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Me seeing thereâs almost no fics about Luigi introducing Bowser to his family:
#super mario brothers#super mario movie#bowuigi#luigi#bowser#mario#fanfiction#expect this in like 2-7 days#I legit just started up my fic again after I abandoned it for 4 months#and now instead of updating that one Iâm starting another#đ#peaches peaches peaches peaches peaches#I LOVEEEEE YOUUU
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Riaâs Top 10 Canon-verse Fics
So, Iâm a little surprised Iâve held off on doing this particular Top 10 as long as I have, if only because this does cover the majority of stucky fics that have been written. It also contains some of my all-time favorite fics, which I will be screaming about below. Youâve been warned. But anyway, this is getting down into the nitty-gritty of why I love stucky -- the original âverse, with the original storyline (although there are a fair few canon-divergent fics in here, Iâm sure). Pure, unadulterated Steve Rogers loving Bucky Barnes. What more can you ask for, honestly? You could ask for it to be legit canon, but lmao, no, we donât expect things like that, especially not from the MCU writers. Also, some of the fics I mightâve included in this list are recced in an ask I got a while ago, so go check that out for some mostly-canon angst. Regardless, here are my personal Top 10 canon-verse fic recs:
1. Ainât No Grave (Can Keep My Body Down) by spitandvinegar. Alright, buckle up friends, because this is the end-all, be-all of my favorite stucky fics. I have reread it probably four or five times in the four years Iâve been in this fandom, and it hits me just as hard every single time. This is canon-divergent post-WS, where Buckyâs come-down from his Hydra conditioning is accompanied by a drug addiction and two smart-mouthed kids he rescued from the streets. Steve literally loves nothing more than he loves Bucky and he is determined to bring Bucky home, kids included. There is just -- so much I love about this story. I canât possibly fit it all into a little blurb. But this is my favorite stucky fic, hands-down. Itâs a must-read if you can handle the incredibly sensitive topics it covers, which means itâs not for everyone. But it has my highest seal of approval.Â
2. Perilous Underside of the World by eyres. I reread this recently because I was in the mood for both angst and badass Bucky, and this delivered in spades. Steveâs been kidnapped and held captive by Ross for months, tortured and experimented on, and it as devastating as it sounds. Cue Bucky and the rest of Team Cap coming in for a rescue mission and an adrenaline-filled adventure through the Antarctic wasteland. The summary says it all, honestly: Steve throws a snow-mobile at a helicopter in this one. Â
3. Steve Rogers at 100: Celebrating Captain America on Film by eleveninches, febricant, hellotailor, M_Leigh, neenya, tigrrmilk. A lot of fics are enhanced by visual media, usually some type of fanart, but few are incomplete without it -- this fic is one of them. Itâs a look through in-universe media depictions of Captain America over the years, with real-life casting and amazingly done posters for the movies. The various Avengers are there to react to it all and itâs nothing short of glorious.Â
4. Came Back Haunted* by Brenda. You guys should know how much I love Brendaâs writing, since I waxed poetic about it when I was doing the rec for Prince Charming, but Iâm going to say it again: I love her writing. And this is yet again another fic series that will tear at your heart and stitch you back together again. It features, among other things: Bucky and Thor friendship; a road-trip; dark Steve; and bearded Steve! All good things. Itâs been a while since Iâve read this, but Iâm pretty assured there is much angst to be found here as well, plus the requisite happy ending, because, as previously mentioned, I donât do unhappy endings.Â
5. Tender is the Ghost* by Hark_bananas. OH WOW. Okay. So. I started reading this series right before the second part had been published, and I just. Fell in love with it. The first part is set right after Bucky turned himself into SHIELD, and it features Steve and Bucky re-learning about each other (and themselves) through a closed door, considering Steve isnât allowed to see Bucky face-to-face. And the second part picks up once Bucky is ready to go home with Steve, and itâs. So sweet. Bucky and Steve recovering, together, and finding love along the way. Bucky loves plants. What more could you ask for?
6. Infinite Coffee and Protection Detail* by owlet. I think this is probably one of the most popular series in this fandom, and for good reason. Itâs Bucky setting himself a new goal after the fallout of Project Insight, and that goal is a protection detail for Steve Rogers, well before he has his memories to back up the need for such a thing. Bucky and Steve donât get romantically involved until much later in the series, but their friendship is a thing of beauty in this, as is Bucky learning how to be human again, through coffee, grilled cheese, and The Olds, the elderly neighbors he comes to care for while heâs watching Steveâs back from across the street. I adore this series and I think most people would be hard pressed to find anything they donât like about it.Â
7. The Blood Will Dry by castiowl. There are clones in this one. It might be the sci-fi nerd in me, but honestly thatâs enough information to hook me already. But this fic is a fantastic, gripping read from start to finish, and the clones are only a part of that. Itâs another fic that written right after The Winter Soldier came out, and so it has a lot of the hallmarks of that era: Bucky dealing with his conditioning, coming back to himself and Steve, Hydra-hunting missions, some kidnapping, unfortunate throwbacks to torture, and Steve having to figure his own shit out right alongside Bucky.Â
8. To Stop My Mind From Wandering by Lynchy8. This one is a little shorter than the other fics on this list, but itâs still one of my favorites, and for a much different reason than the others. This is Bucky and Steve separated for the majority of the fic, with Bucky taking up residence in Steve abandoned apartment while heâs off being Captain America and also looking for Bucky. Bucky does home repairs for Steve. Steve broods and worries. Bucky heals on his own terms and itâs lovely. And the ending is very sweet when Steve finally does come home.
9. despite the threatening sky and shuddering earth (they remained) by praximiter. AKA The Mask Fic. Which. Jesus Christ. This shouldâve gone in with my angst fic recs, because this will hurt you, in the best possible way. Buckyâs mask doesnât come off, and so thereâs no pivotal moment of realization for Steve, no hellfire determination to ensure Bucky survives their fights against all odds. But heâs saved regardless, and the rest of the fic is the team trying to communicate with him, learn his story, all while Bucky canât speak and the mask physically cannot come off. Like I said, itâs a recipe for Pain, but the pay-off is more than worth it, in my opinion.Â
10. waiting for the winter by coldhope. Also just recently reread this one, and I loved the progression of Steve and Buckyâs relationship here as well. It also has Bucky befriending all of the Avengers, not just Natasha or Sam; getting to see from other charactersâ POV how their perception of Bucky changes as the fic goes on was so interesting, since itâs not something Iâve seen done in many fics. Which also might be a personal thing on my part, who knows. Anyway. Good fic. Steve and Bucky donât take forever to figure out their feelings, but they do take a while to get on the same page with each other, which should surprise absolutely no one who has ever read a stucky fic before.
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Practical Tips on getting your fics out there!
Iâve gotten an influx of these types of questions here recently, and the more i thought about what i was gonna add, it became really long :(Â Â
disclaimer:Â a lot of the things i bring up are just from personal experience as a writer on this site, what my followers have told me they appreciate, and what i tend to look for when im looking for fics to read! If you donât like these tips then pls move on :)Â
although iâll mention them, iâm also not going to be focusing on cliche tips like âwrite for yourselfâ or âgrammar issuesâ cause those are pretty obvious!
1. accessibility of your blogÂ
when youâre trying to get your name out there, make sure that youâre creating an inviting experience for any potential followers! this includes:
a memorable url! be creative!
have some fun designing your blogâs aesthetic! (i love cute blogs because it reflects a bit of the writerâs personality), and (i prefer blogs with white backgrounds because itâs easier to look through/read, say, in contrast to a pitch black one where the words need to be white!)Â
put your masterlist link in your bio (even better if you can link most recent fic! found this most helpful when i revisit authors that i like and can easily see if theyâve updated or not)
an organized and easy-to-navigate masterlist (personally, i prefer masterlists organized by band, instead of types of fics ie. i hate when i have to choose between drabbles, oneshots, and series masterlists; i really prefer to see them altogether!) --> see section 3Â
organized tags (if youâre going to be posting a lot of non-fic-related content like pictures or videos, tag them properly so followers can sort through and find your fics easily!), or (if youâre going to be writing in different mediums like drabbles, or answering asks, make sure to use a unified #mine or #writing or #fics to centralize your content)Â
2. get your name out there!
write write write! once you have some fics that show your talent, donât be shy!Â
join writing groups: when i first started out, I joined a bunch of groups that would reblog my fics in the midst of the content of much bigger writers; these blogs developed a following, and as a result of my content mixing in with bigger blogsâ content, so did my own tumblr! thereâs been a stigma recently with these groups, but im sure you can find one thats supportive and not clique-y!Â
send your fics to rec pages: whatâs the harm? the only bad thing that can happen is that they ignore you! who cares! get out there!Â
if you can do the above, i really encourage you to ask your fave writers for advice/to read your fic: again, the worst that can happen is that they say no or donât respond or donât have enough time, but itâll be a good opportunity to get some feedback! i for one read (or try to read) every single rec that falls into my inbox. if i like it, iâll #rec it, and if i donât, unless the writer asks me for feedback, i move on!!Â
utilize your tags!!:Â iâm not entirely sure if this is still the same or not, but from my memory, itâs the first 3-5 tags that matter the most? so utilize them well; push back the tags that arenât really relevant (ie. #writing, #fics) and push more the main subject line of what you wrote (ie. jungkook fluff, bts smut, namjoon angst). these will populate your fics into the tags better!
headers!:Â when iâm scrolling through an infinite page of fics, the headers catch my eye the most; try being creative! you can find a lot of info out there on how to make ur headers super aesthetic, but i can share my tips too! --> see section 3
3. your masterlistÂ
here are some practical tips!Â
organize by band, not type of fic/member/centralize your masterlist: i went onto a blog recently and clicked their bio mlist link to find a page full of 20~ish âJUNGKOOK MASTERLISTâ/ âJAEHYUN MASTERLISTâ and when i clicked on each one, they only had like 2 or 3 fics per member. i think it wouldâve been better if sheâd centralized all her fics! that keeps whoever is looking interested and more likely to click on another fic while browsing
add info about the fics!: when scrolling through a masterlist, itâs easy to get lost; try to add some snippets of info (ie. a short sentence you liked from the fic, a quick summary, a description of the au/scenario, or even a header!) this all gives some info about the fics you have tagged!Â
headers: this isnât a requirement, but i personally love a good header on fics i read and i love making them myself as i finish up a fic and get ready to upload it; here are free sources: unsplash for HQ stock pics, crop/edit/filter in VSCO, and then add aesthetic script with fontcandy)Â
try to fill it up!: after i visit a blog after reading one good fic, i usually browse through their mlist to see if there are any more that iâd be interested in. if thereâs a lot to look forward to, iâll almost always follow; try to write as much as you can in the first few months to try and fill up your mlist and give blog viewers a reason to visit your blog again, follow, or even reblog your content!)Â
4. try not to reproduce cliche fics:Â
honestly tumblrâs writing community (and armys) has grown insanely these past few years and, unfortunately, even from my perspective, in the past 3-4 years, all the writers have sort of become blended together in my brain. but, i can say that the ones who consistently stand out are the ones who produce consistent content and think outside of the box!Â
i tend to gravitate towards fics that have really interesting plotlines (ex. btssavedmylifeblrâs VOID is always a surprise to read because itâs sO unique! i usually donât read ot7 fics but this one is legit my fave)Â
I know itâs tempting to try and just write typical smut fics to try and gain some traction, but tumblr is already too overloaded by that kind of content; try to write something thatâs special and unique! this will set u apart from the thousands of other writers here --> see next section
5. create unique fics:Â
this is also personal to my writing style, but i get so bored writing just casual fics about the members, and it affects the fics i choose to read too; i prefer unique fics which you can achieve through:Â
circumstance/au:Â create a fun au!; donât just create an arranged marriage, create an arranged marriage in joseon dynasty, or between a werewolf and a hunter! (shameless self plug); donât just give me friends to lovers, but give me spiderman!jungkook friends to lovers! (ie. cupofteagukâs exchanges)
jobs:Â give them out-of-the-ordinary jobs; donât just give me enemies to lovers, but give me rival!anchors who end up loving eachother! (ie. jimlingss The Newscasters)
fun dialogue: create good back-and-forth, (something iâm still working on!)! this will help your characters develop personality, and that way, readers will start to develop that themselves as well (ie. dad!yoongi from insemination wars by prolixitae is such a specific character that i love so much!, or obiwritesâ garden characters were so memorable!)
create memorable personalities: donât give me a flat character, try to develop 4d personalities in all of your characters! (im still working on this too!) this way you can really make an impression on your followers! a great way to practice/recognize this is: âAsk my Character.â Can your followers ask a specific character a specific question, and would you be able to deliver an answer that is very specific to that characterâs tone/voice/personality? If yes, then ur doing well! If not, try to think of ways that you can make tht specific character from a specific story, really unique and separate from your other characters.
6. some practical writing tips
be yourself, write for your own pleasure, blah blah blah; yeah you know already haha but here are a few more practical tips!Â
grammar check: if you can, try and hone your grammar! makes for an easier readÂ
write like you:Â i personally LOVE this by obiwrites, but even the way she writes exudes her personality and is so specific; try not to be caught up in adding hundreds of synonyms and exquisite language; in fact, simpling it down and being more concise and honest with your writing is better than a superfluous sentence; this will also give ur characters so much more dimension and funk
use those commas/sentence variation: try to use more commas; this will feel like youâre the narrator to your own story; it also makes it more fluid to read in my opinion, over those short. clipped. sentences. (ie. âhe came over, sitting down on the corner of your bed with an expression youâd never seen beforeâ over âhe walked over. he sat down, looking sad.â)Â
half-half dialogue/narration:Â a fic with too much dialogue can get confusing, and a fic with too much narration can get dry; try to balance them out, and weave in and out of each!Â
quality over quantity: donât feel burdened to write a 30k word fic. in fact, i think some of the shorter fics (ie. any of versignyâs stuff) made a bigger impression on me over the longer fics because they were short, left me wanting more, and were just so high-quality in such small quantities. try out your hand at drabbles and one-shots, and donât feel too burdened to try and develop a series right off the bat!Â
abandon pigeon-holes: iâm guilty of this; i start series and then end up with no vision for the stories and they end up giving me writers block. its okay. just stop or discontinue them or leave them on a hiatus; itâs okay. your priority is yourself, and if abandoning certain works are part of that, then go ahead. itâll help you progress more.Â
and finally.......
iâll add more as they come up! but if you liked this, then pls lmk! iâd love to give more tips and tricks; i think i started this blog 3-4 years ago when there werenât as many writers here, but im glad youâre thinking of starting out/wanting to grow more! donât feel intimidated! itâs not all about the notes/followers but creating a blog youâre proud of.Â
so write what youâre proud of, or interested in, and keep going. i truly thoroughly had so much fun writing this post. if there are any writers who read through this and have some more advice, pls msg me!Â
all the best to you!Â
#writing tips#story talk#if ur a writer pls lmk if theres anything u wanna add#if ur a reader then pls lmk any questions or comments!
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Impasse - Chapter 9: Epilogue
The final chapter of Impasse.
Chapter warning: Fluff; Slight sexual content.
All Chapters:Â Â 1Â /Â 2Â /Â 3Â /Â 4Â /Â 5Â /Â 6Â /Â 7Â /Â 8Â /Â 9
Also on Ao3.
M-rated version on ff.net.
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I canât believe it. My first Vegebul multi-chapter fanfic is over! I legit feel like crying, because I am so happy that I actually completed this fic. This story started just from a one-shot inspired by a cute little fanart that I found on tumblr, and has somehow turned into this story that helped me explore not just these characters, but facets of myself, as well.
Also, because of this story, I have met and interacted with so many wonderful people, have received amazing writing tips and inspiration, and I am really very, very thankful to all of you who liked, commented, kudosâd, favorite/bookmarked and reblogged this story. You all made it possible for me to push through and finish this story, so from the very bottom of my heart, thank you so much to all of you!
Letâs get on with this then! The final chapter of Impasse.
And as always⌠your feedback will be greatly appreciated!
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Bulma hummed a small tune as she drove, her shiny new periwinkle hybrid car gleaming as it sped down the highway.
She knew she was speeding just a tiny bit, but it was Friday, and she really couldnât wait to get home that day.
She was bursting at the seams with excitement, dying to share her most recent discovery with the dark-haired man waiting for her at home.
She stopped at a red light, tapping her fingers against the steering wheel as she impatiently waited for the light to turn green.
The rays of the setting sun reached for her through her lightly-tinted car windows, bouncing off the shiny, intricately-engraved golden ring and its grander diamond-topped twin on her left ring finger.
She smiled, excited to see Vegeta.
Vegeta⌠Her husband.
It had been five years since she had met him, since she had first looked into the piercing eyes of the man she would later fall madly in love with.
Three years since he, at their annual office party, got down on one knee before her, and with the entire staff of Ouji Enterprises as their witness, asked her to become his wife.
It had been nearly two years since she walked down an aisle littered with blue flower petals, her bouquet of light blue roses and hydrangea clutched tightly in her hands, and promised her mind, body and soul to the only man she would ever cherish more than life itself.
He was truly the love of her life, and she was determined to make sure that he knew it, felt it, every single dayâŚ
Which was the reason why he needed to be the first one she told about her entire lifeâs most amazing discovery.
She slammed down on the gas, giddy as she saw the roof of their medium-sized mansion, nestled among the trees, smack down the border of the South and West Cities.
It was a strategic spot. It was only half an hour away from both of their places of work.
He at Ouji EntâŚ
And she at Capsule Corp.
Vegeta had taken it upon himself to help the Briefs reconcile. Several months after Bulma had admitted to the public that they were together following his car accident, he had pulled strings to, without Bulmaâs knowledge, gain an appointment with Dr. Briefs.
They had spoken at length about her, him promising her father that he was going to look after her and be there for her, before he begged them to leave Bulma alone to find herself.
She had been livid about his interference, but he had simply said that he knew, deep down, that she still loved her family in spite of their issues⌠and she had nothing to fear from them now, as he would be there with her, standing with her, to keep her strong, all the way.
She had later gone back to her family home to speak with her parents, and with her hand in Vegetaâs warm grasp, she had looked at her father and motherâŚ
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âI am happy. I am very happy right now. Vegeta,â she paused as she choked back tears, and he squeezed her hand in support. âVegeta makes me happy. My job right now, makes me happy. And I donât care if you think Iâm a harlot,â she glanced at her mother, âfor dating my boss. Because this thing between us is real.â
Her father had sat straight, brows knitted together as he responded. âBulma... If you two are in love, then I am glad that you have found each other. Your mother and I⌠We are your parents, and we want you to be happy, dear.â
âThen I need you both to promise that whatever I do, youâll be happy for me. I need to know that you wonât try to stop me from discovering more about myself, because as much as I am your daughter, I am also my own person,â she paused to glance at the dark-haired man sitting beside her. âVegeta makes me happy because he supports me. He gives me my freedom and lets me have a choice. My life is up to me, and he has never tried to force or impose himself and his decisions on me. I need that kind of support from you two, as well.â
Panchy refused to look at Bulma as she spoke, her voice light and airy, but Bulma sensed the underlying seething in the blonde womanâs tone.
âYou would abandon us for him? Your family who raised you, gave you everything you needed and wanted⌠just to prove a point?â Panchy asked.
Bulma gasped, utterly mortified as fury crawled through her veins.
She opened her mouth to reply, but a stern voice beat her to the punch.
âIf I may interject, Briefs-san,â Vegeta spoke, pulling all of their attention to him.
His face and tone remained polite, nearly impassive, but Bulma could tell from the way his hand curled convulsively around her fingers, and his eyes had darkened in his barely leashed rage, that he had reached his boiling point.
âBulma did not join Ouji to prove a point. She wanted to discover herself, find her own way. She is not abandoning you, but she had distanced herself from you because she needed room to grow, which is something that in your overprotectiveness,â he paused, his teeth grinding in agitation. âshe was having a hard time finding. I cannot promise to be the perfect person towards her, but I can guarantee you this⌠with me, she will be free to learn all she can about herself. And I will stand by her. Because I cherish your daughter, as I am sure you do, as well.â
Her heart clenched, and she could feel his love for her enveloping her, giving her the courage to push forward and make her parents understand that she didnât hate them, but she was done being a child.
She was a grown woman. A woman who had been lucky enough to find and fall in love with a wonderful man who, amazingly, loved her back.
âPlease remember that it was Vegeta who wanted me to talk to you,â she said through gritted teeth, causing her father to wince, and her mother to blink. âI never would have found the will or desire to come here if not for him, so donât suggest that he is the reason I have turned away... He is the reason, the only reason, I am trying to clear things between us now. I would prefer to have you in my life, but I will not hesitate to turn away again if you cannot accept that I am my own person, and the decisions about my career and personal life are mine to make.â
She stood, Vegeta following suit. As they made their way to the door, she turned back slightly as she remembered something else.
âBy the way, Tights called a week ago. She and Kaito, Jacoâs father, are getting married. If youâd like to attend the wedding this fall, you know how to find her.â
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That slightly disastrous meeting had led to further conversations between Bulma and her parents, until they had finally settled on a truce, on the day of Tightsâ wedding.
However⌠it was not until after they had gotten engaged that Vegeta had asked her to think about going back to Capsule Corp.
He had known, before she herself had realized it, that she could never truly turn her back on CC, because she would wish to honor her fatherâs legacy and hard work.
He never pushed, only planted the idea in her head⌠but as a testament to how well he knew her, Bulma realized that he was right⌠she did want to eventually lead CC, but the problem she had before was that if she had just taken over the company at 21, then she would not have been happy because it wouldnât have been her choice to do so.
She also knew that without any corporate experience, in spite of her genius, she would have surely run the company into the ground. She would not have had the chance to learn and grow, to develop strategies that could help her manage a corporation. Now that she had learned the ways of steering an organization from Ouji, she could seriously consider eventually heading their familyâs company.
Vegeta truly did know her better than she knew herself.
Her father had been ecstatic when she called him to talk about Capsule Corp., but she had insisted that she first be assigned a lower executive position, until she felt confident in fully taking on the responsibilities of leading the company.
She left Ouji Ent. shortly before she married Vegeta. He had been very sad to have her leave the company, but he had been happy for her, knowing that her moving to CC was the start of yet another chapter in their lives. She joined CC as the Chief of Research and Development six months after their wedding.
Bulmaâs life was going exactly the way she wanted it to, perhaps even better.
She turned into their large garage, grinning as she saw her husband already there, pulling open the back of his SUV, that she saw was full of groceries.
âHey babe!â she greeted, carefully parking beside him.
He gave her an answering smirk, moving to meet her at the driverâs side, extending a hand to her. She smiled gratefully as she took his hand, easily hopping off the large vehicle with his help.
They walked to the back of his car, and Bulma snickered at the number of bags she saw.
âWhatâs all this?â she asked amusedly, eyeing the grocery bags he was unloading.
âFood.â
She rolled her eyes. âOk, smartass. What kinds?â
He smirked. âMeat, some vegetables. A bunch of your Cheetos and coffee. I sent Kakarot out to buy all this.â
After Goku graduated, Vegeta had hired him as one of Ouji Entâs purchasers.
âIâm pretty sure thatâs not in his job description,â she grinned, pulling out some of the lighter bags to help her gluttonous husband take the food into the house.
âI am also quite sure he doesnât mind, after he received that large bonus that I approved.â
Bulmaâs smile widened. âOh come on. You realize that the whole thing would probably be spent on his and Chichiâs wedding next month?â
He scoffed. âI am already paying for the wedding cake.â
âAnd that was really nice of you.â
âWhat can I say⌠you made me do it,â he groused as he heaved the last of the bags into his arms, heading for the door with Bulma in tow.
Suddenly he grinned, teeth gleaming with his lascivious smile. âI seem to remember that you had been⌠extremely persuasive that night.â
Bulma flushed, gaping as she stared at him incredulously.
âI- I- I didnât-â she sputtered.
âThat was an extra nice touch, the thing you did with the-â
âVegeta!â
Vegeta threw his head back, laughing raucously in the face of her distress as he began walking towards the house.
Bulma ran after him, face red as a tomato.
âI did not do that to persuade you, you ass-â
âWhatever you say, woman,â he said as he pushed the door open and let them both inside the house.
The mansion was deserted, save for them and the security guards at the gates. All their housekeepers have gone home, as was usual for them every Friday evening. Their household help all had the weekends off, since Vegeta and Bulma preferred to have the entire house to themselves during the weekends.
It was also Vegetaâs chance to have Bulma cook his meals, as for some reason she really could not fathom, he absolutely loved her cooking.
It still puzzled her to high heavens, as she knew that her cooking was mediocre, at best. Nobody other than Vegeta seemed to like it.
She pouted as they went into the kitchen, where Vegeta dropped their bags onto the counter, teasingly placing a kiss on her cheek before turning from her to hunt down the TV remote. She smiled at his back, then started placing their food into the cupboards and the fridge.
It was a comically simple routine, but it was all part of Bulmaâs domestic dreams come to life.
She shook her head at the sight of the cans of his Hetap energy drink, arranging them into the fridge as she heard the television blare to life in the living room.
âBulma,â Vegeta called as he reentered the kitchen. âI almost forgot, Raditz said thanks for those CC shoes you gave Laura. Apparently, the kid loves them and refuses to take them off.â
âOh thatâs great!â she said brightly. âLaunch told me that their little girl doesnât like wearing shoes. I guess the new prototype soles we produced were comfy enough that Laura actually likes them. Iâm gonna tell Marketing to complete their market research so we can mass-produce the shoes.â
She felt his thick, well-muscled arms snake around her waist from behind as she finished arranging the last of the groceries into the cabinets.
She lifted her hands up to grasp his as he rested his hands across her stomach, and their fingers linked together as she leaned back, turning her head slightly so she can gaze at him while he lowered his lips to kiss the side of her neck.
She felt the warmth of his lips contrast with the coolness of the golden chain around her throat as he moved up, leaving small nips and licks until she giggled, and he smiled as he moved so her lips could gently meet his.
She stayed in his arms, luxuriating in his heat, silently feeling him for a few minutes before she took a deep breath.
He felt her inhale, and he asked, âIs everything alright?â
âYeah, why?â
âYou seem a bit⌠anxious. Did anything happen at work?â
She smiled, raising a hand to stroke her crescent necklace, silently asking it for support.
âNothing bad, but I did discover something very important today,â she whispered.
He pulled back, turning her so she faced him, before he wrapped her in his arms again, their hands resting on each otherâs waists.
âWhat? Do you need help?â
âWellâŚâ she started, smiling softly at him. âNot right now⌠but I will probably get a lot needier in the next few months.â
His brows furrowed. âWhat do you mean?â
Her smile widened, before she lifted a hand, taking one of hisâŚ
And very gently, very slowly, laying it across her abdomen.
His eyes widened, hope and disbelief brightening his obsidian orbs as he stuttered at the insinuation.
âBulma?â he breathed. âAre you sayingâŚâ
âIâve been feeling a bit strange, so I did a test at work and discovered that⌠Iâm six weeks along, Vegeta.â
âYouâre⌠Bulma, youâre-â
âYes!â
âYouâre serious?â he asked, face flushing as he watched her smile, tears of joy filling the corners of her eyes.
She nodded. âWeâre gonna be parents, Vegeta!â
âBulma!â he exclaimed, his voice catching slightly as he said her name.
He pulled her close, lifting her off her feet in his excitement, and she laughed, holding him around his neck as he held her tight, his face buried into the crook of her neck.
He let her go, gently dropping her to her feet, as he began frantically asking if she felt ok, if there was anything she neededâŚ
âDo you want me to call the housekeepers in? Do you want to sit down and let me make dinner? Do you want me to buy the actual moon for you?â he asked, and Bulma wasnât quite sure anymore if he was kidding or actually serious.
âIâve got my own moon around my neck, thank you very much,â she laughed. âAnd no⌠I can still make dinner.â
âBulma, anything you want, let me know immediately,â he said, a huge grin splitting his face as he still held her loosely, unable to let her go.
âl will.â
âYou have no idea, I canât even tell you how happy youâve made me,â he said.
She laughed as she watched him, his eyes glued to her stomach as he stared in wonder, no doubt already imagining the child that was growing within her right at that moment.
âI love you, Vegeta,â she whispered, and his sharp eyes flew to hers as his hands tightened their grip around her waist.
He leaned down, his soft breaths fanning over her cheeks as he lowered his lips to hers, giving her a heartfelt kiss that breathed life into her every cell, sustaining her heart, letting her feel how much he treasured her and everything they shared together.
He suddenly lifted her up, and not breaking their kiss, began walking out of the kitchen with her in his embrace.
She wrapped her legs around his waist as he deftly found his way into their bedroom, and he laid her down on the very center of their plush king-sized bed.
He held himself over her, his weight carefully on his hands and knees that surrounded her like a protective cage.
Her heart was in her throat as she stared at him, taking in every line and curve of his gorgeous face, as he lifted his left hand, stroking her cheek.
Her eyes strayed momentarily to the scars adorning his arm: the tiny one from their first night together, and the longer, harsher one from his accident.
Two scars that somehow brought them together, reminding her even more of the things they had endured to finally find their way to each other.
They had won.
âI love you, Bulma,â he whispered, leaning down to kiss her again, and she felt him pour his entire heart and soul into the beautifully intimate contact as his fingers traveled down to undo the buttons on her blouse.
She pulled away from his kiss with a gasp. âWhat about dinner?â she asked, half-jokingly.
âThat can wait,â he smirked, pulling her blouse open and eagerly cupping her soft breasts, making her moan.
As she surrendered once more to his touch, let him ravish her with his love, she couldnât help but agree.
This overwhelming feeling of joy, that she needed to express to him in the deepest way possible, cannot wait.
Dinner could, until much later.
After all, they had plenty of time.
Together, they had forever.
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Annual Writing Self-Evaluation
*All answers should be about works published in 2017.
1. List of works published this year:Â
In the order that they were posted
Fall At My DoorÂ
Collide
Mercedes Boy
The Oldest Magic WordÂ
With a Word (part 2 of FAMD)
Possessing All of Me (part 2 of MB)
It Had To Be YouÂ
One of ManyÂ
Stranded in a Dream
How Fast You Fall
Soft Wings
Has The Ocean Lost Its WayÂ
Splish SplashÂ
Donât Want ShelterÂ
Wasted Like A Memory (part 2 of DWS)
Just Around the CornerÂ
Find You HomeÂ
Sweating âTil My Clothes Come Off
Number 84Â
Let Me In (part 3 of DWS)
Admission
Intention
Resolution
2. Work you are most proud of (and why):
Donât Want Shelter, definitely. The idea for it came to me over a year ago, and that was basically exes to lovers stuck in a hurricane together. I tried to write it earlier in the year and scrapped it. It was a completely different story and they were actually exes, but it just wasnât working. RIP those 10k words. But I set out to write something with more emotion and I wanted to write something different and I feel like I succeeded. Iâm very emotionally attached to their characters in DWS too. Itâs been hard to get my head out of that universe.
Iâm putting the rest under a cut because this got really long.
3. Work you are least proud of (and why):
Soft Wings. It was soooo hard to write at that time. I was just struggling to write anything at all and every single word of that fic was a giant pain in my ass. It was a bday gift and I actually decided not to do gift fics anymore because of how hard it was to write. The last gift fic I wrote was DWS and it was like 2 months late-- sorry about that @justafatbirdonaboat <3
4. A favorite excerpt of your writing:
So, this was actually difficult and I would rather include the sex scene I mention below in question 7, but itâs long and... itâs smut and I feel like dropping it in here with nothing leading up to it or after it takes a lot away from it. This is from DWS:
If he keeps himself busy enough, which heâs fairly successful with, he doesnât have time to think about Harry and how once again he practically laid himself bare for absolutely no reason. Itâll fade, he knows that, but at the same time he doesnât want it to. Itâs how he finds himself going out of his way to some specialty store to find Harryâs organic cinnamon toothpaste. Itâs why he bought some fancy vanilla candle for his bedroom. Heâs fighting with himself over trying to forget and wanting to remember, because he knows that eventually itâll be gone no matter what he wants. The toothpaste will be empty and the candle will burn down, and itâll all become a distant memory.
5. Share or describe a favorite comment you received:
i got a super long and detailed comment on FAMD from one of my favorite drarry authors and bloggers that came at the perfect time when i was feeling really shitty about writing and also life in general. it was such a surreal thing for me because i was reading the comment and it was just super lovely and the whole time i was reading it i was like OMFG and fangirling lol
all of the comments on DWS from people who read it as a WIP. they were like some sort of super fuel for me. and it was... idk a special thing for me. iâve never done a WIP before and idk if I ever will again. it just worked out with that fic because of the chapters and betaing etc. but every time i posted a chapter and people would comment on it, it was just... idk it meant a lot that anyone would follow along, i guess.
6. A time when writing was really, really hard:
Writing Soft Wings, so late May, and then again after I posted DWS, I struggled with Sweating âTil My Clothes come off. That was Reason #14 and literally NO ONE wanted to write that prompt, so I took it. Mainly though, my struggles have been with fics that either Iâve abandoned (the old version of DWS) or my unfinished sci fic au.
7. A scene or character you wrote that surprised you:
i feel like everything i write surprises me. iâm constantly shocked that i write anything at all. i think that most of dws was surprising to me. i had a vague idea of what i wanted their personalities to be like, but the way they ended up was so much better than i thought theyâd be. I MEAN, i legit thought that the entire fic would take place over 3 days and would end when the storm ended! and then the storm ended and i was like... wtf iâm not anywhere near finished with this. and then a scene specifically, umm... thereâs a sex scene in ch 7 of dws that ended up being wayyyyyyyyyyy more emotional for me to write and it still makes me sad to read it. and iâm like 99.999999% sure if youâve read that fic, you know what iâm talking about. i wrote that and immediately was messaging nic like âiâve made myself sad with smut! what is wrong with me?â
8. How did you grow as a writer this year:
iâm much less messy, though iâm still messy. i think i was easier on my beta this year. less cliche (unless iâm cliche on purpose) and better at getting the emotions across? I DONâT KNOW @louandhazaf is better at this stuff. she answered a different question about this earlier in the year actually.
wait. also. i think iâm better at conceptualizing a story BEFORE i start writing. i still suck at it, but not as badly as last year.Â
9. How do you hope to grow next year:
iâd like to write another long fic. iâd like to get better at developing secondary characters. iâd like to write more emotion into my fics. iâd love to be better at outlining and planning fics, but idk if thatâs who i am lolÂ
tbh iâd like to be better at the part of writing that, up until this point, and to a certain point, come naturally to me. i donât think about my characterâs motivations or what theyâre separate stories are or backgrounds and shit like that until iâm writing and sometimes i do it and donât realize iâm doing it? i guess? I DONâT KNOW. coming from a math background and never having written or even taken a creative writing class or anything like that, like... some of the most important aspects of writing, i have no clue about them. at least thatâs how i feel. a lot of what i do is just................. like me flying by the seat of my pants.Â
10. Who was your greatest positive influence this year as a writer (could be another writer or beta or cheerleader or muse etc etc):
this is my answer from last year and iâm just going to leave it because itâs still true.
NIC @louandhazafâ my friend and forever beta. one day weâre going to take over the world. just depends which one of us is in charge of the brain that day as to whether itâs for good or evil.
however, iâll add to this a bit. nic is the best cheerleader and beta and all of that. bouncing ideas around with her is always fun and always productive. we laughed so hard when we were talking about ideas for DWS. like... i think we both laughed so hard we cried.Â
having writer friends -- so all of you -- has been such a positive thing for me. knowing that we all sort of go through the same shit makes it easier when itâs my own lol.Â
specifically, iâll say that @phd-mama influenced me with her fic âfeels like coming homeâ because i read that fic and when i finished i decided that i needed to write something with more emotion behind it, something with a really great (though not necessarily good) back story. the history between her characters in that fic..... idk a lot of it hit home for me. and because of that fic, i wrote DWS. so, thanks <3Â
11. Anything from your real life show up in your writing this year:
ummmm... yes. letâs just say.......... yes.
12. Any new wisdom you can share with other writers:
yes! write what makes you happy, even if that means writing something sad and depressing. but also try to challenge yourself to write things youâre not used to or things you havenât done before. also, just write. you can edit later. put words down.
13. Any projects youâre looking forward to starting (or finishing) in the new year:
my near misses fic, which is what iâll call it until i title it, that i am super excited about (this one just came to me yesterday)
moodboard fic - itâs anon, so i canât say anything other than that. i started it, but i think iâm going to start over.Â
2 time stamps for âdonât want shelterâ. one that takes place the summer theyâre 13, and one that takes place between chapters 8 & 9, but before âlet me inâ
my sci fi au - itâs been kicking my ass for most of this yearÂ
i have a fic idea where they go from friends to lovers, but itâs a long long road to get there. idk if iâll get to it. it would be loooong.Â
i want to do a valentines fic but idk if iâll have time. iâd like my near misses fic to be for valentines, but thatâs a lot of pressure on me and then on my beta.
28 proposals with jess @someonethatsfunny and if we want to do it for an advent fic for next year, i need to at least write a proposal per month.Â
i want to do the new relationship travel the world fic with nic @louandhazaf that weâve talked about co-writing, but we both have so much going on.........Â
oh and the tiny penis fic series. which is 5 short fics that are not connected, but one of them has a tiny penis in each fic (it switches around and also maybe they both do in one fic)
14. Tag three writers/artists whose answers youâd like to read. ;)
I would like to tag all of my writer friends, sooo youâre all tagged. Also, this is more than 3, but idc
@dinosaursmate @allwaswell16 @letsjustsee @gaycousinlarry @goodmorningtoyouuniverse @assisreal (writing or art, saori! or both!) @prettytruthsandlies @someonethatsfunny @phd-mama ok iâll stop tagging so that yâall will have people you can tag lol
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