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[eddie-rifff]

my background check came back clean i think im actually going to get this job. i start in 10 days

[blackleopardgirl]

MTR final dating episode- he's never finding a woman.

MTR wanting that one woman Melanie to ask younger women why their standards are so high is so stupid. I always say that at the root of the issue is what you have to follow with these red-pill men, to find out why they say what they say. at the root: MTR wants to know WHY the woman he wants to be with, wouldn't want to be with him. so he hopes that another woman like Melanie, could ask the woman and try to convince THEM to choose basic men when women don't stand to gain anything from that when they CAN get better.

MTR wanting a younger woman when he's 40 is odd. He isn't a catch. he's not cute, he dresses awkwardly, and he's clearly trying to seem "masculine" or "cool" with the women around him. He's insecure which is why he pretends when he's around people/mainly women.

Being in this community has rotted MTR (and other people's) brains. He ignored a perfectly good woman because of ONE comment she made and her being 33, despite him being 40.

NOTICE! HE HAD NO PROBLEM GIVING THE 20-SOMETHING, CUTE, IG MODEL A CHANCE AND DIDN'T REALLY WANT THE GOOD GIRL! THESE MEN ARE LIARS. THEY SAY THEY CARE ABOUT A WOMAN'S PAST AND BLAH BALH BUT WATCH HIM! HE WANTED ANOTHER CHANCE WITH HER WHY? CAUSE SHE'S MORE HIS SPEED. MELANIE IS MORE HIS SPEED.

you can fucking TELL that MTR is so into Melaine, and he doesn't care she's older and is divorced and has kids. these men are liars part 2. As long as you're cute and play your part, they don't care about all that other shit.

in the end, it was very funny when Pearl says, "I think she showed me that us women need to do better because it's hard to pick good women for men to date from." what....? how is THIS the conclusion you came from after seeing MTR's points? he literally is awkward and not cute? what MTR wanted was for women like Nicholle Gonzalez and Cyn Steph to show up there and be interested in him for a date and it's like sir! You're 40, lame, not cute, and socially awkward. No cute, sexy, young women are looking for you, you're not Michael B. Jordan or Drake, or some attractive rich man, you're John David from New York City. they don't care! So no, cute sexy girls aren't coming.

In conclusion: the problem with men like MTR, is that they believe that they're more of a catch than they are. even in the final episode, he says something along the lines of, "I think I'm a great catch! I think I'm what a woman is looking for!" and it's like, no you clearly aren't because if you were, you'd be married with a family by now. it can't just be everybody else. that's the mindset of a child. he already said he doesn't have women friends, so he isn't sure how he actually comes across, and none of the MEN who watch him are ever going to call him out usually- so he goes around delusional thinking, he's a high caliber guy. he isn't. He's also a Ben Shapiro kinda nerd who weaponized his intelligence and couldn't let loose on the date. women don't want to be debated during a date stupid.

[moondustis]

hi! I keep using "I" in my works too much. most of my works are like: "i blah blah i blah blah i balh." the I's are just too redundant so do you have solutions or tips for that? thank you in advance! i love the louvre btw!!

hii, i tend to do that sometimes too lmao it’s very hard 😩 i’m guessing you write in first person pov but since i’m more used to second person i’m gonna explain it using it, i hope it’s not hard to understand and that it helps you! 

when it comes to actions, a good way i find to help with the overuse of “you did this, and then that and then that.” is putting emotions and descriptions of the surrounding in the middle, for example: “You sigh a little bit too exaggeratedly when you finally remove your heels, the satisfaction of finally stepping on the cold floor with bare feet almost sending shivers down your body.”

so like instead of writing “You’re at a party having fun, with a drink in your hand. You look to your left and see...” you can something like this: “The party you are at is fun, the cold drink in your hand definitely helping, but when you look to your left and see...” this helps the sentences flow better in my opinion. 

as for emotions, instead of writing it like “You felt like crying and when you blink a tear falls down.” i like playing around with it instead of going straight to it. “You blink quickly, a lump forming in your throat as he continues talking. There’s a sting in your eyes, the tears wanting to come out and when you finally let them is with a small sob.” 

basically, what i do is fill in the spots in between “You’s” to make it flow better. 

i’m not sure if this was your actual question, i’m really sorry if i misunderstood it :( but if not, i hope this is helpful!! 

[i-see-you-mendes]

hi, okay i��m probably gonna sound weird but um I really enjoy writing and get inspired by your post to keep writing about Shawn. i would really like to share my writing with the people on tumblr...but i’m worried it’s just not gonna get read by anyone and I just don’t wanna feel like I wrote it all and spent so much time into the writing to have no one read it. i need help, you got any advice? thanks

Hi, Hi, Hi! This is not weird at all for me, and it’s actually very exciting cause I’ve never had anyone ask me a question like this on here before. Also you cannot respond to an anon ask privately, so I hope this doesn’t bother you. 

Honestly…

POST IT

Just do it, this Tumblr was one of the biggest risks I’ve taken (as silly as that sounds). I was always absolutely terrified of people reading what I wrote and there were a lot of factors that went in to me finally getting up the nerve to post something on here but for some odd reason I did and I wouldn’t change that decision for anything.

My blog was totally blank when I posted my first imagine. I had 0 followers and only followed like 3 people. For some odd reason it comforted me that I thought  no one was seeing it… so I posted a second one. It felt good to just have my writing out there somewhere and nothing negative was happening, so I kept going. Annnnd now here I am

Okay on to the actual helpful advice though

I wish I had a great answer for so many people discovering my blog all of a sudden, but really the only thing I did was… post a master-list. I did it at the same time I posted my third imagine and somehow people found it. I realize now how helpful it is when you come across those, so as soon as you post your first *whatever* (I don’t know if you’re into fics or single imagines or any of the other options), create one.

USE TAGS to your advantage. I’ve ran Shawn accounts before on other social media and so luckily I was used to tagging things. A few weeks in I saw an ask where the blog let the anon know Tumblr only sorts using the first 5 tags, so use the most important ones first on your writing. Ex. Shawn Mendes imagine, Shawn Mendes Fanfic, etc. Steal my tags if you want or peruse through other peoples for ideas

Put yourself in the text posts too, I love reading Author’s notes at the beginnings of a fic. If people find them annoying they’ll just skip them, but trust me most people don’t. It’ll help readers connect to you, cause it’s your place to be witty, funny, etc. where as in your fic it’s going to be a character talking. It’s just a little way to say “Hi, it’s me, the actual person behind these words.”

Talk to other blogs. Getting a message from someone is very rarely not appreciated, and you can be surprised by how quickly friendships will form. I’m always 10 times more excited when I see a fic come out and it’s someone I talk to. Even if their writing isn’t the best you feel a little sense of pride, you know? like go best friend, that’s my best friend. And even if they’re not actually my best friend, maybe they’ve only commented on one post, that’s still more than nothing.

Find your niche. You’ll be able to tell when you and a style click, and sometimes that means taking all those ‘man I wish someone had written..’ ideas and doing them yourself. Truly, I’d wait to post your first Imagine until you get that feeling. You’ll know the feeling. I’d never had the desire for anyone to read any of my stuff like I did with Slowly. Not because I thought it was the best thing ever, just because I felt in someway it needed to be shared, even if that meant just one person would read it. It all grew from there, even though no one even noticed Slowly until I had posted my third fic ( no one noticed my second either). Which is also to say don’t panic, people will find you

I mean there are lots of other things one could say like don’t take requests at first, try to distance yourself from the female character your writing, don’t over-word your imagines, blah balh, cause I’ve seen all those things be said on here but at that point I’m messing with your own personal flow and that’s a no from me. If you want to imagine yourself as “Y/N” or write 4.k words per one shot because that’s how you feel you write best- do it.

Also  come message me again and again if you feel the need to Hell, submit me your first post if that’ll make you feel better (I’d love to read it :) ) Or come talk to me off anon, I promise it may seem embarrassing but it’s not. And we don’t even have to talk about writing, we can just be chill.

I know that’s a lot, but I felt like I should give you the best answer I had.

Best of luck and I hope to be reading your things soon!! Deciding to do this is a brave thing, you’ve already got one fan in your corner

💕xxBxx

[plutonian-honey]

Hi! I'm sorry if you've been asked this before but I also have a 11th house stellium and I'm trying to learn more about my chart so I was wondering how is it for you to have that placement? And wether you like it or not? Anything you say about it would be interesting for me, actually 😅 thank you!!

lHiya!! Don't ever apologize for sending an ask ok I am so happy everytime even if it was literally 100 times of "i love plant" so dont worry!!! 11th house stelliums are super weird right it depends on which planets are in it you know so I have Sun, Mercury, Venus and Pluto all in my 11th house it's a party and for me, having the Sun there kind of influences you to place all your ego and self worth on your social interactions and friends & also makes it really hard to be alone!! I need to socialize every day for real I hate being alone or ignored. Having mercury in there also influences my need to socialize all the time as well because all he wants to do is blah blah blag balh blah all day legit its ridiculous smh esp bc hes in sag as well lmao. having venus there means i find it easy to be social you know? i make friends easily, my friends genuinely like me, i really fucking love people like shes just good to have there - she's good to have anywhere!! and then pluto is a fucking shithead smh nah i love him but like chill u know? he makes all the house stuff a little harder like i worry a lot about the things i say and do in public, i cut my friends off for months at a time over stupid things like just stuff like that. overall an 11th house stellium means ur friends and social life and community matter a lot to you and because friends are such a huge part of ur life, a lot of other stuff gets left behind and you can end up feeling lonely at the end of the day because friends are so everchanging (esp with pluto there smh) and this is probably my libra moon ass talking but you feel like you NEED people in your life and when ur alone u feel extra lonely and when people dont text you back or want to hang out with you its actually really hard and upsetting so thats a fun thing for us lmao if u send me ur placements & what planets u have in 11th i can tell u more about specifically you thank u !!

[daehwigaunlin01-blog]

Stuck With Guanlin

Genre: Angst, Fluff Summary: “ Out of all of the boys it have to be you!” I said. “ I know right out of all of the girls it have to be you too!” Guanlin said.. “Do you like her?” Jihoon asked. “Nope not at all” Guanlin said shaking his head.

Little by little Guanlin falls in love with her… because of….

Ch: 1

On my way to my new school. I am wearing the uniform that the school gave it to me.

I hate going to new school because people bullies me if the boys just help me a bit or they just hang out with me.

They would beat the sh** out of me and slap me.

I bet this school would probably be the same too. I don’t have any friends the only one that I have is just ‘Doyeon’. We are really good best friend but then later she have to move away.

I don’t know why.

I was infront of the school,  I past the gate and went to find the office and get my schedule first.

Even though I was late a little bit but I don’t care.

8:00

School start at 8 and I’m barely getting my schedule.

8:10

The teacher told me to follow him, my room number was ‘304A’ . I was nervous and have goosebump.

The teacher told me to wait outside and he went inside of the classroom

“Okay guys listen up quick!” His name was Mr.Park.

“Today we have a new student and please be polite and respectful to her. come in new student” Mr. Park said.

I walk in quietly not know which part to stare at so I just look down.

I then started to hear people talk things about me. Ummm I can hear what y'all talking about me.

‘damn she’s hot.’ 'shes okay that bomb’s

I can’t really tell if people already dislike me or like me a little bit but I still keep on quiet and listen to the teacher.

“Hi (Bows), my name is Lee Y/n, and I hope we will get along with each other and be friends.” I said . I don’t even know what to say but my mind was telling me to say those word. Lol.

“Alright let’s see where should you sit. Ah right there next to Park Jihoon. Hey you raise your hand.” Mr. Park said while the boy he was falling asleep.

But as he looked up at me his eye became big.

I slowly walked to the seat beside him and sat down. Then he stared at me. “Hi, new student, you already know my name yep it’s Jihoon and yours?” He asked me.

With a cute smile on his face.

“L-lee Y/n” I stuttered.

“Nice to meet you..” he said. And I said the smart thing too.

“Hi students (students stand up and bow to her) oh yeah. Today we have a new student right? L-lee Y/n right? (I nod my head) oh nice to meet you. Alright so today we have a really good news. From now on all of this week we will be really busy. Why because we have a project then filed trip and then another project.” Mrs. Bae said.

“PROJECT AND ANOTHER PROJECT AND WHAT FIELD TRIP!!!” Students yelled.

Have they never gone to any field trip. Hmm probably that’s why they are excited.

“Calm down okay I know hat you guys are really excited but you guys will have to wait. So this week we will do our first project and it will be, we are going to a garden place. It’s really pretty. And you and your partner will have to take alot of pictures and both of you will have to be in the picture together for only some pictures like two or three at least or more if y'all want to” Mrs. Bae said.

We all nod our head and waiting for the teacher to announce our partners.

“First partners are, Hana with Guanlin, Second, Jihoon with Y/n, Third, Daehwi with Some, Fourth, Jinyoung with Woojin” and more.

Guanlin Pov

I feel like I’ve seen her before, later on she introduced her self. I heard people saying to her that she’s hot and pretty .

Umm okay

She then got to sit with Jihoon, my best friend.

I don’t like her at all. Seeing her I already hate her.

Because I don’t like new student. They think they are the sh** and balh blah.

The teacher announce the partner and I got Hana and Jihoon got that new student again. Wow Jihoon must be really liking her.

Your POV

It was lunch time so I went to go get food. After getting my food I try to find a place to sit

I looked everywhere at the left side , there was no more seat and I looks t the right and saw only a seat beside a guy with Jihoon and other boys.

I didn’t want to sit next to them so I went to the place that I’ll go eat by myself.

Of course it’s at the rooftop.

But then I heard my name, “Lee Y/n”??? Said.

I turned around to see who was it. It was Jihoon, smiling at me…his face is cute to be honest. He was so nice too. And sweet

“Come sit with us since there’s no seat.” I looked at the other boy, but the guy , that guy right there I can tell that he dislike me.

I shook my head and said “its okay I can go find another seat.” As I turn around a girl was making a evil eye at me.

Oh my gosh please no drama.

-At the rooftop-

I was eating my food enjoying the air.

The air was so fresh and the food was super good. It was pizza with mini corn dog.

But then I heard lots of boy voice coming in the roof top I was trying to hide but too late all of the boy see me already.

“I thought your going to sit in the cafeteria…why are you here? Eating by yourself?”“ jihoon asked.

I was too shy so I kept on stuttering, “I-I-i uhh usually umm eat at the r-rooftop so yeah.” I said while holding my trays and was about to leave.

“Can’t you stay here for a little bit. I want to introduce you to my friend.” Jihoon said.

I didn’t want to say no again to him so I nod my head.

“Oh. Thank you.” Jihoon looked at me, with his smiling face again….ah…I am…… fallen……………in love with him his cute eyes and cute smile…

“Hi my name is Jinyoung,Jaehwan,Jisung, Daehwi,Daniel, Seongwoo, Seungwoon,Minhyun,Woojin, and…….” I was waiting for the guy to say his name.

Wait it’s him the guy that was making his face like he doesn’t want me to sit with him.

That guy right there I don’t like him at all, he seems scary and cold hearted and and and and so tall .

“Why are you not saying your name?” Daehwi asked.

Guanlin Pov

They were all taking turns to say their name and now it was my turn I didn’t want to say my name cuz…..

Theres my an tag she can just read it.

“It’s okay I know his name already, it’s Guanlin.” Hmm this girl read my mind really clear seems good.

“How do you know ?” Jihoon said.

I bet she’s gonna say by my name tag.

“By his scary face and tall and his name tag. His name even fits him” she said.

Ooh this girl is dangerous. I can tell she dislike me too. I don’t like her either.

Your POV

I can tell by his face he doesn’t want to say it because he probably want me to just read his name Durr it’s Lai Guanlin.

I can see his name tag. I ain’t blind.

“Ah Y/n” Jihoon said as I was about to leave. “What is it?” I asked while holding my trays.

“Oh nevermind ill tell you later.” Jihoon said. And shit his smile again….makes me fall in love with him more……

MORE THAN that Guanlin.

I nod my head and went downstairs and throw my trays away.

-Home-

“Y/N!!! Y/N !!!Y/N !!!Y/N!!!!!!!!!” mom yelled.

“WHAT IS IT” I yelled back, oh my gosh I was so annoyed by her voice .

“We have a new geust and it’s the boy that I have been talking about . He’s finally here. So you better get your butt out of bed and dress up nicely” my mom yelled.

I still didn’t care and sleep a little bit more.

Next thing I know cold water was already on me. I stood up quickly and went to the bathroom as fast I can.

Because I don’t want to here my mom yelling at me.

-skip-

“This is Guanlin he is very grown up now! Wow he is so handsome and so sweet” mom said. I was at the stair texting my friend Doyeon

I didn’t even want to get down there.

WAIT HOLD UP GUANLIN I HAVE HEARD THAT NAME BEFORE.!!!!

“Y/n please come out for a minute” mom said.

Guanlin Pov

“This is Guanlin he is very grown up now! Wow he is so handsome and so sweet” Ms.Lee said

“Y/n please come out for a minute ” What the hell!

Y/N I HEARD THAT NAME BEFORE. AT SCHOOL! NOPE IT CANT BE LIKE THAT. PROBABLY A NEW GIRL.

End of Chapter 1, Wattpatt username - Daehwi_Kookie