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in one of the chapters of "Peace Is A Journey" you had the gang eat snow to stay hydrated, you should never eat snow to stay hydrated. in fact, it does the opposite and dehydrates you. My family comes from a long line of Mountaineers and my mom used to be a cross-country skier. Other than that you've been incredibly accurate with mountaineering knowledge.
See, I'm actually of two minds about this one, because you're right that in the long run, eating snow dehydrates you more than it hydrates you....but I've been debating whether or not that would be known by Rayla in-setting.
I have shown her to have pretty damn good all terrain survival knowledge, so on one hand, yes in theory she could know it. But on the other hand, I have to think about what her people in the Silvergrove do or do not know, and where they'd get that information from.
The reason snow dehydrates is because melting it inside the body and then reheating the body's core temperature takes energy, and that's like, metabolic knowledge that I'm not sure everyone would have. People who live in cold regions would probably have most of their populace knowing that eating snow is bad just from folk knowledge and experience, but for everyone else....I'm not so sure.
The Silvergrove is located in a temperate forest. Certainly Runaan and the assassin squad would have been trained in a lot of survival knowledge, so they might know intricate cold weather survival stuff like this. But it could also be that, like for us, there's a basic assumption that eating snow is a good way to rehydrate if you can't make a fire to melt it, and either Runaan would know or wouldn't, and then Rayla would know or wouldn't, because in the end she is less knowledgeable and experienced than Runaan. I've been leaning towards 'yes they do know', because they did travel through mountainous regions in winter to get to the castle, so Runaan would probably have brushed up on operational knowledge and learned it even if he didn't previously - IF that information is actually available. And that's where I'm stuck.
Moonshadow elves in piaj ain't any better at thermoregulating than humans. But. In piaj worldbuilding, Skywing elves are very very cold resistant, and Sunfire elves can keep their core temperature high with very little energy, because their thermoregulatory processes are augmented by magic. So if Sunfire and Skywing elves can very efficiently stay warm, and therefore snow hydrates them, and they can live in cold regions more easily, it might be harder for Moonshadow elves who don't generally live in cold regions to know whether or not snow is an efficient water source, since they only have hearsay from other races. This makes it more likely that Runaan and his squad wouldn't necessarily know that snow-eating itself is dehydrating, just that eating it makes you colder, so wherever possible you want to melt it on a campfire first.
So my options are:
- Runaan knows, because the Silvergrove has accurate niche information about Moonshadow elf cold survival for some reason, presumably from hypothetical cold environment Moonshadow societies or a pronounced past history of cold weather ops. In this case, Rayla either knows, in which case the story text needs editing, or doesn't, in which case only the notes need editing.
- Runaan doesn't know, because either Silvergrove information on cold weather survival isn't that detailed, or because the differing physiologies of different elf races means that information just plain isn't available.
So in sum I really haven't decided yet what my stance is on this lmao, and that's why I haven't made any notes about it in story yet. I was kind of hoping no one would notice >.> Good catch though.
I welcome input / opinions! I'm still making up my mind on this one. I really like it when there's funky racial difference reasons for there being misinformation, so I'm biased towards that, but on the other hand I feel like the Silvergrove assassins are pretty resourceful and might have conducted enough cold weather ops to know anyway.
What do you think?
#piaj misc#piaj asks#see this is the sort of tiny detail i agonise over#i hope everyone had fun#i probably shouldve readmored this#also as a note#when i first wrote that bit about eating snow#i absolutely bought into the popular myth#i was wrong as shit!!!#i learned otherwise later on while reading some nonfiction mountaineering books that were super cool#and have been agonising over it ever since
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Oooh I was playing with this exact picrew the other day and did in fact use it for tdp OCs! Let me share some!
These are two of my only piaj elf OCs who this picrew does justice to. The others generally aren't compatible with its options.
I also made an attempt at a Cairon, but he's not quite this baby, lol.
four of my main characters from this picrew
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Fuck yes finished piaj 26!!!
#piaj misc#shitpost#i could have finished and published this chapter months ago if I'd really been trying#but then we started getting hints about the contents of s4#and i went 🤔#and the more time that passed the more i was like#no actually this chapter specifically should release after s4 has just come out#for Reasons#and the reasons are thematics and fun coincidences#anyway so im hoping to force feed the chapter to my prereaders and have it out next week sometime#tomorrow i will theoretically post a Ceracurist update since I've been sitting on a complete chapter for a while
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*stares at Bloodmoon Huntress* hoo boy. Time for more piaj edits huh.
#piaj misc#I've not actually read it yet because it's not released in the uk#but I've read some spoilers and#sigh#like. i always knew this might happen#but i am so. so fucking tired of character phobias in media always having a logical origin point#like sure a lot of people have phobias with instigating events#but a shitton of phobia just sort of develops#for no damn reason#and then you've got to live with this illogical and occasionally crippling fear#i was really hoping Rayla's water phobia wouldn't have a reasonable and sensible origin point#like whatever it's useful backstory fodder for characterisation so I'll probably use it#but i was just hoping.#like speaking as someone with a deep but unfounded phobia I'm really sick of media phobias always being sensible#and because tdp is my obsession in recent years i hoped the Explicable Phobia trope wouldnt get rayla#so I'm peeved#I'll get over it. I'm just peeved#gonna tag this with#bloodmoon huntress spoilers#bh spoilers#tdp spoilers#rant
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PIAJ 2022 Edits Changelog & Update News
The 2022 Grand PIAJ Edit is now complete. All chapters on ao3 and tumblr have been modified, supplemental material such as supplemental chapter notes has been modified, and the changelog is ready. The PIAJ master post has been updated.
PIAJ chapter 25 is complete, and will be posted 23/06/22, on my birthday.
This post will cover an overview of some noteworthy changes to the story and worldbuilding, and will then list the chapter-by-chapter changelog. You can refer to this changelog to decide whether or not you wish to reread a given chapter or scene.
Story Content
When I started the story, I considered incorporating water purification as a campcraft & survival issue to address, but decided against it because at the time I didn't think I was going to take piaj very seriously. By the time that changed, it was too late to reasonably introduce. But as long as I'm editing the whole thing, I might as well incorporate it. So, now Rayla is appropriately disturbed at drinking unclean water, and some scenes have been modified to reference this, and conversations modified to discuss it. Some worldbuilding notes have been added in relevant areas.
I made an incorrect assumption about the Banther Lodge when writing PIAJ; namely, I assumed it had taxidermy and animal trophies in it - it took closer examination for me to see that it's actually all wooden sculptures of animal trophies. Some not yet published scenes later in the story reference the presence of animal trophies in the Banther Lodge, so rather than change those scenes, I thought of something else I preferred for the setting and characters and modified the early piaj chapters accordingly.
Grammar
I have always been fully aware that you're supposed to end dialogue with a comma if there's a dialogue tag afterwards, but it looked so profoundly wrong to me that I couldn't bear to do it. I trained myself steadily to accept it, and having now accomplished that, I've edited PIAJ accordingly. I have almost certainly missed some instances, which will likely get picked up on future edits.
Continuity and Consistency
Ensuring I could take notes and check for continuity errors was one of the major reasons I wanted to do this in-depth editing process. I did identify a few continuity errors where late chapters had conversations that neglected to reflect the existence of similar conversations earlier in the story; these have been fixed. I have also taken comprehensive notes on a variety of topics to have easily searchable records to help me keep continuity solid in this ridiculously complex story.
Some things now being tracked: Clothing (Quantity, damage, cleanliness), Food & Rations, Supplies (Quantity & usage), Past Events (Pre-story events mentioned), Campsites (Chapters & brief descriptions), Ezran & Zym Ability, Callum Ability, Health & Injury (all relevant characters), and various subsets of all of these, as well as some misc. progression details. I've also done some in-depth mapping in my detailed Information & Espionage document.
Worldbuilding and Nomenclature
The PIAJ worldbuilding has been developing over time, so some things needed to be tweaked and amended, and other things were amended to conform to new canon material that I thought it was worth incorporating. Here is a list, not necessarily complete, of changes that have been made.
Great Bay has been renamed to Weeping Bay to conform to canon.
PIAJ stance on elves with facial hair modified in light of Tales of Xadia elven characters with beards. A summary: elves can have facial hair, but it's as rare as for cisgender human women. It runs in families, so more prevalent in certain communities, and may be utterly unknown elsewhere. Due to association with humans, facial hair can be stigmatised in some xenophobic communities, similar to hornlessness.
Some terms in Paragonism have been changed. The High Cleric is now the ultimate religious authority in a kingdom; the Priest of Paragons is now the highest religious authority in a given settlement. Houses of Paragons are now called Halls of Paragons, except where they are large enough to be called Temples. The overarching authority of Paragonism is composed of one High Cleric from each human kingdom, and is known as the High Clergy.
Some references / details in Paragonism have been changed. While Fortune is considered a Paragon, they're a controversial one, and not widely followed. Accordingly it doesn't make sense for most people to make references to them; any of these in the text have been replaced with more appropriate Paragons. References to 'Lord' or 'Lady' on their own have also been modified; this isn't an uncommon thing for people to say, but it's generally only done by people who have an exceptionally strong faith for a specific Paragon, such as Healers for Mercy. In the absence of this, any reference to 'Lord' on its own can be assumed to be an oblique reference to Hope.
The supplemental notes for each chapter have been inspected and modified where needed. Some examples: moondust dosage now varies based on the point in the lunar cycle it is taken, the full-body dragon sign language has been updated with its name of Draconic Corpus, and details of the rare Moonshadow elf talent called 'truthfinding' have been clarified.
Chapter-by-Chapter Changelog
Please refer to this to see where the largest changes have been.
(Section 1)
Chapter 1:
04/05/22: Grammar, style, added lines and paragraphs here and there – particularly to the opening, which I always disliked before. Addition of some description in the Banther Lodge.
Chapter 2:
04/05/22: Grammar, style, some modified sentences. Nothing major.
Chapter 3:
04/05/22: Grammar and style edits, as well as some extra lines here and there, and a couple paragraphs of extra content in the late tent stuff scene.
Chapter 4:
05/05/22: Grammar, style, a couple extra paragraphs early-ish in the chapter relevant to Banther Lodge changes. Changed the moonberries to gooseberries.
Chapter 5:
07/05/22: Grammar, style, etc. Added in a couple extra lines, and edited Ezran’s knowledge, for some geographical locations that are more worldbuilt now than when I first wrote this. Minor insignificant edits to this chapter’s supplemental notes.
Chapter 6:
07/05/22: Grammar, style, new scene section pertaining to water purification that’s nearly an entire 1k of new writing, two new chapter note sections pertaining to water purification and swamp fever. Also, modified the Claudia and Soren scene to fix a continuity issue with chapter 24.
Chapter 7:
07/05/22: Grammar, style, water purification edits, etc. Minor edits to the chapter’s supplementary notes.
Chapter 8:
10/05/22: Grammar, style, minor details. Minor edits to the chapter’s supplementary notes.
Chapter 9:
11/05/22: Grammar, style, minor details. One conversation gently modified for better continuity with ch24. Minor edits to this chapter’s supplemental notes.
Chapter 10:
11/05/22: Grammar, style, minor details. Supplemental chapter notes received minor edits.
Chapter 11:
19/05/22: Grammar, style, minor details. Supplemental chapter notes have had minor edits.
Chapter 12:
19/05/22: Grammar, style, minor details. Supplemental chapter notes received minor edits.
(Section 2)
Chapter 13:
20/05/22: Grammar, style, minor details. Supplemental chapter notes were edited; the section on the story section format was edited to account for the current state of the story.
Chapter 14:
21/05/22: Grammar, style, minor details. Supplemental chapter notes received minor edits.
Chapter 15:
Grammar, style, minor details, a paragraph and a bit added in around the wound care stuff to improve binding-related continuity. Supplemental chapter notes received minor edits.
Chapter 16:
22/05/22: Grammar, style, minor details. Supplemental chapter notes received edits, with my worldbuilding stance on elven facial hair modified to reflect some official elven characters from Tales of Xadia.
Chapter 17:
22/05/22: Grammar, style, minor details. Supplemental chapter notes received minor edits; updated information on moondust a little.
Chapter 18:
22/05/22: Grammar, style, minor edits. Supplemental chapter notes received minor edits; added in a paragraph regarding my stance on new and supplemental canon materials such as the books or Tales of Xadia.
Chapter 19:
22/05/22: Grammar, style, minor details. Supplemental chapter notes received some edits and padding and supplementing.
Chapter 20:
22/05/22: Grammar, style, minor details.
(Section 3)
Chapter 21:
23/05/22: Grammar, style, minor details. The supplemental chapter notes received some significant edits; positions of authority in Paragonism have been modified.
Chapter 22:
23/05/22: Grammar, style, minor details.
Chapter 23:
23/05/22: Grammar, style, minor edits, some slight changes to a scene for better consistency with previous chapter. Supplementary notes have been updated to reflect developments in the worldbuilding, largely affecting the rare Moonshadow elves known as truthfinders.
Chapter 24:
23/05/22: Grammar, style, minor details, edits to the first two scenes to fix a continuity issue with chapter 6. Minor edits to the supplemental chapter notes.
And that’s all! Happy rereading, and I’ll see you again in a week.
#piaj misc#piaj chapters#part of the reason I waited so long to post the edits is I wanted to have ch25 ready before I did#thought it would be nice to hiatusbreak promptly :)#and my birthday seems a good occasion to do the update
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I was not expecting to see two of my fics in a graph tonight but it was certainly a fun and surprising experience! Same hat @raayllum 😅
Pronouns used in top 20 The Dragon Prince fics on AO3, sorted by bookmark. Almost an even split!
more on how this type of plot was made
#piaj misc#boundless#reblog#tdp#thanks op this is interesting#it figures piaj would be weighted towards more female pronouns#given how many female pov characters there are#and that boundless would have more male#what with it being entirely Callum pov#neat!
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are you planning on finishing Peace is a Journey? i was binging it recently and its really good, but i noticed it hadnt been updated in like 6 months
You have very interesting timing, my good fellow!
As it happens, I've had a lot of shit on and have barely written for like five months, and ngl I am bigtime not enjoying it. So actually these last few days I was finally able to sit down and force myself back into the tdp fandom by binge watching reaction videos for three days and then finally by watching season 3 again and reading ttm, the art book, etc. I finished doing that today! And now:
Over the next....probably weeks, I'll be honest, I'll be starting the Grand PIAJ Edit of 2022. It's been a long time coming, and I put it off for a long time because I hadn't caught up with ttm or this or that, and then life just sort of,,, happened, and it got put off even longer. But yeah, now's time to start, finally.
I've got a lot to do, so I expect it's going to take a while. I've got bits to add, bits to tweak, grammar to edit, and on top of that....I've got to start seriously keeping track of a lot of running details in order to be able to do my consistency checks effectively in such an enormous story. For an idea, these are some of the things I've noted to myself I'll need to take notes down about during the next grand edit in order to track:
Clothing state and quantity; damage, discoloration, wash status
Food quantity and use
General supplies quantity and use
Rayla injury progression and healing
Sketchbook drawings progression
Campsites by day and description
Noteworthy scenes and conversations and exposition by day
....and some more stuff that's more spoilery. Point is I have a good amount to do, and piaj is so massive and so logistics heavy that I really need to keep easily searchable records of things like this so I don't trip up. In a recent chapter I almost rewrote a scene that already existed in another chapter because I couldn't tell the difference between 'I remember it vividly because I've thought about it a lot' and 'I remember it vividly because I've already written it.' I caught it in time but I don't want that to happen more often in a story as detail-oriented as this, which it will, if I don't take careful notes on my next grand edit. Which will start today or tomorrow.
I won't edit any public chapters until I've finished all the extant chapters on my computer, so you've got plenty of time to download the current version if you want to preserve it. I'll also make sure to preserve a copy myself and make it available for download. There will also be change notes added to the change logs of every chapter so you can get an idea of whether anything interesting was added or changed, or if it was just basic grammar or style edits.
In general, rest assured that my plans for piaj are too cool for me to leave it here!
#piaj#piaj misc#piaj asks#asks#lmao the timing of this ask seriously#it came just as i was finishing my catch up and going off to have dinner before appraising the state of the story#anyway the edits won't change anything major i don't think#but it's certain I'll add paragraphs and maybe even sections of scenes in certain places#my piaj plans have come a long way since chapter 1 was published#and while i was always writing for the long haul right from the start#with key events foreshadowed in the opening chapters#there are more key events planned now as well as misunderstandings i had about some canon details#that require me to make some changes#on top of that i have spent around three months sleeping in a tent since the last update#the very same tent i used as model for the kids tent#and this experience gave me some new ideas and first hand impressions i want to incorporate#it had been a very long time since i used the tent before after all#I'd forgotten a lot of the finer details and experiential stuff#and im a fucking sucker for those details
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A whole entire mood from ch25 Rayla
#piaj misc#editing the existing parts of chapters 25 and 26 too#i did some comprehensive timeline jockeying yesterday#the runaan plotline timing had got a bit messy so that's all been changed#should make it easier on myself too#not having to pack quite as many events into a few days#i did miss this#flitting between like five timeline sheets cutting and pasting and editing like a chaotic timeline wizard#to clarify runaan timeline events that haven't yet been published have been juggled mercilessly#the ones that have already happened are staying as they are
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Ok so. Soon, probably not today because my head is mush, but maybe tomorrow, I think I'll be starting to put edits live. Feel free to download the current ao3 version of piaj if you like. I'll reblog this post with progress updates and post the full changelog when it's done.
#piaj misc#i didn't actually finish the info timelining for a few reasons#1. it takes about a million years#2. it was really unlikely to make me have to re-edit any of the edits anyway#like I'm still going to have to catch up on it because it is very important to the plot#but i need to stop willingly giving my adhd brain more barriers between me and doing stuff#so#it's about time to get this edits in order#and then we can hiatus break#about fucking time honestly
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Thinking about that time like a week ago I wrote a note to self in the piaj channel of my friends discord server that was just the word 'blood' with no follow-up or context and then forgot about it, and then one of my buddies was like,,,,, should we be concerned orrr
#piaj misc#like it was for something pretty innocuous and unworrying but yes without context it was probably quite concerning#it was just a note to self to remember to incorporate the thing i needed to remember#and i didnt feel like opening any of my various notes software at the time#but it was quite funny
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Rereading the earliest chapters of piaj during the editing process has been a fun time, but man, this line in chapter 1 just got me like:
"It's spring, though, and it'll only get warmer. Do we need cold weather stuff?"
oh Callum you sweet summer child
#piaj misc#i got the first three chapters edited last night#im having fun#feels super good to be getting back to my Real Writing#like i technically write for a living now but it just isnt the same#and on top of that i legitimately haven't reread the early chapters of piaj in a looooong time#so this is nice#i fixed the opening paragraph that always bugged me too#ch1 has the meatiest edits so far
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Finally finished the initial read-and-edit of the published piaj chapters 🎉
Still got more editing to do, as I took notes on things that would need more careful changes for consistency - it'll still be a while. But we're getting there.
Eventually, I'll post a comprehensive changelog that will give chapter by chapter summaries of changes, as well as broader scope overviews of changes I've made. Might not be for a bit, but that's the objective I'm working towards. At that point I would recommend people either reread the fic, or reread chapters marked as having significant changes, according to your preferences.
(However, you can just as easily not reread anything at all; nothing major enough to affect story continuity will be changing.)
#piaj misc#i missed this story like an old friend#rereading it and re-experiencing it has been surprisingly emotional#but at the same time i think i got some necessary distance to make judgements about the story and canon#that were hard for me to do before#still though. it's going to take me a while before my head is fully in the game again#I'm staring at my detailed section focus timelines complete with scene allocation with such relief#thank you past me for your obsessive ways#having this vast trove of resources and timelines is a gift#it would have been so much harder to return to a story this complex without it#I'd have been proper fucked#side note i have 26 chapter documents open right now and microsoft word alone is currently using 1gig of ram lmao#also universe bless onenote for making it possible for me to organise all my supporting resources and meta for this fic#the literally hundreds of entries would have been unmanageable without it or something similar#god it feels good to be back in writer brain again
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I think I'm going to be ready to put the piaj edits live soon, which is great timing really, but before I do that I want to get up to date with my information travel timeline and that's,,,, uhh,,,, yeah let's have a look at that.
This is my current key for writing/interpreting the information travel timeline:
Plus a bonus look at some of the sections and tracking pages. Also this key is heavily censored for spoiler reasons, but you get the idea.
And here is an example of what the information travel timeline looks like:
Covering the days immediately after the pre-canon death of Avizandum, and Xadian response to it.
This is all horrendously complicated but....necessary? Because I legitimately have a story here that's so logistics based that it matters what information is being sent, when, by who, via which information channels, and in certain cases, whether those channels have the capacity to send short notice emergency missives or not.
Using codes like this means I can easily search for a specific piece of information being passed on, or a specific source that is passing information, and track what they're doing through the timeline.
I enjoy it but man it's a lot of work. Last stage before I'm happy with the piaj edits though.
#piaj misc#it's possible but unlikely that getting up to date with my information travel timelines would mean i have to do further edits#i don't think that's going to happen but who knows#also some of those source codes in the key are pretty guessable and fine but i censored them anyway#the one i really don't want anyone to guess is RB#honestly if someone manages to guess that one you deserve a cookie#but also that plot point is so close to going off lmao#don't want to ruin the surprise#n.b. some of the SW codes are old and I'm changing how i number them now#not that that will mean anything to anyone lmao
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Would you say that the edits are good enough of an excuse to do a reread? :P
Lmao, yeah I would if it were me as a reader and enjoyer of the fic. I reread things very very often.
If you're the sort of person who likes rereading fics, I'd recommend it. There's a lot of subtle tweaks to worldbuilding and general vibes that can't really be explicitly pointed out in the changelogs. Everything major is in the changelog, like the fresh 1k of new writing in chapter 6 for example, and you don't have to reread to understand the story, but I'd recommend it if you're that way inclined.
#piaj asks#piaj misc#im actually working on chapter 6 edits posting right now coincidentally#this is so fucking boring yall#like the editing was vastly more interesting than the posting thereof#my brain weasels are threatening mutiny
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So, er, I've been doing kinda good at piaj over the last week 👀
#piaj misc#i didnt finish 24 today but i think i might tomorrow#goal for this weekend!#23 is provisionally complete and I'll be going through it a couple times for edits#and then tossing it at my prereader squad#i will post it at some point#possibly in a week possibly later than that#we'll see#but point is i think ive given the hiatus a very solid whack on the noggin#lol this is quite good timing what with the comicon thing being on now isnt it#nice
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S U F F E R I N G
Thank u for your enthusiasm, penny 👏
#ask meme#asks#piaj misc#this one is also from ch23!#most of these are not making me go very far i have to say#i bet everyone can guess whose dialogue this is#too fucking old timey and fancy to be most peoples#plus the subject matter#going to make an effort to get my brain back in this chapter tonight#for Reasons it would be sensible to get my ducks in a row before next week
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