#InvokeSequel

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Chapter 10 is done!

I am finally done with chapter ten! This chapter really focuses on Keon and delving into him as a character and sort of his relationship with the new people in his life. I’ll share some dialogue I enjoyed writing in this chapter. It’s a first draft so who knows if this will remain until the end.

Irua hugged her memory board. “I know that this has been very hard for you to handle. You were spared a life in the circus but you could not return to what had become normal. Humans are at the center of everything you do and yet you don’t even remember what it means to be human because you never saw yourself as one nor were you treated as such. The situation you’re in now is calling on you to be something that you have never considered yourself to be. 

“Honestly, I’m still wondering why you took up the queen’s offer to become her bodyguard. I’m sure she told you that you would be swearing loyalty to her and your life would revolve around her and nothing else. I see how upset you get when we point out your flaws but you have yet to reveal your true self to us. That is why your training has not helped you as of yet. Regardless, you need to bear a mark to be identified and be considered a true member of the queen’s court.”