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CHAOS

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[frogremi33]

I love them but also why season 4 gotta do em like that

[kitkat-the-muffin]

I love fake boybands created for cartoons

Love Sentence, Sev’ral Timez, 4*Town, Boys Who Cry—

Peak ^

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Butterfly Metamorphosis

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Remember when I told you here that Mina was going to be a decent endgame villian here?... Well I wasn't lying 😢

Oh god, I feel like crying right now! These pages are finally here and they look so beautiful 😭😭😭 I think that watching anime for hours when I was a kid really helped me out to make this pages 🥲 thank you dear dad for bringing home lots of Sailor Moon, CCS and Rurouni Kenshin DVDs 💙 I'm so happy TTuTT also because I got excellent grades guys 😄 right now I feel capable of doing anything I want ❤️‍🔥

[algodon-candi]

Redraw of Marco from an episode of Star

[axolotlonamelon]

In my opinion, SvtFoE should’ve ended with Cornonation/ The Coronation of Queen Eclipsa. 

It makes a lot of sense when it comes to Star’s character arc as she was originally sent away because she was being disruptive/ destructive and needed to learn to be a better and more responsible princess. She’s only sent to Earth because it's seen as a backwater dimension that is both convenient timeline wise and they wouldn’t care if it was damaged in some way.

She grows to love Earth and see its flaws and strengths, learning to look at Mewni with this newfound perspective

The end to her character arc should be that, after her time on Earth, growing and becoming more mature, she should become Queen in a time of crisis. The thing is that she realizes that this job and life isn't what she wants and she's honestly bad at it. The most responsible decision that she can make after getting everything that she thought her future would be and realizing that she doesn't want it, is to give up the throne and wand to someone that both shares her newfound hopes for a better world and is more suited to leadership. (While Eclipsa isn’t in canon, I think she would be here, just ahead of her time and too liberal and outspoken for her own good.)

Star would end up becoming a knight and/or magic teacher to Meteora, where she can do everything she loves without the social pressures inflicted on her based off of her previous status.

I know I’m shouting into the void and everyone and their mom has complained about the romance but Star and Marco should’ve either gotten together in early season 3 (since Marco finds out that Star likes him at the end of season 2) or not at all. I really like season 3's Tomstar and Marco with either Jackie or Kelly. Given that the only one of Star’s long standing character arcs to not be resolved by the end of season 3 was the romantic one, forcing the show to end would force this arc to be shorter as well.

My preference is for Tomstar and Jarco with Janna being the supportive aro friend we all deserve. Also, I love Trans!Marco and am throwing the name ‘Luna’ into the ring as both symbolizing the now sibling-like relationship between Star and Marco and her cheek marks.

(They would already know about the crescent moon cheek marks because there is no way that these two dumb teenagers live in the same house for a year and a half and not at least test whether or not Marco can use the wand.)

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SvtFoE Rhombulus Rewrite (Pt. 6)

Hey, it’s been a while since you saw my face-

All jokes aside, sorry for being gone for so long. In my defense, I was in college, then I had seasonal depression which made it hard to do much of anything creative-wise. This is admittedly one of my favorite fan projects, so I always feel bad about not updating it. But I have managed to get back into it again (finally) and wanted to release one of the easier parts to do. (@bawfulio @sagesilentfire​ tagging you since you guys have been following this AU since the beginning and have been waiting the longest for an update)

Anyways, Monsters and Mewmans, Crystals and Chimeras, welcome back to my Rhombulus Rewrite! Check out this post if you have no clue what the heck I’m talking about or you want to read the previous parts. As I said in Part 4, this part will be one of the two possible ends I have to this AU. Ya’ll can choose which one you prefer. This one is called the “Closest to Canon Ending” and is also sad. It will not focus on the problems with the ending as a whole and shall instead be more about fixing Rhombulus’ part. I’ll admit, though I prefer the second ending as a finale, I’m pretty proud of this one as well, as it has some stuff I’m pretty proud of writing wise. I did make myself sad though, so there’s that.

Closest to Canon Ending (AKA Ending 1):

- This ending is kinda if I switched Rhombulus and Hekapoo’s parts, but Rhombulus had a more proper and fitting redemption. Also, it might make some character choices make more sense.

- So, the first big changes happen in “Ready, Aim, Fire”. We overhear Rhombulus arguing with Hekapoo and Omni about how to handle the Mina situation, saying that even though they may not like it, they need to protect Eclipsa and her family since it’s the right thing to do and they can’t let Mina take over. 

- This is when Hekapoo reveals that they have been backing Mina the whole time, which horrifies Rhombulus. He says that he is disappointed in them, and will go out to support Eclipsa and co, even if he has to fight Hekapoo and Omni. He then runs outside.

- We don’t see what happened to Rhombulus until “The Right Way,” where he jumps into the battle as things are looking dire. We get some pretty cool action stuff from him, which should be fun. 

- He even helps out various monsters, using his crystals to protect them. It brings his arc full circle, showing him go from someone who fights monsters to someone who protects them like he would protect any other innocent civilian. It’s a good moment for him. 

- But unfortunately, Rhombulus gets seriously hurt by the Solarian Blade multiple times, and since he and the rest of the MHC are basically monsters, the blades actually work on them. I think it’ll be the most shocking (and plot convenient) if Rhombulus loses his tails, as they are his main weapons and method of self defense. 

- He’ll manage to play it off like he is fine, but will need help soon. Maybe he’ll convince them that he probably won’t die. He might not even realize the blades work so well on him, especially since his magic is making him more asymptomatic. He’s good at hiding how bad he is doing, mainly because he is still able to walk and run and other stuff. But he can’t fight and needs to sit down a lot, so he won’t be able to do much during the Moon reveal.

- Instead of that horrible first kiss scene between Star and Marco, I have decided to give them a platonic love scene in a way, since I want the ending to not seem too random but still keep things platonic.

- Star is clearly upset and overwhelmed by everything, even though she might not be able to express it properly. She eventually tensely says that she’s going to do [insert helpful yet distracting task], and Marco offers to help her. She agrees, and while they’re working, Marco says that he knows something is bothering her, and she can talk about it if she wants.

- Star confesses that she’s been feeling extremely alone and scared lately. Multiple of her friends are severely hurt and could easily die, and she can’t do anything about it. She fought so hard and is trying to stay strong, and even despite all that, she feels like she’s failed at keeping people safe.

- Marco says that she is the reason less people have been hurt, and that everyone chose to fight and stand up against Mina, knowing the risk they would be in. It’s not her fault this happened. He then assures her that no matter what, they will always be best friends, and he’ll be there for her no matter what. 

- Pretend we’ve also had a lot more great friendship moments between them this season, so that the show clearly shows their dynamic as important to the plot.

- Anyways, back to everything else. This rewrite is called the Rhombulus Rewrite after all.

- “Pizza Party” will be renamed “Where the Blame Lies,” and instead of the MHC having a pizza party, we will see Hekapoo and Omni arguing over whether or not they made the right choice, and if they should go after Rhombulus. It’s a very short, tense scene, where Hekapoo believes that Rhombulus is wrong, but they should still go look for him to talk, and Omni believes that Rhombulus is “too far gone.” 

- They decide to split up, with Hekapoo choosing to go after Rhombulus, and Omni choosing to do his own thing.

- Meanwhile, Rhombulus ends up fleeing with Star and co, pretending that he is fine, until he ends up collapsing while they are running. Mina declares Rhombulus a traitor, and attacks him, causing yet another major blow to his body, where many of the other scars have already spread far. 

- As Eclipsa and Marco help him up and try to support him, Mina declares her plan to wipe out all monsters and monster-supporters. The group tries to escape, but are soon surrounded. Mina goes in for the kill, but a portal opens up under Star, Marco, Eclipsa, Moon, and Rhombulus, whisking them away. They find themselves in the middle of a forest, saved by Hekapoo.

- This is where “Tavern at the End of the Multiverse” starts. Hekapoo is horrified at Rhombulus’ condition, and after picking him up, she says that she knows a place where all of them can hide. And so she takes them to the Tavern at the End of the Multiverse. This space is also a bit of a safe zone for all different types of people, and has some private rooms if needed. 

- Hekapoo takes Rhombulus into one of them to see if she can help him somehow. Star argues with Moon, but they are interrupted by Hekapoo, who says that she needs them to come over to where Rhombulus is. He’s in terrible condition, with the wounds having fully spread all over him. 

- It’s a really sad scene, especially when he begins telling Hekapoo that he can see Lekmet, and they are going to be reunited soon. Hekapoo is extremely distraught and basically in denial, while Rhombulus is basically accepting what is happening. 

- He tells Hekapoo not to worry too much about it, and that their time is close to ending anyways, he just wishes he could have seen everyone win. He tells Star to do better than those who came before her, and that she will be able to fix the world. Then, my boy dies.

- While I still don’t like the whole “destroy all magic” plotline, I thought that something like this would be cool in helping explain the rationale for a few characters. In Star’s case, this is a bit of a breaking point for her. This is where she begins to have her “I hate magic” moment, because she just lost a close friend due to the damage magic can cause when in the wrong hands. 

- And Hekapoo being chill with Star destroying magic makes a lot more sense. She too just lost someone important to her, basically her favorite sibling, and is in a more apathetic state. Hekapoo is mad and sees that the MHC has fallen down a bad path that has slowly destroyed them. Her attitude is less chill and carefree and more angry and resentful.

For Ending 1, I don’t really have any other changes, because all I really wanted to do for this ending is the scene where Rhombulus dies, so that’s the end of that. I think Ending 2 will be a much better ending as a whole, but I thought of Ending 1 first, and kind of liked aspects of it. It’s very bittersweet, and I wanted to make a version that stays faithful to the OG. 

However, the OG is also terrible, so I decided to make another version anyways, especially since I wanted a version where Rhombulus can live. Stay tuned for Ending 2, which will hopefully be coming soon! Or at least, a special post before that giving extra context for Ending 2 (spoilers, I reworked Mina a bit).

Thanks for all your support, and I hope you like what I have in store, since I’ve been working on Ending 2 for a while now. Hopefully this will keep you company in the meantime.

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ATTENTION STAR VS THE FORCES OF EVIL FANS!

I need YOUR help!

(Yes yours! I found a funny screenshot to get your attention and everything, see?!)

I'm putting together something about a certain character from the show while I work on the rewrite (with my good buddy @full-moon-phoenix who I'm sorry to tag-n-drag into this), and I need your help getting to the bottom of a mystery that might just help us all make sense of why the last season of the show was... you know... like that.

According to this bullet point from SVTFOE's What Could Have Been page on TV Tropes, the Season 3 finale was originally planned by Daron Nefcy and the team to be the series finale before the finale season was even green lit!

However--as you may notice when checking the page yourself--unlike some of the other details on the page, this one had no citation or link to trace back to the original interview for evidence. (Typical TV Tropes.)

I'm going to try and find the interview myself but with all the things I have to juggle, and search engines being as crappy as they are now, there's no guarantee I'll actually find the damn thing.

THAT'S WHERE YOU COME IN!

It's nothing really. Basically I just need you guys to let me know in the comments or in a reblog if you know where this interview is from or if you can find it.

If not, feel free to signal boost.

OK NOW LET'S SEE IF THIS WORKS BYEEEEEEE!

[fagbearentertainment]

Also Toffee is one of the best Disney cartoon villains of all time I will forever be salty that they ditched him in the last two seasons even tho he would’ve played perfectly in the story stuff they did there

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Butterfly Metamorphosis

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What is Mina scheming?😟😟😟 btw little reminder: all these pages where Moon is having a meeting with Mina and the MHC happened the day before Tom breaks up with Star, that's why portals are still working in my comic "Sad Teen Hotline": because Moon (after seeing Star and Tom's photos) asked for one more day to make a decision :')

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Star Butterfly from "Star vs. the Forces of Evil" sim attempt

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Marco and Toffee are like mirrors each other, or have similar facial expressions and gestures (Part 3)

Thank you for likes and reblogs! I'd compared more cuts that I personally thought might be similar, even if partly.

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HAPPY 4 YEAR ANNIVERSARY OF SVTFOE ENDING !!!

[axolotlonamelon]

Hello! I wanted to create a shared timeline between some Disney Shows

Warnings before we begin:

I did mess with the ages of the characters and presumed years each show takes place for the purposes of the au I was working with and what would make more sense (Hello Anne 'I made varsity tennis at age 12', I am talking to you)

This is meant to tie in with my Amphibia au '4 Stars'. While it's not going to break any of these shows much, it does impact some of the decisions I'm making, such as having The Owl House earlier in the timeline, as well as how much focus I'm giving Amphibia's side of the universe.

2013:

June: Dipper and Mabel Pines (Age 13) arrive in Gravity Falls

August: Bill Cypher invades Earth and almost destroys it

AN: The Pines Twins' ages have never made sense to me. Turning 13 should only set them up to enter 8th grade which isn't the beginning of high school in the American school system. Also, Mabel at least would have already noticeably started puberty.

December: Star Butterfly turns 15 and is given the royal wand

2014:

January: The creation of the Calamity Stones, the creation of the Calamity Box, the box sending itself to Amphibia, and the beginning of the Leviathan dynasty's imperial conquest of other dimensions (please see below for elaboration)

Also January: Star is sent to Mewni's sister realm, Earth, and meets Marco Diaz (Age 15) in Echo Creek (East LA), California

AN: I see the wand as being given at the very beginning of Mewman adulthood, so I wanted to age Star up a bit. Because the Diaz's are a Mexican-American family, I wanted to make her 15 since the symbolic and social transition to adult responsibilities seemed fitting for Star and her journey.

October: Star loses the Royal Magic Book of Spells and Glossaryck to Ludo. A couple months later, Glossaryck's current physical form (at the time) is destroyed.

2015:

June: Star returns to Mewni with her mother after Toffee kills and/or temporarily kills the entire Magical High Commission. A few days later, Star fully unlocks her magical potential

Also June: Luz Noceda (Age 14) travels through a magic door portal from Gravesfield, Connecticut to the Demon Realm. Less than 10 days later, the portal seemingly spontaneously combusts with almost no one the wiser.

October: Luz meets Vee, a basilisk impersonating her and their mom finds out that Luz is in The Demon Realm.

AN: Much like Amphibia, time also passes differently in The Demon Realm. Theres a couple different pockets of time (see below for elaboration) but 6 weeks on The Boiling Isles= ~9.4 days on Earth.

2016:

April: Luz and her friends arrive back on Earth

June: Queen Moon goes missing, Star is temporarily made queen, and she gives the wand and throne back to Eclipsa

October: Luz, her mom, and her friends go back to the Boiling Isles to save it, and Luz and Camila Noceda come back victorious.

November: Scientists discover that the lake around an old graveyard in Gravesfield, Connecticut contains strange structures, artifacts, plant matter, and an unknown script.

AN: Being alone with scientists starting to look into Gravesfield is terrifying for Vee. The Pines family finds out about the oddities going on in Gravesfield and go to check it out. Eda and Stan reunite, and it is very strange for everyone involved except for Ford who finds it hilarious.

2017:

January: Meteora Butterfly is aged up by the Neverzone to be about 16 years old. Meteora and her mom come to an agreement to split the difference since she doesn't want to forget her time here, turning her eight years old. About two weeks later, Eclipsa is officially crowned queen.

AN: I chose 6 months between Eclipsa being given the wand back and her coronation as queen due to the different developmental milestones Meteora displays. She is swaddled at the end of Conquer despite not really needing to be, so I put her at about 4 months. Babies crawl at around 10 and she does in Cornonation.

May: Leif comes to Earth with the rightfully stolen Calamity Box and hides it among a bunch of antiques.

June: Dr. Wu accepts a job offer for early next year studying the strange plant matter found in a lakebed in Gravesfield, Connecticut. Believing that his family would enjoy the quiet and mysterious atmosphere of this small town, he and his wife decide to move.

August: Marcy Wu, Sasha Waybright, Anne Boonchuy, and [4th star] steal the Calamity Box and activate it, getting sent to Amphibia. About 12 hours later, Anne, [the 4th star], and the alien frog child Polly return.

Also August: Two weeks later, the trio and a squad of human allies go back to Amphibia to stop Andrias and save Sasha and Marcy. About an hour later, they return victorious.

AN: A bunch of people either sense or have technology that senses when the box is opened. Dipper was coincidentally in the area visiting various universities in Southern California with Mabel and Grunkle Ford, so they rush to check it out.

September: The Wu family completely moves to Connecticut slightly later than planned. Marcy befriends and swaps stories with Luz and Vee Noceda, eventually convincing them to tell Dr. Wu about the existence of The Demon Realm.

2018:

January: Dr. Wu begins studying the Gravesfield site. While he is aware of where these plants likely came from and the potential dangers, he continues on all the more fascinated, focusing on dating them and analyzing their internal structure and the impact they have on the soil. Marcy and Luz are even allowed to help, both having studied plants from other dimensions before.

September: Dipper begins attending UCSD dual majoring in Zoology and Environmental Science. Mabel and Pacifica go to cosmetic and business school respectively.

AN: I picked UCSD specifically because it is both a prominent university with a focus in research and is the closest and biggest school to Oceanside, CA (which is a real place and idk why the wiki says it isn't)

2020:

September: Marcy and Sasha both begin attending UCSD as Marine Biology and Social Psychology majors respectively.

AN: Anne goes to a community college in Los Angeles instead (like financially responsible people). Anne is getting a certificate in horticulture while working at her family's restaurant

AN: [4th Star] will get a certificate in photography while building her underwater photography portfolio.

2021:

October: Molly McGee (Age 13) moves to Brighton, Iowa and encounters/ befriends the paranormal

2022:

January: Haley Banks (Age 16) is visited by a person from the future and gains access to some futuristic tech and knowledge

July: Dipper (22) begins studying under Dr. Wu in the budding field that is interdimensional biology

AN: Dipper didn't peruse his master's/ PhD under his Grunkle Ford due to both ethical reasons and the fact that Dipper is a bio-centered scientist. Luckily for him, Dr. Wu has been publishing papers on supernatural plant matter discovered in Gravesfield.

AN: When Haley eventually graduates, she will actually ask to peruse her master's under Dr. Stanford Pines in environmental engineering.

November: The Pines twins and Pacifica go to Brighton to check and see if everything is okay. Mabel and Molly really bond and the whole situation ends on good terms with open communication.

2023:

March: Scratch comes back to life

Beginning of January, 2014:

Glossaryck becomes worried that between the dream demon's failed takeover last year and Princess Butterfly's presence on top of Earth's ambient magic this upcoming year, Earth will be thrown into the interdimensional limelight sooner than they can handle. As a result, he conspires with the Cosmic Axolotl to minimize Earth's aura by condensing all of Earth's ambient magic into 4 gemstones that they call 'The Calamity Stones'.

These stones would give someone incredible power and The Axolotl, wanting to see what someone with a good heart could do with power like this, leaves them in the possession of Hailey Banks. While Hailey would one day be a brilliant scientist who changes the world, she is eight years old when immense cosmic power falls into her possession. She instead imbeds the stones into a music box she made. When she steps back to admire her handiwork, the box vanishes.

The Box would then be found by Valeriana, a salamander priestess of the Cosmic Axolotl (though not known by that name). She would present the box to her king, Atlas Leviathan, who uses them to conquer many of the smaller worlds surrounding Amphibia, claiming them in the name of the Leviathan Empire.

If this is you first time here: Hello! I'm hope you're enjoying my timeline so far! Amphibia and Earth run on different speeds. Much like the planets in our solar system, a year on Earth is not the same as a year in Amphibia. 10,000 years pass on Amphibia between the box sending itself to Amphibia and Leif taking it back to Earth whereas on Earth, it has been approximately 3 years and 5 months.

How Dr P's plays into this: Instead of Dr. P's being a book, it's a blog that Dipper (with the help of Grunkle Ford and others) runs to inform others about oddities that aren't in Gravity Falls that they want to keep an eye or obtain if they can. When Leif brought the box back to Earth, The Cosmic Axolotl, in the form of Frilliam, informed Ford of its presence and danger. He then told Dipper, and they created the post to ask if anyone had seen it.

The Demon Realm's Time:

Time moves differently on every continent. The only two that we have to worry about for now are The Boiling Isles and The Neverzone (the place Hekapoo resides and makes dimensional scissors).

The conversion is: Earth: BI: NZ = 1 Day: 4.8 Months: 388,800 Years

When it comes to The Owl House's timeline, Luz graduates from Hexside before the Day of Unity. The portal is destroyed after six weeks and she spends (in total) 4 years there, most of that time trying to fix the door and become the best witch she can be to beat Emperor Belos.

When Eda takes Luz on as an apprentice, she gives her a potion that will keep her aging consistent with time passing on Earth as opposed to time passing on The Boiling Isles. Because no witch has ever seen a human before or understands how they work, she doesn't have to explain her lack of physical aging.

AN: When it comes to Amphibia, the girls flip flop back and forth between the ages they should be in the world that they are currently in. During the events of Amphibia, the girls are 15 on Earth and 15-20 on Amphibia.

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Currently getting back into my Rhombulus Rewrite a bit, and oh god has it spread beyond just rewriting Rhombulus. Yes, I did make an ending to his story that fits with canon, but I also wanted to make a version of the finale that brings a legitimately satisfying end to his story. Part of the point of the rewrite was making him a more fleshed out character and even a major one, but without replacing Star as the protagonist. And it's hard to write an interesting ending to the character when the rest of canon is still shit.

Then I thought of an interesting idea that would result in tying Mina and Rhombulus together in a way, as well as connecting to one of the major themes of the show (and the rewrite). This caused me to add some changes to Mina during my rewrite.

Then things got a bit out of hand and it lowkey became the Rhombulus (and Mina) Rewrite. Then I realized that I couldn't rewrite Mina without rewriting some of the main plot for Season 4. Then I finally decided "fuck it, let's just rewrite the majority of the finale and much of the plot of Season 4. We'll keep some of the stuff we already changed and the episodes we still kept, but the whole Mina subplot will need to be completely reconstructed from the ground up."

Next thing I know, I'm writing out multiple scenes that have nothing to do with Rhombulus and I'm crying over Mina's new death scene.

God I am so excited to release my next proper Rhombulus Rewrite post.