#TELL ME WHY I SPENT. TWO HOURS TODAY. DOING A DIVE INTO FUCKING. DIRECTOR GAO

[hideyseek]

wrote like ... 1k of good solid fic today ... feeling VERY ACCOMPLISHED. my new solution to a convo in-fic that feels like it's dragging is to actually make the characters have two conversations at once. this takes twelve million hours to figure out how to do in the text for me BUT does solve my problem of "WOW THIS CHAPTER IS LIKE. STRAIGHT UP BORING?!" lol

also i've put in (HEE HEE) a very pointed technical shift at one key point of chapter 3 which satisfies my need to underscore the important thing happening. and ALSO all the dialogue is sooo much snappier and faster and "realistic" and less "here is plot exposition. here is my clear and direct feelings" thank god omfg

ANYWAY! suffice to say. it is possible that. there will be a new chapter on time on uhh whichever weekend day i post on. sunday (???) i think. and also like .... it might actually be good up to my personal standards