#missing scenes include and are not limited to: First comforting Reader after because he knows intimately how unpleasant it is
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Linktober (Shadow) 2023, Day 11
Monsters (Dead Hand)
Summer Stop Giving Reader/PoV Character and the Chain a Hard Time and Trauma Challenge (impossible) /j. But really I'll probably write something lighter for Linktober or Linktober Shadow later to compensate for this one lol. Probably a sequel to this one that has Reader actually having a nice time with the Links for once.
Technically since unfortunately studying for future exam season in like a couple of days has been kicking me in the ribs and thus my time was highly cut and unfortunately I don't have an Ocarina to give me more, this is actually a mix of prompts! The ones in the title, Keese, Wolfos, Wizzrobe, Lizalfos, Redead, and Boss, although they are not the focus here, mostly just mentioned but technically checking out the boxes, maybe next time I'll go more in deep on that (Like the original idea that basically was Reader taming a pet Wolfos as a guard hound that I will not elaborate on at least not this year), instead y'all get this with the boss that gave a lot of people childhood trauma and was never seeing again since because we really don't talk about just why Dead Hands are terrifying much, just that they are, really missed opportunity to use them more in an LU context lol.
As always any relationship between Reader and any of the Chain can be interpreted as romantic or platonic, and Reader is Gender Neutral on Purpose. And First is here because again, this would have been longer if exam season wasn't kicking me in the ribs and I have some really evil ideas involving First, Reader and Time bonding over having trauma of enclosed spaces, but thankfully y'all don't get that today lol, or not, it would be a really fluffy scene so up to y'all if it's a win or a loss.
TW:
Don't think there's anything too heavy-ish? But I'm a horror fan so I'm not someone who can accurately judge that. I'd say graphic descriptions of violence and gore, and being restrained/pinned in place and the entire deal that is the Dead Hand's existing, so please don't read if you're squeamish or uncomfortable. Health is important and specially mental health and I always leave these warnings on Linktober Shadow related prompts or heavier stories, so just a heads up so no one is caught by surprise.
Anyway, enjoy reading!
It was an almost unanimous agreement that no hero liked to pass through a cemetery in Hyrule.
From the restless Gibdo, to the mischievous yet usually cruel Poes and the lost Ghini, to the ever wandering Stalfos and the ghastly agonized Redead and ever determined ghoulish Garo, nothing good ever came from entering in areas where dead things roam. You can't be sure if it's because of the magic in Hyrule, the living force of light and shadow and the divinity coursing through the land, or simply the will of the undead or the consequences of Demise attempting to claim the Triforce, graveyards and desolated fields meant silence, they should be where those who are gone should finally acquire their final catharsis, not to roam endlessly without release, solemn as these places are they are still places for a peaceful end and to be denied such due to the whims of the Shadow... You can think of very few awful fates that can compare.
('Terrible fates, you could say.' The grimly bemused part of your mind whispers, as you walk alongside Time further down into the crypt that you and the Chain had followed the shadow into, silver, prisitne armor briefly blends with old, rusted, bloody gold and you think you hear the rattling of bones in the distance, the draw of a rusted, but still serviceable sword. You shut it away with a snarl as you cut down the Stalfos attempting to ambush Wild from the rear, and it goes down and back into the darkness with a screech alongside the chilling knowleged and the sick cracking of broken bones, not on your watch, never on your watch, you refuse.)
"Of all places why did it have to be a bloody crypt?" Grimaced Warriors, casting a weary glance towards the skulls decorating the walls, their empty sockets empty but silently cutting, as if sneering at the fact you lot had dared disturb the dead, as if it wasn't the Shadow's mere presence making what would otherwise be a place for rest into a possible death trap.
Legend smirked, though you could tell he wasn't anymore pleased from the way he marched through the cold, cracked stone floor, steps flighty and eyes darting around corners, "What, a bit too much for you, soldier boy?"
"No," came the prim answer, although the twitch of the hand near his scabbard as you stepped into an open chamber gave him away, as well as Wind being kept at his side rather than near the wall, "Just don't generally like fighting the undead in closed spaces. It's a recipe for disaster."
"On that I believe we all can agree on." Came Time's voice, cutting through the banter, tense as a drawn bowstring, you knew being back in a crypt wasn't easy for him, with the way his jaw tensed, you both had the same awful memories of a similarly buried, abandoned place where dead things roamed without cease, frantic, hungry for the warmth of the living, "Keep your guard up, and stay close together."
Almost as if on cue came the monsters from the open corridors, you didn't hesitate in drawing your blade to cut through the enemy, keese were easily dispatched by Four and Legend's swords, you spun to slit the throat of a growling Wolfos from Twilight's era going for Sky's back just as he mercilessly chased down the Black Lizalfos, the beast clearly avoiding the glow from the Sword of Evil's Bane. Time's back to yours as you cleared the path for him and blocked the Shadow's exit through the left corridor, it had already proven that it would not matter if you did or not, but you refused to not let it work for survival.
The jolt of magic being used crawling up your spine was your first warning. Like the build up of lightning in a storm, the taste of rust and a feeling like tar slithers up your throat.
The second was Wild's warning shout as the chamber shook with the grating, chilling, blood curdling howl of the Redeads, Time lunging away from your side to slash the beasts away from Wind and Warriors with all of the fury of a wolf defending it's pack, before you had to throw yourself back, slamming your back against the arch on the right as it caved in, lest you be crushed alongside the Wolfos coming for your neck the second the older hero moved.
You were separated.
You were alone.
A really, really bad spot to be when in Hyrule's catacombs.
"Are you alright?!", Came muffled from the other side of the stones, the hint of an actual wolf's growl and the distinctive Ordonian cadence, Twilight.
"I'm fine! Keep fighting, I'll find my way to you guys!", You yell back, heart racing, trying not to think about what you could find on your way back, you didn't have any bombs on you, it wasn't feasible to use them in a place as old as this, not without risk bringing down the ceiling on you and the Chain. But most catacombs have interconnected hallways, if you moved quickly, you might just avoid finding anything that you won't be able to handle on your own.
You think Twilight replies, but it's muffled by another Redead's yowl, you wince, your muscles lock up and you feel something warm drip from your ears, but thankfully you are not rendered immobile due to the involuntary wall, you swallow your trepidation and get moving.
The further you get away from the fallen stones, the more silent the catacombs extending from the crypt you were dropped in became, shadows twist oddly by the torches upon the wall with only your breathing and the cold, unfeeling remains of the dead to keep you company, the lowly burning flames bringing you no warmth. The corridors blended together in the darkness cast by the faint light, the shades contorting themselves in the crevices of your paranoia the longer you went on with only your own hurried footsteps to make any true sound.
Not one monster had found it's way to you thus far, though, and according to the copy of the map Legend had made the second you had acquired the original from a very unfortunate Wizzrobe from Wild's era. You just needed to pass one more open chamber to find the corridor leading to your boys, You couldn't keep them waiting, who knew how long it would take for the fight to finish if Redead's were involved? And staying still when the Shadow could turn itself intangible was practically begging it to switch it's attention, it usually didn't pay you as much mind as it did the heroes, Time specially (it seemed to hold a grudge against him more than any of your boys, you noted bitterly), but it would occasionally target you if it meant getting a rise from any of the Link's or if it felt you were too secure in your safety, it was better if you found your way back first to the hunt before you became hunted.
You grit your teeth, by Hylia's dripping gash, you were so. darn. tired. of. being. hunted.
Of watching your friends being led into a wild hunt with no end in sight, dragged by the noose by a remnant that refused to stay dead, you never thought you could burn with so much anger, with the desire to see if fire would scare it sober into ceasing in it's infection of all of Hyrule's Eras. But unfortunately you knew it didn't work like that, so you had to survive, you would survive, because someone had to protect the heroes when the heroes protected everyone else and if no one was going to step up to the job, you'd just have to do it yourself.
Shaking yourself from your thoughts, lest you end up drowning in them, you breath in relief as soon as you come upon the metal door with the symbol of the royal family, faded and rusted with age, there. You just needed to pass through this chamber and the corridor next to it, and you'd be back with Link, all of them, and hopefully out of here. You push it open, grip tightening on your long dagger, almost a sword, good enough to cut and hide. The thick and pungent combination of old, congealed blood, sick and decaying flesh, something like rotten eggs dipped in alcohol and withered flowers hits your nose, making you nauseous but you press on, the chamber is circular and dimly lit, with a long cracked, soft stone from a leak in the walls. You studiously do not look at the far corner of the dungeon or the pillory's and shackles scattered around near the cells, there's a second door to the other side, as soon as you pass through it you'll be in another corridor.
... It's silent, too quiet. Unease slithers and twists around you like vines, but you can't delay, you won't, so you keep walking-
Until you can't.
Something has grabbed a hold of your leg. You look down, and your blood freezes, spotting a long, sickly, pale arm and a bright crimson, elongated nails, claw-like, digging into your ankle, having dug itself up from the fragile ground.
You don't hesitate, slashing down violently at the offending limb, frantic terror spreads through your blood, you knew what was here. It featured in your nightmares for a long, long time, you knew it still haunted Time's, the limb goes slack as it is severed, and you barely note the way it starts bleeding black and green at the stump, thankful for Four's expert craftsmanship and maintenance hints as you dive to the exit. You don't make it far, it's companion limbs bursting in front of your path like a snake emerging from the ground, it makes a solid grab for your arms, one of them grabs you by the scalp, firmly digging as you dodge and weave between, a stabbing pain upon your skull from the indomitable grip of something fueled by fury, twisted magic and rigor mortis and makes you cry out, your slight moment of hesitation allowing two more hands to latch onto your legs and arms, nails slicing through your flesh like easily and digging, tearing like a rabid hunting dog's teeth upon an unfortunate deer, leaving deep gashes upon your arms and ankles, it's not unlike being pinned and held to a torture rack, in hindsight, ironic given just where in the crypt you ended up.
Your hear the ground below shifting below you, a groan carrying through the air, awfully monstrous, coldly human. You struggle harder like a desperate butterfly upon a dissection board, from your peripheral, you see the form of the thing unhurriedly dragging itself over, it uses the sharp and bloody ends of where bone was broken to slice it's hands off to shuffle out of the grave, using it's stubs as support. Long long neck barely supporting it's elongated head, the scent of rot intensifies and you feel like gagging as it settles it's empty, frigid, hungry eye sockets on your bound form; it's broken jaw contorting itself in a mockery of a human smile over rotten gums and exposed teeth, stretching unnaturally and bringing emphasis to it's rotting, bloodied sunken features. From behind it's bloated, putrid shape, barely obscured by the bloodied white cloth and the grotesque vision of the undead you swear the crimson eyes of the shadow, watching you coldly, the hint of a knife sharp, serpentine smile as the sound of wet meat slamming across the ground rings in the chamber.
Fury mixes with your panic as you snarl, trying to twist the dagger in your grip as best as you can to drive it into the arms, pain and blood drips from the open wound but you don't care; you need to get away from the Dead Hand. A monster like that feels no pain when struck for it is not human, not any longer, and you couldn't hope to face an infected one alone, it shuffles over the floor, unhurriedly shuffling like a predator that knows it's prey can't run away, it moans and groans with hunger as it approaches and you have no intention of giving it a meal, you grit your teeth as the nails sink deeply into your shoulders and arms, using your blade to saw through rotting flesh and hopefully break bone with every single inch of strenght you have, the blade is slick in your hand with your own blood and the poison-tar of the Shadow's infection burning through you but you do not mind, can't. You need to get away-
The undead's teeth sink into the hollow of your collarbone, blunt, human teeth that shouldn't have half the strenght it does to rip through flesh, blood and crack bone, and you caterwaul with pain, skin crawling and numbing and set aflame with curses sent from the dark reflection of the hero, darkening, veins blackening, your eardrums vibrate with the force of your own agony and you are sure you could rival a Redead on pitch alone of your tortured howl. Struggling even more ferociously, attempting to disloged it, kick it off, your blade sucessfully slashes through the arm from your reverse grip, pushing away from it with the savegery off a cornered predator you sink your long dagger into the undead's eye sockets, tearing through it's cheek with animal ferocity, it keens high and chilling, you're losing blood quickly and it (for it's not a human, not anymore, you can't feel sympathy for it, won't. You can't hesitate.) knows, for it tries to chomp down onto your vulnerable neck, your arm being the only thing keeping it from biting it out as you growl with pain, although you can't be sure it just won't bite through, it's teeth are bared, the pitch of it's blank eyes locked onto yours in stalemate, you have the advantage of not being weakened by hunger and decay, not sluggish like it but that will not help for long, the clammy being determined to bleed you dry and feast on your corpse and you are drowning drowning drowningDROWNINGWITHWRETCHEDTORMENT MAKE.THE.PAIN.STOP-
A scream of your name, sword calloused hands yank you away from claws and fangs (because nothing with blunt teeth and nails should be able to wound someone so throughly), you waver on your feet, swaying, supported by a warm, strong body and pulled away. A sword slashes the foul being away from you and you go lax, numb with pain.
First, First was supporting you. Keeping you steady, stopping you from falling, snarling at the corpse with a lion's fury, holding you protectively. Time tears by him like a man possessed, frenzied with the look of a man looking at his worst nightmare and growling in denial. The Links, wounded but alive, the Chain had met you halfway.
The last thing you remember before losing conciousness as adrenaline leaves your body and everything goes dark, is wishing that they'll burn it to be sure it's gone for good. It's the kindest thing that can be done for a such a wretched existence.
You'd be okay.
#linked universe x reader#technically#lu first x reader#lu time x reader#but mostly only hinted at because things didn't go according to plan#anyway my pitch is that dead hands died of hunger more so than torture which is why they are so darn bitey#and that being an undead being in Hyrule is horror at it's finest actually and in this essay-#Really can't wait till exam season is finally over so I can ACTUALLY dig up those essays lmao#missing scenes include and are not limited to: First comforting Reader after because he knows intimately how unpleasant it is#to be restrained underground alone#and the two fall asleep on each other to reassure the other is still there#and protective Time caring for Reader because having Dead Hand Traumaâą dug up is not fun#On a Scale of Viscerally Hating the Dead Hands from Biggest to Lowest: Time First Twilight Warriors Sky Wild Hyrule Legend Four Wind#I will not elaborate why at this moment#And now I'll take a darn nap lol#summer writes linktober 2023#summer writes linktober shadow 2023#summer writes#Feral Reader#Reader gets to be capable as a treat
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Rereading Emma, Iâm noticing the degree to which it includes an inversion of Sense and Sensibility: in both of them, a young man is in a secret engagement with a poor woman of whom his family would strongly disapprove, but he appears to have fallen in love with another young lady whom he met after the start of the engagement. In both of them, the woman he is engaged to notices this other attachment.
The contrast is in the utterly different personalities of Jane Fairfax and Emma relative to Lucy Steele and Elinor. Lucy is posessive and feigns friendship with Elinor in order to taunt and watch her, whereas Jane is distant from Emma and would rather break the engagement than have him marry her out of obligation. In personality, the compare-and-contrast effect is heightened by Jane Fairfax and Elinor Dashwood - in opposite positions in the real or supposed triangles - having extremely similar personalities: reserved, polite, self-controlled, valuing morals and good behaviour over personal comfort, and willing to bear patiently with difficulties.
Emma, however, behaves extremely badly by Jane in spreading (if only to Frank) the groundless speculation of a romantic connection between Jane and Janeâs friendâs husband. In addition to this being extremely insulting in particular to a woman like Jane with very high moral standards, Emma (not knowing of the engagement) is under the impression that Jane is going to be a governess, and being suspected of such a thing, if it got spread around by gossip, could be extremely destructive to Janeâs job prospects. Though Emma has no real malice, one could easily see Jane feeling similar about her to how Elinor feels about Lucy.
The other contrast with S&S, of course, is that neither Emma nor Frank is either in love with each other; they just have a lively friendship and enjoy other people shipping them (Frank to conceal his actual engagement; Emma for reasons of vanity and because heâs really the only person whoâs both socially eligible and close to her age that sheâs ever met in her limited social circle).
The other thing that stands out is that, relative to Austenâs other novels, Emma is much more of a sitcom. Sense and Sensibility, Pride and Prejudice, and Persuasion all have comparatively linear narratives revolving around 1-3 relationships involving the main characters. Emmaâs much more episodic, without either Emma or Mr. Knightley realizing their feelings until later in the book, and with very low stakes for both of them through most of the book. Austenâs novels seem to alternate in this way. Northanger Abbey (written first, but not published at the time) satirizes popular melodramatic novels, and so to a lesser degree does Sense & Sensibility. The lighter and wittier Pride & Prejudice is followed by the more serious and sober Mansfield Park, which is clearly in conversation with P&P with the strong parallels and contrasts between the two in characters, relationships, and scenes. Then the lighter and more comedic Emma follows the more serious MP, and is in term followed by the more serious and dramatic Persuasion. This feels deliberate on Austenâs part, and would have given her contemporary readers a good amount of variety.
Emmaâs an interesting character in that, while her flaws (mainly her snobbishness towards the Martins and how manipulative she is regarding Harrietâs interactions with them, as well as her bad behaviour to Jane) do bother me more than any of Austenâs other protagonists, she also has virtues I couldnât imagine having (her father is so aggravating, and sheâs so patient and tactful and good at understanding how to manage his interactions with guests in a way that is comfortable for everyone). Really, despite very different social classes, Mr. Woodhouse and Miss Bates are notably similar in being very kind and well-meaning but also very irritating, and taking a long time to say very little. I feel like that may be an intentional parallel.
My sympathies in the book (apart from Jane Fairfax and Mr. Knightley) are most with Mr. John Knightley, Isabellaâs husband, and if I were in the book heâs probably the one I would most enjoy spending time with. I too would get annoyed sometimes with many of these people! I too weary of meaningless small talk and local gossip! I could happily accept a little occasional ill-humour from him in exchange for the rare blessing of thirty minutesâ rational conversation.
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Totally random thought. But what if you write a delicious smut with your man Jooyeon, that includes (but is not limited to) oral and the phrases âStaying quiet was never your strong suit, wasnât it?â âWell, you could do something about it.â You may pick who says whatđ
tags: bf!jooyeon x fem!reader, oral (m!rec) | mdni
a/n: took some time but here it is! this is based on the promt BUT also inspired by your post xh as seasons where you mentioned that jooyeon is mid autumn with slasher movies and shades of red⊠<3 honestly glad that i waited so long cause i donât know if i was gonna think of combining them before ~ hope you enjoy how it turned out!!
âJooyeon.â You lay eyes on your boyfriendâs side profile, but he continues his rambling despite you calling out his name. âBaby!â
You turn the volume of the movie down a bit more.
âWait, what are you doing? Arenât we gonna watch it till the end?â
âMaybe we will if you stay quiet for more than ten minutes.â
Jooyeonâs lips instantly turn pouty from the remark, but quickly melt into an enticing smile after his reaction makes you chuckle.
âI thought you like it when we chat during a movie! Iâm making some serious commentary here.â
âI do, but when itâs not every five minutes.â You laugh, rewinding the scene to the beginning. âWe just missed something important again.â
âOkay, okayâŠâ Jooyeon faces the tv screen, getting a hold of your legs that are resting on his lap. âIâll be quiet as a mouse.â He pretends to throw a key in the air after locking his mouth, and fixes his gaze back on the slasher film.
As expected, his silence didnât last long.
He seems too full of energy today. Heâs always lively and playful around you, wanting to keep that precious smile of yours glowing on your face at all times, but tonight heâs more bubbly than ever.
Itâs Saturday night and youâre in the middle of yet another movie, picked out from the special list with scary films you made together, deciding to keep the tradition going by watching one every weekend.
One Saturday you hang out at his place, the next - at yours, - since youâve been dating for little over a month and you still donât live under the same roof.
It looks like for the first time you wonât finish a movie⊠Itâs not because heâs not able to shut up, itâs because you simply find it attractive. He makes you laugh with another joke as his right thumb draws lazy shapes on your bare skin. The bangs of his chocolate brown hair frame his face beautifully every time he turns in your direction to see if youâre looking at him. And you always areâŠ
You catch Jooyeon by surprise when you suddenly straddle his lap; your fingers grip his shirt eagerly. You stay like this for a moment with lips hovering over each other, and the intense sounds of the movie filling the silence along with the rain thatâs banging on the windows.
The corners of Jooyeonâs mouth slide up as the realisation of whatâs happening slowly settles into his mind. It doesnât take long for his hands to move beneath the oversized tee youâre wearing so he can feel more of your skin.
He still touches you like itâs for the first time - slowly and tenderly.
âStaying quiet was never your strong suit, wasnât it?â You ask, and he smirks. Itâs one of the things that made you fall in love with him, and you both know it.
âWell,â he whispers before his mouth stays open from the sudden pressure of your clothed cunt against him. âYou could do something about it, baby.â
You donât even kiss him.
You kneel between his legs after leaving him only in his shirt and run your tongue from the base of his cock to his tip. The delightful contact turns him fully hard, and you grip the length comfortably, inviting it into your mouth.
Jooyeon sucks in a breath as he keeps his eyes open to look down at you. He will never get bored of the sight of you drooling all over him; holding him with your gentle fist until you fit it all down your throat. He loves your hollowed cheeks, your stretched puffy lips that currently are burgundy red from the lipstick youâre wearing, your fluttering lashes every time your eyes close as you swallow another inch, your little muffled sounds as you do your best to keep up the pace he likes.
âHoly shit, babyâŠâ His hand properly gathers your hair away from your face. âYou take it so well in that pretty mouth⊠I like it so much.â His voice slows down its tone, as the pleasant thrill spreads through his body.
He doesnât guide you. Sometimes he does, but not tonight. He doesnât force your head down, his hand just holds your hair as he lets you do everything the way you want to.
After a moment of deep throating him, you pull back, keeping your scarlet lips on his leaking tip while your slick fist twists around him. The flashy lights of the tv land on his handsome face thatâs contorted with pleasure. The living room is dark, because the lights are off, but thanks to the movie in the background you get to see his weak eyes and the way he bites his lips perfectly.
Thereâs screaming which only gets worse as the plot thickens, but none of you care about it.
You suck on his warm tip before rolling your tongue over it. The seductive movement makes Jooyeon groan shamelessly.
âFuck, baby, please, pleaseâŠâ He throws his head back against the couch, breathing much heavier than before. âWanna cum, pleaseâŠâ His brows furrow when you give the head of his cock a kiss.
âShh, no need to beg.â You glance at his exposed neck and see his adamâs apple move after he gulps.
âSo closeââ
His thighs begin to shake when you resume to suck him off, this time quicker, working your tongue more intense to bring him to the edge.
The rush multiples in Jooyeonâs veins, turning his moans into high pitched whines. They elevate more and more meanwhile his fist tightens without letting go of your hair.
His body convulses as his cum starts to paint your throat. You keep one hand resting on his chest as the other stays on his thigh while you hold your lips glued around him; his tip as deep as possible as it spills its warm arousal.
You swallow it down, humming in satisfaction. After you glance up at him with a horrific scene unfolding behind your back, Jooyeon smiles lightheaded, only able to see you.
âThat was fuckinâ amazingâŠâ He admits out of breath. This is the first time you swallow his cum, and heâs excited about it. âI donât know what to sayâŠâ
You give him a coy smile, then place a kiss on the pale skin of his thigh. The red mark of your lips sticks nicely.
âGood.â
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Rocks, Shoulders, and Ears
Pairing: Bucky Barnes x Avenger!Reader
Word Count: 3501
Warnings: !FATWS SPOILERS!, Cursing, Major Angst in this one, guys, Loads of Feels (sorry not sorry), John Walker being a douche (I really donât like the guy)
A/N: Iâm SO SORRY! I promise I was planning on it being shorter, but I went a little overkill with the angst! Thereâs just so many feelings and not enough space in my heart and soul, so I had to pour them out here! You get to see more of Reader and Samâs relationship in this one and thereâs major Bucky Feels towards the end (in my defense, this is based on the Couples Therapy half of the episode).
Iâm really hoping we get to see Bucky go to Louisiana next episode! Iâm holding out for it! I have a few ideas that include Sarah, but I need the episode! Ugh! Now we have to wait a whole ânother week! I really shouldnât write three chapters on one episode in one day. I just couldnât help myself!
Anyways! Please enjoy this part and thank you so much for all your support! Seriously, itâs meant so much to me, especially after the week Iâve had! If you havenât checked out the previous parts, my FATWS Series Masterlist is HERE, so please go read those first. Like always, this isnât betaâd so please excuse any mistakes! Enjoy, babes!
!SPOILERS UNDER CUT!
The last thing you remembered was falling asleep in Buckyâs arms after walking a few miles. And a hospital in DC wasnât exactly what you preferred waking up to, but itâs what happened. Turned out, not only was your shoulder dislocated and your thigh was strained, but you had a mild concussion. Your arm was in a sling and your palm, which you had completely forgotten about after you wrapped it while on Buckyâs back, was wrapped properly. Luckily, your thigh wasnât too bad, but they wanted to put you on crutches, which you refused immediately.
You had to get out of that building. You had no idea where the guys went, which was weird because you were sure theyâd never leave you alone. Especially in a hospital.
You quickly snuck your way through the halls after grabbing your bag which - thank God - was left on the seat besides your bed and changing into an extra pair of clothes.Â
You tried calling Buckyâs phone, the one he had specifically for you, which he always always answered. He even made an excuse to go to the bathroom once when you accidentally called in the middle of a therapy session. Nothing. You called the number four times before trying Samâs phone.
It clicked on the first try.
âHey. Listen, sorry for leaving-â
âWhere the hell are you?â
You heard him sigh. âI was just about to explain, so hang on a second there. You werenât waking up, probably because that concussion you forgot to mention to us-â
âIn my defense, I didnât know.â
âSure you didnât.â You rolled your eyes, throwing your free hand up, exasperated. âAnyways, Bucky wanted me to meet someone, weâll talk about that when you inevitably get here, put we had a bit of trouble and Bucky was arrested-â
âWhat?!â
âChill your pants, Y/L/N. Just listen. Weâre in Baltimore. Iâll text you the address. Get here soon and Iâll explain the whole thing. Weâve been here for a couple hours, but thereâs people on their way and weâre getting everything situated right now.â
âOkay. Fine. But youâre in trouble.â
âDonât I know it, babe. Now hurry your cute little ass here. Weâve got stuff to talk about.â
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The ride from DC to Baltimore is usually an hour or so, but youâve got resources, especially in the nationâs capital, and riding the bike you got, being able to go way over the speed limit? You got there in half the time. Being an Avenger really does have its perks.
The moment you got there, you hopped off the bike, not even bothering to turn it off, and stormed into the precinct. You headed straight over to the desk, but a pair of hands caught you by your uninjured arm before you could make a scene.
âHey, hey, hey.â Sam spoke softly, squeezing your bicep gently. âHeâs okay, alright?â
âWhy is he-â
âHe missed his court-mandated therapy session.â Sam informed you, pulling you over to where he had been sitting previously. âThere was a warrant out for his arrest. They had to bring him in, but itâs fine. His therapistâs been contacted. She should be here any minute to get him out.â
Your head fell back at his words. His therapy. How could you forget? You let Bucky complain to you about it and played along sometimes, but you really did think it was good for him and you tried supporting him. Yet you made him miss it and now heâs in trouble.
âHey. Y/N. Look at me.â You found Samâs worried eyes, his hand coming up to hold the side of your neck. âHeâs okay. Heâll be out in just a bit. Itâs fine.â
âItâs my fault, Sam.â
âNo. Itâs not. Heâs a grown ass man who made the decision to skip.â
You shook your head, holding his wrist for something to anchor you down. âNo, Sammy. I brought him along. I shouldâve been more responsible-â
âI know weâve joked around about you being in charge and stuff, butâŠyou know itâs not all on your shoulders, right?â Sam tilted his head slightly, eyebrow pinched in confusion making his eyes narrow.Â
You turned your head, not wanting to look at him. You didnât need another set of deep eyes to fall into. âSammyâŠI promised him Iâd look after you.â
âI know. And thatâs fine. But looking after us - looking after him - doesnât mean you have to be there to hold his hand and take the fall for him. Heâs not a child. Hell, heâs a hundred years old. Tell me you understand that.â
Licking your lips, you closed your eyes and shook your head again. âI-I canât-â
âIs that why youâre obsessed with finding Wanda?â
You frowned at his question, eyes snapping to his. âIâm worried about her, Sam.â
âI am too, but she can handle herself. And if she doesnât want to be found, you have to let her be. I know the Avengers were your only family. I know how much Steve meant to you-â
âNo.â You pulled away rather harshly, digging your nails into your palms, trying not to cry, ignoring the wound you were irritating. âNo, you donât. How could you understand my feelings for Steve when I donât understand them myself?â
Sam always had this ability to make anyone feel important, just by looking them in the eye. It was something you always admired about him; the way his smile could light up a room, those warm eyes making everyoneâs fears go away. They reminded you of hot chocolate. Something that could soothe your worries, comfort you, warm your very soul from the ice tragedy and heartache tend to big on.
You promised yourself you wouldnât cry in front of people, but with the way he was looking at you, it was hard to keep the tears from slipping.
âYou loved him, Y/N. Why is it so hard for you to see that?â
âI didnât - I wasnât in love with him, Sam.â You argued, wiping your cheeks aggressively and turning, crossing your arms defensively.
âWhat do you call it then?â
It was a rhetorical question, Sam copying your movements and sitting straight to watch for Bucky coming out. A rhetorical question that you didnât know the answer to. Because you werenât in love with Steve. No. Maybe you had been, but somewhere along the way he passed your heart to Bucky. So why did it hurt so bad?
You refused to dwell on it anymore, clearing your throat and dabbing at your eyes one more time before changing the topic. âWhy are we in Baltimore?â
âBucky wanted me to meet someone. Isaiah. You know him?â Sam turned back to you, his warm eyes shifting into something else. Suspicion? A bit of anger? Annoyance? You couldnât tell.
âIsaiah? I donât think I know any Isaiahs. And definitely not here. Why? Who is he?â
Sam shook his head, eyes darting around the lobby. âWeâll talk about it later.â
You nodded, although now your curiosity had peaked and you wondered who this guy was that made Sam so agitated. While you waited, you felt your eyes drooping and you let your head fall onto Samâs shoulder, who chuckled.
âYouâre still tired? You know you slept for, like, twelve hours, right?â
âI havenât been sleeping much.â
Sam turned his head to kiss yours. âY/N, I know you want to care for everyone, but youâve gotta take care of yourself too.â
âI know.â
âOkay.â And with that, the subject dropped, Sam pulling out his phone while you rested your eyes.
It was another ten minutes or so before Samâs name was called and the both of you stood up to greet the speaker. A woman, Dr. Raynor. Buckyâs infamous therapist.
And speaking of infamous. The moment you heard his voice, you squeezed your eyes shut, hoping it was just your brain malfunctioning. And then he was walking towards you, calling Bucky âBuckyâ like they were old pals and he was saving him from something terrible.
Your face scrunched up as Walker talked about stopping Buckyâs regular therapy sessions. âHeâs too valuable of an asset to have him tied up-â
âDonât call him an asset.â You snapped. âHeâs a human being with needs, and therapy-â
âHeâs a super soldier with skills that we need.â Walker cut in, making you scowl as he turned back to Raynor.
You scoffed in disbelief at his words, turning on your heel and walking away before he did, heading straight for Bucky, who lifted his right arm, wrapping it around your shoulders once you were close enough.
âAre you okay?â You whispered, closing your eyes and trying to relax in his hold, breathing him in.
âAre you? Should you be walking? What did-â
You shook your head. âIâm fine.â
âReally?â
âPromise.â You sighed out with a nod, squeezing him once more before pulling back as Raynor stepped forwards, ordering Bucky and Sam to do a session with her. You almost laughed when Sam tried refusing, a little chuckle actually leaving your lips when Bucky slumped, dragging his feet like a kid going to the principalâs office.
You followed, Bucky holding the door open for you. âThanks, Buck.â
âOf course, doll.â He gave a small smile, before walking in after you, Sam letting out a, âhey!â when Bucky shut the door on him, making you roll your eyes. You let the corners of your mouth tick up slightly in amusement. Yes, they annoyed the hell out of you, but you had to admit it was pretty funny sometimes.
âI believe I asked for James and Sam, Ms. Y/L/N.â
âItâs Agent, actually, and I think Iâm gonna sit in.â
Raynor narrowed her eyes. âI donât think-â
âThat wasnât a request.â You threw her words to Sam back at her, making Sam smirk. You shot him a wink as she relented with a sigh.Â
âFine. Just as a spectator. Don't interrupt.â
You raise your hands in surrender, slipping around the table to stand in the corner as your fellas sank down into the seats across the table from her.
A small puff of laughter came from you at the lack of response when she asked one of them to start. She shot you a warning look over her shoulder, but you shrugged. You couldnât help it; it was like all those times back in grade school when a teacher asked for a volunteer to read in a classroom full of rowdy kids and crickets followed.
Once she mentioned the next exercise was used for couples, you had to laugh, making both men shoot you begging pouts.
âY/N.â Raynor glared at you, so you controlled yourself, gesturing for her to continue.
Her miracle question did work so well, neither of them cooperating well.
She didnât even bother with you when you started cackling after she mentioned the âsoul-gazing exerciseâ and Bucky thanked her, Sam commenting that he would like this one. You gave a teasing wolf-whistle when they got close, one of Buckyâs thighs between Samâs and vice versa.
âDoll.â Bucky whined at you.
âListen here, smartass-â
Raynor cleared her throat, cutting Sam off from finishing his statement towards you. You leaned back against the wall, crossing your arms with a smirk. After all the bickering and side taking theyâve put her through, letting you enjoy this was the least they could do, and they knew it.
Of course, this exercise didnât work out either. A staring contest. Children. She was best friends with literal children.
But then something happened. Something you never thought would happen. Raynor asked Bucky why Sam aggravated him, and Bucky looked over to you, his eye growing sad in a way they only did when Steve was involved.
âSteve believed in you.â Bucky told him earnestly. âHe trusted you. He gave you that shield for a reason. That shield? That isâŠthat is everything he stood for. That is his legacy. He gave you that shield, and you threw it away like it was nothing. So maybe he was wrong about you. And if he was wrong about you, he was wrong about me.â
You heard his voice crack a little at the end as he slumped down in his seat, you jaw dropping slightly. You listened to the rest of the conversation, catching the way Sam grew irritated again, something that you didnât previously think was possible, but was happening more and more now.
Why wasnât Sam talking to you? Why was he holding all this in suddenly? And whyâŠBuckyâŠhe didnât tell you that. Why didnât he say anything? How could he ever feelâŠ
But you knew how he could feel like that. Yes, Steve believed in him so much that he tore the Avengers apart for himâŠbut he was the only one willing to do that for him. Yeah, you and Sam and Wanda and Clint, you all joined their side but, being honest, it wasnât because you believed in Bucky. It was because you believed in Steve. Of course, it was different now. You believed in Bucky with your entire being, and you believed in Sam with your heart and soul, butâŠdid either of them know that? Did they believe you when you told them? Or did you not tell them enough? This whole time you thought you were doing right by Steve - trying you damn hardest to watch out for them. But it obviously wasnât enough. And that was on you, no matter what Sam said.
You read people. Thatâs what youâve always done, thatâs what youâd always do. It was the reason you earned your spot on the team. You read people and situations and could figure your way into their heads in a second. Years and years of undercover work taught you how to do that and how to protect yourself while doing so.
So why? How? How did you miss something this big? How did you miss the way Sam was holding onto something? Why did you ignore the vexation in his tone for the last couple weeks? How did you miss that Bucky was hurting that deeply? Why didnât you do anything more for him?
You left the room before either of the boys, but you heard Sam standing up as you walked out the door.
You shouldâve known you werenât the only one holding things in. Of course they were. The difference is, you were supposed to be their rock, the thing they could hold onto to ground themselves, the shoulder for them to cry on, and the ear lent to them whenever they needed someone to listen. That was your job. It wasnât their job. Not for you. Your rock - your shoulder, your ear - he left you. And you thought, after all he did for you, if you just returned the favor for his best friends, youâdâŠyou dunno. Youâd be closer to him, maybe.
But you couldnât. Because you werenât Steve Rogers. And you knew that from the start, but you had to try. You tried. And it wasnât working. He made it seem so easy when he did it for you. Clearly you didnât give him enough credit for dealing with all your shit on top of his own.
âDoll.â You didnât stop walking, needing to get outside for some fresh air. âDoll, hold on. Wait a minute.â
He grabbed your arm as you made it outside, spinning you to face him. âYou didnât tell me.â You spoke quietly, your voice fragile as you stared at him, confusion and hurt in your eyes. Were you really that bad at doing your job? Did you really already fail him? He asked you to do one thingâŠ
âI didnâtâŠI didnât want you to deal with my problems.â You opened your mouth, but he shook his head, holding your face between his hands. âIâm not stupid, Y/N. I know somethingâs going on with you. Youâre good at hiding your nightmares at night, but Iâm better. Youâre jumpier than usual. Quieter. Every time Wandaâs brought up, you turn away. And the other day? On the truck? You froze. I was watching, doll. It was just a second, but you froze. You never freeze.â
âItâs not your job to worry about me, Buck-â
He frowned, tilting his head. âNot my job? Arenât we friends? Isnât that what friends do? Or am I just a job to you? I know you promised him to look after me. Is that all I am to you? A responsibility?â
You shook your head vigorously, holding onto his wrists. âNo. No, Bucky, I just-â
âDo you think he was wrong about me?â
Salty diamonds ran down your cheeks as you clenched your eyes shut and shook your head. âNo.â
âDid you ever believe in me? Did you ever care or was it all just because Steve? Is Steve the only reason you tolerate me?â
âDonât say that. God, please donât say that.â You begged quietly, meeting his gaze again. Every beautiful detail was laced with devastation, eyes imploring her to make him feel better. âOf course I believe in you. I have since Wakanda, you know that. Yes, okay, maybe Steve is why I helped you at first, but-butâŠI care about you, James. So much so that it hurts sometimes. He wasnât wrong about you. Or Sammy. You both mean so much to me. Okay?â
You watched his Adamâs Apple bob as he swallowed thickly, nodding slightly. You both simultaneously moved to get closer, him pulling you while you stepped into his chest, arms around his waist. His arms were tight around your shoulder, holding you just as firm as the kiss he planted on your forehead.
Sam came out, planting himself besides you as you pulled away, Bucky wiping your eyes. âI feel better.â He huffed out sarcastically, making you smack him in the arm. âOw! Yeesh. Women these days.â
The sudden siren of one of the parked police cars made the three of you look over, spotting Walker and Hoskins. You groaned. âDid he see that?â
âHey,â Bucky caught your jaw between his fingers, shaking his head. âWho cares? Itâs between us and us only. Right?â You nodded, making him kiss your forehead again, a whisper of âattagirlâ against your skin. You hadnât heard that from him in a while.
âGentlemen!â Walker waved them over, nodding at you. âAnd lady.â The three of you reluctantly walked over, Bucky going to lean on the police car Walker and Hoskins were near and you hopped up to sit on the hood of the police car across from them, Sam besides you.
You got information from Walker, who was once again trying to get you to work with him, but Sam summed it up nicely, explaining that the three of you didnât have to follow the rules he did. You started to leave, Bucky tucking you under his arms once you slid off the car, when Walker stopped you once more.
âA word of advice, then. Stay the hell out of my way.â
You grumbled under your breath as the faker and his lapdog walked off. âIâm gonna kill him.â You vowed as the three of you started in the other direction. âI swear to God, Iâm gonna rip that shield off his back and use it to beat him in that stupid face of his-â
âDown, girl.â Sam jested, flicking your ear. âWe need a game plan. Whatâre we thinking?â
Your eyes narrowed as Bucky piped up, talking about the Isaiah character - who you still didnât know - before HYDRA entered the equation.
âAbsolutely not.â You shook your head, tugging his arm to make him stop once he mentioned Siberia. âDo you remember Siberia? Because if youâre actually suggesting what I think youâre suggesting, we remember Siberia very differently.â
âHeâs our best bet-â
âSo youâre just going to go sit in a room with this guy?â
Bucky scrunched up his nose. âYe-yesâŠâ
A beat of silence passed before Sam gave his stamp of approval, but you still disagreed. âThereâs no way thisâll end well and I refuse to let you-â
You found your face between Buckyâs hands again. You really wished heâd stop doing that and just ask for your attention. You didnât mean that, of course. Youâd be held by him every second of every day if you could. âDonât you trust me, doll?â
You licked your lips, looking around the darkened street. This was not a good idea. A bad plan - a terrible plan, really - but, unfortunately, it was the only one you had. âDammit. Iâve got a really bad feeling about this.â You finally sighed, running a hand through your hair after Bucky let go of you, his eyebrow quirking.
âIs that a yes?â
Sam nodded. âWeâre gonna go see Zemo.â
You tugged Buckyâs hand when he nodded back and went to walk after Sam, who started walking around the corner, making him stop. âAnd yes. I do trust you. With everything I have, Buckaroo.â
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Can you write something where when the reader sees Aaron for the first time in the fbi vest she canât take her eyes off of him. When he confronts her about it, she denies it so he decides to send her filthy texts the whole flight home. When they land he tells the reader to get in his car. When they get to his place to go at it, she asks if heâll wear the vest. He does. DomHotch!!! đ xoxo
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Aaron Hotchner x Reader
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âAlright Reid and JJ stay here, look over anything else we might have missed. Coronate the media and send back up.â My eyes snapped over to Aaron.Â
âSir what about me.âÂ
âYouâre coming with, your vest is in the car. Everybody lets go.âÂ
I was confused at the request but I followed the order.Â
I never went into the field, I had experience from my previous job before the BAU. But Aaron never let me go with him to make an arrest which I never minded. Iâd much rather work from the precinct or do an interrogation
I had my gun with me at all times but have I ever used it in an actual situation... With the BAU never once but with my other job yes. When Aaron and I got together he never changed a thing about how he acted towards me. It was always business but he did still worry about me.Â
Going after regular criminals is definitely less nerve racking than serial killers.Â
âHotch sirâ, I stopped him before he left the room. âAre you about me going with you? I can stay here, Itâs not a problem.âÂ
âY/n youâll be fine. Strauss called earlier about how you never do anything, how I âbenched youâ. She wanted to see what you could do.âÂ
âBut--â I tried to speak but JJ and Reid left the room and we needed to move over. âLook y/n we need to go.. come on.â He lightly tugged on my arm to follow him. I followed him as the rest of the team left the building.Â
We climbed into the SUVs. The whole way there Hotch gave the orders that the ubsub was in the house, he didnât plan on coming out alive. Morgan, Hotch, and I got into one car while Emily and Rossi went into the other.Â
Aaron and Morgan could feel the nervousness radiating off of my body. Morgan turned around in the passenger seat, âBaby you gotta calm down.âÂ
I scoffed a dry laugh, âEasy for you to say, you guys do this all the time.âÂ
Aaron kept his hands on the wheel and focused on the road. âYouâve done this before nothings different.âÂ
âYeah it is, I worked with those people in the field before and I trusted them. That's not me saying I don't trust you guys because I do... Itâs just different.âÂ
âJust follow us youâll be okay.â Aaron spoke and turned the corner on the street and my view revealed lines of cop cars and flashing lights. Hotch pulled over and we all got out of the car, I walked behind him and go to the back.Â
He opens the trunk and pulls out three vests. I froze a little, being intimidated. I watched as Morgan and Aaron put on their vests. My eyes drifted over to Aaron, it fit his body perfectly. The navy blues kevlar fibers and white letters splayed across his chest.Â
âSweetheart, my eyes are up here.â He said teasingly after Derek had walked away. âSorryâ, he just smirked and helped me tighten my vest before we made our way over to the officers.Â
âAre you ready?â Aaron and I walked over the house.Â
âTotally.â I wasnât ready, being too distracted.
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On the jet Aaron sat in the back with his face buried in the files that scattered the table. I was with Emily and Derek on the opposite end. They were talking about Reid and teasing him while he was sitting in the seat next to us.Â
While they were cracking jokes I couldnât stop thinking about how Aaron looked in that fucking vest. He was already built but with the extra padding he just sparked that part of me.
My eyes drifted over to him working, he pen glided across the paper and his hands--
Zoning out I didnât realize that he had noticed. Then my phone vibrated on the table.Â
Aaron - Are you okay there
Me - Yeah I'm fine... why
Aaron - Youâre staring
Me - No I wasnât just thinking about you
Aaron - Me? You know what I think
Aaron - I think you couldnât stop thinking about how I looked earlier. Your mouth was practically water at the sight of me. I bet you just wanted to get on your knees right there in front of everyone
I glanced up in surprise at Aaron and his files were closed and he was looking at me with a smug grin.Â
Aaron - Youâre imagining it now arenât you
I was honestly, the things Iâd do for that man. I clenched my thighs together and hoped no one noticed.Â
I didnât want to react but he was already getting a rise out of me.Â
Aaron - You want to be on your back and have me over you with my cock buried so far, just wait baby
My eyes widened a bit and I put my phone back down. There was no hiding how flush my face was. âWho keeps blowing up your phone.âÂ
âDonât worry about itâ, i said too quickly and Emily reached over the table to grab my phone. I lunged over and snatched it back before she had the opportunity to search through it.Â
âOkay...â JJ said after being included in the conversation. Aaron saw how I had excused myself from the table and went to the bathroom.Â
When the plane landed we all exited and headed back to the office for the remainder of our things.Â
After everyone left I joined them, going into my car from the garage, I heard a car behind me. Aaron pulled up and rolled down the window, âMy place, now.âÂ
He didnât say much after that, I climbed into the car and he reached a hand over to my thigh. His finger rubbed my thigh before the tipped of his fingers brushing, dangerously close to my core.Â
I just glanced over at him, he was still in his suit. His shirt was so tight over his chest you could see the definition.Â
We crossed the threshold of his house and not a second went by before my back was slammed against the wall. Â
âAaronâ, he shook his head slightly. âI didnât say you could speak.âÂ
âPlease, I just-- I wanna ask you something.âÂ
âYou get one question before I have my way with youâ, his hand traveled down my neck and to hip, keeping me on the wall. âWear it.â He raised his eyebrows.Â
âThe vest.âÂ
âI knew you couldnât stop those thoughts from going into your pretty little head, you want me to wear a government issued bulletproof vest so you can have your fantasy.â I whimpered, I really wanted it.Â
âI want you stripped and on the bed when I come back.â He released me and stepped away going out to the car. I went up stairs and in the bedroom shedding my clothes on the way. I kneeled on the bed and just waited and waited.Â
When he didnât return the arousal between my leg was already dripping down onto the bed, slipping a hand down I made slow circles on my clit.Â
I was too focused on the sensation that I didnât hear his heavy footsteps approaching the room. He watched with a smirk on his lips as I arched my back on the duvet. I got closer and closer to finishing and he could tell.Â
My eyes snapped open and he was hovering over me, âI tell you when to cum... understand.â his voice was dark and coated with lust. I didnât expect him, I thought Iâd be able to hear.
I nervously nodded my head. âTsk, are you going to be a good girl for me.âÂ
âYes sir.âÂ
âI donât think you are, needy little sluts always say whatever they need to get their way. That sounds like you doesnât it?â He put a finger under my chin and lifted my gaze to match his.Â
âNo sir I promise.âÂ
âWeâll see wonât we, step off and get on your knees.â He pushed himself off the bed and I got the full view of him. It was like I saw him for the first time again, he looked so fucking good.Â
I didnât take a second thought before getting low in front of him, patiently waiting for him. Aaron was going to either take his time or be indescribably rough to get the message through.Â
His hands went to his belt and took it off moving around me and buckling my hands together behind my back.Â
Stepping in front of me he unzipped his pants and pulled them down enough to pull himself out. âOpenâ, he ordered before my jaw slacked as he slid his cock into my mouth.Â
He looked down at me and my eyes met his. A groan escaped his lips before he took the motion. Sliding a hand behind my head and into my hair, he gripped a portion.
Tilting my head up a bit more so he could thrust in and out easier. âThis is what you wanted right-- fuck little girl youâre doing that so well.â He gritted out using my mouth as a tool for his own pleasure.Â
He was right, this is what I wanted, just the feeling of him inside my mouth was enough to make me cum. I wished heâd let me touch him, to just get a better grip and grab his thighs to stable myself.Â
âI might actually let you finish tonight if you keep this up.â With the limited motion I had I flattened my tongue along his shaft and took him in as deep as I could before it was too much.Â
I gagged around him, no matter how far we were into the scene he still cared about how I was feeling. Aaron pulled out and loosened my hair in his fingers, âYou gotta breathe.âÂ
There was a string of saliva moving down my face as I swallowed and collected myself. "Are you okay?", I nodded softly.
"Do you want to keep going?" He gave me an out, he didn't want me to feel obligated to keep going just because of him. Aaron wanted me to feel comfortable.
"Yes", he resumed what he wanted. Opening my mouth back up.Â
His cock moved slower to give me extra time to get okay again. When I moaned around him he got the message.
Pushing his hips into my face again and I got that feeling of my jaw being stretched.Â
He groaned and his dick twitched and I knew he was close, I wanted him to finish but he pulled back.Â
When he got a hold of my waist he tossed me on the bed. Flipping me over roughly my face pressed into the pillows below me. Aaron manhandled me like I was a ragdoll. âWell would you look at that, you really do get off when you act like the whore you areâ There a small wet spot on the floor.Â
My face was flushed and I caught my breath. Feeling the bed dip he adjusted my hips into the air. âFuckâ, I muttered my breath.Â
âWhat was that.â I didnât answer and he didnât like that.Â
His hand traveled over my curve of my spine and Aaron placed a slap onto my ass. Recovering he slammed himself into me and I jerked forwards. Letting out an embarrassingly loud moan I bit my lip and tried to hold them in.
âNow donât do that now, I wanna. hear. you.â He every word he pumped in. I whimpered, getting the relief that had been building a few hours earlier. He grazed my g-spot deliciously and snaked a hand to my clit.Â
âOh god... fuck.â Leaning onto me his other hand wrapped around my neck and lifted me flush against his chest. I felt the kevlar on my back and it scratched my sensitive skin.Â
His fingers tightened around my throat and squeezed. My vision went hazed and I rested my head back onto his shoulder. My back arched and I got every sensation I could.Â
We locked eyes and he captured my lips in his, he slid his tongue over mine and claimed dominance.Â
âDoes the little bitch deserve to cum tonight.â He quickened his thrusts and I jolted. âDaddy please.â I clenched around him and I watched as he tossed his head back. I was already so close, and he knew it.Â
âSir can I cum.âÂ
âNot yet.â I could barely hold it, his pace on my clit was too much to handle. I choked out, âAaron please.âÂ
âGo ahead baby.â Releasing the tension that was building was like breaking a dam. I came around him and I felt him pulse. My orgasm brought him over the edge and he spilled inside of me.Â
I fell limp and he let me go, my pulse calmed as I came back to reality. He undid my restraints and I automatically pulled him on me, my lips met his.
âCome hereâ, he whispered against my lips and he helped me stand as my knees buckled. I couldnât walk or stand on my own, âFuck Aaron.â I chuckled and he brought me to the bathroom, cleaning up.Â
I watched as he shed his clothes, to lazy to actually put them in the hamper they laid on the floor. âIt was hot in that.â He said when he felt the cool air on his skin.Â
I smirked and kissed him again, âand it was so fucking worth it.âÂ
âGlad you enjoyed it."
Getting up I made my way back into the bedroom and settled under the thin sheet. I laid my head down, Aaron had gone into the kitchen to get me some water.
When he came back he smiled at the sight, I was already sleeping so he placed the glass next to me on the table.
He got into bed, curling up with me. My sleeping body flipped over and automatically clung on to him. Putting my head on his chest, his arm moved around me and his hand rested on my hip.
Aaron kissed my temple and he fell asleep soundly.
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Thirty seconds: Cameras & Caramel
Bakugou x âmodelâ reader
Warnings: cursing, sfw, mentioning of body type
Quirk: Stopping time ( limited time and limited amount of people)
Summary: When your roommate kinda pushes fate at your doorstep you end up in bed with Bakugou. That wouldnât be so bad, except for the pervy director, the spotlights and the fact that you are definitely not used to model. Atleast you can make sure you get your 30 seconds of peace....
Art by : Chocalicia
Bakugou hated these types of things. He knew that being a hero on the rise meant that he had to grow his fanbase. He HAD to be known. He had to show up at random places, on billboards, in magazines and on tv. Not just for the live broadcastings if his fights, but also in random commercials.
He hated those commercials most. With magazines it was just a picture, a second of pretending. With commercials you had to pretend for longer. Professional models were at least professional about it, but those aspiring ones were trying so hard to get more out of the shoot than just a paycheck. They probably went into the shoot just for him. It would be a lie if he never ended up next to a stranger because of that. He had a busy schedule and sometimes he was touch starved. Those moments were the only moments his âworkâ and private life were combined. The rare private life he had.
You on the other hand had no idea what you were up to. You never wanted to be a model, so you werenât. You just happened to be in the wrong place at the wrong time. When searching for a âplus-sizedâ model in the middle of Tokyo you -a foreigner- stood out and when asked for a one time job, you had politely declined until your roommate had said: âYou are here for that once in a lifetime moment, get out of your comfort zone, fuck the insecurities and experience that momentâ. So here you were. Wearing a sleeveless top and black sleeping shorts. Laying in a fake bed, on a fake set, bright spotlight hurting you eyes and with a blanket only covering your ass and barely covering your boobs (which looked nude bc of the illusion). Since your friend pushed you to do this, she was the one who did all the talking. You just knew that you were supposed to lay like this, act shocked by your male counterpart and needed to smell his perfume. Something about âComforting and sexy.â It was a stupid catchphrase. You had been living in Japan for a couple months, studying quirks.... you had only chosen that major, because of your own struggle with your quirk and had no real goal with the study, but the chance to finish up the course in Japan was something you couldnât pass up. Since Japan was the country with the most development of quirks, it was the perfect choice. You worked a part-time job as a barista on the side and you couldnât complain. But when you saw him you definitely wanted to complain. The first thing you noticed was the spiky blond hair, then his red piercing eyes and since you didnât want him to catch you staring at his abs, you decided to use your quirks. The room was filled with eight people including the two of you so it wasnât that difficult to do. And so you just paused everyone. You knew that you could only keep it up for thirty seconds at most, but in those seconds you could take a good look at him. At the bored expression he had, the way he was only wearing low hanging jeans and those rock-hard abs. You had barely fifteen seconds left to just readjust yourself one last time, trying to ignore your insecurities and give yourself the ultimate poker face, you laid in the position. Time went back on an nobody seemed to have noticed the missing seconds. Bakugou definitely looked slightly confused, which didnât stop him from walking towards you and yelling to no one in particular: âLetâs get this shit over with, I have things to do.â He didnât even acknowledge you. âOkay letâs get this thing right in the first take. Bakugou you just came home from a long patrol, you walk over to your s/o who is all curled up in bed and you give her a kiss on her cheek, she wakes up smelling your neck and realizes that you still smell like our cologne. She pulls you towards her and then itâs CUT, since we need to keep this safe for work right? We will film the solo clips of you after this scene. Ready? ACTION.â
Bakugou walked towards you. His face looked kind, maybe even loving in some cocky way though. Confidence was more the right word. You quickly close your eyes knowing you have to be âasleepâ. 20 seconds later your eyes still haven't opened up, Bakugou was supposed to kiss you awake right? âDUMBASS WHY ARENâT YOU DOING YOUR DAMN JOB.â You couldnât even respond, he scared you with the way he talked, of course you had heard of him. The hero with the terrible temper, but still experiencing it first-hand kinda sucked. âI... I... I didnât....â The director cut you off. âCUT, letâs try it again.â Bakugou had already gone back to reshoot the scene. âACTION.â He walked towards you again. This time you knew the camera would only focus on your face when he âkissedâ your cheeks, which he wasnât planning on actually doing. You didnât know whether it was him being respectful or him hating you, but it really annoyed you so you decided to give him a little payback. As he faked kissing your cheek you decided to use your quirk and pause only him. You didnât touch his lips. You did however smell him. He didnât smell like that disgusting cologne. He smelled like sweat and something burning. A light caramel smell. It was intoxicating. You had forgotten that you had only paused him, so the rest of the crew saw Bakugou standing over you with pouted lips not moving at all. When you realized that you were still pausing him, you quickly released the quirk and here he was all flustered, confused and definitely annoyed at himself for losing his cool. You felt a little guilty, but on the other side this was his payback. No one said anything about the rising heroâs pouted lips though, not wanting to trigger the heroâs anger. âLetâs just try it once more. Action.â Before Bakugou walked back to his starting point he whispered â err... sorry for acting so creepy. I... I donât know whatâs gotten into me.â Now you DID feel horrible. You had to make sure this take worked out.
He walked over to you and actually kissed your cheek. You let go of all your insecurities, âOpenedâ your eyes and you smiled at him with a smile full of love (mostly due to the fact that you were still intoxicated by his smell and of course his good looks, and maybe that apology did kinda make him seem... likeable), you once again smelled his neck which was far from punishment and the rest was just natural to you. Pushing your hands over to his neck and pulling him in felt amazing. Seeing him lay next to you felt even better and even he couldnât help but to give you a tiny smile. Probably because you were radiating so much happiness. (Which was definitely not because you were such a good actor). âCUT. This was perfect, there is just one little thing I want to add, but give me two minutes before I explain. You can stay in your positions.â Bakugou looked at you. Just now noticing the way you looked naked. âAre you comfortable like that?â He asked. âErr... not really, but probably because this is my first time doing this.â He clicked his tongue âTsk youâre not a model?â You shrugged âNope just a regular barista whoâs roommate forced her to end up in this weird commercial for err... cologne right?â Bakugou chuckled, âYeah goddamn awful cologne.â You couldnât help but agree. âThey made me smell a tester, you definitely didnât smell like that, fortunately.â He raised his eyebrow âHow did I smell then, extra?â But his âextraâ didnât sound as threatening as it usually sounded in the fight videos on his Youtube page. It sounded more like a dare, but before you got the chance to explain the director already started explaining his new idea. â I know we are not supposed to do anything not safe for work, but sex still sells, so we will just plant a seed.â He couldnât help but give you a pervy look that made you feel sick to your stomach. âOnly thing you two should do is end up under the covers, that's it. Action!â He continued.
âWHAT THE HELL, DO YOU EXPECT ME TO GO UNDER THE BLANKET WITH HER?!â Bakugou screamed. It wasnât supposed to hurt. You barely knew him, but still hearing him get so angry for having to look at you and sharing that small space with him, definitely did hurt.
âBakugou, why are you being difficult?â The director sighed. â Look how you made her look, this girl has never been on a set and you already made her lay nude under a blanket, expecting me to go under that blanket. Iâm not a FUCKING PERVERT GODDAMIT!â He was looking so angry, but you had to tell him. You slightly tapped his shoulder. âWHAT?!â He screamed. âErr... Bakugou...â You lifted up the blanket. âIâm not naked.â You couldnât help but notice the quick scan he gave your body. You couldnât blame him, especially since you had done the same. âOh well, still you shouldnât do anything you donât feel comfortable with.â You gave him a tiny smile. âDonât worry I trust you, itâs only for a second right.â He couldnât help it. You intrigued him. The way you made him forget what he was doing (literally), the way you were sooo out of place, but still seemed to enjoy your time here and the way you just talked to him. âAlright letâs go then ACTION.â And the crew just knew Bakugouâs âactionâ was just as valid as the directorâs.
You continued with the loving looks. Bakugouâs smile was a lot bigger than before, âHe can really act.â You thought to yourself. And while you were still holding his neck in your arms, he grabbed the blanket and put it over the two of you in a swift move. Now you were surrounded in the dark. The only thing you could see were his red eyes. âThanks for making me feel at ease today Bakugou. It was nice of you being cautious whether you should kiss me. Err... I mean kiss my cheek.â You stammered quickly, knowing that this conversation could only take a few seconds. â No problem Dumbass. Iâm still cautious though..â his face was closer now. âAbout what?â You let out. Feeling butterflies in your stomach, feeling your breathing stagger and your hands getting sweaty. âAbout whether I should kiss you right now. Youâre probably too nervous with everyone around right?â How had he known that you wanted to kiss him? You felt humiliated, but still you had a ace up your sleeve. âDonât worry about that, I already paused everyone.â You said with a smirk. âWAIT A MINUTE, you DAMN extra were the one to pau...â but he couldnât finish his sentence. You had already put your lips on his and he had already forgotten all about his anger. That day you found out that you could use your quirk to a much longer extent than 30 seconds.
Authors note: Just a quick story I came up with. Hope you enjoyed it and would appreciate a reblogđ
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Someone's Someone | Bang Chan Oneshot (2)
â Genre : CEO AU, Soulmate AU, Fluff
â Pairings : Bang Chan X Reader
â Word Count : 5.5k words
â Synopsis : We all just wanna be someone's someone that we can't live without. At this time, Chan was looking for his. And unexpectedly, he was already tied down to someone.
â Warnings : Explicit Language
â Parts : 1 , 2
" Let's just part ways here, " Saying those words felt a bit disheartening at some point, yet you chose to disregard it.
You walked forwards, while Chan stayed in his position, wearing his coat and fixing his tie. Although, something stopped you. As in you couldn't go forwards as much as you force to. Well when you did force yourself, it only tugged Chan towards you. Turning around, he was already eyeing you. " What was that for?! "
Glaring at the thread, you thought out loud, " Is this string telling me, it can only stretch itself approximately at 7 meters?! "
Twin buildings towered above you two, heavy work's shouting for the both of you. You suddenly feel so small when you found out who this dude was in the company. Either way, you stepped inside the building next to him as if you're supposed to be. You don't have any other choice though unless you wanna be dragged by this buff guy and look like a fool rolling around since the thread is invisible to the public.
" I'm surprised that you don't know who I am, " He stated as you entered the elevator with him. You could tell how much of a fuss this is already when you walked in those doors alongside him.
" Does it really have to be my fault when I only started working here a few months ago, Mr. CEO? " He responded with a chuckle.
" It's Mr. Bang, well, at work. You can call me Chan when we're not. I don't like such formality and bringing work on my rest hours. "
" Oh, so you're that Mr. Bang. The one I hid from last night, " You whispered the last sentence.
" Pardon? " The elevator chimed as you reached your floor, opening its doors swiftly.
" It's.. It's nothing, " You stuttered and hastily stepped out of the elevator while Chan followed. " Why are we on my floor again? Isn't yours like, at the very top floor just to have that stunning view of the world or something? "
" Seems like some fanfiction you got there for me, " He chuckled first while you lowered your head in embarrassment. " But no, my office is at the opposite building, about two or three levels above yours which means it's the middle floor. In addition to that, I have to discuss matters with your boss due to some adjustments that we have over here, " He brought up his thumb to your view, talking about the red string. " Just hand over the documents then wait for me outside by the door, copy? " Chan explained as he stopped in front of a dark oak door, knocking on it three times.
" Adjustments? What- "
" Come in, " The voice on the other side of the door called out. You could've had a short session of hesitations first but this Bang Chan just opens the door widely and gives off such superior vibes that gave you the chills - like he should 'cause he's the CEO, he freaking owns the place. You did wonder why you haven't been fired yet after every informalities you've shown to him. What a great first impression you got there for a Chief Executive Officer, you're never gonna get a promotion to get out of this trashy position.
The surprising entrance of the uninvited and unexpected guest caught your boss off-guard. " Ah! G-Good morning, Mr. Bang! " Ms. Kang frantically stood up and bowed, her phone slipping off of her hands and onto the desk. Looking up, she saw you behind Chan, your hand fidgeting around the strap of your bag while head held down. " And Ms... (Y/N)? " She questioned as she averted her eyes back to Chan.
" Pardon me although I won't be here for long, I'm only handing you the documents like you instructed, Ms. Kang. " You said while handing her the documents. She took a quick scan on it before she gestured you to leave. Following Chan's instructions, you wait by the door as soon as you've shut it. Trying your best to not let curiosity get the best of you and eavesdrop, you distracted yourself by scrolling through your phone and jamming to some Monsta X's songs.
" May I ask what business brought you here to my office? "
" I'd like to compromise. "
It wasn't long that you've thought about getting fired and promotions, not even hours had passed.
Yet here you are, promoted and working as the CEO's assistant on that very day like it's the only choice. Standing on the polished marble floors, opposite side of the building, in his high-class office. It was spacious enough to fit two office desks and a lounge (probably for coffee breaks or small meetings) yet grand-looking with the accent walls and chandelier. The smell of lavender and the nice fluorescent glow it had made it better. Speaking of glow, you suddenly missed Kim Seungmin, the only co-worker friend you got. His bright presence who would constantly bother you from time to time during work hours. You can't really pinpoint whether he is an angel or demon with that fact because most likely you're the one being scolded instead of him. He better be jealous by the time he finds out you're now a CEO's Assistant.
" Ms. Kang got what she wished for in exchange for you getting the 2nd best achievable seat in the company, " Chan continued to elaborate the discussion in the room where it happened as he took a seat, not even bothering to help you fix your new desk if he was a gentleman. Honestly, it's undeniably comfortable being around this man despite you only got acquainted with him this day.
" Seriously? Can't you just promote me with a snap of your fingers? " You whined, arranging all of your things out from the container.
" Maybe if I had the infinity stones, " He first joked and you're not taking it. " Although it's Ms. Kang, there's an exchange for everything with her, " He casually said, looking through his emails with his chin resting on his fist.
" I- " Learn to shut your pesky little mouth, (Y/N). Your own conscience just sealed your mouth from babbling nonsense.
Well, let's think about the bright side. First up, you're promoted, meaning you'll get a way higher pay than before. Second, you're free from Ms. Kang's grasp. Third, Chan seems like a nice and chill boss. If your impression on him will be proven wrong, in any way he couldn't be as worse as Ms. Kang 'cause so far he saved your butt and doesn't mind your attitude.
" Ah, right. You're staying at my house for the meantime, " The book you're trying to place on the top shelf just fell on your head, making you lose your balance and fall to the ground. The loud thump made Chan glance at you, preventing himself from laughing. With your head aching and vision uneven, you tried to process what he said.
" What did you say? " Chan stood up from his chair and made his way towards you.
" I said you're staying at my house until we figure out how to break this thread off, " He answered as he offered a hand for you to take. This simple action made you tense, feeling your face heating up. You gladly took it with weak legs, though you eventually got back to your own feet without his support.
" Yours? Why not mine? I bet it's closer to work than yours. "
" You got a lot of complaints, I hope you know that. "
" No I'm not! Just.. talkative, " You bluffed, pouting. " And fine, your house then. Mine's probably not as presentable as yours anyway. "
This is the red string of fate that kept you two together the whole time, knotted around one another's finger securely. Both of you share the same thoughts while sitting on the couch in the living room of Chan's luxurious penthouse. It did offer extravagant views of Seoul from the top of the apartment, making everything feel so surreal. Could it possibly be malfunctioning? It's supposed to stretch out without limitations as well as it'll be invisible to the naked eye including yours, according to the tales and legends you've heard as a child. Most importantly, how could you break it off?
" Maybe this had to do something with the child, " Chan thought to himself, legs crossed and eyes trained down to the floor. " You cleared our schedule for the week, correct? " He looked towards you, catching your gaze on him.
" Yes, I did. Why? " You couldn't help but be enchanted in his brown eyes. It did look brighter in the sunset than before as the sunlight kissed his face. You wanted to take a closer look at it as to what it may hold within those orbs.
" You know the child back in the train? The one who placed this string of fate around our fingers? " With those words, you were snapped back into reality.
" Child? No? I was asleep, remember? " You looked away and a dog's appearance caught your attention, feeling soft and in 'awe' for it immediately. It had some large brown spots on its white fur, fluffy and has this wavy ears. It looks quite similar to that dog named 'Lady' in "Lady and the Tramp". Noticing that it was really friendly even with strangers, you patted its head lightly as it neared you. Chan witnessed you bond with his partner, smiling. The dog was ecstatic to make new friends with you that it jumped to your lap. Giggling, you ruffled its fur and kissed its forehead. " Seems like you're well loved, baby~ " You cooed, booping its nose.
" She's Berry, by the way. " Chan informed you while watching you play with berry's paws.
" I have to say, she's the cutest, " You flashed a beaming smile at him, eyes forming into crescents. Chan couldn't do anything but smile back, his heart slowly melting at the scene in front of him. You caught the sight of his dimples, which made you think that it's now one of your favorite features he has. If everyday's like this, it'd be such a bliss. Yet you know it'll somehow be just another memory you'll treasure since there will be an end to this.
Back to reality, Chan further tells you the details of the occurrences while you were sleeping. " Ah, right. About the child. If my memory serves me correct, he was blonde headed and had ocean blue-like eyes. He's about 4'6 feet in height and the one who placed this thread around our fingers. When I tried to run after him, he just vanished into thin air. "
" You sure you're not being delusional? " You carefully placed berry down on the couch then made your way to the kitchen.
" Positive. " He replied while petting his companion, who's getting some rest first, before following you. You asked him what his plans were, wrapping your fingers around the refrigerator handle. Opening it, you scanned for available foods due to your stomach being upset in this whole conversation. There's a lot of goods, especially meat. You're assuming that this man eats a lot even when he's on his own. While you were busy with that, Chan thinks of an itinerary for the whole week to get your own lives back. Until, his deep thoughts were interrupted by you.
" How about we eat dinner first so then you can plan properly, hm? You want steak? " You asked, placing the ingredients you need right in front of his view. His eyes just twinkled before you and were already on the raw steak, famished.
" Chris wants steak, please! " Enthusiastically said by Chris, giggling afterwards.
" Steak coming right up just for Chris! " He responded with a small clap, smiling ear to ear. You have to be honest, your first meeting with him is just the worst than any other possible happenings to you two's first meeting. Yet you're satisfied that at least you met him in some way that brought you closer, especially with this string of fate. And today's gonna be a long night for the both of you.
It's very late at night yet your body wouldn't let you rest despite Chan giving you his whole king-sized bed while he sleeps on his divan couch a few meters away, or so you thought he's fast asleep. Although the comforter, mattress, pillows, just the bed as a whole is definitely a 5-star, you can't really sleep easily in someone else's home that you just met. Minutes that felt like hours passed, your eyes were blankly staring at the ceiling. The silence was quite dreadful for you usually at night, which is what you get for watching a fairly ton of horror movies. With a few sessions of hesitations, you decided to break it by calling Chan first. " Psst. Hey Chan. Who designed your house? "
After a short pause, you received a fade sound of shifting and a groan. " A friend of mine. His name's Hyunjin. Why do you ask? " He responded, staring at the same ceiling as you. Arms resting behind his head.
You laid down on your stomach then propped your chin on your hands, facing him. " Is he cute? "
" Seriously, (Y/N)? " He deadpanned. " Also he's already Changbin's anyway so I suggest you stay away unless you want a death wish. "
" Okay, Okay. Chill. I'm just asking, " You rolled your eyes. " I just can't sleep. "
" I already offered you the best bed there is. " Chan looked at your direction and glared.
" It's not that. It's from the fact that I can't fall asleep easily in a stranger's house, that's for sure, " You shifted again in the soft cream cotton bed, letting your body sink. It's like you're laying on a relieving cloud in the heavens.
" We've already passed the stranger level. Let's say we're acquaintances. "
" That doesn't make any such difference especially to my problem but okay. " You pouted.
A long pause surrounded the room, the chills slowly creeping on to your skin. You covered your whole body with the warm comforter, feeling the slumber visiting you little by little. A yawn escaping your lips and eyes getting droopy. Pondering for a second before you let yourself sleep, you took a last glance towards Chan. " Are you cold? " You asked when you saw him without any blankets. He responded with a hum.
" A little bit. But I'll be alright, don't worry, " He yawned, eyes getting heavy as he slowly visited dreamland. " Goodnight, (Y/N). "
However, before you reply, you silently get off the bed when you're sure Chan's too tired to even open his eyes again. Making your way around the room with tippy toes until you found what you needed. You've gone over to his divan couch where he occupies it, placing the blanket you found on top of his and Berry's body, who happen to be sleeping peacefully right next to him. With a weak smile, you finally greeted him back before heading back to the bed and your slumber, " Goodnight Chan, Berry. Sweet dreams. "
Almost afternoon came but none of you decided to rise and shine, except for Berry who's starting to get hungry. It was indeed past her usual breakfast time and she doesn't seem to like the sound of having 'brunch'. So then to get what she needed, she has to be the doggo clock for today.
Berry starts barking the best that she could although it didn't make any much effect, Chan only responded by covering his ears and turning away while you stayed unbothered in your deep sleep. She proceeds to hop back on Chan's couch and licks his face, surely an effective way. He immediately flinched at the wet contact and moved Berry's face away from his, slowly opening his eyes to meet an adorable face smiling at him. " Good morning to you too, " He replied followed with a yawn.
The King Charles Spaniel dog makes her way out of the room after accomplishing step one. While Chan took his time before completely getting out of bed - or rather, couch. With a few stretches and after taking a glance at the time, he made his way out of the room to make breakfast. He glanced towards your sleeping figure. Mumbling a silent, " Thank you. " for what you've done to him in the middle of the night before carefully closing the door behind him.
Before he could even reach the kitchen, a tug from his thumb stopped him in his tracks. Chan forgot that the string of fate only has a length of 7 meters. Sighing, he went back to you and thankfully found you still fast asleep.
Chan sat down on the edge of the bed, your back facing him. Once more, his dark brown eyes gazed upon your sleeping beauty state underneath the sunlight. Once more, he admired this mesmerizing view of you for a good few seconds. He lightly tapped your shoulder, causing you to shift your body to face him while responding with a hum. " Good morning, it's time to rise and shine, " He greeted in his husky morning voice, unknowingly smiling sweetly at you. You replied with a groan, covering your whole body with the comforter. " C'mon, let's go and have breakky. "
" You should've woken me up when breakfast is ready, " You whined, your voice muffled underneath the comforter. Chan chuckled then pulled down the comforter away from your face, " I would've if it wasn't for this string. Now come on. ". You groaned, feeling defeated. Sitting up on the bed, you opened your eyes to meet Chan's face filled with softness and joy. Seeing that first thing in the morning made you smile. It was lovely.
A loud bark from outside of the room interrupted, assuming that Berry's dying of hunger. You instinctively hopped off the bed and hastily made your way to Berry, Chan followed suit. At the kitchen, you both found Berry sitting in front of her food bowl, whimpering. " Oh no, the baby's hungry, " You cooed as you knelt down to pet her. " Chan, you can start making our breakfast, " He followed your instruction, putting on an apron and started preparing you two's breakfast.
" Where's her food, by the way? "
" Are you sure we're gonna find him here? " You questioned, walking a little behind Chan at the same train station yesterday. His strides were big and quite fast which made it difficult for you to keep up at his pace. To the point that your eyes were set on the floor where you have a clear view of you two's feet. You're trying to match his pace but you immediately get worned out and fall behind once more. You guessed it was a CEO thing.
" Well, did you see him in any other places? " You fell silent, continuing to keep up with his pace. The fact that you've been asleep during that time and missed the chance to see who's behind this string of fate hit you. Chan's considered lucky to be awake and witness it.
Chan took a glance behind him to see your reaction, only to find you struggling to match with his settled pace. As soon as he noticed it, he slowed down and matched his pace with yours. Confused, you looked up at him. There were no signs of annoyance or pity on his face, and that made you delighted. What a considerate guy.
It wasn't that long until you both got in the train. The two of you sat down next to each other on a vacant bench and let the train lightly sway you as it starts moving. There was a comfortable silence lingering in the train car as you waited for this child to come into your view. Fortunately, the train's not as crowded as you thought it would be so it would be easier for you to spot the child.
After 3 more stops, you started to get distracted. Your eyes boring onto the view of the opposite window side. Chan kept cautious in his surroundings, still having high hopes of seeing the child's appearance. He didn't realize how much time had already passed and sooner or later, they'll reach the last stop. On the other hand, you slowly began to get drowsy. It's probably because you're sleep deprived for the past few weeks, over-working yourself since that Ms. Kang came into your life. You let your head rest on Chan's shoulder unconsciously which surprised him. With that, Chan first made sure you were comfortable, setting aside the thought of needing to meet the child. He hesitated first, though he did ended up wrapping his arm around you and kept you close to him. Feeling relaxed and secured, you shut your eyes as you slept in his warm embrace.
Chan noticed how much exhausted you are during the time he's been with you. He may not know exactly how tough your previous boss was to you, but it did show a huge impact on you. He thought that you looked so fragile underneath his touch, and he greatly feared the moment you might break. So he made sure to be careful with you. But other than that, he felt the urge - the need or wanting to protect you at that moment. He did questioned why, out of all people, he felt it from and because of you.
Maybe, it's because you looked so exquisite especially under the sunlight. Maybe, it's because he thought you looked adorable and amusing at the same time when you whine or complain. Maybe, it's because you're motherly especially to Berry.
Maybe, he just caught feelings for you. That's why he's questioning " why you? ", it was already love.
Unfortunately for the both of you, you never got to encounter the mysterious child once more. Days have already passed, it has been almost a week. Yet to you and Chan's dismay, no signs of the boy at all. The both of you began to lose hope and just give up. Especially you.
You felt guilty for being the least focused between the two of you, leaving Chan more responsibilities. Find the mystic child and to look out for you. You weren't really in the best shape right now, Chan knew that. You easily got tired, tend to oversleep, and you're hella pale, which you knew well that it isn't so you. " I'm sorry, " You mumbled weakly, your legs crossed and back lean on the couch pillows. Trying to not lay down and sleep more since you did just woke up from a faint.
Hearing this, Chan head over to you then immediately refused. " No, no, no. It's alright, no need to apologize. Just focus on getting better right now, okay? " You replied with a small nod, his warm hands were on yours. That simple touch always made your blood color your cheeks and feel so shy. He went back to the kitchen to continue preparing your dinner as soon as he is satisfied with your answer. In the mean time, Berry made sure to keep you busy and entertained.
While Chan's dicing some pork on a cutting board, he took a glance at the red string wrapped around his thumb. He noticed a small difference to it ever since the first day you both tried to look for the child. It had more of a faint color red, losing its opaqueness. Almost like it's about to vanish which is at some point is a good thing. Though it still has its limitations for length and never broke at your own will. He wondered if you have noticed it as well. What would it be like to be back on your own lives? Chan would be lying if he managed to picture that when he felt disheartened just at the thought of it. He got used to your small complaints, you baby talking and spoiling his dog, needing to be taken care of - when you're unable to do it yourself, even the pocket knife in your bag, that he couldn't imagine you being gone. You did became apart of his life afterall and that left him thinking of making you stay. Chan already figured that he's starting to like you back then on the train, 1st day of hunting down the child.
Which got him pondering. Concluding to a theory that maybe, this string of fate isn't going to vanish. It was only starting to get invisible to your naked eye, just like what you originally thought it would function. But it will always be there no matter what. This string of fate just happens to be more translucent the more you both realize how much you love each other.
Chan tore his gaze away from the string, switching to your pale figure in the living room. Once he knew he could leave the food cooking for a while, he grabbed a glass of water and went back to you. " You like that friend of yours, huh? " You referred to Berry's favorite dog plush. Seeing Chan in your peripheral vision, you locked eyes with him. Beaming him the sweetest smile you could muster which he instantly returned. He offered you the drink and you gladly took it into your hands. Taking a sip, you could feel Chan's eyes burning through your skin. Heat rushes to your face just by that. It's frustrating how you're so easy when he's by your side and only with him. Frequently getting the butterflies, timid, blushy, heart racing, distracted by how ethereal he is, and everything related. And you completely denied your feelings for him.
Chan took a seat beside you, now looking at the pitch black night sky out of his window walls. Those dark brown orbs showed a hint of disappointment. Following his gaze, you figured out the reason. The sky's literally pitch black, starless. As well as the moon being nowhere in sight. The melancholic sight did brought a frown to your face and you couldn't stand it. Looking back at him, you realized that there's no need for you to be crestfallen. In fact, you should be in awe.
It seems like Chan took and held the whole galaxy in his eyes that's why the night sky is empty. His eyes twinkling and shining in the darkness. Many must've envied him for that and it feels so surreal to witness it in by your very own eyes. To have it in front of you. And maybe, just maybe.
You do like Bang Chan.
" Where the hell are you taking me, Chan?! " You quietly panicked as Chan led you to an unfamiliar forest. Just the thought of the crawlies present in places like this made you shudder. " D-Do you really think the child would be brave enough to be here when I am already cowering in fear just looking at this? "
" We're not here for that child, " He chuckled at your state, continuing to walk ahead of you and deeper into the woods. Your wary eyes stayed restless, darting from left to right. " We're here to just relax. " Chan's voice began to echo the farther he is away from you.
You started to get pissed at how he started being inconsiderate and how relaxed he is right now, that's definitely not what you know about him. " What the fuck are you talking about?! So we're just wasting our ti- " The sudden raise of your voice resulted a noise in the forest - sounded like a bird flapping its wings. The sound made you flinch then you picked up your pace to get to him. You tugged onto Chan's jacket which caused him to stop and look back to you. " Chan, please, let's just go home. " You hushly pleaded from behind him, your head hung low in fear and embarrassment.
Sighing, Chan held both of your hands in his. Rubbing circles on it for you to ease up. The both of you still connected by the string of fate, which looks like it's bound to vanish soon. He also noticed how you're short in breath. " Easy, easy. Take deep breaths with me, yeah? " You matched his breathing with yours, eventually loosening up in his warmth like always. You just felt so safe and secure when you're with him. " Let's proceed? I promise you that when we get there, it'll be worth it. " He reassured, never leaving his grip on you.
" Chan.. " You whimpered and Chan instantly hushed you.
" If it makes you feel better, I'll never let go of you, " Oh how you wished that'll last forever. " Sounds good? " You nodded hesitantly.
With that, you let Chan lead you towards his destination. The comfort of his hands wrapped around yours never left on the way just like he promised. It wasn't too long until you saw light at the end of the forest. You could hear faint sounds of waves meeting the seashore and birds singing a melody. The fear you had a while ago slowly washed away as you're nearing the place.
Reaching the light, you witnessed the jaw dropping sight of the beach on the other side of the fence. Like Chan said, it is promising and worth it. He guided you in hopping onto an enormous boulder to get to the other side and you didn't complain, you're too drawn into the beach. In excitement, you went ahead of Chan, letting go of his grasp. Your feet immediately ushering you to the seashore where you could feel the cold water at your toes. As soon as you got here, you felt like you were cleansed. As if the sea took every problem, worries and fears away from you. It was healing and just the thought of it made you smile unknowingly. You never knew you needed this until now, it has been years since the last time you've been this carefree.
On the other hand, Chan's seated at his usual place. Where he could take in the whole view. Now that you were apart of it, everything seemed to set into place for his secret escapade paradise. All felt just right. The way you dance with the waves, moving with the sea, completely letting the rhythm of the water set yourself free. Plus the wind blowing your hair, your face glowing underneath the sun, how blinding your smile was at that moment, he cherished it all. " Perfect with no reasons, " Chan thought out loud as his eyes were trained on you. Unbeknownst to him, it was loud enough for you to hear it clearly.
" Perfect? " You questioned, making your way to his side. His eyes widened, alarmed. Chan looked away without hesitation. The tip of his ears starting to turn red in embarrassment. You sat down next to him, knowing that you'll be bringing some sand in your pockets back home. Noticing his ears, you let out a hearty laugh. " Aww, look at you! "
" I know, I know, " He started, covering his ears. " I'm helpless. "
" Huh? What are you talking about? " You asked while tilting your head to the side in confusion. There was a short pause, only the sound of waves continuously ringing in the area could be heard. As well as the sound of leaves rustling while the wind whispers sweet nothings to it and palm trees swaying from side to side.
" Like- "
" If this is you doubting yourself again, gosh Chan you're not the helpless one between the two of us. " You pointed out with your arms crossed. " You're a CEO of a well known company! Plus, who took care of me? You. Who saved my ass from Ms. Kang? You. Who just comforted me a while ago? You. You are never incapable or weak. If anyone told you otherwise, I- "
" I'm helplessly in love with you is what I meant, (Y/N)! " Chan confessed, now facing you.
Then, the thread in your fingers entirely loosened without any of you knowing.
The two of you locked eyes for a minute. Both surprised by everything, especially you. The wind did whisper something to the two of you, too. Yet it's difficult to figure it out at the moment. Even in broad daylight, his eyes still held the whole galaxy. And you could never let that dim.
" You walked into my life as if you've always lived there, like my heart was a home built just for you, " Chan continued, his hand already searching for yours. Looking down at your now intertwined hands, eyes filled with pure love and adoration. " It fits just like a glo- "
Perfect with no reasons.
Chan was taken by surprise at your sudden answer. You cutted him off, attaching your lips to his. Your free hand finding itself cupping his face. He then passionately responded to the kiss, his arm snaking its way around your waist to keep you close - now that the string of fate is invisible and endless. The kiss resulted you to feel so lightheaded. The softness of his lips brought you to euphoria, everything just felt so right in place. In the end, both of you were left breathless. You couldn't do anything for a few seconds after, keeping your eyes closed with mouth agape of you to try let your mind process what just happened.
You did't need for him to explain or give you anymore reasons why he loves you. The string of fate has always been the answer, reason and explanation to your love. Ever since the beginning, you and Chan are destined to meet regardless of the time, place or circumstances. It may stretch or tangle but nothing could break it and never will. You're one another's someone's someone who you can't live without.
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Snippet of âAwakeâ - First Chapter of âDivergenceâ
Hey, all! Wanted to share a snippet of the first chapter (âAwakeâ) of âDivergenceâ - a fic that will offshoot from âHeavy Metal Lover.â Note that this is basically a whole spoiler for chapter 20 of âHeavy Metal Lover.â If youâre like me and see random stuff saying âDonât click if you havenât read...â and click anyway: Hi! Welcome, chaos lover. If you like this and want to know the context, please feel free to check out the full work on AO3.
âDivergenceâ should be posted within two weeks and will be open to requests for the reader (âLuckyâ) to have different experiences than what she has in the original. This can mean the following:
- AUs
- Re-tellings of certain scenes of the original
- Reader-specific details included in old or new/original scenes (i.e., reader is plus sized, skinny, tall, short, etc.)
- Genderbending of any of the characters
Originally made this Tumblr to share snippets of the stories on...so happy that I could finally do that! If you want to skip writing that was in the story, you can start at âThough sleep pulled at your eyelids...â
Story contains mature elements, swearing, and explicit mention of sex. Please be forewarned.
Looking back, it would only be a wonder that it did not occur sooner.
As soon as you were alone in the bedroom, you took off your shoes and eyed the clothes Heisenberg had provided you from the factory...
...before turning to the tub.
Couldn't hurt to bathe. Love to be clean.Â
That man is coming back up to this bedroom.
This is the point, self.
The logical side of your brain, for once, remained quiet.Â
Though you had clearly lost all sense of sensibility, you at least moved the divider to completely block the tub from any but the most determined of views.Â
The water had been scalding when you got in.
By the time you had bathed and decided that your foolishness had reached its limit, it was stark cold.
"This was stupid," you said. "Fucking stupid. What did I want? Him to join me? This is the universe saying 'Wake the fuck up.'"
Though your fingers were pruned, you dried yourself off and pulled a nightgown from the small cupboard beneath the sink.
Sheer as ever. Fuck's sake. The universe had truly saved you.
Until it hadn't.
Heisenberg rushed into the room like a rocket and you jumped as the door slammed close.
"...you here, Luck?"
"Yeah," you called out. "Um...don't come over here...gotta get dressed real quick."
"...k" called Heisenberg.
Wasting no time, you slid the gown over your body and made sure to fan out the edges as far as they would go.Â
You needed no mirror to see your nipples proudly displayed through the fabric.
Mouthing a 'fuck' for good measure, you frowned.
"Heisenberg?"
"Yes?"
"Do you...do you mind looking away for a second?"
"From you?"
"Yes."
"...are...are you coming out naked?"
"No," you snapped.
An awkward silence greeted you.
"Heisenberg?"
"Huh?"
"You looking away?"
"Oh. Yeah. You're good now."
Peeking from behind the divider, you only saw Heisenberg's back.Â
With more speed than you were familiar with, you bolted to the bed and ducked under the covers.
Once secure beneath the pillowy softness, you breathed a sigh of relief.
"Okay. Itâs safe."
You did not miss how Heisenberg whirled around.
"Oh...fuck...that was fast."
"Yeah," you said absently.
"Trying to set a fucking record?"
"Something like that."
"Mmn. I...gotta get changed."
"Okay."
The two of you stared at the other.
"You trying to get a free show or you gonna cover those peepers?"
"...I figured you would go behind the divider."
"The divider is on your side of the bed."
"Oh," you said dumbly. "Oh. Yeah...wait."
Yanking the pillow from underneath your head, you smashed it onto your face above your mouth and pressed down.
Heisenberg chuckled. "Dramatic as hell."
"Doing what you asked of me."
"...didn't formally ask you to...did I?"
Swallowing found your throat on fire.
"Mmn."
"What was that?"
"Mmn," you repeated.
"Heh...don't go into public speaking, kid."
You frowned at the ceiling and the darkness of your eyes.Â
Instead of speaking, Heisenberg decided to tell you he was done by climbing in the bed beside you. It struck you suddenly that lamps had been placed in the room instead of the candles that the castle was so beset with. But when you removed your pillow, you found yourself met by more muted darkness.
"Sure you okay with this?" asked Heisenberg. "I can fuck off and go into another room. I like to bitch like a drama king, but I don't need anything crazy set up for me."
"Bed is pretty big," you said carelessly. "S'okay. We've been closer."
The chuckle Heisenberg gave was absolutely filthy.
"We have...haven't we?"
The fucking lilt would be the death of you. What a relief it was to blink blindly and stupidly at the man in peace without judgment.Â
"Hey - last time I'm reminding you...what's your one job?"
"Get you out in the morning," you replied.
"Because?"
"Ah...generators...production line...something about a reset..."
"That's my girl. Nighty night, Luck."
"Night, Heis."
A turn. A breath. A feeling that you would never be able to sleep with the man so close that you could feel his body heat radiating from him like a welcome sign.Â
But you awoke.
You awoke often.
You awoke in the middle of the night from a dream you could barely recall and all the images of Alcina at the forefront of your mind.Â
You awoke in Heisenberg's arms and sobbed into his chest as he clung you to him just as sweetly as any of your snowy imaginings.Â
"Fuck you doing awake? No...shh...it's okay...shh...you're alright. I'm here. I've got you."
Though sleep pulled at your eyelids, you nudged your head up to feel the spikes of Heisenberg's scruff. You had to stay awake. Could not return to sleep and Alcina awaiting you with her long talons and even longer legs.
"Nightmare?"
You nodded into his neck.Â
"Mmn. Have those myself...think you can go back to sleep? Don't think it's quite time for me to leave yet if you just wanna yak about it or something."
Swallowing, you exhaled. "Don't wanna go back to sleep."
With a grunt, Heisenberg sat up to leave you curled on the sheets.
"Just checking the time..."
When Heisenberg turned to pull something from the floor, you noticed that your eyes had somewhat adjusted to the dark. Enough so that you saw the loose movements of his arms and realized that he had gone to bed without a shirt.Â
"Fuck...two in the morning..."
"I'm sorry," you said, tensing. But Heisenberg was mumbling and coming back to you with open arms. "Sorry I woke you..."
"S'alright," he said, yawning afterward. "Gotten less sleep and done more stupid things after than make sure the reset doesn't fuck up the factory..."
As he spoke, you could feel one of his hands rubbing up and down your arm a bit too roughly. An awkward and well intended move to comfort you.
"Still...I'm sorry...you need all the sleep you can manage to get. I don't know how much work the whole factory thing will be..."
"Honestly not much as long as I get back in time," he said, hand squeezing your arm for good measure before returning to that same rough rubbing motion. "Could probably even come back here afterwards...heh...that would spook that sixty-foot snake."
You laughed a sleepy laugh and settled further into his grasp.
"Mmn...like a fucking little bunny...cuddling into me and shit..."
"I can stop...pull away..."
Heisenberg's hand stopped rubbing you in favor of clutching you to him.
"Shh...you're talking nonsense. Need some sleep."
"Heis..."
"Shhh..."
"Heis, you can just tell me that you like it when we cuddle."
When he tsked and laid his chin on your head, you smiled. It felt so much like that day at the stronghold.
"Why would I say that? Not in the business of lying to people."
Lying...yes...because what we are doing now is causing you so much distress...
"Well," you said, smiling. "I'll say it then. I like it when we cuddle. Especially in bed. Feels more comfy than cuddling in front of the lycans."
A shiver - as though Heisenberg had been beset by the cold - ran through his body.
"Oof...y'okay?"
"Yeah, yeah..." he said absently. "Uh...actually...we might wanna go to sleep after all..."
"Mmn?"
"Yeah...early morning..."
"You mind if I hold onto you for a while? This...this actually helps from the nightmare."
The only way you knew how to describe Heisenberg in that moment was jittery. His movements were fine on their own but were conducted with such awkward quickness as to be alarming.
When he did not answer you, you looked up at him through the dark.
"What's wrong?" you asked.
A beat of silence and then another.
"Nothing's wrong." Quick words to match his quick movement.
"Heisenberg..."
"It's Heis."
"...you...Heis...something isn't right. Just talk to me. In English, preferably."
What you could only assume was a curse in German fell from his lips.
"I...fuck's sake, buttercup...I don't know how to...if you...this was such a bad idea...so fucking STUPID."
"What?" You paused, gathering enough evidence from his huff. "Sleeping together?"
"Yes."
"It was your idea."
"I FUCKING KNOW THAT, OKAY?" he hissed. "Just...I thought...earlier...it made more sense...this made more sense..."
"Glad something did because I am completely and utterly confused," you admitted.Â
"You're confused? You started flirting with me." Heisenberg grumbled something low and rough. "Fucking gave me ideas...false hope...so I thought...guh I'm such a fucking idiot..."
Hope began to fuel you too. Fuel you and feed into the most terrible of terrific ideas.
"Are you...whatever you're trying to say...I was flirting with you. That wasn't false. Honestly...I was in the bathtub just moments before you came in hoping you would join me."
"...you what now?"
You could not help but laugh. The fact that you could not see Heisenberg's expressive face only added to the hilarity as you imagined a hundred different emotions running through that scarred skin.
"I took a bath...a long one...hoping that you would come up here in the middle of it and offer to join me...figured one thing could lead into another and the bed was here anyway..."
The pauses in between Heisenberg's voice could only endear you to him. He seemed every bit lost for words.Â
"You...are you talking about...what are you talking about?"
"Sleeping with you," you supplied with a shrug. "What are you talking about?"
"Sleeping...you...ah...I wasn't...I wasn't mistaken? Shit...I...I may or may not have a fucking stiffy over here...because the cuddling is...something you enjoy so much."
"Oh?" you purred. The chance of escaping in the delights of Heisenbergâs body made your body positively teem with anticipation. But you could not forget your own actions...the last time you had seen him in such a vulnerable state. Losing some confidence, you glanced at the darkness of the bed instead of his body. "Umm...I want to touch you...want to...would it be okay if I touched you?"
"Yeah...course. You've touched me before."
"No...I mean...is it...fuck...can I jack you off?"
For a long while, Heisenberg said nothing.
The next thing you heard was a rattling spit.
"OUCH GODDAMN MOTHERFUCKER!" he whispered.
"What's wrong?"
"Pinched myself."
"You...why are you pinching yourself?"
"Because I'm clearly fucking awake but clearly dreaming at the same time because yes, I would enjoy that very much. Please. And thank you."
"Are...are you sure?"
Heisenberg's hand came down heavy but without malice on your neck.
"OW!"
"Shit...I was trying to grab your hand."
Providing your hand to his, you hitched a breath when he splayed it against his chest. His heartbeat thudded against your palm. Wrenching your knees upward, you brushed against that heated length between his legs.
"I...um...we should probably talk about boundaries before I do this."
"Huh?"
"Is this...are you okay with me just jacking you off?"
"Just? This is a goddamn holiday. Marking it on the calendar. Nothing little about it."
"Dumbass. That's not what I'm saying," you said, scratching his chest somewhat affectionately to show him that you meant no harm. "Do you...are you wanting anything more? Because I'm on my period...I'm up for it...but it might get messy and I know that's the last mess I want a certain someone finding."
"We...we can do more? More like..." You heard him take in a shaky inhale. "Can we...is like full blown intercourse on the table?"
"Sure...long as you don't call it that again," you said, shaking your head.
Grumbling and tensing his shoulders, Heisenberg whined when you dropped your touch to round one of his nipples.
"What the fuck else am I supposed to call it?"
"Sex. Fucking. Making love," you added jokingly. "Um...ah...you know...I hadn't thought about it, but maybe you genuinely didn't know. German to English...or...ah...Romanian to English. Might not have those words."
"I like making love," he said with certainty in his voice. "Let's do that. Make love."
You had expected him to laugh at that suggestion if he acknowledged it at all. But there he was giddy and practically giggling over the most flowery option he was given.Â
"Okay...are there any places that you don't like being touched?"
"Not that I know of," he admitted. "Are there...is there somewhere I shouldn't touch you?"
"Not necessarily...just...no going down on me this time. Sex is one thing-"
"Making love."
"-us um...us making love is fine, but I don't want to get eaten out while my period is going on. And don't show me your dick after or comment on the blood...just...get rid of it. Please. And...and nothing too crazy to start out with. I'm not a prude, but don't want to be choked or anything harsh like that. Just...vanilla for our first go. Then we can see where things take us."
"Roger that! Heard loud and clear," he said, leaning his face to kiss your forehead. For all the lack of a relationship, Heisenberg was making you feel far much more mushy and cared for than your ex ever had. You let your hand round his stomach slow and soft in response.
"Thank you. We...if you want to, I'll jack you off for a bit before you grab the condom."
"The...I don't have one of those."
That made you freeze.Â
"Not even in this room? Your chambers? If you don't feel like getting up, I can grab them from wherever they are."
Heisenberg went uncharacteristically quiet.
"Heis?"
"None in this room," he said plainly.
"I'm not trying to make you uncomfortable by asking...but...is that typical? You having sex without a condom?"
It worried you. Here you were all too willing to have him fuck you into the mattress while he could be having all sorts of unprotected sex with who knows who in the village. He was attractive - a lord. Anyone with a pair of eyes could easily fall in lust if not love with him.Â
Anyone with ears too...fucking sexy ringmaster voice...
"Not typical, no."
"No? Has it just...been a while?"
"Never."
"Huh?"
"Never made love before."
That sent you sitting up in bed.
"WHAT?"
"What?"
"HEISEN..." you lowered your voice, realizing he was growing tense. "You've never...I don't believe you. Quit joking. Not the time."
"Not joking," he grumbled. "Why would I joke about that?"
"You're just..."
"I'm what?"
"You're you," you said as if it clarified anything at all. "You're a lord in a small town. You have a face of a model. Not...not trying to open old wounds, but you're absolutely gorgeous underneath all those layers..."
"Yeah," he snorted. "Fatass McGee will be strutting the runways any day now."
"Oh my god...you're serious." Lying back down, you brought your hand to the clothed length between his legs. He had grown noticeably more soft since the brush of your knee, but you could feel his cock twitch when you cupped him. "So...no one? Not even foreplay or...what about kissing?"
"...ahhh...nah...none of that either...you're probably the first person to see me naked since I was a little kid...well...maybe a few folks in Constantinople. Got sloshed one time and woke up naked tied to a lamppost. But...other than that...all you."
There seemed to be no end to the surprises that would fall from Heisenberg's mouth. You stared at him - or the inky shadow that was him - and ran teasing fingers up his shaft.
"I uhh...fuck...I'm pretty sure anyone who saw me then is dead by now though," he supplied.
"Heis...you're so fucking ridiculous."Â
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Love and Redemption Review
Overall, I have to say that the story was really good, maybe even better than the popular xianxia romances that came before it like Ten Miles of Peach Blossoms, Love and Destiny, and Ashes of Love. The romance may be comparable to AOL, but as a whole, the plot in L&R was more interesting and cohesive.
****SPOILERS AHEAD FOR LOVE AND REDEMPTION AND OTHER XIANXIA DRAMAS****
Plot
What sets Love and Redemption apart from the other 3 xianxia romances is that Love and Redemption also feels like a quest/adventure story, while also delivering a gut-wrenching, star-crossed romance plot. Whatâs interesting about L&R is that the main focus is on the mortal realm and the FL and MLâs current mortal incarnation, as opposed to the heavenly realm and their immortal identities.
The actions of the mortals have consequences across the 3 realms, as opposed to other xianxia romances that only use the mortal realm as a temporary stage for the leads to fall in love. The other 3 xianxias that I mentioned all opened up in the heavenly/celestial realm first, while the mortal realm was just a brief trial that the leads have to endure before returning to the immortal realm. The moral realm in L&R therefore feels livelier and more eventful, and the mortals have more agency and are not easily influenced by celestial beings. Whenever a celestial being does come down to the mortal realm, their powers are limited and are they are bound by the rules and restrictions of the mortal realm (which means that celestial beings canât use their powers to mess with the emotions and decisions of mortals).Â
The drama opens up with a tournament being held at the FLâs sect and members from all the other sects are arriving for the tournament. When the FL and ML meet, they are on equal footing (well, equal in terms of status as disciples, but not so much in terms of magical prowess). Itâs like when you were in high school and you meet the visiting basketball team from a rival school, and then end up becoming friends with them.
Love and Redemption also takes the audience through a mystery. What is the true immortal identity of the FL? Whatâs her relationship to the Star of Mosha? Is she the saviour or the doomsday harbinger? Does the ML have an immortal identity too? Why do they have the same birthday? The drama keeps us on our toes because we learn about the truth and the history of the characters as theyâre discovering it, as opposed to the other xianxia dramas where there is very little mystery and few plot twists.
Because of this mystery, the drama is tight and well-paced, since a new piece of the puzzle is always being revealed. Just when you thought that the mystery is solved, thereâs a twist, and you realized that the twist was set up from the very beginning of the story, but you just missed it.Â
The story also doesnât stray from the main leads. Yes, there are subplots (as all dramas do), but the subplots here are brief, and they usually relate back to the main leads. Unlike in AOL where the later half of the drama derails and focuses on the two other supporting couples, while the main leads only get about 10 minutes of screen time.Â
The Male Lead - Yu Si Feng
Before starting the drama, I read a lot of comments about how much whump and emotional torture the ML goes through and how much he sacrifices for the FL. I thought this was an exaggeration. I mean, Xufeng in AOL went through a lot of Jin Mi too, (and you could make the same argument for Ye Hua in TMOPB, or Bai Zi Hua in Journey of Flower), so I was a little hesitant about the premise since itâs such an old trope, and I was doubtful that it could top the sacrifice that other MLs have done in other dramas.Â
But reader, boy was I wrong. Yu Si feng is the definition of limitless, unconditional love. I lost count of how many times he almost died for the FL (not including the 9 times she killed him in their previous 9 lives). Heâs spitting up blood and stabbed in nearly every episode. Episodes 37-47 were the hardest to watch because of the escalating chronic angst and misunderstandings between him and Xuan ji that caused irreversible damage to their relationship. Even when she tries to kill him and tells him she regrets having ever known him, he still drags himself back to rescue her. To quote Si feng himself, itâs not a question of whether or not itâs worth it, but itâs a question of whether you are willing to do it. And Si feng is as eager and willing as ever to sacrifice everything for Xuan ji.Â
I mean, even Xufeng in AOL and Ye Hua in TMOPB snapped at the FLâs cruelty and aloofness at one point, but Si feng seems incapable of ever being angry with Xuan ji. Even when Si feng purposely tries to avoid her, itâs out of protection for her, not out of anger for everything sheâs done. Like??? Si feng is impossibly perfect, even by the impossible standards of xianxia.Â
Cheng Yi plays Si feng to a T. He conveys a different type of pain in every crying scene, and so Si feng basically experiences like 59 different types of crushing pain, and you feel it in your bones every time you watch it. The manâs eyes speak volumes.
While it would be easy to say that Cheng Yi carries the drama with his portrayal of Si Feng, the actions of the ML would be meaningless if there were no romantic interest that he was doing this all for. Â
The Female Lead - Chu Xuan Ji
Some people may feel that Xuan ji isnât worth Si fengâs devotion. But, I would argue that the first 37 episodes shows us that she is definitely worth it.Â
Xuan Ji is similar to Jin Mi from AOL in that she is incapable of feeling or understanding love. Because Xuan Ji was born without her 6 senses (and also without a real heart, unbeknownst to the other characters), sheâs naive and juvenile. But despite not having feelings, sheâs still able to care completely about others. She cares about her sister, her father, her sect brothers, and Si Feng. Sheâs fiercely protective of them as they are of her. To the best of her limited abilities, she is devoted to people as much as she can be.Â
Because of her sensory deprivation, Xuan Ji is really curious about the world. She wants to be like everyone else, to feel like everyone else, in hopes of being able to properly reciprocate peopleâs love for her. She envies people who are able to cry because she thinks thatâs an unhindered way of showing love. She regrets not being able to cry when her mother died. Xuan Ji is therefore a self-aware character, unlike Jin Mi, because she knows her shortcomings. She wants to be able to feel, understand, and share pain.Â
As such, sheâs quite an active character because she has this goal of reviving her senses, which has ripple effects for the other characters in the story since they become a part of her journey, whether by choice or by force.Â
Why Si Feng fell for Xuan Ji
Xuan Ji and Si Feng are very opposite characters, and not just because of the obvious difference in their personalities. Si Feng is a boy who feels too much (we later see that he gets his persistent sentimentality from his father), but was taught his whole life to suppress his emotions (I mean, the mask both literally and figuratively prevents him from emoting). Si Feng wants to express his feelings, but cannot.Â
On the other hand, Xuan Ji is allowed to be as expressive as she wants, but she is empty on the inside. Xuan Ji represents everything Si Feng wants to be and is expected to be: free and emotionless.Â
In this mortal incarnation, SF has responsibilities to everyone, from his spirit beast to his sect. Xuan Ji is the only one who doesn't ask or expect anything of him and yet, for someone who can't feel, she's always thinking of him. she stands up for him, she brings him snacks to comfort him when heâs being punished, she helps steal back his mother's hairpin. These are very simple gestures, but they mean the world to him (no one else has done these things for him before, and he doesnât understand why she would unconditionally do these things for him), and that's why he's so quick to risk everything for her. Thus ironically, Si Feng actually learned about unconditional love from Xuan Ji.Â
Heâs never known love, warmth, or friendship in his lonely years growing up in the Lize Palace. And so, when youâre just a 16 year old awkward, hormonal, and introverted teenage boy, itâs easy to fall for a selfless girl who invades your personal space and has no sense of propriety.Â
Why Xuan Ji fell for Si Feng
We see that her love is gradual. She falls in love with him without even realizing sheâs fallen in love. She cares for him as a friend at first. After all, like she said, Si Feng is the first friend sheâs made from outside her sect. But soon, her caring for him surpasses that of what she feels for her sect brothers. Si Feng teaches her about the world, from what different food tastes like, to naming colours. Si Feng doesnât infantilize her like her sect brothers do. Her sect brothers are either dismissive or protective, like Ming yan, but she is able to find a proper confidant in Si Feng who is willing to be patient with her and listen to her.Â
Their 4-year separation when they each undergo training and achieve a boost in their abilities, only made Xuan Jiâs heart grow fonder. She misses Si Feng, and is frustrated to see that things are different between them when they meet again. She doesnât understand why heâs so cold and distant, and all she wants to do is close the distance between them.Â
Itâs a meme that Xuan Ji is the one who wears the pants in the relationship. Sheâs assertive and bold, and I think part of the reason why she fell for Si Feng is because he gives her that space to be best and biggest version of herself, whether in the heavenly realm or in the mortal realm. Sheâs also fascinated by him. A person outside of her sect who has an endearing personality unlike anyone else sheâs seen. He piques her curiosity, and so sheâs drawn to him. Heâs as much as her romantic and sexual awakening as she is his.Â
Itâs apt that their ship name is the combination of their last names âChu Yuâ, which sounds similar to the words ćé, which means âfirst encounterâ. Not only is this drama about capturing the feelings of first love, but Si Feng and Xuan Ji have also had 10 different first encounters because of their 10 reincarnation tribulations.Â
The Romance
Itâs actually quite fun and endearing to watch because both Xuan Ji and Si Feng are playing hard to get, which frustrates the hell out of both of them. Xuan Ji is trying to win back Si Feng and convince him to stay, while Si Feng himself is trying to win Xuan Jiâs heart, and she doesnât even realize it. Theyâre both trying to woo each other, but theyâre both being resistant, intentionally and unintentionally.Â
I have to admit, though, that the first few episodes were slow.Â
There arenât major sparks during the first meeting between the leads. She just falls out of the sky into his arms, and heâs flustered by her sudden appearance and clinginess. The love story didnât feel âepicâ during the the first 4 episodes because it didnât feel like there were any stakes. These were just 2 young disciples from different sects who had a stereotypical meet-cute. It was like watching a high school coming-of-age romcom.Â
Things start to get serious when Si feng is forced to wear the loverâs curse mask, meaning that he cannot love, or else every time heâs hurt by the one he loves, that mask will release a feather to his heart and heâll feel unbearable pain. When all the feathers are released, heâll die. This means that he has to stay away from Xuan Ji, but obviously, the drama canât let that happen, so heâs constantly thrown into situations with her, he canât stay away from her, and he ends up falling for her harder and harder against his will.Â
Xuan Ji trusts Si Feng completely and unconditionally (until episodes 37-47 that is). She is willing to go against her father and sect in order to protect him. Sheâs willing to sacrifice herself to save him. Sheâs willing to go rogue with her powers for him. When no one else trusts him, she does.Â
This makes Xuan Ji a very cathartic character to watch because she isnât frustrating at all. She isnât easily influenced and has her own views. She doesnât share the same prejudiced views as the elder sect leaders. She is willing to disobey if itâs the right thing to do. She immediately clears up misunderstandings, like the one between her and Ming yan. We see her gradually become more mature through her increasing protectiveness over Si Feng.Â
I think because we see this rational and loyal side of Xuan Ji, weâre able to have a higher tolerance for her ignorance and mistakes later in the drama (but only barely).Â
The Reincarnations - What Does it Mean to Love a Soul?
Si Feng fell for Xuan Ji 10 times in the mortal world, not including the very first time he falls for her when they were immortals in the heavenly realm.Â
I explained why I think Si Feng fell for Xuan Ji is this 10th reincarnation, but why did he fall for her in the past 9 lives? In the flashbacks, we see that in each life, Xuan Ji is cruel and heartless, and she still had the same unforgiving and ruthless demeanor as when she was the god of war. Is it because Si Fengâs soul is always going to be automatically attracted to Xuan Jiâs soul?
Because we only see brief glimpses of the past 9 lives (more specifically, we only see the ending of these lives), we donât really know how they met or how Si Feng came to love her in each life. But, I would assume that there was something about Xuan Ji in each of her reincarnations that attracted her to Si Feng and completed him. Also, we know that Xuan Ji is capable of tenderness. As the god of war, she disliked fighting. As Mosha, she cared about Bailing. So, while Xuan Jiâs nature might be violent and cruel, I think that with each life, she learns about love and sincerity. If we assume that the flashbacks of the 9 lives are in order, then it would seem like Xuan Ji becomes more and more affected by Si Fengâs death with each successive lifetime. In the first life, she is completely indifferent to his beheading. but we see that she begins to become affected in the later lives, but tries to shove those emotions aside because theyâre foreign and unfamiliar to her.Â
We get even less context for how Si Feng might have fallen for the god of war in the heavenly realm. We only know that Si Feng was the Jade Emperorâs son, and only gained a celestial anamorphic form after 10, 000 years. His true form is the Golden-feathered bird. Heâs always appearing by the god of warâs side to listen to her vent, but the god of war only sees him as a stray bird who comes by to visit occasionally. Why did he fall for her? Did he empathize with her loneliness? Maybe she was his only friend, like he was her only friend, but she didnât even realize it.Â
We also see that Si feng loves Xuan ji no matter who she is or what form she takes. Her gender doesnât matter to him, and gender was never even an issue in the drama. The drama doesnât give an explanation for why Bailing created a female body for the god of war (besides that he wanted to disguise Moshaâs appearance), but it also doesnât matter. Itâs a non-issue, and I love it. We just need to accept it, because the âwhyâ isnât important.
Xuan Ji has 3 different identities: The Star of Mosha (Luo Hou Ji Do), the god of war, and Xuan Ji the mortal. The god of war and Xuan Ji have the same âsoulâ, and that soul came from the glass of Moshaâs imprisonment lamp, and also from Moshaâs altered corporeal body. So, she is a part of Mosha, but has also become her own entity.Â
To Si Feng, all 3 identities are Xuan Ji. The memories, emotions, and experiences of all the identities are what made Xuan Ji Xuan Ji, and so he loves all of them.Â
But what made Xuan Ji finally crack so that sheâs now able to love Si Feng in this 10th reincarnation? I think it has to do with her upbringing. We see in her previous 9 lives that she had a troubled upbringing filled with scheming and violence. So she was consumed by the darkest side of humanity and Si Feng couldnât pull her out. But in this life, she grew up with an abundance of love, which made her want to learn how to love, which allowed her to open up to Si Feng. In this way, the drama shows that Si Feng alone isnât enough to redeem her, but it took the love of her friends and family to help her grow a heart.Â
The Angst
Okay. So. Si Feng has probably suffered more than any male lead in xianxia history. I think someone said that he has a martyr complex. But, Iâd like to break down the type of angst that are present in dramas.Â
There is angst that is harmless, and there is angst that is damaging to the relationship.Â
Harmless angst is usually angst by external forces. Like parents who donât allow their kids to be together. Like in AOL when Xufeng mistakenly thinks that Jin Mi might be his sister so he canât be with her. In L&R, this kind of external angst happens when Si Feng mistakenly thinks that Xuan Ji likes her 6th sect brother Ming yan. Xuan Ji isnât purposely hurting Si Feng, but itâs an unintentional misunderstanding.Â
Damaging angst is when the couple turns against each other and become enemies. This happened when Jin Mi kills Xufeng and says she never loved him (which technically is true since her heart was re-sealed so she didnât even understand what love was when she said it). In L&R, this happens Xuan Ji sides with her sect and attacks Si Feng when he reveals his demon form. This happens again when they confront each other outside the Lize Palace and she announces that sheâs done with him and breaks ties with him. This happens again when she stabs him, says she regrets having ever known and loved him, and proceeds to try to stab him again. In Love and Redemption, Xuan Ji keeps saying hurtful things to him. Thereâs not just one moment of betrayal, but a constant onslaught of betrayals over 10 episodes that make the relationship feel like itâs entered a point of no return.Â
The masochistic side of me likes love/hate relationships and damaging angst. I grew up with it. TVB dramas have a lot of it. My favourite is the angst in Raymond Lam and Charmain Sheh dramas like Drive of Life and Lethal Weapons of Love and Passion. But despite over 20 years of watching dramas, I was still not prepared for the pain and suffering in Love and Redemption.Â
The good news is that they make up fairly quickly, though some may argue too quickly and easily.Â
What I Enjoyed
Other xianxia romances usually only have 1 mortal reincarnation. This has 10 reincarnations (even if only shown briefly), and I love that. The leads have already had such a rich history together, but they donât remember, and so the romance is about them falling in love all over again in this life, while also slowly remembering the love they had in their previous lifetimes.Â
The world-building was also compelling, and the supporting characters were great. They were the voice of reason and talked sense into the main leads to help move the plot forward. I also liked how the ML and FL each had their own personal relationship with the supporting characters separate from each other. For instance, Ming yan has a childhood friendship with Xuan Ji, but he also develops his own friendship with Si Feng. Wu Ziqi was once Moshaâs helper, and also knew the god of war, but also forms his own friendship with Si Feng. Zi Hu is also friends with both Xuan Ji and Si Feng. Having separate friendships with the leads means that the supporting characters are unbiased. Theyâre not likely to help the ML more than the FL or vice versa, but theyâre able to see both sides of things. They help the leads, but theyâre also critical of them, and is therefore able to help the leads make rational decisions. It reminds me of the friendship dynamics in Avatar where the characters have unique relationships with each other. Like Toph has her own relationship dynamic with Sokka and Katara, which is different from Aangâs relationship dynamic with them.Â
It goes without saying that Si Feng is the best part of the drama. He plays an emotionally repressed character, so it always feels like the heavens opened up when he smiles, and Xuan Ji seems to be the only one who can make him smile. SF's best moments are when he shows moments of vulnerability, like when he begs Xuan Ji not to cut ties with him, or when he's so happy to the point of disbelief and he's afraid of it being true that he begins to slightly quiver, like when he kept asking XJ if she was really the one who took off his mask. You can see him break down and not being able to contain his emotions and how much heâs desperately yearning for his love to be reciprocated.Â
I like that the FL has the same personality throughout the drama. I'm always annoyed when the FL's personality takes a 360-degree turn when she has a sudden "awakening" when her past life memories come flooding back and she instantly matures and becomes jaded. In Love and Redemption, Xuan Ji stays her bubbly self, even when sheâs burdened with responsibilities. Hell, even when she becomes a mother, sheâs still aloof and playful. In episode 52 or so when she burns her leg and refuses to leave Si Fengâs house, she acts like a helpless little girl again. Si Feng tells her that such a small injury wouldnât even faze someone as powerful as she is, but she reminds him that he once told her that even if she didnât feel pain, her body would know the pain, and so she should always tell him when sheâs hurt. I just like this throwback to the earlier episodes to show that while Xuan Ji has grown and matured, sheâs still the same person who wants to be loved and pampered.Â
Weaknesses of the Drama
Xuan Ji is a really multi-faceted and complex character (because of her villainous tendencies), but Crystal Yuan doesnât completely deliver in all of her performances of the character. Crystal Yuan is great when sheâs acting cute (though it reminds me a lot of Zhao Liyingâs acting in Journey of Flower, even the voice actress is the same actress), but I feel like Crystal Yuanâs crying scenes are a little lacking. Also, Xuan Ji is a character who is often in moral and emotional conflict because she starts to feel emotions that she doesnât understand since sheâs never felt them before, but sometimes Crystal isnât very convincing when trying to convey this internal conflict. For instance, in the scene when she thought Si Feng was getting married to Ah Lan, I thought that her devastation at seeing that should have been a bit more palpable. I mean, you finally found the love of your life after searching him for over a year and now heâs in front of you, about to get married to another woman. There should be more pain, anger, regret, disbelief, a battle of emotions unfolding on the face. There should have been more deflation, more staggering. I think back to when Tang Yan was watching Luo Jin get married to someone else in Princess Weiyoung, or when Jin Mi was watching Xufeng propose to Sui He in AOL, and the desperation and shock was subtle, but still so strong. You could feel the drop in your own stomach when sympathizing with the female character.Â
I also obviously disliked how Xuan Ji didnât believe Si Feng. But I would have understood why she didnât believe him (even when he logically explained his innocence) since there are so many people pressuring her judgment, but what I canât get over is how she had it in herself to physically hurt him. And she already hurt him before too, so she knows how much it pains her to hurt him. She already regretted the act before. But because she mistakenly thinks that he killed Hao Chen, she decides that she needs to kill him? Does Hao Chen mean that much to you that youâd be willing to sacrifice Si Feng in order to avenge him? That was my breaking point for her character.Â
I didnât like how Hao Chenâs arc was resolved. For 1000 years, he thought he was right and never had any regrets. He was obsessed with controlling his friend Mosha to the point of killing him and sealing his soul away. He then created another being, became possessive over that being to the point of falling in love with it (without admitting it), and then follows his creation down to the mortal world, and wrecks havoc on the mortals, especially Si Feng. And when Hao Chen learns that he can no longer control or redeem Xuan Ji, he decides that he needs to kill her in order to prevent Mosha from coming back. But then suddenly, because of a few words and visions from the Jade Emperor, he immediately has a change of heart and sees the error of his ways. Itâs just so anti-climactic. Yuan Longâs ending was also underwhelming. I just wanted the good guys and bad guys to fight it out without divine intervention.Â
While I sympathize with Si Feng and agree that it's like watching a puppy get kicked over and over again, he honestly gets jealous way too easily and is too insecure. He also keeps everything to himself and sucks at communicating. We blame Xuan Ji for being too quick at jumping to conclusions, but Si Feng also jumps to conclusions too and causes unnecessary pain for himself.Â
Overall Impression
Overall, despite the frustrations, I really liked the consistency of the drama. It flows as one complete narrative and all the subplots are well intertwined with the main plot. With other reincarnation xianxia dramas, you could divide the story into distinct arcs, but itâs harder to do with this one since you have arcs that overlap and transcend other arcs. Thereâs the mask arc, the god of war arc, the reincarnation arc, the demon identity arc, the Mosha arc, etc. Before one arc is completed, another arc is introduced.
If youâre looking for a be-all-end-all, til the end of time and end of the world romance, this is it. While it has many similar tropes to other xianxias like AOL, I think this executes the tropes better. Although if youâve already watched AOL or other xianxias, you might be more immune to the angst (even though this drama is angstier). But if you watch this drama first, I think it sets the bar pretty high for other xianxia dramas.
The chemistry and sexually tension is also through the roof (and the BTS will have you raising your eyebrows - are costars normally that flirty and touchy feely on set?)
So yes, this drama does live up to the hype. More meta posts to come because Iâm still going through withdrawal.Â
(Just checked the word count on this review, and itâs over 4700 words. Iâm clearly an obsessed mess).Â
Other meta posts:
Recurring details and motifs in Love and Redemption
Similarities to other stories in movies and literature
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The Sight of You (Spencer Reid x Reader)
Summary: Spencerâs disturbing dreams about his childhood bring him back to Las Vegas to face two of his childhoodâs greatest enemies: his estranged father and his ex best friend.
AN: itâs a friends to enemies to lovers fic! Set in the episode âMemoriamâ 4x07
Content Warnings: usual Criminal Minds stuff, mentions of child death, childhood trauma, descriptions of a dead body. Let me know if I missed anything!
Despite seeing Spencer around Pre-k, Y/N did not trot over to talk to him with their brightly coloured rucksack swinging vigorously and violently behind them. They walked faster instead once their parents had dropped them off. Spencer did his best to catch up to Y/N but lost them around the corner in the sea of students seeking their next class. He was meant to be one of them. Adjusting his glasses as they slipped down his nose, Spencer noted that he needed a new prescription before entering his own class and preparing to focus on a subject he was already well-versed in.
It was lunch time when Spencer finally found Y/N. They were sitting at the furthest end of the table in the canteen. But Y/N cowered away from him, his shoulders drawn up defensively.
âAre you OK, Y/N?â Spencer asked before getting to what was more significant to him: âDo you know when you will be free to play again?â
The next sentence out of Y/Nâs mouth stung like a nettle. They stood up, their face contorted in their fit, and they pushed Spencer hard on the shoulders.
âGo away! I canât look at you! You make me feel sick, you and your family!â They cried.
They went silent when Spencer was laughed at by those who heard what was said. Just grabbed their lunch and moved away, leaving Spencer spellbound in the middle of the canteen, heartbroken and with a new opening for a potential chess partner. Maybe that man they saw last week at the park would be kind enough to join him again.
But there was no replacement for Y/N, who now never said a word when they caught a glimpse of Spencer being bullied â only dithering about on the spot before fleeing the scene moments before a teacher would show up.
Spencer was hurt; that hurt warped into hatred when he was next out with his mother and father. They were at the shopping mall and had just bought Spencer his new glasses. Going down the escalator, he saw Y/N. They were smiling and skipping between their parents, a new pair of shoes shiny on their feet.
The second they spotted the Reids, Y/N ducked behind their parents. Spencer could still see their face: brow furrowed, eyes squinting, hands shaking now that nothing was holding them. Their parents didnât seem to notice. They kept talking and walking even as Y/N stopped in time with the Reids stepping off the escalator.
Sudden footsteps running away was what dragged the publicâs attention to a suddenly absent child.
âY/N!â The parents called out as they chased after the four-year-old. They were quick past the Reids, not stopping to say âhelloâ.
Spencer kept his eyes trained after Y/Nâs fleeing form, right until his motherâs face came into view. Diana looked saddened; she too was staring after the L/Ns. Turned to his father. William was composed but his eyes were turned down and watering.
For making his parents react like that to their mere presence, Spencer despised Y/N.
---> ---> ---> ---> --->Â
 The burning hatred from adolescence staled once Spencer reached adulthood. The protective nature that spawned from it for his mother remained.
Which is why, when Diana Reid casually mentioned Y/N when asked about Riley Jenkins, Spencer froze up.
âYou remember Y/N?â He said stiffly.
Diana didnât notice her sonâs change in tone, âOf course, you two were opposites but you got on so well. So sad what happened to them.â
The first guess was that she was referring Y/Nâs repeated attempts at running away before Reid cut contact with neighbourhood gossip at age fourteen. He didnât bother with a second attempt to understand what his mother meant.
âI donât care about Y/N. I want to know if you remember Riley.â
âAnd I told you: Riley was a boy you made up.â
âNo, Mom, he was a real boy who lived in our neighbourhood, and somebody killed him. And, I don't know, I think-- I think that dad might have had something to do with it.â
âHe was real?â
âYes. And...â
âHe was on that little league team, too.â
 ---> ---> ---> ---> --->
The whole case was surreal - âcaseâ being a very loose term.
When they got into his office, Spencer thought that perhaps things might simmer down a little. Unfortunately, as soon as his father spoke about their history of similarity in appearance, Spencerâs usual comfort of statistics and facts on the elderly and pets failed to conceal his abandonment issues.
William Reid was clearly affected by Spencerâs accusations, calling the idea of fitting the profile thus being Rileyâs killer âabsurdâ. Furthermore, he was confrontational when asked for access to his files and demanded a warrant. Coupled with Lou Jenkinsâ absolute certainty that William was not involved in Rileyâs murder and Penelope asking him âyou sure about this?â concerning invading the aforementioned files, Spencer was very close to snapping.
âI really wish people would stop asking me that.â
Then there was the envelope posted beneath his motel room door. Suspicious timing aside, there was a brand-new suspect basically handed over on a silver platter. One Gary Michaels whom Spencer couldnât remember him but he couldnât be sure that he didnât know him. Uncertainty being the feeling he hated the most.
This man could fit the profile; his previous of exposing himself to a minor was a precursor to molestation. But that wasnât what Spencer wanted to hear from the shady file slipped to direct his attention away from William.
Garcia reported back about his fatherâs drives, âNo kiddie porn, no membership to illicit websites, no dubious emails, no chat room history.â
âWhat about his finances?â
Hotch joined the conversation, âWe went back ten years. No questionable transactions that we can find.â
Spencer sighed while Emily decided to crack a joke: âWell, he did buy a ticket to see Celine Dion six months ago, but I think we can overlook that.â
âHeâs smart. Is it possible he kept things under the table?â Spencer persisted.
âWell, of course,â Hotch answered, âBut from what we can tell, Reid, he doesnât fit the profile.â
âWe can tell you other things about him, if you want to know.â
A peace offering on behalf of Emily. Clearly she had improved after her night out and subsequent hangover. Spencer gave the go-ahead and Emily listed her profile:
âHe's a workaholic, he actually logs more hours than we do. He makes decent money, but he doesn't spend a lot of it. He has a modest house. He drives a hybrid. He doesn't travel much. He stays away from the casinos. Um, and according to his veterinary bills, he has a very sick cat.â
âHe appears to spend most of his free time alone,â Hotch added, âHe goes to the movies a lot, and he reads. And from his collection of first editions, it seems his favourite author is-â
Spencer interrupted his boss, âIsaac Asimov, I remember that one.â He pressed his lips together. They were right; William Reid did not fit the profile.
Garcia piped up once more, âHe does have one other major interest. On his home computer, he's archived, like, a ka-jillion things on one common subject.â
âWhat?â
âYou, kiddo. He's got, like, everything that's been published online. Every article you've been quoted in, pieces you've written for behavioural science journals, He even has a copy of your dissertation.â
âHe's keeping tabs on you,â Rossi said, That's saying something.â
But Spencer smoothly dismissed this attempt to make excuses for his father, âYeah, he googled me. That makes up for everything. I'm going to get some air.â
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After getting said air, Spencer went to the local bar and began playing an computerised poker game. His paying attention was only to distract himself, clear his head with something he knew he could control. And thankfully, a chance interaction with a lady at the bar spawned the inspiration for a sporadic hypnosis session.
Doctor Jan Mohikian allowed them a session. Reminded of the limitations that a four-year oldâs memory could provide, not including the bias he already had as a son and a profiler, Spencer lay on the couch. His feet hung over the end so that his head could be comfortable in a pillow. There was no time for self-consciousness with Rossi in the room observing. He closed his eyes and felt his hand be placed upon Doctor Mohikianâs body.
She spoke low and calmingly, âI want you to hold my wrist in your left hand. And if you should feel any fear, I want you to squeeze, do you understand?â
âYes.â
âGo back to the night you were just telling me about. You're at home, in your room. You can't sleep because your parents are arguing.â
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 His eyes were closed still, but the couch shifted into a bed. His bed. A floor below, the faint shouting between his mother and father was heard. There was someone else there too. A child wailing, and it wasnât him.
Suddenly his father was at his side, touching his arm, saying, âI know youâre awake. Daddy loves you; you know that?â
Spencer didnât want to be there, and then it was the following morning.
Putting his glasses, the room fell into focus. His mother was there, she didnât see him because she was too busy looking out the window. Her body language told him that this was not a meltdown, but what she saw was distressing. Sheâd been crying. As she walked away into the house, she hid her face as if she knew Spencer was watching and she wanted to hide her reaction from him.
Spencer ran to the window the second Diana had left the room.
His father was in the back garden and burning clothes. A bloody shirt, a tiny cardigan, landed on top of the pile already set alight.
â5, 4, 3, 2, 1, and wake.â
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 And Spencer was shocked out of the scene, back to the doctorâs couch and gripping her wrist with an iron grip. Rossi was by his side, bringing him back to peace with his voice.
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 Derek was clearly disturbed that Spencer was very set on his father being a paedophilic murderer as much as he had been that Spencer was taking something that was said after his motherâs fit seriously. He continued however to assist with Rossi in Spencerâs investigation.
As if everything else hadnât been hard enough, the captain took some time to agree to holding William Reid in custody. Finally, he settled for twenty-four hours. William was as resistant to the questions as he had been upon the initial reunion. All he could say was that he didnât hurt Riley. Spencer wore him down, getting him to drop the Gary Michaels bomb plus the threat that he âdidnât want to go down that roadâ.
Garciaâs search of Gary Michaelsâ DNA on the databases brought to light that their suspect was dead. Buried across state lines, beat over the head with a pipe or bat, and the body was discovered in 2001.
âMaybe it wasnât Rileyâs blood on the clothes he was burning.â Derek was about to hang up when Garcia began to speak again, a new discovery ready for her team.
âAlso, Todd found something in your fatherâs finances. There was a standing order for a therapist, specifically a child therapist from 1985 to 1995. I thought it was for Spencer, but William left when you were twelve, and these sessions continue irregularly after he left you!â
âWho was the patient?â
âOne Y/N L/N. Local to North Vegas, born 1980 to Shelly and Finley L/N.â
Both Rossi and Derek looked away from the phone to Spencer and he knew. He knew heâd have to face another villain from the past â like a knight in one of Y/Nâs stories.
âStill alive?â
âYep, already pulling up an address. Thereâs a lot of short leases attached to this name. Lucky for you, they keep going back to live with their parents.â
Spencer wasnât entirely sure that he could handle two bitter reunions in one day.
âWeâll send off the fingerprint while we visit Y/N. They could have been a potential victim of Michaels before he died. They might know something.â
 ---> ---> ---> ---> --->
It was a normal home in a normal neighbourhood. Spencer had never visited Y/Nâs house. Their play-dates were always at the park.
âHello, Mr L/N,â held up their badges, âIâm Agent Derek Morgan, this is Agent David Rossi and Doctor Spencer Reid. May we come in and ask you some questions?â
âSure. My wife is uh out at work at the moment,â Finley opened the door wider and stepped aside for the trio to enter, âIâm the house husband as it were.â
Looking about the kitchen, Spencer spied several photos of an adult Y/N but very few of them as a toddler and even less as a teenager.
âYou have a child, Mr L/N?â Rossi asked.
âAll grown up now, Y/N,â Finley smiled with a nod. Then he squinted at Spencer, âYouâre not related to William Reid by chance, are you?â
Masking his bitterness, Spencer said shortly, âHeâs my father.â
Finley seemed in awe at the prospect, so Derek redirected the conversation back to the matter at hand, âWhat was Y/N like as a child?â
Nodding still, like a bobble head, Finley looked weary at the notion, âTroubled. They were very young when they withdrew into themselves. Used to run away from home a lot. I donât know what happened, but Y/N never told us.â He then jumped to protect his childâs reputation at present, âTheyâre doing better now, went to therapy and theyâre doing very well for themselves.â
âIâm glad to hear.â Rossi replied.
Finley continued his defence of Y/N, âTheyâre a published author, they write fantasy things for kids and young adults. Weâre very proud of them.â
âDid Y/N know Riley Jenkins when they were a child?â
âRiley Jenkins, thatâs Louâs kid who died, right?â Finley sought confirmation and, when he had it, he spoke, âNot personally. I think they might have played at the park once or twice. Before he died, Y/N would play with anyone. But you⊠you know that.â And Finley gestured to Spencer, much to his disgust.
âIs Y/N in the area?â Spencer asked briskly.
âWell, theyâre due for a visit in a few hours. They went on holiday.â
âThey still live with you?â
âA month ago, they got a new flat in the city. But theyâve got their own room here, for whenever they need it.â
âMay we see it?â
The wallpaper was barely visible beneath exam revision notes, posters of Fresh sheets on the bed and the clear space on the floor were the only tidy things about the place. It was a haven of organised clutter.
A chess set caught Spencerâs eye. It sat upon the windowsill, recently dusted. The pieces were not that of a classic set; each was painted prettily but with enough error to indicate it was a personal touch.
âYou and Y/N were close then?â Derek was holding up a photo album. Upon inspection, the photograph the page was open on was of Spencer and Y/N dressed up for Halloween as Doctor Frankenstein and the Monster respectively â accurate to the book of course.
âYeah, âwereâ,â Spencer turned back to the chess set. He didnât bother to ask when his friends had figured out he knew Y/N.
Rossi decided to further test the waters, âYou think that Y/N could have killed Riley?â
âOf course not. A four-year-old couldnât kidnap, tie up, rape, and kill a boy their own age. No violent history that indicates they would ever do something like this. Do I think that Y/N knows something about what happened and my father is trying to keep them quiet? Yes.â
Rossi moved beside Spencer, picking up the knight. Except it wasnât a knight. It was a wizard of some kind in purple robes.
âWeâll stay up here for a bit then go down once Y/Nâs inside and settled,â He gestured with the knight to the window. Spencer blanched as he spied a cab at the end of the driveway. The trunk was open and someone was retrieving a suitcase from within.
Y/N appeared around the corner, waving off the cab and turning to the house. Mr L/N appeared on the drive and they met in the middle for a hug. Over Mr L/Nâs shoulder, Spencer could see that Y/N had grown into their chubby childhood features. They looked genuinely happy.
He would have to go through with it, but he didnât have to like it. And he couldnât go hide in the bathroom like with his father.
The trio plodded down the stairs when the sound of the front door closing was replaced with a joyous gathering in the kitchen. It all changed when Y/N went to take off their jacket and caught sight of the three FBI agents standing in the doorway. Taking out his badge, Rossi led the way.
âHello, Y/N, Iâm Agent David Rossi, this is Agent Derek Morgan, and Doctor Spencer Reid. Weâre looking into the death of Riley Jenkins, and we were hoping to ask you some questions.â
To the naked eye, very little changed about Y/Nâs appearance. To the three profilers, there was a visceral reaction: Y/Nâs right hand started trembling, the hard swallow, the dropping of their gaze from Spencer to the floor.
âOK,â They said, a great deal quieter than they had been with their father.
Rossi sat next to Y/N at the dinner table. Derek was beside Rossi; Spencer stayed standing. Mr L/N stayed in the kitchen, at Y/Nâs request.
âCan you tell us what you remember about Riley?â Rossi began.
âNot very much, I donât really remember much about school.â
âOh, you donât?â Spencer blurted, âWell, I do.â
Derek glanced back at him with a look that just screamed âshut the hell upâ. It seemed to cut down Y/Nâs resolve, their jaw quivering.
âSorry, can you give me a moment?â They stood up quick, the chair legs scraping loudly against the floor as they walked just as fast to the kitchen. Through the open door, Rossi, Derek, and Spencer watched Y/N grab a glass from the open dishwasher. The water from the tap hit the bottom of the glass harsh, crashing out like a wave of the ocean hitting a cliff. Y/N didnât seem to care. Their hand dripped water onto the surface as they chugged back some of the drink before returning to the table with a topped-up glass.
âAre you alright?â Rossi inquired, leaning closer to Y/N.
They answered wearily, âFine, just feeling woozy.â
âYouâre a writer?â
âYeah, youâre a writer too. My mom reads your stuff before bed.â
âBit of an odd nightcap,â Rossi said with a little chuckle.
Y/N shared that smile for the briefest of moments, replying âYouâre telling me.â
From their pocket, they pulled out some painkillers, popping them back with a slug of water then speaking again. âI remember Riley was smaller than me. Still figuring out coordination, but he liked to play chase. I know he was killed; I didnât find out how until I looked into it last year.â
âWhy did you look into it?â Rossi gently probed.
Y/N rubbed two fingers back and forth across their head as they spoke, âI was back here, I felt sick so I went for a walk in the park, and I just remembered him tripping over while trying to tag me. No one ever told me what happened, just that he had to go away. I wanted to know what happened to him.â
âAre you sick often?â Derek asked suddenly, his voice soft to match Rossi. Spencer grimaced at the treatment Y/N was receiving but said nothing.
âHeadaches and stomach aches mostly.â
âYou get them whenever you come home?â
âI do. Figured I was allergic to something but never figured out what.â
That would have to be a very quick response, like a dog allergy. And coincidental, seeing as the symptoms didnât start until they saw Spencer.
âY/N?â called their father, âCan you come here a moment please?â
âMay I?â
âOf course,â said Derek and Y/N was out of the room. Derek pivoted in his chair to include Spencer in his theory, âI think they know something, but they donât know they know it. I think they repressed this memory like you did, Spencer. We should take him to the therapist, see if we can jog his memory.â
âYou canât be serious,â Spencer covered his face with his hands, dragging them down with irritation.
Derek was persistent though, âSpencer, like it or not, Y/Nâs linked to this investigation. Put aside your differences for a moment, please.â
Spencer all but squawked, âPut aside my differences?â
âYou have brought a lot of bias to this case. Let us at least pursue this lead.â
âSorry,â Y/N interrupted Spencerâs retort, sitting back at the table, âHe needed someone to get unhook the loft door. Mom usually does it.â
âThatâs alright.â Rossi waved a hand dismissively. Once Y/N accepted that, he moved in with Derekâs suggestion, âYou know, some people have strong physical reactions to memories, trauma. Maybe youâre not getting sick. Youâre rejecting something.â
âRejecting?â repeated Y/N. There was no doubt in their voice, more cautious curiosity.
Derek nodded, âA memory, repressing it, and your body has linked the physical responses to your home. We think it has something to do with this case, and weâd like to see if we can retrieve any memories you might have. Would you be alright to come with us?â
âYeah,â said Y/N, though they didnât sound too certain, âYeah sure.â
The resigned, too tired look on their face, and Spencer felt a tug in his chest. A longing to see Y/N smile like they had when they first entered the house. Heâd rather hate someone who was happy than someone who suffered the same as him.
Leaving the house, Spencer took a deep breath of fresh air.
âSpencer?â
He ignored Y/Nâs voice for a moment, but he couldnât disregard Y/N standing in front of him and speaking again, âSpencer, can we talk please?â
âIâm busy,â He said, already walking off as he pretended to call someone, âHey Garcia.â
 ---> ---> ---> ---> --->
 âHold onto my hand, use it as an anchor, and squeeze when you feel fear.â Doctor Mohikian accepted Y/Nâs hand on her wrist and their silence nod as they lay back on the same couch Spencer had been just hours before.
âI want you to think back to your childhood, back to when you were five. Youâre at the park, your parents are on a bench watching nearby to keep you safe. What do you see?â
âSpencer Reid.â
Derek and Rossi glanced at Spencer, who did not react. They kept quiet so that Y/N could immerse themselves in the hypnosis.
âWhatâs he doing?â Doctor Mohikian continued.
âTeaching me chess.â
 ---> ---> ---> ---> --->
Sat on opposite sides of the table, Spencer and Y/Nâs eyes were glued to the chess pieces that were neatly organised between them. Spencer was thinking strategy. He could not say the same for his companion Y/N. They reached a hand out and hovered over the pieces before finally selecting their last knight.
Their tongue clicked as Y/N trotted the piece on the spot.
âWhatâs this one again?â
âThe knight,â Spencer recited, âIt moves two spaces up, down, left or right, and another step perpendicular to the first direction.â
âBrave creatures riding into battle,â Y/N narrated before continuing their clip-clopping to its new position, âPawns in the game of war.â
Spencer didnât understand how they were coming up with this whilst playing. Well, actually, he did. Because Y/N was clearly not playing to win. They were playing for the best possible story.
âWhere do you think this story will end?â Y/N asked.
âI donât know.â
âYouâre lying,â said Y/N, pushing back the sleeves of their white cardigan, âCome on, you can tell me, with your magic powers.â
âItâs not magic. Itâs logic.â
âThatâs magic to me,â
Narrowing his eyes, Spencer decided that he should give his friend the information they sought: âI see checkmate in fifteen moves.â
âSee? Magic! The gift of sight!â crowed Y/N, clapping their hands together. The cardigan sleeves fell back in place as they did so. Spencer felt his cheeks heat up; he dropped his head so he could smile in privacy while Y/N began to decide their next move.
âHowâs your mommy today?â
Shrugging, Spencer said, âBetter than normal. But that means a bad day is around the corner.â
Y/N nodded solemnly. âDo you want another ice cream? I got more birthday money.â
âNo thank you.â Spencer moved the piece but was immediately intercepted by Y/N, âYouâre getting better.â
âFank you.â
âYouâll have to wait longer to beat me though.â And he snatched Y/Nâs knight away, just as planned and much to Y/Nâs dismay.
A new voice from their left spoke, âHey youâre pretty good.â
 ---> ---> ---> ---> --->
 Y/Nâs grip tightened on Doctor Mohikianâs wrist, âSomeoneâs with us.â
âWho do you see?â Doctor Mohikian asked patiently.
âA man. Heâs asking us if he can watch us play, listen to the story.â
âDo you want him to stay?â
âNo,â Y/N flinched, âBut Spencer keeps talking to him. The man wonât go away.â
âItâs OK, itâs OK, youâre safe, Y/N.â
Y/N flinched again, this time letting out a whimper, âHeâs on the floor.â
âSpencer is?â
âNo, the man.â
âWhatâs he doing on the floor?â
âHeâs,â Y/N began panting, their face tensing and body jerking, âI canât get to him. Thereâs glass in the way and the ground is shaking.â
âY/N.â
âI canât look, Iâll be sick! Whenever I see them, sick.â
âOK, youâre going to wake up in 5, 4, 3, 2, 1!â
Their eyes snapped open with the click of the fingers and Y/N leapt out of Doctor Mohikianâs couch. Their head aimed over the bin by the door and they retched. Nothing came up but their stomach continued to squeeze up
Spencer fidgeted in his seat, trying his best not to look at Y/N. The choice words of the session, three in particular, wrapped around his head.
âFloorâ.
Y/N had seen Gary Michaels inside, somewhere that wasnât the park.
âGlassâ.
A window, Y/N was watching what Gary Michaels was doing.
âSickâ.
âGo away! I canât look at you! You make me feel sick, you and your family!â
âThemâ.
It wasnât just Michaels in the room alone. They had been a witness to his murder.
Derekâs movement to help Y/N took Spencer out of his analysis. Sweaty, Y/N was led back to the couch, the bin between their legs, head lolling forward. Spencer tried to move beside them for questioning, but Y/N winced and began heaving again. He felt that ache in his chest again. He was causing this and nothing he could do would change that. Not until they both knew what happened to Riley and Y/N got help through it.
âWhat did you see, Y/N?â Derek asked as he replaced Spencerâs spot beside them.
With watering eyes, Y/N looked at Spencer, âThe man we played with, he was on the floor. His head â thank you.â They accepted the water from Doctor Mohikian, gulping some back, âIt was smashed in.â
The three agents left the room, Doctor Mohikian following after Y/N left to get some air.
âItâs logical to assume that Y/N tied that sickness, that repulsion because of what they thought they saw your mother be involved with, to you and your family,â Doctor Mohikian evaluated.
Interrupting again, Spencer stammered his way through his analysis, âThatâs why they avoided me. They associated me with being ill. Itâs probably also why they ran away so much; they had to get away from this horrible feeling they had associated with their home.â
Doctor Mohikian shook her head, âWe wonât be able to use this in court, I told you when we started.â
Derekâs phone started to ring. As he answered, Spencer somehow managed to slip away for long enough to find Y/N. They were leaning against the rampâs railing in front of the practice, their body lifting and slumping with each deep breath they took. Against his better judgement, he moved toward them.
âY/N? Can I have your number?â
The breathing slowed again.
âI need it to call you with an update on the situation as soon as we get one.â
Without looking up, Y/N pulled out their phone and handed it over to Spencer. He punched his number in a new contact, using this time to gather the courage to maybe say something else. The hurt and pain went beyond him now. Y/N was suffering and had been much longer than he had.
âThank you, Y/N,â Spencer said quietly, hoping that his didnât add to the illness, âI hope you feel better soon.â
Their head still down, Y/N croaked, âYou too, Spencer.â
âSpencer, get over here! We got a match on a print on Michaelsâ body!â
 ---> ---> ---> ---> --->
âWhat makes you think Gary Michaels killed your boy?â
âHe admitted it,â Lou Jenkins said, as monotonous as he had been for the last fifteen minutes of the interrogation.
Derekâs quickfire was on Jenkins instantly, âYou beat a guy with a baseball bat, he's going to admit to a lot of things. How do you know he was the right guy?â
âI know. He approached another kid in the neighbourhood.â
âAnd how do you know that?
âI was told by a concerned party.â
âWho? Another parent?â
Jenkins leant back in his chair, âThat's all I'm going to say on the subject.â
âWho was it?â Spencer suddenly spoke up.
Caught off guard at his interjection, Jenkins awkwardly parroted himself, âI told you that's all I'm going to say on the subâ"
Reid slammed his hands on the table, getting right up in Louâs face, âWho was it?â
The door opened, Detective Hyde appeared, âAgent Reid?â
âDo not interfere with this interrogation, detective,â shouted Spencer, âThis is not your case anymore!â
Once again, he was cut off. This time, by the arrival of his own mother, Diana, and her admission of guilt: âSpencer, it was meâ.
 ---> ---> ---> ---> --->Â
  Of all the things this case had brought him, Spencer least expected to be sitting in a room with his mother and father together for the first time in years. To have Diana explain to him how she was involved in a childâs murder was also up there with the unthinkable.
But he stayed quiet and listened to her confession.
The reveal that she had seen Gary Michaels playing chess with him and Y/N, that she and got a feeling that something was wrong before anything had even happened, opened the story. Lou Jenkinsâ involvement was next on the menu. Two days after the chess game, he drove Diana to Michaelsâ house, disclosed his history of child abuse, and demanded she leave while he went into the house.
Upon reaching the point where she entered the house, Diana struggled with her words. William reached over and took her hand.
She described seeing Lou with the bat, standing over the body, slipping in the pool of blood, finding Y/N standing in the window and their face, their little face as innocent as the white cardigan that covered their shoulders and absorbed the blood from Dianaâs hands as she shook their shoulders.
âAnd the rest... It's all dark after that.â
William continued for her. Diana came home and brought Y/N with her. Eventually he came to understand what had happened and decided that nobody could ever know.
âYou were burning her bloody clothes,â Spencer concluded.
His father nodded, âBut the knowing, you can't burn that away. It changes everything.â
âYou paid for Y/N to go to therapy.â
William didnât seem surprised that Spencer knew this, going straight into explaining: âThey went into a dissociative fugue state after seeing what Lou had done. When Diana brought them home, they were just stiff. I asked them for their home number, to call their parents, but they started screaming and throwing up. We had to take them to the police station.â He mopped his brow with a handkerchief, âThey needed help, but their parents couldnât afford it. And they didnât know what had happened. I couldnât drag another person into this, Spencer.â
âIs this why you left?â
âI tried to keep us together, Spencer. I swear to you, but the weight of that knowledge, it was too much.â
âYou could have come back. Could have started over.â
âI didn't know how to take care of you anymore. When I lost that confidence, there was no going back. What's done is done.â
âAt least now you know the truth,â Diana made an effort to smile at her son
Choking on his words and the overwhelming remorse he felt, Spencer refused to look at his parents any longer, âI was wrong about everything. I'm sorry.â
And William said something that Spencer had been waiting for, for a long time, âI am, too, Spencer.â
 ---> ---> ---> ---> --->Â
  All of this was repeated when Spencer walked with Y/N through their old park the following day. Filling the final gaps in the memory would hopefully bring some respite to them both. Or at least maybe something to start the recovery process, easing Y/Nâs sickness and Spencerâs pain.
âIâm sorry for my behaviour during this case,â Spencer sniffed, âWhen you said we made you sick, back when we were four, I thought you had seen my mom during one of her episodes and thought she was a freak, like everyone else.â
That stopped Y/N in their tracks, their hands coming up to cover their mouth, their eyes misty, âOh Spencer, Iâm sorry too, Iâm so, so sorry I caused you so much pain.â
Spencerâs hands rushed up as if to create belated damage control, âItâs ok! I hurt you too. I made you sick.â
âThat wasnât your fault though.â
âIt wasnât yours either. We were kids.â
Almost pedantic, stropping, like a child again, Y/N moaned, âItâs all been such a waste. We could have been friends all this time!â
âWe can be friends now,â Spencer pushed his hands down into his pockets to stop them flailing about anymore. His sentence was phrased more like a question.
One that Y/N gladly answered, âI would like really that.â
Sitting in the reply for a moment, Spencer followed up on his concerns, âHow are you feeling? I mean, are you feeling sick again?â
âA bit, but I can handle it.â
Spencer could not see any changes in their behaviour from the day before. So obviously they were lying about that. But he didnât protest. The lie meant Y/N wanted to stay with him, which was good - Spencer wanted that too.
They kept walking, only in silence for half a minute before Spencer broke it again, âI read your books last night.â
âYeah?â
ââThe Siege of the Lost Faithsâ in Rogueâs Mask, that was our first game of chess.â
âIt had by far the best narrative,â Y/N dragged their shoe a little on the grass before coming to a stop, âDo you still play?â
âAll the time.â
They nodded over to where the old chess tables still stood, âFancy a game before you go?â
Spencer grinned, âJust promise that this is the only setting where weâll be on conflicting sides from now on.â
âPromise.â
Brushing the debris from the table, they both took their places opposite each other. From Y/Nâs bag was revealed a box, spilling their painted chess pieces across the board. Remembering how they had stood in Y/Nâs room, Spencer helped to set up the match. They took their seats opposite one another. Y/N was the green side, Spencer the purple.
Spencer moved first. After a secondâs deliberation, Y/n moved their pawn.
âIsnât there a story with this one?â Spencer said, an implicated teasing in his tone despite his shyness.
With an equally bashful eye roll, Y/N started their new story, âFirst begins the battle with the royals on both sides sending intrepid messengers to meet and pass along their deeds.â
Spencer took Y/Nâs pawn. As he lifted their piece away, he spoke quietly, âOne not as intrepid as the other.â
A gasp dropped from Y/Nâs smile. He had never joined in the narrative telling before, always too taken up in the match to invest in whatever story they spun.Â
âHeâs not a coward,â They said, still smiling, much to Spencerâs delight, âPrisonerâs dilemma, he just couldnât trust the other with his life.â
âDid they know each other before this battle?â
âYes,â Y/N moved a knight across, stealing Spencerâs pawn, âThey were brothers who once shared a crib and now they share a grave.â
Throughout the game, Y/N continued the story with Spencer asking questions just to hear them talk more. The maturity of the stories had grown just as Y/Nâs voice had. They knuckled their eyes a few times, but they didnât complain about the headache.
âI know what endings you like,â Spencer moved his rook, âCheckmate in five.â
Y/N didnât seem to mind that little dig, âThisâll have to be a short story instead then.â
Spencerâs next sentence got away from him, trailing off the closer he got to the end of it, âYou could write an anthology series, if we see each other again and play more games.â
Where Spencerâs voice disappeared, Y/Nâs returned with invigoration, âThatâs not a half bad idea, Spencer.â
The checkmate never came. Y/N diverted the ending into a draw.
âA peace treaty has been forged by the survivors, because too many lives have been lost to justify this violence anymore. If only they realised sooner that no blood had to be shed for peace to rule the lands.â And they smiled at Spencer, clearly chuffed as they leaned back in their chair, âBit of an upgrade from the horse noises, Iâll say.â
Spencer rotated the purple knight â the illusionist â between his thumb and forefinger, âI liked the horse noises.â
âYou should have said during the match! Iâd recreate them, for you.â
One by one, the pieces were placed back into their box until the last piece remained in Spencerâs palm: the knight or Soren the Illusionist, distractions and deceptions but he loved the tricks that delighted most of all. Just like Spencer with his magic tricks but a little to the left. The character was always one of Y/Nâs favourites. Some solace away from the pain of thinking of who he was based on.
Y/N pushed Spencerâs hand away, closes his fist around it, âKeep him. He was made with you in mind anyway.â
The information sank in and Spencerâs nose wrinkled with the little smile on his face as he cupped the little Illusionist, âIâm Soren?â
Nodding, Y/N confirmed, âYouâre Soren.â
âBut what about your set though?â
âI can always make and paint another knight,â and Y/N tilted the piece upside down in Spencerâs hand, revealing the signature on the underside, âYou and him are the originals, itâs only fair you stay together.â
In a moment of pure instinct and nostalgia, Spencer clicked his tongue as he twisted Soren in time with the noise. Y/N let out a burst of laughter that dragged the air out of Spencerâs chest.
âHey, do you wanna get dinner tonight?â He said, running out of breath very quickly as a result.
It had a similar effect on Y/N, âI thought you â donât you have to get back to Virginia?â
âI have time for dinner. For you.â
 ---> ---> ---> ---> --->
 The bookstore was packed but the breath of the patrons was held as one. All eyes were watching the mini stage where a crouching figure lifted their head up slowly. A jump as the tension broke with the figure leaping up to their feet with a bang.
Y/N pushed up the brim of their cap. Snatching a deep green hoodie from the purple trunk â silver constellations painted on the sides â they swung it over their back before picking up the page where they had left off.
âNasima looked up at Mason and said, âWell that was just unnecessary.ââ
A burst of laughter shot through the pre-teens in the front row, spreading to the adolescents sitting further back who had grown up with the authorâs other works, finally reaching the adults at the back where Spencer was fiddling with his cane. He adjusted the sleeve of his costume absentmindedly. He was just like everyone else in the room: captivated by how Y/N was so immersed in their reading.
They had just mimed kicking down a door, plus sound effects from their mouth. Swapping back and forth between the two conflicting characters arguing with one another, changing between the hoodie and the cap with every other line of dialogue and taking both off for the role of the narrator, it was certainly a workout.
An exaggerated breath was drawn into Y/Nâs lungs, flopping over in a melodramatic state, which caused another laugh in the audience.
Spencerâs nose scrunched up as he grinned. He knew this was part of the scene; heâd seen Y/N rehearse this story in their sitting room. It was so much better to share this with an audience, for their reactions to fuel Y/Nâs energy.
Y/N finished the short story A Battle of Bent Truths with a flourish, leaving the rest of the anthology for their audience to read in their own time. The kids were up on their feet first. Some of them were jumping up and down as they applauded with the rest of the shop. Y/N gave a big grin as they bowed, sweeping their cap off for extra drama.
There was a book signing and a photographer that followed, and Spencer waited patiently at the end of the queue, thankful that the store allowed him to bring a chair along with him. He was happy to entertain his godson and friends with a few tricks to pass the time.
âAnother one please!â Henry jumped up and down when Spencer revealed his card.
A minor commotion arose by the photographerâs backdrop. There was a teenager was crying; she was clutching her copy of Untold Tales of Human Nature. Y/N was holding their shoulders, rubbing gently and speaking softly. Only half paying attention to his next trick, Spencer kept an eye on Y/N as they hugged the teenager, looking near tears themselves.
âSpencer?â J.J tapped him on the shoulder and Spencer realised that Henry was looking a little mad to have lost his godfatherâs attention so easily.
âSorry, Henry, can you pick another card please?â
When they reached the front of the queue, JJ went up first and took Henry and his pals up to see Y/N. They instantly recognised JJ and welcomed her with a tight hug. Henry was delighted to see his favourite babysitter and show them off to his school friends, boasting that they had read to him before today.
âThey read me bits for bedtime, Mommy!â
âI know!â JJ tickled his cheek, âI read them to you too.â
âWho do you like better?â
âMommy,â
Y/N gasped, dropping to their knees which made Spencer wince, âHenry, you wound me!â
Rossi approach next, knowing that once Spencer got to Y/N, they would not be left alone.
âYou really know how to captivate an audience,â He kissed them on both cheeks, âThough donât take offence if I donât use the same tricks at my readings.â
âWouldnât dream of it! Thank you for coming.â
Y/N then caught Spencerâs eye and began meandering over to him with a smile they were desperately trying to stifle. Spencer rose from his chair, meeting Y/N in the middle.
âHi, Spencer.â
With his free arm, Spencer flaunted his cloak, âWho is Spencer? Iâm Soren the Illusionist!â
Giggles from his godson, his godsonâs gang, his co-workers and friends, they almost caused Y/N to lose their composure. They held on just long enough to continue the banter.
âOh, forgive me, you look so much like my boyfriend.â
âHmmm, he must be very handsome,â
And Y/N burst into peals of laughter, waving their hands about, âOK, stop, stop, stop, I canât.â
âHey!â Spencer pretended to take offence, pouting as Y/N brought him into a hug.
âDonât worry,â They kissed his cheek between giggles, âYou are so very handsome.â
âTo think you were once sick at the sight of me.â
#spencer reid#spencer reid fanfic#spencer reid x reader#spencer reid imagine#criminal minds#criminal minds imagine#criminal minds fanfic#criminal minds x reader#my writing#r: gender neutral#wc: 5k+
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Close Shave #1 - Frankie Morales
Frankie Morales x readerÂ
Word count: just shy of 2k
Warnings: Straight razor shaving. I guess it could technically be counted as knifeplay, so just to be on the safe side Iâve marked it down. Some James Bond quotes are lifted from the movie Skyfall.
And yes, thereâll be another piece with Clyde later on. Because these two men have my heart and I will not be able to choose. Lol.
Ever since your visit to the antique store with Frankie on a sunny Sunday afternoon, you hadnât been able to get the set out of your mind. First off, the wood case was beautifully crafted; despite the time passed it still looked shiny and all the metal parts worked well, despite aging and darkening. It had called you from the corner, sung like the sweetest canary, and you had been unable to resist. You marveled the feel of the smooth wood as your hand caressed the corners, admiring the craftsmanship.Â
Once you had opened the case, you had been sold. The beautiful straight razor with gold and copper caps, the fluffy brush with a casing for cream, the leather strop and paste box all looked pristine. Well, the strop had obviously been used before, but it still looked in wonderful condition. You could still smell a hint of the musky beard oil that was once kept in its own place within the box, the woodsy and earthy tones hitting your nostrils as you peered in for a closer look.
It had only been the steep price that had made you leave the shaving kit there. But you still had thought about it until long after dinner and as you got ready for bed that you knew you had to get something like that for Frankie.Â
After some intense browsing and comparing later, you had finally placed an order for a straight razor kit, some additional oils and moisturizers and they had arrived neatly packaged this afternoon. You had taken the day off work in order to prepare. Preparing meant countless Youtube videos on the subject, practicing the use of the straight razor on air and on balloons you had slabbed some shaving cream on.Â
You had also transformed your master bathroom into an oasis, with dimmed lights and one of the dining chairs sitting in the middle of it all. There were lit candles, sheets and towels in the dryer to keep them warm and a small pillow sacrificed for the occasion was sitting beside the sink, ready for use.Â
You had a selection of bottles next to the pillow; a small moisturizer, a bottle of beard oil that carried a sandalwood, vanilla and bergamot scent (something you thought he would appreciate) and a little bowl with shaving cream already ready. The piece de la resistance had a prized place on a small side table youâd dragged into the bathroom.
Now you just needed the man of the hour, one Francisco Morales.
You knew he had no flights today so he should be home shortly. Maybe youâd roped Will and Benny into making sure there wouldnât be any Friday happy hour gatherings but you would never tell. And neither would they if they wanted you to cook for them the next time boys night was at your house.Â
Right on cue, you heard the truck pull up and you took the moment to gather one of the sheets and two towels from the dryer, while you waited for him to enter.Â
âHermosa? You home?â
âIâm in the bathroom, babe! Would you come and help me for a moment?â
Was it sneaky to lure him in under false pretenses? Maybe, but getting him in here would be a challenge otherwise. And you didnât want him wandering around the house and picking up on the missing items.Â
Two loud thumps followed your question and you knew Frankieâs boots were off and socketed feet carried him towards your bedroom. Some shuffling around the bed and a question rang out.
âWhatâs this, hermosa?â
âPlease put them on and come in. I have a surprise for you. Oh! And leave the cap behind too, thank you.â You had laid out a pair of sweatpants and his softest possible T-shirt on the bed, wanting to extend the comfort as far as you could. You pressed play on your phone and smooth classical music began to play from the bluetooth speakers. It was set on top of the toilet, far away from any water sprays.Â
You heard him shuffle in the bedroom, no doubt obeying your wishes and you started to swirl the shaving cream in the bowl with the brush, making it as fluffy and airy as you could.Â
The door to the bathroom opened and you were greeted by your boyfriend in his grey sweatpants, his white t-shirt and dark curls framing his face. The hair was mussed up, no doubt because of his tendency to keep the hat on at all times and this mustâve been his attempt at ridding himself of hat hair. He looked adorable as the curls hung around his forehead and over his ears all messy. His dark brown eyes were open and curious as they took in the scene and you smoothed down your own t-shirt anxiously.
âSweetheart⊠What is all this?â He whispered, the awe clear in his voice.Â
âCome, sit down,â You took his hand, placing the bowl back on the counter as you pulled him closer. A small kiss was placed on him by your lips and you pushed him gently towards the chair. As he sat down, you placed the small pillow under his neck, urging him to relax into it. The pillow would certainly help his position in the long run.Â
âRemember that antique store a couple of weeks back?â You spoke as you draped the sheet on top of his chest once he was settled. With Frankieâs affirmative hum, you opened the tap and let water run, trying to find the perfect temperature.Â
âI didnât tell you this at the time, but there was this gorgeous antique shaving kit in the back, strops and brushes and all in tip top shape. It got me thinking that I wanted to do a little something to pamper you and I bought a modern-slash-antique-looking set. I want to give you a shave.â
As you spoke, you lathered your hands under the water, ridding them of their coldness before wetting two small makeup towels to run across his face. The surprised gasp that left his lips betrayed he hadnât been expecting that.Â
You got into the rhythm of things, wetting his face with long strokes, allowing the warm towels to soothe his skin and soften it. Frankieâs eyes fell closed as the up and down strokes lulled him. After that, you squirted some cleanser into your hands, rubbing them together.
âIâm going to clean your face real quick, before we get into the shaving part. Do you want me to leave something or would you prefer clean-shaven?â You murmured, keeping your tone low to make sure he wasn't disturbed.Â
âWhatever you like hermosa,â came his reply, a sleepy mumble that made you smile. Frankie worked so hard sometimes, taking care of his baby girl on the weekend she was with you, you and your relationship, his sobriety and the copters back in the hangar.Â
After Colombia, he and the Miller brothers had joined forces, opening up a business together. They combined self-defence classes and survival training and business was good. Once Frankie had gotten his licence back, they often took their students training in the mountains, testing the limits and allowing for them to train first-aid skills on the wilderness too.Â
It was honest and hard work. You knew how much all of them loved it and they were hopeful that Santi would join them as well once he was able, bringing the boys together once more. But the physical aspect of the job, including the maintenance of the planes, did take a lot out of your man, so to offer him this after a long week felt really good. And judging by his blissed-out state in the chair as you swept the lather into his skin and beard, he was enjoying it too.Â
Round and round the brush went, all along his jaw and cheeks. You made sure he was well covered in the cream before you stepped back a little, taking the small steel knife into your hand.Â
âCut-throat razor. How very traditional.âÂ
The quote slipped your mouth quietly as you admired the blade in your hand. Frankieâs eyebrow lifted but a hand on his shoulder eased it down again. Taking a deep breath, you let the blade touch his skin and waited for a beat. When there was no resistance on his part, apart from his hand finding its way to your hip as a grounding place, you let it slide across the lathered skin and stopped about an inch from his jawline. After all, there was something in a man with facial hair, especially if that man was Frankie.  Â
âSometimes the old ways are the best,â You couldnât help yourself, letting the next line fall down as the blade lifted from his skin. The motions repeated themselves, both of you getting lost in the moment. The music faded in the background, Ludovico Einaudiâs calming notes becoming only a memory as you watched the blade move and turn the cream around, revealing smooth skin beneath. Each motion was followed by a swipe on the towel to make sure the blade didnât dull in the middle of the session. It felt almost like a dance, your breaths the only sound left.
You moved, he stayed still. He moved, you stayed still. Back and forth, like the steps of a complicated dance.Â
You didnât know how long it took, shaving his face, but when there was only the small part left in the middle of his throat, you felt him gulp.Â
âKeep still,â You admonished him slightly, tipping his face backwards, his skull digging a little deeper into the pillow that separated it from the cold marble of the sink. âThis is the tricky part.â The final swipe was almost tantalizingly slow as you dragged it upwards to meet his chin. The trust he placed in you that moment made you feel powerful. It felt like something settled upon both of you as you lifted the blade from his skin for the last time. Â
âNow thatâs better,â You breathed out, as you watched him tip his head forward and open his eyes. The dark pools drilled into yours, the arousal and relaxation dancing a tango within, battling for dominance. How you wanted to keep watching it, enjoy how the candlelight reflected from the dark orbs but there were still steps to take before you could. You held his gaze for a moment, before lifting a towel from the counter to wipe off any excess cream left behind.Â
âDid youâŠâ
âShh, Iâm not done with you yet, mi amor.â Your eyes crinkled at the corners as you smiled softly to him. Frankie nodded, the movement barely there but still visible. He relaxed back, allowing you to rub some oil into his beard and some moisturizer into his skin. Frankieâs eyes slipped close once more and you took the moment to really admire him and the neatly trimmed beard in full.Â
âAll done,â A whisper in the air as you trailed his regal nose with your fingertip. His eyes remained closed but his hands grabbed your waist to tuck you into his lap. Slowly, the eyelids opened and lashes fluttered as Frankie peered into your eyes. The relaxation had won out, but there was still a small fire simmering behind that.Â
âDid you quote James Bond to me?â He muttered, letting his left hand trail up your spine.Â
âYou know how I like that scene.â You shrugged.Â
âMhmm⊠Will you allow me to recreate some other scenes from those movies?â There was a playful edge to his voice as Frankieâs hand rested on the back of your neck. You leaned closer, breaths mingling, as you let a sliver of air between your lips.Â
âGo right ahead, mister.âÂ
Tagging @clydesducktapeâ @wayward-roseâ @themuseicâ @miraclesaboundâ @clydesfavoritegirlâ @a-true-janian-replyâ  @10blurredsmoke10â  @cailleaâ @mind-p0llutionâ â
#frankie morales#frankie morales x reader#frankie catfish morales#francisco morales#triple frontier fanfiction#my writing#cw: knifeplay#pedro pascal character fanfiction
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farran re-reads lost lagoon: chapter 1
- there is a vibe here that i really donât know how to explain. it might just be a juv fic thing where nuance gets flattened on the assumption that younger readers wonât or canât understand such subtleties but i am immediately remembering that something about the way rapunzel is portrayed in the novels gets my hackles up. tts was evidently limited in how it could flesh out rapunzelâs character, and some of her flaws are glossed over accordingly - but in tts, rapunzel does have flaws, and toxic positivity is one that is repeatedly, if lightly, examined. in lost lagoon it feels like this trait has been dressed up in a party hat and presented to me as her best trait with a rah rah girl power cake to go with it, and it irks me. weâll see how this holds out through the rest of the story, because in all fairness i have never met a juvfic first chapter whose character establishment i liked. lmao
- to give an example - in tangled and tts, pascal functions as rapunzelâs voice of reason. he encourages her to get out of the tower, and likewise encourages her to be cautious of eugene and check for âred flagsâ (such as pointy teeth). in tts he regularly displays emotional awareness and sensitivity well beyond what rapunzel can grasp, and makes his doubts known when he feels rapunzel is behaving poorly. here⊠heâs afraid of heights, for some reason, so rapunzel can look carefree, spirited, and brave while teasing him for having this fear. she even lampshades the fact that it makes no sense for pascal, who grew up in a seventy-foot-high tower, to be afraid of being in a tree perhaps five or six feet off the ground.Â
then this is underscored by means of guards rushing up with a ladder to âhelpâ rapunzel down from the tree, followed by her laughing them off and jumping to land âas always, on my strong bare feet.â while it makes sense for rapunzel to think and feel this way, it has a distinctly different energy from rapunzel cracking under pressure in before ever after. in bea i feel like iâm supposed to sympathize with rapunzelâs distress whilst also recognizing the importance of the shoes she has been asked to fill, and of making her ready to fill them; that is⊠not the impression being crafted here.
- lost lagoon is one hundred percent structured as a coming out romantic novel wherein rapunzel identifies and comes to terms with her identity as a gay woman by cheating on her perfectly nice but unexciting male love interest with another woman, and this is endlessly hilarious to me regardless of anything else. i mean:
Not to mention true love with Eugeneâsweet, funny Eugene! [âŠ] And yet something wasnât right. Something was missing.
leila howland said âget fucked, fitzherbertâ
- the treatment of friedborg here is a small step up from tts, where âhaha weird and uglyâ is literally the punchline of every scene sheâs in, but nevertheless it is distinctly uncomfortable to have a mute character portrayed as communicating in grunts and pointing. surely corona has some sort of sign language? surely someone could get this poor woman a slate and a piece of chalk, or if fine motor control is an issue that makes writing or signing prohibitively difficult then at the very least a booklet of cards with common words and phrases she could use to convey her meaning? butâŠno. instead she becomes a device to illustrate how opaque and confusing rapunzel finds palace etiquette to be.
- rapunzel thinking âmanners are overratedâ is extremely funny. i am not sure itâs supposed to be funny, but it is.
- lost lagoon eugene is suffering the great indignity of being made to learn something. this is one of the first signs that the book is fanfiction, which now that i think of it is also sort of hilarious.
- also: âIâll join a dishwashing club or participate in a meatloaf-eating competition if thatâs what it takes to make your dad accept me.â eugene what
- re: romance novel: âI watched Eugene walk back toward the castle. Why couldnât I be as happy as he was? I wondered. We had everything anyone could ever want. Was there something wrong with me? It was almost like I didnât even know I was lonely when I was in the tower, but everything had changed now. I could feel the places inside me that had been empty for so many years and I wanted to fill them all up.â
- amusing as this is i also canât help but feel⊠a little irked, that tts rapunzelâs zeal for the outside world and her discovery of it has been transmuted into mere loneliness. rapunzel is a lonely person, absolutely, but i think far more pressing than that loneliness is her longing for newness after a life spent in the tower. moreover, in tts we see that it takes six months for rapunzel to start really chafing within the confines of her new lifeâin beginnings, which is the canon lost lagoon equivalent, she is still overwhelmed with wonder and delight in all the new things, cassandra included. i suppose what iâm getting at here is i donât quite buy that the shine wore off this fast. itâs been less than a week.
(i promised myself i would keep bitter snow talk to a minimum for this but i do feel the need to say - benighted happens in a far more compressed amount of time than canon, and there rapunzel does indeed begin to feel overwhelmed and anxious within a single week. but her response to that anxiety is to think âwell, i overestimated how easy this would be just a little!â and it isnât until several more weeks have passed that she begins to feel dissatisfied and unhappy and uncomfortable as a consequence. whereas here, the vibe i am getting is more âmanners are dumb, shoes suck, the guards suck, iâm miserable and i donât know whyâ which just⊠it doesnât feel like rapunzel.)
- rapunzel asks her security detail to give her some space, and when they refuse, she takes note of their sweaty brows, thinks to herself that they must be roasting under their armorâand uses this observation to deftly manipulate them into leaving her alone by suggesting they go dip their feet in a fountain to cool off. âIt would make me really happy to see you happy.âÂ
i would argue that this sort of conscious manipulation is not at all out of character for rapunzel - she learned it from gothel and certainly there are examples of manipulative behavior from her in tts as well - but for it to happen so clearly in the very first chapter of the story casts everything else that happens in a sort of interesting light. for rapunzel to do this suggests a basic grasp of, at least, how people can be made to do things by appealing to their physical needs or comfortâyet she will also struggle to grasp social nuances and as in canon much of her conflict with cass is grounded in rapunzelâs dismissal of or blindness to what cassandra wants or needs from her. manipulativeness and social ignorance is an interesting combination of traits for her to have and it is nice to see the manipulativeness borne out so overtly in the text. again, weâll have to see how this holds up later in the story because i do not remember it very well.
re: romance novel: the dissatisfaction and loneliness established in chapter one and explicitly not filled by the male love interest are, of course, answered by a fascinating glimpse of the one (1) gnc woman in all of corona. whom rapunzel only glimpses because she is climbing a tree to paint the view out of hopes that it will âfixâ how out-of-place she feels. ms. howland you are not subtle, and also, how did she slip this past the disney censors?
#lost lagoon reread#rta#cassunzel#you know how RDO is in part a cassunzel tangled au?#lost lagoon is a cassunzel s1 au.#and i have some thoughts about that that i'll get into once i finish the reread but for now hahahahahaha
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End Of The Year Faves 2020!
Rules: itâs time to love yourselves! choose your 8 (ish) favorite works you created in the past year (fics, art, edits, etc.) and link them below to reflect on the amazing things you brought into the world in 2020. tag as many writers/artists/etc. as you want (fan or original) so we can spread the love and link each other to awesome work!
i was tagged by the lovely @lxncelot & @musicallisto !!!
iâve only written 10 one shots this year since i stopped taking requests rip. i only ended up picking 5 of them bc i didnt like the rest. also i love talking about the behind the scenes of writing like its just so fun. i literally went through my revision history in my google docs to see how i wrote these akjsdhasjd so literally........... if anyone wants to talk to me about a piece........... just shoot me an ask bc i will gladly tell u all about it
1. Lifetimes (Sebastien le Livre)Â
this might be my number one bc itâs the most recent and i havent decided i hate it yet but wrote this as an alternative to therapy lmfaooooooo and itâs been a month but um. it still hurts. but anyway, i started off with the below paragraph:
And Booker has centuries of pain under his belt. Endless years of trauma that he cannot even begin to unpack. But you donât have centuries. You donât have lifetimes to reconcile with all the cruelty in the world â you just have one, and Booker knows he of all people should know just how much hurt one lifetime can contain.
and just worked around it, bc i was just really obsessed with the concept of having multiple lifetimes and all that, and just the fact that life has so much pain and hurt and it just sucks. i edited the first sentence for the final but otherwise itâs the same. i think i came up with some pretty good lines in this if i do say so myself, and i mentioned it in the a/n, but i intended for it to be longer but didnât want to push it after i feel like i had written all i wanted to. i just wanted someone to hold me and comfort me clearly.Â
2. Cursed Blood (Renfri)
i am obsessed with renfri as a character and her whole story, and the whole concept of her being cursed just felt like something that i really wanted to explore and write about. these were the first lines i wrote for the piece:
But every time you kiss her, you swear that itâs impossible her lips could be poison. Or perhaps you grew so used it, that the poison tasted sweet.Â
i ended up editing this a lot for the final version, but a trend in my writing seems to be i always come up with how to end a piece and just work around it. i really enjoyed going into depth into renfriâs character and it kinda felt more like a character study than a reader insert? but eventually i found a way to work the reader in there and i liked where the story went, bc renfri deserves happiness and someone to be there for her.
3. Roadside (Robin Buckley)
still in shock at how many notes this one got and i am forever grateful to everyone who reblogged/left comments!!! this was for laceyâs ( @moonlit-imagines ) writing challenge, and idk why when i saw the prompt i immediately decided to use robin. for this one, i actually started with the beginning, which was the prompt, âLetâs take a walk. Just you and me.â
i mentioned this in the a/n, but i planned it to be a lot more angsty and wasnât even planning on ending it on a happy note askjdhaksd the original plot i had in mind was that robin and the reader were into each other but were dancing around each otherâs feelings. so one night, the reader drunkenly kisses steve at a party to try and make robin jealous, but it ends up just causing a rift between robin and the reader even after they confess their feelings. here is a part i wrote for the original plot before i decided to scrap it and go with the final plot.
âLook, I donât even care if you and Steve get together.â Robin waves her hand, and youâre not used to seeing such disappointment on your best friendâs face as she lets out a shaky breath. She looks as if sheâs struggling to collect herself before she asks, âI just⊠why did you lie to me?â
âI didnât.â you desperately blurt, and Robinâs eyebrows furrow. Shaking your head, you take a step towards her as you explain, âI didnât lie, Robin, I swear. I donât like Steve. What happened at the party meant nothingââ
Robin scoffs. âThen whyââ
ââbecause I wanted you to see.â you finally confess, and Robin stares at you. Youâre shaking, tears welling in your eyes as you continue, âBecause I thought I could make you jealous, because I was just too afraid to make a move and wanted you too. And I know thatâs silly of me, and I never meant to hurt your feelingsââ
i changed the plot because i didnât think i could pull it off, and i didnât know how to fully end it. i liked where it ended up going anyway after the change of direction so all good!!
4. Games (Michael Gray)
so this was inspired by a gif imagine request that @fangirlsarah16 sent me, which you can find here!! you can literally see me already plotting for the piece in the tags aksjdha i just loved how angsty the situation was, and i love michael, so i decided to just run with it. i put what i had already written into a document and just pieced everything in around it. this is definitely one of my more dramatic pieces, but i just loved how the story came together and how all the other characters were included.Â
i already planned to write a part 2 while i was still writing this piece, but obviously that hasnt happened yet. also i got discouraged bc i thought it would do better in terms of notes but oh well. i wrote around 300 words of where i wanted part 2 to go, and i still have it saved, but i dont want to share it in case i end up writing it. also, i have 2 plots in mind for where i want part 2 to go, and havenât decided which one i want to go with. weâll have to wait and see i guess >:)
5. Off Limits (Cassian Andor)
ah yes, the first in my rewrite project that is going along very slowly. basically, im planning on rewriting my super old one shots in hopes that iâll like them. i swear iâve got the next one shot in my drafts but i just havent had the time to finish it yet. anyway, the original piece, which i wrote 4 years ago (!!!!), was the piece that really got my blog started and helped me get activity/attention, and it has around 500 notes, which kinda makes the new version look depressing bc it only has 97 and itâs definitely a lot better in my opinion.Â
i donât really have a detailed process for this one, seeing as i was just improving upon an old piece, but one of the main things i did want to change was cassianâs characterisation. i felt like i just made him too mean in my old piece, and i wanted to loosen him up a bit. i managed to bang this one in one day and i just think itâs some cute content and i miss the rogue one squad!!
iâm tagging @moonlit-imagines @emcon-imagines @lotsoffandomimagines @dannyboy-writes @murswrites @randomfandomimagine @sonsofeorl @spxder-mxns & all other content creators that see this!! iâm definitely missing a lot but everyone should share their favorite pieces from this year :â)
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đ”everythingâs coming up ivarđđ what a morning of fortunate revelations for him! i know i must say this after like every chapter, but you have truly done such an exceptional job building up these characters and this relationship. there were so many neat little tie ins to other things i noticed in the story! and every other line, i was just struck by how well theyd come to know each other. i remember after the first time he broke a bone (and smth similar in ch36??), she thought something to the extent of âif i try to push him on this, ill just hurt him. if i donât, then heâll just accept this situation as immutable, so im at a loss.â but she absolutely could not miss in this chapter. after all this time together, she knew exactly what to sayâand he finally felt like he could completely sincerely trust her! âOf course you wouldnât leave, he knows you wouldnât leave himâ đŁđ„șđ heâs got a new certainty!! also cracked me up to read half the lines and think âyouâre gonna give him a heart attack!!!â only to move to the ivar pov to find that he was in fact having a heart attack. i Love that for themđ sub ivar is like inspired choice #17266 for this fic but damn!! does it go hard you do just an excellent job!
itâs been such a convincing and satisfying journey for them. theyre really doing it!! i feel like my child has learned to ride a bike. you have been cranking out bangers only since the hiatus so thank you very very much for another fantastic chapter!!!â€ïž(bit of a tangent but i briefly looked up some baseline historical symbolism for lavender bc i was so struck by freydis and the mint smell and i wanted to get ahead of the game and like the first meaning that comes up is silence lmaoâsomehow i donât think thatâs it so ill have to keep looking!)
OMFG ILY â€ïž
Iâm so happy you liked the newest update! That morning was A Lotâą for Ivar lol, all positives but still, his mind tapped out halfway through GÇ«fga and none of us can blame him, poor guy was a tad overwhelmed lol. And yeah, her not really knowing if she should push or not is a thing that happens a lot (that will happen a lot more in a certain AU lol) because there really is no way to navigate around that until thereâs the established trust and vulnerability that they have by now.
Iâm so glad the fact that he now holds on to the certainty of her promising to stay by his side was noticeable!
Omfg yeah, the inside of Ivarâs head anytime she started talking was probably just a loop of a very loud alarm going off lol
Iâm so happy you like sub!Ivar, it is a blast to write him actually surrendering to his lover like that. I cannot see him any other way to be honest, especially with my priestess. Sheâs been thinking about making him hers for a long time: âEven after he has imprisoned you, it would be a lie if you said you didnât wonder what it would take to have the Viking underneath you, or the different ways you could make his proud façade crumble."
Thank you so so much for your kind words, they mean so much!! I am so happy you have been liking this so far, and that you enjoyed the latest updates. Thank you so much, you wonderful person!
I answer your intrigue about Lavender under the cut by the way, if youâre interested. It is not as interesting as with Mint and Freydis Iâm afraid, but if you were curious as to why Ivar lingers on it, and why specifically Lavender, under the cut is the (very rambly, but thatâs expected of me by now lol) answer đ
As for the lavender, I commend your resolve to get ahead of any plot twists, but surprisingly this isnât one. Lavender is actually the scent she uses in her baths, and thus her skin smells slightly of lavender. In a deleted scene of one of Ivarâs PoVâs it goes into how he has started to relate this slight lavender scent with her so much that walking into their room already makes him feel like sheâs there even if she isnât; and in his newest PoV he just lingers on it because itâs just one more way she clouds his senses.
As for why lavender? Ah, thatâs where my irrational need to research everything comes into play. Lavender is a flower that symbolizes Persephone first of all, and it was (according to some of the sources I handled) one of the flowers used in the temples in Ancient Greece, so for the Priestess it has a strong meaning regarding her faith (and her retracing Persephoneâs myth in the Goddessâ role, but she doesnât know that lol). Also, Lavender was fairly common, and it has a lot of medicinal uses, including relaxation and the such, but most importantly for this story, it is one of the many herbs used to heal burn wounds. Lavender was one of the flowers used on the Reader (and that once she was better she used on herself) after the Eleusis thing, and either consciously or not she uses it still, it is a source of comfort in a way.
Cause hereâs a thing/headcanon of the Reader/Priestess that really means nothing but I always snuck into my work: she is a healer first and foremost (is the one thing across all AUs and all the places she has been that remains consistent, from the Roads to Greece to Kattegat and beyond, in Nostalgia, and Hope and Alatheia and all others), and her insistence on keeping plants close to her is mostly because she wants life to be around her in a land like Kattegat, yes, but it is also because she trusts/relies on the herbs and what she can do with them. Her own sword and shield, her own way of fighting, like Sieghild told her in the flashback of Ch 33.
At the beginning of her time in Kattegat, stretched to her marriage to Ivar even, she mostly just kept plants like Lavender, Poppy, Summer savory, Field scabious and the such, which are all used medicinally to treat burns and as antibiotics. She is more scarred by what the Byzantines did to her in ELeusis than she would like to admit, or that she ever would in her PoV, thatâs why I like sneaking in comments by Ivar and Freydis in their PoVs about how she flinches when someone breathes too much life to a fire, or how when she feels unsafe (even when she is freezing her ass off, bc she is not used to Scandinaviaâs cold) she sits far away from any fire. Keeping plants like this is her way of irrationaly wanting to keep herself safe if they ever do the same thing to her again, even if it is incredibly unlikely. Slowly, she starts to be able to let go of that, and really all that remains by now (~Ch 42) of those plants is the Lavender.
When she marries Ivar (and more importantly when she starts truly caring about him) she starts keeping plants like Comfrey, Chickweed, Buckeye, which are used for broken bones or for rheumatic/arthritic pain, or for pain general, like Willow or Elderberry. Freydis makes a point of it in âUntil spring comes.â, of how she has been relentless on keeping both the common/accesible ones like Comfrey and Willow around, but has also secured plants from the East, like Ganglong (which was traditionally used for bone fractures). Again, the plants and her ability to heal is her own way of fighting, her own way of keeping the people she loves safe and protected, limited as it may be. Which, around Ch 31 she uses (in a different way) to try to keep the man she loves safe, which is by making the wreath of flowers and praying to her Gods.
And once she really starts settling into her life in Kattegat, even if she doesnât realize it, she no longer keeps plants only for the use they may have, and brings things like that Marsh Violet (that as far as my limited reseach told me has no real medicinal uses). Her own way of making the world around her a little more hers is by putting plants around her and caring for them (she did this in the Roads a lot too), and with time the stubborn little shit accepts letting this world make her a little theirs too by caring for plants like that one.
You are on point that I use plants and symbols a lot, most of them you know about by know. Ivar/Hades and snakes, Melinöe/Freydis (especially once the revelations of Ch33-34 happen, which is when the Minthe parallel comes to an end and she embraces the role of Melinöe in the Priestessâ eyes now that the lies are discovered) and howling dogs, Hermes/Galla and hawks/falcons. I used Snowdrops a few times I think, towards the beginning, which was a little nod to Freyjaâs myth and the Priestessâ threading the line of it, because I like the parallels between some of Freyja and Persephone/Hecate (which by some sources could sometimes be intertwined, or one and the same, much like Melinöe and Persephone).
Anyhow, sorry for the long-ass answer, I hope it doesnât dissapoint. I really cannot put into words how happy it makes me that youâd care enough about this story to search the meaning of lavender, thank you so much for your support, and for the undeserved love you keep showering me and Nostalgia with! Thank you so much sweetheart!
Sending you my love!! â€ïž
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SOME NIGHTS YOU DANCE WITH TEARS IN YOUR EYES
CHAPTER TWO
pairing: baekhyun x reader, (in future chapters) ot9!exo x reader
genre: mafia, fluff, (in future chapters) smut
warnings overall: gang shit, cursing, violence, mature scenes, drugs, blood
warnings in this chapter:Â daddy kink, makeout session in front of people
word count: 2k+
You wake up bleary, your eyelids fluttering at the harsh grey light filling the room. Youâre disconcerted and dazed, confused about where you are. As you raise your head the room begins to spin. You feel as if youâve woken up out of a hypnotic state.
You can only sigh and you search for your phone to take a peek at the time- 7:13 AM.
You shouldâve slept longer than two hours.
You glare at the time as your phone vibrates wildly in your hand and feeds your moodiness. Notifications of messages and missed calls from your parents pour in. Names of your friends are scattered randomly amongst all of the notifications.
With a flick of your wrist you throw it off the bed and it falls with a low thud. You donât think you broke it but even if it is broken, you don't care. You can simply ask Baekhyun to buy you a new one. He's already done so twice... Youâre quite clumsy.
You roll over on your pillow to find an empty spaceâ Baekhyunâs side of the bed. You wince as you push yourself further upright in the bed. You pout at the thought of him not staying with you.
You look down and notice that youâre only wearing a large white button-up shirt. One that you swear belongs to Baekhyun. You bring the collar to your nose and inhale softly. You are right. The scent of Baekhyun invades your nose- but his best friend is there as well. Cigarettes. You can't help but roll your eyes as you groan to yourself; Why do all his clothes reek of cigarette smoke? Nevertheless you indulge, enjoying it even though itâs not the best. With thoughts of him storming in your head, you squeal as you press the long sleeves to your face; smothering yourself with his scent.
Deciding that the natural light is not enough, you turn on the bedside light and glance around the room. His room is vastly different from your old one. Itâs minimalistic yet so elegant. Floored with rich marbles so well polished that it reflects the light, you swear it'll blind you if you glance at it from a certain angle. Rich-colored sheer drapes rest over the sole window that fills the left wall; looking through them shows you that you're surrounded by yards of trees. You turn to find the door of the walk-in closet open, which allows you to see that it was filled to the brim with dark shaded suits. Across the room sits a black bureau with papers carelessly scattered all over it. To your left is the one table in the room, a nightstand that supports the lamp you just turned on and an ashtray filled with dozens of cigarette butts. That's why all his clothes reek of cigarette smoke, you sigh.
And finally, the big bed with a memory foam mattress that you've awoken in, tucked into securely. The bed sheets are light and silky. This is the first time you've slept in such an elegant bedroom. That is if you donât count the chic hotel rooms Baekhyun has brought you to before. You count six lights in the roomâ table lights, wall lights, and the lamp besides the bed.
Why would one person need so many lights? You've always imagined Baekhyun as a person who enjoys darkness. Youâre quite surprised by what you've observed but you are happy, learning something new about him.
After you've had your fill of studying his room, you struggle to get yourself out of bed. It requires a great deal of endurance and effort considering how heavy the covers are and how groggy you are from waking up. The second you stand up, youâre exhausted and the only thing you want to do is jump back in bed and go back to sleep- that is until Baekhyunâs face flashes in your mind and you think that searching for him is far more interesting.
You walk to his bathroom and wash your face. You find one toothbrush. Baekhyunâs. You take it and proceed to brush your teeth. Some people might find it disgusting but youâre sure he wouldnât care, youâve done more nasty things with Baekhyun; which include but is not limited to him spitting on your face.
When youâre done brushing your teeth and brushing out your soft hair, (if you have dreads, curly hair or braids, youâre rearranging your hair instead!) you head for the bedroom door.
You peek out into the hallway. The floor looks deserted. You can hear chatter down the hall towards the staircase at the very end. Baekhyun must have some guests, thatâs why he didnât stay with you! Excited to meet new people you rush down the hallway, passing many doors as you bolt to and down the stairs. The closer you get, the louder the voices grow.
When you finally reach the last step you find seven men, including Baekhyun, talking softly. Remembering youâre only wearing a dress shirt, you pause in your tracks and glance down. You breathe a sigh of relief when you see that the large button-up covers your panties. The hem rests atop your knees, baring the shapely expanse of your legs.
Their light chatter pulls your attention once again and you observe Baekhyun and his guests for a moment, from the bottom step of the stairs. Theyâre all good-looking, rivaling Baekhyun's charms. You note that theyâre all wearing suits. Many of the men appear to be substantially older than Baekhyun, leading you to believe theyâre associates. The men are strewn about on the couches and chairs, comfortably lounging as if they are family yet the tone of Baekhyunâs voice is all business. Baekhyun's serious tone suggests that your hypothesis about them being business colleagues of his may be correct. Effectively, to hide his gangster dealings from scrutinizing eyes, as a cover, Baekhyun tells everyone that he works in a company.
You try to sneak closer, curious of their conversation but with your first step the entire plan falls to ruin. The wood floor creaks loudly under your bare toes. Suddenly aware of your presence, their conversation comes to a suspiciously abrupt halt.
You can feel the stares burning into you, surprise morphing into lust. You donât shy away from their gaze, liking the attention. You know you look goodâ you made sure of it when you were in the bathroom. You search for Baekhyun and when you meet his bored eyes, you beam at him and skip to him, passing by the six other men. You jump onto his lap. The shirt rides up your thighs just a little bit. Â âDaddy! Did you sleep well?â You gaze with big doe eyes, completely ignoring the other model-looking men in the room. You want to look at them so bad; to take in their symmetrical features but you know that if you do you wonât be able to stop. Thatâs how you attracted Baekhyunâs attention in the first place.
You kept staring at him from across the club all night. Maybe he got annoyed and thatâs why he stood up to you- to tell you to fuck off. Maybe thatâs why but you couldnât help yourself- the moment he came to you, you jumped out of your seat, wrapped your arms around his neck and kissed him. Was it sexual harassment? Probably- but he seemed to like it since he brought you with him to a five star hotel and fucked you all night. Heâs kept you around since. He seems to have a soft spot for your straightforwardness (he never said so but you know it, you can see it in his eyes) and here you are. In his home, officially living with him.
Youâre stopped in your state of reverie by Baekhyunâs low-pitched voice, âWhat are you doing here? Awake?â
âI couldnât sleep in that big bed of yours without you! You know itâs not very polite of you to leave your baby girl sleeping all alone! And you had the nerve to invite some friends this early in the morning, itâs unfairâŠâ You pout at him. Gasps of shock fill the room because of how you talk to Baekhyun. Normally a person who spoke to him like this would end up dead but Baekhyun seems amused when you act like this.
His face doesnât change, still void of emotion, but the corner of his mouth quirks up a little bit. You resist the urge to kiss him because you want to continue to complain about him leaving you alone. As youâre about to open your mouth again, a deep voice interrupts, coming from behind you.
âInvite some friends? Where did that come from, little one? Weâre not his friends.â A red haired man says, amusement dripping from his velvety voice. Baekhyunâs face is still frozen in an annoyed-looking blank expression.
âThen what are you doing here?â You raise an eyebrow, confused about why theyâre here at all as you look back at the man talking to you.
He places his cheek against his palm lazily. âWe all live here.â He states nonchalantly.
You immediately turn to Baekhyun, your mouth agape. Dubiety in your eyes, you ask with a small voice.
âAre you poor daddy, is that why you have roommates? You canât afford this place? Thatâs ok! I still love you!â
âShut the fuck up,â Baekhyun snarls at you. âYou talk way too much.â
âWeâre brothers.â You turn to face the man who just spoke. He has dark curly hair and two piercings on his mouth; one is attached to a chain that goes to the top of his ear.
Thatâs hot.
âCan I play with your hair?â You blurt out suddenly, not really asking, just proposing. Itâs not that you donât care that theyâre brothers, itâs just not that big of a deal. You understand that itâs more convenient for them to live together because of their job. You may not be book smart but you are street smart and you know when to stop asking unnecessary questions.
The man raises one eyebrow at you- before a stupefied smile breaks through his face. He doesnât say anything, he only pats his lap. You jump up from Baekhyunâs lap and quickly walk to the curly haired man. You sit on him abruptly, not missing how his opened dress shirt shifts to show more of his chest. Running your fingers through his dark hair, you let yourself enjoy the softness of his locks. His eyes fall shut immediately and his lips part open slightly. He relaxes with your caresses.
âWhat are the products you use? Your hairâs so soft...â You pout, moving your fingers to play with his chain, liking how it tingles against your long fake nails.
He opens and stares at you thoroughly with heavy-lidded eyes. His thumb brushes your jaw and you close your eyes at your turn, soaking up the heat and the profound lust flowing from him into your skin. You take it all in with a hunger so wild itâs a physical pain. Then he pulls your head down to him and kisses you. What starts out as a sweet kiss transitions into a battle of teeth and tongue. Hands greedy for a touch, bodies fighting to get closer. Itâs like no one else is in the room. Youâre not even paying attention to Baekhyunâs dark gaze. The curly-haired strangerâs fingers leave your face and wrap around the nape of my neck, gripping your thigh. A low growl pushes through his lips and into yours.
Holy shit.
How is it youâd lived without his mouth on yours all these years? Â The second he kisses you, you feel as if he has always been there, kissing you, claiming you. Desiring you.
Pain suddenly shoots through your head. You squeak as youâre pulled away from the mysterious man. Turning, you find Baekhyun pulling your hair.
âWhat do you think youâre doing?â His voice is dark. You can decipher a pinch of annoyance in it.
âIâm only testing if your kissing skills run in the family!â
He slides his hands down the curve of your backside harshly, then scoops you off his brother's lap with his hands under your thighs. You wrap your legs around his slim waist naturally as he walks away.
âWait, I havenât tried with the others yet!â You move rigorously in his hold, meeting the amused gaze of the others.
He walks to his spot and lets himself fall lazily, which results in you falling with him on his lap. You turn to him and cross your arms against your chest. Your body language clearly tells him that youâre annoyed. âYou didnât even let me finish withâ uhâŠâ
âJongdae.â The man you were making out with seconds ago states.
âYeah, exactly! You didnât let me finish with Jongdae!â
âArenât you two dating?â A man with pink hair asks. His bangs cover his eyes but as you stare at him you can see how big and innocent his eyes look. His ears are big and his lips are full. You resist the urge to stand up to kiss him the same way you did with Jongdae.
You hum as you think of how to explain your relationship with Baekhyun- âNo.â You play with Baekhyunâs shirt, âIâm only here to pleasure him and in return he spoils me. Itâs ok for me to go after other guys, as long as Iâm here when he needs me and my skills.â You wink cutely at the others before adding- âThatâs why I can fuck yâall!â
âDonât curse."
âSorry daddy.â You peck Baekhyunâs lips softly. âIâm hungry, can I eat some food?â
âThe twins are in the kitchen, still eating. Go ask them for some food.â Baekhyun whispers as he takes a puff of his newly lit cigarette.
Twins? So they are other hotties in this house, looks like your stay here is gonna be more enjoyable than you thought.
As youâre about to stand up, two tall men enter the living room, looking absolutely different despite being twins (you guessed it). One is tan while the other one is really pale. The tan male has dark green hair that really compliments his skin. His full lips look delicious, and his abs that are shown by his crop top look ready to be marked. You slide your tongue on your lips hungrily as your eyes turn to the other twin. His hair is dark and short, the cut shows his forehead. His nose is strong and his eyebrows are dark. The longer you stare, you come to realize something-
âYouâre the guy I fucked last week!â
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