#jk i totally did lmaoooo

[dangerous-advantage]

i refuse to believe mxtx has not listened to at least one or both of the songs 'viva la vida' by coldplay, and 'pompeii' by bastille. i refuse

[aachria]

Alright for once i wont make this long fr (jk)

Ah yes, Ed's weird past life dreams that i always forget are a thing until they jump out at me like an old fandom i was in that i forgot existed that i suddenly want to read fanfic for.

Ed thinking of Sanji and then crying is evil evil evil of you, sometimes i picture you cackling eviley in your lair while writing but then i realize you're definitely sobbing alongside us 😭

NOOOOO going through the strawhats one by one is so mean of you 😭😭😭 also is ed still falling did i miss something 🧍‍♀️

"It ends with me and Luffy, as many things do" like the dream earlier 100% ended on luffy right?? Luffy was the boy right??? Like no way its not him 😭 even if its in a past life

So ed is still in the air and ed is alone and i honestly cant blame them for crying

"I mean, there’s always the chance Coin really will pull through with the pizzazzy ass pickup, but I’m not holding my breath for that." IAM I AM !! IM SO SO SO EXC8TED FOR THEM 🤭🤭🤭

Mf lands and immediately just 🧍‍♀️ makes a graffiti i mean at least bbg isn't cruing anymore 🤷‍♀️

Damn who tf are these giys is ed gonna get beat up 😭 more than they already are 🧍‍♀️

Bro shouldve asked the date at the doctor's

I hope Coin is on lulusia and i hope ed can get to luffy fast enough but the possibility of Ace dying is too real rn

Ed's weird dreams are like a weird rash that only pops up after they've been in a chlorine pool. Should probably be brought up to a doctor, but is it reeeeeally that much of an issue??? (Yes they should go to the doctor for that rash. That rash should be addressed. This metaphor got weirdly out of hand.)

I cackle while perched on my chair WHILE I cry, I'm a multitasker. Maximum angst said systematically go through the Strawhats, so I systematically went through the Strawhats. C'est la vie.

Hmmmmm yeah I wonder about that hmmmm.

Yeah I'd cry too. Ed's real for that.

BREATH EASY POOKIE. BREATH EASY.

The best way to ignore a breakdown is to vandalize public property with stolen goods. Graffiti is good for the soul 👍

Lmaoooo would I keep beating Ed up? Yeah I totally would wouldn't I.

A smart person would have asked the date. Ed is a very very VERY stupid smart person.

Man I hope Coin is in Lulusia too. That would be awesome. Anyway.

[the-sun-princess]

Emi Plays Revue Starlight: El Dorado Part 5

anyway continuing on since the image limit cut me off

maya i s2g ur ruining the whole revenge plot for everyone for goin on about the candy box akjhdsfiu

mm true tho, kaoruko's not going into acting. she's going to be teaching japanese dance.

maya u are killing me

mood

kjshf

what do you mean NEVER maya doesn't claudine call u infuriating all the time

akjhsdf maya i cant show it bc im too lazy to go get something to screen record but ur sprite is literally vibrating (jk here's a short twit vid of her doing it)

maya does NOT want to go to the boarding house lmaoooo

kaoruko: a longish monologue about how they need to get better to live up to the stage theyre preparing

maya u gotta get over ur fear of ghosties to become a better actress cmon

mk bla bla class B rally

snort masai's cup ramen taste changes each story ok. it was Not miso last time. amemiya's is always salty

babies...

genuinely dont remember if they said this last time or not but idc! ur seeing it again!

i mean if i can remember masais ramen flavor being different im sure i woulda remembered this-

something something pro dont let script revisions happen all the way to the end

booo kaoruko ghost interrupting masai's reply

KJSHKJDFHKJSHF

sjkdfhkjhksjdhf maya kaoruko is thanking u genuinely and this is what u say in reply

aha it is funny kaoruko said something about how two people can't share the same dream for their whole lives earlier. in response! to the ring scene. and masai and amemiya are now telling them that they Do have a shared dream they are going to Achieve Together

snort

"you promised not to tell anyone!?" "did i? well add it to your total revenge points then"

lmao do kaoruko n maya actually stay awake long enough to tell masai and amemiya stuff. yes lmao

and no ow ow ow brainfreeze right after. im still gon stop there tho it gettin late

<<part 4 part 6>>

[keeperoftinyarmy]

You're not jimin biased lol how can you think that Jimin doesn't deserve success like Jungkook. Nobody cares if you think that jk is more popular, jimin is really popular in USA as well, also where is Jungkook sex appeal? Lmaoooo watch the interview with Fallon and the interview that Jk did, Jimin was more comfortable to speak en english than Jungkook. You're not fan of jm you're just a shipper and clearly jm is not that important for you. Don't speak about him again

Okay….I’m Jimin biased to my core. I readily admit to buying more and streaming more for Jimin (and RM) I want him to have all the success in the world. But what I want is not going to change a business plan. I understand what Hybe might be thinking about with JK. Totally thinking objectively from a business point of view.

I am not going to trash JK …he’s not my bias…not my favorite voice in the group…and he’s not even the member I’d “ship” with Jimin…but I’m not going to diminish his talent, hard work and accomplishments. He deserves just as much as Jimin. And the fact that the company thinks he’s the one with the mass appeal, is not on him.

Absolutely agree….Jimin was great on Fallon. Jimin is good with words…even in a different language. He has a presence, charisma, sexiness..all of IT. He always shines in interviews.

JK is not as strong in that area but I’m not going to mock him for that. He has different strengths and he’s always been great in his role as center. I support him fully as I do the whole group.

And because I am Jimin biased I will continue to talk about him, support him, stream his music, buy his CDs, show everyone I can his videos… The last thing I want is for Jimin to lose fans….I want everyone singing his praises.

[taegularities]

omg rid i read entertainer on the go and i didnt realize it was split into two parts... I FEEL SO STUPID!!! but pls disregard my last two asks and answer this one!! FIRST OF ALL OF MY GOD I STILL WANT TO SAY THAT I WANT TO BE OC 🙏 she was so well-written and the smut is still top-notch 😭 also the full jk pov is so smart looking back at all the plot twists bc oh my god NOT BEING IN OC'S HEAD MADE EVERYTHING 10X MORE SHOCKING

i was originally not gonna share my notes bc i felt like they werent as thought out since i read it while commuting, but AFTER THE SECOND HALF I GOTTA SHARE MY REACTIONS

i also want to reiterate that i feel so embarrassed not realizing this was split into two parts bc i am def not down bad for jk - he is a piece of shit (too bad he was hot 😔 what a waste)

the wait was WELL WORTH IT 🙏

LMAO E., i will never get over the fact that you didn't see the rest of the fic 🤣 which is ok, it happened to a couple ppl!! but the fact that you loved it even then is crazy :')

also yesss – smart, sexy, composed??? i'd wanna be oc, too :') the smut did take me out, too haha i'm not one to brag, but rereading it i was like what am i on 😭 TOTALLY. not being in her head was an absolute deliberate choice or we would've known the ending when the fic started already.

"too bad he was hot 😔 what a waste" REAL LMAOOOO

you being excited over reading something from me was the cutest fkn thing ever. and ty for liking the banner!!! it's the fastest and most basic one i've made so far, but there's something about it hahaha :') the way your thoughts changed as you read is so interesting to me, that's exactly what i wanted to hear from my readers. from liking jk and finding him funny to absolutely despising him lol. also you can be her or be WITH her, i'm sure she'd love to get to know you 👀 idk what possessed me during the smut but i want that demon to come back the next time, too 😭

YOU MAKE HIM A POET WAS SO FUNNY TO ME TOO LMAOOO THANK YOU. hehehe honestly, i love your feedbacks to death, and i cannot wait for the next when cmi12 drops bc ugh, i have so many thoughts on that, even though there aren't as many plot twists or angsty bits hehe :') ily ily ilyyyy thank you for being here, my baby <33333

[onlyswan]

!! How could I forget 'in which jungkook comes home drunk but bam can’t speak.' comedy gold: _ _

he looks back at you with a wide grin, extending his arms to raise the puppy he’s holding. “say hi, bamie!”

oh, so now he has the arm strength to carry a dog? when he couldn’t even raise one to hold his toothbrush earlier?

you meet bam’s drooping round eyes, slowly blinking at you as he is suspended in the air. poor thing.

“you know it takes me like two hours to make him tired and sleepy, right?” __

tbh the whole story makes me giggle. kookie being annyoying, oc getting annoyed, both of them being cute, kookie salty that he missed bam's first woof on command... __

“jungkookie, speak.”

jungkook uses his elbows to drag himself as close to you as bam is. “woof!” his lips stay in a big pout with his bunny teeth showing, and you playfully slot the piece of popcorn in the space between.

__ pllleeeeease i need jk to woof for me and let me hand feed him Also arty don't forget you have a heart of gold and you're a baddie and we love you and you got this. even when you don't got this you still got this. 💗🔥

oh my god you’re right anonie why did i totally forget that i wrote this one i’m laughing so hard 😭😭😭 OC WAS SOOOO DONE WITH JK BUT ALSO FELT SO BAD FOR HIM :( he just wanted a woof :(

just overall cute and unserious i gotta reread this one myself after my exams lmaoooo thank you anonie for sharing 🫶🏼

even when you don't got this you still got this. 💗🔥

unironically i actually say this to myself all the time it’s the only option!!! hehe thank you so much anonieeee i really needed these reminders today 🥹 i love you guys too so much 💘

[ham-st4r]

I’m gonna start off by saying this: I genuinely don’t understand how some people in the human species can be just complete idiots. 🙂

Ill try to make this short but I don’t think I can lmaoooo. Basically at the place I work at we got this online order for delivery. We make everything according to what the order said to make. We pack it all nicely and we made sure that everything that was on the order was in the bag. We get the delivery guy to deliver it and that’s that.

Tell me why this customer calls us back 10 minutes later screaming that he’s gonna report us? This idiot was screaming about how he didn’t get and item that he ordered. So we go fine, let’s check the order that he submitted, said item was no where to be found on the receipt. So we tell him that, this guy had the audacity to say that he did in fact order it AND he paid for it (which was not true). So we politely say okay let us send you the online order that you submitted all the whole he’s still screaming at us (I kinda muted him cuz he was getting annoying lol) so we messaged him the receipt and we told him to take a look at it AND U KNOW WHAT THIS MF SAYS?!

“No I don’t need to look at it, I know what I ordered.”🗿🗿

Sir you clearly don’t know because you’re wrong 🤡🤡 and WHY WONT U JUST TAKE A LOOK? PROLLY CUZ U KNOW UR WRONG AND GOT CAUGHT TRYNA GET SOME FREE THINGS

But ofc we don’t call him out (I rly should’ve just don’t that) but honestly he would’ve just blamed us. And so we tell him if you really want this item we can make it for you, you just have to pay for it which makes total sense and he goes “I CANT BELIEVE YOU WOULD ARGUE WITH ME ABT THIS”

SIR WHAT MAKES U THINK WE’LL JUST STAND HERE LIKE IDIOTS AND LET YOU CHEAT OFF OF US LIKE THIS WHEN WE ALL CLEARLY KNOW UR JUST LYING

This is when I get mad and I’m tryna be all nice cuz yk customer service and I’m like sir if u would just take one look at the receipt we sent you, you will know that we’re not trying to argue with you we just don’t want to be accused of doing something we didn’t do. If it was our fault we would compensate you but we literally DIDNT DO A THING WRONG.

Then he goes “iM GonNa RePoRt you GuyS” 🙄I’m like is that supposed to be a threat or something? Cuz go the fuck ahead we literally have receipts and everything. Then I guess he was tryna make us scared and just give him the item so he goes “I’m gonna go on yelp and tell everyone that you guys are horrible” 🤡🤡🤡🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿

That’s when i just hung up.

Plz tell me that u also think this guy is an idiot or am I just going insane

So first off yes I think you’re in the wrong………

Jk lmao

No I completely understand you and yes I feel the same way cause some people are making me give up on the human race tbh😞

But honestly people are just so damn dumb sometimes it’s hard not to just cuss them out and tell them off

I honestly don’t know how people can be like that cause if it wasn’t on the receipt and he didn’t pay for it why not just order again?

It’s not like you’re getting charged twice so just place another order and call it a day I don’t understand why he had to get all wild and belligerent over something so simple now he’s gonna go leave a review about some bull 💩 that never even happened just lol

And you know he knew he was wrong too cause if he wasn’t he would have been so proud to show you guys the receipts and tell you what you did wrong but because he knows he’s in the wrong he refused

Gotta love these people 😂 I had to deal with plenty of bitches where I used to work at let’s just say I’m happy that I quit that shit job

And good on you for hanging up on his ass😂

[5secondsofhating]

Same anon, no I don’t think they will have another hit or Youngblood on their hands. I can’t say for certain- But I don’t see it happening unless they collab with another band like the level of fame chain smokers were at the time when they did “Who do you Love?” But they’re all idiots and collabing with Sierra Deaton and making music videos for songs that will never be popular (ie- Older). They’ll probably have like another 2 Complete Mess level minor hits imo if anything. I totally agree with what you said. They’re trying to survive from the fans they already have like you said, and that’s not a way to be sustainable (also a lot have left lol). The quality of the music is not as good in any capacity as it used to be and there is no promotion on their parts. Their independent album did not do well, and they literally were happy to reach #2 and the album then virtually disappeared from the charts. It flopped so hard. It reached #2 and then fell so low and then like disappeared. There’s 4 of them, I don’t understand how not one of them is taking a stand in regards to who they are collating or what they’re doing- they should be trying to be mainstream popular again ala Youngblood- but they’re just doing, whatever. I legitimately believe if they tried harder, or purposefully got into a scandal (LOL jk but not really), had a real label, collabed with other people, etc. they could at least become more recognized again.

yes, you're right, but didn't they say that no one wanted to collaborate with them? lmaoooo and if they did a collaboration with a big artist tbh I don't see any of the big artists wanting to collaborate with them, so they're losing either way. don't get me started on sierra collaborating with them because now she's part of the band and everyone treats her like she is (band and fans) she says she likes to be behind the scenes but we all know it's complete bullshit and it's only because she was semi cancelled, but every time she gets a chance to shine she does and her "shy persona" magically disappears and here we have 5sos pushing everyone she's super talented and poor her likeee stfu.

wait didn't they get to #1 because they were telling the fans to buy it and they even made the song cheaper?????? I don't remember

they should be trying to be mainstream popular again ala Youngblood- but they’re just doing, whatever. I been saying this for years but the thing is that 5sos don't want to be popular anymore because they're going to be "pressured" and I mean I understand but you can't expect good things if you never work, they want to do the minimum but expect to be the best and well, things don't work like that and they always come out with "finally we are doing what we like" but they say that every time there is a new album

i hope everything i said makes sense hhdwjffks

-n

[afreakingdork]

HI OMG HAPPY NEW YEAR BTW

OMG CHAPTER 15 MIGHT BE MY NEW FAVORITE, DONNIE YOURE SO FUCKED BUT IN LIKE A GOOD WAY I THINK LMAOOOO

No but seriously it was so well written!!! I LOVED THE OCEAN METAPHOR I love the brotherly interactions and Reader accidentally admitting they'd been watching XD

Donnie: *oh I'm in love*

Also Donnie: Time to PANIC

OH OH AND UM DID U HAVE ANY PARTICULAR SONG IN MIND FOR THE SLOW DANCE? NOT FOR ANY PARTICULAR REASON >>

Thank you for sharing your writing with us as always! I'm surprised you dropped it so soon after the last one? I hope you are taking breaks and eating and hydrating🥺 pease take care of yourself too 🙏💜🐢💖

I'm so so glad you liked it! I'm a big ocean fan. Love all their work. Had to incorporate it somehow 😂 /jk

It's so wild you ask about the song because I've been pretty vocal about how I don't use music to help me write, but in this one particular case, I felt like I needed help with the rhythm they were rocking to to get the right vibe across. Still, to form, I totally biffed it because I listened to TEARS OF JOY by Leven Kali and it wasn't what I was going for at all so I totally just gave up! I'm happy to take suggestions of something that would be a club slow dance though!

While these chapters are close together, I've weirdly enough adapted the healthiest work schedule yet writing them? I'm slowly practicing getting up super early for a gym project later this month and that means I have all this extra time so it's perfect for writing languidly! Also these two chapters are one continuous sequence so when I finished one, I felt like it wasn't quite done, ya know? I had to get writing to actually get this full segment finished.

As always, thank you dearly, Shade!

[m1ckeyb3rry]

The mdni was so funny LMAOOO I love the Ubers dynamic I can’t say it enough Barou acting annoyed by aiku but secretly doesn’t mind his company shdhakzjs

OOO ok I can totally see that happening less than a month away everyone….

YESSS he definitely actually takes care of himself we stan >>> also wait you’re so right the official arts definitely play into fanon tropes for marketing purposes…

LMFAOOO hollyhock Karasu just being a sap has me crying YUKIMIYA AHAHAH “when is it my turn to be the protagonist” the Coachella ref has me rolling too

Ok when you said tabieitaryu my first thought was Aryu???? I mean ig so that wouldn’t have been my first choice though…LMAOO then I read shidou and thought wait what it took me like a good minute to realize you meant tabieita/ryu LOL but FRRRR I can definitely see him being besties w reo and I bet Barou would be like “finally someone normal” WAITTT you’re onto something Kunigami yuki duo next!! I fr wish they would’ve spotlighted top6 like you can’t just drop that information and not show us more of their skills….theres also no way they wouldn’t have continued evolving more in the nel so (ignoring Rin and nagi) I would’ve expected to see more tabieitaken….shidou still gets a good amount of spotlight I feel just because of how they’ve set him up as a character but why did tabieitaken fall off the face of the planet

OKFG THE BAROU ANGST???? Bawling my eyes out wdym he died and got fucking possessed????? Ok but that’s actually fire I love familial Barou too!!! But was he MURDERED or did he like idk slip on a banana peel and crack his head open why’s he dead! Reading this I completely forgot that there was supposed to be a love interest im ngl you could just write this as a familial relation platonic journey thing and it would still eat like im locked in for the Barou siblings angst now Barou’s houndoom killing itself has me crying too omg I lowk had no idea what direction this was gonna go in after you said angst in the pkmn world but NOW I GET IT

TULLIA COMEBACK!!! Also omg pkmn miraverse Karasu is giving bfb Karasu stop why’s he’s getting rejected pokemon I can’t LMAOO ok wait let me go in order of character team for reactions so it’s easier to read

First of all DONPHAN >>>>>> I remember first playing donphan was like my right hand pokemon only second to my starter we love the donphan mention we’ve had this convo on teams before but these all fit so well otoya having a greninja and then all these sweet pokemon is so real (heavy on the blissey I can imagine him raising it from a happiny) Karasu archon agenda >>>>>>>>> ok coordinator yuki I totally forgot coordinators were a thing but COORDINATOR YUKI!!!! Breloom is such a yuki pokemon idk what it is abt the vibes!

Nagi having an arcanine when his house burned down is crazy LMAO also a big fan of goodra/goomy nagi, reo would totally have a cincinno is so real I can imagine him brushing it and petting it but also heavy on the gallade….another vibes pokemon why does it feel so reo

LOL EX RAPIDASH RACER CHIGIRI real…so real…also I never considered dragonite but why does it fit so well LOL actually it’d be funny imagine he has a shiny dratini and up until dragonair the colors perfectly match him and then bam GREEN LMAOOOO

also now that you mention hiori i can totally see him having interest in fossil pokemon…for some reason i can totally see him with an armaldo and a bastiodon too (unrelated but autocorrect is my number one opp while typing out pokemon names smh)

Isagi sus /hj LMAO but raichu reminds me sm of Isagi too…maybe it’s the face…idk LOL

I’m crying when I first read catch and release for aiku I thought “lol is that a reference to him catching and releasing women in bllkverse” SHSHSH jk LMAO

But fr I would just read this as a platonic family/found family journey story LOL the dynamic exploration between characters and again the BAROU SIBLING ANGST

TRIED AND TRUE SENDS ME the way that you’ve had to do this so many times fr manifesting better experiences for you!! Seems ghosting truly is the move LMAO it’s ok the opps just got their ego bruised and obv weren’t worth it anyways sooooo

HAHAHA real for that I’m usually a bit picky with art style but for some series I’ve also managed to brainwash myself enough to filter out the crunchiness….exposure therapy yk

- Karasu anon

tbh barou and aiku give such sibling energy but specifically in the way that like your mom and her brother would if that makes sense SLFJSJSJA

nah because sometimes the official arts have me raising my eyebrows and shit like why is chigiri always looking like uhhhh that?? LMAOAOA it’s so funny 😭 and isagi’s hair is always horrendous too for some reason omg

HELP BECAUSE HOLLYHOCK KARASU SEES BLLK OTOYA AND IS JUST LIKE �� meanwhile bllk karasu is like “bro i cry when i see him too but for the opposite reason (because i have to look at his dumbass face)” LMAO bllk yukimiya would be so offended especially given his sensibilities meanwhile hollyhock yukimiya was just trying to keep up with the times 😩

LMAOOO NO NOT ARYU 😭 pls i was trying to follow the format of their first names shortened and ryu fit pretty well but yeah i can see how that would be confusing (technically aryu is also 18 so ig he could be a yuki bestie option too?? i feel like barou+aiku or reo+nagi fit better though) agreed barou is just grateful to have someone normal who can also hold his own on the team 😰 LITERALLY BRO A YUKI X KUNI TEAMMUP WOULD BE PERFECT i need it so bad…honestly i think it’s crazy karasu has only scored like once or twice in the entire main series (in third selection) and pretty much consistently since then he’s been defending like does bro even want to be a striker ⁉️ i feel like of the three though karasu’s the only one who still feels like he’s kept up with the other players albeit in a diff position…like at least he’s consistently been doing stuff in pxg vs bm whereas we haven’t seen much from yuki besides manshine and almost nothing from otoya at all even in the u20 game 😓 i get other characters have to have their moments and whatnot but like…as much as i love kurona for example he was so randomly dropped in there?? i was deadass lost when he appeared because there was almost 0 mentions of him before 😨 so i feel like instead of developing this new character kaneshiro could’ve had yukimiya fill that role for isagi but instead of being as loyal as kurona is he’s more like a hiori type where he’s just choosing what’s best for the team ☝🏻 he could even have used the religion and blindness aspect to lean into a more altruistic characterization for yuki where he tries to be unselfish so he’ll help out anyone even kaiser as long as that’s what’s best for the team/the greater good because that would also make the kaisagi rivalry more interesting (especially if yukimiya stays the 1v1 emperor) as then they’re competing over who gets yukimiya on their side at any given point — he could’ve continued to improve and been the kind of player that helps break through defense before getting the ball to hiori who can then pass from there or go straight to one of the strikers depending on the situation 🤔 there also could’ve been a little ness vs yukimiya rivalry going on in the background that would’ve been rlly fun and could’ve developed ness a bit more ☝🏻

as for how i would’ve approached kunigami (not a top 6 but facing similar treatment atm) were i the one writing this arc there’s two options i think — get rid of kaiser completely and have kunigami be isagi’s main rival in the nel especially given his new ego of being the hyena and whatnot 😟 i think that could also really hammer in how effective the wildcard program was if kunigami essentially becomes ng11 level and adds an ethical dilemma of “ok so wildcard was successful but is this something we can morally/legally do to people and is it even worth it” bonus points for developing a really weird and horrific dynamic between him and noel noa with him simultaneously being noa’s protege (since he’s supposed to be a copy of him) and being completely ignored and shunned by noa because he’s disgusted by what kunigami is and what wildcard has done to him 😩 OR if it’s like. essential. to keep kaiser in there for whatever reason (fanservice) i would again take out a player from bm but this time it’s ness because okay hear me out what has ness actually contributed to the plot like at all 😭 besides being a kaiser stan and having a weird toxic relationship/breakup with him idfk JFJDKDSJ anyways so maybe kaiser’s in a kind of loki-esque situation where all he needs to advance is someone who has crazy strength to push through players like lorenzo who we saw him struggling with…enter kunigami who’s obviously HUGE and kaiser’s like ok buddy let’s work together so kunigami’s like sure (maybe he resents the blue lockers for not going through what he went through) and he teams up with KAISER and is actively working against his old friends (definitely put in angst and reminders of the team z days)…again would add a weird dynamic between him and noel noa as well as juxtaposing kunigami’s and kaiser’s backstories for maximum effect — kunigami being “had a good life, soccer ruined him” and kaiser being “had a shitty life, soccer saved him” 🤩 there’s plenty of theories floating around that ness is going to end up assisting isagi at some point (maybe to score the final goal against pxg) BUT my counterpoint is don’t have kunigami assist isagi with the two-gun volley (give that to yukimiya or even hiori) and have kunigami pay isagi back for the half of a steak (therefore acknowledging their past and friendship for the first time since his return) by giving him the ball instead of kaiser like everyone expected and was covering for, allowing isagi to still score the final goal (or maybe pxg will win in case leave the two gun volley as is but make a bigger deal of the pass from kunigami to isagi and don’t have kunigami focused only on marking shidou…maybe even make kaiser/isagi/noel noa yell at kuni for being so obsessed w shidou??)

as you can tell i have many thoughts on areas bllk could be improved even if i don’t really mind how the story is going atm LMAOAOA it’s also easier to think of these things when you have the base laid out in front of you so def no hate to the current story or kaneshiro or anything those are just some things i’d adjust personally HAHA

YESSSS BAROU ANGST so i have a few ideas for his death floating around in my mind…either he’s really sick/terminally ill and only tells isagi because they’re rivals and he doesn’t want his family to know because they’ll stop him from reaching his goals but when he goes to victory road he just succumbs to it and dies without anyone knowing (hence why isagi is elusive — he doesn’t know barou’s dead so he’s trying his best to be loyal since barou expressly said not to tell any of his family members) which would make the possession more a lucky coincidence for the evil team OR he gets murked so that the evil team can have his body and his pokémon 🤔 still not really sure yet LMAOAOAOA omg trust i can make angst happen in ANY au 🤩 honestly i would just leave it platonic but i’m worried that if reader and/or tullia start gravitating towards certain characters through the course of the story without me tagging or planning for it people will be mad like “no i don’t like nagi why would i be flirting with him when chigiri’s right there” “bro tullia better stay the fuck away from isagi that’s my man” ykwim 😰 maybe i’ll try writing it just to get a feel of what reader and tullia’s personalities will be and figure out who they’ll likely end up with based on that!! even if there is romance though it’ll be super super slight because again barou family relationship is the most important thing PLUS (mis)adventures and whatnot are much more fun to write about!! i’m thinking if i go with a ml nagi he (plus reo and chigiri because yk i’m not splitting up the manshine city trio) will probably behave kind of like the rivals do in the games?? like he randomly shows up, does something lore developing with the reader, and then leaves again for a while 🤔 whereas karasu and otoya are always there because they’re all traveling together but because of that the four of them specifically (karasu tullia otoya reader) kinda just have found family vibes and aren’t romantic

TUPAC BACK (except it’s tullia) FR DJDJSJSK it’s like those nobara edits but tullia instead…i was considering having it be may but idk tullia just felt more right in the situation 😭

HAHAHA PKMN KARASU IS LIKE BFB KARASU ON STEROIDS whenever yayoi thinks a pokémon doesn’t have the potential to be a gym pokémon/she doesn’t feel like training it she just dumps it on tabito because she doesn’t want to release it (she feels bad) so when he first meets mc and co he just has a bunch of baby bird pokémon that like to sit on his shoulder and are shitty at battling 🥹 with mc otoya and tullia’s help he makes them really strong though and i have a vision of him going back and challenging yayoi and beating her only with the pokémon she discarded (he either hasn’t caught lucario and garchomp atp or they’re just chilling on the sidelines) which finally makes her acknowledge him

YESSS DONPHAN i tried to make reader have a very balanced team in terms of typing and whatnot (hence her having a galvantula i feel like that’s such a random pokémon) i also tried to make it so it’s not just all basic pokémon on everyone’s teams (except isagi he’s the king of basic soooo) although ofc they’re not totally unavoidable which is why reader does still have a gyarados and tullia does have an infernape etc etc

HAHAHA at first otoya’s mad but then he realizes that cute pokémon = hella bitches so then he’s always letting his ninetales out to walk with him and flex how beautiful it is because it’s basically a chick magnet KDJSKSKA no fr breloom + yuki was one of my hardest cooks ever tbh and i think him as a coordinator is such a fun concept!! and adds some variety instead of everyone just trying to be champion or wtvr

HELP okay so the reason he has an arcanine is because when he has to go to the government to become a trainer they’re like ok well you missed the cutoff for a normal starter and he’s like bro ⁉️ should i just starve and die then tf 😰 and they’re like okay well modern problems require modern solutions…this growlithe was rejected from the police academy for being too cuddly and friendly even with criminals so we were planning on releasing it or sending it out to be adopted as a pet but like you can have it if you want and obviously he has to say yes and that’s how he ends up with a growlithe/arcanine 😭 at first the growlithe is super scared of battling and nagi doesn’t care enough to make it battle (he finds reo very fast and gets spoiled) but then reader + houndour beat some sense into them both and they get serious after that!!

LMAOO EX RAPIDASH RACER CHIGIRI WAS JUST TOO GOOD it also felt like a fun way to expand the verse a bit?? showing other careers people have and whatnot…also i think it would be so cute to imagine that the ponyta chigiri learned to ride on doesn’t belong to him but it ends up loving him so much that after its racing career (once it’s evolved into a rapidash) is over the owner gives it to chigiri as just like a personal pokémon since that’s where it’ll be the happiest 🥹 which coincides with chigiri’s accident so when he can’t walk he just rides around on his rapidash and it helps him recover before they both learn how to battle together in order to make money FNDKSJSJS

hiori just gives strong dinosaur kid energy although tbh i just picked his pokémon so that they were all light blue like his hair 😭 but given the many avenues for arcs that exist in a pokémon au there could def be one where reader and co meet up with hiori and he’s like lowkey a fossil dude and they save the fossils from the evil team however hiori says they should release the fossil pokémon because conservation and whatnot but the amaura loves him sm it evolves into an aurorus so he’ll keep it by his side as a battling pokémon and part of his team 🤔

ISAGI IS ALWAYS UP TO SMTH he’s def supposed to give the vibes that he knows more than he lets on (because he usually does) and PLEASEEE NOT THE CATCH AND RELEASE OF WOMEN i think aiku is going to be a brock equivalent tbh like maybe he first meets reader and co by trying to rizz up reader and tullia in the middle of a forest which makes karasu and otoya CRACK UP and aiku’s like yo wtf let me cook here 😒‼️ however that prompts tabieita to explain in detail exactly why aiku doesn’t want to date either girl and it ends up in a very sibling-ish squabble between the four meanwhile aiku is just like damn sorry i asked

stop because now that i’m thinking about it this could actually cook as a long fic there’s just so many different stories within the story that could be written 😨 if that makes sense LMAOAO okay wait also hear me out: leonardo luna, pablo wtvr tf his last name is, adam blake, loki, dada silva, yayoi, anri, and ego as gym leaders + chris prince, noel noa, lavinho, and snuffy as the elite four (ofc reo’s dad is champion but maybe he’s grown complacent because the elite four is so strong so it’s kinda accepted the noel noa is the ACTUAL strongest??)

KFDNSJJS unfortunately i’m fr experienced with it but it’s okay at least ik i’m a baddie!! 😭 generally i try to drop a lot of hints that i’m uninterested when i sense a guy is into me so it never even gets to the point that i have to reject them ☝🏻 LMAOAO yes the opps are just mad i wouldn’t get w them but what can you do 🤷🏻‍♀️

i’ve read so many manhwas that like as long as the proportions aren’t insanely off i’ll just accept whatever honestly 😭 anyways this is such a massive response i’ll leave it at that 😩 SOMEBODY (me) got chatty today i fear…

[angelguk]

prompt: jock!jaykay sending oc to class with a load of his fresh cum in her p*ssy 🤓 hes like putting her panties back on her, patting said p*ssy like a good girl and saying shit like “be a good girl for me and keep it inside as long as you can, ok?” with a loving kiss on her forehead 🥰 n so she goes about her day trying so hard to keep it all inside even tho she can feel it sloshing inside her lmaoooo i feel like he’d be totally into nasty shit 🤪🤪

see yeah i’ve been thinking about this right......like....*clears throat* ahem!

warnings: creampie kink, use of pet name (redacted), dom!jk, fingering, mentions of oral sex

Jeongguk looks smug. It’s a look you’re still growing accustomed too as it’s not the usual result of his triumphs on the lacrosse fields or his not so subtle flexes in the middle of the gym garnering him a folk of admirers. Rather it’s because your face is planted in the tousled bed sheets, breath haggard and a warm glow spreading over your skin.

“You good, baby?” He asks like he’s concerned, but there’s a brazenness in his tone that your read clearly. 

“No, Jeongguk,” you retort, fingertips languidly reaching out for him. He leans into your touch, broad chest warm under your palm, his lips stretching into a smile that is nothing but sinful. “I think you’ve killed me.”

Your thighs twitch when he yanks you close, settling your body on his with an ease that triggers a flip in your stomach. He’s so stupidly strong it’s mind-numbing, your brain eagerly recalling how he’d pinned you to the bed and fucked you wide up with fervour that should be illegal. Jeongguk just grins at your distress, fingertips delicately wondering down the length of your back. 

“You look alive to me,” he murmurs. There’s the nudge of his nose against yours, lips gingerly meeting as your press yourself into him. Breathes that turn into one as his mouth parts yours. He tastes like you, petal lips soft as your bodies melt into one. You don’t even realise your shifting closer until he knocks your legs apart, slotting his hardening cock right between your heat. You’re still wet, dripping actually, and when he bucks up you can’t help the slick that seeps out. You know when he stills that he felt it too, the flood of cum coating your inner thighs. His cum. A lot actually. Apparently Jeongguk loves the idea of you stuffed with it.

“Barely,” you whisper, peeling away when your gaze catches the time on his bedside alarm clock. You have class in a few and judging from the way Jeongguk stares at your body as you shuffle in his lap he might not let you leave this room. It’s with a weak resolve that you ignore the twitch of him between your legs, shifting off the bed. The hand that clamps down on your hip to drag you back was expected, yet your walls still clench tight.

“Where are you going?” Unwavering honey eyes that glimmer with want trap you. You can’t help leaning back in, planting a gentle kiss on his check. 

“I’ve got class, Gukkie.” He squeezes your hip in protest when you try to move away.

“Right now?” There’s the needy boy you know, a whine colouring his words as he holds you tight. “Skip it, bunny.”

“Jeongg—

“Missed you so much,” he mumbles, tugging you back down with a force that knocks the air out of your chest. Before you can retort his lips are on your neck, a gentle bite that leaves your skin tender. “So so much. Don’t go just yet.”

“I didn’t see you for three days Jeongguk.”

“Yeah,” he whines. “That’s like a fucking life-time.”

“It was three days, Guk! Three!” You whisper, exasperated. But there’s a heat forming between your legs. 

“Didn’t touch myself the entire time too,” he returns, strong hands digging into your hip. “Look how much is leaking out of you. And I’m not done yet.”

“You—you can’t just fucking say that.”

“Why? I mean it. You can take more, I bet that if I—” He slips two fingers in then, your back arching from the intrusion. They slide in easy though, aided by the slick coating your cunt. Your brain shuts down when he curves them just right, aiming for that spot inside of you and has your eye fluttering shut. “So wet, bunny. Look how well you take my fingers.”

“Jeo—ohfuckkk.”

“What?” He says it with that stupid smug smile on his lips. “What do you need, bunny? Hmm? My fingers not enough for you? Do you need another?” He slips in a third before you have time to ask, the tightness in his balls driving his actions. You’re so wet, slick covering his knuckles every time he drives his fingers deep. He can feel his cum dripping from your cunt onto his thigh whenever your hips move too, an automatic movement as your search for something to grind your clit on. 

“I need to get to class,” you snap back, a low groan slipping from mouth when he hits deep. “S-seriously, Jeon.”

Something clicks in his brain then, his fingers abruptly leaving the warm heat of your cunt. “Okay, get going.” For some reason you freeze. It’s exactly what you wanted, and yet now you’re to riled up to move. Jeongguk gives your hip a fond pat though, gently pushing you off his lap. “You said you wanted to go, bunny. Get going.”

You move agonisingly slow, searching for your clothes scattered on the floor with a frown plastered on your features. But before you can dress Jeongguk is rising from the bed, moving to stand behind you. 

“Bend.” It’s a firm command, one that leaves no room for arguing but you can’t help it, already irritated by his sudden nonchalance.

“Jeongguk—

“I said bend, bunny.” His hands force your hips to move, the shift leaving your cunt on display as a shiver travels through your nerves. He gets low too, silently observing something. You can’t see but with every flutter of your walls his cum drips out, milky white and sticky, leaving your thighs and lips glistening. His cock is heavy against his thigh but he fights back the urge to shove you onto the mattress and fuck you full again. This will do for now.

“Good girl,” Jeongguk murmurs as he rises. You can’t even muster a word, checks flushed by his bold behaviour. He lets you dress unbothered, mumbling  something about practise and Coach’s ridiculousness commands as you slide your clothes back on. You respond back because you’re too shocked to ask him what that was about, eyes everywhere but his naked firm built body.

It’s only when you’ve got your lanyard in your hands that he draws close, forcing you to look at him when he fingers dig deep between your lips, the smile tugging at his lips devious. He presses in with purpose, ignoring the hitch in your breathing when your underwear drenches.

“Be a good girl for me and keep it inside as long as you can, okay?”

You nod, brain fuzzy as he places a delicate kiss on your forehead. The contrast between the two touches has your mind spinning. He’s soft but firm in how he owns your body, the reminder that you’re his steadily leaking out of you. He grants your clothed cunt a gentle pat right before you leave, still smiling smugly. Yet, you don’t mind at as much as you did moments ago.

[blackxones]

portwell’s are already being annoying “if ricky and gina cheat-“ BLAH BLAH BLAH. it’s confirmed they don’t, but if they did!! (i’d be here for it) jk! (am i?) lmaoooo

Well, I don't exactly blame them for trying to find explanations as to why the relationship is going to fail. They are teetering closer and closer to being 6ft under as the season progresses so I'm not surprised. Thankfully, Tim came out with that interview where he says that Ricky will not try to put a wedge between p0rtwell. I think I've said this before, but an actual cheating plotline with Ricky and Gina was impossible from the get go because this is, after all, a Disney show and they would never allow that.

Oh yeah anon, we're totally joking!! 👀👀 lol

[aquagustd]

english anon here.

i thought the most "let's put emotions inside that roller coastes and ride it!" period with the painful © cramp of all time, i am back.

I wish I could tell more about hie but i was a mess, and now hie is THE chaos. to much emotions omg. i think I will have to re-read it feel times cuz...tae is driving me insane. i am totally like oc "Tae, I love you but why you trigger my trust issues stoop 😭"

actually...he is driving me insane TOO. Bc Jk is the master here 😑. Like WHY DID HE TRY TO MAKE HER FEEL FREE AGAIN, SPEEDING THE DAMN CAR i see your tricks, b@st@rd! the sexy mom + car was not even a surprise 💀

I LOVE HOSEOK AJSJAJFKAKSEJSH so much and for no reason apparently 😂

Although the trust issues that it brought, more Mr Park please 🥺

...i think one day I want talk about Sora, but she has to do something more than exist & being bored.

ok, i have to re-read.

PS: DAMN JIN YOU JUST GAVE JUNHO A TOY RIFLE-!! wth

are you sure there is NO gang fight here? More than just JK vs Take to be the """"best"""" father.

hey bb you’re back !! ik 😭 tae is just giving us more reason not to trust him.

you caught that !!! that’s exactly what he was trying to do like pls. you weren’t making her feel free you were giving miss oc a heart attack 😭✋🏻 she’s not who she used to be. unlike him 🙄

hahaha hoseok makes oc feel safe 👁 LMAOOOO i’m dead at your comment about sora. that’s all she ever does tbh. oof good theory about tae & jk fighting for best dad spot 👀

[laughing-with-god]

I’m still reeling from QQ III like.... b i t c h..... I love the way you wrote joy and y/n, their dynamic is really interesting and I couldn't help but root for their alliance to work out. y/n and joy is the lesbian couple we never knew we needed and I deadass forgot that this was a jk fic when I was reading about them lmaoooo.

this is why jk’s appearance almost came as a bit of a shock to me? like I didn’t expect him to find her, but once he did I couldn’t help but think about how anxious and tense he must have been after joy left the group. I really enjoy jk’s characterization, you really nailed his character.

QQ III was a masterpiece, but I knew that even before you posted it. it is one of the most interesting yandere aus I've ever read, and I enjoy every second I spend reading it.

your writing is out of this world, and you’re one of the few writers I know that can make 12k words feel like 3k and 1 hour feel like 15 minutes. thank you so much for sharing your content with all of us 💜

Chinkbihh response; Thank you so much for taking the time to write this post and send it to me.  I really am blown sometimes over how my silly little ideas really exist in other people’s mind now.  And I really didn’t expect people to fall for Joy like that, I kinda feel bad for killing her now lol, but I have more characters coming up so save some room in your heart for them!  But really, truly, feedback like this makes writing all that for free totally worth it, I really am a writer but don’t really know how to properly express my appreciation for this just in words so---

[taegularities]

Rid, did you see the whole perilla leaf and shrimp discussion and how members are okay/not okay with their significant others helping their friends??

Ok so don't ask me why but all I could think of is the members who said no, going back home and telling their real partners to take the hint. That they'd be pretty focking mad if something like that happened. Help, my heart hurts. Like it could be absolutely true and we'd never know? Imagine them watching the lab episode today and laughing with their significant others???? Kill me now

okay so i just learned about this, bcos i was Not Mentally There all day LMAO but all i can think of is jk immediately going "they can't help" and tae saying "i'd have a fight with them", men really said "mine. touch them and 🔪" WHICH. U KNOW WHAT THAT MEANS?! THEY ARE THE JEALOUS KIND WHO WANT U JUST FOR THEMSELVES >:( idk how to cope

no but u are so right, them going home to their S.O. must be damn hilarious tho. yoongi's partner being "excuse me wtf, u don't give a shit?" while jk's or so being all "🥺 my jealous baby 🥺" LMAOOOO they'd totally laugh their asses off 😭

[onlyswan]

Hey love ! I hope you are doing great and that you are taking care of yourself🤍 BABE DID YOU SEE THAT FREAKING JUNGKOOK LIVE WITH HIM SHIRTLESS UNDER THE COVERS? I IMMEDIATELY WAS LIKE IS THIS ARTEMIS' JK COMING ALIVE AND SOMEHOW WE ARE PRYING ON HIS AND Y/N'S MORNING🤣 anyways at this point us Army and Jungkook are married like HE FEEDING OUR DELULU AND NOT HOLDING BACK .... we are forever thriving 🤍 anyways love ya and take care 💕

LMAOOOO THE WAY HE WAS JUST CALLING US HIS FRIENDS IN THE OTHER LIVE 😭 like okaaaay i’m totally nonchalant about being in bed with you while you’re half naked i don’t care it’s not like i have romantic feelings for you or anything 🤣

hehe love you more i hope you’re having a wonderful weekend !!! <333