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WOAH oh my god?? it's oc time??! some character sheets of my main two gals for my original story, Visions of the Hereafter!
the plot focuses on heiress to the underworld (also known as the medium in-universe), atalanta, who shows great raw power but has incredible difficulty channeling and restraining her emotions, which is super important when you're a necromancer. and while her mentors have taught her a lot, her aunt brisa never lets her hear the end of how far behind she is, as the clock is ticking for her ascension as head necromancer.
meanwhile, mortal delinquent and con artist kris has lived her whole life with the strange ability to sense the dead...when atalanta goes up to the surface under brisa's strict supervision as part of her training, what on earth happens when she manages to sneak off anyways and bumps into kris? it seems like the two are inexplicably connected, somehow...could the realms of the living and dead colliding like this only spell disaster just like atalanta's education in the medium has always taught her, or could it perhaps lead to something more...?
everything regarding this story is gonna be in my #VotHa tag from now on, more guys to come!
#GOD OKAY. IM FINALLY DONE WITH THESE.#i started these damn sheets in november and then life kept. HAPPENING!!!#HOPEFULLYYY i can intoduce the other guys soon though i am. SOOO excited for the rest of em.#also YES. kris and atalanta are love interests....it's unimaginably slow burn yuri but it IS endgame#oc: atalanta#oc: kris#oc: seung gi#oc: pestilence#oc: brisa#<- just bc they make cameos in the sheets lol#VotHa#FINALLYYY got a tag for this story YAAAAYYYY!!!!!!!!!!#sketchbook
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Noticed you're taking requests for dark!nikki sixx. How about him getting all jealous and posessive (maybe he noticed some guy looking at reader or something, or her being too friendly with someone) and reminding her who she belongs too?
current or 80s nikki, whatever you prefer
Who do you belong to?
A/n: oh yeah! I love these tropes so much ft. A cameo from Eric Brittingham bc yes
Pairings: Dark!Nikki Sixx x Fem!reader
Warnings: smut, rough sex, possessiveness, knife play, blood, punishment (spanking with a belt), daddy kink, Nikki’s kind of mean in this lol, and I think that’s it. Let me know if I missed any.
“Hey baby.” A man said from behind you. You turned to see non other than Eric Brittingham from Cinderella.
“Oh, hi.” You smiled, just trying to be polite. You knew what his intentions were, obviously and your boyfriend did too. Because right before Eric could get another word in, he was pushed against the bar roughly, Nikki staring down at him with fire in his eyes it seemed.
“And what the fuck do you think you’re doing?” The bassist snarled at the other bassist.
“Hey man, I didn’t know she was yours.” The blonde tried to reason with the raven haired man.
“You’re a lucky bastard cause if you had gone any further you wouldn’t be able to fucking walk.” Nikki threatened him before letting go and gripping your wrist tightly, dragging you out of the night club.
“Babe-“ you tried to speak but he cut you off. “Shut up.”
The two of you got in the car and Nikki drove off. You could hear his tires squeaking against the road.
Once the two of you got home he dragged you upstairs to your shared bedroom and said, “Strip.”
You did as you were told, stripping all the way down including your underwear. You stood before him, bare as he was fully clothed. Your nipples were hard from the cool air.
“Tsk, tsk. Such a bad girl going around letting other men flirt with you. Especially in front of daddy.” He said, slowly walking towards you unbuckling his belt.
Your eyes widened, you knew what was coming.
Once he slid the belt off and folded it in a loop he said, “face down, ass up.” A simple command that had you scrambling to obey him.
Then, a sharp sting hit your bare ass. You whimpered. “Count.” Nikki said, and hit your ass again. “One.” You counted. Another slap, “two.” Tears were springing in your eyes, “three”
“Four”
“Five”
“Six”
“Seven”
“Eight”
“Nine”
“Ten” you sighed in relief when he stopped and smoothed his hand over your red cheeks before dropping his pants and lining his cock up to your pussy before roughly pushing in. You cried out in both pain and pleasure as he started pounding into you. Clutching the sheets, you cried and moaned, “Daddy! F-feels good!”
“Oh yeah? You think I can fuck you better than that blonde fucker?” He responded.
“Yes! Oh yes you fuck me better!”
Nikki slowed down a bit and then reached over to the nightstand and pulled out his pocket knife. Your breath hitched.
“This ok, bunny?” He asked. He knew that you knew what he had in his hand.
“Yes.” Because you were interested to where he was going with this. And also because even if you said no he’d do it anyways.
You felt him slowly carve into your skin, not too deep but enough to make you bleed a little. You hissed at the pain while your pussy was dripping. You felt him carve a ‘N’ onto your left ass cheek and then an ‘S’ on your right one. Fuck that’s hot, carving his initials into your skin. Now you’re his forever it seemed.
Nikki lightly traced them with his finger. “So beautiful. And now you really belong to daddy.” He said before pushing back into your tight hole and fucking you into oblivion.
“Mmm Nikki!” You moaned.
“I’m close, baby.” The bassist warned before pulling out of you and cumming on your ass over his newly carved initials. He then took his finger and scooped some up before feeding it to you.
“Good girl.” He praised.
#motley crue#nikki sixx#motley crue x reader#tommy lee#vince neil#mick mars#fanfic#dark!nikki sixx#dark!nikki sixx x reader#dark fic#smutty fanfic#motley crue smut#motley crue imagines#current nikki sixx x reader#nikki sixx smut
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hi! could I request an 8th!member male reader surprising Ni-ki with a gaming date? it could be comfort fic after a long day or a regular date ^^. 🍨
he's so cute i love him sm
pairing: niki x male!8th member! reader (no pronouns used) genre: fluff, sickfic word count: 829
includes: mostly a sickfic but they do game together at the end i just couldn't figure out how to write that lol, it's implied that niki throws up but nothing graphic, jungwon and heeseung cameos, mention of re4 bc i am still obsessed with leon
a/n: thank you for requesting !! this idea is so cute, i hope you like it :))
requests open !! read my rules first
“niki?” you lean against the doorframe of the bathroom, still slightly disoriented from waking up so suddenly. niki coughs violently a few times before he shakily stands up. his eyes look even more tired in the dim bathroom light as you rush over to his side.
“’m sorry,” he mumbles.
“don’t be.” you do your best to keep him steady against your body as you guide him back to your shared bedroom. you gently help him lay back down against the sheets, brushing the fringe out of his eyes. his forehead is hot to the touch and his face is slightly flushed a sickly pale. “i’ll go get you some water and medicine.”
niki’s eyes are closed by the time you return, though you can tell he’s still awake. he shifts as soon as you re-enter the room before forcing himself to sit up. despite his whines, he forces the bile taste of the medicine down before quickly drinking all of the water from the cup.
“thank you,” he whispers.
you shake your head, brushing his bangs back once again. you lean forwards to press a gentle kiss against his forehead. “lay down.” niki moves back to make enough room for you to lay beside him before he relaxes against the sheets once again. his hand finds a resting place against your waist as he curls against your body, nuzzling his head against your chest.
you rub a hand against his back as he contently sighs against your chest. “i love you.”
“i love you too,” you murmur. “now get some rest.”
niki rubs his eyes as he stumbles out of your bedroom. it’s quiet - unnaturally quiet for such a busy dorm. “y/n?”
“niki,” you smile, gently wrapping your arms around him. “are you feeling any better?”
“my head kinda hurts.” his voice is raspy as he leans his body weight against you. you hum, pulling you with him towards the couch. “what about practice? and our date?”
“i talked to jungwon and heeseung already. they’re letting you stay home until you aren’t sick anymore,” niki pulls you down to sit beside him as he leans against your shoulder. “and don’t worry about the date. we can go out when you’re feeling better.” you pull back just enough to brush your fingers against niki’s forehead. the skin has cooled down slightly since the night before. “why don’t you go lay down while i make you some food?”
“okay,” niki hums. you hold your hand out for him to take as your arm finds its rightful place around his waist. your touch is gentle as you guide him back to your room before he lays back down on the bed. you lean down, pressing a quick peck against his lips.
“get some rest. i’ll be back soon.”
true to your word, you return with a warmed bowl of miso soup not long after leaving. niki stirs when you set the bowl down on your bedside table. he squints up at you as you run your fingers through his hair, gently waking him up from his much needed nap. “hi baby,” you whisper. “i made you some soup.”
niki leans back against the headboard for support as you move to sit on the edge of the bed beside him. he smiles a little as you raise a spoonful to your lips to gently blow on it before holding it out for him. the flavor is familiar to him - you always make the same soup whenever he’s sick or has had a bad day. it’s a recipe you learned just after moving into the dorms when he was feeling especially homesick, making you call his mom and asking her for advice.
“thank you,” he whispers. you shake your head, continuing to hold out spoonful after spoonful for him.
“where are we going?” niki’s question goes ignored as you tug him along with you into the dorm’s living room. you toss the clothes that lay sprawled out across the couch cushions aside to make room for the both of you to sit down before gently coaxing him onto the floor.
“sit.” his protests are left unsaid as niki watches your scurry around into the kitchen to lay out an assortment of snacks and then into your living room to drape a blanket over his shoulders. it’s warm and heavy - almost like a cocoon around his body.
you reach over, grabbing two controllers out of the pile you’ve slowly accumulated over the years before handing one to niki. his hands naturally sit around the curve of the plastic though he’s never used the specific model before. the tv screen is bright as it lights up before the familiar playstation logo appears. “you’re sick, and we can’t go out on our date, so i brought our date to you.”
niki smiles, leaning his head against your shoulder. you lean over to press a sweet kiss against his forehead. “resident evil?”
“resident evil,” you smile.
#niki x reader#enha x reader#enha soft hours#enha fluff#niki fluff#niki x male reader#enha x male reader#enhypen x reader#enhypen fluff#enhypen x male reader#niki x you#niki x y/n#niki drabble#niki scenario#niki one shot#niki imagine#enha one shot#enha x you#enha x y/n#enha drabble#enha scenario#enha imagine#enhypen x you#enhypen x y/n#enhypen imagine#enhypen one shot#enhypen drabble#enhypen scenario#male reader
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Love In The Air episode 12 live reaction under the cut (long post)
I can't believe there's only one more episode left after this one (and then I'll move on to The Wedding Plan for their cameos obviously)
Awww Prapai is helping Sky again <3
"I'm not worried" baby you can drop the tsundere act fr
Sky getting startled and then annoyed every time Pai says "ouch" hahahaha
"You've become sillier since I last saw you" lmao
"He's a gentleboy in the streets, but a freak in the sheets" GENTLEBOY LMAO BYE
AAAWWW PRAPAI IS SO LOVESTRUCK (and Sky is being sneaky about how much he loves Pai but Pai notices awwwww)
Hahaha birthday immediately canceled bc baby wanna go shopping
THIS EPISODE IS CALLED WHEN THE SKY SURRENDERS TO THE WIND aaaaa will Sky finally admit his feelings??
Sky is such a sugar baby fr
Sky smiling like an idiot when Prapai is talking about couples t shirts but telling him "I think there's something wrong with your brain" hahahaha god I love him so much my sassy boiii
He's trying his best to be a tsundere
"People will misunderstand that you're my boyfriend" IS HE NOT?? SKY WTF ARE YOU ON ABOUT smh Mr Emotionally Unavailable better make up his mind
"This guy's my wife not my boyfriend" PAI PLEASE I'M WHEEZING
Aaaaa he brought Sky to his place and he's gonna bring him to the party Prapai is so ready to go official but Sky is not
Also can I just say PRAPAI IN THOSE PANTS
PAI'S CONFESSION 😭❤️😭❤️😭❤️ "When you tell me to stay away, I want you to admit that you want me to stay close. Or when you tell me to get bored, I wanna tell you that I won't." It captured their dynamic so perfectly - here's how I see it: Sky still doesn't believe this thing with Prapai is serious and long-term but he still gave in to his own feelings and desires. He doesn't see a point in going official and he can't admit his true feelings, maybe because if they're not together there won't be a breakup when things "inevitably" end and it won't hurt as much? He's trying to keep a bit of a barrier to protect himself while still indulging in this relationship. But Prapai knows what's behind that barrier and he's breaking it down with earnest feelings and a good amount of cheekiness. In conclusion: AAAAAAAAA
I'M GONNA COUNT THIS AS THEIR FIRST REAL ROMANTIC KISS I'm pretty sure this is the first time they kissed without a sexual context or the "excuse" of it being some sort of "payment". It's the first kiss that's honest and open, all cards on the table, no excuses or facades, no (faked) reluctance, just pure earnest emotion.
Not the mic making fart noises during the kiss tho omg talk about ruining the mood lol
Just rewinded... Sky's hopeful look before the kiss is everything 😭❤️😭❤️
"I want you to kiss me too. I want you to like me." HE SAID IT HE GOT OVER HIS TSUNDERE ACT AND ADMITTED IT AAAAAAA I LOVE THIS FOR THEM
I mean of course it was gonna lead to sex but still the kiss was not about that at all. THAT KISS. WAS EVERYTHING. THAT KISS WAS THE REAL VERSION OF THE ONE PRAPAI HAD IMAGINED. ROMANTIC. EARNEST. AAAAA IT WAS PERFECT
Huh I didn't expect them to actually make it to the party after Sky said he could skip morning classes lmao
The little peck aaaa so casual so sweet Sky still isn't used to this but he loves it
Oh no now he's freaking out about his own feelings again NO BABY DON'T OVERTHINK IT YOU WERE DOING AMAZING
Oh no ex-hookups and new boyfriends do not mix
The way Sky immediately forgot about having to pee lmao
Oh no what is he seeing- OH. The ex-hookup. SKY IS ALREADY TRAUMATIZED THIS HAS GOT TO HURT SO MUCH JUST AFTER HE FINALLY GAVE IN FUUUUUCKKKK
Oh no not another flashback NOT ANOTHER FLASHBACK NOT SKY CRYING MY HEART CAN'T TAKE THIS IT'S SHATTERING INTO A MILLION PIECES MY POOR BABY SKY
Meanwhile Pai is actually doing his best to get rid of the random boy clinging to him
Prapai is so smooth even when rejecting someone
Why is Sky not confronting him THEY NEED TO CLEAR THIS UP, COMMUNICATE YOU IDIOTS
"I saw your boy. The one you let me borrow. The one who said he loved you so much" FUCKKKK NOOOOO FUCKKKKKK and I can't believe I called that guy pretty, what a fucking asshole FUCK THE FUCK OFF
Meanwhile Sky is having a fucking breakdown in the car while trying to hide it from Pai
AND NOW HE KEEPS BRUSHING HIM OFF AND MAKING EXCUSES NOT TO SEE HIM THIS FUCKING HURTS SO MUCH DO YOU UNDERSTAND HOW MUCH THIS SHIT HURTS WHAT THE FUCKKKKK
Poor Pai poor Sky my poor babiesssss
Everyone is scared of Prapai lmao
TWO WEEKS????? Christ on a bicycle shoot me now I will never recover from this
And Sky's "I don't even like you" act is back up to 200% AND IT'S FUCKING HEARTBREAKING BECAUSE SKY IS BEING SO FUCKING HURTFUL AND MEAN BELIEVING IT'S JUSTIFIED AND PRAPAI IS HAVING HIS HEART SHATTERED INTO A MILLION PIECES WITH EVERY WORD I CAN'T KEEP WATCHING THIS just the thought of hearing that from someone you love - or saying that to someone you love(d) - freaking KILLS me
At least Pai doesn't really believe it. Though it hurts, he knows in his heart it's not true.
Sig is the fucking MVP
Sky is even gonna move dorms?? MY BABY IS HURTING SO MUCH I CAN'T FVKNG BREATHE OMG THE MEMORIES OF PAI WHEN HE GETS BACK TO HIS OLD DORM
Why did I kinda expect Prapai to be waiting in his room omg THE ANGST I'M GONNA IMPLODE
It's the book with all the notes he took 😭❤️ PROOF to Pai that Sky loves him
Which I guess is good for Pai but rn it's just making things worse for Sky because he still thinks Pai lied to him and used him and now that guy has proof that Sky loved him DID I MENTION THAT THIS HURTS??? BECAUSE IT SURE FUCKING DOES
Omg all of Sky's thoughts during their arc being revealed BUT AT WHAT COST aaaaa why couldn't they just have COMMUNICATED?!?! RIGHT AFTER THE FUCKING PARTY?!?!
"Can you not look for someone else? Can I be the only one for you?" 😭😭😭😭 SKYYYY BABYYYY he really wrote that aaaaa my heart
SKY WAS SO IN LOVE 😭❤️
In Pai's eyes he's proving to Sky there was no reason to break up. In Sky's eyes he's adding insult to injury and humiliating him for being stupid enough to fall for Pai. ARE YOU UNDERSTANDING I WANT TO SCRATCH MY EYES OUT
Ok what I don't like about the love confession is that it happens before they've talked it out so in that moment Sky still feels pathetic for admitting his feelings to a guy who has hurt him and will probably do so again
FINALLY they talked it out. I hope Prapai understands that Sky was not overreacting but actually acting the way anyone with that kind of trauma would act after getting triggered.
"I wonder where you get this idea that I'd get tired of you some day" *panicked look* oh no
But at least Sky is finally talking about it
"You can tell me when you're ready" PRAPAI MY LOVE LEMME GIVE YOU A BIG KISS FOR SAYING THAT MWAH
"Cause love makes me blind" AAAAAAA
Rain's reaction to PrapaiSky dating hahahaha
Sky's reaction to Rain calling Pai shameless ayyyyyy
"Can I kiss you?" PRAPAI DO YOU UNDERSTAND HOW MUCH YOU MEAN TO ME RIGHT NOW
Bonus scene: WHY U GOTTA HURT ME LIKE THAT AGAIN --- HE WROTE THAT AFTER THE PARTY???? FUUUUCKKKKKK
#well that was a wild fucking ride#probably the longest live reaction ive made#because there was A LOT to react to#and because it contains a good amount of meta aka me trying to understand whats going on#love in the air episode 12#love in the air meta#lita meta#love in the air live reaction#prapaisky#prapaisky meta#phayurain#payurain
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So I will definitely not be making more of these any time soon bcs school is kicking my ass, but I dug up this drawing from months ago that I kinda felt like sharing??? You get a gold star if you guess who they are without clicking for more lol
Contrary to what the stuff I reblog might lead you to believe, I really don’t inherently hate the concept of reboots, they just have to be *done right*. This is probably not an example of that lol, but I have a little au sitting in the back of my mind about the Magic School Bus characters aged up and attending college, and this is my first attempt at getting an idea of what the girls would look like (we’re going back to the og cast with my girl Phoebe obviously, Jyoti can have a cameo or something). I haven’t actually drawn the guys and I probably won’t any time soon bcs like I said, school’s kicking my ass, but I have Thoughts about them as well. I kind of want to save my full detailed thoughts for if I ever get around to making individual character sheets with outfits and stuff, but who am I kidding that’ll probably never happen so here’s a brief rundown:
Phoebe’s always been big on animal rights and whatnot, so I took that and ran with it. She’s this chill bi vegan chick who lives in an rv and has like five pets that she rescued. I’m not super sure what anyone’s studying just yet (except Keesha) but I’m thinking Phoebe’s somewhere on the environmental science side of things.
Speaking of Keesha, I kind of want them together 👀 Keesha’s getting her BFA in dance with an emphasis on ballet. One of the episodes has her mention a dance class and as a dancer myself that’s all I needed lol (just realized how hard I’m projecting here, since Phoebe was my favorite character growing up).
D.A.’s probably the most thought out of this group. She’s great at pretending she’s put together but she’s actually a huge mess. She’s a perfectionist about every aspect of her life, to the point where is starts taking a serious toll on her mental and physical health. Maybe she needs a certain former classmate to help her realize she doesn’t always have to take everything so seriously 👀 I don’t know what she’s studying yet but it’s some obscenely difficult thing lol, she’s probably trying to get her PhD in like five years or something
Wanda I’m thinking doesn’t have a major decided on just yet, not because I don’t know but because she doesn’t know (I could be convinced otherwise). I feel like she’d grow into a bit of an adrenaline junkie and get a motorcycle and shit. She’s pan(?) with a heavy preference towards women. I’m most sold on her hair but least sold on her face shape, so I guess we’ll see. I have her personal life worked out pretty well but that’s kind of spoilery and not just about her, so I’m probably not going to share unless I post more for this. Maybe knowing that I still have things to tell will keep me invested and creating for this lol.
That’s the girls!!! Maybe over spring break I’ll do the rest of the class? Maybe not. It’s a mystery to everyone.
#the magic school bus#msb#magic school bus#phoebe terese#da hudson#keesha franklin#wanda li#my art#mine
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i’m watching the pilot of the o.c. and i’m gonna liveblog that shit bc why not
oh my god baby ryan atwood long ass time no see... all the fuckin heart eyes <3 <3 <3 <3
holy shit trey was a different actor in the pilot? damn who knew
SANDY MOTHERFUCKING COHEN...GREATEST IN THE GAME
ben kinda looks like a baby ryan gosling ngl
“Dude, I’m on your side...” iconic
sandy cohen’s eyebrows are legendary...drop the brow care queen
mrs. atwood’s outfit is a fucking mood
all the pent up angst of my teenage years have come flooding back w/this theme song...i could cry
KIKI COHEN EVERYBODY
“you’re endangering our home” wow how karen of you kiki smh
“he sleeps in the pool house” HE AINT A DOG KIRSTEN. but aww she’s getting him fresh sheets. k....slightly redeemed
“Who are you?” “Whoever you want me to be.” “Okay...” THE MOST ICONIC GODDAMN MEET CUTE OF THE CENTURY MOTHERFUCKERS.
i don’t remember mischa’s voice being this high.
k i’m putting the rest under a cut this is getting long
ugh the pool house...i spent all my best teenage years in that pool house
SETH...”Hey..” “Hey...” classic.
did they really just go sailing 2 hours after meeting...i love it.
oh my god i forgot seth named his boat after summer BEFORE ever having spoken to her. that’s prime incel material right there
why are the feds after jimmy again i forgot
ok yeah he’s knee deep in some fraud shit lmao.
“suck it queer” lol you stay classy too Luke
oh my god i forgot summer hit on ryan too damn boy is just making waves.
SWING SWING SWING FROM THE TANGLES OF MY HEART IS CRUSHED BY A FORMER LOVE...ugh...14 year old me is somewhere sharpie decorating her pink converse
oh my god HANDS UP this is ALL my gotdamn tween party playlists i’m crying
“Isn’t it like, so beautiful? The sand and the water?” this extra girl’s flirt tactic is out of this world
where is Julie Legend Cooper— omg speak of the devil THERE SHE IS “JImmyyyyY? Did you get my Froyo?!” iconic. ok you know what’s not iconic, pistachio froyo. who tf has pistachio froyo.
why is it always a running trope in this teen shows that the parents also talk about their “wild” days? Serena’s mom and Rufus talked about this NONSTOP on gg too. what even.
ugh RYAN + MARISSA FOREVER, other teen couples just don’t compare. truly romeo + juliet.
was that a kristin cavallari cameo
is summer trying to grope ryan. god i totally blanked how hot she was for him in this ep i thought she never had a minute for him from the beginning. awww seth is upset now, great.
THE SECRET’S OUT, RYAN IS FROM CHINO
i truly did not understand the implications of being from chino as a 14 year old
Here it comes...it’s coming... “WELCOME TO THE O.C., BITCH! THIS IS HOW IT’S DONE IN ORANGE COUNTY.” by beating up nerds and kids from chino, apparently.
omg mazzy star, did not remember.
should not be commending ryan in my head for not touching a passed out marrisa but these are the sad standards we have sunk to
“I was 22, i stank of patchouli, and I lived in the back of a mail truck.” I SWEAR TO GOD LILY VAN DER WOODSEN SAID THIS EXACT GODDAMN THING.
that map slap. ugh. best brothers-who-arent-brothers relationship in the entire damn television history
ugh that shot of Marissa receding as they drive away. ICONIC. LEGENDARY. UNFORGETTABLE
ugh this end music... more memories. damn that was good pls take me permanently back to Newport in 2004 where everything was beautiful and nothing hurt, and your biggest problem was some blonde douche bully named Luke, thanks.
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Re: Imaginary Friends bc I can't reply for some reason - WOW this was amazing. Re: Imaginary Friends bc I can't reply for some reason - I'm so invested in Haruka and her family, I just want her to get to be happy! Would honestly love to see the Michiru POV I bet it's fascinating. I'm so worried about you everyone here, amazing job, great atmosphere!
Thank you so much! I might post the old Michiru POV fic to the patreon, if there’s any interest there.
vassekocho said: This is sooooo good. I love Haruka’s inner voice, the small mistakes she makes, the ways she reminds herself she doesn’t belong (even if she clearly does). Mako and Mina cameos are great, I always enjoy seeing other girls in your AUs. The ending line sent chills down my spine, and as sudden as it is it’s also the perfect open ending to a horror story. Filing this away as one of my favorites.
Thank you! Haruka’s inner voice is really tough for me to write in, and this is by far the longest I’ve done it for, so it makes me so happy to know it worked for you
simplymindspace said: I shall most certainly post my thoughts on this when I have more time later today/nite. But just, DAMN DOC. JUST DAMN.
You’re the only one I can be this forward with BUT IF WORDS FAIL YOU A SKETCH IS FINE
skylineofspace said: I really love the way you build characters in your stories, by putting in details that are off from what one might think as the default of a situation, and then tying them together with a reveal. It works really well for both Haruka being adopted and for Michiru’s goal at the end.
Thank you so much!! When I started this AU, a lot of my “stock” solutions for Haruka and Michiru didn’t quite work, so in some ways it was really challenging to make my own conceptions of character hold against this setup, especially when we CAN’T see what Michiru is thinking or feeling. But I think I like what I ended up with!
Keyofjetwolf said: “and another half of my brain, the part that was the worst at math” ACTUAL LOL
THANK YOU I THOUGHT IT WAS PRETTY FUNNY
: MOUSE IS HERE TOOOOO (I now realize that Mouse has appeared a hell of a lot more than I realized, which I feel particularly daft about. STILL. MOUSE.)(Though maybe Ghost Mouse? I’m thinking very possibly. Did Michiru kill you, buddy?)
MOUSE ENDS UP A LOT OF PLACES ahaahah
GHOST MICHIRU IS LONELY AND HAS WANTS AND DOESN’T REALLY CARE WHETHER YOU SHARE THEM HARUKA I love that you’ve made her dangerous.
I was just thinking about Michiru, and what if she’d spent a hundred years watching and waiting, and finally saw something she wanted? Something she craved.
“She had the same look in her eyes, and they were even stranger in full color, like they’d seen everything, and wouldn’t tell you, they would just let you drown.” This is one of those lines you come across every now and then, where it’s just so fucking good you kind of want to scream. God.
THANK YOU SO MUCH I LIKED IT TOO
“She was talented and set to marry Mamoru Chiba” WELL I’D PROBABLY FLING MYSELF TOO HONEST
AHAHAH
“Of course we want to come to your giant palatial mansion, holy shit rich kid.” Mina was about as nice about this as usual. ANOTHER LOL
THANK
“Ow!” She threw off the sheet. “Oh my god, I’ve been hit by a popcorn ball but also inspiration. Let’s do some ouija board shit!” Oh my god Minako you fucking idiot, this is amazing, my anxiety just shot through the roof.
I AM SO GLAD. Horror and humor are the two hardest things to write, i think.
The glass moved again, not waiting for a hand. C..A..T..G..O..T…Y…O…U..R..T…O…N..G…U…E..? –Michiru finally gets to speak and this is what she says. MICHIRU KAIOH YOU ARE DEAD BUT YOU SHOULD ALSO BE ASHAMED
MICHIRU PLS
Man, I have so many ouija board shit, this really sticks with me. I’m glad you went there.
I LOVE TO SCARE YOU SO SO AM I
“Mina’s right. I’ll go into the basement for a pretty girl.” I love this. LOVE this. That despite everything, despite KNOWING better, Haruka’s convinced herself on some level that Michiru’s not dangerous. And it’s such a stupid fucking thing to do, but Haruka – EVEN MORE HERE PERHAPS THAN USUAL – as a goddamn martyr complex and wants to save the fucking world and everyone in it. And she, too, is lonely, and wants to love and be loved, and she wants a girlfriend and god, she’s just SO UNSPEAKABLY STUPID about this, but so understandably, and I adore it so fucking much. If there were one genre that would be yours, I think we’d agree it would be horror. And I love how the person is much at the root of it. Haruka’s being haunted, but it’s her own nature that’s really doing her in here. Those are ideas that are always so present your horror stories, and it makes them just so delicious.
THANK YOU. Yes I feel like horror is personal, and this moment, that sentence, is the linchpin of what I think this is for Haruka. That she can’t leave it alone. Despite everything she knows about MIchiru she feels BAD. She feels like she can save her. And that strange goodness that Michiru, if we could hear her side, could barely understand, well, that just makes her bolder.
“I don’t know what she wants. But I think it’s me.” WAIT THAT’S IT THAT CAN’T BE IT WHAT THE FUCK HOLLIGAY WHAT THE FUCK WHAT THE F
AND YET
Shadowsarefriendstoo said: This is a fucking masterpiece. Those layers add a depth to this otherwise fairly simple storyline in a way that sent actual chills crawling down my arms. Not just in the…spoopy scenes if you will- but those tiny emotions mentioned, the parallel and that lingering sense of insanity are so seamlessly woven throughout the writing. Gah, I just love it. Haunting beyond Michiru’s ghost who was being really fucking extra and creepy as well. Good god, she’s dead and she’s still the more dominant of the two.
Thank you so much!! This means a lot to me, and thank you for reblogging it!
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