#Rapunzel Retelling
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flynn rider aemond being tied up with rupanzels hair and he gets hard abt it lol
Innocent rupanzel has never seen a man so she starts to experiment around him
First was spot the difference, what constitutes as a man and woman, only to find his half hard cock and this makes her wet
and she takes all her frustrations out on his dick
Is ThisâŚHair?! -Yandere!Aemond T
Important A/n:Must Read (Dark)
Okay so this one is DEFINITELY DARK. Y/n is the epitome of innocence, sheâs lived in the tower her whole life, only ever read the books that her âMotherâ got for her and she didnât have any clue that men even existed.
She is clueless because when she asks her âMotherâ questions she gets beaten, she learned very young to just do as she was told.
The first thing Aemond realized as he woke up was that he was unable to move, opening his eye he saw a circular room, but it had everything a house needed. A small kitchen, living space, too few bookshelves for his taste, then there were stairs leading up to what he assumed was a bedroom. Just as he looked down to try and free himself there was a voice that came fromâŚabove him?
âDonât try to escape, youâll never get out!â A girls voice spoke and Aemond looked up, seeing what looked like a girl hiding behind one of the beams near the ceiling.
âLook, Iâm sorry I just broke into your house but I was in a bit of trouble. I wonât hurt you Darling, please wonât you let me out ofâŚIs thisâŚHair?!â He was stunned as he finally figured out what the soft texture of the âropeâ was.
All at once the girl leapt down to the floor, controlling her descent with it, not harming herself a bit it seemed. âHave you come for my hair?! Mother always said someone would! I didnât believe her butâŚShe was right to lock me away up here.â
Aemond instantly found himself thinking about how gorgeous this girl was, she was absolute perfection made into human form, not one single blemish aside from the bruise on the side of her face that looked like someone had slapped her pretty hard. His thought then trailed to the idea that she had been up here her entire life with no one to talk to, never able to leaveâŚwhat kind of a mother would do that to her child?
Then again, who is Aemond to judge? Heâs not a good man, never has been and never will be. Hell, heâs tied to a chair with a hot girl inspecting him and he is unable to control his own cock as it swells in his breeches.
âHave you been up here your entire life?â He wondered as she stepped a bit closer, now about 5 feet away.
âOf course! The outside world is dangerous, mother says there are monsters everywhere!â He could see how scared she was a he felt for her a bit. She had never experienced anything that is good in the world, just kept inside and naive, too innocent for the world around her. Aemond had never been innocent, as long as he can remember he was alone, having run away from the orphanage he grew up in when he was 11 he fended for himself fairly well.
âHonestly you are describing almost every guy Iâve ever met, though theyâre not all bad. Iâm not a bad guy, I donât want to hurt you. I only came here to hide.â
âWhat is a âguyâ?â She asked and Aemond felt his jaw drop. What had this girls mother done to her?!
âYouâŚyou donât know what a guy is?â She shook her head. âA guy is a boy, itâs the opposite of a girl, you are a girl, I am a boy or you could say that you are a woman and I am a man. You know the old stories of a man and a woman falling in love and living happily ever after?â She shook her head.
âWhat is love?â Once again he was stunned by her naĂŻvetĂŠ but he half expected this one. However this one gave him an ideaâŚAemond loved her innocence, craved it and here it was for the taking. If he took his time, he was confident he could own this girls soul if he wanted to.
And he Desperately wanted to.
âCome closer and look at me, I wonât try to move, I promise. Just see our differences and youâll understand.â She cautiously crept closer until she stood before him. âTouch me, you know what you look and feel like, now feel me. Itâs okay, go on.â She hesitated, unsure about this stranger. âHey, whatâs your name, hmm?â
âR-Rapunzel.â
âWow, thatâs a beautiful name. My name is Aemond, okay? We know each others names so weâre friends now, no reason to be nervous sweet girl. Now, come sit on my lap and look at me.â Rapunzel must have thought his explanation to be a sound one because a moment later she plopped herself into his lap and reached up to touch his face.
âYour face is scratchy.â She giggled, rubbing over the stubble.
âThereâs a reason for that. When a man and a women love each other they play games together just for them, the rough stubble on my face will make my future wife happy.â She looked to be considering that but didnât ask before touching the eyepatch and looking curious.
âDid someone hurt you Aemond?â He nodded and she took the eyepatch off to see a large sapphire where his eye should be. âYouâre so pretty.â She stated, touching over his scar gently before running her hands down his jaw to his neck and over his chest which was flat and hard unlike hers. âThatâs differentâŚâ she admitted, looking down at her chest to see where it is much bigger than his.
âYou can look if youâd like, men have hard, flat chests, usually with defined muscles. Women have breasts-â
âWhy?â She questioned as she began unbuttoning his shirt, though she was unable to pull it off with her hair in the way.
âTheyâre for whatever man she falls in love with to touch and suck on, theyâre also for feeding whatever babies a man and woman have togetherâŚyou can untie me if youâd like. I promise, I wonât move a muscle until you want me to. I want to help you understand this, itâs an important life lesson that your mother is wrong for not telling you about.â Rapunzel considered this, he hadnât been fighting against her despite him being able to hurt her in his lap so, why not?
She hopped up and began untying Aemond from her hair but once she did, he did not move at all other than to gesture her back onto him.
âNo, try the other way. Put one knee on either side of my legs, youâll be able to see me better.â
âOhâŚthatâs smart!â She smiled and Aemond wanted to see that smile on her face everyday for the rest of his life, he wanted to see her smile up at him while his cock is buried into her virgin tight cunt for the rest of his days on this Earth.
He couldnât hold in the groan as she began rubbing his chest so delicately, he was in heaven already and he still knew he could take so much more. âDo you need help untying your dress? So that you can compare better, of course.â She thought for a moment before nodding her head and allowing Aemond to untie the back of her dress and pull it down her arms and all the way to her waist. Her breasts werenât overly big, they were petite and cute, perfect in Aemondâs eyes, though his cock twitched when he considered what they would look like swollen with milk atop her belly swollen with his child. He was no longer half hard, he was fully erect and leaking against his breeches. âCan I show you something?â She didnât hesitate to nod this time as her breathing was becoming a bit faster, she was getting excited and that is exactly what Aemond needs, now he just needs to make sure that sheâs as wet as she can be.
He leans forward and kisses her chest between her breasts before pressing his jaw to her skin and hearing her gasp at the scratchy sensation against her sensitive skin which was instantly made stronger as he moved over her nipple. âOh God! Do-D-Do that again! Please?!â She whined and Aemond chuckled, doing as she asked and as he did her hips moved against her will making her feel something against her Kitty. She was going to ask what it was but all thought flew from her brain as Aemond wrapped his lips around her other nipple and suckled gently. âAh-Oh! Aemond that feelsâŚit-â her hips were grinding down on him once again but she didnât care anymore, the sensation rising in her belly felt too good to stop. âDonât stop! Please?! I-I needâŚâ Aemond wrapped one of his arms around her waist, adjusting his hips and began helping her grind down on his length harder as he licked over her sensitive nipple, sucking even harder and twisting the other between his fingers roughly. She threw her head back as she came, her body shaking at the intense orgasm but Aemond kept up his attentions on her until she came back down.
âThat felt good, didnât it?â She nodded, face now in his neck as she breathed heavily. âIt made you feel good right down here.â He stated, cupping her pussy and making her whimper at his attention. âThis is your cunt, or your pussy, and it is so specialâŚdo you know why?â She shook her head as she sat back again to look at him. âItâs special because it can make you and the man you love feel so amazingly good.â
âHow do I know if I love a man, Aemond?â He smirked, unable to help feeling successful at this moment.
âThat really good feeling I just gave you?â She nodded. âThat means I love you, it means you are the only girl in the world for me. Now if you can make me feel like that too then that means you love me. It would mean that we are meant to be togetherâŚdoes that make sense?â
âYesâŚwhat should I do to make you feel good?â She asked him and he took hold of her legs and lifted her against him, moving them both over to the couch and laying her down.
âI just moved you here so that it will be more comfortable for you, I donât want my Princess in unnecessary pain, do I?â Her eyes widened and she smiled before shaking her head. âIâm going to show you the biggest difference between a man and women, alright?â He sat back on his knees between her legs and unhooked his belt before pulling his pants down enough for his cock to slap against his stomach and he saw her eyes widen as she looked at it. âYou can touch it if you want to, just be gentle.â She sat up a bit and reached out to wrap her hand around it making his head fall back as he groaned. âThis is my cock, and itâs very sensitive. You can make it feel so good for me just like I made you feel.â
âShow me how! I wanna make you feel good too Aemond.â
âSuch a sweet girl you are, fuck! You can make it feel good just stroking it if you want, or you can put it in your mouth and suck on it, that feels incredible.â He stopped her from moving to put her mouth on him making her pout which he found adorable. âThe thing that makes a manâs cock feel best though, is when itâs inside a tight little pussy like yours.â Her eyes widened in surprise before looking back at his cock.
âI donât think that will fit AemondâŚâ
âOf course it will pretty girl.â He promised, laying her back and kissing her cheek gently. âI love you, and you love me, I already know it. Now Iâm gonna make the both of us feel really good, okay? Do you trust me?â She hesitated a moment before realizing that she does which prompted her to nod her head. âThatâs my good girl. Now this is going to be uncomfortable for a moment, maybe even a tad bit painful but I promise it will pass quickly, alright? Then you will feel nothing but pleasure.â
âOkayâŚI trust you.â Thereâs a small part of his brain that feels a bit bad taking advantage of her like this but if he didnât then someone else would and they would probably be 10x worse than him. Heâs going to make her feel good for the rest of her life, and sheâs going to give him all the pleasure and babies he could ever want. Itâs worth it any way you look at it.
âJust relax for me.â He instructed as he pulled her panties down and tossed them aside, pressing his cock against her hole and pushing into her gently. He didnât stop until he bottomed out before he leaned down and pressed his lips to hers, kissing her softly and taking her mind off of the discomfort. She kissed back happily, following his lead and eventually he felt her relax. âThere you are pretty girl.â He pulled his hips back, pushing into her again slowly which made her whine as it clearly felt good. âSuch a good girl, letting me fuck your little pussy. So fucking good Princess!â He moaned as he rocked back and forth, picking up the pace a bit at a time before she was a panting, mewling mess as he drilled his cock in and out of her as hard as he could. âYou feel so good for me baby, making my cock feel so fucking good! Such a good girl!â
âDonât stop, please? Feels-ah! Never want you to stopâŚâ she whined, pulling his head down to kiss her again which he happily did.
âGonna fuck you like this all the time Princess. All day every day, this pussy was made for me! Your body was made for me, made to take my cock! Oh fuck, Iâm gonna cum! Gonna fill you up so good baby!â
âC-cum?â She mumbled and he just grunted as he buried his face into her neck.
âCum, remember how good you felt before? That was cumming. Gonna cum inside you, fill you up so deep! Youâll never want to be empty again, and Iâll never leave you without my cum.â He could feel her pussy squeezing around him suddenly as she cried out and he fucked her through it before thrusting harder and making her look up at him. âTell me what you want.â
âI want you to cumâŚwant you to cum in me and feel so good!â
âTell meâŚtell me you want me to put a baby in you!â He grunted, so close and desperate to hear her say it, knowing she would do anything he said at this point.
âYes! Fill me up! Put a baby in me, please? Want your babies!â
âOh Fuck! FuckFuckFuck!â He pushed his cock as deep into her cunt as he could physically get before he came, shooting everything he had up into her womb. âGood girl, gonna have my babies. God, I love you Princess-fuck!â
âI love you too AemondâŚyou feel so goodâŚâ
âThatâs right Princess. Youâre all mine now, all fucking mine.â
Aemond âTangledâ Moodboard
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Botanic Tournament : Main Bracket !
Round 5 Poll I
Note : The tournament has been extended to all plants, whether they have/are flowers or not
Momo means peach
(Rapunzel and peach)
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Melodia (Fairytale Retelling )
I want to do a little something for Mermay before it comes to an end. Melodia is a part of a story of mine called Golden Seas . Which is a Little Mermaid x Rapunzel retelling that a part of a series of sapphic fairytale retellings I started awhile back. Melodia is my retelling version of The Little Mermaid. She is based off the Hans Christian Andersen fairytale, not the Disney version. All my retellings are based on the actual fairytales but with my own creative twists to them with some changes. I do want to start posting about this project on here, so expect some more art and info in the future possibly.
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Lava Red Feather Blue by Molly Ringle Awakening the handsome prince is supposed to end the fairy tale, not begin it. Prince Larkin has lain in a magical sleep since 1799 as a truce between humans and fae. That is, until Merrick Highvalley, a modern-day witch, accidentally awakens him--and releases Ula Kana, a faery bent on eradicating humans. View the full summary and rep info on wordpress!
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I'm writing a book
So, I mentioned I'm writing a book in my last post. It's called A Braid of Thorns and Shadows. It's a sapphic, YA, science fantasy Rapunzel retelling.
Micah's life has been nothing but experiments and isolation because of her magic. She only wishes that she could leave her tower prison and see the world.
Ren is a secret agent for the king on a mission of the utmost importance when she stumbles across the tower.
Neither of them knew the danger that would follow when Micah escaped the tower or the pretty things beneath the thorns they discovered.
This description is a work in progress, but it's still the best description I've written of anything, so that has to count for something. There is disability rep, queer rep, and all sorts of other fun things. Please follow for updates if this sounds at all interesting to you.
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Book Review: "Tangled Up In You" by Christina Lauren
New Review: If you've ever thought about bringing Rapunzel and Flynn Rider into the modern world, Christina Lauren have you covered. "Tangled Up In You" brings our long-haired princess into our world and you simply must read it. Check out my full review
A new Christina Lauren book, you say? I know youâre suprised to find me reviewing a book by them. JK. Iâm incredibly predictable. When I heard the fabulous writing duo of Christina and Lauren were writing a contemporary Tangled retelling, I was so in. Tangled Up In You [By Bookshop Amazon] changes up some details from Rapunzel/Tangled, but there are also plenty of Easter Eggs for the fans. InâŚ
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ŕ¨âŻ Long Gone Princess âŻŕ§
Characters: Yan!Thief x (Y/N) reincarnated as Rapunzel A lot of you guys enjoyed the Cinderella version, so why not make a Rapunzel version? Very much considering making this a Yan!Fairytales Series.
Stowed Away
When you first awoke in your tower, you panicked for days. There was literally no way out, no matter how much you clawed at the bricks. It didn't take long to figure out where exactly you were. Who else would paint a mural of herself, seriously long-haired, gazing at floating lanterns?
Meeting Mother Gothel was the most anxiety-inducing thing you had to push through. You pitied the real Rapunzel for falling victim to her sugar-coated, poisonous words. As much as you internally cringed at them, it wouldn't serve you well to raise suspicion. After all, you have nowhere to go.
Whenever Mother Gothel was gone and you finished tidying up the tower, you emptied one of your chests full of female paraphernalia and stuffed some "safety equipment inside." Hopefully, Mother Gothel wouldn't notice a missing pair of scissors. Or a few darts.
Your now abnormally long hair was disturbing, to say the least. It was pretty, but now that you were living her life, you wandered how Rapunzel managed to put up with the hair strands scattered around the house, washing the heap of keratin proteins for hours in just ONE day, and sleep knowing there was at least some hair flowing to the floor. And let's be real: you were not going to spend most of your day braiding it just to remove your work whenever Mother Gothel came back.
Unfortunately, you couldn't afford to cut your hair--not just because it'd give Mother Gothel a heart attack but because it might help you. It did have magical healing powers. The only huge problem was that you were not skilled enough to maneuver your hair like Rapunzel. In addition, if you were to leave the tower, how would you return? Until you found the secret entrance amongst all the brick, you needed a backup plan.
One day, you gathered the courage to ask Mother Gothel for more fabric to sew a beautiful wedding dress, one that was colorful and very long. Of course, you left out the part where you wanted it to be long enough to reach the bottom of the tower (it'd be a lot of work, but what else were you going to do to escape?). She was skeptical about the idea behind the dress, but you reassured her that you just wanted something like those girls in the fairytale books you had in your room. After her lecture about the dangers of the world, she agreed to get you fabric.
My Savior
One morning, while you sowed your dress, you heard the sound of metal jabbing into something growing closer and closer. In a panic, you shut off your sewing machine and tied up as much as your hair as possible. There was no way you could capture Rapunzel's beloved thief the way she did. You vaguely prepared for what to do when he arrived, but you hadn't expected it to be that day!
At last, he fell into the tower and froze at the sight of you. He glanced behind him and turned back around, stepping away from the window with hands up. "Uh. I am so sorry for breaking into your home."
You pointed one of your scissors (used to cut fabric earlier) at him with a glare. "I'll forgive you if you hand me that bag you have."
"Listen, miss, I think we can sort this out without--"
"The bag or I'll throw you back down."
He gulped and reluctantly threw you the bag, begging you to please return it to him afterwards. The shock he had at your nonchalant expression while pulling out the most sparkly crown you've ever seen was laughable. In reality though, you were in awe. You quickly snapped out of it, though, and threw it behind you. You both cringed at the clanging it made as it hit the floor.
"I need you to listen to me," you started, gripping your scissors and your dress. "I need your help."
You didn't hesitate to cut to the chase. You explained that you were kidnapped by a woman claiming to be your mother and trapped in the tower by her. Although it may backfire on you later, you shared that you were reincarnated from another world. He was in disbelief until you told him his full name, his criminal history, the companions he had who would soon betray him, and the small cottage he visited along with many more criminals or outlaws. He challenged that you just did your research, but then you told him what crime he had just committed: stealing the missing princess's crown, which was--by the way--you.
After some back and forth, he agreed to help on the condition that you return the crown. You agreed to return it on the condition that he not only help you escape but also help you live in safety.
Together, you both clawed at the bricks on the wall until the secret backdoor was found. He helped you come up with a way to hide the new backdoor again whenever Mother Gothel returned.
You found a pattern in the earlier months leading up to then on Mother Gothel's pattern of visitation. She comes back every three or four days in early evening. If she didn't return by the time the sun disappeared, she wouldn't be back at all. That day was one of those days she wasn't going back. You suspected she wouldn't return for a while since she had just left the day before. Although hesitant at the idea of a new roommate, you demanded that Yan!Thief spend the night in the same room as you. He balked at what he thought was an implication, but he soon found himself sleeping on the floor (you dropped a blanket for him). How were you sure he wouldn't use the secret backdoor while you slept? You boobietrapped it before bed, making sure he stayed in the room so he wouldn't see under the threat of murder.
Steal His Heart
Your new routine was a scary turn but also surprisingly relieving. Yan!Thief would leave the tower in search of a new home for you (and him too) and would return in the afternoon only if a piece of purple fabric hung outside the window. Otherwise, it wasn't safe to come back.
Although your relationship started off rocky (who's to blame him with how violently you approached him?), you two soon warmed up to each other. He sometimes returned with small goods that you sometimes got a clear answer for how he retrieved. That chocolate he got for you both to try? He pickpocketed it. That ripe fruit that tasted like mildew spring? He dodged all of the questions.
Eventually, you gathered the courage to leave the tower with him. Your activities differed from there. Sometimes, you both ventured a little ways from the tower to discover the terrain and help find a new home. Sometimes, you both would spend the day walking around, learning more about each other and chatting away.
With no other companion, it came as no surprise to Yan!Thief that he developed romantic feelings for you. You didn't want to admit that you did too. At least, not until you both were in a safe place.
At last, Yan!Thief found an abandoned shelter. It was rusty, but it was closer to the kingdom than the tower but sheltered away like the tower. With a pounding heart, you gathered as much as you could from your tower into a backpack that Yan!Thief had brought over and left forever. In the shelter, you cut your hair, rendering it free from its power. Yan!Thief initially didn't want it to happen due to your great abilities, but one look at your determined face told him that you knew better.
The next couple weeks was spent in paranoia, you in fear of Mother Gothel and him in fear of guards. Luckily, you two went as far as making it into the kingdom without getting caught.
One day, you brought up the idea of revealing your identity to the king and queen while fidgeting with your crown. You reassured Yan!Thief that you'd vouch for his safety and freedom for as much as possible. It took a while for him to warm up to that, but you two finally made your way towards the castle.
Everything went surprisingly as planned. The kingdom rejoiced at the return of their princess, Yan!Thief was spared of a prison sentence and was even given a home and job as a prize for bringing you back, and the dead, rotten body of Mother Gothel was found not far from the shelter you and Yan!Thief had found.
Life was a fairytale.
MY Princess
Until it wasn't.
See, although you and Yan!Thief seemed to start opening a romantic chapter, that soon closed. With your newfound title came new responsibilities, friends, and much to his worries, a possible new love interest.
He tried his best to remain just a friend to you, but it was unbelievably hard. He couldn't believe that you were slowly forgetting him, your savior! Why must you abandon your knight in shining armor?!
He did feel guilty for not appreciating his new life more. Any other criminal would probably fight tooth and nail to be in his position, but he just wasn't happy if you weren't there with him.
Once his selfishness began to boil over, he devised a plan he wasn't sure if he was going to regret. He paid a visit to your room in the castle (you had given your dear best friend special permission) and chatted with you a bit. You apologized for being so distant as of late; royal duties had been keeping you at bay. He accepted your apology more readily than he had expected. It was hard not to with your bright smile and the cute way you pushed your hair behind your ears. He asked if you had time to visit the old tower for memories sake, and you happily agreed. The kingdom had yet to find the tower (you insisted to him that you wanted it kept secret in case you needed to run away again), so you simply told your guards you were heading out for a stroll.
Once at the tower, you two ventured inside and reveled at how dramatic your lives had changed. You even reminisced your life before being reincarnated. As the sun fell, you got up and suggested that you both should head back before it gets dark.
"Yan!Thief?" You peered at his gloomy expression. "Is everything okay?"
He nodded. got up, and hugged you. You let out a gasp before embracing him back. When he left go, you caught a tear slipped down his cheek. Your hands shot up to cup his face. "Yan!Thief?! What's wrong? I'm here. Did something happen?"
He sniffled and brushed a hand over your cheek. "I'm so sorry."
You were about to demand an explanation until you caught a glimmer shine from a blade in his other hand.
When you woke, you found your ankle chained to your bed--not your bed in the beautiful castle you were meant to be in but in the tower you had escaped from a year ago.
Yan!Thief came in the room and apologized with tears streaming down his face, exclaiming that you were just too irresistible to give to any other man or even the kingdom. He promised to take care of everything.
No matter how much you screamed, threw items in a fit of rage, or revealed that you only had romantic feelings for him all this time, he wouldn't budge. It was only until he bought a longer chain that he freed you from the bed. Your heart broke when you discovered he had discarded the wedding dress you had worked hard on and abandoned in the tower long ago, and even more so when you saw that he had built a new door in front of the original secret entrance.
You were back to square one, only this time with no way out and betrayed by the one person you truly trusted in this universe.
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No matter how many times it happens, I'm always shocked by how reliably all my problems with any given story are solved by making it shorter. If I go into a story with the idea that it'll be long, that I should use as much detail as I want to craft a full-length and fully-fleshed-out story instead of a short one, it always turns into this rambling, meandering, soulless thing that's no fun to read, and I get tangled up in so many flimsy, sprawling layers of character and worldbuilding that the plot becomes unworkable.
The minute I tell myself, "Let's make this as short as possible," the problems fall away, I find the heart of the story again, the pacing is brisk, scenes get multiple purposes, the world feels deeper because I'm implying things that spark the reader's imagination rather than trying to put every threadbare, boring detail on the page. Every time. You'd think I'd have learned by now.
#adventures in writing#yes this is about the arateph rapunzel retelling#the drafts of that one are *so* bad#thin and rambling with no plot progression#but then writing that rubber duck outline made everything fall into place#for instance: the drafts included subplots about zemma struggling with wanting to connect with her family while also doing her work#there were entire scenes just to introduce her mother#her family was going to get a whole subplot#camreth had a family full of brothers he mourned#and then writing the rubber duck explanation i realized that *none of that mattered* to the story i wanted to tell#cut away her family and i don't have to worry about how they could be harmed by her decision to marry a fugitive#and i can focus on her relationship with camreth rather than this tangled web that includes her mentor and her family#cut away his siblings and auren becomes much more important and it's relevant to his arc rather than an easter-egg add-on#i had struggled with the double point of view when i was given full rein#putting in lots of filler scenes because i feel like i need to give a full picture of both their lives#the 'keep it short!' mindset makes the two povs easy#just pick the scenes that are directly relevant to the plot then choose which pov is best for it#it's absolutely astounding but also horrifying because i've had this story for years#and this has worked with other stories before#i should have figured this out long before now
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The Grimm Legends (Character lineup)
All the character designs so far all togetherđ¤
Axel (Huntsman), Prince Henry, Prince Louis, Geppetto, Hansel, Jack, Princess Anita, Blanchette (Red), Gretel, Ella, Briar Rose, Rapunzel, Snow White, Luke, Pinocchio and Goldilocks!
More designs/characters on there way!
#the grimm legends#grimm fairytales#grimm fairy tales#grimm brothers#fairy tale retelling#fairy tales#fairytale#character designs#digital character#digital characters#character artwork#snow white#cinderella#rapunzel#pinocchio#sleeping beauty#hansel and gretel#little red riding hood#jack and the beanstalk#goldilocks and the three bears#the boy who cried wolf#the frog prince
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I did it! The great endeavor I began, five years ago, to rewrite every Austen novel blended with a fairy tale is DONE. You can now reexperience all/moments of your favorite Austen moments, but now with elemental magic and cursed princes!
Feels a bit weird to say goodbye to the books that have consumed me for two years straight, but I'm also so excited that these stories can now be read and loved by everyone!
They're all right here. Check 'em out. Also, Thornrose Estate is 99 cents right now for ... reasons.
#Kendra E. Ardnek#my books#books#retellings#austen fairy tale#pride & prejudice#sense and sensibility#Emma#mansfield park#Northanger Abbey#Persuasion#Snow White and Rose Red#Cinderella#Rapunzel#Snow Queen#Beauty and the Beast#the little mermaid
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5 star reads of 2024 âł tangled up in you by christina lauren
#tangled up in you#christina lauren#bookedit#litedit#librarysource#romanceedit#romcomedit#booksociety#romcom#romance books#tanglededit#rapunzel#romance#contemporary#retelling#moodboard#mine*#5*2024
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It finally clicked Damon is the Eugene to my travelers Rapunzel. Their dynamic is just Tangled in space
#he could also be that guy from anastasia to my travelers anastasia#which would be fitting because a6 is just an anastasia retelling in space#but what can i say i like rapunzel#andromeda 6#damon reznor
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rapunzel
klaus mikaelson x fem!oc
ao3
sinopsis
this is a fairy tale of love and desperate passion. rapunzel donovan had a princess name, a diagnosis of schizophrenia and a confused relationship with the will to live. but the tower she built around herself was threatened to fall when she met klaus â the big bad wolf, willing to be the hero of this story, just this one, just for her.
â ď¸ depression, anxiety, self mutilation, suicide thoughts, sexual abuse, psychophobia, explicit sexual content, violence
â lily james as rapunzel donovan
â dividers by @issysh3ll
â who hasn't asked himself, am i a monster or is this what it means to be human? â [clarice lispector]
playlist
as it seems, lily kershaw
happiness is a butterfly, lana del rey
honeymoon, lana del rey
if you wait, london grammar
i'm your man, leonard cohen
lust for life (demo), lana del rey
make it holy, the staves
patience, rhye + Ăłlafur arnalds
sights, london grammar
â if I shall be saved, it will be because your love redeems me. â [gaston leroux]
chapters
part one â dream a little dream of me
01. once upon a time
02. snuggled in sublime comfort
#klaus mikaelson#klaus mikaelson fic#klaus mikealson smut#klaus mikaelson imagine#klaus mikaelson x fem!oc#the originals#the vampire diaries#dark fairytale#rapunzel#fairy tale retelling#schizophrenia#smut#vampire
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Stuck on a thing. I know I only have a few of the Mangst one-shots out right now. But writers block has me stuck on being able to finish the next few (ideas there; execution, not so much), plus this cold isn't helping.
Anyway, working on more worldbuilding while my brain clears up. Putting the poll first, context underneath. (Mild spoilers for New Eden Institution)
*seclusion not fully 100% for reasons below
So, I have Leslie (Rapunzel OC) and Rosalin (Odette OC). They're both in a similar boat.
Kidnapped young. Forced to look like pretty dolls for their captors. Find love (*love interest gets past the seclusion barrier) before being forced into the Institution because of their captors' jealousy. Kind of like the og fairy tales.
Now, either Leslie's first partner (one of two, in my version) either finds her in the big gated garden owned by Mama (real name Gaia/Mother Gothel OC) or they met in high school because Mama wants her to gain more skills to be "a perfect bride" (ie, Regency standards).
Then Rosalin, she's held in the same house as Teddie (full name Theodora/Odile OC) and Rudolf (Rothbart OC). So, being fully secluded from Teddie doesn't work, though Rudolf keeps her locked in a room when he isn't there and with him when he is. If she does go to high school, it's because Teddie convinced him to let her go.
Third option is they both go to a high school as a start to the New Eden pipeline. Either because of the love interests or they do have summer vacations, so authorities don't get suspicious and see said love interests in those time periods.
I might figure it out as the poll gets results, but it helps to ask to get unstuck, you know? And besides, if I don't go with what the poll wins, I can always do the idea with other characters in the New Eden universe. It's not like there's a lack of fairy tales out there.
#whump community#whump writing#whumpblr#creative writing#rapunzel#swan lake#fairy tale retelling#captive whumpee#captivity whump#kidnapped whumpee#female whumpee#whump ideas#whump scenario#secluded whumpee#whumplr#abused whumpee#conditioned whumpee#controlling whumper#manipulative whumper#writer community#writblr#writeblr community#writer problems#writers block#writing is hard#writing problems#the new eden institution
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I want to briefly talk about this book called "Gender-swapped fairy tales", by Karrie Fransman and Jonathan Plackett
I first saw it in several libraries translated in French as "Le Bel au Bois Dormant"
And I was quite interested by the idea. Take the classical fairytales, but change the genders, have heroic she-knights and princesses save men in towers and asleep princes. It is always a fun concept - and the illustrations looked weird and cool enough, with their Rapunzel-bears and drag-queen-looking wolves.
But I took a glimpse inside at a bookshop earlier and... Now please tell me if I am wrong but... it is just the fairytales retold with the pronouns changed, right? I mean I excepted a bit more of a rewrite than just copy-paste the tale by changing the pronouns, and yes there's slight changes like Rapunzel's hair being a beard and whatnot but ultimately... I can just take the original text, change myself the pronouns, and I have the content of this book. Right? Its just that?
Which is the whole point, I totally get it, it proves that fairytales in our modern world can exist beyond gender... But I don't think I am willing to spend that much money just to have a retelling I can literaly type at home on my computer.
(And they also did a gender-swapped Greek myths book apparently? And as a Greek mythology fan I can't help but ask... what's the point, beyond cashing on the trend set by this first book?)
At least the pictures are nice... But I think people are over-hyping way too much this book. They are selling it as like "the ultimate answer to fairytale misoginy" and I am like... Again, I can type this on my computer in two minutes. I just copy-paste the text and change the pronouns. Bam! Misoginy solved apparently? But please tell me if I am wrong, I just quickly went though the book...
#book#fairytale retellings#illustrations#genderswapped fairytales#genderswapped fairy tales#gender swapped fairy tales#hansel and gretel#snow white#cinderella#little red riding hood#beauty and the beast#rapunzel
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Currently reading: Cress by Marissa Meyer
#lunar chronicles#cress#marissa meyer#fantasy#science fiction#romance#retelling#dystopian#fairytales#Adventure#rapunzel#fiction#reading#books#currently reading
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