#TornPaw

[once-a-kittypet]

Tornear

First Mention: Forest of Secrets (chapter 2; page 32)

[beetle-clan]

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Welcome to moon 3.. part 1! There's more for me to draw buttttt im way too tired rn. Sigh

The drawing with Webby was heavily referenced from this moon by FallenClan with Mr. Oreo ^_^

[elementclangen]

Moon 184-Greenleaf

Poolbounce (20)  just can’t stop adopting kits.  This time, he adopted two kits a loner left to the Clan.  Both of them are water-blessed, which Creekstar (38) is grateful for.  At least one of them will become a mediator.  It’ll be nice to have one again.  The little girl, Swiftkit (2), loves using her water-blessing to get into trouble.  She uses it to make the splashes from puddles even bigger to drench one of Poolbounce’s other kits, Robinkit (1).  He’s not a fan of getting doused with water, and the most his fire-blessing can do is warm him up a little bit.  The other kit, Silverkit (2), makes quite a team with Swiftkit.  Sometimes the two of them will make a wave that completely drenches the nursery.  How fun.   Lightkit (1) seems to be getting along better with Silverkit and Swiftkit than his bio brother.  He has a fun time joking around with Silverkit.  Robinkit is excited to escape his splashing tormentors and dreams about becoming a warrior.  In other family relationships, Gladepatch (60) is feeling a little defensive of his daughter after she got rejected by Wildcave (67).  He doesn’t think the other tom is being completely honest with Creekstar about his feelings.  Pigeonspot’s (53) efforts to get along with Sleepyfoot’s (50) older kits seem to be going well, at least with Astertwist (20).  She appreciates the advice the young Healer gives her.  She’s also been spending time with her younger bio son, Elmroot (14) and wants to explore the whole territory with him.  Primcrest feels the need to keep all of her skills sharp and challenges Elmroot to spar with her.  Frecklepaw (11) is enjoying her Healer training, particularly the parts where she gets to hang out with the elder, Peakspots (153).  She promises she’ll always take care of him. Tornpaw (11) is working hard at developing fighting techniques that take advantage of his disability.  He’s determined that he’ll be just as skilled in battle as any able-bodied fire-blessed cat!

[splashclan-clangen]

once again i couldn't help myself and did all the suggestions (these are just too fun 😭)

suggestions from @/wizardgirl25

i decided on tornrun for the last one because i ADORE him and i think this is probably a good representation of his experience in the clan as he got older and realized how sucky his mom was as a leader asdkljfkl

[spire-clan]

Introducing SpireClan! The survivors of two warring clans that destroyed themselves in a final battle, they followed a sign from StarClan into the mountains and found a new home waiting for them. Now it's up to them to build a new legacy from the ashes of their disgraced former clanmates!

[rose-warriorcatsrefs]

[ripple-clan]

And so it begins...

Trying to figure out a different text style but this works for now!

Moon 0

[typhos-c-dragon]

now that some of the murderers who never confessed in braveclan started dying, i've been making sure to plop their asses in the dark forest. i ended up sending tornfur there once that started happening (since he killed flareswarm), but i think i'm gonna send him back to starclan next time i boot up the game. after having seen enough "this cat was murdered" event prompts, tornfur's murder of flareswarm kinda stands out bc it didn't say "tornpaw killed flareswarm" or "flareswarm was murdered, the culprit is unknown to the clan". it just said "tornpaw stands over the body of flareswarm, covered in blood", which none of the other super deliberate murders had. combining that with tornfur being an apprentice at the time, i think i'm fully convinced now that tornfur killing flareswarm was an accident, even if he didn't like flareswarm. maybe it's bc i liked tornfur and i feel bad that he died kinda young with no kin.

[echoes-in-echoclan]

The babies are all apprentices now!! And Tornpaw is a medicine cat apprentice!

Moon 0 

Moon 42.3 - Moon 44.1

[juniper-clan]

I have a cat that looks like Slick

my baby TornPaw, they look like a possible relative or twin too..

AU where he’s one of Slick’s 14 siblings from 10 different baby daddies

[thevividai]

Some of my ocs

RatTail, HoneyPaw, PhantomVoice, DragonsHoard, WhisperingIvy, TornPaw, and- and G e r a l d

[readerofoddities]

More warriors OC art!!! I love rambling about my silly little guys!!!

Warning for some gore :D

These two had a pretty okay relationship as mentor and apprentice. Heronsight (first cat) is pretty sullen and closed off due to some unfortunate circumstances in her past, such as her mom and godmother dying when she was an apprentice and her sisters dying before she did, but she did her best to be a good mentor. Opalpaw (second cat) really looks up to Heronsight and wants to be a great warrior like her. She also appreciates Heronsight's softer side, as Heron helped Opalpaw (now Opalblaze) through some tough emotions when her mom died.

These two also got along really well! Ratclaw (first cat) has trained a lot of cats in his day and Oakpaw (second cat) was nothing he couldn't handle. Ratclaw has lost a lot of people in his life, from his wife to his children to his mom and aunt, but he doesn't let that get him down. He's lived a nice long life and he's come to terms with those deaths. Oakpaw really admires Ratclaw and they were really close while Oakpaw was training. Even after Oakpaw became Oakclaw, they were buds

Anyways, he's dead now lol

Ratclaw died in the fire I mentioned in the last post because he got trapped in a fox trap and couldn't escape. The first thing he saw when he died was his wife, Silvershine (silver ghost w/ orange eyes), and his kids: Swankit (white & black), Batkit (brown & black) and Stormpaw (silver w/ scars). BTW, kits & apprentices who die young get to grow up in SpiritClan because I think it's horrible and morbid that they don't in the books. I only mention that because Swan, Bat & Storm look grown up here

Back to semi-normal stuff.

Coalwing (first cat) has been mentioned before. She is Jadepaw’s aunt. Coalwing is aroace and has never wanted kits of her own. But, when her brother, Firestorm (second cat), and his mate, Onion (third cat), started discussing having kits, she offered to carry them so that they wouldn't have to both with finding a surrogate mom outside of the Clans. She had a stressful pregnancy, what with the fire and having to share a camp with victims of said fire, she is thrilled to get out of the damn nursery. She's only around because she needs to nurse the kits and because these are technically her niece and nephew since they're officially her brother's kits

Now it's time to discuss some family drama. First of all, these are all the kids born around the same time. They're all cousins and we're born in the same moon.

There's Spotpaw (first) and Swanpaw (second) who are littermates. Then there's Wolfpaw (third), Peachpaw (fourth), Brightpaw (fifth) and Tornpaw (sixth)

Wolf, Peach, Bright and Torn are Halffur (who I mentioned in my last post) and Sapphireeyes's kits.

I'll also use this section to let you know about the kits's disabilities because their mom had a pretty complicated pregnancy and it affected them. Wolfpaw has bad eyesight (which actually runs in his family on his mom's side) and is practically blind. Peachpaw is polydactyl (she has an extra toe) but her extra toe sticks up to far to really be useful and it causes her a lot of pain in her paws that she doesn't complain about. Brightpaw has a tightness in her chest that makes it hard to breathe (she has kitty asthma) and talk, so as a result she has decided she is mute and uses a makeshift sign language that the rest of the Clan has come to learn by now. And finally is Tornpaw, whose disability is the most obvious. He was born with a crooked jaw that causes him to have a lisp and it makes it hard to chew and hunt.

Sapphireeyes has always told her kits not to think too much about their differences and to embrace them. Halffur on the other hand...

Halffur noticed Tornkit's jaw when visiting his kits one day and became irate. "No kit of mine will look like this" "he's a freak and he needs to be put out of his misery" etc.

Halffur was going to drown Tornkit when he was attacked by Sapphireeyes's mom, his mother-in-law, Mirrorpool. Mirrorpool and Sapphireeyes teamed up to beat the hell out of Halffur and he was later killed while the battle was in full swing (Fallenbranch dealt the final blow, btw)

Tornkit was luckily unharmed, but hearing about the event as he grew up made him nervous about his jaw.

Peachpaw always jokes that she was next if Halffur had succeeded in his endeavor. No one really likes this joke but her

The kits are honestly just living life now and they like to make light of their situation sometimes.

Wolfpaw especially likes to say that one day he'll go fully blind and he'll be able to use his hearing to catch all the prey in the forest.

Most of the time, at Gatherings (which are called Meetings in my story), the siblings try not to draw attention to themselves and don't really talk about their dad. They don't even acknowledge him as their father, even, just the guy who happened to be half of their DNA (or cat-slang equivalent, ig)

What a nice note to end on. More art to come later!

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[elementclangen]

Marshdapple's Kits' Adult Sprites

Tornpaw; Powerless tom; Charismatic, eloquent speaker, and a good fighter

Apparently keeping a paralyzed cat as a warrior will give them a lot of scars.

Frecklepaw; Earth-blessed she-cat with a power level of 15 (very low); Childish and an eloquent speaker

[splashclan-clangen]

Longpool

more info below, potential spoiler warning! I use these character bios as a way to keep track of my SplashClan game which means that all the information is up to date with the current in-game events, not where I left off with the youtube series

Longpool is one of the founding members of SplashClan, having been discovered as a kitten beside his deceased mother. Longkit was quiet but curious but he was able to break out of his shell thanks to Snapfern, a warrior he grew close with who later became his mentor. When he became a warrior, Longpool gained a sense of confidence, grew into an even better teacher than Snapfern, and had a longing for companionship.

Despite his friendly and playful nature, Longpool desperately wanted a mate and kits as he craved being able to have the family he didn't have in his youth. He went onto mentor his first apprentice, Tornpaw and started a relationship with a she-cat from HazeClan but ultimately this led to heartbreak. He dropped his attempts to start a relationship, instead focusing on his warrior duties and enjoying time with the clan's kits.

Longpool wasn't an exceptional warrior in terms of strength or speed but he was widely known for his friendliness. Sadly, he broke his jaw in an accident while on patrol and later died from the injury, joining StarClan.

General Information

Names: Longpool (warrior name), Longpaw (apprentice name), Longkit (birth name; named by clan cats after being found)

Current Affiliation: StarClan, formerly belonging to SplashClan

Past Affiliation: None, former rogue

Gender: Male (he/him)

Sexuality: Bisexual

Age: 58 months at death (4 years; born 1 month before SplashClan's founding)

Cause of Death: Broken jaw (recieved injury in month 53, later died in month 57)

Description-

gray tabby tom with long fur and eyes of sunlit ice

Traits: Determined and a great teacher (warrior) + playful (apprentice and warrior) + quiet (kitten)

Role: Warrior (formerly a warrior apprentice and kit)

Relationships

non familal relationships will only be listed if the in-game relationship bar is more than half-way full (when it turns green or red), the only exception is with romantic feelings which will always be written down regardless of how big they are

Mother: Unknown rogue, died in childbirth

Mentor: Snapfern (months 5-13)

Apprentices: Tornrun (months 19-25) and Gorgeflight (months 31-37)

Nursery Denmates: Thunderisle and Sagepeak (months -6-0)

Apprentice Denmates: Sagepeak and Thunderisle (months 5-6)

Former Mate: Tempesthollow (months 19-26; seperated)

Romantic Feelings: Thunderisle, Brackenshade, Weedspeckle, and Clovefreckle

Detailed Biography

Longkit was found by the new clan cats beside his mother. Based on what they had found, it seemed like his mother had died in childbirth and Longkit was her sole surviving kitten. He was taken in and named Longkit after his lanky body type and features. A month after he was discovered was when the clan cats began to settle into their groups officially and Longkit was the second cat to decide to join SplashClan, following after the much older Sagekit.

As a kit growing up in SplashClan, he was highly inquisitive but due to a lack of confidence he was quiet and even suffered painful stomach aches as a result of his high anxiety. Snapfern, a former kittypet had accepted the job of caring and spending time with him, grew a close relationship with him through his kithood. When he was able to be brave enough to speak, his true playful nature would show. By the time he was six months old, he was able to grow into the playful cat SplashClan knew him to be.

He was apprenticed to Snapfern, who requested that she be his mentor herself, and this decision made Longpaw so excited he nearly tripped over his own paws running over to her at his ceremony. Though he was excited to finally be an apprentice his training was hard. In terms of his skill, Longpaw knew how to do a lot of things but he was never the best at any of them which led to him struggling, but not falling behind, during his training. Regardless of all of this, he really felt like his bond with Snapfern was growing and growing.

Three months into his apprenticeship, Longpaw caught whitecough but thankfully was able to recover within the same month. Normally this would excite someone but instead Longpaw was disapointed as he wanted more time to avoid his work and sleep in his nest. It was after this when he began to feel tired of being an apprentice but he didn't complain too much and by the end of his apprenticeship he felt rather satistfied with how his life had gone up until now.

When Longpaw was thirteen months old, he finally became a warrior. Gannetstar named him Longpool and honored him for his determination, being able to complete his training on time despite his struggles. Now a warrior, he displayed a newfound sense of confidence that nobody had seen from him before. He became more energetic, fierce, and even talked about wanting to someday fight in a real battle. Regardless of all of this, he began to realize how truly lonely he felt. Seeing Gannetstar have kits as well as Lightgale and Jadezinnia's own litter made him understand that what he wanted was a family.

He later recieved his first apprentice, Gannetstar's son, Tornpaw. Though he was able to teach Tornpaw to be a great warrior he was unintentionally distant. The reason for this was that he had met a she-cat from HazeClan named Tempesthollow and had begun a relationship with her. The two would meet frequently and he'd always bring Tornpaw to patrol the border with him, hoping to see her.

While he was mentoring Tornpaw he was pulled out to sea by a strong tide and was thankfully rescued by the patrol he was on. He was in the medicine den for two months and by the time he recovered Tornpaw was nearly done with his training, having been trained by another warrior in this time and Tornpaw had begun to intentionally avoid Longpool. Longpool felt incredibly thankful to Lightgale for his treatment and spent that month helping gather herbs as he was annoyed and frustrated with Tornpaw avoiding him.

Tornrun was made a warrior when Longpool was 25 months old and regardless of the negative thoughts he had towards him he was proud of his apprentice. He was also happy to finally be able to get back to seeing Tempesthollow. However the next time he saw her she was meeting with Thunderisle. Tempesthollow confessed to having been also seeing Thunderisle and being the mother of Thunderisle's unborn kits (thank you to Cody_Wolf1 on youtube for this idea!). Longpool was incredibly hurt by this and stormed off alongside Thunderisle.

Longpool tried to shift his attention back to performing his warrior duties but he wasn't able to keep up or be as 'useful' as he wanted to be. The anxiety he suffered when he was a kit began to act up again and it only calmed down once Thunderisle's kits were born. Instead of Longpool and Thunderisle hating each other for the circumstances they had been in , they became good friends. He began to spend a large amount of time in the nursery, playing with Thunderisle's kits and watching them whenever Thunderisle wasn't around. It's because of this that he seemed to always have a horde of kittens trailing after him since not only did he gain the affection of Thunderisle's litter but of Jadezinnia and Lightgale's as well. Throughout all of his Longpool began to develop feelings for Thunderisle but he knew that she wasn't going to reciprocate them, so he never told her how he felt.

Around this time he was nearly bitten by a snake while leaving the nursery but Jadezinnia leaped from his nest and tossed the snake out of camp, saving him. He continued to spend time in the nursery all throughout Clovekit, Downkit, Gorgekit, Clovekit, Boughkit, and Dappledkit's time in the nursery to the point that he was chosen to be one of their mentors. Though he would've prefered to mentor one of Thunderisle's kit's he was happy to receive Gorgepaw, Lightgale and Jadezinnia's daughter as his second apprentice.

He was incredibly thankful to be able to mentor Gorgepaw as he knew he had failed terribly while training Tornrun and he also considered this an extended thanks for his past medical treatment he recieved from Lightgale. Longpool knew he was a good teacher and he wanted to prove to the clan that this was true. His training of Gorgepaw went smoothly with nothing overly interesting happening. Outside of his job as a mentor, Longpool began to think more about his romantic feelings for the SplashClan deputy, Brackenshade. Knowing that nothing was going to happen between him and Thunderisle allowed him to get closer to Brackenshade and in this case the deputy even reciprocated his feelings, but neither confessed to the other.

Eventually, Gorgeflight recieved her warrior name and Longpool was very proud of her. On Gorgeflight's first patrol as a warrior however, she drowned in a flash flood that Longpool unfortunately was there to witness. Her death caused his anxiety induced stomach aches to return but thanks to Lightgale's treatment he was able to recover from both the shock of witnessing his apprentice's death but also the anxiety. To thank Lightgale for all the healing he's done for Longpool over the years he began to frequently help him collect herbs.

Moving forward, Longpool continued being the best warrior he could be but overall not much happened with him. While on patrol with Brackenshade and Tornrun one day, he fell into a collapsing sand dune and broke his jaw. Initially it seemed like he was going to recover as his energy and upbeat attitude were still high. However as time went on things got worse for him, resulting in him succumbing to his injury four months later and going to StarClan.

Game Events

There may be some minor adjustments/changes made from the game events/in-game timeline in order to make the story more interesting or make more sense

Month 0: Longkit is a 1 month old quiet kitten. He's learing all he can about Mintshade

Month 1: He gets a stomachache and wonders how Snapfern is doing

Month 2: He gets over his stomachache and goes to look around camp

Month 5: Longpaw is apprenticed to Snapfern. He nearly trips over his own paws running over to her due to how excited he is before the two of them touch noses. He's now playful but later has a hard day.

Month 6: He thinks he's really bonding with his mentor, Snapfern

Month 8: He catches whitecough but gets over it quickly. He wishes he was still in his nest sleeping

Month 13: Longpool is made a warrior and he's honored for his determination. He later spends time sharpening his claws

Month 15: He wants to have kits

Month 19: Longpool gets his first apprentice, Tornpaw and is curious about the other clans.

Month 20 and 21: He caught scent of an enemy warrior earlier

Month 22: Longpool was pulled out to sea by a tide and was rescued but has been hacking up water ever since. He starts making up song and is encouraging others to join in

Month 24: He recovered from the water in his lungs. He helps to gather herbs

Month 29: Longpool was nearly bitten by a snake but was saved by Jadezinnia who threw it out of camp before it could bite him. He somehow always has a gaggle of kits following him around

Month 31: He recieves his second apprentice, Gorgepaw. He wonders how Brackenshade is doing

Month 33 and 34: He has the apprentices engaged in a very, very tall tale

Month 37: Longpool has a stomach ache. He has the apprentices engaged in a very, very tall tale. His former apprentice, Gorgeflight dies on patrol

Month 38: He no longer has a stomach ache. He wonders how Thunderisle is doing

Month 41: Longpool has heat exhaustion. He later spars with some clanmates

Month 43: he recovered from heat exhaustion. he helps to escort Lightgale to gather herbs

Month 53: He runs after a colorful beetle. While on patrol with Brackenshade and Tornrun he breaks his jaw in an accident

Month 57: He died due to his broken jaw

Fun Facts

His favorite foods are vole and mice

He was the sixth SplashClan cat to die and join StarClan

His theme song is “Somebody to Love” by Queen

His voice claim is Arataki Itto from Genshin Impact (voiced by Max Mittelman)

Poolpaw may have been partially named after him by her father, Lightstar

[spire-clan]

Moon 1! Poor Dappledstar has his paws full managing a new clan and a very excitable apprentice