you just make up that name, Michelle?”

“It’s my middle name. I figured that was our thing, "Joseph”,“ she laughed.

Aaaaaaah, we have a "thing” now…😏

Jared always enjoyed a bit of flirting with the fairer sex, and since he´s now stuck in this pit...

“So... eh... what do you do, Michelle?”

“I… uhm… I… I suppose you could say I’m a… housewife…”

“Well now YOU don’t sound sure!,” Jared picked up on her hesitation.

She chuckled.

“Oh you noticed that… Well it’s a relatively new thing so I’m still getting used to it, I guess! How about you?”

Crap…

Another opportunity for exposure.

“Well… I work for a record company.”

Technically not a lie! 😁

“Aaaah so you’re in the music business?”

“A little bit yeah.”

“A musician?”

“Uh… part-time.”

Technically also not a lie! 😝

“Would I have ever heard any of your music, you think?”

Goooooooood, if only… 😞

“I… uh… probably not.”

His heart sniffled. 😔

“Oh… Well maybe one day, Joseph!”

“Yeah… maybe…”

Well now he wasn’t just lying to her… He was also lying to himself. 😶

They both fell silent, just laying there in the moonlight, one in a pit and one above ground, staring up at the starry sky. Jared felt oddly at peace, even tho he was stuck in a pit with just this one stranger keeping him attached to life outside his hole.

Their silence was peculiarly comfortable.

Just two strangers, sharing a moment in the wilderness.

“So what brought you up here this evening then?,” Jared finally decided to spark up their conversation again since the medics seemed to be taking their sweet time.

“Well… I was at this party with my husband and-”

“Oh… You’re married?”

Bummer.😔

“Yes. I’m a housewife, remember?”

“Oh…”

For some reason Jared felt a little bit hurt by this news.

“Anyway, so tonight I’m at this party with my husband we got into an argument and I took off ‘cos otherwise I might have slapped him… So I just drove around and finally ended up here!”

“What’d he do?”

Michelle laughed.

She had a wonderful laughter. Warm, catchy, strangely familiar.

“What makes you think it was his fault?”

“Oh please, isn’t it always the dude’s fault?,” Jared snorted sarcastically.

His quip was met with more giggles.

Her giggles made him giggle under his breath as well.

“Well… yeah! Why is that tho?!,” she quipped. “Men are always stirring up shit!”

“Heeeeeey, that’s not true! Women are the nutters who constantly create drama and misunderstand everything! I swear women have some weird-ass gene that makes them incapable of letting shit go,” Jared protested.

Still more giggles from above.

Jared enjoyed knowing he could make her laugh so effortlessly.

“So what did this hubby of yours do then?”

Michelle described how they had gotten into an argument over her hubby’s upcoming work trips abroad, and how she jumped in her car to drive off for some alone cooling-off time. Jared listened quietly in his pit, soaking in her stories as her mesmerizing voice filled the air...

Her voice made him feel warm even tho temperatures in his little prison were slowly dropping.

She effortlessly moved on to chatting about her love of nature and surfing, and Jared entertained her with (partly truthful) tales from his rock climbing treks.

They shared giggles and witty back and forth banter as the minutes ticked by, and Michelle even playfully “scolded” Jared by throwing her Manolo Blahnik at him when he made yet another sarcastic remark about what bitches all women are.

He didn’t mind being shoe’d by her.

“You sound bitter, Joseph. Girl trouble?”

He hesitated with his reply.

“It’s okay, you don’t have to tell me.”

“It’s just… really complicated right now,” Jared sighed quietly. He wasn’t quite ready to get into that whole Alice/baby mess yet.

Michelle peeked her head through the hole again.

“It’s okay. We don’t have to talk about it.”

“Thanks.”

Jared again tried to make out her face in the darkness but… nope.

But going by her dreamy, comforting voice and fun, sparkling personality, she no doubt was beautiful on the outside too.

A silence descended upon their little “campsite” again.

“Wanna know something funny, Joseph? Your voice sounds familiar.”

“Oh…?”

Jared still didn’t wanna explain to her why that might be…

“It’s… uh… it’s probably just a really common voice, I get that a lot,” he fibbed, hoping she wouldn’t probe more. For some reason he, a proud lifetime-long Liar Extraordinaire, felt bad about lying to her.

She was so nice and helpful and made him feel safe even tho he was sat almost 3 meters underground in a dirty pit in pitch blackness..

“Oh… Yeah that must be it,” she replied.

“In LA you meet so many people that names and faces and voices all start sounding the same.”

"Yeah,” Jared replied. On one hand his ego was nagging him to let her in on his real identity so he could get some much-needed fawning-over which would be more than welcome after the shitty day he had lived through, but still he held back.

“Your heel broke btw,” he said as he picked up her stray shoe and took a closer look.

“Damn... I just bought those last week!,” Michelle sighed.

“Don´t worry, I´ll buy you new ones if I ever get out.”

“Thanks but I don´t know if my husband would like it if strange men bought me shoes,” Michelle giggled.

“Ugh fine, coffee then! Surely this dude won´t mind if I treat you to a beverage?!”

“I´m sure coffee would be ok,” Michelle agreed.

“Okay good, it´s a date then,” Jared smirked in the darkness.

If this chick is even halfway decent in the looks department, and more importantly in the weight department, he knew once the secret of his identity was revealed, she´d be thanking HIM for... well, for whatever would happen after he invited her over for a... “cup of coffee”... ☕

“Shhh! Listen,” the angel interrupted his daydreams. “I think I hear the ambulance”. 🚑

“Ah thank god,” Jared sighed in relief. Finally he could get out of this stinkin´ hole!

Altho in all fairness this evening had not been a total disaster... This savior angel had not only physically helped him in his hour of need by calling for help and staying to make sure he was okay, but also helped him get his mind off that scandalous baby business back home...

Perhaps, since they now had this nice connection established, if there was trouble in her marriage and seeing as there definitely was trouble in his own little relationship, maybe... maybe... 😜

Jared heard a car approaching and a male voice joined Michelle.

"What´s your husband´s name, ma´am?”

“Oh no, that´s not my husband! I just happened to be nea-... actually I don´t even know his name!”

She peeked in again.

“Yo! What´s your name? Like... REAL name.”

Well, there was no use in hiding it anymore...

“I´m Jared,” he answered. “Jared Leto.”

Silence.

A loooooong silence.

All Jared could hear were nasty ants scurrying around him in the pit and the medics shuffling around somewhere above him, but other than that...

Nothing.

“Hello...?,” Jared hollered. “Are you still there?”

“Uh... Yeah... I´m here...,” Michelle answered. Her voice sounding unsure and a bit strained all of a sudden.

“So who´s this guy down there then?,” Jared heard a male voice coming closer and saw a dark figure appearing above.

“He´s... eh... Jared Leto,” she replied with a slight stutter and a half-chuckle as she disappeared from Jared´s view.

“Right, okay. Well, let´s get him out then!”, the medic sounded unimpressed as he leaped into the pit, craftily maneuvering himself so he didn´t land on his patient. A quick check on the ankle revealed that luckily it indeed wasn´t broken but definitely severely twisted so a trip to the ER was still needed.

A second medic appeared above, and then a third. They lowered a few ropes down the pit and Jared sighed in relief as he was finally hoisted out of his underground prison, two men pulling from above and one pushing his ass from below.

Once he was safely back on solid ground, the three men helped him to a gurney.

"Did you wash your hands after your last patient?,” Jared asked as he was being strapped in.

“Sir, I´m wearing gloves,” the medic replied with a slight eye roll.

“Good! I´m very sensitive to germs.”

“Well you must have had fun down there in your hole then...,” the medic chuckled.

“Listen, Seinfeld. I´m not paying you to do stand-up over here. You better get me to a hospital asap before I have your license.”

The medic thought it best to not even respond, but rather just quietly rolled the gurney to the ambulance.

“WAIT!,” Jared yelped just as they reached the car.

“What, sir? Are you in pain?”

“Where´s that woman who called you?”

"I... I don´t know. I guess she left,” the medic replied.

“WHAT?! What do you mean she left?! She can´t just leave, I don´t even know her name!”

“Calm down, sir. Please, we need to get moving, we have a long wa-”

“No we can´t go! Go out and look if she´s still there!,” Jared demanded. “I need to see her again! We had this connection and-...”

“Sir, this is an ambulance. Not a tinderlance. We´re going now,” the medic calmly replied as he shoved the gurney inside and started filling his patient´s information on his clipboard form.

“Let´s go, Larry!,” the medic called out to the driver.

“YOU MOVE THIS FUCKING THING ONE INCH AND I SWEAR I´LL HAVE YOU ALL FIRED!,” Jared screamed at the top of his lungs.

“DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA WHO YOU´RE DEALING WI-,”

“Wooooow... Talk about a blast from the past...” the familiar female voice suddenly sounded from somewhere off to the side just as the doors swung close.

“WAIT! That´s her!,” Jared yelped again. “Don´t go, I need your number!”

He didn´t get a reply but instead heard her giggling outside.

"Michelle! Can you hear me?! I don´t know your last name! Please!” 🙏🏻

No response, just giggles.

The ambulance driver slowly started backing away, despite Jared knocking on the side windows to grab Michelle´s attention.

There was no response coming, and in a last ditch effort Jared grabbed the medic´s clipboard.

“Hey, you can´t read that! It´s privileged information!”

“Oh shut up, that´s MY information!,” Jared barked.

Her name has to be in there somewhere...

Jared glanced the clipboard up and down, looking for some clues to who had alerted the medics to save him, and finally at the bottom of the page...

“There it is!,” he shrieked.

“identity of 911 caller: Phone number 555-9227. Name: Cameron Di...”

He froze for a second and looked up at the window as the ambulance slowly pulled away, only to spot his saving angel waving him goodbye with a smile, the ambulance lights finally revealing her face... 😲

DISCLAIMER AND RULES

(PS. Thanks for the vote and fic idea, anon! I took some liberties with the execution tho... hehe...)

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sketchguk · 3 years ago

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Hi Hi how are you? I have many days off this week because of Easter so I'm glad!

I met my crush on weekend but we were not alone 😔 we met with friends! But I hope we meet this week or weekend alone, I want to ask him but I don't want him think I'm going too fast hdssdsds so I'm thinking what to do. When we met on weekend he remembered my favourite icecream flavor 😭 I know I told him only few days ago but I was still so happy hdsssdsdss he talked to me a lot this time because of his work topic, He thinks I understand everything because I was talking about the topics you and your friend told me to 😭 I don't really understand everything but I nod and smile hdsdsss he's so cute when he talks about it! Thanks for the topics again 😭

Your friend's boyfriend is Jins age so 31? That's not so younger than my crush! But my crush said it's a big thing to finish three stripes at that age because covid made flight school so slow so many people lost 2-3 years, so my crush said without covid your friend's bf would've completed it earlier! He was asking how your friends bf managed to get flying hours during covid 😭😭 was he three stripes even before covid?? Because many airlines pilot didn't fly during lockdown so many junior pilot didn't get flight hours. My crush is also struggling because of that, he asked me what your friends bf did, So he can get some idea or help from it 😭😭😭 I told him i don't know but I said I'll ask hsadsdssa. Do you know anything??? How did he complete flight hours?? Is there a shortcut or trick 😭😭😭 if you don't know or don't want to ask your friend it's okay hdsdsss I will tell him idk! I thought it will be helpful for him but I don't want to annoy you or your friend 😔

aaah 25 21 sounds sooo good, I saw people were expecting something else from the ending. Your correct about that not realistic! But people wanted more answers 😭 what was your favourite kdrama before this??

I read all the gryffindor soonyoung asks! But I don't know if I miss something because it's not tagged so, I read when I see some answers on your blog! mc's gift to mingyu is so hot hdsdsss how does she tell him that? 😭 Does he ask where's my gift and she tells him? Does soonyoung find out about mcs gift 😭

I don't remember the quidditch after party fight much, was it because mingyu said something?? Soonyoung should be mad at mc for always supporting mingyu even though mingyu says rude things 😭 why?? just because mingyu is hot??? 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

aaaaaaah but what happens on soonyoung's bday?? Does mc know it's his bday? Will soonyoung ask for a gift too ? 😂😂 - 🍰

Hii ! I'm good ! I just came back from a weekend trip from Philadelphia. It was a lot of fun !

I don't think it would be too soon if you asked him to hang out alone. You've already been friends for a while. He remembered your favorite ice cream flavor too. That’s practically better than 3rd base, right? 💔 Are you going to tell him that you had wingwomen help you with conversation topics? aha I would find it so endearing if someone told me that. It’s like someone is doing research into my hobbies/interests just so they could get to know me better. That’s soo cute, no?!!! But maybe he’ll also figure it out with the nodding and smiling LOL

Ah, my bad ! My friend's bf is the same age as Seokjin internationally, 29! I'm not too sure how he got his flight training. He worked soo many jobs, and he was getting his masters and PhD at the same time. I don't think he ever sleeps tbh 😭 But recently, he started working at the airline job, and he made that his primary. Maybe he got the three stripes during the pandemic?? And that was like the catalyst for taking this new job?? I’m not sure if there are any shortcuts to take because it seems like such an important job that needs training in it’s entirety 😔 I’ll see if my friend can let me know some insight though !

I think people really want a special Twenty Five Twenty One episode ! Or a reunion kind of thing. An alternate ending would satisfy all of our needs, but they neverrrr do that :/ For the longest time, I LOVED Crash Landing on You. It’s always the emotional shows that get me :’) Our Beloved Summer is definitely up there along with It’s Okay to Not Be Okay. For feel good shows, Hometown Cha Cha Cha, Fight for My Way, Strong Woman Do Bong Soon, and Weightlifting Fairy Kim Bok Joo are my faves !

I’ve been meaning to tag my Gryffindor Soonyoung asks, but I want a cute name for it. I can’t decide on one LOL. If I were mc, I would straight up tell Mingyu that he could have whatever he wants because I’m a wh*re and a people pleaser. However, mc is a hawt girl . She doesn’t chase, she attracts 😔 So Mingyu would probably be the one to ask "where’s my gift?” She’d tease him a little or pretend that she forgot it was his birthday. He’s gonna whine, but she wants him to work for it !! Then finally, she would tell him to lean down so she can whisper in his ear, “you can have whatever you want.” >.<

Would Soonyoung find out?? Hmm I’ve hurt him so much, I feel like i need to scale back on a few things LOL. He’s already aware of their relationship, but he can’t even be mad about it because they’re not together 💔 He does believe that she deserves better, however !!! And that’s why he’s soo frustrated.

Oh yeah at the quidditch game, Soonyoung was mad that mc supported Hufflepuff, and she even wore Gyu’s yellow scarf. On the field, he said Mingyu isn’t even hot shit and vice versa. But Mingyu told Soonyoung that’s not what mc said when he fucked her last night 😭 hufflepuff card REVOKED. They fought, Soonyoung got benched, Hufflepuff won. At the party, mc was on Mingyu’s arm all night, and Soonyoung was ready to pounce again because she didn’t hear what Mingyu said on the field :/ But by that time, Soonyoung was drunk and he was causing a scene. Mc told him to leave, but he was upset that she was taking Mingyu’s side once again 😭 So when he didn’t give up, Mingyu and mc were the ones to walk away hand in hand.

Why does mc deal with this?? Mingyu is hot yeah, I’m glad we agree LOL. I feel like it’s out of pocket for her to go back to him even after the things he said. But I also believe that even the most intelligent and strong willed people can become blind when they’re infatuated with someone (aka literally all my friends when they return to their terrible boyfriends). Also, I love making characters a reflection of ME because I usually chase after people who don’t want me back romantically LMAO. It’s just one of her flaws, ya know? He’s

Omg for Soonyoung’s birthday, I guess it depends on what stage they’re at in their relationship. Maybe if they are in the first few months where he’s trying to befriend her, make her like him, etc, at that point, she would not know about his birthday. But when she hears about it from another friend, she might wish him and bake him a little cake as a surprise ! Throw him a bone because she still has a soft spot for him. If she is with Mingyu at the time, she might be pissed off at Soonyoung loll. Maybe Soonyoung would approach her, try not to be annoying for 24 hours, and just spend time with her. He wouldn’t even mention it was his birthday, but when she gets suspicious of his actions, she’ll ask him what’s wrong. The day would be nearly over, and then he would tell her !! I don’t think he wants a gift. He just wants to have one good day with mc 💛

#ravenclaw mc i'm gonnna steal your boyfriend #ask #anon #🍰 anon

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Kana.......if you keep posting fics like this at the end of the year my top 3 is going to be just your art. "24 hours with you" and now this beauty?

“You’re thinking about my lips? Seriously?” He asks, but might as well splash cold water to your face. “If you said something about my eyes, sure, I mean, they are attractive. One might even say that God Himself took the stars from the sky and put them in my eyes—but my lips? Huh, that’s new.” aaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, yes. I love this so much

i love EVERY SINGLE dialogue specially the one's from hyuck, they got witty and funny and cute and positive as the words pass JAJAJA the lip thing? good i love it. And you kept using it in a way that its not repetitive and i love that so much

I found really lovely the part where they were eating and she was like "you are so nice" while he was stealing her food JAJAJAJA

the goodmorning thing???? AAAAAAAH I LOVE IT SO MUCH. it was super cute i cant handdle this

the taeil story was so amazing! i love it and the message he gave to hyuck was really nice

“For saying that sincerely.” He taps the side of his head, gesturing that he read your thoughts. NO BRO KAJSDHASD im going to stop putting dialogues that i love bcs im going to copy paste the hole fic

brooooooooo, the part where hyuck broke, the way you portray the sadness and the vulnerability was amazing (i almost cryyy). But...

Did i cry on mark's part? absolutely yes

and now im crying again bcs of her story damn

BRO GOING TO MARK'S GRAVE IM CRYING AGAIN JAJAJAJAJAJJAAAJ

commenting on the main's character reason: it was so real, and even if you are not alone and have lot of friends or a family you can feel lonely (and i hate that jajajaj :( ), so i felt that people could get that feeling from her alone or not alone, its so hard to find someone that its there for you and gets you :(

Slipknot’s Solway Firth its a good song JAJAJAJ

“Maybe, when Jaehyun finally kisses you. Which would be never.” yeeeeeeeees boy get it

THE poet thing in the kiss i love ittttttttt

and well the sex part?? i enjoy it a loooooot, not awkward, both of the having a good time and short JAJJAJA and when you describe hyuck's body and he was like "damn girl" JAJAJA i was having fun reading it

about the characters, well... hyuck, i think it is super clear that his character is so beautifuly written. i dont remember the joke but:

we dont want real men we want men written by women you know? JAJAJA he was so flirty in a not cringe way, so funny yet serious and caring

(it reminded me, this may be too much info but, hey the fic did this to me, it interpellated me lol, one time i stayed until like 7am talking to a guy and he was all the time like "you talked too much" AND i know he did it in a flirty way you know? i didt felt offended but i was like "omg sorry hahaha" like flirtring but.... after that it stop, like mmmm why do people flirt like fighting........ (im sorry, their morning conversation reminded me of that JAJJAJAJAJA). I also like that you use some elements from the actual haechan you know?

the main??? too real for my liking JAJAJA WHEN I READ FICS I DONT THINK ABOUT PEOPLE I JUST THING OF SILHOUETTES AND THE SITUACION, BUT In here.... i kinda was picturing faces which it was so weird JAJAJA (in a good way)

And jaehyun's character too, i also enjoy it! i like that he was not just a one appearance thing

i started reading it at 5am and finished it at 9..... im so glad i was looking for fics on the tags and came across this, i saw that it was from you and i started it without looking the amount of words so when i finish it and read the A/N, i was like 36k??? it felt like nothing like for real, everything was so freaking smooth and perfectly written, you are a genious. This was not just a fantasy soulmate thing (and why the fuck i wanna cry right now????? THE POWER OF THE FIC, ACTUAL COMFORT RIGHT HERE PEOPLE) it was a story (to me of course, the fic made me felt this way) about a search of our own needs, we might be our own soulmates bro, love ourself, battle our demons and then live WHAT AM I TALKING ABOUT BRO IM CRYING THE FUCK JAJAJAJAJJAJAJAJAJAJ AND ALSO I LOVE THAT it was everything so serious and then a funny comment there. One moment i was crying and then i was smiling kajdhsad

Most of the soulmates stories are like we are soulmate ok done but in here there was a purpose and i like that . Also this universe has a lot of potencial JAJAJAJ people gathering to become better and be good to themself

on the trip thing, from there i was thinking other things to happend like them having sex there bla bla from that point i was predicting something and pom other things happened which i love!

i dont know when you shaved but when i do im always complaing about it, i imagine this situation jajajaja hyuck reading her thoughts while saving for the trip like girl its winter..........JAJAJAJAJ SORRY

Love, you are an amazing writer! i hope you keep the hard work and the passion you put in this stories bcs its so obvious. Thank you for sharing this amazing fic, i will look forward to the next and the next and the next

also, can we talk about how beautiful the banner is???????? yes

My Words, Your Thoughts

Lee Donghyuck/Haechan X Reader | Fluff, Hurt/Comfort, Smut | Soulmate AU, Friends-to-Lovers AU | 36k

Synopsis: As an introvert, you are familiar with the silence. Drowning yourself deep in your thoughts has been a habit you’ve become addicted to. Your life begins to change, however, ever since the day you turned twenty. Suddenly, there’s this song that’s stuck in your head, and no matter how much you yearn to hear your thoughts or be comforted by the silence, it keeps on playing. You only get to find the answer to your problem when a young, cute barista hands you a cup of coffee one day, with that song’s lyrics written on the side. And you realize that you’re not the only one who’s been hearing voices in your head.

Warnings: explicit sex, expletives, mentions of physical abuse and astraphobia (not for the main characters)

It’s weird. It’s so weird.

It’s weird that you’ve been hearing this song replaying over and over again in your head when you’re sure you’ve never listened to it before. It’s also weird because sometimes the song sounds like the ones you often hear about on the radio—complete with instrumental accompaniment and everything—but most of the time, it just sounds like someone is humming to it. Sometimes quietly, but more often than not, vehemently like they’re having a concert in the shower, not caring if the neighbors might hear.

As someone who rarely listens to mainstream music, you don’t keep up with the trend these days but the tunes are catchy enough that you think, maybe, it’s one of those Justin Bieber’s songs people always talk about. You’re not fond of it, though, so even if you’ve heard it somewhere in a cafe or a mall, there’s very little chance you’ll be humming it in your head.

And yet, it keeps on playing.

It gets worse when it goes on for a whole day—a whole fucking day—that your brain feels like it’s seconds away from bursting into pieces. It doesn’t even sound like your voice. It seems like it belongs to a male, a bit light and a pitch higher than most. Though it sounds pleasant, the voice is unfamiliar to your ears and that’s what bothers you the most.

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#cami's recs #julio21 #kana #sundaysundaes #i hope i didt forget anything #ALSO THIS IS LONG #SORRY

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