#and mistaking her for his child/sibling 💀💀

[bxtonpxss]

Running. Running. Running. Opacho dashed down the sidewalk, hurried footsteps echoing against the pavement, her tiny frame weaving between pedestrians. After a while, she finally slows, breath heaving as she ducks into a narrow alleyway. Pressing her back against the cool stone wall, she cautiously peeks out from behind the corner to scan for Nnoitra.

When the spindly man was nowhere to be seen, she sighs deeply and slides down to sit against the wall, tiny legs splayed out before her. She needed to catch her breath. Eventually time passes and Opacho puffs out her cheeks impatiently, her tummy was starting to rumble. “He take too long, and Opacho getting hungry…” she mutters to herself, unwrapping one of the onigiri to bite into it. She hums in delight at the flavor, it was spicy tuna mayo! It doesn't take long for her to polish it off, scarfing the treat down in several bites. A can of apple juice soon follows, the stolen meal did well to curb her growing hunger.

As she began to settle, its then she feels it.

A wave of raw anger surged toward her like a storm, crashing into her tiny frame and making her tremble. Opacho grits her teeth, steadying herself against the oppressive force of Nnoitra thoughts. His fury was loud, sharp, and biting. Rather than fear it, she finds herself growing rather annoyed by the emotions.

Opacho stands up, crossing her arms tightly over her chest, cheeks puffing out again as she huffs. Why he get mad at Opacho? He dummy who didn't run when he saw Opacho steal! Comes her own indignant thoughts. She decides to peek out from behind the alley again, feeling the weight of his rage grow stronger as he draws closer.

It doesn’t take long before she spots him storming down the sidewalk in her direction, his towering frame cutting an intimidating figure. She notes the wild look in his fiery gaze as his eyes dart around frantically. Searching.

Most likely for her.

As soon as he'd put down Opacho, his attention shifted from her to his current shopping task. She was going to steal some snacks for him, which was nice, but he still needed more stuff. Which he was going to buy. He continued to pick out a few items. A bag of chips, and then a toxic green looking soda. He was about to pick out some chewy candies too, when the sound of the alarm system startled him. He immediately understood that Opacho's attempt at stealing was getting fucked over.

Ain't my fuckin' problem.

That's right. Why he hell would it be his problem?

One of the store's employees were yelling at Opacho now. Nnoitra peeked around the isle to see what was going on. The kid was just standing there, blank stare in her eyes, while she clutched onto her stolen items. Then, Nnoitra blinked - and off she went. She practically bolted out the store. The doors teamed up with her, opening up so she could escape.

❝ Sir, you're going to have to pay for what your child took. ❞ said the store employee. He sounded strict. Fair enough, Nnoitra thought. Her parents should probably pay, but --- WAIT A FUCKING MINUTE!! The store clerk was looking at him.

❝ H a h ?? ❞ Nnoitra was almost stunned, and it showed. ❝ Ya better fuckin' not be talkin' 'ta me. ❞

❝ I saw you help her reach the top isle. You're telling me you're not her parent? ❞

This shit was wild. He had never been mistaken for someone's parent before. ❝ Or, are you her brother, perhaps? Either way, I assume you're responsible for her, and so you have to pay. ❞

This shit was SO not fucking happening to him right now.

Except that it was.

He argued with the clerk for several minutes. He got so annoyed that it became a yelling competition. Nnoitra threatened with violence, the employee threatened to call the police.

Eventually Nnoitra paid.

He was LIVID when he walked out of the store. Where the FUCK was that kid???? He was going to fucking strangle her!!

[donut251155]

The "Yugi twins situation" is NOT incestuous

I'll just analyze stuff people used to "prove" the opposite of this, as someone with a close (PLATONIC!!!) relationship with a sibling

I'll just get straight to the point

This scene is NOT incestuous. They hadn't seen each other for DECADES, it makes sense that Tsukasa reached out to touch Amane - usually if you can't believe you're seeing someone you reach for their face, no? And he just moved his head up (+ the つ (translated as "rub" could just be his hand moving and could be a translation error. Like the "ah…" from Amane, he says "つー" (Tsu) which would've probably been him calling out for Tsukasa)

Also Amane was blushing because he WAS ABOUT TO FUCKING CRY??? IT'S NORMAL TO GET RED WHEN YOU CRY??? That's basic knowledge I fear

He'd seen his brother after AGES, AFTER HE KILLED HIM. I WOULD'VE HAVE CRIED TOO IF I WERE HIM Y'ALL HE'S CRUSHED BY GUILT, GRIEF AND IS HAPPY TO SEE HIS BROTHER AGAIN

I also think that if the scene was supposed to have some incestuous undertones, Tsukasa wouldn't have moved his thumb back.

Someone said this

I believe it doesn't have incestuous undertones for three reasons:

1. He had a dreamy and hopeful face in both cases. Usually, when characters dream of doing anything, even eating a cake or something like that, the artist adds blush to make the desire stronger. Tsukasa's desires were just having fun with his brother at a festival, something COMPLETELY PLATONIC, and knowing that his brother genuinely cares about him (another COMPLETELY PLATONIC thing driven by a sense of insecurity that he got because of how grumpy Amane was while sick. He wanted to hear his brother say "I love you" (PLATONICALLY) for the last time. It's less ambiguous in the Italian version because it's "Amane, tu mi vuoi bene?" which can only be seen as platonic (voler bene is platonic, amare romantic))

2. He looks cuter blushing. He's a child, children are supposed to be cute. He looks depressed without the blush in the first image 💀💀

See? He's cuter with the blush

3. He blushes for like 90% of the time. It makes him cuter, more childlike, he's FOUR YEARS OLD. The blush disappears when the drawing is too small for it to be added, when he's supposed to be confused, scary/creepy or serious.

This part fucking hell. Y'all do not know how four year olds think, do you?? Let me enlighten you

To the four year old Tsukasa, you either love or hate someone. No in between. He isn't talking about romantic love, he's talking about caring about someone, usually deeply. He means the platonic kind of love, it's all he knows. Nene reacted that way because she's 15, to her "love" is the romantic kind of love and she's in love with Hanako, same with Kou - they're teenagers who learnt that romantic and platonic love are different. Tsukasa doesn't know. He loves Amane in a platonic, brotherly way and thinks Nene loves his brother in the same exact way, like every other 4 year old would've assumed

(I reached the max of images :(( I meant the part where Tsukasa asks Nene if she loves Amane and says they're the same after she says she does, her mistaking it as romantic love and him taking it as platonic. Mb guys I'm new to Tumblr)

For the pose where the early manga showed us how Amane supposedly killed Tsukasa: it's not suggestive in any way. It just looks like Amane pushed Tsukasa down, stabbed him and that his knees gave out after he noticed he actually did what he did because of the wave of guilt and grief he felt (he even dropped the knife)

That's all I can think of atm :D

If you have any questions about this, ask ahead and I'll answer them!! I'm ready to answer

And sorry if I sounded a bit pissed off, but I am. I'm so sick of people misunderstanding sibling love lolol if you ship them go fuck yourself and do not talk to me, do not even breathe the same air as me I hate you and you're a disappointment to humanity

[yinyuedijun]

AAAA thoroughly enjoyed how you wrote the og timeline of desire path, ur writing had me immersed like crazy, esp in combination with the angst and morality of the fic... chefs kiss, it was sickeningly beautiful 😭

it was interesting to read the fic through sae's eyes as the eldest child with his sense of responsibility towards taking care of his siblings and then theres the guilt of doing what he thought was right leading to how wrong things turned out, ur mind... is just INSANNNEEEE (positively ofc).

it's also crazy how sae intended to push away reader and rin for their own good by using hurtful words but they ended up using each other to mend the hurt he inflicted. sheesh.

do you have anything to share about how the story goes when sae returns home to rin & reader? how do things go to shit then?

THANK YOUUU ANON 🥺💗 birth order really doomed sae, he got the short end of the stick because he was born first 😭

YES, I can share a synopsis of their adult reunion in funayuurei here:

(cw incest, victim blaming, ambiguously implied suicide)

it's pretty rare for sae and rin to be in japan at the same time nowadays (they are both pro footballers), but there is a short period where they're all there for one month and essentially are forced to see each other because their mom wants to have dinner. reader and rin, who are normally estranged from the rest of the family because of their incestuous relationship (that sae doesn't know about), attend. both of them see sae there.

the reader really misses sae despite everything, and wants to catch up. rin is on the fence about it. he has a negative relationship with sae; he now acknowledges his brother's mistreatment of him was an attempt to help his growth as a soccer player, so he has forgiven him on that front. however, he can't forgive sae's treatment of you. he perceives sae's feelings as having been lukewarm and lacking conviction (whereas rin, being batshit and egotistical, has 200% conviction about his incestuous feelings 💀) and that's why you got hurt.

that being said, rin doesn't really feel threatened by sae the way he was as a teenager. he's just grown up since then. so he concedes to catching up with sae, and sae even stays over one night because of the weather. as sae interacts with the reader and rin, he starts to realise that they are in a very serious romantic relationship. he immediately goes to talk to his parents about this, and he realises that both of them already know this. it's an open secret and his mother has just given up on trying to separate them.

this does something really horrible to sae mentally. I'm not sure if you saw this, but sae's mother previously accused him of having abused/exploited the reader and encouraged these incestuous feelings in her. the guilt from this, plus the weight of being the eldest, is what led him to alienate himself from his younger sister whom he loved. but now he fully realises that this decision only ended up with rin getting together with her instead - and worse yet, their parents aren't punishing rin for it.

SO sae kind of like. goes on this bender of repressed frustration. he calls you to a bar (alone, without rin) and speaks with you, with the intention of trying to get you to leave rin. instead you make a move on him (in a bid to get him to "come back" - romantic and sexual behaviour is unfortunately the only way you know how to communicate with your brothers at this point). in a moment of weakness, sae sleeps with you.

he wakes up - this is the first scene of funayuurei - and finds himself in a nightmare scenario where he's done the worst and slept with you. he tells you it was a mistake, and that it's wrong, and that your feelings are unnatural - trying to undo whatever happened last night. then he leaves.

now, the reader in this version of the story is like... she is not the resilient person that she is in desire path. she has emotionally relied on her brothers her whole life, but sae just rejected her again, and she has lately gotten the sense that she's ruining rin's life by being with him. worse yet, sae just called her a mistake, wrong, disgusting etc (things she's heard from adults her whole life), and she internalizes all of it. she feels utterly worthless and goes to sagami bay, thinking about how her mother drowned herself here. she calls rin out of the blue and thanks him because he's the only person in her life who's never found her disgusting or as something to be thrown away.

when she hangs up, rin gets a sense of something being terribly wrong. he remembers hearing the sound of the sea in your phone call to him, and he rushes to sagami bay. he runs along the shoreline, calling your name - and this is the ending of the fic.

[alchemicaladarna]

I saw a lot of people making headcanons about a Percy Jackson crossover after watching the "Lost" animatic, so I thought I could contribute some of my headcanons! :D

I LOVE THIS AU SO MUCH I SPENT AN HOUR RESEARCHING ABOUT THE GODS AND THE EGGS' PERSONALITIES SO I CAN BE ACCURATE WITH ASSIGNING THEM A GODLY PARENT LMAO

Tldr for anyone that wants the short version of this post;

Leo: Aphrodite

Chayanne: Zeus

Richarlyson: Athena or Hermes

Dapper: Hecate or Hades/Pluto

Pomme: Demeter but she's a Hunter of Artemis

Ramon: Hephaestus

Tallulah: Apollo

Trumpet: Hermes (or unclaimed demigod)

Bobby: Ares

Tilin: a lot of options tbh (see explation) (or unclaimed demigod)

Juanaflippa: Dionysus

Leo: Aphrodite because she loves flowers and looking beautiful. Like. My girl cannot handle sleeping in a reinforced room because the reinforced blocks are ugly😭💀

Chayanne: feels like an Ares because of his connection with Techno and his warrior spirit, however, I do think he's more responsible/acts like a big brother to a lot of his siblings and sort of has a leader-like role, so I headcanon Chayanne as a child of Zeus.

Richas: kinda feels like Athena's child because she is known as the goddess of crafts as well as knowledge, and he has a talent for art and an affinity for enigmas like his dad Cellbit, but he is often very mischievous and chaotic, so I feel like he fits in with Hermes, rahter than Athena.

Dapper: a Hades/Pluto child in my opinion because of his connection to death; he's also very knowledgeable, but I'm kinda struggling to think of a god of knowledge that is different from Athena. To be fair, he did pick the Death entity in Cellbit's paranormal room, so I think Hades fits him more than a knowledge-aligned god. He can also be a child of Hecate because of his connections with the paranormal, mysticism, and necromancy/grim reaper stuff.

Pomme: She is definitely Demeter's daughter because of her affinity with nature, but if you're familiar with Greek mythology, you might remember that she can be fierce and very vengeful. She can also fit with Persephone because of this tbh. Also, although she is a daughter of Demeter, I think she would be a Hunter of Artemis, so you can incorporate her warrior side without her being necessarily affiliated with Ares.

Ramon: 100% a Hephaestus child, but can also be considered Hypnos' kid because of how much he likes to sleep, especially during the early days.

Tallulah: definitely gives off Apollo vibes, but she hangs out with the children of Demeter so often because of her love of nature and flowers, that people mistake her as a child of Demeter rather than Apollo.

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The deaceased eggs are interesting because some of them died before they had a chance to truly develop their personalities to assign them to a specific godly parent, but I tried my best!

Trumpet: I didn't get to know him, unfortunately, but from what people say, he was very mischievous and liked to place bombs to prank people, so he could be a child of Hermes. (also, something sad to consider is how, at least in the first pjo series, kids who were unclaimed by their godly parents, ended up in the Hermes cabin- so, if we want to be super sad, we can say that Trumpet was never claimed by his godly parent D':)

Bobby: He looooved fighting and dungeons very much, and be was one of the most aggressive eggs (except when it came to Jaiden lmao), so I can't see Bobby having any parent other than Ares tbh.

Tilin: ngl I don't know too much about Tilin, but from what I've gathered from Jaiden's early streams was that they had a strong fighting spirit like Bobby; but, according to the wiki, they were very compassionate and empathetic as well, and towards the end of their life, they became kind of depressed because they felt neglected by Quackity and they never met their other dad, Luzu. They're actually kind of similiar to Tallulah in a way, but in the pjo universe, they kinda remind me of Bianca Di Angelo as well. They could either be a child of Hades/Pluto, Ares, Hermes, or even Nemesis or Eris, the goddess of chaos. Orrrr we could also go the sad route and say they were never actually claimed by their godly parent, and thus, they were kind of taken care of by everybody, just like in the server.

Juanflippa: Another egg I don't know much about except that Juanflippa was a very chaotic egg, but she was very kind and had a positive attitude, despite her situation often being very unfortunate. She kinda fits in the Hermes cabin, but I think she is a child of Dionysus because, according to the myths, Dionysus was a patron god for transgender or non-binary people. He was also a patron god of madness and chaos, and that's always the energy of Slimecicle's streams tbh. (Fun fact: even though Dionysus is commonly referred to with as a male entity, he rejected binaries and embraced a bigender identity, much to the dismay of the ancient Greeks) Anyways, got a little sidetracked with the lore, but I think Juanaflippa is a child of Dionysus because of her chaotic nature, and also for fun!

[sun-undone]

You definitely reminded me of some key points in season 3 that I definitely didn’t consider.

The château being burned down by topper seal the deal of him becoming an enemy. It would be EXTREMELY hard to see topper having a redemption story after that with some corny BS line like “ hey John b no hard feelings with the château, right?”💀💀💀

But just a warning 👀 if you hear Sarah’s voice starting off a epsiode with a reflective monologue of confusion and indecisiveness, then You know what’s coming 😂 let’s see if the pates intentionally screw us over with her character growth.

I agree with Jarah B being the stable couple as the other couples are still fresh and have some more exploring to do with their dynamic. I would love to see a bond created between JJ and Mike maybe closer to the end of season 4 to show Mike he can be the guy for kie and mike should give him a chance just like he was given one before he got accepted into the kooks.. we’ll seeeeee

NOWWWW

MR COUNTRY CLUB HIMSELF

Mark my words if Rafe does not become a Pogue by the end of season 4 he will die sacrificing his life for them with his final words laying in Sarah’s arms saying

“ I finally did something right”

( if I am completely wrong just forget I ever existed 🤣🤣)

LETS BE HONEST Ward created a monster with rafe. But rafe mistakes EAT HIM UP ALIVE which is why he is heavy on drugs. I still remember him crying because Barry didn’t have any coke for him one day and he freaked out. Rafe is a lunatic but not a serial killer. Which is why he went back to save Ward after putting a hit man on him. Rafe wants real acceptance! His problem is he always tries to fix his mistakes last minute.

Rafe isn’t a kook because of the luxury lifestyle. He’s a kook because of power and validation. Unlike topper who is a silver spoon fed kid with no siblings. Just a spoiled single child.

If the JJ and rafe fight happens. I think it’s early in the season. I don’t think they’ll make it a big ordeal. I feel like the Pogue gang will have bigger fish to fry by the end of the season if they’re on a new treasure hunt.

OK, please rip my response to shreds with your thoughts, I’m all ears.

Look at what this stupid little boat show has done to us 🥲

oooooh okay this is such an interesting topic, Rafe is such an interesting character to begin with, so i think his storyline in s4 is the one i'm most curious about. especially since we got nothing from him in the s3 finale for whatever dumb reason.

this is a very complex conversation to have, but to start, i don't think i want a redemption for Rafe! and i think they kind of closed the door on him sacrificing himself for the pogues or Sarah in particular by having Ward do it in season 3. i truly don't know how far they're gonna go with him seeking revenge on the pogues for Ward's death, or what they plan on doing with his character after this season, but whatever it is, i just don't see him turning a new leaf by the end of it. the ending for Rafe i'd most like to see is him going to jail and losing all of his assets and possessions, including Tannyhill, so Pope can snatch it up and make it a museum that tells the true story of Denmark Tanny. but i'm getting ahead of myself, let's talk about the really juicy stuff

do Rafe's actions eat him up anymore? i definitely agree that in the first 2 seasons, he was an absolute wreck trying to hold himself together with coke and by desperately seeking Ward's validation to keep himself occupied. but what about in season 3? he has that scene with Kie in episode 2 where he tries to paint himself as the victim for killing Peterkin, and i think that his denial truly runs that deep at this point. through spinning the story in his own mind, he's convinced himself that he did the right thing so he doesn't have to feel all the complicated emotions that we saw him feeling at the end of season 1 and even into season 2 in the aftermath of the murder. but in terms of Sarah, he does actually get emotional when he explains that he knows it was wrong, which is incredibly interesting to me. he clearly hasn't done the same mental gymnastics in trying to defend himself for that, so i could definitely see him genuinely feeling remorseful, which opens up that same incredibly complex dynamic that he and Sarah have had for a while now. there's a part of him that will always resent her for being Ward's favorite for so long, but now we can see that there is real guilt about trying to kill her. i think that scene really captures the pure instability of Rafe's mental state that still exists in some capacity, mainly in terms of Sarah, which we unfortunately don't see a ton of moving forward in the season since he barely has any scenes with the pogues. in general, he actually seems pretty confident and secure, maybe the best we've ever seen him, in terms of his mental and emotional state. so is the guilt really bothering him that much? the coke doesn't seem to be a coping mechanism for him like it had been before, like he was constantly using for the majority of season 2. but we just didn't see him struggling with his past actions in season 3, it was much more about his present and especially his future.

but for season 4, i'm definitely expecting a return to the more unstable side of Rafe as he plots revenge. who will he target in particular? who does he think is most responsible? will he choose to leave the other pogues out of the crossfire? if he gets the chance to kill Sarah again, would he take it? if he really was remorseful at the beginning of season 3, has that been overtaken by rage by the beginning of season 4? the year and a half time jump makes this much trickier cause maybe he's been trying to keep his mind off of it and do his own thing and resist the urge to get revenge but when he hears about the pogues getting recognition for their findings, it sends him off the deep end again? or has he been stewing the entire time? has the time given his rage the chance to simmer down a bit or has it only boiled over into something worse? now that he has the blessing of his father, which is the only thing he's ever really wanted, what are his motivations? how will he shift his way of thinking now that there's no more Ward to aspire to or to spite, and how will his mental state fare now that he believes that the pogues have taken away any opportunity he might've had to mend his relationship with his father?

there's truly so many things to consider and countless different avenues that his path could take, and i really do not know what is most likely at this point!! Drew hasn't even gotten to set yet so there's absolutely no bts to speculate about either. personally, i love Rafe as a character and i don't wanna see him killed off, and like i said before, although he expresses remorse in 3x02, i'm not sure if it's gonna be enough moving forward. i've always been interested in his character and have never shied away from the fact that Ward absolutely aided in fucking him up for life, BUT i just don't know if Rafe himself thinks he needs redeeming. and i especially don't know if he'll be thinking in that way in the aftermath of Ward's death.

but really, who knows???? i'm voting squarely against a redemption or any kind of sacrifice, but god, i am so so so intrigued to see where the pates take him.

this was really fun to think about and i could probably ramble on for way way way longer, but this is long enough already!!! thanks for sparking up the discussion! ☺️

[lightlycareless]

sorry for any mistakes, english is not my first language going straight to the point, I LOVE how you write the feelings of the characters, it's like a real situation

About chapter 28 kfjgjf, Ranta and Naoya coming up with a plan on how to separate Y/n and Naoki reminded me that scene from Lion King when Timan and Pumbaa try to separate Nala and Simba, but only getting closer to each other hahajah

I love the scenes with Naoki, he is so loving around Y/N, she deserves it after the whole nightmare with Naoya. I am also curious to know the age difference between the two since he is Naobito's first child 🤔

There are so many things that I'm curious to know, how Naoya's first interaction with Y/n will be after all this time without contact with each other, if their relationship can still be evolved and etc.

I'm looking forward to the next episodes hope all is well with you, thank you for writing this story🥺💐



Hello anon!!

Thank you so much for your lovely words 😭❤❤❤❤❤❤ They mean the world to me, thank you thank you thank you!!!! (we out here giving the 5d experience amirite??? ignore this haha)

Yes!! I totally see the resemblance now hAHAHAHAH I mean, that’s probably what’s going to happen considering how Y/N doesn’t even want to see Naoya at all—and after all the things he’s done… can you blame her? I’m team Naoaki as for right now, I’m waiting for Mr. Naoya to wake up and stop his delusional madness, but that’s essentially asking for a miracle hahahah and Ranta certainly doesn't deserve to be wasting his energy on a guy like that 🙄 anyways...

I’m glad you’re liking the scenes with him! Naoaki is a guilty pleasure, but a well-deserved one if I’m being completely honest…. (it doesn’t make it guilty anymore now, does it? Lol) ah, isn't he dreamy?

As for their age gap, Y/N is 18, Naoya is 19, and Naoaki is 26. I remember initially wanting to make him a bit older to basically put a 3 year gap between each sibling, but after checking with the council (you, my lovely readers) I decided to settle for his current age, 26 :> I basically forced their poor mother to birth kid after kid 💀 I apologize.

I do intend to write somewhat detailed profiles of the characters (or at least the main ones) so all this extra information like their age, hobbies, trivia, backgrounds, that kind of stuff, will be available :> but I’ve been struggling a bit because I gotta write down their backstories and most of them aren’t even developed lmao.

As for the rest of your questions, you will see 👀 just a matter of patience, and enjoying the ride!

Once again, thank you so much for your kind words. It really motivates me to keep on trying and doing my best!! I hope you’ll like the rest of the story!

Have a wonderful weekend, take care, and hope to see you soon!!!

[toddstool]

long and spoilers ig under the cut

notes as i was watching:

THE GRANDMA IS SOOO MEAAANNN that grandmother disappointment hits different. reminds me of mine and how she's always kind of "gently" disapproved of me being me (mentally ill and gnc and weird)

I read a theory that since mirabel is the next head of household, antonio got his gift from mirabel and not from abuela like the others, so his room and his gift aren't oppressive and mainly used just to serve. it's more about him and what he wants; what makes HIM happy. and that that's kinda shown when abuela is displeased to find animals warming her chair the next morning.

mirabel better than me cuz i woulda cussed every one out, ran away, and sabotaged them. like straight up I would've been the villain of this movie fr. someone said they would've blown that candle out and that's so real 💀

the casita def started cracking not because mirabel was feeling bad, but because the rest of the family left her out and were ignoring that one of their family members was hurting. because abuela decided to just overlook mirabel and kind of discard her after she found her useless, and when antonio got his gift and she was so happy, purposely just forgetting the "mistake" resulted in the house starting to shatter, because their family started to shatter (specially the member that is going to be in charge of the house next was left behind, cuz i mean she also did that with bruno and the house didn't start to crack) also how tf did bruno fix the house that fucking quickly

another theory that i read: luisa: brawn, isabela: beauty, therefore mirabel: brains. BUT STILL WHY DIDNT SHE GET A FUCKING DOOR THEN IK ITS JUST FOR THE STORY AND TO PORTRAY INTERGENERATIONAL TRAUMA BUT DAMN

mirabel's mom is soooooooooo pretty

abuela pulled the one white flower out of isabela's hair 🕵 pretty sure someone's already pointed that out tho

I wish the sequence for "surface pressure" was based on more of her daily chores and was realistic. i think that would flesh out the surroundings more.

isabela probably had to go thru SO MUCH SHIT as the first grand kid YIKES. i imagine she was much more messy and creative as a child and just got constantly shut down and shit on. and then as she got older she projected all that hate onto mirabel

i definitely feel like this story wasn't fleshed out enough and that they didn't have enough time to portray what they wanted to. cuz it does feel like a lot of love went into this but at the same time why does some of this shit happen? why does that stuff in bruno's room happen? almost like there was some executive interference with the storyboard-ers.

we don't talk about Bruno but the entirety of the town is gonna participate in this musical number

I really need to watch that youtube essay titled "disney has an adorkable problem" cuz true

dolores lowkey sucks like girl can u not shut up. she probably hears so much shit but she has to say something about this during this dinner. ik it's just to further the plot but I hate writing like that.

the fucking door kick back into bruno's rat nest 💀

dolores had to hear their whole convo in the walls right??

the kid that voiced antonio did a great job

again to reiterate: grandma being a hater is what's causing the cracks, not mirabel's existence. her tough attitude was necessary after the war but it's not needed now

love fixing a sibling rivalry that's been going for almost a decade with a single musical score👍

ooo I forgot about the part during this song where isabela and mirabel stop in front of the candle to hug and it glows brighter and the cracks fix themselves. i guess luisa's powers are not working because she still doesn't believe in herself and still bases her worth on what she does for others

are mirabel and abuela the only ones that are able to control/communicate with the casita? I think they're the only ones shown to do so at least.

why tf did pedro stay back and try to stop the men on horse back what the hell was he gonna do. i just feel like some of this stuff wasn't thought out idk.

the whole ending seems like it was cut short and just happens so quick.

the adorkable problem is strong with bruno and mirabel and it just makes their characters dislikable, but then again this was made by millennials. and also it's a children's movie.

what's "the stars dont shine they burn" supposed to mean

movie should've been 2 hours at least, with more interactions with mirabel and her cousins and aunt/uncle, to show more problems with the family and more of her fixing that.

i did read that some people didn't like the fact that they get the magic back once mirabel touches the door knob, but i think that shows the magic is in mirabel and she watches over it and is the next family matriarch pretty well.

with a little rewriting and adding some more points it would've been great but all together i feel it was just a bit lacking. the world building didn't feel very real for some reason, it felt stiff and small. i didn't like some of mirabel's writing/portrayal like i said before, but I do like her, just could've been better.

I hate finishing a piece of media and coming out of it thinking "man that could've been great", something i feel way too often nowadays, and i definitely felt that with encanto. i like the world building, i like the characters, kinda like the story, but there's just something off? or missing? not sure

anyway

would.

thinking about encanto again jfc

[candyplayssssss]

HI ITS MERCURY >:D

i finally created a tumblr acc bc im cool and im epic 😎 anyways you write very very well and im glad I met you through your writing and im just glad a met you in general :D yes this counts as a wilby and mercury fluffy moment because most of it is me calling you a bitch and i just show affection through saying shit like that but i thought you deserve some appreciation, your a very good writer and a very good friend. You helped with the whole sitution with Izzy on tiktok which was the highlight of my week and it cheered my mood up a lot >:) this took a while because I wanted good grammar in my note to Mr. Grammar bitch so if theres any grammar mistakes please cut me some slack lmao, also i dont understand why your concerned about WOB (William Our Beloved) the religion because its a very beautiful thing that nobody should be concerned about >:(

You are so swag , I am glad we met too lmao

Cw: fluff , sibling stuff 😔

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William snickers as Mercury was yelling and practically screaming out.

"I am not short , bitch."

"Yeah yeah , sure." William replies with a playful eye roll.

Mercury punched Will's arm and laughed causing the other to go dead serious.

"Oh shit uhhh fuck fuck sorry Will." They semi-yell while cowering back.

William couldn't help but crack a smile at their action and giggled. Mercury tilted their head and quirked their eyebrow.

"Why are you laughing. Bitch."

"No reason." He says while standing up.

They give a frown.

"Where are you going?" They ask not keeping their eyes off William.

"I would love to stay and all but much work is to be done back at the cafe." He sighs , reaching into his back pocket.

"Oh c'mon it's a lovely evening and the park is still empty." Mercury says , patting the free space on the bench.

William put in some thought before shaking his head.

"Emily will start to get worried plus I promised her I'd help out with dinner tonight."

Mercury gives a sad frown and stands up from the bench.

"Stupid bitch and his wife. Dumb simp." They mumble and start to walk ahead.

William stands there , baffled. Without a word , the two began to walk back to his apartment.

-time skip-

It was a long way back and not a pleasant one. Even though Brighton streets were quiet , rain started to drizzle down , causing the two to get caught in a cold windy storm.

William turned to the shorter child and noticed they were shivering ever so slightly. Without hesitation , he takes his jacket off and taps their shoulder.

"What?" They retort , voice shaky.

"Here , take this. You seem cold." He tell them while gently nudging the jacket against their shoulder.

They snatch the jacket out of William's hand causing the other to flinch at the sudden movement.

"I am only taking it because uh- it is all your fault we get into this mess." They say playfully while put the jacket on.

-time skip-

Arriving at the entrance , William unlocks and opens the door. Mercury barged past and snickered , an idea coming to their head.

As he cleaned his feet on the mat , Mercury slammed the door shut.

"What the fuck?!" William was just heard by them.

"Hahaha bitch." They snicker and take their shoes off.

Swiftly he unlocks the door again and finds the look of horror on their face.

"HOW-"

He waved the keys in the air.

"I still had the keys smart ass."

Mercury scoffed and started to walk up the stairs.

"Oh no you don't. Today you are not staying over." He says with crossed arms.

"You can't tell me shit , bitch." They yell while laughing.

Mercury began to run up the stairs leaving William chasing after them.

"AAAAAAAA WAIT WILL I AM SORRY."

"GET BACK HERE RIGHT FUCKING NOW." He replies with an infuriated tone.

"NO WAY BITCH."

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A/n:

Ignore any grammatical errors. 💀

WOOOOO this was so fun to write LMFAO

Shout out to Mercury who is super cool lmao

[inthisfire-ifindrain]

🤡 🌙 🧑‍🤝‍🧑 (All of them Huehuehue)

🤡 - What’s something dumb they’re embarrassed about?

Fiona- you could literally pick any moment in her life lmao 💀 but one that sticks out the most to her is when she found an interesting 'white' rock. Vulpes later told her it was in fact not a rock but a old turd.

Vulpes- before he destroyed Nipton he went to Vegas, just as the doors started coming into view he realized he was still in full legion wear! Backing out quickly and changing before anyone noticed.

Adira- she occasionally goes into these 'nesting' fits and will collect sticks of various sizes. Sometimes she even starts to collect them in a spare room in her home. She will deny this ever happens and often act confused at how the sticks got there in the first place.

Belle- she thought a cigarette was one of thoes candy ones. And ate it, in front of a group of people... but being a Hemlock she couldn't let on that she made a mistake and continued to eat it like it was a normal thing.

🌙 - What’s their sleep schedule like?

Fiona- spurratic and inconsistent. She will go go go until she crashes, being up for days at a time until she passes out. ( wherever she passes out at) sometimes she will sleep for an entire 24 hours or even longer depending on how long her awake binge was.

Vulpes- he is more of a night owl, he tries often to make sure most of his plans are done at night which isn't too difficult concerning his line of work.

Adira- she prefers to sleep in the early hours of the morning and wake up just before evening being awake for half the day and most of the night, she is pretty consistent with this routine.

Belle- had bad insomnia due to being over worked. Sleeps only a few hours at a time during the night and lives off caffeine the rest of the time.

Tivan- has a regular sleep sechdule usually in bed early unless he gets caught up with his collection or making a deal.

🧑‍🤝‍🧑 - Do they have any siblings?

Fiona- no! She is an only child due to her mother escaping and Lucius never finding another 'wife'

Vulpes- he was an only child as well and dosent remember too much of his family before the legion.

Adira- has no memory of siblings, she has no memory of her past at all other then bits and pieces of flashbacks which are rare.

Belle- has about 6 siblings!!

Aria- has a twin that died when they were both in their teens.

Tivan- has many! Well they all call themselves siblings the Elders of the universe.