#and it's a difficult balance to strike!
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"I'll just write a drabble this time, I swear!" I said at 3 am, a couple days ago. I am now neck-deep in an introspective piece on Maude and Vivian's relationship, at 1.4k with no sign of stopping anytime soon
#just had some Insights I'm going to have to work into the 2nd draft too so that's sure to provide an even higher word count lmao#maude is a surprisingly difficult character to write! especially for introspection?#this is a woman who knows what she wants and is very unapologetic about it#but she also lies to herself frequently (possibly even without knowing she's doing it most of the time)#and it's a difficult balance to strike!#like it's not repression or denial so much as an unwillingess to face up to the truth. thus putting the blame on someone else to save face?#i don't know either. wish me luck lol#alys.txt
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worst doctor who creature design?
c'rizz because it's really lame to have an alien main character in an audio only series just look like some dude. he could look like anything. the visuals of audio are not constrained by budget or practicality. why is he just a guy. they need to fix this.
#i have been trying to redesign him#but its actually pretty difficult to strike that balance of alien vs casual enough to look like he talks with a normal man voice#at least not without just making the design look like a scalie which isnt what I'm really going for
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🔥 New Vegas: Old World Blues
I do not think they gave appropriate weight to the racial implications of the Little Yangtzee internment camp and the use of its inmates as test subjects- particularly since, unlike similar sites in the franchise where the atrocity is long past, the specific perpetrators and overseers are still alive and are meant to come across as, if not sympathetic, at least massively charismatic
#fallout#I think there's a difficult balance to strike here#because what's actually happening is that one of many similar atrocities is being thrown into stark relief#by the existence of a well-known real-world reference point#Feels somewhat gross to imply that these problems wouldn't exist if they were swapped out for prisoners ala the Robco site#chopping the beat entirely feels equally gross#it's kind of a mess#thoughts#meta#fallout new vegas#asks#ask#ask game
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the puppet is lying in a heap when the marionettist takes hold of its control.
the wires straighten as she pulls, running up to pulleys in the ceiling and back down. with fluid, almost human movements, the puppet stands up, hands clasped in front of it, facing its mistress.
"hello, pretty thing," she purrs. the puppet curtsies as the marionettist's deft fingers play its strings. it is a pretty thing, painted and lacquered wood in a short, frilly dress. its flawless face is fixed into the image of a serene expression.
"I'm feeling lonely. wouldn't you keep me company?" she steps closer to the puppet, and lifts up its chin with her free hand. she places a kiss on its cool lips.
the question is a jest, the answer predetermined. the puppet is hers, wholly and utterly and it would do just as she wished.
the puppet follows the marionettist in a few waltzing spins across the cluttered room, ending with her on the edge of the bed. the puppet kneels, impassive eyes watching its mistress strip one-handed. she spreads her legs to it, running her hand up her thigh.
the puppet leans in, hands on her inner thighs, and runs its segmented tongue between the marionettist's lips, flicking at the clit in rhythm to the minute twitches of the control. her deep, lingering breaths sound out in the quiet room.
"slower," the marionettist breathes, and without delay the puppet slows, with long licks and gentle circles. it's a nimble thing, precise in its servitude. the marionettist leans her head back.
"my pretty little toy," she says, biting her lip, then twitches with a sharp moan. "there," she says, and the puppet's tongue replicates its motion, growing faster with each flick. Soon its mistress lacks the breath for orders, but strings yank it to right where it is needed, force its tongue deeper inside her. the pretense falters and the puppet is reduced to an instrument of her pleasure, her fingers blurring in furious motion.
she orgasms and the puppet shudders and twitches and writhes in an echo of its mistress's thrashing. finally it falls limp on the floor. the marionettist pants, exhausted and euphoric. after some long moments, she reaches for the control, swaying from the ceiling. the puppet rises and goes to lie down next to her.
she wraps her arms around it, pulls it against her, and strokes its hair, smiling all the while.
#puppet#my writing#not technically monsterfucking?#really should figure out the tags at some point#anyway this was fun to write#a bit more avant garde than the previous stuff#a POV character with no interiority is a difficult balance to strike
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New Scotland Yard: Point of Impact (1.1, LWT, 1972)
"I thought they'd lumber you with it."
"Did you, why?"
"It's a touchy one, isn't it?"
"There's a policeman involved."
"Yeah, unpleasant."
"Always."
"You were bound to get it."
"Thank you."
"Would've never happened at all if it hadn't been for that blasted Law and Order Brigade turning up on the scene, bloody reactionaries."
"Look, spare me the catchphrases, will you? I don't understand what half of them mean, I don't suppose the people who bandy them about do either."
"Well, I happen to know what a reactionary is."
"Good. You must explain it to me in great detail. Some other time."
#new scotland yard#point of interest#lwt#1972#classic tv#tony wharmby#don houghton#john woodvine#john carlisle#bryan marshall#barry warren#claire warren#shirley cain#brian rawlinson#norman jones#basil henson#mel martin#nicholas young#recently trawling a certain You based Tube‚ i stumbled across a user who has uploaded great swathes of old telly‚ to my delight. a lot of#it I've already seen or even own‚ but finding NSY was huge: I've wanted to watch this for a while but the discs are frustratingly hard to#come by at a reasonable price since Network (rip in our hearts forever) went under. so i guess this is my viewing for the near future‚#before a copyright strike inevitably gets them pulled (and i don't think it's every episode that's available either). the series starts#promisingly‚ eschewing a safe and steady introduction for an altogether more challenging issue based ep; a man has died during a scuffle#between socialist protesters and rightwing counter protesters‚ apparently killed by a police officer. our leads must investigate whilst#balancing the difficult tightrope of public opinion‚ avoiding either a whitewash or an unjust persecution. it's heavy‚ polemical stuff but#the script works hard to maintain balance and present nuance‚ with idealists and extremists on either side (and Woodvine's senior copper#stubbornly sticking his feet in the center). it's still copaganda of course‚ but intelligently done nonetheless#we don't learn a great deal about our two leads at this point‚ but their relationship certainly seems spiky (Carlisle is given to making#leaps of deduction and announcing moral absolutes where Woodvine is almost frustratingly impartial to the extreme). plus nice to see#familiar faces like Marshall‚ Jones and Warren among the supporting cast. a very promising opener
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in the deepest recesses of my heart lies the knowledge that gija would use embarrassing euphemisms to describe anything sexual, even in his head. however, i refuse to subject both myself and my beloved readers to that so i’m letting him say cock (and by say i mean think, let’s not get carried away here!). it’ll be good for him
#the thing about gija is that he’s both very blunt and very easily flustered which is a difficult balance to strike#there’s also the nuances of how he thinks about intimacy that’s expected of him vs intimacy that he actually wants#but i can’t spell everything out and take away the extra enrichment from my silly little fic now can i#and the thing about me as a Romance Connoisseur is that i loathe euphemisms in the vast majority of cases#akayona#sorry for putting my fic editing blogging in the tag. or you’re welcome :)
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stockholm syndrome au!techno must be on the clouds now like he finally has cdream's heart and the dependecy that comes with it
He's actually happier than he thought he'd be! It's what he's been working towards for months, yk?
More under cut :P
Obviously there's still some steps he wants to take, a kiss is just the beginning of his great ambitions, hehe. But, that little peck really takes him by surprise. He gets a surge of like, almost genuine emotion? It's elation, certainly, but also this wave of warmth in his chest that he hasn't ever really felt before.
C!Phil is his best friend, the only person he's ever truly cared about. He genuinely fears for his safety and respects his opinion a lot, which is why he caves pretty quick to the guy when Phil presses him on what he's doing. This is the only connection he can use as a comparison, and in all his life no one has even come close to it.
Yet, here he is, holding and kissing this guy who at first was just someone he saw as an equal on the battlefield and that he got a kick out of making fun of him, now someone that has Techno jumping through all these elaborate hoops and making meticulous plans just to keep him a secret away from everyone else. He thinks if Phil was ever in danger and needed to be hidden away for whatever reason, he'd do much of the same things he is now.
It took centuries for him to establish that level of connection and respect for Phil. C!Dream wormed his way into Techno's heart in less than a year.
#dnb#dreamnoblade#dreblr#tw stockholm syndrome#into the fire au#bubble answers#Im tryna strike a balance of 'yeah this guys fucked up and has some control issues' but also 'hes actually kinda starting to like this guy'#which. is difficult to explain. I hope this is making sense to y'all 😭
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my kingdom for a modern au fic where Luke Skywalker is written in character
#(me reading any fic with Luke Skywalker in it) he would not fucking say that..#honestly finding a good non-modern-au one is hard too. he's a hard bitch to write dialogue for#he's hyperarticulate and hopeful and altruistic but also snarky and a bit of a whiny bitch sometimes and I love him so much#it's a difficult balance to strike like love and light to the fic writers who don't get it right#you still have my support#I honestly have to admire the ones who say fuck it and just make him a slutty twink. you're brave and powerful#however.. one does yearn for some in character writing. I will continue my search#wading through the fucking trenches trying to find a scrap of my beautiful twunk's winning personality
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I consider my earliest writing of Silver (think New Beginnings and such) to be far too uwu bapy cinnamon roll, but now I'm wondering if I'm not taking things too much into the opposite direction by making him too grömpy instead🤔
#the main games I base my characterisation on are the Rivals ones but he definitely became nicer in the 2010s#but he's still quite sassy haha#but he's also a sweetheart! and I wonder if I'm good at combining all that into an authentic Silver#feels to me like I find it difficult to strike the perfect balance between it all
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I keep forgetting that y'all don't know the lore I made up for my au LOL-
Like specifically in the case of Chip's statement, there's a lot going on there that will be elaborated on in 6 to 15 business statements, but I haven't explained it to anyone outside of DMs-
#all this to say oooo you wanna ask me about my au so bad /silly /nf#I'm trying to keep things Mostly confidential but there's a difficult balance to strike between “no spoilers”#and “if no one else agrees that this is cool I'm going to explode”#anywasy rumi's statement is taking longer than i expected to write so maybe dont expect that one right on schedule </3#<-why did i give myself a schedule. anyways#tag rambling#jrwi pd tma au
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i don't have any new drawings to offer unfortunately but rn the concept i have for odette is that since her name's french she's clearly a vaugardian that moved to ka bue for whatever reason--so she likely follows change too. so her talk about it's part of why odile's so skeptical of the belief
#odette tag#odile.txt#i want to say that she might've also influenced odile's decision to travel to vaugarde? but i'm not sure how involved she should be with he#since i'm working odette's entire character off of like...two lines odile has in some room banter. aha.#i'm not entirely sure abt odette's design either bc i want to make her fit into isat's cast and style. i do that w/ all my fan characters#it's very difficult since there are a lot of liberties i want to take as well. gotta strike a good balance#btw if anyone wants to throw in an ask or whatever to help brainstorm things go right ahead!
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aa5 and aa6 spoilers here!
another reason why aa1, 2, 3 and 4 "feel" different from 5 and 6 - different writer. yamazaki isn't necessarily a bad writer, he did write some banger cases for ace attorney investigations 2 and i think also 1 as well. i'm not sure if aa5 and 6 are a result of too many cooks spoiling the broth, executive meddling or what, but... it does lose something.
shu takumi's writing is hallmarked by its lightheartedness, its focus and dedication to the comedic elements while never neglecting the emotional heart of the characters. it is characterized by simple, domestic events between family and friends. there are no bombs blowing up the courtroom, no dark age of the law (except for, well, rfta), no massive political revolutions. the stakes are relatively low and local, focusing instead on the family drama of the feys, the gramaryes, the angst of edgeworth, and how phoenix gets dragged into the tangle of their lives.
it is interesting and compelling storytelling because a LOT of storytelling time is spent on motive, characters, and how they feel about events. the funny moments endear you to the characters all the more, and the optional dialogue makes them seem more human and relatable. phoenix's snarky inner monologue and huge heart work together to grant him a distinct and unique character voice that makes you want to root for him. aa5 and aa6 try to focus more on grander stakes and simplified plotlines about good and evil, the lawyers v. the phantom who is unapologetically evil, the lawyers v. ga'ran who is fundamentally unsympathetic. it's not really as nuanced as say, morgan, who is definitely evil, but her motivation for being so is more fleshed out based on how jealous she was and her desire to elevate pearly to a higher status and escape being the branch family. the sense of urgency to events, and flat-ness of some of the humorous elements, causes you to connect with the characters less. phoenix is much less connected/engaged with trucy than he was in aa4, for example. his beanix personality is all but gone. apollo is also noticeably less connected with trucy whereas in aa4 they were joined at the hip. this is one of the more egregious examples but there are more, like klavier being reduced to a one-dimensional fanservice robot and a lack of explanation of any aa4 plot threads.
while the writing is not the best, i believe aa5 and aa6 do have some good things on offer. the stories and adventures are engaging, have some decent humor in them, and the pacing isn't bad. but the lack of takumi's input is really, really felt and makes them weaker entries in the franchise. i feel it is harder to get excited about replaying them than it is to get excited about replaying 1-2-3-4.
#also 1234 feel more like visual novels that were meant to be cohesive stories.#5 and 6 feel more like they were designed from the ground up to be GAMES first.#not bad just a different type of experience.#there are just less memorable character moments and less memorable dialogue and memes.#not that there ARENT any of those in 5 and 6 there are quite a lot#but takumi is a tough act to follow#its like if you tried to remake the peanuts comic strip without charles schulz.#that underlying emotional timbre of deadpan snark combined with soft commentary and a sprinkle of satire...#...coated generously with funny jokes#its an incredibly difficult balance to strike#there are only so many writers who can do it right and its a very personal thing i feel like.
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the thing about social interaction is that it is an essential skill that i never learnt and whatever of it existed was only grievously impaired during the pandemic so i'm trying to learn it by aggressively throwing myself into social situations even though it is difficult. surely something will stick
#having connections is so important#which is why i'm grabbing every opportunity to make new connections by the throat even if it scares my so so so much#chanting 'we must not romanticise ease we can do difficult things' as i scream cry and try to teach myself something basic#i have discovered in this process that i try too hard to make myself palatable and ultimately give others nothing to work with#that's probably the adhd. i can't strike a balance bw masking enough to not be ridiculed but not so much as to seem completely distant#but worrying about that is step 2. step 1 is just interacting with people at any cost#in less scary news i am trying to figure out stuff i like instead of just going along with stuff people around me have always told me i like#shit although maybe that's more scary now that i think about it...#i might have to.. open up... and talk about all this stuff... to all these people i'm trying to make connections with... Oh God#bwaaaaaaaaaaaa this self improvement shit is difficult and terrifying they should do classes on how to be a person
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I just looked up a question about a work of literature and took one million point of psychic damage from idiots on Reddit acting like the female characters are worse than the devil for daring to be humans with complicated emotions and motivations and sometimes making decisions that don't make 100% logical sense while they're heavily grieving. "Oh she's evil for still loving her boyfriend after he killed her brother in a very morally complicated situation where her brother had already killed someone who was essentially his brother even though humans bonding with the person that's causing them their current pain is a well documented phenomenon that can happen so easily that people with nefarious intent can purposefully induce it in what is known as trauma bonding and also she's like seventeen years old at most" are you fucking stupid
#yeah obviously this is about west side story#if you dislike any of the female characters in this movie you forfeit your right to say you want more complicated female characters#also hot take I don't like Bernardo. he's fine as a character but I don't like him as a person#“his sister's not grieving him properly!!” lmao that's so based of her because he's a misogynist#no one should be grieving his stupid ass#Anita's one of the main characters in the fic I'm writing and it's difficult to strike a balance between critiquing him in the narrative#but also honoring the fact that she loved him. anyway#west side story#west side story 1961#wss#maria west side story#tony west side story#bernardo west side story#riff west side story#maria x tony#tony x maria
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thank you to everyone who’s read my simon fic so far 🥺 i see some tags mentioning that they don’t follow cod and aren’t familiar with him at all besides maybe gifsets and edits—and i am so touched!!! that you’ve chosen to continue reading despite that 🥺 thank you so much 🥺
#this fic is honestly a lot more serious than i normally write!! and i lean into the character analysis a lot more than the romance#so i wasn’t really expecting it to be for everyone or easy to latch onto#esp since it’s kinda non-linear too!!!#i wrote this fic first as a birthday gift and second as a concept i really wanted to explore with him#i was also so nervous!!! bc i’ve never written him before and i realised when i started writing that he’s a tough one#his dialogue is insanely difficult (as someone who isn’t good at dialogue in general too 😭)#and there’s such a hard balance to strike when it comes to portraying his stoicism and jadedness with his dry humor and sarcasm + sassiness#trying to get inside his brain was also challenging bc he’s honestly been thru so much#ALL THIS TO SAY THO i did like what i ended up with#and it’s one of those things that i can say wrote itself#ANYWAY thank you to everyone 🥺#idk if i’ll ever write cod outside of birthday gifts for the Cod Girlies (gn) but 🥹🥹🥹🥹#i talked so much again
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god i love when characters have full conversations without communicating anything that they were intending to
#decided to rewatch all of good omens s2 at one go. perhaps a bad idea#random side note though i think this is one reason that i (and i assume a lot of other people?) struggle when writing dialogue#i know what the characters are trying to say but since it's very rare for humans to have super direct conversations irl—#—it sounds very strange for characters to actually say what they mean#but of course it isn't meant to be 100% realistic so there do have to be some points where they say something for the story's sake#idk. difficult balance to strike#august rambles
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