#reitanna seishin criticism

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So I found this post on Twitter and I couldn't help but think about two artists

Vivziepop who drew N that one time, it's sad because I do like the drawing and how she made N look cute here but I obviously cannot like Vivzie because of the fact that she is indeed a horrible person and overall disgusting

If ya want to know what she did, check out Vivziepop Receipts thread

And then ofc, we have Reitanna Seishin who did this adorable vector of Derpy Hooves wearing a bubbles dress 🫧

And yes, that Reitanna seishin, the same woman who created Muffins/Muffins Side Story. CW// CSA mention, Pedophilla

Despite her being really good at vectoring mlp stuff in some cases to the point that it looks exactly like something that could be in the show.. she sadly isn't a great person either, while Vivziepop had drew art of a naked minor in a tub of snakes (zoophilla porn) and such.. Reitanna had dated a 14 yr old child when she was 18 (and allegedly, according to Issac in one of his youtube community posts and the now adult victim, Rei had SA'd him when he was 14), Wrote a story about a baby with an addiction to sex, wrote fanfics about underaged teens getting it on and a lot more. If you do wanna know about Reitanna Seishin, then watch Issac-bloomz' video on her

I already said this a while back but I'm PROUDLY to say it again, bad people don't deserve to have good talent and that includes proshitters, zoophiles, pedophiles and such.. they do not deserve to be good at anything.

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Some stuff I noticed in Muffins that confused tf out of me..

In the chapter 'Derpy's first project', she starts crying and calls for Pinkie Pie and Pinkie somehow hears her despite her telling AppleJack before in the chapter 'Apple bloom gets her cutiemark' that the room is soundproof and there's padding in the walls. So, how did Pinkie heard Derpy? I'm gonna assume that Pinkie probably left the basement door open since the cakes are out and the bakery is shut so that way she is able to hear Derpy just in case she needs help or something, that's my assumption.

In the chapter, Twilight's Fall (correct me if i'm wrong), Pinkie Pie gets depress which concerns her and her sisters which Apple Bloom asks "She wouldn't hurt herself would she?" despite the fact in the side story, Silence is Sliver, Pinkie Pie had shown to had slit her own throat as a manipulation tactic to get Apple Bloom to drain the blood of Sliver as well as kill her. I have to assume that this was a serious oversight by Reitanna and that she MADE that chapter wayy before she written Silence is Sliver but my fucking god- And before you say "Well, maybe uh Apple Bloom FORGOTTEN that Pinkie Pie had tried to kill herself or hurt herself." Firstly, that would be unlikely considering how traumatizing that event would be and trust me, I understand considering I encountered a fair share of traumatizing experiences in the past either when I'm a child or adult. And secondly, in the chapter 'Let's welcome chaos: day 2', Apple Bloom lifts Pinkie's fur up to reveal a large scar on her neck and then explains how she got it, so she CLEARLY remembers it.

Also in the final crusade, can we just talk about how one of the Pie sisters someHOW knew how to make those headband things?? I don't think in the early chapters it mentions that the one of the sisters knew how to work with technology.. :V

But anyways, that's all I wanna talk about EDIT 29/11/24

Currently re-listening to Muffins on this channel and I found another thing in the chapter 'prison break'. How comes the POLICE PONY working at the jail just let Babs talk to the pie sisters?? Like, Babs a child and I know that she mentions is because she wanted closure and such but, I don't think in real life prisons would just allow an unsupervised minor to enter the prison and do visiting hours with the prisoners....

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Agree, the og design is VERY problematic and to those who don't understand why, I'll explain again: Rouge is a child and in Reitanna seishin's own words, she had designed Rouge to look like a skank and even describe her as a skank (describing a child that dressed like that as a skank, which is already problematic as itself since that's a kid NOT an adult--).

To those who don't know what Skank means

And lastly, her cutiemark is a pair of lips.. how did Rouge got the cutiemark you may ask? By kissing every colt in her classroom so that they could vote for her as class president..

decided to hop in the Muffins redesign stuff

so here is my redesign of Rouge(cause her OG design is pretty wack and that it was also off putting)

The Original:

just, eugh...

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Ya'll remember when Rei tried to prove that "Lol, Minkie isn't a Pinkamena recolor"?

In my opinion, Minkie looks like a copy of Pinkie's pinkamena only that her mane and tail is really long and ofc, Reitanna seishin gave her a different cutiemark and color scheme. I understand that Minkie Pie is suppose to be Pinkie's 3rd sister that was created before Maud was officially revealed but that doesn't really excuse the fact that Minkie is a slight copy of Pinkie Pie

There are ways on how Reitanna could've gone around fixing the problem instead of trying to convince/gaslight people into thinking that Minkie Pie is NOT a complete copy of her sister like, maybe give her a different straight mane and tail style. I seen a lotta Minkie Pie redesigners (and Muffins rewriters) completely change Minkie's mane, one of the best examples being Midnight Muffin's and Doggosage's Minkie redesigns.

Both manes and tails look far unique but they still can pass off as Pinkie, Inkie and Blinkie's sisters while not being accuse of simply being recolors of either Pinkie Pie or her two other sisters! And then we have my re-redesign of Minkie Pie I did long ago, and once again her mane and tail looks a lot different but she STILL can pass off as a sister to Pinkie.

But if Rei still wants to keep Minkie Pie looking like Pinkamena that's on her but if I were to keep the pony as the same I would probably rewrite the fanfiction and make an excuse on why Minkie looks exactly like Pinkie.

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Also, Reitanna claims that she "never" go after people or encourage harassment.. but if you look at the screenshots (which were taken during the Stella Burst drama when Issac was falsely accused of "stealing" Stella), Rei is a big face liar

And you wanna know what's ironic? I'll tell ya.. STELLA BURST is not even Reitanna's OC. I unfortunately dunno who originally owns Stella since Rei never named her ex-friend what so ever, but basically what happened was Rei made the oc for her ex-friend and according to her, her ex friend wanted to post the ref sheet of the oc onto their deviantart page (apparently without crediting Reitanna which.. is wrong on their part)

BUT however, Rei is in the wrong for revoking/stealing the character and then killing her off in Muffins.. So um yeah, Reitanna Seishin is a hypocrite

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Shout out to these Rouge redesigns, gotta be one of my favorite genders :P /ref Original Design by Reitanna seshin :T

Redesign by Cupid

Redesign by Rads

Redesign by avi21

Redesign by me :P

Makes me really happy to see people's redesigns especially since the original design was problematic (especially the bio).

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I decided to return to this to basically add that she IS making more.. I found these two on her patreon (no, I did not PAY to see them.. they were already out in the public)

I don't have Dermatillomania or trichotillomania so I can't speak at all but I think it's pretty ableist to portray mental disorders that you clearly do not have as quirky little creatures... Like, I don't think it's confirm that Reitanna seishin has autism (correct me if I'm wrong please) and seeing Rei making an 'Other' of the disability is pretty ableist especially how she portrays them, as a robot which falls other the stereotype that people with autism act like robots which is wrong. I myself am Autistic as well as having ADHD, she does however get it correct that we do sometimes repeat certain words or phrases like me for example I do sometimes vocal stim or if my brother for example says: "Duncan, I need you to buy me a soda please." I'll repeat and say "Buy you a soda". I had already made a video speaking about Reitanna seishin awhile ago, mostly focusing on how she portrays Derpy Hooves in Muffins which I highly suggest you go check it out if you wanna learn more

Watching a video by Rainbott... Reitanna what the fuck--

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Vivziepop: *Blocks critics and vague talks about them* Reitanna seishin: *Calls the police when someone critics her*

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So I watched Reitanna's latest update video and basically tldr She is blaming everyone who had criticize her back in 2020? (idk) for her trying to commit suicide.

And also openly claimed that Issac-bloomz (she doesn't mention his name but it's obvious who she's referring to) is ableist all because he voiced his concerns and opinions about her and muffins, I do think that it was wrong on Issac's part to call her lazy but still, he wasn't even being rude or entitled.. He was just telling Rei that she should simply just stop writing Muffins all together and say that she is done with the series, and besides, The Fun Never End is suppose to be the last chapter of Muffins anyways btw but she was badgered into making more :|

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So, I just remembered that originally Inkie Pie in the Muffins series was gonna be schizophrenic but Reitanna scrapped the idea because she didn't know where to place it or have a chance to place it

Honestly, I'm glad she didn't include that in her fanfic because we saw how she wrote Derpy Hooves in and she seem to not understand how mental hospitals work considering that for some reason, the ward that Twilight was in doesn't have iron bars on the windows of the activity room. Correct me if I'm wrong but, don't all mental hospitals have iron bars or something similar instead of glass? And the excuse of why there isn't bars is because it's a Low security ward and that they "never have a problem" like... uhhh wHAT????? I don't know if it's just me but you would think that all MENTAL HOSPITALS or WARDS would have something to prevent patients from committing suicide or hurting theirselves. To be honest, I think she only include the idea of the room having glass windows instead of bars as an excuse to kill off Twi :/

Buuut that's just me

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My thought??? How is she both Malnourished and Clean at the same time?? Like, my only logic is that I assume that her sisters after they rescued Minkie Pie were able to sneak shampoo, hairbrush, conditioner and such to give to Minkie???? Idk, Muffins always been weirdly written and confusing

minkie pie after living in a rat infested cellar with no exercise and being severely malnourished, and yet still being incredibly strong physically and having a sleek, flat mane with zero matting, lice or knots

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So I Issac-bloomz is working on editing Silence is Sliver which is one of the entries of the Muffins saga (which I'm hyped about)

Which got me thinking about the story Reitanna made a while ago.. This story is like infamous for a lot of reasons and is probably the most controversial. If you had read SIS (shorten for Silence is Sliver) then you would understand why it's so controversial and a lot of the muffin fans don't really like it.

If not, then I highly suggest not reading my criticism further because it WILL contain spoilers.

So the reason the fanfiction is so controversial is because it really shows how Pinkie grooms Apple Bloom into joining her with the "baking" and of course, that one infamous scene where Apple wanted to let Sliver Spoon go and Pinkie of course, didn't want that so she slit her own throat in front of Apple Bloom and which the young filly somehow knew how to perform a blood transfusion with Sliver Spoon's blood (obviously saving Pinkie's life lol). In the story or future stories that Reitanna made, she NEVER explains how Apple Bloom knows how to do that and I'm baffled that coincidentally Sliver spoon has THE SAME blood type as Pinkie Pie.. Like, I can sort of believe the same blood thing except for the fact that Reitanna seishin has a habit of adding plot coincidences into her stories or even plot armor too to some of her characters.. the most telling has to be Babs and the bakers, eSPECIALLY Babs seed. Babs appear to have no weakness what so ever and she was able to take down Big Macintosh (which granted, he was weak) and was able to take down one of the ponyville police officers... like, the stories have a lot of problems and I can see why so many decided to do a rewrite of the infamous fanfiction. And let's not forget that Reitanna wants to end the story with the bakers becoming alicorns... now, I don't know if this is just Rei joking and she is NOT actually gonna do that ending but who knows lol

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From Issac's community post on YouTube, reminder, this is all Alleged but I do want to believe that this is all true considering Reitanna literally admitted to dating a 14 yr old when she was 18 yrs old in high school.. ALSO Cw// CSA & Pedophilla

And here's Reitanna Seishin admitting to dating said 14 year old teenager. (1:20:19) ! Again, this is all alleged information so I'm afraid you guys will have to take it with a pinch of salt or choose to whether or not you wanna believe this info, I'm choosing to believe it since Rei did admit to dating a child when she was a young adult so I have no doubt that Reitanna DID SA'd that child and then lie about breaking up with said kid.

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CW// Blood in the thumbmail

This story really frustrates me because of the idea that Apple Bloom somehow knows how to do a blood transfusion on Pinkie Pie, the fact that coincidentally Sliver Spoon shares the same blood type as Pinkie and lastly, the fact that Rei had said "Apple Bloom is doing this by her own will" when she is actually not, it is very clear that AB was being groomed and manipulated by Pinkie Pie (and it's very clearly shown in this story). I really honestly hope that Issac Blooms explore Apple Bloom more, I'm pretty sure he hinted that he's gonna do something about AB as seen in his "Who is Apple Bloom" video and in his livestream he did where he hinted the next Muffins chapter he's working on (that being Derpy's birthday wish).

It sad that this is never explored in any of Reitanna's muffins fics and I doubt it'll ever be explored again since it's been years since she written another muffins or even narrated another muffins, and let me just say, I doubt she'll ever return to it and even if she does, it'll be locked under her paywall all over the fact that people were RIGHTFULLY criticizing her and calling out her behavior but oh well.

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I JUST NOTICED SOMETHING IN THE MUFFINS SERIES--

In the first chapter, Derpy Hooves is talking normally but in later chapters, she just... ya know talks like that. I get that this is Reitanna's first mlp fanfic but considering that she wrote stories before muffins just as Playing with Fire you would think that she would plan it out before writing. Granted, I myself don't really plan stuff unless it has something to do with animation.. I just basically go with whatever my mind thinks of and start writing BUT I do, in some cases end up planning my stories first but it mostly depends. So basically, her including Derpy Hooves to have a cognitive disability seem to just pop up in her head when she was writing the next story rather than ya know.

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Reitanna: "I can't be transphobic because I'm pansexual" Also Reitanna: *proceeds to be transphobic*

1# proceeding to accuse a minor of "transtrending" without evidence

2# Reitanna seishin misgendering Issac despite knowing FULL WELL that he goes by different pronouns (she does this more than two times)

3# using the term 'trap' and talking over trans voices when they voice their concern about how the word 'Trap' is in fact a slur (see 'Idiot on Colors! 3D journal) So uh yeah