This is gonna be so long i am so sorry but iāve been reading WG3 all throughout the day, at work, on the street and as i ate my lunch so its been all on my mind for HOURS now and i have to SCREAM about it somewhere š¤·āāļø
First things firstā¦ Wanda, bestie, is currently in, what iāve coincidently learned recently is called, the āØdick sandāØ its where you lose touch of reality and friends and everything that actually matters and just fall for a guy like a fucking idiot falling into quick sand, so yeah we definitely hate this version of Wanda but i shanāt judge until Curtis like cheats on her or something, which he will, and sheās left a sobbing mess being dragged out of the āØdick sandāØ
Alsoā¦ we still have yet to see her handle reader in this fragile state and if she keeps ditching her for Curtis while sheās this distraughtā¦ you must kill her off please and thank you š
I understand that its more convenient for the plot for reader to forget about what happened in the ride back home with Steve but like she remembered being fucked in front of everyone by Ari while being most high and drunk! Iāve never been drunk before so i dont know if the haze intensifies as the liquor runs through onesā veins but like i just hated that for her because it could have saved her but like i said it is essential for the plot i guess so iāll just shut up about it š„²
I LOVE how it all started with Ari forcing himself on reader and ended it with Steve doing the same thing and how the difference in her reactions was stark, depending on the dickhead, her feelings towards each one and just like the actual way they did the forcing! And i cannot believe that i am team Ari now! Like youāre really about to convert so many of us to Ari stans after this because Steve is a fucking monster and also you should definitely kill him off as well please and thank you š
Thank you for giving us a fragile and submissive reader who got to actually speak up and say no for once before all hell broke loose.. well.. looser š
with poyt, Omega was seriously pushed to her most extreme edge before falling over and just saying enough and even the way she said it was more to herself than to Steve tbh so this was a lovely change and i am grateful for it so thank you bestie š
Fucking Sharon! I canāt believe you made her nice and sweet! That is so genius of you but like also diabolical š itās like you had an angst bingo card and youāre just FEROCIOUSLY going for the win š
The ball hitting reader was just *chefās kiss* and its just perfect for me cause this was such a classic romcom moment and then having Ari scoop her up and take care of her is also another classic romcom move and i love you so much for it! God youāre so talented im gonna cry š
Speaking of the scoop, Ari felt fast for reader, huh? Did not think he would fold so damn fast! I mean i understand your assholes tend to have a heart hidden deep deep DEEP within them that ends up beating hard for your readers but i thought this one would take longer so i am definitely pleasantly surprised i must say š¤
Now for The Beefā¦ i think Kira has to do with it. That kind of hostility between boys almost always circles back to a girl they fought over or like a sister that got burned lol but like also let me congratulate you on your stunning talent to make me hate Steve Rogersā guts and to make him the WORST human being ever when his image is that of a golden retriever. Kudos bestie you have done what no one has ever been able to do which is break us essentially but we love it š
I canāt wait to hear Steveās backstory about when he was hospitalized for his anger issues btw iām holding my breath for that one cause neglectful parents š¤ angry and confused child is very relatable to me and representation matters š
āI broke up with her.ā is like singlehandedly the most powerful phrase iāve read in a fanfic in a long time because the timing, Ari saying it and the way he chose to say it are all just so incredibly and perfectly woven together to create the best plot twist EVER! Again with the genius and the talent and the youāre the goat shenanigans š
I love the questions at the end cause its such a clever way to engage with your readers and honestly you are one of the best fanfic writers in this fandom at that! Your blog is honestly just the best place to hang out and just have the best of fun like weāre all just this insane group of besties who keep fighting over Ariās 13 inch dick (when soft) and spewing hatred in the ugly and icky face of Andy Barfer lol
Iām so sorry this is long but iāve made a promise to myself that i would read every review for this chapter since i never did it for any of the previous ones or ever for poyt cause i have the attentions span of a snail so i just took liberty and just talked my ass off to kinda compensate for all the reading imma be doing lol
Anyway, in case it aint obvious yet, loved the chapter to death. Love you to death. Forever grateful for all that you give us. You feed us so well, mother, we are so chubby and cute just like little Rosie šššš
Yep, Wanda is definitely in dick sand right now! I love that hahaha, it fits perfectly.
And itās not uncommon for people to remember only bits and pieces when they were drunk. When the Ari stuff happened, she had just drank. When the Steve stuff happened later, she was fully gone lmao. Like when Iāve gone on nights out, there have been times where I remember the beginning of the night but then have no recollection of anything else until the very end. And other times I remember everything! So it all just depends.
Also I didnāt really think you guys would think Steve was a monster š¤š Like, as you said, they BOTH forced themselves on her. But the one who stopped and apologised is the monster and not the one who clearly didnāt stop? Thatās soooo interesting to me mwahahah, but I didnāt see this reaction coming from yall but it seems to be the popular one! Tbh theyāre both fucking monsters bahahaha but itās called wicked games for a reason! š¤š¤ also I think readerās reaction to Steve in his bedroom was BECAUSE of her past experiences with Ari!! It made her wiser to the fuckboyness of boys hehehe and wary too!
Also hahaha I am so happy you appreciate the questions at the end tbh i do the questions at the end bc i remember a lot of writers doing it on 1dff (the 1d fanfic site) back in like 2014 lol and even I did it when I wrote a fic there! Itās bc whenever I finish a fic im so frazzled bc Iāve taken in so much info so all I can do as a review is a keyboard smash so the questions are a good way for me to gather my thoughts so I thought it would be the same for you guys!
Thank you so much for reading and leaving such a wonderful review bestie! I love you sm š©·š„¹ Now letās see if Ari truly lives up things bc he has a lot more people in his corner this time around hehehe
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