#idk about the pacing on this one :/
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must a book have ‘plot’ and ‘structure’ and ‘progression.’ is it not enough for characters to be in a place. and for that place to be really fucking weird.
#this post brought to you by. who else. lay me down. one day i will post about things that r not her but that day#is not today i fear#anyways today the concept of pacing knocks me down and kicks me in the ribs over and over and over again more news at 12.#ithink i’m having trouble bc the book starts out VERY fast paced for like the first 2-3 chapters (<- Agnes And The Awful Horrible No Good#Very Bad Day) but then REALLY slows down and stays slowed down from then on. idk i just need to find a way to either slow down the beginnin#or make the rest move faster eye think#wip: ghost story
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day in
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likes do nothing!
#i just realised this is such a fnaf camera angle#anyway#what if L was the one under observation instead of light?#something about his trudging repeatedly in the hall is giving ankle shackles and i know that says something but im too tired to tell what#idk i wanted to practice perspective and lighting and shit#i think hes cute#pacing back and forth in doomed by the narrative insanity and listlessness#something very attractive about that#L#Misa#Ryuk#Death Note#Shinigami#Kira#Detective#Anime#Manga#Fanart#Fanfiction#Cosplay#Anime Art#Manga Art#Digital Art#Traditional Art#Death Note Art#Death Note Fanart#Death Note Fanfiction#Death Note Wallpaper#my art
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lost meme dump because i cannot be assed to make individual posts
#roach talk#sorry that it's mostly ben/linocke. you can tell i have a favorite#i feel normally about him#lost#lost 2004#i refuse to use ''bocke" goofy ass ship name i'm sorry#ben linus#john locke#desmond hume#charlie pace#i refuse to tag that other guy. fuck you#and then everyone who only appeared in john's contacts also goes untagged. sorry#i also have a version of john locke whatsapp that had desmond instead of eko. idk which one i like more but i posted the one with eko since#desmond already got to be here w charlie#Good for them. good for them#desmond/charlie/claire/penny the polycule ever thanks for coming to my ted talk
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i do think if the bridge scene (where jayce has to get viktor through the blockade) hadnt happened or had gone down in a more chill way, that viktor would have told jayce about the hexcore experiments he was going to do, like either worked out what they were going to do or had jayce there or like aware of it instead of doing it in the middle of the night without telling anyone
#like that was the whole point of havig viktor say jayce will understand he was going to tell jayce about his theory#but then jayce did all that and viktor decided that jayce wouldnt understand#when he only tells jayce half of singed answer? yeah#anyways au time#thinking thoughts about jayce carefully writing the runes onto viktors skin (not carving idk if that was necessary i think that was a little#self hatred moment for viktor?) and like maybe not being in the room but like right outside pacing and listening#bc they would have figured out that its only safe for one person??? idk how it works#maybe jayce gets some runes too#whatever ill figure it out#jayvik#arcane#viktor
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just all of this from moa regarding frank/hazel/leo. the most uncomfortable romantic tension ever because nobody understands it and nobody involved wants it to be there
especially "Hazel's eyes glittered like gold. 'Gold is easy,' she said. It didn't seem that way to Leo--not when he looked at her." like we can interpret this in a few ways. what an interesting thing to think about a girl you just met
and the whole "if this is a private special thing that she's only done with her boyfriend then I either really don't want to try it or I really really do want to try it" like STOP cut the cameras
#also he's only riding with one arm around her??? on ARION?? bro relax 😭#a frank pov would have been so entertaining here like god I would have loved to see exactly what their loud argument looked like#leo is explicitly attracted to hazel but his romantic feelings are explicitly ambiguous. like he really doesn't know what's going on#he clearly feels Something. but what is it. mostly infatuation imo. he's a teenage boy with feelings that he doesn't want#towards a girl who doesn't want him like that. idk it's just kind of sad and relatable if you've ever been in a similar position#(this is where I remind everyone that hazel is 14 in hoo not 13. closer to being 15 than 14 really. frank and leo are not weirdos)#I love the detail about big bro percy being protective towards hazel even tho it sucks for leo 😔 poor guy#anyways this would have been more interesting if frazel were more slow-paced and didn't get together until hoh or something#like hazel is 100% off the table in this situation so the tension (and the resolution to it) feels kind of meaningless and inconsequential#frank is hazel's anchor to the present and leo represents her lingering inner conflict regarding sammy and her past#choosing between the two (present/past) would have been more thematically significant#but that doesn't really happen because she's already fully committed to frank so the choice is already made#one of the big questions you can ask about moa is “ok so what was the point of the whole sammy thing” and doing ^ something like this#would have helped imo. but everyone that isn't me hates love triangles so yk. probably I'm the only one who would have enjoyed that#or like all three of them should have kissed each other. in my head they did actually#the audience is gonna boo me for this but while I understand why leo and hazel were both weirded out by the sammy revelation#from a reader's pov I'm just like Ok but come on is it really that much weirder than being a demigod and dating your cousins#hazel levesque#frank zhang#leo valdez#pjo hoo toa#percy jackson#piper mclean#frazel#heroes of olympus#riordanverse#pjo#frazeleo#percy jackson and the olympians
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Kinktober Day 15 - Dirty talk
pairing: pete “maverick” mitchell x f!reader
cw: fingering, penetration, teasing, dirty talk, a little praise
word count: 1625
kinktober masterlist here.
18+ ONLY | MINORS DNI
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It was a huge relief, after the mission. You got to watch Maverick relax for the first time in weeks. The stress that had been very visibly plaguing his existence had finally gone. Watching his regular demeanor return more and more each passing day was a treat. You loved him, you loved seeing him smile, but it also came with extra perks. Now able to settle in at home with you more comfortably, Maverick was touching you a lot. Coming up behind you, kissing you for longer periods of time, purposely pressing himself against you in bed.
He was being a tease.
Waiting for you to cave first.
But two can play that game. That’s why now, after a very romantic dinner on the porch, you’re ignoring Maverick’s very suggestive stare from across the table. He watches from under his eyebrows, a slight curve pulling at the corner of his lips as you ramble about something he’s unintentionally tuning out. And maybe that was your goal, to get him absolutely entranced with some food and his favorite wine and you purposely dressing in something you know drives him wild.
You’re sure you’ve won the game when he suddenly stands, but then he dramatically stretches his arms above his head, feigning exhaustion. He makes some comment about cleaning up and heading to bed, but you can surely swear that the sudden smirk on his face as he picks up the plates and wanders inside has something to do with the brief discontent on your face.
You’re not gonna beat him at his own game, are you?
Huffing, you stand and help clean up. Maybe once you’re settled in bed, you’ll make a silly comment about how his age is starting to show. That will surely get him to crack, you think, what with his constant need to take a challenge and all.
After cleaning, your plotting follows you to your bedroom, where Maverick is already taking his shirt off for comfort. You try not to stare, try to continue playing hard to get, but that’s incredibly difficult at the sight of his spotted skin. Bruises, blotches of purple and red, litter his torso. Even after a week post-mission, they’re only starting to lighten up.
“Like what you see?” he suddenly remarks, throwing you off guard.
“No,” you immediately bite, eyes darting away to resume your little game.
He smiles, playful. “Seems I’ve got you a little riled up, no?”
You focus on removing your own top, whether that be to initiate something or to simply change into PJs. You shrug, matching his smile. “Don’t know what you’re talking about.”
Maverick’s eyebrow cocks, a silent Challenge accepted.
He’s biting back a grin when he launches himself after you, pinning you to the mattress with ease. You pretend to fight him off, mostly just squirming as he presses his body to yours. His solid warmth is comforting for a quick second, until it’s not, his hips rutting up against yours. The sensation wipes the smile right off your face. Maverick stares as he repeats the motion, teeth biting down hard on his bottom lip. The hard material of his jeans sends a pleasing jolt up your body. He grinds against you once more, the material rough against your inner thighs, and you whine quietly.
“You done pretending?” he asks, his voice soft but patronizing.
“You’re imagining things,” you contend, eager to rile him up just to see where it takes you.
“I don’t think I am.”
You stare up at him, trying to give him that very defying look he likes giving everybody else. “You are.”
Maverick continues to stare, and then his face softens. Above you, he leans down and gently presses his lips to yours. You giggle internally. Success. You’ve fucking got him. Soft lips tenderly move yours, calloused hands placed on your ribs, massaging at your skin. He’s got such a way of kissing you. It’s always deep, no matter the pace. Almost hypnotizing. That’s why you jerk in surprise when his hand is suddenly down your pants, the trailing of his fingers alone sending tingles up your body.
You gasp against his mouth, and he pulls away to watch your face as the pad of his middle finger parts you open.
You try to hold back your whimpers as he prods at your slit, bringing his finger up to his tongue and then back down to rub in circles. The bit of spit immediately helps slick you up, and his finger slips inside. He watches you with an innocent look on his face, like he’s still winning the game somehow. And maybe he is, with the way you’re desperately bucking against his hand.
“Doin’ alright, honey?” he asks, tone as innocent as the look on his face—funnily enough—as his finger works in and out of you.
You breathe out, slightly exasperated at his pace. He always does this; always likes to take his time loosening you up. Likes talking and frustrating you so that you grow needier. It’s a very torturous tradition. But it is pleasureful.
Maverick notices the strained look on your face, raises his brows when a second finger elicits a sharp noise out of you. “You look frustrated.”
“You’re teasing me,” you whine, wrapping a hand around his free arm and squeezing.
“I’m not,” he insists.
“Please, just—”
Wrist slightly strained, he removes his fingers and waits for you to finish. “Please what?”
“Pete.”
He hums, his hand coming out of your pants to pull them down. Chills run up your exposed legs at the cool air in the room, Maverick’s warmth no longer covering you as he sits back to pull the rest of his clothes off.
Forgetting all about your little game, you reach up for him with grabby hands as he settles in next to you. His hard cock presses against your thigh as he brings you close, your hips sputtering against him for contact. He’s seemingly amused at your enthusiasm, but his demeanor changes when he’s got you flush against him.
There’s a very intense intimacy that comes with almost everything he does. The kiss, the talking, now this. You’re nearly breathless as you face him, faces inches apart, his expression serious and soft all at once. He likes watching you, that you know, his lips parted as he slowly stretches you around the tip of his dick. It’s little by little that he starts to push in, feeling your body tense in the one arm he’s got wrapped around you.
A hot, blazing blush spreads in your cheeks. His gaze is overwhelming and just as intense as everything else. You try to hold eye contact as he pushes in more and more, until his hips finally meet yours. His cock fully inside you, you shudder.
“That feel good, sweetheart?” he asks quietly, leaning to kiss your collarbone.
Whines stuck in your throat, you nod, biting down on your bottom lip.
He groans then, the noise right in your ear. “You feel good.”
The tight knot inside you tenses even more at his voice, so soft compared to the filthy, delicious ache down below.
Maverick holds you tight when he starts rocking up into you, slowly at first. He gradually picks up the pace as he feels your body’s responses, eager and aching for him. Fingernails dig into his back, a frustrated whine finally escaping you. He’s hitting the perfect spot inside you, but not fast enough. And he seems to be doing it purposely.
“Right there?” he asks, guiltless.
“Harder,” you plead through heavy pants, clutching at him.
A sharp snap of his hips. You wail out. He gives you a long, wet kiss, pulls back and then snaps his hips again.
“More, more, more,” you chant, head thrown back, exposing your neck to him.
He leans down to nip at your skin and trail his tongue along it when his pace finally meets your needs. Hard, heated thrusts. The sound fills the room, along with his breathy groans, and your spill of cries and incoherent mumbling.
“You wanted this tonight, didn’t you?” he asks against your neck.
“Yes,” you breathe, “Yes, yes.”
“I know,” he murmurs, his hands roughly adjusting you by your hips to fuck into you at a better angle. “I know you did, baby.”
“Oh, God,” you cry, moans trapped in your throat.
“I always know.”
Fucking Christ. Him and his ego. Too bad you’re too out of it to even argue with him, the pleasure licking up your body like fire.
“That’s it, sweetheart, a little bit more,” he urges, voice just above a whisper. “Just… ah, just a little.”
“Pete—I,” you stutter, the feeling in your abdomen threatening to spill.
His pace doesn’t falter, and he doesn’t slow. His thrusts do get a bit sloppy, but that’s from the angle, your bodies grooving together with every sharp motion.
“Let it go, come on,” he coaxes, hands rubbing up and down your waist. “Let me feel you.”
The orgasm is earth-shattering, Maverick’s voice ringing in your ears as everything around you blurs in white hot bliss. He holds you through it, arms pulling you as close as can be. You can feel his heartbeat against your chest, loud and pounding, just as yours is. Your cries are silenced by his mouth on yours, a soft and languid kiss.
Savoring the feeling, he grins against your lips. “I won.”
Even in the middle of the very overwhelming wave of pleasure, you pull back, perplexed. “You won what?”
He tries to catch his breath. “The whole thing we had going on.”
He’s not serious.
“Pete, you literally initiated this.”
Tongue in cheek, he visibly thinks about it. “I’m pretty sure it was you.”
#idk how to write shorter fics jesus christ#not sure how i feel about this one but i am definitely on a roll again#let's hope i fix my pace#kinktober 2023#top gun#top gun: maverick#top gun fic#top gun fanfic#top gun: maverick fic#top gun: maverick fanfic#pete mitchell#pete maverick mitchell#maverick#pete mitchell x reader#pete maverick mitchell x reader#maverick x reader#maverick x you#top gun 1986#*#mav#tom cruise x reader
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a short zine about a lack of object permanence
#two posts in one day bc u guys know idk how to pace anything I need to just post when I’m so inclined#I made this for the zine fest I did about a month ago tho!#it opens up to an abstracted portrait but I didn’t include that here idk#my art#zine
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i love nandermo for a lot of reasons but honestly it's one of the ships that i just have the best relationship with. like i love it with all my heart but i do not think it's going to go canon and it's awesome, at least from my perspective, that i'm seeing people be okay with that, like it's so refreshing to see people content with the idea that the show isn't going to give this to you, nandermo lives in fandomville and will probably never move to canon but at least we have fanon <3
#its just nice#idk im probably missing some people who are aggressive about it but That One Ship is very much not this way so this is a nice change of pace#it doesnt make annoyed with fandom and make me hate the ship#like i know it won't become canon and thats okay cause theres so much fanfiction and fanart and headcanons to play with#im in my sandbox playing pretend <3#nandermo#wwdits
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Work things, OCs, and... yeah
#doodles#non-fandom stuff#oc art tag#don't worry about it beaumont sam usagiman is a kind creature#the demons in the last image... ah someday i will talk about the demons#they're designs for a thing that could either go the dating sim route or weird workplace comedy route#anyway. creatures.#if ur brave enough to ask about them i may actually respond#likely with my usual slow pace but i will respond eventually#the girl with the red hair up there named Dea#she's part of that strange fantasy idea i had a whiiiiiile back#maybe i'll post more about that too; i already made one post about them#I have some drawings and pages done in that world but... idk they need work and all#i just don't know if theyre interesting enough to worry over#ah the troubles of creating things
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Here is lady pics from when I was MIA
#alek insanity#using this time to rant about my personal life. my dad had a medical emergency but he should be coming home soon#i spent a while at my aunts house it was fun they have a cat named harold hes so fatness#my stepmom has been staying with my dad up there and magically our heater broke#the hvac guys came (like 10 minutes ago) but they cant really fix it it just needs 2 be replaced atp.#and its been getting below freezing these past few days behhh#but its all good bc im gonna get popeyes soon#doodle (the lady) is sitting on my as i type this#and i decided to start drawing everyday !!! around 2 hours at a time is my goal. i used to draw until id get numbness in my arms#carpal tunnel speedrun? but ive realized its best for my joints if i draw for 1-2 hours. also if i draw everyday im more motivated#ive been trying to pace more too. i used to get 10k + steps a day but kinda. stopped doing that. oopsieeee. just aiming for better habits#fixed my sleep schedule too behhh#my friend has a christmas party on the 21st so im excited 4 that. also christmas in general bc im gonna get a new laptop#mine barely works and is held together with duct tape 😭 and im gonna get a ton of money#my friend is planning a h×h zine so thats exciting + there's a lot of ninjag0 ones around the corner. big things brewing#i think next year will be a good year. this year kinda... started off really shitty#hoping to get my drivers liscense next year. ive been studying for my permit but stuff keeps getting in the way#Also im gonna get new glasses soon after TWO YEARS hfgdhd . idk the future looks bright yall#and i got this fatness woman on me rn so happy times now too#shes trying to sleep on my leg . but ... i have to eat food ... doodleee lady
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you know, i always find it really funny when dudebros complain about syndicate and odyssey being too "jokey" or not "taking its characters seriously" or whatever…
like, did y'all collectively sleep through "it's-a me, mario!", "i meant besides vaginas", ezio inventing the latte, bartolomeo's... just... *gestures vaguely* entire character, etc?
like, it's fine to have preferences of course, i myself prefer a more serious and grounded tone, but these are usually the same people who tout the ezio trilogy as "peak assassin's creed", call ac1 a glorified tech demo and hate on connor for being "too serious and boring", like? make it make sense!
#asscreed#ac syndicate#ac odyssey#dont get me wrong#i do have problems with syndicate and even more so with odyssey#but it's not the tone lol#honestly i think kassandra is the protagonist that's the most similar to ezio if you really think about it#but bc she's a woman she's suddenly 'overpowered' and 'unrealistic'#yall don't remember the insane things that ezio survives in revelations do you#speaking of which#been replaying the ezio games lately#and i have something to confess...... i really don't think ac2 is good#ac brotherhood was a BIG improvement#in terms of story pacing for one (none of those insane unmotivated time jumps... well aside from the strange montage at the end)#and the characters are a lot more fleshed out (probably bc there aren't like 20 of them)#and the handling of female characters is MUCH less egregious#maybe bc there's only really claudia and caterina left LOL#lucrezia is a little annoying i guess... but she gets a pass bc she's cesare's sister and really they're the same kind of crazy lol#and hey we actually get to see how dangerous sex work can be and how it's not just a way for sexy nuns to give inner peace to men#even cristina gets fleshed out!#and i like that we get so see ezio being a little bit of a selfish prick in her missions#and making bad decisions in interpersonal relationships#at least i THINK that's what we're supposed to take away from it... but who knows maybe it's just supposed to be a tragic love story...#i hope not.... i hope the player IS supposed to think that ezio's treatment of her is bad. otherwise.... :/#sorry for rambling#guess im just kinda surprised by how much i enjoyed brotherhood#it had been a long time since i last played it#also the modern day is really good!#that you can talk so much to everyone and also being able to read their emails and the mundane banter... idk i just think its neat :)
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man i really wish they'd remake origins because playing this game is so tedious
#🏹⠀ ── ⠀ ooc : whispers from the fade .#i've started literally just skipping all the combat#i had to replay the same mission like 6 times yesterday and in the end i was losing my mind#finding things/locations without googling it is impossible#morrigan i looked for ur moms grimoire like 3 times but idk where the fuck it is so let's just pretend we found it. god#also i got to a point in the game last night that made me uncomfortable and i still feel weird about it today and THAT'S weird#but i want to continue so i can remember what happens. ughhhhh#also the private chats in the party camp don't really... match the pace of the main story?#or at least where i think the characters should be given the events of the main quest#everything feels disjointed. none of the character check ins are at the same pace as the others. i'm confused and scared#immersive i guess?#i can't wait to finish and get to my da2 replay#i have all these people in my camp and the only ones i use are zevran alistair and morrigan#and ALISTAIR dies CONSTANTLY#yeah i'm looking at you big boy
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The age difference between tommen and myrcella bothers me way more than it should like sometimes it's 2 whole years sometimes they're the exact same age like grrm wanted to make them twins but he forgot. Girl what is the truth
#.txt#grrm has a loose grasp on numbers unfortunately#in agot myrcella is 'not quite eight' and in affc she's 'not quite one-and-ten' ok so she went from 7 to 10 in 2 years?#and in 2 years tommen went from 7 to 8 uhhh if she's almost 11 he should be 9 at least right#maybe he is 9 but everyone just forgot his birthday lmao#BUT in the agot appendix it say's she's 8. which makes more sense. if she's 8 turning 9 instead of 7 turning 8#but BUT the wiki (my best friend and worst enemy) says she was born in 290. bc they take the 'not quite 8' thing as fact#which. ok after pacing around the house talking to myself like a madman that's not possible. it has to be 289 ☝ I think. um#I don't fucking know man I also don't have a very firm grasp on numbers. but something's not right here#idk grrm definitely fucked up some ages in affc bc it says joffrey died at 12. damn he died so hard he aged backwards 😔#btw this is the second time I've gone insane thinking about grrm's bad math today. and that was only considering time#imagine if I also thought about space too hard...thank god my understanding of distances sucks ass
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Dav spoilers (mostly around taash but also around the shadow dragons quest line ending)
Okay I'll probably be making more veilguard rambles bc this game is like right on the line of "good enough to get me invested but bad enough to drive me up the wall" so I have. A lot of thoughts.
I'm still not certain how I feel about taash's writing. I'm not particularly going to go into their culture thing besides to say why the fuck is choosing one of the other what their entire god damn arc revolves around. What. Do they know you can be more than one thing... I think this is VERY odd with them being nonbinary
But anyways. What I actually want to talk about is them and their gender. Because like. I still do not know how to feel about it lmao
Because on one hand, seeing a nonbinary character be just accepted like that genuinely made me tear up a bit. On the other. This is dragon age. You know.
The previous games have set up Thedas as somewhere where homophobia/transphobia exsists and is relatively common. Zevran is more cautious flirting with a male warden, Anders asks if it's okay that he's into men. Hell, Dorian's entire fucking companion quest is "my father tried to do blood magic conversion therapy on me"
And it's just. Very very odd. Because Taash's dialogues set up the Shadow Dragons as their go to for gender problems. Which you know, makes sense on paper because of course the organization that opposes the old system of Tevinter would also want to get rid of the built in bigotry that comes with "breeding" the perfect mage. However!!! They did *nothing* with it!!! I think the shadow dragons have the most trans named/important characters in it (tarquin, maevaris, possibly also rook and maybe others? I'm not sure) and not ONCE is the fact that Tevinter is a extremely bigoted society that values bloodlines over people mentioned. Your two choices between the next archon are a gay man and a trans woman which is GREAT but not once is anything about public backlash mentioned!!! Public opinion doesn't just change overnight, blight or not! There would still be a LOT of people blinded by ignorance who would push back. And it's not!!! Fucking!! Mentioned!!!
I do love a story without homophobia/transphobia, I really do. And I think the exsistance of that kind of bigotry exists in dragon age because of when it was made. However, seeing characters thrive in spite of that? Finding love despite living in a more bigoted society? That ALSO means a lot to me. And I think they really could have done it with taash and the shadow dragons but they just didn't and it makes me so sad
#dragon age#dav spoilers#dav critical#taash#this isnt even getting into the complete lack of mention of anything regarding slavery in minrathous#theres like. one line but its not even about minrathous!!! its about an elven lady who was sold by loghain during the blight!!!#i really did enjoy dav and the problem ISSS THAT I CAN SEE HOW GOOD IT COULD HAVE BEEN#good games leave me thinking “wow that was good!”#bad games i dont even finish#mediocre games brimming with untapped potential make me pace around the room rambling about insane theories#im not gonna lie and say that nothing about taash's story resonated with me. im nonbinary so seeing some of that reflected in them was grea#however. it also slighly felt like they werent willing go touch on the more uh. whats the word. darker?#parts of it? instead they just villainzed the qunari (again. third game in a row btw)#its insane how the best writing of the qunari is STILL sten from origins#not gonna say it was perfect by anymeans but at least origins tried to be slightly sympathetic to it ugh#im tired i needdddd to calm tf down about this game#dragon age makes me a Certain Way idk why#crow rambles
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the Samantha American Girl movie really holds up actually
#the Kit one doesn't unfortunately#idk yet about Felicity and Molly I haven't seen those since I was the target demographic#but the Samantha one is pretty well written and well paced#i like how they rearranged elements from almost all the books into one cohesive story#the actors are good and the costuming and sets are better than a LOT of 'adult' historical dramas
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with my phantom hourglass replay, there are two things i noticed;
a possible theme you could glean from the game is action vs inaction, and i think it's especially prevalent before you even leave mercay the first time, with oshus frequently urging link to not go after the ghost ship, then to just wait until the broken bridge is fixed, and seems reluctant at every turn while link and ciela are more than eager to go and do something about this problem, and the people of mercay in general talking about things and their problems but never seeming to act on their fears or desires, as well as the mention that due to the ghost ship, very very few people are still sailing around, while linebeck is one of the only people we see in the game actively going after the ghost ship and still sailing around. i might make a longer post just talking more about the action vs inaction in phantom hourglass but i just noticed it a bit and thought it was a bit of an interesting sort of theme you could find in the game.
linebeck moves so fucking much. i think he moves more than any npc in the rest of the game. not just in his intro cutscene where he is very animated, just in how much he moves when just standing in his little idle post, it's damn near distracting when the camera is focused on him, he moves a lot. i don't think i've really acknowledged how much he moves, and it really gives the impression that he's antsy or eager to get going, both of which fit him pretty well with how he acts.
#phantom hourglass#linebeck#loz#legend of zelda#salty talks#imo the action vs inaction thing feels esp interesting to me when looking at oshus specifically. he and his world are in grave danger#and he knows it and he actively does nothing and even seems reluctant to let ciela and link go ahead and do something.#of course he comes around on it but it's very interesting. has he given up at that point? thats what it suggests to me#that hes like. joined the people of mercay in just lying down and waiting for other people to fix their problems or just. not do anything#otherwise on mercay you have that old guy in the bar who spends the whole game not leaving bc he doesnt want to face his wife#and she never goes to the bar to actually look for him and just talks about it if anything#the guy with the blue tunic talks a lot about linebeck and his ship and almost gives the impression that he really wants to talk to him#but yknow. doesnt. theres the women that tells you about docks being shut down and how linebeck is the only person who's showed up#the woman you see at the broken bridge who's just like oh well! time to wait til someone fixes it.#even the guy fixing the bridge iirc is like well fuck i gotta do it or else oshus is going to bitch at me abt it#everyone seems reluctant to act which makes for an interesting way in how our main crew stands out#it is less so oh theyve been chosen specifically for this its moreso they're the ones who are fucking doing something about this#for their own various reasons some of which are more selfish but theyre still doing something#will likely have more stuff to say when im done but ofc we have other characters in the game who have to do with this#anyways. linebeck is so animated all of the fucking time it's great i dont think theres any other character that moves as much as him#when he's just standing around to talking to link it's great. he's so ready to get going.#it works with him being an anxious mess and also with like. oh he's probably understimulated. you know he's got a nasty case of wanderlust#i can put it with the idea that he's understimulated and afraid to stim in public so he's just constantly moving#he probably drums his fingers on tables bounces his leg when sitting paces around switches the way he sits or lays down often#tbh this kinda fits in with him being one of the main characters who takes action moreso than a lot of other characters#his arc culminates in him taking action he's going after the ghost ship he's moving around the world the only issue is that one of the#actions he takes is running away from his problems literally n metaphorically (tho idk if facing the jolene problem is a good idea for him)
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