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There's a version of the "don't go grocery shopping while hungry" rule specifically for writers where you should never under any circumstances be allowed to touch your draft within 3 hours of reading a really good story. Because sometimes when you read something great your head goes "fuck this is so much better than my stuff I should make that more like THIS instead!" Look at me. That's the devil talking and you should close the document NOW.
#you will make superficial edits that do not gell well with the rest of your work#and won't actually capture what you thought was so good about that story#close the doc. sit down. think about it for a while. inspiration is fine. getting a 'eureka' moment from another story is fine#but if you find yourself comparing your work one to one with someone else's and taking any differences to be flaws on your part then STOP#you will never write good stuff by trying to make it look less like you wrote it#writing#writing advice#guess who just had to go into her google doc history and undo a bunch of panic-induced edits#because she read a fic about the same characters she's writing for?#meeee. they aged badly within just a few hours of hindsight. learn from my mistakes#self-hatred is not a good motivation for creation#fic writing
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I don’t know what you’re going through, but problems are like rain. Some days it pours hard. But trust me, there will always be a day when it stops.
WHALE STORE XOXO EPISODE 1
#whale store xoxo#คุณวาฬร้านชำ#milklove#milk pansa#love pattranite#thai gl#gledit#wlwedit#wlwsource#lgbtq#lgbtedit#wlwgif#wanmaewnam#womenoftv#wocedit#mystuff#gifs#wsx*#wanmaewnam*#thdramas*#i'm so so happy with episode 1 it was GREAT#23.5 will always be my baby but if i had to compare the two pilots i loved this one way more#i just love adult stories and i love how much depth we got into the characters!!!#i'm gonna try to do the episodes gifsets well this time and hopefully not stop in the middle lmao
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One of the best
I have been thinking about Erenville a lot and how the narrative allows us to really get to know him through the quiet moments. Through action rather than spoken words.
His mother calls him a fussy little bunbun, which is funny to begin with as we know him so far to be a taciturn and practical man. But while we travel with him we discover that he has suffered abandonment all throughout his life; first by his mother leaving him in care of others as she traveled herself, then by sending him away on his own travels, then further upon his return when there is a literal screen between them. The symbolism here is unmistakable.
Then, as we progress, it becomes quite clear that Erenville suspects that there’s something wrong with his mother. Instantly he’s on the defensive, citing that her whimsy and overwhelming personality always overshadow his own wishes, and that he struggles to understand her, also to trust her. His quiet stoicism isn’t that funny anymore.
In an ironic twist we discover that she has left him one last time, to the land of Living Memory. Even if it was never her intention to leave him in such a way, it must be hard to overcome that sense of continuous abandonment - and this time he has to say goodbye forever. That he draws away from everyone else to grieve and come to terms with this in solitude speaks volumes. It really indicates that he dealt with difficult emotions alone a lot while growing up, and in such a way he never learned how to rely on others. In the end, when finally pressed to the breaking point, Erenville lashes out in anger as the tools he made for himself fails him in processing all of his grief and fear alone. He has to find the courage to trust his mother with his emotions and that just as she's leaving him one last time.
Wuk Lamat is always right there in your face going through her emotions and leaning upon others for support, on the other side is Erenville, who draws back with his pain. We learn to know him just as deeply as Wuk Lamat, but through everything that isn’t said, rather than what is said. In fear of sounding effusive, even their appearance symbolises this: they're golden dawn and darkening dusk. Two sides of the same coin.
Honestly, personally to me, Erenville is one of the best written characters in this story so far. I love him deeply. I cried so hard for him.
PS. His love for his mother becomes so clear in the love he pours into the fauna that she mentored him in. While working as a gleaner, he's probably as close to her as he can be when she's physically not there. In the moments we see him care for animals his entire countenance changes, he becomes soft and caring, even exuberant and joyful.
#oh no#someone let sunny at the keyboard again#you'd think i had a degree in comparative literature and spend way too much time analysing story narratives or something...#anyway#i can't stop thinking about erenville#erenville#dawntrail#dawntrail spoilers#7.0#7.0 spoilers#ramblings
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I am once again dabbling in spoilers for Sinners territory, BUT I did not consciously register until watching Sinners a second time that Remmick attacked Bert in their nursery. Told Joan, "Shhhh, don't cry." while rocking in their nursing chair, next to their crib. Yet there is no actual baby to be heard or seen anywhere. Someone read A Modest Proposal by Jonathan Swift (probably the year it came out) like it was a recipe book, and it shows.
#and not that bert or joan are major characters#but the fact their baby just never comes up at all after that#to the point where i full on forgot they at some point must've had one#compared to how ever-present annie and smoke's baby is#how annie never stops nursing and caring#even though their's was lost before the story even began#ooooh this movie </3#remmick#sinners#sinners movie
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Aaaaaaagh I wanna write mechanisms fanfiction so bad!!!! I don’t know the character thoooo it’ll be so bad
#they’d all be horrifically miscjaracterized!#that was a horrible misspelling of mischaracteriEd#okay I can’t spell#they’d all be so out of character#and I’d get the lore wrong#and my headcanons might not make a lick of sense compared to the actual story#like- why can’t j just project my problems onto them?#possibky because I don’t really have any plot ideas#just loose headcanons and a few scenes that might look nice in a larger fic#I bit the bullet and started writing one#that’s like- Jonny right after killing his dad#but idk how to write Carmilla AT ALL#and I think I’m getting Jonnny’s thoughts and opinions on his father all wrong#so I might but a stop to that fic very soon#the mechanisms#mechanisms band#the mechs#the mechs band#I’m out here SUFFERING yall#I’m reading fanfics to see how others write these characters#so if yall have any good Brian angst#OH anything about his morality switch especially- I so want to dig into that
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this is about Griddlehark but it’s also about Hellylena
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Kaeyappreciation post!
Kaeya is wonderful in a sense that he:
Has a penmanship described as "Beautiful Handwriting". He for sure worked on that.
Willingly spends his time making sure his outfit looks perfect
Is well-loved by Mondstadt and the Dawn Winery staff
Is described to like a prince, both in looks and in actions
Is shown to be gentle and caring to children and elderly, most seen with Klee and the staff from Dawn Winery
Is a great listener and, therefore, also knows what gifts to buy based off of something someone said in passing
Is predominantly kind- unafraid to help out and defend someone in need. His first reaction is always kindness, and worry about covering up that kindness later on
But Kaeya also has his moments where he:
Says things out of pocket with enough alcohol in his system. Things that usually lead to shame and regret.
Would rather give others the credit for his hard work if he could help it
Intentionally makes himself look suspicious by withholding information and only throwing tidbits that are not of substance
Has sadist tendencies, which affects how he treats both his (cavalry) company and his enemies
Can and will use underhanded tactics to gain the upper hand
Rarely ever says what he truly wants to say
Has a fake smile. Usually lies or only deals with half truths.
He is such a complex character. I really do want people to appreciate him and his intricacies more. The fact that his entire personality and story is done so well and continues to actually grow and expand as the story progresses is something that genuinely makes me want to keep watch of him. I have never, in all my fandoms, stuck to a character as long as I did with Kaeya, and honestly? I know I'm not alone with this.
Look at how well they made our boy!
#the longest other characters have lasted with me is 6 months at most but kaeya has been eating my brain for YEARS#kaeyachi randoms#kaeya#kaeya alberich#note: everything listed here is from the kaeya hangout/limited events/character stories. None of these are HCs#but no seriously look at how much we have of him and yet all of this is still barely scratching the surface augh#im gonna keep digging#HIS FLAWS ARE APPRECIATED IN THIS HOUSE#room for growth and error? thats very cool. give me more pls#give kaeya the dan heng treatment 🙏#bro's character is legit getting more and more detailed its amazing like ayo why is genshin leaving other characters in the dust?!#look at how they made kaeya and compare it with others who have lower lore relevance...#some characters stopped growing after they were introduced :(#tbh the fact that genshin released a starter character this amazing made several of us stick to the game#thats amazing tbh...
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pivoting a little off of that Neve post to say real quick that if you haven't played the Templar route of DAI i highly recommend it. Some highlights:
Calpernia vs Leliana > Samson vs Cullen. Samson, as an antagonist, honestly feels pulled out of thin air, and having an extremely weird rivalry between him and Cullen shines a spotlight on the very strange role Cullen plays in DAI and makes the player wonder why they aren't switched. Calpernia, on the other hand, is a nuanced and complex character with somewhat sympathetic motivations, and watching Leliana get to put her spymaster skills to use to find out more about her is a lot more satisfying imo. Additionally, Samson's maguffin of his Red Lyrium armor being weakened for the unavoidable fight pales in comparison to convincing Calpernia to stand down by telling her the truth about how Corypheus is using her.
DAI's infamous issue with Corypheus's lack of presence in the story? Somewhat alleviated in this route. It's still not great, but we actively see him manipulate Calpernia, multiple times iirc, and at one point we hear his thoughts throughout one of the dungeons. I sincerely believe the reasons Corypheus gained such a reputation for being absent in the story are because most players have only played the mage route
Everything involving Therinfal Redoubt. The Envy demon, the mind prison, Cole's introduction (a far improvement over his intro in the mage route), the slow and natural revelation of the Venatori's ultimate goals (as a opposed to "i accidentally got chucked into the future but some time goo and here's everything i was able to learn for the whole Hour I was there"), Ser Barris my beloved <3
Depending on how you play it obviously, but there's an argument to be made that dissolving the Templars may do more good and result in more lasting change than freeing the Circles, seeing as the idea of the circles, as an academic space for mages to learn to control their powers, was never really the issue and oppression and abuse of the Templars is the true root of the problem. YMMV here though
As mentioned in a previous point, no time magic! this streamlines a lot of the storytelling imo, and makes for an INCREDIBLY CRUNCHY introduction to Dorian, who shows up at Haven and, since he's allowed to talk like a normal person and not a Spirit of Compassion, brings a very intense energy to the scene. Imo this works best if this is your very first time meeting him, as in you never went to Redcliffe and never had to deal with the Headache that is Alexius, the character assassination of Fiona, and the illogic inherent to Time Magic
The Templar route is just better integrated into the rest of the story. Cassandra's personal quest where they mention the Lord Seeker's been replaced by a demon? That no longer feels like it came out of left field, we literally saw that and so this quest feels like payoff. Leliana gets more time to shine doing Spymaster Things so her personal quest about being More Than A Tool feels more impactful. The Inquisition being an organization that scares the Chantry makes more sense because we stole the Chantry's army. The Red Templars no longer feel like a "bad thing made worse for some reason" and instead feel like sad endings for good (or well, i should say "good") people, who could've found a better way with the Inquisition and instead chose to be This. Emprise Du Lion and the Emerald Graves are now completely skippable areas, aside from whatever sidequests you'd like to do there.
Unfortunately, the greatest barrier to entry is justifying the In-Character reasons for your Inquisitor to get help from the Fucking Templars, which is. not ideal. BUT if you can do that, I really truly believe it's the superior route
#i'd go so far as to compare it to DA2 just not writing a mage ending#the mage route of DAI feels so immensely underbaked to me it's a very reminiscent feeling#does creating an rpg where the choices the player makes are rendered obsolete by virtue of one being vastly surperior to the other -#- mean it fails as a Role Playing Game? probably yeah.#BUT the PREMADE story BW is clearly trying to tell isn't that bad imo#and i enjoyed DAI a lot more once i stopped fighting it and just played along with who BW clearly wants my PC to be#also like. this is all in my humble onion#there are things to like about the Mage route and i haven't played the Templar route in like a year so i might be forgetting worse parts#and so if you prefer the mage route that's 100% awesome and valid#but i think a lot of people don't enjoy it and so they don't enjoy DAI as a whole bc they feel like the Templar route isn't an option#when i think it's DAI's best side and fixes (or at least alleviates) a lot of the game's issues#dragon age#dai#marie speaks
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Not to be that person but
The Wardance event really had Luka and Yanqing reflect each other. I feel like we got a speedrun of vaguely similar events that happen to Yanqing occur to Luka here. Like while being really good, he gets hit with obstacle after obstacle that shakes his confidence and willpower. Yet, when it comes down to it, Luka boxes because he loves it and it makes him feel happy and free.
"The most important thing is to always throw the next punch."
To work towards self-improvement, to love what you do, they both share that sentiment.
These two really felt like protagonists from different yet similar genres lol
This event was just so peak TvT
#honkai star rail#hsr yanqing#luka strongarm#i can't stop yapping about yanqing because THIS WAS HIS UPDATE FR#and luka's whole story throughout the wardance made me tear up at multiple points#and luka's story in general also makes me shed tears so there's that#i find his shounen protag energy great because i love those kinds of characters but what really makes him hit home is that emotional depth#his motivations and his worries#watching him struggle to adjust in such a new environment had me feeling a lot for him#bro was straight up hallucinating and being hit with slanderous rumors and the pressure to represent his planet#like literally the weight of the world on his shoulders (haha Igor...ha..*cries*)#anyway what a fun update! the boss fights were a bit of a struggle to get through compared to previous ones so yippee?#struggling jpg loves
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#girls i know my period is coming when i start assuming nobody likes my writing anymore#or me/my personality lmao#please god grant me the ability to not care and not always compare myself to others.#do you ever feel like you work very hard and it doesn't really get seen#which like isn't even true in my case because I have such nice readers#but also it's sad to see some of them go away over time#and i wonder is it something i did or that i've gotten worse in some way#then i feel like i should just stop because it shouldn't feel so hard and so sad#not all the time just sometimes when I'm hormonal#my body is mean to me#and so is my brain#i'm scared about getting more in my head about it now that I have increasingly less time to work on my story#I had endless free time before but now I'm becoming a manager at work and it means I simply won't anymore#and i fear fading into obscurity and nobody noticing or missing me or my story/characters#time to talk to real people so i don't feel like shit lmaoooooooo i've had a whole weekend working on a cake topper for a client#that i don't want to make#and i'm tired
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IM SO SICK of the manga at rhis point gege really NEEDS to bring gojo back and what does he mean he’s taking a break 😭 what is even the point of this story now
…look, if you’re dropping by my askbox just to rant negatively about the manga like this, i’d appreciate it if you don’t at all :’)
so now that you did, let me give you a guide and answers to a happier and stress-free life without hating:
if you’re sick of it then so be it. don’t read the manga. just do what you like to do best and that’s it
and why gege has to take a break? he’s a human too like us and he’s tired after thinking and writing and drawing. we should be grateful that he writes the manga in the first place and not rush him
what’s the point of this manga? yuji is the point of this manga. this is all about his growth. gojo is there to guide him and yes, he steals the show, but the final arc is going to be about the students he nurtured instead of him—it’s only right that it’s that way
hope this clears everything and have a good day :)
#i feel like there’s excessive hate towards gege just because he kills gojo off and the more i see it the more jarring it feels#like if we just stop obsessing over gojo for a sec we’ll realize how unique jjk is actually compared to other mangas#it’s explosive and unpredictable—how many other stories that can have the same feel as this one?#well then again that’s my opinion💁🏻♀️#📨 — mailbox
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Ienzo the Liar
#kingdom hearts#ienzo#library of ruina#project moon#yes this IS based on the pinocchio battle from library of ruina#it's a long story. i was supposed to draw this in july 2023. i didn't. there’s a whole dnd gimmick battle to go with it#me art#me post#pinocchio lor's tactics are pretty similar to zexion's in both re:com and kh2fm#copying your card deck (though zexion steals them instead of just copying them)#and changing the costs of your cards (can be compared to how zexion fucks with your ui in 2fm)#thematically relates less to xemnas's control and more to how zexion feels he is a creature of darkness#hence taking on shadow heartless features#wooden puppets hang from the ceiling in the background of pinocchio's battle and ive placed a hole in a suspicious place on each of them#aaand he's a child because pinocchio is a child#pinocchio lor specifically has the traits “curious” “copycat” and “liar”#which. ienzo :)#do you guys like the color palette I use for like every zexienzo drawing I do#not actually a question. I’m not going to stop using it#I CONSTANTLY forget to turn off red eye mode on my computer while drawing so it’s probably more blue than intended#I don’t really care though
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Wow, you guys already regressed to bitching about Castlevania. Btw, they produced Castlevania: Awakening in the Moonlight stage musical by Takarazuka Revue in Japan, it also has Dracula and Lisa in it. Castlevania lives on and thriving!
Considered just leaving this alone, but I'll take it as a chance for clarification.
Rant Below the Cut
I do not hate Castlevania, Netflix version or game version or stage musical version or any other iteration in-between. What few clips I've skimmed of the show online have suggested that it's something that the animators and writers put real heart in, plus a healthy dose of gay vampires to garnish with. I will repeat myself in saying that I quite enjoy the bloodstained Beauty and the Beast/villainy born of love route as a trope. To my knowledge, Castled Vania Dracula x Lisa is a great example of the latter. Great. Cool.
My issue with Castlevania is the issue I have with an infinity of films and books and games going back nearly 130 years. And that is the use of the characters' names from Dracula like they're costumes. Call it a nitpick or a pet peeve or just something that hits the big literary bitch button, but I Do Not Like that even when creators have ostensibly made a story that I could enjoy for its own merit, they feel compelled to graft the Dracula cast's faces over entirely unrelated, antithetical characters and motivations, and spoil the overall experience for me, the Dracula the Novel enjoyer.
I don't begrudge other people for being chill about it or enjoying the stories that have come as a result. I can't talk shit and be the DON'T ENJOY THIS!!1! police when I openly enjoy the gratuitous hot mess that is Hellsing. I am not immune to bondage suit anime men or Crispin Freeman voice acting or nazis getting eaten. I am not throwing those stones in my glass house.
But I am standing on top of the glass house and hurling boulders at the creators who, whether they make something fantastic or mediocre or genuinely teeth-grindingly awful, keep passing the baton of 'If we add Dracula names to this it adds more legitimacy! No, I have not read the book and I never will, but I don't need to because I read a footnote in a wiki once, I saw a movie, I read a spinoff of a spinoff.' Over and over and over.
That is what upsets me. That is my bitching point. Not whether you or anyone else Likes a Thing. You are not Netflix. You are not Konami. You are not Hirano or Moore or Coppola or Newman or Besson or Moffat or Browning. What you enjoy does not matter to me and never will.
Go enjoy your musical and let me regress in peace.
#really the whole phenomenon of stapling public domain names over wildly OOC OCs is the crux of it#I know no amount of complaint or frustration will stop it#but that doesn't stop the frustration from nettling every time something like this comes up#the Wuthering Heights film's casting (and costuming dear god)#the Dorian Gray series getting the 'we're just bros~' treatment to no homo Dorian and Basil#Carmilla getting de-lesbianed or de-vampired or de-sympathized in every appearance#every Dracula story utterly refusing to let Dracula be his own self while erasing or rewriting the rest of the cast to be window-dressing#to big dickify the Count and alternately get ravished or emasculated/bastardified/killed off#if it were just a once in a while thing I could write all this stuff off as genuinely 'bold and subversive'#but it's not. it hasn't been since these books were first published. because from day one NOBODY has bothered to read and/or respect#the stories the authors put down; opting instead to make each successive spinoff or adaptation or cameo dedicated to watering everything#down into a homogenous anti-wave making (weirdly less progressive compared to the PRE-20TH CENTURY NOVELS) soup#so yeah#I'm gonna bitch
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Salaar is indeed a gay coming of age movie

Reading the reblog tag from this post lmao I can't help but think about how similar the goodbye scene between Elio and Oliver in Call me by your name with Varadeva first separation scene lmao
Especially Varadha lingering behind looking at Deva's moving vehicle as he left him in Khansaar, same with Elio who keeps staring at the train 😂 then we have the car scene with Baba sitting right beside Varadha just like Elio's mother turning his head once looking in sympathy that this pitiful kid just experience his first heartbreak, the dramatic lifting his head off the headrest akin to Elio rubbing his face in frustration about their goodbye, thennnnn we even have the focusing frame crying scene as tear rolling down the cheek of a brokenhearted boy.
Sir, Prashanth sir I need you to tell me that the inspiration for this sequence was cmbyn wasn't it even just a little bit? Stop playing with us, Salaar is a full queer romance isn't it??????
#cmbyn#oliver x elio#varadeva#salaar#queer movies#karthikeya dev#timothée chalamet#tollywood#it's a love story#please I will keep comparing the romance movie tropes with salaar#I will not stop#it's so many lmao#stop playing Prashanth#also thank you for the hilarious tags#reading the hashtags is the highlight of making gifset#bless you
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Author: This character was beautiful according to every beauty standard of her time, and also quiet and kind and good and feminine, but she was insipid and boring and stupid compared to the extroverted, wild bad girl with unconventional looks.
Me: Actually she's my favorite, I've adopted her, and I'm taking her away so you can't hurt her anymore.
#anyway justice for lucy floyd#the author keeps comparing her unfavorably to aurora#constantly mentions that she 'reads high church novels' while mocking high church novels#(incidentally she's making me like charlotte yonge more because she makes fun of her books)#(and i'm like woman she's a master at group dialogue and also her disabled characters are miles and miles better than yours)#and anyway she deserves better#this is like the anti woman in white#there i was like 'why are you marrying this boring conventional girl and not appreciating the active unconventional one?'#and here it's like 'stop obsessing over the unconventional one and appreciate the conventional one!'#sure you keep telling us he's come to appreciate her#while having him spend a lot of time thinking about aurora and pushing lucy out of the story#anyway this phenomenon in austen fandom is why i will never like mary crawford#aurora floyd#mary elizabeth braddon
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it's such a wild contrast going into the mighty nein after vox machina — first of all the atmosphere and the feel is completely different, clear indication that you've entered a different story, of different people, on a completely different continent. and i can't say i do not enjoy it.
but what's getting me the most is a contrast between vax — jumping recklessly in front of everybody, less of his own person but an addition to someone's life, a secondary priority, — and caleb — bruised, beaten, a mess of pain and terror plaguing his mind, keeping to the outskirts of the battle like a coward. there's guilt and grief following both of them but so differently. liam o'brien... wow.
#may watches the mighty nein#ep 5#i am can't stop comparing being fresh out of vox machina's story#but not in a bad way#more with genuine awe and appreciation for what this man does with his characters#liam o'brien#damn#the man you are#caleb widogast#vax'ildan#the mighty nein#vox machina#critical role
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