#they’re usually compelling or well written and complex

[lyriumsings]

it’s so funny to me when people hate a popular character for the sake of being contrarian like dksjdj that’s so like 13 yrs old it’s giving when i hated pink bc it was “girly”

[whichcouldmeannothing]

big big marvey fic rec list

marvey is currently my most bookmarked ship, so trust me when i say i've been around the bend for marvey content. i have dug through a lot of it the past few months, so trust that these fics have been highly rated!

fics are loosely grouped, with the summary and my thoughts under the cut :3 no spoilers ofc bc i love you

MY PERSONAL FAVOURITES

A Specter-Ross Affair by @frivoloussuits (15k+, au)

“You ordered an ‘extra-hot, extra-wet cappuccino, single-origin, properly layered, to-go and ready five minutes ago to make up for your service speed or lack thereof.’” In which Mike is a barista, Rachel is a lawyer, and Harvey is paid excessive amounts of money to plan their joyous Christmas wedding.

"Love is just a particularly socially accepted form of fraud. It's a series of increasingly complex and fragile deceptions between two or more people, and, more alarmingly, between each participant and their own deluded subconscious."

i literally cannot recommend this fic enough. this might be my favourite read of the entire year, dead serious. this sounds fluffy but trust me, the pining and the angst go well like salt on a chocolate chip cookie: extremely decadent. everything about this fic goes insane and this should be your gateway drug into marvey, im so serious about this. READ IT. (weddingplanner!harvey)

of all the gin joints by @frivoloussuits (10k+, au)

Hanging around a neighborhood bar one night, Harvey befriends a guy named Mike after realizing they can both quote The Princess Bride on demand. In the law offices of Rand, Kaldor, Zane and Pearson, senior partner Harvey Specter takes on an unusual case, representing his managing partner's daughter as she divorces a Michael James Ross. Harvey sees no connection until it's far too late.

"They’re playing a virtuosic duet with inhuman ease, as if the intoxication has broken their boundaries and blurred them into a single entity."

this. obsessed with fics that really use the law in their plots, and this is a prime example. a lot of chemistry in this one that is described in a way that makes you jealous of the bond they share and there are still lines in this fic that i think about almost everyday but honestly, such a top-tier read. PLEASE PLEASE IF YOU LIKE SUFFERING ANF REALLY REALLY GOOD CHEMISTRY PLEASE

5U175 by Closer (26k, canon-adjacent)

Harvey sometimes moonlights as a Star Trek BNF. Mike might have an attitude problem on the internet. TiberiusGhost is strangely compelling, for a recluse who never goes to meetups, and Harvey's finding this kid Photohead vaguely familiar…

i know that the terminology in this one is hella old-school but trust me. as someone who doesnt read a lot of fandom fics, this fic has changed it all for me (also bc the author replied to my comment hehehe) stick with this fic because the way fandom weaves with the character development is absolutely delicious, i remember saying this in my og comment but this fic was written with love for fandom and you should definitely read it too!!! you'd absolutely love it! (also ben stans rise up ^^)

fics to sink your teeth into (20k+)

needs must by @melthemagpie (98k+, au)

When Grammy needs an upgrade in care, Mike knows that the usual one-off gig as a paid submissive won't be enough. He takes a job he's been refusing for a while - a long-term, full-time contract. He expects his client to be a sadistic asshole. He expects not to like it. He's wrong on both counts.

this is a fandom classic, every fic rec has this on the list (cw for dom/sub and prostitution, so if you're uncomfy please dont read) but i swear there are so many romantic moments in this one that make me swoon and the smut is very good, i usually tap out in long fics really quickly but this hooked me the whole way through twice. thats my ringing endorsement, READ THIS

Lobster and Other Catastrophes by @andthetardis (21k, canon-compliant)

After months of silence, Mike starts texting Harvey again out of the blue. Funny thing to do on his honeymoon, really.

BRO PLEASE. this was so good. angsty and pining-y enough even though it's mostly a text fic. text fics to me are more like comedic, but this one had substance and heart (and funny and enjoyable btw). pulls you in and really makes you want to stick it out and get to the beautiful ending <333 (harvey being soft is probably a category on its own :3)

The Game by @frivoloussuits (27k, hunger games au)

Harvey Specter and Donna Paulsen are efficient and elegant killers. They have trained since childhood, mentored personally by Jessica Pearson and marked for years as District 1's Tributes for the Hunger Games. Mike Ross is an orphan from District 12, a drug dealer, and an underage gambler. After years of scrutinizing the Hunger Games on TV to make savvy bets, he finds himself on the wrong side of the camera, now playing the odds just to survive. Harvey and Mike cannot, should not trust each other. Still, they strike a backroom deal.

"Because he’s clever and quick-thinking and he’s learned her main lesson well– don’t love anyone you wouldn’t be willing to see dead. Ideally, don’t love anyone at all."

I READ THIS WHEN I WAS REVISITING HUNGER GAMES AND OHHHHH THIS HAS THE ANGST. absolutely riveting. ths is the third fic im reccing from them bc i love frivoloussuits. i would die for them HHFSHFHKSDGDHFG i love the angst and the life-threatening situations that the hunger games provide and harvey as a career is correct. its just correct. everything here grips my soul

Disaster Stories by agatestones (22k, canon-compliant)

"Hold on," Mike asked, "you made Donna come into work in the middle of a blizzard?" "I don't make Donna do anything. Haven't you learned by now?" Harvey gave Mike a mean little smile, but under that was relief for anyone to see. "You, I can make come into the office in a blizzard."

reads like a novella to me, and it's really good!!! very episodic and you really feel like these are things that have happened in universe. its very slice of lifey and i reread it a lot as a comfort read, its like a big hug to me

Pizza and a Movie by Closer (30k+, au)

In an alternate universe, Harvey's still a lawyer but Mike's not a pot runner -- he's a deliveryman for Rollo's Pizza and Ribs, which happens to be Harvey's favorite pizza place. Once Harvey finds out his pizza guy is a genius, Mike's life takes a few turns he would not have expected...

i swear this is the most rom-commy fic marvey has to offer. i like aus that slap me in the face more with the alternate universe, but this is such a rom-com plot. fandom classic as well and it really reads like a hugh grant 90s movie and if thats not enough to pull you in idk what will tbh

Imprimatur by Closer (22k, au)

Mike was raised to believe Imprint was a life-changing event for those few lucky enough to experience it. Harvey was raised to believe it was a form of mental illness. When it actually happened, neither of them noticed.

this goes absolutely crazy. one of those fics where you read it and you almost want to throw your phone at the wall because the characters could make it so easy if they werent so stupid (but in a good way of course) but the way it was written, you feel the depth of the soulmate bond and why its so important (which a lot of soulmate aus forget to do loll) but goes down like an expensive and delicious dinner :)

afternoon reads (10k+)

Sony SRF-39FP by @frivoloussuits (11k+, canon-adjacent)

Anita Gibbs won’t settle for Mike, not when there are name partners within her reach. She offers only one deal– two years, no other charges against anyone else in the firm, as long as Harvey Specter turns himself in. And even as Donna and Jessica and Louis and Mike beg him not to, he jumps on the grenade. “Time to get busy living or get busy dying,” he remarks, and Mike gives a small chuckle. Then Harvey smirks, straightens his suit jacket, and strides into FCI Danbury.

“I can’t believe they’re trying to lock you in a box and forget about you,” Mike sighs as he leaves.

“Well, as long as you don’t forget me, I figure I’ll survive.”

“Maybe you haven’t noticed, but forgetting’s never been my strong suit.

cw for depersonalization and desc of solitary confinement, very very heavy but the way mike is there throughout everything makes my heart twinge. i really dont know how to describe this fic at all but its really good. it makes me cry a lot. also made me start listening to jazz which- uh

Here at the end of all things by @tattooedsiren (10k, au)

When he arrives at the Pearson Hardman building the lights are dimmed and the floor is deserted. His feet carry him to Harvey's office even though he expects it to be empty. Because Harvey probably fled the city via helicopter or teleporter or sheer force of will. But when he approaches the office he can see that Harvey is there. He has moved the couch so that it now faces the floor to ceiling windows and Mike silently sits beside Harvey, joins him in looking down at the chaos engulfing the city below. [Apocalypse AU]

I LOVE APOCALYPSE FICS UP UP UP badass!harvey makes me bark, but im a really big fan of people who find happiness in the worst circumstances and this fic does it so so so well. reminds me a lot of tlou episode like 2? the one with the strawberries. please this is what i revisit when i miss marvey and i dont have a lot of time because the world and the characters are jsut so delicious!!!

quick reads (1k+)

This Love is Silent by kim47 (8k, canon-compliant)

She should have known. She had known, that something was off, at least. She knew he was hiding something. She just never imagined it could be this. Despite Harvey's warnings, Mike tells Rachel the truth about everything. She's shocked, naturally, and more than a little angry, but she agrees to keep his secret, and even to date him. So when they break up, Harvey goes into damage-control mode.

RACHEL!! HELLO RACHEL!! im always up for smart and discerning rachel (this shows up in of all the gin joints too btw!!!) this runs realistic to me because it shows that rachelxmike arent some hopelessly wrong for each other couple, they have good and bad times. this feels more real to me than other fics bc its not like the world conspires for marvey to be apart, its just life. i know this makes it sound so sad, and it is, but trust me: this is really really really good i love this so much

an archive of harvey specter's expressions by @frivoloussuits (2k, canon-compliant)

Five old expressions that Mike rediscovers in new contexts once he and Harvey are (finally) together, and one that he sees for the first time. Alternatively titled “An Ode to Gabriel Macht’s Face.”

this was written for me. this is literally me. writing fic because gabriel macht is too pretty, like this fic is literally for me. a lot of peering at him to get this fic as masterfully written as it is, and i thank you author everyday for it. to me, this reads like it's been written with love and care and true adoration (Truly, like Mike)

Coffee-Cart Client Privilege by @frivoloussuits (7k, au)

Mike runs a coffee cart. The coffee cart.

"Why not? They're too big and dense to be a snack." So are you, Mike thinks, and yet.

IM SORRY I KEEP RECCING FRIVOLOUS SUITS THEYRE MY FAVOURITE WRITER IN THIS FANDOM HFBKABFDKHFBHKDSA this has the hand-wavy logic the show has itself but mike's internal monologue in this one is one of the best ive ever read and the way mike's integrated in the offices is just so well-done ahhhh

Objection by yeah its frivoloussuits again i feel bad tagging them like 7 times (2k, canon-adjacent)

When Mike announces he’s leaving, Harvey plans to hide the jagged pieces of his broken heart deep inside, where no one will ever find them. His heart would like to object.

BIGG fan of physical hurt/comfort!!!! also big fan of people absolutely freaking out in the hospital in fics, it makes me bounce of the wall!! very short but the angst and love really hits you quick and leaves you on the floor gasping for air. very good (also cant prove this but im very sure this is a scrubs reference.t hanks)

Excerpts From The Gospel of Harvey Specter, edited by Michael "Forever Awesome" Ross, 2011, 1st Ed, by @rcmclachlan (7k, canon compliant)

Mike can totally read people. Well, most people. Some people. Or maybe just Harvey, who's pretty much an open book.

this one's really funny! it doesent follow direct prose and instead plays a lot with the setting its in (where mike's a documenter of harvey) and its just so funny and adorable. has a lot of heart too, it isn't just crack or anything but you really feel everything mike does as he writes all this, read this!!1

One More Sleepless Night by @sal_si_puedes (9k, au)

Soul Bonds are one-sided – there’s usually mutual affection, but only one party feels the crippling need to be together as often as possible. If separated at length from their love, that party becomes crushed by longing, panic, and sheer hopelessness, and so it is illegal to forcibly keep Soulmates apart. Some days, Harvey Specter hates the Bond that skews his judgement and weakens his resolve, and he fears what would happen if anyone in his world ever discovers he is so compromised. He certainly never planned to disclose the Bond for the first time in the middle of Anita Gibbs’ office, in a last-ditch attempt to invalidate the deal sending Mike to prison.

HSDGFHSDKGHRLKGHK THIS FIC. i love fics that use more than just prose to tell their stories (see above fic) and this does my favourite thing that soulmate aus do, which is where they integrate in-universe explanations for the phenomenon. the amount of work and dedication put into this fic makes it absolutely sing and was absolutely lovely!!

also pspspsps

golden like the daffodils by @mini-mart (2k, canon-compliant)

Poetry holds meaning, for anyone who reads it. It obscures and dances around the literal and metaphorical, because it’s imbued with so much of something that it overflows out of any definition. It can make someone mad, or lovesick, or aroused, and the reactions would be absolutely warranted. Mike is poetry, to Harvey. - Harvey Specter could be a good politician, as he believes in pragmatism over poetry. He won't let his progress fall apart, won't let someone knock it down. And then someone unceremoniously cracks open a suitcase at his feet. Or: Harvey, pretty boys and poetry.

yeah yeah i wrote this yeah yeah self promo smth smth

there's a lot more that isn't here but i'll probably write a new one when i go for a deep dive through the ship tags again :3

^^ ao3 etiqutte applies! if you like the fic, kudos and comment and bookmark!! show your love! happy reading marveys! my gift to u :3

[secret-fiction]

Sonic & Stick's Hold Hands

When Sonic visits Sticks at her burrow on Bygone Island, she takes the opportunity to ask him a question that's been on her mind. What ensues is the two of them going out together on a short adventure, giving Sticks the opportunity to see some of the world she usually hides from.

General Audiences, Friendship, Romance, Oneshot 6,733 words. A Secret Santa gift fic, and a neat challenge!

Even from within her Burrow, one of the only places comfortable and safe enough for her to sleep, Sticks the Badger heard Sonic approach. The breeze trailing behind him jostled bells she’d hidden in the jungle branches, making a song distinct from those of natural wind gusts. None of her other friends or enemies moved that fast while also evading the traps. Yet he still couldn’t outpace her broad attention, allowing her a full second to process his arrival before he knocked on the door. 

Sticks bounded over to the door, but stopped short of opening it. A sudden worry had frozen her, compelling her to press her ear to the door and double check it wasn’t some government imposter. Arguing with such worries was pointless. It was easier to listen to the distinct footfalls of sneakers on her driftwood doormat, accompanied by a familiar post-run breath. Finding this confirmation, Sticks threw open the door before any more worries could interject. 

“Sonic!!!” shouted Sticks.

Sure enough it was Sonic the Hedgehog, arm outstretched to knock on her door as a breeze of leaves and dust caught up to him. He smirked immediately with a soft chuckle. “Wow! How'd you beat the fastest thing alive to your door?”

“Cause I can hear ya from a mile away! Even when you somehow dodge all my best booby traps.”

“Gotta say you had some fun ones this time,” said Sonic, stepping aside to gaze at the jungle where his trail passed a gauntlet of well concealed traps, having narrowly avoided setting them off. “Didn’t know you knew how to build a trebuchet.”

“What’s a trebuchet? D’ya mean my intruder launcher?” said Sticks.

“Guess you didn’t either!” said Sonic.

“What brings you to Bygone Island today? Need help getting off the grid? Or hiding from G-U-know Who?” asked Sticks.

“Psh, they’re hardly worth hiding from,” said Sonic, wiping his nose and leaning casually. “I just felt like headed this way today. Oh! Amy also wanted me to give you something.”

Sonic pulled a small binder of photographs from his quills and offered it to Sticks, who immediately accepted it. Inside were photos of Amy, taken of herself in a wide variety of locations. Some she was with friends like Sonic & Tails. Others she was alone with some scenery. Each one had a small note written on it as well, like custom postcards inviting Sticks specifically to join the others on one of these adventures. 

This gift made Sticks happy, but it was that annoyingly complex kind of happiness that made her want to cry. Especially the photo of Amy, Sonic, Tails, & Knuckles in Station Square. Behind them one tower was taller than the rest, a multimedia headquarters covered in satellites & antennas. Able to distract herself with this detail, she pulled the photo up close and looked for signs of tampering.

“I also got a bit to hang out today if you want, after you're done looking that over,” said Sonic. 

“Huh?” Sticks glanced up at Sonic and back to the photo a few times. It was hard to ascertain if his height matched with the distance from him to the tower. If this was a fake background, it was professionally edited. “Oh, sure, whatever. More importantly, is this photo real?” 

“Why wouldn’t it be?” Sonic leaned over and cocked his head. “I wind up in Station Square all the time.” 

“If it is real, then it further disproves the Postcard Conspiracy,” said Sticks.

“The Postcard Conspiracy.”

“Y’know, the one where they make up whole cities to sell ninety-cent postcards.”

“Can’t say that I do.” 

“What? But I thought you watched TV!” said Sticks, staring closely at him with her inquisitive glare.

“I thought you didn’t!” said Sonic, copying her inquisitive glare.

“Well I don’t, but I overheard it on someone else’s TV in town. Which is why I don’t fully trust the idea, because-”

“Because TV can’t be trusted.”

“Exactly!” 

Sticks and Sonic nodded to each other, affirming the logic she’d worked through. 

“But yeah I was there. That tower is real, as is Station Square.” Sonic put a hand to his chin as he processed Sticks’ information. “Honestly I’ve probably been to most places you could get a postcard of.” 

How had Sticks never considered this before? Of course he could reach any place on a map with his speed! She dashed into her burrow and dug through her pile of evidence boards, easily finding the one she’d nailed every postcard she could acquire to. It wasn’t her best work, but only because she had known this conspiracy was probably being spread on TV to waste her time.

“Quick, tell me about each of these!!” said Sticks as she pushed the board into Sonic’s arms, allowing some loose cards to fall off.“

“Hm, alright!” Sonic leaned the board on a wall then cracked his knuckles. 

Having apparently taken this as a challenge, Sonic picked through each postcard at an increasing rate. After stating that each was real, he stacked them in a pile on his right. Based on this, Sticks could discern that he’d place any faux locations on his left. After a minute all had been sorted, only one laying to Sonic’s left in the fake pile and the last one in his hand.

“Hmmm, nope, never been here,” said Sonic as he turned to show Sticks the postcard. It depicted a wide waterfall, labeled as Geauga Falls. Sonic’s finger tapped an additional note on the bottom that Sticks had written, saying the scene would be awesome if it is real. “But that doesn't mean it’s not there. Y’know you could go see places like this if you wanted, right?” 

Sticks felt her teeth clench for some reason and had to shake her head to clear it enough to form words worth speaking. “Yeah yeah, I just don’t got the time. I’m a busy gal! Or guy! Or whatever!”

Sonic leaned around Sticks to glance inside the burrow, no doubt taking notice of her well organized hoard of potential crafting materials. “I can see that.”

“Also if any of these places aren’t real, they could be some kind of a trap! For Tourists! A Tourist trap!”

“Oh, several of them are definitely also tourist traps,” said Sonic. As he made eye contact with Sticks again, his eyes widened for some reason as he continued, “But there’s no danger if you don’t have money with you.”

“Ah, I see! A financial incentive.” Sticks let herself snarl at the concept of finance for a moment, she knew Sonic would understand. “Of course they’d save money too by setting these traps at preexisting real locations!” She glanced back at the postcard stacks again, remembering the single one sorted as ‘not real.’ “What about that one?!”

“Oh, that’s just art of a place called England. It’s the setting of a popular book series, completely fictional… I think.” Sonic’s eyes trailed to the ground for a moment. “Anyway, they sell them as gifts for the fans.”  

“If they keep that up, one of these days some poor schmuck will think this here ‘England’ would be a good place for a vacation, and then they’ll try to find it!”

“Well if that does happen, somehow, that theoretical person will still get to experience the journey of trying to find England.”

Sonic smiled in that way that he often did where he looked truthfully content. He’d leaned back against her Burrow with his arms behind his head, gazing up at the treeline or sky. Looking down at all those postcards made Sticks wonder, were all these places really that great? How could they be, especially the cities, where so many eyes could be upon her.

“Okay seriously, I gotta know something’ while I have you here,” said Sticks, taking a deep breath to brace herself. “How the heck can you stand being in all these places where the Government, Eggman, or whoever else could find you?! Spy on you! Especially the big city, where the ole’ big G can watch every step you take?”

“Oh!” said Sonic, for a moment looking at her with that ever frustrating incredulity. Soon though, it shifted to what seemed like thoughtfulness, before he stood up from his lean and answered. “I guess… I just never really worried about that.”

“Wha-HOW?!” said Sticks as she grabbed Sonic by the shoulders and almost gave him a shake before realizing her teeth were barred, certainly betraying a hint of desperation. “I mean, weren’t you arrested in Station Square?!”

“Oh yeah, twice! In a row!” said Sonic with a chuckle.

“Then HOW do you go back there to see Amy and be certain you won’t get captured again?!” 

“Well for one, the President and I made a truce,” said Sonic.

“Which you’d be a fool to trust!” said Sticks.

“But also, now that I think about it, it’s probably pretty hard to track me,” said Sonic.

“How do you figure?” asked Sticks.

“This isn’t just me bragging about my speed again,” said Sonic as he calmly pulled Sticks’ hands off his shoulders. He then dashed a superspeed loop around to behind Sticks, of which she was able to follow on her heel to keep facing him. “Though I am pretty fast. I think setting a trap for me can be hard because I move in what I’ve been told is an… ‘erratic manner’.”

“You mean you don’t know where you’re going?” said Sticks.

“I know what’s ahead of me, and I always figure out how to find my way through any obstacle. But more importantly, I only really decide where I’m going and how I’m going to get there as I'm on the move!” said Sonic. 

“Yeah okay, but who’s to say one of these times you wind up on their doorstep, the government won’t just decide to snatch yo up?!” said Sticks.

Sonic folded his arms and looked around, then walked under one of the taller nearby trees. “How fast could you build a trap in this tree, one that could catch me.”

“Oh, pretty fast,” said Sticks. She started walking a semi-circle around the tree, pretending to look for a good place for a trap. Then when she reached the trigger vine hidden among other vines on the ground, she casually tripped it with her boot. 

The secret trap that Sticks had already set in the tree went off, using tension to send a weighted net down upon Sonic. It hit the spot he was standing hard, kicking up a cloud of dust. However she did not see his silhouette trapped there, finding him instead standing on a tree branch a few meters away.

“That doesn’t prove anything! We're talking about people with resources & budgets way beyond mine.” said Sticks.

“Hm, I suppose so…” said Sonic as he jumped down from the tree branch and rolled across the ground, popping back up into a casual lean against the wall of her burrow. “Honestly the easiest way to show you what I mean would be if you came with me for a day or two.”

Sticks’ heart jumped, but it felt like a different kind of worry than usual. Her fur bristled as her nerves spiked further due to her considering his offer. Gripping her arm to feel the bristling fur, she couldn’t help but wish her reaction to the idea of going on such distant adventures wasn’t so negative. Yet this time, her breath felt light but her thoughts weren’t so dreadful. Just a day? And with Sonic the whole time? That could be safe enough, couldn’t it?

Sonic started to speak again. “I just figure-”

“I want to go!” 

Sticks made eye contact with Sonic again, trying not to care how much terror her wide eyes betrayed right now. This was the closest to willing to travel she’d felt in a long time. Something about the joy she saw on her friends faces in the photo binder got her yearning. Still, thoughts started creeping up to hold her back, to stay home and safe. Looking around for an excuse to take up Sonic’s sudden offer, her eyes fell on the postcards.

“I want to see for myself that this place is real,” said Sticks, lifting the postcard for Geauga Falls to Sonic's view.

“I mean it probably is…” Sonic looked up to Sticks’ face, then gave her a smile. “But y’know what? I can see myself taking a short trip there.” 

“Good, let’s go now!” said Sticks.

“Really?” said Sonic, his voice raising in excitement. “No one’s ever ready as soon as I am.”

Sticks could not afford to give the idea of preparing any thought, she knew herself. Her mind would continue finding issues with this plan until she couldn’t go. So she needed Sonic to help her outrun that zipline of thought before it could get going. Instead of telling him that though, she said, “Well that’s been disproven just now. Let’s go, no more yapping!”

With a chuckle, Sonic smiled, then pointed out the direction he’d landed on the beach. The two of them took off in a race, exclusively sticking to the jungle branches and canopy. Sticks had a lot of experience traversing this whole jungle, which allowed her to not only keep up with Sonic but to overtake him several times. Meanwhile he sped up everytime she swung ahead of him, almost cornering himself in the canopy leaves half of the time. Yet he always got around it without her help, at the cost of adding a few leaves to his quills. 

The Tornado Mark-whatever-it-was-now had been left tied off on a pier near the beach, floating on air filling things.  Sticks herself had enough momentum to swing from a vine and whip herself toward it in the air. As she landed atop its wing, Sonic dashed up and touched it at the same time she did. Managing to make the race a tie. 

With how winded this had left her, Sticks felt more content with the idea of strapping into a seat and letting the plane do the flying for a bit. It was hard to tell if Sonic was good at hiding physical exhaustion or if his stamina legitimately had yet to be challenged. As the plane started and Sonic started directing it faster through the water, Sticks found her rate of breath not decreasing. It wasn’t due to fear of flying, she’s done that fine before. This had more to do with the view of the horizon ahead of her.

Sticks did not look at the horizon for the rest of that flight, instead holding onto the seat ahead of her and keeping her eyes pressed onto her boot. This whole operation started to feel like a horrible idea, who knew what dangers were ahead? She wanted to think about anything else, but that was not easy. So she was left bickering with every worry. The only reason she was able to keep a leg up on that internal debate was thanks to Sonic’s presence. 

With a lurch the Tornado landed once more, skidding across the waves of the continental coast. This wing of the journey had been shorter than she worried it would be. Releasing her deathgrip on the seat in front of her, Sticks realized her nails had poked holes through to the stuffing. “Well, now I owe Tails an apology.”

“Oh don’t worry, I have to apologize to him all the time for what my quills do to the cushions when I’m tense,” said Sonic.

“How’d you know I’m tense?! Was it the interrobang in my punctuation?!” said Sticks.

“Because you just told me, Badger girl!” said Sonic, before spitting up a laugh. ”Sorry! Gotta remember If I keep mimicking Egghead like that I might start talking like that for real.”

Seeing Sonic’s logic, Sticks took a moment to steady her nerves to a nice level of ‘totally panicked’, down from ‘a catastrophe is imminent’. She then took to running alongside Sonic again, quickly passing through a small coastal community into lands of open fields. There was a concrete road nearby occupied by cars, dangerous metal machines powered by a flame combustion engine. Luckily Sonic already took the lead up some dirt roads to head further inland.

As the two of them passed over a knoll, Sticks saw a vast hilly landscape ahead of them. Possibly more land than she’d ever seen all at once. She couldn’t help but gasp. It was immense, terrifying, and fascinating. Most of the land was covered by forests, grassy fields, and crops broken up occasionally by barns & houses. This must be that ‘industrialized agriculture’ she’d heard all about. 

At this point Sonic moved up to her side and held out an arm. “We can move faster if you want!”

Sticks was already breathing heavily, though at a pace she could maintain. Any faster on her own and she’d burn out. “Sure, you gotta show me how you move around after all!” Sticks wrapped her arm around Sonic’s. “You better not hold back!”

“Alright! Here we go!” said Sonic.

Sonic's footsteps increased in pace, the sound of his patter on the ground reaching an impossible rate. Staying right with him made that sound so much more distinct in her ears somehow. As they speed down this incline Sticks was able to keep herself mostly upright by keeping pace with her legs, but not able to contribute at all to their speed. She could feel his movements and hear his breath. That gave her enough information to match with each of his moves.

It felt absurd how fast they met the bottom of the first hill and moved up the next. Within a moment they’d reached the next knoll and launched off of it, flying several feet into the air. There was a tractor below them, the driver looking up in disgruntled awe. Frankly, there was something awesome about being beyond anyone’s reach like this. She could feel a wide smile on her muzzle as she and Sonic arched toward the downward slope of the next hill.

They let go of each other long enough to make a rolling landing, Sonic going ball mode while Sticks reached out like a beast pouncing on prey. She threw herself into a roll upon hitting the ground, tumbling several times before kicking herself upright hard enough to bounce back into the air a bit. A frenzied laughter overtook her between laboured breaths. She turned to watch Sonic unroll beside her, looking behind himself before facing her with wide eyes. They both then grinned wide as he reached out and took her arm again. 

Their ensuing journey continued at an incredible pace as Sonic listened to Sticks and did not hold back. Soon the landscape was constantly changing around them. Farms shifted to wildflower fields, then to forests. Their route involved several sharp curves. While Sticks watched their surroundings, she noticed Sonic kept his eyes ahead a lot of the time while his ears kept a lookout of his sides. Then occasionally his head would turn one way or the other for a split second before he decided whether or not to turn.

After what felt like a half hour Sonic gasped and came to a sudden sliding stop that almost sent Sticks tumbling into the trees if not for her agility. He then ran backward a bit to a particularly large tree and looked up. 

“Why’d we stop?” Said Sticks between fast breaths.

Sonic pointed up the tree and said, “Bees!”

“Huh?” Sticks followed Sonic’s line of sight up. There indeed on a branch pretty far up was a massive swarm of bees. 

“Bees.” said Sonic.

“Bees…” said Sticks.

After a moment of watching the swarm in silent appreciation, Sonic bumped Stick’s shoulder and asked, “Whaddya think they’re doing?”

“They seem lost,” said Sticks, tilting her head to listen to the patterns of buzzing better. “They’d only be out in the open if they needed a new place.”

“Oh… wonder if I can help with that.” Without any warning Sonic dashed off around the forest for a moment. He then returned to Sticks’ side and pointed. “There's an empty unoccupied hollow tree that way. But, I also remembered I have no idea how to communicate with bees.”

“Oh, that’s easy,” said Sticks.

Sticks jumped up the tree and dug her nails into the bark, scrambling up to the hive. Once up close, she looked at the mound of bees hanging from the branch closely, soon finding one that was not like the others. She carefully snatched it up and cupped her hand around it before dropping back down to the ground. 

“Hold this,” said Sticks.

Sonic accepted the queen bee into his hand and looked at it.

“Don’t let her fly away. I just remembered how awful pine sap smells, so I’ll wash that out of my claws and be right back.”

Sonic nodded and gave a thumbs up with his free hand. So Sticks hurried to a nearby audible stream and scrubbed her hands with freshwater and silty clay. She also took a sip of the stream, finding this freshwater tasted a bit different than the stuff on her island. Then after a minute or so she returned to Sonic, seeing his quills coated in an increasingly large swarm of bees. 

“Okay, looks like they’ll follow you now!” said Sticks.

“Cool! Gotta say, I assumed they’d be mad I was holding the queen bee,” said Sonic.

“Oh yeah there was a chance they would be.”

“Well, glad they aren’t!”

Moving with more care, Sonic paced over to the other tree, climbed up to the opening of its hollow interior, and put the queen down inside. He then gently shook the bees off of his quills into the hole. Soon many more showed up flying along the air to coalesce at their new home. Sonic then dropped down beside Sticks and took her arm again.

“Nice thinking, glad I didn’t get stung!”

“Eh, bee stings aren’t that bad. It’s the venomous ants ya gotta watch for!” said Sticks.

The two of them started running again, quickly reaching the edge of these woods. As they passed under nearby electric pylons, Sonic skidded to a stop again.

“Wait! There was another reason I stopped,” said Sonic.

“What?”

“I have no idea where those waterfalls are. Gonna hafta to look at a map.” 

“Oh.”

So Sonic took Sticks to follow along the Pylons. Soon the skyline of a city appeared ahead and drew closer before Sticks could mentally prepare for it. Then the towers of the city were over them. Its people, machines, and stores around them. All a blur that faded into clear view as Sonic slowed to a leisurely stroll. Though they were moving a manageable speed now, Sticks tightened her grip on his arm.

“Okay, just gotta find a map now…” said Sonic, loosening his grip but letting Sticks hold him. 

“Sonic!!!” Shouted another familiar voice. 

“Amy?” said Sticks.

Sure enough it was Amy Rose, shopping bag in one hand as she waved the other. She ran across the street, having to jump out of the way of a moving car, landing her boots on its hood before jumping to the sidewalk. Her landing was absurdly graceful. Then up close, she gasped and dropped her shopping bag to jump onto Sticks with a hug.

“STICKS!!! Oh my gosh! I’m so happy to see you!”

“Hey Amy,” said Sonic with a wave.

“Hrgh, Amy…” muttered Sticks. This much contact so suddenly was a bit overwhelming, she couldn’t help but start to squirm.

“Oh sorry!” Amy pulled away and looked Sticks in the eye. “I wasn’t prepared to see you, joy got the better of me.”

“It’s okay, this whole trip is kinda random,” said Sticks.

“By the way Amy,” said Sonic, pulling the relevant postcard out of his quills with his free hand. “D’you know which way Geauga-”

Amy held her arms out and looked at Sonic with wide charming eyes. So he held his arms out and let her hug him for a second as well. He tensed up for that moment, but didn’t stop smiling. 

“Thanks! What were you saying?” asked Amy.

“Geauga Falls, on this postcard, you ever been?” said Sonic.

As Amy took the postcard and looked at it, Sticks watched Sonic relax. She wanted to do that. Why couldn’t she do that? Just, exist with ease in a place like this? Even before the surprise hug she was all tensed up, to the point of still gripping Sonic’s arm tightly. All those people around, cameras by the storefronts, and so many windows above them anyone could be watching her from. 

“I’m afraid I haven’t, though it’d be a nice spot for a date,” said Amy, pulling Sticks back to the present conversation.

“Do you happen to know which way it is?” asked Sonic.

“It’s of vital importance! I have to check if it’s real!” said Sticks.

“I’m sure it is! Oh I bet you’ll love the view Sticks!” said Amy, “Hang on, we can check the travel maps in that store over there!”

Everyone turned to walk toward a nearby convenience store, but Sticks quickly stopped. There were so many security cameras positioned around its door. This sent a flood of possible motives into Sticks’ mind, all speaking of reasons to stay away. Sonic kept walking, until Sticks’ grip on his arm anchored him down.

“Everything okay?” asked Sonic.

“We can’t go in there! They’re obviously using those cameras for nefarious purposes!” Sticks turned to Amy, trying to find the words to impress upon her the severity of the threat. “They could be stealing everyone’s fashion sense for marketing data, even yours!”

“I… Kinda doubt that. The cameras are probably for crime,” said Amy.

“Criminal purposes? Maybe! All the worse!” said Sticks. 

“Hey, it’s okay,” said Amy, putting a hand on Sticks’ shoulder. “I can check it if you want to stay out here.”

Looking around the street, the number of people out here, everything, did not make staying out here seem like a safer prospect. She wanted to hide. Dig a hole if necessary! But the concrete below here was clearly placed to block that sort of escape. This whole place was a trap. If it wanted, the city could corner her. All she had here was her claws, teeth, and… her friends.

Sonic took hold of Sticks’ hand, and she loosened her grip on his arm. It was okay, she was safe from hypotheticals with him here. 

“Do you want to leave?’ asked Sonic.

“Don’t worry if you can’t stay here,” said Amy. “I forgot how scary the city can be on your first visit. I just really appreciate getting to see you.”

“I don’t-It’s just… How can you guys handle all the eyes on us?” Sticks tried to keep her eyes on Sonic and Amy, despite compulsions to check her surroundings. Even though it never worked before, she hoped they had some answer that’d give her enough of a leg up on any hypothetical to stop needing to worry. 

“Hey, let’s get a bit more altitude for now,” said Sonic.

Despite uncertainty of how it’d help, Sticks nodded. 

Sonic proceeded to say something to Amy, then take Sticks into a run again. They ran a lap around several city blocks, blurring the view of the city around them. Then they jumped onto the side of a skyscraper and dashed up it. Their momentum slowly faded until they reached the peak and fell onto its roof. The only thing standing above them here were radio towers and satellite dishes. Every other structure of the nearby city lay below. 

“This is a lot better,” said Sticks, before releasing Sonic's arm. “Sorry.”

“Eh, we were standing still longer than I’dve liked anyway.”

“I like Amy, I like you, ugh.” Sticks leaned onto the ledge overlooking the city, taking in all the visual information she could and trying to process through it. 

“She’s gonna check the maps and come up here,” said Sonic, “But if you want to go back home we can do that too.”

“No. I want to see how you travel. That’d… that’d muck it all up.”

Sonic nodded to that, and joined her on the ledge gazing at the city. While her eyes darted between details, trying to map potential intentions, he looked across the city as a whole. After seeing this, Sticks tried to copy him. However, it brought no relief. Her mind bombarded her with worries of hidden dangers she might be missing. Unlike at her home jungle, she hasn’t had most of her life to memorize the environment enough to just live. If Sonic weren’t with her, wasn’t a tangible route of escaping any surprise scenario, Sticks doubted she could even think straight.

A surprise scenario such as some sort of jet engine approaching from below. Was it the police? Eggman?! Sticks turned to Sonic, but paused as she saw no worry about the noise from him. Was he actually just a total fool?

“Sonic! Sticks!” 

That was Tails’ voice! Flying up in a cross between a robot and a jet was the fox himself, with Amy in the passenger seat. He landed it on the roof and immediately jumped over to Sticks.

“It is you! Sticks, you gotta try this!” said Tails, holding out two paper bags that smelled of greasy food.

“Oh!, is that-” started Sonic.

“Street vendor chilidogs? YES! With chips and Sandwiches!” answered Tails.

“Awesome! He’s right Sticks, you gotta try this food!” said Sonic.

“Alright, sure.” Sticks accepted one of the bags, finding a chili dog in a basket with chips inside. “Just as soon as you guys start eating.”

“I got you ice cream too!” said Amy, walking over and presenting a waffle cone of vanilla ice cream. “I realized you’ve never had anything from my favorite parlour!”

“Oh! Thanks, gimme a minute here.”

While Tails did take a moment to exchange a fist bump with Sonic, he soon returned to focusing on Sticks. Between him and Amy, they gave Sticks a long list of potential eateries she should try if she’s ever in Station Square again. She might’ve doubted their judgement if the warm chili covered hotdog wasn’t actually pretty dang good. It was gone almost as fast as Tails’, though devouring a whole meal didn’t seem to slow his rate of talking. After his fuzzy muzzle was completely covered in grease, Amy made him wipe his face with the provided napkins.

Meanwhile Sonic ate his food at a surprisingly reasonable pace as he sat there cross legged, listening intently to their friends talk. There was something to the fondness in his eyes. Every recommendation, all their enthusiasm, seemed familiar to him. At least that’s what Sticks deduced, finding focusing on the subtleties of his expressions much less stressful than focusing on the city surroundings. 

The icecream was also really great actually, though Sticks was so slow and careful to avoid a brain freeze that it started to melt. At that point, with some advice from Tails, she treated it like a drink with an edible cup. Soon it and all the chips with her meal were gone. This almost felt like the days when everyone, including Knuckles, spent time with her on Bygone island. Although the food here was much better. 

“Amy, did you find out about those waterfalls?” asked Sonic in a break of conversation. 

“OH! I did!” 

Amy released Tails’ head and he scrambled away from her to Sonic’s side. Though the cleaning had already been done. His muzzle was spotless aside from one crumb, of which Sonic wiped off with his thumb.

“It’s a little ways up north, one of the rail lines actually goes that way if you want to take it!” said Amy.

“Ehhh…” muttered Sticks.

“We’re gonna run there actually,” said Sonic, standing up and dusting off his legs. “I'm tryin’ to show Sticks what it’s like to live like me.”

Tails gasped, looking at Sticks with stars in his eyes. “That’s so awesome!”

“Yeah, turns out going fast feels like going fast,” said Sticks.

“No! That is Sonic praise! You’re honored!” said Tails.

“I am?” asked Sticks.

“He’s making a reference to a show I showed him,” said Amy.

“I’m also speaking the truth! Have fun!” Tails turned to Sonic and gave him a hug. “I’ll see you later! Bring Sticks by the workshop later if she wants to come too!”

“I’m glad I got to see you today!” said Amy, taking Sticks’ hands and visibly resisting the urge to hug her goodbye.

“Thanks… that means a lot.”

“HEY!” shouted a man in a suit as he pushed through a door to the roof. “WHAT are you critters doing up here?!”

“Time to go, ready Sticks?” said Sonic.

Sticks nodded and took Sonic's hand. With that, everyone left the top of the media tower. Tails and Amy flew away overhead while Sonic took Sticks down the side of the skyscraper. Instead of going all the way to the streets, they jumped onto the lower ceilings and awnings of the city storefronts. This route involved a lot more jumping and dodging as they navigated elevated cables, street signs, and even the odd pole decorated in traffic cameras. 

Sticks found a good use for the leftover paper bags from that lunch by covering a couple of the cameras they leapt over. Just as a bit of punishment for the dread being under them caused. If anyone was bothered enough to stop her, they weren’t able to catch up to Sonic’s speed. Soon enough they were on their way to the outskirts of the city and picking up pace. Suburban homes blended into a boring beige blur until they reached the countryside again. 

They traveled for several more hours together, passing towns, rivers, and flora of all sorts of colour. After so much running and agility, even with Sonic providing the momentum, Sticks started to get a tad sore. Mostly in her abdominal muscles, which is something she hadn’t actually considered worrying about even after that meal in Station Square. As she came to terms with this, she noticed they’d begun running parallel to a reasonable-speed train. 

“I’m gonna take a break, that alright?” asked Sonic.

“Yeah, sure!” said Sticks, holding her torso in less-than-subtle pain.

The top of the train offered the breeze and travel progress of a run alongside an opportunity to sit down, which Sonic did. Sticks joined him on the sun-heated metal roof and came to the realization her legs were feeling a tad wobbly as well. If Sonic was sore at all, he showed it by laying down on his back and looking like the most comfortable guy ever to ride atop a train.

After watching the passing landscape for a moment, Sticks glanced back at Sonic to find he’d closed his eyes. “Are you asleep??”

Sonic’s ear flicked slightly, but his breathing remained slow and steady. This blue hedgehog was asleep. On top of a moving train, in a part of the continent he’d never been to before. How was he asleep?! How was Sticks so calm about this as well? She looked around, seeing no obvious threats on the landscape ahead of them. But clearly someone had to keep a watch for any danger, Sonic must’ve just trusted that task to her. 

Sticks sat upright for a little while, occasionally staring down the occasional passing airplane or car. Nothing turned out to be worth waking Sonic for. In the meantime the warmth of the sun felt nice. Who knew steel made for such a good basking rock? At the behest of her legs and cramping abdomen, Stick laid down on her back as well. Just for a moment. Yet, with her side to Sonic’s side, it became hard to keep worrying. That was… the opposite of what her trouble usually was… 

Sticks woke up when the train steadily slowed to a stop. The Sunlight in the sky was notably more orange than when she’d closed her eyes. She shot up and looked around with this realization. Sonic wasn’t at her side anymore as he now sat at the edge of the train, his legs dangling off of the roof. Everything else was as it had been, aside from a massive river now being in view less than a mile from the train.

“Oh hey, I think we’re arriving!” said Sonic with a smile.

Sticks’ breath hitched. This wasn't panic, but not knowing what it was made her worry in a new way. At least she trusted Sonic. At this point, she couldn't find any reason to feel any major doubt in who he was. It was just so obvious, he was Sonic.

“I like you,” said Sticks.

“Oh!” replied Sonic.

“I like Amy, and Tails, and especially Knuckles too. But today is the first time in a while it’s been so easy to say.”

Sonic reached out his hand. “Let’s hop down before the train gets moving again.”

“Good idea.”

Once on the ground, they made their way from the small train station toward a hill. Not running, just walking. With the echoing noise of water over the hill, the voices of other people, and the cool feeling of the breeze, going any faster would clearly be a waste. Over the knoll, there was a grassy hillside that led down to a wooden pier. All of this overlooked what was indeed a massive waterfall. Geauga Falls was somehow simultaneously bigger and smaller than Sticks expected it to be. It was real. 

As several other people watched the falls down on the pier, Sticks and Sonic sat on the grass. It’d be a lie to say the nerves under Sticks’ hide had subsided. But they didn’t feel as overwhelming now thanks to the other feelings here. 

“I like you Sticks, we all do,” said Sonic as he gazed at the rolling waterfalls.

“I know, I should know this,” said Sticks.

“I’m not sure I thought out what taking you with me for the day would be like for you.”

“Yeah, that makes sense. I haven’t pinned you as someone who ‘plots and schemes’.”

“Heh, I’m usually the one who has to spin it as a good thing,” said Sonic, letting out a sigh and he laid back onto the grass.

Sticks let herself flop down onto the grass as well, the feeling of it on her hide helped occupy her mind. “Somehow, I’m able to worry a little less around you. I’ve been beginning to think I might, possibly, worry a little too much.”

“Yeah, you kinda do.”

“Everyone just-, they act like they don’t see everything I do. But man, am I beginning to envy you.”

“Envy me? D’ya wanna improve your super speed? Tails can-”

“No no, I envy the way you somehow have everything sorted out already.”

Sonic sat up and looked at Sticks. “I… I really don’t think I do.”

“For every possible problem, you already have a way to deal with it!”

“Well, kinda. I mostly just apply the same solution to everything.”

“But it works somehow!” Sticks huffed and wiped her face, taking a moment to try turning her thoughts into actual words. “I feel safe with you in a way I otherwise can’t. So I’m trying to figure out why!”

“Oh. Do you trust me?”

“Yeah, why?”

“There you go!” 

Sonic flopped onto his back again, but Sticks turned to look him in the eye.

“It can’t be that simple.”

“Maybe it isn’t.” Sonic put his hands on his chest and smiled. “But it’s close enough.”

They sat in silence for a few moments after that. The sun continued to set, and the air already started growing colder. For some reason, ruminating on why she felt comfortable around Sonic was starting to make Sticks worry. She hadn’t realized she’d reached for Sonic's hand until he held hers. It was calming. It felt like no matter where she was, she’d feel safe with him. 

“I like you,” said Sonic.

“Thanks,” said Sticks.

Sonic squeezed her hand, then rolled over to look her in the eyes. “...D’ya wanna ride down the waterfall before we leave?”

Sticks gave Sonic a sharp toothed smile. “Heck yeah I do! Let’s find a boat!”

If you made it to the end, please tell me what you thought of this however short or long you want in the comments or tags! It was fun to write this! I don't usually write romance, so it was interesting to try finding an angle two characters can have chemistry, especially two I've never seen shipped before. For this I actually drew on personality traits I've imagined both Sonic & Sticks could have before. Ones that makes interactions between them still interesting but amicable/friendly. I do worry a bit that I took an "easy route" for the ending by leaving it open ended what way Sonic & Sticks feel about each other here, but I at least personally kind of like it.

[dreamingmappist]

Year in Danmei 2023

I read 16 in total. I kind of want to compare some titles instead of ranking them.

After Entering a Book He Just Wants to Be a Flower Vase vs. Transmigrated as the Cannon Fodder Abandoned by the Movie Star

The former is my fave of the year. They’re both about acting and they’re both more serious than the title would have you think. The former deals with PTSD, but with a light touch and balanced by happier moments & the latter with depression, in a way that is realistic enough that I felt very down after reading it which may be why I didn’t like it as much.

Vicious Male Counterpart Isn’t Competing vs. Mecha Slave Contract

Both mecha stories set in the interstellar. I enjoyed them especially the crafting parts that may be tedious to other people. For the former, the main character is a bit flat and the villains 2D, but the love interest is well-rounded. For the latter, I don’t remember either character very well and the romance didn’t quite succeed. There’s a lot more action and it has a more complicated plot. But I didn’t like the extras. I feel like they ruined the story for me.

How to Survive as a Villain vs. Transmigrating into the Reborn Male Lead’s Ex-Boyfriend

The former has a historical setting and the latter is modern day, but I thought they had a similar relationship dynamic—a bit codependent, plus the lack of communication. The former is much angstier but is funnier at the same time, while the latter while sweeter, dragged towards the end. Like the author couldn’t raise the stakes high enough.

Don’t Discriminate Against Species

I didn’t really finish anything I can compare this to. (Though I started Fantasy Farm around the same time) It’s an interesting urban fantasy specific to Chinese mythology and reads like a buddy cop show. It’s silly and lighthearted. There’s twists but a bit predictable. I enjoyed it.

Honourable Mention to Alpha Predator, which is by an author who is known for heavy angst. I usually like that but sometimes when one character takes it too far I’m rooting for their breakup instead. I did find it compelling, but I am wary of trying this author again. (Still can’t finish Beloved Enemy, the novel OR the show)

A caveat:

Even though I thoroughly enjoyed myself, between danmei and the countless manga, light novels, webtoons, and web novels I read, I feel like I need to challenge myself more in the coming year. Aim for less books but more complex ones with better worldbuilding and characters.

I haven’t read a lot of fanfic these past few years because danmei and light novels kind of filled that need for easy, predictable and pleasurable reading. But I’ve also been reading machine translations where I just kind of get the gist and once I got used to that, the lyricism of actual well-written work with words carefully chosen by a human mind becomes an amazing experience in comparison.

So uh danmei burn out—though I am still aiming to finish MDZS in 2024.

[sillyguyhotline]

like i’m gonna be so real i just genuinely don’t get how people can think that tlou2 is a well written game. actually no i do get it because when you engage with something that makes you feel a lot of emotions it usually compels you in some way and that compulsion can make you feel like you’ve had a meaningful experience. i get that. but the surface level torture porn angst is literally the only thing it has going for it because people lap up angst and if someone doesn’t like it it’s really easy to respond with “you don’t like it because it made you sad.” but god it is just such a weak narrative. the pacing is all over the place, the characters that get praised for their complexity often have so little to do with each other or so little weight on each others stories that you can almost forget they’re even from the same game, the story treats the characters wildly differently in respect to morals, the themes are deeply incongruent with those of the first game in a boring way, and so much consistency and depth is forsaken in favor of being subversive and critical and gritty . there’s so little substance in such a long fucking game. it adds absolutely nothing to the first game’s characters or themes. god

[sometipsygnostalgic]

Here is a video I watched this morning! It’s really long and really good. The person is basically doing a liveblog/review of She Ra, and they go into the subversiveness of it all at a few points.  

I had a youtube comment, and it was such an in-depth response that I want to share it here as well: 

“You're absolutely correct. This show is way, WAY better than it had any right to be; one of the most cohesive and well-written things I've seen, and yet, I dismissed it for all this time because it came from Netflix, which is notorious for a huge decline in quality after the first season!!!

When you were talking about Hordak, and how you didnt think that making us sympathise with him would work, and then you gradually evolved to sympathising with him more and more... I think it's a good example of how the show subverts not only the expectations of how we think a story SHOULD go, but our own expectations of how we WANT it to go. How the way we've consumed media in the past gives ourselves enormous biases, and we just decide something shouldn't work, not because of its innate quality but because of the VALUES we've developed on what a story should say, values that do not need to be there. The villains of She-Ra, from the goodhearted Scorpia to the sadistic Hordak to the manipulative Catra, they're all massively sympathetic in some way, and we are able to put aside our more generic moral judgements to want them to get better, if not redeemed then at least seeing a way to escape whatever misguided complexes they've wrapped themselves in.    

Here are some ways that I think She-Ra was enormously subversive and used its characters greatly:  

1. Immediately, despite being contrasted with Catra, Glimmer was not delegated to being the "good friend" to Catra's "bad friend" like I expected her to be (cough Owl House cough). She wasn't sidelined like a character in her position so often is. In fact, she became a protagonist in her own right - she was the AntiHero of season 4. It's so refreshing to see a princess, a girl covered in glitter, end up playing the Lancer, someone who contrasts strongly against the purehearted protagonist. And yet we always understand that her motivations are heroic. There's a point where Glimmer is a clearer reflection of Catra than Adora ever was.  

2. Scorpia's character is usually relegated to being either just The Muscle, or The Idiot, but Scorpia has her own motivations and wants and arc. She has her own compelling story.   I particularly love how she embraces her heritage and everyone starts emotionally supporting her like how she has been doing to them.  

3. Entrapta is the character who's often either relegated to "the tech member", or used as a one-time villain before getting ditched, but the way the show moves her around and has her interacting with all sides of the war, causing chaos as a third party observer who is just trying to get to the heart of matters, while also giving her a compelling arc.... Entrapta with all her imperfections/struggles embodies the heart of the show, the embracing of humanity in places where people would oppress it, and she serves as the clearest foil to Horde Prime's religious leviathan cult. (She is my favourite - I had been burned by best character Peridot getting sent away to the Farm in Steven Universe, and was happy Entrapta stayed important.)

4. Adora''s entire character is a breakdown of the "Chosen One" archetype. Adora's choices to do The Right Thing are on the face value very heroic, but once you understand more about her, you realise that she's been groomed into the position, and that it's no good for her; Shadow Weaver raised her to be a cutthroat warrior who puts aside all her own needs to fight in the name of Justice, and she does that as soon as she joins the Rebellion. Adora was taught that other people's mistakes were her fault, if tehy got hurt it was because she's not good enough, and her role as She-Ra only reinforces these insecurities. Slowly she realises where she's gone wrong,  but it's not until Catra joins her and reprimands her for doing what she thought was heroic that Adora starts to realise she doesn't WANT to be the hero who sacrifices everything for everyone else.  

5. Continuing on from this, Adora's role as She-Ra actually having been stolen by her own people, Adora finding out that the supposed "heroic destiny" was in fact one of destroying the universe, not healing Etheria. The twist that "restoring balance to the planet" will actually destroy it? That the sword had been repressing She-Ra's true power?  And yet, the understanding that the First Ones weren't exactly evil, they were humans like us, trying to do the human thing when defending against an impossible foe?  Fucking masterclass.  

6. The inversion of courage, selfrighteousness and selflessness into negative traits, and villainy and selfishness into positive characteristics. Adora's heroism and Glimmer's self assuredness make them very dangerous people when these tendencies are not controlled. Meanwhile, Catra's selfishness and disregard for the "right thing" ends up being exactly what Adora needs in order to save her from her self-destructive hero complex.  Scorpia is the villain mook but her determination in protecting Catra makes her a good person. Entrapta is heavily villain-coded with her mask, madness, and her robots, but her ability to love even robots makes her probably the most empathetic character in the show.  And Hordak, ever so violent and evil and yet human in the first few seasons, embraces exactly these parts of himself when he realises that they separated him from Prime, casting Prime into the darkness.

7. The inversion/rejection of the typical redemption arc - Shadow Weaver is the best example of this. She goes through all the beats of what you would normally get in a redemption storyline, but she never actually changes as a person, and everyone knows she is still horrible. But at the same time, she's still very human, and has some self awareness of it all. Shadow Weaver just doesn't think it's worth the effort to become a better person, it's much easier to stay awful and grab for power, and it's not until the finale that she realises this is a very unsatisfying existence.  

There is a reason that it is only the Horde, Horde Prime, and the First ones, who use retributive justice as a means of punishment. She-Ra challenges our values of Good and Bad, using our heroes and villains to deconstruct them in their entirety. The villains deliver the harsh retribution that completely dehumanizes the people getting punished. The heroes deliver a far more personal and effective kind of response - rejection, maybe even containment, but never pain.  

"All beings must suffer to become pure" - the idea is presented as extremely sickening, cultish,  puritanical Christian. The idea that to "make up" for what you did you need to die or something.  

The character who chooses to do this is Shadow Weaver, and there's a reason everyone says she never had a redemption arc. Shadow Weaver had decided she was beyond growth, even though she had ALL THE BEATS of a redemption arc. she was unable to become anything better, so she did that One Good Thing instead, knowing she was going to die a monster, hoping maybe that people remember her for a bit more.

Hordak doesn't get a redemption arc of any kind - he is, instead, free to become his own person. And She-Ra respects that, because that's what she's been fighting for this entire show, without even realising it.”

[ruby-whistler]

the difference between static and dynamic characters on the dream smp

Hi, hello, it's Ruby, back with another PSA because this fandom (specifically the people on Twitter) keeps getting worse.

/dsmp /rp

Recently, people started claiming c!Techno was boring because he never had any character development.

Now, this may come as a surprise to some of you, but if you in any capacity decide to study the ins and outs of creative writing, you'd learn that characters don't need to have character development to be compelling, loved by the audience, and have a complex personality.

This is what is called a static character. Not to be confused with flat characters. What's the difference?

Most articles seem to agree on this;

"Static characters should not be confused or mixed up with flat, one-dimensional characters. Though neither changes as the story progresses, if a character remains unchanged, it does not mean that he is one-dimensional like a flat character. A static character can be perfectly interesting, like Sherlock Holmes, who is completely ingenious, eccentric, and sometimes jerky. He never changes, but the audience still loves him. Thus, a static character could be the protagonist too, and a flat character, on the other hand, only plays a side role in the story." - ( link to definition )

Static characters are ones that don't experience any personal growth during the span of the story. They're often used in writing, because they're realistic and can be interesting if well-written. This article provides examples such as the aforementioned Sherlock Holmes, Captain America from The Avengers, and TommyInnit from the Drea- [gunshots]

But in all seriousness, c!Tommy is very easily a static character; a lot of the criticism of his character is about the fact that he doesn't change. He does gain experience and new relationships, he does suffer and becomes more and more traumatized, he does make choices out of impulse or emotion, but none of that is character development - he never overcomes his character flaws, including selfishness, stubbornness, and a lack of compassion or empathy for others. And I do not blame him for it as a person, and I do not consider him a badly-written character, even if he's a little frustrating to watch sometimes.

c!Tommy has two main reasons why he remains a static character.

a) he doesn't live in a constructive environment

It is normal for boys Tommy's age to be low on empathy. It's completely normal for them to be chaotic, immature pricks, because that is part of their growth. All of this would be just fine if c!Tommy was growing up in a highschool; however, he in actuality grew up on a land ruled by politics, wars and conflict.

I do not like using the age excuse, because I do not believe it makes his bad choices any more justified, but it's easy to realize why him being in such a position could stunt his personal growth.

At that age, you need guidance, whether it be from teachers, parents, or whatever other figures you're able to find around you. Usually, it is not difficult to find good people to look up to in today's world, but for c!Tommy, that isn't true.

In the pre-L'Manberg, post-Tommy era, there was moderate peace. Yes, there were conflicts, but none of them were damaging in the long term for anyone involved, and they were chaotic scuffles more than fights of ideals.

Once c!Wilbur came along, c!Tommy latched onto him. We all know how that went.

None of the adults Tommy had looked up to were in any capacity helpful to him growing or becoming a better person. He helped lead a revolution to help Wilbur gain power, he was lead to help Wilbur lead and unfair election, and witnessed the breakdown of the man he trusted shortly after. He was subjected to emotional manipulation by Dream, and then came to the wrong person for help. None of these things are reasons for positive change.

b) it's his major character flaw

Even in the few chances he had at genuine change, at forgiveness, at letting go, all provided by the environment or people around him, he didn't take them. Tommy doesn't like change, he fights it, and that is why he always loses. He doesn't want to change for the better, and he despises himself when he changes for the worse.

He looks for peace in a lack of activity, growth, or development. He searches for happiness in not letting go of the past, but hanging onto it for dear life, terrified that the people around him might change because he doesn't want to. And that is why, as long as he keeps this mindset, he'll never find it.

While other characters, such as Tubbo, Dream, Wilbur or Quackity seek to change the world around them, for the better or the worse, to rewind or to progress, and are willing to change themselves accordingly, Tommy does the opposite, because his biggest fear is people drifting apart and leaving him behind.

Let's get back to the point, then; what makes Technoblade a static character, and a good one at that?

His motivation is simple; he is a lawful character who sticks to his morals through thick and thin, follows a strict inner code, and is loyal to people above all.

On top of that, he is given no reason to change his morals.

No one's arguments against c!Techno have ever made much sense, let's be honest, and ever since he'd entered the server, Techno's been proven right over and over and over again.

He saw Wilbur face the consequences of having power over other people and then losing it, seeing the influence of corruption on the man he worked with. He was forced by the government to kill another person, to kill an ally, to kill an innocent. He was betrayed and used by the Pogtopian revolution, which knowingly kept things from Techno and fought to seize power, rather than destroy it. He was unfairly executed without a trial by corrupt politicians just absolutely demolishing the Geneva convention, holy crap people call Techno a war criminal, just in that one stream New L'Manberg commited so many war crimes-

Point stands that people say one thing and then do the other. Talk of freedom and then force people to do things (and no, forcing people not to force other people to do things doesn't count nor does it make Techno a hypocrite, get a better argument). Techno was never manipulated or swayed to someone's side against his ideals because he's not a man of words; he believes in what he sees, not what people tell him, especially since he's been repeatedly lied to.

That is the first thing a good static character needs; a strong motivation. Through everything that's happened, I'd say without a doubt that Technoblade has the strongest motivation out of everyone, which is to emancipate people from the tyranny of their rulers - not just sing about it and then establish a dictatorship - but to in fact do it, no matter the cost.

He's a very Paragon-type character, which is a common type of static; his moral code is too strong to allow emotional change.

Another thing a static character needs is personality. And Techno - if you watch his streams, not just others' perspectives - has a lot of that. From his bond with Phil and Ranboo to fondness of animals to sense of humour, the character is entertaining to watch and follow. You know what to expect of him, you know he won't betray, and that despite the flaws he has he will not let personal issues hold him back. He wins because he trains, and he puts hours into pulling crazy stunts, and he's persistent - it's satisfying for the people watching his perspective to see his efforts pay off.

His interactions with others are characterized by an attempt at kindness, no matter how many times he might fail at separating his personal life from the ideals he's pursuing.

And that is compelling! To draw parallels to Tommy again, the kid has so much personality that other characters could borrow from him and he'd still be fun to watch!

Neither Tommy nor Techno are flat characters, and I think that is the mistake a lot of people make when misinterpreting both the characters; Tommy and Techno are amazing examples of great static characters in fiction, and I'd like to applaud cc!Tommy and cc!Techno for being brilliant writers.

[marta-bee]

Over the last few weeks I’ve read “The Case of the Green Dress” by splix. It’s over 200,000 words, exceptionally well plotted and well written: the kind of story that deserves a place on the shelves at Barnes & Noble, but really along the great classics. I don’t doubt for one second it’s better than the story Mofftiss will tell us, if we ever get a fifth season. It’s also not new, so I suspect most of you who have been around in fandom for a while have read it.

This post isn’t really about the story, particularly. Or at least not just about the story.

See, what made it work so well for me was it fully acknowledged the complexity of John’s and Sherlock’s relationship, and John’s and Mary’s, and especially the two of them running side by side. It’s a tragedy, and there’s no easy resolution, except to keep muddling forward however you can. It’s also an all-too-relatable look at an ageing marriage (and an ageing whatever-the-heck John and Sherlock have going on), and just about getting older generally. There’s a truly touching conversation at the end about what it means to love two people at the same time. Not necessarily in a polyamorous sense but just in the sense of life being complicated and reality not always adhering to romantic ideals.

I think as a fandom --just as story-sharing humans generally-- we need more of that. I’m all for a good OTP story, but there’s something utterly compelling about owning up to life’s complexity, at least for me.

Mary’s character and her past (and present) are also a huge focal point of this particular story. General spoilers for the story follow, but nothing too specific I hope: Mary’s a trained assassin, but trained by “the good guys” (for whatever that means; her assassinations at least before she met John were state-sanctioned). She’s also got one heck of a compelling motive for keeping on with that work, to the point I can’t imagine approving of her as a character if she didn’t go on with the assassination-work. Ethically, philosophically, I can’t approve of quite a lot of her actions, but psychologically it’s utterly compelling. With all that said, though, she’s still killing people. Quite a lot of them as it turns out. And even though her only real motivation is to keep John and their child safe, just the nature of who she is does expose them to all kinds of risk.

This is the Mary I wish we saw more of in canon. For me, the Mary on the show has been such a cocktail of characterizations, I’ve always struggled to make sense of her in canon. But I think this is the version I’ve always found most interesting: a Mary who doesn’t shy from the horror and gore of her profession (that’s me being euphemistic), who has the best justification possible but someone for whom all the secrets and dangers still make her not a great match for our soldier with trust issues. That last point is my own preferred interpretation, and Splix’s tale is much more open-ended and better for it. But the point is the best version of this character for me isn’t one that defangs her or turns her into a monster, it’s one that looks at the evil she’s done and the destruction she’s brought about and still honors the weight of her relationship with her family. Just because she’s caused all that death and pain, it doesn’t mean the fallout from all that is any less difficult to bear for John and Sherlock and everyone around her.

That’s perhaps more of my RL bleeding through than I usually allow. But complicated grief is a thing, and it’s possible to [spoilerish vague murmurings about some kind of nonspecified loss] someone and it still hurt. Even if they’re a bastard, which this version of Mary really isn’t. It almost has to; or at least stories that wash over that to focus on other things are telling a very different kind of story.

(Mycroft’s side of the story is lovely, too. I could make a whole post on that. But I hope my fellow Mycroft lovers will consider reading it just for his parts.)

Anyway, what I’m saying is: there’s a place for complex characterizations and ambiguous endings in fic, or there should be. This story wouldn’t have been half the compelling read it was if it fit neatly into any kind of a box.

[fanfiction-funtime]

IM SORRY IVE BEEN SLACKING ON HYPING YOU UP

Anyway I’m reading through the Things ™ and wow

Can I request something? There’s an idea I’ve been pondering for a bit. You know already who I’ll ask for, I’m guessing.

What if the reader fell for Xiao in Genshin, in a state where they constantly daydream about him. Rather than working on scenarios and scenes, it happens in real time.

Meanwhile, in another universe, Xiao in a modern setting has fallen for a Genshin character- the reader. He daydreams about them in the same manner.

To the reader, their Xiao is a guardian yaksha, Golden adeptus, and doombane itself.

To Xiao, his (y/n) is something just as exalted. I tend to use a seelie, since they’re an immortal race of ancient and now weak gods.

What they both don’t know is that they’re actually meeting in those daydreams. It’s not just imagination and the longing for company, but an actual relationship with another person.

Bonus points if it’s some sort of soulmate au and they physically can’t find each other and eventually realize it.

I’ve never told anyone about this before, and I’m excited to see what you do with it! I might work with it one day, just not yet.

(Hoo boy, this will be tough, but I'm sure I can do it! Xiao might be a bit ooc as I'm getting his personality from wiki and fanon, as well as modern au [hopefully] gives him less trauma and a slightly different personality.)

(Also, I can't do sad endings. So a bit of deus ex OC at the 3rd part)

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Your game

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Your pov: the dream eater of your dreams

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You are (y/n)(l/n), and you are in the saddest love story this side of the lake.

Ever since you saw him in that first quest you were in love!

You were just a teen though, so it wasn't real right? After all, your red string wasn't connected to the screen.

Well, your string isn't connected to anything...

Y-your just a late bloomer though right?

(Ten years later)

Your now in your twenties and you still love Xiao!

He permeates your thoughts like how lovers do, you feel an inexplicable hurt in your chest similar to what many describe feeling when they see their soulmate prior to their string appearing, not to mention whenever you aren't busy you feel like you're...slipping...in...in and...

[Daydream]

It was happening again.

It was like a daydream but more...real.

Like a lucid dream.

You saw your string, just like so many other times, and you followed it.

You ran and ran, turquoise clouds parting and making paths for you to find him.

Him..

You ran and ran, glad that atleast in some way your delusions can give you some semblance of true love.

You saw the..wait..that's not the inn.

Well it is the inn, but more modern. And there was a school next to it, and a small village not far away.

Another of thing was that you were in some kind of yellow armor, it reminded you of those baby geovisnaps from genshin impact(that are absolutely BULL-)

You went into the elevator, which seemed more ancient than usual.

And when you reached the balcony, you saw him. But he was different.

Instead of the Yaksha you usually saw, you were greeted by an equally shocked man in a martial arts gi. But it was him.

But different.

You reached out, and he did the same.

And you touched

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Xiao's pov: the midsummer knight of his dreams

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(Clarifying: in this version Liyue is based on European mythology and aesthetic while Mondstadt is based on Chinese. So you are a fae hunting knight rather than a demon hunting yaksha)

Xiao had always been reserved, but what happened to him as a kid drew him further into his shell.

Abusive parents, accidentally giving his sister trauma induced amnesia, he felt the weight of his actions like atlas feels the world on his shoulders.

Luckily, two people took him and his sister QiQi in: QiQi's doctor Baizhu, and Xiao's therapist(and Baizhu's husband) Morax.

It was difficult to come out, even after Xiao stopped feeling so at fault. So he mostly stayed in his room and played video games.

That is until he met you.

Well met is the wrong word here.

He saw your character in his world's version of genshin impact: tribunal eruption

The way you used your weapon, the way your armor shined in the night as you rode to his wanderer. The smile you gave as he handed you (favourite food).

But most of all, the way you used fighting styles from so many martial arts and hand to hand combat techniques.

From irish kickboxing to karate, from assassination arts in ancient history of japan to systema.

It awoken two things in him: first was his want to learn martial arts and make his own.

The second was his love for you.

But don't worry, your physical attributes only drew him in. Your personality made him stay.

Years went on, he became a martial arts instructor for his own style, and moved into an apartment near a small village.

He started teaching at a school nearby, he even gets a discount on rent for giving free lessons to the owner's sons, Ivan and Viktor.

He's also convinced those two have a crush on him but it's pointless.

After all, he was a dream eater, a common group of people who have a strange ability to find their soulmate.

Specifically, the ability to have "lucid daydreams" where they meet their soulmate.

But he must be defective. After all his soulmate kept appearing as...well you. As a knight that would meet him on the balcony every night.

He assumed maybe it was your voice actor or designer, but neither of them have had the lucid daydreams.

He began thinking he'd never find his soulmate

Until one daydream...

He was on the balcony again, like a prince awaiting his knight to rescue him.

But it was different.

The apartment complex he lived in now looked much smaller, as did the tree it was built around, and the building looked far more ancient in design yet so much younger in age.

And the village and school nearby aren't there anymore.

Oddest change of all is that his gi he was wearing just a second ago is now similar to the outfit warn by the mondstadt demon slayer Corps

And when you arrived at the balcony, he noticed a red string, one that connected your heart to his. But you weren't wearing your armor, you were wearing casual, modern clothes.

He knew it was stupid, after all you can't touch your soulmate in the daydreams. But he felt compelled to....to reach out and..

You touched him.

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nothing never comes between you, and nobody helps you get together

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(3rd person pov)

He really did find it annoying, how often mortals would find themselves in the wrong dimension, especially when it's because the writer wants drama. And now he's written in to solve the problem.

Ah well, it's his job.

(2nd person pov)

You didn't know how to feel. You were touching Xiao...and you weren't waking up. Was this...real?

"You... you're real...different but....still the person I love...." Xiao seemed to be equally in a trance at the prospect

"yeah...so are you..."

The armor you wore melted away, and you cant see it but Xiao's fictional clothes melted from him as well. You were both equally real, in your own reality.

But you knew it couldn't last.

"When the daydream ends, I wont be able to see you anymore," Xiao said with a sea of tears in his eyes, "We've actually met now...and now...now the dreams will end."

You lean into him, "then let's make this dream the best one we've ever had."

Your about to kiss when-

"Terribly sorry about this!" A childlike voice called, "you know, interrupting your moment and all that. See for the sake of narrative, you both were put in separate universes. And it's my job to give you a happy ending."

When you both looked, you saw a child made of bone climbing into reality from some kind of hole.

"Now just wait a moment aaannnd-"

The turquoise clouds cleared, and the world rippled into a conjoined reality between genshin impact and tribunal eruption.

"Welcome to your dream world, enjoy eternal love!" The child said as he crawled back into the hole and it closed.

When he was gone, you both observed the world around you: a beautiful mix of aesthetics surrounded you, and both your armor and his adeptus clothing were on you both.

You gazed into eachother's eyes.

He placed one hand on your cheek while another held your hand, "I'm not good with speaking..speaking my emotions..but I....maybe my actions can do that for me..."

You felt your red string radiate with the warmth of love, likewise Xiao felt his daydreams dissipate like a haze leaving his mind.

You grab his hand and place your free hand on his cheek, mirroring his love, as you always have.

"Xiao...your very existence tells me all I need to hear.."

You both leaned in, and kissed.

Two lovers, in a dream made reality,

A paradise for all eternity.

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I feel it kinda fell apart with the deus ex, but I think I scraped it back together in the end!

I hope it's good enough for what you envisioned buddy, I tried my best!

(Also I think you deserve something just as good as what happens to the reader insert in this fic, story)

(Tagging: @golden-wingseos (this is the writing blog for someone you told to tag you), and @storytravelled (just to keep the idea of tagging in mind))

[paragonrobits]

i found an actually good take on Superman, considering the use of Parasite as an interesting villain and while the movie at question (Man of Tomorrow) gave Parasite more character and nuance than he typically has, it occured to me that taking Parasite as he is normally depicted, a power-sucking greedy bag of hunger and desire that doesn’t care about ANYTHING but satisfying his cravings, leads to some interesting thoughts on Superman in terms of his rogues gallery.

You can tell a lot about a superhero by their rogues. Often times a well written rogues gallery that treads the fine line between being compelling without coming off more sympathetic than the hero is ESSENTIAL for that superhero becoming popular and well-liked, and it can be difficult to narrow them down to a snappy summation that says something about that hero. For instance, it’s hard pressed to say what Batman (arguably the most well rounded rogues gallery out there) has to say with his villains. You can definitely pinpoint various eras of those villains and how they were influenced by popular culture, such as how Batman’s earliest villains are generally gangsters and crime lords with a gimmick or two, or how later villains were very one note and given more complexity to the point that there’s a ton of discourse about, say, whether Ivy’s political outlooks and so on.

so, Superman’s rogues are an interesting thing in that uniquely for superhero comics, they’re very rarely given a lot of attention. Most of them don’t really exist to the common view; most people can probably name Lex Luthor, sure, and maybe you might find Metallo or Prankster name dropped here and there. There’s this common idea that Darkseid is his nemesis, and sure, Darkseid as a living embodiment of the concept of tyranny battles well against Superman’s role as a force of optimism and helping other people as best you can, but really, the New Gods are more of a much broader strokes attitude. it cheapens Darkseid to reduce him to this.

so Superman DOES have a rogues gallery. They’re certainly there, and while its true that many superman writers find it more interesting to muse on Superman grappling with the morality of using his amazing power or raising the questions of if he has the moral RIGHT to do as he wants (he has the power to do whatever he pleases, but that doesn’t give him the RIGHT to do so). There’s still room for his rogues, and lets think about what his rogues represent.

There’s power-mad billionaires like Luthor, who goes obsessive with a need to beat Superman or outdo him, who makes a cure for cancer and makes it so that someone will need to take it their entire life at big prices to survive, who could have saved the world YEARS AGO but never cared enough to do it. Luthor is defined by selfishness and ego, contrasting Superman’s desire to do good and help people in whatever ways he can.

Then there’s Parasite, who is again defined by his greed and hunger. Even in the broadest strokes, he’s ravenous and only really cares about feeding, even to the point of a compulsion. He doesn’t want to do anything WITH that power, he’s just got an itch to scratch and he doesn’t care who gets hurt in the process. 

Then there’s everyone’s favorite keyboard-destroying nuisance, Mister Mxyzptlk, an imp from a higher dimension with outright godlike power, who comes to this world to muscle around and screw with people that are otherwise completely powerless against him, just because he can. This contrasts against Superman’s own use of his power as responsibly as he can, and who often gets irritated by the imp’s pestering him while he’s trying to do his job.

It goes on and on, there’s thugs and bullies and users of all kinds, short sighted people craving power or attention with a strict point that: 1. they don’t care about the people that get hurt in their actions. 2. they don’t usually care about anyone but themselves and MAYBE a few friends, and 3. they’re carelessly, horribly irresponsible and prone to massive damage.

superman’s villains, i suggest, are defined by the lack of responsibility and a big attitude of selfishness that defines Superman by the LACK of those traits in him; he’s strong but handles his abilities with responsibilities, with a keen understanding that everyone, in his world view, has a responsibility to help out others and continue the never ending battle to making the world better. At worst they want to dominate and control, while he is specifically the opposite; liberating and hoping that people can trust in each other. This is a great way to approach Superman, and especially the people that fight him.

[essayofthoughts]

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Put “📓” or some other version of a book emoji into my inbox and I’ll explain the plot of a fanfiction that I haven’t written but daydream about.

From what I see of CR fandom there's ... well frankly, not a lot of thoughts about Cassandra de Rolo, which is a shame because she's fascinating, but there seem to be a few specific trends for her. Some people want to give her a chance to be awesome and adventure on her own, which fine, I kind of get but also I think after the five years she had she'd want to unwind and relax and be safe more than a lot of things. Even when dealing with anger and all (with Percy's help, given some of the Wrap Up comments) I don't think that's necessarily the route she'd go. The other trends I see for her are often specifically romantic - and there's two trends I see there. People who ship her with Kynan, due to some of the Wrap Up comments from Matt, and people who ship her with Kaylie for... I don't know what reason. Some combo of Lesbians and, from what I could tell "it'd piss off Percy and that'd be funny" which I don't necessarily believe and certainly do not find encouraging ship motivation.

Sufficeth to say, I do not find either of these particularly compelling.

I've written a small fic about Cass before (here) and one day I'd like to write something that builds on it. Specifically, I want to explore how she might interact with Desmond.

No, not the mapmaker, that's Tyriok.

No, not the person they saved outside of Westruun from the orcs.

No. No. No.

The carriageboy Percy maimed.

Yeah. Him.

See, there's a few things I think that have the potential to make that interesting. Firstly, we're told Desmond is around 18 - which is to say, older than Kynan, around the same age as Cass, and likely around the same age Percy was when the Briarwoods attacked.

(Percy's last words to Desmond before knocking him out, "I want you spend the rest of your life making up for what you allowed to happen", suddenly take on a whole load of other meaning when you consider that, imo.)

He's a Whitestone native, he's not an inherently bad person. Percy attempts to apologise once they return, but gets repeatedly spoken over because he pauses, presumably trying to find the right words to apologise ("I'm sorry I maimed you, I was not entirely myself and may have been under the influence of a demon but that's no excuse and I do not know that I can ever make amends to you for the wrong I have done you" is not an apology that's likely to fall easily from anyone's lips, let us be honest here). He does ultimately try to ensure Desmond gets a position of work - which he may otherwise struggle to find, given his maimed hand, and again, which it is only fair Percy attempt to rectify given his responsibility.

But ah, this is all Desmond and Percy, let me move on to Desmond and Cassandra.

They're of an age. They also both lived through the Briarwoods occupation in pretty close proximity to the Briarwoods - Cassandra as their prisoner and Desmond first as the carriageboy of one of their new nobles and then as their carriageboy. They've seen both the Briarwoods capability for kindness, for protective anger, and for their cruelty and brutality - including towards them. They murdered Cassandra's family; when she helped Percy escape they were shot at and she was shot down under their orders. They abandoned Desmond when Vox Machina attacked; on realising he was their prisoner they sent two invisible stalkers to kill him.

They also were twistedly parental to Cassandra and saved Desmond from Tylieri's treatment. These two undoubtedly have complicated, messy and often unclear thoughts and emotions regarding the Briarwoods. Desmond was offered a job as a courier between Whitestone and Emon but after Musician's Nostalgia he's never heard from again. He may have been killed during the Conclave's attack, if he was still in Emon - or he may have been sent off already. The wiki assumes he lives; we don't know for certain. But I like the idea he lives and I like this specific idea, so I run with the assumption he survived and either made his way to Whitestone or was part of the refugees VM evacuated to Whitestone.

And I like the idea that he ends up in service to Cass, basically as her manservant and personal assistant. Percy wants to see Desmond employed. Cassandra is being left in charge of Whitestone and all the things Percy, in his particular messy way, is not good at dealing with, which is to say the aftermath of so much of what he does.

So Cassandra, partially perhaps as a pointed comment, keeping Desmond as her personal servant - so Percy cannot forget what he has done and what he has left her to deal with.

I do not think Desmond would ever think particularly kindly of Percy. I do not blame him. No matter how much I love Percy as a character and think him well constructed and find him fascinating to explore - I would not blame Desmond in the least for being bitter and angry regarding the man who maimed him, never apologised, ensured he was given employment and just left the handling of that to his deeply traumatised younger sister.

There are many legitimate reasons to criticise Percy and Desmond, in this circumstance even more than canon, would have every cause to see those.

But I also think he'd have a lot of reasons to empathise with and understand Cassandra. I think their understanding of the complexity of their personal relationships with the Briarwoods would make them less judgemental of one another's difficult decisions during the occupation; their understanding of the pressures of the occupation and the grief Whitestone and the families within it bear for what happened - they lived in and amongst it as Percy did not.

I think they could connect on an interesting and deep way.

I also think neither is particularly prone to trusting, given everything. I think they'd take a damn long time to admit their trust for each other let alone anything else. If I wrote it, it would be a painfully slow burn.

But... I like to imagine it. I like to think up how they'd slowly be drawn closer just by working together and seeing each other every day and understanding one another's quirks. I like to think about the steady, quiet peace they build because neither has much care for sudden loud noises or explosive anger. For how their understanding of one another builds reassurance; for how that means they stand firm for each other in tentative friendship and empathetic loyalty. I like to think about the way they act towards each other, starting as the formal standard of ruling Lady and personal manservant and how that shifts as they use that to shield one another from things they know they dislike; Desmond given leave when Percy comes to speak to Cassandra, Desmond interrupting with some small important distraction when Cassandra gets caught in panic or anxiety or a memory. Quietly, persistently, helping each other, and it seeming only as work.

But it's too persistent for just work. It's too consistent for work.

But of course - they cannot just admit it. They have little reason to trust, for all they very clearly trust each other within their set dynamic.

This story, if I ever wrote it, would unfold slowly, small thing weighing upon small thing until the pressure is insurmountable and impossible to ignore.

It's not my usual style, that kind of steady slow pacing. But one day, I'd like to try it.

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Darkling Character Analysis

Full disclaimer, I’ve not read the books, though I have ordered the first so I am hoping to have read that soon. But just so you are aware this character analysis is based entirely on the show version of the character. Obviously there will be spoilers for all of season one. Also I just want to say that my aim with this analysis was to sort of get into The character’s head and so alot of this is just what I think the character might have been thinking, feeling and what his motivations may be, it does not mean I agree or disagree with his actions. When I am giving my view on his actions I will try to make it as clear as possible. Also this is just my interpretation of the character and my own opinions on the character, it is ok if you disagree. So obviously this is an analysis of the character The Darkling but I am also going to be talking about his relationship with Alina so I guess its also a sort of analysis of their relationship too just solely from Aleksander’s side of it. I will be using all of the names he has interchangeably because he has so many that I don’t know which one to stick with (seriously haven’t seen a character with this many different names since Jace from Shadowhunters) so sorry if that’s annoying. Fair warning this one is probably the longest analysis I have ever written and they are usually pretty long so I would suggest if you are going to read this maybe get some beverages and snacks first. I mean I think it shows how compelling and interesting a character he is that I was able to waffle on as long as have about him. But yeah its long. Of course you can also always scroll on past. But if you would like to read it then the rest is under the tag. 

Ok so first off I think the show does a really good job of building up the character in the first episode by giving us some information on The Black General before we and Alina officially meet him, they really give the character this air of mystery by giving us only a small amount of information about him but also by not letting us see his face. We get small tantalising glimpses of him, a shot of his boots in the mud, his carriage passing by, the back of him with his cloak billowing in the wind as the skiff enters the fold. It’s just enough to peak the audience’s interest. But most of what we learn in episode one is from what other character’s tell us. The very first mention we get of The General is from Mal and it’s a very small detail but I actually think it can tell you alot about The Darkling’s character. When Mal and Alina come across the Grisha practising Mal says ‘They’re always picking on us when their General’s not around.’ This seems like such a throwaway comment designed to show us how the First Army feel about Grisha and paints this picture of the Grisha thinking they are higher and mightier than those who are not Grisha. But it actually suggests that if they only do it when The General is not around then he does not tolerate Grisha bullying First Army. That he doesn’t think its ok for them to act like they are higher and mightier than those who are not Grisha and that he believes in humility even. Which I think is really interesting. This tracks with Nadia’s comment later in episode three when she says that General Kirigan insists that the Grisha eat peasant fare to keep them humble. Yet while he encourages humility he also makes sure that the Grisha have everything they need in order to flourish and he obviously cares a great deal about the Grisha, I feel like rising the Grisha up and making them strong has been pretty much his only drive and motivation over the hundreds of years since the fold was created. 

The other thing we learn which is repeated a couple of times by a few of the characters is that The General cannot bring down the Shadow Fold. In fact I think there are two conversations about it. The first between Inej, Jesper and Kaz when Jesper asks why the General hasn’t taken it down to which Inej replies ‘Have you ever put out fire by adding more fire?’ The other conversation is more flippant and is between Dubrov and Mikhael, where Mikhael sarcastically says the General is there to save the day and Dubrov asks if he’s going to tear down the fold. So on two occasions we have characters believing the General is powerful enough to fix the problem of the fold only for them to be corrected and told that he can’t. It seems like the show wants to make it very clear that the General will not be destroying the fold and I could be reaching here but this could be foreshadowing for later when we learn he doesn’t desire to bring down the fold.       

Of course even after the first episode the character of the Darkling still remains a bit of a mystery. He’s the kind of character where the more you learn about him the more questions you have. This tactic of giving us small pieces of information about him, just enough to keep you interested continues throughout the season and of course you have the twist in episode 5 where its revealed that he’s the ‘villain’. And yes I did put villain in quotation marks because I personally feel like its too simplistic a term to use for the character. I do feel like he’s more than just a two dimensional villain and there is alot of complexity to the character and his actions just for him to be considered the ‘bad guy’. 

So lets have a look at some of those actions and think about what might have been his motivations and what he might have been thinking and feeling. I want to start with one of the more controversial of his actions and as a warning this is a sensitive topic. One of the earlier things we find out about is that General Kirigan gifted Genya to the Queen. I’ll be honest when I first watched this scene I was so caught up in the new character and what was going on in the scene that I didn’t think much about Genya’s comment about being a gift to the Queen but when I thought more on it later I realised that it was a rather dark idea, that you could gift a person to another person. It becomes especially darker later when you find out what Genya suffered at the King’s hands. I kept wondering a few things, one being why the General would gift a child to the Queen in the first place, two whether he knew what the King was when he put Genya under the royal family’s care and three if he didn’t why he didn’t remove Genya when he discovered what was happening with the King. I do feel that we didn’t get enough information in the show (I don’t know if there’s more information in the books) to really answer these questions but I’ll give it my best shot. Firstly why would the General gift a child to the Queen? Well I actually think this one is easy to answer, he needed a spy within the Royal Family. We know that Aleksander has suffered and been betrayed by a king in the past. He won the Old King a war and in turn that King turned on not just Aleksander but on his people too. I feel like Aleksander was blindsided when this happened and he just didn’t see it coming and because of that his people were slaughtered. It would make sense then that the General would want to keep an eye on the royals and get a warning if they were planning on turning on Grisha again. I also think this is why they refer to Genya as a ‘gift’. That was just the wording the General used to manipulate the royals. Here’s a gift that I am granting you out of respect and to honour and please you, is going to go over a lot better than hey here’s a spy I want in your household. Genya is essentially the General’s trojan horse. As for it being Genya as oppose to someone else, like a trained adult Grisha, well I think that’s because it would be easier to get the royals to take a child into their household than an adult, even as a gift. They will be alot less suspicious of a child than they would an adult. Also they might bond with a child and therefore treat them as more of a confidante as time goes on. As well as that Genya had a very specific set of Grisha abilities that made her perfect for a vain Queen. I may be wrong on this one but thinking back to my history education I think I remember being taught it was fairly common during the time period if a young lady was discovered to have a particularly special talent, like say singing for example, they may be given as a gift to the Queen as this may gain favour for the maiden’s family if she is made a lady in waiting. So if I am right about that then whilst it might seem strange to us it may have been a fairly normal practise to the characters. I mean Alina didn’t seem shocked when Genya said she was a gift to the queen it was learning about the King that upset her. 

Also I do wonder if some of the reason why he placed her with the royal family was because he believed she wouldn’t fit in with the other Grisha, she does say that she is almost as rare as Alina. I don’t know for sure but maybe the General suspected she would struggle with being different from the other Grisha and so decided the best way to help her grow and flourish was by giving a special mission of her own. 

Ok so what about question 2? Did he know what kind of person the King was when he placed Genya under his care. In my opinion I don’t think he did. I am basing this on how he always seems to want to make Grisha safe and wants them to flourish and also due to his actions with Alina when things between them became more intimate, we know that consent is something Aleksander cares about. So to me it would be out of character for him considering how much he cares about the Grisha and consent for him to knowingly put Genya under the King’s care whilst having the knowledge of what would happen to her. I feel like he would also consider it as a disrespect towards Grisha from the King for him to harm a Grisha woman like that especially as she was ‘gifted’ to them. Also when Alina herself asks a similar question in episode 7 when she says ‘did you think Genya was safe when you placed her under the King’s watch?’ To me I think the Darkling looked somewhat upset that she would think that he would knowingly put Genya in that situation. However I do think that by the time Alina was discovered and brought to the Little Palace he was aware of what was going on with Genya and the King as he makes that comment about Alina remaining at the Little Palace with him to train undisturbed. The way he said undisturbed made me think he thought the King might decide he wanted Alina and the General was warning the King away, making it clear that if he wanted the fold destroyed he would have to leave Alina alone. His actions here in protecting Alina also make me think that he didn’t know at the time of placing Genya with the Royal family what would happen to her. He doesn’t want to make the same mistake with Alina that he made with Genya. 

As for number 3, why didn’t he remove Genya from the King’s care once he did find out about what the King was doing? I saw a few comments about this. All of them saying the same that because he didn’t get Genya out he was as bad as the King and was complicit in what happened to Genya. But I actually think it’s more complicated than that. For one thing technically he did remove Genya from the King’s care when he had her poison the king and then made her Corporalnik. Though obviously he didn’t do it immediately. We’ve got no timescale as to when he find out so who knows how long they were planning this. But also there was one line in episode 3 that I think answers this question best, when the General says ‘I may lead the Second Army, but the King is still the King.’ Whilst the General is powerful he still only has so much power over the King. He needed the King’s permission just  to have Alina at the Little Palace and for her to train, which is what the demonstration Alina had to go through in episode 3 was all about. I don’t think the General had the power to just walk into the Grande Palace and take back Genya. The only way he was getting Genya out of there was by killing the King. Also correct me if I am wrong but I feel like what the King was doing to Genya was a large part of the General’s motivation for poisoning the King. I mean we weren’t given much information about the King other than what he was doing to Genya, which made me think that’s why he was poisoned as we weren’t told about any other bad things the King had done that might lead to the General deciding to poison him. I think once he found out what the King was doing to Genya he allowed her to be the one to carry out the poisoning knowing that she would want revenge rather than trying to remove her right away and potentially causing tension with the royal family and also making it harder if not impossible for Genya to be the one to exact her revenge on the King. I guess what I am saying is its possible that Genya was the one who wanted to stay because she wanted to be the one to kill the King. I mean that’s the impression I got from her conversation with Alina where she says ‘I waited for years for my chance at revenge.’ For all we know General Kirigan might have offered to remove her from the Royal household and she might have told him she wanted to be the one to help him take down the King. Whatever his motivations were and however much he may or may not have known I think we can all agree that him ‘gifting’ Genya to the Queen was a mistake. I personally feel like it was more of a similar mistake to when Alina burned the maps. She had good intentions, she did it to protect someone she cared about, but in the end she caused others harm. With Alina she wanted to protect Mal and her whole unit was killed. With Kirigan I think he hoped a spy in the Royal household would protect the Grisha but in the end Genya was harmed by the King. One question I do have is whether Kirigan feels any guilt over what happened to Genya, whether he regrets his decision. I mean we did see him protect Alina from the King when he insisted she remain at the Little Palace. But was that just because it was Alina, the Sun Summoner? What if it were someone else. For example say the King came to the General and said he had taken a fancy to Marie, or Nadia or Zoya, and asked for them to be sent to the Grande Palace, would the General have agreed or would he have made some excuse as to why they couldn’t go, maybe even sent them on an assignment to protect them? There’s no way we can really know the answers to these questions as we just don’t know enough about the situation. All we know is that the General ultimately decided to get rid of the King but even then we don’t know for certain what his motivations for that were.   

I suppose you could say that him plotting against the king and conspiring with the apparat to usurp the throne was also a ‘bad guy’ move. But to be honest after telling us everything that the King did and just generally presenting the royal family in a negative light, I was surprised that Alina had such a problem with what the General did. To me it didn’t make sense for her to be upset and using that against him. I mean after learning what he did to Genya I was fully on the Darkling’s side when it came to killing the King. If they were trying to present this as a ‘villain’ move on the Darkling’s part then they did a poor job of it because I completely understood where he was coming from with that one. 

I felt a similar way with his other big ‘villain’ move when he expanded The Fold into Novokribirsk. At first I found it hard to have sympathy for them considering literally a couple of minutes before we were being shown that the soldiers were planning on murdering everyone on the skiff as soon as it docked. Couple that with the fact that Zlatan had arranged to assassinate Alina and once again I found myself on the Darkling’s side, I mean screw Zlatan and his soldiers. It was another case of it wasn’t until I rewatched it that I realised the villainous part of what the Darkling did was that there were civilians in the city that were also killed. To be honest I do wish that the show had done a better job of showing those civilians to really get across the horror of what the Darkling did. I mean on a rewatch I could see a few civilians mixed in with the soldiers but they were blended in so were hard to spot. I guess that was the purpose of Zoya having family in the city, to tell the viewer that there were innocents there but I just don’t think it made enough of an impact. I feel like if they had focussed in on actual civilians running and being swallowed by the darkness as well as the West Ravkan soldiers it would have had a bigger and more horrific impact. Instead it just kind of came across as the bad guys who had been built up as being bad throughout the season, who were rebels and who had tried to kill the main character, were finally eliminated. Lets be real if Alina had been the one to take out those soldiers we would all have been cheering. Lets talk about Game of Thrones for a moment as an example (spoiler alert for GOT here) however you felt about the way Dany’s descent into madness was written one thing the writers did right in The Bells episode was focus on the civilians that Dany was killing on the ground. They cut away from Dany completely and stayed on the ground with her victims and so you get that impact of what she has done, you see the horror in what she has done and I think this is something that would have worked well with Shadow and Bone. If they had just cut away from the skiff for a scene showing the civilians, the victims that were being effected by what the Darkling was doing then I think I would have been more shocked and effected by his actions. 

Ok so lets focus back in on the character and talk about what his motivations might have been for Novokribirsk. Why did he expand the Fold and take out the city? Well again I don’t think its hard to answer that question. We have to remember that he is a General that is fighting a war on three fronts. He’s fighting the Fjerdans on one side, the Shu Han on another and then the cherry on top is that the West Ravkans are rising up in rebellion. It’s already hard enough having to fight two enemy countries without also having to split your forces again to deal with a rebellion. The General knows that they are already overstretched without having to split their force again to deal with Zlatan. So if you look at it from his point of view striking down Zlatan now before the rebellion gets too large is a tactical military move. Also the fact that it is such a violent move will act as a deterrent for any remaining rebels who might think of trying to restart Zlatan’s movement. As well as to Fjerda and Shu Han, a this is what we do to our own people when they act against us so think about what we might do to you if you cross us, kind of deal. As for the innocent civilians that were in the city well I think the Darkling would convince himself that it was a numbers game. He might have killed hundreds of civilians but as far as he sees it he has spared thousands of lives that would have been lost if they had gone to war with West Ravka. By now the General knows the cost of war, so to him sacrificing a few hundred civilians is worth the price of saving thousands of his soldiers. Of course there is another motivation for the General, one that is less military strategy and more personal and emotionally driven. As Kaz says he was a man fuelled by vengeance. These soldiers standing on the dock had turned their back on Grisha and even worse than that they had tried to kill Alina. In the scene where The Darkling is talking to the Conductor and the Conductor admits to agreeing to assassinate Alina for a million kruge you can see how angry this makes The Darkling. This idea that someone would harm Alina for something as material as money is unforgivable to him. I said in a previous post that I wondered if the General always planned to expand the fold into Novokribirsk and I actually think the answer to that is no he didn’t. I actually think he was trying to make up his mind about what to do about Zlatan and his rebels, its possible he had a number of strategies to go with and was trying to decide which to choose, with expanding the fold being the most extreme of them. I actually think this here is the moment he decides to go with that plan. As he walks away from the Conductor and the Conductor asks ‘tell me how I can help’ The Darkling replies ‘you already have.’ I actually think what he meant here was you’ve helped me make up my mind. Them daring to harm Alina was the linchpin.         

Which brings me to the next part of this analysis, The Darkling’s manipulation and relationship with Alina. One of the great things the show did with the Darkling’s character was making him so complex and nuanced that the audience is in very much the same position as Alina when that reveal is made about Aleksander being the Black Heretic. Just like Alina (if you haven’t read the books) you are left sort of blindsided. Also just like Alina the audience is left wondering how much of it was a manipulation. Was all of it part of his manipulation? Or were there some moments that were real? Did he care at all about Alina or was he just interested in her power? 

Well I will say this, while I do think he always planned to manipulate her, I don’t think he ever planned or tried to use seduction as part of that manipulation. I think we have to remember that he was waiting for the Sun Summoner for hundreds of years and I think he spent that time creating his plan for her and her power. We also have to remember that when he was creating this plan he was expecting to find a child. I think his plan was to earn her trust as a mentor and build a confidence between them. I think he planned to bring her up with his ideals, to bring her up believing the best thing was to use the fold as a weapon, to bring her up to always want to protect the Grisha and to bring her up to embrace her power. However this whole plan had a wrench thrown in it when he does finally find Alina and she’s not a child, she’s a grown woman and one that has been taught her whole life that the Sun Summoner’s purpose is to tear down the fold. Changing the ideals and beliefs of an adult is alot harder to do than a child. On top of that I think he does develop real feelings for her. But these feelings get in the way of his plans, which makes everything all the more complicated for him.        

Lets go to the moment they first meet. I do think right from the get go he is intrigued by her and mean I think when you watch the scene you are so focused on Alina and what she must be going through and feeling, how scared she must be being dragged in front of this powerful General that she’s only ever heard stories about, that we don’t think about what this moment meant to the General. I mean he has been waiting for this woman for so long. She could be the solution to all of his problems, a fix for all of his mistakes. She has been his one glimmer of hope in the vast darkness of eternity. And now she’s here in front of him. Jessie said in an interview that Alina felt a connection to Aleksander right from the beginning, but I think he felt a connection to her too. I think you can even see the moment they make that connection and it’s when he takes her wrist in the tent.

Once he takes her wrist they never break eye contact even as he draws her sleeve up higher, their eyes are glued to each other. Then they both pause for a few beats and again just stare at each other.

The tension between them is so thick it almost makes you want to yell get a room at the screen. It’s like they both suddenly felt something click between them, a oh I know you, kind of moment. But I also feel like Aleksander is a bit surprised by this feeling, he wasn’t expecting it. They don’t break eye contact until The General cuts her arm releasing her power and causing her to look down in surprise. But almost immediately Alina brings her eyes back to his. One kind of cool little detail I did notice is that you can see the reflection of the beam of light in both their eyes.

It’s like a thread connecting them both, I don’t know why but it sort of reminds me of that red thread of fate legend. But also with them both having dark eyes the beam of light reflected in them sort of reminds me of yin and yang. The other thing of note is the General’s facial expression when he sees her power. Whilst everyone else is looking on is awe and surprise, he looks almost content, definitely happy and maybe even a bit hopeful. To me he kind of looks like he’s just had all his prayers answered. 

I think Kirigan is further intrigued by Alina in episode two when she talks back to him with that rant about maybe he hasn’t found anyone with her power because they didn’t want to be found. I think its the first time in a long while that anyone has stood up to him and not just said yes sir. I actually found it really comical how surprised he was when she said no to him. You just know he hasn’t heard that word much in recent lifetimes. But I do think this plants those first seeds of him seeing her as an equal to him. I think this is where he starts to see her as not someone to bow at his feet but someone who belongs at his side. Then when she confesses that she hid from the testers because she didn’t want to feel even more alone I think he really saw something of himself in her. I mean you can see his facial expression shift. I think this furthers his idea that she is meant to be at his side, that she is the same as him and I think even at this early stage he begins to hope that maybe she is someone who will understand him as no one else ever has. In that moment he is determined to make sure she doesn’t ever feel alone again and that is why he tells her ‘you are Grisha, you are not alone.’ You can see from the passion in his voice when he says it that this is something very personal to him. 

However despite this connection he feels to her and the care I think he has for her too, he does manipulate her. I think one of the more obvious manipulations happens in episode 4 when he takes her to the fountain. Something that is worth noting is that before setting out on their ride Aleksander takes off his Kefta. Their Keftas in the show are presented as their armour, so I think it was a very deliberate move on his part to sort of send the message to her, look I’m taking my armour off for you and I am being vulnerable and open to you. He furthers this by giving her his name to create this familiarity between them. Then he takes her to a place that is personal to him and then he really gets into his manipulation game. Here’s the thing though, I feel like most of the time when we think of manipulation we think of lies. But sometimes the best way to manipulate a person is through twisting the truth and I think this is what he does here. From their conversations so far I think he has figured out that Alina feels like an outsider and that she fears being alone and not fitting in. I definitely think he uses this information to manipulate her by telling her the story about how he used to go to the fountain as a boy after he discovered he was descended from the most hated Grisha in Ravka and wished to be anybody else. He knows that Alina will respond to this story, that it will make her feel sympathy for him and also make her feel like he is someone who understands her and therefore someone she can trust and rely on. He is also most definitely being deceitful in that he knows she thinks he is talking about being related to the Black Heretic when in fact he is the Black Heretic. However that doesn’t mean that what he said was untrue. I really do think he used to go there as a boy and wish to be someone else. As for being the descendant of the most hated Grisha in Ravka well my theory there is that he could actually be talking about Morozova. In the flashback in episode 7 Aleksander says that he and Baghra are his descendants and that means that if he created the amplifiers than Aleksander could create an army. Baghra gives the warning that Aleksander will die like Morozova. This makes me think that Morozova died in quite an unpleasant way, maybe even killed because he was feared and hated. I mean sure the Black Heretic is the most hated Grisha in all of Ravka now, but whose to say there wasn’t someone who came before him? Another Grisha who was hated like the Black Heretic is now. And maybe when Aleksander was a boy he discovered he was the descendant of Morozova and that was a burden on him, so much so that he wished he was someone else. 

I also think he was being genuine when he talked about how he is never seen as the solution only a reminder of the problem. I mean we’ve seen this ourselves in episode one its one of the first things we learn about him, that he can’t bring down the fold. I also think he’s being truthful when he says they always need someone to blame but again he’s twisting this truth. Alina thinks he means he is being unjustly blamed for not being able to fix the Fold but I think he actually is talking about how the Old King turned on him. I’m also sure over the years many people have blamed him and the Grisha for all the ills the world has suffered. But I do think he really meant it when he told her that he wouldn’t let the world make her the new Heretic. I think making sure that doesn’t happen is something he cares deeply about and I think it shows that he does have some care for her that he is so determined that she doesn’t go through what he did with the world turning on him. 

Slight diversion here but I do want to talk about whether or not this hatred the world has for him is justified, I mean he did create the fold and that fold has killed alot of people since its creation. So surely just the fact that he created the fold is enough to solidify him as the villain. Well I think that depends on why he created the fold. I mean we get three different versions of how and why the Fold was created. The first one we hear is in episode 4 when Alina tells us the story that is taught to children in school. They say that history is written by the victors, and whilst I personally don’t think there were any victors in the creation of the fold, The Black Heretic disappeared with its creation, presumed to be dead, so the Old King probably considered himself the victor and was left to decide the history. Therefore this story was most likely the Old King’s version of events. In this version of the story it talks about how the Darkling hungered for more power after being made the Kings military advisor and this made the king fear that the Darkling would try to overthrow him. So he put a bounty on his head and that of anyone who stood by him. Eventually the Heretic realised he was outnumbered and decided to create an army using forbidden science. But he failed, creating the fold and killing himself and countless others. The second version we get is from Baghra and it is similar to this one. She says that he created the Fold to use as a weapon, that he tried making an army with merzost and that he didn’t think about what that would do to the people who lived there, that it turned the men, women and children into the Volcra. That she had warned him there would be a price and that he didn’t listen. She also says that he took a noble’s name to hide after. Baghra’s version paints Aleksander as power hungry and as someone who will stop at nothing to get what he wants no matter the cost. But there are somethings I think its worth noting about her version. The first is that it is very brief, sort of like the cliff notes version, as they are in a hurry and she needs to get Alina out of there pronto. She doesn’t have time to go into all the details so she tells her enough to convince her to leave. Which brings me to my second point, Baghra’s motivation here is to get Alina to flee, so logically the best way to do that is to tell her the worst parts of the story and leave out anything that might make Alina feel sympathetic towards Aleksander and therefore hesitate about leaving. Another thing to remember is that Baghra whilst she might know somethings wasn’t there for a lot of it, she didn’t see Luda killed by the soldiers just knows that she was killed and she didn’t witness the confrontation between Aleksander and the soldiers. However what she did see likely had an effect on her. There is one moment in particular during Baghra’s story where she becomes emotional and choked up, there are tears in her eyes and you just know she is reliving a bad memory and that is when she talks about the women and children who were turned into the Volcra alongside the soldiers. Think for a moment about where Baghra was when the fold was created. She was inside the sanctuary with the women and children who were hiding from the soldiers. Which means that she would have witnessed them turning into the Volcra which must have been a horrifying scene. 

Eventually we get to episode 7 and we learn what really happened when the fold was created and the story is more tragic that first told. I mean first you have the whole situation with Luda. He obviously loved her deeply and I can only imagine how painful it must have been to see her murdered right in front of him and to feel that guilt of her dying because she was protecting him. I mean the words ‘just mortal’ now make me want to burst out crying anytime I hear them. Then he gets to the sanctuary and there’s all these Grisha there that need protecting. I think he feels a responsibility for them. Then his mother reminds him that they are not fighters, they make things. Which gives him the idea of creating an army using merzost. It is worth pointing out here that when telling the tale to Alina Baghra says that she warned Aleksander that there would be a price for using merzost, but when you actually see the conversation what she says is that whilst the small science feeds them merzost feeds on them. This suggests that the price to be paid is by him. So yes he was aware there would be a price but he assumed he would be the one paying it. I think if he knew that the people inside the sanctuary would be turned into Volcra he might not have gone through with it. This is another thing that makes the story even more tragic. Aleksander was driven to create his own army by his wish to protect his people, but he lost control and ended up destroying the very people he was trying so hard to protect. Another thing I noticed when Alina is telling the story of the heretic in episode four when she gets to the part about the Heretic being killed along with countless other you can hear what sound like screams in the background, also Aleksander looks really sad and guilty. It is also right after that he says he had devoted his life to undoing the great sin aka the creation of the fold. We see this look of guilt again when Alina confronts him in episode 7 about being the one to create the fold and therefore responsible for the deaths of her friends and parents. You see him look to the floor.

 I really do think that he has alot of guilt about the fold, he sees it as a mistake.  We see both Baghra and Alina make the claim, the fold was no mistake. But in episode 7 we learn that it was, Aleksander did not deliberately set out to create the fold. It wasn't his intention. It seems to me that he wanted to bend the will of the soldiers to his, to make them his own army, but I think he lost control due to the emotional state he was in at the time. I mean right before the soldiers were threatening to murder all the people inside, including his mother, and were mocking him about Luda’s death. He was grieving, he was angry and he was fearful for his people. We were told the fold was born out of greed but lets be real it was born out of grief and out of pain and anger and fear. 

So if he considers it such a big mistake why doesn’t he want to tear it down? Well I think its two fold. On one hand he might be afraid of what he’ll see. It’s like Kaz says to Zoya ‘it’s dangerous to go looking for the dead. What you see may haunt you for the rest of your days.’ Tearing down the fold will reveal all the destruction he caused to the land and to the people who lived there, he’d have to really confront what he did to his own people. But I think another motivator is what he said about undoing the great sin. I think he thinks if he makes the fold useful then at least it would have made the ‘deaths’ of his people mean something somehow. If creating the fold cost them their lives then maybe by making it a weapon that can be used to protect Grisha will make their ‘deaths’ a worthwhile sacrifice.

Ok so diversion over, lets go back to the Darklina relationship and how much of his actions were a manipulation. We’ve already established that he was being manipulative when taking her to the fountain and was telling her twisted truths. But if we stick with episode 4 there’s the scene where she comes to visit him at night in the war room. This whole scene I actually think he was being completely genuine. I don’t think any of it was part of his manipulation of her. First off is the way they are both dressed. They are both in their nightclothes which gives this idea of them being more intimate and more exposed to each other. I said above that the Kefta is seen as the Grisha’s armour, well here neither one of them are wearing their Kefta. They have both taken off their armour and are letting each other in. When Alina first finds him he is looking over the war map and you can see that he looks troubled, which you know fair enough considering he’s fighting a war on two fronts, having to deal with getting supplies through the fold and how to deal with the rebels. I love the way he looks at Alina when she comes in though, its just so soft and I feel like he feels instantly calmer when he sees her. But then he starts talking about how he’s been fighting the war alone and lost friends, about how their own people are turning on Grisha just as their kin once did and he is clearly thinking back to when the Old King was hunting him and his people. When the shadows start creeping in I think his pain is very real, I don’t think this was an act at all and once again if you listen closely you can hear those faint screams in the background. Then Alina dispels the shadows with her light and repeats his words back to him, ‘you are not alone.’ I think in this moment he truly does feel like he’s not alone. That he has found someone who understands him and who is his equal, who is like him. So he reaches out and cups her face and tells her he’s been waiting for her a long time. But then she pulls away and says she should go. I think Aleksander is afraid at this moment that he has frightened her away or that he misinterpreted the situation and he becomes very confused. So when she lingers at the door he goes to it and contemplates calling her back, just as she struggles with whether she should go back. But then she walks away and I think he thinks that maybe he was wrong and she doesn’t feel the same as him and he is a little angry with himself for losing focus and for feeling something for her and so he locks the door between them.  

Another question I asked myself was whether he always intended to put the stag collar on her and to control her powers. In my opinion this one has a bit of a yes and a no answer. I think he kept changing his mind. He clearly knew that by killing the Stag and putting the amplifier on her he would gain control of her powers. As I said early I think his first draft of the plan, shall we say, was to find the Sun Summoner as a child, to gain her trust as her mentor and teach her that the Fold is a weapon to be used as opposed to something that needs to be torn down. If he had found her as a child he would have had a lot more control over her and could shape her into what he wanted. However when they find the Sun Summoner she’s an adult and believes that its her fate to tear down the fold so he has to do a rework of his plan. On top of that he’s got this problem that she clearly doesn’t want to be the Sun Summoner she has no interest in saving anyone and she just wants to go back to being a mapmaker in the First Army. I think it is during that speech where she talks about him transferring her power to someone else that he starts to look into whether that is possible. But as he gets to know her more I think this changes again and he starts to feel things for her and I think he starts to believe that they want the same things and that maybe taking control of her powers won’t be necessary. I think the turning point for him is in episode 5. In the breakdown video of their first kiss Jessie says Alina goes to the General’s rooms because of what happened the night before in the war room where they had a moment in episode 4. Alina wasn’t sure what that moment meant and so she was seeking out Aleksander because she was intrigued and wanted to know if there was something there. Aleksander is once again clearly happy to see her but I do feel like there is some awkwardness there because of what happened in episode 4 and because he feels like he had misinterpreted things and maybe was too intense with her. It’s an interesting dynamic because as Jessie says in that video in this moment he is the vulnerable one. One moment in particular that I think shows this vulnerability is right after she helps him into his Kefta. Again going back to the whole the Kefta is armour thing. When Alina first enters the room like in episode 4 she is wearing her dressing gown she has come to him with her armour off so to speak. He is also out of his Kefta and this early conversation is playful where they are joking about Ivan and the Volcra. But after she puts the Kefta on him is when his mood shifts a little and you see him kind of tug the Kefta tighter around himself. I feel like he was trying to protect himself because the more time he spends with her the more vulnerable and confused he feels, he’s feeling alot of feelings he hasn’t felt in a long time and I think he knows by now that he is well on his way to falling in love with her and this scares him a bit because he has lost loves in the past. Him putting the Kefta back on is like him attempting to put that armour back on. There is another way of looking at it too though. It’s worth noting that on this occasion Alina is the one helping him put the armour/Kefta on, like she is the one giving him protection. Then he turns around Alina is alot closer then he anticipated and you can actually see him struggling to even form words. Then she leans in close to him like she's about to kiss him but changes her mind and walks into the other room leaving our poor guy more confused than ever. Then Alina makes the speech about how she finally feels like she is part of something bigger and that they can offer hope to the Grisha and to Ravkans. In this moment our girl was talking straight to our boy’s heart. I think this is all he has ever wanted to hear her say, especially the ‘we can offer hope.’ I think he really means it when he says it means a lot to him and you can hear the passion in his voice when he says ‘you mean a lot.’ Of course when she looks down he once again becomes afraid he’s overstepped, gone too far and so he tries to backtrack with ‘to everyone’. And well we all know what happens next. Alina kisses him and as he says after he is surprised and not many people do surprise him. I think there is something about this woman that just makes him lose all his senses until his whole world becomes about her. I feel like throughout episode 5 Aleksander feels like he’s gotten everything he’s ever wanted. Because maybe she does feel the same way he does, maybe she wants the same things he does, maybe he has found his life partner, another immortal who will always be by his side, finally he’ll never have to feel alone again. I think the moment I decided this fool was definitely in love with Alina was the look on his face when she enters the room and he sees her in his colours for the first time. After watching her demonstration I think he does see her as his equal. He’s in complete awe of her and the only time he looks away is to look at the Monarchs to see their reaction. Basically from the moment Alina kisses him to this moment where he is seeing her take command of the room and truly showing her power, having people bow to her, Aleksander is living his best life, he’s on cloud nine. 

Then he gets word that someone has located the stag. We don’t see the scene where he gets informed of this but you can imagine he probably can’t believe his luck. Not only are things perfect between him and Alina but now someone has found the amplifier. But I feel like he gets a bit of a reality check when he discovers that Mal is the one who found the stag and he’s now here in the Little Palace. I feel like Aleksander sort of came crashing down to earth here and realised he might have a bit of a problem. Once again he’s having to do a quick, rapid, rework of his plan. Which brings us to another moment where the Darkling is being manipulative. He uses Mal to find out what Alina’s favourite flower is. I mean I suppose you could argue that he’s only doing what every other person does when they want to get a gift for their crush and don’t know what would be best, ask the best friend. But all jokes aside this move was clearly calculative on The Darkling’s part. But I couldn’t help but wonder why he decided to use the Irises. What was his motivation here. It’s clear that he has already won Alina over seeing as she was kissing him not to long ago. Well I said earlier that I think he changed his mind about using the collar on her. I do think after their conversation in episode 2 where she talks about how she didn’t want any of it and could he transfer it he thought she was going to be a problem and difficult so maybe he should look into finding a way of controlling her power. In the beginning she was focussed on her old life and I feel like she didn’t have much loyalty or care for the Grisha, it took her awhile to accept who she was and she was also struggling to use her powers. All she wanted was to go back to Mal and I think this may be why, or at least part of the reason why The General takes their letters. For one he didn’t want her to go back to him and so making her think that Mal didn’t care would encourage her stay put and discourage any ideas of leaving. I mean given her comment in episode 3 where Alina asks Genya if anyone had ever escaped the Little Palace, which the General overheard, its not that surprising that he would decide to confiscate any of her correspondence out of the Palace in case she was organising a breakout with Mal. Secondly as I said she was having trouble using her powers and I think after reading the letters maybe he figures out that its because of Mal that she is struggling, so he either stopped the letters because he wanted her to continue feeling abandoned by Mal and therefore he was hoping she would shift her dependence onto him or because he knew if she let go of Mal then she would be able to control her power more and more power for Alina means more power for him to control. This was all very manipulative on his part and obviously not the actions of someone who cares about Alina’s feelings but at this point she wasn’t Alina to him she was the Sun Summoner, a tool to be used and he was thinking as a General who had people and a whole country to protect and if that meant putting the collar on this stranger then so be it. I think he set out to win her trust to make it easier for him to put that collar on her when the time came. But then as he got to know her more, started catching feelings for her and after their conversation in episode 5, I think he decided that maybe he wouldn’t need to use the collar after all. My theory is that he got her the flowers and he took her to the war room instead of the dinner because he was planning to tell her some of the truth. I don’t think he was going to tell her about who he really was and about him being the Fold’s creator but I do think its possible that he intended to tell her about the Stag and maybe even try to convince her about using the Fold as a weapon. So I think he just wanted to put her in as good a mood as he could if that makes sense, sweeten her up before he brought it up. Also telling her about the Stag means telling her about Mal. I think he actually felt a little threatened by Mal because having read their letters he knows how she feels about Mal. So he wants her attention as much on him as possible. I think he very much felt like his dream was slipping away. As for the make out on the war table moment, that could have also been an attempt to keep her sweet on him like the irises. But as I’ve said before Aleksander seems to lose all his senses when he’s with Alina. When he’s with her the only thing he’s focused on is her, and I personally think it was just a case of he really wanted to kiss her. Some of it might also have been to reassure himself that those feelings between them were real, especially now that Mal has shown up. I mean they are both so giddy and happy when they break apart for him to answer the door that I find it difficult to believe that the whole kiss was a cold manipulation, he was grinning like a school boy. My favourite kiss between them (as steamy as their make out session was) was actually the one where he comes back to kiss her one last time. This is right after he has learnt that she was the target of an attack that happened inside of his Palace, which is the one place where his people are supposed to be safe. I think in that moment he just needed to reassure himself that she is safe, you can see his desperation in the kiss. There was just something so soft and pure about it. If I am sure about anything is that one was definitely real, I may have small doubts about the other kisses but that one kiss was 100% true.   

Things only get worse for Aleksander in episode 6 when he realises that Alina is missing. I think how he behaves in this episode tells us alot about how he really feels about Alina. He becomes somewhat unhinged when she goes missing and only becomes more so the longer she is gone from him. His sole focus is on her and finding her, to the point where he kind of forgets about anything else as we see when Fedyor comes to report about Nina, The General has completely forgotten there were other missions and things he was dealing with. Later when he calls Zoya to tell her to prepare a team to track down ‘Alina’s abductors’ and she puts forward the suggestion that Alina ran by herself, he doesn’t even consider it a possibility. The idea that she would willingly leave him is just too hard for him to wrap his head around because as he says to Zoya he is sure he knows exactly how she feels. He is usually the composed, unfazed General but he very much snaps at this moment and I think reveals more than he intended to Zoya, who clearly looks surprised by his outburst. He even says himself with Alina gone he’s not himself, he’s feeling unbalanced and tense without her. So when Zoya offers to help him relax he tells her that he’ll relax when he has Alina. I think its important as well that he says Alina and not the Sun Summoner. It’s not the Sun Summoner he’s lost without its Alina. When he finally catches up with Kaz and is told that Alina fled on her own you can see how shocked he is at this.

 And even then he has trouble believing it because he once again asks where she is and its not until the line ‘It was pretty clear she wasn’t interested in being a captive any more’ that it begins to set in for him and you see his shadows creep in. After you can see the heartbreak set in and then the anger.

 This anger only grows when he learns that she is with Mal and that she is going after the Stag. I think he very much feels like everything has been snatched away from him in a blink of an eye. I think he is angry that he was blindsided by it and he’s angry that he let his feelings for her cloud his judgement and distract him from his plans. Because of his feelings for her he might now have ruined all his plans and, as he would see it, risked the safety of the Grisha in doing so. Naturally its back to plan A of forcing the collar on her, because no matter how he feels about her he can’t let that distract him from his mission to protect the Grisha again. 

However no matter how angry he is at her and how hurt is is that she ran from him, that doesn’t mean he doesn’t care about her. I see alot of arguments that he can’t have loved Alina because you can’t hurt someone you love like he did when he put the collar on her. But I’m calling BS on that one now because the people you love are the people who can hurt you the most, especially when they are hurt or angry. It doesn’t necessarily mean they don’t love you it just means they are human and make mistakes. However that doesn’t mean you should tolerate those mistakes or brush them under the rug, absolutely they should be called out for them and held accountable for them and I am really glad that Alina does do this. The Darkling's anger at her is what drives him to find her and to kill the stag himself so he can collar her and I think this anger builds up whilst he is away from her, again showing how unhinged he has become without her. But I feel like some of that anger ebbs away a bit when he does find her and once she is in front of him again. That moment when he finds her and the stag and Mal is hurt and he calls out to her that she can’t save them, that as powerful as she is she does not have the power to heal. He is obviously thinking back to Luda here. Because as powerful as he was he was not powerful enough to save her, in that moment he was utterly powerless to keep her from dying. I think despite how hurt he is he cares about her too much to watch her go through the same pain and grief he did which is why he offers to heal Mal if she gives him the Stag. The similarities between the two scenes (the one with Alina, mal and the Stag and the one with Aleksander, Luda and the king’s men) are clear and I think really have an effect on Aleksander. I think when he says that Mal was only protecting Miss Starkov there are two interesting points. One is the use of the term Miss Starkov. This is a name he mostly called her when they barely knew each other and I think he is trying to distance himself from her again by making things more formal between them. The other thing is that it draws a parallel between both Mal and Luda. Both Mal and Luda were just trying to protect the people they love and Aleksander clearly doesn’t think either one of them deserved to die for it so he lets Mal live. 

Another scene I want to talk about real quick is the one right before he puts the collar on her. This scene is eerily similar to when they first meet. Once again they are back in a tent. Once again the scene starts with the Darkling’s back to her and with Alina in the hands of a guard/s. I said before that I think alot of the reason why he decides to collar her is because she doesn’t share his views and he feels like he needs to control her so he can weaponize the fold and save his people. That he was angry at himself for believing she might be his equal and share his goals. I think this scene where he talks to her shows that. The fact that he lowers himself to her level I think shows that he does see her as an equal. Then he talks about how together they could end all wars and protect their own and asks isn’t that what she wants. I think he is still clinging to that belief that he wasn’t wrong and that they did want the same things and maybe some part of him was still hoping he might not need to use the collar. But then she asks if they are going to tear down the fold and you can see the disappointment on his face because he understands now that she won’t see it his way. So instead he deflects the question and I think this is the moment that cements his choice to collar her.  

Further evidence that he does still care about Alina comes when he puts the collar on her. This is obviously a very distressing and gruesome scene. What he is doing is obviously wrong and I think deep down he knows it too. He can’t bear to look at her as it happens and so her turns away and its the second time he does as he also looks away in guilt when he threatens Mal. I don’t think he can handle her looking at him like he’s a monster and he can’t cope with seeing the betrayal and hurt in her eyes. It is also worth noting that I think part of the reason why he goes through with putting the amplifier on her is like he said to Mal, he thinks that over the years she will come to forgive him. Now this conversation where he talks about how she might take years to forgive him but he had patience also tells us that the fact that he is hoping for forgiveness shows that he knows what he is doing to her is wrong, that it is something that will require forgiveness. When he comes to see her later in her tent, can we just talk for a moment how nice that tent was, I mean he really went all out for her with lace and flowers like he somehow thought that would make up for him fusing a antler into her collar bone, but again even the fact that he gives her all these nice things shows that he wants that forgiveness and the way he approaches her as well is cautiously, like you would a wounded animal. He knows he’s hurt her and made her angry so he comes in with sweet words of compliments, telling her how special she is, and very quickly comes to know that she’s not having any of it. I mean that look she gives him when he first comes in, if looks could kill he’d be six feet under now. But I really do think he did go to her just because he wanted to talk to her, despite his words to Mal about having the patience to wait however many years it will take for her to forgive him, he wants to fix things between them now. He doesn’t want her to be angry with him and he doesn’t want her to be in pain. He’s desperate to get back what they had in episode 5. Also I think its important that we remember that until that conversation with her in the tent he didn’t know that she had discovered who he really was, so when she ran he believed that she had ran because she wanted to be with Mal which I think contributed to his anger at her and his feeling of betrayal. He couldn’t understand why she would want to be with someone who he believes never appreciated who she really was and who is mortal and will eventually just be a blip in her very long lifetime, instead of being with him who is her equal and immortal like her. This is another occasion where I feel like he gets a bit of a reality check and realises that she didn’t run because of Mal, she ran because of his own lies. So all that anger he felt at her ‘betrayal’ was unjust. But then I think he feels a different sense of betrayal in how easily she believed Baghra. I mean looking at it from his point of view she didn’t come to him and ask for his side of the story or demand an explanation she just trusted Baghra and ran. He is clearly desperate to make her understand and you can see his composure begin to fail as he stands and tells her that everything he is ever done has been to make Grisha and Ravka safer. I really do think that line was true, he really does believe that what he’s doing is the right thing for his people and his country. You can feel his frustration and desperation continuing to build throughout the scene as he pretty much pleads with her to understand and can see that she doesn’t. I think the part that really hurts him though is when she says ‘we could have had this, all of it. You could have made me your equal, instead you made me this.’ This line is so powerful and I think its at this moment that he realises just how badly he has messed up. To be told that his actions are the reason why he hasn’t got her, the one thing he wants more than anything else in the world right now. Also the line of making her his equal I think would have hit him hard because he did see her as his equal and so I think he’s surprised that she believes that he didn’t make her his equal and then when she says ‘instead you made me this’ he realises that whilst he might have seen her as his equal he wasn’t treating her as one. His need for control made her a slave to him and I really think that in this moment he is realising that, I genuinely think this dumbass got so caught up in his own dream of what the two of them together could be that he didn’t realise that whilst he thought he was protecting her and helping her grow into this saviour for their people he was taking away her choices and he was making her feel like a captive, the dummy didn’t think to ask how she felt about any of it because he assumed he already knew, it was the same as what he wanted, to protect their country and people. So his anger when he says the line ‘fine make me your villain’ isn’t just directed at her but himself too. It’s not just his hurt and anger that she doesn’t understand his reasons and that she isn’t seeing it his way, it’s also because he knows it was his own actions that lead him to that moment when the woman he loves is standing in front of him and looking at him like he is a monster. He can’t go back and he can’t undo it and worse than that he can’t seem to get her to understand why he did it. I think he feels trapped and so the only thing he can be to her now is her villain. 

It’s after this conversation that his demeanour towards her changes and you can see that he sort of stops trying to win her over. He’s not as gentle with her, I mean he ties her to the deck of the skiff and answers mockingly when she points out it’s not a good look for him with the ambassadors. I did notice though that after that conversation he seems to have trouble looking at her. When they are walking to the skiff and he tells her that Mal is being held captive and will be released if she does her part, he isn’t looking at her but straight ahead and this is something he does alot when he is threatening Mal. The moment when he takes off her cloak he does glance down at her. I seen alot of debate about that scene, as it does come across as having a bit of sexual tension in it and some people thought it was a rather sexy scene whereas others pointed out that he was holding her captive and mocking her. Me personally I actually think its both. People talk about how it has to be one or the other. But yes in that scene he is holding her captive and that part’s not sexy but there is a moment where I feel like he still feels that draw to her. Before reaching up to undo her cloak it seems to me like a hesitates for a moment. When he goes to whisper in her ear that he doubts they’ll notice her feet and I think he feels that pull and that attraction to her and he is really close to her, I don’t think he’s been that close to her since the war room in episode 5. You can see him lean slightly towards her and I think he really is struggling with the desire he feels for her which is why he steps back with the cloak rather forcefully, like he's having to force himself away from her again. It kind of reminded me of the scene where she helped him into his Kefta. So no the situation itself is not sexy but I do still think there is tension in the scene because the attraction they feel for each other didn’t just disappear despite how hurt and angry they are at each other. It’s like their words are saying one thing but their body language is saying another. 

When they are in the Fold again at first The Darkling avoids looking at her particularly when he is forcing her to use her power to create the tunnel of light. His focus is on The Fold. Again I think this shows that he is determined to not let his feelings for her get in the way for his goals, yet he knows he is taking away her free will and her choice and that’s hurting her so he can’t really stand to look at her. Its the same when she asks to tear down the fold and he answers why would they destroy the best weapon they have. Again he doesn’t look at her when he says it because he knows that he deceived her by letting her believe that was what they were going to do and he doesn’t want to see the disappointment and betrayal in her eyes. Again this is something he does alot and look, I love The Darkling’s character, I do, but that doesn’t mean I can’t recognise his flaws and for me I kind of saw him as a coward for this. I mean if you are going to deceive and manipulate a person and force them to do something you know they don’t want to do, then at least have the decency to look at them. He does however look at her when she tries to save Novokribirsk after he lets the fold consume it. He stops her and you can see the anger when he says they are traitors who tried to kill her and that this action was retribution. I think he hates the fact that she is trying to save the very people who tried to hurt her. But again he looks away from her when he sees the way she is looking at him and how horrified she is by what he has done. 

Their very last interaction is when she uses the dagger to cut the amplifier from his hand and shows him what she is and that she’s the one the stag chose. He sees this as her betraying their people which is interesting because at the end of the episode Alina says that Kirigan turned on his own people. So they both believe the other turned on their own people, the problem here is that I feel like Alina feels more loyalty towards the non Grisha Ravkans, she still sees them as more her people due to spending more time as just a ordinary mapmaker then as Grisha but the Darkling has more loyalty towards the Grisha. Its like how you know parents aren’t suppose to have a favourite child but we all know they do. Well I feel like the Ravkans are Alina’s favourite child and the Grisha are the Darkling’s. Of course they still care about the other but their ‘favourite’ is their priority if that makes sense. By the end of the season when we see the Darkling emerge from the fold I think he is feeling very angry and very betrayed by Alina, however I actually think the fact that she bested him has only made him look at her as even more of an equal than before. Not only is she someone who will stand up to him but now she has become someone who can match him. I do think he’s in this very complicated situation where he is on an opposite to the person he believes is essentially his soulmate. However as much as I think he does love her I still think he will put his people above her and so will continue to act in what he considers to be the best interests of his people. It also seems like he’s got some new powers and was able to create shadow soldiers which again is interesting because he basically just accomplished what he meant to do in the first place when he created the fold, he’s created his own army. 

Ok so that’s all for now to be honest I could talk about the Darkling forever but I think this is already long enough so if you have read all the way to the end thank you for your time. I am thinking of doing other character analysis posts so keep an eye for that if its something that interests you, I think I might do Alina next. I’ll also post my thoughts on the book once I’ve read it.        

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Yo so like, after watching Book 3, I think I wanna kinda just put my thoughts here on Simon because so far he’s been one of my fav characters because of how well written he is and I just wanna like, idk, ramble

i absolutely adore how Simon and Grace are essentially 2 sides of the same coin, but also fundamentally different, and this is how their paths diverge. i think a large part of why Grace was able to start her redemption is because of how much she loved kids, and making them feel less alone. She thrived off of taking in lonely souls and showing them a “better way.” She genuinely felt bad for Hazel and wanted what was “better” for her. This doesn’t excuse any of her stuff, but her general love and compassion for other kids is really was kickstarted her on her redemption.

Simon did not. Not to say he didn’t care about Apex, but I don’t think he cared for the kids themselves. He cared about GRACE. He cared because she cared. If she had taken his hand and said “let’s leave this all behind” I’m sure he would have followed her. So while Grace is bonding with Hazel and learning to be ok with Tuba, all Simon sees is a distraction and someone holding them back. He also sees Grace not as enthusiastic to get rid of Tuba and keeps putting off killing her.

Now, about Tuba’s death. I see a lot of people marking this as the moment they started to hate him, and they’re not wrong, this was the key point where he became irredeemable. But I want everyone to take a step back and look at what we’ve seen so far. We know his backstory with Samantha, and i think everyone believes that’s the only reason he hates denizens. That could be the MAIN reason, but I don’t think it’s the ONLY reason. Remember why they were running in the first place? Because there was a bug denizen chasing them. We know from Book 1 that these big monsters are actually the creatures that inhabit the train. I think there is a big chance that he witnessed a denizen transform in front of him, and try to attack him. This is also supported when Grace has to explain to hazel why she doesn’t like them, she says “they’re unpredictable.” What’s that supposed to mean? Using context clues, I think they’re aware al the denizens are actually those soul sucking creatures. Yeah, no wonder they don’t feel anything for them when they die. As far as they’re concerned, they could turn and kill them at any minute.

Also, i’d like to bring up Book 2, when we’re first introduced to Simon and Grace. When they’re trying to recruit Jesse, they planned on killing Lake off to “help” him. Look at just how many kids are in Apex. What’s the likelihood that a majority of them befriended a denizen that they later had to sacrifice for initiation? This isn’t the first time they’ve done something like this. They’ve done this a LOT, possibly hundreds of times. Tuba’s death to Simon was just another day of initiation. Does it make it any less wrong? Of course not, he fully had the capacity to bond and redeem himself just as Grace had, and they even got along right before her death. But in Simon’s eyes, he was too far gone, Tuba was a dangerous creature holding them back and he finally found the perfect opportunity to get rid of her like they‘d always done. Grace’s horror is what’s new to him. Her acting shocked, disgusted, scared? She’s never done that before. She’s always planned it, egged it on, encouraged it, PRAISED him for this behavior. And note what he says to her after the job is done!! “Let’s see how high OUR marks have gotten.” He knew Grace was insecure about her number lowering, and did something he usually got praised for, and even thought it’d help her. It wasn’t a selfish betrayal (sort of, I also partially believe he did it to get on Grace’s good side again) but he also did it because he knew how down she’d been.

I also just wanna say Grace should have communicated better with him. I don’t know if things would have turned out better or different, but a lot of his later actions were derived from her dishonesty and her distancing himself from him. She never told Simon what she was thinking. She never told him about her hesitation. She never let him in on anything. Instead? She chose a denizen over him. She decided to change and grow and expected Simon to follow suit. He isn’t a mind reader, how the hell was he supposed to know plans had changed and he was meant to keep Tuba alive? How was he meant to know?

This doesn’t make any of his actions ok. Trusting the cat over Grace and trapping her in her own mind? There’s no ”justifying” that (not that I’m trying to justify) but I think I’ve reached a level of understanding with his character. A lot of what happens is because he’s been left in the dark. Yes, he had the opportunity to change and it is his fault for not taking action, but I think a moment that struck a nerve with me is when Grace said “I’m not responsible for your problems, I don’t owe you anything.” She’s right, she’s not responsible for him not bettering himself.

She’s not responsible for his betrayal. She’s not responsible for his jealousy over Hazel. But you know what she is responsible for? Shoving this ideology down his throat, refusing to communicate, and then acting disgusted and lashing out at him for doing everything she’s ever taught him. She’s the one that taught him a higher number was better. She’s the one that’s always took command/control. She’s praised him for shitty behaviors and when she sees the result of it? It’s not her problem. I completely understood when Simon screamed out “YOU OWE ME EVERYTHING.”

No, she doesn’t owe him everything, but her toxicity towards him is a major factor into why he turned out how he did. Treating people like shit and then saying it’s not your problem when it affected them? (Btw, I’m NOT a grace hater and do not believe she is the source of all his problems, clearly he is his own person and has the capacity to grow as well, but saying she doesn’t owe him anything?? Not even an apology for lying and keeping secrets?? that’s what mainly struck a nerve.)

Also, I wanna bring up another moment that I think solidified hate for him. When Grace saved him, and he tried wheeling her. I can also understand why he did this. Is it right? No, obviously no it’s not ok. But I think the reason he chose to shove her off is because when he asked “why did you save me?” Her response was “I don’t know.” You don’t know? You don’t know why you were compelled to save your number 1 friend for years? Someone who stuck with you through thick and thin, clung to every word you said, and did everything you asked? You don’t know why you saved him? Even after everything? In such an emotional and high tensity moment, I can’t say I wouldn’t have done the same. Again, not something he should have done, but it’s something I can understand. If my scorned ex best friend saved my life and said they didn’t know why, I’d probably feel angry too.

anyways yeah, he’s still a shit person but he’s complex and i think a large reason why his character works so well is because of how well he is written. He did horrible things but there was always a reason, it was never ”mwuahaha, I’m evil now.” And that’s what I love about Infinity Train. Everyone feels so real. Anyways yeah ramble over, if you’ve read this far, feel free to discuss more with me if you feel like I overlooked anything or just wanna spark more conversation!! <33

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Weekend Top Ten #497

Top Ten PC Games No One Talks About Anymore

Blimey, Quake is rather good, isn’t it? Have you heard about it? I really hope so, because it’s only twenty-five years old. I mean, Jesus. What’s up with that? Quake is meant to be the future. It’s full of true-3D polygonal texture-mapping and real-time dynamic light-sourcing. Fancy it being a quarter of a century old. That’s ridiculous. “Old” is for things like, I dunno, Space Invaders or The Godfather or I Wanna Hold Your Hand. Stuff that our parents heard about before we were born. It’s not – it’s absolutely not – used to describe something that people bought 3D accelerator cards for. It’s not used to describe a game that popularised online gaming.

But old it is, getting silver anniversary cards and everything. No longer the angry, hungry young tiger, devouring its ancestors and growling at upstart rivals like Duke Nukem 3D – sure, you’ve got non-linear levels, interactive scenery, and toilet humour, but we’ve got grenades that bounce with real physics – Quake is now an aged beast of the forest, resplendent, battle-scarred, weary with gravitas. Quake is the game that shaped the now, but it does not represent the future anymore. In fact, arguably its greatest rival – Unreal – is the game with the lasting, living legacy, its progeny building the next generation of gaming with one of the most popular and impressive engines around, the framework underpinning everything from Gears to Jedi to Fortnite. Quake blew us all away, but arguably it ceded the conflict, secure in its status as one of the most important and influential games of all time. Quake II got plaudits for actually having a proper story and an engrossing single-player campaign (and coloured lighting!), and its immediate descendants such as Half-Life changed the nature of what FPS games could do, but in a funny way it feels like Quake has long since retired. A sleeping titan. It got old.

So it’s great that they rereleased it on modern systems! The version of Quake released last month is basically the game I remember, but tarted up a little around the edges, with texture filtering and dynamic shadows and other stuff that I couldn’t manage on my Pentium 75 back in the day. It plays great – it’s slick as anything, and you go tearing round the levels like a Ferrari with a nail gun, blasting dudes and ducking back around a corner before you get hit with a pineapple in the face. It’s the first game I’ve played in a long, long time that evokes the feel of classic PC first-person shooters of that era – which, y’know, kinda makes sense as it is a first-person shooter of that era. But that style of fast-paced run-and-gun, circle-strafing gameplay has gone out of fashion now, with FPS games usually favouring slow, methodical, tactical combat, or larger-scale open-world warfare usually involving vehicles. Whether it’s a straight-up no-frills blaster like Quake, or a game that takes you on more of a linear, narrative journey, like Quake II, or even just a multiplayer-focused arena shooter, like Quake III Arena, it does feel like a dying artform, like a style of gameplay that could do with a resurgence (and, to be fair, there are games on the horizon that look like they’re harking back to the era, so that’s cool).

But it’s not just first-person shooters like Quake that I feel have slipped from gaming’s shared consciousness. Maybe it’s my age (it’s definitely my age) but there seems to be quite a lot of games that were a big deal twenty or so years ago that are utterly forgotten now, whereas some – Doom, Duke Nukem, Command & Conquer, Age of Empires – are often namechecked or rebooted (even before the full-on 2016 reboot, Doom must have been one of the most re-released games of the last thirty years). But there are lots of others where sometimes I feel like I’m the only one that remembers it. And that’s where this list comes in: inspired by the excellent re-release of the Quake franchise, here are some other great PC games of that general era that I feel still need shouting about, even if I’m the only one doing the shouting. Maybe they don’t all need a full-on remaster or whatever, but it’d still be nice if they got a bit of modern gaming love.

No One Lives Forever (2000): coming at a time when most FPS games were still Doom-style blasters with little in the way of real plot, NOLF was different: stylish and funny, genuinely well-written (as in the dialogue), with interesting objective-based missions and a cool female protagonist. It skirted similar ground to Bond and the then-white-hot Austin Powers franchise. Two games were made and then, as far as I’m aware, it evaporated into a mess of tangled rights, hence no sequels or remakes. A shame, because it was great.

MDK (1997): the next game from the people who made the multimedia phenomenon that was Earthworm Jim, MDK was a really cool slice of sci-fi style, all sleek level design and intriguing features. It had a supremely bonkers plot which bled through into a game with a sense of humour, but mostly it was the run-and-gun gameplay and innovative use of a scoped weapon – possibly (don’t quote me on this) the first sniper rifle in a videogame. An even wackier sequel followed, but despite its cult status, that was it.

Star Trek: The Next Generation – Klingon Honor Guard (1998): it’s probably fair to say that Star Trek has not had as many great videogames as Star Wars, perhaps because Trek’s historically straightlaced earnestness just didn’t translate as well as bashing someone up the chops with a laser sword. Honor Guard shook things up by casting you as a Klingon, showering levels with pink blood and going Full Worf. It was the first game to licence the Unreal engine, and had a cool level where you walked along the outside of a ship like in First Contact. Also: shout out to the Voyager game, Elite Force (2000), which was another really good FPS set in the world of Trek, with intriguing gameplay wrinkles as you fought the Borg. It also let you wander round the titular starship between levels. Trek deserves more quality action games like these.

Earth 2150 (2000): the nineties on PC really saw RTS games come down to those who liked Command & Conquer or those who liked Warcraft, but as the decade drew to a close other titles chased the wargame crown (including Total Annihilation, which would have made this list, except I feel like the Supreme Commander franchise is a sequel in all but name). 2150 was notable for its Starcraft-like mix of three factions with contrasting play styles, and its use of 3D graphics and the ability to design and build weapons of war that could lay waste to armies and bases with spectacular results. I think the genre has ossified into something more hardcore, and this was probably an inflex point where idiots like me could still get a handle on things.

Midtown Madness (1999): Microsoft has a history of building up great racing franchises and then abandoning them, but their “Madness” line of games in the late nineties/early noughties was terrific and much-missed. Back when tooling round actual 3D cities was still new and exciting, this was a no-holds-barred arcade racer, with some gorgeous shiny chrome effects on the cars, and very nippy handling. It was great fun smashing up VW Beetles and the like. It was surpassed, I guess, by Project Gotham on the Xbox, and sadly the whole franchise was then forgotten, despite the ascendent Forza franchise mostly shunning city driving.

Commandos: Behind Enemy Lines (1998): part tactical war game, part puzzler, Commandos was famous for its gorgeously intricate graphics and its difficulty – I mean, it was way too hard for me. But its beautiful top-down design and its slow, methodical gameplay was compelling, as you evaded Nazis and solved missions with a team of unique units with special skills. Sequels followed, and western spin-off Desperados, but there’s not been a true follow-up for quite some time, despite promises; and few games have echoed its style or look.

The Pandora Directive (1996): okay, so really this is just a placeholder for an entire subgenre of game that appears to have been forgotten: interactive movies. I know, there are flirtations with this from time to time; and many of these games featured obtuse puzzles and relatively little gameplay strung between FMV scenes. Pandora was great though; a first-person 3D game with loads of old-school adventure aspects, as well as FMV, it was a noir-tinged detective story but set in the future. The Tex Murphy series (of which this was the fourth instalment) has had sequels – the most recent one was sadly cancelled only this year – but many other games of a similar ilk, such as Phantasmagoria and even Wing Commander – have fallen by the wayside. With in-engine graphics now allowing the fluidity and expression of cinematic renders of old, shooting movie inserts doesn’t seem like it’s worthwhile; but I still always loved a point-and-click game that featured digitised actors milling about. Toonstruck, anyone?

Marathon (1994): before Halo there was… Marathon! Back when I used to lug my Pentium round my mate’s house so we could play different games on different machines side-by-side, he’d bang on about this Mac-first series of games, like Doom but better, with an intricate plot and complex levels. And y’know what? He was actually onto something. There’s a style and an earnestness to the Marathon franchise, along with many concepts that would be refined in Halo years later. With Bungie now seemingly committed to Destiny, and Halo in Microsoft’s hands, I’m not sure what could possibly become of this, their forgotten FPS forebear, especially as it shares so much DNA with its offspring.  

Outlaws (1997): LucasArts are famous for two things, really: their Star Wars games and their adventures. But they made loads of other stuff too – including this intriguing Western shoot-em-up. Back when Western games were rarer than Western movies (which were rare at the time), this quirky and difficult cowboy-em-up saw you rounding up outlaws in typical oater locations such as saloons, trains, and mines. It had great music and a really intriguing set of weapons, including (don’t quote me on this) the first sniper rifle in a game. Sadly Outlaws’ success could be described as “cult” and it never got a proper sequel. and, weirdly, despite the success of Red Dead Redemption, we’ve never had a bit Western-themed FPS again. Which is really odd.

Soldier of Fortune (2000): I pondered whether to include this one, as if I’m honest I’m not sure I want this licence brought back. But I can’t deny the game was a huge deal and has seemingly been forgotten. A relatively gritty and realistic combat game with a huge variety of excellent real-world weaponry, its big hook was its incredibly detailed damage modelling, that could see you blowing limbs off enemies, or splitting open heads, or disembowelling them. Whilst its OTT violence made headlines, the granularity of its systems meant you could be more tactical, shooting weapons out of hands. But really its biggest controversy should be its association with a big old gun magazine.

There are many, many other games that nearly made the list - I almost had a Top Ten of just FPS games, for instance. Little Big Adventure was here, till a sequel was announced the other day. Hexen and Heretic I think still have a place in FPS history. Toonstruck, although without a sequel, was only really a cult hit at the time, and I feel the people who’d love it already know about it. I do tend to overthink these things, y’know.

So maybe not all of these could make a comeback, but all the same I don’t think they should be forgotten, and it does make we wonder what games will fall by the wayside twenty or more years from now. That game about the big green space marine dude in a mask – what was that called again…?

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Title: The Last Samurai

Author: Francis Munroe

Rating: 3/5 stars

A novel with more of a feel than its plot really deserves, with more depth than its structure and more style than its substance.

This isn't an entirely complimentary thing to say. It may be true, but I'm reluctant to say it out loud.

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The book opens with two parallel plots: two people are each making a journey across North America; one is a native-born American, the other is a man who spent his boyhood in the Philippines in the days of the Empire, and spent his adult life in the United States. The Philippine native-born man is named Francis Xavier and the American native-born man is named John James and they are both named after missionaries to the Philippines. John James and Xavier have both been living in the United States for several decades; John James grew up in the Philippines and then moved to the States before Xavier did, so we're dealing with people who have both come of age in the same country. They have been neighbors and neighbors have been friends for a long time. They are both now middle-aged men nearing retirement.

Their journey is ostensibly not the same. Xavier is going to see a doctor and John James is going to die at the end of the story. But their two journeys are connected by some kind of shared purpose, an ambition that goes beyond any one goal: John James wants to find his missing daughter, and Xavier wants to save what's left of the American Indian community (which is small and dying out, as John James has told Xavier about). John James and Xavier do not realize this at first, and they think of their journey separately, and there is a great deal of conflict in between when they realize they're actually on the same path.

On one hand, John James is an old man with few friends, who has spent his life apart from the culture he thinks he loves, and has done little to preserve the culture (not having a wife and family, in particular). And on the other hand, Xavier is young and strong and he has a large family and the support of a community; his task is not nearly as weighty as John James's. Their journey is not a natural, self-sustaining thing, a way of life that has kept its momentum going for decades, but a struggle that needs external support (to be honest, John James is struggling more than Xavier).

The book focuses on the journey of these two men. It's less like "the book," less like a book, than that; if you were looking for a book to describe its own journey, this would be a bad idea. The book's primary method of depiction is narration, but it doesn't really work as narration. A reader who isn't familiar with this sort of story will likely not be satisfied by it as a narration. The author of this book is not a trained writer (not in any ordinary sense of the word), and this shows: the writing is not nearly as good as you might expect from a non-trained-writer. And the story itself is not as compelling as you would expect from a book written in the style it does. The book's style is "low-budget" and "poverty-stricken" and "bucolic," and a reader of its kind of literature is likely to have a different perspective on its content than the book's narrator would. The book's narrator does not see his own life in terms of the struggle to preserve cultural identity; he has a sense of humor about the whole thing, and you can see that in his narrative as well.

This novel isn't, in any ordinary sense, about anything. Its narrator doesn't say much about his past and the lives of the people he writes about, in any of the stories about his life. This is not a novel I would have found myself choosing to read, in the usual sense of the word. I would be hard pressed to describe it as engaging; its language is more straightforward, its events less narratively complex and rich. It's basically about how it feels to be on a long journey and how you feel about the people who are helping you on the journey and how your mind works in the context of that. John James and Xavier are really, at heart, two versions of one person.

I felt no particular compulsion to read the book; I didn't want to. But I did find myself reading it on and off, because it was a thing to do, and in reading it I kept thinking, "you know, if I had made that journey in John James's place, maybe I would have written this book." Because, ultimately, this is a book about the two of them, and I found myself rereading it to see how it would have been in the hands of its second author.

The book is kind of, well, boring, and kind of, well, compelling. I recommend it to people because it has the sense of something not quite like anything else you've ever seen before.