#descriptive words

[futurebird]

Descriptive words for the exoskeletons of ants:

striate - with many parallel grooves tuberculate - with little protrusions covering the surface reticulate - split into irregular cells opaque - light cannot pass through translucent - light can pass through shiny - reflects light, has visible reflections on the surface matte - textured to absorb and prevent visible reflections. glabrous - smooth punctate/foveolate - covered in little round depressions rugulose - wrinkled pilosity - the degree of pilosity refers to how hairy the ant is reclinate hairs - hairs that lay flat tomentum - wooly hairs clavate hairs - hairs that are club-shaped

[redd956]

Some Sickness Writing Refs

Coughing

Hacking Cough

Wheezing

Shuddering

Dry/Wet Cough

Spittle

Phlegm

Mucus

Whistling Cough

Whooping Cough

Rasping

Gasping

Chesty Cough

Throaty

Croup

Chills

Shivering

Feverish

Shakiness

Trembling

Teeth Chattering

Tremors

Goosebumps

Sweaty

Drenched

Cool Skin

Watery Eyes

Bedridden

Stiff

Sore

Housebound

sick-abed

Bedsores

Suffering

Paralyzed

Debilitated

bedrid

Unconscious

Snooze

Groggy

bedfast

Dehydrated

Pale

Immobilized

Red-faced

Feeble

Incapacitated

Hospitalized

Feverish

Sweaty

Sweltering

Red-Faced

Drenched

Soaking

Teetering

Hot to touch

Beads of Sweat

Heat exhaustion

Damp Clothing

Delirious

Febrile

Clammy

Lightheaded

[blackrosesandwhump]

Words to Describe Blood

For all your whumping and writing needs.

Bead

Congeal

Drench

Drip

Drop

Fleck

Flow

Gush

Leach

Leak

Ooze

Pool

Puddle

Rivulet

Saturate

Seep

Smear

Soak

Speck

Spill

Spatter

Splash

Splatter

Spray

Sprinkle

Spurt

Stain

Stream

Surge

Tinge

Trickle

[kcarkwright]

Texture Words to Make the Reader Think You're Smarterer Than You Are

Gotta trick them into feeling like you know what you're talking about, right?

Abrade (abrading, abrasive) - To be broken down via friction/erosion

Barb (barbed) - having quills or spines or thorns calculated to wound

Bristle (bristled, bristly) having a still and prickly texture

Bolster (bolstered) - padded support

Burnish (burnished) - polished via rubbing

Coagulate (coagulated) - a liquid changed to a semi-solid texture, usually over time

Corrugate (corrugated) - shaped into ridges/groves or wrinkles

Crenelate (crenelated) - ridges over a relatively flat surface. Named after the gaps on top of fortified castle walls for archers to shoot from provided cover.

Diaphanous - a very fine texture that is translucent

Distension (Distended) - expansion via pressure from within. Synonym of bloated—although carries a different meaning when used medically

Emblazon (emblazoned) - inscribed with intricate design; synonym to embellished

Hirsute - hairy

Incise (incised, incision) - to carve into a surface

Keen - multiple meanings. Can mean: sharpened edge; extremely cold; clear scent/sound.

Lusterless - Dull. Posh older sibling to lackluster

Mellifluous - Having a smooth, rich flow

Ossify (ossified) - rigid or fixed into place

Patinated - Having a green or brown film produced by oxidation

Plumose - having many fine filaments [usually used to describe antennae, as exampled here. Look at that Silk Moth, isn't he cute?! TW: bugs]

Serrated - having a jagged, sawlike edge

Shirr (shirred) - gathered together in rows, usually stitched

Slovene (slovenly) - messy and dirty

Stodgy - dull and uninspired; heavy and filling

Suppurate (suppurated) - to produce or discharge, usually pus

Tessellation (tessellated) - patterned by repeated shapes without space in the middle

Unctuous - oily, greasy

Whet (whetted) - sharpened

[ihasafandom]

Problem as a Venom writer that might be applicable to other people and other types of fic and ofic:

too few words for a symbiote's biomass and other structures.

I've got:

flesh/tissue/matter = biomass, biomatter (the one I have the most trouble with in writing)

blood & internal fluids = xenoplasm, protoplasm, plasmatic matrix, biofluid

body = soma, being

skin = membrane, dermis, dermal tissue

head = pseudohead, pseudocranial protrustion

limbs = pseudopods, tendrils, tentacles, extrusions

sensory systems = chemo/photo/thermo/mechano/electro/nocic/etc receptors/sensors

teeth = dentition (fangs and teeth seem fine to me still too)

and ones that are specific to my HCs:

bit that connects to host's brain = holdfast

bit that connects out of material world = threshhold

bit that connects threshhold to pocket dimension = gullet maybe?

Anyone else have any others?

[btrflyng]

It tastes...

acidic

ashy

bitter

burnt

buttery

chalky

chemical

chewy

clean

creamy

crunchy

delicious

dry

earthy

fatty

fizzy

hot

lactic

like cardboard

musty

poisonous

pungent

salty

scorched

sharp

smoky

sour

spicy

sweet

tasteless

vegetal

[ardent-reflections]

How can I describe my life to you? I think a lot, listen to music. I'm fond of flowers.

Susan Sontag

[thewatcher727]

Updated 15th November 2024

Time for introductions!

Greetings to all you lovely people. My name is Jack (or John as I commonly go by). Welcome to my Tumblr! I took an interest in writing FanFictions back in 2012. I’ve written several stories, also took breaks here and there, but now I am back and writing primarily for Sonic! It’s a franchise I’ve adored since I was a kid and I always wanted to find the confidence to write stories around them. With that said and done, I post regular previews to my next updates. Feel free to drop me a message anytime!

FanFiction Profile:

https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4420290/Assassin-s-Creed-Master

Archive of Our Own Profile:

https://archiveofourown.org/users/AssassinsCreedMaster

Writing & Reviewing Tips & Advice:

I've been writing FanFictions for over 10 years now. It's safe to say I've learned a thing or two. That's why I wanted to take this time to share what I have learned with you guys. However, one thing I do want to make perfectly clear is I am not a professional writer at all. These tips are solely based on my own personal experiences.

Review Tips:

What Is Constructive Criticism?

Don't Be Afraid To Speak Your Mind

Understand The Difference Between Constructive Feedback And Just Being Mean

Explain Properly Why You Like Or Dislike Something

Don't Take Offense If The Reader Doesn't Decide To Take Your Feedback On. It's Up To Them

Remember, At The End Of The Day, It Is Just Your Opinion. You Might Not Always Be Factually Right

Writing A Review Tips:

How To Differentiate Between Criticism And Rudeness

Expressing Your True Thoughts

Clarify How Feedback Benefits The Story

Explaining Likes Or Dislikes

Don't Be Offended If Your Feedback Isn't Taken

Be Specific With Examples

Offer Solutions, Not Just Critiques

Even If There Were Several Negatives, Focus On The Positive Aspects Too

Discuss Various Aspects In Your Review

How I Write A Review

What To Look For When Writing A Review

Writing Tips:

Never Think You're Done

Ask For Help

Never Think You Are The Best

Identifying Your Unique Style

Upload Schedules

Don't Worry About Making It Perfect

Have Fun

Be Inspired, Not Controlled

Make Sure To Have People Who Tell You The Truth, Not What You Want To Hear

How To Make A Scene Immersive

There’s Always Different Ways To Approach Writing

Revise and Shine

Portraying Characters Out Of Character

Unnecessary Descriptions

Writing Description Notes:

These notes describe various styles and specific details, and they will be continuously updated. Feel free to use any of them for your stories as you see fit! Additionally, please feel free to contribute your own notes and ideas via message.

Writing Description Notes

A handy list of my Sonic FanFictions:

The Untold Tales Verse

Have you ever wondered what Sonic and friends were up to between thrilling escapades? The Untold Tales Verse is a groundbreaking series that unravels the enigmatic gaps in the Sonic universe

Sonic: The Tournament of Chaos

Plot Summary: Weeks have passed since liberating the world from Dr. Eggman. The announcement of the mysterious tournament with the Chaos Emeralds as the prize calls Sonic the Hedgehog back once again. Determined to win the powerful gems, Sonic assembles his team for their toughest battle yet. (Story 1 of the Untold Tales Verse)

Status: Completed

FanFiction: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14084460/1/Sonic-The-Tournament-of-Chaos

Archive of Our Own: https://archiveofourown.org/works/49636771/chapters/125281660

Be One World, Be The Light

Plot Summary: Plagued with nightmares of a future that never came to be, Silver the Hedgehog seeks answers in the past. Meanwhile, Blaze the Cat is confronted by a being like no other who threatens to erase those she cares for. Join the heroes as they learn some secrets are best remained buried. (Story 2 of the Untold Tales Verse)

Status: Completed

FanFiction: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14128690/1/Be-One-World-Be-The-Light

Archive of Our Own: https://archiveofourown.org/works/49716742/chapters/125491246

Our New Life Together

Plot Summary: Reunited at last, Blaze and Silver begin their new lives together in the Sol Dimension. While spirits are high, emotional pain continues to leave invisible scars. Follow the reunited friends as they learn the true meaning of friendship and adventure. (Spin-Off of the Untold Tales Verse)

Status: Completed

FanFiction: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14165460/1/Our-New-Life-Together

Archive of Our Own: https://archiveofourown.org/works/49951156/chapters/126114025

Sonic Chronicles: Return of the Dark Brotherhood

Plot Summary: Shade's loyalty is put to the test as the Nocturnus Clan make their return. As they face their greatest challenge yet, the heroes reflect on the memories they've made and the bonds of their friendship that will last forever. With high stakes and dangerous obstacles ahead, they must come together to save their world one last time. (Story 3 of the Untold Tales Verse)

Status: Completed

FanFiction: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14214179/1/Sonic-Chronicles-Return-of-the-Dark-Brotherhood

Archive of Our Own: https://archiveofourown.org/works/49951984/chapters/126116539

After The Storm

Plot Summary: The heroes find themselves grappling with the aftermath of their greatest challenges yet. Memories of triumph and sacrifice linger as they lean on each other for support. With the past as their guide and the future as their horizon, they stand resolute, ready to write the next chapter of their legendary journey. (Story 4 of the Untold Tales Verse)

Status: In Progress (Updated 14th September 2024)

FanFiction: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14341784/1/After-The-Storm

Archive of Our Own: https://archiveofourown.org/works/54817303/chapters/138943699

Sonic X: Gotta Go Fast Again Verse

Sonic X: Gotta Go Fast again is a thrilling continuation of the beloved anime, promising action-packed escapades and heartwarming moments as our heroes embark on their next chapter.

Sonic X: Gotta Go Fast Again

Plot Summary: After the defeat of the Meterax, Sonic and his friends return home, relieved to finally be back where they belong. However, their respite is short-lived as new adventures beckon. With peace restored, Sonic, Tails, Knuckles, and the rest of the gang find themselves facing fresh challenges and foes. Sonic’s back in style! So watch out… For Sonic X!

Status: In Progress (Updated 15th November 2024)

FanFiction: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14344080/1/Sonic-X-Gotta-Go-Fast-Again

Archive of Our Own: https://archiveofourown.org/works/54991219/chapters/139406080

Solo Chronicles

Dive into Sonic's world through standalone stories that break free from the constraints of continuity, offering fresh adventures and endless tales.

The Lone Guardian: Shadow's Search For Purpose In A New World

Plot Summary: Shadow the Hedgehog finds himself at a crossroad. After living for over 100 years, he is filled with a sense of emptiness, wondering what his purpose is now that he has outlived his friends and allies. As he wanders through the deserted Station Square and visits Angel Island, he is visited by a friendly face who helps him to understand that he still has a purpose.

Status: Completed

FanFiction: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14196978/1/The-Lone-Guardian-Shadow-s-Search-For-Purpose-In-A-New-World

Archive of Our Own: https://archiveofourown.org/works/50273557

Chaos At Play: Sonic & Friends Take On The Ultimate Day Off

Plot Summary: Sonic and his friends take a much-needed break from their usual battles with Eggman, enjoying a day of fun and relaxation. As they explore their world without the pressure of danger looming over them, they discover new things about each other and themselves, forging stronger bonds along the way.

Status: Completed

FanFiction: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14200635/1/Chaos-At-Play-Sonic-Friends-Take-On-The-Ultimate-Day-Off

Archive of Our Own: https://archiveofourown.org/works/50830051

Sonic & Amy's First Date: A Night To Remember

Plot Summary: After years of asking, Sonic finally agrees to take Amy out on a date. But the blue hedgehog has no idea what to do on a date. Join the two hedgehogs as they experience a night to remember forever.

Status: Completed

FanFiction: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14203138/1/Sonic-Amy-s-First-Date-A-Night-To-Remember

Archive of Our Own: https://archiveofourown.org/works/51156406

Whispers In The Storm

Plot Summary: In the midst of a stormy night, Amy finds unexpected solace and security when Shadow seeks refuge in her cottage. As the rain persists, their shared moments become a cherished memory, leaving both of them contemplating the possibility of something new. Through acts of gratitude and heartfelt conversations, their connection deepens, revealing the potential for a lasting bond.

Status: Completed

FanFiction: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14292740/1/Whispers-In-The-Storm

Archive of Our Own: https://archiveofourown.org/works/51156646

Under The Sun, Beside The Star

Plot Summary: In a world finally at peace after the absence of Eggman and Starline, Sun the Hedgehog finds the courage to ask out his long-time crush, Staria Amantha. Together, Sun and Staria navigate the highs and lows of their budding relationship, discovering that love can be just as thrilling and unpredictable as any battle they've faced before. (Non-canon story set within the Werehog Verse)

Status: Completed

FanFiction: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14299175/1/Under-The-Sun-Beside-The-Star

Archive of Our Own: https://archiveofourown.org/works/51649651

The Art of Dance

Plot Summary: As the Celestial Yuletide loomed on the horizon, Blaze prepared to embark on another Christmas keeping suitors at bay. But her plans take an interesting twist when Silver unexpectedly dropped by for another visit. Little did he know, this particular visit would lead him to an intriguing crossroads of a shared adventure, where they discover the true magic of the art of dance.

Status: Completed

FanFiction: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14310640/1/The-Art-of-Dance

Archive of Our Own: https://archiveofourown.org/works/52520977

Gala of Secrets

Plot Summary: Shadow and Rouge are assigned to infiltrate a high-society gala to recover a dangerous illegal artifact. As they navigate the glamorous but treacherous world of the elite, Shadow's past comes to light once more, bringing new challenges to light. Through thrilling espionage and unexpected revelations, Shadow and Rouge discover the power of trust and friendship in the face of adversity.

(Co-written with FantasyLover88!)

Status: Completed

FanFiction: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14366564/1/Gala-of-Secrets

Archive of Our Own: https://archiveofourown.org/works/56791795

Tumblr Exclusive Writing Snippets:

These are basically just random little one shot ideas I have for short and simple stories. They won't have as much writing detail as my longer stories simply because I just wanted these little fics to tell their tale and leave it at that. Enjoy.

Grief

Plot Summary: The world was saved, but at what cost?

Link: https://thewatcher727.tumblr.com/post/708869363083722752/tumblur-exclusive-one-shot-grief

Thank You, Amy

Plot Summary: He never thanked her for her kindness... Until now.

Link: https://thewatcher727.tumblr.com/post/708903835723251712/tumblr-exclusive-one-shot-thank-you-amy

Partners Forever

Plot Summary: Shadow has something he really needs to share with Rouge.

Link: https://thewatcher727.tumblr.com/post/708904149510750208/tumblr-exclusive-one-shot-partners-forever

Omega's Quest For Societal Integration

Plot Summary: Omega excels at many things, but social interaction is not amongst his many skills.

Link: https://www.tumblr.com/thewatcher727/708982688851410944/tumblr-exclusive-one-shot-omegas-quest-for

My Favorite Pillow

Plot Summary: Silver would do anything for Blaze, including being her favorite pillow when she's exhausted.

Link: https://thewatcher727.tumblr.com/post/709345935722938368/tumblr-exclusive-one-shot-my-favourite-pillow

The Rage Of A Gentle Soul

Plot Summary: Mephiles is about to face the most dangerous being of all - a gentle soul consumed by rage.

Link: https://www.tumblr.com/thewatcher727/709785881501925376/tumblr-exclusive-one-shot-the-rage-of-a-gentle

You're My Brother

Plot Summary: Sonic and Tails reflect on their adventures together.

Link: https://www.tumblr.com/thewatcher727/709983044341219328/tumblr-exclusive-one-shot-youre-my-brother

Guardians

Plot Summary: Knuckles and Blaze reflect on their roles as guardians.

Link: https://www.tumblr.com/thewatcher727/710613374615126016/tumblr-exclusive-guardians

I Miss Him Too

Plot Summary: Rouge just wanted to know if Shadow was really gone again.

Link: https://www.tumblr.com/thewatcher727/711247550498439168/tumblr-exclusive-i-miss-him-too

Cooking Lessons With Silver

Plot Summary: Romance in the kitchen?

Link: https://www.tumblr.com/thewatcher727/711881748974288896/tumblr-exclusive-cooking-lessons-with-silver

Who's Weak Now?

Plot Summary: Infinite makes Shadow relive his worse moment.

Link: https://www.tumblr.com/thewatcher727/712515963622490112/tumblr-exclusive-whos-weak-now

High Five Mishap

Plot Summary: Amy doesn't quite realize her own strength at times.

Link: https://www.tumblr.com/thewatcher727/713150096977657856/tumblr-exclusive-one-shot-high-five-mishap

Storm Preparations

Plot Summary: Team Dark hunker down for the night as a storm rolls in.

Link: https://www.tumblr.com/thewatcher727/713784233154494464/tumblr-exclusive-storm-preparations

The Outsider

Plot Summary: Blaze has always felt like an outcast, until now. Link: https://www.tumblr.com/thewatcher727/714418448587014144/tumblr-exclusive-the-outsider

Story Time With Shadow

Plot Summary: Shadow has quite a talent for storytelling. Link: https://www.tumblr.com/thewatcher727/715052667581366272/tumblr-exclusive-story-time-with-shadow

The Joys Of Chao Dolls

Plot Summary: Omega has quite the fascination with Chao.

Link: https://www.tumblr.com/thewatcher727/715686831089500160/tumblr-exclusive-one-shot-the-joys-of-chao-toys

The Last Dance

Plot Summary: Why does Rouge have to be so difficult?

Link: https://www.tumblr.com/thewatcher727/728521629009870848/tumblr-exclusive-one-shot-the-last-dance

[shuckle24]

It is Cold

The weather is cold and listless. The seething sea hostile and frigid, the air cruel, piercing, and pregnant with an apocalyptic volume of water vapour, a tsunami threatening to burst forth out of the strained intermolecular forces of the paper-thin, unforgiving atmosphere. 

It is cold. The very spaces between the air molecules, the vacuum that is the staggering majority of the universe, the absolute nothingness that exists between two adjacent subatomic particles, even the regions of the infinite expanse of spacetime where the fields of quantum physics exhibit no curve or bend, even nothingness itself was cold. A chilling, merciless, sharp cold. A kind of coldness that is addictive. That burns torturously but enticingly, that slices the heart bitterly and lovingly. The kind of cold that gets to you. That gets to your bones, to your souls, to your memories. That chills your evolutionary desire to maintain homeostasis and leaves you longing to curl up and freeze, to submit, to give yourself up, to obey to the calmness, to the stillness of the coolness. 

The weather is cold. It is very cold. 

[psychologicalnausea]

Okay writers...

Do any of you know the name for when you have wicked bad writers block on the story you are supposed to be writing, so you get an idea for a different story and start writing on that, but then it happens again and again and again and suddenly you have 80 half written stories and writers block on all of them so you drown yourself in another story? Is there a name for that other than PURE HELL?! Because I have it and I need the cure.

Alternatively, have any of you had a scene in your head so you write it out and then these ideas just keep coming on how to expand and move the plot along even though you haven't done any planning and then suddenly you're staring at a completed story with no idea how you accomplished it?

[redd956]

Words: Sense of Smell

Scent

Auroma

Stentch

Sickening

Stale

Moldy

Natural

Sweet

Refreshing

Pungent

Decaying

Waft

Perfume

Burnt

Rotten

Potant

Fresh

Cologne

Douse

Clean

Chemically

Earthy

Noxious

Sniff

Appetizing

Outdoorsy

Smog

Charred

Dank

Rancid

Smokey

Decomposed

Cheesy

Whiff

Sulfer/Rotten Eggs

Antiseptic

Stink

Citrus

Fagrant

Bleach

Faint

Sour

Musk

Oily

Nauseating

Reeking

Redolent

Overwhelming

Sharp

Seasoned

Odor

Must

Powerful

Putrid

Mouth Watering

Aged

Dull

Ancient

Fishy

Eye Watering

Minty

Floral

Resinous

Inhale

Savor

Spoiled

Amrbosial

Spicy

Dusty

[storiesgoeveron]

View this post on Instagram

A post shared by Kyle Warford (@storiesgoeveron)

[molecularspaghetti]

Three

Heaven’s music in child’s laughter

Hell’s darkness in brothers slaughter

And in the dirt

consumed by all the night of the cosmos

Death speaks.

And says to Her

“show them the meaning of sight”

And so She did.

But the poison is seeping through.

And the balance has begun to rot.

Walking eternity.

A passing wraith.

Judgment higher

Than any faith.

[milo-the-crotonian]

Homeless Man on the Moon

Oh, there in that crater was a nebulous nomad,

Out on the gray fields of Selene's snowmen:

He plucked peonies that shone silver sheen;

Emitting eminent rays as his rugged face gleams.

His beard of moon-dusted stalactites,

Was as worn and ugly as Vulcan's might!

Although, he was not gorgon-tranced

His placid eyes reflected the petal's dance:

Flickering bands of white and chrome—and

Fields of elderberries wherever he roams.

[aiviwaivy]

The Silence I Crave

The beeping and clicking and buzzing never stops. The incessant hospital noises drown out any peace or quiet, stealing the silence I crave. They fill my mind with reminders of my illness and isolation instead of comfort and healing.

The high-pitched ringing when call buttons are pushed jolts me awake, even in the middle of the night when I'm trying to rest. Doctors talk loudly outside my room, discussing me like I'm not even here, hovering just beyond the door but never coming in. Nurses gossip as they walk down the hallway, chatting and laughing without realizing I can hear every word. These noises amplify the distance between me and everyone else, dragging my confinement and loneliness into sharp focus.

The machines monitoring me beep constantly, a high-tech soundtrack signaling that I'm still alive. The IV feeds fluid into my arm hour after hour, clicking softly each time a new dose arrives. Alarms shrill when a monitor goes askew. All the noises work in concert to remind me how fragile and weak I am, hooked up to tubes and IV bags and stripped of my independence.

The hospital noises drown out any peace and quiet, filling my mind with my illness instead of comfort and hope for recovery. They make me feel small and powerless, just a patient in a hospital bed waiting for someone to take care of me. I hate how helpless these noises make me feel. I just want silence.

[kuro-tsuki-san]

also with practice it is possible to learn to his and growl and other sounds. So the character may well be doing exactly that. Or not be human and have other sounds to their voice.

5 things your character can't do while speaking

Choke. Just think about it, seriously. Think about what choking is and imagine speaking while it’s happening. That would fuckin’ hurt, man.

Hiss. Look, it’s just not possible, okay? No matter how “evil” you want your character to seem.

Snarl. Animals snarls. The Beast from Beauty and the Beast snarls. The Hulk snarls. You know who doesn’t snarl? PEOPLE WHEN THEY’RE SPEAKING.

Shriek. Come on, 99% of the time, “shriek” is not the word you want.Let’s face it: if you put an exclamation point at the end of the sentence, your reader gets the picture. Don’t bring to mind banshees and screaming toddlers.

Sneer. I’m not even going to bother explaining this one. “SNEER” ISN’T EVEN A SOUND.