#It would follow Brokenstar as the POV and occasionally have a chapter or two from Yellowfang

[bonefall]

What are Bonefall Brokenstar's thoughts on Cannon Yellowfang and how she thinks she deserves kitty hell while she's alive?

(Also, does Bonefall Yellowfang think she deserves constant punishment?)

Bonefall Brokenstar sees Bonefall Yellowfang like an obstacle, someone who will stand in the way of getting what he wants. She was also sassier than Canon Yellowfang, who based on Yellowfang's Secret, only developed that sarcasm late in life. BF Yellow was practically strong-armed into taking on Runny as an apprentice but growled,

"Fine! But with a name like Runningpaw, I will make his name Runningnose if he's a bad apprentice."

So, with that in mind, I think BFBroken would find Canon Yellow to be very... sad. He'd think the Canon versions of his family's super messed up and not want to sit with that. He would really be made incredibly uncomfortable by the "bizarro" versions of his Clanmates sdgfsdfg

Raggedstar stupid?? Yellowfang sad?? Runningnose nice???

He would want to go home soooo badd, even if just to crawl back into his little SkyClan tree

(But yes Bonefall Yellowfang IS actually consumed by guilt; she's just more consistent between TPB and 'Bonefall Yellowfang's Secret'/Brokenstar's Cataclysm. Snarky, independent, self-loathing.)

(Also also Brokenstar probably never figured out Yellowfang was his biomother... but only because he really didn't care. If he ever raised the question to Runny he would have just said, "probably yellowfang. why?")