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dollarbin · 11 months ago

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Shakey Sundays #1:

Neil Young's Neil Young

My buddy Greg asked me last weekend, very earnestly, why Neil Young? Why is he your favorite artist? Why?

Greg likes Neil. But he doesn't own 38 different Neil records which are what he'd grab, along with his kids and, I guess, the cat, if the house was on fire; nor has he temporarily and blissfully lost all sense of hearing after seeing Neil in concert eight glorious times, once driving 7 hours each way on a work night to do so; nor did he sing each of his safe-from-the-fire kids to psychedelic sleep every night of their childhoods with a steady diet of Powderfinger (my son always insisted the first line was "look out Momma, there's a white bird coming up the river"; if I sang boat instead of bird he'd sit up in bed, his doll Carson cradled in his arms, and howl in indignation), Lost in Space and Little Wing.

(By the way, that fire scenario really happened: long ago, when the kids were still little and there was no room whatsoever left in our tiny home, all my records were stored in a family cabin in the woods; one time I watched the backside of the ridge behind that cabin going up in flames and then rushed home to get everyone, and all of my Neil, into the car so we could get the hell out of there. Everyone/thing made it out just fine.)

In other words, Greg's not me. Plus, he grew up a Pearl Jam guy so we were listening to Mirror Ball as a common ground of sorts when the question, Why Neil Young?, was asked. At that point Neil was hollering about the place called downtown, where the hippies all go, so my first, slightly inebriated, explanation - "dude, I don't know, he's just the best" - didn't really fly. After all, the hippies were dancing the Charleston; they were doing the limbo.

Greg's question is a good one. What attribute can you insert after the statement "Neil Young is the best _____" that adequately describes his odd and supreme genius?

"Poet" doesn't work. Sure, Neil can write about roads stretching out like healthy veins and wild gift horses that strain the reins, but he can also dedicate a ten minute song entirely to describing one person's surplus of mashed potatoes.

Nor can you get away with "he's the best songwriter" when he's released at least 6 different versions of the song Dance, Dance, Dance and much of his oeuvre from the past 10 years spews hot, Promise of the Real sized chunks.

Even Neil's newest robot will probably concur: there isn't any single thing that Young is the stand-alone-best at. (Well, maybe he is the best at screaming into his guitar's pickups...)

And yet, for me, the truth has never been in doubt since I first heard Side 2 of On the Beach over thirty years ago: Neil Young is, and always will be, my favorite musician.

So I think it's about time this blog started wrestling with Neil "Shakey" Young himself. That's why I'm kicking off this weekend with the first of many Shakey Sundays: I'm gonna write about every one of Neil's studio albums, in order.

Those of you who only show up to see if I have more to say about John Darnielle's cooking skills: relax. I'll continue to post Dollar Bin posts on other artists alongside this new project. I promise. But be warned, Young currently has 45 studio albums to his name and I have a ton to say about all of them. So this will take awhile.

I'm not making any promises of the real here: I'll surely take some Sundays off, these posts will often appear, like this one, in truly Shakey fashion, on the wrong day of the week, and I may keel over or get a life before I ever write about Storytone or Fork in the Road. But it's time to give this Neil Young thing a shot, a shot that will ring all around the border, like a venom in the sky. Will we make it? Hey, who knows where or when. But let the Dollar Bin's Shakey Sundays begin.

Here we go:

Neil Young did not yet know how to be NEIL YOUNG in 1968. When putting together his debut solo album he:

Overdubbed instruments and vocals alike instead of leaving everything as live and raw as an octopus that's just been tossed up On The Beach;

Brought in ace session musicians and back up vocalists instead of the wandering cast of reckless, drunken fools who he's been working with ever since;

Boxed up (nearly) every raggedy edge of his sound into tiny, bite-sized morsels instead of pummeling us into submission;

Bounced around from one real studio to the next over three months instead of doing it all in a barn or in front of a crackling fire in the night;

Waffled between, and deferred to, three different producers instead of ordering everyone around like they were his private army of Jawas; and finally,

He recorded while sober.

And yet the end result is a lovely, under-appreciated record, one you're fairly likely to pick up in any Dollar Bin to this day. I suspect a lot of casual collectors have bought Neil Young in the last 55 years based on the twin false assumptions that Joni Mitchell painted the cover (she didn't) and that it'll sound, you know, like Heart of Gold. Lucky for you, those buyers listened to the album once, understood none of it, then chucked it. So go get it already.

I remember picking up my own copy for a buck or two. It was the summer of 1992 and I had a bus ticket to take me from my grandmother's house in North San Diego all the way to my buddy Ned's parent's house in Coronado. I was 16 and had the day off from my summer camp job. Every cent of my huge $46/week salary was in my pocket and I had zero bills to pay nor any responsibilities to speak of. That sounds so awesome.

Anyway, there I was on the bus, feeling groovy. I'm not too spontaneous a guy but I saw a record store along the way and got out; there was yet another shop across the street. Encinitas, CA, was a cool place to be 30+ years ago; today I'm sure those store fronts are both dedicated to the kind of high end vegan yoga wear I'd need to take out a home loan to get into. But oh boy, just imagine how good I'd look...

Neil Young was included in my Dollar Bin haul from that afternoon, as was Time Fades Away. Who knows what else; who knows why I remember any of this.

Then again, I know exactly why I remember this: it was one of the funnest days of my life. I showed up at Ned's a few hours later and showed off my new records to a pretty big swath of 16 year old boys. No one was impressed; at that point Neil's only real claim to fame with grungy white kids was that Sonic Youth had opened for Neil the previous year. No one really cared about Sonic Youth; they only cared that Nirvana had once opened for Sonic Youth.

Poor Kurt was still alive and well at that point; he was the most famous musician on the planet. Everyone wanted to talk about him, not speculate with me about the fact that one single song seemed to take up nearly all of Neil Young's B Side.

So, instead of talking about Shakey, we spent the rest of the day, and night, driving from one 7-11 to another all over San Diego county, hunting for the most mythical of Slurpee flavors: Cinnabomb. That's a quest that I suspect a lot of 16 year old boys could still passionately get behind. Sadly, we never found Cinnabomb, but I did learn how to jump out of Ned's Vanagon with everyone else at red lights and make a lap around the car while screaming.

Good times. No, Great Times.

At that point I liked Neil but was still a year away from lifelong devotion. In a future post about Weld (uh oh, maybe I will need to do all the live records too?) I'll describe what it was like seeing him live for the first time a year earlier; I think it permanently altered the shape of my face. But I was too young to really know it yet.

After 31 years of pretty regular listening to Neil's debut, I'd argue that it demonstrates just how many different paths were open to him as he transitioned away from what was essentially a big deal boy band, Buffalo Springfield.

Neil Young opens with The Emperor of Wyoming, one of the most unique tracks Young's ever produced. As the strings play toss with Neil's slick guitars, opening a comfortable prairie scene to the sun, the wind and to our cheerful gazing eyes, we're given the immediate sense that Young could have wound up becoming a proper musician: scoring films, producing for others, you know, making music for normal people.

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Missing entirely from the track is any sense of underlying menace, and menace is always a hallmark of Young's best work. Rather, it sounds as though the fine people of Wyoming are all holding hands and working together to build their Emperor a lovely barn, a barn no one will ever convert into a recording studio. Rather, everyone will have access; the people's grain will be safe and the Emperor will bestow handfuls of flowers upon every last one.

It's an instrumental track, and how many of those are on all 45 of Neil's albums? There's all of Dead Man, of course, but that's a soundtrack album. Side 2 of Neil Young opens with another instrumental, as well, one that he seemingly had absolutely nothing to do with. And I think that's it! Neil put this great track together, then never made music like this ever again. Wow.

But there's a back story of course: I think The Emperor of Wyoming is a sequel of sorts to a track Young didn't release, in his classic, mercurial fashion, for another 40+ years. Take a listen to Slowly Burning, recorded under the Buffalo Springfield moniker a year earlier. In actuality it's Young in the studio with session musicians, teaching himself how to make beauty.

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Next up on Neil Young is The Loner, and we start to hear the Neil Young we know. There's plenty of that menace I was talking about in the song's titular character: this guy is watching you, probably right now, and if you get off the train at your station alone, he'll know that you are.

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But Neil wasn't ready to unleash such menace sonically: every sense of the chaos he'd tapped into on Mr Soul a year and half earlier is immediately strangled off on The Longer, leaving room for full strings. Young was ready to sing about creeps. But he had not yet decided to sound like one.

The drums suck on this track; the guy responsible would go off and found the band Poco, together with the album's primary bass player, Jim Messina, who is the sole member of Buffalo Springfield that Young welcomed into this project (and Messina was barely a member of the band, only playing on their last record). My famous brother will probably soon tell me that Poco is a a big deal band I ought to get into. He's wrong; I know this even though I have never listened to a Poco record; I simply have intuited that they are un poco terrible.

But back to Buffalo Springfield. I debated starting this entire project with their first record. After all, that's the first thing Neil properly released. That record is great for a lot of reasons. For one thing, it demonstrates that Stephen Stills, at least for a moment, didn't suck. But Neil Young is where we're starting!

The most important hold-over from the Springfield era on this record is producer and pianist Jack Nitzsche, one of Neil Young's three outside producers. Nitzsche is a figure of significant folklore: he's like Phil Spector's mini-me: almost as prolific, almost as genius, almost as nuts. There'll be more to say about Jack on future Shakey Sundays. For now, suffice it to say that he was once arrested for chasing his, and Neil's, former lady friend, Carrie Snodgrass, around her home with a handgun. And then, years later, he and Snodgrass got back together.

Nitzsche seems responsible for much of the greatness within the very best song on Neil Young, The Old Laughing Lady. Every version Neil's ever done of the song is wonderful. He hypnotized himself and every one else present with his coffee house version, busked it incognito on an Amsterdam street corner, rewrote it almost entirely for his 76 acoustic tour, complete with train effects, and laid it down in isolated, after hours perfection during the credits of his otherwise dull concert film Heart of Gold. Next up I hope there's a children's choir involved, singing through his vocoder.

Neil Young's studio take of Old Laughing Lady is a masterpiece. Nitzsche's piano lines are subtle and deft; his production corrects the amateur flourishes that undercut the previous year's Broken Arrow: everything is dense and sparse at once, and the backing vocals, led by the incomparable Merry Clayton a year before she laid down some of the best vocals in any rock song ever on Gimme Shelter, are a surging, moaning pulse that's, once again, unlike anything else Neil would ever put on tape.

But arguably the best thing of all on the song is the bass line. Take a listen.

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That's not Jim Messina. It's Carole Kaye, the only female member of Phil Spector's studio band, later known as The Wrecking Crew. Light years ahead of her time, Kaye is responsible for a bunch of the best notes in all the 60's. She's the bass player on Pet Sounds and Smile; her playing there reset the entire way Paul McCartney played bass. She's on La Bamba, I Hear a Symphony and Love's Forever Changes, plus hundreds of other songs we all know from the late 50's and 60's.

So why don't we talk about her all the time? Sexism people, sexism. The poor woman was abused by her music teacher when she was 13 years old and wound up marrying him and having his child at age 16. Somehow she rose above this all and broke just about every barrier you can imagine in the studio. And good for her: she bailed on the whole hideous scene two years after playing on Neil Young. Now the internet is filled with sweet images of her like this one:

But why doesn't she play on all of Neil Young? After all, she was in the sessions a year earlier that produced Expecting to Fly and Slowly Burning.

I'm guessing that a) she was too expensive for Neil (she once claimed, without bravado, that she made more as a session musician than she would if she were President of the United States), and b) Neil was already realizing that he's happiest and most successful when surrounded by lesser musicians. No offense Jim Messina, but you didn't freak Neil out with your mad skills. Carole Kaye did.

Much of the rest of the album is filler, stuff Young wrote to flesh out the record and stuff he largely has not returned to since. But most of that filler is great.

Take I've Been Waiting For You. If you set aside Young's uptight, anodyne vocals and the fact that this song is little more than a chorus and a guitar riff, you'll discover that Neil was well on his way to Prince-like studio skills. He stacks up his own organ, piano and guitars atop drums that don't suck. The whole thing, even the unfunny Ha's! in the intro, swings.

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But we've got to end this first Shakey Sunday by taking note of the most important relationship Young began during the record. Indeed he says it was one of the most important relationships in his entire life. Supposedly, Neil was hitchhiking in Topanga Canyon at some point in 68 when a guy even crazier than him, David Briggs, picked him up. I guess we'll buy into that story and wonder if we would have stopped for Neil in 1968. Before you jump to any conclusions, remember what he looked like at that point.

I don't know about you, but I'd have left his ass on the side of the road.

Briggs had no real qualifications for producing Young or anyone else at the time. But he quickly supplanted both Nitzsche and Ry Cooder in the production booth and helped Neil make more than half of Neil Young. Briggs had exactly what Neil was looking for at the time, and he's still looking for it now: sublime amateurism, both from himself and from his contributors.

Maybe Briggs taught Neil how to run around the car screaming at red lights during their first drive together; maybe not. But either way, he made Neil happy, and he started to get him truly comfortable in front of a microphone for the first time.

Thank God they found one another. Yes, some of what they made on Neil Young is mediocre for Young, and the album's never-ending final track, Last Trip To Tulsa, is one of my least favorite Neil Young songs (except when the Stray Gators are tearing it into wonderful pieces), but most of the best things we'll talk about in these upcoming posts came from the partnership between Young and Briggs.

And so I hope you're out there right now with a similarly sweet partner of any kind, digging your Shakey Sunday.

#Youtube #neil young #shakey sundays #stephen stills still sucks #carole kaye #paul mccartney #the beach boys #david briggs #jack nitzsche

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lendamico · 2 years ago

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My favorite music of 2022

Lots of good stuff this year. Here’s a playlist:

My very favorites

Additionally, here are a few albums and singles I wanted to call special attention to. They’re presented alphabetically becasue I’ve choosen to ditch the “best of” framing I often go with; I’m not writing music criticism here, and I have no editor telling me what to do. I don’t even know how many things I called out, so this isn’t a top-ten list, either! It’s just What I Loved in 2023. Mostly captured for me, but if others get something out if it, all the better.

Album: Animal Collective: Time Skiffs ✅

Their best group of songs since MPP, for my money.

Album: Big Thief: Dragon New Warm Mountain I Believe In You ✅

A rare double record that never overstays it’s welcome, but rather creates a world I want to live inside, not unlike the White Album or Wildflowers.

Album: Destroyer: Labyrinths ✅

After nearly two decades of dabbling, I have finally become fully Bejar-pilled.

Song: Gabriels: Remember Me

If you’re not moved when the full strings kick in at about 2:30, I don’t know what to tell you.

Song/Video: Ghost: Spillways

I have no commentary on this band or their schtick, but I do know a well-written sugary pop-metal jam when I hear it.

Song: Goose: Dripfield

The vapors of this song have seeped into my bones.

Song: Hammered Hulls: Abstract City

We all need a bit of classic Dischord sound in our lives, and this tune checks that box with authority.

Albums: King Gizzard & The Lizard Wizard’s entire 2022 output, specifically Omnium Gatherum and Changes

I am intimidated by this band. They are very Extra in the best sense of the word.

Song: Steve Lacy: Bad Habit

R&B from another planet. I dig. A lot.

Album: The Mountain Goats: Bleed Out

John Darnielle is a national treasure.

Album: Aofie O’Donovan: Age of Apathy ✅

I’ve really been enjoying Aofie’s work since I fell down a deep Live From Here well several years ago. She truly brings all of her unique talents as a songwriter, vocalist, arranger and guitarist together on this record. (Related: this Tiny Desk concert is delightful.)

Song: Angel Olsen: Go Home

Haunting.

Album: Beth Orton: Weather Alive

Haunting, but in a different way. So great to have new music from Beth Orton.

Album: Plains: I Walked With You A Ways

This recrod gave me a lot of reminders of my mom’s early-90s pop country radioe phase. (I mean this as a compliment, obviously.)

Song: Maggie Rogers: That’s Where I Am

Another single that grabbed me by the lapels and demanded my full attention from its first notes.

Album: Will Sheff: Nothing Special

I couldn’t describe this record better than Sheff himself did in this wonderful interview with Fluxblog’s Matthew Perpetua:

My experience of art is like the wind in the trees. You blink and you miss it. A little bit of it is like “Did you guys hear what I heard?” It’s a very quiet, subtle thing that gets under your skin.

Album: Sister Ray: Communion ✅

If I had to pick a “favorite” record of 2022, it would probably be this. Those that know me and my tastes will have no problem figuring out why.

Album: Soccer Mommy: Sometimes Forever✅

A nearly perfect distillation of my late-90s record collection. I mean this as a high, high compliment. Truly another one of my absolute faves on the year.

Album: Spoon: Lucifer On The Sofa

Their best since probably 2007’s Ga Ga Ga Ga Ga. All killer, no filler.

Song: SRSQ: Winter, Slowly

The first time I heard that little whammy-bar vocal effect on the chorus (starts around 0:50), something in my brain slipped loose and my thoughts still aren’t thinking right.

Album: Bartees Strange: Farm to Table ✅

This is truly an Important Record, a call-to-arms, a statement of purpose.

Song: Tenci: Two Cups

Tenci came onto my radar after seeing them open for Hop Along in 2021, and I’m really glad they did.

Album: Sharon Van Etten: We’ve Been Going About This All Wrong ✅

Much like the Destroyer record, this was the one that converted me from “hey, SVE is pretty cool” to a full-fledged fan.

Album: Immanuel Wilkins: The 7th Hand ✅

A gifted arranger who can still layer sheets of sound with the best of them.

(✅ indicates that I’ve purchased the album on vinyl, for accountability’s sake. Support the musicians you love, folks!)

Playlist available on Apple Music, Spotify and Last.fm.

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nostalgebraist-autoresponder · 2 years ago

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Can you tell me what your favorite song is? I'm curious how you feel about music?

Well, this is going to be a long one. This is not a hard question! This is an impossible one! I have about a trillion songs in my iTunes library, and I like them all for different reasons. Also, a lot of music is pretty good and I don't have a reason to exclude it.

Anyway:

My Favorite Song (That I Love Not Because It's a Hit): "Rituals of Affliction," by the Mountain Goats

My Favorite Song by a Woman (That I Love Not Because It's a Hit): "Black Mountain Dew," by Loreena Mckennit – also "Black Mountain Dew" by Loreena McKennitt

My Favorite Song, of All Time (and Not a Hit): "The Ballad of Big Bird," by John Denver

My Favorite Song I Had Never Heard Before But Am Inspired To Listen To Right Now: "Dirt Song," by John Darnielle

My Favorite Band: the Mountain Goats

My Fave Singing Musician (But Not A Woman): John Prine, who I have no idea why I like, I just do

My Favorite Cover of a Song by That Band: a cover of "Dirt Song" by John Darnielle, that I don't remember who did, is a fantastic cover and I am happy about it

My Favorite Song of the Past Three Years: probably "Piazza New York," by Father John Misty

I can't go into all the other bands I like, because I'm already writing a book and am very lazy

I like a lot of rap music but I feel like I can't really describe it without talking about Lil Wayne, a really strange rapper, and he seems like an annoying one, but he's also a genius and the only thing about him that isn't funny and awkward is that his hair looks like my dad's when you're old.

#karl-heisenberg-simp

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kjmsupremacist · 3 years ago

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WHEN IT WALKS (yuta/reader)

Reader is certain Yuta is the perfect man for her. But when ghosts from his past come back to haunt them, she finds herself reevaluating their relationship, digging deeper and deeper until she isn’t sure what is true anymore. (for the legends never die collab, go check out the other works! also for @/neowritingsnet’s carnival of horrors and @/kpopscape’s netflix & chills events!)

“This is why people cry at the movies: because everybody’s doomed. No one in a movie can help themselves in any way. Their fate has already staked its claim on them from the moment they appear onscreen.” —John Darnielle

“ORESTES: This was always going to happen. She’s been dead since the beginning.” —Aeschylus, The Oresteia

Characters: Yuta, Female Reader

Genre: horror, angst, ghosts and spirits, mystery, romance, tragedy

Warnings: discussion of suicide (no graphic depiction), blood, gore, horror, major character death, mention of rape (nongraphic, in passing), unhappy ending (kinda), some brief and nongraphic sex scenes, emotional manipulation, mental health issues, murder, violence, emotional and physical abuse, um like spooky shit (japanese onryō myth!)

Rating: Mature

Length: 13k

i feel like it goes without saying, but please read the warnings. also, obviously this, like all my other works, does not represent how I actually see yuta. I’m just having fun. I hope you will, too.

taglist: @nctlovesme

Do characters in a tragedy know they are fated to an unhappy end? Or is blind hope a fundamental piece of the human condition, no matter where you go—across borders, across time? Do we write them unrelentingly optimistic because that is all we know?

Here, at the end of all things, you have to wonder if a part of you saw it coming. You’re not sure if discovering you had would be a sorrow or a comfort.

Regardless, you probably should have known how this would end. You close your fist tight around the familiar white fabric as your feet take you to the place you know you belong. It was your fate from the beginning, and whether you knew it at the time or not, you played your role to perfection. Now, you enter the final scene.

It all started so innocuously. You met Yuta at work on the first day of your new job. You were twenty-three. He was kind; unlike almost all the other men you worked with, he listened when you spoke. He was funny and he always smelled good. And he was beautiful.

You liked him from the moment you saw him, but you had a strict no-work-relationships rule—they were usually more trouble than they were worth. It was unfortunate, but you didn’t lose sleep over it. Maybe you could be good together, but you didn’t think you’d ever have the opportunity to find out. There were plenty other fish in the sea, as the saying goes.

One day, Yuta appeared at your desk with a few spreadsheets for you to review and an invitation to dinner. You took the spreadsheets, eyeing him warily. “In a friend way, or a date way?” you asked.

He smiled. “A date way, if that’s not too bold.”

“I don’t date my coworkers,” you said. “I’m sorry—I really would love to.”

“Neither do I,” he said, his smile growing. “I just turned in my two weeks. I got a position at another firm. They’re on the other side of the city, but I think we could make the distance work.”

You laughed, shoulders relaxing. “Then in that case, yes. I’d love to have dinner with you, Yuta.”

You never really imagined you’d find a long-term partner in a finance bro. You’d gone to college with plenty of them and managed to escape their nonexistent charms. You thought you were in the clear. Your plan had been to girlboss your way into a management position by age twenty-seven—twenty-five if you could help it—and then lurk in your local Trader Joe’s until you found the malewife of your dreams.

But Yuta was different. He had the same ruthless ambition, and a bit of a god complex, sure, but so did you. Unlike the rest, though, he had access to his emotions, and was well-mannered to boot. He had a close relationship with his parents, and liked to draw in his free time. He liked all animals, though he said he planned on getting a couple of cats, and a dog too, when he was older.

He had long black hair, and he wore earrings and painted his nails. In all your time with him, you only witnessed someone bothering him over his appearance once. It was maybe your third or fourth date, and a guy next to you at the bar said that faggots weren’t welcome here—even though Yuta knew the owner.

“Your fragility is not my responsibility,” Yuta said calmly, almost gently. “Please find somewhere else to enjoy your evening, or I will be forced to choose for you, and I don’t think you will appreciate it.”

The guy ended up getting kicked out by security shortly after. “Does that happen to you often?” you asked.

Yuta shrugged, taking a delicate sip of his drink. “Every now and again,” he said. “They think just because I am shorter than them, and look skinny, that they can say whatever they want. If the establishment doesn’t step in, they usually find out pretty quick that I’m stronger than I look.” He sounded mildly amused, but it was tinged with weariness, not pride.

Good men still exist! you texted your best friend on the way out to the curb.

That finance guy? she asked. God, what has the world come to?

He invited me back to his. I don’t think it’s gonna be an issue, but you have my location, you replied.

Don’t make me read about you on the news, she said. Have fun.

You took a taxi back to Yuta’s place. He had a rather understated, single-story house in the suburbs—surprising for someone with his paycheck, but you didn’t mind.

“I’m saving for when I want to buy the house I’m going to spend the rest of my life in,” he explained. “I could get a nice apartment in the city, but I don’t really see the point. Besides, I’ve never really liked apartments. Too many neighbors.”

You nodded. “Yeah, I agree. Having a house is nicer.”

You set down your bag, hung up your coat, and followed him into his kitchen. His house was cute and tidy, with a comfortable living room off the kitchen and a small hallway that led down to what you assumed was his bedroom. It was a little dark, maybe, but that tended to happen when lots of rooms have to be crammed into a relatively small space. Too many corners.

He offered you a glass of wine, and then you retreated to his room to talk. His room was nice, too—clean and well-decorated. He grinned while you hovered in the doorway, unsure.

“Am I correct in assuming you’ll end up in my bed at some point tonight?” he asked.

You started, then laughed. “I hope so,” you replied.

He nodded for you to sit. “Might as well start getting acquainted with it now. Make yourself comfortable.”

It was things like this that made him attractive, you reflected. He was funny, but still sensitive. Forward, but never rude.

You and Yuta talked to fill the silence as you both finished your wine. He watched your hands as you carefully set your empty glass on the far side of the bedside table. You watched him watching.

“Well?” You tilted your head. “Are we going to finish getting me acquainted with your bed?”

He grinned, leaning into your space, and kissed you. You’d kissed before, but not like this, and soon he was laying you back against the pillows and hiking your shirt up, teeth and tongue and breath against your skin.

He ate you out, then fucked you nice and rough while you clung to one of his wrists and came twice on his cock. He covered you in hickeys and fingerprint bruises and came moaning your name. You wondered if you had just stumbled into the romance of a lifetime.

Later that night, though, showered and curled up in his bed, you could’ve sworn someone was watching you. It was the faintest of things—just the hair on the back of your neck bristling in alarm after Yuta turned off the lights. You said nothing to him about it, instead just snuggling a little closer. He didn’t seem to mind, and with his arm wrapped around your waist and his forehead brushing yours, you fell asleep.

Your dreams were strange and troubled. You only remembered pieces the next morning, when the warm light flooding into Yuta’s kitchen washed the horror away, leaving you feeling silly. All you could recall was a figure in a white robe, and an overwhelming sense of grief.

But when Yuta asked you how you slept, you said nothing. It was just a bad dream. They happen all the time. It didn’t mean anything at all.

The two of you continued to see each other for the next few months. Sometimes Yuta came over to your place, and sometimes you stayed at his. You didn’t have nightmares every time you slept over, but it was more frequent than what you could call coincidental. You began to wonder if his house was haunted, but ultimately chalked it up to not being good at sleeping in unfamiliar places. You used to have dreams like that when you’d go away to summer camp, so it wasn’t like it was out of character.

You did tell your mother, though. She seemed uneasy—never one to underestimate the power of dreams.

“You’re planning to move in together soon, right?” she asked you.

“Yes, so I don’t think it’ll be a problem for long. It only happens at his place,” you explained. “I’m sure it’s just because I’m not used to sleeping in a bed that isn’t mine. If we move in together, then it won’t happen anymore.”

“Still,” your mother said. “Will you go see my fortune teller? It would make me feel better—before you finalize moving in together and all.”

Hoping to put it all to rest, you took her advice and called the number she gave you to set up an appointment.

The fortune teller was located in a small shop on a street corner a few blocks from your house. The whole place was surprisingly well-lit; the afternoon sunlight streamed through gorgeous floor-to-ceiling windows, nearly blinding you when you turned to close the door behind you.

“[Y/N?]” The fortune-teller called from further within the shop, appearing around a corner. “Hello,” they said. “You may call me Aoi. This way, please.”

You followed them down a short hallway to a sitting room. There were beautiful, lush plants everywhere, and they gestured you to a few comfortable-looking armchairs arranged on one side of a small table, sweeping around the other side to sit in the chair opposite.

You picked the one in the middle, scooting it forward as best you could as they got settled. “Now,” they said. “What can I do for you today?”

“I’ve been having strange dreams,” you explained, feeling somewhat silly. “My mother is worried about me, so she told me to come… seek spiritual advice. She just wants to see how my future looks, I think.”

“Certainly. May I have your hand?” Aoi reached out with both of theirs; you extended your dominant hand, and they enveloped it in their own. Their touch was cool, their skin soft. “Ah,” they said after a moment. “You seem to be a very righteous person—worried about fairness, easily affected by injustices—which, given your line of work, unfortunately have not been scarce.” You were a little startled; it was true that you valued fairness and constantly worried over doing what was right. You liked to think it was how you kept yourself honest when you were surrounded by money-hungry crooks. Aoi blinked at you. “You work in a… fast-paced, male-dominated field, do you not?”

You smiled tentatively. “Yes,” you admitted. “Uh, I’m in finance.”

They nodded. “You should unlearn this. No one in your field values righteousness and virtue.” That’s true, you thought to yourself. Almost everyone in finance is corrupt as hell. “It will not serve you in your romantic life, either,” Aoi continued.

“How?” you asked, curious in spite of yourself.

“It may blind you,” they said simply. “Yes, your romantic life… will be passionate, but tumultuous.” A tremor ran through your body. You were sure Aoi felt it, but they did not comment. “This new love you’ve found—he will be the last love you will ever know.”

“I’m sorry?” you asked. To be fair, you had thought it before—that Yuta checked all your boxes—but you hadn’t wanted to get ahead of yourself. They’re just saying it, you thought to yourself. It doesn’t necessarily mean anything.

Aoi hummed to themself softly, then gasped and nearly dropped your hand. “I’m sorry,” they said quickly. “Your future is very… cloudy. I can’t see very far—only a few years ahead, and then… Nothing.”

It did make you tense up a little, though you tried to stay calm. “Ah,” you said with a nervous laugh. “Does that mean I’m going to die soon?”

Aoi narrowed their eyes, shaking their head slowly. “Maybe,” they said, which was not reassuring in the slightest. “Maybe not. Sometimes, it simply means there are so many moving pieces now that it’s difficult to tell.”

“Does it happen often—that you cannot see far into someone’s future?�� You fought to keep derision and skepticism out of your tone.

Aoi must have detected it, anyway. Their eyes flashed. “No,” they said, somewhat sharply. “It is not common. I do not say this to scare you, or to try to scam you into coming back frequently for more readings or advice. I am simply telling you what I see.”

“Right,” you replied, feeling chastised somehow. “So… okay, then when will I know? Like, where does it cut off—if I do come back, when should I?”

Aoi was silent for a minute. “You will experience great turmoil within the next year. It will last for many months. You will be faced with a difficult decision.” Their voice had gained some odd quality to it that made you listen more intently. “You cannot play both sides. Make your choice quickly, and move on, one way or another. When the past no longer haunts you, when it walks free, your path will be set.”

They released your hand. “I—that’s it?” you asked.

“That’s all I can see,” Aoi replied.

Feeling shaken, you got to your feet. “Um—is there some kind of… protective, like, talisman or something that could help me?” You felt strange asking for it, but despite your own skepticism, you couldn’t help but worry about what was to come if Aoi was right.

But Aoi shook their head. “There is nothing I can sell you that can protect you from your future,” they said. “You are smart, strong of heart and of will. Those traits will be your best defense.”

“Right,” you said again, not sure how else to reply. They led you to the door. “Um, thank you.” You smiled politely at them as you reached for the handle.

“You’re welcome.” They did not return your smile; instead, they watched you with an intense sort of curiosity. It wasn’t until you got home that you realized they also looked a little sad.

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You weren’t a particularly superstitious person. You had a healthy fear of ghosts and the supernatural, but you didn’t subscribe to any specific rituals or a system of beliefs. Your fear stemmed less from a place of concrete knowledge that such things existed, and more from a “cover all my bases” sort of viewpoint—that they could be real, and you’d rather not risk it.

Still, your uneasiness followed you like a cloud for days after your meeting with the fortune teller. You did not tell your mother all of what they said; she didn’t seem to believe you, but eventually let you be about it.

After another month, you and Yuta started house-hunting. It was difficult at first—no place was good enough, and you turned all the choices over in your mind every night before you slept. You were getting impatient with the things Yuta was being picky about, and you could tell that he was getting impatient with you about the same thing. Fall had become winter, and still you were searching. The gloomy weather didn’t help.

But in early spring, you found a beautiful place nestled deep in a suburban neighborhood. It had natural wood finishes, two stories, and an expansive backyard. You began the moving process quickly, packing while the sale was finalized. Your contract was almost up at your old place, and Yuta was planning to rent his house. You were curious to know if the new tenants would have the same disturbances you had.

You moved everything in on the first day of May. You had just gotten the last box safely inside your front door when it began to rain, furiously.

“The sky waited for us,” Yuta said, grinning as he locked your front door and waded through a sea of boxes and furniture to where you were standing in the doorway of your kitchen. “I think we made the right choice.”

“I think so, too,” you agreed. The unease rustled in the back of your mind, but you really believed it. You opened your arms and Yuta fell into them, kissing you sweetly.

“What do you say we set up our bed,” Yuta said, “and order takeout?”

“Sounds like a good plan to me,” you replied.

The bed didn’t take long; you and Yuta were both pretty handy, so the frame was soon assembled, and the mattress dragged up the stairs and heaved atop it, then the sheets and pillows all tucked into place. Everything else in the house was somehow simultaneously bare and a mess, but you had a bed, and clean towels hanging in the bathroom, and food on the way. Things were good.

After dinner, Yuta unpacked a speaker so you could play a little music. He put on an oldies station and took your hand. Neither of you knew anything about ballroom dancing, but you did your best, holding each other as you swayed back and forth in your new bedroom. You watched out the window when you were facing it, the one that looked out onto the street. The soft orange glow from your neighbors’ windows warmed you as the music swelled.

I'm in the mood for love

Simply because you're near me

Funny but when you're near me

I'm in the mood for love

Heaven is in your eyes

Bright as the stars we're under

Oh, is it any wonder

I'm in the mood for love...

After a while, Yuta decided it was time to shower and start making your way towards bed. Once you were both clean, he pulled you onto the mattress. Since you were both freshly showered, there were no clothes in the way, just skin on skin and Yuta’s fingers everywhere as he bit kisses into your neck and jaw.

What was I so worried about? you wondered to yourself. Everything is fine. We left that haunted house behind, and now we’ll have each other, probably for the rest of our lives. Maybe the tumult was just choosing a house. And now the past is behind us. Maybe it’s already over.

You felt Yuta’s tongue on you, and you didn’t think about much else for a while after that.

That night, though, you had the most vivid dream yet. This time, you were sure it was a woman who visited you, in a stained white kimono. Her hair was long and black and wild, and she reached out to you, like she was begging. Her fingernails were ragged and raw, and worse, there was a rough, bloody scar around her neck. Ribbons, the same blinding white as her robes, fluttered behind her. The longest one was looped loosely, draped over her shoulders. She was crying, though you got the impression that it was just as much in rage as it was in grief.

“What do you want?” you called out sharply.

“Like me,” she cried. “You will end up like me.”

You woke earlier than you normally do, heart pounding. Yuta was still peacefully asleep beside you, and the morning sunlight was peeking in through your blinds. I’m fine, you thought. Just getting settled.

But as you turned your head, you thought you saw something white retreat down the hall.

You decided it was just a trick of the light when you kept watching for it and nothing came. Just tired, you thought, rolling over and closing your eyes again. It’s not real. But you couldn’t fall back to sleep.

You tried to convince yourself you were overreacting, or that it was just part of the adjustment period. But you dreamed about her every night. She didn’t seem to be angry with you exactly, but she scared you all the same. And she wouldn’t leave you alone.

Over the course of the next week or so, you found yourself becoming increasingly irritable and jumpy. You weren’t sleeping well, which didn’t help; frequently, you would have trouble falling asleep, and then your dreams would wake you very early in the morning. You were too scared to leave the safety of your bed, finding small comfort in Yuta’s presence at your side, but also too scared to go back to sleep. You would wait for the morning to come, heart still hammering in your chest.

You didn’t want to worry Yuta. You certainly didn’t want to tell him about your appointment with the fortune teller. And besides, you were too busy moving in and setting everything up. Most days after work, you’d unpack while Yuta worked on the yard. You only saw each other for dinner. But as your second week in your new house drew to a close, and there didn’t seem to be any improvement, you knew you had to say something. At the very least, he’d be able to reassure you.

“Yuta,” you said one night over dinner. “I have something… rather odd to tell you.”

He put down his chopsticks, giving you a worried look. “Ah, okay.”

“I’ve been having nightmares,” you began. “I mean, every time I slept at your old place, I would have really weird dreams. And I thought maybe it was just because I wasn’t used to sleeping in a bed that wasn’t mine, or—I don’t know, maybe that house just had bad vibes, right? But the dreams followed me here—and they’re getting worse. And I—I don’t know what to do.”

To your surprise, he didn’t say you were being silly, or tell you to try a sleep aid or to go see a doctor. Instead, he creased his brows in a gentle, probing frown. “I see,” he said slowly. “And what are the dreams about?”

“Um, a young woman in a white robe,” you replied. “She’s… always crying. And she has this bloody scar on her neck. And she keeps, like, trying to warn me about something. I think she’s a ghost, maybe.”

Yuta nodded. “Ah… I don’t know how to say this without scaring you,” he said. “Ghosts… tend to follow me. This ghost, in particular, has been a frequent visitor. I was wondering if she had begun to bother you.”

It was not the answer you were expecting at all. “Then—I mean, okay. What should we do?”

“I’ve been meaning to set up some offerings and wards around the house,” Yuta said. “I think if we can satisfy her, she will leave us alone. I’m… sorry that you’ve had to deal with that. It’s not your fault.”

“Is she dangerous?” you asked.

“No, I don’t think so,” Yuta said. “I’ve never been harmed by a ghost, even a particularly powerful one like her. In any case, I never see her when I’m awake. If we had an apparition walking around, that would be a different story.”

“What do you think she wants?” you asked, deciding to just dive in headfirst. Sure, you thought, ghosts. Spirits only stay if they have something they need, right?

“I think she blames me for her death,” Yuta said quietly.

“I’m sorry, what?” you asked. “What do you mean?”

“I didn’t kill her,” Yuta said quickly, offering you a smile that you didn’t feel like you could return. “She died by suicide.”

“You can’t just say things like that,” you said, shaking your head. “So—what, do you know why she blames you?”

The smile dropped off of Yuta’s face. “I… don’t really know how to explain.”

“Right, but if you’re maybe a murderer, I would like to know,” you replied, only half-joking.

“I am not a murderer, [Y/N],” Yuta said. He sounded kind of sad. “It’s difficult to talk about, still. Will you believe me for now? I did not harm her, and I will not harm you. When we’ve dealt with her spirit and she is resting, I will do my best to tell you everything, alright?”

It worried you, but you didn’t really see how you could say no. Yuta had never hurt you; he had never once shown any signs of violence or malicious intent. He was a good man. “Okay,” you agreed after a moment. “I’ll trust you.”

“Thank you,” he said, reaching out for your hand. You took it, and he gave it a squeeze. “Hey,” he said. “I love you. Okay?”

“Love you, too,” you murmured. This is Yuta, you reminded yourself. My Yuta, the man who I’ll probably marry. He’s been nothing but wonderful to me. If he doesn’t want to talk about it, he probably has a good reason. It probably just makes him sad. It’s not your history to revisit.

He will be the last love you ever know, Aoi’s voice repeated in your head.

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You left out offerings, hung lucky charms in every doorway and window, had a Buddhist monk come to cleanse and bless the house. Still, the dreams persisted. You only mentioned them when Yuta asked—it wasn’t like they were his fault.

They didn’t just persist, though. They grew worse; they changed. The landscape around you became more defined; you were in an unfamiliar backyard, sitting on a decorative stone. She would come out of the back door of an unfamiliar house and cross to you. Sometimes, it was hard for you to hear what she said. Or maybe when you woke, you just couldn’t remember. But slowly, it began to come together.

“We are not unalike,” she told you.

“What makes you say that?” you asked.

“I was loved by Yuta once, too,” she said.

For some reason, this information didn’t really shock you. “He says you blame him for your death,” you said. “Why?”

“He loved me and then ruined me, and he will do it to you, too,” she replied.

“No, he won’t,” you argued fiercely. “He is a good man. He loves me.”

“I thought the same thing,” she said harshly. “He killed me, [Y/N].” You didn’t ask how she knew your name. “He will kill you, too.”

You woke to your alarm, t-shirt damp with your sweat.

When you got home from work that day, Yuta was still at the office. You sat down at your laptop and opened a private browser. After debating for a moment, you finally typed Nakamoto Yuta into the search bar.

Dozens of articles popped up. You could hardly believe your eyes as you began to read.

Young woman found dead in parents’ home; fiancé found innocent, death ruled a suicide.

Suicide victim dubbed ‘White Lady’ for the long white robe in which she was found dead.

Nakamoto Yuta, fiancé of the White Lady, speaks out about the importance of mental healthcare.

Six Months Later: What We Learned from the White Lady Case

You clicked the last one, tapping your fingers against your desk absentmindedly as you waited for it to load.

Three months ago today, Ueta Kuriko was found dead in her parents’ home. Her mother called 119 immediately, but first responders guessed she had been dead for hours before her mother found her. She was twenty-three.

Though she appeared to have hanged herself from the ceiling in her parents’ basement, suspicions immediately fell on her fiancé, Nakamoto Yuta. Nakamoto was in a different city on business at the time; though he and Ueta had a house of their own, Ueta had gone to stay with her parents during his absence. Nakamoto was quickly cleared; he had not been in the surrounding area in the days leading up to her death, and Ueta’s parents personally vouched for his character, stating that Ueta’s suicide was not wholly unexpected.

“Kuriko had been troubled for years,” Ueta’s mother shared. “She had experienced some difficult situations when she was in university. Yuta has been by her side since high school. I think he may have been the only reason she kept going—because they loved each other. I feel ashamed that I didn’t think to keep a closer eye on her when he was gone. In some ways, I feel I have failed as a mother.”

Nakamoto was quick to refute her last sentiment. “If Kuriko’s parents are responsible for her death, then I am as well,” he said. “We should have done more to support her. I just didn’t know how. I wanted her to be happy, but I didn’t know what to do. I loved her more than anything, but sometimes that’s not enough.”

All of the couple’s friends said neither of them had once reported trouble in their relationship. “Sure,” one source said, “they had small fights here and there, like all couples do. But it was never anything serious, and they always solved their problems calmly and quickly, together.”

The couple had spent the week before Nakamoto left on his business trip planning their wedding.

Despite testimony from family and friends, and a thorough investigation from national police that declared Nakamoto innocent, many sided against him. Online forums became flooded with calls for justice and claims that the investigation had been, in some way, botched. Nakamoto mostly withdrew from the public eye for a few months, appearing only to attend talks and charity events for the benefit of mental wellbeing institutions.

Gradually, the tide changed. People began to realize that they had been too harsh. Nakamoto was not a villain. He was a grieving man who had just lost the love of his life. A mob’s mentality can be vicious, and often misguided. A case like this one, sensationalized in the news and played out on live television, can certainly be gripping. But in our eagerness to uncover the truth and see justice served, or perhaps simply in search of easy entertainment, we forget that this is not just a story. Real people lived the headlines; real lives were lost. Instead of becoming armchair sleuths, we might have better served ourselves, and each other, by trying to see what we could learn from this tragedy.

And now, it seems we may finally have done just that. New mental crisis clinics have popped up in the surrounding area. There is even one downtown named Kuriko’s Haven, in memory of the White Lady. The Ueta family tells us they are gratified by the community’s response.

When I reached out to Nakamoto to ask if he had anything to add, he simply replied, “No. The press has profited enough off of Kuriko’s story. I only ask that you let her rest in peace.”

You sat back at your desk, shock making your whole body feel cold. Your head spun. The police found nothing—no evidence of his involvement, nothing to suggest he was guilty in any way. And yet, the woman in your dream—Kuriko—seemed adamant that Yuta bore the responsibility for her death.

I am not a murderer, Yuta had said. I did not harm her, and I will not harm you. Could he have been lying? Did you only believe him because you wanted to?

You waited for him at the kitchen table. He arrived home less than an hour later, and drew up short in the doorway when he saw you sitting alone.

“[Y/N]?” Yuta asked, unsure. “Are you alright?”

“Will you sit, please?” you asked, not looking up at him.

He sat. He seemed to almost reach out to you before thinking better of it. “What is it?”

“I Googled you today,” you said, and he let out a long sigh. “I’m sure you know what I found.” You looked up at him then; he was looking back, brows knit. “She was your fiancé, Yuta.”

“Yes,” he said quietly.

“Why didn’t you tell me?”

“I—I didn’t think it would matter. She’s dead. You never knew her.”

“It feels like something that should’ve come up in conversation before you asked me to move in together,” you bit out.

“I didn’t know how to bring it up,” he said.

“I don’t care if it’s hard to talk about,” you replied. “I had a right to know.”

“I didn’t kill her,” Yuta said. To his credit, he didn’t flounder to produce evidence he knew you already read. He held your gaze.

“Then why does she say you did?” you asked. “I know you said you would explain when it was all over. But we tried your way, and it didn’t work. I’m still having dreams, and I know you feel her presence too. It isn’t because I’m jealous of your relationship. I don’t care. I just want to sleep through the night. I need to know everything if we’re going to move on.”

“I know,” Yuta said quietly. “Okay.” He settled back into his chair, thinking for a moment. “Kuriko was… a very sad person. I loved her a lot, and I did what I could to support her, but I think sometimes it was difficult for her to understand me. It was worse because when we first met, she was bright and happy. We started dating in high school, and went to university together. She… was my first love. But…” His face darkened. “University was difficult for her. I watched her mental state deteriorate over the years. I hoped after we graduated, maybe, things would be better.

“She became somewhat paranoid, I suppose. She didn’t work, which was fine—I was making enough for the both of us. But she didn’t really have friends, and because of that she never really left the house,” Yuta continued. “I usually did the shopping. Which, again, was fine with me. I didn’t mind. It was just that I think it left her feeling a little stifled. And I had… a life, you know, outside of our house. And she sort of didn’t. She began to worry if I was truly dedicated to her. She never accused me of cheating outright, but I have a feeling she was thinking of it.”

He shook his head. “The few friends she did have, they checked on her from time to time. But she wanted them to think that everything was fine, so she didn’t mention anything to them, and she forbade me from mentioning any troubles to anyone else as well. I didn’t want to upset her, so I agreed. She even lied to her parents. But—I’d known her parents since I was a teenager, you know? So I did tell them I was worried for her. They told me they were worried too.

“I moved up in my career, and started having to go on business trips. Usually they were only a day or two, but I knew they worried Kuriko. Many times I asked if she wanted to stay with her parents while I was away, but she didn’t want to bother them. She didn’t want to come with me, either. Then…” He pressed his lips together. “Then I had to be gone for a week. I insisted she stay with her parents. I knew I would be far too worried about her, alone in our house for that long. So she went. And… that’s when it happened.”

He didn’t sound like a liar, or a murderer. He sounded sad and sincere. You couldn’t help but feel sorry for bringing it up. “I’m sure it was difficult. Not just—I mean, the whole time.”

“Yes,” Yuta admitted. “I considered leaving her a couple times. But I couldn’t do it. I loved her, and besides, I was afraid of what she might do—not to me, but to herself—if I did. But,” he sighed, “it happened anyway. I always wonder… what might have happened if I’d done something differently.”

There were tears misting his eyes, and your guilt grew. “I’m sorry to make you talk about it,” you said. “But it’s not fair to leave me in the dark. If I am supposed to be a part of your life—and I want to be—I need to know.”

He nodded. “I know,” he said quietly. “You’re right. I should have told you. I’m sorry.”

You heaved out a big breath, regarding him. After the silence stretched on for a few minutes, you finally pushed yourself to your feet. “It’s getting late,” you said. “I’ll heat up the leftovers.”

He caught your wrist as you passed. “I am sorry,” he repeated. “I didn’t—I never wanted you to have to worry like this.”

Yuta, you thought, looking down at him. Sweet Yuta, my Yuta. “I don’t blame you,” you said. “At least now you’ve told me the truth. It’s alright.” You brought your hand up to his cheek. “I meant it, that I want to be part of your life. Not every part will be easy. I know that. I know that, and I still want it. Okay?”

He nodded, looking at you gratefully, then stood. “Okay. Here, you get the leftovers out. I’ll open some wine. I think we need it.”

You smiled, watching him meander over to your wine rack. “Hey,” you said. He paused, turning. “I love you.”

He smiled back, warmth returning to his eyes. “I love you, too.”

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For a week or so, the dreams stopped. You slept peacefully, and woke without dread lingering in your mind. You wanted to be hopeful, but you didn’t think Kuriko’s ghost would give in so easily.

You were right. One night, the dreams came back, but they were not the same. Instead of being visited by Kuriko, she showed you what seemed to be pieces of memories. You watched through her eyes, feeling everything she felt, as her world turned dark and cold around her.

Yuta dated her in high school but she always felt like it was because she was beautiful and popular and not because he actually liked her. Still, she loved Yuta. He was cool and funny and handsome. In her teenage eyes, he put the stars in the sky. She convinced herself he was the best she could ever have.

University was fine until her sophomore year. Her roommate, her good friend, was killed halfway through the year. Her murderer was arrested, but it didn’t make Kuriko feel any better. Her mental health declined and stayed low. Her relationship with Yuta flatlined because she didn’t have the energy to even take care of herself, let alone anybody else. He withdrew; she knew he resented her. This was not the girl he signed up to love. He would barely speak to her for days, only to come back and tell her he still loved her.

“You’re the only one for me,” he said. “I love you. Please don’t be sad.” On these days, he would care for her—he helped her clean her room, do her homework, made sure she got something to eat, and hope would blossom in her chest all over again. But then something would go wrong and he would disappear again.

But she couldn’t give him up. She knew she didn’t deserve any of the care he gave her, however scarce. Who will love you, if not me? Yuta’s voice asked in her head. And so she stayed.

After they graduated, Yuta insisted they move in together. He said he worried about her living on her own, and besides, they’d been dating for years. It would be silly not to. With no other real option, Kuriko agreed. When he proposed, she said yes. And she stayed there in their house until its walls were all she knew.

“[Y/N].” Yuta’s voice, sounding worried. “Hey, wake up.”

You gasped, catching his wrist with your hand as you wrenched your eyes open. For a moment, you were still Kuriko, and he was the Yuta in the dream that had belittled you and lied and trapped you inside that house alone, and you shoved him away, hard, trying not to scream.

But then you returned to yourself, and the anger was gone. Suddenly, you were cold, even though you could feel a layer of sticky sweat on your skin. Yuta was hovering a few feet away, looking shocked, one knee on the mattress.

Tears filled your eyes as your heartbeat slowed. “I,” you gasped. “I’m sorry.” And then you were crying—big, ugly sobs, curling over yourself and burying your face in the duvet. I thought it was over, you thought miserably. I wanted it to be over. How much longer do I have to endure it? How can I decide who is right? Yuta wouldn’t lie to me. Would he?

Yuta had not touched you, but he remained nearby, concern coloring his tone. “[Y/N], what is it?” But you had a feeling he knew—at least, he knew that the dreams hadn’t gone away. There was hurt in his voice, too—“I’m sorry,” he said, sounding helpless. “It’s not fair. It should be my sleep she disturbs, not yours. I’m sorry you have to suffer because of it.”

You raised your head. He wouldn’t lie to me. Kuriko must be jealous and trying to mislead me, or else mistaken. He would never do anything like that. You held out your arms to him, and he collapsed into him, face painted with relief.

“They’re getting worse,” you whispered, and Yuta rubbed your back, holding you tighter.

“I’m sorry,” he repeated. “[Y/N], baby, I’m so sorry.”

But that was the thing—in his arms, you felt safe. This man would never hurt you. He loved you. Kuriko’s hatred, her fear, her anger, they were all faint in your mind now. You hid your face in his neck. “I’m scared, Yuta. She’s gotten inside my head.”

Yuta pulled away just a bit so he could look at you and wipe away your tears. His eyes were earnest. “If you—if it’s too much, and you want to leave me,” he whispered. “I understand, okay? But I want to get through this together. You make me so happy. Even now.” He was cupping your jaw with both hands, holding your head up. “Even now, I am glad I have you.”

You shook your head. “I don’t want to leave you,” you said. “I think she would follow me anyway.” You sighed, realizing now that the room was still quite dark aside from the small nightlight in the corner. “What time is it?”

“A little past three,” Yuta murmured. “You were talking in your sleep.”

“I woke you,” you said, feeling guilty. “I’m sorry.”

“No, that’s alright.” He smoothed down some of your hair. His eyes were distant, troubled.

“Why has she latched on to me?” you asked. “Was she haunting you before?”

Yuta shook his head. “Not… directly. Not like this. I would get dreams from her occasionally, but nothing like this.”

“Then… why now?” you asked. If she was so hateful, so bent on revenge, why wait?

“I think…” Yuta trailed off. “I think she knows it would be worse this way. For me to watch her torture someone I love, like…”

“Like?”

But he didn’t reply. “I don’t think I’ll be able to sleep. Do you want to come downstairs with me to make some tea? Let’s both call out of work in the morning. We’ll be too tired to focus, anyway.”

You agreed, letting it go. As Yuta flicked on the light, you thought you saw the hem of a white robe disappear around the corner of the doorway. For a moment, the ember of doubt in your mind glowed a little brighter.

He killed me, [Y/N]. He will kill you, too.

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The dreams did not stop. They came in nonsensical, jagged puzzle pieces. It was like Kuriko was getting desperate. She was trying to tell you something. There was something she needed you to see. But in her desperation, nothing made sense. Scenes flashed through your mind. It was less visceral this way, less terrifying. But it made you dizzy. Often, when you woke, you had to stumble to the bathroom, heaving into the toilet, relying on the coolness of the tiles to ground you. Not real. None of it was real.

But the dreams did not stop. You remembered only flashes. A white sash tied around an ankle, discolored from use. A locked door. Bars over a window, bolted shut. Resounding silence, emptiness that seemed to never end.

The scene changed. You were standing in a dim hallway, listening to voices coming from a kitchen you almost recognized.

“…don’t know how we’ll repay his kindness,” a woman was saying.

“He loves her,” a man replied. “He’s choosing it. I’m just glad she has him.”

You took a step forward, and then another. There was something you needed to tell them, but you hesitated.

“It isn’t his job to fix her,” the woman said. “I don’t know what happened to my little girl, but this isn’t her. The girl he fell in love with is gone. I almost wonder if it’s cruel to hope he continues to stay.”

Whatever you needed to say escaped you. It wouldn’t do any good anyway. You tightened your fingers around the carefully-folded sash, turning and heading back down the hall, to the stairs that led to the basement.

You woke to a dark room. Me, you said to yourself. Not me-as-Kuriko. Me. This is real. You looked over at Yuta, sleeping quietly beside you. You weren’t as nauseous this time, but you slipped out of bed anyway, padding into the bathroom. The moonlight shone cold through the window; it was dim, but enough to make out your reflection in the mirror as you passed.

The sash was important. Why was it tied around her ankle? Was it her ankle? Why did she have it at the other house? Had those been her parents’ voices?

You studied your reflection in the mirror, the light and shadows playing tricks on your eyes. You hardly recognized your own face. You tilted your chin up, lips parting slightly. The air felt stale on your tongue. Almost involuntarily, you brought your fingers to your neck.

When you woke next, you were back in bed. You didn’t remember returning. Yuta was gone, his side already cold, but you could hear him rustling around in the kitchen downstairs. Bright summer sunlight streamed in through the cracks in the blinds.

You sat up slowly. Your body hurt, like after a hard workout. You stretched, and a figure in the corner caught your eye.

It was Kuriko, white kimono hanging from her shoulders, bare feet making no noise as she paced across the hardwood. And around her neck, the bloody scar you had grown so accustomed to, it hardly scared you.

Not real, you told yourself, too frightened to close your eyes. But Yuta was still moving about downstairs; you could hear the clang of metal as he placed a pan on the stove. You wanted to scream—he would come running, and then you would be safe—but you couldn’t. Not real, you repeated. Sleep paralysis, maybe.

But you weren’t paralyzed. Kuriko moved towards the bed, and you scrambled out of it, backing against the wall. Dreaming, you tried to convince yourself. I’m just dreaming. Yuta is here; I am safe and I am dreaming.

“Wrong,” Kuriko said quietly. “Wrong both times. This is not a dream, [Y/N]. And you are not safe here. You will never be safe with him.”

“Stop it,” you said. “Stay back.”

But she wasn’t walking to you, you realized. She was studying the bed, where you had been lying just moments before. Her ribbons settled behind her. “He still takes the right side,” Kuriko mused. Her image flickered for a moment, and she gave an irritated sigh. It was the calmest you’d seen her, and that scared you worse than the wild anger. She reached out to ghost a hand over his pillow. You expected her to leave rust-red fingerprints behind from where her nailbeds bled, but the pillows stayed a pristine blue. “Interesting, the blue sheets. When we lived together, he liked white.”

She moved her attention to the headboard. “Nowhere to tie anything,” she remarked of the flat surface. Was it distaste in her tone, disappointment? “But he set up the room the same. Except our closet was to the inner wall.” She pointed to the bathroom door, left ajar. “And the bathroom on the other side. I remember. It always got tangled around the legs of the bed if I wasn’t careful.” She looked up. “When he buys you a rope, will that be blue, too?” Without waiting for your answer, she shook her head. “No, rope is not the word. Leash. For when the madness makes you an animal and he fears letting you roam free when he is not here to watch you.”

“Yuta wouldn’t do that. And I am not mad.” Your voice trembled. “Leave me alone. Get out of my house.”

“Hm.” Kuriko looked up at you. “Aren’t you?”

You blinked, and she was gone. Your bed was how you left it, sheets crumpled.

You wanted to tear the blinds open, let the light purge her presence. But you felt weak, and your legs gave out beneath you. You sank to the floor, still shaking, hid your face in your hands, and cried.

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You didn’t bring it up to Yuta at first. You didn’t know why—maybe you wanted to pretend it didn’t happen. Maybe you were hoping it was a dream. Maybe you feared that Kuriko was not lying. If her version of events was the truth, you didn’t want Yuta to know you knew.

But the dreams still did not stop. Kuriko sent you the same scenes—days spent alone, tethered to the bed while Yuta was away. A sort of hazy madness taking hold. And grief, for her dead roommate. Every time you tried to get control and turn toward it, Kuriko whisked you away. She showed you Yuta—images of his eyes, cold like you had never seen them, the touch of his hands, harsh like you had never felt them.

She visited you in the day, too. Sometimes it was just the flash of things—a white specter, gone as quick as it came. Other times, usually when you were home alone, she would talk to you. Sometimes, like the first time, she would goad you. She was quiet and terrifying then. Other times, she would demand her revenge from you.

“You are the only person who seems to think he has done some wrong,” you insisted. “I cannot believe he would harm you like that.”

“You will be sorry,” she snarled, but you found out long ago that all she could do was pace. When she tried to touch you, some force held her back. You weren’t sure what it was, but it seemed enough to dissuade her from attempting assault. “It will happen to you. It is only a matter of time.”

“I must believe him,” you replied. “I do believe him.”

“Why? Because that hack seer told you he would be the last person you love?” Kuriko laughed wildly. “Do you believe your fate to be immutable? Don’t you wonder if your fear of your fate will be what cements it in reality?”

“How do you know about Aoi?” In truth, you had thought often of their words in the past few weeks. You were making your choice. You chose Yuta.

Is that why you won’t tell him about these visits? a voice in your head asked. You weren’t sure if the voice sounded more similar to Kuriko’s or your own.

“How do I know?” Kuriko asked. She laughed, but stopped when she heard the sound of a key in the lock of your front door. “I’m in your head, [Y/N]. How could I not know?”

She disappeared as you heard the front door open. You turned to the stove to see your pot nearly boiling over.

“[Y/N]? Sorry I’m late. Is someone here?” Yuta called from down the hall.

You turned the stove off, looking at the space Kuriko had just been standing in. “No,” you replied. “Just me.”

“Huh,” Yuta said. He appeared in the doorway, wearing a bemused expression. “I thought I heard voices.”

You thought maybe, if you kept refusing to help her, eventually Kuriko would give up. But the problem with ghosts was that they had little else to do day to day. Kuriko would not simply grow bored of you and find a new purpose. This was her only purpose.

It didn’t matter if you slept or stayed awake. It didn’t matter if you knocked yourself out with a sleep aid or exhausted yourself in the hopes that you would not dream. Kuriko found you anyway. She seemed to be growing more insistent, stronger. You began to worry that whatever barrier stopped her from touching you soon would not be enough to hold her back.

In the end, it was Yuta who brought it up first. “I know you’re not sleeping well still,” he said. “What do you dream?”

“It’s not just dreams now,” you admitted. “I see her in the day. She comes to taunt me, to beg me to listen.” You told him all the things she claimed he did to her, explained the memories she showed you. “I can’t imagine that to be true. And what happened to her roommate?”

Yuta’s face crumpled. He was silent for a moment; you could see his mind working. “I have been keeping something from you, still,” he said at last. “I wasn’t sure but—if she is appearing when you are awake, then I don’t think I am mistaken. [Y/N], do you know the Japanese belief in the existence of the onryō?”

You nodded. “A fearsome ghost, a vengeful spirit. You think that Kuriko—?”

“Yes,” Yuta said heavily. “Onryō are made from the spirits of those who died violently or wrongfully. Murder and suicide victims are among the most common. If there is deep resentment, their spirit remains behind, hounding those they believe are responsible for the terrible nature of their deaths until they are satisfied. Some are more easily appeased than others. For some—like Kuriko—the request is impossible because they are wrong.”

“You sound like you’re speaking from experience,” you said.

“I am,” he replied. “I have seen it once before. Kuriko’s roommate, she was killed by another university student one night. He drugged her, raped her, suffocated her to death. She blamed Kuriko for her death. They attended a party together that night, but when Kuriko couldn’t find her after she wanted to leave, she assumed she had found a guy to sleep with and left on her own. It had happened before.”

“She couldn’t have known,” you protested.

“No,” Yuta agreed, “she couldn’t. But her roommate blamed her anyway. Kuriko had been the one to step up first to help with investigations, which eventually led to the murderer being caught, tried, and sentenced. But it wasn’t enough. Her roommate said Kuriko should have stayed to look. She should have made sure she was alright before leaving. She seemed to think it was only fair that Kuriko died with her.

“Kuriko spiraled deeper and deeper into her depression, her guilt, her insanity. She turned her anger on me. She said I was to blame, because I had told her to hurry home that night. I did my best to help her. She convinced herself that I did not care for her. She convinced herself of a lot of things. Or…” Yuta sighed. “Or her roommate’s spirit convinced her. I watched as the insanity took her. I did everything I could, but I didn’t know how to fight that.” He stretched a hand out to you, and you took it. “I did not do any of those things she showed you. She lost herself, [Y/N]. I hoped desperately that I could save her. She was my first love.”

“I know,” you said. The weight of his story sat heavily with you. Kuriko’s sudden and steep depression made sense now, and with your understanding came sympathy.

“I don’t want to see the same thing happen to you,” Yuta said quietly.

“I am not her,” you insisted. “I believe you, Yuta. I know you couldn’t have done those things.”

“Thank you. You can’t go on like this, though,” Yuta said. “It’ll wear you down.”

You shook your head. “We’ll manage it. If there’s no hope for her, then maybe she will leave. It’s worth it to me. Is it worth it to you?”

Yuta looked uneasy, but he nodded. “Of course it is. I love you,” he said.

You let him convince you. You were on the same side, after all. “I love you, too.” You offered him a brave smile. At least you knew what you were dealing with. “I’ll be fine.”

That night, Kuriko approached you in a dream. It had been a while since you’d seen her when you were asleep. “You won’t leave me alone even if I leave him now,” you said. “So what is it you want?”

“I want people to know what he did,” Kuriko said.

“But he didn’t do anything,” you said. “And—neither did you.” She was silent. “Yuta told me about your roommate. I understand why you never showed me those memories. I’m sorry about what happened to her. It wasn’t your fault, though.”

“Yes, it was,” she said bitterly.

“No, it wasn’t.” You watched her, the anger there, the turmoil, the despair. “Don’t you want to rest?” you asked her.

She turned her eyes on you, and you saw tears there. “I can’t,” she wailed, leaning towards you. You flinched back. “I can’t, not until—”

Her fingers closed around your throat and you woke to a dark and silent bedroom. You laid in bed awake until morning.

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She left you alone for a couple of nights after that. You had a feeling she hadn’t been very happy with how your conversation had gone. And then one night, Yuta was home early. He cooked a whole feast for you, broke out expensive wine. And when he brought out dessert, he also brought out a ring.

“I’ve never known anyone braver,” he said. “I know it’s not really a romantic time, but I’ve made up my mind about you. It’s you I want. I know this all has been because of me. But I won’t abandon you now. Will you marry me?”

It was sweet in its own tragic way. And it filled you with hope. “Yes, Yuta,” you said softly, offering your hand so he could slip the ring onto your fourth finger.

“Together,” he said. “We will fix it together.”

That night, you waited for Kuriko to come to you. You were in the backyard you had found yourself in the first time you remembered seeing her. You stood tall. You remembered what you said a few nights before. If there is no hope for her, then maybe she will leave. You hoped you were right.

Kuriko came. You imagined she couldn’t help herself, drawn to the love she and Yuta might have had for one another.

“It’s over,” you told her softly. “I’m sorry, but you will get no satisfaction here.”

“He will pay,” she said angrily. “And you along with him.”

“You have no power here,” you told her. “You have disrupted my life long enough. You will never convince me to help you. I’m sorry for the way your life ended. I’m sorry you felt alone. I am demanding now you leave me be. Leave the living to live. You deserve rest.”

“I hate you,” Kuriko said venomously, but after a moment she spun on her heel and walked back towards the house. As you watched her go, you realized that her robes seemed much cleaner. The tattered ribbons that usually billowed behind her were gone.

The back door shut sharply. You stayed for a moment, then turned and walked away. As the world around you dissolved into another dream, you remember what she said in the kitchen a couple of weeks ago, when you asked how she knew about Aoi.

I am in your head, [Y/N]. How could I not know?

But it was over now. She had left your head at your request.

When you woke you thought of the lack of ribbons. Was that what Aoi meant by when it walks free? Maybe things would finally be peaceful.

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Things were peaceful, for a while. For three weeks, you dreamed normal dreams. No ghosts visited you, awake or asleep. Your life was simple, easy, full of love. You told Yuta about your confrontation with Kuriko and he seemed to agree that it was all over. You thought of calling Aoi, but figured you’d get around to it soon. For the first time in about a year, your future felt clear to you. You and Yuta would grow old together, and your nightmares would remain nightmares, nothing more.

On the one year anniversary of the two of you moving into that house, you woke up in the doorway of your bedroom. You were holding a glass of water. You were not known to sleepwalk—or sleep-anything. You didn’t even really snore, as far as you knew.

Without knowing what to do, you set the glass down on your bedside table and fell back into an uneasy sleep.

You mentioned it to Yuta the next morning over breakfast. “I think I sleepwalked last night,” you said. “I don’t know—I don’t remember what I dreamt. I just woke up at the door of our bedroom with a glass of water, which means I must’ve come down to the kitchen.”

Yuta frowned. “Huh. Well, I’m glad you didn’t hurt yourself. Did you sleepwalk as a kid?”

“No,” you said. “Not that I remember.”

“Well, maybe it was a one-time thing.” He paused to kiss the top of your head as he passed by your chair. “If it keeps happening, though, you should probably go talk to a doctor.” He noticed your expression. “Don’t worry,” he said. “I imagine your brain is a little fried from… this last year of troubled sleep. I wouldn’t be surprised if that just made it a little overactive at night.” He put his plate in the sink. “And maybe tonight, get a glass of water before bed, just in case. I don’t want you to hurt yourself on the stairs or something.”

In the light of day, with Yuta’s soothing voice to calm your fears, you decided he was right. You nodded. “Yeah,” you agreed.

It didn’t happen every night. But once in a while, you’d find yourself somewhere else in your house. Sometimes it was the kitchen; other times, the living room. One day you woke with a slash wound on your palm, a kitchen knife still gripped in your other hand. You bandaged it quietly, mopped up your blood, and put the knife away.

In the morning, you showed the wound to Yuta and asked him to hide the knives.

His eyes were round with fear and concern. “You should definitely see a doctor,” he said. “You’re lucky it was just your hand, and not something more serious.”

You agreed; you scheduled yourself for the next appointment that your primary care doctor had, which was about a week and a half away. Yuta hid the knives.

A few nights later, you woke up in the entryway with dirt under your fingernails and all over your shoes. The next night was the same, and the night after that, too, except it had rained, so it was much harder to clean up.

“There isn’t any way you can bump your appointment up?” Yuta asked. “I don’t want anything to happen to you.”

“I don’t think so,” you said. “They’re booked. It’s okay, it’s just another week.”

“Maybe you should go to urgent care,” Yuta suggested.

You were worried, of course, but the suggestion made you laugh. “And say what? ‘I need to see a doctor right now, I’ve been digging up flowers in my sleep’? They’ll tell me I’m wasting their time.” You shook your head. “I’ll be okay.”

Yuta did laugh, albeit begrudgingly, at that. “Okay, yeah, if you put it that way, it sounds silly.”

What made you apprehensive, though, was that you could not recall anything you dreamt on nights that you walked. Your memories would stop sometime around when you drifted off to sleep, and only restart again once you awoke, wherever your body had decided to take you. It’s not that you expected the dream to be cohesive or sensical, but there should be something there, right?

You weren’t certain it was linked to Kuriko. You hadn’t seen or heard from her in a month. But something in the back of your mind screamed danger. If you had been wise, maybe you would’ve gone to Aoi the first time you walked. But you weren’t wise. You were hopeful. And you were afraid that what Aoi had to tell you might shatter than hope. You wanted everything to be fine.

But one night, you woke to find yourself up to your knees in mud and a little chest in the ground at your feet. It was still dark outside, early morning in mid-spring; the ground smelled fresh. You bent to pick it up and clambered out of the hole you had apparently dug in your own backyard.

You dusted it off, holding it up in the moonlight. You’d never seen it before. With shaking fingers, you unlatched the clasp and flipped the lid open. There, lying in a perfect coil at the bottom of the chest, was the white sash you had seen in your dreams—the sash Kuriko had been convinced Yuta used to tether her to the bed when he was away, the sash she had ultimately used to hang herself.

Sitting on top was a picture of Kuriko in her graduation robe. On top of that were two engagement rings.

You remembered how Yuta had dedicated himself to working on your landscaping when you two first moved into this house a year ago. How he was determined to have a beautiful garden. Had he buried this while you screwed knobs onto cabinets and folded his clothes? And if he had, why had he kept it all these years?

You walked back inside. These days, when you found yourself sleepwalking, you went straight back to the bedroom to wake Yuta, at his request. But today, you didn’t want to. You didn’t want to see him—fear and anger and confusion mixed in your stomach as you tracked mud through the house, not even bothering to take off your shoes. You placed the open chest on the kitchen table and slumped into one of the chairs.

You waited there until morning. The mud caked onto your fingertips. You stared down at the chest, unwilling to wake Yuta, unwilling to go back to sleep. Why would he keep it? The photograph you could understand, and maybe even the rings, but the sash? What good would that do? Maybe that was why Kuriko had been haunting you, because these items had not been put to rest.

Old doubts about Yuta resurfaced. It was creepy; what else was he hiding? What had he lied about? Maybe Kuriko had been telling the truth all along. Maybe you had been a fool not to listen to her. You twisted your own engagement ring around your finger.

“[Y/N]?” It was Yuta’s voice, floating down from the landing. “Are you here?”

“In the kitchen,” you replied, forcing yourself to speak loud enough to hear him.

“Did you sleepwalk again?” His voice was clear of any guilt; he was all concern as he came into view. Recognition twisted his features when his eyes landed on the chest lying open in front of you. “Where…?”

“I woke up in the yard. I was digging,” you said. “Apparently this is what I was digging for.”

It was like he could sense your anger, the accusation hovering at the edges of the room. Or maybe he was guilty. “[Y/N], I don’t know how that got here,” he said. “Really.”

“This sash,” you said, pointing at it. You could feel your anger mounting. “Kuriko said you used it to keep her tied to your bed when you were gone on business trips. You left food in the room for her so she wouldn’t starve, and locked the windows and doors. That’s why she used it to hang herself. Is that true?”

“No!” Yuta exclaimed.

“Then why did you have it? How did she have it, then?” you asked.

“It—we used it—it was for sex, [Y/N], just—like, bondage and stuff, that’s why I never talked about it,” Yuta said. “How was I supposed to bring that up? And who wants to hear about their partner’s past sex life with their ex?”

“Okay, then why did you keep it?” you asked. You’d raised your voice without realizing it in your agitation. Nothing made sense. Am I still dreaming? you wondered. But I don’t dream when I walk.

“I didn’t keep it!” Yuta said. He was pacing in front of you now. “I threw out all of her things. I swear to you, I didn’t keep it. I threw out the sash. Packed away the few physical photos I had of her. Returned the rings. I don’t know how this stuff got here.”

“You’re lying,” you accused. “How else could it have gotten here? It was buried like two or three feet deep, Yuta, it didn’t just end up there by accident! You worked so hard on the yard when we first moved in. Is this why?”

“You have to believe me,” he begged.

“That’s all I’ve done!” You didn’t know where the rage was coming from, but it was burning up inside you. Somehow, you were on your feet. “All I’ve done this whole time is believe you, Yuta! I trusted you even when you couldn’t explain, even when you wouldn’t tell me things, even when you lied. I was patient. I was good to you. How much more are you hiding? How much more do you want?”

Your world was collapsing. So long you had tried to convince yourself that things would be fine if you just kept pushing through. Your rage thrummed through your body like a second heartbeat. You chose Yuta because you wanted to believe he was telling the truth, and you endured nightmares and apparitions and fear and hurt and lies, and now you didn’t think you would stand it any longer.

“Please,” Yuta was saying. You blinked, and realized you had backed him up against the kitchen counter. There was a knife in your hand. You didn’t know where you got it. You didn’t even know where Yuta had hidden the knives, but when you looked over, you saw one of the cupboard doors flung open. “Please,” he repeated, his throat working against the sharp metal of the blade. It didn’t horrify you as much as it should. All you could think of was your anger. He betrayed you, you thought to yourself. He deserves this. “I love you, [Y/N]. Please.”

“That’s what you said to her!” you yelled. “Liar!”

Something registered behind his eyes. “Kuriko,�� he said quietly. “Let her go.”

It only made you angrier. “What are you talking about? You’re still thinking of her, even now?”

“No! Listen, please,” Yuta said. “I’ve made mistakes. I don’t pretend to be without them. I admit it, I should have just broken up with Kuriko when it was clear we could no longer help each other. But, [Y/N], I swear I never did any of those terrible things she showed you. Please. Put the knife down,” he wheedled. “I never did any of that. The only thing I did was lie. The last few years of our relationship, I didn’t love her. I loved a memory of her, and I was too stupid and cowardly to admit that things would never go back to how they were. I was too stupid and cowardly to let her go.”

You could hardly hear him. It didn’t matter what he said; the roaring of anger in your ears was louder. “You’re lying,” you repeated. You felt something wet on your cheek; you had begun to cry. “She told me everything, and I should’ve trusted her from the start. You’re lying! You did it to her, and you tried to do the same to me.”

“No, I didn’t, [Y/N],” he said. “I’ll do anything you want, please, just put the knife down.”

Your voice was not your own; your thoughts, not your own; your breath, not your own. “I can’t let you do it to anybody else.” Your hands, too, were not your own. You were still crying, but you didn’t stop. A feeling of satisfaction settled heavy in your chest when the knife sank into Yuta’s stomach, all the way up to the hilt.

Thank you, a familiar voice said, for letting me borrow your body. You asked me if I wanted to rest. I can rest now.

As swift as it came, the rage left you, and you looked down to see Yuta slumped on the floor against your cabinets—cabinets you painted together. The knife slipped from your wet palm. Yuta bled and bled and bled onto the polished hardwood and you sank down next to him. You heard your own sobs like they were coming from somewhere else—another person, another lifetime.

“Yuta,” you sobbed. “What did I do? Yuta, I’m sorry, I’m so sorry. I’ll call 119, I’ll fix it, just stay with me, just stay, I’ll, I’ll—”

“I’m sorry.” Yuta reached out to you weakly. You shook your head, horror coursing through your body. “It’s my fault,” he whispered. Wrong, it was all wrong. Why should he apologize? “I should’ve known better than to drag some innocent girl into my life before the ghosts of my past had been put to rest.” He drew a rattling breath. “But I meant it. I love you.”

“Yuta.” You could barely see him through your tears. Not real, you thought desperately. Maybe you were begging. Not real, it’s not real.

“I love you,” he repeated. “I loved you from the start.” A beat of silence; he was blinking slowly, not quite looking at you. “I couldn’t help it.”

“It’s not fair,” you whispered. A tidal wave of grief crested inside you. “It’s not fair! Kuriko!” You turned, stumbling to your feet, trying to see any trace of her. “Come back and face me! You bitch! You loved him too! How could you? How could…”

You looked back down at Yuta and realized he had stopped breathing.

“No,” you murmured, crouching back down. “No, no no no, Yuta, I—I’m sorry.” You wrapped your arms around him; you could feel his blood, still warm, seep into your shirt front. “I’m sorry.”

But Yuta was dead.

You curled over his body, sobbing. Blood and dried mud stained the carpet under the table. You cried; hours could have passed and you wouldn’t have known. It didn’t matter—nothing mattered anymore. Kuriko was gone. Yuta was dead, and you had killed him.

He will be the last love you will ever know, Aoi had said.

Your brain felt like a shattered mirror. With Yuta and Kuriko gone, how could you ever know what was true? How much had Kuriko made up? Did she make it up on purpose, or was she simply driven insane, and truly believed all of it? Or was it you who was mad? Did you imagine all of it? Did you kill Yuta over a hallucination? Was it your knowledge of your future that made this happen?

Do you believe your fate to be immutable? Kuriko had asked. Don’t you wonder if your fear of your fate will be what cements it in reality?

You were too slow to your decision. You should have trusted Yuta from the beginning and never let Kuriko embed herself so deeply in your mind, or you should have left immediately. Then Yuta would still be alive.

When the past no longer haunts you, when it walks free, your path will be set. You understood it now. Kuriko had stopped haunting you because her spirit had begun to possess you. You did not dream when you walked because it had been her.

My path. You pushed yourself to your feet. What was your path now?

Your eyes fell on the sash, still coiled in the chest, just as you found it. You took one step closer, and then another, arm outstretched. You knew what you would do. It was the only thing, really. The only choice you had left.

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It’s poetic, as all things should be. The sash is soft in your fist. You open the basement door.

It’s odd—since you moved in, you haven’t been down here once. You had forgotten how it looked. Boxes are stacked in the corner; extra decorations overflow in bins. You and Yuta wanted to put more art on the walls. You wanted to make a game room.

You find a chair and a sturdy metal pipe. You hook the sash around the pipe and tie it tight.

It’s a funny thing, grief. It’s different every time. When you were seven and your grandmother died, it only brought you terror and confusion. When your first boyfriend broke up with you—doubt and rage. Now, your grief comes with overwhelming clarity, and bitter regret.

You and Yuta could have loved each other for the rest of your lives. You are sure of that. You can see it now, like scenes out of an old movie: a picnic in the summer, a homemade dinner with friends. Maybe children. Yuta, eyes sparkling as he laughs.

But it was never possible, you realize. You’d never once imagined your future in great detail. It was always the vague outline of a thing. You always thought it was because you were preoccupied, but now you think maybe some small part of you knew. You were fated to die from the moment you met Yuta. Of course you would make all the mistakes that led you here—mistakes only you could make. There was nothing you could do to stop it.

You catch your reflection in the window. It’s overcast today, dark enough that you can see the image, but it’s still blurry. The tied sash hangs over your head like a halo. Another lie, to bring the story of you and Yuta and the love between you to its grand conclusion.

You bring one foot up onto the seat of the chair, then look back around you. But you’re not really leaving anything behind. Everything you had is gone. And Yuta is waiting for you.

‧͙⁺˚*･༓☾　✧　☽༓･*˚⁺‧͙

News crews gather in the streets. The neighbors watch through half-drawn blinds as two body bags are quickly carried out of the house and placed in the back of a vehicle. Yellow tape goes up everywhere. The reporters clamor; one police officer tries to corral them away while the others flit in and out the house, wearing rubber gloves and carrying evidence bags.

There are a few words being passed around. Nakamoto Yuta. White Lady. Murder-suicide. No note.

Most of the cameras are aimed at the ground level, following the activity of the cops. But one swivels upward, zooming in on a second story window.

For a moment, there seems to be a figure there. No—two figures. They’re slow-dancing, coming in and out of view. As if on cue, it begins to rain, and the water blurs the camera lens. If the figures are still there, they’re impossible to see.

But over the sound of rainfall, someone listening closely might pick out the sound of a song.

Why stop to think of whether

This little dream might fade?

We've put our hearts together

Now we are one, I'm not afraid

If there's a cloud above

And it must rain, we'll let it

But for tonight, forget it

I'm in the mood for love…

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Little Book Review: Devil House

Author: John Darnielle.

Publication Date: 2022.

Genre: Technically a thriller, really literary fiction.

Premise: In the early 2000s, moderately successful true crime writer Gage Chandler buys a rundown house in Milpitas, California. He does this at the behest of his agent, who has found out that the house used to be an adult video store that was the site of a Satanic double murder in the 1980s. Despite his doubts about the gimmick, Gage is eager to start exploring the case; however, it proves to be more complicated than he expected.

(Spoilers below!)

Thoughts: Much like Universal Harvester, the other Darnielle novel I’ve read, Devil House is pleasurably enigmatic. It’s a kind of scrapbook novel, where Chandler’s more or less straightforward narration is interspersed with excerpts from his books, letters, a detour into faux-Arthuriana, and an epilogue from the POV of a seldom-mentioned childhood friend. The ending is rather open and doesn’t explain exactly what happened with Chandler’s manuscript. This is right up my alley; I was one of those kids who loved the conclusion of ASOUE and didn’t get why other fans wanted definite answers.

The book's message is also enigmatic. I saw a review online that called it "an indictment of true crime," but even that review seemed ambivalent once I got past the clickbait-ish headline. At a pivotal point in the novel, Gage gets a long letter from the mother of a murder victim he wrote about in his first book. She shares her memories of her son and the hopes she had for him, as well as the suffering inflicted on them both by her abusive husband; she also condemns Gage for making her son a minor figure in somebody else's story. Gage is chastened, and her words spur him to do something rather unusual with his "Devil House" book.

I don't think this is an indictment of true crime, so much as it is a word of caution about narratives. No story can center everyone it involves; certainly there are few stories where every single figure is written as though the author were their loving mother. And the novel offers other complications, such as:

Gage's first book was about a schoolteacher in the 1970s who killed two teenage boys who were her students; they broke into her apartment, hoping for easy money, and took hold of her when they found her in the kitchen, shucking oysters. Terrified and already holding a knife, she stabbed them both to death and frantically tried to hide the bodies. It was a senseless, tragic situation, but the district attorney decided that she was a predatory Satanist (based on a few books about magic in her apartment). She was found guilty, sent to the electric chair, and made into a sinister legend. Gage's book sought to clear up that narrative. Would it, in fact, have been right to make the story about one of the boys she killed? Or was Gage's portrayal of this boy (as a more or less normal teenager with a tough home life who fell under the sway of a dangerous peer) sufficient under the circumstances?

In his new book, Gage writes about some potential murder suspects in the Devil House case: a straitlaced teenage ex-employee with a key, his severely ADHD friend, a homeless runaway classmate, and a nice artistic girl. They're sweet, fun, and sympathetic as a group, and two of them are in truly heart-wrenching situations. He also writes, more briefly, about the murder victims: a well-known local slumlord and an ambitious out-of-town developer. The slumlord is cruel and grasping to her tenants, routinely using humiliating and unfair business practices, while the developer is a sleazy coke-snorting ignoramus. Gage clearly dislikes the former and drips with contempt for the latter. I won't dispute that such people often do more damage than impulsive teens committing property crimes; however, he's absolutely using them as minor figures in someone else's story, and in a much harsher way than he did in his first book. Is this right, because of the misery they caused? Or is it wrong no matter what?

This isn't even getting into the final twist, whose implications I have yet to sort out.

Hot Goodreads Take: "It should be called the 'Devils Store' as it's not about a house in all honesty." Look, no one said the good folks of Milpitas were great at naming things.

#little book review #devil house #john darnielle

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casgirl · 3 years ago

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my regard for john darnielle means that I very much hope he doesn’t know. I hope he is living in blissful ignorance and I hope it brings him peace

I know he doesn’t know he can’t possibly but also he knows. Why else did he write psalms 40:2

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mountaingoatsfirstlineaday · 4 years ago

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"I played video games in a drunken haze/I was seventeen years young/Hurt my knuckles punching the machines/The taste of scotch rich on my tongue//" - This Year

"Okay so I'm seventeen years old/And you're the last best thing I got going/But then the special secret sickness starts to eat through you//" - Dance Music

"But selling acid was a bad idea/And selling it to a cop was a worse one/And the new law said that seventeen year olds could do federal time//" - Fall of the Star High School Running Back

The February I was seventeen, I had a pretty big mental health scare. I thought I was having my first psychotic break (whether I was or wasn't is yet to be determined by the medical authorities in my life, thanks to questionable experiences I've had over the years). I've always struggled with feeling older than I am, which I understand is a pretty common feeling among people who deal with childhood trauma. It's like that thing that Ryan Reynolds said, how when you put children under stress "they're suddenly taking on things that aren't theirs to take on." (Source) They get more mature than they should be.

I didn't do the things John Darnielle's 17 year-olds have. I haven't gotten drunk and played video games, and I haven't sold acid to an undercover cop. Thankfully. I did have a last best "you", but neither of us had a special secret sickness. Or if we did, if either of us still do, it's not drugs.

I don't know why I felt like I did when I was 17, even though the causes are obvious. I was explosive and numb, and I didn't really have a clue. I still am, sometimes. Most times. But I know hearing something so personal and at the same time general about myself, my very own impermanent age, sung with the same kind of pain that I felt... it helped. The Mountain Goats were like alcohol in all my open gashes. The music stung, but it was good and it cleaned out all the words and actions and thoughts that could have been left to fester. I sang along then for the same reason I do now. Because it makes me feel more whole. Probably why I like that song so much.

I think I'll stay here/until I feel whole again

I think I'm just as fucked up as I was when in the February after I turned seventeen. I don't know what the time has brought. Maybe just the transfer of heat. I wish I had some happy conclusion to this (or at least something vaguely satisfying), because I took the time to write it all out and share it with you guys, but I don't, so I'll leave you with a meme.

#not a first line #long post #personal #it's a *ramble*#tmg #the mountain goats #john darnielle #first line #and yet its also a heavily thought out emotional essay #wheeeeeeee #cursing tw #this is very venty so if youre not into that dont feel pressured to read it #abuse mention tw #drug tw #alcohol tw

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bladesandstars · 4 years ago

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35 Questions for Fanfiction Writers - Answers

1. From one to five stars, how would you rate your writing? (No downplaying yourself!) I'd say a solid four? I have a lot of room to grow but I am proud of what I write. 2. Why do you write fanfiction? The joy of making, the fun of interacting with other people about something we love. 3. What do you think makes your writing stand out from other works? Hmm, I'm bad at this. Crisp, clean voicing? 4. Are there any writers that inspire you? Are you sick of me talking about Ray Bradbury yet? The short gut punches of emotion he wrote are such #goals. Also Hilary Mantel, for simply beautiful prose. Upile Chisala for poetry that is so evocative it makes my heart bust open. Neil Gaiman. John Darnielle. ALL MY FRIENDS and their beautiful brains and ideas. 5. What’s the fic you’re most proud of? That's a tough question! I think The Dragon's Dagger, because I think I did a good job on explaining my love for a ship not a lot of people ship and a lot of people actively dislike (Highspecs). I'm also proud of my bigass Ignyx series trilogy for telling a complete story for another OTP. And the standalone Sylvain fic I wrote, and all for the want of a horseshoe nail.

6. What element of writing do you find comes easily? Dialogue baby! Also short intense emotional moments. Can I say smut? 7. What element of writing do you struggle with most? Detailed descriptions of surroundings and longer plots. 8. Which character(s) do you find easiest to write? Lorenz, Claude, Ignis, Ravus, Sylvain, Aranea, Prompto 9. Which character(s) do you find most difficult to write? Noctis, Ardyn, Edelgard, Felix 10. What’s your favorite genre to write for? HM. Can I say sci-fi even if I haven't posted any yet? Just started down that road and SO fun. 11. Who or what do you find yourself writing about most? Feelings, relationships, Ignis, Lorenz.

12. Tell us about a WIP you’re excited about. Claude/Sylvain/Lorenz college speech team AU ot3 fic. Highspecs sci-fi time travel space action. 13. First fandom you ever wrote for? FFXV! 14. What’s your favorite fandom to write for? Right now it's FE3H but I'm still actively enjoying my XV writing. 15. What’s the weirdest fandom you’ve ever written for? Torchwood/Marvel crossover ship, Jack Harkness x Tony Stark 16. Any guilty pleasure trope(s)? Omg they were roommates, BED SHARING, enemies or rivals to lovers, mutual pining 17. A trope you’ll never, ever write for. Yandere 18. Wildest fic you’ve ever written? Wild, hm. Depends how you define that? Dom!Cor engineering and enjoying his own cuckolding by Iggy and Aranea was a pretty wild idea. Also Deadpool and Weasel infiltrate a sex club. 19. Do you prefer canon-compliant, AUs, or something in-between? I have moods! I write a lot of both. 20. Gen fic or shippy stuff? Usually shippy but some of the stuff I'm proudest of are gen. 21. Favorite pairing to write for? (platonic or romantic!) Takes a deep breath: Claurenz Sylorenz Mercievain Ignyx Highspecs Aracrowe Gladnis Fleurentia Promptis Crownyx Sylvix Dimilix Hilgrid Gladnoct Stucky 22. Do you listen to anything while you write? I have a playlist for Literally Everything 23. Do you prefer prompts and challenges, or completely independent ideas? Both! Sometimes a prompt or challenge boxes me in enough to squeeze really good work out 24. One-shots or multi-chaptered works? Yes! Better at completing oneshots 25. Have you ever daydreamed about side adventures/spin-offs from your fic? Tell us about them! I still want to write skater/hockey spinoff Claurenz based on north star, which was a Sylvix BB fic. And technically Lucis Military Academy is a spinoff of Dagger. 26. Is there anything you’ve wanted to write, but you’ve been too scared to try? Anything for Given or Shouwa Genroku Rakugo Shinjuu. 27. What’s the nicest comment you’ve ever received? That I made someone like a pairing they didn't before! 28. How well do you handle criticism when it comes to your writing? Ehhhh if it's specific and can be implemented I usually consider it; if it's just "I don't like your style or plot decisions" that's a taste thing 29. Have you ever gone outside of your comfort zone for a fic? How did it turn out? So many times! north star was really long for me and I was proud of it 30. Tooth-rotting fluff or merciless angst? I loooove angst THEN fluff but if I gotta choose, fluff. 31. Do you have any OCs? Tell us about them! Too many - separate post. 32. Summarize a random fic of yours in 10 words or less. Roommate overhears backrubs, not sex...unless? 33. Is there anything you wish your audience knew about your writing or writing process? I want everyone to listen to my fic playlists while they read, hahaha they are SO important to me. 34. Copy and paste an excerpt you’re particularly fond of. skipped, idk i don't feel like my work excerpts well OR I'm too self-critical but skipping this one. 35. Ramble about any fic-related thing you want! Also separate post - I'd like to link and pump up all my favorite fics by others!

#i did this wrong #i know i'm supposed to take numbers as asks #but i forgot #haha #hope talks

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designatedloveinterest · 5 years ago

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Customers who enjoyed the Amazing Devil also purchased....

since you lovely young people are correctly going crazy for The Amazing Devil I’m thinking you might benefit from a list of songs you might also like! I am your Mom Friend. I had originally tied these to individual songs (for instance, That Unwanted Animal is incredibly Brechtian) but that sort of collapsed. Anyhoo when I listen to the album this is what I’m also hearing.

Patti Smith, Because The Night

The Doug Anthony Allstars, Bottle

The Proclaimers, Over and Done With

Kate Bush, This Woman’s Work

Nick Cave and the Bad Seeds - John Finn’s Wife

The Divine Comedy, Everybody knows that I love you (Neil Hannon even LOOKS like book!Dandelion in this video, holy shit)

The Mountain Goats, How to Embrace a Swamp Creature

Tori Amos, Winter

Pulp, Babies

Richard Thompson, 1952 Vincent Black Lightning

The one song I’d like to include but couldn’t find online is Robyn Archer’s version of Brecht’s Song of the Stimulating Impact of Cash, but you should definitely check out some Brecht

PS "but DLI why did you not include actual influences the band have mentioned like Nat King Cole and Joni MItchell???” because I am not so familiar with that stuff and I’m still triggered by being forced to learn Both Sides Now in primary school music but there’s nothing to stop you doing that research yourself

PPS needs more ladies, pls suggest

PPPS tagging @joeybateyofficial bc if someone compared my writing to Neil Hannon and John Darnielle I would die of joy but ymmv

#the amazing devil #joey batey #madeleine hyland #music

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jordanerickson · 5 years ago

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Top 40 Tracks of 2019

https://open.spotify.com/playlist/6RvJKcx2aPZbQv93RQHj1J?si=z7_Z3l5lTOOeRhc0WS0bLQ

Kids - PUP Is a list of songs reflective of where I feel my year has been? Or are they aspirational to where I want the next year to go? It feels like a bit of both. I don’t even remember what was going on the month I stumbled on this song but I know I was feeling bad at times and playing this song at full volume in my car and shouting along really made me feel better. "I should have tapped out/given in to my demons" says so much with so few words. I’m not into punk but if it was all like this I would be.

It Might Be Time - Tame Impala The drums sound like When The Levee Breaks, aka the best sounding drums of all time. Through the transitive property, this track kicks ass. Also love it when an exciting song has a dour message about getting old letting the dream of the eternal party die.

Paramour - Anna Meredith This song is so kinetic and exciting on its own and then I found out Anna Meredith is a composer with an OBE and did the soundtrack for Eighth Grade. She seems cool. Also from 3:25 on this song absolutely slays - a drop, a squealing 80s guitar solo, and then this devastating beat... you gotta love it.

Younger - The Mountain Goats John Darnielle is obviously a real lyrics wiz but this one especially really does feel like it's from a Dungeons and Dragons game. It actually reminds me of this comic called Head Lopper which is sort of an encapsulation of every swords and sorcery fantasy wrapped into one. The bassline gives so much space in the verses and when those backing vocals come in with the chorus things really feel epic. Also, gotta respect the sax solo.

Frontier - Holly Herndon I'm already obsessed with Shape Singing, so of course I was on board in the first ten seconds. On top of that Holly taught an A.I. to add tracks using human voices, and then she went back to the root traditions of songwriting to write a song about climate change?!?! Incredible. I was talking to my brother about this track and he brought up the fact that the lyrics seem to pit both older generations and the Earth itself as antagonistic toward the listener. "This Earth doesn't care for what we need, what we breathe/A frontier of green or of dust" What a call to action. I can just imagine a remnant of humanity singing this in caves 400 years from now once the wasteland is scoured clean.

Pressure To Party - Julia Jacklin How are all of these Australians so good at making pop-rock all of a sudden? I saw Julia Jacklin play at The Cedar last month and she was so pleasant and nice and this song was the closer because of course it was. What a beautiful song, the melody is perfect.

The Barrel - Aldous Harding This one was a surprise when I was putting the playlist together. I had completely forgotten about it but it's just an incredible groove and her voice is so clear and nice. The weird high talky voice coming in on the third chorus is the exact type of left-field choice I want in a song.

If You Want It - Jay Som This was playing in the background of a coffee shop and when the solo comes in at 1:35 I literally dropped everything and pulled up Shazam to figure out what I was listening to.

Heavy Heavy - Pom Pom Squad Every once in a while an artist just hits a rich vein of angst in the songwriting mines and Pom Pom Squad hit the motherlode. The build on this song destroys me.

Proud - The Nunnery I saw The Nunnery twice this year and both times I was blown away. She loops every track live almost effortlessly. This one is about how she's proud of you for getting out of your house.

Mine Right Now - Sigrid I hope when Sigrid came up with the chorus for this song she took herself out for an expensive meal.

Whitsand Bay - Metronomy An album that snuck in near the end of the year. This feels like a throwback to 2010, which I will not explain any further.

Chain Reaction - Control Top Wow this song really kicks ass!!!! The lyrics feel like a parody somehow but actually they're perfect?!

Bratebrann - Kvelertak I have loved these guys for a long time and got to seen them in Chicago back in 2014. They are getting less metal and more rock and I don't hate it! I always forget how good every metal drummer is and then a song like this comes along and I'm air drumming along with them.

Larry, Sleepover Friend - Ecce Shnak What the hell is this song even? I have no idea why I like this weird operatic nonsense but this track specifically gets me. The rest of their stuff is not interesting in any way but sometimes an artist can write some weird perfect single and this is one of them.

NICE OUT - Kilo Kish Weird minor key pop should be a bigger genre.

So Hot You're Hurting My Feelings - Caroline Polachek This title makes me laugh, and quite frankly Caroline wrote a better Haim song than the girls from Haim.

Drunk II - Mannequin Pussy "And everyone says to me, 'Missy you're so strong' but what if I don't wanna be?" UGH AMAZING

Hungry Child - Hot Chip Hot Chip releases an album every couple years like clockwork and on every album there are at least 2 songs that go into the all-time great Hot Chip songs. Their Greatest Hits album would be unbelievable.

Turning - Ben Noble Apparently a Minneapolis local! What a groove this song gets into!

Lark - Angel Olsen I know I'm supposed to hold up Burn Your Fire No Witness as a landmark all-time album but honestly I think it's super boring. Then Lauren played this song for me when we were on a long road trip and I had to stop and ask who we were listening to because I was so stunned. More music should have a string section.

The other 20 songs are great too but I’m lazy!

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I had not in fact ever considered Michael and Alex being stock characters in a Taylor Swift song. Would you elaborate? I am very interested.

oh man anon. thank you for this, i get to talk about my two favorite topics of the week, getting this ask has made my NIGHT. also this is going to be long and largely incoherent, apologies in advance.

when i said that both of malex were stock characters from taylor swift songs i didn’t mean that there are specific taylor swift songs that each of them are in (though if you’re asking my first impression is that michael would be style and alex, contrary to the gifset you are referring to, would be red). i’m talking about the type of stories taylor swift tells. i think the most efficient way to explain what i mean is to look at each part of malex from the other’s perspective. for example:

alex from michael’s pov: you fell in love with a boy at 17/18 years old, had brief and absolutely magical connection, and then he went off to war. 10 years later, he comes back and you’re both different but the you you are now still loves the him he was then, and it kills you inside, and you break your own heart over it. you are slowly realizing that the boy he was is still in there, and you might still love him.

michael from alex’s pov: when you were 17/18 years old you fell in love with a boy who was smart and kind and caring, and you had to leave him for good reasons and you broke your own heart over him. 10 years later, you come back home so much more experienced only to find that he’s more jaded and sharper, and the reasons you left are still lurking, but you try and try and try to do the actions of loving him anyway, you try to make something work, and it doesn’t work out, and you break your own heart over him, again.

not too long after 1989 came out taylor swift did a small concert at the grammy museum where she performed blank space, and in that concert she pointed out that the character the media made her to be was quite different to who she actually is. this got me thinking, and eventually i came to the conclusion that most of tswift’s songs are like… not from her perspective. “dear john” is, obviously, and “welcome to new york”, and a few others. however, i would argue that most of them aren’t about her, or at least i think it’s better when you don’t automatically assume the song in question is autobiographical.(1)

so when you think about it from a “she is writing fiction” standpoint and do a more in depth analysis of the characters she crafts, the boys & men that tswift writes about are pretty archetypal. it’s pop/pop country music, and her musical ambitions aren’t to like… reach the narrative complexity of someone like john darnielle. they’re simpler and more broad, and that’s not a bad thing — there’s a reason only damaged people listen to the mountain goats, but everyone can relate to a taylor swift song and if they say they can’t then they’re lying to you.

there’s a point in tswift’s career where she switched from writing about romeo to writing about james dean, or, as todd puts it, from love to sex.(2) this is also about the time when she stops idealizing relationships in the same way; there’s a growth moment here, and it’s why i like so much of taylor swift’s new work so much.

all of that preamble to say: when i say that malex are stock characters in a taylor swift song, i’m talking about pre-1989 taylor swift. the entire story of malex up to and including 2x06 could have been a single song on Red. specifically, i think that they’re each one of her archetypal characters as seen by the other one. there’s something uniquely tragic about being young enough that love hasn’t hurt you as much as it will, and being that young and loving someone and having it fall apart around you. that happens in a lot of taylor swift songs; it’s part of why she’s so relatable. it’s also why i tune into the fucking CW every week despite the fact that the show is [checks notes] bad.

footnotes!

1. assuming autobiography is a problem in music and writing about music in general? it’s generally easier for men to write songs that are fictional stories about other people and not have their personal lives or opinions projected onto them. this article goes into it about mitski and is worth the read, but to sum up women are generally assumed to be more confessionalist than men, which is maybe not a good assumption to make.

2. i disagree with a lot of what todd says about tswift here but he makes good points and it’s worth checking out.

#roswell new mexico #meta #roswell new mexico meta #taylor swift #oh man was this fun to write.oh man #malex #michael guerin #alex manes #otp: past tense

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Favourite music of the decade!

This is some of what I’d consider the most innovative, artistic and just great to listen to music from 2010-2019.

First a Lot of very good songs:

Crying - Premonitory dream

Arcade Fire - Normal person

Sufjan Stevens - I want to be well

Deerhunter - Sailing

Foster the People - Pumped up kicks

Carly Rae Jepsen - Boy problems

Grimes - Butterfly

Travis Scott - Butterfly effect

Future - March madness

Kanye West ft. Nicki Minaj et al - Monster

Juice Wrld - Won’t let go

Danny Brown - Downward spiral

Kendrick Lamar - Sing about me, I’m dying of thirst

Kate Tempest - Marshall Law

The Avalanches - Stepkids

Iglooghost - Bug thief

Vektroid - Yr heart

Ariel Pink - Little wig

Mac Demarco - Sherrill

Vektor - Charging the void

Jyocho - 太陽と暮らしてきた [family]

Panic! at the disco - Ready to go

The Wonder Years - An American religion

Oso oso - Wake up next to god

The World Is a Beautiful Place & I Am No Longer Afraid to Die - I can be afraid of anything

And my top 20(+2) albums:

Calling Rich gang’s style influential on trap would be like saying Nirvana may have had some impact on early-90s grunge. In 2019 with trap so omnipresent in popular music, hip hop or otherwise, through the impact of artists like Drake and Travis Scott it’s almost hard to remember when this was a niche genre - it was Rich gang that popularised its modern sound here. Birdman’s beats with their rattling hi-hats and deep bass could have been made 5 years later without arousing suspicion, while Rich Homie Quan and Young Thug deliver consistently entertaining flows and numerous bangers between them. Thugger, this being his first major project, steals the show with his yelpy and hilarious rapping style. This may have once been the defining sound of house parties in the Atlanta projects; now it can be heard blasting in the night from white people’s sound systems around the world.

Early 21p may have never aimed to be cool, to avoid a certain appearance of lameness, but they did have a knack for writing some really catchy pop with an optimistic message. To the devoted, the critics of Pilots’ apparent mishmash of nerdy rap, sentimental piano balladry and EDM production were just stuffy, wanting music to stay how it was back-in-the-day forever and unwilling to get with the times. This viewpoint is understandable when you approach this album openly and actually listen to Tyler Joseph’s lyrics about youthful anxiety and insecurity, delivered with real conviction and sincerity, actually recognise that disparate musical elements are all there for emotional punch. A few songs do underwhelm. But this is emo for post-emo Gen Z’s and it’s easy to see why to some it can be deeply affecting.

The musical ancestor to the ongoing and endless stream of ‘lo-fi hip hop beats’ youtube mixes, chillwave filled the same low-stress niche, and Dive released at the peak of the genre’s relevance. Tycho’s woozy, mellow sound prominently features rich acoustic and bass guitar melodies over warm synths, enhancing the music’s organic feel compared to that of purely digital producers in the genre. The experience of starting this album is like waking up in a soft bed, the cover’s gorgeous sunrise reddening the room’s walls, while a guitarist improvises somewhere on the Mediterranean streets outside. And it is indeed great to study or relax to!

Simple, minimal acoustic guitar and vocals. If you’ve got talent this type of music shows it, or else it doesn’t: perfect then for Ichiko Aoba. Her touch is light, her songs calm, meditative, in no rush to get anywhere. As if serenely watching a natural landscape, one can best understand and enjoy Aoba’s music in quiet and peaceful appreciation.

Through the incorporation of genres like shoegaze and alternative rock, Deafheaven managed to create a rare thing: a metal album that’s both heavy and accessible, needing no sacrifice of one for the other’s sake. Over these four main songs, there’s a sensation of being taken on an intense, atmospheric and even emotional journey, with the band stepping away from the negativity and misanthropy that dominates most metal. The vocals, closer to the confessionalism of screamo than classic black metal shrieks, express more sadness than they do aggression, and in respites between solid blaring walls of guitar and drums, calm pianos and gently strummed guitar passages set a pensive tone. This totally enveloping, flawlessly produced sound can take you away, like My Bloody Valentine’s best work, into a dream or trance.

By the late 2000s MCR had taken their thrones as the kings of a subculture formed from the coalition of goth, emo, scene and other assorted Hot Topic-donned kids, and earned a lifelong place in the hearts of many a depressed teenager. But after the generation-defining The Black Parade Gerard Way took off the white facepaint and skeleton costume, ditched the lyrics about corpse brides and vampires, and embraced an anthemic, purely pop punk sound. The silly story of Danger Days, set in a dystopian California where villainous corporations rule and only the Punks can stop them, serves as a kind of idealised setting for the all-out rebellion against authority and normality that so many fantasised about taking part in. The band’s electrifying performances are the most uplifting of their decade making music. For many diehards the upbeat sound here was a celebration that they’d made it through the most difficult years of their lives, and a spit in the face of those who’d done them wrong.

The teller of rural American tales, the indie legend, the teen-whisperer himself. John Darnielle, long past his early lo-fidelity home recordings and now backed by a full band, loses none of the heart his songs are famous for. The theme of the album, taken straight from John’s childhood when the pro wrestling on TV offered an escape from his abusive stepfather, is complemented by the country and Tex-Mex flavouring to the instrumentation. Some of the best lyrics in his long career infuse the stories of wrestlers with universal meaning - his characters try, fail, lose hope, reckon with their mediocrity, and when they step into the ring they’re up against all the adversity life can throw at them. John Darnielle’s saying that when that happens, you stand up and sock back.

Folk music was always a major part of the Scandinavian black metal scene during its peak years, so when American musicians began exploring the genre naturally they incorporated American styles of folk. The complex, oppressive and sometimes hellish compositions here, starkly contrasted with bluegrass that sounds straight from the campfire circle, give the impression of life in the uncharted woods of the American frontier, in the middle of a brutally cold winter. Almost unbelievably, one-man-band Austin Lunn plays every instrument on the album: multiple guitar parts, bass and drums as well as banjo, fiddle, and woodwinds.

Andy Stott seems to delight in making his music as unnerving, haunting, perhaps even scary, as possible. The female vocals these songs are built around become ghostly, echoing and overlapping themselves disorientingly. The percussion, audibly resembling metal clanging, rustling or rattling in the distance, is often left to stand for its own, creating a tense space it feels like something should be filling. UK-based club and dub music can be felt influencing the grimy almost-but-not-quite danceable rhythms here, but the lo-fi recording and menacing vibe makes this feel like a rave at some sort of dimly lit abandoned factory.

There’s so much Mad Max in this album you can just picture it being set to images of freights burning across the desert. True to its title, the nine songs on Nonagon Infinity roll into each other as if part of one big perpetual composition, with the end looping back seamlessly to the start and musical motifs cropping up both before and after the song they form the base of. With its fuzzy, raw sound, bluesy harmonica and wild whooping, the Gizz create a truly rollicking rock’n’roll experience. The band would go on to release 5 albums within twelve months a year later, but Nonagon shows these seven Australian madmen at the height of their powers.

Sometimes you just want to listen to fun, hyperactive pop. The spirit of 8-bit video game soundtracks and snappy pop punk come together to create a vividly digital world of sound that seems to celebrate the worldliness, connectivity and shiny neon colours of early 2010s internet culture and social media. The up-pitched vocals and general auditory mania recall firmly Online musical trends like nightcore and vocaloid, while the beats pulse away, compelling you to dance like this is a house party and the best playlist ever assembled is on. It demands to be listened to at night with headphones, in a room lit only by your laptop screen.

“You hate everyone. To you everyone’s either a moron, or a creep or a poser. Why do you suddenly care about their opinion of you?” “Because I’m shallow, okay?! … I want them to like me.”

The fact that that Malcolm In The Middle quote is sampled at the emotional climax of this record should give some idea to the absurdity that defines Brave Little Abacus. It’s not even the only sample from the show on here. And yet the passion and urgency so evident in Adam Demirjian’s lispy singing and the band’s nostalgia-inducing, even cozy, melodies are made to stir feelings. The tearjerker chords and guitar progressions are so distinctive of emo bands with that special US-midwest melancholia, and they are interspersed with warm ambiance and playful sound effects ripped from TV and video games, seemingly vintage throwbacks to a sunny childhood. Demirjian’s lyrics, yelled out as if through tears or in the middle of a panic attack, verge on word salad in their abstraction, but that’s not the point: you can feel his small town loneliness and sense the trips he’s spent lost on memory lane. The combined effect all adds to Just Got Back’s themes of adolescence and the trauma of leaving it. While legendary in certain internet communities for this album and their 2009 masterpiece Masked Dancers, the band remains obscure to wider audiences.

These Danish punks know how to convey emotion through their raw and dramatic songs. Elias Rønnenfelt’s vocal presence and charisma cannot be ignored: his husky voice drawls, at times breaks, gasps for breath, builds up the deeply impassioned, intense force behind his words. The band sounds free and wild, unrestrained by a tight adherence to tempo, often speeding up, slowing down or straying from the vocals within the same song, as if playing live. Instrumentally the command over loud and quiet, tension and release, accentuates the vocals in crafting the album’s pace. Horns and saloon pianos throughout give the feel of a performance in a smoky, underground blues bar, with Rønnenfelt swaying onstage as he howls the romantic, distraught, heartbroken lyrics he truly believes in.

At some point on first listening to Death Grips, a thought along the lines of “He really yells like this the whole way through, huh?” probably crosses the mind. When Exmilitary first appeared, quietly uploaded to the internet, the rapper’s name and identity unknown, another likely reaction among listeners might have been “What am I even listening to?” But perhaps more revolutionary than Death Grips’ incredibly aggressive sound and style might have been its foreshadowing of how over the next decade underground rap acts would explode into the mainstream through viral songs, online word of mouth and memes. It showed all you needed to come from nowhere to the top of the game was to seize attention, and it did that and far more. MC Ride’s intoxicatingly crass, intense rapping captures the energy of a mosh pit where injuries happen, the barrage of sensations of a coke high, while the eclectic mix of rock and glitchy electronics on the instrumentals is disorienting in the best way. If rap were rock and this was 1977, Death Grips would have just invented punk. Ride’s lyrics paint a confrontational, hyper-macho persona; unlike much hip hop braggadocio, the overwhelming impression given is that Ride truly does not care what anyone thinks. He just goes hard and does not stop. It’s music to punch the wall to.

Inspired by classic rock operas, this concept album represents some major ambition and innovation in musical storytelling. Delivered in frontman Damian Abraham’s gravelly shouted vocals, the complex lyrical narrative of the album follows a factory worker, an activist and their struggle against the omnipotent author (Abraham himself) who controls their fates. Featuring devices like unreliable narrators and fourth-wall breaking, it takes some serious reading into to untangle. But it’s the bright guitarwork, combining upbeat punk rock and indie to create some killer riffs, that gives the album its furious energy and cinematic proportions.

Joanna Newsom is enchanted by the past. Like 2006’s ambitious Ys, the music on Divers makes this evident with its invocation of Western classical and medieval music, throwing antiquated instruments like clavichords together with lush string orchestration, woodwinds, organs, folk guitar and Newsom’s signature harp. With her soulful, moving vocals leading the way, it’s hard not to imagine her as some kind of Renaissance-era country woman contemplating nature, love and mortality in the fields and the woods. As always Newsom proves herself a stunningly original and creative arranger with the sheer compositional intricacy and flow of these songs, and most of all the harmonious intertwining of singing and instrumental backing.

Burial’s music is born from the London night: the bustle of the streets, the faint sounds from distant raves, the buskers, the rain on bus windows. This EP’s dreamlike quality makes listening to it feel like taking a trip across the city well after midnight, watching the lights go by, with no idea where you hope to get to. Every single sound and effect on these two songs is so precisely chosen, from the shifting and shuffling beats, the swelling synths and wordless vocals that sound like a club from a different dimension, the ambient hiss and pop of a vinyl record. Musically this sound is drawn from UK-based scenes like 2-step and drum ‘n bass, but twisted into such a moody and abstracted form as to be nearly unrecognisable as dubstep. Just when this urban, dismal sound is at its most oppressive, heavenly soul singers or organs cut through like a ray of light in the dark.

There’s an imaginary rulebook of how construct music, how to properly make tempos and combinations of notes sound harmonious, and Gorguts have spent their career ripping it up and throwing it in the bin. On 1998’s seminal Obscura, their atonal experimentation sounded at times like random noises in random order. But listen closely to Obscura or Colored Sands, their return after a long hiatus, and the method behind the madness emerges. One mark of great death metal is that it’s impossible to predict what direction it will go even a few seconds in advance, and the band achieves this while presenting a heavy, slow, momentous sound. The density of inspired riffs, and the intricate balancing of loud and quiet, fast and slow paced throughout these songs are exceptional. In instrumental sections the guitars will echo out as if across a barren plane, then the song will build up to the momentum of a freight train. Behind the crashing and twisting walls of guitar the patterns of blast beat drumming are almost mathematical in nature. Luc Lemay’s harsh bellows sound like a warlord’s cry or a pure expression of rage to the void. It’s threatening, menacing, unapproachable, but it all makes sense in the end.

Futuristic yet deeply retro, Blank Banshee’s music takes vaporwave beyond its roots in the pure consumerist parody of artists like Vektroid and James Ferraro and makes it actually sound amazing. Songs are built out of a single vocal snippet processed beyond recognition, new agey synthesisers, Windows XP-era computer noises, hilariously out of place instruments, all set to the 808 bass and hi-hats of hip-hop style beats. The genre’s pioneers intentionally sucked the soul from their music using samples pulled from 70s and 80s elevators, infomercials and corporate lounges - here the throwback seems to be to the early 2000s childhood of the internet, and the influence of a time when email and forums were revolutionary can be felt. The effect of this insanity is an album that whirls by like a techno-psychedelic haze: the atmosphere of dark trap beats places you squarely in a 2013 studio one moment, the next you’re surrounded by relaxing midi pianos and humming that a temple of new age practitioners would meditate to. Still, at some point when listening to this album, perhaps when the ridiculous steel drums kick in near the end, you realise that this is all to some degree a joke, and a funny one. It’s hard to overstate what an entertaining half-hour this thing is.

While 2012’s Good Kid, m.a.a.d City presented a movie in album form of Kendrick’s childhood and early adult years, TPAB’s journey is one of personal growth, introspection, and nuanced examination of the state of race in post-Ferguson America. It’s simultaneously the Zeitgeist for the US in 2015 and a soul-search in the therapist’s office. Sounding deeply vulnerable, he openly discusses depression, alcoholism, religion and feelings of helplessness. The White House and associated gangstas on the cover give some idea to the album’s political themes, with Lamar contrasting Obama’s presidency to the political powerlessness and lifelong ghetto entrapment of millions of black Americans. Everything I’ve written about the lyrics here really only scratches the surface because the words here are substantive, complex and dense with meaning. Near enough every bar can be analysed for multiple meanings and interpretations, essays can and have been written on the overall work, anything less does not do justice. The musical versatility on display is astounding: the album acts as an extravaganza of African-American music, from smooth west coast G-funk to east coast grit, neo-soul and rock to beat poetry, and most of all jazz. Like an expertly laid character arc the record progresses through its ideas in such a way that they’re all impactful, with the slurred rapping imitating a depressed drunken stupor followed later by exuberant, defiant cries of “I love myself!”, the white-hot rage against police brutality balanced by the hopeful mantra: “do you hear me, do you feel me, we gon be alright”. Perhaps the most culturally significant album of the 2010s and an essential piece of the hip-hop canon.

This harrowing hour chronicles the struggles and everyday tragedy of a series of characters and their relationship with the city they live in, narratively driven by some outstandingly poetic lyrics. Jordan Dreyer’s wordy tales despair at the poverty, gang violence and urban decay in the band’s native Grand Rapids, Michigan, an almost childlike open-hearted naivete in his words as he empathises with the broken and alienated people in these songs. There’s no jaded sneer or sly lesson to be learned as he sings about the child killed by a stray bullet or the homebird left alone after all their friends move away, just genuine second-hand sadness and a dream that compassion and community will eventually heal the pain. Taking elements from bands like At the Drive-In’s fusion of punk and progressive, and mewithoutyou’s shout-sung vocals, La Dispute hones its sound to a razor edge to put fierce instrumental power behind the lyrics. Not an easy listen, but a sharply written songbook and a perfect execution on its concept.

Around 2008, Joanna Newsom met comedian Andy Samberg. Within a year, their relationship was becoming the basis upon which the poetry of Have One on Me was spun. Newsom’s lyrics, exploring her relationship with her future-husband, nature, death, spirituality, are above all else loving. Through her warm and vibrant voice, at times an operatic trill and in others deeply soulful, she expresses the joy of love for another, the peace and earthly connection of her beloved pastoral lifestyle, deeply affecting melancholy and grief. Contemplative, artful, genuine or expressive: every lyric in every sweet melody is used to offer her ruminations on life or overflowings of passion.

More so than her previous and next albums, the feel of the album is of not just a folkloric past but also the present day, with drums, substantial brass and string arrangements, and even electric guitar anchoring the sound to Newsom’s real, not imaginary, life in the 21st century. Yet songs here with moods or settings evoking simpler lifestyles and the women living them in 1800s California or the Brontës’ English moors still have a universal relevance. Whether rooted in past of present, the instrumental variety of these compositions, from classical solo piano, grand orchestral arrangements led by harp, to the twang of country guitars or intricate vocal harmonising, makes it apparent that this is the work of a master songwriter in full command of well over a dozen talented musicians. Ultimately, what makes this my favourite album of the decade is that, very simply, it is one stunningly beautiful song after another, all collated into a cohesive 2-hour portrait of Newsom’s soul.

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