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(I have to share one wip snippet for every flower)
3 flowers? Damn, Marz, keeping me humble lol.
OK, this first wip I wrote while on the plane after watching Waitress the Musical and feeling MANY feelings. Instead of the next chapter lol.
He was afraid of the past. He knew that. But when he looked to the future… He used to have an old neighbor. Ancient. Stan would talk to him, and he would tell stories, and teach parables, life lessons Stan was far too young to remember. He couldn't even remember the neighbor's name. But he remembered that he made Stan feel young. Naive. Hopeful, filling his heart with a desperate want– a desperate need– so powerful that it made him want to scream and cry. And so he did. Yet to this day Stan couldn't define what exactly he cried for. The man made Stan look forward to the future, when the neighbor kids would come over to his porch, look up at him in his old age with spaekling hunger as he rocked contentedly in his rocking chair, as he told them stories they'd never remember, leaving a lasting impression they'd never forget. Make them feel safe, make them feel naive, make them look forward to the future where they too could do the same. And only then, finally, after all these years, did he finally cry.
Yeah, I was working through some things. Anyway, onward to the next wip snippet! This one is for the upcoming branding post.
** In addition, many supers are not allowed to use their powers, period. For example, anyone with a Red or Black designation, and any other super whose power is deemed unfit for society. These supers have a special ink in their brand that, when their power is activated, will glow extremely brightly like a flashlight for about 2 minutes before fading. If you ever see this glowing brand, hide from the super and then report it to the authorities immediately.
And this next one is actually one of my first creative writing stories I ever wrote about supers. I'm rewriting it bc of an ask I got about some very important (un)Official Guide lore (which I will answer soon, promise lol)
“Alright, what the hell,” Destron finally cried when her neutral silence became too much to bear, ripping off the blindfold before they even arrived at the cell he’d laid out for her. “Don’t stare at me like that, what's wrong with you? You’ve been kidnapped! Aren’t you terrified?” She stared up at him with her big green eyes. Not scared. Destron honestly couldn't tell what emotion that was. Destron narrowed his own eyes at her before resuming his walk, yelling unanswered by his silently compliant captive. The girl followed after him.
(Also if you're looking at that and thinking "huh, I wonder if he's talking about my ask with this? Maybe?" Then yes I can promise it's 100% you lol. Yall talking to me and asking about stuff genuinely impacts the story and makes it better, so thank you :) )
#shoutout to me last night for getting this entire post done but then not actually posting it and waking up to it deleted#genuinely tho im proud of myself for doing that considering i walked around a city all day on 1 hour of plane sleep for the night#wish it hadnt been deleted but oh well#not heard to remake#im really excited for the wips tho#hopefully ill have time to actually get them done in the next two weeks lol#bee talks#answered asks#ask game#whump#(un)official guide#asks#heroes and villains#wip
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hotel wip???
#idk i havent built in a while but i renovated a hotel build off the gallery and the synapses started firing so i started to build my own#i stopped building bc i suck ass at exteriors its embarassing i just dk how to make things symetrical and then rooms end up too small BUT#im doing ok so far there's 4 two bed rooms nd 2 single bed rooms and then two “penthouse” suites#also i havent playtested yet so dont get too attatched but also im kinda excited to play w/ this!#idk what mod it's from but the rental (shared) lot type works so well w/ hotels i will say it is laggy tho so be wary of that#also umm i hv w*ckedwhms now um that mod is... a lot esp w/ hotels but i guess it's kinda accurate?? it's fun to snoop on sims#s#wip#not tagging this bc i dont wanna let ppl down if i end up not finishing im unemployed so i really should be doing more productive things#but oh well :p
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need to work on spacing but heres my wip!!!!!
#my art#artists on tumblr#digital art#wip animation#petscop#animatic#animation#rough animation#care petscop#carrie mark#oh man i gotta go to bed im going to the mall tomorrow#had a vision of this in the car while listening to the sign and ougghhhh it really is a petscop song#like all of the lyrics but the chorus especially#hope this is legible lol#im really proud of the second hand and the pan up and the car shaking :3#woahh its almost like practicing makes you better.....#i do need to do all the spacing bc esp the first hands its all kinda rough rn#i did this all in one sitting tho and its 1am so thats for another time lolllll#so excited to animate the flower tho
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decided that for my final law of the year, I'm gonna draw him dickin down my sona >:3c
#its a zombie so it'll be okkkk#will take a lotta stitches to patch up tho :3c#btd#boyfriend to death#lawrence oleander#btd lawrence#lawrence btd#gore#nsft#gutspill#amputation#forrest's sona#im also just really excited to share this wip cause i haven't drawn law since the queen died dhfjgm#feels good gettin back to my roots
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Uuuuuuuhhhh... concept art??
#of course the really big scenery peice i do isnt for the story ive been worldbuilding for 6 years#but for a completely different world for ONE character#im rlly happy with it so far tho#i started rendering/linearting/ coloring whatever u wanna call it#i started that last night and so far i have the giant root theyre standing on with the smaller tree rendered#excited to do the rest!!#am i gonna die?#oh absolutely#itll be worth it though#fantasy#concept art#wip#sketch
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hello 🩷
#how are you guys 😔#what have y’all been up to?😼#I miss being active on here#cant sleep so I remembered I had a tumblr acc there I post my lil delulu fics hehe#actually I also remembered I have loads of wips I should really finish writing#but school stresses me out so bad (even tho I’m procrastinating a lot…)#so I can’t even write something without feeling so stressed ugh#I was just thinking about nanami and his big protruding arms and abs and his thighs hehehehehee giggling so bad it’s literally 4 am I need#to go sleep rn because I got a test today…gonna fail it so bad (it’s all my fault…sighs disappointedly at myself)#ALSO ALSO I COMMISSIONED A ARTIST AND IM SOOO EXCITED RO RECEIVE THE FINISHED ARTWORK#the sketch itself is GORGEOUS#cant wait to show y’all me and my husband together 😼#ok I should sleep 😔#kei talking!
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me, having done absolutely nothing but lay in bed all day: i deserve a nap
#i really do tho#im a sleepy baby snork mimimimi#i have done something!!!! i wrote 300 words on my new wip#i am very excited about it BUT im nowhere near the exciting bit yet#im also writing in duke's pov so idk how thats going haha#scary stuff#someone ask me about it im so bored#im deffo having a nap now tho#gonna daydream about danny being tortured :)
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hiii um so you know how i was so dead for the past few days. well. we're back at it again, dudes
a little sneak peak of the stuff i managed to start today 😌 hope i'll be able to finish at least one of them before the holidays, but we'll see!
#im back and hi mutuals i promise ill do a reblog spree tomorrow#be prepared for spam ehehehe#jjk#choso#itafushi#inuokko#wip#<3#really excited for all of them#Choso is giving me such a hard time tho HOW DO U DRAW A FACE FROM THIS ANGLE#i won't give up tho. im a strong little boy 😔✊#ellis art
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Bestie the way I am so hyped for your rewrite 👀
WHAT IF WE KISSED. RIGHT NOW
#i've been replaying book 3 and writing out a guide for myself as well as planning out little scenes to add#and ways to retool current scenes to make it work for my rewrite hehe <3#and some themes to build on that i really love#and ways to make the mommy issues WORSE and use soul-bonding for angst hehe#i've been writing snippets here and there for later chapters but i think i'm gonna sit down and try to write ch. 1 this weekend#i've prob said all this at some point but i'm trying not to say TOO much on here even tho i'm excited kMFKMDKMF#IM SO GLAD UR EXCITED TOO <3333 TY FOR THIS SWEET ASK#asks#wips#<- putting here so i can look at it later hehe
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rendering a rider suit (< said while coughing up blood)
#im REALLY excited to be making progress on this piece tho it has been sitting in my wips folder for TOO long#✉️
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i want to keep drawing... but my tablet pen is dead and i havent slept yet... so i SHOULD take a break and get in bed probably... but i WANT to keep working on that ryou and marik piece... waaaAAAAAAHHH. is how i feel about the situation
#marcnotes#im having SO MUCH FUN drawing fanart again hsdfghjkl... zero pressure and self indulgent and fun to experiment with#and like just BEING really self indulgent with it and taking my time but making an effort to finish things#is so nice... i lov making art and i love SHARING the art i make#oh i was gonna post this on main but maybe it can go on my art blog lol. since its about art#even though its a little silly!!! im allowed to be silly on here hsdfghjkl. who cares#it is kind of funny to say 'drawing fanart again' on here when the gap in me drawing fanart#is not smthng rlly reflected on this blog... i dont post most of my original work! which is a shame bc its really good#its not because i dont want to its just bc i never finish any of it... hence the effort lately to Finish and Post Things#with 'finish' being a relative term!#also to all the death note fans who followed me recently: dw i have more mellodramattic in progress. The Boys Will Continue To Appear Here#im actually jumping between that ryou/marik piece and a big matt/mello piece (which i have posted a wip of here already)#the matt/mello one is closer to done! but im doing a whole bg for it so... its an undertaking lololol. like i said! experimenting!!!#its very good tho im excited to show yall. i went crazy on the faces they look sooo good
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Random but when you post something I always get excited thinking it's a new chapter 😭 I'm literally waiting by my phone for it
BAHAH IM SORRY ANONS ITS COMING SOON I SWEAR!! but im glad ur looking forward to it!! my damn outline ALONE is 21k words (tho im really happy with it and im excited for yall to read it) and although i still have to finish it + the drawing, HERES PART OF THE WIP IN THE MEANTIME🥹💖(also anon, who cares if u think youre terrible at art... DRAW ANYWAY!!!😤& ILY TOO💖 )
im definitely gonna write them as adults, and have ideas for some side stories i wanna do!!! the one i mentioned in the wattpad comment would be in writing, because i wanna write about seb and clora finally deciding to have their first kid (along with the process😏😏😏😏) and how sebs breeding kink ass will react to doing the devils tango with clora when its ACTUALLY gonna make a baby LMAO. plus how his overprotective ass will act when he finds out clora is LEGIT pregnant while theyre travelling/on the JOB, rather than just a pregnancy scare like last time BAHA. so yes, overly excited seb will defs be a thing in the future LOL. (though there are things i am just gonna keep in comic form, like their kids and stuff, bc i dont rly have ideas for any sort of epilogue with that. so if ppl wanna know about seb and cloras kids, they can just look at my art once i finally draw and post them ^^)
IVE THOUGHT ABOUT THIS TOO and the hairclip would defs be different!! i just havent decided what it would be.... (bro's about go buy her something bedazzled from ardene or claire's or some shit 💀💀LMAO) as for the mascots, the snake for seb would defs still apply bc ive decided its their mascot for the school football team. but for clora no, i dont think bird/raven imagery would be a thing......tho maybe the school mascots can be the snakes AND ravens LMFAO. and then i can have seb look directly into the camera and say "well, clora, looks like we really are The Raven and the Snake."
@4ever2000lover BAHAHA YOULL SEE YOUR NIECE AND NEPHEW SOON I SWEAR!!! i have the sketches but i plan to finish them + post them once im done the last chap of my fic. but they ARE coming, i promise👀👀(and im rly excited for everyone to see their daughter and her name, bc im so proud of it LMAO. i used up my entire big brain quota for the year on it +the reasoning behind it🧠)
also @blue-space-dragon TYSM IM GLAD U LIKE MY ART AND HOW I DRAW MY BLORBOS🥹💖AND ALSO THAT U FIND IT APPETIZING LMAO😋💖
#ask#hoping to have the new chap out by like the 15th!! but we'll see#also that second anon cracks me up bc its like they were waiting for it to be an exact month before they sent that anon#im pretty sure it was the exact day or the day after LMAO#i respect it
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human au phos enjoyer over here
THAT IDEA YOU POSTED ABT RECENTLY IS SO FUN????? I can’t wait to see designs?!?!!! Lunarians are really annoying to think about when coming up with aus too,…,
Who have you designed so far tho? I’m super excited to see this omfg foaming at the mouth
HIII OMG THANK U SO MUCH FOR THIS!!! HERES EVERYTHING I HAVE RNNN
these are all super old doodles (and a wip) except for the Dia and Born one which is from yesterday!!
basically this AU revolves a lot around music, as someone who really loves music. I want to say that the characters are all in Music school or maybe Art school so that it can include other characters’ interests like Red Beryls love for fashion and tailoring.
This idea came to me when I was listening to rock (more specifically Queen) and I started envisioning Phos’s moon group as a band! At first consisting of all the gems that went with Phos to the moon, with the exception of Goshen since they never really stuck around for much and were just doing their own thing LOL. Ofc this means that Dia later on breaks off from the band to become an idol like in the manga. Also Padpa plays tthe piano and as a former piano player that’s important for me to say. I have most of that arc envisioned and back when I first thought of the AU I had wanted to execute it with animatics, which im still kind of considering!
I also assigned each of Phos’s phases songs, which I can delve into in another post. Going back in time a little to the beginning, I imagine that partnerships are kind of like bands too , and duos and stuff. Like for example Dia and Bort are a duo and they make music togetherr :3 and they have little matching pendants because idk I thought it was cute. Anyways tho I was thinking maybe Phos just lives around this school at the very beginning of this AU and wants to join a band or just join them in making music, but they haven’t gotten accepted into the school and the other gems see them as inexperienced. Btw Antarc is the one who starts to teach Phos about music similarly to how they started winter duties together. Also I love Phos and Antarc so there might be a lot of focus on them in this AU.
ITS NOT COMPLETELY done yet or fully thought out but thank u so much for asking me about it thank u thank u. If you have any specific questions about any parts of the AU I would absolutely love to answer them!!!! (Please send me asks)
#hnk#houseki no kuni#hnk au#hnk spoilers#houseki no kuni spoilers#land of the lustrous#phosphophyllite#rockstar phos au
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Spoiling a scene of my guitarspear one shot for u guys cuz i cant take it anymore LOL im so excited to share this when its finished!!
Ofc I gotta edit some shit by a lot but idk was kinda proud of this and wanted to share. Keep in mind tho, this is STILL a wip. Tho, it will prob come out sometime later this month ( i hope! )
And I just hit 100 followers on here! So, thank you so freaking much, you lovely people.
(and yes. it is a jacuzzi scene for context. SO PREPARE FOR SOME HEAT AND PHYSICAL TENSION!!)
Warnings: kinda sorta suggestive maybe idrk, just overall hella close proximity, swearing
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She exhaled sharply, her fist going loose into a palm, letting the towel fall to the floor and pool at her feet. Adam’s brows shot up, his wings puffing out simultaneously like crazy, a few golden feathers falling and floating gently onto the water.
Ignoring his reaction, she took a brazen step over and dipped her foot onto the first step of the tub. Slowly, she sauntered in and adjusted to the scalding whiplash against her skin and the concrete below her feet—which didn't take too much time, as they were literally in Hell earlier.
What took time was trying to maintain her composure when it sunk in. It didn’t necessarily occur to her how worse things would get now that she was at the bottom of the short steps, facing him unintentionally close.
Too close. More than she anticipated for a simple act of challenging his ego for once.
The pounding in her ears got louder as she stood in front of him, trying to keep herself from staring too long.
While his eyes gradually drifted downward, he tugged his elbows up on the rim in admiration.
Her lip curled when the realization hit as to what he was so shamelessly entranced by, quickly covering her chest with her arms.
“Don’t block my view, bitch.”
Sometimes, Lute seriously didn’t understand why she liked him so much—let alone tolerated him.
A man that could not, and refused to get over himself for a second.
Still, her heart pounded against her ribcage, the warmness and the closeness screwing with her entirely, finally resigning with Adam’s demand.
“Hoooly fucking. Shit. Knew it was a good move nicknaming you ‘Dangertits’,” he broke out when her arms slipped away, taking her in for a second time. “But y’know. My decisions are always top-notch.” His voice strained on the last word when he reached down with a renewed vigor, like he couldn’t take it anymore. He hooked his arms around the backs of her knees, cushioning together with his forearms.
Her eyes went wide as he lifted her, taking her into a straddle on his lap, water swishing from the movements. It earned him an involuntary, humiliating grunt from her that really got him going, making him laugh a bit. “Now that’s straight-fuckin’-music!” he mused.
Damn it.
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this is all for the writer ask!!! :3 hope it's not too much >_<" answer the ones you're comfortable answering and don't force yourself to answer all of them if you don't want to! <3
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EHEHEHEHEHHE NEVER TOO MUCH THANK U SMMMMMM 🌵 ⇢ share the link to a playlist you love
i dont really listen to premade playlists, so ill link mine >:333 this is a playlist i made for a roadtrip to berlin, including all the songs i was listening to at the time, and ive since been adding new ones actively, so it's literally just a huge list of everything i love :D 🥤 ⇢ recommend an author or fanfic you love
first of all gonna plug my besties ofc @levi-dayne writes sick ass fics for death note @uriekukistan writes amazing itafushi angst (and not only :33) SENDING BOTH OF THEM SMOOCHES GO READ THEIR STUFF! and a fic that id read recently and LOVEDDD was all about love by fullvoid (@casgore on here :3) the yuuji characterisation broke my heart - it was a gutwrenchingly real way of depicting mental illness, and i loved seeing how different he acted around people vs alone. and it was super cool seeing a healed megumi helping yuuji rather than the other way around!!! HIGHLY RECOMMEND!!!!
🌻 ⇢ tag someone you appreciate but don't talk to on a regular basis FIRST OF ALL U!!!!!! i love the mutual interactions THANK U FOR BEING HERE!!!! @alonelystargazer is very sweet and i interact with her pretty regularly i feel :3 THANK U FOR INTERACTING WINNIE!!!!<3 cant think of anymore rn but if i do i WILL edit this post TRUST 🍄 ⇢ share a head canon for one of your favourite ships or pairings
megumi likes penne but yuuji hates it so they always disagree over pasta shape if theyre making it for dinner. yuuji always wins bc his favourite is spaghetti and obviously everyone likes spaghetti so megumi doesnt bother fighting him on it 📚 ⇢ what's the last thing you wrote down in your notes app?
HEHEHEHEH nervous. lets see "what kinda gay shit goes on around here when im not around" LMAO the choso x todo wip in action. what a quote thank u past me. you'll find out the context once i post it sjdhfgsjhfks
🔪 ⇢ what's the weirdest topic you researched for a writing project?
hmmmmm from random shit i think like. 1980s window designs in england lmaooo
🥐 ⇢ name one internet reference that will always make you laugh
answered here :333
🏜️ ⇢ what's your favourite type of comment to receive on your work?
ARRGRHRG ANY COMMENT. i get so excited u cant even imagine. i sometimes type 'AO3' in my gmail just to delude myself that i got a comment and get that little pang of joy seeing the notif 😭 my favvvv must be ones that quote certain lines tho bc then im like HEY!!!! I WROTE THAT!!!! U LIKED THAT??? DUDE UR NOT GONNA BELIEVE THIS I WROTE IT
🦋 ⇢ share something that has been on your heart and mind lately
i feel like an everpresent topic ive had on my mind especially often for the last year is kindness. there's a multitude of things i could say, whether that's bashing people for lacking it, or get all teary over how beautiful it is (which!! it is!!!) but i think what ive recently discovered is that it's my only constant :3 when everything else goes wrong, that's all i have, and im really happy it's second nature to me (altho im still actively working on making myself better!!!!)
yeah, maybe everything sucks right now, but i know i can make someone else's day better :3 and often it makes things a little more okay to me too
🐝 ⇢ tag your biggest supporter(s) and say one nice thing about them
RAHHGHG BESTIES. question for the bestiessss
@levi-dayne is so dear to my heart!!! such a sweet and kind person, who truly and deeply cares about others!!!! makes music, writes well AND ALSO DRAWS??!!! amazing and super talented person with super high ambitions too!!! SO SLAYFUL. what did i do to deserve such a slayful friend<333
@uriekukistan is one of the most naturally talented ppl i know!!!!! they write amazing fics, can DANCE super well, and took up drawing like 3 seconds ago and are already churning out really cool stuff on a fucking TOUCHPAD. ON THEIR LAPTOP. gofundme for rin graphic art kit when?? also ofc. a really good friend and very kind person :3333 <333
ILYSM BESTIESSSS
🧩 ⇢ what will make you click away from a fanfiction immediately?
from a writing style perspective: first person and tense switches
from a content perspective: anything fucked up like noncon or incest....how tf are they often not tagged like??? or putting that at the bottom of the warnings list 😭 oh yea im far more concerned about swearing and underage drinking......
something im picky abt that sometimes annoys me enough to click off but i feel like it's just a weird personal preference is the overuse of alternatives to a characters name. so using "the brunette" like 5 times. just say his name!!!!! it's ok!!!!!
RAHHHHHH i usually reread my answers before i post but not this time. adios fuckers i dont remember what bullshit i wrote here but ur left with the consequences. if u wanna deal with even more of my terrible takes ASK ME STUFF
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“You made more than a mistake, Az. Now we’re all hurting because you—”
i am so glad it's finally been said out loud. And that it was Mor who said it because immediately I understood how she was feeling about the entire situation, which made me feel better about her being an asshat at the end of the last chapter. It's strangely therapeutic. As soon as Mor tells Az to shut up though, I couldn't help but start crying a little bit because you really perfected how I thought Mor would've perceived reader going to Eris-
“She could have come to any of us. It’s more than we ever had, and yet she ignored it. Then tries to pretend it away? I’m not immune to that. If she can’t even be bothered to care about my pain why should I give a damn about hers?”
-this line in particular ruined me (not to be too personal n emotional lol), as someone who grew up in a not so great home i can really empathize with Mor here. It's not healthy behavior but I can say that there have been times where I've resented the people in my life who didn't accept help after i had been desperate for it for years. I'm more emotionally aware now and have unpacked those resentments (THANK GOD), but it was such a visceral response to reading that line because it mirrored unhealed me.
The next scene with madja was the perfect balance to mor and azriel's...argument? discussion? idk. You really guide us well through the world which is something I really admire in your writing, it flows very naturally and it always feels like a very natural progression of events. (its just something i've noticed i struggle with in my own wips lol).
compliments aside, it was also really sweet to see reader's peace in this chapter. Madja herself being a very peaceful motherly figure for reader who we know desperately needs that kind of care right now, her sisters are doing great right now but she needs someone who's not family to prove that they do care about her and it will not change over a few mistakes. Which is something that Cassian embodies very well later in the chapter too.
Bas.... sweet guy :( i hope reader gives him the truth. Imo, i think he deserves at least a bit of the truth when she is in a better place to give it (she fr could've said she was at a friend's in autumn. bas doesn't need to know WHO). But Bas held up his own boundaries very well with reader as well and I'm glad that we got a little of his feelings on the situation as well as reader acknowledging she hasn't been a great friend recently. (it's valid tho she's been goin THROUGH IT)
Tabbatha... you keep saying you don't know how to portray cassian but i personally think you do him such a great service ESPECIALLY after some instances of cass's behavior towards nesta's struggles in her own healing journey. I really feel like he actually cares about reader herself compared to rhys who cared about feyre and her only. He makes an effort to get her to relax, which is something acomaf cass would've done and is the version of him i miss the most. And him calling reader out for keeping things to herself? I personally think she needs to be called out and take accountability for her own role in the healing process. He was the perfect person to push her in this scene.
The dinner scene also really resonated with me and my own childhood. As a kid growing up we NEVER ate dinner together, so reader's apprehension to going to dinner is so real, and Mor sitting across from her?
oh myyyy goodness, ik this chapter just came out but im already rereading hehehe im so excited for the next one
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If I’m honest with you, I wanted Mor to tear into Az a little more than she did? For her to fairly obviously and kind of viciously defend reader but I felt it would be weird for her to go that far, considering Mor is supposed to be feeling very betrayed and hurt by reader? I did have fun with writing Mor telling Az to shut up though 🫣 I even nearly italicised it 🫢😳
‘The next scene with madja was the perfect balance to mor and azriel's...argument? discussion?’
Oh I really liked writing the Madja scene!! I mean, kind of scary obviously, but I enjoy her character and it’s so nice getting to write someone being kind to reader? 😭 Particularly since a fair amount of scenes in cbmthy aren’t particularly lighthearted/high-spirited? I’m hoping to continue dropping scenes with Madja in here and there since it would be weird if reader’s checkups suddenly stopped out of nowhere? Also so she has someone to keep an eye on her who might know a little more about what’s going on with her physically and mentally from experience and studying other people/medicine?
‘(its just something i've noticed i struggle with in my own wips lol).’
This might be totally unsolicited/unhelpful, but usually for me if a scene isn’t working or I’m struggling to write it, I’ll either change the perspective or switch to something else entirely? Like the scene just after reader’s entered the kitchen with Cassian I was struggling with, which is why there’s that snippet from Rhys’ pov to section them up? I don’t know if that’ll work for other people, but it’s something I fall back on quite regularly so it might help you too? 🫂🧡💛
‘but she needs someone who's not family to prove that they do care about her and it will not change over a few mistakes. Which is something that Cassian embodies very well later in the chapter too.’
I’m so glad you feel Cassian read that way!! 😭 I’m kind of of the mind that Nesta’s still protective over her sisters and so that might occasionally stretch across to Cassian at times? Also I just feel like Cassian genuinely cares about people in a more (this might sound strange) innocent way? Like more carefully and tenderly?
I would have loved to write Cassian and reader as being good friends but because Cassian’s friends with Feyre I think reader would still always feel in second place and unfortunately it might hinder her more than help 😭
‘Tabbatha... you keep saying you don't know how to portray cassian but i personally think you do him such a great service’
I’m literally refusing to respond to this because I’m so embarrassed and flustered from the compliment 😶🌫️
‘As a kid growing up we NEVER ate dinner together, so reader's apprehension to going to dinner is so real, and Mor sitting across from her?’
Yes! And especially after she’s done something that so obviously puts her in a vulnerable position too? Now they all know that she was in a place like that I can’t imagine reader will feel particularly comfortable over dinner 😭
As for Mor, I think I’m actually going to be writing this scene tonight, so I’ll be interested to see what happens? (Because honestly I don’t 100% know how it’s going to go either 😭🫣)
‘oh myyyy goodness, ik this chapter just came out but im already rereading hehehe im so excited for the next one’
Babes oh my gosh I was struggling to start chapter 18 so did a change 🫢🫣
I had so much fun writing the opening scene to the next part and I’ll be so excited to hear some thoughts on it—if you or anyone has any thoughts on it, of course 🧡💛
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