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TOO LOST IN YOU - part VI
Paige Bueckers x bartender!oc
playlist, part I, part II, part III, part IV, part V
Warnings: toxic!p, language, SMUT!
Wordcount: 7.3k (oops)
A/N: PALERIE IS BACK - i know you guys have been waiting to find out what happens after part 5, well guess what - you're gonna have to wait till part 7 :) i wanted to have you on the edge of your seats a lil longer, so this part will be a flashback to how paige and valerie met and how all that unfolded! don't hate me too much lmao. anyway again, you guys have shown so much love and appreciation and i'm so incredibly grateful!! ily all please enjoy and send me live reactions and feedback!!! i'm begging (@paigesbabygirl your wait is over)
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September 2024
âValerie, can you bring more tall glasses weâre about to run out!â
âUh ok,â I yell over the crowd, wiping the sweat and the hairs sticking to my forehead with the back of my hand as I hurry to the back. Dread takes over me when the rack is empty, not a single glass in sight. We never shouldâve hired that freshman Johnny to clean tables. I groan running back to the front, the bar lining up with rows of customers for what felt like hours now. It felt like all of Storrs had made their way to Tedâs tonight.
I was warned about the last weekend before classes start, that all the students pack into Tedâs and get shitfaced. Somehow it was still just me, Natalie and Thomas working - and this new guy called Johnny who I had a feeling was about to be fired. How were we out of glasses?
âNo glasses, use pints!â I shout, the chatter of the students overwhelmingly loud.
âWhat?â Natalie yells and I just point to the pints towering next to her, knowing it was no use to talk in all this noise.
Natalie looks at me, her wide eyes showing slight panic, her hands mixing drinks expertly. She evidently had some years on me when it came to bartending. âWhere the fuck is Johnny?â
âNot doing his job I guess,â I groan, carrying a rack of pints over to the bar. âIâll go clean tables then, get us some more glasses.â
The red haired girl waves me off as I rush into the crowd, squeezing through and grabbing every empty glass in sight, adding them one by one to the tower I was balancing against my side, bringing them to the back to be washed. Once I return into the crowd of swarming students, Iâm crushed between two groups of guys, elbowing their sides to make my way through. I could feel the sweat dripping down my back, the air felt heavy and humid, early September still as hot as July had been.
âAh fuck!â
Suddenly I feel a splash of something seep into my tank top, the white thin fabric turning red and seethrough.Â
âWhat the fuck!â I yell looking down, the shirt sticking to my skin as more people pushed into my back, nearly making me stumble.Â
âShit bro Iâm so sorry,â A hoarse voice mumbles and I lift my eyes upwards to the tall blonde girl standing in front of me, a sheepish smile on her face as she scratches the back of her neck. âSomeone pushed me.â
âAre you fucking kidding me?â I snap, too overwhelmed and overworked to deal with this right now. Someone behind me trips, forcing me to stumble forward, the girl catching me and steadying me. âWhoa there,â she says.
âYou good?â The blonde asks and I roll my eyes, what a stupid question to ask.Â
âYou just spilled a drink on me, what do you think?â
âIâm so sorry, deadass. Lemme buy you a drink please.â
âI work here, Iâm working.â
âOh, shit.â
I look down at my top, completely ruined and unwearable - if not for the red stain then for the fact that the fabric had turned completely transparent, my lavender bra completely visible.
The blonde girl in front of me blushes, eyeing the way my nipples poked through the drenched top now. Noticing me watching her, she quickly looks up to the low ceiling of the bar, pretending she wasnât ogling over my chest.
âYou can totally see through it right?â I ask frustrated and the blonde only nods, clearly trying not to grin which only annoys me more.
âIâm so sorry, hold up.â
She seems apologetic as she covers my front from the view of other people, big hands confidently guiding me into the much quieter hallway where only a few people were lining up for the bathrooms. Itâs only then I look up and really study the face of the tall girl in front of me, quickly realising who it was that spilled her Shirley all over my white top.
Paige Bueckers is only hotter in person, her jaw that much more refined, long neck and broad shoulders and the way she towered over you making her seem bigger than she was. Her blue eyes are flickering everywhere but my chest as she drags me into the desolate end of the hallway. Iâm sure I wouldâve felt starstruck if the situation had been different, but the stress from work and the fabric smelling like grenadine and sticking to my body was only irritating me further, the blonde in front of me to blame.
Suddenly Paige starts pulling the back of her white hoodie to undress, the white t-shirt underneath rising enough to reveal the tan skin on her abdomen, her shorts low waisted enough to show the tiniest bit of a tan line.Â
âWhat are you doing?â I ask confused as Paige pulls the hoodie over her head, fixing the shirt underneath it, silver chains dangling from her neck.
She hands the white hoodie at me, her blue eyes studying me. âWhatâs it look like, take it.â
I glance at the hoodie scrunched in her hands, being offered to me. The back of the hoodie is decorated with a large number 5, Paigeâs last name written in big bold letters above it.Â
Publicly Paige might have been loved, considered kind and grounded, but on campus people knew more. Sure, the girl was adored. But it hadnât taken longer than staying at Storrs for a few days for the rumours to reach me, about her endless roster of girls who she never let sleep over, who she seduced into bed and then never called or texted. It had become a joke amongst the students that everyone knew - when you saw a girl wearing a shirt with Paigeâs name on it, she was either fucked by her or wanted others to think so.
I shake my head at the hoodie, not wanting to be marked as one of them. I didnât wanna be part of some sick fantasy Paige had about claiming girls.
âNah I ainât wearing that,â I chuckle bitterly, pushing the hoodie back, a jolt going through my body when my fingertips brush hers.
Confused, Paigeâs brows furrow as she grabs the hoodie back. âPlease, I really donât mind. I feel really bad, just take it. You donât even have to give it back.â
I scoff, crossing my arms over my chest. âIâm not playing into some weird little fantasy and wearing a hoodie with your name and number on it.â Paige is quickly taken aback, brows only furrowing further.
âYou.. I⌠Huh?!â She asks bewildered.Â
âPlease, everyone knows what those hoodies and shirts mean.â
âI got no clue what youâre talking about,â Paige chuckles, finding amusement in my defiance. âBut I know you ainât gonna work in that top for the rest of the night.â
Sheâs right. Why do I hate that sheâs right? Thankfully the solution is right under my nose.
âIâll take the t-shirt,â I say, my tone assertive. With a snort Paigeâs brows rise as high as they can - I canât tell whether sheâs amused or shocked at my audacity. Perhaps a little bit of both.
With a chuckle she holds the hoodie over her forearm, piercing blue eyes landing on me. âYo I donât remember offering it.â Thereâs a spark in her eye, something that makes me bolder and certain that sheâs enjoying this. So I play along.
âYou donât have to, I know youâll give it to me.â
We stare at each other, both of us waiting for each other to fold. Finally Paige opens the bathroom door next to her, nodding her head for me to get in. She follows behind me, closing the door and locking us into the tight space. My back presses against the wall as she turns to me - I'll never forget the look she had on her face, the way her eyelids grow heavy and head tilts the tiniest bit upwards, making her neck that much longer. Itâs in that moment, in the bright, fluorescent lights of the bathroom that I realise how blue her eyes are, how intense her gaze was.Â
An involuntary blush grows on my cheeks, for a moment forgetting why we were here in the first place. Paige had seemed to forget as well, her tongue darting over her lips to wet them, the tight and enclosed space forcing us both to notice a tension. I clear my throat, my eyes snapping to the ground.
âSooo the shirt?â
âOh right,â Paige murmurs, finally breaking the intense stare.
I watch the way her hand grabs the back of her shirt, pulling it over her head. I feel something stir in my stomach when I notice the rings decorating her long fingers, the muscles in her shoulders flexing as her arms lifted. Sheâs wearing a grey sports bra underneath, and Iâm surprised by how broad she looks shirtless like this, how refined but somehow soft her stomach looked.Â
When I realise that Iâm staring itâs already too late, Paige is grinning down at me and momentarily it makes my legs feel weak. Okay, I see what the fuss is about now.
âYou good?â Paige smirks handing me her shirt and my eyes quickly flicker to the ceiling, back turning to her as I start pulling the damp top over my head. I can feel the blue eyes drilling into my skin, making me feel hot all over. Quickly I put on the white tee over my head, a whiff of deodorant and cologne making my head spin as I fix the much too large shirt. I tuck part of it into my bra, turning around and seeing the blonde pulling her hoodie back on, feeling a pang of disappointment when she hides the broad shoulders and the abs I had taken a liking to.
âOh Iâm Paige by the way,â she murmurs, pulling her head through the hoodie, hands sleeking her long hair back.Â
I snort, raising my brows. âVery humble of you to assume I donât know who you are.â
Sheepishly the blonde scratches the back of her head, shrugging. âNah, I knew,â she smiles. âI just wanted to find out your name ma.â
The nickname brings an immediate heat to my core but I do my best to keep my cool. I doubt the blonde needed any ego boosts from me.
Trying to remain chill, I casually chuckle. âIâm Valerie.â
âValerie,â Paige repeats. I never loved my name but hearing her say it was making me seriously reconsider. âIâve seen you around campus, you know.â
âOh?â
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Valerie. The name feels smooth slipping from my lips, I wanted to say it again and again. It hadnât been my intention to spill my Shirley all over her, but Iâd be lying if I wasnât happy about the situation it had got me in.
I must admit I had seen the brunette before, in fact I remember the very first time I saw her. It was her voice that drew me in, impossible to miss as I was walking back to the dorms with KK, Ice and Azzi.Â
âHOW did you not know you need to add water to boil pasta?? What did you think boiling is?!â
There was something about the lilt in her voice, the way it echoed around campus, and the pure astonishment in her voice that got me to laugh before I had ever even met, yet alone seen her. I couldnât help but turn my head, only to find that the owner of that beautiful voice was fittingly the most beautiful girl I had ever seen.
It was her hair that caught my eye first, it wasnât just brown but the tones of gold made it sparkle in the late August sun, her golden jewellery only adding to the twinkle. Her eyes were big, getting even wider the more shocked her voice got on the phone. The gloss on her lips and the way her shirt showed just a little bit of cleavage caused very inappropriate thoughts one should not be having about a person they didnât know at all.
Her legs were shorter yet somehow she took such hurried steps she passed me and the girls without a single look in my direction despite my obvious ogling. It was that moment I knew I had to have her.
So it must have been Godâs plan all along for me to spill that Shirley all over her shirt. Because now I had her in a bathroom, pulling her shirt off, unable to look away from her lacy lavender bralette, trying to get the way her nipples peeked through her soaked top out of my head. To my pleasant surprise, I catch her dark eyes leering at me before I pull the hoodie back on.Â
âYou couldâve just come talk to me, there was no need to spill that drink on me,â Valerie chuckles, the annoyance in her tone making a heat pool between my legs. I should probably bring that up with a therapist.
Lifting my hands up in defiance I scoff. âMa I swear it was an accident.â
âSure.â
As she looks up at me I suddenly felt a desperate need for her approval, for her praise. Usually girls were quick to fold once I turned the rizz on. Valerie didnât seem even a little bit affected - somehow it irked me and turned me on more simultaneously. For a moment I consider just pulling out the old trusty rizz hands but before I can process Valerieâs hand is on the door handle, stepping past me into the hallway, a whiff of coconut making my heart beat faster. I was usually smoother than this.
âWell thanks for the shirt Paige Bueckers,â Valerie smiles and walks out before I can say a word, leaving me speechless in the bathroom.
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âDid you see the way he looked at me tho? Genoâs gonâ bench me for the whole season forreal.â
KKâs voice is faint in my ears as we sit at our usual table, leaning back on my chair to get a better view of her. Valerieâs pouring drinks to a couple guys, her nose scrunching a little as she giggles. Even in the dingy bar everything about her lit the place up.
I had come here three nights in a row now, sipping my Shirleys and trying to find courage to approach her with more than âA dirty Shirley thanks.â Normally approaching a girl and getting them naked into my bed was easy, nearly boring at this point - the five girls blowing up my phone on the daily proof of that. But something about Valerie was different, challenging. While it was intriguing it was also scary.
âEarth to P boogers?â KK pokes my side, snapping me out of my thoughts. I turn my head to her, raising my brows expectantly.
With a roll of her eyes, KK nods towards the bar where Valerie was alone now, humming to herself and playing with the ends of her hair. âGo talk to her.â
âNah.â
âBro.â
âWhat would I even say?â
âRizz her up girl! Isnât that your whole thing?â
I throw my head back and groan dramatically, throwing my arm over my eyes. Sheâs just a girl, if she didnât want me the campus was full of other girls dying to fuck me. Why was I tripping over a girl like this - mind you, a girl I barely knew.
In truth I hadnât stopped replaying every moment of that night I spilled my drink on her over and over. Thinking about the way Valerieâs top clung to her skin, the way her tits looked in that bra had made me drag my hand down my stomach, between my legs. But it was the memory of the way she stared me down that had brought me over the edge.
âBro, you canât come back tomorrow without talking to her, that shit is called stalking.â
KK was right. A fourth night in a row of just ogling over her would be nothing short of creepy. Finishing my drink, I finally get up and walk to the bar, butterflies growing with each step I take. Shit, shit, shit, shit.
âHey,â Valerie says, her eyes twinkling as she looks at me and I immediately wanna go back to the table and just forget about all of this. How was I supposed to form comprehensible sentences when she looked at me like that? When her hair was pulled up messily in a clip, loose curls framing her face, white t-shirt hugging her curves.Â
Before I have the chance to respond the brunette is already opening her mouth, a tiny grin on her face. âThis is your third night in a row here.â
Sheâs noticed - no, sheâs kept count. My confidence soars quickly as I look at the ground, my mouth twisting into a smile. âOh you been counting huh?â
âNah was just wondering if the student athlete was turning into an alcoholic,â Valerie rolls her eyes, leaning forward on her elbows against the bar, her breasts perking menacingly between her arms. I only let myself look for a second before using all my constraint to move my gaze elsewhere.
âOh you worry about me?â My tongue slides over my lower lip, watching as she rolls her eyes once more. God I could get used to that sight. Her eyes rolling back because of me in a multitude of ways.
âUnfortunately itâs part of my job description.â
âTo take care of me?â
Another eyeroll. âTo not serve alcoholics.â
I chuckle softly, mirroring the brunette by leaning forward against my elbows. The faint scent of coconut makes its way into my nostrils again. âDamn, thatâs a shame. They gonâ miss out on those Shirleys you make.â
Even in the dim lighting of the bar I can recognise the hint of a blush that rises to Valerieâs cheeks, her eyelids fluttering as she quickly looks away from me. The moment of silence is causing a stir in my abdomen, electricity palpable just for a moment. I got her, sheâd be in my bed in no time. Maybe by tonight.
âYour shirtâs still in my dorm,â she says nonchalantly, breaking the tension of the moment by pushing herself off the bar and beginning to clear the glasses on the bar. I watch amused.
âYou wanna keep it?â I grin, letting my eyes land on the curve of her ass as she bends over to pick up a beer cap off the floor. Goddamn, I better have that in my bed tonight. Rubbing my jaw I swiftly bring my eyes to look at the walls of the bar as the girl turns around, even more curls falling out of her clip now.
Valerie scoffs loudly like itâs the most ridiculous thing sheâs ever heard. âNo.â
I kiss my teeth and raise my brows. âI could also come pick it up,â I grin, my blue eyes staring into the girl. âYou know, after your shift ma?â
The look on Valerieâs face is priceless, a mixture of surprise and something I canât quite recognise. Yeah I got her, sheâd be between my legs in no time - those big brown eyes staring back at me as I pull on her hair, her perfect ass in the air.Â
To my bemusement, instead of blushing or getting flustered Valerieâs hand flies to her mouth as she bursts into a bright laugh, her eyes squeezing shut as she does. The grin on my face quickly wipes off as I shift on my feet, my arms crossing over my chest. Seems like I might have to wait a little longer than Iâd like to for this one.
Taking a deep breath to calm herself, Valerie shakes her head. âIf itâs one thing you got Bueckers, it's audacity.â
Her indifference to my flirting irks me. At this point I usually gave up, looked for another girl - not that I had to nearly ever. I donât think Iâd worked this hard for a girl since coming to Uconn. But there was something about the brunette in front of me, something I couldnât quite place, that made it impossible just to give up. Maybe it was time to move on to a more challenging territory. The pussy would be worth it, I knew it.
âYou want a drink?â Valerie asks, finally recovered from her laughing fit. Without even thinking I shrug.
âShirley.â
âWhich way?â
A small smirk tugs at the corner of my mouth as I wiggle my brows. âDirty.â
With another eyeroll the brunette gets to work. Part of me wanted to keep saying stupid things just so sheâd roll her eyes at me one more time.
I watch her work for a moment, noticing the golden bracelet with a small charm dangling on it decorating her wrist as I thought of any other way to get her naked as soon as possible.
âYou ever been to a game?â I ask, convincing myself that seeing me on the court would have the effect it usually had on girls.
âNo, this is my first year here so,â she mumbles absentmindedly, mixing the bright red drink for me.
âYou should come watch me sometime.â
A smile. Valerieâs mouth turns into a smile. Iâll take that as a win. Feeling the tiniest bit proud I smile too.
âYeah? You any good?â The brunette asks seriously, but thereâs a hint of something in her voice that tells me sheâs teasing me. Just that is enough to get me going. I rarely found the chase to be this fun, but with her? I was fucked.
I shrug and bring my arm up, flexing the bicep that had grown exponentially over the summer. âBest player in the country, they say,â I grin.
Her eyes land on my flexed arm, softening for a moment before she returns to stirring the drink. âNow whoâs they?â
âJust come see for yourself ma.â
As she places the drink on the bar I reach for my wallet, pulling out 30 bucks and leaving it on the counter.
âHold on Bueckers, your change,â Valerie stops me as Iâm about to head back but I shake my head at her, walking backwards.
âKeep it. Come see me play sometime.â
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âPick up⌠pick up⌠pick upâŚâ I mumble under my breath, phone against my ear as the steady slow beeps keep taunting me, reminding me no one had answered to any of the tens of calls I had made. Groaning, I put the phone on the table, looking through the back door of Tedâs, over the liquor shipment sitting in the bright evening sun. It wasnât meant to come till tomorrow, when the boys could carry all of it inside. Now it was just me, my pathetically small muscles and boxes full of liquor bottles and beers.
âFuck,â I groan when the phone finally rings. Picking it up urgently, Natalieâs voice comes through.
âRiri you called me like five times, are you good?â
âThe shipment came early,â I panic into the speaker.
âWhat?!â
âMhm.â
âHave you tried-â
âTried calling literally everyone. No oneâs picking up,â sighing I push my hair back from my face, trying not to panic. âWhat do I do?â
âIâm out of town too,â Natalie murmurs as Iâm leaning against the doorframe, digging my brain for any solution. A moment of silence falls between me and Natalie when I finally got it. Saying bye to the girl on the line I walk to the front - the bar is empty in the early Wednesday evening. But like clockwork at 9 pm the tall blonde opens the door and comes in for the 6th night in a row - this time alone.
Of course she looks great, wearing basketball shorts and a team USA hoodie she had grown too big for, evidently a little too small on her arms and shoulders, her hair in a ponytail. Her mouth twists into a smile as she sees me, long legs quickly reaching the bar.
âWell he-â
âPaige, I need your help.â
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Paige stares at the shipment through the door frame as I shift on my feet, hating how I had to ask for help, especially from her. I, like everyone else, found Paige incredibly attractive, exceptionally charming. But the ego on her irked me. The way she looked at me like she could read my mind, the things she said to make me blush and that grin like she knew that it was just a matter of time before Iâd join the long list of girls she took to bed and left high and dry. I refused to be one of those girls - but it was hard to ignore the flutters in my stomach that arrived routinely at 9 pm when the blonde made her way through the door and to the bar each night.
âHowâd they leave a lil thing like you to deal with this?â Paige chuckles, elbowing me gently.
I rub my hand over my face, smiling too. âIt came a day too early.â
Paige nods for a moment and shrugs. âWell letâs get to work ma.âÂ
With that she pulls the hoodie off, left in black basketball shorts and a black matching sports bra. I let myself look just for a second. Eyes roaming over her broad shoulders, the muscles in her stomach, the silver chain with a cross on it. It didnât hurt to look now and then - as long as I didnât ogle.
One by one Paige and I carry heavy boxes full of bottles inside Tedâs, though Iâm slightly distracted by the way the blondeâs back muscles flex when she picks a box up, the way her jaw flexes when itâs a little too heavy for her. A bead of sweat trickles from her neck downwards along her spine as my gaze follows it, a heat pooling between my legs as I watch her.
Out of breath and slightly sweaty, I push my hair back trying to catch my breath. Paige takes note of this, blonde hairs sticking to her forehead as she walks over to me. This September heat was no joke.
Her blue eyes roam my face as both her hands grab a hold of my hips. A jolt of electricity runs through my body, her touch igniting a fire I hadnât felt in a while. Our gazes meet, Paige licking her lips as her hand pushes my thick brown hair off my face. I find my heart beating so hard I swear itâs trying to make its way out of my chest. For a moment I think sheâs about to kiss me.
âWhy wonât you go get us something to drink?â Paige murmurs, her voice deep and gravelly in a way I had never heard before.Â
My cheeks slightly pink I nod towards the boxes, my voice quiet as I speak. âBut what aboutâŚ?â
âI got it ma,â she assures me, never breaking eye contact. Itâs almost dizzying, the tension between us. Reminding myself of what I knew about Paigeâs roster, I finally look away, slightly disappointed when her hands drop off my waist.
Walking to the front I find the bar still empty of customers. I grab a bottle of water, chugging it in an attempt to bring myself to my senses. Donât be stupid Valerie, everyone knows how this could end up if I make the wrong choices here.
Filling two glasses to the brink with ice and coke, I return to the back, eyes landing on Paige and her arms that flex as she lifts up another box, making my mouth go dry. I quickly sip the coke, ignoring the way my legs had been growing weaker the more sweaty Paige got. As the last box hits the floor and all the work is done, Paige closes the door finally locking the scorching heat out and grabs the glass from my hand. We both feel the same goosebumps down our spines as our fingertips graze, forcing our eyes to meet.
âThanks for the help,â I murmur, my voice weaker than Iâd like. Paigeâs chest is heaving, whether from the physical strain or the tension of the moment I donât know. âI owe you.â
Paige shakes her head, blue piercing eyes still locked in mine. âNah, always down to help a pretty girl out.â
I hate that I blush, but I canât help it. I hand the blonde the glass of coke and watch the way her throat bobs as she drinks, my lips itching to kiss there. I was falling for her tricks quicker than Iâd like.
âI uh, how about you donât have to pay for your Shirleys?â I offer, voice slightly shaky,
Paige grins and places her glass on a side table, leaning against the closed backdoor. âI donât need anything free, trust,â she grins, heavy lidded eyes looking down at me. âBesides, how will I tip you then?â
âYou tip way too much,â I giggle, brushing my fingertips through my long brown locks.
Paige shrugs. âI tip just enough,â she murmurs hoarsely, licking her lips as her fingers come up to toy with the ends of my hair. I swallow hard, my panties growing damp between my thighs. The blonde breathes out heavily through her nostrils, still watching me. âJust come see a game and weâre even.â
My eyelids flutter shut when Paigeâs hand carefully moves from my hair to the side of my jaw and I canât help but nod.Â
âOkay,â I murmur breathlessly, head spinning with need.
Licking her lips, Paigeâs eyes land on mine. âValerie?â
âYeah?â
âIâm gonna kiss you now.â
âO-okay.â
With all my restraint, all my plans to stay strong forgotten, I do the exact opposite of what I planned. Paige leans down and her lips crash into mine, an involuntary moan leaving my mouth. My stomach flutters as I lean into her, my hands wrapping around her neck as I get on my tiptoes to reach her better. The blondeâs hands land on my waist, pulling my body closer to her, breathing heavily through her nose.Â
Itâs dizzying, the way she kisses me, the way her touch feels against my skin leaving a trail of fire in its wake. I feel completely overwhelmed yet dying for more, all the patience leaving my body at once. Like reading my mind, Paigeâs hands fall from my waist to my ass, gripping harshly as she groans against my lips. My core is already throbbing, the sounds coming out of the girl kissing me only making it worse.
Thereâs a sense of urgency when Paige backs me into the side table, sitting me on it. My legs quickly wrap around her waist as her tongue slides over my bottom lip before biting on it gently. I let out a whimper that makes the blonde grin.
âBeen dying to fuck you. Will you let me?â She pants against my mouth and I have no other choice but to nod, my body aching for her.
âPlease,â the plea spills from my lips as Paige sloppily kisses along my jaw, all the way to my neck. She gently nibbles, eliciting a hiss from me when she reaches the spot under my ear that was most sensitive. She sucks on it harder, her hands gripping my denim covered thighs firmly.
âHow wet are you?â The blonde murmurs, her breath hot in my ear sending tingles down my spin all the way to my cunt that was dripping.Â
âSo wet Paige,â I whimper, feeling Paigeâs hands travel up my thighs and squeeze again, other hand pulling off my white t-shirt, leaving me in a black lace bra and jeans. Paige pulls back and watches my chest, licking her lips.
âGoddamn look at those tits,â she mumbles, more to herself than me before her lips attack my chest, kissing all over, teeth grazing over my bra where my hard nipple is poking through.
The lack of contact between my legs felt excruciating, like some sort of torture. With a whine I roll my hips into Paige, pulling her closer with my legs. Her blue eyes look up at me from my chest menacingly, hand coming to toy with the button of my jeans.Â
âTell me what you want, baby.â
Panting, I collect myself enough to speak. âTouch me, P.â
âI am touching you,â she teases, kissing along my neck again.
âYou know what I mean.â
âNeed to hear you say it ma.â
Frustrated, I tilt my head back, the need between my legs becoming overwhelming. Her hand was unzipping my pants now, torturing me.
âFuck okay just touch my pussy Paige, now please,â I whine eliciting a smirk from Paige as her fingertips slip underneath my lace panties.
âYou want my mouth or fingers?â
âWhatever you want just now please!â
âOh youâre gonna regret saying that.â
With that Paigeâs fingers make their way into my folds, gasping with me as she feels how wet I had grown in this past hour watching her work. With a practiced ease her fingertips press against my clit, starting to rub against it in tight circles.Â
âOh fuck,â I whine, my head tilting back. Paigeâs other hand quickly covers my mouth and suddenly Iâm reminded that any customer coming in could hear us from the front of the bar.
âGotta keep quiet for me, yeah?â The blonde reminds me and I nod, my eyes meeting hers. My moans are muffled by her hand as she continues the movement of her fingers.
âFuck, gotta take these off,â she murmurs, her voice low and hoarse as she pulls my jeans down, moaning at the sight of my black, lacy panties. âGotta see this pussy.â
Her hands pry my legs open, fingertips digging into my thighs as she slides my panties to the side, my glistening cunt proof of how bad I needed her.Â
Paige hisses, unable to look away as her fingers swirl in my folds, gathering wetness before returning to my clit, rubbing back and forth so fast I let out a loud gasp. The blondeâs free hand returns to my mouth, eyes warning me. âQuiet, remember?â
âMhmm,â I mumble against her hand, my eyes fluttering shut as she speeds up even more, my pussy already throbbing, aching to be filled. Paigeâs hand on my mouth pushes me backwards, my back hitting the cold wood of the table.Â
âAttagirl.âÂ
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My fingertips tease her entrance, circling around it menacingly. She looked incredible like this, even better than in all my fantasies, back arching and head thrown back, mouth covered by my big hand making her look even smaller for me. The sounds she was making were driving me insane, causing my own cunt to throb and soak all the way through my boxers.
Her hips buck, clearly not a fan of my teasing as she whines against my hand. God, I could listen to these sounds forever,
âYou want my fingers?â I ask, panting just from my own need. She nods, her big brown eyes pleading, nearly making me come merely from the way she was looking at me.
âTwoâs good yeah?â I ask, two of my fingers so close to dipping in. It takes all my restraint now to pound them into her when she nods. Instead I slowly push them in, my eyelids fluttering shut at how wet and warm and tight she felt around me, how I could quite literally feel her pussy throbbing around my fingers.
She gasps, her eyes rolling back at the stretch caused by me, and I canât help myself when I lower myself onto her knee, grinding my cunt against the bones there making me groan breathily.
I start slowly pumping my fingers in and out of Valerie, unable to take my eyes away from her cunt, the way itâs swallowing me up, sucking me back in each time I try and pull away.
Hoping the brunette remembers to stay quiet, I pull my hand back from her mouth, kneading her left breast as I grind my own hips against her knee.
âMore,â she whimpers, pretty eyes squeezed shut and back arching.
âWhatever you want baby,â I whisper, my own mind so drunk off her I couldnât keep up with the composure Iâd had in the beginning.
I push a third finger inside her, curling them just right to press against the spongy part inside her making her gush around my fingers. I could barely think straight, doing everything not to come all over her knee before she finished.
The sounds coming from her body are downright sinful, the wet sounds of my fingers curling inside her cunt making my legs shake. I donât know how Iâd ever get enough.
When I start pumping those three fingers in and out of her with more force, Valerie turns into a mess, her thighs trembling, body writhing on the wooden table and eyes squeezed shut, hands trying to grip onto anything they could - the table, her own breasts, even me. In a haze I offer her my free hand, letting her fingers grip my hand as I pump my fingers faster, palm hitting against her clit.
âPaige, Iâm close,â she cries out, urging me on as her knee presses against my swollen clit in my boxers, forcing me to bite down on my lip hard to not moan.
âFuck ma, so fucking sexy,â I groan, watching the way her head tilts back as her cunt tightens around my fingers.
âYes, donât stop, donât stop.â
âI got you Val,â I moan, rocking my hips back and forth on her knee, my juices gushing out of me as I fight my eyes from rolling back.
âPaige, shit, Iâm-â
Suddenly sheâs covering her own mouth with her hand, her back arching off the table as her cunt clenches around my fingers, but I donât ease up, I keep up with my movements. The way her face is scrunching up is enough to get my own orgasm to take over me, my movements on her knee turning sloppy and desperate as I come all over her while my fingers pump in and out of her. Iâm unable to look away.
A guttural groan leaves my body as Valerieâs muffled moans fill the room, waves of pleasure taking over us simultaneously. Thereâs something addicting about it, the way weâre both riding out our orgasms at the same time.
âGoddamn,â I sigh, eyes watering as my movements slow down, enjoying the way sheâs throbbing around my fingers. Valerieâs eyes flutter open and I swear sheâs the most beautiful girl Iâve ever seen. Weâre both panting, the moment over far too quickly to my liking. I could never be done that fast with a girl like this.
Pulling my fingers out, I kneel between the brunetteâs legs, pulling the panties off her completely. Face to face with her glistening cunt I decide this is the most perfect pussy I have ever seen in my life - and there have been quite a few.
âWh-what are you doing?â She asks me, her voice still shaky from her climax as she sits back up.
âNeed to taste this pussy,â I murmur, my eyes locked onto her cunt, hands spreading it open, making my mouth water.
âPaige I have to get back to work,â she whines, looking down at me as I begin to kiss her inner thighs, pulling her legs over my shoulders. âThere could be customers.â
âThere arenât,â I say matter of factly. Truthfully there was no way for me to know, but I needed to have my mouth on this pussy right fucking now.
âHow do you- oh fuck.â
My eyes flutter shut at the taste of her, my tongue dipping inside her and slowly circling. I wrap my arms around her thighs, pulling her closer as I drag my tongue upwards through her folds to her red, swollen clit, lapping at it. I can already tell this isnât gonna be a one time thing. There was no universe in which I didnât get to have my face buried in this pussy at least once a week.
âWait wait wait, too much-â she hisses but then I press my tongue flat against her and shake my head, making her gasp and throw her head back. I hum against her pussy, taking turns lapping her up sloppily and shaking my head against her, drinking all of her up.
âValerie,â I moan into her cunt. I usually didnât like saying the names of the girls I fucked during sex but something about the softness of the letters, the way the name felt in my mouth made me wanna repeat it over and over like some sort of oath, like a prayer.
âTaste so fucking good,â groaning I suck on her clit, listening to her hiss. âCould eat this pussy forever ma.â
The shake in her legs tells me Iâm getting her there again, and her hands finally find my hair, making me moan as they pull on it suddenly. When my tongue precisely licks over the right side of her clit she lets out a guttural moan, my own need pooling in my boxers once more.
âRight there?â I ask, repeating the movement of my tongue, taking it as confirmation when she cries out and her back arches. Copying the movement of my tongue over and over again I keep working her, my face getting covered in her, my own spit dripping down her pussy making an even bigger mess. The thick thighs around my head are beginning to shake, pressing to the sides of my face. I pry them further open, with enough force to bruise her. The brunette doesnât seem to mind though, her whimpers turning high pitched and desperate.
âShit shit shit shit,â she repeats quietly, her whole body trembling.
âGonna cum for me again?â
âMhmm,â she mewls, nails digging into my scalp.
My fingers spread her pussy further apart, my tongue moving even faster on her clit now as her hips squirm, my lips following her.
âPaige fuck right there,â she gasps and I keep going, the strain in my jaw merely an afterthought, only thing on my mind getting the brunette in front of me to come all over my face.
âYou got it baby, câmon,â I praise against her, copying the movements from before as her grip in my hair tightens.
âI, Fuck-â she gasps and sheâs coming again, pulling my face closer as she squirms all over the table, my tongue not easing up as the pleasure takes over her. I swear I feel just as euphoric, watching her like this.
When her whines turn high pitched I ease up my movements, wiping my mouth on her thigh before getting up from the floor. Valerieâs out of breath and her eyes are heavy, mascara smudged underneath her eyes and lips plump from the rough kissing. I donât know what does it, but something I canât control makes me lean down and kiss her. I never kiss girls after sex.
Just as Iâm about to speak, the bell on the door jingles, returning both of us back to the backroom of Tedâs, the fluorescent lights suddenly harsh and overwhelmingly bright.Â
âShit,â Valerie gasps and starts getting dressed in record time. I watch her, my brain still mush from what we just did. She quickly brushes her hands through her long hair and rushes to the front, leaving me alone.
âHi, what can I get ya?â I hear her faint voice a little too perky compared to how she normally sounded.
Wiping my lips I stare at the calendar on the wall marking everyoneâs shifts, but all I see is Valerie. Blinking stupidly I wipe my mouth, my mouth twisting into a small smile. The heat in my cheeks and the butterflies in my stomach made themselves known - informing me that this girl would have me utterly, completely fucked from now on.
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Drive you crazy | Day 8 | jjk
⤡ SUMMARY In which you are stuck living with an arrogant rookie racer who thinks of you as an obstacle, ready to ruin your glory, but things get heated when he has a pervy smile hidden under that pretentious attitude. Emotions that are complicated. You could never fall for your enemy! He's sabotaging you.
Pairing: racer!jk Ă racer!oc
Genre: angst and pure filth smut
Warnings: trash language
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A/note: Helloooo, happy thanksgiving you guyssss. I'm so thankful to be able to write here and I hope I continue writing for a long time aheadâ¤ď¸.
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I sprawl across the bed, allowing rays of the sun to directly hit my eyes. Wrapping my arms around I squirm and roll over, sniffling the shirt I slept in.
His shirt.
"Get ready we are leaving?" Suddenly I hear a deep voice on the other side of my door, Jungkook knocks on it waiting for a reply.
"Where?"
"France? We have a race, idiot."
I facepalm, falling on the floor like a stack of boxes hitting the ground.
"You okay?" His voice is laced with concern, I notice the knob of the door shifting, the key inserted in it jingling.
"I'm fine!" I yell abruptly, "Don't come in."
"Alright." His footsteps turn faint and the breath I held in finally escapes in relief.
I touch my face, feeling it warm up, little by little strings attach to my heart and Jungkook's voice is enough to pull them.
Especially his morning voice.
I walk out of the room, hurrying when Namjoon texts me, it takes me some time to pack and by the time I'm outside, I see no one.
Where did everyone go?
I crane my neck looking for the bus that was supposed to take us to the airport but find the place empty.
"They left."
Jungkook says with disappointment, waving at an eerie object at the very end of the parking lot.
"You took freaking 30 minutes to get ready and yet didn't change your clothes?"
I look down at my outfit. Technically Jungkook's shirt.
Feeling a warm blush creeping up my neck I dip my head down, staring at the road with embarrassment.
"I was packing my bag," I mumble, receiving an eye roll from him.
I fake a smile, and a small minivan approaches us.
"Thank Namjoon for this. He said he and the rest of the guys wouldn't step into the bus without you."
My heart swells up, a smile slowly growing with excitement.
Everyone gathers around, climbing into the small vehicle, after three people it starts to fill up quickly. In the end, I'm left standing on the pavement searching for a seat.
Jungkook taps his thigh, gesturing to me to come over.
I look at him vaguely, confused.
"Quick, before we miss our flight as well." He grumps.
I slowly make my way over to his lap, accidentally straddling him, my hands fall on his chest and he sharply breathes. "Sorry..." I mumble.
Jungkook quickly pulls me in, his hand resting on my waist. Soon I started to slip when the breaks started to get frequent. Jungkook slips his hand under my thigh, tugging me closer.
"Hold tight." He whispers jaw clenched as it twitches.
My eyes drift over his hard chest, the long drive leaves me tired, and my head rests on his warm body. It wouldn't hurt to take a quick nap.
It feels silent the whole way, my body almost seems dead and I end up in the plane with surprise glinting in my eyes.
Slowly my eyes open to a foreign voice on the speaker.
"This is your captain speaking, we are now about to take off for France."
My eyes bulge out and I throw myself out of the seat sitting straight as I frantically look around.
A hand slithers between my fingers, interlocking together. I look to my side to find Jungkook facing me, his face squished against the seat as he eyes me with a toothy grin.
"Relax Princess." His hoarse voice leaves me jittery.
"How did I end up here?"
Taehyung who sits next to me answers with a mischievous grin planted on his face. "He carried you of course."
"Even through security?"
Taehyung nods.
I shift my eyes back to Jungkook who intently stares at me with droopy eyes and a stupid smile on his face.
My face lights on fire, turning bright red, I quickly hide it in my hands, receiving a small chuckle from Jungkook.
I nudge him with my elbow as he pouts.
"aren't you going to thank me for not ruining your sleep?" He cocks his eyebrow, sitting straighter. I laugh, feeling playful enough to piss him off.
"No. You are a big bag of dick."
He dramatically gasps, placing a palm on his shoulder. Pretending to find my words offending.
"Did you hear that Taehyung?" He smirks, "I'm a huge bag of dick."
"So the lady speaks with experience?"
Taehyung now enters into the conversation as both of them naughtily gape at me with cocky smiles.
Ganging up together. How dare they.
"SHUT UP!" I yell, crossing my arms and sinking into my seat, blushing furiously.
The number of times Jungkook made me blush today was enough to have blood flowing everywhere in my body.
Jimin quickly turns around, flashing his phone screen at us.
"Natalie sent us this message!" He jumps in his seat with excitement. "We are all getting our own rooms!"
I look at Jungkook but he is already staring at me with questioning big doe eyes. He quickly looks ahead of him, hiding the anguish that I notice.
Our whole flight he stays silent, not a word exchanged between us yet our hands linger together silently.
I want him to tell me to stay.
Tell me to not take up that new room.
Just tell me with words.
But he hides his disappointment with a small smile and flickering orbs that don't look at me anymore.
He wears his headphones, resting his head with his eyes close "Tell me to stay, dumbass," I whisper, hoping he never hears it.
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JUNGKOOK
As the plane touched down on the runway at Charles de Gaulle Airport in Paris, a sense of excitement bubbled up inside me. This was it, the start of our much-anticipated trip to France. I was travelling with my seven teammates, and we couldn't wait to explore this beautiful country.
The moment we stepped out of the airport, the crisp French air filled our lungs, and the bustling atmosphere of the city greeted us with open arms. Our faces lit up with smiles as we hailed a fleet of taxis to take us to our destination - a famous French hotel we had heard so much about.
The hotel was everything we had imagined and more. Lavish chandeliers hung from the ceilings, and the lobby was adorned with exquisite French art. We checked in, and soon, we were each handed the keys to our rooms I entered my room, feeling a mixture of exhaustion from the long flight and exhilaration for the adventures that awaited us. The room was elegantly decorated, with a stunning view of the Eiffel Tower from the window. It was a dream come true.
After freshening up and getting settled, we decided to do some sightseeing. Paris had so much to offer, and we couldn't wait to immerse ourselves in its culture. As we gathered in the hotel lobby, I couldn't help but notice Y/n, a fellow teammate, looking as excited as I felt.
"Hey, Y/n," I said, approaching her. "Is there anything specific you'd like to see today?"
She looked at me with a playful glint in her eye. "Well, Jungkook, there's this place I've always wanted to visit - the Bridge of Love Locks."
A smile tugged at my lips. "Sounds romantic. Do you have someone in mind whom you'd do this activity with?"
Y/n chuckled her confidence shining Y/n chuckled, her confidence shining through. "Who needs someone else? I can lock my own love, thank you very much."
I couldn't help but laugh at her cocky response. "You're right, Y/n. Love for oneself is just as important."
We strolled through the charming streets of Paris, taking in the enchanting atmosphere. The city's beauty was captivating, and I was grateful to be experiencing it with my teammates, especially Y/n, whose lively spirit added an extra layer of excitement to our adventure.
As we finally reached the Bridge of Love Locks, I watched Y/n choose a padlock from a nearby vendor, her eyes sparkling with enthusiasm. She scribbled her name on it and, with a determined expression, fastened it to the bridge, among countless others that symbolized love, both shared and self-love.
The sun began to set, casting a warm, golden glow over the city. Y/n and I stood there, side by side, admiringthe bridge adorned with thousands of locks, each telling a unique story.
"Today has been amazing," Y/n said, her voice softening as she looked out over the Seine River. "And I'm glad I got to share it with you, Jungkook."
I smiled at her, feeling a connection that went beyond friendship.
Beyond friendship....is it even possible?
When I look into her eyes I see sparkle of love, but it's not the same. Those eyes look at me as if we are acquainted. Sometimes when she brings her face close to mine it isn't because she wants to kiss me but because of her uncontrollable excitement, or when she clings to my arm it isn't because she's head over heels for me but because she seeks...a friend.
Why do you bring me my favourite cereal, or sit with me at night listening to my cries of vulnerability? Why do you end up sleeping in my shirt or sitting on my lap thinking I wouldn't notice it? Why do you do all this just as friends? I hate it.
It makes me think of you as something more than JUST FRIENDS.
After an eventful day of sightseeing and exploration in the heart of Paris, I returned to my hotel room. The luxurious suite was both inviting and intimidating, with its opulent furnishings and spaciousness. I couldn't help but feel a sense of solitude as I prepared for bed. Even though we were all in the same hotel, the fact that we each had our own rooms left me feeling strangely empty. Wasn't this what we all wanted? Our own space, privacy, and comfort?
As I lay in bed, unable to sleep and deep in thought, I couldn't help but think about Y/n. Her earlier cocky response about locking her own love had amused me, but now, in the quiet of the night, I found myself wishing there was a bed next to mine where she could be. Her presence had brought an extra layer of excitement and joy to our day, and the emptiness I felt now was proof of that.
Just as I was lost in my thoughts, a sudden knock on my door jolted me upright. My heart raced as I cautiously approached the door. Who could it be at this hour?
I opened the door slowly, and to my surprise, I found a tiny figure standing there, her face obscured by a pillow. It was Y/n. She looked up at me with a sheepish smile and removed the pillow from her face.
"Jungkook," she began, "I hope I didn't startle you. Can I come in? I can't sleep."
I blinked in surprise but quickly stepped aside to let her into my room. As she entered, her eyes darted around, taking in the neatness and elegance of the suite.
"Nice place you've got here," she remarked, her voice filled with admiration.
I leaned against the wall, crossing my arms. "Thanks, Y/n. What's keeping you awake at this hour?"
She hesitated for a moment before answering, "Something's missing."
I furrowed my brow, concerned. "What do you mean?"
She turned to me, a playful glint in her eyes once again. "My cocky roommate," she said with a smile.
I couldn't help but laugh at her response. "Well, here I am, your cocky roommate," I said, feeling a warmth spread through me. It was as if her presence had filled the void I didn't even realize was there.
Y/n settled down on the edge of the bed, and we began to chat, sharing stories and laughter, as the night continued to deepen around us.
It didn't take long for me to realize that sometimes, the best adventures were the ones that unfolded unexpectedly, and in this moment, with Y/n by my side, I couldn't have been happier.
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Hello,
Can i request Wonwoo with suggestive prompt 38 & 8 + 10 fluff. I'm sorry already because Iâm not sure how to make this request đĽ˛
ThankyouđŠľđŠˇ
hello! only 38 is available right now, so i'm going to go with it, sorry love :( thank you for requesting! đ hopefully you will like it!
suggestive prompt: 'since it's you, i'll let it go... just this once, understand?'
wonwoo tilts his head to the side, scrutinizing the scene in front of him with narrowed eyes. there are millions of thoughts in his head, thousands of theories but he silences them all down, preferring to get all answers from you directly. in the end, you always tell him not to overthink so he'll try to do exactly this tonight. cheers erupt at the final music notes and wonwoo claps as well, transfixed at the way another guy shows you off, loudly proclaiming how amazing you are in dancing. wonwoo is aware: he knows how amazing you are and not only in dancing. his eyes trace your shy smile, your beautiful curves as you walk past everyone towards him, shining with joy. it's your moment and he's not going to ruin it with his stupid jealousy and overthinking; wonwoo opens his arms wide and welcomes you in them with a sincere smile, hugging you tight. 'you were amazing out there, my love,' he says and smiles at your giggle.
'thank you!' you lean back, smiling widely. 'it was very unexpected!'
wonwoo agrees: when you two came for drinks to this new bar, the last thing he expected was for a random guy to ask who's good at this certain dance and then for you to join said random guy on a dance floor. he's not an idiot and knows that random guy means nothing to you, but something dark inside him is not happy, it gnaws on his mind and- 'had fun?' he asks, bringing you closer. he kind of hates how someone else made you this happy.
you nod. 'i did!' and because you know him very well, better than he knows himself, you of course notice: 'i guess someone is not happy that i danced with some guy tonight.' wonwoo nods, not seeing any reasons to lie. you sigh, leaning close. 'i hope that this someone also knows that i'm not interested in anyone else.'
oh, reassurance feels like balm on his wound. he knows he has no rights to tell you not to dance with others, but he also knows he can always turn everything into a joke with you to ease the tension: 'since it's you, i'll let it go... just this once, understand?'
you roll your eyes, knowing full well he's joking. 'how kind of you, woo.' you say, slapping him lightly on his chest. 'jealous much?'
'very.' wonwoo admits easily, because it's you and he has nothing to hide. 'want to go home now. you ready?'
you huff, leaning in to give him a sweet kiss. 'ready, my jealous baby. let's go.'
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english kinda sucks.
â rin x reader! (gender not mentioned)
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crack? idk im smokin /j | reader might be illiterate (LIKE ME IN JP) | already in relastionhip B)
notes: (rin might be ooc D:) i go to a jp/en bilingual school as an english strong student so idk i thought i'd have fun + this is inspired by the infamous EN additional time :P
sypnosis -> learning english after the age of six kinda sucks, having to actually learn the grammar.. but you know what's almost as bad as english grammar?
çşéł (PRONOUNCIATION.)
your eyebrows bunched together, your pouty lips now just frowning in distaste at the english letter written out for you by your boyfriend.
meanwhile he's sitting beside you with his legs crossed together, looking at your fidgeting pen and confused look on your face, rin had already gone through this before, since he was going to be at the top of the soccer world of course.
after another minute of you butchering the pronunciation of "th", rin takes the pencil from your fingers and points the lead at the words he had written, turning to look at you, you catch eye contact with him.
he looks at the three words, pointing at each one, in the order he wrote it, rin proceeds to carefully pronounce to you, and you drunk in his slightly accented voice. what a cutie.
"through"
"though"
"thought"
...
maybe his voice wasn't as cute when he pronounced these words and despite looking VERY similar, sounded very different and even meanr very different things...
and what does he mean one's a prepozishun, another is a naon, and that last one is a conjuhkushon...??? whatever those are supposed to be..
"ehhh... threuw?"
you felt like an infant, trying your hardest to try and annunciate these confusing and annoying words.
the little accent in your voice that bled through your voice as you put in so much effort into trying to say these words correctly, it was really amusing to rin.
to him, these words were easy to say, easy to spot, easy to use. but seeing you put in so much effort was adorable to say the least.
"through" he echoes your words with more certainty and accuracy.
you scrunched up your face at the correction, and just went to the next word.
"..dough.."
"though" rin reads, you shoot him a small side glance at how close you were.
you were bit more happy that you got this one a lot better than the last, barely off, you were motivated to try again.
...
"...though."
you turned your head towards rin with an expectant look, the look in your eyes screamed "tell me i'm right".
though his facial expression didn't beam with gladness at you finally getting it correct, it's still rin itoshi afterall, but you could see a small glimmer of pride that dotted itself into the teal sea of ethereality that swam in scleras of your boyfriend's features.
"good job. took you long enough." he complimented, but deep rooted in that bored sounding tone, you knew he was happy to see you overcome.
rin then narrow his eyes slightly, moving his pencil over, making your eyes follow with his movements.
ruining your nice moment, "now this one." he speaks in english, you frown.
rin only watches as you struggle to differentiate 'though' and 'through', it's entertaining to watch, but next to him you were merely being sulky.
all with a single thought going through your head, though you agreed with yourself completely, you like spending time with your boyfriend.
'man, english kinda sucks.'
~ rini writes ~
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Jaune: (Walks in) Oh! Hey, guys! What's up?
Yang/Pyrrha/Oscar: (Standing around)
Ozpin: Have a seat, Mr. Arc.
Jaune: Uh, sure... What's going on? Did I go rogue again?! I'm so sorry! I promise not to do again! Don't throw the book at me! I was young and needed the money and-
Yang: Alright, this is already off to a bad start.
Jaune: Huh? Oh, did I insult someone's favorite kid's show again?
Oscar: No, this isn't another Goof Troop situation.
Pyrrha: It's more serious than that.
Oscar: Slightly more serious.
Jaune: Um... Okay? So, what is this?
Yang: THIS is an intervention! Your dad jokes are out of control, Jaune! You have a problem!
Jaune: Dad jokes?
Yang: You know, like, "Can a kangaroo jump higher than a house?"
Jaune: Ha! Of course not! Because houses-
Yang/Pyrrha/Oscar: CAN'T JUMP.
Jaune: Y-Yeah... Alright, point taken. I'll, uh... just get some new material.
Yang: OR you could just stop! They're super lame!
Jaune: Yeah, but like, lame in a funny way?
Oscar: Eh... Not really...
Ozpin: I have to say, they're lame even by lame dad standards.
Pyrrha: I don't really see how they're funny.
Oscar: I think it's supposed to be ironic. Like, they're so not funny that they're actually funny.
Pyrrha: I don't think that's how it works.
Yang: Yeah, not to mention they're so ANNOYING when they're coming from you! I know when my dad came around and started spouting off dad jokes, it was cool or whatever, but he's not here and there's no need for another dad joke teller! We're doing this for your own good. Please, just stop...
Jaune: Wow, I... I had no idea you guys felt this way. But, if I can ask, what makes you guys the arbiters of comedy? Like, when does a joke become a dad joke anyways?
Pyrrha: Hm... I never considered that.
Oscar: Oh, actually, I do have an idea-
Yang: WAIT!
Jaune: (Grins) When it becomes...
Yang: STOP HIM!
Jaune: APPARENT! (Drops smokebomb, Runs)
Ozpin: GRAB HIM!
Pyrrha: (Catches Jaune, Holds him) Jaune! You need to stop! You're addicted to dad jokes!
Jaune: I used to be addicted to the hokey-pokey, too! But then I (Judo flips Pyrrha) TURNED MYSELF AROUND! (Runs)
Pyrrha: (Gets up) What does that even mean?
Oscar: That was pretty clever, but the punchline kind of falls flat. See, he didn't actually turn HIMSELF around and-
Yang: HE'S GETTING AWAY! (Chases)
Ozpin: (Enters warehouse) Ready yourselves, everyone... There's no telling what he has planned.
Jaune: (Echoing through the warehouse) YOU GUYS WANNA HEAR A JOKE ABOUT CONSTRUCTION?
Yang/Pyrrha/Oscar: NO!
Jaune: THAT'S FINE. I'M STILL... WORKING ON IT~!
Yang: Oh, that son of a...!
Oscar: I didn't think it could get this bad! How did this even happen?
Jaune: YOU COULD CALL IT A CHICKEN AND EGG SITUATION...
Pyrrha: As in... which came first?
Jaune: I'LL LET YOU KNOW; I JUST ORDERED BOTH FOR DINNER~!
Yang/Pyrrha/Oscar: (Groan)
Ozpin: YOU SUCK!
Oscar: We need to stop him! If we don't, then the dad jokes will spread to the rest of us! It's the most widely believed fact in history!
Ozpin: We can't let that happen...
Pyrrha: Should I use lethal force?
Oscar: Only if you have to-
Ozpin: Yes. Absolutely.
Yang: Hang on. What if... What if we lure him out by fighting fire with fire? Kill the dad joke by ruining the punchline. Follow my lead.
Yang: What do you call cheese you don't own?
Yang: NOT! YOUR! CHEESE!
Jaune: UUUGH...
Pyrrha: Oh, uh, I had a pencil with two erasers! It... didn't write very good.
Jaune: (Drops down) It was pointless! POINTLESS! COME ON!
Ozpin: GRAB HIM!
Jaune: (Tackled by Oscar and Yang) Rgh! Did- Did you know I could cut down a tree with only my vision? It's true! I SAW IT WITH MY OWN EYES! I tried to catch the fog, BUT I MIST! I used to hate facial hair, BUT THEN IT GREW ON ME!
Oscar: Don't listen to him! It'll spread!
Jaune: Can one bird make a pun? No, BUT TOUCAN~! HAHAHAHAHA~! (Dragged away by Oscar)
Pyrrha: ...
Yang: This... This is for the best, Pyrrha. (Pats, Walks away)
Pyrrha: ...
Pyrrha: Heh... Toucan~.
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I don't have any specific questions, but I'm very interested in your comic! Do you have any (non-spoilery) character or worldbuilding lore that you're excited about but haven't had the chance to talk about yet? I'd love to hear it :)
Uuurggghh god do I ever-
This is gonna be so long I'm so sorry
Gonna go with Sootsnow this timeâ because there's so much to this man that I cannot fucking write or convey as I want to. (But I'll try here, probably won't succeed.)
Like I complain about him having so many kits but it genuinely makes a lot of sense for them, specially in relation to their personality- it also very much ties into why he refuses to share information about the Takers.
Look at this fool, he (in game) went from Responsible -> Lonesome -> Righteous- and it makes a lot of sense for him to have kits, because Sootsnow has 1) always been social, and 2) became a leader as a newly made adult, learned that beasts run around the lands he owns, and at the time it was only them, Silk, and a little later, Dewâ so of course he'd be stressed out of his mind, refusing to go to gatherings and tell the other clans about Takers, because if they turn to blame Chasingclan they could very easily eradicate Chasingclan.
That's scary.
So, the triplets were a direct choice by Sootsnow to expand the clan and grow in power. That's also why Soot raised them as his mother did to him and Silk, because in his mind that creates strong, resilient cats.
They value strength beyond anything, which is why Moth went from being the favourite (some internalised bullshit from Riftjay that the youngest is the strongest and the elder are canon fodder) and when Moth couldn't fight, and chose to become a healer, Valleyfrost was the next best, especially with her abnormal strength.
This is also why Soot disliked Crane from the get go, she was the weaker link, the canon fodder for her siblings. Which is absolutely wild considering that Cranedance is the ONLY cat that has been in a fight with another cat, scarred another cat, and has killed another cat. She is consistently the only cat that never backs down from a dangerous situation. But because Sootsnow has already written her off he doesn't know anything about her or his kits.
Nowâ the four new kits, where born during Lonesome personality, the ones he had with Quiver, was an actual attempt on a family. If he couldn't have convinced Quiver to join the clan Soot would have left to be a loner with her. She just went missing before that could happen.
They're now Righteous and I choose to believe it's they fully think they're doing only the right thing. Sootsnow has to believe he's only done the right thing ever, otherwise he's strained so many relationships for nothing.
So basically: Sootsnow is a very complicated guy, and shouldn't be in a leadership position, and is very much crumbling under the pressure. And, in turn, is ruining his own relationships trying to feel in control.
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"if it's a one time thing for "closure" for Buck's sole benefit, or to ruin Tommy's character, then I don't want it" - You said that so well, and I totally agree. It seems it is always about making Buck "the poor guy everyone feels sorry for" (maybe that's why the breakup was spun the way it was, or happened in the first place), but this is really getting annoying. I don't trust them, so the latter part of your sentence could be an idea that they think about.
yeah, at this point, I don't trust Tim at all. he said he would stop paying attention to fandom and start writing the story *he* wants to write and what happened? he went on to use a fandom idea (Abby's Tommy was Buck's Tommy) on the show, which retconned timelines and events, just because he thought it would be funny.
so yeah, he might find funny to bring Tommy back for a single episode, like Abby, just for a final conversation with Buck or, worse, to show him with some other guy all happy while Buck is still miserable and missing him.
I hope I'm wrong, I hope this (clumsily told) break up is just the start and not the end of their relationship, I hope Oliver's "will they, won't they" was talking about them, but I'm not placing any bets on it.
#Tim has clearly been too distracted with the spin-off to pay attention to what he's doing on the OG#I hope he would make up his mind of where he wants to be#and delegate his showrunner position to someone else#tommy kinard#bucktommy#911#911 critical#anon asks
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(So, so, so, so, so sorry I've been a bit preoccupied with other storylines I'm doing)
All of a sudden Lucifer heard yelling downstairs. Curious he picked Avery up and took her with him as he opened a portal to the lobby. The screaming was getting louder now. He could hear it coming from the kitchen. He headed to that direction and went in to see Charlie trying to calm down Angel and Nifty.
Charlie: It'll be okay guys maybe, maybe we can buy some more before
Lucifer: Before what? What seems to be the problem sweetie.
Charlie was about to answer him when she glanced down at her sister and saw her hands. She came to take a closer look and sure enough they were still a bit grimy from frosting. Charlie looked up to her father and asked him,
Charlie: Dad, please tell me you didn't give her the cupcakes we were making for Sir Pentious visit.
Lucifer's eyes widened in complete shock and almost dropped his daughter, again.
Lucifer: ...I thought that wasn't until three weeks from now.
Charlie: (groans) No Dad I said three days from now, TWO days ago
Lucifer turned as slowly as possible and saw Nifty and Angel glaring daggers at him for ruining all their hard work
Lucifer: ...Oops?
Separation Trial
@beef-brisket @things-arent-what-they-seem66
Adam tapped his fingers against the table in a distracted manner. He had been there at the restaurant for a while now. Waiting for his...waiting for Lucifer. He needed to talk with Lucifer, he wanted to talk to him at home about it, in private. However, when he asked about meeting him, Lucifer simply nodded his head and said they could meet at this restaurant.
He didn't even take Adamâs idea at eating at home into consideration. Although the place Adam sat currently was upscale and nice it wasnât what he wanted to do. This wasnât where he wanted to haveâŚthe conversation. He sighed to himself as he saw Lucifer approach. He barely even said hello before Lucifer kissed him on the cheek before seating himself.
Lucifer: Hello my dearest, whatâs going on? Whyâd you want to talk at a restaurant? You know we could have talked over the phone. You made it sound so urgent.
Adam took a moment to keep his anger in check. Once again Lucifer wasnât listening.
Adam: What I wanted to talk to you about couldnât be said over the phone. It had to be in person. Lucifer we have been married for three whole years now.
Lucifer: Yeah I know, last week was our anniversary. Donât you remember Addie?
Adam felt his breath hitch and he struggled to not cry then and there. Their third anniversary had been a disaster, he didnât want to go into it. But Adam had would forever hate that day. It was what made him bring this meeting with Lucifer.
Adam: I do remember, and so should you.
Lucifer: But I literally just said that I
Adam: No, Iâm talking about what happened that day. Can you please tell me what happened?
Lucifer was nervous at his husbandâs harsh tone but answered him.
Lucifer: Well, I do remember that both of us were so busy, I with handling a fortis problem, then Charlie called and she needed some help with the hotel, and I didnât get back till late at night. Oh and you had that concert of yours, by the way how was it? I donât think I asked before.
Adam felt his eye twitch.
Adam: It was not JUST a concert Lucifer.
Lucifer: âŚDid something happen at the concert?
Adam: More like what didnât happen.
Lucifer: Did no one applaud you? Were they booing you? Honey donât worry your a great singer, youâll bounce back.
Adam: No, there were no applause nor cheers. Because my audience wasnât there.
Lucifer: Oh, Adam Iâm so sorry.
Adam: You werenât there Lucifer.
Lucifer: What?
Adam: You were not at my concert Lucifer, You were supposed to be there. Because you were meant to be my audience. Because that concert was going to be dedicated to you! It was supposed to be my wedding anniversary present to you!
Lucifer: But, but, but itâs not my fault if you donât tell me in advance!
Adam: Lucifer I told you weeks prior about it. And you always said that youâd be there. But of course you lied.
Lucifer: I didnât lie! Shit came up Adam this isnât my fault. If anything you should have told me before I left that day! On top of that what did you expect me to do? Not do my duty as king. Tell the goetia to handle it themselves!? Say no to my own daughter, your own daughter, I shouldnât have helped her at all?! Geez you can be selfish sometimes.
Adamâs eyes widened at that statement. He was shocked to his seat still. Then slowly he nodded his head in understanding. He was an idiot for ever even considering giving Lucifer a second chance. Taking a deep breath, Adam looked directly into Luciferâs yellow, red eyes and said,
Adam: Lucifer, I want a divorce
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Sector FYI Night-Day Terrors Statuses
[CW/TW: small bits of Bl00d]
INFO: Sector PHP decided to give Carol a place to stay at Sector FYI so Plantazia could do research on her condition, since she's (usually) the brains of the team. After dropping her off there, Carol was greeted with a nice and tidy room with small decorations and some food set up by the team. But the Sector start to notice Carol's symptoms...very sooner. She starts having breakdowns when someone stares at her for too long, having hallucinations, and a clear lack of sleep. The Sector doesn't know what to do, Plantazia's out of ideas, Irk's just wants to get this over with, and Adelle wants to see Carol get better, but things don't seem to be going well for the team.... Plantazia/e560
"The heck is this...? I've never seen anything like this before, this is...concerning..." INFO: -Stays up until midnight, desperately needing to know what has gotten into Carol so much that she's gained eyebags and is most likely about to wilt -"Why haven't you found anything Plantazia?! you're a genius, NOT A DUMMY!" -Starts getting into more arguments with Irk
IRK/Numbuh ¤
"WHY 4R3 Y0U GUYS 0V3R34CT1NG S0 MUCH? 1T'S JUST S0M3 STUP1D N1GHTM4R3S, SH33SH...." INFO: -Thinks everyone is overreacting and that everything will go back to normal, but still has concern for Carol deep down -Stays outside of the room Carol stays in for the week and guards it at night (with Their axe) -Refuses to see how Carol sees her in her hallucinations
Adelle/Numbuh 136
"Hey Carol, you doing good? We can spend some time together if you'd like.." INFO: -Doesn't know what's going on but still wants to help -Thinks that Carol is just having reoccurring nightmares and that she's just going through something bad -Got scratched by Carol a lot due to accidentally having eye contact with her (Despite Carol apologizing, she still tries to be patient) -"Is....something more going on, Carol? It's ok, you can tell me...if you want, but if you don't that's fine..!"
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Template & AU by @kandykatz Adelle/Mesona by @catchingrockd Sector PHP (mention) by @artsygirl0315
#knd#codename kids next door#kids next door#codename knd#knd ocs#knd oc#knd au#numbuh e560#numbuh ¤#numbuh 136#plantazia#irk#adelle#night day terrors au#I'm so sorry if I ruined this with these guys
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Winner!!!!!
Congratulations to Harry du Bois for winning 2nd place in Tumblr's Poorest Little Meow Meow Contest!!
as the saying goes, second place is first loser! HDB, you'll always be the poorest little meow meow in our hearts. congrats!
oh and i guess also congrats to that other contestant or whatever
#tumblr's plmm contest#maybe if vriska hadn't cheated she would've earned an actual congratulatory post :)#now i have no motivation to make something special for the occasion#so you get a shitty edited meme instead of a drawing#disco elysium#harry du bois#hdb#vriska serket#homestuck#harrysweep#don't take this out on all homestuck fans guys tho for real. i'm sorry a few bad actors ruined it for everyone
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#silvergifting#tyelpe#celebrimbor#mairon#annatar#i'm so sad about them#like guys if somehow mairon managed to deal with his pride and stayed in eregion#then it would change the whole middle-earth history for the better#and both of this idiots would have a happy life with engineering stuff and avoiding questions#imagine steampunk eregion with railways and airships#technical progress goes weeee#elves and mairon together make ar-pharazon reconsider his middle-earth expancion#hobbits live happily ever after without any suspicious rings#and also sunglasses#they need sunglasses#mairon why are you a stupid idiot why you ruined all of that?#also i am not sorry
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@glowweek Day 5 FAMILY | FRIENDS
Peridot and specially Lapis do not trust the racoons.
Specifically chose this angle so I don't draw feet. _(:,3ăâ )_
Mi own connverse kids Ebony and Rohini are there! And technically Sakura and Zachary. (Please until now I don't know what else to name them. đ)
And sorry the older Maheswarans aren't there. I don't know where to put them and I already had character overload. đ
Hibiscus print on Bismuth's shirt is from ManMadeOfGold!
Speaking of shirt, another thing I avoided was thinking of their outfit designs. đ
It's somewhere a little over a decade of timeskip since SU:Future and I'm sure at least one or two would've reformed during the time. So I'm gonna say they wanted to keep the vibe of a casual outdoors picnic-type event so they wore the casual themes.
#Still ..Honestly got lost on what to do with Bismuth and Pearl's forms. First tried to give the button up shirt she had in Bismuth casual#but it didn't look casual enough.... So I made it into a Hawaiian shirt. đ
#I ACTUALLY ended up Googling 'Mom casual summer outfit' lol and grabbed the first I saw as base..... I still managed to kinda make it#look... eh. But I already spent so much time on her. Sorry Pearl. đ#I mean. In contrast I gave Garnet the super simple white shirt and loose pants. But like... She already looked so darn good imo. So I#just left it at that before I ruined it.#connverse#connverse week#glowweek#Bismuth SU#Ebony OC#Lapis Lazuli SU#Peridot SU#Garnet SU#Connie Maheswaran#Pearl SU#Amethyst SU#Greg Universe#Steven Quartz Universe#Rohini OC#Lion SU#Yeah. I'm late and the last two will most likely be super late as in around past the GlowWeek week. đ
#..... Guys..... I just realized ... There should be the rest of Greg's body visible. RIPPppp sorry I'm not going back to fix anything. đđ#Possible backstory of Lapis and Peri and raccoon:#https://www.tumblr.com/screwpinecaprice/141991576032/i-just-thought-it-would-be-really-funny-because-i#connverse kid#Gold TL
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so here's my honest thoughts on dragon age: the veilguard, after ~40 hours of playing. i finished the main quest after having finished all companion quests and major faction quests. just to clear up what content i saw, i played as an elven transmasc rook who is a member of the lords of fortune. he romanced lucanis (although after finishing the game i'm now leaning towards taash). i don't know what's happening in playthroughs that have a different race, gender identity, romance or faction going on.
full spoilers ahead, i mean it. don't read further if you want to avoid them. i don't want complaining about it in my asks.
oh and also, if you're worried because of a few negative reviews online i can comfort you by saying don't give a fuck about a certain big name youtuber who is very much tied to bethesda franchises giving this a negative review. i'll explain why.
i'm starting off with the things i liked
the game looks really pretty. i was worried it wouldn't feel like thedas anymore (with them trying to "focus on northern thedas only" i thought they'd make a clear cut in environmental design. they do and they don't. it's complicated. i'll elaborate on it when talking about the negative stuff). anyway it does. minrathous feels like kirkwall. treviso enchanted me like the winter palace did. the hossberg wetlands reminded me of the hinterlands and a couple other inquisition maps. arlathan looked like... arlathan. the crossroads were different, but familiar. overall i like the way it looks and feels. it's thedas, with a twist. it's a good one, and gives everything a solid but unique feel.
combat is top tier. if you're a hardcore dragon age player you WILL miss the tactical aspect of it for a bit, but i promise you, once you're used to the way the combat works, you will be lapping that shit up. and once you get to ability combos you'll mourn the control you used to have over your companions in battle a bit less
the MAIN quest and its story. i expected worse, way worse. and for a while the game even had me tricked (harr harr you'll get it in a second) it is Really That Much Worse. but holy shit was it good. i walked away satisfied ngl.
your choices have SOLID weight. there's consequences, good AND bad. i got minrathous blighted, ruled over by venatori, and the leader of the shadow dragons ultimately died because of my decisions. i made those at the beginning and throughout the game. he died at the end. DAVRIN died because i didn't expect what i was saying to have that much weight. i thought i was in the clear. he had hero status. well turns out, your choices can still get your companions killed even if you do everything right. i fucking love him. he shouldn't have made that sacrifice just because i told him to do everything it takes once.
the inquisitor, morrigan and dorian being there, surprisingly. there's also negatives to this though, see below.
speaking of companions dying and the inquisitor playing a bigger role: the final quest feels like me2's suicide mission. i was blown away by it and the fact that i got to see the results of all my efforts playing out in front of me.
bioware are NOT trying to redeem solas. they love him as a character yes, but i wasn't forced to see any good in him. he betrays you. he fucked my rook over twice. he fucked him over right back, for good this time (the veil wasn't torn down, i anchored it by binding him to it, he's doomed to uphold it). but solas really lives up to his name as the trickster elven god. rip to all the people who grew really attached to him over the years.
varric died. if you like him that's probably as hard reading it as it was watching it. varric died and the game lies about it until the very end. when the realisation hits, it hurts. but in the very best way.
the amount of care they put into gender expression and trans identities this time around. (i'll add onto this with negative points as well too).
rook feels very much ingrained in the world of thedas. he doesn't ask questions that expose the player to lore through dialogue as if he's stepped foot into thedas for the first time. those conversations feel very solid and good. i hope other faction players got as much joy out of this as i did.
and the things i didn't like and boy there's a lot unfortunately
the music. let's just get that out of the way holy shit. it doesn't feel like it belongs in this universe. it gets so incredibly sci-fi-y at times you'd think it's taken straight from mass effect andromeda. there's not a single song unique to veilguard that i really enjoyed. it broke my immersion, real bad. hearing a busker play the tavern songs from inquisition on a lute right after i killed some venatori with wobbly bass songs playing in the background is just odd. weird tonal shift. don't like it. it's made for people who like flashy light-weight cinema.
tevinter nights is required reading. the podcasts are required listening exercises. the game is so fast paced, especially at the start, that there's no time to introduce you to characters and how much weight their names carry in-game. i would not have known who half these people are if i hadn't skimmed over tevinter nights. i'd care even less about them than i already did. there is no time to get properly attached to them. people will act as if you're talking to a legend personified and you'll be thinking man goddamn which chapter of tevinter night were they in again and what did they do???
there's a weird mismatch with the animations. you'll have beautifully fluid ones, like emmrich casting spells. and then you'll have rook's face animating in the most unnatural manner that's sorta reminiscent of mass effect andromeda's "my face is tired" addison, when their emotions SHOULD be landing with the player rn instead.
i'm not vibing with the art style. sometimes it works. most of the time it doesn't. at points i felt like i was watching tangled.
that also brings me to some of the dialogue. same issue. i am watching frozen. i am watching tangled. someone on the writer's team really likes the adorkable trope. bellara is its victim.
for all the talk about identity, bioware sure doesn't like theirs. the grey warden armor got a redesign again and it just makes them look like a generic army. i hate it lol
in general, i don't like the armor design. the wardrobe/appearances system is fine, but it's just not helping if all the armors are just... kinda bland or downight bad looking? and don't get me started on the lords of fortune armor. that is orientalism personified.
the world states should have been carried over, full stop. i know they said they didn't because they want to separate what happens in the north from what happens in the south, which... i could have lived with that. but the inquisitor sends you letters that keep you up to date on... the south of thedas. you learn that there's a blight again, that people are standing strong but it's difficult, denerim's fallen, the rulers are taking care of it, orlais is fighting and they're successful for a while, etc etc. what's good bioware. i thought we don't care about the south this time around. why are you feeding me so much boring generic information. if you're not gonna show any of it and just write letters, then carrying the world state over should not have been an issue. i have a game dev background. those few lines of code would not have broken your budget or pushed your engine's limits. fuck right off.
this gripe of mine carries over to all the cameos. as a lord of fortune you have to deal with isabela a lot. it's fun. i missed her. you get to go drinking with her and taash and bellara! also my hawke romanced her. she's not mentioned once. they had the opportunity to put a sentence or two about her in there with not a lot of effort, trust me.
when varric dies, all she has is a single line about it. for gold, for fortune, for varric. she only says it if you interact with her on your way to the final push. that's not mandatory.
morrigan is there. kieran isn't. the old god soul that mythal and then solas absorbed? who cares at this point, the gods are dead now and solas is locked away for eternity. i suppose? why is morrigan there. she feels unneeded. i wish they'd just left her down south, at least that way i wouldn't have had to witness her god awful redesign.
dorian at least feels as if he belongs in this story. the shadow dragons are a crucial part to protecting minrathous. he's also weirdly underutilised. isabela and morrigan had more lines than him in my playthrough.
on the topic of romance: bro that was underwhelming. no, genuinely. you know when romance picked up a bit? after the point of no return. i heard maybe two lines of companion banter about it before that. maybe i missed something which i honestly doubt, but romance did not play much of a role in lucanis's storyline. i saved his grandmother as he wished me to (and if you read tevinter nights you know she was rather abusive and their relationship not the healthiest) and told him to focus on his family. a reunified family my rook wasn't even introduced to as a partner at the end of all that.
really, do not buy this game if you're only in it for the romances. others might be better, lucanis's basically gave me nothing. except for an outing (the second coffee date i had with him, it was getting repetitive) all of it played out once i committed to the final quest. the sex scene was a fade to black. annoyingly right after davrin died. if you're looking for well paced and good spice, pick up something else. the sweet talk and the final goodbye were nice though.
for all the good the ever-presence of gender identity does, it is brought up in such a disruptive manner too. it doesn't even play out naturally if you CHOOSE the lines that are meant to be said. hearing the words trans and non-binary in this setting doesn't feel right, and i'm saying this as a trans guy. i think it could have been handled more gracefully. the amount of times my rook went "i'm a MAN" as if he's about to start drumming on his chest and roaring any second now got super nerve-grating. "i'm so glad you're into me... the me who is trans. remember?" just. tell me one trans person who'd talk like that to a person they've grown close with and are trying to romance. this game doesn't handle sexuality well, so all this hey my body might not look like the way you're expecting it to look talk amounts to nothing anyway. i feel about this the way i feel about krem: this is partial exposition to trans experiences... packaged up for cis consumption. the ONLY exception to that is interacting with taash. holy shit was all of that heartwarming and bro did it feel good and natural to talk to them about theirs and rook's gender.
rivain and nevarra are new locations added by veilguard. they're also incredibly underwhelming, small and constricted maps. rivain is a coastline with a few ruins. the hall of valor is a partial ruin nestled into a cave on a beach, with a fighting pit. isabela is there in her skimpy outfit commentating your pit fights. that's it. i'm sorry if you were looking for a bustling pirate cove or whatever. you're not gonna get it. the nevarran crypts btw are a long ass dungeon crawl. that's it.
speaking of maps. i thought people were being dramatic when they said you're gonna be fighting the same enemies on them again and again. i thought they were figure of speeching it. they're not. you WILL fight the same amount of enemies. in the same spot. every time you reload the map. best to stay on a map and clear out the enemies and do as much questing on that map as you can before leaving, because you WILL have to do it all over again once you return.
the three choices i made for my inquisitor didn't matter lol she didn't have to face solas and therefore couldn't stop him at any cost as she had sworn (maybe because my rook tricked solas into binding himself to the veil, there was also an option to fight him. would she have stepped in? who knows). blackwall wasn't mentioned. and either her using a small amount of her forces in the final fight was the reason the civilians of minrathous fared so well..... or it just didn't matter. ultimately i think she had very little impact on anything
#datv#datv spoilers#dragon age: the veilguard#oh wow i hit a limit typing this#anyway to tie this up a bit: the good and bad to the environmental design being that well-known architecture like minrathous and dwarven#ruins look fire and remind me a lot of the previous games#but newly added locations are very... generic... very bland#i was very excited for rivain. i thought we'd get to see ships. not a bunch of ruins and a fighting pit and that's it#and why did i say to ignore a certain guy's review? bro because he was complaining about taash being ace and that taking up their screentim#and them being too up in your face about their identity. he did all this while she/her'ing them constantly#but my man they're trans. nb. not ace.#y'all need to be careful about bad reviews. they're coming from people who are upset about gender identity being handled as a topic in this#game. meanwhile they have no clue what they're even talking about. i don't think matty knows the difference between ace and trans#and neither do the hundreds of people who are one star rating this game currently#i liked this game. it's not top tier. it's not something i'll sink hours and hours and hours of my life into#it has tonal issues and it's moving away from what made dragon age stand out for me#but i do think that it's a genuinely fun play and people who are very invested in dragon age will squeeze joy out of it wherever they can#i had a hard time warming up to the new characters (taash and lucanis being the exception because they have an older bioware air about them#but solas's and varric's story (and don't get me wrong that's what veilguard is about) is GOOD. that is how bioware used to be.#and i wish they'd given us that energy all over the game. that direness. that grit. serious and mature writing.#that consistency is lacking#and whether you're gonna enjoy this game or not is entirely dependant on what you came here for and how well the game delivers on it#i think their weakest points are ironically the thing they advertised the most: the new companions and their writing#you won't find nuanced and good enemies here (i already reblogged something about this. you can go scroll around a bit and catch up on that#really the only thing that had me super invested and emotional was the main quest.#so make of that what you will. ultimately i was more frustrated with the game than i got enjoyment out of it. i was close to just put it#aside for now... until i went to minrathous to end ghila'nain's and elgar'nan's ritual. that all blew me away. still on a high off of it.#anyway yeah that review got cut short by the character limit maybe i'll add more to it tomorrow but rn... i am heading to bed#thanks for coming to my ted talk. also i'm sorry. zevran REALLY isn't in this.#dragon age
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Why is the TROP fandom so toxic all of the sudden?
(Rant in the tags and spoilers for S2 E7 of TROP)
#there are so many people arguing right now#I'm going to keep this simple but#was the kiss a choice?#yes#do I think it's going to ruin Haladriel content from the show forever?#certainly not#I really don't think we have anything to worry about#I think the show is still going to treat Haladriel with respect but fans of the ship just have to wait a bit for content#the allure of Haladriel to me (as someone who is 50/50 about the pairing) is the slowburn#If they are going to do something romantic with Gal and Hal they want to build up to it and make it great#We're only in S2 and they just met in S1#Let them have time to let those emotions simmer y'know?#And the amount of hate I'm seeing towards the people who didn't mind the kiss whether they saw it platonic or not is CRAZY#For a fandom that spews positivity on liking the show despite its flaws and shipping whatever you want (within reason)#there seems to be a lot of hatred now. Are we turning into what we wanted to avoid in the first place?#It's like you can't be a fan of a pairing other than Haladriel/Saurondriel or people attack you#Not all Haladriel fans are like this I'm just saying I'm seeing a lot of people being a little over-possessive of this particular pairing#The kiss didn't ruin my enjoyment of the show nor do I think it âruined things foreverâ for Haladriel#I think everyone should take a breath and calm themselves a bit before we start baring our teeth at each other#I'm not saying you can't be dissapointed that the kiss wasn't a Haladriel kiss#I'm just saying don't be a jerk to other fans because of your disappointment because then you're no better than the TROP haters#rant over lol sorry guys I'm just tired#blue blathers#the rings of power#rings of power#trop#lord of the rings#lotr
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Pancreatic Slut
#I am. So sorry. But that's just what I thought when I heard that line.#Seriously though I was not expecting that one pancreas thing to get called back to so much and to seemingly become a plot point.#Tbh I'm loving it. I love horror comedy and this is basically that. Plus some surrealist shxt and a liminal space aesthetic.#Also there are fxcked up science experiment creatures what's not to love. Love me some creatures.#dawko#garten of banban#<- think this is like the first time I'm actually using that tag for some reason I just felt too nervous snsnsnsnms#Cringe culture is dead but people treat this game like it's the worst thing since war-#because I guess people can't fathom the idea that horror comedies exist-#So they have to act like this is some antichrist that's ruining the state of horror when it's just some game made by two guys-#Idk I'm rambling now. Gonna shower.
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#i know i am in a teeny tiny minorityy of da fans but#i am. so tired of v4rric#i'm tired of him being in everything#(tired FOR him too. let the man rest)#tired of him being used to market every-damn-thing#i know I KNOW since almost everybody loves him he's a pretty surefire way to get ppl's attenion#but my interest in the game literally DROPPED seeing him involved#ugh you again#i used to like him!!!!#a lot!!!!#but when i say don't leave a seb-mancing hawke in the fade if you wanna keep liking v4rric I MEAN IT#his dismissive tone and insulting word choice#about telling sebastian his WIFE is (probably) dead sent my opinion plummeting to the depths of the deep roads#(i have to tell sebastian or he'll throw a fit. he'll THROW A FIT)#i try to keep it to myself bc i know ppl like/love him and i don't want to ruin that#bc i understand why you'd like him. i do#but for all the talk of him being hawke's best friend he does NOT act like it if you romance sebastian#not to mention the ''ignoring letters from starkhaven when he's viscount bc he doesn't like the man in charge'' things from trespasser :\#i just want to meet and play with new characters rather than have the same guy shoved in my face every time around#varric critical#(if this shows in the tag and you like him i'm v sorry. i tired to censor)
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