#driftycloud

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Very interested to see if what everyone's saying about Driftycloud is legit or just complaints! I'm personally biased, as I like her design a lot. The blue frill around the neck is pretty

Hello my first ever ask!! :D I'm glad that you're curious about Driftycloud because she's my favourite character in the story!

Much of her clan is definitely... unwelcoming of her, and Sandyfur in page 17 does give an insightful perspective as the oldest elder in the clan. Hopefully once I release RainClan's clan profile it'll make more sense why the warriors are so on edge. I'm more excited for readers to make their own judgement of her later on in the story though!

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Foxskip's Choice: Chapter One — "Begin" pages 4-5

(Focal) characters in these pages:

Orange and white tom - Foxpaw

White molly with blue fins - Driftycloud

1, 2, 3 <- 4, 5 -> 6

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Foxskip's Choice: Chapter One — "Begin" page 12

If Driftycloud has no defenders then Foxpaw is dead 🙏

Characters in this page:

Orange and white tom - Foxpaw

Small brown tom - Pinepaw

Pale speckled brown molly - Doespots

Brown tabby tom with amber eyes - Squirrelstripe

Dark brown tabby tom with red fins - Adderclaw

11 -> 12 -> 13

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Foxskip's Choice: Chapter One — "Begin" page 6

Characters in this page:

Orange and white tom - Foxpaw

White molly with blue fins - Driftycloud

4, 5 <- 6 -> 7

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Foxskip's Choice: Chapter One — "Begin" pages 1-3

Characters in these pages:

Orange and white tom - Foxpaw

White molly with blue fins - Driftycloud

Prologue -> 1, 2, 3 -> 4, 5

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Foxskip's Choice: Chapter One - "Begin" page 17

Completely forgot to post yesterday, sorry everyone!

Also going to start matching the character descriptions in page posts to what they are in the allegiances 🫡

Characters in this page:

Foxlike ginger tom with brown eyes and a white underbelly - Foxpaw

Small brown tom with amber eyes and orange gills - Pinepaw

Thin-furred pale yellow she-cat with blind olive-coloured eyes - Sandyfur

Ruddy orange tom with amber eyes - Firepelt

Pale, bluish-gray she-cat with yellow eyes and pale orange fins - Bluebellstar

White she-cat with icy blue eyes, pale blue undertones, and a beautiful blue fishtail - Driftycloud

Silver-striped tom with heterochromatic amber and blue eyes - Gullpaw (Gullstalk)

16 → 17 → 18, 19

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Foxskip's Choice: Chapter One — "Begin" page 13

Characters in this page:

Orange and white tom - Foxpaw

White molly with blue fins - Driftycloud

Bluish-gray molly with sea-green eyes - Waterwave

Pale speckled brown molly - Doespots

Dark brown tabby tom with red fins - Adderclaw

12 -> 13 -> 14

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Driftycloud and Foxpaw ~

No one sucks up to Foxpaw's mentor quite like he does... I have so much planned for these two that I can't wait to show you guys :))