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OOO I FOUND IT! I know I learned about it in history class, it was the Amago clan of ninjas 𼡠that had that saying âThose who desire only technique will never understand it's everything beyond thatâ. And hereâs two quotes by Sensei Toshitsugu Takamatsu also known as âThe Last Shinobiâ: âHow difficult is life when one is not surprised by anything and laughing, everyday.â And âKnowing that disease and disaster are natural parts of life is the key to overcoming adversity with a calm and happy spirit.â
It was one of Sensei Takamatsuâs lessons about keeping spiritual peace and balance while not letting internal darkness consume oneâs life. (Hope you donât mind me doing themed quotes, I find traditional ninjas and samurai, especially their lessons and proverbs, fascinatingđ
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The Samurai Code Pt 2
IDW Drift x Reader
⢠Youâre real, warm against his servos as he makes his way through the halls toward the medbay. Heâs also painfully aware of how badly youâre shaking, the way youâre curling into yourself. âCan you understand me?â He asks, parting his servos enough he can see your eyes almost squinted shut, face drawn like youâre in pain even though heâs sure heâs not holding you tightly. Feeling of one of your tiny hands grabbing onto his servo, clinging to him.
⢠That prickling, fiery feeling is a tide washing over you in waves, stealing your breath when it crashes over you and leaving you trembling in agony when it washes out. âMake it stop,â you manage, pressing your face against that giant hand as the sensation tears you apart again, shredding you into nothing but suffocating pain. âPlease.â
⢠âYouâll be okay,â he promises, lying to you, because he has no idea whatâs happening. Spark twisting at the agony in your words, thereâs nothing he can do but run a servo against your spine in what he hopes is a comforting touch as he enters the medbay. Ratchet looks up from where heâs sterilizing tools when he enters. âI canât fix this,â he whispers, holding out his caged hands, because he can feel the way your heart beat shifts into something frantic and wild with every time you clench into a tighter ball. Those little, pained noises youâre making going right through him.
⢠âWhereâd that one come from?â Ratchet groans, reaching to accept your little form and heâs almost reluctant to give you up as crazy as it is, youâre just clinging to him like heâs the only thing keeping you together. Hovering as Ratchet lifts you from his hands and reaches for a scanner to pass over you as the shaking gets worse. Eyes opening and finding him, little hand trembling and reaching out for him.
⢠Thereâs two of them now. Youâre dimly aware of the first one explaining how youâd just appeared, but everything is so fragmented, pain breaking you apart piece by piece. And then thereâs panic choking you, until youâre reaching for the first one. The one with that soft, soothing voice and gentle hands. Wanting to ask him to not leave you here, please, donât leave you alone, but unable to focus enough to say any of it. But then heâs reaching for you as the other one frowns, extending a huge servo to you and in your fear, you latch onto him, the only thing even slightly familiar amid the pain.
⢠You curl yourself around his servo, pressing your face against him. Needing him and he stills as the shaking eases and you slump into an exhausted sleep. âBest guess it has to do with however they got here,â Ratchet says as he studies his scanner. âRodimus already alerted me that he found another one, so youâll have to look after that one.â
⢠âYou can fix this,â he says, spark twisting uneasily as he carefully accepts you back from Ratchet, aware of how fragile you feel in his servos. âRatchet?â That look the medic levels at him is answer enough, but itâs not the one he wants as his attention dips to you.
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Hi Lexiii and hear me out! You always cook with Patrick's pov, so listen: imagine having rough sex in his office? We're so down for him, we're so needy and soaking for him! I'mma scream if you do something with such plot and daddy kink and maybe make Patty show some love to our tits? Anyway, I'm sure you'll deliver! I love ya sm!đŠˇđđ¤đ¤đ¤
NSFW PROSE 1 (Patrick's POV)
đđđđđđđ: Patrick Bateman x Fem!Reader
đđđđđđđđ: PWP, unprotected rough vaginal sex, nipple play, body worship, hair pulling, creampie, Daddy kink, minor degradation kink, dirty talk, pet names, dom!Patrick.
á´/É´: Hello, thank you for your kind words and for sending me this request! I'm slowly working my way through all my WIPs, I hope to finish them all whenever I have the time!
Being stuck in the office late at night was the worst thing that could happen to me, but being stuck in there with you was a whole other story.Â
When I pressed you against the door of my fancy office with your back to me, hiked up the hem of your dress and pushed my fingers into your mouth, you took them eagerly, almost hungrily. My lips then covered yours, craving your taste more than anything else in the world, and I heard you whimper into the kiss as I pressed you harder against the solid door.
"Daddy..." you begged as you heard me unzip my pants. "You're so hard...is it because of me?"
God, you wanted me so badly, even though you probably didn't know what you were asking for. Smirking, I just chuckled at first, but a little later I slipped the straps of your dress to reveal your full breasts and squeezed them with both of my handsâyour tits fitting so perfectly into my large palms.
"A-ahhhh..." a muffled whimper escaped your swollen lips as you covered my hands on your breasts. "Are you gonna...f-fuck me?"
Your little nasty sounds drove me fucking crazy. So goddamn desperateâlike you were begging with every breath. I grinned against you, I could feel your heart racingâyour body pressed so tightly between me and the door... it's like I could feel every inch of you shivering.Â
Shaking. Needing. Melting.
My hands tighten on your soft mounds, thumbs grazing over those perfectly hard nipples, eliciting another sweet moan from you. By this time you were practically pleading under your breath and I was loving it. Slowly, almost torturously, I pressed my hips against your ass, grinding just enough for you to feel how hard I was and fuck...you were so wet...I could sense the dampness even through the fabric of your panties.
"You want me to fuck you right here..." I growled, my hands slipping lower down your sides, gripping your hips with enough force to leave marks; your body arched instinctively. "You want me to fuck you until you can't even stand, sweetheart?"
Your breath hitched, then another muffled moan caressed my ears. I let my hand slide over the curve of your assâleisurely pulling your dress up until it was bunched around your waist. You gasped as I moved your panties aside to feel all of youâdirectly, without barriers.
"So fucking soaked..." I grunted against your neck, my fingers trailing down your slippery slitâslowly at firstâjust to make you squirm even more. Damn, I could feel every reaction. Every trembling sigh. You were literally writhing nowâpressing your ass back into me like you were starving for it. And I couldn't help the smug grin that spread across my face. The way you reacted to my every touch. "I'm gonna ruin you."
The second those filthy little sobbed whispers left your lipsâ"Please...Daddy...my pussy...hurts without you...inside..."âI lost control.
Aroused as hell, I didn't even bother to pull your panties down completely, I couldn't wait. Not with you like this, not with you moaning my fucking title like you forgot how to breathe without it. A little aggressively, I grabbed a fist full of your hair, yanking your back just enough so that your body arched perfectly against me, my free hand reaching for my zipperâthe rasp of it loud, intimate, just like every fucking gasp you made.
"P-Patrick..." Your breathless stutter barely escaped your lips before I aligned myself with your tight little hole. You were dripping, shaking, and I hadn't even pushed all the way in yet. And I didn't even ask you how you felt, nor did I care to give you time to adjust.
I thrust into youâmercilessly and harshly.
Your cry was muffled by the door, your hand slipping up to brace itself as your entire body jerked forward from the impact. My grip on your hair tightened as I slammed into you again as hard as I could, owning every inch of you. You were almost screaming nowâloud enough that I was sure the echoes would fill every corner of this business center, but it didn't matter. None of it mattered when your body responded to everything I didâevery thrust, every inch of my fat cock brushing against your warm, tight walls. Without a second thought, I pressed my hips harder against your backside and buried myself deeper inside you. Fuck... you felt so good, so fucking good. And the way your cunt clung to me with every movement?Â
Jesus.
I pulled back just enough to thrust into you again, deeper this time. Your cries were uncontrollable nowâpure fucking pleasure spilling out of your throat like you couldn't even stop it. Each thrust sent your body forwardâyour breasts pressing against the cold door of my office. My hands gripped your hips harder, digging into your soft flesh, and I could feel you tightening around me with each passing second.
You were so fucking close.
"You like that, huh?" I growled into your ear before my teeth grazed the back of your neck as I rammed into you againâfaster now. "You love being fucked like this... don't you?"
Your answer was almost a screamâdesperate, high-pitched. "Yes! Oh God... please... don't stop... Daddy... please."
I lost it completely.
My rhythm faltered for a second as I buckled deeper, hammering into you until each thrust sent you over the edge. Teetering on the brink, you were trembling all over, your legs barely holding you up as I ravaged you from the inside out. Meanwhile, I could feel it building inside of me, tooâthe way your hot cunt cramped around my throbbing dick, the way you moaned my fucking title over and over...
I was right there, right fucking there.
My hands moved from your hips to your breasts again, squeezing them roughly as I pounded into you one last time, causing your entire body to tense, to fucking shatter into piecesâyou let out a sharp yelpâyour hands gripping the door like it was the only thing keeping you grounded.
And then everything fell apart.
You came hardâyour legs quivering, your pussy convulsing around my cock like it was trying to pull me deeper inside. And your gasps, damn, they were erratic and so fucking desperate. At that moment I could barely hold on, knowing that your body was a fucking mess beneath me, shaking violently as your orgasm tore through you, every nerve ending firing. And I... I couldn't take it anymore.
With my eyes closed, I thrust into you one last time, sinking deep into that perfect cunt before everything fucking crashed through me, my grip on your breasts tightening and my whole body tensing as I finally released inside you.
The whole world collapsed upon us.
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im under the assumption that requests are open, so uhmmmm
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can i request Aventurine giving Reader a hug or whatever physical affection, and Reader starts crying because of that? (Reader is crying because it's been a long time since they were last touched/held, and the thought of someone wanting to touch/hold them is very scary. even the sensation behind being touched/held is almost overstimulating, despite how badly they want to be held)
i know my request is, uh, oddly specific ?? hope that's ok with you tho đ§ââď¸ im one of the few dorks out there that is so touch-starved that i cry when it happens lol,,, it's not that i hate touch, my brain just can't register it.
âIf you hold me without hurting me, you'll be the first who ever didâ
Summary: After a long time without any physical affection, youâre overwhelmed when Aventurine gives you a comforting hug. The sensation is almost too much, and you break down, finally allowing yourself to be vulnerable. Aventurine reassures you with gentle words and a steady presence, letting you know heâs there for you whenever you need.
Tags: Aventurine x Reader, Hurt/Comfort, Fluff, Emotional Vulnerability, Reassurance, Established Relationship.
Warnings: Emotional Overwhelm, Touch Starvation, Reader Crying.
A/N: Donât worry, Rose! My requests are open, so feel free to drop yours whenever you like! ;) And donât worry, your requests arenât weird or anythingâactually, theyâre cute and wholesome. đ¤§đĽş I can also relate to the touch-starved feeling, though Iâm uncomfortable with people touching me without consent (trauma). Iâd be fine with holding hands or arms, though. :') Hope you enjoy this! And remember, you're valid! đ���đŤ *Sending virtual hugs <33*
Sorry this uh rushed and I didn't edit it properly and got to your request late :')
The room was quiet, save for the soft murmur of the city outside. Aventurine led you in, his gentle hand resting on your back. You felt your pulse race as he guided you to sit on the sofa, his easy confidence steadying you as you took a shaky breath. Tonight, heâd traded his playful banter for a quieter presence. His usual grin softened, and his eyes were filled with something far more tender.
You sat beside him, hands twisting nervously in your lap, feeling that comforting warmth radiating off him. Despite how close he was, you couldnât shake the distance you felt from it, as if an invisible wall held you back. It was as though you were tethered to a feeling you couldnât escapeâsomething that had kept you from letting anyone close for so long.
âAre you alright?â Aventurineâs voice was low and gentle, his words laced with concern. He reached out, brushing a lock of hair behind your ear, the gesture simple, yet it felt like a landslide of emotion.
And then, without another word, he drew you into his arms, pulling you close against his chest. The sudden warmth, his touch, the feeling of his heart beating steadilyâit was too much. A wave of sensation hit you, so foreign yet so needed, and before you could stop yourself, tears blurred your vision.
You hadnât been held like this in so long, hadnât felt this kind of closeness. It scared you, left you trembling in his embrace as the ache in your chest spilled over into silent sobs. Every part of you was screaming that this was wrong, that you couldnât trust it, that you shouldnât let yourself need it so badly. Yet Aventurine held you tightly, his presence unwavering, silently urging you to let go.
âHey⌠youâre safe here,â he whispered, a hand rubbing slow circles along your back. âIâve got you.â
You felt his hand press against your back, steady and comforting, grounding you with each small touch. His other hand cupped the back of your head, cradling you as though you were the most fragile thing in the world. His words, low and close to your ear, were soft promises that left no room for doubt.
The tears came harder, and you pressed your face into his shoulder, feeling the fabric of his coat against your cheek. You clung to him, fingers clutching the back of his shirt as though he might disappear if you let go. Every part of you felt exposed, vulnerable in a way that was terrifying, yet liberating.
âIâm sorry...â you managed, voice muffled against him.
âFor what?â He shifted slightly, pulling back just enough to look at you. His eyes, usually playful and glinting with mischief, were filled with nothing but understanding and warmth. âThereâs nothing to apologize for.â
Your words choked up, and you simply shook your head, a fresh wave of tears welling up. You couldnât explain it; it was too raw, too deeply ingrained in every wall youâd ever built around yourself. But Aventurine seemed to understand. He stayed, hands gently brushing up and down your back, thumb tracing soothing circles along your shoulder.
And in that moment, for the first time in ages, you felt safe. The warmth, the steadiness of his heartbeat, the quiet strength in his holdâit reminded you that maybe it was okay to let yourself be held, to be cared for, even if it was overwhelming. His hand found yours, fingers entwining, grounding you in the here and now.
âWhenever you need this,â he murmured, his voice steady and filled with reassurance, âIâm here. And Iâm not going anywhere.â
The promise lingered in the quiet, like a lifeline you hadnât realized youâd been waiting for. You let yourself lean into him, allowing the tears to finally fall as he held you, the world slipping away until it was just the two of you, wrapped in warmth, safety, and an unspoken promise of more moments like thisâof a love that was patient enough to wait.
This is so Aventurine đŞđ
#honkai star rail#hsr#x reader#honkai star rail x reader#hsr x reader#hsr aventurine#aventurine x reader#aventurine x you#hsr aventurine x reader#fluff#hurt/comfort#emotional vulnerability#reassurance#established relationship#emotional overwhelm#touch starved#reader crying
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but you belong to me (jungkook) !
tw sexual content - mini post.
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jungkook caressed your lower back as you move yourself on him. he lets his head rest on the back of the couch as he moans your name, "yn~" over and over again.
the tv was playing music in the background, house of balloons echoing through his apartment. your moans were soft but clear, clear enough for jungkook to hear. It hurts how badly his cock was throbbing. he needed it so badly.
"yn, please baby. I need you- hop on it, please." his voice was drained because of all the moaning and praising he had done.
you breathe heavily and feel the damp air becoming colder as you take off your top. your breasts were now exposed and jungkook was dazed.
"shit baby," he murmured.
"kook, you're so sweet-" you say randomly. he squeezes his eyes shut before grabbing your ass. he needs to cum, you've been rubbing his poor cock on your clit for long enough.
jungkook groans, "mh- ahgh!"
the soft fabric of your panties squeezed his cock even more when you pushed it into your pussy. you whine when his thick cock stretches you out â it burns, but the pain...it feels so good.
"that's my good girl- such a good girl for me." jungkook gives short breaths between words. the words he had to gain effort to form. he was so exhausted, used with pleasure.
you laugh softly, "jungkook, your cock. oh- it's so big!" his cock was truly something you can't ever get used to. it was thick and way too much for you to sit on, only so much can go inside of you.
"yeah?" he teases, "too much for my baby girl to handle? isn't that a shame." jungkook had switched on you. his body tensed up and his tatted arm came up to pull you closer to him. "sit all the way down."
you look into his eyes with nervousness. could you handle it? could you take all of him at once? the thoughts ran through your mind and your body shakes at the feeling.
"go on." jungkook smirks. he enjoys your reactions because of how sensitive and tight your pussy is.
you take a breath, really noticeable because of the way your chest rises and falls in a quick manner. jungkook groans and gasps, seeing your face convert into pleasure as you sink all the way down on his cock.
"mh ahh!" you cry out and grab onto jungkook's shoulders. he looks at you with soft eyes, obviously lost in yours.
he chuckled breathlessly, "fuck- good girl. my girl."
you whine when you start to bounce on jungkook, the way his cock hit your good spot each time makes you see stars.
"kook, I feel so good!" you plea, "I don't want it to s-stop."
he smiles lovingly before helping you; grabbing your hips, pulling them up and down to keep you steady.
"we don't need to, sweetheart. we can fuck all night, mm." jungkook's words made butterflies erupt in your tummy. you knew you were gone with when that happened â so, so horny.
"ah-ahh!" you hide your face in jungkook's neck and breathe in the aroma of his sweat. it was sweet and sexy, everything you need to keep you calm while his cock destroys your insides.
jungkook moans, "ooh- mmh. gonna cum baby? huh, cum for me- I've got you."
you nod desperately, then you feel his cock jerk inside of you. the way his moans got more and more erotic let you know he was about to cum as well.
"ooh yes!" you scream loudly and pull your head back. the feeling of jungkook cum inside your pussy makes you feel full, but in a good way.
"please- mm c'mon. cum baby." jungkook kisses your left breast, moving to the other to do the same. he slapped your ass and groaned at the sound.
you wince, "agh!"
your pussy tightened around his shaft and you fell apart. you cried loudly and squeezed jungkook's arms and shoulders, unsure on how to handle how strong your orgasm was.
he admired you, "so pretty when you cum. like an angel."
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Messy Disaster Besties Crystal & Edwin fic recs
@gendrsoup tagged my "I need more Crystal and Edwin growing into their friendship" post with: #YES PLEASE#I LOVE THEIR FRIENDSHIP I ADORE THEM#fav#I NEED THE FIC RECS SO BADLY so... here's some messy disaster besties Crystal & Edwin fic recs --
An Unformed Life by takadainmate - 1 chapter, 12 497 words Incredible character study of Crystal figuring out how she fits with the boys post canon and making space for herself in the agency and her and Edwin finding their footing with each other (and also some solid Edwin whump.)
A Room Of One's Own by DarkStars - 1 chapter, 11 192 words Crystal perspective on payneland generally failing to figure their shit out while she rolls her eyes and snaps at them for the frankly unreasonable amounts of sexual tension in the office. Also includes some really lovely soft moments of understanding between Edwin and Crystal towards the end.
A Teenage Psychic's Guide to Having a Mostly Probably Functional Life by @acediscowlng - WIP, 1/2 chapters so far, 5 557 words Lovely Crystal character study ft. Crystal and Edwin watching some of Niko's movies together. I love how much Crystal gets to just be a traumatized grieving 17 year old in this fic, trying to figure out how to stay friends after a breakup and how to be nice when you don't really like yourself that much, and how Edwin meets her where she's at in all her dysfunctional glory, it feeds my soul.
Dance the Night by Gruoch - 11 chapters, 69 182 words Very intense plot-heavy rollercoaster of a story - a casefic in which Charles ends up in a dangerous situation and Edwin and Crystal have to team up to get to him while risking their lives to protect each other against a seriously terrifying opponent and bickering like cats and dogs the whole while. Lots of angst for everyone, but especially Edwin.
how could anything bad ever happen to you - 1 chapter, 11 070 words Really fascinating dynamics both between Crystal and Edwin and Crystal and Charles. Lots of neat worldbuilding around the plot as well, which focuses on the gang trying to get Niko back. Has a sequel which is also very good (but less Crystal-centric)
Iphigenia by @e-vasong - 1 chapter, 9 567 words Vampire AU where the boys are vampires instead of ghosts, and Crystal was enthralled by David before the boys rescued her. I love the nuanced take on Crystal and the way her relationship with Edwin especially changes over the course of the fic. (Also highly recommend this author's other work!)
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Shorter fics: I'm Bitter But I Swear I'm Fine by @cordelia-noir - 727 words, Edwin comforting Crystal after her parents have let her down, very sweet. We'll Work On It by @ahyperactivehero - 1716 words, Edwin and Crystal working on magic and bonding over rich neglectful parents, hardcore sibling vibes, adorable.
(add on in the notes!!! add your own fics!! add your friends' fics!! feed my TBR pile...)
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helloooo!! can i request idw rung x human fem reader?? just fluff, maybe rung is exhausted from all the sessions and clients, and the reader is just there for him. Kinda like instead of rung giving out therapy, he's receiving therapy lolll
And this makes rung kinda emotional because like i said, he's always the one giving out therapy, and no one ever really cared about him that way
idk if u write for idw though i hope u dođ have a nice day!
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Thank you for requesting this, I wanna smother him in love so badly.
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Rung loves to help, the care he feels deeply for all on the ship is immeasurable, like a sire to their sparklings. He just wants to give them the tools to help themselves, to help them out of their depressions, to help manage their moods swings and out bursts.
To show them they aren't alone, and it's okay.
But some days take everything out of him, like learning something new in his clients past that just makes his spark break for them. Rung forgets himself, forgets that he too needs someone to lean on sometimes.
He didn't expect that support to come in the form of the human of the ship.
You knew he'd be back late and yet you still found your way to his habsuite, and stayed up waiting for him. You smile up at him, gentle and kind.
"Welcome back, you look tired, hon. C'mon, you need to lay down and relax."
He's not sure what made him break, your soft voice or your warm expression, but he could feel the fluid leaking down his face plate, fogging his goggles. He moved to you without a second thought, carefully picking you up and holding you close to his face plate as he lays down on his berth.
"I just want to help them."
His quaking voice breaks your heart.
"I know, Rung, I know. You have been doing so well. But you forget to take care of yourself, you can't help everyone if you're too tired." You try to wipe his tears, but there is just too much.
You nuzzle up close to him, offering some comfort to the large bot.
"You need someone to vent to, you need to take those stupidly long hot showers, read something new, you need time for yourself to recover."
When was the last time someone offered such support to him? Been there to let him cry and get it all out?
"You're a kind bot with so much love to give, but recovery isn't all work, you need to stop and just breathe in the moment, feel what you feel, and show it."
He lets out a watery chuckle.
"I know you're right, but I'm not pleased about it."
You playfully huff, "Well, now you just sound like Prowl being proven wrong."
Rung moves to lay on his side, curling around you in the process, keeping you close to him. He takes his fogged goggles off, setting them to the side, letting you see his pretty blue optics, but he looks so tired.
You place a hand on his cheek, rubbing soothing circles across his metal.
"You're a sweet bot, Rung, don't let these trying times ruin your compassion."
You nearly panic at how much he begins to sob, as if you broke the dam that had been cracking for so long, his cries were loud in your ears, but you never wavered in your comfort. You lay against him, kissing the digit of the servo that holds you.
he needs this, he's needed this for so long.
"It's okay, I'll stay by your side, always."
There isn't anything he wouldn't do for the crew, and there isn't a thing you wouldn't do for him. You let him cry as much as he needed until he grew exhausted, growing limp in the oncoming rest cycle.
He spoke up, his voice near a whisper.
"You'll stay here with me...right?"
You worm your way out of his servo and lay down next to his helm, his optics lazily following your every move.
"I'll be here when you wake up, you won't get rid of me that easily."
His smile, though tired, is just as sweet as always.
"Thank you."
"Anything for you."
You watch as his optics slide close, powering down to recharge. You will stay right here with him, right beside him no matter what, he's too kind to be left alone as is.
His berth isn't very comfortable for you, but you will ask for your bed to be moved here if he'd be okay with that.
Ah, you will worry about that in the morning, for now you just want to bask in his presence and enjoy this.
#transformers x reader#transformers#transformers rung#transformers rung x reader#transformers idw#i wonder what my therapist would think if she knew i was using what she said in a fanfic about a robot-#tranformers idw x reader#transformers mtmte#transformers mtmte x reader#transformers lost light
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Make Them Blue (Leo x FemReader) *Blurb*
Summary: Itâs No Nut November and, as usual, your man lets his stunad friends talk him into participating. Everything was going sort of well, until one crazy day working at the shop. After dealing with idiot customers, watching you scampering around in that skirt and his hoodieâŚhe needs to unwind badly. So he grabs the bottle of wine stashed for emergencies and you, dragging you both out back to the alley.
Warnings: 18+ (mdni), because thereâs sooo much of the smut. Thigh riding; some good, cheap vino; one horny and worked up big chooch, sauce stain, jizz in pants, and⌠Leoâs big, fat dick.
Notes: Happy No Nut November all you, lovelies! đ¤đ
- Two fingers beckon while holding a bottle of wine. âCome here, amoreâŚâ Other flour covered hand easily captures both of your sweater pawed ones. Bringing your knuckles to his red stained lips; placing a kiss on the icy-hot skin. âMissinâ ya all afternoonâŚâ
- Tugging gently, he urges you to take a seat. âLeoâŚâ Flirtatious grin widening on his flushed face as you happily oblige. Plopping down onto his toned thigh. ââŚI've practically been glued to your side the whole time.â   Knee âaccidentallyâ glancing his already hard cock; warm, tacky core pressing against his sauce-stained jeans.
- One last deep swig for himself, for you, and he sets it with a soft clink on the alley floor. âYeah, I know.â Calloused fingertips come to rest on your waist, squeezing and kneading your handle like fresh dough. âBut I couldn't doâŚâ Before wandering lower, slipping under the hem of your skirt. ââŚthisâŚâ
- Hooking his thumb, snapping the band of your lacey panties. Ample globes jiggle, ripple from the recoil. Tits bounce beneath his stolen hoodie. When a squeak, followed by a giggle bubbles up from your throat. âOoooh, true. Customers kind of frown at the cook feeling up the register girl in front of them.â  Â
- âExactly,â he chuckles. Big hands come to rest, cup your bottom firmly. Pulling you even closer, little paunch brushing his thick middle⌠the swell of his prominent bulge.  âNow youâre gettinâ it.â
- Your own small ones settle on his toned chest, fingers tangle lazily in his gold chain. âI am, butâŚâ Head tilts slightly to the side, mischievous smile curling at the corners of your mouth. Plush pillow rubs and prods; eyes search his glassy, blue ones. ââŚwhat about your bet with the guys?â
- Low hiss, hot breath washes over you. Faint smell of alcohol tickles your nose and senses. âFuuuck âem.â Shrugging, leaning down; lips hover inches away from yours. âChoochs donât got it as good as meâŚâ
- Crashing them together, pushing past yours. Tongues tangle, wrestle. âGot someone to keep their dicks wetâŚâ Bitter, sweet taste tantalizing and arousing. Adding to the overwhelming, swirling onslaught of pent-up frustrations and tension. âGot a fat ass like thisâŚâ
- All the while he caresses, gropes your full cheeks. Guiding, rocking you back and forth. Stimulation, friction from your puffy folds passing over the course denim; making a thrill run, sparks of pleasure erupt throughout your body.  Causing you to moan softly into his mouth, yank roughly on his chain. âFasterâŚÂ FasterâŚâ
- Landing a solid, painful smack. His grip tightens, fingers dig and sink into the subtle flesh. âFaster, huh?â Presses you down harder on his flexed thigh, drags and grinds your sensitive bud. Pushing, hurtling you towards the edgeâŚthe much-needed release. âBetter hang on then, angel.â
- Pace picks up, almost brutal and blinding. Juices totally soak, drench your panties; seeping into his jeans, coating them in a sticky trail. Needy mewls, whines echoing off the brick walls. Along with the distressed creaks from the wooden crate below. ââCause I ainât stoppinââŚâ
- You can feel him rutting frantically, desperately against you. Chubby cock straining at the fabric, poking at the underside of your stomach. His breaths coming out in shallow pants; wispy puffs that float away on the cool, night air. ââŚâtilâŚât-tilâŚâ
- Nails scratch at, digits just start to fumble with his zipper. Trying to free him whenâŚÂ Abruptly he stops, deep groan escapes him. Face and cheeks grow redder, sweaty forehead leans on yours. As a moist, heated spot forms, soaks through the front of your skirt.   ââŚcum.â
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Chapter 20: This Road is Wild and Wicked (Preview)
âWhen people first hear how my mind works, they think itâs a gift,â she murmured, her gaze fixed somewhere distant, as if she were speaking to the air in front of her. âIt really isnât. I think⌠I think itâs a curse.â Â
Agatha turned to her, caught off guard by the statement that seemed to come out nowhere, but Rio didnât look back.  Â
Agatha could see the tension in Rioâs grip, the way her fingers tightened as if she were holding on to Agathaâs hand as a lifeline, as if she needed it to keep going.  Â
Agatha squeezed back, silently urging her forward, waiting. Â
âWhen I was thirteen,â Rio began, her voice steady but laced with a strain, âmy parents and I were driving back from one of my soccer tournaments. We were hit head-on by a drunk driver. My dad⌠he died instantly.â  Â
She paused, a tremor passing through her voice.  Â
âMy mom, though⌠she was hurt badly. I could see her, but I couldnât get to herâmy legs were pinned.â Â
Rioâs gaze drifted, as if the memory were pulling her back. Â
Agatha watched as Rioâs free hand drifted to her knee, fingers tracing slow, restless patterns back and forth. Â
âSitting here, in this car,â Rio continued, her voice soft, hesitant, like she was speaking from a place buried deep within, âI can feel it, like Iâm back there all over again. The weight pressing down on my legs, the tightness in my chest... the panic clawing its way up, the helplessnessâŚâ Â
Her voice trailed off, and she pressed her head back into the leather seat, squeezing her eyes shut, her jaw clenched so tightly Agatha swore she could hear her teeth grinding. Â
âAnd I can still hear her breaths,â Rio gritted out, the words strained, as if they were physically painful to release. âEach one... so wet, soâ pained .â Â
Agatha sucked in a quiet breath, her chest tightening in response to the raw pain laced in Rioâs voice. Â
Jesus. Â
Why was Rio telling her this? Why was she putting herself through the agony of reliving it? Â
A sharp ache bloomed in Agathaâs chest as a startling realization hit herâ she hated this. Â
 Seeing Rio in pain, watching her struggle through memories that tore her apart piece by piece. Catching Rio quietly wiping tears away in the bathroom had been hard enough, but this⌠this was so much worse. Â
But Rio wasnât finished. It was as if she were determined to reach the end, to push through this painful memory, as though it held something she needed Agatha to understand. Â
âMy mom, she⌠she turned toward me,â Rio continued, her voice trembling, thick with emotion. âEven then, I could tell she was barely holding on. I knewâ somehow, I just knew âthat she was going to die. And there was nothing I could do to stop it.â Â
She swallowed hard, her jaw clenched as tears gathered in her eyes, shimmering in the dim light of the car.  Â
Agathaâs chest ached as she watched Rio struggle to hold back the flood of emotions, her grip tightening around Agathaâs hand in a borderline painful grip. Â
âAnd then,â Rioâs voice broke, barely more than a whisper now, yet so loud in the quiet car. âShe told me⌠â Close your eyes, mija ,â she said. â Close your eyes and cover your ears. Can you do that for me, baby? ââ Â
After the words crawled painfully out of her mouth, she shook her head, as if trying to shake the sound of her mother voice from her ears. Â
âI didnât understand why she was asking me to do that,â she continued quietly, her voice trembling. âBut I was terrified, so I did what she asked. I closed my eyes, covered my ears, and sat there in the back seat, surrounded by darkness and silence that felt like it would go on forever⌠while she died just five feet away from me.â Â
Agathaâs chest tightened painfully, the weight of Rioâs words sinking deep. Â
Rioâs words lingered in the silence that followed, as if the weight of them took on a tangible presence, filling the carâpressing against them.   Â
Agatha held her breath, watching as the tears finally slipped form her eyes and down Rioâs cheeks, silent but devastating.  Â
Agathaâs throat tightened, as she felt the urge to say something, to reach out and wipe them away, to offer words of comfort, but nothing seemed adequateâshe was trapped in this story just as much Rio was.   Â
Rio took a shaky breath, wiping her cheek with the back of her hand, though her grip on Agathaâs hand didnât loosen.  Â
âIt wasnât until later, at the hospital that I realized why she told me to do that. She asked me to close my eyes and cover my ears,â Rio continued, her voice fragile, âbecause she knew Iâd never forget the moment she died. She knew that memory would haunt me. So, she tried to shield me, even then. She died still trying to protect meâ protecting me from own mind .â Â
Agathaâs heart ached at the depth of Rioâs pain, her fingers tightening around Rioâs hand in silent support. This wasnât just a storyâthis was Rioâs way of opening a door to her heart, showing Agatha something she kept hidden from everyone. Â
âAfter that, I learned to keep everything separate,â Rio said, her gaze distant, lost in the past. âTo keep my eyes shut and my ears coveredâto keep my emotions apart from the memories. It was the only way I know how to survive⌠to stop them from consuming me.â Â
Agatha became dimly aware of the car slowing to a stop, catching a fleeting glimpse of Rioâs street outside the window, but she couldnât tear her focus away from Rio. She was entirely caught up in the raw, unfiltered honesty spilling out before her. Â
Rio hesitated, her hand tightening around Agathaâs, then loosening, then tightening again, as though she were battling with something buried deep.  Â
Agatha braced herself, sensing that whatever came next was going to be harder stillâthough she couldnât imagine how Rio could possibly bear to share something more painful. Â
With a deep, aching sigh, Rio finally turned, lifting her gaze to meet Agathaâs. Her eyes shone with a vulnerability so raw that it made Agathaâs heart skip a beat. Â
And for the first time since sheâd begun speaking, Rio looked her directly in the eye, and Agatha understoodâwhatever came next held everything Rio had been holding back. Â
âBut I canât keep my eyes closed with you, Agatha,â Rio whispered, her voice breaking, the words trembling on the edge of something raw and unguarded. Her gaze held Agathaâs, as if searching for a safe place to land. Â
She swallowed hard, her fingers tightening around Agathaâs as though trying to ground herself.  Â
âIt just hit me out of nowhere. And suddenly I... I feel everything ,â she admitted, her voice barely above a whisper, thick with emotion. âAnd I donât know how to shut it off.â Â
#fanfic#lesbian#ao3#ao3 fanfic#ao3 writer#ao3feed#ao3fic#ao3 link#rio agatha all along#agatha coven of chaos#agatha x rio#agatha all along#agatha harkness#rio#rio vidal
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I AM FERAL
YOU TWO ARE KILLING ME
Currently thinking about Makoto actually nursing a forte overuse-induced headache during his fight with Yuma because he used his forte 5 times to forge those letters then again with Yuma to enter the Mystery Labyrinth. It just wasn't obvious during that fight because he had enough painkillers to last him until the end.
Unfortunately for him, the fight didn't end with him getting reaped so after he revealed the truth to Kanai Ward, he's now completely suffering from his headache and also a fever because he forgot to take a bath after being soaked in the rain for so long due to his exhaustion physically, mentally, and emotional.
All the while he has plenty of things on his mind and plenty of work to be done to change things in Kanai Ward for the better.
#not mine#whumpcode#rain code spoilers#HOLY SHIT HOW DID I NOT SEE THIS?!#OUUUGHHHHH THIS IS SUCH A GOOD CONTINUATION#YOUR MIND HERE....#YA'LL BROKE ME WITH THIS#YUMA HELPING MAKOTO AS HE COLLAPSES FROM EXHAUSTION AFTER HE LEAVES THE EXIT#AND THEN HE TAKES CARE OF HIM AFTERWARD TAKING HIM BACK TO HIS TOWER TO LAY HIM TO REST#THIS IS SO SOFT I NEEDED THIS FOR THEM SO BADLY#THIS IS A BUFFET OF GOODNESS#god I need a full on fanfic of this nowâŚ#makoto kagutsuchi#makoyuma#so freaking beautifully written#I NEED MOREâŚI NEED MOOOOORE....
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[mild tw for marital rape/forced 'consent' its only referenced a little, but it feels necessary to mention it]
imagine Alicent only standing up for herself when Aegon is in the picture. Imagine her talking her son to her chambers cause he's fussy and won't go down for bed and was asking for his mum, and she has him tucked close, blissfully asleep, and Viserys calls for her.
she knows she can't refuse, but she tells the servant he had sent to make him aware of Aegon's state. he still demands that she be brought to his chambers and that the babe go back to his nursemaid. she looks down at her baby, who's now woken due to the disturbance, who is staring up at her with soft tired eyes, a little yawn escaping him.
she doesn't want to go, she doesn't want to be forced to take her husband, to pleasure him at her own discomfort. she doesn't want to leave her son, to have him sent back to bed where he will remain restless and in the care of someone who is not his mother. she had never want to refuse more than she did in that moment.
she hesitates, her facade falters. Aegon is still looking up at her as tears well up in her eyes. he quirks his head at her, fingers reaching for her cheeks as if to comfort her. with a sudden conviction, she takes him in her arms, rising from the bed, requesting a robe and a blanket. when her servant looks at her in question, she clarifies that she will be taking Aegon with her and does not wish to rouse him in attempts to dress him. they look at her with shock, but don't voice the concern written on their faces.
they bring her Viserys's favorite robe. Alicent recognizes it from her time with Rhaenyra and Aemma. she's worn it before, Viserys has made sure the servants bring it to her every time he requests her. she hates the way it feels against her skin, knowing why he makes her wear it. she wraps aegon in his blanket, soft and royal blue, his hands beginning to play with its golden tassles as she tucks him inside her robe, pressed to her chest with care.
even as fear bites at her heels, anxiety churning her stomach, she walks to Viserys's chamber with her held high. she knows she is only asking for her husband's wrath; she knows she should just obey him, but she just can't. her son will not suffer a sleepless night and horrid following day all because her husband feels the need to use her body once more. he will not suffer at his father's hands tonight, even if she has to endure Viserys's anger for it.
she enters her husband's chambers, finding him in bed, in a white night gown, clearly ready to use her; he was never subtle when he asked for her, not even the first time.
she pauses in the doorway, pulling back the robe slightly, making him aware of Aegon's presence. she watches his face fall, barely muted anger. she holds onto Aegon tighter. part of her fears he may hurt her for this disturbance, but more of her fears he will hurt Aegon on her behalf.
"I told the damned servants to take him," his voice is warped and cruel, just an angry scowl of sorts.
"Aegon is not well, dear husband... I could not leave him," she admits before he can say anything else. she puts her foot forward as a mother, hoping to claim mercy from the man who made her one.
he mutters something in response, not quite loud enough for her to hear. she has a feeling she is grateful for that.
"what was it you needed, my dear?" she tries to sound sweet and kind, in attempts to abate his anger, "I'm sure I could still attend to it."
"you know what I wanted," he yelled. it had been the first time he'd truly raised his voice to her. she couldn't help but gasp, stepping back one step, than two, stopping when Aegon began to fuss, curling around him instead.
"Please Viserys, the baby." she ducks her head down to press her against his whispy white hair. her son his huffing, as if about to cry, and she's sure if she could see his face, his little cheeks would be red and his eyes would be crinkled and wet, his lip puckered. she begins to rock him slightly, still afraid to move.
"your'e dismissed," he grunts, but his tone gives it away. she knows he doesn't mean it, the if she leaves she will be in more trouble. she questions staying, calling a servant to take Aegon and giving him what he wants, but decides against it. he would not come before her son, not now, not ever.
"I'm sorry, my dear, another night, when I do not have Aegon to tend to," she forces some cheer into her tone, "he is still so young, so helpless. he needs his mother. I'm sure you understand?"
"he is not the only one in need of you." he had not lost his anger yet. not even for the sake of his son.
"yes, of course. forgive me. only he is not as understanding as you, my love." that wasn't the truth, Aegon was more kind and understanding at a year old, than viserys was in all of his years. "I will leave now. I am sorry for the disturbance."
she pauses for a moment, waiting for her husbands reaction. when he doesn't lash out at her, she breathes a quiet sigh of relief, feeling as though she has evaded a great beast. her heart calms in her chest, slowing from its fluttering and her stomachs stops its dizzing ache. she questions turning and running, fleeing from his presence before he can change his mind, but knows better.
she hurries to his side, eyeing him all the while, each step calculated, avoiding cracking any eggshells, until she is close enough to kiss his cheek. he allows it, and gives Aegon grace when he reaches out for him, letting him play with his finger a moment, before pulling it away, not even turning away fully before sneering. she takes that as her cue to leave, this one being much more genuine than the last.
"goodnight dear husband." he says nothing. she takes Aegon's little hand, waving it slightly, "say goodnight Aegon."
her son tries to imitate her, though unintelligible, as a toddler would. she continues to smile and coo at him even when his father ignores him, not letting him feel his father's scorn, quickly turning towards the door and back to her own chambers.
the second the door is close she feels herself sag, she would have fallen to the floor right then and there had there not been kingsgaurd watching. instead she holds her head high once more, walking calm and steady, like a queen should.
Aegon settles his forehead against her collar, giving a great yawn against her skin. she smiles at him fondly, kissing his brow, earning a tired little giggle from him. it hits her that he is unaware of the trouble he just saved her from. she feels equal parts relief as she does terror; she hopes he never knows, never understands, but is so so thankful for it none the less.
the second she steps into her chambers she pulls of the robe, setting it aside carefully despite the pain it brings her, respecting the memories it carried. she pulls back the covers before smothering her and her son amongst them. he's quick to curl against her, quite tuckered out after their harrowing adventure, even if he was unaware of its true weight. she herself still wanted to cry, but was similarly too tired to keep her eyes open for another moment. tomorrow, she tells herself, tomorrow will be difficult, but tonight you have your son, tonight you have a chance to rest.
so she does, she holds him close, tracing fingers over the gold threaded patterned of his blanket, feeling the shifting of his chest as he breathes and the tickle of his hair against her neck. all is well in that moment. she drifts to sleep at the thought.
#omage to Aemma's robe that we see alicent wearing in episode 3 (I believe. it was when she was helping bathe viserys)#cause I know he made her wear it cause he's a monster#this is set prior to Helaena's conception. aegon is tiny. and alicent is still naive to the true extents of viserys's abuse.#especially to the fact that despite all of the love she holds for her children and how badly she wishes to always pick them first#his abuse and the stockholm syndrom that follow it will turn her against her children. aegon in particular.#maybe not against. but acrid and foul. her pain overtaking her love. she still tries so hard to protect them though. if you get what I mean#its otto's fault too and they should both die#anyway#I'm just in my feels with these two#we didn't get enough scenes of them together especially when they were both young and I wanted to give alicent a moment were she fought bac#she refused to give him what he wanted. she chose her child over him. she stood up for herself and what she wanted.#she earned that moment#I know she was choking through those âmy dearsâ and âmy lovesâ but she had to for formalities sake#angst in the front fluff in the back#even if the fluff is laced with angst#letting alicent be soft and love her son#I needed it#aegon targaryen#aegon ii targaryen#alicent hightower#anti viserys i targaryen#pro team green#hotd#house of the dragon#I love them your honor
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day 31 of missing landoscar; thank u mclaren for the landoscar content on ig đ¤đ˝
#landoscar with the same smile đ¤đ˝#theyâre twinning all the way fr#i liked the miami gp merchđŁ even tho iâd probably never wear it#their hair looks so fluffy and soft#need landoscar to come home miss them so badly#ln4#op81#landoscar#814
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Dragon finally meets Luffy face to face and reacts as chill as you'd expect but on the inside he's just
#cuz its literally canon he is such a SOFT guy especially for his son#i need them to hug omfg it mustve been mind numbing to learn Luffy got hurt so badly at marineford#plz let them hug just once i know Dragon wants to give him the biggest fucking hug#i feel so fucking weak#one piece#monkey d dragon#monkey d luffy#good dad dragon
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i feel people are sleeping on Dennis, like ughhh, just look at him
#f2#dennis hauger#f1 fanfic#f1 imagine#f1 x reader#f1#f2 x reader#f2 x you#f2 x y/n#f1 x you#red bull racing#hes so cute#i need him so badly#i cant stop thinking about him#i love his smile#also his hair????#i wanna play with it looks so soft#dont even get me started on his tattoos#i feel i have a heart attack everytime i see them#like imagine tracing your fingers over them omg#especially the one he has near his hip???#he has such a chokehold on me
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rereading the last chapter of 'so mordor it is' for the first time in a hot minute and i just-
Eddie purses his lips, âI mean- Okay, yeah, thatâs shitty or whatever. But I get it. I get why heâs doing it.â âBecause heâs a dick? Because heâs always been an asshole looking for a reason to pick on you? Like I said, itâs not excusable, Edd-â âBecause if I lost you how he lost Chrissy, Iâd do far worse.â Willow pauses with her mouth wide open, taking in just how deadly serious he looks at this moment. Heâs not even cracking up in the slightest at her insults at the jock who had contributed to being a thorn in their side this past year, focusing on her and only her. âNo,â Willow says slowly, âYou wouldnât. Youâre a good person with common sense.â âNot when it comes to you,â Eddie rebuttals, âNot when it comes to you getting hurt. If you- If you had- If it had been your body found-â he chokes up, unable to continue the thought without taking a breath, âIâd also have a vendetta out for the prime suspect. Hell, Iâd have it out for every possible suspect. Willow, if I lost you, Iâd do far worse than some petty rallying against the townâs freak. Iâd burn this town down for you.â
what the hell is wrong with me
#eddie munson#stranger things#so mordor it is#mordor#willow and eddie are literally the blueprint for the soft love i so desperately crave#the devotion i seek out in everything#'their incessant need to protect one another had become their greatest weapon - and their greatest fault'#i just want to wrap them up in a blanket and kick them back into the shire days#vecna? no. send them back to innocently holding hands during a stormy night because willow is scared of the rain#i'm trying to be so normal about them so i can write for them again but then i see past me put shit like this in the fic and i crumble#willow wants to be brave for eddie. to be the person he sees in her. so badly.#and eddie wants to be good. to sow whatever seeds she's planted in him. prove that he was worth choosing#anyways im going to shut up and go back to writing
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You are so right in your distaste for Blades book 2. No matter how great things get near the end, a majority of the book was horrible. They led us along like mouse to cheese. Itâs inexcusable to play with their audience this way.
I only wish more people were less willing to excuse PBâs mediocrity. The signs were on the wall for me when DLS was flat out better than Blades 2, and itâs narratively quite simple. The story told was well paced, thought out, and above all kept us waiting for more each week. I cannot say the same for B2. That is sad.
I mean I do understand why people still enjoyed it and were willing to overlook the negative aspects or didnât have much of a problem with them to begin with. Blades 1 was a fan favorite, we all missed these characters a lot, and many people (myself included at one point) didnât believe we would actually get book 2 because of all the bait and switches PB had done in the past. But the first two things are why I personally couldnât overlook the glaring issues.
I canât remember who the OP was now, but I remember seeing a post from when book 2 only had a few chapters out where someone said something about it seeming like the writers learned all the wrong things about what made the book so good, and I couldnât agree with that person more! Yeah, book 1 was good because it was different from anything we had ever gotten before. But I think the main reason it was so good was because of the characters as individuals and the relationships we got to form with those individuals to ultimately become a family. Yet they didnât really acknowledge those individuals or relationships in ways that did them justice for the majority of book 2. And on top of that, MCâs own characterization was inconsistent at times because the writers picked and chose when they wanted us to be a competent leader and when they wanted us to be virtually clueless for plot convenience.
Book 1 was also relatively straightforward whereas it seemed like the writers wanted to turn the sequel into their own personal commentary on religion, which is an incredibly complex topic in itself. They had some social commentary in book 1, but it was done a lot better in my opinion because it didnât take so much of a front seat. They managed to make it clear that that commentary was important and relevant to the writers, the characters, and the readers living in the real world while never robbing book 1 of that fun adventure game used for escapism feel. Meanwhile, book 2 almost felt like âRising Tides but make it religionâ at times. And thatâs on top of all of the other issues Iâve already mentioned in my previous posts.
I will say that I can see how thereâs usually a lot of pressure to blow things out of the water for a sequel to something so beloved, and that most likely contributed to how things played out. So maybe Iâm being a bit too harsh in my judgement of everything. But I still find it very disappointing to wait so long for something just for it to be so messy and miss the mark by a mile
#choices bolas#choices blades#blades of light and shadow#choices stories you play#playchoices#I think the alcohol I had tonight is making me soft#bc thereâs another side of me that agrees with you about how people should be less willing to excuse PBâs mediocrity#and thatâs in general not just about Blades#but at the same time Iâm like maybe Iâm going too hard and need to chill đ#so Iâll just say harsh but true#also about DLS Iâm not VIP so I havenât finished it yet#but I am still enjoying it#idk if Iâd say itâs well paced#itâs definitely not as badly paced as Blades 2 but I think they are dragging it out a bit#to really capitalize on those sex scenes every chapter đ#however as a lot of people have already pointed out DLS knows what it is bc the writers were actually self aware for once#which makes it enjoyable because we arenât taking it too seriously and nor are the writers or the characters as an extension of them#so we can fuck around in the neighborhood (literally and figuratively) - get good dirt on everyone - and play detective on the side#and MC and the LI donât act like self righteous little bitches#like people who are smarter than they actually are#or like they fell madly in love within the first 2 seconds of meeting#and the crazy thing is that the romance is fairly well written tbh#choices#choices app#choices ask
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i wish the inquisitor didnt show up in-gameeeeeeeee i wanna make eimhin as rook so fucking badly but i cant figure out how to reconcile that one bit yet. like idk who i'd put. part of me kinda wants to make vivienne and just have her fill in (i miss her and eimhin & her were so. close.)
varric guiding him would make sense from a character perspecrive (eimhin never wanted to be the inquisitor and often a lot of decisions he relied on his advisors/companions for, tbh,) like he's just scared to fuck it up again or whatever. sure. i can rewrite other bits in my head like solas nd him interacting, harding's talk about the inquisition (they're just reminiscing!!!!), etc....... i just get so mad when i see the way they frame rook vs solas in the weird b&w fade prison bc every time i see it im like. fuck. this shouldve been the inquisitor. and also really all of it entirely just. god. rook shouldnt have to give a single fuck WE shouldnt give a single fuck the game just TELLS us to and it's so annoying!!! let me be the goddamn inquisitor you fucks!!!!!
#makes me even madder how they wrote out the inquisitor by removing their arm & fucking over the inquisition#only for them to. like. do everything they implied the inquisitor wouldnt be able to do. just OFF-SCREEN.#it makes me soooooooooo mad bc fuck if they werent so deadset on soft rebooting this shit it would be PERFECT. BUT NO!!!!!!!#Anyways eimhin rook era. i need it. so badly. itll fix me. (and help me rewrite this shitshow im my head)#txt#datv spoilers#datv critical#<- kinda. mostly yelling abt my quizzy sorry.#oc: eimhin lavellan
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