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ech0wingg · 9 months ago
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Theres a lot of missed potential at SO I cant
spoilers!!
First of all, FOUR
Like, they have a pallette (which its REALLY good) but at the dialogue Pearl its like "Lol whos this", and later on the paralel canon Boss fight... And thats it. They totally deserved being another protagonist, theyre the og protagonist on Splatoon 2!!! Before Agent 8 came and hitted the spotlight with OE!!! Also gotta mention when you complete the pallette, Marina assigned them to be part of the security at the Memverse....... AND WE DONT GET A PEEP ABOUT IT AT THE MAIN STORY??? HOW DID AGENT 4 FAILED?? WHAT HAPPENED???
Plus, Agent 4 its more capable and fits more in the role of this roguelike Gameplay than Agent 8, why? At their Hero Mode, you can 1000% by using all weapons in all stages, also when you find sunken scrolls and anchovies in a certain stage Marie comments on Fours obssesion with finding little secrets.
Meanwhile Agent 8.... Give girl a break bruh 😭 if i was her i would complete only one pallette and then go home and prepare hot chocolate meanwhile watching a documentary on turf weapons. At Side Order we dont quite know the reasons of them being there apart from "helping Off the Hook", and being compared to OEs where theyre fighting for their literal FREEDOM... What a fall off :/
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secretly-tword-obsessed · 4 years ago
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Save The Queen
Ok, so I said I’d post this later but I just couldn’t resist!
Prompted by @randomtickleewriterstudent 
Summary: Burr helps Hamilton play his chess game, in a very unexpected way...
It was a rainy Thursday afternoon in Manhattan, New York.
Alexander Hamilton stood outside President George Washington’s office, a stack of papers in hand. He knocked on the thin door twice, causing the room to rumble softly.
“Come in”, came the voice of George Washington. Hamilton obeyed, stepping inside to find Washington with a quill in his hand, writing some sort of letter.
“I have the papers”, Alexander said, making the other man look up. Washington smiled softly at the sight of one of his hardest and most loyal workers.
“Thank you Hamilton”, he said, “Put them on my desk”.
Hamilton nodded and walked by Washington’s desk, placing the papers down. As he did so, he accidentally knocked over Washington’s jar of ink, causing ink to spill all over the letter Washington was writing, ruining it.
Hamilton gasped: “I’m so sorry!”.
Washington just shook his head and looked up at him, “Don’t be, son. We all make mistakes”. 
Yet Hamilton could tell that Washington was a little irritated. 
“I could, erm, rewrite that letter for you if you want”, Hamilton offered.
“That would be nice”, Washington responded.
And so Hamilton sat at the presidents desk, writing out on a new sheet of parchment the words that came out of Washington’s mouth. 
Once he was done, he dropped the quill, his hands a little red from witting so fast. Of course, Hamilton was used to this, but that didn’t make it any less annoying. Washington noticed Hamilton’s red hand.
“Sorry, did I go to fast?”.
“No”, Hamilton responded.
George Washington thought for a moment. “You seem worked out Hamilton, would you like to take a break with me?”.
Hamilton’s face lit up, “I would love to, sir”.
Hamilton really was feeling worked out, from both the essays he placed on the president’s desk and the letter that he just wrote for him. He didn’t often take breaks, but he couldn’t say no to the president of the United States. And it was fun spending time with Washington, he was a smart man and had lots of insights to give, in one game in particular...
“Chess!” both men said at once.
They stared at each other for a few seconds, and than burst out laughing. Washington was a very good chess player, and liked giving Hamilton new techniques and strategies to follow. Of course, for every time he played Washington, the better he got himself.
They both walked over to Washington’s couch’s and set up the board on his coffee table, each man on either side of it. They didn’t even have to ask each other about what colour to play; Washington always played as black and Hamilton always played as white.
“Would you like me to give you tips as we play?”, Washington asked.
“No”, Hamilton replied, “I’m feeling competitive today”.
Just than, there was another knock at the door, making the room quietly rumble.
“Come in”, Washington called.
In stepped a short man: Aaron Burr. 
“Sir, may we have a discussion?”, Burr asked.
“Maybe later”, Washington responded.
Burr was about to walk out, when Hamilton said, “I have an idea! How about winner plays Burr!”.
Burr raised an eyebrow in confusion, before walking over to see the chess board on the table between the two men. Understanding, he nodded.
“Do you play chess?”, Washington asked.
Burr smiled, a common habit of his, “Yes, and I am quite good if I do say so myself”. Burr shook his head and added, “Sir”.
Washington chuckled, “You don’t have to call me that. For now”.
He patted a seat next to himself on the couch for Burr to take.
And so, the game began. Alexander advanced his pawn, to which Washington responded with a knight. Alexander took another pawn out to threaten that knight, and Washington advanced his knight further to the centre. 
A few moves later, and Washington was already dominating the game. Snatching pieces, threatening pieces and taking control over most of the board. 
Hamilton cursed under his breath every time another valuable piece was taken, wishing that he had accepted the other man’s guidance.
Burr seemed to be very interested in the game, observing the board and calculating many possible moves for each player and their outcomes in his head. He noticed Hamilton make a very stupid mistake with his queen, and had to try hard not to make a noise as to spoil the game.
Just than, Washington stood up, “Do you guys need a drink?”. The other two shook their heads. “Well than, if you’d excuse me, I’m just going to get some water for myself, be right back”. And with that, the president left the room.
Alexander and Burr sat in silence for a few moments, before Burr muttered: “Your in trouble”.
“What?”, Alexander asked.
“Oh, I mean, Washington will destroy you when you get back”.
Hamilton tilted his head, “Why?”.
Burr snickered, “Look at your queen Alexander”.
Hamilton looked at the board. “What? I don’t see anyth- OH SHIT.”
Burr chuckled to himself, “Yeah, that is a bit of a problem isn’t it”.
The problem they were talking about: Washington’s pawn was just diagonal from Hamilton’s queen, and he would surely take it on the next move. Crap, why didn’t he see that?
“Of course”, Burr said at a clearly frustrated Alexander, “You could cheat”.
“What?”
“I said, you could cheat. Quickly, move your queen before Washington gets back, hopefully he won’t notice anything”.
Hamilton raised an eyebrow, he rarely saw this side of Burr. Burr never cheated, at life or in a game. Yet Hamilton was ready to obey, as it could have been his only chance of winning the game. He did as Burr suggested, and moved his queen one space down. 
A few moments later, Washington returned with a small glass of iced water in his hands.
“Now, where were we?”, he said, resuming his position on the couch. As soon as he glanced at the board before him, a smile spread across his face.
“Hamilton?”
“Yes, sir?”
“Did you move your queen when I was gone?”.
Crap. 
“No”, Hamilton lied, fumbling with the buttons on his coat.
“Are you sure?”, Washington asked him, raising an eyebrow, a wide grin on his face.
“Yes”, Hamilton responded, tying to keep eye contact with the man as his knees wobbled.
“Come’ere son!”, Washington chuckled, walking to the other side of the board and sitting down on Hamilton’s couch, wrapping an arm around the man’s shoulder. Hamilton squeaked.
“Now what if I told you”, Washington explained, “That this was all a test?”.
Hamilton’s eyes widened, his jaw dropping open. Washington chuckled at the look on the mans face, and Burr also couldn’t help letting out a humph of amusement. Hamilton shot Burr an ice-cutting look, to which he just responded with a finger to his lips, as if to say: ‘Don’t tell him I suggested it��.
“Now”, Washington said, “Since I know that your a cheater, it’s about time I give you your next lesson”.
With that, the president pounced on him, leaving him laid back on the couch.
“Never cheat at chess”, Washington said down at him, “Because there are consequences”.
Hamilton gulped,”What kind of consequences sir?”.
“Well, glad you asked”, Washington said, a smug smirk glued to his face; “You see, the other day, I went in to check on you at your house, and I saw something very interesting through your window. You were play fighting with your friend John Laurens, is that correct?”.
Hamilton’s eyes widened once again, “Uh, umm....”
“Oh, my eyes never deceive me son. But you know, you have always seemed to me like the ticklish type”.
“Wait-sir-NO!”, Hamilton cried, but it was too late, Washington had started clawing his quick fingers up and down his ribs.
“No what?”, Washington asked, not slowing his attack.
Hamilton tossed his head back in hysterical laughter, trying to squirm away to no avail.
“Whats wrong son, are you a little ticklish?”, Washington teased, making his hands towards the other man’s belly, scratching and teasing at the thin cloth of his shirt. 
Burr watched the whole thing from the other couch, with a smile on his face.
Hamilton thrashed and squirmed.
“BUHUHHHUHUHUHUHURRR HEHEHEHEHELP MEHEHEHEHEHE!”, he begged, squealing as Washington swirled his pointer finger into his belly-button.
Burr just chuckled, “Washington was right, there are consequences for cheating you know”.
Oh, the irony.
“SIHIHHIHIR, WAHAHAHAHASHINGTON, PLEHEHEHEHEHASE!!!”.
“Please what?”, Washington asked, “What is it Hamilton, do you want more tickles?”.
“NOHOHHOHO!”, he cried, “NOHOHOHO MOHOHOHORE THIHIHIHHIHIHNGS!!!!”.
“Things?” Washington questioned, “Can you not say ‘tickle’ Hamilton?”.
Hamilton turned crimson, squirming around and kicking lightly in his laughter. 
Washington tried out the mans neck, which was exposed from him tossing his head back in laughter. He shrieked and pinned it down to his chest.
“NOHOHOHHOHO WHYHYHHYHYHY?!?”
“Why? Because you cheated, thats why Hamilton. And you thought I wouldn’t even notice”, Washington teased.
This was torture, just torture. Yet of course, Alexander didn’t exactly hate it. 
Ok, he loved it.
But why would he not? He was playing with Washington like a little kid after a long day at school. And the feeling of just laughing freely was...lifting. Like the worlds problems vanished for those moments, and he was just having fun with a friend.
But that still didn’t stop the man from begging and squirming.
“Wait, stop”, Burr said to Washington, making him halt his attack. A huge smile spread across the shorter’s face: “I have an idea”.
“Wait, Bur, don’t you dare!”, Alexander threatened, as the other approached him and Washington.
Burr’s eyes flashed, “Don’t I dare what Alexander? This?”.
“No! Wait-”, Burr started squeezing the sides of Hamilton’s stomach with both hands, which he knew Hamilton couldn’t stand.
“NOHOHHO HEHEHEHEEHELP AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!”, he cried, his laughter ticking up a pitch. 
Washington smiled down at the scene before him, “Oh, your in trouble now son”. He went back to Ham’s neck.
“YOHOHOHOHOHOUR NOHOHOHHOHOT MYHYHYHYHY DAHAHAHAHAHAD!”, Hamilton laughed, the sensations almost unbearable.
“And you, son, are not a fair chess player”, Washington responded teasingly, watching as the man completely lost his mind under the attacks.
“I was right Hamilton, Washington would destroy you when you got back!”, Burr slipped out.
Washington stopped his fingers and looked up at Burr. Burr, realising his mistake, cupped a hand over his mouth.
“What was that Burr?”, Washington asked.
“N-nothing”.
“Did you warn Hamilton about the queen?”.
“N-no”
“Did you suggest that he cheat?”
“N-no”
“Are you ticklish?”.
Washington stepped over to Burr’s side of the couch.
“N-no”.
Hamilton chuckled, sitting up, “Nothing he just said was true, sir”.
“Hamilton!”, Burr exclaimed, feeling betrayed. Hamilton just shrugged.
“You shouldn’t have done that Burr, attacked when I warned you not to”.
“And”, Washington added, “There is a punishment for assisting in cheating too”.
And soon, Burr was trapped on the couch, letting out streams of giggly laughter.
It was a rainy Thursday afternoon in Manhattan, New York. And a very playful one to!
Oh my dog I’m blushing so hard right now just from writing this! Hope you enjoyed, and my back in a little hungry so please give some feedback!
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timandlucy · 7 years ago
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Prompt List
I have been getting a lot of questions about whether I got your prompts, whether I’m filling them, and so on. Because I take creative liberty with which prompts to take, I will compile a list of all of them that are on my to-do list. If yours is not on the list, you can try to send it in again, but I’d just like to point out 2 things:
I no longer take post 4x17 prompts, and the 4 I had in my askbox were deleted. I’m sorry, I don’t know how else I can write it without being repetitive. Me writing another s4 fic comes with very low probability.
I don’t take prompts that are for other One Chicago couples. Which means no Man*stead or Ste*llaride or Daw*sey or Bur*zek. Sorry. I just don’t feel any of these couples enough to write them.
Bellow the read-more will be my current ridiculously long list of prompts.
•  jay and erin trapped/abducted/alone in a prison like situation?
•  “You’ve been there for me before” missing scene
•  A fic that takes place right after the episode of 3x15 or 3x19.
•  Prompt idea: Lindsay gets injured on the job and doesn't tell anyone because she doesn't think it's that bad until something happens and they all find out.
•  Can we pretty please get a fic of Jay's jaw on the floor thanks to erin's dress??? I need this more than air i swearrrr. If you don't take requests i get it. Hope you have a lovely day :)
•  Please do a prompt about jay being the one in the room instead of Antonio when erin was yelling for the suspect to shoot her in 2x22 and him trying to calm her down when she runs away when Voight appears
•  I know you probably have a zillion of prompts to fill, and I can't wait to read every single one of them. I apologise in advance for adding to your list, but I'd love to read a story set just after Linstead rekindle in season 3 - the fire alarm goes off in Jay's building, and after having been naughty naughty, the two end up outside in very little - which causes Jay's elderly neighbours to gossip and wonder if they're back together?
•  The Man Slut scene and how after it may have been a way for Jay and Erin to have a light conversion with everything else going on in their lives.
•  Hey I was wondering if you’d write this as a fic ( I’m not sure if your taking prompts) Jay and Erin show PDA in front of their friends but not full on just cute fluff but everyone’s just surprised even though they know their dating but they forget because there just do professional at work
•  Can you do a fic about young Jay right when he gets into the unit? We saw how Ruzek/Atwater/Burgess got treated in their initial days so I think it would be cool to see the banter/tricks Jay goes through at first :) (also this might be shown on Fire bc I’m pretty sure that’s where his character is introduced?? I don’t watch fire so idk). If you don’t like the idea, maybe do one that shows his transition from army to police. Like at the academy or something!! Love your writing :)
•   I know you have tons of requests but just incase any of these catch your eye I'd love them! 1. Erin getting drugged on a bust and struggling with it and of course jay is there for her 2. Jay accidentally hits Erin and hurts her while having a nightmare or just in another accidental way 3. Erin having a scary allergic reaction and jay being here for her!
•  i'm not sure if you take requests but i saw this prompt earlier that was "you love her don't you" "is it that obvious" and i was just wondering if you would write a fic from the teams perspective about jay being obvious about being in love with erin and they like all say something to him and then at the end someone says that quote to him and he says the obvious thing and they responds "it's ok she's in love with you too" thanks:))
•  *** This is on the backburner, which means I'm not sure about it, but maybe *** Omg! Can you please, please do a rewrite of the end of season four with this scenario of Jay being the one that spirals. This is what I have thought would have happened too if Sophia hadn't left, and I've been waiting for someone to do it justice. Either way, you're an amazing writer, and I wish you wrote for the show. Have a wonderful day, you deserve it!
•   i don't know if you do requests or not but could you write a fic about adam and kevin's perspective during the whole scene and maybe trying to help get them back together? love your writing so much:)
•   I love your writing would you ever consider doing a continuation fic based around either 1x10 or 1x07? they were both angsty and I didn't like how either was handled.
•   Hey just wanted to say that I love your writing, it's amazing. And I was wondering if you could do a fic, where instead of Erin and Jay "cooling it" in season 2, they decide to go and come clean to Voight together. And it goes surprisingly well, and then it could get all fluffy and maybe even smutty after that...If not that's cool, I understand, I just had to at least tell you that I really enjoy your fics, hope all is well.
•  Do you take requests? If so, could you do one before Erin and Jay got together and Jays at Mollys with the guys and they're teasing him for liking her? Love your blog btw:)))
•  Okay but like can I request a fic? If you can manage it I'd love a linstead fic where Erin is the one that works in Intelligence and Jay has some other job (like idk a teacher or something else that's "normal"). He still has the same military background though. I imagine that "normal" former military Jay would be 9999999x more worried about his lady knowing that he's not there watching her back on the job but also JUST as proud & loving the fact that she's such a badass babe. Clearly I need help
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hemlockdumpling · 8 years ago
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MY FFXV DLC LEAK OPINION PIECE POST (BIG SPOILERS, DINNAE READ AND GREET.)
Big thanks to the girlfriendy, for bringing this to my attention, given Final Fantasy XV and the eagerly anticipated DLC Episodes are all we talk about these days. I've been currently working on Episode Wishlists for each character, though if these leaks are true, I might have to rewrite the completed Gladio one as well as the in the works Prompto and Ignis ones. I know they’re just rumours at this stage, bur I’m going to approach them as if they are truth and how I’d feel about each one.
My personal thoughts in the cut.
1.06. Playable Gladio in Chapter 13 protecting Ignis? I smell escort mission. Normally, escort missions are frustrating as get out, but perhaps it being Ignis you're protecting gives it more heart? Chapter 10 alone had me freaking out over my husbando's personal safety and that was with a whole crew. Being Gladio might also be good for me in the sense that I have very mixed feelings about him and giving him a duty like this on such a personal level may just be what I need to remind myself why he's the Shield of the Chocobros. It would also be a good bonding opportunity for Gladio and Ignis.
Free Booster Pack. Magitek suits for the Chocobros? That should be... interesting. Poor Prompto, though. Way to rub it in, Squeenix dudes.
DLC Episode Gladio. Spoke volumes about this before. If it's just about Gladio wanting more power for the sake of it or to boost his own ego, then sign me off. Gladio is the Chocobro that needs the most development and I think it would be a bad idea to just have a combat based episode with little in the way of character substance. They have a real chance to flesh him out, expand on his family (Iris, JARED YOU KNOW THE FAMILY BUTLER, his father,) and his relationship with Noctis that suffers at points in the game. This could be the chance to help me CARE about Gladio again after him leaving and the Chapter 10 shambles. Please, Squeenix. Do right by Gladio. You can have him be badass AND have heart.
1.07. The Bestiary feature unlocked with Prompto's camera is a fantastic idea. Offers more replayability this way. Thinking Pokemon Snap, but with Prompto. ........That needs to be a thing, Squeenix.
1.08. Oh. God. Prompto. Going off the tracks in the Regalia. How ever do they convince Ignis to let this pass? Also playable Prompto in Chapter 13. Yay. I'm getting strange Metal Gear Solid vibes here.
DLC Episode Prompto: Strange that Episode Gladio is supposed to be only two odd hours long, yet we've got a roughly five hour deal for Episode Prompto, though given there's far more to work with here, that's hardly a surprise. I had a feeling it would be set after his fall from the train and I wondered what he got up to between then and being in Ardyn's capture. We have a shooter style adventure with plenty of story to flesh things out, which is exactly what we need. I always felt the aftermath of Prompto's reveal in Chapter 13 was sorely lacking. It's sweet and all that the Chocobros still love him for who he is (because who wouldn't, it's Prompto?), but there just wasn't enough meat on the bones to this huge story. The identity of Prompto's father was in the official guide, but not the game? Glad that they're finally adding this in. I'm also intrigued by this important connection between Prompto and Regis, and how he's in the Crown City as a child. See if Regis saved him... HEARTS! REGIS IS BEST DAD EVEN TO OTHER CHILDREN. ♥♥♥
1.09. A customised fifth party member? Part of the Kingsglaive? Sweet. <3
1.10. A challenging new dungeon full of nasties? SIGN ME UP FOR THAT SWEET XP AND AP.
1.11. A Halloween themed city? The Chocobros in Halloween Town now? Interesting to see what comes of this (especially if we get Halloween themed outfits for the guys.)
1.12/DLC. Multiplayer options. FREAKING KINGSGLAIVE CUSTOMISATION. NEW OUTFITS FOR NOCTIS AND PALS. YESH.
1.13. O.M.G. Playable Ignis in Chapter 13? After Noctis enters the Cystal? Sign me up. The escape from Nilfheim idea is also good as it just sort of ends in vanilla FFXV. It would be good to see the aftermath of losing Noctis to the crystal (and to Ardyn's bawbaggery.)
DLC Episode Ignis. This is it. This is the big one, the DLC that would have the biggest effect on the story and based on this little nugget of information, it's a doozy. Far better than my intial fears ramped up by fan theorists (Traitor!Ignis, hate that idea.) Rumoured to be released in December, we get a "strategic battle against the empire" in the Leviathan chapter (what I suspected,) we get a three way smackdown between Iggy, Ravus and Caligo, surprise wild Ultros appears and then the doozy. Ignis PUTS ON THE RING OF THE LUCII AND MAKES A DEAL WITH THE ROYAL DEAD DUDES - SAVE LUNA OR SAVE NOCTIS. Like, wow. This is a big game changer. You know Ignis cares deeply for Noctis, therefore there is no doubt in my mind he would save him, but the guilt this would cause him, even if Luna was prepared to sacrifice herself. It also says a lot about Ignis if the Royal Dead Dudes are willing to make a deal with him, like maybe along the lines of Noctis may die in Altissia unless Ignis intervenes by offering his sight and Luna's life? Oh God. OH GOD. MY FEELINGS. WHY DO YOU MESS WITH THEM GAME? You also have to wonder if the other Chocobros ever learn about the deal Ignis will make because IMAGINE THAT. IMAGINE THAT ANGST.
1.14/1.15. Funny that an expansion of the World of Ruin comes up shortly after I made a post wanting something like this. It might not be the whole map like I hoped for, but it's something. Older versions of Iris, Cor, Monica, Cid and Cindy are also appreciated because we only get told about them, but never actually see them. I missed them. A Chapter Select option is also quite a good idea for returning to particular parts of the game.
Done. I'm off to rest my head.
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