#like that would be sooooo unhinged but honestly that is literally why i always get the bags when im forced to go there bc theyre a nice

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i just reread tbim because i am in love with the haechan you wrote (minus the girlfriend cheating parts of him🙂‍↕️) and i loved it even more reading it back to back this time, although it was so fun to wait and read new chapters every week.

even though it wasn't that long ago that the fic was finished, the second time reading it made me realise more things than the first time (as it always happens when you reread a book or rewatch a show, that's why i love doing it) + obviously i started rereading it because i loved it the first time but i love it even more now lol i've gotten even more obsessed with haechan's character😭

i hope you keep on writing haechan in the future because i honestly believe you are one of the few writers who write him the best. also!! if tbim were a movie it would be one of my comfort movies for sure ! as always, thank you <3

*sweating nervously but vibrating with excitement* care to share what you noticed 👀 that you didn’t catch the first time 👀 i don’t ever plan to stop writing for him i just posted a fic abt him and another fic abt him on patreon (shameless plug, you can read it here if you’d like)

and guess what? i’m writing another one as we speak (well not LITERALLY but im in the process of writing it…. im abt 10k words in (i will come back to update this number in a sec when i do the math….. update it’s actually at 12.9k woot woot 🥳 ) and im having sooooo much fun i try to write him a lil diff each time but this one is giving pussy fiend haechan just a wee bit he’s a lil less unhinged though and not quite as open about his feelings BUT YEAH :D and omg ….i would love to make tbim a movie ☹️ that’s the dream fr SO THANK YOU SM FOR THAT :’)

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5 Survive chapters 25 & 26

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Chapter 25

“When would he have bugged the RV?” Reyna returned, just as the chorus did, and Red had to strain to hear. “We haven’t left it unattended.”

I feel like it’s in the same sort of way that Mr. Sniper knew that they would make a wrong turn down a completely random side road in the middle of nowhere. 

That is to say that it only works because the author commands it to. Logic be damned. 

Yes, sir, right away, sir. Red blinked. It seemed Oliver had already forgotten that two people just died less than fifteen minutes ago, bleeding out on the road out there, blooms of red around their once-heads. He was already on to the next thing.

I’m kind of with Oliver about this. Don and Joyce are dead; there’s nothing more that they can do to help them. The only thing that the kids can do is to try and stay alive themselves. 

 She paused as, right then, Oliver and Reyna reemerged from the bedroom. Reyna’s eyes shifted, rubbed red, and Red wondered whether they’d been fighting in there, in whispers so the others couldn’t hear. How bad could their secret be? Worse than hers?

Is it bad that I’m wondering if Reyna is pregnant? Or is that too obvious? Maybe she had an abortion. 

Red scrabbled in the darkness for the toilet paper, ripping some free and folding it up.

Okay, this is the SECOND time this book has given us almost graphic details of Red urinating. What the fuck. 

“So why does your uncle have a photo of someone else’s family in the glove compartment?”

Chapter 25 summary: The others are obviously confused about how Mr. Sniper could have put a bug in the RV when they’d pretty much been with the RV this entire time. However, I guess since there’s nothing better to do, they all start to search. 

Red searching through the cabinets and fridge honestly takes up sooooo much page time. Like we get it; she searched and found nothing. Move on. 

Arthur passes her a note that asks if she’s okay, but she says no. They briefly talk about Don and Joyce. Red has this idea in her head that if literally one tiny thing had changed, then the elderly couple would still be alive. Arthur tells her that it’s not her fault. 

There’s also this tension between Oliver and Reyna. Like their secret is due to the fact that they’re a couple. Hence why I’m thinking of pregnancy. But seeing them coming out from the bedroom after they’d clearly been fighting makes Red wonder what Simon’s secret is. 

Then there’s a really gross passage where Red tries to go to the bathroom. She’s about to undo her pants when they turn all of the lights off in the RV so that they can search the light fixtures, so she has to go in the dark. To make matters worse, they’re literally RIGHT outside the door, and it’s awkward. The entire passage should have been removed, since IDK what the author thinks that it’s doing here. 

They don’t find any bugs, and Oliver is clearly becoming more and more unhinged when each and every one of his ideas fails. Maddy finally produces a random photo from the glove box, and Simon is like “Uh… That’s not my uncle.” (His uncle owns the RV.) 

Chapter 26

“One of us is working with them.”

Chapter 26 summary: For some unholy reason, they need to argue about this mystery photo. Simon eventually tells them that his uncle’s used car dealership… Doesn’t always sell legal goods. And that he’s helped his uncle to acquire some of these vehicles occasionally. Because his mother isn’t some hotshot lawyer, and his family isn’t swimming in money. Not like Oliver’s and Maddy’s family. 

However, Simon is quick to point out that he accepted the offer of this unknown-status RV because Maddy had insisted that things be as cheap as possible for Red’s sake. This obviously makes Red feel like shit… Especially since she’s standing right there. She has to brush it off and act like she doesn’t care. 

Simon and Oliver start arguing about the note. Again. 

It’s at this point that Red realises that she left the walkie-talkie in the bathroom. But she’s so bubble-headed that she forgot that it was in there. When she does find it, Oliver has the sudden realisation that maybe the bug is in the walkie-talkie. Red offers to disassemble the device, since she’s done it a million times with her mom’s old police radio. 

However, as you might have imagined, there’s nothing in there that shouldn’t be. 

This leads Oliver to the conclusion that somebody is working for the snipers, and has been reporting back in. Which… wow. The paranoia and delusions have set in with him suuuuper quick, haven’t they? 

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Any parallels or similarities you find in eremika and obikaka? I’m interested to hear your takes.

unlike obikaka, eremika isn't in my top two for it’s show (sasusaku, obikaka, erejean, aruani) however eremika is still a favorite of mine similarities and parallels alright there’s a bunch now that I think about it

eren and obito ... were genocidal maniacs who genuinely believed they were doing the right thing and they dd these things partially for themselves but also for their loved ones they had no qualms of killing innocents but at the same time had a plan for people to be brought back to life/from being titans and that they ensured they would die

now eren thought armin was going to be the one to kill him and obito thought he’d be the one to kill himself with rinne rebirth or whatever it’s called but in actuality Mikasa kill eren and Kaguya killed obito HOWEVER the only other person who came close to killing obito was KAKASHI and he would have had Minato not stopped him had naruto taken the tone of aot kakashi for sure would have ended Obito’s life

in personality eren and obito have similar temper issues the crybaby I wanna do this unattainable goal personality they weren’t really skilled at anything but they always wanted to be the best they were reckless and as children hated seeing anyone left behind anyone they valued human life very much

mikasa and Kakashi are actually very similar yes yes adult kakashi reads porn and is lazy as fuck unless its the battlefield but why is he like this? because of obits death. and it’s not just oh he decided to become a better person no he modeled his new personality from obito Mikasa doesn’t do this but she too changes after eren saves her of course trauma changed her from a sweet happy girl to the Mikasa we know but more than that Kakashi’s loss of obito and Mikasa’s saving by eren fundamentally change their personality and outlook on life

EM antis will say that Mikasa’s life revolves around Eren which in some ways yes a lot of the things she dos has to do with Eren because he’s her precious person and she wants to keep him safe she doesnt want to loose someone again but you know no one ever points this out Kakashi’s personality also revolves around obito due to obito being “dead” no one calls it out but everything he does the way he talks the way he fights the way he treats people is all connected to obito

kakashi calls obito his “eiyuu” his hero and for Mikasa eren is the very same as obito saved kakashi from being crushed dead eren saved Mikasa from being sold off and we also see in these instances that obito and eren are willing to kill for people who they barely know/seem to dislike I know team Minato was in a war but obito had parallels to naruto and 13 year old naruto refused to kill anyone even if they had hurt his precious people eren well... dude has always been a little unhinged but so has obito it just didnt seem that way because being unhinged was the normal for Ninja if u were sane u clearly shouldn't be a child solider for hire in a military dictatorship

also just angst yea that's a similarity angst cuz like Mikasa and kakashi will never get to be happy with their loved ones because eren and obito are dead had they been alive they would have been executed due to committing literal genocide kakashi has no body to bury and Mikasa only has a head they cant have a grave with their names on it and yea yea obito might still be on the memorial stone in boruto but u really think anyone outside of team 7 would be alright with the man who started the 4th shinobi war being honored among the people he killed?

people will hate them rightfully so because they did terrible things but for Mikasa and kakashi it’ll be devastating because they love eren and obito so much but other than armin and naruto you wont find anyone else who seems to accept that they feel such a way (tho I wanna believe my favs jean and sakura would be ok with it cuz jean has always been soft on Mikasa and eren while sakura would understand the feeling of liking someone who did bad things but regretted it but that doesnt take away said bad things)

theres a lot more but I feel like im honestly just repeating the same things sooooo if I were to parallel obikaka with a ship it would be bakudeku from bnha or sasusaku (ik ik people are gonna be like but it’s more like sasunaru and to that I say naruto never saw sasuke as a criminal and he always wanted to save him while sakura tried but couldn't cuz she loved him so much and that's very much like Kakashi’s feelings toward obito no hate towards sasunaru tho I ship it I just like sasusaku and sasunarusaku better)

phew this is long sorry anon