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waywardsalt · 4 months ago

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alright just to get it out of my system so im not overly self deprecating when i post rhe draft. i kinda. dont like how the draft for the first chapter of the bellum x linebeck fic is. theres no issue with the plot of the chapter or anything jts just like. oh boy i can write this better. and tbh thats not too bad we have the foundation now i just need to retool the way its told. god i hate the way this chapter is written lmao but it is a very early draft and doesnt include stuff im better at (character interactions n dialogue. im not as good with just explaining actions on its own)

#shoukd hopefully post it in an hour or two with extremely minimal editing bc im short on time #and have stuff to do but i do want to show it off. messy pilot for a fic thats probably not going to be actually published for like #idk a year. yall get the inside scoop you get to see me yap abt this shit in the meantime #does that help with waiting? bc i know i talked a fair bit while working on the ganonbeck fic and shared updates #does it help during waits between chapters or w/e for me to just shoot the shit with whoever abt the thing im working on #i like talking and i like this fic so hey #ive lost the point here i went in meaning to be self deprecating and here we are. damn. mission failed successfully #so uhhh when i post it no reblogs but the intent is like. reply w/ notes or constructive criticism if touve got some #i’ll reiterate in the actualt post but i just want stuff abt the literal writing the actual story and events are fine #its just. GOD it feels rough to read and i hate it

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