#Terrible formatting

[temporalbystander]

Starting off.

We have the first, and arguably worse, piece of Miraculous fanfiction I have written. There is so much wrong here that I need to fix but, since I'm not actually going to write Faybon's initial story anymore, I don't see the point in fixing it.

Chapter 1: Finally noticed.

On the first day of the school year I wasn't expecting much. So it was a good school in Paris, so what? I hadn't changed so how could I expect anyone's reaction to me to differ? So, I did what I had always done. I stayed quiet, kept to myself and stayed out of everyone else's way. All while keeping an eye on what they were up to. Not like it was hard. Pretty easy when nobody notices you. Miss Netta called it my superpower once to try and cheer me up. She didn't need to, I had gotten used to nobody caring about me, but I still appreciated the sentiment. Besides, having superpowers was cool so, like everyone else, when Ladybug and Cat Noir appeared I was very interested. I followed everything I could about them, though that was kind of hard to do considering all the part time jobs I worked. Finding the Ladyblog was a blessing.

Being invisible my entire life I got into the habit of watching the people around me. How they acted, how they sounded, it was a skill that would help me figure out who would be akumatised next. They were clearly attracted to negative emotions so any signs of sadness quickly caught my attention. I'll admit, when I first started it was to see who disappeared before the two heroes showed up. I quickly realised how bad an idea that was though so it instead became a method of self-preservation. Other than that, at school I watched the other students in order to work out their relationships, out of idle curiosity mainly. Friendships were easy, as were the varying types of dislike. What was very interesting were the crushes, or love as they put it, and how subtle the differences were from the typical interactions of friends. That's how I first noticed Marinette.

She was in my class and was quite a nice girl who had the makings of a fashion designer. She did have one problem though, she was kind of shy and didn't like standing out, so she kept mostly to herself. Then came the year Adrien Agreste joined our school, teen model and celebrity who also ended up in our class. Poor girl became amazingly clumsy when he was around, in both words and actions, you could practically see the hearts in her eyes when she was thinking of him. In my time as their classmates she wouldn't be the only one to show such feelings for him.

Both Chloe and Lila had intentions and, while not going to our school, Kagami would also grow close to him. Chloe saw him as something she deserved being Miss Popular and the daughter of the mayor, but they had grown up together so I kind of understood. Kagami had been sheltered from any friends by her mother and, since she saw Adrien as perfect, he was pretty much the only one worthy of her, not that she didn't care about his feelings, she clearly did. It was honestly quite sad to see how broken up she would be when they didn't work out. Out of all the potential girlfriends it was Lila that would worry me the most. While it was clear to everyone that she had intentions, except to the boy himself, it was her overall demeanor that unnerved me. In those rare moments when she let her guard down, when nobody could or would call her on it, normally when making a threat, her true nature shone through. Quite frankly, she terrified me, I found her sinister, if not downright evil at times.

But before we got to those last two, my attention mainly stayed on how Marinette acted with him. More than once the way she stumbled over her words and feet forced me to change position due to some unintended consequence of her actions. I had gotten quite used to it so, when another encounter sent her water bottle flying I was quick enough to make sure only my jacket got soaked. After which I went to hang it up in my locker to dry before continuing on with my day as normal. I had figured that would be the most exciting thing that would happen today, assuming no akuma's showed up of course, but I was very wrong. What happened next changed the course of my life.

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It was the end of the day and I had just gotten my jacket out of my locker, that had thankfully dried, when I heard an out of breath voice behind me. "Geez you're hard to pin down." I knew Marinette's voice so I turned around, quite curious to see who she was talking to, only to find her blue eyes staring right at me.

"Oh!" I cleared my throat to try and hide my surprise. "Yeah I've been told that a lot." Normally by people who have walked right by me shouting my name, it was honestly pretty funny when that happened. "How can I help you?" That question seemed to make her as confused as I was, followed quickly by embarrassment.

"I wanted to apologise for earlier." The girl in the pink jacket and jeans started slowly as everything began to make sense. It's the first time her accidents had ever actually affected me, of course she would notice now. "And for all the near misses before that." Or not… This was definitely new. "I mean I felt bad for it but you never brought it up so I figured you didn't mind but then I got you wet and I saw you without your jacket in class and I felt so guilty I just had to tell you how sorry I am." Looking up at me again, after that very drawn out sentence, she frowned. "Though I didn't think it would be so hard. You weave around everyone so easily I kept losing track of you." Then her eyes widened. "Oh gosh I'm sorry, I haven't even introduced myself yet. I'm Marinette Du Pein-Cheng, I sit near the front in most of our classes."

She knew we were in the same class. Something was very wrong here. "I'm Faybon. Faybon Tules. As for all that?" I shrugged and gave her a smile. "Don't worry about it, no harm done." Saying that I put my jacket back on and closed the locker before starting to leave.

Matching me step for step my conversation partner kept talking. "Are you sure?" She questioned nervously. "You just always seem to be around and I'm a mess."

"Not normally." I hadn't meant to say that, the shock of all this was getting to me.

"Pardon?" Naturally, she was confused.

Well, we had reached the front of the school by this point so maybe telling her would end this strange encounter. "You're not normally so clumsy." I started explaining with a shrug. "I mean sure you tend to trip when you're in a hurry but who doesn't? The only reason things were so bad this morning was because you were trying to talk to Adrien." Once I hit the bottom step I turned for home. There were chores I needed to do before rushing off to work.

"That obvious huh?" Glancing to my side I saw Marinette burying her face in her hands. "God I hope nobody else knows"

I sighed. Guess there was no getting out of this. Clearly she was comfortable with me as she wasn't even trying to deny it. I had no clue why that was but I should stop being rude and actually talk to her. "Don't worry about it so much. Only those who know you or pay as much attention as I do would see what's going on. If it makes you feel better Adrien is clueless about the entire thing." Okay why was I giving new information now?

"Really?" Of course that caught her attention. "What does he think then?"

Though she tried to sound  casual I could tell how desperate she was to know.

Shaking my head I decided to stop questioning it. Somehow I had found myself in a full fledged conversation with a classmate so I should probably start talking properly. "Well I can tell you that he is normally annoyed by what Chloe does but he's known her since they were kids and is willing to put up with a lot because of it." Honestly I had a large and varied pile of opinions when it came to Chloe Bourgeois and the way she acted but I wouldn't get into that now. "As for what you should do? Just don't play down your feelings too much or go overboard trying to convince him that you're just friends."

"Are you sure?" She was worried but that was understandable.

Coming to a stop on a street corner I turned to face her. "Marinette, listen to me, if you do that all you will end up doing is convincing him that friends is all you could ever be. He has to few of them to risk and he won't take the chance if you don't even hint that you are open to the possibility. As for the stuttering? If anything that works in your favour. He lives in a mansion and gets a limo everywhere. He probably thinks you're intimidated but are still trying to treat him normally." While the first girl to notice me, ever, thought that over I decided to point out where we were. "You live down this way don't you? I have to keep going."

If anything that surprised Marinette more than what I'd already said. "Yes, but how did you know that? You haven't been following me have you?"

I chuckled, actually chuckled, at the question. "Not at all, I know there's a bakery down that way with an apartment right above it. I also know that it's your parents who run it, you don't exactly have a common last name."

"Wow, you do notice a lot don't you?" When I nodded she gave me an uneasy smile. "Please don't tell anyone about my feelings for Adrien."

I managed to hold back my laughter this time, though how she got me laughing so easily had me worried, before answering her plea as seriously as possible. "Who would I tell? Hell, who would even ask?" My question didn't seem to calm her at all so I decided to break it to her gently. "Tell you what. Ask your friends how many there are in the class without counting and come tell me the answer tomorrow. You'll understand then." I don't know why I was inviting her to talk to me again but I hoped it would be worth it.

"Well, alright?" She was clearly still confused but started walking down the street before turning back to look at me. "Hey, I've wanted to say this since school started but I didn't think it was my place…" Marinette's nervous comment shocked me. She had noticed me since then? How? "But since you've been so kind and given me such good advice I thought I would return the favour. If you're set on wearing such neutral colours you should go more for the dark reds and blues. They'd go well with your eyes and skin tone." Perhaps realising how personal she was being, my classmate blushed hard. "Well, goodbye Faybon, it was nice talking to you, I'll see you tomorrow." Then she hurried off.

I could only wave and stare after her before looking down at myself. I had on a black jacket covering a grey shirt that matched the dark grey track pants on. The most colour I had were the dark brown shoes I was wearing. Then I really started laughing. "Fashion. Of course it was my fashion sense she noticed." Shaking my head at the strangeness at it all I continued on my way. Wasn't like she was wrong, the grey sometimes made me look sick in the wrong light, but nobody else noticed so I never really cared.

The lingering smile on my face was noticed as soon as I walked through the door. "Hello Faybon, you're looking happy today, did you have a good day at school sweetie?" Miss Netta's tone was slightly teasing as I kissed her cheek before hurrying into the store room to help with the cleaning.

"Actually, I did." I answered as I put on some gloves before starting up the stairs. "I had a really interesting conversation with a girl in my class on the way home. She commented on my choice of clothing."

"I'm glad, you do so much it's good for you to just talk sometime." Before I could reply a news bulletin popped up on the tv in the playroom. Yet another person had fallen victim to Hawk Moth. "Such trouble. I hope your friend got home safely."

I didn't correct her. As the scene unfolded on the screen I felt this slight feeling of worry curl in my stomach. "Yeah… Me too…" I couldn't move until Ladybug showed up. Only then did I continue my chores, content with the knowledge that everything would be okay, I'd catch the highlights on the Ladyblog later but there was a lot I needed to do before I had to leave for work.

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At the end of the day, after checking to see that all the kids were sleeping peacefully, I got into my pajamas and put my clothes aside to wash tomorrow. Just before getting into bed I opened my closet to pick my clothes for the next day. I hesitated over my typical choice before looking at my other options. Money was a little tight at the moment so the majority of what I made I gave to Miss Netta or spent on school supplies but I could still go out if I needed too. Yet the majority of colour in my ensemble came as gifts to help me stand out more. Not that it ever worked. Pulling out the red and white sports shoes I hadn't worn since I started working so much I started sorting through the rest. There was a light aqua blue shirt, Miss Netta said it matched my eyes, and some navy blue striped pants that weren't as casual as my grey ones. Setting them out ready for the morning I had to shake my head at my actions. Colour didn't make me any more noticeable so I was doing this just for Marinette. What had that girl done to me? Climbing into bed I decided not to dwell on it. Chances are she would forget all about talking to our classmates and finding me afterwards, more exciting stuff had happened after all.

[br3adtoasty]

Oh silly Youssef…..

[sarovhs]

This what happened, right?!

[msbarrows]

Argh... so I've been reading in Scum Villain's Self-Saving System (SVSSS) fandom recently. And it's given me a new pet peeve about formatting and TTS. A bunch of the authors in that fandom are using black lens brackets to indicate the 'system' voice, 【like this】, because the original novels do, and, yeah... unfortunately that's not always compatible with TTS (definitely not with google's TTS engine, and testing with various other online TTS engines gives mixed results).

Guess how I know they're called black lens brackets.

…

Go on, guess.

…

YUP! They get read aloud! Every. Single. Time. They. Appear. Open black lens bracket like this close black lens bracket.

Please resist using the novel's formatting and just use regular square brackets instead! Which do not get read aloud unless there's a space in a bad position, [ like this ]. If you want to be fancy, maybe use <tt>...</tt> formatting or a monospaced font such as courier to make it stand out more as something mechanical.

[Like this]

Which reminds me, another bad formatting choice I've bumped into multiple times (and I can't remember if I've mentioned this one before) is where authors use something <like this> to indicate things like speaking mind-to-mind, or that someone is speaking a foreign language (despite the actual text still being in English). Cool. Neat. Also not TTS compatible, unless you like repeatedly hearing less than and greater than mixed into the text. But guess what - there are already perfectly serviceable ‹single› and «double» angled quotation marks that could be used instead - and since they're recognized as actual quotation marks, they don't get read aloud! Shocking, I know.

Those angled quotation marks could also be another decent option for indication of things like the system voice, obviously.

«Like this»

Thanks to everyone who is already using more TTS-compatible formatting, and to anyone who decides to make some changes to theirs after reading this :)

[chocostrwberry]

How does Felix in this au learn he’s a senti? How old was he, and how did he take it?

After the life-altering talk:

[gotham-snark]

(X)

[whaliiwatching]

city smokers

prompt: cigarette

[euthanix]

[sporeclan]

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SporeClan's first babies!!!! I love them so much

[hopefulleafva]

Papyrus Wrote the UTDR Mystery Valentine

Okay so with a 2025 release for Deltarune chapters 3&4 confirmed I want to get this off my chest and document it for future me to either feel vindicated by or have a good laugh at how wrong it was. This has been eating me alive since the Valentine’s newsletter and I never said anything but I want this out there before anything new comes out.

Disclaimer: I have no idea if this is a theory other people have already made posts on or not because all I ever see is “it’s Gaster!” or “It’s not Gaster, it’s Dess/Egg Man/[Insert mysterious character here!]”. If someone has posted this theory before I missed it entirely. Not looking to steal anyone’s theory thunder here.

I’ve convinced myself this is Papyrus and just want to get my thoughts down here.

So. I see a lot of people talk about how the flippant and humorous way it’s written makes them think this isn’t Gaster. To get the Gaster stuff out of the way, my stance is that everyone has their own preferred idea of how they think Gaster acts and whether or not he could have a sense of humor, but we really have yet to learn a lot about him in canon. I don’t love us trying to make rules about what is and isn’t “in character” for him when we really haven’t met properly and have very little dialogue to go off of. I get a lot of people are basing their ideas of him being serious off Entry 17 and the popular assumption that the intro voice is Gaster. I think that’s fair and very understandable, but even still it’s only an extremely limited peek at what the guy is like. Point is, maybe he does have a silly sense of humor and maybe he doesn’t. I don’t want to entirely dismiss the idea that Gaster wrote this based on “it’s too silly, Gaster is serious!”. But I also think that the idea that because the speaker is a mysterious voice with meta knowledge of Deltarune that it MUST be Gaster is also a bit shaky.

Anyway.

Is it just me or does the bizarre roundabout way of phrasing things in the letter perfectly fall in line with how Papyrus speaks?

One of my favorite notes in the Undertale Legends of Localization book (HIGHLY recommend by the way, a really fascinating read) was this:

While yes, it’s important to bear in mind that this was the quote of a localizer and not Toby directly, I think it still rings very true for Papyrus’s character. Don’t really think I need a laundry list of examples for this point, right? Papyrus’s fun and unique way of speaking is such a memorable part of his character that you encounter in all routes.

Which is why it’s so interesting to me that this mystery writer seems to have a highly similar way of phrasing things in a unique and playful way.

The first one that really sticks out to me is the “I never forget someone I don’t remember.”

Really reminded me of the little bit you get after a post neutral run reset.

While not something I originally weighed in to my theory, it is worth noting that this bit between Papyrus and Sans occurs immediately after Papyrus has recognized Frisk after seeing them for this “first” time. This makes the mystery valentine writer’s preceding comment that they will know the forgotten person they are looking for immediately upon seeing them extra interesting.

This bit also stood out to me:

Because it also felt like very familiar phrasing. It took me a while to realize what it was making me think of.

Down to the quotations around a common phrase like it’s an alleged thing not a very common thing??? Like MAN.

While these were the only two parts I felt directly and strongly paralleled specific phrasing Papyrus has used before in canon, there were a few other things that caught my eye.

A faith in the power of love, and the power of belief.

(Yes, I realize the “even if you don’t think so” appears to negate the idea of Frisk’s beliefs being an important part of their ability to change, but I’d say Papyrus is still emphasizing that his beliefs are significant in this.)

Very strange that the writer doesn’t dismiss the idea that the person they have forgotten they wanted to help could be themself. How could you forget yourself? But then again…

And while not really the same degree of strength in a parallel, I just want to bring up that the letter writer remarks that the reader is odd yet reliable for responding out loud to a piece of written communication.

It is strange that the author seems to have still heard the reader’s out-loud reply to the letter. A weird instance where a mode of communication that has limits on what SHOULD be able to be perceived by the other person somehow has those limits broken and allows that person to comment on something they shouldn’t be able to perceive.

Kind of like if you were having a phone call with someone far away from you but they still seemed to somehow be able to know exactly what you were looking at and where you were. Where have we heard that before…?

Also come on. You can’t tell me “PUT ON YOUR COAT AND WASH YOUR FACE! OR, PUT ON YOUR FACE AND WASH YOUR COAT. NOT NECESSARILY IN THAT ORDER. OR, IN ANY ORDER AT ALL.” doesn’t sound like a Papyrus-ism.

I know some people may point out that Papyrus already has Valentines that are very explicitly from him in the newsletter, so it would be weird to have three that are and one that wasn’t. But I don’t think that necessarily should refute this idea. It could be possible the “signed” valentines are from Undertale’s Papyrus, and this one is from Deltarune’s Papyrus. Even if you subscribe to the idea that UT Papyrus IS DR Papyrus, this could simply be a letter sent from a different point in time.

Anyway, this has been eating me alive since February so I wanted to get it off my chest. Maybe this is completely off base, but interesting to think about.

[maskedteatime]

do i continue working on this

[teenagenutant]

Ngl I love Galileo's entire concept. Does he have double the ego-mask and double the insecurities?

hope you don't mind me using this message to compile some asks ^^ (if you don't see yours im probably planning on doing something else with it) thank you so much!! first off... yeah totally LOL

gali's being totally genuine here. i don't think galileo masks their feelings at all- they're a total emotional open book in contrast to both donnie and leo, lmao. when they're being egotistical, they mean it 200%, but its also the same when they're feeling insecure...

(a bunch more galileo asks beloooow)

made me giggle LMAO

in regards to powers: i'm still unsure on exactly how to handle it, but i do like the idea of being able to create more stable portal constructs... maybe being able to teleport constructed items? maybe being able to create more sci/fantasy constructs than donnie alone can...? much to think about. parmi definitely has a combined Even More Insane portal powers, messing with both dimensions and space... (but he operates on rule of funny, lol, so a bit unpredictable) they can probably still use their normal separate abilities to some extent, but probably are still affected by each other!

i love the idea of galileo getting Very hyperfocused Very easily- gali gets their love of learning and being right, and they don't feel hungry or tired as much as either donnie or leo would, so they can get really lost in the weeds... components of a fusion remember everything that happens and would probably retain the information learned, but wouldn't for example make leo instantly knowledgable on all the complicated science stuff donnie knows, and vice versa. aka: leo and donnie both ending up with a LOT of contextless, near-useless trivia after unfusing post-wikipedia binge. the image of them fusing exclusively to combine their ability to Prove Someone Wrong On The Internet is really, really good LMAO

THANK YOU !! galileo was a fun guy to design, i'm really glad people like them. i think being galileo is actually really fun, especially in the moment... like how initially excited donnie was + how hyped leo was to make scifi stuff in mind meld..

thank y'all for the asks!! i'll be tagging this stuff as 'fusion mayhem au' in the future. (again no promises this'll be a Formal AU Thing but i thought it be helpful for people to have a tag to filter!)

[agentsinlove]

ethan and benji's relationship through the series // m:i 3-fallout

[miidnighters]

It's my birthday ! To celebrate, I wanted to put together a little shout out of people I love because it's the most surefire way to get compliments back in return (I'm kidding!). Thankyou so much for writing with me and mashing our barbies together and making this hellsite such a fun place to be.

Also, seeing how this has changed from my last shoutout at Christmastime - notably, the people I tagged as "people I love who I don't write with very much" but who now I write with or talk to every day lmao.

Please let this have tagged everyone I wanted to tag

@92328

I love u so much. U know I do. I love all the random questions u ask and ur request for Isaac Facts and the fact that you refer to Morgan as "Nora's Husband" and the way you wanna lock Flynn up in a tower to keep him a baby forever. Never change lmao.

@bloodykneestm

Bender ur characters are chefs kiss and our dynamics are chefs kiss and I get such a huge smile whenever I see u in my notifs (either here or on disco). I love the things we come up with together.

@cigarettesandcoffee

My darling! I know you're not writing a lot atm but it makes my day whenever we chat and whenever you pop up with some random love. All of our pairings are so good and I can't wait to see what we cook up for the others.

@draconisa

I know you're ALSO not writing a lot atm but Dany and Isaac have my whole heart plus everything that we're doing on the multi for everyone there like. My brain is still stuck on Harts and Vasile like. Does it get any better?

@epistrefei

HELLO. ARTEMIS. WOW. I am so in awe of the original spin you're able to put on such a well-known character - and it's not just Artemis and Billie, it's Barty and Flynn, and watching what you do with Zahrosa and so many others.

@exquisitexagony

Sami is my baby. The relationship they have with Flynn and Bella (or Bella and Arthur) and all the others is so special to me, as well as everything we have going on your other blogs (Callie and Shimi, for example? Yes).

@fangmother

Rainer is who I want to be when I grow up. If I could be half as confident and gave less fucks. I love seeing all the wild shit she gets up to and following her different relationships with people who have been in her life for varying lengths of time.

@freekzout

What can I say about the freekz? Callie and Funke's relationship is so special to me BUT also the friendships we've built? Lu and Ruth? Flynn and Ruth? Bella and the both of them? Not to mention your other blogs - Bella and Connie in particular.

@inrovina

Every relationship my characters have with Xeno is SO special. Flynn and Lake are SO special. I'm so excited for what other shenanigans they get up to and all the potential new stuff we're doing on your multi !

@kurjaks

I need to put this man in an enclosure and study him. I love him so much, and I love the careful way you've crafted him, and the truly unique way he carries and conducts himself. PLUS the way we chat ooc? Peak.

@mystiika

Every one of your muses is a darling to me. We've started creating such interesting relationships between a few of our muses in varying stages of romance or friendship and I cannot wait to do more with you.

@recitedemise

Every time I see you in my notifs I know I am getting fed the Good Shit. You have such a way with words and what we've crafted between Gale and Callie is really something special to me. Plus to varying relationships w Harts and Bella? Yes.

@sorrowsick

There is no muse of yours that I don't love down bad. We have some truly batshit stuff going on and I know that I can always come to you with the wildest ideas and we can make it work. I am truly your biggest fan.

@soulmissed

August is the only child character I write with and I think that says something bc it's hard to write a child without them being too much of a caricature and it's hard to build relationships without them being one-note but you so it SO well, so we have such beautiful ties.

@starlyht

One of the true lights of my life I adore seeing u on my dash and in my notifs. We have some great ties between our characters and I truly love seeing your thoughts on lycanthropy or drow society or whatever takes your fancy.

@stcllata

I love that every pairing we toss together just seems to Work lmao. Whatever the situation, whoever the muse, we can always put them together and come out with something good. And by good I often mean shippy but like. Who's gonna tell us no?

@tewwor

I am so in awe of your mind and your worldbuilding, and I am so lucky to be able to play in these spaces you've built. I love the relationships we've built and I love that we can throw different characters together to see what sticks.

@vitalphenomena

I say this with the UTMOST affection but this is the most messed up roster of characters I've ever seen and I adore writing with them. I adore exploring all the different facets of their characters and how my characters interact with their struggles bc they're NOT perfect.

@whileurmine

If I see a man over 30 on my dash, odds are it's you. I love your roster and I love our OOC hate sessions and I love that we can both puck up and put down starters like nothing. Whether it's something established or a new idea we can always put a pair together.

@yxkanna

I know you're ALSO not writing atm but I have to let you know how much I love you and your babies. Not just Nick but all of them. We have some really interesting dynamics both platinic and romantic and I can't wait until you're back to pick them up.

And then of course some other shoutouts of people I don't love any less but perhaps don't write with or talk to as often <3 (which should change, honestly. Come yap w me <3)

@abysswarden | @berylcluster | @bucketkicked | @byanyan

@coastercrushed | @corsey | @cragsnow | @demonstigma

@downspirals | @fvzzyelf | @godstrayed | @hegrudges

@idnull | @kxllerblond | @lcngdays | @nabaidhean-neonach

@platiinums | @pohlepen | @redemnation | @strszyga

@withbeasts | @xinxiins

[phanyaoi]

hes so pretty, stop

[nightofnyx8]

I've been seeing a lot of "draw something in the art style of your mutuals," and I wanted to try something similar to say thank you to the many writers who put their heart and soul into this fandom.

Granted they're not perfect and they're a poor imitation of their true talentas as truly magnificent writers, but I thought I'd give it go :)

Presenting a thread of twiyor, written in the style of some of my favorite authors in the fandom (more to be added later) ❤️

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@puolain Master of ethereal imagery, poetry woven into every line

@nire-the-mithridatist Master of sentence structure, expert characterization, and witty dialouge (oh, and smut)

@firewoodfigs My dear friend, master of Taylor Swift lyrics, intimate consent, heartbreaking backstories, tender conversations, and waking me up at 4 in the morning with a new smutty wip ❤️

@neejmorp Master of just, really good smut :) Tickling my need for a slightly dominant Loid who's never truly in control of the situation