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The Art of Flashbacks: Using Past Events to Enrich Your Story
In the tapestry of storytelling, the past is not a forgotten thread but a vibrant color that infuses depth and meaning into the narrative. Flashbacks are the writerās brushstrokes, allowing the past to be a living part of the present story. However, the art of using flashbacks goes beyond mere chronological shifts. It involves a thoughtful, deliberate process of weaving past events into theā¦
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#Character Psychology#Character-Centered Flashbacks#Crafting Flashbacks#Emotional Resonance#Flashback Purpose#Flashback Transitions#Flashback Triggers#Flashbacks in Writing#Memory and Meaning#Memory and Time#Narrative Complexity#Narrative Techniques#Past Events in Fiction#Sensory Details#Story Enrichment#Storytelling Craft#Theme Echoes#Unreliable Memory#Writing Tips
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i'm unwell!!! because in stede's eyes, ned low was right!! ned says "he [ed] only likes you because of your bumbling amateur status" and calls stede blackbeard's "pet" just like izzy did in series 1
so stede steps up as a captain, kills the man who harmed his crew, and suddenly, for once in stede's life, he isn't a joke! the gentleman pirate is taken seriously and welcomed into the pirate community!
and what happens less than 24 hours later? ed calls their night together a mistake, AND LEAVES.
yes, obviously the situation is more nuanced, and these old men are once again struggling to communicate, but i 100% understand why stede went a bit of the rails at the end of episode 7. stede's been so focused on trying to help ed, that he's completely ignored his own ongoing identity crisis and trauma, and after the incident at the academy in series 1, this meltdown was long overdue.
#yes he's being a bitch but it's IN CHARACTER#just because you don't agree with his actions doesn't make it bad writing guys c'mon it's good omens 2 all over again#ofmd#ofmd s2 spoilers#our flag means death#stede bonnet#ed x stede#rhys darby#i'm a stede apologist first and a homie second i'm sorry lmaoo#i got so excited when i saw the flashback to him as a little boy bc finally!!! stede's trauma gets to be addressed!!!#edit: HE SLEPT WITH ED TO TAKE THE POISON AND TURN IT INTO POSITIVITY WAIT A SECOND WAIT A FUCKING SECOND
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AURGH auwarghh the autistic parental trauma... the epi was wacky hijinks then dropped this on us out of nowhere... (sobs) laios... laiiiiooooos
#he just like me fr#dungeon meshi#laios touden#actuallyautistic#aphelion.txt#dunmeshi#laios#autism things#im definitely chewing on that marcille lore/angst too but the laios nightmare sequence hit close to home!!#dont think falin had a great relationship with their parents either#i mean aside from being willing to abandon her in the dream. idk if that's 100% accurate to how they acted.#it didnt seem like her affinity for ghosts was gonna go down real good in that flashback#also i need to write that post abt how falin has girl autism (dont ask me what that means unless you want to enter an unskippable cutscene)#actually its pretty easy to hit most dunmeshi chars w the hammer of autism laios is just the most obvious#senshi hyperfixating and having meltdowns (Waterwalk Incident.) and low empathy for people until he's gotten Attached#i need to go find that post someone made about chilchuck being the token allistic it was so fucking funny#i have like 3 more dunmeshi autism metas in my mental queue apparently. please make me shut up
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Tim, buddy, what do you mean you might had accidentally made a Love Child?!
Danny finds out that
1. He's a clonish 'love child' of two heroes
2. He was accidentally created during one of his donors mental break downs after losing his father and best friends (one of which was his other donor)
3. CW interfered before his creator realized what he made and pulled him out of that dimension because "it would had lead that world to true ruin if he found out at his state of mind. He's better now but it would had been the final straw for him should anything had happened to you in his care and given who he had to partner up with later... I did what I had to."
4. Due to Danny having a bad fall out with his parents after he told them about being Phantom (they didn't attack him... but they did disown him.) Danny is left adrift of what to do. He doesn't wanna bug Jazz, she's in college and dorming. Tuckers place has no room. Sam's parents would never let him stay. Vlad was a definitely a no go. And Dani (Ellie) last check in was near the Amazon rainforest.
5. Danny finds out some of his powers might not be as ghostly as he thought... it does explain the huge power boost some of his powers have compared to other ghosts.
6. He went to Clockwork... who proceeded to tell him the truth, smile his cryptic smile while saying "and now. Have fun this time around. I'll see you again in due time Daniel." Before yeeting him into a portal.
7. Danny woke up in his home dimension.... deaged to being five years old (the age he would be if he stayed and grew by now) (DC timeline is slower than DP in this)
8. He woke up apparently his creator's home city... during a Gala (Danny woke up in a garden, dazed and confused. His memories are fuzzy)... and wandered into the party... and apparently he looked like a perfect mix of his.. dads? Which catches A LOT of peoples attention.
9. Especially with Tim Drake-Wayne and Conner Kent-Luthor just announcing they're dating that very night.
10. Rumors and gossip of a random kid, who looks just like the recent happily announced couple, go flying quickly among the elite... and reaches certain ears before it gets to batfam and supers (I have a feeling they learned how to block out rumors and gossips during these events)
11. Those ears happen to be Lex Luthor and Ra's al Ghul (both who are there at the Gala just to annoy and unnerve the Bats and Supers)
12. By the time the rumors get to Tim and Conner, they find Danny almost getting taken away by one of those two.
#danny phantom#danny fenton#dp x dc#blue rambles#crossover#writing ideas#random idea#danny phantom dc#dpxdc#dcxdp#Danny is Tim and Conner's love child clone baby#Tim accidentally made him during his bad year#but due to CW getting Danny out Tim never noticed#Tim would had become a villain should ANYTHING happen to Danny if he knew#and given the fact he teamed up with Ra's later... yeah#Tim doesn't like remembering that year#he later reviews the tapes in the lab he used and found a small glitch in them where Danny was forming only to disappear a second later#when Tim sees Danny he is hit hard with how much he looks like him and Conner and gets flashbacks to his childhood and being at Galas#after DNA is confirmed and tapes are looked at Tim has to confront this old can of worms he tried to forget during his bad year#Conner is a bit conflicted over it#flattered as heck his crush and best friend back then tried cloning him to get him back but... again... he tried cloning him#and accidentally created a love child#who may or may not be now targeted by Ra's and Lex#now Tim and Conner have to parent up to a young Danny whose memories are a little fuzzy#conner kent#tim drake
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What would you all think if I made small mini comics about the skelebros as babybones šš
Like...I would sometimes upload some pages that are self contained mini comics but there would be multiple parts and they would be different but also kind of linear?(also small effort drawings sjdhwkrj)
How does that sound?
They would be complementary to the main comic hehe you don't have to read them but they might bring some insight about certain stuff and also it would be cute to see them as babybones that's always fun
#I wouldn't update it super often since it would be just a little side thing but...uh.#how does it sound?#I just...I've been writing some little scenes and I kind of want to draw them RIGHT NOW#but...if I were to put flashbacks in the main comic that would be until WAAAAAY later on#so...not right now....
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The thing you need to understand about Girl Genius before you consider getting into it is that it's the sort of comic whose authors are 100% willing to pause the action not only mid-scene but mid-dialogue with a little note to the effect of "hey, we need to take a few days to go over our scripts and sort out some potential continuity issues with the back half of this arc, so in the meantime, here's a short non-canon side story to tide you over!", and then it's five months and sixty-seven pages later and that short non-canon side story is still going, and shows absolutely no signs of getting to the point any time soon.
You also need to understand that this isn't a hypothetical example. It's happening right now.
#media#comics#webcomics#girl genius#writing#the short non-canon side story is currently doing a flashback
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oooooOOOOOooooo digital circus upon ye!!!!!!!! (these characters are SO hard to draw ;;) ((Stupid-er doodles under the cut))
I love Cain I swear dsfklksldkflsdkf
#the amazing digital circus#tadc#tadc pomni#tadc jax#tadc caine#wait is that how his name is spelt#tadc ragatha#tadc bubble#this show is very silly :) and incredibly fun to write stupid jokes with the characters haha#also was I the only one who got war flashbacks to md ep 6 during the whole office maze thing.#I thought a sentinal was abt to destroy pomni dslkfjsdklfj#anyway enjoy my doodles :3c#my art#because I forget to tag it lmao
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Small but significant character moments that I actually really adore are from both the times we see the boys as tots. There is a reoccurrence that happens in both of them that I find so incredibly interesting.
For the turtle tot short, Splinter leaves the boys with weapons. In the short, Raph is the one who suggests they do āwhat Lou Jitsu would doā and Leo is the one who takes point when Splinter comes back to reprimand them. Leo, in taking point, is the one to defend them and get Splinter off their tails.
And then, in the flashback regarding the Kuroi YÅroi helmet, Raph is the one who grabs and throws āSkullyā as a way to replace their missing ball which breaks it into pieces, but Leo is the one who speaks for the group and rushes into action to fix the teapot.
I love this for multiple reasons, but the biggest are how it shows that Raph has always been inclined toward the bold and fun and making the plans to include his brothers in what he loves and believes theyād love, whereas Leo has always been inclined to be the āFaceā of the group and shoulder the attention even if itās potentially negative all while coming up with on the spot attempts to fix the situation.
#rottmnt#rise of the teenage mutant ninja turtles#rottmnt raph#rottmnt leo#rise Raph#rise leo#I really do love this bit of character writing a ton#again itās so small but like this is consistent!#little Raph just wanted to have fun with his bros š#Leo immediately coming in with the save both times (and more - remember Bug Busters?)#I really love too how none of them pointed fingers like#it was Understood that Leo would speak for them#listen thereās a reason Leo is the Face Man and itās NOT just because heās got a pretty face#he can talk both himself and his fam out of situations and I wish we saw it even more because itās amazing to witness#circling back to Raph his bold nature is something I ADORE about him but I donāt see it brought up a lot which makes me so sad#like this boy is a RAPHAEL he is bold!!#and itās cute too how the other bros immediately go along with it too#imo the Raph in these tot flashback is the same Raph that glues them all together as a bonding exercise#side note but damnā¦Leo saves them from punishment in the tot short and immediately gets jumped š#but yeah man I think a Lot about the little dynamics between the bros and how those dynamics could have first came into being#Leo being the face of the team and having been it since childhood-#-makes all the moments of immediately choosing to sacrifice himself when HE royally messes up all the more notable#if itās one bro or the whole group individually heās more chill about it but often still lets himself be the talker to get them out of it#he will do his damndest to get his brothers and himself out of trouble but once theyāre in it heās in the front with a smile#his own safety be damned#Raph is actually the same in that respect - heāll jump into danger fists first but all bets are off when a brother is in danger#and like how Leoās been the face - as the eldest Raph has been the de facto leader of sorts#heās the one who is shown to make up their games! and I think thatās very cute#anyway their clashing in the movie is so interesting for a lot of reasons but one of them is that it shows how-#-even a longstanding dynamic like Raph and Leoās thatās WORKED for so long is still susceptible to flawsā¦and to time
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whatever. you know who really deserved to get a glimpse of baby Tenko's life at his home and at his father's abuse via magic memories voodoo bullshit?
this guy.
can't believe Horikoshi Mr Parallels Kohei missed this opportunity.
Dabi would have snatched Tenko out of there and burned that house down so fast. and when Tenko would start crying and questioning why was he so broken that he never deserved to be saved, he would say what Tenko actually didn't deserve was to be treated this way by his family, didn't deserve to be abandoned.
and even if it's late, even if the memories are not real, Touya would have saved Tenko's heart by seeing the unfair hurt inflicted on him and reaching out to save him.
#dabi every time his friends are having a family abuse flashback:#everyone get out of my way my spidey senses are tingling#what was the point of making kotaro and enji THE worst fucking dads on that show#and not even letting touya and tenko bond over this or comfort e/o about it#shigaraki stepping on dabi's dad was better writing than the entirety of the ending#anyway#bnha#boku no hero academia#bnha critical#shigaraki tomura#shimura tenko#dabi#todoroki touya
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āSophie became exactly like Keefe in Stellarluneā
Loud incorrect buzzer
Sophie, beginning in Neverseen and slowly in increasing amounts begins to pick up Keefeās way of speaking/his form of snarkiness/his style of humor because she spends a TON of time around him and our speech patterns are influenced by those around us. Also, she got older and more confident, so a lot of her shyness melted away. But she is the girl sheās always beenājust a lot more confident and making a lot more of the same style of jokes as one of her closest relationships. That is way more realistic than yāall give it credit for
#also! itās explicitly stated in the books many times that Sophie RECOGNIZES sheās behaving more like keefe#on purpose#and appreciates his style of humor as a coping mechanism#like. she SAYS that. in neverseen. in flashback. probably in other places too. oh and I think in stellarlune#YOU DONT have to appreciate it#but Sophie does and Shannon is writing this influence of keefe on his girlfriend very much on purpose#like. it is TOLD to us. idk why yāall are surprised by it#she literally TELLS us sheās being influenced by keefe. in case the showing wasnāt enough for yāall.#but the showing part is what made everyone be like āew Shannon just changed Sophieās personalityā nope! not what happened! Sophie changed#in a very realistic manner#kotlc#keeper of the lost cities#sophie foster#keefe sencen#kotlc stellarlune#shannon messenger
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by god
I CAN'T BELIEVE THEY SOMEHOW MADE ROLLO EVEN MORE OF A MUSTACHE-TWIRLING SATURDAY MORNING CARTOON VILLAIN THAN HE ALREADY WAS IN TWST JP š¤” They deadass had this peepaw lookinā man drop TWO consecutive goofy puns RIGHT AFTER CACKLING ABOUT HIS VICTORY + THE UNTIMELY END OF ALL MAGES AND RIGHT BEFORE PULLING A LEVER THAT SENDS THE NRC BOYS TUMBLING THROUGH A TRAP DOORā¦
HEāS CRINGE, YOUR HONOR š
#twst#twisted wonderland#Rollo Flamme#twst en#twisted wonderland en#disney twisted wonderland#notes from the writing raven#spoilers#Rollo rot#heās cringe but heās OUR cringeā¦#flashback to the first Halloween event when Rook said āomelette du fromageā in EN only#this only adds to his angry wet cat energy#weāre FALL-ing for you
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Classic Literature Sexyperson Tournament; Round 1
propaganda:
Mercutio:
has an article
watch the baz lurhman movie. that's the propaganda.
He is absolutely full of Gender and chaos and frightening narrative awareness for a guy who seems to think (hope?) heās in a comedy until the minute he dies. I love a guy who can prophesy the deaths of his friends while consistently being comic relief.
i mean come on.
I feel like Mercutio fits exactly into the sexy person category. Heās a prince, heās a fighter, he may ambiguously be in love with his besties, hes a silly guy, he dies tragically.
Carmilla:
Um. Vampire. Seductress. Sapphic
#HAHA WAR FLASHBACKS ANYONE?????#first; who's gayer. now; who's sexier#reminder: BE CIVIL!!!!! <3#you can write propaganda and i'll rb it!#tournament poll#classic lit sexyperson bracket#r1c#round 1#romeo and juliet#carmilla
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Curiosity and Puzzle Boxes
It was tiny Tim's first time being 'old' enough to be left home alone without a babysitter, and even though he KNOWS he shouldn't mess or play with some of the things his parents sent home from their digs, he's still a very curious child.
Yeah, maybe playing and later solving that old puzzle box that apparently summoned a powerful eldritch being from a different realm and binded them together until his own death might not have been the brightest thing Tim has done... but at least he's not alone now!
Meanwhile, Danny takes one look at the kid who not only summoned him but solved the puzzle box and sighed to himself, this was the last time he took Tuckers advice on how to escape the dumb Ghost King summonings by creating a 'prove yourself worthy' loophole/puzzle.
Also.. where the heck are your parents kid?!?!?
#danny phantom#danny fenton#dp x dc#crossover#blue rambles#writing ideas#random idea#danny phantom dc#dpxdc#a trope ive seen done before but i wanna throw my idea in the ring as well#baby tim is ghost adopted by danny#tiny tim is smart#but baby too#danny really hoped to get out of summonings#but he didnt take into account of the smarty smart Tim Drake#Danny got uncomfortable flashbacks to his own childhood when he asks Tim where is parents were at.#and he says 'they have more important work to do than be with me.'#Tim meant it as a little business man way to show hes grown up but there is a hint of hurt in his tone#and Danny can hear it and decides to channel his inner Jazz#yep this is his kid now
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Shattered #10 - Happy Birthday, August! Part III
Previous / Masterlist
CW: kidnapped whumpee, captivity (kinda/kinda not), defiant whumpee, whumpee thinks caretaker is a whumper, forced to kidnap references, vampire caretaker, threat of violence/death, weapons, adult language (pls let me know if I've forgotten any!)
AND FINALLY! THE LAST PART FOR AUGUST AND LUCAS' BACKSTORY! š Thank you so much for your guys' patience, with this one - it means everything <3 We resume with our usually scheduled Declan next chapter! š And a mahoosive thank you to @darkthingshappen for her beta and help!
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August feels like a stranger in his own home. A prisoner in his own home; his sanctuary now nothing more than a gilded cage. He is forever and always a captive of his own compassion and a victim of his cowardice.Ā
But August curses himself for daring to think like that. Itās unjust to think like that, especially on a night like tonight. The frantic hammering of a human heartbeat upstairs is his bleak reminder that heās not alone anymore, and yet somehowā¦ heās never felt more alone in his life. The quiet has never screamed so loud, and the walls stretch to endless empty space around him.
For decades, August has been a ghost haunting this house. Lost in the in-between, a nobody with nobody. For decades, August has been at peace with that. Or at least, he had convinced himself that he was - if he dared to admit that the solitude was crippling, then the silence would drag him under and swallow him whole. Contentment was a convenient lie for the last century, but Augustās loneliness is a glaring truth rearing its ugly head. He isnāt ready to face it.
Despair gnaws at his insides, sharper than the bite of the cold nipping his skin. Daylight has been and gone, and now moonlight bleeds through the dusty drapes. The ornate windows have blurred over with swirling white as the blizzard wails like a banshee and rages outside. August waits and waits, the grandfather clock in the corner ticks with a maddening slowness. He waits for something, anything and nothing all at once. He doesnāt know what. His comeuppance, perhaps? A wooden stake plunged straight through his spine?Ā
The human is still hidden away upstairs. Hours have bled by without a sound, not a whisper of movement and not a creak of the floorboard. No doubt he is plotting and scheming, waiting for his perfect chance to strike. Who could blame him? If August were in the human's position, trapped and desperate, the only natural urge for survival would twist his mind too.
August repeats his earlier vow in his mind like a broken record, over and over. When the snowstorm clears, the human will be released, and not a second later. He is a healer, not a gaoler. Every fibre of August's being aches with the need to atone. He will right this wrong no matter the cost.Ā
A sudden chill snakes down August's spine. A different kind of chill than the frosty air that fogs his breath. He snaps around, his eyes zeroing in on the dark figure lurking in the doorway. The human. They hadnāt made a sound, theyād justā¦appeared. Materialised out of thin air. Their sunken-in and bloodshot eyes lock with Augustās in the dim light. His stance is imposing, his demeanour threatening. August feels strangely diminished by the very sight of him, as though heās two inches tall.
"Hungry."
A single grumbled word is all that leaves the human's lips. Barely audible but the demand is crystal clear. Not a beg for scraps or a plea, itās a demand. An attempt to claw back a sliver of control in a situation spiralling wildly out of reach for both of them. The terse delivery, the lack of a complete sentence - it speaks volumes. August isn't worthy of conversation, of any respect or dignity. He isnāt human, afterall - why should he be treated with any humanity?
The realisation eats away at him more than the rumbling of the humanās stomach.
Thatās another thing. August forgets how quickly the humanās digestive system and their metabolism works. Itās a miracle how they live as long as they do. Itās as though the second they swallow, their belly immediately roars for even more. It must be impossible to keep up. August canāt keep up.
"I-I'll see what's in the pantry," August stammers, his voice cracking under the weight of the human's burning stare. "It- It won't be much, but..."
He shuffles towards the kitchen and its meagre cabinets. A can of chicken chunks, a tin of kidney beans, cobwebs and layers of dust line the shelves. The human catches a glimpse of the miserable sight, his expression drops to a mix of disapproval, offence and somehow, something akin to pity.
āIf you plan on keeping me prisoner, you need to feed me, vamp,ā the human snarls with contempt, āThatās human biology 101. Didnāt you claim to be a doc?ā
August's jaw clenches. That hit a raw nerve. He wants to retort, to defend his capabilities, but the accusation lodges itself deep in Augustās gut. He feels a flush of shame and embarrassment fill his cheeks, because the manās words were a bitter truth. How can he call himself a doctor? When all heās responsible for is pain and misery? He canāt even provide basic sustenance.
August finds himself at a loss for words. He canāt even look at the human. Instead he hangs his head and anxiously picks at the skin on his fingers.Ā āI-I ā¦I didnāt p-plan this. Any of this-ā
ā-Food,ā the human makes his demand again. His fuse running short.
āH-Help yourself. You donāt have to ask. Please, just make yourself at home.ā
āThis will never be my home,ā the human spits venomously, his hands balled tight into fists.
āNo - I - I didnāt mean tha-ā
The human tears past August in a huff, his body vibrating with barely contained rage. His shoulder slams into August with deliberate malice. August, however, stands firm and absorbs the shove without a flinch. He watches as the human throws himself at the kitchen with the ferocious hunger of a starved lion. He wrenches the cupboards open with bone-jarring bangs and slams them shut with enough force to rattle the windows.
āSo whatās your plan?ā the human side-eyes August, squatting down to the lower cabinets and flinging them open. Theyāre empty too. They all are, really. He groans in frustration and slams them shut. āEarn my trust to break it? Iāll be a mindless zombie in days?ā
"My plan is to return you to where I found you. As soon as I possibly can. Without hesitation."Ā
āāWithout hesitation?āā the human scoffs, a bitter and humourless laugh, āwhat a fucking joke.ā
He snatches at cans and packets, what few there are that he can get his hands on. He crams a half-empty bag of dry pasta and a tin of peaches into his arms - god knows how long theyļæ½ļæ½ļæ½ve been there. Nothing that constitutes a full meal but his stockpile will stretch to a couple days, at least. August feels a weight settle heavy on his chest at that. He knows with a devastating certainty that the bridge of understanding between them is crumbling away. The human will surely disappear upstairs again, never to be seen. There will be no getting through to him. Strangers, they will remain.
The human fills his arms and races back towards the stairs. August scrambles after him, his voice tight, "Please, can we just talk? Before you-ā
āNO! Don't follow me! Don't talk to me. Don't you dare come anywhere near me. Don't even knock on my door. You want to make good on your promise? I don't want to hear from you or see your face until weāre heading back to human territory. Comprende?!ā
If August had a tail, it would be between his legs. His shoulders slump as he nods solemnly, shamefaced.
āI understand,ā August croaks,Ā āIām so sorry. I wonāt come near you until itās time to go.ā
āNot a moment before, and not a damn second later,ā the human growls with a point of his finger, veins bulging in his neck that August canāt help but notice.
One moment heās there and the next, he disappears up the stairs in a flash. He slams the door like a hormonal teenager and August hears the unmistakable screeching and scraping of furniture being dragged across the room all over again.
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Lucas doesnāt count the days itās been. He doesnāt need nor want to. Even if he tried, the numbers would slip through his fingers like grains of sand. He refuses to be one of those prisoners who scratches tallies into the walls until thereās no space left to etch, until their sanity crumbles to nothing.
Either yesterday, or three days, or a week ago - Lucas can only guess, everyday has turned to mush - the storm knocked out the power lines. The house plunged into pitch-black darkness and stayed that way ever since.
Itās now or never. The vampire or him. Lucas knows no-one is coming to save him. No-one is looking for him. He canāt afford to be the damsel in distress and wait for a saviour or a miracle. The gnawing ache in his stomach and the dwindling rations remind him that his clock is ticking.Ā
Only one of them walks out of this alive.
Lucas grits his teeth, his resolve hardening like steel. He will be the last one standing. He dismantles his barricade, and the stake finds its way back to his palm again. His fingers curl around the splintered, shaved wood. On tip-toes, he sneaks through the shadowed hallway. A too-loud creak of the floor and Lucas freezes on the spot, his ears pricking. When nothing comes of it, he creeps on towards the stairs.
How will it feel? Brief hesitation coils around his gut. His hands turn clammy. How will it feel to take anotherās life? Thereāll be blood on his hands for the rest of his life - maybe guilt will eat him alive. But needs must. If he doesnāt slay the monster, thereāll be no life left to be wracked with guilt. How many countless other lives will this save aside his own?
Lucas holds his breath, cautiously poking his head through the bars of the stairwell railing. In flickering candlelight, the vampire hunches over a worn chessboard. Its face etched with an ageless ennui, it tediously moves the black knight across the squares. Somehow, its pale skin seems even more ghostly in the dim light, but Lucas notices how its dark eyes seem to hold a profound loneliness and deep despair.
The vampire was playing all by itself; the opposing white pieces stood sentinel in their starting positions. A ragged sigh escapes its lips as it captures a white pawn with a languid grace. The victory, if it could be called that, brought no spark of joy or satisfaction to its eyes. The vampire simply reset the captured pawn. And played on.
Lucas watches the vampire, his mind in turmoil. This isnāt what he envisioned; being kidnapped by a vampire. Heād imagined a life of forced subservience, drained for every drop of his blood. He saw himself fighting tooth and nail for a life no longer worth living. A life as livestock, waiting for slaughter. His grip on the stake loosens, and he stares down at it with deep contemplation.
This doesnāt feel like the nightmare Lucas had always feared it would be. This vampire, this monster that stole himā¦ has kept to every promise itās made. Lucas canāt believe that heās admitting that. It hasnāt used persuasion. Why? It would be so easy, like taking candy from a baby. Lucas would have no choice but to grovel at its feet and offer it a drink from his neck. But the vampire hasnāt even tried to feed, claims it doesnāt want to feed. The vampire hasnāt laid a hand on Lucas. Itās given him peace and solitude, food and drink, endless promises to return him to human territory, safe and sound.Ā
A wave of doubt crashes over Lucas. Could he dare to trust the vampireās word?
āCare to joinā¦?ā
Lucas jumps out of his skin. The vampire is looking right at him, its gaze fixed and intense. For a moment, Lucas fears the worst. Has he angered the creature? But as he looks closer, he realises that the vampire's expression was not one of anger. Instead, thereās a raw desperation and longing in its eyes, a look that Lucas had never seen or maybe cared to notice before. He quickly and discreetly shoves the stake into the waistband of his jeans, and grabs the bars of the stairs like the prisoner heās been so convinced he is.
āWhat do I win?ā Lucas calls down. Thereās still hesitation to his voice, an air of stubbornness. Heās not fully prepared to let his guard down just yet.Ā Ā
For the first time, the vampire actually smiles. āBragging rights. I never lose.ā
Lucas hesitates, a mixture of curiosity and trepidation coursing through him. Perhaps this game of chess would help pass the time before he goes back, and maybe, just maybe, it would give him a chance to glimpse into the mind of this vampire. He nods and heads down the stairs as the vampire frantically and meticulously restarts the board.
āIāll let you go first, of course. Give you a headstart. It would be unfair otherwise,ā the vampire lightly teases.
Lucas moves first, his fingers hesitating slightly as he places a white pawn forward. The vampire responds with equal care, its movements precise and deliberate. They play in pregnant silence, the only sound the soft click of the pieces against the board. An eternity and a half passes before the silence is dared to be broken.
āIāve been thinking,ā The vampire ponders, āwhen the power is restored, is there anyone you could call? Just to let somebody know youāre safe? That you will be back as soon as you can?ā
Lucas leans back, his eyes glued to the board, and without looking up, simply replies, "Nope."
āNo-one at all? Not a single soul?ā the vampire presses.
āThatās what nope means, donāt it?ā Lucas takes a pawn, and the vampire uncomfortably shuffles in its chair. āYou know that no-oneās looking, thatās why you chose me, rememberā¦?ā a condescending smirk curls on Lucasās lips. Like he can afford to prod and jibe. Heās feeling more at ease, his confidence growing with each passing moment.
"Anyway. You must be the softest leech going. Either that or you're playing the long game. The self-restraint is mind-boggling... don't you want a bite? Bet the smell is driving you almost cuckoo," Lucas outstretches his arm and waves it underneath the vampire's nose.
Lucas doesn't know how much he even believes what heās saying anymore. His thoughts are a whirlwind. He has been so hellbent on survival, on staying one step ahead of the vampire, that he hadn't had a second to breathe and take a step back to really think about what was happening. He watches the vampire's face closely, searching for any sign of weakness or desire. Is the restraint genuine, or is it just a facade?
Instead the vampireās face falls and it gasps, reaching out for Lucasās wrist, āYour wound-ā
The gash on Lucasā palm is deep, the edges jagged and uneven and the skin around it is inflamed and swollen. Lucas had bigger fish to fry than worrying over a silly little cut, but now he notices it, he feels it throb with dull pain.
āThatās not looking good. Would you let me take a look at it?ā
Lucas quickly retracts his arm and cradles his hand defensively. His eyes narrow. āIf you win. If you win, maybe Iāll let you. But what do I get if I win?ā
The vamp seems satisfied by that. So certain of its inevitable triumph. āI told you. Bragging rights.ā
Lucas isnāt so certain that the vampire will best him. He remembers the long days spent practising his moves against the undefeated champion. His grandpa was tough, but Lucas had always held his own. There were times when he thought he might just be able to beat him, but the old man always managed to pull through.
A flicker of nostalgia and a flicker of grief passes over Lucas's face.Ā āMy grandpa. He was the undefeated champ. But I got pretty damn close on occasion. This will be childsplay.ā
The vampireās face softens, its voice gentle, āIs heā¦still with us?ā
āIf he was, do you think Iād be sleeping rough on some sopping wet cardboard?ā Lucas makes another sharp move, capturing one of the vampireās pieces. Silence fills the air, and Lucas sighs.
āWhy arenāt you using persuasion? You could easily win this. Make me move my knight and the gameās all yours,ā Lucas suggests, shrugging. The vampire lets out a low chuckle, his eyes scanning the board as he calculates his next move. But Lucas's words lingered, a nagging thought in the back of his mind.
āNoā¦but, in all seriousnessā¦why - why arenāt you using persuasion? Like, at all? Iād be powerless to stop you. Iādā¦ be y-yours,ā he stutters. āEntirely at your mercy. You wouldnāt have to follow through on your promise to free me.ā
The vampire's ruby-red eyes widen in shock. Its mouth drops open as though heād been struck. It averts its gaze down to the flickering candlelight.
āWhy would I?ā the vamp laments, āI donāt want to use persuasion. To what aim? Iāve made a promise to you, and I intend to keep it. I value your trust, and I would never do anything to jeopardise it. You deserve your free will. Your choices and your thoughts are, and will always be, your own.ā
āI didnāt choose to be here-ā Lucas' lips respond quicker than his brain can comprehend. He can tell those words cut like a knife to the vampire.Ā
āNoā¦ you didnāt.ā The vampire whispers, its tone heavy with guilt. āAnd that will haunt me for as long as I shall live.ā
Lucas is taken aback. Heād always assumed that vampires were cold, unfeeling monsters - devoid of all emotion. But here, he saw something different. He feels something different. The vampireās words were filled with a mournful regret. He fears heād been too quick to judge, too eager to paint the vampire as a villain. Maybe there is more to this creature than meets the eye.
The wind suddenly picks up outside, it howls and screeches, whipping against the glass. Lucas stares out the window, a chill running down his spine as he watches the snow swirl and fall.
āI hate to say itā¦ I am glad you are here. Not out there tonight,ā the vampire says, watching the blizzard too with a heavy heart.
"Yeah. Me too,ā Lucas mumbles.Ā
"What would you do?ā the vampire frets, dragging itself back to the gameās attention and playing its turn, āIf you were? Where would you go?"Ā Ā
"I...I don't know,ā Lucas shrugs, āLoiter somewhere warm inside until they chuck me out?"Ā
"Is there truly no-one you could go to?"Ā
"No-one. I ā I don't have any family left. And try making friends in a nomadic lifestyle. I'm never in one place long enough to keep friends. And if I'm honest? I'm shocked one of you lot hadn't snapped me up sooner. I was...kinda expecting it."Ā
Every night was a gamble, every morning was a blessing. Lucas always had to be careful, to seek refuge in shadows and find safety in numbers wherever possible. He knew it was coming sooner or later. He was always a sitting duck for a vampire to come along and nab.
āForgive me if I do say, I am glad I was the one to snatch you up. And not another.ā
The walls Lucas put up seem to be slowly knocked down brick by brick. He doesnāt feel like a hunted animal or a captive anymore. He doesnāt feel like he has to look over his shoulder at every turn. It feels almostā¦safe.Ā
āYeahā¦ guess I probably lucked out, huh?āĀ
Silence falls once again, Lucas looks down to the board. But now he sees an opportunity. With a swift and decisive move, Lucas advances his rook, placing the king in check. The vampās king is trapped, cornered by Lucas's pieces.
Thereās no escape. The vampireās face falls as it realises. Lucas has won the game.
āThereās no way-ā the vamp mutters, shaking its head in disbelief. āWell played,ā he concedes, offering a hand out to shake. Lucas takes it readily.Ā
āI - I know we made a deal, but please may I look at your wound?ā the vampire tries its luck.
āFinee,ā Lucas rolls his eyes jovially, āGuess Iām feeling benevolent. Coming off a high from my win.ā
*!*!*!*!*!*!*!*
The human sits on top of the examination table, swinging his legs nervously like a child. His eyes flitter around the room, eyebrows furrowed. Thereās no sign of the destruction and chaos he unleashed last week.Ā
August approaches him and gently lifts the humanās hand, examining the slash across the palm. āThis looks deep,ā he murmurs to himself, turning the humanās hand to different angles and reaching for a bottle of antiseptic.
āLuckily, I donāt think itās infected. Just a bit swollen. I have some antibiotic ointment - neomycin - and weāll dress the wound. Shouldnāt give you too much trouble.ā
As August pours the antiseptic onto the wound, the human flinches and hisses through his teeth. His eyes squeeze shut, snatching his hand away. The sudden movement startles August, who flinches back too, his heart hammering at his ribs.
"Are you alright?" August asks once heās caught his own breath, his voice filled with concern. He tries to appear confident and in control, but the truth is, heās just as nervous as the human.
"Yeah, I'm fine," the human replies, his voice a bit shaky. "It just stung a bit, is all."
August nods, his eyes filled with a strange intensity. "Want to know something?" he asks. The human nods, his own eyes filled with a mix of curiosity and apprehension.
"I used to be terrified of humans," August confesses.
The humanās eyebrows shot up. "You? Scared of humans? A vampire?"
āMy mother spun tales of hunters, mobs, and lynchers. I was taught hell hath no fury like a human. I grew up believing our own blood bags would tear me limb from limb should they grab hold of me. I thought humans were my natural predator."
The human is silent for a moment, his mind racing. "ā¦when it was the other way around," he finally finishes. āIāve lived my entire life in fear of you - of your kind.ā
āMe too. Our practices are cruel-ā
āWhat makes you so different?ā The human cuts in, desperate for answers, āWhy - Why are you being kind to me?ā
August gently applies the ointment to the humanās wounded palm, then a clean bandage securing it with a strip of medical tape. He places a cold compress on the area to help reduce swelling and pain.
āKindness costs nothing, but means everything,ā August explains, āYou were not put on this earth to suffer, or to be my food. Nor would I ever want that. You deserve your freedom -Ā your humanity. I will live my life, and you will live yours.ā
āWhy-Why did you take me? If you never wanted me, if you never wanted this ā¦ why am I here?ā the human croaks, tears brimming in his eyes.Ā
āI was left with no choice, I promise you. I - I took you to save you. My family - they forced my hand. They said they would take you if I didnāt. They would hurt you. They would make your life a living hell. It was the only way I could stop them - It was the only way I could make sure you made it home again-ā
A tear freely rolls down the manās cheek, he quickly swipes it away. āYouā¦You saved me?ā
āIām so sorry it had to happen this way. But I would do it ten times over if it meant I knew you were safe in my hands.ā
The human closes his eyes, and exhales a deep breath of relief. August can see the weight of the world lift from his shoulders. āT-Thank you,ā the human whispers.
āPlease,ā August shakes his head in abnegation, āDonāt thank me. I donāt deserve gratitude. You deserve every apology I could ever utter, and still it would never be enough.ā
August scuttles across the room to his cabinets, rummaging around for the painkillers he knows are hiding in there somewhere.
āAugust?ā
Augustās heart leaps. He stops still, the world stops still. Itās the first time the human has spoken his name. Not vamp, not leech, or monster. August. Itās like music to his ears.
āMyā¦My name is Lucas. Lucas Slater. I - I thought if I gave you my nameā¦ I was giving myself away. But I trust you with my name.ā
Itās not much, but itās more than August could have ever hoped for. It feels like the sun rising after a long, dark winter. His legs feel as if they might give out beneath him, he has to lean against the countertop to steady himself.
āLucas.ā August whispers to himself. He can finally put a name to the stranger.Ā āItās - Itās nice to finally meet you, Lucas.ā
*!*!*!*!*!*
The day finally arrived. The day Lucas had been waiting for was finally here. Hometime. To where or whatever his home is supposed to be. But home has never been just a place to Lucas. Itās always been a feeling, a sense of belonging. This house, that was supposed to be his prison, has become more of a home in this short time than he has ever known in his entire life. The days spent with August felt like a new lease of life, their connection grew day by day. At night, Lucas slept like a baby, without a care in the world. In a toasty bed, and not on cardboard and newspaper. With a warm belly, and no starved rumbling. For the first time, he feels that sense of belonging heās craved.
Heās never belonged anywhere, and neither has August, it seems.
The snow has melted, revealing a landscape that was both familiar and foreign. It looked so much like human territory but felt worlds apart. As they drove through the countryside, Lucas couldn't help but think about all he would leave behind. The vampire's old, dusty house had become his asylum, a place where he felt safe and protected. He had grown to trust August, to rely on him.
Lucas couldn't shake the feeling of dread that had been gnawing at him all morning. He knew his time with August was coming to an end, and the thought of leaving filled him with a sense of loss. He had grown to respect the vampire, more than he ever thought possible. He glances at August in the rearview mirror. His expression is unreadable, dormant. Heād been quiet all morning. He stares absentmindedly out the window, lost in thought. Lucas wonders if August feels the same way. They both live such lonely lives. A nobody with nobody. What if he stayed? Would that be so awful?Ā
They continue driving in silence, the only sound the gentle hum of the carās engine. Lucas watches the road pass them by from the window, edging closer and closer to human territory. Lucas feels his stomach sink. Going āhomeā shouldnāt feel like that. This isnāt right.
"Stop the car," Lucas blurts out.
"You want to get out here? We're still miles away yet!" August queries.
"No, I... I've been thinking," Lucas stammers. "How do you... feel about a new roommate? I guess I'd feel bad leaving you to your lonely, boring self with your dusty, old books."
Lucas silently scolds himself, using his humour as a shield. He lets the mask slip, and his lip wobbles with impending tears.
"I - I have nothing back in human territory. You plucked me from the streets, my cardboard bed, my only possession was a paper cup with a few coins... I'll do anything. Odds are another vampire will find me again in no time and I - I doubt I'll be as lucky to get another one as kind as you - it'd be like lightning striking the same spot twice."
"If you truly wish to stay, you're more than welcome..." August began, his voice soft. "The guest bedroom is yours for the taking, stay as long as you need or want. Please do not stay on my account, or out of fear of me. You truly are free to go."
Lucas hesitates, a thousand what ifās fill his mind. This is quite possibly the most idiotic choice heās ever made, but it just feels right in his gut. Itās the path heās meant to take.Ā "I - god this is so stupid, I barely fucking know you but... I think I trust you. If this kindness is all an act or a game then hey, props to you for keeping it up this long, you deserve to feed off me."
August can't help but smile, a gentle expression that warmed Lucas's heart. "Only if you're absolutely, positively sure. You can change your mind at any time. But...I'd like that. I'd like that a lot."
Lucas takes a deep breath. He rests his head against the window.Ā "Turn the car around. Let's go home."
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Six Years Ago
Part One
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Part Three
Fortunately for them, the kid isn't good at subtlety. When he appears it is usually with a delayed boom announcing his arrival, like a crack of thunder to his lightning. And a hood pulled low over someone's face doesn't mean much when there's only one preteen in the world who can blow a fire out with his bare breath while floating in midair.
Unfortunately for them the kid is fast, see aforementioned "sonic boom". That is not to say Danny could not follow him anyway, but after the eighth time he heads to one of the kid's rescues and he flees before Danny can get a word out, Ellie is sitting at his kitchen counter heating up his leftovers.
"You need to cool it," she says, using her fang to pop open a sapporo. "He doesn't want to be found right now."
"Yeah, I got that." Danny says, swiping the beer out of the hands of what is technically a fourteen year old. She shoots him a scowl as the microwave dings.
"He's a child, and he's sick, Ellie." Even if Frostbite hadn't said as much, it hasn't escaped Danny's notice that in the past two months his speed has ever so slightly slowed. A particularly brave emergency worker had scolded Phantom for scaring him off this time around, concerned about his thin wrists.
"Gee, a sick child runaway, I wonder who that reminds me of," she says, tapping at her chin. She douses the chicken lo mein in sriracha.
"That's different. You knew to come find me, when it got bad. This kid is afraid of me." And he was. Whenever he and Danny met eyes the kid would go pale(r) with fear before zipping away.
"So make him less afraid."
Danny gapes at her. "Gee," he says slowly, a mimicry of her earlier sarcasm. "Why didn't I think of that."
"You're literally stalking the kid right now, you think I don't know about Tucker's alert system? Right now you must seem like the boss monster that shows up at the end of the level," Ellie says. "You need to approach this differently. Go slow, the way you did with me." She pauses, mouth twisting in a way that signals she's about to be reluctantly vulnerable with him.
"I didn't know what it was like to be...cared about. Properly. Before you guys. Even with the memories," she taps her head with the chopsticks, "It didn't click. But you showed me you would be there for me, even as you respected that I needed my space. You taught me how to trust you."
Danny takes a lengthy pull from the bottle he's still holding. "I can't be patient with him, Ellie," he says. He fiddles with the edge of the peeling label. "He's going to get worse."
"Yeah." Ellie says. "And I think you should let him."
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The first time the backpack appears, Jon takes one look at the post-it with the scribbled stylized D and ":)" on it and tosses the whole thing in the trash before taking off.
He does the same the next four times, even as the backpack gets bulkier, its contents crashing together as it hits the nearest available dumpster.
He's in New York City after he saves a window washer from falling twenty stories when he sees his face plastered on a Times Square billboard. A hotdog stand owner in New York City offers him one on the house which he reluctantly accepts, trying to ignore the man's searching gaze.
He's not an idiot. He knows he's starting to look like crap, if the way the people react when they see him means anything. It's not like he smells, he regularly bathes in clean streams and lakes, but even when he eats coconuts and mangos and wild raspberries until his stomach is bursting and he has spent the last five minutes petting a giraffe on the head, feeling so giddy he almost forgets how his family is goneāhe feels...strange. Weaker. The cuts on his side and face from the evil robot with the green eyes have slowly scarred pink, and they still pull and sting if he stretches. Jon's never had a scar before, and now he has six. And he's losing weight.
A lot of the people he meets have been super nice about it, offering him food and, in a particularly cold area of Alaska, a zip up hoodie he now wears over his recognizable family crest. Not that doing so has stopped the white-haired guy from finding him. But it has allowed Jon to move around more freely when he isn't out rescuing people. He even made some cash in Wisconsin cleaning up a grocery store before the night shift manager had recognized his face.
This and the billboard means he stops to buy a pair of cheap glasses and a large t-shirt with the NYC skyline and shorts on it from a tourist shop. After, he takes a bus to New Jersey with the last of his money and changes in the bathroom. He bites back a sniffle when he peels his superhero costume from his body. He's suddenly overcome, poking a finger through the slashes in the side, and spends the rest of the trip with his head buried in his knees, trying to keep his hiccups quiet.
When he exits, he heads to the library he's already visited three times before. It's bad, to develop a routine like this when he is actively being hunted, but he can't help himself any more than he can help the way he sometimes sleeps in that barn in Kansas, the few times he feels like he can actually rest, surrounded by the familiar smell of animal and hay.
As he searches a few more terms that predictably turn up nothing on the public computer, he notes bitterly it's not like the man can't find him anyway. Just because he's backed off doesn't mean he isn't around, silently threatening Jon with randomly appearing backpacks. Each backpack is different too, as if Jon might be taking issue with the color purple rather than the scary guy providing them.
Jon pushes away from desk, waiting for the inevitable wave of despair that hits him after each Google session proves fruitless. He's even, in one moment of lunacy, searched Talia Al Ghul, thinking if anyone can find him after his search pings her servers it's herā
But she never did come.
No one has.
Except for him.
The wave today is muted, lapping at his ankles rather than bowling him over, and somehow the resignation that accompanies it hurts more. He wants to do something, anything, and so he scoots back to the cubicle and types in white haired flying man, d symbol.
This is the first time he learns about Phantom.
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The boy has started taking the backpacks.
Each one is filled with fresh meals in glass tupperware, meant to last for a while even without refrigeration (though with the boy's ice breath, maybe it's not a problem), as well as ziploc baggies filled with pretzels and carrots and goldfish and celery sticks.
("no peanut butter, he might have a nut allergy!"
"Wouldn't that have come up in Frostbite's scan?"
"You think Frostbite would've thought amidst scanning a little boy's half-alien body to check for a peanut allergy?"
"...Fair enough")
Alongside the meals are cash in the form of U.S. dollars, pounds, euros, yen, yuan, and an extreme hail mary in the form of an ATM card that Ellie rolls her eyes at every time Danny packs it.
There is also a miniature first aid kit, sans medicine but including ice and heat packs you can shake to activate. Danny wedges folded clothing in the spare edges of the bag, a blanket, and forces the zipper closed over a pair of high top sneakers similar to the ragged ones the boy wears. He tops every one with the same post-it drawing of his symbol, and a smiley face.
The boy is still weakening, beginning to look like a strong wind could blow him over even as he zips through mudslides in Colombia and scoops a father and son out of a rip current in Italy, but as he accepts the backpacks Danny listens to Ellie and waits.
And then one day Danny is watching him push a bus away from the edge of a sinkhole in Mexico, school kids pressed against the rear windshield watching him, and Danny hears the creaking of his bone right before the kid's arm snaps.
"Okay, fuck this," Danny says into the Fenton comms as the child wails, swooping down to grab the boy with one arm and the bus with the other.
The boy is too stunned to react, sobbing with pain as he cradles his arm protectively, and Danny shamelessly takes advantage of that as he gently but hurriedly places the bus beside the crowd of spectators.
A very small woman who immediately beelined for him as he landed smacks him in the shoulder, hissing at him in Spanish while several people try to hold her back. She smacks him again.
"I'm trying to help him. I promise. Ayuda." Danny says, shifting the boy into a more comfortable bridal carry.
"Ayuda? Help? You, you bad! El pobre niƱo." The woman sneers. "Bad! Ā”Mal Fantasma! Ā”Eres un padre horrible!"
Danny knows what padre means, and even if he didn't, he's heard the rumors and conspiracies (and maybe even leveraged them in a conversation with the U.S. government, who can say) and he doesn't bother denying it, because the truth is he has let this child down from the moment he allowed him to be hunted on Skulker's island, and he deserves every nasty word and more.
"Yeah. I know," he tells the woman. In his ear, Sam demands to know what's happening. The boy is incoherent with pain, the outline of the bone pressing against his skin.
"It's going to be okay," Danny tells him, lifting off the ground. Regret is sour in his gut, bile on his tongue. What was he thinking? In the curl of his arms, the child is so small. This isn't a stray cat one coaxes into their home. This is a terrified little boy.
Danny isn't a fourteen-year-old too young and stupid to recognize he shouldn't let a two-month-old clone explore the world with his blessing. He's twenty-eight. He needs to get a grip.
He needs to be better.
The world stops. Everything goes quiet.
A blue portal unwinds via the hands of time.
"I see you're ready now." Clockwork says to him.
Danny wants to deny it, but the words are stuck in his throat. What use is denying what Clockwork already knows to be true?
"This is the right choice, Danny. Everything will be as it should be. Help him," Clockwork nods at the child. "Then find me."
Danny's tongue unsticks from his mouth. "Only if you tell me. If I do this, will he be safe? Will I have the power to protect him?" An echo of what waits to be unlocked drapes over his words, cracks appearing in the ground at his feet. "Tell me."
"Yes. You will keep him safe. Until he no longer needs you to do so. Here."
With a wave of his staff, a neon green portal rends through the air.
Clockwork drifts back to his own portal. "I will see you in Time, Danny."
Danny nods at him as he leaves, feeling a contract snap into place as time restarts at a crawl.
"Shh kiddo," he says as the boy, gradually unfreezing, trickles tears. "I've got you. You'll be okay. I'm going to fix this. I promise."
He steps through the portal, towards whatever comes next.
Part 5
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I think we Khan do it if we try (dp x dc)
Dannyās well-deserved Sunday of rest was interrupted by the sound of their doorbell ringing throughout the house. With barely a mumble, Danny cracked an eye open, observed it was much too early to be awake, and burrowed back in the covers.
He was brutally ripped away from sleep once again when the stupid doorbell rang again. With a groan, Danny rolled to the side as his brain slowly started to churn again. And with it, he slowly remembered that both Jazz and their parents had said theyād be out for the morning, which meant he was the only one home.
The doorbell rang for the third time, and Danny gave up the idea of out-stubborning whoever was at the front door. Through much effort, he managed to drag himself to the front door, and slam the door open on two older teenager/young adults, with one of them his hand raised and poised to ring a fourth time, and the other holding onto the guyās wrist. Both of them, their eyes wide in surprise.
āWhoās it?ā Danny yawned out as he leaned against the doorframe.
āIs this the residence of Madeleine Walker?ā One of the guys asked, while looking suspiciously around as if he wasnāt expecting a positive answer.
āYeah. Whoāre you,ā Danny mumbled, as he fought to keep his eyes open.Ā
āIām Bruce and I want to learn all that I can from Master Walker,ā The other guy, with the darker hair said.Ā
āDoctor,ā Danny corrected as he rubbed at his eyes, his brain feeling like it was working through molasses. āAnd itās Fenton.ā
The lighter haired guy took over smoothly with a smirk towards the other guy, whoās jaw tightened in a way that couldnāt have been comfortable. āAnton,ā he introduced himself, āIāve come to seek Dr. Fentonās guidance as I have done with masters of the craft from all over the world.ā
Danny squinted as he struggled to make sense of the string of words coming out of the guyās mouth. āWhat, so you guys are, like, exchange students?ā
The lighter-haired guy opened his mouth, only to be elbowed in the gut by the darker-haired dude, but Danny was too busy trying to remember if there had been any talk of an exchange student recently. He knew his parents had considered it and even applied, but the house hadnāt passed muster for the committeeās criteria, which fair enough. Maybe theyād reconsidered? Danny sighed. Whatever, it was too early for this.
āAlright,ā the halfa said. The room his parents had set up was still ready and they had applied. It wouldnāt be too surprising if his parents had forgotten to inform Jazz and him of the newcomers, or just forgotten about them altogether. āAlright come in.ā
āAnd donāt forget to take off your shoes,ā Danny added as he led them into the house, āmom hates when we walk on the carpets with them on.ā
With his back to the two man, Danny missed the alarmed look they gave each other. āMom?ā He could hear one of them whisper to themself.
Weeks later, Danny would come to regret that decision with every fiber of his being.
āMo-om, the exchange students are fighting again!ā
āLeave them be, Jazz,ā
āBut mom, theyāre blocking the way to the bathroom!ā
Danny clenched his eyes shut as he tried to stuff his ears harder.Ā
Still better than the time heād caught them both half-naked and wrestling on their front lawn like a couple of insane people.
#Khan: maybe this suburban decor is meant to be a decoy?#Bruce watching Jack bumble around knocking every single beaker to the floor: genius.#Khan under his breath: why canāt they just live in a cave like all the rest of the martial artists weāve met#Bruce: Omg Khan you canāt just ask someone why they donāt live in a cave!!#I read Batman: Ghost Stories so this is very loosely inspired by that mostly through the flashbacks#basically Ghostmaker/Minhkhoa Khan and Batman/Bruce would compete for teachers while doing the training to be a vigilante thing#and so I figured why couldnāt Maddie Fenton be one of their teacher.#This is crackish#Also first time writing ghostmaker#sorry if itās wonky#ghostmaker#minhkhoa khan#bruce wayne#danny fenton#dc x dp#dp x dc#roxpox#roxpoxwrote#ngl the title makes me crack up I think I need to sleep more#bisexual character
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