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you're a bitter kind
i love you so
(from chapter 141, more words under cut)
I'M SO SORRY THIS TOOK SO LONG...i've been lost in the gamer zone, but also this has been one of the absolute hardest chapters to write so far, because i took a difficult structure (dives) and made it even more difficult by combining it with action!!! it took a lot of thought and tweaking to make it work, from a technical and conceptual standpoint.
the only constant throughout it all has been that song. Tenenbaum by the paper kites. it's one of the oldest "kiddo" songs and it completely drove me through this chapter and this art. call them radiant, call them mother's eyes...... don my clothing robes of ancient white..... like this is the song they share with az, just like Nothing Arrived by the Villagers is the song they share with frisk.
i hope it comes together for you readers like it SOMEHOW, IMPOSSIBLY, came together for me!!! these scenes were years in the making!!!
#undertale#chara#asriel#toriel#asgore#frisk#naya#fanfiction#undertale oc#jack of all trades#joat#my art#chapter art#i really really really dig this piece#it's a callback to the one i did for tori's dive#but this i feel is more refined...#i always had the visual of using undertale's traditional sepia palette and having it feel grainy. filmy.#originally i wanted a long lyric comic with tenenbaum but this honestly feels cooler#utdr
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weird bird!
#ive had this dude stuck in my brain for like a MONTH NOWWW#i love him forever and always. i NEED to catch up on my hero good lird#i was going to refine this sketch more but i dornt feel like it !!! it looks otay as it is#present mic#hizashi yamada#mha#bnha#nathan art#kolejka.plik#<- putting this thang in the queue because i am nervous!!! ive never posted my hero art before.....
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wereramb design i was toying with last night...
#i feel like its a little simplistic (?) but also considering that i've never been one for character design i'm happy enough LOL#besides i can always refine it later...#ramb#deltarune#deltarune spoilers#my main ideas were umm. incorporating the shadow mantle into his existing clothes + keeping the general shape of his. hair/ears/whatever#those are because i feel like a fight against a wereramb would be more fucked up if he was more easily recognizeable as ramb...#like yuppppppp heres your reminder that this guy who loves you and has been trying his best to do what (at least he thinks) is best for you#is now the guy you have to actively fight against (Given the already tragic nature of his story im imagining that a fight would Not really#have a happy ending. LOL.)#And also I wanted to give him cunty boots. I also just wanted to do that for fun
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"Stop grieving already... I told you I'll be back..."

Quick. Get that out there before I start to hate it!!!!
I took a sketch from one of my upcoming doodle pages. Since I liked it I thought I might as well refine it. The blue/orange hue is so satisfying for my eyes, I almost love the non coloured version more...
Drawing shadows with lines at an almost meditating pace did the trick for me again i guess.. I could kinda relax while doing this, which is basically a big as goal achieved on it's own right now...
I am so tempted to critic the shit out of it again.. BUT I'm not gonna do that.. I will not let my fucking brain ruin this hobby for me again..
Not. this. time.
#hansry#kcd2#kingdom come deliverance 2#kingdom come 2#kcd#suchdol aftermarth for I was not prepared for the game to jump to the next cutscene#i am going back and forth whether I should refine this a bit more for hansry week#since it fits a prompt... or I'll just gonna reblog it i dunno#of course I am giving you my song rec with this as I always do#also what do you mean my stuff always matches my personal state of emotion#also what do you mean Henry is like my motivation and inspiration for drawing.. gone and at risk to never come back#*finger guns* Ayyeee~ Big fan of roasting myself again#nah for realsies... I feel better today.. like I start to embrace tough times a bit more#and handling them despite feeling shitty#if you only knew how your guys feedback is helping with this#I am horrible at telling but you all really are <3#icy's art#maybe a WIP
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experimenting with different brushes
#what#my art#bocchi the rock!#bocchi fanart#hitori gotou#unsure how I feel about it#will prob try and refine it more#haha yeah
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âeveryone in mdzs is morally greyâ is not the amazingly nuanced take some people think it is. infact, itâs the opposite. assigning one single kind of morality to the entire cast of characters (who are richly diverse in personality, background, personal principles and their actions) IS the simplified, flattened version of perspective that they are trying to fight. pivoting so hard against the grain, you end up with an even worse understanding of canon. the characters in mdzs belong to a whole spectrum of morality and that is the point. if everyone was morally grey, the books wouldnât make half the impact that they did, especially when it came to social commentary.
#also can we please stop with the rhetoric that morally grey characters are automatically more interesting than the rest??#and that irl humans are all morally grey?? noo??? tf theyâre not???#idk how ppl think that assigning every individual to the same aspect of morality is somehow the more refined & nuanced pov#when in truth itâs trying to conflate the apples and oranges and bananas when the differences are so stark and clear when compared#wei wuxian#mdzs#canon jiang cheng#mdzs meta#mxtx mdzs#mo dao zu shi#lan wangji#jin guangshan#jin guangyao#also the kind of morality has to be a consistent trait of a character#a morally good person can inflict undue violence and itâd be a mistake they try to atone#while a morally grey person might inflict violence and feel they are justified in their actions because they have their âreasonsâ#it is NOT solely the actions that should be considered but also the characterâs response to it & the way they behave going forward#super sure i have touched on this before but ehhhhh what is this blog if not me regurgitating my thoughts a bajillion times đđ
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Your art is jaw-droppingly stunning. Can I ask, how do you render things so beautifully? Can you give any tips? Especially with colored lineart.
Aww thank you so much, that's so sweet of you to say. <:3
I don't think I can give much advice on rendering; I've always been highly dependent on line-art to portray form and any attempt at lighting more complex than "shade with one layer of a desaturated color on multiply" frightens me.
BUT I can share what I do with line coloring!
This is a drawing I've done both with and without the coloring on the lines, to show the difference it makes.
In general, the color of the lines is just a darker shade of the color surrounding it. The more defined I want a feature, the darker the hue.
The interior lines, everything that goes on inside the outermost line-art, is where I put most of my attention. I separate the lines into tiers of importance and color accordingly, with the most important things getting darker (and often thicker) line-art.
Here's a cropped image of Ambroys holding a very expensive future murder weapon to try and show what I mean. The big circles are the base color of his dumb face and ludicrous glove, and the smaller circles are the color of the line-art for each of his features.
The hierarchy tends to go like this:
Important Features: eyes, mouths, hands, forearms, anything that I want to be emphasized or needs to be very clear, etc. gets dark line-art. This separates these features from the rest of the image and makes them pop.
Secondary Forms: joints, noses, the edge of bangs over the face, the lines between fingers, big wrinkles on evil old bastards, cravats etc. get medium line-art. These forms are meant to be distinct from what surrounds them (fingers shouldn't look melted together, the hair is not part of the forehead) but giving them dark line-art would draw attention from the important parts (for example, Ambroys' punchable grin), so they get slightly darker line-art to make the forms clear but not distracting.
Fiddly Little Details: fabric folds, flesh creases, strands of hair, seams in clothing, etc. These add texture, but I don't want them to be making everything look like a mess of scribbles. So these have light line-art, relative to the base color, to allow them to blend more than the important features.
Sometimes I'll make the line color more saturated or a slightly different hue (cooler or warmer), but it depends on the image and how much skill I randomly roll in color usage that day. It just looks more interesting than just going over the lines with a low-opacity brush of the base color.
When it comes to the exterior lines, I have two approaches. If I want a form to be bolder or stand out I tend to leave the outside lines around the form black or a very dark color. If I want something to look softer or blend into the surrounding image, or want the form to appear to glow, I color the outside lines closer to what colors surround the form or a brighter, paler color.
For example, all the characters here have nearly black exterior line-art. The background objects all have pale line-art, so they don't overwhelm the characters. Even objects in the mid-ground have slightly lighter line-art than the figures so that the eye is (hopefully) drawn to the characters instead of my labored attempt at drawing a cash register.
Or here, the parts of Ambroys that are en flambĂŠ have orange-red exterior line-art, while everything else has dark exterior line-art.
Like most things with my art, it's not hard to do, it just takes a long time. :P
And of course, this isn't the "right" way to color line-art! My art style is pretty cartoony, heavy on line-art and low on shading and very focused on silly characters making silly faces. A softer, more realistic, more rendered style, or one that is more graphic and focuses more on silhouette, would likely require a different approach. But regardless, I hope this ramble is helpful!
#asks#i never feel quite qualified to give art advice... but this is less advice and more just my personal approach#it could use tweaking and refining i'm sure!#but anyway super flattered by this ask thank you anon!#chocodile did the heavy lift with the lineart color on that ambroys on fire pic but i liked that pic better than others i had with glow#thanks chocodile for being better at color than me!
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DAY 4 - Favourite Alt Hermit
NPC Grian anyone?
couldnt decide which was more tragic NPC or robot G so i just went with NPC
its been raining since last night so i wanted to go for something dramatic
had something more dramatic planned cuz i didnt wanna pick between EX, Hesknight and NPC but i realized thats a bit too ambitios for me for an everyday challange
#hermitaday#soulart#hermitcraft#npc grian#do i tag grian too?#ig#grian#went a bit more loose on the lines for this one#wasnt feeling the more refined-ish ones i usually do
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not enough discussion about the gavins' complicated relationship with feminine-coded/beauty products, i don't think.
#for klavier because it's not as direct it's about how we never see him actually wearing lipstick? even though apollo literally attends#a concert of his which is where you'd most expect him to wear makeup. but apparently he just doesnt. or at least not in public#klavier gavin#kristoph gavin#i feel like there are several ways you can read into it. the misogyny/toxic masculinity one is really obvious clearly with kristoph's#singling out of men specifically and klavier's (probably accidental?) condescending manner of calling women 'fraulein' plus his general#mildly patronising attitude towards many of the women in the game (also probably unintentional)#(i think he's trying to be charming and it's coming off wrong to some of them. like ema. and me.)#but i feel like there's also maybe an element of... inherent perfecfionism to it? like both of these products are conventionally beautifyin#products and kristoph while he is open to showing people he uses nail polish specifically chooses one that's clear and missable unless you#see him apply it. he also feels the need to justify his use of it and specifically spell it out as something he chooses to do rather than#needs to do even though duh. that should be obvious.#idk there's just something about his seeming need to take control of that narrative that i find interesting. his need to spin it into a#'there's nothing wrong with my nails but I had the foresight to see that even the smallest parts of my appearance should be kept immaculate#and it's a choice i'm making to refine an already adequate part of my personage /not/ to cover some unsightly defect.' the need to emphasis#that specifically is so. hm. and with klavier i could see it being a case of him liking makeup liking the pops of colour yet being unwillin#to admit to it because he's afraid that other people might see it as him being dissatisfied with his own appearance regardless of if he is#or isn't. or even just perceiving colourful makeup as being unseemly because it's so overt and unnatural.#like i can see this as them both viewing 'real' beauty to be that which is inherent to a person and seemingly effortless#thus somehow negating the beauty which one achieves through cosmetics or other external means.#and if you want to use external means to achieve beauty or neatness or whatever then your only valid options are those which blend into you#natural state. like clear nail polish. or really awful spray tan.#i feel like klavier's less confined by these ideas (if they hold merit at all) considering he actually owns coloured lipstick and he wears#jewellery (admittedly quite 'masculine' jewellery no gems or pearls or anything like that but jewellery nonetheless) but i think it just#makes it more interesting that he doesnt seem quite able to cross the line anyway. like it's that ingrained into his system.#anyway that's all i've got. you guys should tell me what you think too#annotations
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Nya Significant Harassment
#no significant harassment#rain world#rain world fanart#egg art#eggmoon creations#I could refine this more but I don't feel like it
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They call me the fucking drawer. The redrawer. of my own draws. Ogs are both from 2019 ^_^

#ignore me aphmau postingim not cringe guys please. its just what i drew for like 2 years straight when i first started drawing#My improvement goes kind of crazy. Id be surprised if i DIDNT get better in 6 years tbf BUT STILL.#tried a new thang with the halftones in the first one i kind of like it#also put in a LOT more detail than i normally do/did. trying to do that more#ANYWAYS#doodles#art#fanart#my art#for both of them i rlly wanted to capture more emotion i feel like in my old art i really struggled to express anything#bcuz id spend so many hours refining that i eventually lost the fluidity of the og sketch. if that makes sense#so they feel very stiff and dont show any kind of personality#especially with the first one i wanted to show more abt how i think abt the character and not just. showing off her outfit or whatever#Overall very happy with how these 2 turned out. i might take my art tablet back with me to my dorm but idk if ill ever have time#and it mioght become a distraction WHATEVER I STILL HAVE LIKE 4 DAYS
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All I need to see is you
#mine#tf2#tf2 sniper#this is technically selfship art but feel free to tag as whatever ship you'd like#today i set out to draw on a larger scale + refine my work less and im having way more fun đĽš
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OC stuff is dangerous wdym you just think about that guy and you feel things. You made that thing and itâs come such a long way like theyâve grown and fleshed out and youâre proud of them. And thereâs an indescribable feeling of pride and tenderness and passion and fondness. That âď¸thingie is My Thing and I love them
#_text#put music on that makes you think of them while drawing them and feel one billion emotion and itâs like wow. hits you how much you care#each little brick placed being one more step to making them feel truly and wholly alive. something with hopes and dreams and fears#Rory has really been coming into his own lately and it makes me kinda emotional and I really do not get emotional about much#I really need to elaborate on some of it with art and just substantiate some of my thoughts and feelings cus thereâs just so much#I donât wanna be tooting my own horn cus this post is not just meant for me. itâs for anyone whoâs going through their own process#of making a guy or refining an existing guy. be proud of yourself and step back to admire how theyâve grown!! youâd be surprised by#the various ways things form and add up to create something amazing and uniquely you. all the various sources of input and inspiration#that really is the joy of creation to me. and I love seeing how others characters grow and change and evolve. being part of that process#is especially deeply meaningful and important to me. nothing makes me happier than being a small part of someone elseâs work#as someone who hates failing and loathes themselves deeply. I can sincerely say with my whole heart that just trying is an amazing step#put down literally anything. see what does and doesnât work. get the feel for the kind of person they are and then refine that.#mix logic with your gut feeling. emotion with reason. use existing lore or make it up! creation and success is not linear and#it definitely is deeply demoralising at times and as someone pretty cynical about the whole thing. and who hates myself#I can say it really is worth it. your ideas are worth it and even if you donât believe in yourself yet#the spirit of my post at least is cheering for you!! because seven+ months ago I was in a pit of nothingness and just.#making zero and putting her out there for the first time has changed so much for the better for me#I will always cheer on anyoneâs OC stuff. they - and you - are awesome and should exist and be put out there#thank u for reading. this has been on my mind lately a few times so wanted to ramble
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So I looked at the live action nadder and thought ânot bad but also not greatâ
Then I looked at all the nadder designs we got over the years: the original, the animatronic and the live action. Specifically their heads

And that made me realize what I find so off-putting about the new one:
The mouth is less beak like, the horn on the nose is *massive* for some reason and the horns on stormflyâs head are smaller and also just slightly curved. Which yeah, not a big deal, but it just...wasn't hitting the way the original design did for me. So I tried to make my own version of what I'd make the live action version look like (although this is just like a base concept, so not as spiky, or colored accurately and stuff; it's more about the general look):

I wanted to keep the beak but...gotta give it to the live action, it just didn't work out. I did like the bigger nose horn *however* i would have made it more similar to the animatronic's. I also would have kept the larger horns on the head, they make the dragon look far more imposing in my opinion. Also bigger nostrils. These are tracker class dragons for fucks sake, make them look like it! And something that annoys me on all of the live action designs: the teeth. I don't care if it's "unrealistic", these are dragons! All the dragons have these small teeth and i really wish they had kept at least some of them bigger, even if it's just for the look of it
#might draw a more refined version if i feel like it#but basically if i had to come up with a ârealisticâ design on a whim it would look something like this#maybe a bit different#if i ever do make an actual piece i'll probably change stuff again#like the head shape#idk the deadly nadder's head shape has always been my worst enemy for some reason#fun fact: for like 7 years the deadly nadder was my favorite dragon in the whole franchise#then i started playing school of dragons#and thus began my obsession with woolly howls#anyways#how to train your dragon#httyd#how to train your dragon live action#live action httyd#deadly nadder#dragon art
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my thing with ford is that I feel like he has this high esteem for like...very specific parts of himself. Like his identity as the Author, the Man Who Will Kill Bill Cipher, a future Great Scientist, etc etc, those are the parts of him that he values and considers important
but Ford the man? just...himself? I think he doesn't value himself as just a person all that much. not to project but I think being bullied for specific physical traits as a kid sometimes results in this fractured sense of self. Where you focus on select parts of your identity, specific talents and things you are "good" at, but at the same time you still harbor a lot of unaddressed self-loathing and this increasing inability to understand why other people might love and value you.
thats why he prickles when stan saves him while risking everything...ford would never do that. if given the black and white choice he wouldn't pick clinging to his own life over giving it towards a greater purpose (which is why I feel the kill bill bit with the destabilizer was lowkey a suicide mission)
but of course stan would...and that's hard for ford to understand, especially after 30-40 years of isolation and estrangement.
#text#stanford pines#gravity falls#i just love characters that put their everything into sacrificing themselves because they feel it will give their life purpose or that it#is the only thing that will make up for past mistakes#but then something changes and they end up living on any way#and they have to rediscover what their purpose is#once bill is gone ford rediscovers his purpose in the kids and in helping his brother and repairing their relationship#he can just be valued as a Man#as stan's brother#as mabel and dippers grunkle#and i just find that sweet!#its important for stan to be the one to kill bill#but its also important ford ISNT the one to kill bill#his life can be more than bill#his life IS more than bill#yknow?#not that ford doesnt deserve to curbstomp that Thang but#he is also more than just a machine refined over the course of 30 years for one singular goal
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im not going to lie i have an illuminati type theory that fanfiction has gotten so fucking bad recently as yet another consequence of the pandemic
#because like we all know how the pandemic caused fandom and a lot of more geeky things to become more mainstream#at least in the US#and thats why fandoms are so fucking shite now because everybody isnt weird and cant handle weird shkt#and also everybody stopped having reading comprehension too because of the sudden rapid uptick in content creation and such#like u guys already know what im talking about#theres a reason why i havent seen an actual meme in years#like im talking a real meme. have you seen anything even remotely close to what a meme was like before the pandemic?#its honestly a real shame because i feel like now saying meme feels kind of cringey but it was something genuinely uniting and a wonderful#cultural thing online back then but also maybe thats just my nostalgia coming in since i was a kid back then#but yeah i think as another consequence fanfiction has become significantly worse#because i dont know maybe im looking in the wrong places maybe its a natural development of my taste becoming#more refined#but i feel like its impossible to find good fanfiction these days#like hetalia ao3 has been notorious for sticking out as the only fandom ever that somehow has so much fanfiction and none of it is good#because even when i was in the oukibo trenches i found some good shit in there that id memorize like bible scriptures#but now it kinda feels like every fandoms ao3 is like the hetalia ao3#i thought it was just my taste refining further until i found one good fanfiction recently and IT LIKE#ITS NOT EVEN THAT GOOD. BUT YOU KNOW HOW THERES THAT TYPE OF FANFIC THAT IS JUST#COMPETENTLY WRITTEN AND THE CHARACTERS ARE IN CHARACTER#ITS NOTHING BEAUTIFUL OR SOMETHING YOUD BE LIKE OHHH THIS SHOULD BE A FINE LITERATURE PUBLISHED BOOK#BUT ITS GOOD#ITS A GOOD STORY THAT FEELS LIKE IT WAS WRITTEN BY SOMEONE WHO WATCHED THE SHOW#AND HAS ALL THE BASIC NEEDS TO BE A COMPELLING READ#LIKE DAMN I HAVENT READ SOMETHING LIKE THAT IN FOREVER#bc a lot of good fanfiction isnt the 400k novels that are intense and beautiful#i love those but there can only be so many of them#the majority are these fics that are fun as hell to read and sometimes even stretch to be like 50k words. but they're definately not#intense beautiful prose. it's a fun story made by a fan who wanted to explore an idea or make some scenarios#and i can never find that shit anymore#its always page after page of the most asinine shit with not even the general aura/sprinkle of anything pertaining to the og source in sight
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