#This goddam letter has been haunting me for the past two days
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"I wrote to Johnny Martin, He wasn't there when I got hit, and I wanted to tell him what happened, tell him I was alive, and to take care of the men. He wrote me back January 12 1945."
Dear Bill,
I received your letter today ā¦ Anything you asked me in the letter Iāll do. You know that. As far as what went on after you left, youāve probably read it in the papers ā¦ it was plenty rough ā¦ and Iāll tell you later about who got it and who didnāt. Well, Bill ā¦ Iām going to see you whether it be soon or a long time, but Iām going to see you no matter what ā¦ Bill, when I got your letter, I was at the Co. CP. Of course, everyone was interested to hear from you. Well they said read it out loud. Well, the Co. and the rest of the company headquarters were there. I got halfway through and started to cry in front of all the guys. I just had to take off, Bill. Boy, I never felt so hollow inside in all my life. From now on when you write, please ā¦ leave anything about your leg out of my letters. Just do it as a favor for me. I guess Iām not near as good a man as I thought I was. Boy, for the first time, I never had any control of myself. When I heard you were hurt, I got all the poop I could, but you know where we were, and I couldnāt possibly get to see you. All the guys told me how you took it cooler than anybody yet. Laying there shooting the shit when you were hit like that. Some guys shit when they get nicked with a bullet and you get hit like that and just shoot the shit. Well, I just want to tell you right now, youāre so much better of a man than I am it isnāt even funny. I don't mean only in combat either. Youāre better than any officer or EM Iāve ever seen or ever will, Youāre the first guy whom Iāve ever met I could hit it with and itās just because youāre such a swell guy ā¦ For Godās sake, Bill, donāt let it get you down ā¦ I know youāre the kind of guy who will see it through to the end ā¦ I expect to have a lot of fun when we get back to the States. Buddy, weāll rip her apart when I get back. When I go to bed tonight, I am going to pray that I get a furlough to England. I hear they are going to send them out ā¦ Well I suppose you want to know what changes there are in the battalion. Our CO is now Lieutenant Speirs from D Company. I think heās the best one weāve had yet. There is a new officer in charge of 2nd Platoon. Welsh is S-3 and we have a new S-2 officer. Nixon is Regiment S-3 ā¦ Iāll close now, and if I donāt get a couple of letters a week from you, Iāll be disappointed ā¦ So Long for now.
Your pal, āJasonā Martin
-Excerpt from Brothers in Battle, Best of friends.
#This goddam letter has been haunting me for the past two days#also were does the Jason martin come from???#johnny martin#bill guarnere#band of brothers
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iām so perpetually frustrated with the audience members who criticise 1917 for having āno backstory or development for the charactersā
like, yes, itās subtle. because theyāre friends and friends donāt talk to each other like āoh, yes, remember all these details of my life iām conveniently and clearly reiterating for an omniscient third party?ā but fuck dude, if you pay attention and know basic facts about war or do your goddam research, there is SO MUCH DETAIL TO THEIR BACKSTORIES
like, just from one TINY DETAIL, you get so much: schofieldās wounded stripe on the left sleeve of his uniform. to get a wounded stripe in world war 1, you had to be officially listed in dispatches as being a CASUALTY, not just having been in a field hospital, meaning the wound was BAD. but, wait, what kind of wound could be so well-hidden and subtle? it could be a gunshot wound or trenchfoot, but there were also two categories that could earn a soldier the wounded stripe: gas, or shellshock. itās therefore entirely possible that he was suffering from trauma rather than a physical wound before he met blake. given that 60,000 rounds of field artillery and 45,000 rounds of heavy artillery were fired in the first DAY of fighting, and one german described the experience of the shelling as āthe earth shook, the sky seemed like a boiling cauldron [...] the ability to think logically, and the feeling of gravity, both seemed to have been removedā, shellshock is a very plausible diagnosis.
so, we know he fought in the somme, and we know which battle he fought, meaning he had been at the front for at the very LEAST 7 months. SEVEN MONTHS. that is a LONG time to be in the trenches, and it is a STAGGERING amount of time to have withstood the horror and still come out of it soft, gentle, and compassionate - think on THAT when yāall say schofield is a flat character. think about what kind of a person could kill and see people killed and live in the constant, crushing, claustrophobic terror and boredom and nothingĀ of the trenches for most likely LONGER than that and stay kind and quiet. NEED i say any the fuck more,Ā NEXT
just from that, we then know that blake did NOT fight in the somme, meaning he arrived at the front some time after november 1916. and, judging by his excited and fearful reaction to the front line trench before a predicted push, thereās the distinct possibility he had never seen a battle, meaning his arrival can be placed after the 18th of december 1916 and that he was still deeply innocent.
if he arrived in december and the film begins on the 6th of april, that ALSO means that they had known each other at the most for just over 3 months, very possibly less, and that they had formed a very close bond in that time.
which brings me to my next point: where are their other friends? all the other soldiers are shown to have close-knit groups, so where are theirs? why is it only them? why are they even friends in the first place? why is blake, a new recruit who had only just arrived, already the same rank as a veteran who had been there for very possibly up to or more than a year? why is a veteran hanging around with a chattery, bushy-tailed, never-seen-battle replacement? why isnāt he hanging out with his own cohort of soldiers who has been there the same amount of time as him and could much more easily relate to his trauma and exhaustion? WHY is a middle-class-sounding guy even hanging around with a lower-class farmboy in the first place?
the most plausible answer? all of schofieldās friends he went through training with are dead - probably in the somme - and heās purposefully isolated himself to grieve with his survivorās guilt. he was most likely wounded, lonely, and agonisingly depressed for months until a cheerful replacement arrived at the front and befriended him. and THATāS where schofieldās fanatic devotion to him comes from, and THATāS what āhe saved my lifeā means, more than in the literal sense - he was lost, and broken, and numb, and blake saved him.
furthermore, because boy have i got more, blakeās backstory, in case someone out there has seen this film and still wants to hit me with that fucking āwe know nothing about these charactersā: we know he has an older brother, we know he has a female dog called myrtle, we know they live with their mum in a farm in the countryside with a cherry orchard, and we know his father isnāt in the picture and that he most likely hasnāt been for a long, long time, judging by blakeās lack of bitterness and daddy issues, his closeness with his mother, and the fact he isnāt in blakeās family photo. we know, from interviews, that he enlisted as soon as he came of age because his brother was an officer and he idolised him, and we know he was barely this side of 18.
another thing? the story about wilko. blake knows stories about men schofield has almost certainly known for far longer - but he didnāt interact and wasnāt told, and blake did, and he was more familiar with all of them and had stories to tell that schofield would have known if heād been sitting in the same circle when the gossip was told. howās THAT for subtle characterisation, chumps.
and if you just think about it, thereās so much depth to blakeās overly trusting nature - because heās still naive, heās still innocent, heās still young. schofield tucks the things most special or necessary away in his inside pocket, whereās it most safe, because heās learned lessons the hard way; blake puts them carelessly in his trouser pockets where they could fall out. schofield keeps his rifle with him even as heās going to fetch water for the german pilot; blake discards his rifle and leaves himself vulnerable. if you just LOOK, itās all there!
FURTHERMORE, we know schofield is in his early 20s and older than blake. we know he has a much more refined accent, and we know from interviews that heās from cookham, berkshire. we know he has two daughters and a wife (or a sister and nieces, itās open to interpretation, go to town), we know he suffers from shellshock, we know he most likely couldnāt face going home on his last leave and instead stayed in france and gave his medal away to a french captain, we know the subject of home is deeply triggering for him, we know he refuses to talk about his daughters, we know that his family haunts him as much as he longs for it, and we know that he didnāt receive any mail from his wife - interesting, considering blake received a letter just telling him his dog was having puppies.
and donāt even get me started on theĀ ālack of character developmentā. watch me scream here about that.
also, some more backstory because now iām on a fucking roll: lance corporals were typically the second-in-commands or heads of sections, of which there were 4 within each platoon, each comprising 12 soldiers,Ā it's likely blake and schofield were in command of different sections in the same platoon. where does that come into play? well, scho seemed to slip very easily into a position of authority when the convoy got stuck in the mud, didnāt he? MOVING ON.
more? i have more. another little tidbit: lieutenant leslie asks schofield and blake if they are his relief, and then asks when the fuck theyāre getting there when they say they arenāt. he and his men are exhausted and it was said by another soldier that āthey had been blown to hell a few nights agoā - theyāve clearly been at the front a long time, which, again, is interesting, considering front line soldiers were typically rotated back into reserve after 8 days. clearly, itās been a lot longer than that, meaning order and routine have completely broken down and a new type of despair, hopelessness, and mess has taken root. there, more backstory again.Ā
āoh, itās just a shitty saving private ryanāĀ āoh, itās definitely no all quiet on the western frontā. FIRST OF ALL, it fucking IS all quiet on the western front, have you literally even read it? baumer goes to such lengths to hardly ever use the word enemy because he doesnāt view the soldiers in the other trenches as bad, just as other innocents swept up in a war that no one should be fighting. he spends a whole chapter sobbing over the only man heās ever killed in close combat. itās a hundred times slower than 1917 and it hasnāt even GOT a plot. what the FUCK are you talking about?
oh, and itās just saving private ryan? show me WHERE. a bunch of soldiers have to go into enemy territory to rescue a soldier because all his brothers have been killed in action and his family wants him home. two soldiers are sent into enemy territory with a letter to stop an attack. i am LITERALLY struggling to think of any more similarities than that and even THOSE are fucking reaching.
also, itās literally a different war. who are you and why are you saying these things to me i am BEGGING you to please use your fucking head for just a few seconds and actually THINK
āit was so convenient that the river just happened to take him to the devonsā ???Ā āthe river. it goes thereā did you just entirely miss everything lauri told him? the river quite literally flows exactly past where he is supposed to go, thatās the entire POINT, thatās WHY he jumped into it, because he KNEW it would take him there, oh my GOD
āif the convoy was going exactly where he needed to go, why didnāt erinmore tell him to meet it?ā i know it might be a shocking concept, but even a general may not have known exactly the route a convoy of trucks was going to take, especially in the confused wasteland the germans had left behind in their retreat. in fact, he might not have known about the convoy at all if they were coming from a different sector of the front - WHICH, guess what, THEY WERE. captain smith mentioned they crossed no manās land just outside bapaume, which was much further south, in the old somme battlefields. scho and blakeās trench was somewhere near boyelles, 11km north of bapaume.Ā
āitās unbelievable that scho would just sit quietly and relax in the convoy truck, and then get out to give orders and take command, after what heād just been through - and, plus, he would have gotten to Ć©coust quicker if heād just walkedā thereās this thing called trauma. shock. dissociating. compartmentalisation. just shutting down in the face of too much grief when you donāt have the time nor capacity to let yourself feel it, acknowledge it, register it. in the script, scho is said toĀ āalmost disappear into the noise of the men.ā and, honestly, the emotional illusion of regaining a scrap of control over a situation he was utterly out of control of would have been enough to prompt him to get out and give orders - but as it is that wasnāt the only thing driving him: he was desperate, and an NCO, and he needed to go. ANDĀ āhe would have gotten there quicker if heād walkedā?? ???????? first of all, he didnāt know that? second of all, scho said it would take them nine hours AT THE MOST to get there and, given the fact they werenāt attacking until dawn and it was most likely morning when he and blake set off, he wasnāt in a TERRIBLE rush. THIRD of all, it was a direct order from a captain. FOURTH OF ALL, do you really think he felt like walking all that way when a truck was RIGHT THERE?
āthere are too many coincidencesā films are built on coincidences. they are conveniently put with a character who will end up being their soulmate at the end of it all. they conveniently uncover information that would take people in real life months to find. coincidences drive stories - one of the greatest tools of screenwriting?Ā ādonāt write what would happen, write what could happen.ā what could happen is that scho finds a teenage girl and an orphaned baby sheltering in a ruined town - in a war. what could happen is that a convoy of trucks heading north towards the battle of arras logically uses the road running alongside a farmhouse. what could happen is that scho jumps into a river that he knows runs east. i just donāt understand what youāre trying to say
āoooohh for soldiers on a life-or-death mission to save one of their brothers, they sure do take their time to sight-seeā theyāve seen absolutely fucking nothing but the walls of a trench and the reserve camp for months. also, itās pretty much just common sense to clear out a building before you turn your back on it and keep walking. also, they had 8 hours, scho ended up getting there in under two hours, and blake is allowed to feel more than one emotion at a time and to be excited about exploring new places, ESPECIALLY when itās almost certain that neither he nor schofield had ever even been out of england. war or not, the french countryside was still beautiful and blake is allowed to appreciate that. next questionĀ
āhow was there a milk pail full of milk if there was no one around to milk the cowā german soldiers were stationed in the farmhouse before they got the order to move out.Ā ātheyāre not long gone.ā they left an hour before hand, someone probably milked the cow before they knew they were leaving. you donāt have to read the script to have a functioning braincellĀ
āunbelievable that they werenāt killed by the tripwire explosionā it detonated in the tunnels, not in the bunker. they wanted to collapse the escape routes first and foremost. please, i am begging you, use your head
āwhy did they pull an enemy out of the planeā basic human decency. i cannot believe i have to explain this concept. soldiers in the first world war were especially conscious of the humanity of the men in the other trench. you say blake had no character and then get mad when heās shown to be so kind and selfless that heāll burn himself rescuing a german. i donāt know what you want from me, get out of my kitchenĀ
āschofield was an idiot for stopping to interact with lauri and the babyā he was concussed. he knew there was somewhere he had to be but he didnāt remember what or where until he heard the church bells. also, for people who criticise theĀ ālack of character development and backstoryā, ya hate to see character building moments. it clearly wasnāt the first time heās recited that poem to a baby. make the connection dipshitsĀ
āthe germans shot like fucking stormtroopers, how did they not hit him?ā point one: one of them was blind drunk. when muller is ranting while scho is strangling baumer, he says that maybe they should head back and that maybe they wonāt realise theyāve been missing. the implication? either theyāve gone AWOL, or theyāre stragglers from the retreat back to the new line. either way, at least one, and very possibly all of them are off their fucking faces, considering the one by the burning church tripped over his own goddamn feet chasing scho. point two: not in a thousand years would they have expected a lone english soldier to just pop up out of nowhere in ecoust. it was so unexpected that you really canāt blame them for being flustered and confused.
āhow the FUCK did the letter survive the river in one piece?ā he put it in his tin. thereās literally an entire 30 seconds of the convoy scene just devoted to showing scho tucking it in there. i donāt understand how i have to say this
āitās too gruesomeā aside from the hand in the corpse and the dead horses, where? where? also, itās the first world war. i canāt believe what iām hearing. who are you people
āitās not exciting enough, itās slow, itās dullā ITāS SUPPOSED TO SHOW THE CONSEQUENCES AND AFTERMATH OF WAR INSTED OF THE SHALLOW EXCITEMENT OF IT YOU DUNCE
in conclusion, suck my ASS anyone who says they didnāt have backstory or development or that there are ~raging plot holes~. FUCK
anyone who doesnāt want the actual soft and only good person in the world William Schofield to live a happy life in peace just isnāt valid and thatās all iāll ever say on the matter you fucking degenerate scum rotten tomato reviewers
#in which i just fucking lose my mind and go fucking apeshit#1917#will schofield#william schofield#1917 movie#mine#also my mum pointed out that they both have scenes where they try to haul the other up and say 'we have to go we have to stand up'#and the other says 'just let me stand / just let me lie here'#fuck#there's SO MUCH THAT I'M STILL ONLY JUST SEEING AFTER 5 WATCHES
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