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parttimesarah · 2 years ago
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sntafe · 4 months ago
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i want to know more about your davey. what makes him tick! what music do you think he’d listen to! what are his pastimes and hobbies and what makes him like them so much!! PLEASEEE rant about your davey i love him!!
- @we-are-inevitable ✨
OH MY GOD. YES. OKAY. you just opened pandora’s box you have no clue. (btw most of this is based on my tattoo au although a lot of this stuff is just stuff i have connected to davey no matter the au)
okay. so. my davey is a high school english teacher and i think something that makes him really upset is when he sees his good students start skipping, not paying attention, etc. while i don’t think this would make him tick per say, i do think it would def make him anxious and on edge. he would absolutely come home and rant to jack about how he doesn’t know what he’s doing wrong and how he’s worried about them and how he wishes he can do more but all he is an english teacher. (and jack would assure him that he’s doing more than enough and just being there and noticing these things is all some kids need) (but davey would def pull them aside in class and just talk to them like they’re humans bc he knows some teachers treat their students as children and they hate that. so he will just talk and try to pick their brains and help them in literally whatever way he can)
MUSIC. okay so davey definitely tries a TON of different genres simply because he is curious and he wants to hear it all. (he wants to experience every bit of life that he can and that includes different genres of music.) at the end of the day tho he’s a slut for sad queer indie pop: hozier, lucy dacus, and kevin atwater are his favs. (i could go on a whole different rant about how davey coded some of kevin atwater’s songs are but i’ll refrain for now.) he grew up listening to billy joel and still listens to him when he’s feeling particularly nostalgic or homesick. the album “the stranger” is one of his favorites in the entire world. his parents had it on record, and one year in middle school for his birthday he was gifted a record player, so he was playing that shit NONSTOP. to read to, to study to, to hangout to, etc. les used to come and sit in davey's room while he was doing domestic tasks, like cleaning or homework, so les now has attached that album to davey. (they get a tattoo for vienna, their fav song on the album—davey gets “slow down, you’re doing fine” on his left forearm and les gets “you can’t be everything you wanna be before your time” on his right forearm) (done by jack of course)
jack listens to more alternative stuff, and although it’s not something davey listens to on his own, he finds himself humming along to the pierce the veil and green day songs on jack’s playlist 
as far as hobbies and stuff, obviously he reads. he’s always been an avid reader because he loves to get lost in other worlds and he likes to learn about things that he otherwise wouldn’t have had the opportunity to. he gets into reading slumps around midterms and finals because he’s grading sooooo many papers but like as SOON as that’s over he falls back into finishing a novel in a couple days and he absolutely loves it. it’s just so… refreshing in a way. (sometimes, when he’s particularly missing jack, he’ll go and just sit at the tattoo shop and read. he’s content to simply be in the same space with jack and he also loves sneaking glimpses of jack working.)
he also absolutely loves to cook. he grew up often helping his mother in the kitchen, so he’s sort of always loved it. once he moved out and began living by himself he found a whole new appreciation for it. it’s his way to decompress at the end of the day and … in a way food is his language?? like he will make meals based on what he’s feeling. if he’s really happy he doesn’t mind making something that takes a while. it’ll be bright and fresh. if he’s had a particularly rough day though, he’ll throw something frozen in the oven and call it a day. (over time, jack slowly realizes this, and can gauge what davey needs based on what he says they’re having for dinner. for example; if davey’s just making something frozen, jack will give him an extra long hug and force him to take a hot shower in order to relax. jack often takes over “cooking” on these days)
don’t even play on his animal crossing island. he likes the domestic video games with goals that he can take at any speed simply because they’re relaxing and cozy. he loves making his island all organized and pretty 
meanwhile jack is like begging for the switch to play mario kart 
thank you for letting me rant GOD I LOVE DAVID JACOBS if there’s anything else you want me to yap about PLEASE ask!!!
@we-are-inevitable :)
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fenimores-book-nook · 1 month ago
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Books (again) and other things
10.22.24 ~ Tuesday
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Welcome back to the Book Nook! First things first: HAPPY ASEXUAL AWARENESS WEEK! I want to do something special for every day of Ace week (I have yet to decide what) and today it's going to be a drawing of a frog with an Ace flag that I found on Pinterest. Maybe that's what will happen every day, I guess you'll have to tune to find out this week. ;) I'm also aware that Asexuality Awareness week started two days ago, on the twentieth and it is in fact, October 22nd. Tuesdays usually feel like the "actual" start of the week to me since it's the first day of work for me. So...it makes sense to me.
I will also be going on a trip to Arizona on Thursday, so you best believe Imma be rocking some Ace and Aro pride while I'm there. ;) I wanted to try to wear something Ace or AroAce every day but I might've forgotten today. BUT I have made AroAce bracelets to sell in the shop I work at, so we got one of those on. Plus, I got my nails done recently and they've got purple ombre, so I think that counts as well.
Something I did for Aromantic Awareness week is make a bunch of Aro colored bracelets and had them out for free, so I want to do that again for Ace week! But I am low on those bracelets, so I'm gonna be a bracelet making machine when I get home today. Besides, better late than never. ;)
One of the main things I wanted today's blog post to be about is a book series that I really love. The Baby-Sitters Club (the graphic novels) books based on the original BSC books by Ann M. Martin. The illustrators/authors have changed as more books have come out but I love looking at all the different art and writing styles.
This is probably the main book series that I will always get new releases for, no matter how old I get, no matter what age the books are for. (Quick side note on that topic: it literally does not matter how old the books you read are intended for and it does not matter how old you are. Heck, I'm twenty and I regularly read middle grade books. Because I like them. And that's all that matters. I'm someone who has had a bit of trouble with not feeling embarrassed with reading some of the books I read but I shouldn't feel embarrassed! No one should. READ WHAT YOU WANT TO READ, WHO CARES WHAT OTHER PEOPLE THINK.) Okay. Side note over.
I never really got into the original Baby-Sitters Club books, though I've read a few of them. I love the graphic novels a lot, I feel like the art adds so much more to the story. So far, there's 16 of the graphic novel adaptations out. (And yes, I have all of them, hehe.) I know they've skipped some of the original books, probably because they felt they didn't add enough to the Baby-Sitters Club universe. (Or not, I don't know.) But the ones they have made, I love. And of course, we're going to talk about my favorites.
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These are three of my favorites out of the BSC! I'm sure if I re-read all of them, I'd include a few others, but we'll talk about these for now.
Good-bye Stacey, Good-bye is book number 11 in the series. Lemme just preface by saying, Stacey is probably my favorite BSC character's point of view to read from. She and Claudia are probably my favorite BSC members, honestly.
I love this one because it's Stacey moving back to New York City and while her leaving Stoneybrook is sad, the way she looks at moving back, I really like. Also, I've always wanted to go to New York City and explore, so I'm gonna love any of the books that have to do with it. As well with Stacey and Claudia's friendship, I love it so much. In this one it's shown quite a bit, their dedication and care for each other. The art style in this is one of my favorites. It was a bit of a change to get used to when Raina Telgemeier stopped illustrating them (I love her own books as well), but I think I kind of prefer this style more. I love them all, but this one just scratches my brain right.
Jessi's Secret Language, book 12. As a CODA (Child Of Deaf Adults), I really, really love when authors include deaf representation. There needs to be more representation, but over the last few years I've really noticed deaf characters being more included in books. As well as deaf representation, I'd love to see more normalized LGBTQIA+ representation. Seriously! But we're getting on a tangent now.
I love book 12 because of the things I've already stated, but also it's such a sweet book too. Jessi's love for dancing and how the kids and other BSC members show their support; I love it all.
And the last Baby-Sitters Club book we'll talk about today: Stacey's Mistake, book 14. Like I said about Good-bye Stacey, Good-bye, I love all the New York City vibes in this one too. But I'm also drawn to it because of the friend issues that happen. I haven't read this one in a bit, but I remember something in my brain going, "oh wow, I feel seen." I love books that make you feel like that. The way everything ends up okay-like every BSC book but that's partly why I love them so much-makes my heart smile.
I love all of the Baby-Sitters Club books and I will probably revisit talking about them in the future. They just give me this comfort and peak my interest every time I read them. And I'll also add: this is probably the only series that I've felt a real interest in writing fanfic and/or creating fanart for. But fanfic in the sense that I cast some of the characters as AroAce in my head. Honestly, it's kinda a lot of fun; I can see why people like creating an alternate story line to original stories in this way. :)
That is all for now, have the best day ever, and never stop reading what makes you happy.
All my love,
Thalia <3
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bikananjarrus · 5 months ago
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I want to read High Republic books but I don't know where to start. Help!
hi bran! i would be happy to help! 💜
(*disclaimer to start: i am still in the process of reading the high republic books myself, so this is just based on what i have read so far. also, this might get a little long, but there's a lot of material and i know it's a bit confusing, so i'm hoping a more thorough breakdown helps a bit!)
To start, the High Republic books have been published in three phases:
Phase 1 (Light of the Jedi) takes place about 200 years before The Phantom Menace.
Phase 2 (Quest of the Jedi) takes place roughly 150 years before that, so ~350 years before TPM.
Phase 3 (Trials of the Jedi)* goes back to the Phase 1 timeline, so ~200 years before TPM. (*this phase is still being published, and is set to be finished in 2025).
Each of these phases has a mix of books, comics, manga, and audiodramas. For the sake of this post, I will just be talking about the main storyline novels, which consist of adult, YA, and middle-grade books.
Do you need to read ALL books, including YA and middle-grade?
Short answer: it depends! If 19 books (and counting; and those are just the main books) is really daunting, or you just aren't sure you're going to have the time to dedicate to all of that, i would say no, you don't have to read everything. You could just read the adult books (which are the main-main storyline for everything), and be just fine!
However, if you are looking for a more well-rounded, full picture of this story, more characters to enjoy, or just want to read as much of this era as possible, than yes, i definitely recommend reading everything! the YA and middle-grade books have been just as well-written as the adult ones, and while you don't need to read them to understand the main storyline, they fill some gaps in and introduce a lot of really fantastic characters. those books just make the story as a whole more full and fulfilling.
Now, where to start?
I definitely recommend starting with Phase 1, Book 1: Light of the Jedi by Charles Soule.
This was the first book to be published, and is 1) a fantastic book, and 2) a great introduction to the galaxy at this time.
From there, I recommend going in order of the Phases, which would also essentially be publishing order.
(Secondary disclaimer: i have not read Phase 2 yet. I finished Phase 1, and then skipped ahead to Phase 3, because I was impatient and wanted to get caught up to the new book that came out a couple weeks ago lol. I am about to circle back to Phase 2, which has important background information and history for some of the things happening in Phase 1/3. so i did things a little different, but i think most people recommend the 1-2-3 Phase/Publication order.)
List of Main Books in Each Phase:
Phase 1
Light of the Jedi by Charles Soule (adult)
A Test of Courage by Justina Ireland (middle-grade)
Into the Dark by Claudia Gray (YA)
The Rising Storm by Cavan Scott (adult)
Race to Crashpoint Tower by Daniel José Older (MG)
Out of the Shadows by Justina Ireland (YA)
Mission to Disaster by Justina Ireland (MG)
The Fallen Star by Claudia Gray (adult)
Midnight Horizon by Daniel José Older (YA)
Phase 2
Path of Deceit by Justina Ireland & Tessa Gratton (YA)
Quest for the Hidden City by George Mann (MG)
Convergence by Zoraida Córdova (adult)
Quest for Planet X by Tessa Gratton (MG)
Cataclysm by Lydia Kang (adult)
Path of Vengeance by Cavan Scott (YA)
Phase 3 (so far)
The Eye of Darkness by George Mann (adult)
Escape from Valo by Daniel José Older & Alyssa Wong (MG)
Defy the Storm by Justina Ireland & Tessa Gratton (YA)
Temptation of the Force by Tessa Gratton (adult)
Beware the Nameless by Zoraida Córdova (MG) [publishing Aug. 27, 2024]
Tears of the Nameless by George Mann (YA) [publishing Sept. 24, 2024]
There are a lot of lists out there with the reading order, but I have found that the High Republic Wikipedia page has been the most helpful, because it breaks down the different categories (novels, comics, etc.) really clearly.
As mentioned, I’ll be starting up the Phase 2 books, but I’m also currently working my way through the Phase 1 comics. So if you would like a breakdown of the comics as well, I can do that too!
i hope this was helpful! and i really hope you enjoy delving into these books! Light of the Jedi sucked me into this era of star wars so quickly, and i've just gotten more insane about them since lol.
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ginnyrules27 · 1 year ago
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An assumption based on your fanfic:
You probably got bullied in high school and with how Audrey was written in the movies, she just triggers memories you'd rather forget so you dislike her
Oh, not just high school anon!
From kindergarten to my senior year of high school, I was bullied. I had the usual forms of name-calling, and then, of course, there was the fact that one kid in my grade invited the entire fifth grade to his house for an end-of-school-year party and I was the only one who somehow missed the invite and only found out about it when the kid's mom called my mom asking what time I'd be over because I didn't RSVP and then I earned the reputation of needing my mom to get me invited to parties.
Middle school was my living hell, though, because, in part of two girls who were so much like Audrey, it's actually scary. They made rude comments about my leg hair in gym class, they emptied my gym locker and taped my clothes to the shower heads, they emptied my actual locker and dumped the stuff into the hall (granted I have no proof it was them but it wouldn't have surprised me if it was), and then their prized gem of shittiness was the fact that they wrapped me up in a gym mat, tied that up in a jump rope, and tried to shove me behind a door. They only had to apologize because they got caught by the gym teacher (and even if I end up getting identified in real life because of this, I gotta just say this: girls, if you're reading this and you know who you are, yes, I still remember and yes, I still loathe you for how you got off with just a slap on the wrist! I got forced to stay in from Recess for a week the year before because someone made a false allegation that I pushed one of my friends when we played tag but your shit only warranted an apology? I hope you're having the lives you deserve!)
And then, of course, there was ninth-grade geometry where about half the class would actively mock the fact that I couldn't reach the hook where the hall pass was located and it honestly got to the point where I'd find myself tightening the hall pass lanyard around my neck when I did go to the bathroom and the only thing that made me stop was the fear of being found passed out in my school bathroom and the comments that would come from that. My parents only found out about that bullying after I failed a test and my mom asked me about it and I came clean about almost everything (the hall pass around my neck thing kinda remains my dirty secret--my family was not big on mental health back then). After Thanksgiving break though, all the bullies in the class had a talk with our Vice Principal and my geometry teacher told us in class that he wouldn't be coming back after the winter break because he realized his dream job was to become a cop (yeah because teachers just up and quit to become cops. My family to this day believes he was fired.)
I could tell you more but in all honesty, this is becoming novel-length. But yeah, Audrey reminds me way too much of my school-day bullies.
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catchingbigfish · 1 year ago
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hey elle!! winter and water for the elemental asks pls <3
hiiii tysm!
Winter: Have you ever written a story based on a holiday?  If yes, which holiday was it for and what was it like?
i actually don't think i have!! i've included holidays in stories i've written if it's timely to the story, but now i want to write something specific to a holiday!
Water: How did you start writing?
this is such a good question because i don't know!! i remember being about 10 years old and writing a story in a notebook that was very reminiscent of that early 00s era of middle grade/YA fiction, like gossip girl and its spin-offs and text message/AIM novels, but i just know at some point in middle school i was aware i wanted to be A Writer. i maintained an active livejournal with anywhere from 1-5 posts daily of just like, snippets of poetry, blogging, etc. it's just always been present in me i guess!
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literaticat · 1 year ago
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Hello! Thanks for having your asks open :) I recently started mentoring a young person who wants to tell their story thru poetry. I've beta read for prose fiction before, but I'm relatively new to nonfiction & poetry story telling.
I know this isn't necessarily your area of expertise, but do you happen to have any advice regarding what sort feedback is generally helpful for nonfiction and/or poetry writing that might be different than feedback for prose fiction? Or any other advice for how I could best support this young writer?
Thank you!
This is NOT my area of expertise (I think you should be asking an educator!) But hey why not.
I personally don't think there's actually a ton of difference in critiquing or talking about fiction/poetry/nonfiction. Regardless, what is THIS story trying to do, and is it succeeding? Is it interesting/compelling? Does it make the reader feel emotionally invested? (Yes, really good nonfiction about protozoa or whatever will make you WANT to know about protozoa! A novel-in-verse still needs to have a story arc, just like any other novel! etc.)
So you might help them find great mentor-texts that are age appropriate -- so if they are writing memoir in verse, help them find great books that fit memoir, and verse, and memoir-in-verse. It could be interesting to do like a "book club" for some of these, where you both read and talk about them -- how are they structured? Why are they affective? What made this story interesting?
It also might be interesting to unpack the differences between memoir vs other kinds of non-fiction writing. (Like, if I'm writing about 9/11 in a journalistic way, I'm writing about the actual facts and talking to many sources and doing a ton of research etc -- If I'm writing a memoir about MY experience on 9/11, that's inherently biased, I'm an unreliable narrator basing things on my fragmented memory -- basically, even though what I'm writing is true FOR ME, it's also more akin to fiction than journalism.)
Something that a lot of new writers of ALL ages and ALL genre struggle with is the fact that most of the time, first drafts are not good enough, but you have to get them out in order to be able to REwrite them. The magic comes out of revision. (Kids and adults alike get impatient to see the magic and give up before they get there, or assume their thing is ALREADY magic when it isn't!)
You don't indicate how old 'young' is. Like do you mean an actual child, or young teen? Or like, a high school student? Or college-age?If you mean an actual child, like, 8-13, you might consider taking a look at this book, REAL REVISION, by Kate Messner. It's cool because it talks to a lot of popular Middle Grade authors about their own strategies for tackling revision.
If you are talking about a high school or college age kid / young adult, I'd share with them BIRD BY BIRD, by Anne Lamott (Maybe you read it first and share the things that feel most relevant, for a younger person, or just hand it to an older teen/young adult) -- again, she gets into the power of revision, encouragement for writers plagued by self-doubt (coughMOSTWRITERScough), etc. And her advice is simple, practical, and delivered in a homespun way that makes it feel very DOABLE and empowering. (At least, that was my experience reading it as a young adult!)
Good luck!
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lainereclipse · 1 month ago
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MARY-KATE AND ASHLEY TWO OF A KIND - IT’S A TWIN THING BY JUDY KATSCHKE 
BOOK REVIEW BY LAINER ECLIPSE 18/09/24
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NUMBER OF BOOK  IN BOOK SERIES : #1 
Author of this book : Judy Katschke 
Star rating 🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩷🩶🩶🩶🩶Spoiler warning : Yes
Triggers are -Mentions the death of their mom and that she was very unwell. 
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Genres - Middle grade, young teen fiction, tv, family, teen/pre teen. 
Pages : 112 
Year this book was published : January 6,1999 
Base of off - The hit tv show sitcom, Two of a kind episode (putting two ‘n’ two together) 
Rated - PG/Pre teens 
Blurb -  Baby-sitter Blues
Ashley can't wait to go back to school. The new school year means shopping for new clothes, meeting boys...shopping for more new clothes! Her twin sister, Mary-Kate, thinks she's crazy. Mary-Kate would much rather hit a softball than hit the mega-mall. But they do agree on one thing: They're way too old for a baby-sitter! Too bad their dad doesn't see it the same way. Now the twins need a plan--a plan to show Dad just how right they are!
Character list : 
Mary-Kate Burke (Staring main character)
Ashley Burke (Staring main character)
Kevin Burke (Semi main character)
Carrie Moore (Semi main character)
Brain (Recurring character)
Max (Recurring character)
Jessica (Recurring character)
Mrs. Baker (Side character)
Mr. Fillmore (Side character)
Pokey Valentine (Side character)  
  -My Final thoughts-
I really loved reading this book again and this book series because it’s a short but easy read with heartwarming as well. To be honest though the first book in this series really has always been my favorite to read out of the series because I am not someone who is really into the sport softball. I also find this book too uninteresting and slow to begin with but after you get into about the sixth chapter it does begin to pick up from there.  
I do really like this book but it just takes forever to get into because 1) I haven’t read a book in over two years, so just getting back into it I found it really hard and took forever for my brain to get interested in this short novel. Also find it hard just  sitting still and not going for walks every 30 mins. Reason 2)- being probably just a bit to do with my age now compared to last time I read this book. I was   12-13 years old and now am nearly 20, so my reading style and genres of books I want to read has changed a lot during this time  as well.  I would still love to re read this book series though and definitely would recommend this book to more pre teens ages 9+ though. Just because I think that it is better suited for that age group.
I really liked how they also told us the characters backstory and Carrie's whole personality and attitude because it was so different to Kevin teaching style and her advice to the girls were different opinions to Kevin that actually a few of her ideas worked better for teaching the twins some stuff. 
-Why did I choose this book to do a book review on?
I chose this book to do a book review on because when I was in middle school and my first year of high school (age 12-14) I loved reading Mary-Kate and Ashley Two of a kind novels and would love to read this book series every chance I got. I enjoyed reading this book as a pre teen so much that I used to recommend this book a lot, so when I had to pick two books to do a book review on I thought of this one pretty much straightway. I decided since not many people even know that the tv series got a book series that I would try to put it out there and see if they wanted to give it a read as well. This book is also great for if you are trying to get into reading or back into reading again. 
Another reason is so I can help others find books to give a go at reading and hopefully help them find a style/ genre that they enjoy or just a great book series that they can sit down and read for hours at a time. 
Other books in series 
1 -  BOOK 2 How to flunk your first date
 2 -  BOOK 3 The sleepover secret
There are 40 books in this series and one season with 26 episodes. 
Other books you may like to read
1 -Lotus Lane
2 - Girl Talk 
3 - The Nancy Drew notebooks 
4 - The babysitters club
More Mary-Kate and Ashley novel series that i also used to read
So little times 
Sweet 16
🩷Thank you for reading my first book review 🩶
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alexanaraxadel · 2 months ago
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oh my god some of you are so annoying like yes obviously adult literature covers a wide variety of genres and themes and spending time chewing on and analyzing complex classics is important for building the critical thinking skills that are sorely needed in our modern society. but also reading is usually a hobby and your hobbies should provide pleasure in some way and if you just want to relax with a book at the end of a long week you shouldn’t be made to feel shame about choosing a ya series or a romance novel or a children’s book or a gay fanfiction by pretentious elitists who think they know what’s best for you. but also classics can be read for fun and not everyone who reads them is doing so solely to look intellectual and make you feel bad about your smutty erotica; sometimes they genuinely enjoy them and are just minding their own business. but also yes some people do read books to look a certain way to others and want to be perceived as educated and impressive and cooler than you and that’s annoying. and of course non-classics have value in their own way whether it be through engaging with deep themes that require critical thinking too or being educational for young people or simply because providing women joy & escapism or marginalized people representation is one form of value other than “builds critical analysis skills.” but then again, sure, if you ONLY read easily-digestible stuff that you can skim through for the dopamine hit you could potentially grow addicted to “trash” in a way that’s detrimental to you; and furthermore if you ONLY read children’s books you’re missing out on a whole world of literature and may be restricting yourself to simple black and white themes and spoon-fed moral lessons. yes there are differences between genres and age categories and books; no that does not necessarily make any of them “better” than any other; okay i accept there are reasonable arguments for some books being “better” or at least more enriching than others. yes you can read whatever you want and no you shouldn’t go up to random people, in person or online, to berate them or shame them for their reading choices. many readers do actually read and enjoy a wide variety of books and you can’t judge them based on any one book they like or dislike. it is very possible to love a middle grade fantasy series with your whole heart whilst also being able to write an analytical essay on shakespeare and be wary of misinformation on the internet. did i get everything.
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freshcuntgrass · 1 year ago
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Hey I saw your tags on that one post and please tell me everything about your D&D campaign I’m so invested?????
This is going to be a novel, since it was a 3.5-year campaign that went from level 1-20. You said everything. I am putting it into chapters because it turned out insane. Without further ado, the LGBT (all at once? yes) adventures of the Extra Gay Party. (tldr what if it was gay wrath month for 42 months straight).
The PCs: Blanche (paladin of Osiris, last nun of her order not slaughtered), Nekrotzar (gay escapee of a cult of Sarastro [radical homophobic Osirian prophet whose cult is definitely not based on the Mormons], now a cleric pledged to a mysterious death god named Achlys), Loge (chaotic tiefling demon-pact warlock), Tchelio (middle-aged sorcerer, Just Some Guy).
Chapter 1: Sure, Fuck the Devil, I Guess
We start with some classic low-level shit in a big port city. A close friend of Nekrotzar's, Callalilly the transgender wizard girlboss slash perpetual grad student, passes off some low-level jobs to them because she's got grading to do. Giant crabs in a basement, zombies in the street. A handsome elf named Nick Shadow sees them fighting things, has them sign contracts as his adventurers-for-hire, sends them off to retrieve some stuff from a cave. Unrelatedly and unnecessarily, Loge fucks Nick Shadow that night. He's pretty hot, so, wahoo.
They get the low-level macguffins from the cave, alongside some beginner magic items, including a mirror that lets them Detect Good and Evil. Somewhere along the way, they determine that Nick Shadow is Maybe Bad News. The lady they deliver the macguffins to sends them off on a foldable boat to Fiend's Bane, a fiend-fighting organization that might know more.
Fiend's Bane, despite being largely middle-aged, mostly retired, and generally past their collective prime, does know more. Nick Shadow (who, remember, one party member has had actual penis sex with) is a devil they accidentally signed themselves into the service of. Also, the younger generation of Fiend's Bane (and/or the traveling wizard school Callalilly goes to, which happens to be in the neighborhood) features a number of reckless young people who are variously intrigued by these new adventurers. Wizard Zoë starts flirting with Blanche, paladin(+secret celestial warlock) Sasha starts flirting with Loge (who's also kind of in a relationship with his demon patron? it's complicated. Loge gets a blade from him with a single wish attached, should he wish to break the pact). Other important NPCs from this include Brad and Samuel, fratty gay necromancers who are in love, this is like a D-plot but put it in your pocket for later
They have a number of misadventures in Fiend's Bane's quiet-up-until-recently small town. Wizard frat parties, stints in jail, I think there's a haunted house in there somewhere. In a brief foray into the wizarding school, a necromancy professor tries to force-choke one of them, in what is widely regarded as a dick move. Cue a wildly lucky initiative that results in this fucking archmage's immediate death at the hands of some level 5 characters. Not like that was plot I was saving for later or anything. It's fine. I pivoted. We're fine.
Nekrotzar's friend Callalilly learns they killed one of her professors and informs her godmother Gepopo, a spymaster for the major city, who goes "...uh. well. that's interesting. good job?" This isn't important yet. Put it in your pocket. Don't worry about it. The party certainly didn't. They were busy with a variety of gay subplots I won't get into. Loge multiclasses into bard during one of these.
At any rate, they eventually escape the small town under Dubious Circumstances on their foldable boat, stowing away the young, rebellious, and mostly very queer new generation of Fiend's Bane (as well as their emotional support gay frat necromancers). They'd previously consulted a map of dangerous portals from fiendish planes, and pointed their boats towards a fairly large one: the Cave of the Banished Scholars, outside of the scholars' city of Cape Hildegard. At some point on the boat, Loge and Sasha get into some relationship drama, largely revolving around the fact that their demon/celestial warlock patrons are rivals/friends/lovers/????? and are MEDDLING in all of their SHIT.
Chapter 2: Cape Hildegard, City of Nerds
They arrive in Cape Hildegard and go to a tavern. Sasha slips Loge a note to meet him on a certain hilltop to talk through things in the morning. Nekrotzar meets a cute gay boy named Axel. They all get in a bar fight against Nick Shadow's agents trying to claim their wayward souls, after which a mysterious elvish priestess named Acona says some cryptic shit at Nekrotzar and disappears.
Loge goes to meet Sasha on the designated hilltop the next morning. He is shunted into the Ethereal Plane by Nick Shadow, who taunts him. Don't you see them embracing someone else? Shadow says. Don't you see they've forgotten you already? You are unlovable, Loge. I know you. I own you. I know this. Instead of talking with Sasha, Loge takes the wish blade from his patron and stabs himself through the heart.
Sasha was not embracing another lover, of course. Sasha was seeking solace in their friend, Samuel, of Gay Necromancer D-Plot fame. Samuel is the one who finds Loge's body, which he has not yet gained the power to truly resurrect. Samuel is the one who carries it, bereft, to the rest of the party. They take hold of the wishblade sticking out of his chest and understand that there is only one thing they can do: use its lone wish to resurrect Loge. He's brought back to life... but without the powers of his demon patron, who made him swear he would not die without his permission.
Once the main party is all back and alive again, they can all focus themselves back on the A-plot, which involves getting a series of keys from a series of colorful local college professors via a series of mini-quests, in order to unlock the right to enter the Cave of the Banished Scholars, where the fabled fiendish portal they were seeking lies. They do some gladiating. Blanche dies a little. It's fine, she gets better.
In one of the earliest mini-quests, the party meets Barbarina Blackhammer, a dwarven heiress who agrees to sponsor the gladiatorial pursuits they're taking on in the B-plot to earn a little treasure. Remember that mirror they got in the tutorial caves? They pull it out to try to discern Barbarina's alignment and motives. It tells them in no uncertain terms: she's a celestial. Loge walks up to her and says: "I know what you are, and I need a warlock patron. Help me." Bemused, she agrees to be his patron. She sends him to various contacts of hers, trains him in different skills, provides magic items to the party. His training is distinctly more bardic than warlockian, but he gains confidence with her guidance.
The fabled Cave of the Banished Scholars that they eventually seek is also the resting place of (gayboyloveinterest) Axel's father, a famous knight who charged into the portal wielding a legendary sword. In another mini-quest, Blanche gets her fortune told: she's fated to find and wield this famous knight's sword, and to bring balance back to the realm of her god Osiris.
Now, a subplot appears here that you've got to understand to get the full picture. Sweet little Nekrotzar, 19-year-old babygoth gayboy, was absolutely lost in the sauce of his cult. Revealed at baptism to be an aasimar (frightening the heathens out from the congregation as he spread his holy wings), weight of the community placed upon him, betrothed by 15 to a daughter of a prominent family, sent away to the starting city on a crucial mission trip... it's no wonder he snapped under the pressure and pledged himself to Achlys, a death god he knew next-to-nothing about. He's a fallen aasimar now, and certainly not beating the emo kid allegations, but he's starting to find himself and having a sweet little romance arc. On one of his dates, when Axel steps out to get drinks, Priestess Acona appears from the darkness to punch him in the face and deliver another prophecy: the only son of Agamemmnon is not his only child. For Romulus's sake, Remus kills the golden wolf. Axel comes back to find his boyfriend clutching his broken nose (owie) and going "Wait… I have a sister? I gotta kill my dad about it? I have a sister?"
Anyway, there's more key shenanigans, more gladiator fights, et cetera. They get some loot from Barbarina, they get some vague and dubious celestial blessings from Acona, and everyone gets invited to a nice masquerade ball. There's a ballroom dance competition that Nekrotzar and Axel enter. But when they switch partners in the minuet, the woman Nekrotzar dances with is all too familiar. At this distance-- even through the mask-- he would know her anywhere. His ex-fiancée, Mescalina. She's an agent of Nick Shadow now, and coming to kill him as revenge for leaving her. Also, those weren't ice sculptures, they were a fuckton of erinyes. In this impossible battle, the party gets the last key to the caves before dying en masse. The last thing any of them see is Barbarina shoving their dead bodies into a Portable Hole.
Several days later, the party awakens at the home of a hermit cleric in the mountains. You know who's also there, visibly exhausted by the journey? That's right! Priestess Acona, with the same celestial aura as Barbarina! Turns out that was just Acona in a fake beard and a couple pounds of makeup, trying to find another angle to get close to the party. Nekrotzar has Divination by now, so he asks his goddess who his sister is. It's Callalilly. One of the "heathens" who fled from Nekrotzar's baptism was his father's sister, who took with her a little boy who desperately wanted to be a girl and was suffering under the Sarastrans for it. Nekrotzar was already gonna kill his dad but now he's for SURE for sure killing his dad.
Anyway: caves! This mëgädüngëön's got everything: zombie cultists, death tyrants, succubi, Mr. Bones's Wild Ride, actual cannibal Shia LaBeouf, absolute oceans of sentient psychic goop. Blanche finds Axel's dad's sword. The final boss is a nightmarish devil/aberration crossbreed who lives in a radioactive death zone where magic is broken and stole Axel's dad's face. None of it really comes up again, but it fucks pretty hard, as mëgädüngëöns go.
They survive the horrors and the agonies. They go back to Cape Hildegard, where their friends and love interests have fought back the siege of Shadow's devils. The older members of Fiend's Bane have caught up with them and aren't super happy about their kids all running away to have a dangerous homosexual adventure. Loge says, "Hey, with everyone here… Sasha let's get married on the spot!" Love wins! They sail away the next day, except for Tchelio, who really just wanted the money to start a bakery this whole time. He's still in Cape Hildegard to this day, baking cakes and telling kids to get off his lawn. (I know I've barely mentioned him. He stayed out of the drama but was generally a good sorcerer and excellent party dad.)
Chapter 3: Fuck the Devil But Not Literally This Time
Time to go to the big city and visit Callalilly for the holidays! She's family and all, you know. Nekrotzar's also very excited to meet her famous godmother, Spymaster Gepopo. When she walks in the door… well, she looks like Priestess Acona. She sounds like Priestess Acona. She, um… she put on a Nystul's Magic Aura and followed the party around to manipulate them into killing Nekrotzar's dad. She got the idea way back when they killed that archmage. Agamemmnon was a transphobic piece of shit to someone she loved, so he's gotta go, and it seemed extra fun to get his own son to do the job for her. What Gepopo was definitely not expecting was to bluff her way through being Loge's warlock patron. This woman can't cast so much as a cantrip, let alone give away magical powers. Loge has been a Warlock of Regular Elf this whole time. The real warlock patron was inside him all along, or something like that. (Just like Nick Shadow had been inside him. Hey-o.)
Loge gets invited to perform in a drag competition by a mysterious wealthy benefactor. Hooray! We have a fun drag show mini-game episode that I rudely interrupt by revealing that the mysterious wealthy benefactor was Nick Shadow all along, and he's here to murder everyone. Massive auditorium fight ensues. All allies firing on all cylinders. Lights flickering on and off. The third Divine Intervention of the campaign goes off because Nekrotzar is god's little meow meow and nobody on earth has ever rolled dice like him. There's a steel dragon at some point because of an F-plot there's no time to get into, and it's like the fourth or fifth most buckwild thing going on in this goddamn fight. When Loge dies, he comes face to face with his old patron, who presents him with a deal: he can make Nick Shadow mortal if Loge comes with him to Pandemonium forever. Loge takes the deal and disappears into the Lower Planes. Shadow is killed-- releasing all the souls he has ever claimed-- but even the gods can't bring Loge back to life.
We have an absolutely brutal funeral. Everyone weeps openly at the table. Loge wins the drag competition posthumously. After some time, a feypact warlock named Pamina seeks them out. She somehow absorbed some of the souls released by Nick Shadow's death, she already wanted to kill Sarastro anyway, and so she's with them now as they travel on to Blanche and Samuel's hometown. Pamina largely hates everyone, particularly Sasha, because the player very intentionally made the opposite of Loge. This causes a ton of drama not worth getting into. That's just the vibe now.
Anyway, they cruise into town, and a massive tsunami cruises on in behind them. Bunch of people die, including Sasha, who has become Little Mx. Death Wish now that their husband's gone. Pamina goes in and saves them. Nekrotzar and the gay frat necromancers get to work raising the dead. You know who's not dead? Blanche's dad! He's a semi-retired naval officer who runs a winery, and he's overjoyed to see the daughter he hasn't seen since she joined the convent. You know who's definitely dead, though? Blanche's mom! She was secretly the captain of a band of warriors, who all sacrificed their lives trying to stop the Sarastran invaders who destroyed Blanche's nunnery. It's likely that they're the reason Blanche had enough time to hide away. There is crying and hugging and a beautiful lesbian engagement party at the winery (Blanche and Zoë. We didn't get into it much but they're cute as hell).
Chapter 4: You Gotta Kill Your Dad Now, Dude
Oops! Look at the time! I say, pointing to my watch where all the numbers are replaced with Nekrotzar Go Kill Your Dad. They also have to go stop Sarastro's wedding slash the ritual where he becomes immortal, but I think the patricide is really the point here. (There are so many goddamn dads in this campaign. It's just dads all the way down. I don't know why I'm like this, either.) They also free the trapped and haunted souls at Blanche's desecrated nunnery along the way. Sasha dies again and is very upset at being resurrected.
They get to the wedding slash occult ritual as it's in progress, under a solar eclipse. Sarastro is marrying-- of all people-- Mescalina, who seems to have recovered pretty gracefully from the whole her-warlock-patron-dying-at-a-drag-show incident, all things considered. Earthquakes. Fireballs. Avenging angel shit. Widespread armageddon. They murder Mescalina with extreme prejudice, as well as most of Sarastro's apostles, a lot of reanimated undead warriors with their hearts cut out, and obviously Nekrotzar's dad (dude dies in the earthquake immediately, bit anticlimactic but it gets the job done). Sarastro's already gone through a bunch of the process of becoming a god, so it doesn't faze him that much when they kill him too, but they do it anyway for good measure.
Nekrotzar uncovers his dad's body from the rubble before they all flee to a local library to hide from the remaining apostles. Here, he proceeds to resurrect his dad, torture him with high-level necromancy spells, and murder him a couple more times, in what is frankly the most brutal way I have ever seen a D&D character use their spell slots. World-class patricide, very satisfying, the kind of death all transphobes deserve. Nekrotzar also reads up on his goddess-- the last breath of the first human, an ancient goddess of grief and loss of whom he may be the last living follower.
Unfortunately, fun library time is interrupted by a legion of zombies with their hearts carved out, led by a few of the remaining apostles. The front lines of the undead army are dressed to resemble the party and their allies. Axel and Sasha get yoinked into a Sarastran demiplane. By the time the party destroys the army, saves the library, and gets to the demiplane, they find Axel mind-controlled and about to straight-marry (boo!) one of the apostles they've killed… who has been turned into a fiend. The demiplane is actually a chunk of what was formerly Nick Shadow's circle of hell, which they're sailing through the Astral Plane to ram into Mount Celestia so that Sarastro can ascend to godhood there. They do save Axel, but before they got there Sasha fucking… jumped off into the Astral Sea. Normal decision from the normal decision maker
They eventually plane shift themselves back home. Homophobe Town's obviously a bad time (no good gay bars), so they bounce around the other cities from the campaign, gathering allies before the big godhood ascension ritual Sarastro so helpfully monologued about the exact date of. Fiend's Bane joins the cause. Warriors who idolized Blanche's mom assemble a force. Blanche and Samuel's dads dust off their old uniforms and lead their cavalry in. There's even a little ragtag band of clerics-- people resurrected post-tsunami by our death-obsessed gayboys, finding new purpose in Nekrotzar's god and desperate to repay the people who saved their lives. They also take a brief jaunt to the Astral Plane to keep Sasha from diving into Pandemonium, who reacts much like a cat who has been prevented from diving into the trash can, but whaddaya gonna do.
Chapter 5: Kill God and Serve Cunt
The Day of Ascension, as I called it, is just a fuck-off huge fight. Grab y'all's shovels because I'm burying our gays. They wind their way through all the iconic battlefields of the town: the ritual monument, the graveyard, the Prime Sarastran Temple. The apostles do their best to stop them-- the ones they killed come back as fiends, while the ones that lived rose as celestials alongside Sarastro. (This was a bit of slick DM work on my part, if I do say so myself. Blanche's fancy sword slices through fiends like a hot knife through butter. It's a big advantage.)
I cannot stress enough: they all die a bunch during this fight. Every PC at least once, every love interest at least once, I think Samuel got in two or three deaths by himself because wizards are made of wet cardboard. Blanche has joked all campaign that god won't let her stay dead. She has always wondered why it was her that lived, when so many of her loved ones died around her. She dies on the front lines, fighting to the last, and wakes up cradled in the arms of Osiris like a child falling asleep at a party. Her sisters from the convent are there, in the silver halls of Ysgard, sharing in the celestial feast. Her mother is there. Osiris holds her gently and tells her, you can rest now. You've carried this mantle so long. Stay here with your sisters. Stay here with me. But Blanche says no-- she has to finish this fight. After all this time wondering, it's not god that won't let Blanche die, but Blanche herself.
One of the most formidable enemies in their way is Mescalina-- she found a way to rise to Nick Shadow's vacant position and become an archdevil herself. She's got portals open, she's directing fiendish armies through them, so Nekrotzar decides to throw up a Gate spell for some sweet portal action of his own. Who does he call forth? An archfey, a solar, his god?
Nope! He picks fucking Spymaster Gepopo, who is definitely on the Material Plane and presumably at brunch.
What he does manage to call forth is some echo of her soul, this flickering wisp from twenty years ago, who calls out to Blanche by her mother's name for help. This is a piece of her soul from the death knight who killed her in her adventuring days, still clinging onto her and getting pulled through the portal as well. Clinging to the death knight is an archangel, trying to arrest him for unauthorized claim on a mortal's soul. Clinging to the archangel is the archdemon who is his rival/friend/lover/?????. And clinging to the archdemon, of course, is his assistant. Loge.
Finally properly reunited, they all storm the cathedral as Sarastro booms out his final villain speech. He has won, you see. He has followed the path he always preached, and it has led him to godhood. This battalion of degenerates could not stop him, cannot stop any of them. He has trapped the final breath of death, and when he kills her, they will be helpless. Nekrotzar bursts forth into the temple to see his goddess chained inside a crystal sarcophagus, Sarastro's scepter of godhood poised to strike the final blow.
So, y'know, fuck that. Obviously.
The final fuck-off huge stage of this fuck-off huge fight commences. Nekrotzar rescues his god. She's throwing them hit points, she's throwing them flight, she's throwing them epic boons. I somehow have twelve Legendary Actions per round. Sarastro's got two level 9 spell slots, maybe three? Throngs of worshippers envelop the party, attempting to overwhelm and trample them even as they fall by the dozens to spell and sword. They vanquish the apostles, one by one. Mescalina screams for the help of her bridegroom as Blanche's sword swings towards her neck. He sneers. I've used you for your purpose. I have no need of devils, or of wives.
It's a lucky swing from Sasha, of all people, that turns the tide. They picked up a silver greatsword while they were making interesting choices in the Astral Plane. A critical hit severs Sarastro's connection to this plane. He goes from towering and omnipotent to faint and flickering, unable to be truly banished while his apostles still stand. But one by one, they fall, and so does he. It is Nekrotzar's hammer that strikes the final blow.
As the fight dies down, the heroes survey the carnage. They've saved plenty of resurrection spells for the fallen. They'll need them all. Brad, Zoë, Axel. Blanche's dad. Loge carries Samuel out of the rubble, the way that Samuel carried him all those months ago, and casts Resurrection. But he's died too many times. The spell fails.
This is hard on everyone, but particularly on Blanche. She has conquered death so many times. She has killed the false prophet turned dark god, the one who twisted Osiris's worship into something hateful and cruel. And yet, there is still one last person who could not be saved-- one last person from home. They leave, the temple in ruins behind them, Samuel's body in Blanche's strong arms.
Loge's patron comes to collect him; he cannot stay. Sasha begs to come along with him, but Loge rebuffs them; they cannot go. But for the rest of the party, there is one last quest: seek any method, pay any price, resurrect Samuel.
True Resurrection is a difficult spell at my table. The cost is high, the materials rare. The casters-- always multiple casters-- have to give up parts of themselves to give the soul a fighting chance. Even then, nothing is guaranteed. They give up nearly every cent of their treasure and settle in for the ritual. Nekrotzar gives up one of his feats-- the wrath that fueled him. Brad gives up some of his lifeblood, some of his CON score. Pamina gives up all memories of her family. They all agree that Blanche has given up enough already. They draw the runes, grind the diamonds, finish the ritual, and pray.
Samuel opens his eyes. In the end, everyone lives.
We end the campaign the way that Griffin McElroy taught me to end campaigns: with a big gay wedding. It is the next spring, and Blanche and Zoë marry on the vineyard they're now helping run. Nekrotzar has moved to Cape Hildegard with Axel, where he is getting a useless art history degree. Pamina is traveling the world, trying to connect with the families of the lost souls that spurred her on to adventure in the first place. The years pass with Blanche's sword upon the mantle and Nekrotzar's hammer in a museum. Blanche and Zoë fill their home with babies and cats. The grapes grow heavy on the vine and the children learn to walk. After all the carnage they saw and brought, after all their travels as disciples of death, the party gets the reward they never imagined: to simply, quietly live.
Anyway, thanks for reading all that. Here's some bonus art. We got Loge, bakery!Tchelio, winery!Blanche, college!Nekrotzar, and the T-shirt I made as a parting gift to the party.
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letarasstuff · 4 years ago
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Girl meets World
(A/N): This was requested by an anon and is based on a show named 'Boy meets world', tho I never watched it so I went solely with the summary from said anon. I hope you still like it :)
Summary: Spencer's daughter is not ready for her first kiss. But are her classmates fine with that?
Warnings: Mean kids, angst but fluff at the end
Wordcount: 1.6k
✨Masterlist✨ ___________________________
Being on the not so popular side in school is not particularly hard, but it doesn’t exactly make things easier for (Y/N). That’s why Spencer was happy to hear from her invitation to a classmate’s birthday party.
“You call me and I’ll get you. I don’t mind if it’s in ten minutes or in two hours. Whenever you feel uncomfortable or you are done with peopling, it’s fine wanting to leave. Ok?” Her father tells her, sitting with her in the car in front of the birthday girl’s house. “Understood. Thank you, Dad. I see you no later than ten. Love you!”
Off she goes. Spencer watches (Y/N) going up the path to the front door, a bright colored bag with a gift in her hand. He considers driving up to Penelope’s apartment, which is only five minutes away, and cries with her over his daughter growing up with a tub of ice cream in both their hands. A second later the father puts his plan into motion.
Meanwhile (Y/N) is inside with a bunch of people from different classes. All those kids already make her nervous. But she is determined to make it through the night. After all, the girl doesn’t want to be seen as a baby that gets overwhelmed by a room full of human beings.
At first it isn’t that bad. (Y/N) finds a few classmates she has a class or two with and they converse. Until someone screams “Let’s play Spin-The-Bottle”. Now the eleven year old kind of feels like she is on a movie or a show. What’s next, she has to kiss the boy she has a crush on since the beginning of the school year?
Still all of the children gather around in a circle and a bottle is placed in the middle. “The rules are simple”, a kid explains, “The bottle chooses two people. They get five minutes in that closet over there.” Right, just like she predicted. (Y/N) is hesitant. They are too young to do something like that. Once again she doesn’t want to be the party pooper, so she sits down between two classmates.
Every time the bottle spins a dread weighs down in her stomach. (Y/N) is only eleven years old. Is she even ready to have her first kiss in a closet? Shouldn’t it be out of love, willently without anybody forcing two random people to such an act?
Seems like the others think these rules are fair and square. Everybody is participating with the utmost joy. Maybe it’s just her, who grew up with romantic novels written by people who not even her Grandmother witnessed alive being read to her for bed night.
Deep into calculating the probability of the bottle pointing to her, it needs a few shouts and a nudge to get (Y/N) out of her head. “Looks like it’s your turn to go into the closet”, her neighbor says to her, gesturing to the bottle, which in fact points towards her. The girl swears that the color of her cheeks is even darker than a tomato.
Shyly she gets up to the wardrobe. The remaining girls nod encouragingly while the next person is chosen by the bottle. Luckily it’s not the boy she has a crush on, this would be like in a fanfiction, too much like a cliché.
Just a few seconds later she finds herself in the closet. Is it appropriate to make a joke about coming out of the closet?
“Well, here we are”, the other boy says. (Y/N) thinks his name is Tyler. “Yeah, I guess.” She shuffles her foot and scratches her neck. “So, shouldn’t we kiss or something?”
Geez, that boy is out for action. “Uhm, what about if we do not? I’m not ready for that and no offence but I want my first kiss with somebody special and you are just a boy from my grade and there are no feelings between us and I need that special moment, because I’m a hopeless romantic.” The girl says all of this in one breath, making her speech pace compete with her father’s.
But Tyler smiles. “It’s okay. I get it, really. I won’t tell anyone. We can just sit here and talk until they knock. How does that sound?” (Y/N) smiles and nods. They sit down on some boxes and just laugh quietly about anything and everything they tell each other.
As soon as they have to come out of the closet, the other kids bombard them with questions. Tyler shuts all of them with one answer up. “A lady and gentleman are quiet and enjoy themselves.”
The rest of the evening goes relatively uneventful. There is a nice buffet and after that the kids watch a couple of movies until the first parents show up to pick up their children. Spencer is relieved to see his daughter so energetic and happy after the party.
“And then we played spin the bottle like in a teen movie. Dinner was also really nice and I think I made one or two more friends. Isn’t it amazing, Dad?” He answers her enthusiastically that he is in fact very happy for her. And Spencer is. But it kind of also implies that she grows up, a fact he doesn’t like.
The party was on a Saturday night and now it’s Monday, the first day after it. (Y/N) is ecstatic to go. In her mind her classmates finally accepted her for who she is. But as soon as she enters the school yard the kids from her grade look weirdly at her.
Immediately the girl’s mind goes into panic. Has she something on her face? Is it the way she dresses? Or is it some- The kiss. Or technically the not kiss.
“Hey Reid, I heard you are unkissed. What about I show you in the janitor’s room? Do you also want rose petals and candles laying around?” Someone starts to taunt her. The bystanding classmates begin to laugh.
(Y/N) has to listen to similar comments for the rest of the school day. A few boys from her science class make kissing noises whenever the teacher isn’t near them. Tyler once catches her eyes, mouthing an apology. But it’s not relevant to her at this point. The only thing that counts right now is getting through the last class without breaking down in front of the others. She can’t show them any more weakness.
When his daughter comes home, Spencer is already there. Hotch gave them an early off, since the last few cases were draining for all of them.
Instead of greeting him with a smile and the definition of happiness she enters the apartment with the biggest frown the father has ever seen on her face. “Hey Dad”, (Y/N) flatly says before disappearing into her room.
Confused, he assumes that she just has to do a load of homework, so he lets the girl be for the next couple hours. But as the clock is pushing near dinner time, he begins to worry.
“Sweetheart, I thought about cooking pasta for tonight. Do you wanna help me try Uncle Dave’s new recipe?” He asks at her closed door, respecting her privacy. There is no answer, just a sniffle from the other side. This alarms Spencer. “Sweetheart, may I come in?”
A few seconds pass until a faint “Yes” makes its way to his ears. Inside (Y/N) sits on her bed, her eyes are red from crying. “Oh Sweetheart, don’t be upset. Whatever it is, we can fix it. Tell me, what’s wrong?” The young doctor tries to console her. It’s always more difficult to calm your own family down than any stranger he meets on a case.
“I-it’s stupid. I don’t know why I’m upset over this.” (Y/N) frantically wipes the leftover tears away. “Hey, don’t say that. Your feelings are valid. You can be upset about anything you want, ok? If you don’t want to tell me about it, it’s fine. But I promise you that I’ll value whatever you say.”
The girl nods, finding her composure. “I- At the party we played Spin-The-Bottle and whoever was chosen had to go into the closet with the second one and kiss. I-I was in there with a boy named Tyler, b-but I told him I wasn’t ready. H-he was really sweet about it and respected my reasons. Dad, I’m not old enough and it wouldn’t be anything like I imagined my first kiss would be. But now the whole school or what feels like the whole school makes fun of me a-and I was so embarrassed.”
Spencer can feel her pain. Kids can be worse than professional torturers, he witnessed both first hand. “Oh Sweetheart, I’m so sorry. I’ll think of something about it. How do you feel about coming with me into the office? The others are missing you, especially Emily. She has a ton of pictures of Sergio she wants to show you. And for tonight we get your favorite take out and watch a movie of your choice, ok?”
(Y/N) smiles at the thought of the pictures she is going to see. “Yes! Can we get pizza and watch Lion King?” Even though it will be the fifth time they watch this movie this month, Spencer is happy to do anything his daughter wants. She has him wrapped around her finger.
So not long after this heartfelt conversation they sit on the sofa in the living room, crying their eyeballs out after Mufasa died. He deserved better.
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Criminal Minds:
@averyhotchner @mggsprettygirl @herecomesthewriterwitch @ash19871962
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walden-media · 2 years ago
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A Kid Interview with Chris Rylander, Author of The Hurricanes of Weakerville
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We’re so excited to have an interview with author Chris Rylander on the blog today! Chris nicely agreed to sit for some hard-hitting questions from a budding journalist about his new middle grade novel THE HURRICANES OF WEAKERVILLE. Jack is a 10-year-old whose two favorite things in life are baseball and books, so he seemed like the perfect candidate to step in as a guest interviewer. Jack had a lot of questions about the plot of The Hurricanes of Weakerville, the writing of the book, as well as Chris’ baseball preferences in his own life. Read on to find out how The Hurricanes came to be, and which MLB team Chris loves so much he got a tattoo in their honor.
⚾️ The Hurricanes of Weakerville is on sale now! ⚾️
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Hi Chris! Thank you for answering my questions about The Hurricanes of Weakerville. First up - How did you first come up with the idea for this book?
It came from talking to my editor, Jordan. We both love baseball and I particularly love fantasy baseball, and he was saying how he always thought the idea of a kid managing a real semi-pro baseball team could be a lot of fun. Almost like a Bad News Bears with the roles of manager and players reversed. When I heard that idea, I loved it!
How did you come with Tex's crazy stories?
They all came from somewhere different. It would take a while to explain each one, but one example is a story Tex tells that ends with a law making it illegal to change the weather in Texas. That came from a magazine article I was reading about absurd real-life laws. So, it’s actually true: It is illegal to attempt to change the weather in Texas. When I heard that, I knew it’d be a perfect story for Tex. I love that I was able to make his great grandpappy responsible for that law existing. And I even borrowed a little bit of the real-life story behind the law, too. In the end, I just love absurd stories with either multiple meanings or possibly no meaning at all.
Do you have a favorite baseball team? Do you have a least favorite baseball team?
My favorite team is definitely the Chicago Cubs. I even have a Cubs tattoo, which means now I have to be a fan forever, no matter what! Haha. And of course, as a Cubs fan, it is obviously my duty to root against the St. Louis Cardinals in every way possible.
How did you choose the town name Weakerville, and why did you set it in Iowa?
One of my favorite bands are The Weakerthans. So, it was kind of a nod to them. Also, I liked the idea of the main character, given the struggles he faces in the book, having this looming label of being “weak” literally attached to his name for rest of time. I chose Iowa because it’s a good baseball state, in the heart of the Midwest, with a lot of small towns the rest of the country has never heard of. I’m from North Dakota originally, so I can really relate to the small midwestern town experience.
Why did you choose the name The Hurricanes?
I went through a few different team names while writing/revising this book. They were originally the Mighty Pheasants, because nobody thinks of pheasants as actually being mighty. It was later changed to the Hurricanes to fit with a tale about Weakerville’s past.
Was the "potty sauce" based on something from real life?
Sadly, no. But now I sort of want to try and make the recipe as it appears in the book just to see if it really is that good…
Do you know how to score baseball games, like Alex?
Yes, I do. I even used to keep fake scorecards for a baseball video game I played. I still have several notebooks full of baseball stats for totally fictional baseball games that occurred only on my PlayStation.
How did you come up with Flumpo?
Alex as a character, struggled with his confidence from the very first draft. I knew I always wanted to present this idea that Alex has that some kids (and people in general) just seem to be inherently likeable, while some don’t. And, after a few revisions, it just became clear that this belief needed a concrete label/name, something that could literally be one of Alex’s worst enemies throughout much of the book.
How did Tex get so rich?
You know, like Alex, I have spent many hours Googling his name and trying to figure that out myself. Alas, in many ways, Tex seems to just be a man of mystery.
Do you have a favorite baseball stadium? Do you have a favorite game that you attended?
As a Cubs fan, my favorite stadium is of course Wrigley Field, and my favorite game was getting to go to a World Series game there in 2016, even though they lost that game. It was still unforgettable. Some other favorite stadiums I’ve been to: Oriole Park at Camden Yards, Oracle Park (which was AT&T Park when I went), and I’ll always fondly remember the very first one I ever went to: Kauffman Stadium (which was called Royals Stadium back then).
Did you play baseball growing up? What position did you play?
I played until about 5th or 6th grade. I wish I had played longer. It’s definitely a regret I have, even though I wasn’t very good. I played second base and outfield and despite hitting many singles and doubles, I never once hit a homerun.
Did you have a favorite baseball player growing up? (I love Mookie Betts and Kiké Hernandez.)
Ryne Sandberg, hands down. Then later as a teenager it was Kerry Wood and Mark Prior. (Mookie Betts is great, though!)
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The Hurricanes of Weakerville Synopsis:
Middle grade star author Chris Rylander brings his signature sense of humor, a compelling and original baseball story, and tons of heart to the story of The Hurricanes of Weakerville.
All his life, Alex Weakerman has had one passion: baseball. Specifically, the Hurricanes of Weakerville, Iowa—the scrappy independent-league team owned by his Grandpa Ira.
Even as team and the town have fallen on tough times, there's no place Alex would rather be than at the ballpark—a hot dog in one hand, a pencil and scorebook in the other, keeping track of each and every statistic. Alex has never been all that great at playing baseball, but that doesn’t matter. For someone as painfully awkward as Alex, being a fan—and a wiz with baseball stats—is all he needs.
When Grandpa Ira passes away, though, Alex is crushed. He's lost his best friend, and he doesn’t see any way that the team will survive. But Ira, it seems, has one last trick up his sleeve: his will names Alex the new manager of the Hurricanes.
Alex is as excited as he is terrified at the chance to finally put some of his fantasy baseball genius to use. But as he sets to work trying to win over the players, he soon learns that leading them to victory is about more than just stats. Will he be able to save his team, his hometown, and his family legacy?
From the author of The Fourth Stall, a SCBWI Sid Fleischman Humor Award winner and multiple state-award favorite, The Hurricanes of Weakerville is sure to appeal to middle grade readers looking for a funny book about real kids.
About the Author:
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Chris Rylander is the author of the acclaimed and bestselling “Fourth Stall” saga, the “Codename Conspiracy” trilogy, and co-author of book three in the New York Times bestselling “House of Secrets” series. He lives in Chicago, where he eats a lot of raspberry jam and frequently tries to befriend the squirrels on his block.
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ravenloftbythelamplight · 2 years ago
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   Well luckily for you I am now awake and thereby now able to try and explain! I’m gonna try and keep this as structured and coherent as possible, but I am very liable to ramble my way into a word salad so apologies in advance if this becomes unreadable a paragraph or two in. Brace yourself because this is gonna be long.
   So, first things first, in order to explain what the fuck is happening in that meme drawing, I have to explain how my brain eventually made its way to this bizarre conclusion because yes that process of going from thought to thought does have significance here.
Flashback to however many months ago: I had speed-read through VRGR several times over and was mindlessly, non-literally hungry to non-literally consume more Ravenloft lore. I went to TV Tropes because I do that on occasion and the idea of digging through a whole wiki felt intimating at the time. I only skimmed through the bits I was interested in (i.e. the pages on the darklords) but one thing on the main page caught my eye:
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   Now for weirdly personal context: in ninth grade at my high school we did a whole section in English class all about Edgar Allen Poe and one of the things we had to read was The Masque of the Red Death. As an end-of-section project one of our options was to make a short graphic novel (of sorts) out of one of ol’ Poe’s writings, and I picked masque of the Red Death because it was the one I liked the most. I made a design for the Red Death based on the description given for the uninvited guest and said design was something I really liked, and even after that section of class was thoroughly done with, I kept drawing it anyway because I just really dug that design I made. Slight aside but actually, funnily enough, I at one point about two years ago had an idea for a story that where I smooshed all the gothic horror lit. stories into one universe (fun fact: the franken-lad NPC in the middle from this post of sketches is a carry-over from this story idea! That’s it’s own whole text post though so I’ll leave it at that), and because I wanted to use that Red Death design for something, I put it into that story as an overarching, looming presence... which is an exceptionally funny thing in hindsight, now knowing that the Gothic Earth spin-off is a thing.
So, with that personal context you can imagine the degree of eyes emoji but slightly blurry to indicate rapid movement I was to see something in reference to the Red Death (and a mashing-together of gothic lit.) so of course I wanted to know more. I wanted to know more, but then I got hung up on that last bit: “..., and Word of God has described the Red Death as an ‘exiled’ Dark Power from the Demiplane of Dread.” “exiled”- that word choice, that one word, fucked me up and I have friends who can attest to that because there is evidence of my wild text-yelling about this on Discord, most of which boiled down to two questions: 1.) Is dissension amongst the ranks of unknowable, cosmic nightmare forces even a thing that can happen? and 2.) If so, then why and how was the Red Death exiled in the first place? What did it do? Those questions can be considered more thuroughly another day though.
   Here’s where our detour ends and we finally make our way back onto the main route of this whole post: Saidra. In the section on Saidra in VRGR it is stated several times that she will, when not hosting lavish and decadent balls, shed her elaborate garb and haunt the streets of Dementlieu as a murderous spirit known as the Red Death.
You can probably see the direction in which this is going.
Saidra’s story in official 5e is a fairly simple tossing-into-a-blender of Cinderella and The Masque of the Red Death and nothing much else beyond Dementlieu itself ... but what if there was more. As my mind is wont to do, I connected dots that had no need to be connected in the slightest and went “OKAY BUT HEAR ME OUT-” and decided that it’d be kinda cool if there was a connection between Saidra and the Red Death of the Gothic Earth spin-off. Now we’re finally at the explanation of the meme image.
   For my partial “my city now”-ing of lore and thereby my campaign, I’ve decided on the following points:
I’ve changed Saidra’s backstory somewhat; in the broad strokes it’s the same as the official one, but of the changes I made the most notable for this post is that her powers and her “darklord” (and that’s in quotes for a reason) status stem from and are due to the influence and interference of the exiled Red Death. It is, functionally, her warlock patron. The plague that swept the ball she was at was not a random occurrence and it wasn’t the Dark Powers either, it came as a result of the willing Faustian pact she made as did her death and return as a wraith-like being.
Throughout this whole thing I have yet to even mention the grandfather clock in the back. That is the vessel through which the Red Death was able to reach into the domains and make a pact with Saidra in the first place, hence the intended ominousness in the drawing. There’s an unrelated reason as to how it was even able to do so without being kicked back out into the infinite multiverse which can be summed up simply with, “Once again Azalin has fucked up everything for everyone and also himself” (a whole post in it of itself). The clock is currently hidden within Saidra’s estate and yes organic tissue has amassed around it.
Speaking of which, you may be wondering what the fuck is up with all the flesh ‘n bones ‘n stuff. That is because for some reason I wanted to give the Red Death a visual association with flesh and organic bodily material. Why? I really don’t know, I just thought it’d be a neat contrast to the immaterial, shadow visual associations of the Dark Powers. So Saidra, as a result, has the power to twist and mold flesh and bone to her will, hence the gross muscle-claw-hand; the two lines coming down along her arm is the skin unraveling like a ribbon (EUGH--). Also, now instead of just casting a regular ol’ disintegrate... you get melted. Like, “Good day to you sir you are now a puddle of viscera on the shiny tile floor” melted. Also there’s minions made of flesh and bone and teeth and eyes. It’s all very body horror. She might make a flesh-throne for herself later but we’ll get to that whenever.
If you’re wondering how she even has flesh to rend like in the picture if she’s still a spirit like in the official stuff... yes.
None of the darklords are aware of this all even being a thing, even Azalin (this has plot reasons). The Dark Powers haven’t done anything about this either (there are also reasons for this).
   And that’s the basic bulk of what I have at the moment. So yeah that meme post is A Lot and I didn’t even get to how all of this ties into my campaign’s overarching plot! I also left a lot of points undiscussed because they could be posts in it of themselves! I have likely thought on these things far more than I should even as a GM--
   In summary: ominous clock does not bode well and Dementlieu has gotten a lot more body horror-y. Both vampire and lich don’t know what the fuck is going on and neither of them are on board with this, meanwhile ghost lady is having a great time. That’s it that’s the meme.
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sokkas1mp · 4 years ago
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I gonna break in this acocunt with me being angry about something that doesn't really matter (very fitting for tumblr if you ask me), this article.
First: "And I’m sorry to open with this, but part of that is due to the age difference between them. Two years is hardly worlds apart (I’m personally working with four), but a 12-year-old boy and a 14-year-old girl are. Especially the way these two are drawn. Not to be too voyeuristic about Y7 cartoons, but Katara has clearly gone through puberty, while Aang hasn’t. There is something just…off, about a sixth grade boy having a full on make-out sesh with a high school girl."
This argument is one of the most stupid ones if you ask me, because it blatantly ignores the culture we have been presented by the show. I can understand why people find this weird, but we have to try not to look at it as if its our society, because its not. In A:tla, specifically the water tribes, 16 is marrying age. Right there, our "age norms" (idk what else to call it) are very different. And there are no divisions between ages in their world like we have with middle and high school. To me, two people are fit to be together based on their maturity, not their age. That's why 45 & 40 is not the same as 15 & 10, or 20 & 15. This is the same for Kataang. They have very similar life experiences and matured together, literally side by side, so a two year ago gap is irrelevant.
Second: "...Katara took on a very maternal role with Aang. Sure, she’s a caretaker and sort of a “mom friend,” but it’s a bit more than that. She served as his literal guardian during the show’s run—there’s just no other way to look at it. By the third episode, she called herself his “family,” and later even went on to role play as his mother to get him out of trouble at school. Aang, meanwhile, was… Well, I wouldn’t say “immature” for his age, […] However, Katara is 14 going on 25, while Aang is just, Aang."
There's a compilation of Katara doing thing with Aang that if someone saw a mother doing with her son they would call it incest:
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Katara definitely acts motherly towards Aang, but that is just her nature. She is more than just motherly with him. And some people like to call the check kisses familial (which is kinda weird imo), but we know Katara herself doesnt think that:
"Easy there, big brother" She pushes Sokka away. Not to mention, this was about a scene or two before she kisses Aang on the check.
Calling someone close to you your family does not mean you see them in the same way you see your parents/siblings. And Sokka played Aang's father in that scene, but we aren't sitting here using that as evidence to call him Aang's paternal figure.
Something Aang haters forget (or chose to ignore) is that being lighthearted and goofy does not equal immature. Yes, Aang does some juvenile things, but that shouldn't take away from his growth and maturity.
Third: "In fact, in the last season, Katara was shown to be uncomfortable each time Aang kisses her, and even went as far as to tell him to back off with the romantic stuff in the episode before the finale, because she was confused about how she felt. [*new paragraph*] Yet, in the end, she just trots up and blushes at Aang, than happily makes out with him when he goes for it,"
Katara initiated 2/4 of the kataang kisses (not including the check kisses). The kiss in The Cave of Two Lovers and the kiss in the finale. Yes, she's the one that "goes for it" in the finale (she also initiates the hug). She only pulls away once out of the 3 times we see a kiss end (this would be excluding the kiss in The Cave of Two Lovers). She wasn't confused about her feelings, she didn't want to have to worry about a relationship when they were nearing the end of the war.
Fourth: "The post-canon comics only furthered the lack of exploration of her feelings in this relationship"
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Fifth: "[referencing a scene in The Promise in which Katara is jealous of a fanclub being around Aang] "I'm sorry, this amazing, adult communication is blowing me away"
The are both still teenagers, who have zero previous relationship experience. Also, Aang had no ill intentions and Katara recognized it.
Sixth: [refencing Katara's role in The Legend of Korra] "Did Katara want to do anything other than sit in a healing hut and be known for having Aang's kids?"
This is another argument that just pisses me off. You can not use Katara's lifestyle in her 80s (she is 85 in s1) as judgement for her adulthood. It's purely assumption based. Constantly this author assumes that because she is in a relationship with Aang, Katara would drop her whole personality. What? Katara would not and could not be forced to do something or conform to some label and Aang wouldn't let it get to that point either. He would squash any idea that she is just "The Avatar's wife" or "The mother of the Avatar's children" the minute he heard it.
Seven: [comparing Katara's reaction to Aang The Desert to Aang's reaction to Katara in The Southern Raiders] "You'll spend a long time looking for her condescending tones. "Anger won't help, Aang," Katara never said, because she got that he was processing something painful and needed to sort it out himself. This difference in behavior is something that would be really fitting for a twelve year old boy to learn and understand. There's just no indication that he ever did."
Maybe I'm remembering wrong, but I don't remember Aang being condescending towards Katara. He was offering his advice because he knew her and knew that she would regret doing what she thought was right when her judgement was clouded by anger. And guess what. He was right. He never forced anything on her, either. Sure, he was a bit more pushy than he could've been, but in the end he let her go on the trip with no complaints. He even agreed that this was something she had to do.
Eighth: [referencing The Ember Island Players] "When the actor says 'Wait! I thought you were the Avatar's girl', Aang agrees. Katara is his."
You know damn well Aang doesn't see Katara as just his. And she's give him PLENTY of reason to believe that his feelings are reciprocated (which they are).
Ninth: "It's the story of a woman who swallows everything lest the man she's interested in has to learn anything about his behavior that violates her boundaries."
Ha! You said she was interested in him.
But in all seriousness, you mentioned how Katara stood her ground and told Aang that she was confused, but apparently now she's swallowing her feeings.
Tenth: [talks about the cloud babies daddy issues]
I don't disagree with what is said here, for the most part, but I don't think it is a reflection on Aang and Katara's relationship.
Eleventh: "... given what what we got with Kataang, it's completely unsurprising that Aang and Katara's parenthood/adult life was defined by a lack of communication and availability, at least from what we can tell. This also puts Katara's choice to immediately moved to the South Pole once Aang died in perspective; perhaps the city he poured all his energy into, at the cost of his family, held some bitter memories."
Once again with the lack communication. We can't use the early years of their relationship to determine their whole relationship. Also, there wasn't consistently a lack of communication, you just pointed out one time and ran with it.
We don't know at what point Katara moved back to the South Pole, but there are plenty of reasons for Katara to leave Air Temple Island:
a) Her son moving in/or planning to move in with his family.
b) She was no longer needed in the city and thus had no need to stay.
c) She wanted to go back to her native home for comfort after the love of her life died at a relatively early age.
d) The next Avatar was discovered and she came home to train them.
That's all. Thank you for reading my unnecessary rant if you made it this far, and I just want to close out with a few things:
- There were some things in the article that I did not include for the fear of this becoming a novel of me repeating myself.
- I agree with most thing said in the final segment of the the article. Most, not all.
- I appreciate the author for not trying to shove Zutara in just because Kataang wasn't there. That is becoming increasingly uncommon, so it was nice to see.
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literaticat · 3 years ago
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Is it easier for MG chapter books to become a series than say YA or upper MG? I see a lot of early/mid MG series that have multiple books in the series usually about magical creatures, witches, etc. Think Babysitter's Club demographic (even tho it's been a popular series for a long time). Do you think being a graphic novel also makes a difference?
I gotta be honest, you are all over the place here, so let's start with some clarifications:
"MG" and "Chapter Books" are two separate publishing categories. In other words - yes I know that MG has chapters, and lots of people call all books with chapters chapter books - but IN THE WORLD OF PUBLISHING, "Chapter Books" is a specific category of book, which is, those thin books between "early readers" and "middle grade" -- they usually have lots of white space on the page and some illustrations. You know what I mean?
Like - Magic Tree House, Ivy and Bean, Princess in Black? Those are all "chapter books"
And they are ALMOST ALWAYS (like - 98% of the time!) -- Series.
Babysitters Club (the original, non-graphic-novel version) was something slightly different. They aren't chapter books, they are MG - but they were originally published in the 1980s, in a time in which we had a TON of middle grade contemporary mass market series. These books came out with new installments of the series multiple times a year (sometimes as often as once a month!) -- they were sold in the supermarket etc as well as in bookstores -- and in their heyday there were dozens or even (literally) hundreds of books in the series. Babysitters Club, Sweet Valley High were the queens of this time, but also there was Fear Street, Goosebumps etc. Publishing has changed a lot in 30-40 years, and that "mass market" supermarket-driven very cheap paperback series stuff isn't going anymore.
We've tried to re-boot some of these - and probably the most successful is re-booting BSC as Graphic Novels. They are very popular! But I wouldn't consider them "middle grade novels" I'd consider them "graphic novels" - and I also would just say, that as they are based on an already existing series, that probably helps with being able to get them out a little bit more swiftly than many original GN can be released.
So anyway.
In today's market I would say that:
* chapter books (ages 6-9) are almost always series, whether contemporary or fantasy
* MG fantasy/adventure/SF type books are likely to be series (think Lightning Thief, Keeper of the Lost Cities, etc)
* MG contemporary books are likely to be standalone, or have "companion books" or "books with the same characters / set in the same world" rather than be numbered series that have to be read in a certain order to make sense.
* Graphic Novels are a different beast entirely -- if they are highly commercial and take off huge, they are likely to be a series. If they are more literary or difficult to produce and unlikely to sell an absolute MESS of copies, they are probably less likely to be a series -- because GN are extremely expensive, labor-intensive and time-consuming to produce.
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djmarinizelablog · 3 years ago
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A Conversation with the Author of City Comma State, kippielovesyou/ForcedSimile
Had a short interview with the author of City Comma State, @kippielovesyou/ForcedSimile and asked her if I could share our conversation online---she said yes!
Did you know that Hange and Levi in her work was based on Spongebob and Squidward's interactions?
Read the entire transcript below:
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djmarinizela (D): if i may ask, where and how did you learn to write so good? what inspired you to write city comma state?
kippielovesyou (K): i don't mind at all! it's genuinely just years of practice. i've been scribbling stories since kindergarten (i had a long standing multi part series in first grade about all my classmates). i think one thing is certain: having a strong understanding of characters whether you borrow them or they are your own is pretty key.
a lot of points [in Isayama's story] could have been better thought out or tighter. however, we all love his characters. a weak plot (or in the case of city comma state: no plot) can be ignored or forgiven if everyone loves the characters
i'll be honest, i spend a lot of time trying to understand why a character does things or reacts a certain way. and yes, sometimes, that means i act out scenes in my car while driving. it's embarrassing...
there's a lot more to it, but to me that's the most important thing
as far as how city comma state came about: i wanted to do a slow burn romance centered around levihan, but I also wanted to show how all these characters care about and support each other. i knew in the confines of the AoT world, anyone could die at any moment and that didn't work with the softer feelings i wanted people to enjoy. how can you enjoy the friendship between mike and hange if he dies? it's possible, but it upends all the warmth we were enjoying. so i wrote an AU. i wanted to keep levi with a rough background with many walls, and i wanted hange to have her own issues that they can work through together. and i love the idea of them adopting/supporting the 104th kids without the fear of sending them out to war
D: your answer is so profound and helpful, thank you so much! I can honestly say you pretty nailed it when it comes to character development---everyone has a character arc in your fic! [my next question] is about the gender discourse in your story. I know you started City Comma State pretty early in 2014, but even back then, the nonbinary identity wasn't widely known before. How were you able to flesh out the discourse on the LGBTQIA+ spectrum and play it out on the dialogues and backstories?
K: it's pretty funny, a lot of the LGBTQIA+ has always been discussed i my family. we've had gay, lesbian, trans, gnc, bi and asexual people in my family for generations, as far back as the 20s (that we're aware of). hange's gender being debated made it a prime opportunity to write such an experience, some of which is borrowed from my own life. when i read older chapters i see certain slips in dialogue where i could have made an effort to be more neutral. we're in such a binary society that sometimes even if you feel in between, it slips in. in fact, i'm sure some people might take issue with the fact that i stuck with she/her for hange. i'm not sure i'd make a different decision today. i like this version of hange the way she is, and i hope hange's nb/gnc status comes across in more than just pronouns. hange's full identity is so much more than that and that is what i wanted to explore. and i think no matter where you fall on the whole LGBTQIA+ spectrum, you are more than just the label you've chosen. yes, in this story levi is bi/pan. but i don't think he ever says that explicitly, and he avoids labels. it seems fussy to him, which feels levi. discourse would not be his thing. i think even having a debate about whether or not he was bi or pan wouldn't be something he would want to engage in, he just wants to do what he wants. instead it's heavily implied. i think we forget since so many of us experience this discourse online and want to label things that there are people who don't want to involve themselves in it. it goes back to how would this character act. for instance, based on how levi is in canon, i can see many ways to interpret his sexuality. there's cues for a lot of different takes. but levi doesn't seem like the type that would need a definitive label in order to be happy. there's many ways to interpret hange's gender (and i've written several takes, some where they're more insistent on their pronouns), but i think hange's more excited to explore life than worry too much about much about how they're addressed or how someone talks about them. maybe another character might be more caught up in labels but hange and levi not so much
D: No, don't be sorry, I am more than thankful for your answer. I really appreciate it! I don't get to have these kinds of conversations with other writers, so I am grateful for your insights.
K: a really funny anecdote for you: i loosely based the idea of my levihan off of spongebob and squidward. you know, since they start out as neighbors and hange is more invasive than levi is used to
D: that's.... a stretch. but thanks for the tidbit! was the annual star wars contest also something that you do in your family? that part as well as all the geeky references won me over tbh!
K: it was an extremely loose inspiration! but hange mowing her lawn in the middle of the night so levi wouldn't be mad at her is on par with a spongebob move. and um...my family, while they can be a little nerdy, is not nerdy enough to do the star wars tournament! i made that up entirely
i just imagined hange having eccentric family, so they have very unusual traditions that none of the children question
i'll be the first to say a lot of city comma state is unrealistic and a little bit of a domestic fantasy. there's a lot of problems with money, employment and such that hange and levi SHOULD have but that's a little too real and not what i want to be the focus of this story. like hange landing a job that gives her a day off and she doesn't suffer a severe pay cut as a result? unrealistic. but i have other things i want to tackle. plus, in canon we have humans that turn into giants and 3D maneuver gear which would probably kill its user in real life. i think making certain parts of this fanfic a little idealistic is okay
D: are there other works that influence your writing? or authors that inspire you to write?
K: There's too many influences to count. reading is so important and even things that are bad are helpful. i actually was trying to read a YA series that seemed really cool and i had to stop reading because so many things were so annoying (I won't reveal which, since i think it has a small but dedicated fandom and i don't want to rain on their parade, it is purely a taste thing to some degree). instead of being upset and thinking that I wasted my time, i took note of what made me stop reading (that is a long list of things i didn't like so i won't bother to outline each one). even if it's something as small as a fanfiction that you had to click out of, ask yourself why you stopped. Especially with fanfiction: you already like these characters, what you're looking for is usually pretty specific (a pairing, an au, a specific scenario, etc). why, when this author has ticked all your superficial boxes, did you stop reading? and when you love something as yourself why. Ask yourself why you love the source material even! do you really love the plotlines and the world or do you love the characters? Is the dialogue strong? something to also pay attention to: people in general. how do they speak, gestures, facial expressions. really listen to how people talk (Youtube podcasts are really good for this!).
i think people would be surprised, a lot of what i really like to read is very all over. from surrealist novels, to classic literature, to science fiction aimed at children (i'm finally reading animorphs after almost 20 years!). and what i write for original fiction doesn't reflect what i'm probably best known for.
D: thanks for this, Kippie! looking forward to reading more of your works!
K: i'm still amazed at the response! writing is so solitary to me and i don't really look at my numbers. it never occurred to me that people would be discussing my fic!
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If you haven't read Kippie's Levihan fic yet, here's the link to get started: City Comma State
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