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aliorsboxostuff · 1 year ago

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Idk if u will do this request but! Miguel’s time is like futuristic set right? ( trans people would just transition and be more accepted in this timeline sí right? 😭) so Miguel He went to college at a high prestige science university and so did reader for he is too an smart as him with his own creations in robotics and chemistry. Miguel had tried to get alone room accommodation but failed and got partnered up with transftm!reader and they became roommates. Reader fell in love with Miguel but he didn’t notice cuz he was too focused on his work and whatever. Years go by aka spider verse but suddenly miguel needs help from his old college roommate. Angst fluff maybe…smut??? Sorry English isn’t my first language 😭😭

Hey anon! I appreciate the idea and i love how much you fleshed it out! Dont worry, i completely understand your vision, and i get it english is hard for me too lol i hope i got your ideas right tho, sorry this turned into angst more than what i was aiming lmao enjoy all!

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Tags: Miguel O’hara x FTM!Reader, Villain!Reader, Lyla, Past Relationship, Angst, Falling Out, Fighting, Arguments, Dirty Thoughts, Meet-Cute, Pining, Secret Crushes, Miguel is as dense as ever, poor reader on this one HAHA

They had a history. Of living together, spending time with each other, but despite all of that it all went downhill. Who knew your ex-roommate turns out to be Doc Oct

(Takes place before Post Credit Scene in into the Spiderverse)

—

"Miguel, I hate to tell you this but we can't-"

"There has to be another way, you designed this Lyla!"

"Hey! Don't blame the AI, blame the maker! I only followed what you said!"

Lyla huffs and glitches to another part of the console. Miguel is currently hunched over a table in the corner of his lair, the only light illuminating his project is the light rod over his workbench and the monitors around him.

The girl busies herself with schematics, working out equations and trying to find where they went wrong.

Miguel's latest work on the multiverse brace is to eliminate the glitches that it makes whenever someone uses it. It could potentially lead to wounds from the cells traveling to a different world, and even the healing factor won't fix it. Worst-case scenario, it would lead to a fatal wound, possibly death, and Miguel can't risk that if he's gonna start interdimensional travel.

His eyes scan over the chip connected to his computer, adding and removing codings that might've gone wrong. He's wearing the headband Lyla gifted him, or mailed to him when it was his birthday months ago, to be exact.

"I swear the shell is all good, Miguel. It should all contain the molecules needed for the portal bracelet,"

"Can you please stop calling it that?"

"What? 'Portal'?"

"Yes. It's not a portal, we already have that," Miguel rolls his eyes, gluing them back to the screen.

"Then what are we calling it?" Lyla pouts, adjusting her heart glasses.

"Transdimensional Pathfinding Wristlet."

Lyla pauses her work, and turns to Miguel, her brows raised, the blinks once, twice. "Wh- seriously?"

"Y'know what, I'm not even gonna try," He shakes her head before glitching to another monitor. "Leave it to the crazy scientist to name his things,"

Miguel ignores what his AI had said, instead focusing back on the chip. If this succeeds, it’ll be the first dimensional trip the prototype could make, and he’d prefer not to be a piece of burnt toast once he comes out of it. He coded another line, before he ran a diagnostic. The screen glares red, the annoyingly big letters of ‘ERROR’ pops up.

Miguel blinks, before he feels his claws coming out, promptly making him stand and throw his chair across the room. It shatters, the metal pieces clinking to the concrete floor. He heaves, sharp fangs bared, barely causing anger at his fingertips.

Lyla fixes him with a look. “That your fifth chair Miguel,”

The man takes a steady breath, wiping his hand across his face, working at his jaw. He tilts his head sharply and something pops. He faintly hears Lyla clicking her tongue.

"There's a guy I know,"

—

"What do you mean there isn't any- I booked a single room last week,"

"I'm sorry but there must've been a mishap in the system. I'm going to have to put you with an available roommate,"

"I don't want-" Miguel sighs, tapping his foot insistently. "Look, is there any way I can register for another single room?"

"You can wait a couple of weeks for a vacant room, but you'd need to consult with the head of the faculty." She nodded to him, a regretful look behind those blonde bangs. Miguel huffs, hands on his hips, thinking out a decision.

"Fine," He groans. "Who's still available for a roommate then?"

The girl's brows raise before she quickly types something into the computer, reading out what looks like a list with numbers and names. "Oh!" She smiles. "Room 304, on the third floor is still awaiting a roommate,"

"Great, thank you," Miguel grumbles, already picking up his boxes where he left them on the floor.

"If you'd like-" The girl calls for him again. "I can talk to the faculty member, see if I can help you with the room situation,"

"Sure, I'd appreciate it," Miguel's back is already turned to her as he makes his way to the building's elevator. With his gym bag slung over his shoulder, and the boxes of his unfinished work, traversing the hallway takes a bit of an effort. Students were not mingling around because most of them were already in their rooms, with the time turning just after 5 PM.

Finally, he reaches the elevator doors. Miguel shuffles the boxes into one hand, struggling to press the button before he is beaten to it by another hand reaching for the ascend button too.

"Here man, let me help you," The person says, already picking up the two boxes that cover Miguel's vision even before he said anything.

"Hey don't-" He begins, before he finally gets a good look at the person that dared to touch his scraps. The man in front of him, standing just inches taller than him, hair with an unintelligible style, captivating eyes and the faintest smirk on his lips.

Miguel's brain stutters a bit. "I'm- nevermind, thanks,"

"Of course dude," And Miguel's interest plummets. "What floor?"

"Third please," He nods, pressing the button once he and Miguel get in. The door closes and leaves the two in silence, only the faint whirr of the elevator's machine.

"So, late to dorm assignments?"

"Nah, they messed up my request,"

"Shit, really?" He turns to Miguel, his brows furrowed.

"Yeah, now I'm stuck with a damn roomie,"

"Oh yeah? What room?"

"304, apparently," Miguel huffs, looking down into the box he's carrying, the tape on it peeling slightly. The guy halts, now his brows are raised.

Miguel's turn to look confused, before the guy chuckles lightly. "Funny you say that 'cuz,"

"I'm room 304," He smirks, readjusting the boxes.

There's a pause, before he feels the red of embarrassment gathers on his cheeks. "You're-"

"That damn roomie? Yeah,"

"Fuck, sorry I didn't-"

"No no, it's fine! Really," The guy laughs, shaking his head while Miguel tries to formulate a coherent sentence. "I don't mind man, I get wanting your own space though,"

"Hey, I hope I'll be a good roomie," He bumps Miguel's shoulder lightly, his smile not fading. Miguel finds himself mimicking it slightly. After that, he introduced himself to Miguel, his major and such.

The elevator opens just after that, the two make their way down the hallway. He asks about Miguel's major too, just as they reach the door.

"I seriously didn't think I'd get a roomie," He chuckles, turning the key with a million other key chains. It jingles, before he pushes the door open and into the room. "I'll go check with the front desk-"

"Oh!" He turns after putting down the two boxes he was carrying. "Just got the text, said they'll give you the key tomorrow,"

"Great," Miguel rolls his eyes, putting down his box on the vacant desk and his duffle on the chair. He turns, inspecting the room that he's been sent to stay in. One side is already cluttered with his roommate's stuff, plants and books and papers strewn about. He tilts his head when he spots a flag on his desk.

"You're trans?" Miguel asks, turning to him where he was still standing with his phone out. He hums and lifts his head, meeting Miguel's browns.

"Oh that old thing? Yeah," He scratches the back of his neck. "I know, I get it. No one really cares nowadays, the worlds moved on, whatever,"

He glances at the little flag, pink and white and blue adding color to the messy desk. He smiles. "It's a reminder, I guess,"

Miguel stares at the flag, just once, before he nods and shrugs, turning to open his boxes. "Sure, that's cool,"

He can practically feel the sunshine radiating from his roommate behind him. He crosses his arms, turning again to face him, and he's right because his roommate has a really bright smile. "I hope we'll be good friends, Miguel,"

—

"Miguel there's so many people in Nueva York how am I supposed to-'' Lyla stops, before she grins. "Nevermind, found him!"

Miguel finishes his spider shot, cracking his neck again as he sets the syringe down. He turns towards Lyla, the AI already projecting the location. "Looks like our guy lives in… the slums? I thought you said he was a prodigy,"

"Yeah well not everyone gets a decent job even if they are a genius," Miguel huffs, running his hand through his hair as he looks at the mirror.

"Who's you said the guy was again?" Lyla begins to scroll through the data.

Miguel sighs. "Old roommate, back in college,"

"Ooh, interesting," She giggles.

"Lyla don't-"

"I'm not looking through his history! Just a peek, though,"

Miguel lets out another sigh, walking towards the large opened window. "Uh, hey Miguel, are you sure about this?"

"Why what's wrong?"

Lyla displays her screen as it glitches in front of Miguel. According to her research, the old roomie has been caught by the police stealing items from hardware stores and electronic stores, a handful of accounts of disruption of peace according to the other tenants in his old apartment. And he's currently deemed missing.

"Where did you say his location was?" Miguel reads through the file, his brows knitted.

"Just here, some abandoned warehouse in the slums,"

—

“Miguel, man, you’ve got to eat,” A tray for warm food was suddenly placed between Miguel's paperwork. He huffs, pushing the plate away and to the edge of his already small table. He hears a sigh, before the plate is moved out of his peripherals, and Miguel is back into his work.

“Dude, you only ate like, one energy bar after going to the gym,”

“I’m fine,”

Another exasperated sigh, before his roommate goes back to whatever robotics he was working on. Miguel has been perfecting his latest assignment the whole week, going back and forth on his computer, writing down research papers and consulting with his professors. Meanwhile, the man that he shares his room with is tinkering with a recent robotic piece he’s been pouring his heart into.

It’s correct that they share most of their schedule together. Miguel would wake up before dawn, and so would he. They’d run a couple of laps around campus before hitting the gym just before it gets too crowded. He’d spot for Miguel while Miguel would comment on his form if it needs any improvement. Sometimes they’d share breakfast together, before they head for their different classes, though ever since Miguel has been engrossed in his recent paperwork, their time spent together has been blessed. It'd be a lie to say Miguel doesn't miss their shared time, but he supposes seeing him back in their room after a long day is enough. Though, it doesn't seem enough for his friend.

Unbeknownst to Miguel, his roommates have been supporting a devastating crush on him. Stolen glances, longing eyes whenever Miguel's back is turned towards him. Times when he’d stare a bit too long whenever Miguel was doing his bench presses, times when he’d stand close just to feel the comforting warmth beside him. He’d fuss over Miguel, bringing food or drinks, bringing things Miguel might've forgotten with his busy schedule. Sometimes, when Miguel worked too late and too much, he’d fall asleep on his desk, at which he’d bring his blanket to cover Miguel’s back. In the morning, he rolls his eyes and says something about Miguel getting a bad back, which Miguel would promptly ignore.

It’s currently Friday night. The man that's sitting on the opposite side of the room has seemingly lost interest in his robotics and decided to peer out of their bedroom window. Suddenly, Miguel is bombarded by a loud shout coming from outside of their room, and snaps quickly to the source. He sees his roommate has opened the bedroom window and is looking out into the campus’ courtyard.

“Yeah, I'll join you! Be right down!” He hollers, before he shuts and locks the window. Miguel turns, blinking away the slight dizziness he got.

“Who was that?”

“A friend, they're having a party at one of the frat houses, you wanna join?” He grins, pulling on his leather jacket and pocketing his belongings. Miguel has never been to a party and he's not about to start going, especially when he has a deadline to push. He shakes his head, always swiveling back his chair.

“No thanks,”

He hears his friend scoff. “Come on Miguel! You’ve been working on that thing for ages now, you deserve a break, and the deadline isn't for another month!”

“I’m not interested,” Miguel bites back, barely glancing at his pleas.

“Just this once, I promise it’ll be fun! I’ll be there and I can take care of-”

“I said I'm not interested.” He spits out, already hunching into the part he’s soldiering. He doesn't hear anything, not an answer or another push for him to join. The air has changed, something heavy hangs between them. The tension is palpable, but despite it all Miguel only hears the shuffling of his friend's boots.

“Sure, whatever,” His roommate fixes a stare at the back of Miguel's head, before he unlocks their door. “Y’know, one of these days that work of yours is going to destroy you if you're not careful,”

And with that, he leaves Miguel alone for the night.

—

“What the fuck!” Miguel jumps and manages to hold on to the side of the building. “Lyla searches for his weakness points!”

“Hah! You think this has a weakness, Miguel?!” The man shouts, a wide grin on his lips. “I’ve perfected these arms, they are practically indestructible!”

“SO this is how you greet your old roommate?”

“I’d prefer for us to meet for coffee, but after how you treated me, I think this…” He brings a menacing robotic arm towards him, as if to inspect it. “Is way better,”

The arm suddenly lunges towards Miguel which he narrowly avoids. He jumps and entwines two of the appendages together as he lands behind the man, at which he growls and breaks free of Miguel’s red webs. “I never treated you badly!”

“No, not really huh,” He smirks. “But you never noticed the shit I did for you anyways!”

He spears those sharp arms towards Miguel which he does a couple of doges before jumping down the rooftop they were currently fighting on.

“All of those morning coffees, late dinners, all for nothing! None! All because you were so fucking focused-” He sharply turns, grabbing Miguel’s wrist and stopping him from dropping a punch. He suddenly pulls Miguel towards him, burning anger behind those eyes. “On combining a damn spider's DNA with yourself!”

He throws the Spiderman across the street, breaking several walls until the momentum finally stops. Miguel groans, cracking his neck when Lyla suddenly pops up. “Boss, the control panel for those arms is on his back, if you could pull it apart from him, it’ll stop him from controlling it,”

“On it.” Miguel swiftly stands, running through the many rooms he passed before leaping into the air, catching the man off guard. He throws a punch that lands on his face, throwing him off balance and into the concrete street below. He grows, and fixes his jaw, before launching back to full force against Miguel.

“It was all fine until you went out with that fucking brunette!” He shouts, throwing debris towards Miguel which he weaves and dodges. “Did I ever mean anything to you?!”

He’s got Miguel pinned to the ground, and pushes all of the arms to stab at him, but instead misses and gets buried in the ground instead when Miguel swiftly pulls away with his web. He struggles to get the appendages out of the strong concrete, suddenly finding them stuck, an opportunity for Miguel to rip the control panel off. He swings above the man, landing directly behind him where he quickly digs his nails into the seams of the panel.

“I’m sorry,” Miguel manages before he pulls. An ear-splitting scream, before deathly silence. Miguel could only hear his heavy breath, before sparks of green ran through the man's body, and it jolted him. He shouts, before falling into the pavement. Miguel takes a beat to examine the control panel, before throwing it somewhere on the ground. He spots the bareback of his once roommate, a horrid sight of root-like marks growing around the man's back. Miguel furrows his brows, before he hears the faint police sirens, no doubt coming over to clean up the commotion.

Just as Miguel was about to make his leave, he heard the man cough, a horrid groan behind him. Miguel glances slightly, as he hears him begin to speak.

“I was right… Your work did destroy you.”

Requests are opened! Remember to reblog!

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bluginkgo · 10 months ago

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Quick announcement (before the diarrhea of information):

I'm gonna go on a semi-hiatus for a week or so. I'll still be around, just not posting any drawings. Need to replenish my energy and drawing reserves cause I'm dead >_<

Sleep behind scenes!

So... Ginkgo why the hell did this take you so long? Sorry, sorry 😅 Here's what happened. I got burned out after like 10 pages (specifically the manor backgrounds killed me, plus having the full gang in the story) and then got sick and was not feeling all that great. Working through the burn out, sick, AND college work on top was quite hard not gonna lie though, but I wanted to finish it ^^

Alright, now as for little unnecessary Easter eggs, I added as nods to the show and my other interests. ^_^

1. Undertale save point. Undertale had me sucked in for a good long while, and for some odd reason decided to re-emerge in a form of the star save. Made it purple for Uzi's effect over N. She made him more rebellious, so he started to question why is it his memories and dreams are strange/corrupted/missing instead of just going with the flow.

2. Ep3 nod. V and N have history, history that I wish we get to see. V was nicer, kinder, in my opinion, prior to the absolute solver going rampage. So it makes sense for them to have some sort of friendship at the VERY least. So I decides to give it a small spin to it too. A direct quote from ep3 ^_^

3. Ep 2 + 5 nod. I kinda pulled the moment when James dismissed N from ep2 together with events that follow after N leaves library in ep5. Chronologically, these events don't fit together, seeing as ep2 is when N first meets Cyn and ep5 is when she's already set up the massacre. But this is exactly what I was going for. N's memories are jumbled at best, so I took liberty in mixing, matching, and editing his memories just as the admin program would probably.

4. Absolute Solver symbols nod. My chats with @absolute-solver (sorry for annoying you with tag 😅) made me realize that the absolute solver ought to have more presence now. It's activated and running systems in the background for Uzi. Whiiiiich means that drawing absolute solver should start now. BUT, it's rudimentary at best. Symbols don't really make sense and are not completed for most of the time. Not until Uzi at least sees the error message in ep2, when she truly starts questioning what that weird symbol on her visor is. I headcanon that N does know or at least feel that the absolute solver symbol is familiar, hence the little comment.

5. Absolute Solver Nori. Why is there so many absolute solver Nori around? I'm certain she went back to normal, just like in pictures Khan showed us in ep4 post core collapse. But I connected the solvers together here. Uzi's absolute solver string is up and running, and because the solver is a hivemind, it'd connect the memories and warp them a little. So that's why Uzi's doodle of her and Nori at the end (and during memory recall) was so full of absolute solver. It's slowly taking root, whether she wants it to or not.

Personal touches/added/cut ideas:

N's tail wrapping around Uzi like a hug. Originally, Uzi was supposed to look more nervous, but not for the reasons you might think. I cut the nervous look to a more upset look so it wouldn't be confused for fear. Uzi's never scared of N (yes, I don't count ep2 either, that was a lot of events at once and very little time to process them). The nervous look was more of a "Why are you butting in?" type, you know? Being a loner makes you cautious, so when N prods at feelings, I figured Uzi would be a bit defensive.

Cyn is fully rendered and yet I glitched her so much I felt bad. So here's full absolute solver Cyn eldrich monster thingy. ^_^

I pulled a Hazbin hotel moment. Did you see it? Abracadabra GONE! All the scraps from first couple pages with NUzi chatting POOFED out of the existence. Did I get lazy and tired? Yes, that was the tell tale sign of burn out, when I stopped keeping track of background details and just kept the pod.

These progress shots show pretty well how the story boarding goes and how I change my mind too easily. 😅 storyboard is still as much of a mess as ever, sketch shows you I was gonna keep Uzi's hat, but decided against it in final product. I figured this. Nori gave Uzi the jacket whenever Uzi got a bigger body + hair. These are the same jacket and hair Uzi has in canon. Uzi's body is just upgraded again and her hair gets shorter in that regard. The jacket would be big on her, and cover her hands, but what's up with the fluff if I draw canon jacket more spiky? And where's the death battery drawing? I headcanon Uzi drew those on once she got into the angsty teenager stage. The jacket is more spiky from wear and tear.

Fun fact! You can sorta tell who's gonna show up in the comic by what memes I post prior. Here's some examples ^_^ Cyn showed up, and that was first practice with maid outfits and Cyn's eldrich form. Closely followed by manor gang, the second/final form of maid and butler outfits and prime practice for those scenes. This example is a bit spoiler for a meme I'm working on right now! I've never drawn Nori before, so I quickly sketched out the idea and continued on with the comic (otherwise, I'd lose my steam and procrastinate on it again). Memes are filler for you guys while I work on the actual projects (comics), and along the way, they give me practice and change in drawing style ^_^

Is it a coincidence that this comic is called Sleep with the release of a certain horror game? Actually, yeah pure coincidence 😅 I had this drafted allll the way back in November, and didn't take particular interest in poppy playtime until I saw lanky boi, which was actually during a stream I watched on release day of the chapter.

(I didn't know tumblr, or at least the phone app, had a tag limit of 30, BOY was I surprised @brookiedaaroacecookie that must have been THE tag city, sorry 😅)

Next comic is Loneliness 1 and 2

This one is split into 2 POVs from both Uzi and N side, thus its 2 separate comics. That one will be more NUzi centered, too, a slight angst and comfort spin to it. That will come... sometime. I have a few more projects I wanna finish up with prior to starting on these guys ^_^

Why are you still reading this? Omg, have a cookie 🍪 you made it. Have a nice day now ^_^

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dayseedrawz2 · 11 months ago

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Okokok, Its time to stop mentally preparing... (for Pomni AND me in this case cuz I sorta regret doing this-) this part is probably gonna be longer than the first

[also tagging @sm-baby again. I'm sorry if I'm infiltrating you notifications but if I tagged you in the first it makes sense to tag you in the rest of the parts]

Here is part one of the Fic:

Okay now here we go again...

PART 2 OF:

☆Settings for two☆

Pomni, not having much to do while waiting for Caine and the others, just sat on the floor on the stage. Letting herself stare off into space, with the thought of escape still circling her head.

Caine was gone for a bit longer than she thought he'd be. She thought he would just snap his fingers and bring the cast out against their will. Ya know, like the oblivous AI that he is. Or at least he appeard to be to her... Then she heard the distant bustling and chatting of the others getting closer:

"Do we really have to do this for her??"

"I guess so. But I don't quite mind."

"Yeah, whatever. I just think it's stupid that he's involving us..."

"The only thing stupid about it is that he's involving you, Jax."

"Oh, settle down, guys! I think it's really sweet of him!"

"Shut up, Dollface!"

"C-can you guys stop arguing..?"

"Oh! Of course! Sorry, Gangle."

"Yeah, yeah, whatever..."

"Let's just get the day over with..."

Pomni got up as they all lined up side by side in the center of the room. But She was still a bit confused...

"What on earth were they talking about..?"

The thought lingerd with her, but it didn't invade her mind as much as the inevitable effect of her plan. But her train of thought again was interrupted by the voice of Caine bursting into their muffled conversations:

"Good morning again, my superstars!"

He swooped around the corner, approaching from the direction of the hallway.

"I hope you all are excited for today's adventure! This one is sure to be a doozy!"

He began to explain the rules of the adventure. "Something Something, the grounds, blah blah blah, Something about the Carnival? Or perhaps it was the Lake?" Not like she would know. She wasn't paying much attention. Again, all that was on her mind was the idea of leaving. When finally she tuned back in to Caine as he wrapped up his speach:

"Alright everyone! I hope you all enjoy the adventure! Stay safe and have fun!"

*Snap!*

And POOF! Caine and the others was teleported to who knows where.

Execpt, for Pomni?

She started to panic a bit:

"Im still here!? Should've known not to get my hopes up... Maybe he set that door there as a trap like the others..."

Well, at least she was alone...

*Poof!*

"Pomni!? What're you still doing here!?"

"Oh God..."

He snapped in attempt to fix what he thought was some sort of bug on his end.

Nothing happened.

Another snap.

Nothing.

He began to grow visibly frustrated, continually snapping as he spoke:

"M-my apologies, dear! There seems to be something wrong with-"

He turned to see the blue door slightly open. Pomni grew worried:

"Oh god... Did he see me in there?? Is he gonna do something to me??"

To her surprise, upon connecting the dots, he simply laughed it off:

"Haha! It appears someone got into the old settings room!"

"..."

"I told Bubble to quit messing with code without permission! I'll be giving him a stern talking to later..."

Though still tense, she let out a releived sigh:

"Sorry again, my dear! I guess this means you'll have to sit out of today's adventure!"

"I-it's fine, Caine. If that's all, I'll just head back to my room now-"

"W-wait!"

His response was a bit more panicked than usual:

"I-I'm afraid you can not go to your room at this time..."

This, of course, alarmed her:

"Wh- I- why not..?"

"You should be in the adventure right now, so even if you tried, the place would glitch like crazy!"

"Oh... well, uh- now what?"

"I... I'm not sure. This hasn't really happened before..."

"Mhmm..."

"Yup..."

It was a bit off-putting seeing Caine this quiet. Normally, he's always bugging her and the others with his antics. Not that she would prefer if he did, just- it didn't feel right that he wasn't.

Caine to must have realized just how akward it felt. He attempted to continue the conversation:

"Ya know, lately a lot of things have happened here that haven't happened before since you got here! It's pretty funny now that I think about it!"

"R-really? Like what..?"

"Well, if I knew, I would tell you! Haha!"

She wasn't quite sure what he was implying. "Was it some sorta joke? A reference?"

"S-sorry, what? I don't quite get it..."

"Well, as a not human being, I have been trying to learn as much as I can from you humans! I want to make sure that this place is as normal and comfortable as it can be!"

As he continued, he seemed more down to earth than he usually was:

"I tried to ask everyone for information about the human world, but either they say they don't remember or they just don't answer me at all."

This answer from Caine caught Pomni very off guard. She didn't expect him to open up to something like this. Especially to her.

"Gee, well- I-"

"But the feedback you gave me this morning, It made me realize. Perhaps I have been asking the wrong questions?"

She wasn't sure how to answer. Never has she been good at giving good feedback, but still she decided to give her best- "advice" You could say.

"You mean you should ask more about their personal issues with the place? Well- it might be different for everyone, but it might give you at least a few of the answers you're looking for? I-"

She was cut off by Caine rapidly shaking her hand:

"Why thank you again, my dear, for your feedback! Hopefully, this will improve everyone's stay!"

The rapid hand-shaking continued:

"Y-you're welcome?"

The shaking finally stopped, making Pomni almost fall forward:

"Well then, I suppose we should wait for the others' return."

"Yeah... I guess we'll be here for a while, heh."

He checked his WackyWatchTM:

"My! It's already almost over! They will be here any minute now!"

"Wait, really?"

"If my WackyWatchTM is right! It's as if it only started not even 5 minutes ago! Ha! That's one more odd thing that's happened since you've been here! Care to explain that one?"

Pomni had to think about that one for a moment. She hadn't had this sort of experience for a while:

"Well, if i remember, humans usually are unaware of time when doing something fun or being around someone that they enjoy being around."

This answer seemed to peak his interest even more:

"I am surprised that you are even willing to share this information with me! Is there anything else?"

As their conversation continued, Pomni thought:

"Huh... maybe this guy really does have good intentions..."

And there! Cut! End part! I can't write anymore-

Stay tuned for the third and final part!

(It is 1 am for me rn and I started at like 10 or 11 oh my goodness)

#tadc #the amazing digital circus #tadc caine #caine #showtime #tadc pomni #tadc showtime #caine x pomni

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littlekoifishes · 7 months ago

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Forever Playmate!!

[It was bright and sunny morning, the birds were chirping and the sun was smiling for once, a back to back rain storm has finally settled down in the mushroom kingdom]

Smg6: *stomping happily in her raincoats at the door, smiling and giggling. Holding a umberlla* DADA YOU ALMOST READY!?!

Mr.puzzles: *in a raincoat, smiling and coming to hold there little angels hand* I'm ready doll, im so sorry I took so long l.

Smg6: *giggling and pulling puzzles outside and to the sidewalk for a walk to the park* Come on than silly wets go!!

Mr.puzzles: *holding there littles hand, watching them jump in the puddles* careful now my little dearest, we don't want to ruin our play clothes now?

Smg6: *shaking her head* nuh uh! But puddles!

Mr.puzzles: *sighing and nodding* alright, but play easy, you look so pretty in your raincoat.

Smg6: *gleaming at her dada before jumping in another puddle, handing her umbrella for puzzles to hold* thankies dada! dada we gonna go park?

Mr.puzzles: *walking along side smg6* Yes we are! And your having a playdate with smg4! You remember him right?

Smg6: *nodding* He so much fun!! Dada, we gonna play tag! Hide n sweek! And Ooo MAYBE WE CAN CLIMB ON DA PLAYGROUND

Smg6: *giggling before splashing in the water puddles again* look dada no more clouds!!

Mr.puzzles: Yes sweetheart no more clouds! Mr sun must have drove then away!

Smg6: Wowie!! Dada mr sun can do THAT!?!? THATS SO COOL!!! *jumping up and down, being a bit to loud*

Mr.puzzles: *chuckling, twirling the umbrella half mindly, his head glitching a bit from the loud noise* Mhm! But remember not to yell, remenber smg4? Well his ears are sensitive little star, you'll scare him a bit with yelling...

Smg6: *looking down sadly, not realizing them being loud might scare people, and walking back to hold puzzles hand* oh...sowwy

Mr.puzzles: *realizing it sounded bad, picking up smg6 and hugging her* I didn't mean it in a bad way little star. I didn't mean to upset you..dada is so sorry

Smg6: *sniffing a bit* it's Otay, I sowwy too..

Mr.puzzles: You have nothing.to be sorry about starlight.

Smg6: *nods and gets put back on the floor on both feet*

Mr.puzzles: *sighing feeling terrible* hey? How about you run and yell all you want to the park gate, I'll catch up with you yeah?

[Alreadly in the park and can see smg6 running to the park gate, seeing her do a cartwheel before jumping excitedly on the locked gate of the park]

Mr.puzzles: *finally making it to the park gate, unlocking it and seeing smg6 run to hug smv4 and seeing them run off* sorry we took so long, we had a bit of a hickup

Mario: *shaking it off a bit and smiling* Mario doesn't mind, you came right on time, smh4 was getting rowdy!

Mr.puzzles: *smiles and look at the littles playing with each other, half roughhousing and than going on the slides together and push each other on the swings* there adorable..

Mario:*grabbing a ice tea out the cooler and handing it to puzzles* They sure are! Mario thinks they'll get along right together.

[Mr puzzles nods in agreement and watches the littles play all day with other littles in the park]

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The Show Must Go On

A commission for @dustinlaughlin

Hardy Wiley belongs to @dustinlaughlin

Sophie and Blitz McKnight belong to @loli-momo1908

In Vox's surveillance room, overlapping videos from various cameras stationed around the Hazbin Hotel played on the screens stationed around Vox himself. Vox was sitting in his office chair, watching them all while drinking from his mug.

Vox - *chuckles* “No fucking way! They're going to fight? Oh, my god. Hahahaha! Oh, looks like your little hotel didn't work out so well. *watches a screen with Alastor on it, which glitches slightly* Oh, Alastor, I cannot wait to watch you get FUCKED! Ahahahaha!”

Vox laughs maniacally. Believing the hotel has no chance and they are going to fail and get killed.

()()()()()()()

The scene changes to show the cannibals all gathered outside the hotel, practicing with their weapons. As Charlie is with her little cousins watches them all from the hotel's entrance, Vaggie comes up to her

Charlie - *sighs* “Oh, I wish my mom were here to see this.”

Sonya - *comforting* “I’m sure aunt Lilith will be so proud of us right now Cousin Charlie.”

Liz - “Yeah she would be happy for us to see us kick heaven’s ass! Especially her ex.”

Vaggie - “The cannibals seem ready to fight. Are we?”

Sir Pentious bursts out of the hotel's doors, wearing a Victorian-style British army uniform and looking proud of himself. He is also accompanied by his nephew, Lucious, and his parents, who also wish to help in the battle.

Sir Pentious - *confident* “Fear not, damsels. I shall have the staff ready for victorious combat!”

Vaggie - *confused* “What in the hell are you supposed to be?”

Sir Pentious - *salutes* “General Pentious, reporting for duty. I'll turn those rapscallions into soldiers in no time at all!”

Charlie - *smiles* “Thank you, Pen.”

Niffty, running around the hotel's entrance, now runs up to Pentious.

Niffty - “What can I do to help?”

Sir Pentious - “I'm glad, you asked, soldier. The base needs fortifications. Reinforce the southern wall! Create a moat around the perimeter to stop a ground assault.”

Niffty blinks up at Pentious, having no idea what he just said. Lucious stepped in also dress in a victorious style British army. He noticed how Niffty was just staring at him confused.

Lucious - “It’s clear this small female have no ideas what to do.”

Charlie - “How about this. If you see an angel, stab it!” *hands Niffty a small blade*

Niffty sees Angel Dust a few metres away, and, thinking that Angel Dust is what Charlie meant, runs towards him with her knife.

Niffty - *crazily* “Stab! Stab! Stab!”

Angel - *freaking out* “Hey, hey, hey, hey!” *climbs up the pole he was leaning on*

Charlie - *quickly* “Not him!”

As Niffty runs off to find other things to stab, Angel does a flip and lands on the ground, before walking over to stand with Charlie, Vaggie and Pentious.

Charlie - *chuckles nervously* “My bad. I should of been more specific.”

Vaggie - *drill sergeant style* “Listen up, sinners! We've got 24 hours before the

Extermination begins. Let's get to work.”

()()()()()()()()

As the cannibals and the hotel's residents begin training to fight, Vox continues to watch them all train from his surveillance room.

Vox - *laughing* “Oh, they suck. Oh, they suck so bad! Oh, God. They're gonna fucking die! They're- they're gonna die.”

()()()()()()()()

Back at the hotel, Charlie is holding Alastor's microphone, preparing to give a speech to the cannibals and the hotel's residents.

Charlie - “Hello? *taps microphone* I want to thank everyone for coming. Even people who aren't staying here yet...Cherri.”

Cherri - “Look, I can't resist a fight, okay? Especially when I get to tag team with this fuckhead. *wraps arm around Angel, who smiles*

Liz - *excited* “It’s gonna be so cool to be fighting by your side, Wild Cherri!”

Cherri - *giggled* “It’s going to be a pleasure squirt.”

Charlie - “Tomorrow, the Exorcist Angels will face a Hell ready to defend itself and win!”

Vaggie - *proudly* “Yeah! Yeah, we will! Tell 'em, baby!”

Charlie - *confidently* “Yes! And we are-we are going to win! But in case we don't, I want you all to know... that getting to know you has been the biggest honor of my life. Whatever redemption really means, I know you all tried. I have seen the good in all of you. And it's...I-I'm just...I love you all, so much, and-and live tonight however you want because-“

Niffty - “We're all gonna die!” *laughs maniacally*

Vaggie - *starts clapping* “Alright! Let's give it up for not dying! Love not dying. *pauses* Drinks?”

()()()()()()()()

Inside the hotel, the gang are sharing drinks, talking and laughing with one another.

Vaggie - “I mean, personally, I'm excited. It's been a while since I stabbed anyone and really meant it, you know what I mean?”

Cherri Bomb - “Cheers, bitches!”

Husk - “Yeah!”

Angel - “Here's to us!”

Sir Pentious - “Here's to being alive today and not dying tomorrow!”

Jonathon - *nods* “Agreed brother. We are going to win this battle.”

Bethany - “We will show those heathens who are powerful!”

Lucious - “We are going to win this battle thanks to my uncle's amazing weapons as well!”

Alastor and Niffty watch the rest of the group drinking from the mezzanine.

Alastor - “Ah, the celebratory night before a courageous last stand. It's been a surprising thrill to witness these wayward souls find connection. Almost makes one sentimental, eh, Niffty?”

Niffty - “I really like them, Alastor. They let me put on roach puppet shows without booing!”

Alastor - “Ah, an enjoyable collective to be around. I admit one could get accustomed.”

Niffty hops on top of Alastor's head and places a crown made of roaches and sticks on his head. Normally Alastor wouldn’t like anybody touching him, especially his head. But Niffty was an exception since he's actually quite fond of her. Despite having a strange mind.

Niffty - “I dub thee, King Roach.”

Alastor - “Oh, to understand your twisted little mind!”

Alastor and Niffty begin laughing maniacally together, signaling that they possibly do understand each other's twisted little minds. Meanwhile, Angel is sitting by the parlor as Husk pours him a drink.

Husk - “Last day of afterlife, and you're not off snorting a line off some hunk's abs?”

Angel - *shrugs* “Eh, you fucked one cannibal pool boy, you fucked 'em all.”

Husk - *smiles* “I guess you have changed.”

Angel - *smiles* “Hey, Charlie said live tonight however we wanted... so pour me a fresh one, and let's get to living!”

As Husk pours Angel another drink, Lucious approaches Sonya and Liz. He took a deep breath because he knows it’s now or never.

Lucious - *awkwardly and shy* “Say, um, Miss Sonya? Miss Liz? May I speak with you two?”

Sonya - *doubtful* “Umm sure?”

Liz - *menacing* “Don’t try anything stupid!”

Lucious - *sighs* “Ladies, listen…I just want to tell you that… I am sorry for the way that I treated you two when we first meet. You see, I was born from an era where women were looked down and condescended to. I always told myself that I get with the times, but.. I didn’t. I know that I said that I was sorry before, but… that was through force and I didn’t understand what I did wrong… But I do now, and it really messed up for me for treating you girls like that, and for that… I am truly am sorry for my behavior. Just know that I still think you’re an incredible and beautiful woman, Sonya, but I completely understand if you don’t feel the same way, and I accept that.”

Sonya - *pauses in surprise*”…Wow Lucious, you really have grown up…*smiles* Thanks.”

Lucious - *nervously* “So, uh... Friends?” *brings out his hand, expecting a handshake*

Sonya - *gives Lucious a thankful and kind hug* Friends.

Lucious blushes at this. Even Liz said:

Liz - “Since my sister forgives you, I’ll accept your apology as well. *darkly* but don’t try anything stupid to my sister or I’ll break your neck!”

Lucious - *raises his hand* “I solemnly vow to never take advantage of your sister, Miss Liz.”

As this happened, Pentious tentatively approaches Cherri Bomb, who is talking to Vaggie.

Sir Pentious - “Miss Bomb? Cherri?”

Cherri - “Yeah?”

Sir Pentious - *shyly* “I want to tell you that I...I love...I'd love to wish you good luck in the battle ahead. *shakes Cherri's hand* You are...have always been a worthy opponent. With the most...brilliant explosive contraptions I've ever seen.”

Cherri - *confused* “Uh...thanks?”

Sir Pentious - “Anyway, I guess...please don't die tomorrow. Okay, bye!”

Sonya, Liz, and Lucious watch Sir Pentious run off. Liz couldn’t help but giggled while Lucious couldn’t help but feel a little embrassed.

Liz - *snickers* “No offense dude, but you're uncle isn't really Casanova material.”

Lucious - *sighs* “I know. He's trying, he's just really shy and wants to make a good impression.”

Sonya - “Does he know anything about romance?”

Lucious - “He read the books if that counts?”

Sonya - *unsure* “Ummmm....”

Angel comes up to Cherri, passing her a shot.

Angel - “You know, you could totally tap that.”

Cherri - “Tss, don't be gross.”

Angel - “Cuz, you know, I hear he's got 2 dicks.”

Cherri looks back at Pentious.

Cherri - *interested* “Huh.”

“Hey guys didn’t forget me?”

They turned and saw Blitz smiling and waving at them.

Angel - “Oh you came! But where’s Sophie?”

Blitz - “I dropped her off at Sonya and Liz’s house.”

Flashback

There was a knock on Azarel and Zella’s door. Azarel and Zella opened the door and saw Blitz holding Sophie in her arms and she had Fat Nuggets in her arms.

Zella - “Oh hello. I see you brought Sophie and a little pig. She got so big.”

Blitz - “Thank you so much for agreeing to watch both Sophie and Angel’s pet.”

Sophie - “Nuggies are very important to me and Angel. He doesn’t want him to get hurt.”

Azarel - “Of course. Come in, we have some cookies and milk.”

Sophie - “Oh yay!”

Blitz let down Sophie, and she and Fat Nuggets went to the kitchen for the cookies. Blitz smiled but then frown and felt some tears coming out.

Azarel - *concerned* “Are you okay?”

Blitz - “The big battle is tomorrow…”

Zella - “We know. But we know Charlie and her friends will win and become heroes.”

Blitz - “I know that…But I’m scared in case something bad happens…*tears up* Do you promise to take care of Sophie?”

Azarel - *puts a hand on Blitz’s shoulder* “We promise. But I know you will win this battle alongside my niece and daughters.”

Blitz - *eyes widen* “You mean-“

Zella - “Sonya and Liz join the fight. They didn’t want to abandon Charlie tonight.”

Azarel - “And we have full trust in Charlie to protect them. We couldn’t shield them from this forever. They are strong girls, I know they can do this.”

Blitz - *nods* “Right. *to Sophie* I’ll pick you tomorrow Sophie. I promise everything will be okay!”

In a quick speed, Sophie flew to Blitz and gave him a big hug. Blitz gave his sister a big hug as well.

Sophie - “I know you will win Blitz. You will kick a lot of butts!”

Blitz - *chuckles* “Yes I will.”

Flashback ends

Blitz - “They promise to look after her until the fight is over.”

Angel - “Did she also take Fat Nuggets with her?”

Blitz - “Yes, he'll be safe with her. They are in good hands.”

Angel - *relief* “That's good, I can't imagine my little baby putting himself in danger...*looks around to find Hardy nowhere to be seen* Hey, where's Hottie?”

()()()()()()()()

Charlie was standing outside Angel's bedroom door. A few photos of Angel and the rest of the group are stuck to his door. Charlie, looks at them, smiling, before realising that she might never see them again if they lose the battle tomorrow, and begins to break down and cry.

"Why the tears, princess?"

Charlie turns to see Hardy looking at her while leaning his back against the wall.

Charlie - *wiping them away* “I'm sorry...I'm...I'm just so scared. What if we lose?”

Hardy - ♪ All I see is shattered pieces ♪

♪ I can't keep it hidden like a secret ♪

Charlie: ♪ I can't look away! ♪

Hardy and Charlie - ♪ From all this pain in the world we made! ♪

Hardy - ♪ Every day you need a bulletproof vest ♪

♪ To save yourself from what you could never guess! ♪

Charlie - ♪ Am I safe today? ♪

Hardy and Charlie - ♪ When I step outside in the wars we wage! ♪

Hardy takes Charlie’s hand and pulls her back into the lobby.

Hardy - ♪ Our future's here and now ♪

♪ Here comes the countdown! ♪

Hardy rallies everyone in the lobby and they watch him sing.

Hardy - ♪ Sound it off, this is the call! ♪

♪ Rise and revolution! ♪

♪ It's our time to change it all ♪

♪ Rise and revolution! ♪

♪ Unite and fight, to make a better life! ♪

Hardy and Charlie - ♪ Everybody one for all ♪

♪ Sound off, this is the call ♪

Hardy - ♪ Tonight we rise ♪

Everyone - *pound their fists in the air* Rise!

Hardy: ♪ Tonight we rise ♪

Blitz, Cherri, Angel, and Husk - *pound their fists in the air* Rise!

Hardy - ♪ Tonight we rise! ♪

Hardy and Charlie slide down the stairs’ rails and land on the floor.

Hardy - ♪ Like a hand grenade thrown in a hurricane ♪

♪ Spinning in chaos, trying to escape the flame ♪

Charlie - ♪ Yesterday is gone! ♪

Hardy and Charlie - ♪ Faster than the blast of a car bomb! ♪

Hardy - ♪ And when the scars heal, the pain passes ♪

♪ As hope burns, we rise from the ashes! ♪

Charlie - ♪ Darkness fades away! ♪

Hardy and Charlie - ♪ And the light shines on a brave new day! ♪

Hardy climbs up a table and everyone, smiling and riled up by Hardy’s song, gather around him and watch.

Hardy - ♪ Our future's here and now ♪

♪ Here comes the countdown! ♪

♪ Sound it off, this is the call! ♪

♪ Rise and revolution! ♪

♪ It's our time to change it all ♪

♪ Rise and revolution! ♪

♪ Unite and fight to make a better life! ♪

Hardy and Charlie - ♪ Everybody one for all ♪

♪ Sound off, this is the call ♪

Hardy - ♪ Tonight *pumps his fist in the air* we rise ♪

Cannibals - *pumps their fists in the air* Rise!

Hardy - ♪ Tonight *pumps his fist again* we rise ♪

Sonya, Liz, and Lucious - *pump their fists in the air* Rise!

Hardy - ♪ Tonight we rise! ♪

Hardy and Charlie dance together on top of the table as everyone watches.

Hardy - ♪ In a world gone mad ♪

Charlie - ♪ In a place so sad! ♪

Hardy - ♪ Sometimes it's crazy ♪

Charlie - ♪ crazy ♪

Hardy and Charlie - ♪ To fight for what you believe! ♪

Hardy - ♪ But you can't give up ♪

Hardy and Charlie - ♪ If you wanna keep what you love! ♪

Cannibals - ♪ Keep what you love ♪

Hardy - ♪ Keep what you love ♪

Cannibals - ♪ Keep what you love ♪

Hardy - ♪ Keep what you love ♪

Hardy and Charlie - ♪ Never give up, no! ♪

Everyone sings along with Hardy and pound their fists in the air in rhythm.

Hardy - ♪ Rise ♪

Everyone - ♪ Rise and revolution ♪

Hardy - ♪ Rise ♪

Everyone - ♪ Rise and revolution ♪

Hardy and Charlie - ♪ Everybody one for all ♪

♪ Sound off, this is the call! ♪

Everyone - *pound their fists in the air* Rise!

Hardy - ♪ Like we're alive ♪

♪ Tonight we rise ♪

Everyone - Rise!

Hardy: ♪ Make a better life ♪

♪ Tonight we rise! ♪

Hardy, Charlie, the gang, and the cannibals - Rise!

()()()()()()()()

In Heaven, the Exorcists are all lined up outside Heaven's gates as Adam gives them all a pep talk.

Adam - “Extermination Day is here, bitches. We're going to go down and exterminate demon ass!”

Lute - “Destroy that ass!”

Adam - “Prepare to slaughter every sinner in that shit hotel, and you all remember Vaggie?”

The Exorcists all boo Vaggie. They all see her as a traitor.

Exorcists - “Boo! We hate her!”

Lute - “Rip Vaggie's c*** mouth out her ass!”

Adam - *a bit freaked out* “Would you just-ju-chill, Lute. Fuck. Anyway, whoever brings me Vaggie's head gets...uh, I dunno, a million Heaven bucks. How about that, huh?”

The Exorcists all cheer.

Adam - “Haha, yeah! Oh, and one more thing. No one lays a hand on that fire-headed fuck, Hardy! *points to himself and speaks in a vengeful tone* He's mine. Alright ladies, let's fuck shit up!” *accompanied by a guitar sting* ♪ ATTACK! ♪

Lute - “FORWARD!”

Behind Adam, a portal to Hell opens and all of the Exorcists fly through it. The portal opens right outside the hotel, where Charlie, Vaggie, Angel, Pentious, Husk, Niffty, Lucious, his parents, Sonya and Liz, Hardy and Blitz, Cherri Bomb and the cannibals are gathered by the entrance. Charlie has a golden shield with an apple motif, Vaggie has her angelic spear, Niffty has the small knife that Charlie gave her (and is laughing maniacally), Angel has a tommy gun, Cherri has her bombs, and Pentious has a short sword. Lucious and his parents have laser guns. Sonya has her magic book and Liz got her scissors and fireworks. Hardy have the staff

Blitz has gloves with blades on it. Their weapons have all been given angelic steel enhancements to allow them to kill the Exorcists.

Charlie - *to Blitz and her cousins* “You guys could still leave if you want too.”

Sonya - *determined* “No way! I don’t care if we get grounded by our parents. You and Liz help us out so much, it is our turn to return the favor.”

Liz - “Yeah! We aren’t pussing out now! You work way too hard for this.”

Blitz - *serious* “I’m not going either. I've been running away my whole life. But no more. I’m staying to protect me and my sister's new true home.”

Vaggie - “Here they come. Get ready, everyone. We fight together!”

()()()()()()()()()

As the group prepares to attack, Valentino, Velvette and Vox are all sitting in front of a TV in V Tower, which is showing real-time camera footage from the hotel. Valentino and Velvette look bored, with Velvette on her phone, but Vox has a box of popcorn and is excited to watch them all die.

Vox - *chuckles* “Oh, oh. Oh, this is going to be good!”

()()()()()()()()

At the hotel, Vaggie raises her angelic spear.

Vaggie - “Now! FOR YOUR SOULS!”

The group cheers and charge as the Exorcists begin pouring out of the portal, charging back at them.

Charlie - “Let's FUCK THEM UP!”

As the Exorcists and the hotel group begins fighting, Alastor stands on the hotel's roof, watching the angels flying out.

Alastor - *darkly* “Let the slaughter begin. AHAHAHAHAHAHA-HA!”

Alastor laughs maniacally as he swings his microphone, causing a huge force field to appear around the hotel which traps the attacking Exorcists inside. Adam and Lute watch in confusion from outside the force field.

Adam - *confused* “The fuck?”

Lute - “They appear to have some kind of shield, sir!”

Adam - *sarcastically* “Oh, really? I didn't see this giant fucking shield in front of me, YOU DUMB BITCH! NO SHIT!”

The force field sprouts tentacles and begins killing Exorcists that are on the outside of the force field with angelic weapons.

Adam - *disbelief* “That's how they can kill us? With our own weapons?! Fucking weak, dude.”

As Lute raises her sword and flies to attack the shield, Cherri and Angel attack Exorcists from the inside of the force field, with Angel shooting with his Tommy gun and Cherri throwing her explosives. Pentious watches them from his cannons.

Angel - “Come and get some!”

Cherri - “Eat shrapnel, fuckers!”

Sir Pentious - “All angelic weapons fire at will!”

Husk flies past, throwing his explosive cards at angels.

Husk - “Hey! Yelling while fighting...doesn't help.”

Niffty runs around stabbing every angel she can see, even the dead ones. Charlie and Vaggie are fighting back to back.

Hardy leaps in the air, striking down the flying exorcists one by one with the Golden Staff. Then he has the staff extend into longer length and twirls around the air, causing exorcists within range to get caught and whacked away from it.

Adam - *confused* “The fuck? What kind of weapon is that?!”

Lute: *shocked* “It's the golden staff, sir! But that's impossible, it was supposed to be mere legend!”

Adam - *sarastic* “Gee you think?! He got it in his fucking hands!”

Sonya was saying magic spells against the excorist and it was working since her book was covered in angelic spell. Then Liz said:

Liz - “It’s my turn to fight!”

Sonya - “Right!”

She quickly took out her pin and prick her finger. Then Liz switched and was ready to battle. She got her signature scissors and fireworks.

Liz - “Bada boom! Prepare to die angelic bitches!’”

She throw her fireworks in the air and killed some exorcists and used her angelic scissors to behead them or stab them. Cherri, Husk and even Angel were impressed that Liz can fight despite her age. Charlie was noticing how the shield Alastor’s used was protecting the hotel.

Charlie - *happy* “Alastor's shield is working!”

Vaggie - *while fighting* “Trying to focus, sweetie!”

Charlie - “We might actually have a chance!”

Vaggie - “Love the optimism. Still trying to focus.”

Adam and Lute are still hovering over the force field. Adam clearly has had enough of being left out of the battle.

Adam - “I'm fucking over this.”

Adam draws backwards before flying straight at the shield. With one punch, he causes it to dissipate, leaving the hotel exposed.

Angel - *dismayed* “Fuck!”

Charlie - *worried* “Oh, no!”

As the smoke clears, Adam sees Alastor standing on the roof. Recognising him as the creator of the shield, Adam flies down to the roof to meet him.

()()()()()()()()()

The Vees watch from V Tower, Vox preparing to see Alastor die.

Vox - “Oh, fuck! It is so hard right now!

Vox makes a thrust gesture for a couple seconds while Velvette seems uncomfy of Vox making the gesture at her.

()()()()()()()()()

Meanwhile, Alastor takes a few steps forward to meet Adam.

Alastor - “Adam! First man, next to die.”

Adam - “Who the fuck are you?”

Alastor - “Alastor. Pleasure to be meeting you, quite a pleasure. *darkly* I'm about to end your fucking life.”

Alastor taps his cane on the ground, causing four tentacles to rise up around him.

Adam - *sarcastically* “Nice voice. Don't you know jazz is for PUSSIES!”

Adam summons his guitar and flies straight at Alastor. Alastor stands still as his tentacles lash out at Adam. Adam slashes at them all before gearing up to attack Alastor himself.

Alastor - “Ah ah ah!”

Adam attempts to attack Alastor with his guitar, but Alastor moves smoothly out of the way, before sending more tentacles towards Adam.

Adam - “You really think you can take me on? A mortal soul is no match for me, edge-lord.”

Alastor - “You should know better than anyone what a soul can accomplish when they take charge of their own fate.”

Alastor's shadow looms behind him, making it appear as though there was a crack in the hotel's roof. The crack leads up to Adam, where one of Alastor's shadow monsters appears and punches Adam.

Adam - “Ohoho, you think you're tough shit, huh? *destroys Alastor's shadow monster*

Alastor - *smug* “Tougher than you. Ha ha ha!”

Adam swings at Alastor with his guitar. Alastor easily dodges his strikes.

Alastor - “You lack discipline, control, and worst, *goes into full demon form* YOU'RE SLOPPY!”

More of Alastor's shadow creatures appear, attacking Adam and crawling all over him, sending him flying upwards.

Adam - “And you're...*realises he doesn't know what to say* fuck-fuck you...you red piece of f-too much fucking red...fuck...shut up!”

Using one of his tentacles, Alastor grabs Adam and throws him into the sign on the hotel's roof.

Alastor - *mocking* “Ha ha ha! Poetry!”

Adam - *enraged* “I'm going to wipe that shit-eating grin off your face, CAUSE RADIO IS FUCKING DEAD!”

Adam flies a few metres into the air and swings his guitar, sending a shockwave towards Alastor. When it dissipates, Alastor has been forced out of his full demon form and his microphone has been snapped in two

Alastor - *with absolutely no static* “What just happened? *notices microphone* ...fuck.”

While Alastor is distracted by his microphone, Adam manages to score a hit on him, slashing him across the torso and sending him flying back to the edge of the roof. Vox cheers from V Tower.

Vox - *cheering* “Yes! Fuck you, Alastor! *flips off screen* Ahahaha! *jumps on top of table* THIS IS BETTER THAN SEX!”

()()()()()()()

Alastor picks up the 2 pieces of his microphone, trying to go back into his full demon form, but being too injured.

Alastor - *singsong* “Have to disagree with you there! Radio's not dead, but it is ending this broadcast.”

Alastor flees the battle and melts into his shadow. Adam, laughing, watches him disappear while leaning on his guitar.

Adam - *mocking* “Bye, bitch!”

Meanwhile, Vox watches in anger from V Tower, disappointed that Alastor wasn't dead and angry at him for seemingly fleeing like a coward.

Vox - *angry* “No! Fuck you fuck you fuck you! Pussy!!l

()()()()()()()

At the front of the hotel, Pentious commands the cannibals from the balcony.

Sir Pentious - “Right flank, advance! Left flank, watch your six. *addressing Charlie and Vaggie* Ladies! There are more coming up on your right. Get ready for them, Vagatha!”

Vaggie - “Not my name, but got it.”

Charlie is hitting angels with her shield, apologizing to each of them as she does so.

Charlie - *apologtic* “Sorry! Sorry. Sorry-sorry, sorry!”

Vaggie - “Now's not the time for that, babe!”

Charlie - *realize it* “Oh, right.”

Five angels fly at Vaggie, out to kill her. Charlie uses her firework power to explode them all.

Charlie - “DIE, MOTHERFUCKERS!”

Blitz soars through the sky while blasting exorcists with his magic. He even stab some of them thanks to the blade from his gloves. He was not going die and lose everything he worked so hard for. Liz was watching in amazement while fighting.

Liz - “Man this is an awesome fight!!”

Blitz - “Remember it’s not a game!”

Husk flies around the hotel, throwing his playing cards. Angel, near him, is shooting them all with his tommy gun.

Husk - “These fucking angels won't stop coming!”

Angel laughs, his dirty mind turning it into a sex joke.

Husk - *chuckles* “Okay, I walked right into that one.”

Angel sees an Exorcist advancing on 2 of the Egg Boiz.

Angel - “Hold that thought.”

Angel runs to defend the eggs, one of them having already been killed by the Exorcist. Angel blocks the Exorcist's sword with his tommy gun, before shooting it up with a pair of guns that were hidden in his third pair of arms.

Angel - *to the Egg Boi* “You alright, squirt?”

Egg Boi - *hugs Angel’s ankle* “I nearly scrambled...myself.”

Angel - “Get somewhere safe.”

Angel is knocked off his feet by a huge explosion. The smoke clears, revealing it to be Adam, flying above everyone and shooting angelic light from his hands.

Adam - “SUCK MY HOLY LIGHT, FUCKERS! YEAH!

Charlie - “What? Alastor was supposed to handle him. Oh no, he must be-“

Charlie and Vaggie run to safety as Adam attempts to shoot at them. Pentious watches them. He was worried about them.

Vaggie - “We aren't going to last long

unless we do something about him.”

Pentious looks up at Adam and gets an idea.

Sir Pentious - “Of course!”

Cherri runs past Pentious to get to a better vantage point, holding a bomb. Pentious pulls her back down.

Cherri - *annoyed* “I'm trying to fight here! You out of your fucking mind?”

Sir Pentious - “Yes.”

Pentious kisses Cherri, the bomb falling out of her hand and exploding behind them.

Sir Pentious - “Miss Cherri Bomb, I love you. Remember me!”

Pentious runs off to his airship. Cherri looks back at him.

Cherri Bomb - *blushing* “That was kinda hot.”

Lucious was shooting some angels with his laser guns with his parents. Then he saw his uncle running to his airship.

Lucious - “Uncle Pentious wait!”

Sir pentious - “No! You stay here! It’s way too dangerous.”

Lucious - “But you always told me family sticks together in times like this.”

Sir Pentious - *sighs* “I did, but I might not be able to come back after this. If you come along with me, I won't be able to protect you.”

Lucious - *serious* “Then let's do it together and make it out together My parents can help too. Please you can’t do this alone.”

Sir Pentious - *pauses*”...Then let's get going.”

Lucious - *determined* “Right! Mother! Father! We are doing the plan!”

Jonathon - “We are coming!”

Bethany - “Time to end this!”

Sir Pentious and his family enter his airship, the Egg Boiz lined up around the inside. As he slithers past them, they salute.

Sir Pentious - “Eggs, activate thrusters, and charge the death ray.”

Egg Boiz - “Yes, sir.”

Pentious' airship starts up and lifts itself off of the hotel. Everyone else watches.

Charlie - *confused* “Pentious?”

Angel - “That crazy motherfucker.”

Sonya - *shocked* “Lucious, what are you doing?!”

The airship flies towards Adam, aiming the death ray at him. Sonya and Liz eyes widen in horror.

Sonya - *horrified* “Oh no…They are gonna kill themselves! *to Liz and said in a serious tone* You know what we have to do?”

Liz - *nods* “Yep plan X!”

The airship flies towards Adam, aiming the death ray at him.

Jonathon - “We got it ready!”

Bethany - “It’s loading!”

Lucious - “For our loved ones!”

Egg Boi - “Target in range.”

Sir Pentious - *serious and darkly* “Fire.”

The airship edges closer and closer to Adam, the death ray charging up. Adam notices it.

Adam - “Oh, whoop!”

Just went Adam was about to blast them, an angelic portal open that sucked the blimp along with everybody inside to the portal and it closed. It left everybody confused, even Adam.

Adam - *confused* “What the fuck?!”

Angel - “Did they…die?”

Charlie - “No they didn’t there was a portal open…realize something* wait that’s means-“

“Highera jumpirna!”

Charlie’s realization came to a halt when she heard Liz speaking, did a super high jump and landed on Adam. She began to tackle him in the sky and punch him. Even cutting him with her scissors.

Adam - *struggles with Liz on him* “Get the fuck off me you little brat!”

Liz - “Never you asshole! You hurt my family long enough!”

Everybody reaction turned into confusion and shock when they saw Liz attack Adam. Then Adam grabbed Liz’s collar and use her other hand as an angelic glow and put it on Liz’s stomach, she glowed and then exploded. All that was left was her hat, coat and scissors and they all fell on the ground.

Adam - “That the best way to get rid of pests! *laughs cruelly*

Everyone stares in horror from the ground.

Charlie - *despair* “Noo! Girls!”

Angel - *gloomy* “Fuck…”

Hardy also saw this, and was just as shocked as the rest. He clenched his fists really tight and gritted his teeth in anger.

Hardy - *rising anger* “Adam.... You. Are. DEAD!!!”

Hardy's rage exploded in a blast of powerful energy as if he were transforming into super saiyan. His fire-like hair starts to glow bright like actual fire, his skin has truned hot red like his blood is boiling and running ten times fast. The upper half of his outfit was ripped to shreds, revealing his cursed mark on his bare chest, which is also burning bright like fire. His eyes were also white with black rings circled around his pupils, and veins of anger appear on his forehead.

Charlie - *breaking down into tears* “No, no, no.”

Charlie grabbed her cousin's coat, and began crying, sinking to her knees. Vaggie runs over to her as an attempt to comfort her.

Vaggie - *sympathetic* “Charlie, I'm so sorry…”

Charlie kept hearing Adam’s cruel laughter. She always tried to see the best in everybody, but Adam just proof to her that he’s nothing but a monster. Adam mistreated her mother, made fun of her idea, kill her people and now killed her precious baby cousins with no regret at all showing how cruel and far Adam would go to hurt Charlie and her home. She growls as the tears run down her face, the sadness turning into rage. She stands up.

Charlie - *calling* “Razzle! Dazzle!”

Razzle and Dazzle fly over to her. Charlie engulfs herself in a tornado of fire and rises up. When it dissipates, she is in her full demon form and is holding a pitchfork. Razzle and Dazzle have become huge dragons.

Charlie - “Let's ride!”

Blitz was also in rage since seeing what Adam did to Liz reminded him of Ryan O’Grady AKA “The Evil Eye Killer” did to his and Sophie’s parents and their home. He let out a roar and began to attack the exorcists that got in his way. Charlie and Vaggie jump onto Razzle and Dazzle's backs and begin to fly. The rest of them watch from the ground, cheering.

Husk - “Yeah! Get 'em!”

Charlie, Vaggie, and Blitz fly higher and higher, towards Adam and Lute.

Charlie - “Forward! Go, Razzle, go!”

Adam - “Oh, look who thinks they're badass now!”

Lute - *serious* “The traitor came to die.”

Lute lunges down and slices Dazzle's wing clean off, causing him to roar in pain.

Vaggie - *shocked* “No!”

Vaggie screams as they fall together. Lute strikes her sword in Dazzle's heart as they crash through the glass ceiling and right in the lobby. Vaggie falls off, and gets up just as Lute raises her sword out of Dazzle, and they stare each other in the face.

Lute - “Before I take your life, I'm going to tear that other eye out of your face.”

Vaggie - *serious* “Try it, bitch.”

Lute lunges at Vaggie, Vaggie managing to throw her into the wall. Lute flies back at Vaggie and throws her to the ground, hitting her head against it repeatedly. Vaggie manages to flip her over, but Lute throws her into the wall again, before lunging at her with her sword. Vaggie dodges and Lute rams her sword into the wall. Pulling it out, she leaps at Vaggie and smashes her head into the table, breaking Vaggie's nose. Vaggie grabs Alastor's radio and hits Lute with it. As the two continue fighting, Charlie watches from atop Razzle

Charlie - *worried* “Vaggie!”

Charlie begins to fly down to help Vaggie, but Adam appears in her flight path.

Adam - “Surprise, bitch!”

With one arm, Adam smashes Charlie into the sign on the hotel's roof, electrocuting her. Charlie falls onto the roof as Adam flies above the hotel's sign.

Adam - “Risking your immortal life for sinners? That's some crazy shit, even for Lucifer's brat”

Charlie - *groaning* “These sinners are my family!”

Adam - *mockingly* "These sinners are my family"! Do you even hear yourself? You should've stayed in your place, girlie-“

Charlie stabs him in the arm with her pitchfork, before swinging him around to throw him across the roof

Charlie - “That's Princess of Hell to you, pig! And that was for Sonya and Liz!”

Adam - *in pain and pissed* “The fuck? That hurt!”

Charlie looked at him, in her final demon form and she was flicking her tail. Adam stands up.

Adam - “Hehe. Okay.”

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Back in the hotel's foyer, Lute throws Vaggie to the ground, knocking her spear out of her hand.

Lute - “You always were weak.”

Vaggie tries to reach for her spear, but Lute flips it off the ground and out of her reach with her foot, before driving it into Vaggie's right hand. Vaggie screams in pain.

Lute - “So, I'll spare you the pain of seeing your demon bitch die.”

Vaggie looks up and sees that the mezzanine is on the verge of collapse. Pulling the spear out of her hand, she uses it to throw Lute off of her before revealing her newly restored wings to fly up and destroy the last pillars holding it up. Lute screams as it falls on her as plumes of sawdust fly everywhere. When it clears, the LED face has come off of Lute's mask. Lute's left arm is pinned under the rubble.

Lute - *angrily* “Do it, then. Correct your mistake.”

Vaggie - *stern* “Seriously, you're pathetic, you know that? Ready to die rather than accepting mercy? No, live. Live, knowing that you only do because I let you. A failure”

Hearing Charlie screaming in the distance, Vaggie flies out of the hole in the hotel's roof to help her. As soon as she is gone, Lute, not accepting mercy, begins to free herself from under the rubble. She screams in pain as she pulls her left arm out of its socket, freeing the rest of her body.

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On the hotel's roof, Adam knocks Charlie to the ground, before picking her up by the throat. Charlie's tail and horns recede.

Charlie - *struggling* “Let...me...go!”

Adam - “This fight was cute n'all, but it's *his mask glitches for a moment* time to die with the rest of them!”

Vaggie flies to the roof to help Charlie, but Lute flies after her and pins her to the floor.

Vaggie - *worried* “Charlie!”

Suddenly, a foot appears and kicks Adam so hard that it damages his mask as he goes flying into the hotel's sign, before falling through the roof. The person catches Charlie as it is revealed to be Hardy Wiley.

Charlie - “Hardy?”

Hardy - *concerned* “You okay, Charlie?”

Charlie - *smiles* “Yeah…Thank you Hardy.”

Hardy - “Hey that’s what friends are for.”

Adam climbs back onto the roof, half of his mask having broken off.

Adam - *mocking* “Well, if it ain't the princess's fucking lapdog. Came to lick her ass some more?”

Hardy - *puts Charlie down and glares at Adam* “Adam, you attack my friends, killed several souls without remorse, and worst of all, you actually killed Charlie's own two cousins. And now, it's time that I make due with my promise to you when we first meet. *glowing in abosolute rage* Enjoy your last moments with your precious dick, Adam, cause I am going tear it right out of your filthy crotch and shove it down that fucking throat of yours!”

Adam stares at Hardy, fearful. Lute and Vaggie stop their fight to stare in shock and awe at Hardy. Angel, Blitz, Cherri, and Husk stare at Hardy with speechless amazement while the other Exorcists also stare in shock. The Vees stare in shock at the screen from V Tower, with Valentino saying:

Valentino - “You know, if he wasn't so terrifying right now, I would say that sounded kinda hot.”

Velvette - *rolls her eyes* “You think everything that’s sexual is hot.”

Adam - *trying to be brave* “Well I dealt with fuckers like you for breakfast! So let’s do this so I can kill you and your friends later!”

Hardy leaps at Adam with a battle cry, crashing him at the back of the Hazbin Hotel sign. Adam draws out his guitar while Hardy takes out the Golden Staff. The two begin to clash against one another with their weapons. As they fought, Hardy transforms the Golden Staff into different weapon forms.

Charlie - *cheering* “Go Hardy!”

Blitz - “You can do it buddy!!”

Hardy - *serious* “You made a really big mistake in attacking my friends, Adam! Add that to your list of angels making mistakes!”

Adam - *angry* “I'm the fucking first man, ya fire-headed fuck! I can do whatever I want! Your biggest mistake was turning down my offer into making the ultimate exorcist in all of Heaven! Instead, you reside in being that bitch's yes-man!”

Hardy - “As if being bossed around by you is any better! It's no wonder that Lilith ditched you for Lucifer. As far as I can tell, he's a better man than you'll ever be!”

Adam - “Ha! That fucking clown is no better than me. I'm hotter and more important than him! All he did was make the earth worse! He shouldn’t exist.”

Hardy - “Says the fuck who gave birth to the world's first murderer. Should I remind you of your failure as a father after the whole Cain and Abel thing?”

Adam - *furious* “Aaaagggh, I'll fucking kill you!”

Charlie watches the two of them fighting for a few moments before running over to help Vaggie.

Charlie - “Don’t worry Vaggie I’m coming!!”

Meanwhile, Hardy changes the Golden Staff into the massive size of a giant pillar and slams Adam away like a baseball. Angered, Adam charges up a huge blast of angelic light at Hardy. Hardy leap into the air and dodges the light. The light chops the hotel straight in half. Charlie screams as she falls down the middle, the entire hotel crumbling around her. Then, Hardy swoops down and catches her.

Hardy - “Gotcha, Charlie!”

Charlie smiles before hearing Adam's laughing. she looks and sees him charging up to them.

Charlie - “Hardy, look out!”

Hardy - *confused* “Huh?”

Charlie snarls as she uses her demonic powers to transform her right hand, turning it red with dark splotches, somewhat resembling Hellboy, and blocks Adam just as he was about to punch them.

Adam - *shocked* “Whoa wait, what the fuck?!”

Hardy and Charlie glare at Adam furiously, before they catapult him to the ground screaming, the impact leaving a blast wave of smoke, and a crater where he lay, his mask completely shattered, revealing his human face. He looks up and sees Hardy. His entire body is glowing with raging chi energy as his glowing fiery hair flows around by the wind. At this point, Adam looks terrified for his life.

Adam - *scared* “C-Come on! Can’t you take a j-joke? I mean we were just messing around and doing a job! I mean, does everybody like working on something they are good at? R-Right?”

Hardy - *livid* “A joke?! DO I LOOK LIKE I'M LAUGHING?!”

Hardy's fists start to glow with energy and starts to pummel Adam senselessly as his face starts to bleed. Hardy doesn't stop as he keeps punching and punching without rest. Hardy was about to even do the punch he wanted to kill Adam, but Charlie stopped him by gently touching his shoulder.

Charlie - *gently* “Whoa whoa Hardy! He had enough.”

Hardy - *take a deep breath* “You’re right. *to Adam* you’re lucky you had mercy.”

Adam - “No... *gets up* you don't get to end this! I'm fucking Adam! *gets out of crater and faces gang* I'm the fucking man, and you're just some fucking soft teddy bear or something! I started everything on Earth! All of mankind came from these fucking nuts!”

Then all of a sudden he felt a sharpen pain as his nuts was impaired by angelic scissors. He weakly turned around and saw it was Sonya and Liz.

Liz - *confidently* “Not the dick master anymore are we?”

Sonya - *shadow form* “I thought we were gonna say “nuts this asshole?”

Liz - *shrugs* “Eh. My version sounds cooler.”

Charlie - *gasps with tears of joy* “Sonya! Liz! You're okay!”

Liz - “Well duh. You didn't think he get rid of us that easily, did you? *to Hardy* Sifu, his nuts.”

Liz handed Hardy Adam's dick and nuts as he glares right at Adam's eyes. He shoves Adam's severed dick and balls right into his own mouth.

Hardy - *menacing tone* “Like I said. Down. Your. Throat-tah!”

Hardy then he punches Adam in the mouth, forcing him to gulp down his own dick and nuts to his throat, causing him to choke. Adam falls on his back to the ground.

Angel - *impressed* “Ya! You were kidding!”

Hardy - “You know I keep my words”

A little way away, Lute turns and looks in horror at Adam's body.

Lute - *horrified* “NOOOO!”

Lute dashes up to Adam. Adam's face was already purple and his eyes were rolled up, showing that he is already dead from choking on his own dick and nuts.

Lute - *desperate* “Sir! Sir! Stay with me sir! ADAM!”

The others then come up to her.

Charlie - *serious* “It's over, Lute.”

Vaggie - *serious* “Face it. You lost.”

Lute - *angry* “No…ILL FUCKING KILL ALL OF YOU!!”

Lute grabs a sword with her one remaining arm and attempts to attack Hardy and Charlie. However, the sword was knocked away and Lute was thrown back down to the floor. Standing in front of Hardy and Charlie was none other than Lucifer, in his full demonic form.

Charlie - *surprised* “Dad?”

Sonya and Liz -*also surprised* “Uncle Lucifer?”

Lucifer - *smiles* “Hey girls, sorry I wasn't here sooner.”

Charlie - *hugging him* “I’m so glad you’re here!”

Lucifer - *hugging back* “Hey, anything to protect my family.”

Lute growled and tried to attack again, but Lucifer effortlessly threw Lute on the ground. When the other exorcists try to attack Lucifer, he kills them in 10 seconds.

Lucifer - *turns to Lute and glares at her* “Now then, little lady. Pick up your toys, take your little friends, and *shouts* GO HOME! *recomposes himself* Please.”

Lute realises that the only option she has is obeying him and picks up Adam's halo.

Lute - “Retreat! All Exorcists fall back!”

With that command, all the surviving Exorcists take off to the portal to Heaven, Lute following behind scowling. the portal then closes as Charlie looks to the group.

Charlie - *proudly* “We did it…We won…*to her cousins* But wait, how did you escape death?”

Liz - “It was quite simple actually. Sonya finally mastered the slow time spell. So when Adam grabbed us, we actives it, put a fake dummy in our place, kill some excorist, eat some donuts and then came back to fight and noticed Adam little tantrum so we gave him the punishment that fit the crime.”

Lucifer - *rustles the girls' hair* “Ahh, you two never cease to amaze us... So, who's up for some pancakes?”

Only Niffty raises her hand, everyone else just looks at him, unamused.

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As this happend, the 666 News reported a newsflash across Hell.

Katie Killjoy - “Good evening. I'm Katie Killjoy!”

Tom Trench - “And I'm-“

Katie shoves Tom Trench out of his seat and out of the frame.

Katie - “Nobody gives a shit who you are, Tom. Breaking news - Extermination day is canceled!”

Arackniss and Baxter are seen looking at a billboard which is playing the news report. The news report begins to play clips from the fight with the Exorcists. At Sonya and Liz’s house Sophie was hugging Fat Nuggets happily as she was relieved her brother and friends were okay. Azarel and Zella were so proud of their daughters and niece for fighting and protecting their home.

Katie - “Charlie Morningstar managed to fend off the angelic attack with more than just nice words.”

In Cannibal Town, Rosie watches the news report while sipping tea, while in V Tower, Velvette watches the news on her phone. Valentino comes over and briefly looks over her shoulder, before walking away to play the same news report on his television.

Katie - “In an unseen turn of events, the Hazbin Hotel's irrelevant handyman turned badass, Hardy Wiley, has stepped in to save the princess's ass at the last moment. We're also hearing reports that Adam, leader of the angelic legions, first man and totally fuckable bad boy, has also been slain by said badass.”

From his surveillance room, Vox watches the news, which is now showing Hardy being interviewed, uncomfortable with the reporters surrounding him. Carmilla Carmine watches the news from her office, a small smile on her face.

Katie - “The handyman said, quote, "I was simply giving that misogynistic bastard what he deserved all these years". Anyway, congrats to Charlie and her crew for not being totally fucking useless for once.”

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Charlie, Vaggie, Angel Dust, Husk, Niffty, Cherri Bomb and Lucifer digging through the rubble of the Hazbin Hotel. Husk picks up a broken bottle. Charlie runs through the hotel with Vaggie, looking anxiously around. She sees KeeKee lying in the rubble and picks her up.

Charlie - *comforting* “Oh...there, there. It's...it's okay.”

Charlie looks over and smiles briefly when she sees Angel reuniting with Fat Nuggets and Blitz reuniting with his baby sister, Sophie thanks to a portal Sonya and Liz's parents opened up. She begins to walk towards them, but she stops when she steps on something. Charlie looks down to see the banner from "Scrambled Eggs" which reads "Happy first week, Sir Pentious and family!". Vaggie walks over to her.

Charlie - ♪ They did it for us ♪

♪ The ultimate sacrifice ♪

♪ He gave me his trust, and look how we paid the price ♪

♪ This bloodshed could have been avoided if I convinced Heaven to work together ♪

Charlie walks through the hotel's ruins to the edge of the precipice, where she has a clear view of the hotel's sign, collapsed on the ground.

Charlie - ♪ I took a hotel, and I destroyed it ♪

♪ I know I could have done better ♪

♪ Better, instead of letting you down ♪

Lucifer walks over to her and places a hand on her shoulder.

Lucifer - ♪ Come on, little lady, why the frown? ♪

♪ In the last 10,000 years ♪

♪ You're the first one to change this town! ♪

Lucifer stands in front of Charlie and points encouragingly at her.

Lucifer - ♪ You can do this! Now I know it! ♪

♪ For your story has just begun! ♪

♪ You can't quit now, hell, you owe it! ♪

♪ There's still damage to be undone ♪

♪ You've changed my mind, you've touched their hearts ♪

Vaggie, Angel (who is still holding Fat Nuggets and began to smile), Sonya, Liz, Hardy, Blitz, Sophie, Husk, Niffty and Cherri Bomb gather around the 2 of them.

Lucifer - ♪ Found the good in souls gone bad ♪

♪ The stage is wrecked, the crowd is gone ♪

♪ But by God, Charlie! ♪

♪ The show, it must go on! ♪

Everyone else gathers around Charlie, singing encouragingly.

Vaggie, Angel, Husk, Niffty, Blitz, Sophie, Sonya, Liz, Hardy, and Cherri Bomb - ♪ We can do this, we can build it ♪

♪ Best hotel that you've ever seen! ♪

♪ Twice the bedrooms, we can fill it ♪

Lucifer - ♪ With more sinners than you can dream! ♪

Lucifer and Vaggie - ♪ It starts with you, ♪

Lucifer, Vaggie, Hardy, and Angel - ♪ You know it's true, ♪

Lucifer, Vaggie, Angel, Husk, Niffty, Hardy, Sonya, Liz, Blitz, Sophie, and Cherri Bomb - ♪ Fulfill your destiny! ♪

Charlie, now smiling, stands up.

Charlie - ♪ So long as I've got all of you with me! ♪

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Niffty running around the hotel's ruins, picking up bricks.

Niffty - ♪ To build a hotel, I think we'll need some brick and lumber! ♪

Lucifer - ♪ Good thing we're in Hell, check out this little magic number! ♪

Lucifer creates huge, neat piles of bricks. Meanwhile, Angel begins to build pillars.

Angel Dust - ♪ Start with foundation! ♪

Lucifer - ♪ A remedial creation for me! ♪

Lucifer, using Keekee in her key form as a gun, creates foundations.

Niffty, Angel and Lucifer - ♪ It's as easy as can be! ♪

Charlie, who is also helping to rebuild the hotel while wiping away tears.

Charlie - ♪ No time for crying, we got a lot of work to do and, ♪

♪ We gotta try and, make the best of what's in ruins! ♪

Vaggie and Husk help to rebuild it.

Vaggie - ♪ New coat of paint! ♪

Husk - ♪ New lights across the marquee ♪

Charlie uses her angelic power to light up the lightbulbs.

Charlie, Vaggie and Husk - ♪ With a little sorcery! ♪

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Meanwhile, in V Tower, Vox bursts through the doors of Valentino's penthouse. Valentino and Velvette are already there.

Vox - ♪ After the battle, masterless cattle! ♪

Vox and Valentino - ♪ Overlords hanging by a thread! ♪

As the Vees look at a board showing a mindmap of their enemies, Vox throws a knife through an old picture of Alastor. Vox is clearly visible in the frame, but has been torn out of the picture, presumably by Vox himself.

Vox and Valentino - ♪ With a bit of bravado, maybe tomorrow ♪

♪ We'll be atop the heap! ♪

Vox and Valentino dance together while Velvette records them, smiling.

Valentino - ♪ While the rest of Hell's pissing! ♪

Vox - ♪ Alastor's missing! ♪

Vox and Valentino - ♪ Fled with his tail between his legs! ♪

♪ Nature abhors a power vacuum ♪

♪ It leaves room for you and me! ♪

Velvette comes up behind Vox and Val and puts her arms around the 2 of them.

Vox and Valentino - ♪ The future of Hell belongs to the Vees! ♪

As the three of them laugh together, the scene cuts to Alastor, limping towards the ruins of his radio tower while holding the broken pieces of his microphone.

Alastor - ♪ This place reaks of death ♪

Alastor enters his radio tower.

♪ There's a chill in the air ♪

♪ And I barely escaped being killed by a hair ♪

♪ "Great Alastor, altruist, died for his friends" ♪

♪ Sorry to disappoint! That is not where this ends! ♪

♪ I'm hungry for freedom, like never before ♪

Alastor walks through his radio tower, his eyes darting around the room.

♪ The constraints of my deal surely have a back door ♪

♪ Once I figure out how to unclip my wings ♪

♪ Guess who will be pulling all the strings? ♪

Alastor laughs maniacally as his shadow looms above him. Meanwhile, back at the hotel, the rest of the hotel's residents are finishing off the rebuilding while putting up a painting of Pentious and his family.

Vaggie, Angel, Husk, Niffty, Cherri Bomb, Hardy, Blitz, Sophie, Sonya, Liz, and Lucifer - ♪ We can do this! ♪

Charlie - ♪ We can do this ♪

Vaggie, Angel, Husk, Niffty, Cherri Bomb, Hardy, Blitz, Sophie, Sonya, Liz, and Lucifer - ♪ We'll be better! ♪

Charlie - ♪ We'll be better ♪

Vaggie, Angel, Husk, Niffty, Cherri Bomb, Hardy, Blitz, Sophie, Sonya, Liz, and Lucifer - ♪ Though redemption may take a while ♪

Charlie: ♪ Though it may take a while! ♪

Vaggie, Angel, Husk, Niffty, Cherri Bomb, Hardy, Blitz, Sophie, Sonya, Liz, and Lucifer - ♪ Wayward sinners, clear their ledger! ♪

Alastor appears in the middle of the group, now recovered.

Alastor - ♪ And we're doing it with a smile! ♪

Everyone except for Husk, Sonya, and Lucifer cheer and hug Alastor. Sonya quickly hides away in her shadow form.

Charlie - *happy* “Al!”

Lucifer - *dismayed* “Oh, this guy.”

Charlie - ♪ We'll make a difference, wait and see! ♪

Charlie and Vaggie - ♪ We're gonna do this, you and me! ♪

Charlie, Vaggie, Angel, Alastor, Husk, Niffty, Cherri Bomb, Hardy, Blitz, Sophie, Sonya, Liz, and Lucifer - ♪ And then tomorrow it will be a fuckin' happy day in hell!

All of them sing the last line while looking at the rebuilt hotel. In V Tower, Vox and Valentino make out while Velvette takes a selfie of them.

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In Heaven, Sera and Emily are sitting in a room together. Suddenly, Sir Pentious and his family were summoned to the room. Sir Pentious' colour scheme has been changed to white, gold and blue and he now has a love-hearts motif. Lucious looks similar but his hair is now white.

Sir Pentious - “What? Where-where am I? *sees Sera and Emily* Oh, hello.”

Lucious - “What is this place?”

Emily, realising that this is proof that the Hazbin Hotel works, squeaks with excitement. Sera, having come to the same conclusion, looks mortified.

Emily - *in her mind* “My portal power worked!”

()()()()()()()

Inside an unknown room somewhere in Heaven, Lute comes with the deceased Adam's halo. There, she sees Hardy's mysterious attacker from "Welcome to Heaven" episode.

Lute - *serious* “Adam is dead. The accursed has managed to slay him.”

??? - *uncaring* “Hmph, why am I not surprised? Serves that worthless buffoon right for relying solely on his powers instead of training in combat.”

Lute - “Can’t believe he killed Adam! But it also means I’m in charge now.”

??? - *uncaring* “So what? Don't think for a second that I'm going to follow you, brown noser.”

Lute angrily grabs the angel's collar and snarls at him in fury.

Lute - *furious* “You think it’s funny? Adam is dead because of that freak?! Don’t you get that?!”

??? - *not scared* “Yeah, and I don't care. As far as I am concerned, he deserved to die for bringing those wretched humans.”

Lute - *angry* “Why you-“

??? - “Enough!””

Lute and the white spikey-haired angel turned and see a rather mighty angel approach them. The angel had long white hair, wore a royal blue Catholic-like outfit, has a long shawl-like scarf, four angel wings instead of three, and a crown-like halo looming over his head. Seeing this figure causes Lute and the angel to kneel before him.

??? - “Adam's death is simply a mere inconvenience, Miss Lute. The plan is still in motion.”

Lute - “But your supremeness, what about the princess of Hell and the accursed child? If they continue, they will threaten the foundation of Heaven.”

??? - “Worry not, my dear exorcist. For I already come up with a solution to our problem. After all, we wouldn't anything to happen to our deal, now would we...*turns his head* Miss Lilith?”

From out of the shadows, a woman, revealed to be Lilith, stared up at the powerful angel before she furrows her eyebrows in annoyance with an ominous music playing in the background.

The End.

#hazbin hotel #fanfic #comission #commissionfanfic #the show must go on #season 1 finale

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nekomancy813 · 5 months ago

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~𝓗𝓲𝓼𝓾𝓲 𝙋𝙩 2~

Her name was Hisui..

Finn & Jake both look at each other and smiled.

“Awesome!”

Finn reaches his arm out to Hisui saying,

“Come along with us Hisui! You're gonna live in the treehouse with me, Jake, and BMO now!”

Hisui glitches again. Feeling overwhelming amounts of excitement, as she softly takes hold of Finn's hand..Gently, he pulls her up on her feet, having both their faces meet close.

sparks begin to fly between both Finn and Hisui. But Jake interrupts giggling,

“Heheheh she's an absolute keeper right lil’ bro?”

They quickly look away from each other, both flustered.

“D-Dang it Jake! Stop making it weird for Hisui man!”

Finn chases him out the room embarrassed with Hisui following them both as they run back outside laughing.

Hisui stares at her surroundings in complete awe! The outdoor environment of Ooo looked like something straight out of a fairy tale! The sweet scent of the candy kingdom's freshly baked houses, and waffle cone rooftops! Also the adorable and lively candy citizens left Hisui feeling utterly speechless, with stars in her eyes!

All she could muster out was a tiny overjoyed squeak.

Her tail wags faster as she walks around, Finn still chases after his smug dog brother yelling..

“Stop running and face me you smug coward!”

“Aye! I'm no coward little bro! I'mma run ahead of ya inside these woods now!”

Jake teased then expanded his size, running faster ahead of Finn towards the green grassy fields.

Hisui quietly observes Finn chasing behind Jake.. Curious, she runs beside him

“...Can I play tag with you guys too..?”

Her adorable question just gave Finn a clever idea!

Finn slows down so that Hisui can catch up to him.

he smirks deviously and replied.

“Of course! C’mon Hisui, let's go tag Jake!!

But be careful, Jake is quick so we gotta be faster to catch him okay?” Hisui nods, running ahead of Finn waiting for his next request.

“Great! Now.. Run just a little bit faster if you can!”

She tries to run faster but suddenly trips up on a rock with her bare feet; before she falls forward Hisui's eyes turn into slits as her hands quickly morphed into black paws! Amplifying her speed.

Finn was impressed by how Hisui’s swift transformation increased her speed to match up with his by running on all fours

“Mathematical!! Now.. Let's narrow Jake's path, we gotta pick up the pace then divide. I'll run right, you run left!”

Hisui obeyed Finn's next command making a sharp left U-turn under Jake, slowly closing him in for Finn to hustle his next move! He quickly grabbed Jake's tail as it flung him up in the air. Finn does an insane airborne backflip, landing himself perfectly onto Jake's back (unknowing of his bro riding on his back) and rushes into the forest. Small branches repeatedly hit Finn’s face making it difficult for him to spot Hisui!

“Shoot! I almost forgot..

Hisui! Jump on quickly!”

Suddenly, Finn saw Hisui jump high up above the trees! Running and jumping back and forth from pine to pine, like an agile cat!

Her eyes blaze bright as she tails behind Jake.

Arching her back, hisui slams her tail hard on the dirt gravel with her giant tail, quickly catapulting her upwards. Finn holds out his arms immediately catching Hisui in clutch; falling backwards into his arms

“Gottcha!!”

Hisui blushes deep as Finn holds her.. Feeling his comforting warmth.

Finn warmly smiles back at her, then softly lets go and says…

“Hisui.. Y-Your stunts are mathematical

#adventure time #fanart #finn the human #jake the dog #oc #adventure time fanfic

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koszmarnybudyn · 2 years ago

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Giving you an excuse to info dump about the magical girl au all you want bc I think it’s so cool and wanna hear ur inspiration for the designs

Okay here is the info dump I promise. Also thank you for all the tags they were all very nice, and they really push me to create more :)

Normal: As I always say with his design its winx and cheerleader inspired, I already dweled on the first one in a previous post so I'm gonna skip that.

I really wanted to incorporate a star motive in his costume (thus the star top which I adore but was a pain to choose colors for), because I just think it fits him very well, he does lose some of the teenie memorabilia (without the SD for san dimas and the T's in his design) because I thought it is reminicent of his departure from the costume, yet it comes after his "trying not to be himself" phase (the third outfit) so it does bring back the previous colors.

He has teal as his main color because I really like the idea of the Oaks being green, but because ge doesn't quite fit (and because he is the new generation pc) he gets mix of blue and green which is teal (also because blue and white are the schools colors but i only found that out later).

His "trying not to be himself" costume brings in elements of the others costumes, with the chunky shoes and wings from Normal, he is trying to his friends yet pieces of himself still poje through. It has red and blue for Taylor, purple for Scary and yellow and white from Link.

I imagine this look comes after his confrontation with his dad (I want him to try to not be a magical girl for a while, like with the dance arc, and when he tries to transform after his outfit glitches and his powers malfunction, later it turns into this when fightning before he has his realization and it goes to the powerup version).

The last outfit is just his everyday (I considered drawing the teenie suit but It didn't fit on the page unfortunetly lol), I imagine he wears a lot off school merch because he still misses teenie (and yes it still very much stinks).

I think he looks the most like the classic magical girl, I really enjoy the poofy skirt because I didn't draw a lot of skirts here (it either defies logic or has shorts underneath because a skirt is not practical)

Scary: again I think I talked about the first outfit previously, I did tweak the colors and design a little bit (I struggled with the hair color a bit) but nothing very major changed.

She has purple and red (classic villian colors because she is cool and edgy). I think I started this before the betrayl but the second powerup outfit definitly happens after the reveal.

She has a lot of punk and rock influance in her outfit (and yes the platforms are impractical but they do add to the vibe). She gets cool chains but no wings. Also the prop is the Kellog knife.

Her everyday outfit is one I designed a while ago yet really like (I actually made a Scary doll and She wears the same one).

Taylor: god this was such a hassle for color choices it was terrible, just hard to draw in general and I did the Hermie powerup too many details abomination.

He gets flaiming hair like his dad, its also blue like his dad. Its definitly sailor moon inspired (I'm debating whenether Hero hates super gero Taylor or likes him, either way she does point out the sailor moon similarities either as an insult for being unoriginal or as an admiration thing because she does like sailor moon) (I just realized if I make Hero a superhero she gets the tuxedo mask inspired design for sure).

There was samurai inspiration in this (thanks Usagi chronicles you have ridden my mind) and his second outfit has a very faint flower pattent which I really like.

I think apart from power up link he has the most armor. He does get wings but they are tiny and don't really work at first but then do in his power up. Which he might get after going to hell. He does get a tail which I forgot to draw and his ears get pointer (he does also have fangs which Scary is jealous of).

He gets a staff in classical magical girl fashion (and because of his sword staff) and a katana which he does summon and do cool anime stuff with, and it does catch in flames. I really enjoy the Taylor is disabled headcanon thus the staff and i do think he has compressors in his costume.

Hermie: my boy changes designs way too aften, there is his everyday pre magic (he does get the joker stuff still).

He is a magical girl that kinda just joins the gang and is kinda a trickster, Taylor and Normal don't realize he is actually Hermie for a while (Normal doesn't know the longest) while Link and Scary know very quickly (Link is annoyed at Normal for not realizing it and it becomes a gag).

There is his 1 magical girl outfit (its practiclly the same to my previous drawings of him as nothing really changed), then there is his accident outfit (he gets it after the cheese accident), his two-face arc (also talked and shown this one previously), his after the accident everyday and then his power up.

God does it have many details, there is joker, poison ivy and two-face as inspiration in it (his hat has leaves for ivy and coins for two-face). He gets two eyes in his mask and more trickstery look in ode to his father scam. I was really inspied by court jesters and harlequins. I like how he ends up looking like a fea. Oh also question marks for riddler.

He is a silly little guy and I adore him but drawing that again will be a pain.

Link: finally my boy, after Normal he was the second finished drawing. I had a slight problem with his colors, finally picking almost white, yellow and really light green.

His norma outfit is the most practical and soccer players inspired. He gets cool lightning and angel imagery (I really enjoy his contrast with Scary with her purple and black and his yellow and white). He gets cool glowing eyes because I am a sucker for inhuman traits.

His second outfit is very palladin-y, I think the lightning kinda looks like corruption which I really enjoy, he also probablly gets it after Scary's betrayl.

There is gold and copper in his design as accents. The wing shoes were hermies inspired. He gets a glowing sword. I really enjoy some of the biblical imaginery he looks connected to.

Like I said I might honestly make more refrence sheets (I am working on kiddads designs and some other charakters, escpecially villains, but that is a bit harder for me to design so we'll see). Anyway hope this wasn't too ranty and feel free to ask anything or add ideas.

Also thank you @rooolt for giving me an excuse to infodump I am a sucker for charakter design and analysis so its very nice to rant about my choices.

#dungeons and daddies #dndads #normal oak #link li wilson #hermie the unworthy #taylor swift dndads #scary marlow #scary marlowe #dndads magical girl au #magical girls #magical girl #it was really late when i posted this yesterday so the rant is today #i really like this au and i hope i do more for it #but only time will tell #i think i might melt if people do more stuff for it

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little-green-lies · 1 year ago

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I can't believe you think they're treating Choni badly this season or that they have bad storylines and especially that they painted Toni as a villain in 708 when she was simply finally granted some perspective and they tackled an issue with their own writing that always plagued Choni back in the high school days, to show how much they've matured. Their content this season is nothing short of excellent.

Okay this is the second time I'm typing this because Tumblr glitched and wouldn't post the first one. I probably typed too much but I really wanted to give you a solid answer. I will try to keep this more succint but I have a lot of thoughts on this so hopefully it posts this time.

I apparently also deleted my first paragraph so I've typed this section out three times now. I do not think they are treating Choni bad this season. My issue is and will continue to be the setting for this season. After two seasons of them not being together they've now thrown them into a situation in which they "can't" be together and that irks me. I thought when we got confirmation that they were soulmates, that maybe just maybe they'd let them be fully happy in the final season. And that is the full crux of the issue, it's the LAST season. I discuss Riverdale a lot more on my main page (which I encourage you to check out because I do speak about this a lot more in the tags of a lot of my Riverdale reblogs) but i actually just made a post stating that I think this may be Riverdale's best season. They opened this season with one of the strongest episodes I've seen in television thus far. Especially coming from a CW show. I do think this season is also shaping up to be Choni's second best season. They've had a lot of solid scenes and Vanessa and Madelaine are giving it their ALL. That being said, forgive me for hoping the last season would be spent wrapping up happy endings mixed with the usual Riverdale drama. I did not go into this season expecting SO MUCH new plot. And if it wasn't the last season, I wouldn't complain as much. That's always been my biggest gripe, it's the last season. That's all. If this was season 5 or 6 and I knew we had 7 seasons, then I would have nothing to say. Because yes, it's given us some really good content. I just don't want it for the finale. They could've tackled homophobia back when Kevin came out to his dad or when Cheryl came out to Toni. I don't want to see my favorite character forced back into the closet because they decided to set us in one of the worst eras in American history.

Now for my villain comment. I stand by that. I do think that scene framed Toni in a really bad light and here's why: Everything she said was valid and yes, it's an issue I've been wanting them to tackle for YEARS. What she said is not what made her the villain. It was the way they framed the scene that I knew would be misconstrued by the people that watch this show and always have a bone to pick about whatever she says or does. Up until that scene, we were led to believe that Toni's biggest issue with Choni is that she lost herself. But all they show that as, is she's given up writing for cheer. Okay fine, drop cheer and go back to writing. Cheryl wants to see her gf but she's not gonna stop her from doing what she loves. However, Toni breaking up with her felt out of left field to me because she's allowed to be her own person AND still date Cheryl. So I figured maybe they were setting it up for the fact that she doesn't like commitment and the other greaser got in her head about Cheryl being a rich girl too scared to come out of the closet. Also a valid reason. But that's not the scene they gave us. What they gave us was Cheryl asking if the issue was because she was white and Toni saying yes. Nothing up until that point had given us any indication THAT was the issue. What frustrated me even further was that they don't even give them room to have a discussion about it. Toni says her peace and leaves and all we get is a shot of Cheryl crying. She clearly cares about Cheryl enough to have pursued her for that long and then she drops her without even having a discussion?? And so soon after they got together? If we had gotten a scene where the difference of their skin was brought up before that (and that could've have been anything from an offhanded comment to Cheryl laughing about something someone says in their presence she didn't know was meant to be a dig) and we see that register with Toni, it wouldn't have felt off balance. Especially since her and Betty get along and she's white. Her and KEVIN get along and he's white. Kevin and Clay are dating and there seems to be no problem THERE. So they can be okay but she can't date Cheryl because of it? It just felt like after they gave us such a strong opening ep regarding race, to then have her drop that with no nuance didn't sit right with me. All of the digs against Toni that we had seen had been because she was bi or at least "queer adjacent" as far as Evelyn was concerned. The only time we see anyone being racist, is when she's dealing with the adults, never the teens. And I knew someone was gonna watch that and say "oh of course the black girl has an issue with her white gf blah blah blah". That's why I said they set her up to be the villain. Not that she was one. Purely based on how that scene was framed. It just felt like it was missing context. And who knows, maybe they filmed a scene and then cut it but either way, it felt off to me and having it not get brought up again until the Black Athena ep just left me feeling unmoored.

#asked and answered #i said I'd keep it short and then i still rambled so apologies #hopefully you read this in it's entirety #but I've had anons rant in my inbox and then tell me they didn't bother reading so...#anonymous asks from people who i know don't follow me are always so weird #cause like...how do you know if i answered? do you come back and check?#I'm happy to have discussions about anything. i have way more opinions on main so its weird to get this here #but i also think this has become the problem with fandom #everyone is so protective of their media that they don't allow people to have differing opinions #if i see a post i don't agree with i usually just ignore it #but i also understand not everyone is going to agree with me so like 🤷🏾‍♀️#i knew when i posted that I'd probably get called out but also it was a month ago #they've rectified the issue for the most part which is why I haven't brought it up again #riverdale #choni #hopefully this makes sense cause it did when i reread it but i could also have just been filling in the blanks in my head #cheryl blossom #toni topaz #i wasnt gonna tag them but idk who this anon is so i figured it beat to cover my bases #vernalfey

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nightsidewrestling · 2 years ago

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D.U.D.E Part 16 - International Velvet (set in 2020/2021)

Note: This is set in a universe where Men VS Women / Intergender matches can happen.

Chapter 1: here Chapter 2: here Chapter 3: here Chapter 4: here Chapter 5: here Chapter 6: here Chapter 7: here Chapter 8: here Chapter 9: here Chapter 10: here Chapter 11: here Chapter 12: here Chapter 13: here Chapter 14: here Chapter 15: here

Tags: @piratewithvigor @tantamount-treason @thedollmaker16 @janetreader

Around 2000 Words. 18+ in places (those chapters will be marked as 'Mature / sexual content' just to be safe). Please inform me if you wish to be tagged or untagged from posts. If the text is in italics and orange it's Kirby's inner monologue. If the text is coloured but not in italics, it's either dialogue or a P.O.V change (P.O.V changes will be in bold and translated dialogue will appear in square [ ] brackets), Key below. Quick note on Geia's text colour: Yes I do know that as Greed she should be in yellow but I decided to colour the men's dialogue yellow so Geia was changed to be pink like the other women in the story outside of the main 8.

The Main 8: Damo - Bio. Vi - Bio. Billie - Bio. Geia - Bio. Kirby - Bio. Honey - Bio. Eli - Bio. Sara - Bio.

Kirby's P.O.V:

"Stop, no, Eddie, ya hands are freezin'." Kirby giggles, her voice sounding more Irish than usual.

Eddie's eyes brighten, "Say that again."

"Say what again?"

"What ya just said."

"Wha? Freezin'?" Her accent thickens as she, fully, drops the 'work voice' she uses around English speakers.

Eddie kisses her deeply, pulling away to whisper against her lips, "Ya voice is much sexier with the accent."

"If you react like that when ya meet my family, ya gonna have a ragin' stiffy the entire time we're there."

"You think I care about that, when ya voice is so sexy, C'mere." Eddie pulls Kirby onto his lap, kissing her deeply.

"You go do ya work, I'll stay here and do mine, okay, a stór [my treasure]?"

"A'ight, Ma, I'll let ya sort everythin' out. I'll make sure we see ya family durin' the holidays."

"Okay, my darlin', I love you."

"I love ya, so fuckin' much, my Celtic princess."

"My American boy, Soldier of New York."

Eddie gives Kirby one final kiss before he heads off, it's short but sweet, and Kirby's left smiling after he leaves.

During the show, four photos 'glitch' onto the screen, the first during the first match, the second during the second match, and so on, the only untouched match is Moxley vs Omega. All four are put there intentionally. All four were agreed upon by Tony Khan and us... I hope people get the message loud and clear.

A couple days pass, Kirby moves all of her stuff into Eddie's home again, she gives up her life in Virginia fully, returning to the wrestling world. The only difference is that she's no longer brainwashed by Damien. On the 9th Eddie has work and Kirby comes with him.

A further four images are shown, this time avoiding Eddie's match. That match has whispers all throughout it, playing over the loudspeakers.

"The road to hell is a one way track, I'm driving backwards to escape it." Is the first line, two minutes into the match.

Around two minutes later comes the second whisper, "Some bridges must be burned."

Another two minutes pass and a third whisper is heard, "Some demons have demons, it's time to fight mine."

Right before the end of the match comes the forth and final whispered line, "I speak the ugly truths, his hounds never listen."

Eddie ignores Kirby's plans to celebrate his 39th birthday, opting to stay in bed together, and Eddie sleeps for the majority of the day. Kirby works beside him and chuckles when Eddie wakes up, only to kiss her. Eddie manages to convince her to have 'birthday sex' with him, several times over, and unprotected each time.

Eddie and Kirby fly out to Wales on the 18th, spending Christmas with her parents, before flying back to Jacksonville on the 27th. Eddie goes to work for the tribute show on the 30th. Kirby stays in their hotel, she sits in bed all day, numb from the news, only moving for food, or to get a bottle of water, or to throw up. Eddie makes sure they fly home, to New York, that night, immediately going to bed with Kirby and falling asleep.

Kirby wakes up to the sound of Eddie humming, she checks her phone '10:00 Thursday 31 December', "Shit, ten am, I slept in, fuck." she whispers to herself.

"Wifey," Eddie smirks from the doorway, "Got ya somethin', several things, also..." he leaves for a moment, coming back with Homicide by his side, "look who came over." Eddie beams.

"That's all well and good, now go away so I can get dressed."

Eddie pushes Homicide out of the doorway, and looks at Kirby intently, his body filling the doorway, "Sexy Wifey?" He raises an eyebrow.

"Edward, ya know damn well I sleep in my underwear... only reason I don' have a bra on, is 'cause ya broke it."

Eddie closes the bedroom door behind himself, climbing on the bed and pinning Kirby underneath him, kissing every inch of skin he can get to. He gets up and watches her get dressed, pulling her into a gentle kiss, refusing to let her be more than an arm's length away from him.

"So sexy, my wife, sexiest woman in the world, ya so fuckin' beautiful, and ya mine, an-"

Kirby kisses Eddie to shut him up, "Eddie, shush, ya got me stuff, I would like ta know what."

Eddie hoists her over his shoulder, she makes herself comfy, he proceeds to carry her out to the back patio. Homicide shakes his head as he looks at Eddie, whispering something in Spanish that Kirby doesn't fully hear, he chuckles when Eddie puts Kirby down.

"Hi Nelson."

"Ey, Mami, ya married his idiotic ass?" Homicide jokes, earning himself a 'you stfu' look from Eddie.

"Eddie, do not start 'effin and blindin' at this time of the mornin'." Kirby warns.

Homicide looks at Kirby like she's an alien and Eddie chuckles.

"I won't, I promised ya mother I'd be respectful around ya," Eddie smiles softly, "I will, howeva, tell you to eat the breakfast I got ya."

"A chopped cheese ain't breakfast." Homicide murmurs.

"Eddie, stop glarin' at 'im. As my grandmother would say, stop glarin', stop gawkin', keep talkin'."

"Why do ya talk like tha'?"

"Because, Nelson, I was raised by a primarily Irish family, who speak Irish slang an' have Irish accents. I, me self, was born in Kilkenny in Ireland." Kirby explains, midway through eating her 'breakfast', aka the chopped cheese Eddie bought her.

"You were born in Ireland?" Eddie asks, a beaming grin on his face.

"Yeah, I thought my Da told ya."

Eddie shakes his head 'no', lifting Kirby's head to kiss her passionately, refusing to leave her side, even as he lights up a cigarette.

"My wifey, my Irish woman. For so long, I thought you were born in Wales, but ya weren't. Can you eat faster, I wanna make a baby."

"Fuckin' niño [child/boy]." Homicide groans.

"With how my stomach's been actin' up recently, ya already have." Kirby mumbles.

Both Eddie and Homicide go still, Kirby can feel them staring at her.

"The feck are ya gawkin' at me for, your the dope who wanted ta have 'birthday sex'."

"Homicide, keep her there, I'm gettin' a fuckin' pregnancy test." Eddie grabs his wallet and rushes off, leaving Kirby with Nelson for around ten minutes.

"Ya married him?" Nelson/Homicide asks.

"Indeed I did."

"Congrats. Ya think ya pregnant?"

"At the least it's a stomach bug, but considering the amount of times me and Ed have, you know, 'gone at it', I'll be fuckin surprised if I ain't up the duff."

"Ya gon' let him smoke aroun' the baby?"

"Eddie's smart enough to know not ta. I trust him on that."

"So... ya got any name ideas?"

"Something with an 'E' at the beginning," She murmurs as she finishes her breakfast, "I gotta put this in the bin, so we gotta go inside."

Homicide follows Kirby into the house, taking in the changes she's made to the place. Kirby smiles when she sees Homicide smile.

"This place..."

"Actually feels like a home now?"

"Yea, I like it." Homicide murmurs.

"Thanks, I kinda want to paint the walls, but that's for another day." Kirby shrugs.

"I thought I told you to keep her there." Eddie grumbles as he walks back into the house.

"Hey Papi."

"Hey Ma, go figure out how to use this, I gotta figure out how to gain back street cred."

Kirby takes the box and goes to the bathroom. It'll be fine, it's too early to tell.

She quickly figures out how to use the test and does so. Oh well, time to pee on a stick.

She paces back and forth as she waits for the results. God, could this take any longer.

She looks at the 'stick' and freezes in shock. How am I gonna tell Eddie?

"Oh fuck... Homicide, make Eddie sit down!" She hollers through the door, taking a deep breath and grabbing the test, checking her pulse before leaving the bathroom.

"Ya not, ya not or the test is too early, or somethin' right?" Eddie asks, his eyes wider than usual.

"Edward, you know ya love me." She mutters, holding the test behind her back.

"Yeah, you're my calm." He smiles softly.

"Would you love me if I was chubbier... say nine months chubbier?" She asks, handing him the test.

Eddie looks at the test, then at Kirby, then back at the test, then back at Kirby. He beams, getting up from his seat, picking Kirby up and spinning her in his arms, "I'm gonna be a dad, I'm gonna be a motherfuckin' father." He chuckles wildly, putting Kirby down and pulling her into a passionate kiss.

Kirby smiles softly, "We're gonna be parents. We're gonna have a kid, there's gonna be a little mix of us running around."

Eddie hoists Kirby over his shoulder, "where the fuck is my phone? I gotta call Moxie, and Ma, and your father, and I gotta tell Eric, and my dad..."

"Eddie, breathe. Breathe, my handsome warrior, breathe." Kirby whispers.

Eddie keeps Kirby in his arms, grabbing his phone and calling everyone he can, and practically getting in a shouting match with Moxley, his brother, Eric, and his dad, Earl. About an hour after calling Ruth, she knocks on the door.

"Edward, let me in!" Ruthie yells through the door.

Kirby slinks her way out of Eddie's grasp, and goes to let her in, immediately being pulled into a hug.

"Hi, Ruthie." She sighs happily.

"Eddie told me the news."

"I know," Kirby giggles, "he had me over his shoulder when he called you."

"Eddie and you are the greatest thing to happen to each other, mi nuera [my daughter-in-law]. I'm so glad Eddie has you, you keep my son happy and calm. I may be his mother, but from now on we both will worry about him, don't let your fear mess with the baby's health. I'm always a phone call away." Ruth whispers, cupping Kirby's face in her hands before pulling her into a hug.

"Gracias, mi suegra [Thanks, my mother-in-law], if you ever need anything from me, Mamá [Mother], don't hesitate to call." Kirby whispers, pulling away and wiping her eyes.

"Everythin' okay over here? Ma, sweetheart, where you two cryin'?" Eddie asks, gently hugging his mother.

"Maybe... a'ight, yeah, but in my defence, it's not everyday that I get to have a sweet moment with ya Mam."

"C'mere, baby mama," Eddie chuckles softly, "let me hug both women in my life."

Kirby joins in the hug, kissing Eddie as she takes in the moment. Her husband, Eddie, her mother-in-law and the baby, or babies, growing in her womb, for the first time, in a long time, she feels like all's right with the world.

Kirby's parents are the next to find to find out, her Da whooping and hollering that his family's legacy will be continued, her Mam crying tears of happiness, and wishing the best for the 'young' couple.

The final person to find out, through Kirby and Eddie, is their boss, Tony Khan. Tony wishes them well, and tells them that Kirby can continue to work, as long as she doesn't get in the ring. Kirby agrees with the compromise.

She relaxes for the last few days of the year, and the first two of 2021, eventually getting bored of laying around and doing nothing.

"Eddie, baby daddy, Papi." Kirby calls from the bed as Eddie showers.

"Yeah, sexy Mami?" He calls back.

"There's ten days 'till my birthday, what do ya wanna do?"

Eddie smirks as he walks over, a towel around his waist, "I think you know what I wanna do, Ma."

He lets the towel drop and goes to kiss Kirby. She puts her hand in front of his face to block him.

"Ya already got me up the duff, Kingy, and we gotta fly back to Jacksonville soon. So, what do you wanna do before we leave?"

"I wanna fuck my wife, ya know, let her know I fuckin' love her." He chuckles.

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theoryfan205 · 2 years ago

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@oceandiagonale I'm just gonna tag you for each part to make it easier! Let's go

Valentine's day confusion part 2

Part 1 - part 3

I am cream! I am the unnown hero, I saved galar! Recently I have seen lots of pretty red hearts in hammerlocke's shops, apparently it's for a valentine's day, this looked fun! Marnie would like some of these, but when I try and ask her about it she runs off in a rush, I haven't broken Marnie again have I? And some friends from spikemuth keep running around avoiding me too, something is happening but nobody is telling me what's going on. Did that rose guy come back? If the day needs Saving I should be the first to know, I'm a hero! It's my job! I'm really worried, so that's why I'm going to ask Marnie's brother piers about it! If something is up and Marnie is glitching too much to tell me, then he can help! He's giving me that look when he can't understand what I'm doing when I come up to him, having a big ❔ on my face should display that I need help! "Piers! Something is wrong, Marnie keeps running away when we see each other, is something going on in galar again? And people keep avoiding me too! Is Marnie in trouble? ...am I in trouble?" I really hope neither of us are in trouble, Marnie doesn't deserve that and I don't remember doing anything wrong, piers gives me that looking at his Pokemon playing look and does that small laugh sound, I don't get it though- this isn't cute or funny? "Nobody's in trouble, 'specially not Marnie. I think I can see what's goin' on here. You learn what valentines day is yet?" I showed a 🚫 on my face, Marnie says a shake Is fine but this is way more clear! Even piers gets it, he understood what I meant, "I've heard about it but all I know is there's inaccurate depictions of human organs! Like this ♥️. I wanted to get some for Marnie but she keeps running off, does she not like it?" I hadn't considered Marnie wouldn't like valentine's day! It might be a sad event, I should have asked those store people before I tried to show Marnie!- "no that's not it, she doesn't tend to celebrate it much but I got a Feelin' she's got more reason to now. You see, on this day it's real common to show people you care about just how much you care, me and Marnie used to just do it as family but usually it's done romantically." ....huh? ❔"...you see what you and Marnie got goin' on? And how I gave you that talk when she started holdin' your hand more in public?" Oh! Love! "Yes! So.. it's a event about love? But... Then why is Marnie running? Shouldn't we celebrate together?" Did Marnie not want to share their love on the love day? It sounds like a nice day to show off even more love than normal! Marnie should be excited like I am, right? "You will, she's been busy all day, right?" 👍👍 "Then just wait, I bet you by the end of the day she'll have somethin' for you." Something for me? Marnie's planning something for me?! Oh! But I have nothing for Marnie! She'll be so upset- "c'mon- if anyone's helpin' you find somethin' for her it's gonna be me. show me what ideas you've got so far, we'll workshop somethin' before her surprise is ready" oooh, piers and cream hanging out! I like doing that, and I can find a good gift for Marnie too! With an easy ✔️ we're both off, don't worry marnie- I'll make sure my gift is good enough for you!

#wip 'cream' protagonist #wip protagonist #Pokémon #maroon skies shipping #piers #Pokémon piers #pokemon #valentine's day #valentine's day confusion

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tvrningout-archived · 2 years ago

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KNOWING YOUR PARTNER WELL CAN POTENTIALLY MAKE WRITING TOGETHER A LOT EASIER.

tagged by: @londonfallen and @hauntedreality, if i'm not mistaken! thank you both very much!!!!

tagging: i can't be sure who has and hasn't done this yet, so!! steal it and say i tagged you!!

Name: bel! it's an alias with a silly explanation that i might just explain if you ask ;)

Pronouns: she/her

Preference of communication: discord simply bc tumblr im's tend to glitch on me, though i won't lie... i'm pretty hit and miss with messages in general ;n; sometimes i do really well, and other times i think it's been only two days since i messaged back and it's really been two weeks. that being said, pls don't be afraid to nudge me or remind me! i swear i'm never ignoring someone on purpose -- i just get busy and then very forgetful.

Name of muse(s): i have so many at this point :' ) but i can say the muses i reach for most often are chiyo, hyouka, and kaiya. i can pretty much write any of my muses any of the time, though!

Experience/how long (months/years?): i guess with the new year finally here, i can officially say i've been rping for 10 years!! which is crazy to me!!

Platforms you’ve used: mainly tumblr, but with some friends in the past, i've used skype, kik, and discord. i did have a twitter for one rp group once upon a time, but that didn't really stick.

Pet peeves / dealbreakers: just basically don't be rude and don't be gross and we're good! i'm kinda at the point where i try to be very careful and wary of who i follow anyway, and i will say if i see " highly selective towards oc's " in someone's rules, i usually won't follow first thanks to a bad experience.

Fluff, angst, or smut: all of the above B))) fluff does tend to be my favorite, but i like to mix angst in and get a nice hurt/comfort thing going. if i write straight angst, i like there to be some fluff to console everyone at the end :' ) as for smut, it's something i'll write for ask prompts mostly, but with someone i'm comfortable with, i wouldn't mind writing threads out! it's my mushy side coming out, but i think it can be really romantic -- or playful and fun or whatever it needs to be in the moment, and i'd love to explore that aspect of my muses more!

Plots or memes: both, but i'm probably a lil faster with memes :' )

long or short replies: both, but let's face it... if i'm involved, that reply is gonna end up on the long side asdfg

Best time to write: i used to think late at night, but i really think it's just whenever i have a quiet moment, which just happens to be at night most of the time. i need to feel like there aren't any pressing matters for me to be most productive.

Are you like your muse(s): hmmm maybe in bits and pieces? i do gift my muses lil aspects of myself sometimes -- like chiyo's love for shounen manga ( including the series she grew up with asdf ). i think if i were to say i'm most like any of my muses, it'd probably be makiko bc i, too, am on the shy side with new people and get in my head about what they might think of me uvu we're both works in progress and that's okay!

#get ready to ramble | ooc #thanks again for tagging me!!#these are always fun to do and a nice way to get to know each other!

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the-dark-abyss · 2 years ago

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I posted 65 times in 2022

That's 40 more posts than 2021!

23 posts created (35%)

42 posts reblogged (65%)

Blogs I reblogged the most:

@sleepytime-moga

@seafoamfucker

@ma2ereki

@oda-haruko

@vampnightwing

I tagged 54 of my posts in 2022

Only 17% of my posts had no tags

#rambling - 20 posts

#mafia 3 - 13 posts

#goncharov - 12 posts

#john donovan - 8 posts

#mafia iii - 7 posts

#ouatih - 6 posts

#lincoln clay - 5 posts

#thoughts - 4 posts

#mafia 3 definitive edition - 4 posts

#cars - 3 posts

Longest Tag: 115 characters

#lincoln is my fave character but lack of fleshed out story for donovan makes me hyperfocus on him and i wanna fight

My Top Posts in 2022:

Mafia 3

Okay so I’m gonna take the L and admit I’ve never played the other 2 games, I just watched the cut-scene movies on YouTube, and while I enjoyed the story and characters of the first 2, when I watched Mafia 3′s it DID something to me. So I actually went out and got the game so I can play it all myself.

First things first, I’m gonna wonder why people seem to hate this game so much until the day I die, sure it’s glitchy but not as bad as any Bethesda glitch I’ve seen and nothing game breaking, more or less just funny stuff like “lol that cop car exploded in the middle of the street. I’m gucci tho.”. I really like the time-period cause I actually like learning about the 60′s in American history because SO MUCH important stuff was set in motion back then. Others seem to not like how it’s nt focused on the Italian Mafia anymore and...sure?? I guess?? I mean they’re still there, you’re allied with some Italians while taking out the bigger Italian crime family (I think they’re mad that the protag is black and it’s an important part of the game tbh) And another complaint I see a lot is the games too repetitive, I think that’s the lamest excuse personally. I played this after I beat Far Cry 6, and honestly? It was NICE! I like being able to sneak and take people down, or just blow up everything! Maybe it’s cause I’m autistic perhaps (ASD gang rise up!) but having a pattern was nice for me, I have a specific way of playing and it was fun. Hell, I’ve beat the game twice already cause it felt nice to play.

I know this game came out in 2016 and I’m way late to the party, I became aware of the Mafia series in 2021 and finally played Mafia 3 in March 2022. And I need to be physically restrained from playing it a third time lol.

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Found this under Nuit Blanche in the alt escape route.

I've never seen this in the game before this is so cool!

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Because I’m on the Spectrum™...

I would post this on my art blog but what good would that do? I guess this is unofficially also a fandom blog... anyways

So! A thing I like doing is figuring out timelines, time frames, dates and fun stuff like that. And I gotta say, the timeline of events in Mafia 3 is INFURIATING! And according to THIS it’s the lead world designers preferred playthrough. I know I probably should take this with a huge grain of salt, but going by this it throws so many things out of wack (especially making Sign of the Times be the last DLC story you touch)

So, February 27th is when things kinda kick off, Lincoln’s friends and family are killed and he’s left for dead by the Marcanos.

Bullet wound takes on average 2 months at most to recover from (from mixed sources 😵)

Lincoln was still bed ridden when MLK was assassinated on April 4th. So I assume he was walking a bit after that, mid-April.

So mid April is when he was up moving around and getting things set up.

The DLC’s, despite not supposing to be in order, 1 of them has a specific date correlated with it.

The DLC stories become available after you get have all the under bosses and do that Sit Down mission.

The “Sign of the Times” DLC introduces character, Anna McGee, without getting too much into it, her death date on her grave is “June 6th 1968

So, set time or no, this implies the cult shenanigans happen immediately while Lincoln is getting into contact with Cassandra, Vito and Burke and he’s juggling them on top of this.

Must happen only in the span of a few days, not even a week.

For the rest of June, I guess Lincoln works at a more normal pace but still a lot going on at once.

For reason the only record date one of the Marcano Capo’s is Lou, and that’s in July, so I assume the Judge gets clapped early July.

That text at the bottom:

This threw me off but I realized it probably took a sec for the charges to process.

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Hey I have a weird thought, do tumblr gays have a specific version of Brad Pitt they latch onto? There's him in Fight Club and Interview with a Vampire thats all I can think of.

I finally got a version of Brad Pitt I latched onto recently and I just kinda noticed it.

Is this common?

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My #1 post of 2022

AND ANOTHER THING-

About Mafia 3

Some thoughts about characters and how some folks treat them:

John Donovan: Love this guy, wish I had more info about him that isn't all surface level and stuff I had to make up for a headcanon, but jeez I swear, at least on YouTube comments, it’s like people want to make him the Mafia games equivalent of Deadpool. Cause he’s “wacky” and “chaotic” and they want him to be the next games protag, once again, love this guy, but oh my god, NO! I think he works best as a side character and at most a secondary protag (like for Stones Unturned). If there was a game with him...what would it be? Just assassinate politicians in the 70′s simulator? Won’t be a Mafia game then would it unless he goes back to the Clay Family. That’s just YouTube comments I see though, but I got thoughts.

Vito Scaletta: I have to be clear, I DO LIKE Vito, but I think I liked him more in Mafia 3, very much Italian Uncle I deeply deserved in life vibes, I will admit though, even though I like him in M3, I feel like the devs leaned in on him being there as like, a selling point? While I enjoyed M2, I will admit as faves in order go, it’s Mafia 3, Mafia 1, and Mafia 2. Vito was getting dragged along for a lot of the events in M2 and boy, Joe was.... I wouldn't want him for a friend. Vito can be all messed up about what happened to Joe, but when I watched the cutscene movie for M2 I thought Joe was awful to Vito. Vito needs better friends :/ (also even tho I’m usually on team “RAIL THAT OLD MAN!” I think the Lincoln/Vito ship is odd, def not my thing and yet somehow not as offensive as the next character I’m about to bring up though.)

Giorgi Marcano: Oh boy where do I begin with him... I see...so many people sympathize with him or simp for him and it feels SO GROSS. (Imma be honest this mf is ugly he looks like a monkey with his busted hairstyle. Like if someone made a realistic Westernized Lupin the III but somehow removed all the charm from him). I feel like people seem to have forgotten he handed the Hollow over the the Dixie Mafia on a silver platter, that or they don’t care. The Hollow is the Black community in the game and the Dixie Mafia is all Southern Pride and Lynch mobs, all those Confederate flags... And I know that Giorgi KNEW THIS. I see people saying he was just doing what his dad said, and sure to an extent but it’s clear he enjoys what he does (He was so hyped to tell Sal what he did to Olivia), I will never forget what the Dixie boy’s did to Perla’s, to the young black women they forced to take drugs and exploited, the the specific targeting of the Black and Haitian communities in game, what they did to Casandra, etc. Giorgi was a spoiled violent Daddy’s boy that either was playing Lincoln, Ellis and Danny the whole time, or didn't care about them enough to even protest Sal’s orders against them. Even in his death scene, he never tried to apologize to Lincoln even if he knew the apology wouldn't have saved him. If they showed that, then sure I would at least admit he did care about Lincoln and all his friends that were killed, but no he didn't, just him and his old man. (PUTTING EEEEEVERRYYOOONE ON A LIST WHO SHIP LINCOLN/GIORGI! I CAME FROM THE FAR CRY FANDOM AND I’M SICK OF SEEING SO MUCH RACISM IN CHARACTER PORTRAYALS AND SHIPS! SICK AND TIRED!)

Game story and themes:

I will praise this game to the moon and back, despite it’s “flaws” like the glitches and game play. The glitches were not game breaking for me and I liked the game play honestly (I have ASD so that probably contributes to it). The driving is good despite me being a bad driver and I liked the how the weapons worked.

But I do have some thoughts about what I think was kinda lackluster and disappointing.

Lack of highlighting how horrible the Vietnam war was, condemning the army and the C.I.A. I know that’s so specific but you can’t have a Vietnam vet without having some kind of toll that it took on him, most of Lincoln’s trauma was mostly just centered around what happened to his family after he got back home, and some stuff in his childhood. Which is valid those things are traumatizing but idk, were the devs afraid? Also I know Donovan during the game is still technically in the C.I.A until he officially leaves in 1969, and he’s like, a big JFK stan, but like, does he know what Kennedy’s plans were for the C.I.A, is he blindly loyal? Was it game? I mean I know he does leave it but he’s been in the game for like 15 years, what’s going on? What’s all those war crimes for? Do the devs at Hangar 13 and 2K not wanna be put on some weird list? I don’t know, man.

My taste for found crime families keeps getting un-quenched: Looking back at the promo trailers showing Lincoln and all his under-bosses working together, with Donovan even tagging along, and seeing how the game actually played out... ow. The under-bosses hate each other, every convo between Lincoln and Cassandra feels like it leads to an argument, Burke was racist to Lincoln at the start, and....actually Vito seems like the most pleasant despite being a sad middle aged man so I’ve give him that. The most we get to them showing respect for each other is if you go to pick up kickback and talk more to them, then they’ll say nice things about each other.

Ex: Cassandra saying Vito isn't as bad as she thought, she thinks Burke is really fun. Vito thinking Burke is funny. And Burke having respect for what Vito's been through and weirdly enough, oddly respectful of her beliefs.

But that’s it, and they have no idea who Donovan is either even though he’s been working behind the scenes. And with how they are in game, I know they would NOT like him, I think Cassandra would hate him the most cause she gave Lincoln flak for willingly joining the army (I mean she’s right, I agree with her.).

So in that aspect I’m a little <:/ about. Not everything can be perfect.

OKAY THATS ALL FOR NOW!

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riallasheng · 2 years ago

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okay the editor is glitched.... doing a reblog with the second two answers under THIS readmore because the darn thing KEEPS DELETING IT

@alexthefly

@mrmustachious

Now I answer Alex's question!!

15) which protagonist do I think would make a good villian? (The answer may surprise you!! XD) Lady Penelope: Penny herself. She can be quite ruthless at times, and she’s made several cold, even slightly cruel, decisions in the comics and novels. Always for the greater good, always trying to help and protect others, but she is not a ‘good’ person, and the potential for her to become a villain is absolutely present and wouldn’t even be a long journey. TOS: Scott. He's a solid example of Pratchett's quote: if a man has you entirely at his mercy, then hope like hell that man is an evil man. Because ... They'll put off the moment of murder like another man will put off a good cigar. ... A good man will kill you with hardly a word. He, like Penny, is easily the most ruthless of the 'hero' characters in Century 21, and both of them are also actually kinda terrifyingly high on the 'villain / all characters' side of the list too. It would be fairly hard to get him to take the step, but if you could get him to do so, he would be a terrifying villain. The man was willing to BLOW UP A MOUNTAIN with hundreds, if not thousands, of people in it (operation: asteroid). He destroyed a pyramid with dozens, if not hundreds of people (the zombites) in it. He 100% purposefully drove the two guys that tried to kill Alan and Grandma off the road, and he did it with an ice cold expression and he only thing he said was ‘they’ve gone crazy, gonna crash’ AFTER SHOOTING AT THEM FOR A SOLID MINUTE. He may hate it and do everything he can to find another way, but at the end of the day he is a good man, who will do what needs to be done... 04 Film: Oddly, Alan. Combine his resentment and teenage temper with the Hood’s manipulations and things had the potential to go in a different direction… it would have taken a lot of work on the Hood’s part, and changes to some setup scenes, but it’s a possibility. TaG: hrmmmmmmm…. Gonna go with John here. Hes often overloaded with terrible situations (and terrible people), has limited direct in-person interactions, and is separated from people in multiple ways. If there was a triggering event, he could easily go darkside.

And now I answer MrMustachious’ ask!!

1) What do I like the most about my favorite character? Lady Penelope: Penny is my favorite there, and what I love about her is her calm and stoic nature, how competent and capable she is, and how she also is so well ROUNDED. She has strengths and flaws and makes mistakes and sometimes needs to be rescued or needs help and sometimes is the one doing the rescuing or helping! TOS: Scott is my favorite here, and (surprising no one who knows me… look the stoic is my favorite character type, esp the deadpan snarker stoic) I love that he’s a stoic, and a deadpan snarker stoic at that. He’s laidback, calm and unruffled no matter what is happening, it actually usually takes longer to set off HIS temper than even Virgil’s, and he is kind whenever possible (and the only person Brains is comfortable enough with for Brains to TEASE and snark at, likely helped by Scott just smiling and letting what could have been insults if you didn’t know that it was Brains’ sense of humor roll off his back. 04 film: Fermat in this. He’s actually REALLY similar to TOS Brains, which I like, but he’s got some really fun interactions with Alan and TinTin where-as TOS Brains really only tended to interact with Jeff, Scott and TinTin. Fermat is shy, awkward, smart as hell, and actually has QUITE the temper. He’s a fun little ball of contradictions and complexities, and I adore his character arc of learning to stand up for himself and gaining confidence, while still never losing his friendship with Alan. TaG: Still have only watched this twice but… Probably gonna say a tie between Kayo and John. Both are stoics, and snarky to boot. (Kayo is also helped by being EERILY similar to a very old TOS OC of mine, Deke).

Squiddo's Ask Game

Got three asks while I was out giving my brother's car a jumpstart and tow with my truck, so answering them all together ^^

(I do hope that is acceptable tumblr manners, my apologies if doing so is rude)

@teapotteringabout

@alexthefly

@mrmustachious

I'll be doing my usual 'Lady Penelope, TOS, 04 film, TaG' for each question ^^

Under the readmore because LONG (as in I crashed the editor six times long!! XD)

teapotteringabout's first, as I recieved those first^^

12) If I could delete a episode/scene, which one would I pick and why Lady Penelope: *laughs* you'd think that'd be a TOUGH one, as I like pretty much ALL of Penny's adventures and stories in her comics and novels... BUUUUUUUUUUUT... I hate the 'Penelope as a Young Adult' comic run (for multiple reasons. I hate that we jump from the 2050s / 2060s to the 1960s. I hate that Mrs Petherton and Spider are gone as they were REALLY GOOD characters. I hate that Penny goes from a rich girl to a 'middle class' girl, becuase her being rich IS a factor in who Penny is. I hate that her being a SPY and goign to go to SPY SCHOOL was dropped. I hate that Penny has a total personality change. I just DO NOT LIKE the run, so it's what I'd cut TOS: Probably Thunderbird 6, even though I do like several scenes in it. Or if it remained it'd undergo a heavy enough re-write to basically be no nevermind / in-name-only. I used to have a fanfic rewrite of it that made it TinTin focused, her deciding if she wanted to remain Support or become Active Rescue that I wrote back in the early Naughts, but it sadly was lost over the years and I've not had anything resembling the time to try to rewrite it ^^;; If not Thunderbird 6, then probably the novel Ring of Fire as it was a very disappointing conclusion to the novels. 04 film: Hm. Oddly a tough one. While there are scenes I dislike, I usually can see WHY the scene is there and/or it's important for the plotline or character arcs, OR it's a case of good concept but poor execution. *ends up spending several RL minutes going over scenes I dislike and realizing that 'crap, no, that's needed for the plotline / character arc / concept is sound'* Y'know, I'm gonna do something odd here. 'What is a big plot element that you'd change to teh point that the original plotpoint is dropped / replaced'. And the answer to that is use the rumor that in the first draft of the film, Jeff was recently gone, lost on a rescue, and SCOTT was the one in Jeff's role... struggling to keep IR going, dealing with recent grief, and trying to keep his mid-teen brother safe for as long as he could. (I do wonder if TaG used this old rumor / idea on purpose or if it was just a coincidence) TaG: Either of the Sally episodes ^^;; And this one isn't even that I dislike Sally, or at least 90% of it is not that... I just ended up disliking the episodes by themselves plotting / story wise. I dislike several things in the EMP episode, but the standout THERE was actually Sally's 'save one life' speech becuase while that's a noble sentiment... FATE. OF. THE. WORLD. and BILLIONS of lives depended on the bad guys not getting away with the device, Sally had NO IDEA that they didn't have it, and she should have told Virgil to go after the bad guys while on-site rescueers or she herself saved the one life (that's actually the scene that made me start actively disliking Sally rather than being neutral on her, although there are other scenes that added to it). As for the other episode... I've yet to run into an example of 'the support team uses the machines and solo saves the day while the rescue team is unavailable' that I liked, and this one is no different.

14) A headcanon I love, dislike, and have a neutral opinion on. Lady Penelope: Love: Penny's mysterious former-spy father is actually a retired Agent 21. The ages line up, and canonically the Agents change their name both when they JOIN and when they RETIRE, and Agent 23 looks so simular to Penny that people constantly think 23 ***IS*** Penny and use her bio picture as a picture of Penny. Dislike: That Penny is disdainful or even dislikes Parker. She canonically and directly states how much she respects and likes him in her novels and comics, and while she sometimes is at odds with him, that respect and like remains. Neutral: That the reason Penny has a fear of mice and rats is due to one of her earliest spy missions going wrong and her spending time captive in a mice/rat infested cell that left her with psycological and physical scars. ...Plus, to be frank, MOST PEOPLE were scared of mice and rats at the time. They were a real problem and in some cases danger to people. There's a reason that the REAL villain in Lady and the Tramp is a rat, and it going after the baby is something that could and DID happen IRL. TOS: Love: (oh so many XD) Let's go with an odd one. That Jeff has been friends with Wilbur Zero, Sam Shore, and Charles Grey since childhood, the four still being friends even into current times. All four know and respect that there are secrets each has that they can't talk about and must actively protect, and they do their best not to investigate or even help support / protect it if the need arises. The other three are certain that Jeff is FINANCING International Rescue, but they don't realize that the Tracys ARE International Rescue. Dislike: I don't like the 'Gordon doesn't actually get along well with his family' headcanon. I don't know if it's still a thing, but it was something that cropped up on occasion in older fanfics and zines and BOY do I dislike it. Neutral: Alan's astronaut training was done at WARP (WSP in canon, I changed it to WARP - world astronautical & rift patrol - so it stood out from the OTHER WSP - World Security Patrol, and WASP - world aquanaut security patrol). This one is neutral because to me it seems likely to the point of being near canon ^^;; 04 Film: Love: That there is a missing scene once all is said and done and they're safe on the island and Alan is being congratulated by Jeff when you suddenly hear a "ALAN!! WHAT THE HELL DID YOU DO TO MY BIRD!?!" off camera from Scott when he finally gets a chance to check One over becuase One got put through the wringer a bit XD Dislike: That Fermat is Brains' CLONE. Why is THAT the 'only' option?! Why is that the FIRST option!? Why is 'Brains was with someone and they seperated or the woman was lost, perhaps in the same accident that killed Alan's mom' not what people assume? (actually if you want some terror fodder... look at how Fermat reacts to WOMEN compared to how he reacts to MEN, because that is nearly textbook for a young teen abused by a woman / mother.) Neutral: The Tracys don't mind people filming the Tbirds because there is no way to STOP THAT with cameras being as readily available as they are, and they always wear the disguising helmets we see Virgil wearing during the Oil Rig rescue when outside the Tbirds so their identities are protected. TaG: Love: That IR has actually only been back at full operation for a short time frame, as there likely was a solid chunk of time where Scott was the only one old enough to be on rescues (John could have easily been on comms the whole time, but Virgil would need to have been in his late teens at minimum to take up the duties required for Two. Same for Gordon. Kayo seems to have been MIA until fairly recently, Alan only JUST started rescue work, and there is no indication that Sally was ever involved in rescue work.

Dislike: That TaG Gordon was in WASP (and actually that TaG Scott was in the Air Force). Gordon's, at best, 18 or 19, when tag starts , and the youngest you can enlist at is 17... and that is with guardian permission. the catch is Gordon's been an active member of iR for well over a year given all dialogue. Thus there's no TIME for him to have been in WASP. TOS Tracys are all 19 (Alan) and up, they've all had time prior to IR for pre-existing careers... the TaG boys don't, esp with the 'iR has ben a thing for over 8 years' Neutral: The reason the world seems so 'at peace' is actually narrator bias. The tag Tracys are all to a man pacifists and are attending rescues... the world is not as peaceful and perfect as they think it is, because they are to one degree or another protected from it.

Now I answer Alex's question!!

15) which protagonist do I think would make a good villain? (The answer may surprise you!! XD)

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