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theha1rarch · 5 months ago
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so .... i did an "ao3 wrapped" & well ...
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artstennisracket · 3 months ago
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Artrick fake dating. I can't think about why they would do it but fake dating is a big trope and I feel like we (Challenges fandom) haven't explored it
waitttttttt jinx…ur so right. can’t think of a single artrick fake dating fic? or any in the fandom tbh? but if anyone has any they’ve seen pls send🙏🏾🙏🏾 anywaysssss here we have artrick fake dating because patrick’s sister is getting married and his ex is gonna be at the wedding. also I feel like suits are lingerie for men LETS BE HONEST, it’s true.
cw: mainly sfw but if you want an nsfw pt 2 lmk cuz I would do anything for you jinx <3 (ik my list of things that need a pt 2 is getting long😭)
Patrick was so excited for his sister Sylvia when she facetimed him the night she got engaged. They were really close despite their age gap. He told Art immediately afterwards, bouncing with excitement.
Art had a smile on his face but Patrick can tell there was something behind his eyes.
“what? what’s up?” Patrick asks grin still plastered on his face.
Art shakes his head no, “no nothing, i’m excited for her man, it’s gonna be great.”
Patrick grabs Art by his shoulders forcing them to make eye contact, “okay no seriously what’s up with you?”
“well isn’t Nick gonna be there?” Art questions slowly. He didn’t want to bring up the fact that Patrick’s ex would most likely be in attendance at this very moment. He wanted Patrick to enjoy his excitement but unfortunately Patrick can read him like an open book.
Patrick stilled. He drops his arms, smile falling. Nick was the first guy Patrick ever dated. He was Patrick’s first everything (with a guy anyway). They dated for almost a year which was a really long time for someone like Patrick who could barely date a girl for 3 months.
They had met at Patrick’s sister’s 25th birthday party. Nick was actually Patrick’s sister’s boyfriend’s (now fiancé) younger brother. His sister was happy for him when she found out Patrick was dating her boyfriend’s brother but she did always say, “make sure this is serious.”
Sylvia knew that she was going to marry her boyfriend one day so if Patrick was going to date Nick he needed to be serious about it in order to not tarnish the Zweig family name (in the eyes of her boyfriend’s family at least.)
But Patrick reassured her time and time again that he was serious about Nick and he was. It was his longest relationship. It wasn’t his fault that one day Nick decided to up and leave with little explanation. All he said was “I just think you’re not fully in this”, which Patrick had no idea what the fuck that even meant.
The breakup was harsh. Patrick started doing really bad on tour, smoking more cigarettes per day than usual, and drinking more than usual.
Art had realized that Patrick wasn’t doing very well and offered Patrick to come stay with him for a few weeks at Stanford. This way he could take a break from tour and get over his heartbreak. That was almost a year ago now and Patrick hadn’t seen Nick since.
Patrick snapped back to reality, back to where he was standing in Art’s dorm room. He looks at Art and shrugs, “yeah i know, it’s whatever.”
Art raises his eyebrow, “you just spaced out for two minutes because ‘it’s whatever’?”
Patrick nods, “yep i don’t care that’s he’s gonna be there, i’m way over him.”
And somehow Art knew that even if that may be the case it’s not, Patrick was somehow concoct some crazy plan cas the wedding date got closer.
“will you be my boyfriend?” Patrick asked on his phone call with Art.
Art felt a blush rise to his cheeks and a familiar pit in his stomach but he was taken aback, “wha— what are you talking about?”
“the only way I can get back at Nick is if he thinks i’m over him. the best way to do that is to be dating someone else,” Patrick responds. Art doesn’t have to see his face to know that Patrick has that “i’m so proud of myself for thinking of this” look on his face.
“so you want me to pretend to be your boyfriend? don’t think it’ll be a little obvious that we’re faking?”
“no we’ll practice, get our stories straight. it’ll be fine.”
“get our stories gay you mean?” Art laughs at his own joke like it’s the funniest thing ever.
Patrick sighs, “yeah that wasn’t funny at all.”
The wedding is a week away. Art made decided he was gonna the light grey suit he has with a white dress shirt. Patrick was supposed to be on his way to Art’s dorm to stay with him for the week before they fly to mexico together.
This was they could “practice being a couple” whatever the fuck that means. Art has been putting up with Patrick’s crazy schemes and ploys for long enough to know this one probably wouldn’t end well either.
Art is just hoping he can get his feelings under control. He knows he has feelings for Patrick, it’s hard not to. They’ve spent every second of every day together for the last 6 years and Patrick wasn’t exactly a traditional best friend. Patrick was always invading his personal space in one way or another. They cuddle just to go to sleep, that’s not what normal best friends do. Patrick started calling Art pet names so long ago that Art doesn’t even remember when it started. It started with things like blondie and just progressed to babe somehow, but Art never minded.
Patrick was always looking out for him. He wouldn’t let anyone walk all over Art, always defended him. I mean they even masturbate together for christ sake. It doesn’t take a rocket scientist to figure out that Art wasn’t even listening to Patrick’s hookup stories when they jerked off together, he was too busy staring at Patrick’s cock which was massive by the way.
Even when either of them were in relationships, nothing changed in their friendship which probably didn’t help. When Patrick started dating Nick, Patrick did call Art less. It was hard adjusting to life in college when your best friend was 1. on tour playing pro tennis and 2. in a new relationship.
So not that Art was happy that Nick left Patrick (because Patrick calling him crying at 2am wasn’t a great feeling) but Art wasn’t not happy that Nick left Patrick. Going from Patrick’s number 1 to number 2 wasn’t great, but now he’s back to number 1. Art’s just hoping that this fake dating situation wouldn’t destroy their friendship because if his feelings came out and Patrick didn’t reciprocate, that would break him.
“okay so I think we just have to first decided how we got together and how long we’ve been together,” Patrick says sipping on his smoothie.
They were at a nearby mall after Art’s tennis practice since Patrick insisted he wanted a smoothie and the dining hall didn’t have any.
Art nods taking a small sip of his smoothie, “I think 3 months makes the most sense since it’ll be new enough but we’ve also been friends forever so no one would question our closeness. And 3 months means we would’ve started dated 9 months after your breakup so it works out.”
Patrick smirks putting his smoothie down, “you’ve been thinking hard about this huh?”
Art shrugs keeping a neutral face, “well somebody has too, and I think we should just say that one of us admitting to having feelings for the other and that’s how it happened.”
“hm…I was thinking we got drunk and hooked up but that works too,” Patrick smiles, “now that’s that out of the way we just have to practice kissing, dancing, and decides who’s the top and who’s the bottom?”
Art’s heart drops into his stomach. Kissing Patrick again would open an entire can of worms he didn’t want to have to confront. He scoffs slightly bewildered, “dancing I get but kissing? top and bottom? when are we going to need to use or know either of those things at your sisters wedding?”
“Art we have to be prepared for anything, it’ll be just like when we used to practice kissing when we were younger. and if someone asks about our sex life we should have our story straight.”
How can Art get himself out of this without exposing himself. He thinks quick before saying, “you mean when Nick inevitably asks about our sex life i’m sure. and we’re not kids anymore Patrick we already know how to kiss, we don’t need to practice.”
“don’t be such a party pooper, and don’t like you didn’t enjoy kissing me,” Patrick smirks, “and you know what that’s fine, I was trying to give you a say but now you’re the bottom and i’m the top.”
Art sighs, “but weren’t you a bottom with him? Nick is supposed to believe you’re magically a top now?”
Patrick scrunches his eyebrows together, “power bottom actually, there’s a difference. and with that ass you’re walking around with? yeah I think he’d believe me. who wouldn’t wanna hit that?”
A blush rises to Art’s cheeks, he plays with the straw in his smoothie cup, “whatever.”
The rest of the week they practiced dancing and keeping their story straight. They would even hold hands walking around campus, if anyone asked they said their made up dating story since it was good practice.
Art knew he’d have to deal with the repercussions once this was all over but it was kind of…nice. Letting himself live in the fantasy of being with Patrick. It really wasn’t very different from their friendship.
They still cuddled at night but now there’s be a make out session or two before bed. Art tried to hold his stance on not kissing but it was late at night and he was so tired. So when shirtless Patrick with all his Patrick like charm, deep sleepy voice, laying so close to Art, star of david reflecting the muted light of the moon in the night sky through the window, had asked Art one more time if he wanted to practice kissing, Art gave in.
So now every night before bed they’d make out. Whenever it started to get to intense which meant Art was getting hard he’d end it making up an excuse about being too tired.
They practiced dancing a few times. They learned how to slow dance just very basic starter stuff. Art would have his arms around Patrick’s neck and Patrick with his arms around Art’s waist.
Patrick insisted they practice dancing to U Got it Bad by Usher (since he was so sure his stew would play it at the wedding) which Art thought was really ironic because Art does indeed have it bad.
Finally the fateful day had come. They had flown to Mexico the day before checking into the resort. Sadly their flight landed too late for them to make it to the rehearsal dinner.
Patrick had his own room so he shared with Art, but since he hadn’t told his sister about his plus one there was only one queen bed in the room. To which Patrick shrugged, “it’s not like we were gonna sleep on separate beds anyway.”
The next day was wedding day so around 1pm they started getting ready. After Art was fully dressed, lacing his shoes up, Patrick walked out of the bathroom in his tux and holy shit he looked good. Art doesn’t know what was happening to his body because he just felt really compelled to get on his knees in front of Patrick right now.
Fuck he’s supposed to go the entire night pretending to be Patrick’s boyfriend when he looks that fucking good? jesus.
“hellooooo earth to Art? you good? you didn’t answer my question,” Patrick asks.
Art blinks a few time to come back to himself, “sorry what’d you say?”
Patrick smirks, “I think we have time for a quick smoke, do you wanna go?”
Art nods, that could be good for him, calm him down a bit, “sure”
They had a quick smoke and Art’s nerves had settled but his dick was still on edge, ready for get hard at any moment any time he looked at Patrick for too long. Patrick even looks sexy smoking a fucking cigarette, Art is so screwed.
They had to split up since Patrick had to go meet up with the wedding party so Art made his way to the ceremony to grab a seat.
Patrick also really needed that cigarette to calm him down. He felt on edge but didn’t really know why. Thinking about seeing Nick didn’t really bother him anymore like it did months ago. Maybe he was worried about the plan he concocted, scared to get caught in a lie.
But here was the moment of truth, Nick would be with the other groomsmen since he was also in the wedding party.
“Zweig.”
Patrick takes a deep breath before plastering his signature smirk on his face. He turns around to face where the voice was coming from.
There stood Nick, tall, brunette, wavy hair cut short. He was wearing a tux identical to Patrick’s with his arms crossed in front of his chest.
“Nick,” Patrick tilts his head to the side, “to what do I owe this pleasure?”
“uh your sister is marrying my brother, have you been living under a rock?”
Patrick lets out a small laugh, “yeah changed my last name to star and moved to bikini bottom. you didn’t know?”
“you haven’t changed a bit,” Nick smiles, “how’ve you been? still got that stray puppy following you around?”
Nick had made a joke about Art being a stray puppy when they first started dating. Whenever Nick would call Patrick, it seemed like Art was always around in the background. But Patrick always defended Art of course, saying things like “we’re best friends of course he’s gonna always be around” “we lived together for 6 years you gotta cut him some slack” “I think he’s having a hard time adjusting to living without me so i just wanna make sure im visiting him often”. All the above had raised red flags for Nick, but he chose to ignore them at the time.
Patrick laughs at the joke. This does make the perfect segway for what he’s about to say next, “i’m good, turns out i decided to give that stray puppy a proper home.”
Nick looks confused, “okay I don’t think I get the joke?”
“not my best work haha, but I just meant that we’re dating now. art and i are together.”
Nick’s face does that thing he does when he starts disassociating from the conversation so he keeps a neutral expression, “how long?”
“about 3 months or so, but enough about me. how’ve you been?” Patrick feels so proud of himself, he has successfully made his ex jealous. He knows Nick well enough to know that he’ll probably pull back from their conversation until he ultimately seeks Patrick out later in the night to get back together. Than boom, everything will be perfect. Though for some reason, Patrick doesn’t really feel great anymore.
“it was nice seeing you Patrick,” Nick does a half nod before he walks away, disappearing into the room.
Yeah Patrick doesn’t feel good at all.
The ceremony was gorgeous, of course it was. Patrick doesn’t want to know how much his parents spent, just wants to know they’d do the same for his wedding one day. But his sister is the only daughter so probably not.
He could imagine it though, getting married. When he was younger the idea always scared him. Commiting to one person for the rest of his life? How could he choose just one person? How could one person choose him? For a long time he didn’t really feel worthy of the holy matrimony, but seeing everyone here to celebrate his sister just made him feel warm and fuzzy inside. It helped him realize he actually does want this.
As he stands on the groom side facing the crowd, Art catches his eye. He’s pretty. He’s always been pretty. But the way the sunlight is catching his curls it almost gives a halo effect. Art is focused on the couple doing their vows. Patrick’s mind starts running away from him and he thinks what it would like if he married Art…
Patrick snaps out of it because the hell is he thinking. Art is his best friend. His really…really pretty best friend. Oh fuck, does he like Art? Fuckkkkkkk
Reception is in full swing, the live band has started their set, food was being served, and the open bar was very very open.
Patrick was a couple drinks in because realizing you like your best friend who you’re currently fake dating isn’t an easy thing to deal with sober. Art had also had a few drinks but he’s more of a lightweight.
They were finishing up their entrees when Nick had approached their table. It was clear he had also had a few drinks in him and he looked visibly angry.
“be honest with me, did you fuck him while we were dating?” Nick asks in Art’s direction.
Art is so confused right now, isn’t Patrick supposed to be the top in their fake relationship? “Patrick is the top?” Art says but it sounds more like a question and Art thinks he may be a little too drunk for this conversation.
Patrick scoffs, “no me and Art started dating way after we broke up I told you. i’m being very honest.” Ironic because he was definitely lying about something.
Nick downs the rest of his drink he had in his hand before he places the glass on the table, “well Art’s the reason I broke up with you anyway so that checks out. i’m surprised it took you guys that long to start dating. it’s clear that Art was in love with you the entire time we were together. you put him before me all. the . time. but you’re just too far up your own ass to think about anyone but yourself. whatever, you guys are such a fucking joke. crazy to think i thought we were gonna get back together when I saw you again but— yeah.” Then he storms off.
Patrick is speechless. Art is feels like he had ice water dumped on him.
At this exact moment “U Got it Bad” by Usher started pumping through the speakers. The live band had finished their set a little while ago so the DJ had taken over.
Patrick felt like his body was moving in auto-pilot because his brain hadn’t caught up yet. He stood up holding a hand out for Art, “c’mon we gotta dance.”
Art looks at Patrick’s hand for a beat before he takes it.
They move to the dance floor, Art’s arms around Patrick’s neck, Patrick’s arms around Art’s waist. They sway side to side to the beat. Patrick speaks up first, “do you think what Nick said was true?”
Art looks up at Patrick even though making eye contact is the last thing he wants to do now, “which part?”
Patrick thinks before he says, “any of it.”
Art clears his throat before he says, “yeah.”
Patrick sports his stupid crooked smile that Art will never admit that he loves. “do you have a crush on me donaldson?”
Art rolls his eyes, “well I actually just meant the “you being too far up your own ass” bit but whatever”
Patrick leans in, eyes closed, and Art meets him in the middle, his eyes closed, lips tangling in a kiss.
And maybe they did get to do that drunk hookup after all.
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luci-in-trenchcoats · 2 months ago
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Hey lovely I haven’t seen anything new from the blog pop up in awhile.
Have you hit a road block or just enjoying life? I’m asking from a genuine perspective (I don’t want to rush you into anything).
I’m going to be honest I’ve been enjoying life and everything that it has given me since January 1st good or bad. It comes in waves. I hope life has been treating you okay. I cannot wait to see what you’ve been working on.
Hi! Thanks for checking in hun! 😘 I appreciate it and nope, I know you're not rushing at all!
I've been doing my usual 1 fic a week lately. Although you are right, I haven't posted anything new in over 10 days which is the longest gap I've had since starting here. We'll get back to our usual Sunday fics again this weekend!
Part of why I don't post as much as I once did is life (work, having more of a balance with my other interests, etc.). I used to spend A LOT of my free time working on fic writing. Nowadays I still do that but I don't prioritize it over other things for the second reason...
The other part of it, and this is the brutally honest, not Michelle saying, "Everything's great over here!", answer is I really don't get excited to post anymore. When I say I'm excited to share something new, I'm talking to the small handful of people I know will actually read. I'm not even asking for feedback or interaction at this point. I'll take a like and be happy. Something that lets me know what people like to see.
I've had to separate writing from posting and that's hard to do because what happens is I'll have a really great idea, something I'm excited to work on, write maybe a few sentences and then think, why am I going to spend 7 hours of my free time writing this when no one will even want this story?
I am under the belief that you 100% do not have to read things you don't like and I don't expecting my followers to like everything I write. But I can't even get feedback on Dean x reader stuff anymore. A stupid meme post I spent 12 seconds writing about The Boys and SPN got more notes in a day than anything I've posted in months which was a tad disheartening.
When that happens, I lose all motivation and stop writing the better story in favor for something short because if people don't like it, hey at least that's only an hour I wasted versus that 7. That's the cycle I'm in right now and it sucks. I'm working on something right now that I know can be so good but I have to tell myself to write it as if I'll never post it because otherwise I'll start thinking about how shitty a reception it'll have and I'll never finish it.
Part of this is entirely on me. I know I put out stuff that's not up to par for the last six months. I know it shows in my work. I know I've tried some different ideas and pairings people don't like as much. I know I can do better but it's hard to put that effort into what I share when I know it's not welcomed.
This isn't a brag but I have a decent number of followers. Nearly 25K. I'm lucky to get 300 notes on something these days. That's 0.01% of followers. That tells me I'm doing something incredibly wrong and I don't know what that is. So I stick with the only things I can seem to find people want. Drabbles or imagines.
It's a cycle I've been trying to break out of because y'all have no idea how much I miss doing a proper series but it's why I don't post as much as I used to. Who knows, maybe someday I'll just start a new blog and not tell anybody to see if it'll be fun to post again.
This is not meant to make people feel bad (and I know ten of you at most will actually read this). It's just how tumblr is I guess and is my issue to deal with to make posting enjoyable again.
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bloogers-boogers · 1 year ago
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Forbidden Power AU. This AU focuses on Michael, it's the end of all Creation, all thanks to Lucifer's Spawn. Michael's final attempt to fix everything is to Disturb their father Only To Discover that his father is dead and has been dead for what looks like years there is still hope his father may be dead but his Authority can still be used... All angels authorities are held in Halos and God is no exception... Michael has a halo So he can go back and fix everything... The issue is the darkness in his heart, his Desire for the First man... Originally he was going to leave Almost everything unchanged...but this is an Opportunity he never did get or never should have had...can he stay on the noble path...ya No Michael has bin the good boy all his Existence and he will continue to be the good boy But he will be so when it comes to Adam and make Adam Exactly how he wants him to be
Hopefully this ask is for me and not mistaken for another blog shsiwbdjiwe do not get me wrong I love the guitarhero ship but I haven't posted anything about them aside from the drawing I made for @/ironbatpaperturtle (and my adamsapple fic) so I have a feeling that maybe this ask wasn't for me 😭
I should tho... like write more of them cause ngl I really like them together but my whole view on those two is far different than @/ironbatpaperturtle's Michael and Adam ahdjendiw
BUT if this anon is for me then I appreciate you for sharing me your au whdjwkdjdwoek 💖 now, with all that said let me proceed on actually answering you.
Omygod. Okay first, I think the God being dead for the longest period is such an interesting concept I read something similar like this before in a fic (adamsapple) called 'the devil you know /by anglotron' so I like it, kinda explains why angels would be put in so much work (do drastic choices) if God isn't there to guide them and solve things for them or just get involved but I also love the concept of him not giving a f*ck shjsiahdwiwbs after Lucifer's fall/betrayal he was just left hopeless for anything; his most "perfect creation" (Adam) corrupted by evil and then his most "perfect angel" turned out to have been the one to bring said corruption. (he may still care for Michael and Jesus tho but like it's hard for him to care about the rest) and letting all his children figure it out themselves (poor Sera), like, I can picture him just as depressed like Lucifer in the show issisofksos but unlike him who copes with making ducks, God just lays in the couch mopping about how disappointed in humanity he is and how "perfect" everything was before he planted the damn apple on earth, while he bosses Michael and maybe Metatron too (tho with him he's a lot more harsher bc he was previously human and he's kinda just bitter about them in general, but he's proven his worth enough) around to bring him shit like ice cream or junk food (tho he could easily just summoned all those things he subconsciously just wants company and Michael is there to bring it to him the only angel that has not yet disappointed/maintain loyal to him). So yeah.
Anyways — I still like the concept of God actually being dead. Like when you say Michael has a halo do you meant like he holds on to God's halo? Cause that's kinda cool af, imagine him just holding on to the halo of God (maybe even pitifully hopeful their father would return 'saving it for him') so he just has the halo on him and everyone just "oh shit this motherfucker really could just end it all if he wanted to" but Michael just doesn't cause 'with great power holds big responsibility' type of mentality and I think it'd be funny if Lucifer confronts heaven and is in a determined search for Michael to provoke him and remind him he's still the most perfect of all God's creation (mosty just salty as hell bc Michael cast him to hell lmao) and then when he finds Michael he like comes up with a taunting comment about how bad heaven turned out to be Yada Yada that neither realm is perfect or better than the other, and BAM suddenly his eyes drifted to Michael's head and recognizes the halo.
"Is that—...!"
"Yeah," Michael simply states defeated in his chair, unfazed by his brother arrival, from all the chaos going on, his people being murder, just, done, "father's gone, Lucifer."
So they just stare at eochother in silence, Lucifer with a stunned almost hurt expression and Michael with a nonchalant one. After the realization hitting him like a truck Lucifer realizes there was no end to the chaos released to all realms after Charlie unintentionally brought it to them if God wasn't there to fix it all...
Fear overwhelming him now cause he was kinda chilled out about the whole thing knowingly God would have to intervene soon because heaven was also being attacked by evil- but now realizing he's dead, it like hits him hard, mostly worried for his daughter's fate more than anything else.
Then, another thing hits him, "wait! What aren't you doing anything?! You can fix this, Michael! You have father's power, we can-"
Michael lifts his hand to signal him to stop, "I'm not planning to do anything."
"WHAT?!! Do you realize your people are also being attacked!"
"Your daughter brought this among ourselves, now, she must find her way to solve it."
"But she won't be-"
"Silence. If she was able to bring it to us then she's more than capable of putting it back. If not, that's no longer my problem"
"YOU-!"
"No, Lucifer," he stands up, the power of God emitting through his aura, the millions of eyes on him, big six graceful wings extended to show their full on glory, eyes bright like the intensity of a star. His voice was much more deeper and cold, distant, detached, "I lost everything because of your silly dream of free will, and now redemption. Look at where it lead us, prove me wrong this time, if it doesn't succeed then it was meant to be that way. Accept your fate.
I would create something new, something different. Something that won't betray its kind. No longer you existing. It will be perfect."
Lucifer felt so tiny now. That was no longer the brother he once knew. Not the caring, gentle, protective fiercely warrior that he once was.
Only filled with rage, grief and pain.
Michael... is dead too.
But anyways with all that, somehow lets say both Charlie and Lucifer mange to remind Michael of his love for the countless souls left at his hands to care and protect. And I dunno maybe a song too ahdhdiqgsjahsia and what gets the cake is Michael seeing Adam alive, behind the two, who somewhat stumble across their intervention in a 'bad timing'.
"Hey bitch you forgot your tampon— oh shit! Wrong room," Adam (now sinner) appears at the door oblivious of the whole deal.
"Adam!" Charlie shouted annoyed as they were already, almost, having a heartfelt moment between her father and Michael.
Michael eyes watered, "ADAM!" He pushes past Charlie and Lucifer who are now just confused as fuck seeing how Michael (filled with new growing hope) crushes Adam in a big hug with all the intensity of his power and somehow it was till so gentle and careful that it didn't kill Adam.
And the first man just there struggling to get loose while also suffocating.
Idk I just like Michael still having to be the hero even in circumstances where he doesn't want to. So the universe just grants him a purpose for he to keep following up God's title for him. If he wasn't gonna do shit because he lost Adam? Then BAM! Sinner Adam is now a thing so keep your ass moving Michael!
Michael now wants to fix things up to keep Adam safe; his new purpose (reason) on protecting heaven, his people and the countless souls God left him in charge with.
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pitter-patt-art · 9 months ago
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Ace Attorney AU August (halfway progress update!)
Okay technically it's the 16th (lol, 17th by the time this is done) so a little over halfway actually, but still I thought since I haven't had anything finished to post the past few days this would be a fun alternative!
I've been going a little nuts (affectionate) over @augustwritingchallenge's AU-gust prompts list this year so August has been a wild ride (about 40k words of one, in fact. so far.) but seeing as I will get attached to even the jokiest of AU ideas instantly, I've completed* a whopping 5 whole fics of 16, lol. Considering the shortest of those is over 3k and the longest is over 12k, I think the problem with not finishing these in a timely manner is entirely on my verbose foolish thick skull, haha, but I'm still having a blast with it.
Here is my ao3 series where I'm posting!
And a rundown / progress report / quick teaser of all the AUs including those I've yet to finish, if anyone's interested:
(*by "completed" I should note two of the already posted fics are basically assuredly going to be continued past the challenge, but let's say "completed enough to post and be on theme")
1. Canon Divergence - complete - 4.5k words ("For the Murder of Mr. Wrong" link)
Mia POV, gen. What if Dahlia succeeded in poisoning Phoenix and framed Doug Swallow instead (and then Mia defended him in court)? Basically a 3-1 rewrite. Fun Fact: I only came up with this AU because before I even remembered AU-gust existed at all, I'd come up with like 4 totally separate AUs in which I poison Phoenix in various ways With Real Consequences because it amuses me, lol, but he survives all those other ones and I eventually realized I hadn't even considered straight up killing him off yet so I figured I should try it at least once, haha.
2. Colorless - complete 1st chapter - 3.2k words ("Grey Matters" link)
Phoenix POV (for 1st ch --prob alternating after), wrightworth. "You can't see color until the first time you touch your soulmate"-soulmate AU. 1st chapter is their first meeting as kids (skipping the class trial itself). Fun Fact(s): I really love a color soulmate AU! Big fan of the "only see the color of their eyes" type of one too but uhhh on top of that working better for things that have wild anime eye colors, you could not pay me enough to try to figure out what the HELL is going on with Ace Attorney eye colors at any given time lmfao. (Also--spoilers for what i haven't written yet but hey if you're here you earned it--this IS one of my very many "teehee what if i poison Phoenix just a smidge as a treat for me" fics. NOT my fault the man ATE GLASS. That's on him.)
3. Dark Academia - complete "1st chapter" - 4.4k words ("The Spirit of the Laws of Magic" link)
Mia POV, lanamia. Magical boarding school setting featuring corruption and missing-student conspiracies and a most likely overthought system of magic with hierarchies and prejudices in societal views of academic/formulaic vs folk/innate magic. Fun Fact: I really thought for SURE i was going to skip this day entirely, lol. (foolish.) I don't think i've actually ever personally read anything "dark academia", technically--so if this doesn't read EXACTLY that way, there you go, but i did my best. I also then thought I could live with keeping this vague but I accidentally thought about it too long so... plus at least two people on top of myself at this point have expressed interest in more of this and so I have some semi-concrete Plans™ now.
4. Zombie Apocalypse - conceptualized (but not started)
Concept: probably gen and Phoenix POV, but also because I'm me and they're them, at least a little bit wrightworth even if it isn't necessarily explicit in any meaningful way bc they are Not Normal about each other lol. A little sketchy on how much of an "AU" this counts for, since it could probably be argued to be canon compliant somehow, but basically just: Universe where they make a Pride and Prejudice and Zombies-type Steel Samurai reboot movie thing (featuring, you guessed it, zombies), and Miles comes over and forces Phoenix to watch it with him just to have someone to bitch about it at, and then during that time Maya blows her way into Phoenix's apartment as well with the exact same intentions except her "day job" isn't quite as time-sensitive-strict so she's already finished watching it earlier and knows all the spoilers. Honestly a good chance Phoenix and Pearl (who came with Maya) end up hiding out in the kitchen together to let Maya and Miles rile each other up in front of the TV, but I'm never exactly sure where they'll take me once I wind them up and set them loose on the page, so who knows. I also hadn't necessarily determined the exact time frame yet but for it to make sense as a reboot-type movie/special episode/whatever it probably should be 7yg-or-later so Trucy may or may not be there as well. (That said, in my struggles to complete an actually short one-shot, I probably shouldn't even include Pearl let alone Trucy, lol.) Fun Fact: I also thought I'd skip this day bc I'm not the biggest zombie guy in the world, and to be fair, I managed to do Way Less with it than the dark academia prompt so, yippie?
5. Chess Players - incomplete (currently 3k word WIP)
Miles POV, wrightworth. Miles is a chess grandmaster and back in Japanifornia for the upcoming world cup tournament, but his greatest challenge is actually to FINALLY best Franziska in their annual who-can-get-the-best-Christmas-gift competition. Luckily, he just so happened to hear of an artist who makes bespoke chess sets, so the plan is to get a custom board made for Franziska without her finding out. The plan is not to get trapped in a weird art collective labyrinth with some model-photographer named Cindy who keeps hitting on him but also happens to be protective of the artist he's there to see because "she and her boyfriend kinda-sorta owe him big time", but this is what he gets for coming here without doing any extra research into the artist besides seeing his work and hearing only "his name is White, or, eh, something like that, you know how those artist types are" from Mr. Amano. (AU where we replace law with chess and no I don't think Phoenix could necessarily hack it in the top-world-grandmasters-level of chess tournaments HOWEVER have you considered he DID go to art school so what if he just tries selling custom chess sets until somehow that reconnects him with Miles. Is that somehow a more insane plan than studying law? Maybe. Did Manfred still shoot Gregory but now it was over fucking chess? Maybe. Idk. But I did let Greg live this time at least!) Fun Fact: we can all DEFINITIVELY blame my lovely, terrible, very wonderful friend Ben (shameless friend plug! she's an outstanding writer and has some AA fics of her own too!! @kindlystrawberry on tumblr!!) for making a total joke about "well what about au where they make chess pieces instead" while i lamented not knowing enough about chess to write an actual match and spawning this ENTIRE concept. It is her fault. 100%. She is the guilty party. (I want to finish this one VERY BADLY. Save me.)
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6. Reality Show - incomplete (currently 700 word WIP)
Phoenix (& Franziska) POV(s), background wrightworth wedding planning going on as set up but it's also definitely just one of my many excuses to set Phoenix and Franziska up as bitchy worsties who can't admit they enjoy each other's company and will cut you down if you suggest it as such. So far I've only written the quote "set-up" section which is in Phoenix's POV, but that was SUPPOSED to be like 5 paragraphs and cut away and then lead into my actual plan for the main body, which was to be in Franz's instead, so. This is very similar to the zombie one in that it's them watching reality tv instead of being contestants on a show (I don't personally like or watch a lot of reality tv so my creative well was somewhat dry on how to make that work) and then I accidentally thought about Phoenix and Franziska watching something just to judge and tear apart the decisions of every person on it and that was too fun to not consider further, haha. Basically the plan is just they get left alone together and don't know what to do with that and end up wine-drunk and making fun of some reality dating show of some kind and Miles and Trucy come back to them losing it together over something stupid and are like "......uh. what's happening." Fun Facts: I really love the thought experiment of Franziska somehow discovering how often Phoenix's internal dialogue/reads on situations and especially people can be So Bitchy And Judgey despite his affable complexion, and her unfortunately finding his opinions to SOMETIMES be somehow slightly okay. Moderately correct, even--occasionally. I know the section she follows you-as-Phoenix around in T&T is really not long at ALL, but I adore it. There's something about it that so badly makes me want to force them into proximity more (to both their chagrin, I'm sure).
7. Farm/Ranch - complete - 12k words ("Two Little Dickey Byrdes" link)
Gumshoe POV, gumbyrde (tho i still think dickeybyrde is a funnier ship name). 5+1 things--except more like maybe 7-or-8+1 to be honest--so it's more: over 5 times Dick and Maggey sit on a wall together and 1 time they find someone else there instead. AKA: Dick runs his family's small farm (think fantasy farm like in a farming sim or maybe horse girl novel type of thing that has nothing to do with what a real farm is like lol don't worry about it) and Maggey starts working at the next farm over as the latest of her many odd jobs. Fun Fact: oh god this one got so far away from me. it was not supposed to be this long lmao. it's literally the elaborate set-up to a very silly Nursery-Rhyme-I-Didn't-Even-Know-About-Prior-To-This -based punchline!?! still, i was pleasantly surprised by how happy i was with this once it was done... two sittings and about 16 total hours later. haha).
8. Nomad - incomplete (planned/outlined)
Apollo (or possibly Klavier) POV, klapollo. Sort of Jove-Thalassa swap adjacent, but basically: AU where Jove survives the Khura'in fire but loses his memories for [contrived convince sake reasons]. (And also possibly loses some or all of his eyesight just to really go for the parallels?) Therefore: Jove and Apollo stay with Dhurke and Nahyuta and the Defiant Dragons for a time, while Jove recovers, but eventually they leave and head out on their own, just the two of them, and do the traveling musician thing, both because it's dangerous in Khura'in and Dhurke already canonically didn't want Apollo to get caught up in it and potentially get hurt to begin with and because with a functioning actual parent Apollo doesn't need to be taken in by him--and also Jove from what little we know seems like he prefers to be on the move and was already a world traveler anyhow, so even amnesiac maybe he gets a little antsy stuck in one place too long. And so like amnesiac Thalassa, Jove thusly becoming a renowned mysterious musician--and then Apollo, sweet tone deaf Apollo, becoming the sonager of all time (like a momager but...you get it) because he's not that into music but he IS into arguing for better conditions/making deals (contracts!! international legalese!! woohoo!!) with venues and promoters and stuff. And then--oops dang Lamioir still exists and now they have a meet-cute (2 electric bugaloo) (but by then it's later enough Trucy still exists because it will be a cold day in hell when I don't find a way to make her work) and they do music collabs or join up to form a group or whatever and OOPS this means now that Apollo and Jove are with Lamioir when The Gavinners / Klavier specifically meet her and get her to come to do the Guitar's Serenade concert eventually. And Apollo and Klavier ofc thusly also have a meet-cute and then talk and bond etc etc. AND THEN the au STOPS THERE and I DON'T think about how without Apollo Phoenix is totally getting convicted of Zak's murder because there's no way that trial works out as well for him with some other attorney and I also don't think about how reasonable it would then be that maybe Trucy ends up helping Valant with his work setting up the trick for the concert afterward on account of the one father in prison and the other being dead and having left behind a notarized confession clearing Valant's name of suspicion, etc. AND I DEFINITELY do not think about how i could then still so easily get everyone in one place at the concert for Turnabout Serenade and/or any possible funny Sibling (And Thalassa) Reveal that could happen i dont i dont i do not--
9. Accidental Baby Acquisition - conceptualized (not started)
Gen, possibly my weakest / least defined idea on this list, but basically: Phoenix kind of already lives this in canon, lol (insomuch as an 8yo counts as a baby) so I thought, well, how to take it a different direction, then? And I thought, I don't usually go for a Phoenix Fey kind of au because I personally really love the relationships he has with all the Feys as-is in canon and so it's not quite as funny to me as, say, a Miles Fey AU where like Misty and Gregory are married, or any of the ones in that bent, because I'm sorry but that's just SO funny (and sad, but mostly funny) any way you slice it--plus his NAME is RIGHT THERE mia-miles-maya he FITS--anyhow, that completely aside, there are just a lot of reasons I really love the platonic relationships the Feys already have with Phoenix and I don't think it NEEDS to be made specifically familial to still be so very important, y'know? BUT. That said. AU where Phoenix is idk abandoned as a baby or maybe his parents die young or something and it's like a Thing to leave babies at temples or churches or whatever, right? So like--Phoenix adopted by the Feys AU but only because the more i considered it the more i thought it would be WILD for him to literally know Maya her entire life, and it's fascinating to me to consider a Maya who ISN'T basically left all alone to her own devices (and Morgan's) and who has someone absolutely in her corner in the village the entire time even after Mia leaves (who isn't a baby when Mia leaves, love you tho Pearls), AND also and perhaps more importantly, the ships-passing-in-the-night-ness of a scene where, like: Morgan does something sketchy or whatever and Phoenix wants to keep Mia updated but for whatever reason decides to go down to the city and actually tell her in person and so he's waiting outside the courthouse or something (possibly part of or perhaps Most Of the reason he goes in person is because he knows her first courtroom trial is that day and he wants to see her + hear how it went) and when he gets there she's in a heated argument with some asshole in a fancy over-embellished jacket and once that guy leaves Phoenix is like "Sheesh, what's his problem?" You know???? And maybe he really would never even know!!!! Bc he grew up in Kurain!!!! And has no reason to care!!! About some random prosecutor who was mean to Mia!! Aaaah!!! So that, and on top of that, Diego would be there too ofc at that point, and I feel like he would ALSO be quite a funny interaction in this scenario. ("Wow, someone's popular, kitten, you have all sorts of guys waiting on a chance to talk to you, heh?" "Uh.--I'm sorry, WHAT did you just call her")
10. Enemies-to-Allies - incomplete (currently 370 word WIP)
Ema POV, faraskye. Cyberpunk AU where Lana is still under Gant's thumb and Ema, with no other way to stay close to her and getting rejected from any of the sorts of jobs she really wants to do, decides to just join the security force (or cyber police or w/e I decide to call it) and is tasked with hunting down the Yatagarasu, guerilla hacker supreme who is threatening the sanctity of the capitalist overlords. Except Ema's squad gets ambushed and she's captured and tied to a pole, and with her useless fop partner seemingly not coming to rescue her (if he even noticed her absence), she does some quick cost-benefit analysis and decides she didn't really like that job anyway and maybe there's another way she can get her sister back in her life. So she breaks free of her own handcuffs (which she definitely didn't modify into incidental ineffectiveness she's still testing for bugs) and helps fix the "Little Thief" device her captor seems to have broken despite how obviously valuable and impressive the tech is, and they eventually come to something of an agreement. If you can't beat 'em, join 'em, and all that. Either Ema as the hardware-engineer one and Kay as the software-programming one as the two sides of the tech coin, or else Kay can just be like doing the physical sneaking kind of spy stuff only--or maybe she knows a little about software but not so much she's a pro the way she is with infiltration and such. Possibly toying with the idea Kay herself is just completely an android, but if not, I think she has some cybernetic cyborg things going on regardless. Possibly from or inspired by her father? I also like the idea that Gant did something maybe more drastic with regards to having dirt on Ema to get Lana to do his bidding--like maybe Ema has a whole cybernetic hand because instead of just her handprint on a leather jacket, Gant has some sicko jar with her entire hand in it in his office safe, or something. I don't know why this would be useful to him but it is certainly an image. I also find it funny if Miss Fingerprint Powder Enthusiast doesn't actually have any fingerprints of her own anymore somehow in this AU, lol.
11. Retail Worker - complete - 6.7k words ("The Bake Anything Boulangerie" link)
Apollo POV, gen. Phoenix gets a job at a bakery instead of the Borscht Bowl Club during the 7 year gap, and Apollo happens to stumble across it and ends up meeting the Wrights while he's still in high school. He becomes a regular at the bakery and is already close to them by the time "Shadi Smith's" murder comes around. And also, yes, sibling reveal right away--at least as soon as Phoenix realizes and can reveal it. As a treat. (Other reveals, though, I might put poor Apollo through on a delayed basis. Also as a treat, lmao, just not one for him.) Fun Fact: I'm being redundant bc this is also in my a/n, but, Baker Phoenix lives rent-free in my brain because Professor Layton vs Phoenix Wright was in fact the very first Ace Attorney game I ever played, technically, and Maya and Phoenix semi-brainwashed in that bakery was literally one of my first impressions of them. ........followed immediately by starting a let's play of Justice for All (which i watched through the first case, after which I was like oKAY fine maybe i DO need more context here, i should probably figure out what the actual first game is, and went back to start the series properly at the beginning hahaha). What do you MEAN i have a disproportionate fascination with amnesiac Phoenix, even if I have yet to finish and publish one of my myriad AUs that utilize stupid, unrealistic, plot convenient re-temporary amnesia?? Hm???? Idk what you're talking about. Also everyone who complains about 2-1 is wrong lmao it's objectively (okay subjectively is what i'm saying yes BUT objectively) such a funny place to start without knowing broad plot strokes, it's great. I both knew so much and absolutely shit-all nothing about Maya after PLvPW and 2-1, LMAO. god.
12. Animagus Wings (Joker) - incomplete (planned/outlined)
Miles POV, wrightworth. Angel/Demon AU, except I'm playing super fast and loose with the rules on that because all my knowledge of Christian-mythos comes from firstly and unknowingly the Chronicles of Narnia and more recently and cognizantly Lucifer (Netflix) and Good Omens. I know that's probably more or less what we're all doing with this kind of AU but still, I'm not even sure I want to refer to Heaven and Hell here, I'm kinda on the fence about maybe just keeping it all very vague? I also accidentally semi-worldbuilt more than i intended incidentally on account of "But Then How-Why Names If Angelic Creatures?" Format-wise it would semi-follow gomens s1 where it's hopping through some meetings between long stretches but also a kind of pre- and post- Fall type of thing? And potentially à la Lucifer becoming, like, these are My Mortal Humans and i will be Spending Time With Them, screw you celestial duties, I'm making my own Free Will, etc. And i mean i guess Lucifer is also a crime procedural lmao maybe they still solve crimes in the end too. Fun Fact: I didn't want to do the original prompt for several reasons, and sure fuck jkr is one of them but even before I knew about her I still wasn't really the biggest hp person in the first place? So i wouldn't know/don't remember at all the way it works without having to do the specific research and i...don't want to haha. Hence. And I know the prompt seems to be using it loosely / might just be borrowing the word and not actually referencing hp specifically but tbh either way human-animal shifter things just in general I can be somewhat picky about haha. (Okay okay plus full disclosure the ONLY idea I have for this sort of thing actually ties into my day-3-dark-academia-extended-au-verse and i COULD make my life simpler by just connecting the two days but Heh who would I be if I simplified things for myself... *sigh*) All that to say: I saw "wings" on the wild card list and I thought, ooh, well that's still sort of a related concept! Let's tag that one in! So it's still kind of day 12 prompt-adjacent, if you squint.
13. Found Footage - incomplete (planned/outlined)
Video Transcript POV? Is that a thing? Possibly capped by a little Phoenix POV (but i don't want that to get too long), wrightworth. Larry's new girlfriend of the month bakes weed brownies and Larry does not realize this and swings by the Wrights' apartment to beg some kind of help off Phoenix and forgets the whole tray there somehow (because it's Larry) and they leave to deal with Larry's thing and by the time they figure the brownies out, in some twist of fate Miles and Trucy have been hanging out (last minute babysitter/adult supervision? but she's at the very very least 14 or 15 here and most likely older, and Nick clearly isn't the most strict about like uhhh supervision in general lol sooo idk. he's helping her with a project or smth. it doesn't really actually matter; he's THERE, that's the important thing.) The point I'm very clearly getting at is they accidentally get incredibly high (not dangerously so because I'm not going that far haha but also, neither of them has actually been high before, so they are Affected) before Phoenix finds out what was in the brownies and tries to warn Trucy and hurry home to like, dispose of them or at least put a warning label on them or whatever, but he is too late lol. By a lot. Definitely an underage drugs tag on this bad boy because it's definitely sometime 18-or-earlier for Trucy, let alone 21. (idk about other places but as a Californian I can tell you Japanifornia "LA" could theoretically have it legalized at 21 for anyone (like alcohol) and 18 with Dr's permission--which Trucy definitely does not have in this AU lol.) Basically, Phoenix grabs Trucy's phone to get photo evidence so he can let them never live this down (after making sure they're okay lmao), but he ofc doesn't get technology so he doesn't realize he leaves the phone still recording when Trucy asks him for something / needs his help, so the recording just keeps going and captures a lot of tomfoolery and eventually some inebriated-to-Extremely-sober Feelings-Adjacent confessions (or maybe more like allusions). Idk, this was actually a fic I thought of before August and wanted to use as an excuse to try a Weird Format for fun, but then i saw this was a prompt on the list and...well. Fun Fact: Cannabis was legalized in California on November 8, 2016 (the first election I could vote in!!! ......uh, rip. lol. but yeah babey I helped legalize weed at least!! gotta remember the positives), which means it was legal right in time for Miles' case(s) / Turnabout Goodbyes!!! Yay!! I mean, I suppose that's genuinely seriously one way to try to mitigate nightmares and manage insomnia--not that I think Miles Edgeworth would ever deign stoop so low as to use an aid to manage his severe PTSD and trauma symptoms, psshaw, who do you take him for? (Get these people some help lol. They all need so much therapy.)
14. Princes & Princesses - conceptualized (not started)
So I've been reading a lot (a LOT) of isekai and/or revenge reincarnation romance fantasy manhwas lately (like, oh, too many, hahaha. they're quite good and they're VERY popular in webcomics at the moment.) Soooo. Soft pitch: Apollo already gets slapped into so many wild backstories he's constantly trying to dodge in an effort to be just a Normal Guy, he's honestly, like, the PERFECT protagonist for one of these lmao. And tell me Kristoph doesn't make a perfect "Upstanding Duke" kind of persona, and Klavier couldn't be the "wild rake" younger brother no one expects much from, and all I'm saying is it wouldn't be that hard to contrive a reason Apollo tries to get Klavier to agree to a contract marriage the way all these stories go, lol. And also, something something, Apollo from the "real world" is an orphan/has an absent family (also like so many of these manhwa protagonists, lol) but then he gets to actually have one in his second life!! I'm such a sucker for that shit. Slightly harder pitch, and the reason I did not let myself actually start writing anything (...yet): so what if the actual plot of the "original romance novel" Apollo is familiar with from the "real world (Earth)" is actually about the slightly older generation and something something instead of admiring Phoenix as a defense attorney, it's just that he instead was Apollo's favorite "love interest" character (not, like, for himself, just the one he most liked to read about) in every way except what a blithering idiot he became when the author had him fall for the female lead--but BEFORE that, he's a cool information guild leader guy who seems like he's trying to work toward some way to improve conditions for commoners in the kingdom (but abruptly there are no more mentions of this after he gets involved with the lead, which is annoying). Aaaand... I guess what I'm saying is, Dahlia is the original female lead because she REALLY fits the whole White Lotus trope, and I'm thinking Klavier is the original male lead because A) hilarious, B) fits in with the idea there's more going on in the ACTUAL world Apollo ends up in that is written in such a way as to make things seem different in the novel (like, that Dahlia and Klavier are actually as nice as they seem and that the terrible things that happen around them are just the trials and tribulations of being main characters and not anything they're directly involved in). And Apollo, the character in the novel Apollo, is an adopted prince of Khura'in, but he's the sickly younger prince and of course not actually of the royal bloodline (and also a man, considering Khura'in is matrilineal), so Rayfa and Nahyuta are the ones the public and other nobles actually know and care about and deal with. But wait! As it so turns out, The Wright Anything Information Guild (I feel like the actual guild name CAN'T have their freaking name on it front and center lol but you get the idea) happens to know some other things that aren't really expanded on in the original novel, and might be key to preventing Apollo's death so he doesn't follow the path of the original story, and also idk maybe Apollo and Trucy are half-fae or something like that and instead of like Aw Yay Bracelet in this AU it's more of a secret Iron Shackle Tool That Will Hurt I Mean Totally-Definitely-Help Us Later (still, in a way, passed down to him by Thalassa, but more as, like... she's kind of a secret hostage and does not manage to hide pregnancy number one so Apollo's now also a secret hostage, but she manages to escape so they don't know about Trucy, only she didn't tell Apollo basically anything to "keep him as safe as possible" or w/e, and......) Well, anyway. It got away from me before I even really wrote anything, that's all.
15. Secretly Alien - unfinished (currently 2.6k WIP)
Trucy POV, gen. Apollo gets sick of very consistently always losing the card games they play at the Wright Anything Agency (usually and in the specific instance the fic starts, Bullshit/BS) and in a stroke of inspiration somehow ropes everyone into playing Among Us instead. ("What! It's still a game of trying to lie/trick everyone else--like you like!--but I actually stand a freaking chance, so we're playing this or I'm going home.") Yes. This is my Among Us AU. Hi. They play Among Us. I'm justifying this one as prime AU territory however because A) Among Us has to exist in this universe, and even more pressingly, B) I found a way to force Phoenix to have--for at least a period of time if not moving forward in perpetuity--an actual smartphone instead of a Nokia-type brick cellphone. Which even under the wild but somehow plausible considering Ace Attorney circumstances I contrived, is just automatically a complete AU lmao. Fun Fact: I am so mad this one wasn't just totally finished day-of, lol. Why I ever thought I could give myself run of an entire WAA 4-person conversation and NOT get instantly derailed is beyond me. (And I want to get the prosecutors there, too?? Someone take the characters away from me.) Anyway. No, I have not written ANY of the actual Among Us part yet. Sigh. Also I haven't personally played amogus since like, 2021? maybe? And I know (now) that it's been pretty updated since then, but, ehhh, I'm just gonna run off like, lockdown-era amogus rules and vibes, lol. If I can get to the game part.
16 - Hobby Drama - conceptualized
I'm going to go out of order this time to say: Fun Fact: I have ALWAYS wanted to write a Reddit-style fic!!! I absolutely love them and I've read some REALLY, really good ones, so I've always wanted to try my hand at it. So theoretically this is the perfect time to make that a reality and write a r/HobbyDrama subreddit fic, buuut I got stuck before starting because I'm torn on two possible routes to take it (I can easily foresee myself caving and just doing both lol). - Option 1: Steel Samurai fandom discourse, always a fun/funny thing to think about, definitely would enjoy having Maya and Miles post some stuff for that. - Option 2: courtroom law fandom discourse, because come ON, how are those galleries ALWAYS SO FULL. The little wiggling rabba-rabba onlookers have GOT to have investment in this shit. And why WOULDN'T they, honestly. I've seen those trials and I have, in fact, spent a Lot of time thinking about them, not that any posts I've made lately would reflect that in any way or anything. Like I know it's hard to tell, but if I can be invested in the Lawyers Fandom, who's to say the people in the courtrooms aren't????? And I LOVE an outsider POV fic actually, I think they're so fun. So anyway. Reddit fic. You will be mine. Just as soon as I can hone my energy
And, what the hell, since it's so late now by the time I complete this "Heh This'll Be So Quick To Throw Together" post, I'll include today's, too:
17 - Flower Shop - conceptualized (at work earlier today. lol)
AU where Daddy Hawthorne is like, 97% less shitty. And the Hawthornes have a flower shop instead of like a gemstone industry or whatever. And he takes both Dahlia and Iris with him instead of dumping one of his daughters at a fucking secluded mountain temple and seemingly forgetting about her forever. On second thought, maybe what I actually mean is he's like 999% less shitty, lmfao. Anyway, Iris POV, but Dahlia (while not a "nice" person by any stretch) is not pushed to such extremes or nearly as desperate as canon, so Valerie lives, Terry Fawles lives, Doug Swallow lives, and Dahlia gets to live a good life overall--because as much fun as I love using her as a villain, she's really such a product of the absolute worst circumstances and I really do find her interesting so I've been kind of wanting to explore her in a less cartoonishly evil light, haha. (Don't get me wrong, I do love the cartoonishly evil light too, but I like spicing things up sometimes.) Like, she does (more) normal teen rebellion things ("Look at my inappropriately older boyfriend, Dad" "I'm going to talk my way out of speeding tickets and petty shoplifting as a bid for attention" etc.) and she still totally orders Iris around and Iris still totally does whatever she asks very much to her own detriment and has to learn to break away and be her own person. Fun Fact: I have a very passionate love for Iris/Adrian Andrews. Is that. Um. Is that a ship anyone else has ever considered before? Is that just me? I'm not sure but very possibly I'll just make this a rarepair fic as a treat, for me alone, teehee. (Like... it's about the becoming the master of your own destiny it's about breaking out of codependent cycles it's about how I genuinely honestly think they'd be each other's type and have chemistry even though they've obviously never interacted lmao... idk what to tell you.)
AND THATS MY AU-GUST UPDATE POST!!!
If you made it this far, take a sprinkle of my undying affection, and may you be blessed with AU inspiration if you so desire it!! (If you do not desire it, hopefully you are not cursed with it. I do not take refunds if you are. Sorry.)
Wish me luck with completing some more fics soon!!! Unfortunately weekends are actually my least free time because I work the most and the earliest hours so I have less time and am more tired, but also on Wednesday I'm leaving for a family vacation, which will either be the BEST thing to happen in regards to AU-gust or the WORST thing lmfao. If nothing else I have 2 flights, and I actually Love writing on an airplane, so fingers crossed for it being Good. <3
EDIT: Now with part 2 for the rest of the month here!
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YOU'RE THE CLOSEST TO HEAVEN (THAT I'll EVER BE) — CHAPTER 32 UPDATE (AO3)
this chapter is a LONGGGG one. action packed. final word count was, like, 6.3k words. not the longest chapter tho (that one is coming, and it's gonna be a good one and i'm not saying a WORD of what happens in it but i can tell u it is delicious)
this is just a lil snippet of course. if you want the full chapter, go to ao3.
also—just wanted to thank everyone for 100 kudos on ao3! it means a whole lot to me that u guys enjoy this lil (but not little) fanfic that started life as the beginning of some lore for my self-insert oc. (it still is the beginning of her lore tho, kinda. once this fic is fully done im gonna post her lil character sheet and introduce her properly.)
don't forget to drop a kudos if u haven't already, as well as leave a comment on ao3 if u want! i love reading u guys's feedback sm !!
She looked so peaceful like this. I was mesmerised by it. Despite the slight furrow in her brow, the small downturned pout and the fact her hand was still fisted tightly into my shirt, right near my rapidly thundering heart, she still looked quaint and angelic—and I was the warden of her peace.
My neck still felt warm from where her lips had been—a kiss that hadn't even been a kiss. Sometimes I found it hard to believe that she’d done that. There was a part of me that thought that after all that we’d been through—everything with Ada, how she had insisted that we were only going to be partners and nothing more—she wanted nothing to do with me. That she felt nothing for me. But then she had gone and done that—kissed my neck in the briefest of kisses, and had me utterly dumbstruck.
I was glad that she had, though. I was glad that something had started to break between us. Something had to give—I only wished that it would have been me that had broken first.
But we had something. Surely now we had something.
Her lips had felt so soft, even though I’d felt them for just a millisecond. Just a fleeting moment, before she’d yawned into my mouth—and the thought of that had me stifling a laugh, a soft smirk touching my lips as I realised how ironic it was. Every time we got slightly close, something happened that made us move apart. Perhaps it was some kind of fallacy.
As I chuckled, it shook her slightly. I froze, stilling my movements as she stirred. Nuzzled in slightly deeper, let out a soft little sound as her cheek pressed against my chest. But she didn't wake up. I breathed a sigh of relief, but my hold on her didn't loosen.
The more I looked at her, the more I thought about what had just happened between us. The more I craved it. I craved that adrenaline rush, that moment of crackling tension that felt like a livewire. I realised that I wanted to kiss her. I realised that I needed to kiss her. A part of me planned to—not now, I told myself. Not here. But at some point.
When the world was safe, when the job was done. I'd indulge then. Indulge in a moment of calm for once—just for a moment.
Just for a moment.
But then that familiar doubt crept back in again, a tiny voice in the back of my head that was reminiscent of my questioning of Ada way back when. What if she didn't actually want me? What if this had all just been a fluke, a random impulse? She had the worst first impression of me—cold, miserable, an utter bastard. I remembered exactly how I had been too, and I wished I hadn't been like that. I wished I hadn't pushed her away at every turn—I wished I had treated her like a partner, someone to rely on, other than some kind of adversary.
What if this tension between us was doctored? What if it was something controlling us—controlling her—making her act on impulse? She didn't want me at all. She couldn't want me. She shouldn't want me.
Black veins began to pulsate and swell in my arms, the parasite crawling across my bloodstream and making my teeth grit and grind against each other. I glanced at my watch, hissing as the light green digital screen flashed the numbers 03:00 in black. It was three in the morning—the suppressant would be wearing off soon. Soon enough, that thing would try and take me again. Take us both.
I wasn't gonna let that happen. No way in hell. I could fight this—I would fight this. For her. For Ashley. For myself. The pulsation got worse, my head swimming as my vision started to cloud. My adrenaline was shot to hell, and fatigue was starting to set in at the worst possible time. I breathed out slowly, sliding my gun from its holster to take stock of the rounds in the chamber. I reloaded, then tightened my hold on Dee as my other hand gripped at my gun steadily.
I set my sights on that blurry hallway.
Fifteen minutes later, there was movement up on the bed. A creak of an old mattress, and a soft yawn as Ashley stirred from her deep slumber. Her voice was groggy and deep, throaty. “Leon?”
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andthatisnotfake · 4 months ago
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Fic Writers Year-End Wrap-Up
@suzy-queued tagged me on this a few days ago, but I was waiting to do it because I literally posted the ending chapter of a fic on the last day of the year.
1. How many words have you written this year? Hard to say because I posted things I had already been working on, plus I've written things I haven't posted yet, but roughly about 23k.
2. How many works did you publish this year? 62, though some were only chapters of on-going WIPs, and others are still unfinished.
3. What work are you most proud of (regardless of kudos/hits)? I'm proud of multiple of them, mostly because I managed to finish some WIPs, wrote a lot of drabbles, and overall wrote more than I thought I would.
4. What work of yours has the most hits? words written down (they are falling now), but I'm not sure if those were all from this year. Second place was Surprise?, also a Young Royals fic.
5. What work of yours got more feedback than you expected? Probably Surprise?, which was mostly a crack fic. Oh, and Fly Guy! This one was definitely a crack fic written in ten 100-word chapters, but people seemed to enjoy it!
6. Favorite title you used. It's a toss between my Gallavich Masquerade fic, which I of course can't reveal yet, and Pride, Prejudice & Video Games, (one of) my current YR WIP.
7. If you use song lyrics, which artist's songs did you pull from the most? Usually I just use songs for the titles, if anything, but occasionally I use lyrics in the fic. I don't think there were any repeats though, I only did it about 4 or 5 times.
8. Pairing you wrote the most for this year? Wilmon, for sure, 17 times. Gallavich and Madirosh came second, with only 2 fics each.
9. Favorite pairing you wrote for this year? You know what? Madirosh, actually. I need to write more of them.
10. What work was the quickest to write? All of the drabbles, especially the ones for the YR drabble challenge. I wrote several on the spot.
11. What work took you the longest to write? Come Jingle My Bells. I finally finished it after three years!
12. How many WIPs do you have in your docs for next year? 13, including 4 that I've already started posting and that are priority. The others are in various stages of writing.
13. What's your longest work of the year? words written down (they are falling now) (18,873 in total, but most of it had been posted before). Come jingle my bells is the longest one-shot (7,232).
14. What's your shortest work of the year? I literally wrote 48 drabbles lol
15. What WIP are you taking into next year with you? The four that I had already started posting and that are priority are two YR ones, Pride, Prejudice & Video Games and I think I dreamed you into life, one DRUK2 one that I've been writing for years and I hope to finish it because I actually enjoy writing it (it's very chaotic!), That's what you get (when you let your heart win), and one Galalvich fic I pretty much abandoned because I don't know how to continue it, even though I had planned it, but that I really hope to be able to conclude, even if not very well, this year, The One that Got Away
16. What's your most common "Additional Tags" tag? "Drabble", lol. Second place is "fluff".
17. Your favorite character to write this year? Wille
18. The character who gave you the most trouble writing this year? I struggled with some drabbles because I decided to write for fandoms I had never written for before. I think Charlie, from Heartstopper, is the one I agonized the most about, because I don't think I got his "voice" quite right, even if it was just a drabble.
19. What's one pairing you want to explore next year? Madirosh! They're not in my WIPs, but I'll make some room for them.
20. Which work of yours have you reread the most? I never re-read my stuff except to continue it, so probably Come jingle my bells.
21. How many kudos in total did you get this year? AO3 says 1,849, but I don't know if this counts the ones on the fics I started posting before and finished this year.
22. Which work has the most comments? words written down (they are falling now) by a landslide (67 threads)
23. Did you do any collaborative works this year? Sadly, no. It's one of the few things in fanfiction I've never done, actually! If anyone wants to collab in a Madirosh fic, let me know. Actually, Wilmon will also do, because I have a couple of AUs I have mostly just the vibes for, so I'd be totally ok with sharing it!
24. Did you write any gifts this year? Yes, "Come jingle my bells", "I think I dreamed you..." and "words written down" were both late gifts. My Heartstopper drabble was also a bit of a gift to a friend who gave me the idea for it.
25. Did you receive any gifts this year? Yes, a couple of drabbles during the YR drabble challenge.
26. What's your most common category/trope? Fluff? Also, soulmates AU, somehow. And meet-cute, apparently.
27. What do you listen to while writing? Absolutely nothing, I can't. I do sometimes listen to songs that inspire me, then I stoppe listening to them and start writing, not at teh same time.
28. Favorite work you wrote this year? Probably Surprise?, it was fun! I also really liked my Masquerade story, hihi.
29. Favorite line/passage you wrote this year? Bold of you to assume I remember what I wrote lol. I'll go with the Ellie/A'Whora talk in "Come jingle" because I thought it was really sweet.
30. Biggest surprise while writing this year? That I managed to write this much! And that writing drabbles, as I already suspected, is a lot easier. Oh, and that I can totally write on my phone if it's in short bursts, and it's actually easier because my brain computes it as "not serious", so I can get a few hundred words out that way and use the laptop for longer spurts, for editing and posting.
No pressure tags: @daughterofscotland @bluedalahorse @junosjukebox @piebingo
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thewulf · 1 year ago
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wait stop! you're one of my fav fanfic writers and you do LOTR??? Okay, okay I have a request for you! A hurt/comfort, you're so good at them!
Can you do a Legolas x elf!reader where she's the daughter of one of King Thranduil's longest and most trusted advisors. She and Legolas grow up together since they were only born a hundred or so years apart. Legolas basically trains you with the bow and you help him with swords/knives (reader is kinda known for that or something). Basically the two of them have a longggg history together, they've always been around each other. The two of them deeply loves the other but both are too afraid to make a move. Reader because she thinks the king would never approve of the pairing and Legolas because he thinks reader would never love him like that.
So I'm thinking the actual story takes place after the ring is tossed in the mountain and Legolas is back. Reader is kinda clingy/wants to be around him since she had to go the year without him, just hoping and praying he'd be alright. Reader doesn't even realize how clingy she's being. One afternoon when you find him sitting in the garden you decide to join him and he just kinda snaps after she asks him a bunch of curious questions? He says something along the lines of:
'Can I just have a moment to myself for once?' or 'You haven't let me breathe since I've been back! I should've taken Gimli up on his offer."
Reader looks dejected, nods and leaves. She's not cold to him but avoids him for the next few days/weeks. Legolas is slowly losing his mind seeing you actively avoiding him after his words clearly hurt you. He finally corners reader and apologizes profusely, he was stressed or something idk you can make it up you're so good at that! He confesses his feelings and wants to braid readers hair or something rly cute like that. Really fluffy at the end.
Omg sorry for the crazy long request. You'll do it justice!!
FINALLY LEGOLASSSSSS!! The LOML!!
Heck yes anon you got it. I've got a Siri and Aragorn request ahead so hopefully I can get this out in 2-3 weeks :) I'm getting 1ish fic out a week these days.
And please don't apologize, I LOVE really detailed requests. It's almost more of challenge to fit everything in and be coherent/fun to read.
And thank you for the kind words! Means the world and beyond to me always :)
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hurlumerlu · 5 months ago
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fanfic asks: 3, 14, 23, 25 (if applicable)
3. favorite line/scene you wrote this year
I forgot this said "line/scene" and just went looking for lines, but given that most of my fics are pretty short it's probably more relevant anyway. Might sound weird, but I think it's that one:
The pool water barely ripples around him when he leaves, as though it likes him best.
Idk why I chose that one. I just like it! Your name's Ray and you're so unlovable your own pool prefers the other guy. Needless to say, it is not about the pool at all.
14. a fic you didn’t expect to write
Almost all of them, actually. I had plans for specific fics last winter, and I did not finish any of them with the exception of Et les roseaux jaseurs. Everything after that? They're all surprises. (still, did not expect Sandray to grab me like it did. While watching the show I thought their romance was like. fine but predictable? I somehow did not realize it contained so many of the things I am deeply into until I was writing my longest fic yet for them. And then promptly proceeded to rewrite the same event from a different perspective. while agonizing over how much I love them and wether or not I was doing them justice. I am a clown.)
23. fics you wanted to write but didn’t
I am so so so stuck in my Dan/Gram/Yok threesome fic. It has a pretty solid skeletton but, when it comes to the meat of it, it all always feel so disconnected. It doesn't help that it started as silly pwp crack I would have written for my wife, and then I started to have big feelings, because I always have big feelings about Yok ...and Gram ...and *anoyed sigh* Dan too. There's also the Gram/Black/Gene fic for which I've almost finished the first draft, like seriously, it's is almost done and I know exactly what I want to write in the part I haven't writen yet. So why am I not finishing that first draft? It's not like I don't think about it at least once a week. At this point I'm just looking at myself and going *dude. really?* and then shrugging in response. Then there's the weird Sandray fic I started on a whim where Sand suddenly wakes up as a kid when they both should be in their forties, and it's so out of my comfort zone in so many different ways (i usually have zero interest in age regression, i don't like writing kids, i started to write this directly on the computer and it worked but i never do that, it would be multi-chaptered) that I really want to write it whole but don't feel the confidence I kinda need to not lose steam. And then there's the fic of the Captain listening to Kant and Fadel fucking (bugged tattoo shop, you know how it is) in the most Kant and Fadel way possible. But that one requires some serious thinking on my part, and I haven't really done any. Pretty sure it would be called Carte Blanche, though.
25. a fic you read this year you would recommend everyone read
So it is perhaps weird to say that everyone should read a fic in french since english's the internet's lingua franca, but pleaaaase let me shill for SayNevermore Ce que veulent les monstres. It is literally so good. I still haven't read even one chaper of Haikyuu!! and yet I love this fic so so so dearly. Japanese Golden Age of Piracy but with Broken Earth Trilogy-like monsters, that some people can mind-link with and control and it's this absolutely crazy bond where you kinda know where the other is always? And the monster is your weapon but it's also the other half of your soul? And the sea is slowly eating the world also? And the worldbuilding is incredible, and the lore so lovingly crafted and well-integrated into the plot, and the attention to little historical details helps make everything more real and there and visible? And the protagonist is insane but so endearing? And he's already so attuned to this tiny sun of a monster he keeps complaining about? And if none of this convinces you, listen. Listen. You could so easily put [REDACTED] into this univ- *GUNSHOT* (anyway for a fic in english, In this darkness, light me is also a fic with magic and monsters and an enticing lore that is cleverly delivered and I love how Sand POV is written and manages to tell us things about Ray that Sand doesn't actually notice or even things about Sand that Sand doesn't notice, or before he notices them, and last but not least the scenes where vampire Ray feeds on Sand are just hot, like, what do you want me to say)
Thank you so much!!! Wailing about fics I am not writing was very cathartic ^^
fanfic end of the year asks
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verycharismaticdragon · 1 year ago
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Do you know why everyone and their mother keeps saying that Sheb Qingqiu's secluded cultivation lasts for a year or 3??? Last I checked, wasn't he only in the cave for several months??
...I haven't seen a fic use that timeframe in quite a while - am I the delusional one??
Having intensively cultivated for several months, he could freely control his spiritual energy and had risen one level above his original cultivation base.
... nope, still as I remembered from the official book, page 85 in my copy. Even my old Exiled Rebels translation puts it as, "several months." Last I checked, 12 (or 36) months is far too many to simply be considered "several", so what am I missing? It just- throws off the timeline so badly and greatly increases the amount of time poor Binghe is stuck in the woodshed, for what?
Okay, so the 3 years thing comes from the donghua, no need to look further. It's one of those things that directly go against canon but have stuck in people's minds, similar to 'the washerwoman was the one to pull baby Binghe out of the river' and 'Shen Qingqiu fainted dramatically several times early on in his transmigration'.
Then, I don't believe I have seen 1 year myself, but if I had to guess, it may come from the fact that Binghe is 14yo prior to SQQ entering seclusion and 15 once he leaves. That said, an entire year makes zero sense considering what we know of the timeline.
Which is where I confess that I tore out some hair over the length of SQQ's seclusion when constructing the timeline for Transmigrator Time Traveler, because for me 'several' months means 3 to 5, but given all the facts, SQQ's seclusion had to last somewhere between 6 and 10 instead. (I went with 9 in the end, for the fic, cause I've read that 9 is a significant number for spiritual practices cultivation is based on? the source was a little vague so i don't know how true that is, but I needed a number.)
Nevermind, to the aforementioned facts. MXTX confirmed the date of the first chapter publication - Sept.21 - to be the date of SQQ's transmigration. (Small note: I'll be using modern months, even though SV's world uses lunar calendar, because it's easier to gauge weather and stuff. For characters in the novel, they might see those as different months/seasons, but that doesn't really affect our purpose here.) Luo Binghe’s 15th birthday - which Shen Qingqiu missed in seclusion - is in winter ('coldest day' which I after some research came to hc as jan6, though that's not particularly relevant, because...) Demon invasion happened on a 'hot day' (SQQ mentions it in relation to how SHL is dressed) - which puts it in May at the earliest, August at the latest. So these are the 'borders' we are working with.
Now, to my actual calculations. We know SQQ spent some time on the Peak after transmigration, before the Skinner mission that led to him going to seclusion. So I'm gonna say that happened in October at the earliest, December if you stretch it (though I feel like his tatas would freeze off if the Skinner left him half-undressed in December...) - but definitely not later, cause Binghe’s birthday has to happen off-screen. So if we take the longest possible time frame, October to August, we get 10 months. The slimmest possible window - December to May - gives us 5 months, but between the aforementioned boob hypothermia issue and the fact that May is a bit of a stretch for the 'hot day', I think that 6 months is the shortest you can go.
Which, again, doesn't align with my understanding of what should be described as 'several' months, but what can you do... tbh, im not sure MXTX thought all that hard about the timeline, which is understandable as a writer - but as a fan, frustrating
So yeah - definitely less than a year (and absolutely not 3, donghua), though the math gets fuzzier after that.
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desceros · 1 year ago
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I just gotta say- I usually don't like established relationship fics (Even if it's just like friends) because it always feels like you're... missing something. There's a detachment for me, usually, because I don't get to see how this relationship is formed. Not really. I miss those first glances, the awkward meetings, just all that fluff and yearning as the relationship develops that I guess my heart craves?
But you write in a way that includes that, like the scene in your latest piece where reader is laying on the couch, thinking of all the happy memories and such that have happened in that space. It's a very fine line between telling and showing that you dance immaculately, so it doesn't feel like exposition... because it really isn't? It fills that craving for seeing how the relationship is forming even without the events unfolding directly in front of my eyes. I don't know how else to explain it, just... it's good. It's really, really good. You did the same thing in Euclidean Line, if I remember correctly (God I'm really feeling the urge to reread that one), where there was... sort of a montage, for lack of a better word? When Donnie and reader (don't know what else to call them) were getting closer outside of their meet-ups. Usually I hate time-skips or the author explaining something that I'd really rather just read, but you do it in a way that makes it feel like you're not missing too much, there's still just a bit left to the imagination. I'm sure it's for time's sake/not wanting the fic to drag, something like that? But it's hard to come across an author that does it so well and I appreciate it so much. I swear, I need to start taking notes on the little subtleties of your writing because just. Ugh. I really want to be able to explain myself better it's just good!!
Can't wait to read literally whatever you put out next!! You're one of few authors where it doesn't matter what you're writing, I'll read it anyways. I really wasn't a huge fan of bayverse until I saw you writing the turtles (Among a few others) now I uh. Might have to go back and watch those movies again.
But eat food, drink water, and I hope your wrists are nice to you!! Mine have been sensitive lately so it's more on the forefront of my mind, I haven't seen you mention it so I've just been hoping things have been better on that side for you. I hope you can get some good sleep too, even when you're able to write through it I still kinda worry!! Like I know you're a fully capable adult but. So am I and insomnia is ass, so... yeah I just hope things go well for you!!
it's funny you should say that, as for the longest time, i Hated putting time skips in my writing. abhorred it. would do it as little as possible. because there's so much characterization you can squeeze out of the smallest details, right? like, when they wake up. what do they do? do they drink coffee? tea? how do they take their coffee? do they get dressed before or after breakfast?
but there's an amount of characterization that becomes... excessive. like, sure, the character feels more like an actual person because of this. but does it serve the fic? i balk at the traditional writing advice that "every sentence must progress the plot," because i love basking in seemingly unimportant moments; but i do think there's truth to a modified version of that thought. "every detail must serve the fic."
take symphony, for example. in the first chapter, i go into detail on what viola-chan includes in her apology bags for her neighbors. at first glance, it could seem like a small list of that doesn't really add anything to the character. it certainly doesn't add anything to the plot. and yet, you learn a lot of what she values, what things she sees as important. she has a hobby (two homemade cookies), she doesn't like pain (ibuprofen), she's comfortable financially (the gift card for coffee), she Will practice even though it's annoying to hear (the ear plugs), but she's also kind enough to bend those rules for extenuating circumstances (her phone number, so you can call and ask her to take a break "if you have a baby or something"). it's an efficient way to get across a lot of character development, even though it feels like an unnecessary detail.
learning to balance how much you can skip and how much you should include for your desired amount of characterization is something that comes with experience, and it's something that comes down to taste. as you noted, i like to include things from skips that make them seem Less like a skip, and more like things you didn't see but still know about. this works for established relationships, too. how did they get together? well, maybe that's not so important. but a little hint of it is enough to show that it's real, that it's an event that happened, even if you the reader don't explicitly see it. there are many people who would find my writing excessively detailed, which is fine, as i would find theirs excessively barren. as with most things in art, it's largely subjective.
anyway, too-long answer aside, so glad you're enjoying and thank you so much for your thoughtful message :D
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writingmochi · 14 days ago
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Hey Lissie! I read through your lengthy exchanges with @faeyun while scrolling through my feed thinking 'omg what a coincidence, I was just thinking about fandom culture and stuff the day before' and you guys covered up so so much I could barely cover up everything you guys said into one coherent ask but to be honest (and to be straightforward) you've genuinely been my no. 1 aspiration on this app alone for the longest time and no it's not just because we're both orang Indo 😭✋✋✋
It pained me a little seeing how you felt jealous of other writers for writing 'hits' and what not because BABES.
Isobel. Motion Picture. Terra Incognita. Future 'Menari Dengan Bayangan' stories. I only said.
There are so many fics you wrote that I have on my tbr for the longest time which I haven't been getting to because, if you have not noticed, I don't particularly enjoy reading as much as I do writing (subi just admit that you're a slow reader—) but also the fact that... I just think so many of your works are so cool I feel overwhelmed on which to read first 😭😭😭 PLEASE HELP ME GRAHHH
Cuz I started following you when I was a minor (16?17?) So the only fic I COULD read... Was the Niki ramen burping one (WHICH BTW UVE SEEN YOUR REBLOGS IVE SEEN YOUR REBLOGS I EXPLODED AT SKME OF THE LORE YOU DROPPED IMMA GET BACK TO IT IMMA GET BACK) and thought 'okay if the piece contains smut I'll just leave it for me to read when my birthday comes up in the next few months...'
*next few months*
*realizes that just because I'm 18 doesn't mean I magically am comfortable with reading or writing smut* well sh*t.
This is not to say your works are inheritently 100% black out devil's tango, no, I just noticed that they do contain heavier topics in general and... I do want to mentally prepare myself for those things. But also yeah main takeaway is: idk which to read first 🥹 so, i feel like this is long overdue but, could you help reccomend me which one of your works to read first? It doesn't have to be the works I just mentioned, it can be anything else 🫶🫶 I recently added a lil upgrade to my blog where I mentioned some works I enjoy and works that have inspired my writing as a whole (ahem as inspired by someone *cough cough*) so, yeah in conclusion you're cool asf 👍
Yours truly, subabooba 🧋🧋🧋🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
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lissie: hiya subibuba! i guess that i didn't expect such a lengthy reply to our convo but i'm also glad to see it anyway...
i'm glad that our convo is insightful enough for you. many opinions and agreements are being uttered through these convo, but i'm sure that it will be insightful cause the people who visited this blog could also know about how i felt about this whole thing and the state of this place as a whole
thank you so so much for that. i mean, i'm probably one of the active indonesians here, especially in txtblr and enhablr, and now there's you too! i'm glad that i could inspire you so much also
i do think being jealous is normal. it means that you want to strive for your best and continue to improve, and one of the ways to improve for me is to be experimental. all the fics you mentioned aren't like the others. isobel with the magical realism, motion picture soundtrack with the slow-burn drama, terra incognita with the cyberpunk sci-fi, menari dengan bayangan with the 24-hour time limit, and i only said with its isekai story. that + all the other additional things i made to immerse myself and readers into the world of the story (terra incognita with the opening sequence and fics with playlists)
thank you for even considering reading my fics. as i mentioned many times before, people are actually afraid of the large word count. but, honestly, big word count helps me actually delve deep into the fics i write. hence why it can be interpreted so much and why, as i have also mentioned too, i like to create discussions. i love how after i released motion picture soundtrack, most of the feedback i have gotten is about the bullying aspect of it all and the discussion surrounding it. it becomes a talking point in a larger conversation outside the realm of kpop fanfiction
i genuinely respect you so much for that because you have so many temptations to read smut here and you don't! very proud! you mentioning it makes me realise that i *do* have written many heavier topics, not just the devil's tango. it's pretty much a reflection of things that i am thinking. but i do have so sfw fics like the rest of menari dengan bayangan will all be sfw, but some have strong themes as well such as for sunoo's and jaeyun's. a few of my wips are also sfw like the tyunkai we are dreamers one i mentioned and all enha maknae line wips, especially chromaquest, cause new deltarune updates are here in june YIPPEE
i see your update about the inspo deck. i can't wait to read what you have written inspired by mouthwashing. i bought the game but haven't played it because i still have to finish baldur's gate 3 (and its nearly 200gb in size so that u can uninstall it to play more games)
i will curate you, user hyukassubi: a personal guideline for the current writingmochi-verse with the starting point from besok mungkin kita sampai !
i will recommend you crossroads next, a jay fic that elaborates on the themes mentioned in besok mungkin kita sampai, but with a bit of slow-burn romance between them. set in years 2 and 3 of high school, and it is very wholesome and still is my self-proclaimed magnum opus. definitely read this while also listening to the playlist.
after that, smirch! it is set in high school, but more on a delinquent style. it is a enha and txt 01-03 liner series where every member has their own part and own mcs. i only have published heeseung and jay and still plotting down taehyun's. i do think this is a very VERY underrated series of mine and i want to go back to writing this so bad ughh
if you want a more challenging story and still sfw, do read ashen next! it is my halloween special beomgyu fic about cinderella and how, maybe, mc might be cinderella? i had a moot of mine live reacting to this fic, and istg it's the funniest thing i have ever read and i can't wait for you to be amazed and shocked by it hehe
if you're ready to have a bit more adult theme to it, try a story of two broken hearts. set in high school about jake and mc fake dating because their crushes dated each other. it has, what i say, non-explicit smut. implications written but not full on descriptive smut. it is actually my first fic ever when i start my blog and i still love it so much. they're unlikely but ugh the angst still hurts me. i'm reminded of the climax of the fic and it still give me chills.
lastly, i will recommend time wave series. probably my most ambitious series cause it has yeonjun and soobin, and with beomgyu, jake, jay, and jungwon spin-offs in the future. it is a 100k+ word count of a series with supernatural and childhood best friends rekindling, with time travel.
then, if you are comfortable enough, you can start reading the heavier ones. i probably start with i only said because of its lighter fantasy high school theme and then troubled pixies, then motion picture soundtrack for heavier high school aus
i sure hope that that is enough of a guideline and thank you so much for this. i had the widest smile on my face whilst i'm writing this :3
yours truly, lissay <3
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wikiangela · 2 years ago
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Weekend WIP Game
tagged by @jesuisici33 <3
Rules: List your WIPs below (if you only write one fic at a time, feel free to include future WIPs/ideas!) then answer the following questions. Then, tag as many people as you have WIPs (or more)
1. WIP List:
alive shannon
sick eddie
buddie coffee shop
new buddie chris' school
roommates
bi eddie
buddie death cast fic
cheating fic
untitled natalia fic
buddie 2x01
5+1 nicknames
coffee buddie
2. Which of your WIPs is currently the longest?
alive shannon with 20k words so far
3. Which WIP do you expect will end up the longest?
alive shannon, since it's kinda a canon rewrite and I still haven't decided to which point it's gonna go, we'll see when it'll feel right to end it haha
4. Which WIP is your favourite to write/the most enjoyable to write? Why?
once again, alive shannon haha - it's just so fun to explore what all those dynamics could've been, and giving Eddie and Shannon some closure, and I love exploring Shannon's character, too, speculating on her thoughts and motivations, and diving into everyone's heads, and I'm so excited to see it all develop!!
5. Which WIP do you find the most intimidating to write? Why?
I think it's either alive shannon or the cheating fic alive shannon bc I've never written s2/s3 buddie and I wanna get their characters semi-right, and I don't remember a lot of details so I need to get on with my rewatch lol - and also writing Shannon's and Eddie's feelings on their relationship and how it all ended is not easy haha and the cheating fic bc it's so not my thing but a song inspired it and it got stuck in my head and it's happening haha and I hope I'll make it make sense haha
6. Which WIP do you experience the most self-doubt about. Why?
tbh all of them - some more, some less, but there are moments, especially lately, when veeeery often I'm just like: everything I write sucks wtf
7. Which of your WIPs will you seek out a beta/sensitivity reader for? Why?
@giddyupbuck agreed to beta the alive shannon fic, and I spam them with snippets if I'm in doubt and it's sooo helpful fr ily <3 and I'll need alive shannon beta-read bc it's gonna be so long, and I keep changing my mind about things bc of how many ideas I have, so I just need someone else to look at it and tell me if everything makes sense haha - and Ro's helped me so much with some previous fics so they have my full trust with my baby that is the alive shannon fic haha
8. Have any of your WIPs been struck by the curse of writer's block?
all of them at some point lol - a few of these are actually on hold bc of that - I will get back to them tho!
9. Which WIP has your favourite OC? Tell us about them?
as of now there's no ocs in any of these, but we'll see haha
10. Which WIP is the sexiest?
cheating fic and maaaaybe coffee buddie (if I'll ever get back to this one) - no actual smut in my wips yet atm
11. Which WIP is the angstiest?
buddie death cast fic - if you've read 'they both die at the end' you know why lol this is not gonna have a happy ending
12. Which WIP has the best characterisation (in your humble opinion)?
so far I'm loving everyone in alive shannon so I guess let's go with that haha
13. Which WIP has the best scene setting (in your humble opinion)?
oh I am so bad this - but maybe let's say buddie coffee shop au bc i think it's the only one where I put even a little bit of focus on the setting lmao
14. Which WIP have you worked the hardest on?
alive shannon, been thinking about it and making notes for months before I started writing, and I don't think i've ever been this invested in a fic
15. Which WIP do you have the highest expectations for? Why?
alive shannon - - like I said, it's my most precious baby, and I'm so excited to not only write it but read it, and I hope it's gonna be as good as it is in my head, and I hope I'll make the story make sense with Shannon there, but also keeping some important buddie moments from canon hah
16. Do you dream about any of your WIPs?
not sure if i've ever dreamt about a wip, but i do get new ideas in my sleep sometimes lol
17. Do any of your WIPs have particular complexities that your other fics don't?
alive shannon will have switching povs which i rarely do, so it's gonna be a challenge to write three distinct voices - and diving into Shannon's head and feelings and motivations will also definitely be hard
18. Which WIP is the funniest or has the most humour?
I think sick eddie - he's so ridiculously stubborn and difficult istg haha or buddie coffee shop with how fucking awkward buck's being
19. Do any of your WIPs contain outside POVs or a deep dive on a character other than the main ship? How are you finding that process?
yep, once again, alive shannon - it's as much a buddie fic as it is a shannon fic, so it's not exactly outside pov, bc I'm just excited to focus on her equally as much, on how she's settling into their lives, becoming a better mom, being involved in Chris' life - she's gonna have as much focus as buddie sns it's not easy, bc it's alternating povs and once I get stuck in Eddie's head it's hard to leave, but so far it's been fun
20. Tell us one thing we don't know about one or more of your WIPs
uhhh, I think I share like everything lol okay, so maybe: alive shannon will definitely go at least up until s4 and will include Eddie dating Ana 👀 purely bc I want a buddie-shipping Shannon to be like wtf eddie??? also, there will be more than one mcd in the death cast fic and coffee buddie was loosely inspired by a small thing from luke cage lol
no pressure tags: @daffi-990 @fortheloveofbuddie @elvensorceress @gaydiaz @diazass @thebravebitch @silentxxsoul @shortsighted-owl @eddiebabygirldiaz @arthursdent @diazblunt @911onabc @eddiediaztho @housewifebuck @lover-of-mine @gayhoediaz @rogerzsteven @watchyourbuck @hoodie-buck @monsterrae1 @ladydorian05 @forthewolves @honestlydarkprincess @wildlife4life @theotherbuckley @weewootruck @thewolvesof1998 @disasterbuckdiaz @loserdiaz @underwater-ninja-13 @giddyupbuck @hippolotamus @eowon @callaplums @spotsandsocks
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chocolate-cringymuffin · 1 year ago
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every even number in the love your fandom game!
Oh bro here we go...
1- 3 things you like about your fandom:
1.1- It has a lot of content!
1.2- You can experiment and play with many characters and concepts, there are no limits!
1.3- it has a lot of nice and talented people!
2- A headcanon you where not sure about first but fandom made you change your mind:
Mmmmm... not sure about this one. I think I used to Headcanon Amon as Asexual but thanks to some nice mutuals now I can see him bisexual.
3- A character that fandom made you appreciate:
Asami and Katara. Before I get in here I was neutral about all the characters (of course my three main blorbos are the exceptions), but with the right fics and art I could connect with them a little bit better.
4- Say something nice about a ship you don't ship;
Not into Korrasami really, but if there's one thing I can't deny is that the ship has good artists, (haven't read fics but I guess there are good writers too).
5- A thing you see often in fics:
We collectively refuse to accept when a character we love is dead in canon. (canon is clay and we can shape it into whatever we want).
6- A thing you see often in fan arts:
When we make Korra strong and pretty. Also Yue art, she is so pretty and I heard that if you are a cool artist you have drawn her at least once! (Please don't mind if you haven't drawn her, I am sure your art is great).
7- Tropes you enjoy to read/write/draw:
To draw- arranged marriage, basically any amorralok au where Tarrlok and Amon live, for Azulaang any modern, cute or funny comfort au, (tea or coffee shop, school au, flowershop), and love drawing dirty mechanic/prince Irosami.
I guess any cute, comfort au actually.
To read- Arranged marriage, castaway Amon, equalists plot continuation, GIMEEE.
Also love coffee shop aus and spirit traveling au's for Azulaang.
Irosami is interesting with equalist or spy Asami au's but love some good cute domestic aus.
Basically anything related with spirit travels, equalists continuation, action and fluff included.
8- Something you would like the fandom to love aittle bit more:
Any ship and character that doesn't get as much appreciation as it deserves around the fandom.
9- A ship that it's not your Otp but you ship:
Yuetara, have neglected it WAY too long but whenever I see it I appreciate it.
10- A blog or mutual that has made your experience in fandom better:
Can't name all the people that have made my experience better, fortunately, there have been too many nice mutuals. Some are no longer active but to name a few I would dare to say @flameo-trashman @crookedmouth-mountainbones @lotus-ashi @orangepanic @moreamorra @amorra-tlok @writebecauseyoucannotbreathe and @mokonahapuuuuuu
Thank you all for your kindness and your presence in this chaotic site!
11- An artwork/fic you are proud about:
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12- Say something nice to a mutual!
Orange, Lotus, Crooked, Neffy, Write, Mokonahapuuuu and Moreamorra: Never stop being awesome and having cool art and fics.
And for everyone else reading this: you are great too and your presence enriches this fandom.
13- Favorite fandom event?
Ship week! (loved the avatarsunkenshipweek by the way).
14- A ship that makes you smile:
Mostly Amorra but Korrlok, Irohsami and Azulaang hold an apecial place in my heart. 💜💙🤎❤🧡💛❤️‍🔥
15- A character that makes you smile:
Baby Korra, she is too precious. Baby Noatak and Tarrlok too, must protect.
16- A thing in canon you would like to get noticed by the fandom?
THE PARALELISMS BETWEEN AMON AND KORRA, THEY ARE INSANE.
17- A thing in canon everyone likes, including you:
Seeing Iroh and Aang back in tlok and Jinora getting her tattoos.
18- A tag you follow?
Just Tlok
19- Current fandoms:
Again just Tlok haha.
20- Your first fandom:
Can't recall the first one I got interested in.
21- A fandom you miss:
Undertale.
22- Mutual you have known the longest?
Mokonahapuu, it's been a lot since we knew through this lil place.
23- A fandom you are curious about thabks to a mutual:
The dragon Prince.
24- How has fandom positively impacted in you?
Mutuals helped me to work in my art and storytelling skills. 💛
25- Advice to take care of you in fandom spaces:
Do not get too invested in any fandom, it can be overwhelming to deal with too many opinions so it's better to try to be nice and not worry about what the rest could say.
Get 2-5 psychos, (affectionate), and stick together, it will probably help you a lot.
Also, you don't have to like what everyone else does or agree to everything, not everything is made for you or a single person. Keep in mind you will have to learn to cope with the things you dislike.
Finally, look for other activities to entertain yourself, focusing too much in fandom can be bad in the long term.
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jinkoh · 5 months ago
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big thank you to @sungbeam for tagging me in her wrapped! i've actually been meaning to make a wrapped of sorts anyway so this was a very welcome motivator to actually do it~
i decided not to include the drabbles that i've written (and am still writing) for my anniversary event bc i felt like they'd mess with the statistics lol
anyway this was very fun to put together so i hope you'll enjoy my year in review~
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first: younghoon - lipgloss(feb 22, 4.8k)
this fic wasn’t just my first fic of the year but also my first time writing for tbz and the fic that got me out of a rather bad writer’s block. it felt so fun to explore a new group even though i didn’t know them that well at the time and maybe couldn’t portray them well either. idk it rlly marked a new start and made me enjoy writing again~   
last: jay - still monster(nov 10, 0.5k)
another group I only started writing for this year. it’s just a teeny tiny drabble, but it was still fun to write~
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longest: haknyeon - rat in the trap (jul 12, 10.6k)
it took me months to finish this tbh. my fics are usually very character driven but this one actually came with more plot and word building and that kinda made it harder on me to finish. it’s not perfect but i still love this sm and it somewhat opened the door to me finding joy in writing more twisted things.
there is also (don’t) wait up on me which is technically longer (13k), but because it mostly wasn’t actually written this year i feel like it doesn't really count?   
most popular: eric - sleeveless (oct 6, 2.5k)
y’all need to go to horny jail but who am i to judge i literally wrote this (and it isn’t even that kinky anyway).
personal pick: haknyeon - seeping through the cracks (jul 23, 2k)
it was my first time writing a y/n who is. just not a very good person and it was so much fun. unsurprisingly the fic didn’t do well at all but i genuinely don’t mind because this is a v self-indulgent fic written just for me. it’s awful and experimental but i love it and in a twisted way it just feels comforting to read.
another thing i greatly enjoy(ed) working on is my soulmate series~
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ateez — 1 fic
did i add the artist category just so i could talk about this? maybe so. but aside from tbz and enha i also wrote my first ateez fic this year. it’s only that one story currently (there are more in the works) but the experiences i had with posting it made me think that atinyblr is a very kind place so i wanted to take this chance to say thank you<3
pentagon — 1 fic
i swear i still love them endlessly--but writing for them has been feeling difficult this year, both for obvious ptg related reasons but also for private ones so i couldn't really bring myself to work on the ideas and wips i had for them. i'm glad i at least got to finish that one wooseok fic that i had in my drafts for a year or so.
enhypen — 3 fics
i kinda got into them over the last few months and though i’ve only written a few short drabbles for them, i’ve found it very fun so far~
the boyz — 40 fics
that is. kind of an insane amount. i know a lot of them are short blurbs bc i don’t really differentiate between full length fics and drabbles but. that is still a lot for me. especially because my writing process tends to be rather slow. but i suppose with how much i've come to love tbz it's not that surprising~
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most fics: sunwoo — 8 fics
as kate said in her wrapped: “i may not bias him- but oh boy- i love writing fics for him.” there is just something about sunwoo that makes it very fun and easy~   
most words:
#3 hyunjae — 15.2k (7 fics)
#2 haknyeon — 15.5k (4 fics)
#1 younghoon — 15.9k (6 fics)
i do bias all three of these guys (some more than others) so it seems fair enough?
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total fics: 43
(incl. 1 text fic)
total word count: ~80k
1.9k words per fic on average (i just love me my little drabbles~)
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frankly this year was a huge mess and i'm glad it's over--but at least in terms of writing it's been very fun! i feel like i've challenged topics and formats i haven't really touched before and generally let myself experiment a little more. it also feels like the first time that a lot of my works were really written for me, because i enjoyed the idea and found it intriguing or comforting to work on, rather than writing with other people in mind, and that just feels nice and freeing~
i've also made some new connections this year that i am really grateful for! it's mainly to blame on deep diving into tbz and honestly? zero regrets. i've found deobiblr to be one of the sweetest and warmest communities i've ever engaged with and i'm so thankful to everyone who welcomed me with open arms and treated me and my writing with kindness<3
also let me just say special thanks to my dearest friend @blizzardfluffykpop. without kate a lot of my fics would have probably never seen the light~ there's so many stories that have their origin in our dms and bouncing ideas off you makes writing so much more enjoyable! and of course i probably wouldn't be a deobi without you, so thanks for pulling me under with you♥️
anyway--with that 2024 comes to an end! thank you to everyone who's been along for the ride this year, and let's make 2025 a good one~
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animazi · 5 months ago
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AO3 Wrapped: Writer's Edition
tagged by @cheesenames
Words written this year: 43,215 (genuinely how. for context the last things I wrote before this year were all sub 1k pretty much)
Works written this year: 5, all star wars, 3 of those being peedy...
Work Most Proud of: girl and ghost. for something written for a headcanon I don't personally like that much I think it ended up being the neatest and best constructed of everything? providence, in summer has, imo, several massive pacing, thematic and structural issues that annoy me deeply
Work with Most Hits: providence, in summer which is the inevitable answer given its a) not a crackfic, and b) is about an actual main star war character
Fav title: providence, in summer. it's based on the 'providence in the fall of a sparrow' line from hamlet, which is imo quite fitting for padme as I read her (a character who has devoted her entire life to grander works than her, save this little corner of peace she has attempted to whittle out - which even then is caught up in prophecy lol - and I like and certainly used the force sensitivity via the twins idea - suddenly getting these strange awarenesses of the world you can't control and feel alien yet total in their correctness. horrible!) but I thought the unaltered quote was both too long and also didn't properly represent the themes of the fic, see my earlier note about how I'm not satisfied with providence overall lol, so I added the 'in summer' part which does get across another slightly flopped theme of that aka the temporary nature of it all. something both longed for and hated (I despise the heat in summer)
Pairing You Wrote the Most For: sigh. with pain in my voice I must accept my crown. peedy. I was also the World's Most Prolific Peedy Writer (I know I know, please hold the applause)
What Work was the Quickest To Write: um. my dad...the emperor! which I wrote on one (1) train journey. admittedly a full day of train journey, but still.
What Work Took You Longest To Write: providence, in summer...and I'm probably going to redo it at some point lol
How Many WIPS do you have for next year: idk man ideas just spawn in my brain from time to time and sometimes they get accepted, and sometimes they go live in the googledocs prison. I do want to write the vader and the obi-wan ones I've had in docs hell for a while though...
Longest Work of the Year: providence, in summer, although coruscant dreams; or eedy in love is a relatively close second. what can I say I'm a versatile person
Shortest Work of the Year: one love story. I haven't finished it though. I want to do a coffeeshop (cafshop?) au and some other deeply cheesy 2010s fanfic au concept in it still
Fav character to Write: embarrassing (true) answer. eedy. because all im doing is writing crack so I really don't have to care that much about ensuring she has a coherent characterisation going on lol. the serious (false) answer would be padme though, I just really love her so even though I agonise about how to write her, I still have fun
Which work of yours have you re-read the most: girl and ghost because it is actually good.
Total Kudos this Year: boring
Total Hits This Year: also boring
Total Bookmarks This Year: see above
Total Subscriptions This Year: ditto
What Do You Listen To While Writing: either silence or like exclusively sofia isella songs? I don't even like them that much I cannot explain it, 'everybody supports women', 'I looked the future in the eyes, it's mine', and 'all of human knowledge made us dumb' all just. have writing vibes I really cannot explain it
Fav line or passage: oh god. evil question. uhhh can I choose two? nobody is stopping me
from girl and ghost: "She had realised that they were doomed one unremarkable afternoon in the gallery when Vel tipped back her head and laughed, golden girl awash in sparkling glass crystals. In the bright white light the tips of her eyelashes had shone like burnished copper bringing out the blue of her eyes, like some delicate artefact Kleya would handle white-gloved, carefully removed from touching it - for its own sake." (this was one of the first things I wrote for this. I really like it, even though the great gatsby influence is obvious...) from providence, in summer: "In her mind, she dismounted from the guarlara and walked out alone into the grass, blades brushing her shoulders, tangling in her hair until they pulled it out of the tight nautilus shells and carried her feathered headdress down to the ground. They pulled out the ribbons in her hair, brushed away her makeup, tore down the regalia of the queen and left the girl behind to walk on forwards deeper into the grass sea and its whispered susurrus-song; a land baptism between the sky and the sea in the art of emptiness, of hollowing out the self and allowing Naboo to reform her. The pale moons, veiled by day, bore witness as she walked alone and unafraid through the ocean, her path her own. Above her, the hawk followed, thermal currents carrying it smoothly along with her. Morning dew that had not yet evaporated beaded on her bare feet and the air was alive with the ancient song of the wind and the high chirp of crickets and calls of birds. The hawk cried, and Padmé woke from her dream." (I will stand by this: a good amount of providence is genuinely my best writing. it's the sort of somewhat self-indulgent prose I really love, and think fits a padme pov story.)
I. I have not read very much fic this year I have to be honest. I don't read for fun at all during term time, and I've been writing more this year, so I don't know whose done what or tumblr usernames, so I fear I must be boring and double tag @wlwanakin and @midnight-melancholiaaa
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