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fanfeline · 6 years ago

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The Danton Case - Complete Notes

More like disjointed amusing moments, but whatever.

Here is a complete post of my notes through all 5 acts of Pryzybyszewska’s Danton Case! I really enjoyed doing this, and I hope you all did as well. Let me know if I should do Thermidor as well....

Act I

Robespierre: Well, this is too much. I look like a gigantic withered cauliflower.

Note: this is his first line in the play.

We’re not going to talk about Eléonore trying to give Maxime a blowjob we’re just not

please don’t make me

please

Eléonore and Robespierre have a really weird relationship in this; he barely tolerates her existence, but keeps being very physical with her and it’s very uncomfortable to read.

“Child, I do not love you anymore - I am literally indifferent to you!”

I don’t even know what to say about Saint-Just in this he’s barely human

Saint-Just [glumly]: Are you delirious? Robespierre: [bursts out laughing, which does not necessarily reassure his friend]

Robespierre has strange names for people

Eléonore is “lioness,” “viper” etc.

Camille is “calf” “wonder child” “talented baby” and a bunch of just…random stuff

Danton and Co. have really weird code names that are never explained

Danton himself is C Three. No idea why.

Louise absolutely despises Danton with her whole heart

[Camille Desmoulins rushes in, very excited]

Again, this is how he enters the play

Danton: Stay. Well, Camille? Have a drink. Well, what have you done now?

Everyone wants to be a dictator and tyrant!! cause that’s how it went.

Act II

Collot: let’s kill Camille!! Robespierre: ...no.

Paraphrased, but barely

Camille: Danton, I will not allow even you to make such jokes. Danton [grips and squeezes him]: What, you won’t allow it?! [squeezes him stronger] You still won’t? Camille [swooning]: Mm-n-mm…oh!

Camille [more softly, clasping his hands nervously] Georges: send me to die. I want to die for you. Danton [gives a friendly laugh] Better write, instead of dying...what use is your corpse to me?

yeah no one actually has any respect for Camille in this play

Vadier [a veritable mimosa as far as his self-love is concerned]

[sparks fly from Danton’s eyes]

he has laser eyes, who knew?

Danton: And you still won’t take your mask off, thought I see through it to every line on your face?! English blood, no doubt….[Robespierre reacts with an Irish look, knowing that it is not worth correcting such remarks]

Robespierre: Oh, yes: I’ve made a fatal mistake. Danton is a source of the plague.

[Camille rushes in, ill-tempered, throws off his cloak and hat, falls on the sofa and assumes a depressed pose.] Lucile: Well…? [when her husband makes a demonstrative gesture] Oh, my spouse! We’ve done something foolish again?!

Robespierre: He [Camille] simply must have his melodrama!

Camille’s sitting in front of him. They’re the only ones in the room.

Robespierre and Camille fight brutally, and to be honest it really hurts to read.

Act III

Actually, both Robespierre and Danton want to be king. Who knew?

Collot [starts to his feet]: Who asked you to interfere, you...underling?! Lindet: Thank you for that honorable title, hangdog. [Collot throws himself at Lindet, restrained by those near him.]

Lindet seems to spend the rest of the CPS meeting ringing a bell and begging people to shut up.

Robespierre: Which of us will go drown out that miracle-making thunderous bass (Danton)? My drawing-room contralto, perhaps? Or Saint-Just’s low-pitched tenor?

Robespierre is very musical in this play, whistling “the entire chromatic scale” in Act I for no reason and then doing this in Act III

[Lindet vehemently rings the bell]

Saint-Just (looking for paper): Nothing doing without the secretary…. [attacks the cabinet, breaks fingernails]

smooth, dumbass. lmao

[Delacroix has the familiar Satanic expression of a fellow conspirator]

Camille [shakes]: Don’t dare mention him (Robespierre)! [leans towards him (Danton) across the table] I’ve spent my life on my knees before the two of you. I’ve worn myself out in your service. And you both knew slyly how to exploit my blindness. From now on I am a free man. I don’t care what happens to me… but I’ve broken with both of you, rotten idols, forever. [turns away]

His newly-declared independence lasts approximately 1 page before he collapses sobbing and pledges his allegiance to Danton again

Again, Danton is uncomfortably physical and abusive with Louise.

She hates him so much… there is no healthy relationship in this play.

ahhhh shit it’s time for the “trial”

Robespierre: I request - the right - to speak!

Most characteristic line yet, if you ask me

Why is Courtois defending Danton? Or does he just hate Robespierre that much?

Act IV

[Camille is standing by the window, crying]

This is roughly the third time this has happened in this play

Philippeaux is just yelling at a very depressed Camille it’s not fun to read Camille: Have pity...and help me, or I shall perish!!! [throws himself on the bed] Philippeaux: You will die in five days, Desmoulins. [Camille goes numb. His crying stops like a switched-off radio]

ngl this made me...very upset

Figure II [stretches out his hand]: Camille, no irony is intended: we thank you in the name of France. [Camille, consoled, returns the embrace and smiles] Philippeaux: Camille - that’s the Comte and Vicomte d’Estaing (royalists). [Camille withdraws, horrified.]

Everyone’s sitting on each other’s beds and it just reads like a massive sleepover for these few lines (ignoring the fact that they’re imprisoned and will be dead in 5 days)

Lucile tries bribing the judges, and is rather disappointed when they don’t take her bribes.

And then Legendre walks in and Lucile is like “you know what? New plan. Hey Legendre you’re a butcher right? Go murder Robespierre!”

Lucile?!?!?!?

[But the essentially gay tone does not change]

That’s a decent summary of Pryzybyszewska

[It is likely that Desmoulins will provoke deadly French laughter deriding both him and his party]

Fouquier-Tinville is already so done with everyone

Robespierre (to Eléonore) [extends one hand to her; he leaves the other on his forehead]: I am sorry. I’m going insane.

Robespierre forgot to eat for like 36 hours and honestly? same

also he’s an authoritarian dictator now i guess

[Robespierre breaks into sonorous, pleasant laughter and disappears]

Act V

[Desmoulins is standing on the table, at which Philippeaux is reading]

This is the stage setup at the beginning of the act. Camille is still Camille.

Danton: Ah, that is exactly the point! Ha, ha! Maxime has done me a very good turn by having systematically concentrated power in his own hands for years: all I need to do now is to take from him… a ready-made dictatorship!

...What?

Camille’s trying desperately to convince Danton to spare Robespierre’s life after all of this he’s still trying to save his friend whyyyyyyyyyyy

[Danton stretches his hand towards the candle] Camille [nervously]: No!!! Georges, please don’t put it out!... Danton [with outstretched hand]: But why? Camille: It’s so horrible here… please leave it, I implore you!

Look, I hate Camille’s infantilization in media as much as the next person, but ahhhh my heart

Camille [after a while, shyly]: Georges….

Danton starts to like...feel himself up and monologue dramatically while everyone else is asleep it’s a real weird page and a half

also he calls Robespierre a “red Irish monkey”

Camille starts screaming and talking in his sleep, begging someone (Robespierre, I wonder?) for forgiveness

Philippeaux: But what did you have against saving that boy - whom, without any reason, you have driven to suicide?... Danton [gives Camille a contemptuous look]: Should I have gratified Robespierre, do you think? For that matter, it will be better for Desmoulins himself to die than to prostitute himself again.

[Depressed silence again. Robespierre slowly places his elbows on the table, and his forehead on his joined hands.]

same

This is roughly the part where Robespierre begins to collapse mentally - continuing well into the next play, “Thermidor”

Fouquier: [bangs the table with a file because Danton is opening his mouth again]

Danton actually manages to turn the whole crowd against the Committee - the mob starts calling for immediate acquittal and protesting the mockery of a trial

Fabre: Thank God it’s the end. I’m barely alive anyway.

Pryzybyszewska makes very clear that the whole trial is corrupted and rigged against the Indulgents

aaaaaand cut their hair, exit stage, we never see them again

Saint-Just and Robespierre have a long conversation about oppression and dictatorship that takes several rapid and interesting turns

Robespierre: Maybe it is madness.

Saint-Just [over his shoulder]: It is not madness, it’s despair. [He turns round. Speaks nonchalantly, but clearly] Shoot yourself. [He stops by the window, aimlessly looking at the yard. Robespierre slowly falls onto the bed, lies down.]

I….what?!?

Antoine, what?????

Robespierre: *lies down for the first time in god knows how long* [He (Barère) rushes into the room. Robespierre, brutally wakened, lifts himself on his shoulder with a slight hiss of fright. In a second he gives the intruder a deadly look which totally puts Barère out of countenance.] Barère: Oh… I’m sorry. May I?… Robespierre [motionless, sits on the bed]: You’re asking that question somewhat late….

[Saint-Just comes in with a helpless shrug of his shoulders]

[Saint-Just watches him with glowing eyes]

[Both gens de la haute main (Robespierre and Saint-Just) look at each other as if mutually hypnotized by their appearance. A long pause of perfect immobility.]

Robespierre [tense all of a sudden. Dead silence in the room.] Do you hear?... Saint-Just [sulking]: What? Robespierre: The crowd is coming back. Saint-Just: Requiescant in pace.

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thrashermaxey · 6 years ago

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Wild West: Winnipeg Jets

We have arrived at the final off-season article, and this week we are taking a look at Winnipeg. After this we will be diving back into the action with some live stats. Hear about the injuries to Seth Jones and Corey Perry? Dobber’s got you covered in the Guide. Also make sure you are up to date with the Eastern Edge Series on value left wings.

The idea for these columns to compare end of 2017-18 Fantasy Hockey Geek rankings for individual players with an expected ranking based on their average draft positions from the start of the year. This process does not necessarily identify who was the most important player to each team but gives us not only an idea of who was a steal/bust on draft day, but where each player was valued going into this season. I will also be adding some thoughts on whether that is the new normal for the player in question and if we should be adjusting our draft positions. For a deeper dive on each team plus full projections make sure to get your copy of Dobber’s Fantasy Guide, out now!

And now for the technical details. We will be using the Fantasy Hockey Geek tool to get a ranking that combines all of a player’s stats for the searched categories. Like for the previous series, the ranks are based on a 12 team, head-to-head league, using the categories of goals, assists, power play points, shots, hits and blocks for forwards/defensemen and wins, saves, save percentage and goals against average for goalies. Player eligibility for this series is based on Yahoo, and draft ranks are based on average draft positions compiled from Yahoo, ESPN and CBS by FantasyPros.

Winnipeg

Recap:

Winnipeg made one thing clear in 2017-18. They have arrived. They finished second in the Central Division with 114 points and proceeded to oust division rival Nashville in the second round. Unfortunately, they lost out on the conference championship to Las Vegas. Expectations are certainly raised going into 2018-19.

Undervalued:

Blake Wheeler:

Somehow Blake Wheeler continues to be undervalued. Every year he seems to get drafted a little bit higher, and yet every year he outperforms that draft position. 2017-18 was certainly no exception. He finished the season as the second ranked winger and the 8th most valuable player overall.

Alex Ovechkin

WSH

Blake Wheeler

WPG

Taylor Hall

NJD

Nikita Kucherov

TBL

Wheeler’s value typically comes from a combination of good point production and peripheral stats. 2017-18 saw that point production turn to exceptional. He had career high assist, point, point pace, and power play point numbers while maintaining excellent hit and block numbers.

Games Played

Goals

Assists

Points

Points/ Game

Shots

Sht%

Hits

PPlay Points

Blocks

1.12

246

9.3

Wheeler was featured prominently back in April during a review of the top right wings in the western conference. In short, that article found that the big jump in Wheeler’s point production came because of an increase in power play points. A little digging indicated that the power play was just simply the most productive of Wheeler’s career. Winnipeg has increased goal scoring on the power play for three consecutive years and now has the fourth highest power play goal total of any team in the past three seasons.

Certainly, the indication is that the Winnipeg power play is good. There is no guarantee though that those 64 goals from 2017-18 are repeatable. Just like there is no guarantee that age won’t catch up with Wheeler at some point. Those are really the only question marks. Maybe because of those things you don’t want to take him as the second overall winger. That is fine. Take him third.

Tyler Myers

Tyler Myers. Wasn’t he supposed to be good? Like back in Buffalo? Well, Myers hasn’t been able to break 30 points since 2011-12 despite consistently seeing over 20 minutes of ice time and over two and a half minutes of power play time. In 2017-18 he was drafted (or not) accordingly. His average draft position was 250th. He finished the season in decent company with those who were drafted an average of 164th. He was the 34th-most valuable defensemen and the 111th-most valuable player in the league.

Alec Martinez

LAK

103

Darnell Nurse

EDM

105

Tyler Myers

WPG

111

Jake Gardiner

TOR

113

Keith Yandle

FLA

114

What happened? Somehow, Myers managed 17 power play points. That production gave him his highest point totals and point pace in recent years, which also correlated nicely with recent highs in blocks and hits.

Games Played

Goals

Assists

Points

Points/ Game

Shots

Sht%

Hits

PPlay Points

Blocks

0.44

150

119

He did receive slightly more power play time than in previous years (though not by much) so it isn’t likely that had much to do with it. He also did not see any additional total time on ice per game. His share of the power play time did tick up a bit, but given that his total time didn’t increase I am certainly less optimistic that that is an indicator of continued success.

I think we again have the same issue as Wheeler above. Winnipeg’s power play was just plain more effective and it rubbed off a bit on everyone. The second unit clearly has some talented players as well and it paid dividends for Myers. Unfortunately in Myers’ case, I am a little less confident that if those power play numbers drop he will be as ownable. His shot rate is not high, and his hit rate is low for a defenseman. It took an impressively unsuspected power play performance to thrust him into relevance, and while he is looking to be in a similar position next season I am would hesitate to draft him in his current position.

Overvalued:

Bryan Little

Bryan Little has long been one of my late draft or even free agent grabs that allowed me to spend earlier picks on other positions. 2017-18 was a disappointment. He was the only player drafted in this group (at 165th). He ended up as the 333rd-most valuable player in the league and the 46th most valuable center.

Jean-gabriel Pageau

OTT

321

Christian Dvorak

ARI

331

Bryan Little

WPG

333

Danton Heinen

BOS

335

Carl Soderberg

COL

338

The worse news is he actually played a full season for the first time since 2013-14 so we can’t even say he would be ranked higher if he had played more games.

Games Played

Goals

Assists

Points

Points/ Game

Shots

Sht%

Hits

PPlay Points

Blocks

0.52

129

12.4

His stat line is not pretty. 2017-18 ended with Little’s lowest point pace since 2009-2010, as well as his lowest shot, hit, power play point, and block rates of essentially his entire career. Some of the underlying numbers aren’t promising either. His average time on ice has been decreasing for the last four years, as has his power play time, and his shot rate. In addition (or potentially a factor in these drops) Little spent a chunk of time on the third line. In fact he spent 45% of his even strength shifts with Mathieu Perreault, instead of say, Wheeler, Patrik Laine or even Nikolaj Ehlers (with whom he did spend a little more time).

On the plus side his personal shooting percentage, his IPP, and his team’s 5-on-5 shooting percentage were all on the low side for Little and have not been showing the same downward trend as his time on ice states. Again on the plus side, Paul Stastny is now in Las Vegas, which means the spot between Laine and Ehlers is once again open and seems to be Little’s for the taking. That spot seems to be ideal for a guy who passes first and shoots second.

The moral of this story seems to be that, while there are some concerns about age-related declines, there are also indications that 2017-18 was a bit of an aberration and if Little can catch a bit more puck-luck in 2018-19 he should rebound. He may not quite be a 65-point place player anymore, but likely isn’t a 40-point guy either.