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I feel like I've had the same experience several times now: someone does a new translation of a non-English literary classic, and all the critics praise it to the moon, so I go and try to read it, and it's turns out it's just . . . bad? Like, really bad? And weirdly bad?
A while back, I wrote about the case of Pevear and Volokhonsky. Here's another example, which I encountered while doing background research for my novel Almost Nowhere.
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One of my novel's major characters is a literary translator, famous for his rendition of the Persian epic poem Shahnameh ("Book of Kings").
To help me write this character, I tried to read the Shahnameh myself. I started out – where else? – with the translation that seemed to be the gold standard, and which was certainly the most critically lauded.
Namely, the 2006 translation by Dick Davis, in prose with occasional shifts into verse.
Here's how the Shahnameh begins, in Davis' translation:
What does the Persian poet say about the first man to seek the crown of world sovereignty? No one has any knowledge of those first days, unless he has heard tales passed down from father to son. This is what those tales tell: The first man to be king, and to establish the ceremonies associated with the crown and throne, was Kayumars. When he became lord of the world, he lived first in the mountains, where he established his throne, and he and his people dressed in leopard skins. It was he who first taught men about the preparation of food and clothing, which were new in the world at that time. Seated on his throne, as splendid as the sun, he reigned for thirty years. He was like a tall cypress tree topped by the full moon, and the royal farr shone from him. All the animals of the world, wild and tame alike, reverently paid homage to him, bowing down before his throne, and their obedience increased his glory and good fortune.
And here is the same opening, in the 1905 translation by Arthur and Edmond Warner (which I only discovered much later in the process of writing Almost Nowhere):
What saith the rustic bard? Who first designed To gain the crown of power among mankind? Who placed the diadem upon his brow? The record of those days hath perished now Unless one, having borne in memory Tales told by sire to son, declare to thee Who was the first to use the royal style And stood the head of all the mighty file. He who compiled the ancient legendary, And tales of paladins, saith Gaiúmart Invented crown and throne, and was a Sháh. This order, Grace, and lustre came to earth When Sol was dominant in Aries And shone so brightly that the world grew young. Its lord was Gaiúmart, who dwelt at first Upon a mountain; thence his throne and fortune Rose. He and all his troop wore leopard-skins, And under him the arts of life began, For food and dress were in their infancy. He reigned o'er all the earth for thirty years, In goodness like a sun upon the throne, And as a full moon o'er a lofty cypress So shone he from the seat of king of kings. The cattle and the divers beasts of prey Grew tame before him; men stood not erect Before his throne but bent, as though in prayer, Awed by the splendour of his high estate, And thence received their Faith.
Now, I can't speak at all about the source text. I have no idea how faithful or unfaithful these two translations are, and in what ways, in which places.
Still, though. I mean like, come on.
This is an epic poem about ancient kings and larger-than-life heroes.
This is a national epic, half myth and half history, narrating the proud folkloric lineage claimed by a real-world empire.
There is a way that such things are supposed to sound, in English. And it sure as hell isn't this:
What does the Persian poet say about the first man to seek the crown of world sovereignty?
Excuse me? That's your opening line? I thought I was reading a poem, here, not taking a fucking AP World Literature exam!
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Postscript
Some of the critical praise for the Davis translation, quoted on the back cover of my copy (emphasis mine):
"A poet himself, Davis brings to his translation a nuanced awareness of Ferdowsi's subtle rhythms and cadences. His "Shahnameh" is rendered in an exquisite blend of poetry and prose, with none of the antiquated flourishes that so often mar translations of epic poetry." (Reza Aslan, The New York Times Book Review) "Thanks to Davis's magnificent translation, Ferdowsi and the Shahnameh live again in English.” (Michael Dirda, Washington Post) "A magnificent accomplishment . . . [Davis’s translation] is not only the fullest representation of Ferdowsi’s masterpiece in English but the best." (The New York Sun)
#almost nowhere#fyi: the warner and warner translation is out of print now but archive.org has the whole 9-volume thing#hmm i wonder which version of the cypress/moon image is more faithful...#(in davis he's the tree. in warner&warner he's the moon. these are not the same metaphor!)
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I'm super hyped for this game because I think about Modern AUs a lot for Tamlin? It's not normally my genre, but he just gets the muse flowing!
I have a couple variations of MODERN AU that I like for Tamlin! I guess they're more related to scenarios/fic ideas than Tamlin-specific headcanons, but I wanted to share anyway because I'm excited about them.
AMERICANA / HIGH SCHOOL TAMLIN: Tamlin comes from a long line of guy's guys. You know, the typical American dream. His father and his brothers were some kind of sports stars throughout their schooling, then went on to work for their father's company (which was passed down from his father, a lot of nepotism). All Tamlin wants is to take music class, join the school band and maybe take a poetry class because he really loves the arts, but he's build like a Ford F-150 so obviously, he has to be on the football team. Enter the rich kids (the IC). Everyone wants to be them, they're super popular and very cliquey. The leader of the group is the very stylish and spoiled Rhysand. This, my friends, is how we get a classic 90's high school romcom where it turns out both of them are more than what they seem, and they find honest little moments between them hidden away from the prying eyes of their classmates, their fathers and their expectations. Very soft AU.
In most of the Modern AUs, I imagine there's a lot of Tamlin forced to follow in his father's/brothers' footsteps which is always something he isn't passionate about, usually business (sometimes shady, sometimes not).
MERCENARY x RETURNING STUDENT AU / BL-INSPIRED: I don't know if this counts, but it's a self-indulgent headcanon (and fic that I'm writing for myself). It's more urban fantasy, but set in modern times. It's heavily inspired by my favourite BL manhwas. Tamlin's family died in an accident while Tamlin was in university, and shortly after his mother fell ill and into a coma. His father was rich, but dealt in shadier/criminal business, so when he died along with his would-be heirs, his rivals basically tore his company apart and now Tamlin is in a lot of debt. He worked for years to pay back as much as he can, and manage his mother's bills, but now he's in a place where he can go back to school (so he can get better jobs). Moving back into a small college town, he accidentally ends up being roommates with a mercenary-in-disguise (Johan, it's Johan) who initially wants nothing to do with him. Little by little, Johan notices the way Tamlin is struggling to exist, so he helps him out and more and more until they fall in love. In this AU, Tamlin was originally pushed to take business in school because of his father, but he was very passionate about folklore, specifically Fairy folklore (he grew up listening to his mother's stories). When he returns as an adult student, he's in computer science (for the comedy) and sucks at it, which gives room for his mercenary boyfriend to help him. It's very cute. I also love Tamlin being older than all the other students and just not keeping up with the trends.
Anyway, those are my thoughts! Long story short, my kink is writing scenarios/fics where Tamlin is absolutely adored!!!
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Me before tour began: Honestly, all I need is Cruel Summer and august and I will be fine with whatever else she chooses.
Me after seeing the set list: Wait where’s x???😭
#taylor swift#eras tour#i will never be satisfied#but for real I got such a big list of my desired surprise song#i cant decide which one I want#but she fed us with Evermore#and starting with miss Americans???😭😭😭#Im so fucking psyched I’m about to buy the outrageous tickets on stub hub right NOW#i at least got my top two songs PLUS champagne problems to scream that bridge#AND both ready for it and don’t blame me#AND atw10mv of course#but tbh she could play the 8 seconds of static and I would still cry out of pure joy#I’ve been skipping the videos (just wanted the set list) but from what I’ve seen her outfits are STUNNING#i legit cant wait Im about to fly to Las Vegas just do i don’t have to wait until June#tho my outfit isn’t ready just yet#i got eight albums repped I just need folklore and midnights#midnights shouldn’t be hard cuz I really just need something sparkly/bedazzled (aka bejeweled)#but i have no idea what to do for folklore#(minus my nails and the gems I’m gonna put on my face)#i was thinking getting a cardigan but that seems too warm to wear to a concert#and Im thinking of getting a sparkly jacket for midnights#we’ll see#I’ll figure it out#i am nothing If not determined when it comes to finding the perfect costume
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writing new characters for supernatural but british and this story wants so bad to say something about the concept of migration and immigration and the consequences of leaving your home and building a new one. And I don't know what it wants to say about that or why
#I'm not doing this on purpose!!!!!!!#also fun fact I am toying with the idea of Will's family being Travellers who gave up their nomadic lifestyle a generation back or so#it would add a really intresting thematic element to him wandering now#to clarify I have no problem with this theme I'm just like ???? what are you trying to do what is the point you are trying to make about it#in fairness it is in large part my fault because I'm trying to depict accurately british diversity. and because this is a story about#folklore and thus history and roots. it by necessity also talks about immigration.
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I've had an odd nostalgia for the Once Upon a Time series of mediocre short-novel-length fairy tale retellings. I've been wanting to read the retelling of "East of the Sun, West of the Moon" from that line.
The trouble is that there is no such book.
Which makes me want to write it.
Unfortunately, the only straightforward traditional retelling of that fairy tale I want to write doesn't fit with that style.
But thinking about it got me excited about that old idea all over again.
#adventures in writing#why do i get all my best and deepest ideas when in line for confession?#had the above train of thought while waiting#and it brought that story idea back vividly and gave me all sorts of enthusiasm for it#you see there's a strong thread even in the original of christianity vs. paganism#and it could be drawn out to make something very interesting#the heroine is brave and bold and wants to be a saint#recognizes the potential for heroism when she agrees to marry the bear (knows that the old ways hold him under a curse)#but the doubts that her mother introduces are the first time she truly faces fear and she fails#but she insists she can fix everything#and after going around the world and getting help from mysterious women and all four winds#earning treasures and sacrificing them for her husband's sake#she gets the nights alone with him and he won't wake#and she has to face that she *can't* make up for what she did and her best efforts *can't* save him#and finally has to admit that she did an unforgivable wrong#and it's her tears of remorse that finally wake him#(a parallel to the wax that woke him when she betrayed him)#and only *then* does she get the opportunity to wash out the stain (the wax on the shirt) from her sin#and it's not a perfect parallel but there's resonance and it could be lovely#unfortunately i feel like i'd have to do more research on nordic cultures and folklore and i don't really want to do that
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#tropes#my post#i had to make it im not sorry#I LOVE FANTASY SO MUCH PLEASE#BUT THE FUCKING LIKE... the way that so many fantasy worlds handle minority-coded creatures... what the fuck??#would i get hunted down if i tagged fandoms this applies to. i wont do that#COUGH H*RRY P*TTER#COUGH WORLD OF WARCRAFT#COUGH WYNNCRAFT#i know its in more but those are the ones on my mind#wait wynncraft is an extention of minecraft. yeah minecraft also applies#the fucking. Aaughhhhh minecraft villagers literally have golems and golems are literally from jewish folklore bro im in pain#I LOVE MOST OF THESE THINGS IVE MENTIONED not h*rry p*tter though fuck that one#this isnt me hating on them its literally me criticising them which is different#perhaps. just an idea. Dont Do That. dont have antisemitic stereotypes. why is it so hard? its literally not
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you see, Your Honor, you HAVE to pay me to live in Ireland, it's research for a magical girl series--
#my art#sketchbook#irish magical girls#the truth is I'm probably never gonna get the 'accuracy' I'd like incorporating irish myth and folklore into this story idea#at least not without like...... getting a celtic studies degree LMAO and idk if I'm ready for all that#the last thing I need is another celtic tree zodiac moment I'm still so embarrassed about that dlfsajktdsfs ahhaa#it started as something like tokyo mew mew but instead of endangered animals it was irish deities#then it turned into something more like warehouse 13#now it's not really any of those things#in fact it's been pretty solidly burner-ed until I can figure out what to actually do with it#but the protagonist is the one in the middle/on the left her name is Dani Ryan and I love her :') butch jock himbo tomboy golden retriever#the one on the bottom is her friend who does not have a name and the one at the top is her rival (and love interest? 👀)#she doesn't have a name either but I think she did at one point#there are other girls too but these three have the most consistent designs#I really wanted to play with a huge ensemble cast! there was originally gonna be 12...#... one for each tree in the celtic tree zodiac that I now know is fake :'')#............................. I wonder what getting a celtic studies degree would look like
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Primis Ji Eun as a Jeoseung Saja
This took me a while but here is reaper baby (I don't know what to color for the soul she's holding but let's say the color of the soul is yellow-orange)
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#call of duty zombies#cod zombies#codz#cod zombies oc#codz oc#fanart#original character#gong ji eun#primis ji eun#Baby girl needs sleep#Look how pale she is#Anyways love how this turns out#Don't know what I am doing with the background actually#I feel sleepy and tired atm while making this#But hey atleast I just finished my finals and I'm free from school yippe#I think I've made a lot of aus that didn't quite flourished#I swear I'm trying :'>#I want to try this folklore au since I have a lot of ideas for this#Now that Primis Ji eun's finish#I'll proceed to the Salvatorix to bring Oni Ryuji to life#or maybe continue with the main 3 ocs as I proceed with Primis Arthur or Primis Val#This is what happens when I watch too much Kdrama that involves grim reapers#I ended up making Ji eun into this#Also I kinda think the lighting looks shitty#I tried okay :'>
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honestly lrb i have had no interaction with mitski fans & i hope it stays that way but the ridiculous bog prince / fae king / etc shit hozier fans have going on makes me feel violent <3
#ophelia.txt#i ranted to rachel abt this but the specific association people have w him and irish folklore just because he’s an irish artist#rubs me entirely the wrong way bc it feels like it’s feeding into the idea that the irish are primitive and uncivilised#which is the most english bullshit i’ve ever heard. anyway let the fae king narrative die and let the fae stay in irish mythology.#where they belong lmao#does this make sense? idk and idc actually i hate h*zier fans#NOT TO MENTION they undermine the political & activist aspects of his music when they do that + the homages he pays to esp black american#musicians who literally created the blues & rock genres - which are what a lot of his music is
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Countess Orlok and her guards
#oc art#original character#character design#wip#vampire#nosferatu#folklore#yes I'm drawing this with symmetry guide on#because i'm lazy#countess is bit funky looking because I just wanted to sketch her dress at first#inspired by Hungarian folk clothing#digital art#i have no idea what im doing#bald lady#hehe#undead guys
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the urge to start a one shot series where every one shot is based off a track from a taylor swift album grows stronger every day
#ive mentioned this b4 i think#god. i just keep listening to songs then getting ideas#like. reputation has so many good lyrics that i could turn into fics 4 so many characters#but also lover. but i wouldnt know what to write for me! & yntcd. bc those r more yay me love songs ya know#i cant just skip tracks. like id have to do all of them.#red would be good for some angst.... so would evermore#folklore would be a decent mix i think. i could make the love triangle all connected too#see a lot of the problem is there is like one or two tracks idk what to do for on each album.#like if i did evermore what do i do for no body no crime#folklore is winning in the sense that each song could be oneshot ified pretty easy. ik its kinda basic but#i have so many ideas and so little organization#lmao
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Remembering the time when I ordered a pack of Taylor Swift stickers and end up with two packs of them
I still have them somewhere in a small box 👀
#snowy rambles#I have no idea what to do with them still#I’ve been sticking them on my phone for a while now#folklore my beloved
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HOO BOI. i desperately want to write volumes about this topic alone but ill stick to a tag rant because is have so much studying lol.
demeter they could never make me hate you. you were imo the only sensible person in the myth(s) actually and a good mum. fuck u zeus
The story of Hades and Persephone isn't an abduction romance, or even a tragedy of not being able to be in two places at the same time. It's about how fucking wild it would be to have a mother who gives a shit about whether you're dead or alive, and whether you are happy.
#hades and persephone#the ill get back to this eventually tag#sick with all the awful adaptations & retellings that romanticise aspects at the price of completely and irreversibly ruining others#look i dont care what u want to enjoy or wish to believe thats none of my business its all fun and games at the end of the day#but to so blatantly ignore the orignal mythos in favour of aesthetic or whatever and insisting *thats* the standard is just cruel#part of it falls on how much were missing in the critical thinking & media literacy department and tend to accept pop culture as is#again one of the beauties of literature is its potential for interpretations.. and storytelling relies on appeasing the masses#and reaching audiences and demographics and adapting to fit the everchanging social norms and all that jazz. i know#thats not what im referring to here#its the denial of nuance and refusal to acknowledge that hey sometimes a piece of media isnt really accurate? or right? like at all#(i for one as of late have been extremely fascinated w darkfics and heavy topics being explored in media.. esp in greek mythology)#and it honestly wouldnt matter if it werent for the vehement hate it breeds against the source material and the very valid#opinions on the other side of the coin. the least we can do is do some background reading and have some common sense guys.#in this case the erasure of justified rage and grief to accentuate rebellious femininity or whatever to me is just sad#making demeter the villain? a mother who was rightfully horrified after her (underage) daughter was stolen from her#making persephone who cried and mourned during her stay in the underworld a girlboss who waltzed in on her own volition?#in some versions of the myth hades tricked her into eating the seeds. she had no idea what the implications were. NOT COOL MY DUDE#look i actually like hades and persphone in terms of theme and symbolism. like a lot. im working on stuff with them in it#but keep in mind the people places and things at play when engaging with media. think of the prices that were paid and how it relates to us#myths serve to teach lessons and morals as well as explaining natural phenomena and other things. folklore doesnt exist in a void#also as much as i love to dunk on zeus for being a piece of shit and serial rapist#he is extremely complex and multifaceted as a god and king of the gods and much more than that. as is the case for everyone in the pantheon#agh i need to go before i go on a rabbit hole so deep i find iron lol
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"I know JK Rowing is a terrible person but her books are so good-"
You sure about that?
I mean, just for a start, have you taken a good look at her fantasy creatures lately? A whole bunch of them are straight-up based on malicious and dehumanizing stereotypes about actual people.
Remember the werewolves? And being a werewolf was made into a kind of metaphor for having AIDS?
And you know how AIDS was first associated with gay men? And how conservatives back in the day were claiming gay men were preying on children in order to convert them to gayness?
Remember how Fenrir Greyback preyed on children in particular? Yeah, she put that subtext in there. She was an adult in the 90's. She knew damn well what she was doing.
Remember the house elves? Remember how most of them loved to serve and needed to have a home and a master or else they just wouldn't know what to do with themselves?
Did you know that's literally what slavers in the American South said about the Black people they kept enslaved? Go look up the happy slave myth.
Do I even need to get into the goblins and the antisemitic tropes they're based on? No, folkloric goblins were not gold-hoarding bankers waiting for their chance to stab humanity in the back.
"But the characters are so good!"
Are you kidding me?
Most of her characters are pretty one-dimensional, including Harry. Her idea of making a morally complicated character is giving a tragic past to a bully. Numerous characters are little more than stereotypes. (Looking at Fleur right now.) Literally anybody, including you, can easily make dozens of characters just as good, if not better. (It doesn't exactly take a lot of character designing skill to go, "hey, actually, having a sad backstory doesn't make it okay to bully children" or "hey, maybe I should not base a character on the first stereotype that pops into my head.")
"But the rest of the worldbuilding!"
Sorry, but her worldbuilding is just as basic as her characters. Magical castles and secret passages are stock tropes. Magical people who keep their true nature secret from humanity is the premise of pretty much every White Wolf TTRPG. Most of her fantasy creatures are just common European fairy tale and folklore creatures with shitty stereotypes projected onto them.
I'm not saying "basic worldbuilding bad." I'm saying, you could do just as good, if not better, with minimal effort.
Also there's her magical bioessentialism, where only Harry's abusive blood relatives could provide him with supernatural protection from Voldemort. Rowling thus effectively declared that non-biological family isn't quite real family, and that abusive biofamily can give you some essential thing that a loving, supportive family that isn't related to you just can't.
The Hogwarts houses are one of the most insidious elements of her worldbuilding. The idea of being sorted gives you a little dopamine hit because wow now you have a li'l niche where you belong!
But the actual function of the houses and sorting system and the House Cup is teaching children to see each other as rivals, and ensure that the most toxic views of the upper class get passed on to every new batch of kids sorted into Slytherin.
Hogwarts effectively prepares children for a dystopia where magic serves to distract its citizens from how nightmarishly awful it is. Economic inequality is so bad that people like Arthur and Molly Weasley can barely afford to put their kids through school, casual sadism is just an accepted norm in everyday society, and non-humans are second class citizens. Rowling sorta acts like she thinks this is a bad thing with certain lines she gave to Dumbledore, but in the end, her special boy protagonist becomes an auror; IE, a defender of the status quo. So.
If you've never seen it, Lily Simpson's video goes into even more detail on how the worldbuilding of Harry Potter is actually incredibly fucked up, and how it betrays small-minded attitudes on Rowling's part. There's no separating the art from this artist, because Rowling's rotten values pour out of nearly every page.
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Yes, there are many things in Harry Potter that evoke feelings and inspire people, but there's absolutely nothing in it that this series has a monopoly on. You can find those same experiences in much, much better media.
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I rlly need to come up with a middle name
#i want to have a middle name decided before i get my name changed legally but i got no idea what names#my enby aunt/uncle suggested that since my first name means god i should do a demon name for my middle name#the fact she suggested that and they dont know what my username is online is so funny#anyways i tried looking up local folklore for demon names but im getting not much results tbh#im not giving myself banshee as a middle name#il find something out eventually but eh im so impatient already skfjlskss
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Apparently one of my newer hobbies is watching long form youtube videos on theology and understanding and absorbing about 10% of what I am being taught but enjoying them anyway.
#also tonight I'm drinking wine by myself (coz I am a cool cat) so the understanding intake is like 5%#but YANNO WHAT IM HAVING A DAMN GOOD TIME#i just watched a 43 minute video about the theory of stoicism#can I now tell you what stoicism is?#no I can not#I can tell you that Cognitive Behavioural Therapy adopts many of its ideas though#or at least the ideas of like#there's no point worrying about shit you cant control but you can control how you react and interact to shit#SEE I DO TAKE IN SOME STUFF#i think this interest (coz its super interesting and I flunked Religious studies at school coz I could not be fucked with a 2 hour exam for#a half GCSE)#stems from my interest in British folklore and ancient British history#IDUNNO ITS JUST INTERESTING SHIT TO LISTEN TO even if I am like “lmao big words no go in”
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