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Some may triumph in this, I just feel empathy.
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this definitely mirrors my experience with Hazbin hotel and the amount of loops I used to knot myself into just to explain away why I loved it and why it was perfectā¦ until the series hit and there was this sinking undeniable feeling that I would be losing it forever. Cause at the time I didnāt have the critical community, and saying anything SLIGHTLY critical would make me lose friends lose colleagues lose followers and basic human respect. I began to grow colder distant and tired. I had to let go of it. In a way I guess you could say I havenāt fully. I mean I do own fanmade merch of my only favorite character and I do talk about it still- but you tell me how to drop a hyperfixation then we can talk lol.
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How to properly create a readable referenceā¦ !
Using old pilot reference as an example, Iām here to expand on this to make a turn around sheet that will be more helpful to someone who would be looking at this while animating the designā¦.
1st, get rid of the posing, itās stretching anatomy and complicating the image, how will we be able to see how her shoulders rest if we canāt see her arms down at her sides? Leave poses for a separate page for exaggerated expressions
2nd, giving her a neutral expression can not only help us better balance the thickness of her lashes but also make the eye shape clearer- and where her features should rest naturally when she is calm. Giving the animator a consistent anchor after an especially exaggerated movement of the face. We always must have a proper clear default.
3rd, proper side angle, her arms pinned back slightly to expose her side, showing the animator how the shirt ends at the side or how the lapels connect to the back and wrap around the neck- which can be shown at the back angle too.
4th, proper back angle, you can see I have two set here one where her hair is out of the way and exposing her back while one had the hair fell down, showing us not only how the back of her shirt looks but as well as how her hair would fall- leaving nothing to imagination and guess which could have contributed to animation consistencies to the pilot art style. Preferably we would also have a straight on shot as well, but for space sake I left that out for now.
5th, all are in the same pose and all body parts match up, none of the hand on hip or out in an awkward position. We have to know in animation the BASICS then from there the animator is free to bend it in practical ways but will always know what the rules may be. Itās exactly why so many shows have animation bibles. The more information you feed your animators the more streamlined your project will be. Donāt make the animators work any harder then they already do by guessing what the hell you were going forā¦
6th, add ons, what is the inside of her mouth look? What about a place we canāt see such as her top lid (while also getting a view of what her lashes look like down at half lidded) or the underside of her foot? Leave no place left untold! Remember animation can help give your characters the illusion of living in a 3d environment. They can and will see the underside of them or behind them- work thoroughly.
Whether you are making animation or even a comic, a proper reference is crucial to character consistency as well as a perfect place to add additional information one might not see at first but grow incredibly vital in later drawings.
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guys,, guys,ā¦ itās the Hazbin Mrs. Hellluva boss
canāt wait for people to unironically draw her to really get the h8er that is me. Little do you know I can bait you into it while also being critical of the show š„ŗš°
Anyways is she annoyingly red enough? Does she hit all the markers? :))
bonus: sheās a zombie somehow. I dunno you figure that out on your own.
#hazbin hotel critical#helluva boss critical#spindlehorse critical#vivziepop critique#hazbin critical#hazbin hotel criticism#hazbin hotel critique#helluva boss criticism
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Stolas fans when he HAS to have a baby with Stella due to them needing an heir:
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Stolas fans when Stella is forced to become impregnated and slowly carry the egg before laying it (probably very painfully) and proceed to feed and nurture it when she clearly didnāt want it:
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They are so mad cause they know Stella is a woman and subsequently had it worse in the patriarchy but canāt FATHOM why people care since they are so sexist already having any empathy for a woman even an āevilā one is too high above their IQ points.
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Guys Stella is totally evil see how she's laughing at Stolas while he looks gloomy and hardened/j
Ffs they're just looking for ANY reason to bash Stella and claim she's not a victim when she IS.
Just because she's a bitch doesn't mean she deserved to be forced into a loveless marriage as a teenager either, as well as only being around to be a fucking BABY MAKER.
And from here in the first image it looks like STELLA is the one being iced out seeing as how the light is more focused on Stolas and Octavia, whereas the alt. just has her doing a Cruella laugh with the light on her and Stolas being the one in the dark while Octavia is mixed with the lighting AND the shadow.
(Also love how Stolas is more focused on his sex pawn that is the grimoire than his own daughter who's glaring at him; now THATS a message right there. He's more worried about his precious Blitzy not loving him than his own daughter being mad at him.)
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I thought this interaction and the rough animatorās (Joyark_Toons) response was interesting so I wanted to share it.
So, basically I was scrolling through Instagram and stumbled across Joyarkās portion of what they worked regarding the Helluva Boss episode āGhostfuckers.ā
In the comment section a user asked: āWhat are your thoughts on how problematic Vivzie is????ā
I was kind of impressed Joyark answered the question. But basically this is what they said:
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Thank you. You make me feel sane for hating on vivs artš (she did influence my art in middle school, but now I see all the issues with it)
no problem! I think her art had a lot of bad influence on newer artists simply because at first glance itās appealing and people like you (and me) thought why canāt we just copy it and go from there? Welllll problem is that just copying an artist will lead to you consuming and producing the mistakes they make or not fully grasp why they exaggerated something the way they did. Unfortunately those anime hating art teachers held some truth in their words, just copying right off of another artist without fully understanding the rules of art will lead to getting stuck.
Iāve gotten āstuckā before, my art deformed contorted to the style and gave me a mess where the heads were too big and the proportions too wonky when I could have spent my time understanding anatomy and proper colouring techniques. Of course thereās nothing wrong with just wanting pretty looking art and nothing more but if you want to expand and not hit a ceiling itās better to learn the rules before you break them. Youāll probably learn things you never knew you never knew! Find things about your style you never dreamed you could have drawn before and expand into your OWN person and your OWN artist, instead of being the vivziepop drawalike.
DECONSTRUCTING VIVZIEPOP ARTISTIC ISSUES WE MAY HAVE CONSUMED AS CHILDREN (if her art has improved I havenāt seen but I will give her the benefit of the doubt! So letās just isolate this to the past for US ex hazbin artists to understand where our problems truly began)
Anatomy: Vivziepop has a habit of not properly following even the anatomy of her own drawings let alone anatomy rules at all. I had to bend and meld what I thought a limb may look like from its transition from in front to behind a limb (like the legs) since the lines didnāt properly match up. Arms change size, legs have no knees, one thigh thicker than the other and hands that have fingers which melt into the palms.
you could say itās stylistic, but considering sheās ONLY ever drawing stylistically whether she liked to or not this bad anatomy has become a crutch and down fall. If she wished to draw more realistically I will assume she canāt or canāt anymoreā¦
Hereās a draw over. You can keep the stylistic effects while keeping your anatomy at least somewhat readable, especially the hands š
Shading: shading plays a huge role in not only give us context to the image like where the light source is coming from but also the shapes of the body. the body is comprised of different shapes (cylinders for arms and legs, circles and ovals for head, different planes for the face) with shading like vivziepopās we donāt know where the light is coming from but also the shading blends into the drawing as visual noise, or worse makes things look flat and lifeless. Her legs especially are shaded as if they are two pieces of paper sticking out from under her dress.
Colours: we all know her main appeal in art is her colours, but designing your piece by just how pretty you can make all the colours also is ignoring fundamentals in what makes your art from good to BEST. With too much of one shade your whole piece blends together in the eyes of the viewer. With not enough contrast in the right areas you will have a focal point that bounces around (like us her chest the focal point? Itās the darkest spot on the piece! Or is it all those eyes that clutter up the whole drawing with the random stripes in the backā¦. Ouch! I canāt tell whatās what!)
conclusion: I leave you and others with this quest, you wanna get better at art? Take a moment to critique even your own favourite artists. You can have inspiration of course but question their decisions before blindly hoping on the hype train. Or you could be consuming their own mistakes and end up STUCK, like I was, like many have become.
Give critiquing these pieces a try, deconstruct them, trace them (donāt post) see where the lines match up- do the limbs look as if they existed behind the limb or do they go to a void and come up the other side a completely different size? You tell meā¦
#hazbin hotel critical#helluva boss critical#spindlehorse critical#vivziepop critique#hazbin critical#hazbin hotel criticism#hazbin hotel critique#helluva boss criticism#artists on tumblr
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Revives the diversityā¦
just a small crappy edit- having these all altered made me realize just how amazing it would be to have diversity in literally anything. Not just race but age, weight, noses, skin tone (for white ppl too), anythingā
#hazbin hotel critical#helluva boss critical#spindlehorse critical#vivziepop critique#hazbin critical#hazbin hotel criticism#hazbin hotel critique#helluva boss criticism#I really like the idea of an old man saint Peter who just is sweet and here to have a good time not knowing about the corruption and#Being like :(((
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The inconsistencies continueā¦
green-best to red-worstā¦. Itās almost criminal to not have proper references for what these characters huge ass lashes look like in certain expressions. Letting the animators guess for you cause you couldnāt be arsed to create a consistent reference of any character. Hurts more when you remember this is also animated by underpaid bento box employees and exploited college students.
Now for one of the most inconsistently drawn besides Charlie herself:
Her cheek is there then not, her lips have a cupids bow then not, her eyes are super wide then smaller, her lashes are super long then short or not there. Not seen here but her cheek blush is just as crazy inconsistent as Charlieās. Once again. Is there no draw overs? Someone there to fix storyboards that might confuse the animators or are they given full reign cold turkey? No instructions? I admit Iād go insane.
This isnāt the first time a design proportions change every two seconds in a vivziepopās work. Beelzebub is another contender, being changed with each animator as they struggle and get nowhere near the original proportions set for them by vivziepop's design. And that is no offence to them at all, Iām sure what theyāve been given is nowhere near as thorough as Lackadaisyās sheets.
before anyone tells me Iām a hypocrite because I have a Steven universe icon. Iāve been preaching the same thing before you were born lol. Inconsistencies take the viewer out of the story! It MATTERS. Visually and narratively. Iāll give Hazbin a bit of a break since they probably had the same issue like Steven universe where it was overseas and as to not rock the boat said overseas animators relied heavily on the proportions in storyboardsā¦ but helluva boss really has no excuse whatsoever.
#hazbin hotel critical#helluva boss critical#spindlehorse critical#hazbin hotel critique#hazbin hotel criticism#helluva boss criticism#vivziepop critique#hazbin critical
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After studying HH and HBās character designs, I bring to you the Ultimate Vivziepop Guy Design, where I tried to cram more or less every common trope found in her designs into one fella
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As someone with pretty bad clinical depression, it makes me legitimately sick how they gave Stolas depression so you feel bad for the poor lil birdie despite the fact that he shows NONE of the symptoms of depression. The writers literally just pulled it out of their ass so you feel bad for Stolas. It makes me feel even sicker that he's infantilized. I hate seeing depressed characters infantilized and acting like they are poor precious babies when depressed people are literally just people like everyone else with their own flaws.
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I will admit to give credit where credit is due, Viv somehow made me not like her show with one season.
That episode was literally trying to justify cheating. Aparently "its ok to cheat if your cheating on your wife with a man!"
Like do I have to remind IN THE FIRST EPISODE OF THE SERIES BLITZĆ WAD FINE KILLING A FAMILY WHERE THE MAN CHEATED WITH A WOMAN?
I am tired I dont know HOWWW people can think that this is ok. If ANYONE gets cheated on they CAN BE ANGRY! IT IS NOT FUCKING JUSTIFIABLE AT ALL.
And just like I predicted, they are gonna use Millie being pregnant as a way to grow her character.
Honestly its the double standards and the justifying cheating that makes me hate this.
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WAIT A FUCKING MINUTE
WAIT ONE FUCKING MINUTE
VIVIENNE ARE YOU TRYING TO SAY ITS OKAY FOR A MAN TO CHEAT ON HIS SPOUSE IF ITS WITH ANOTHER MAN BUT IF A WOMAN CHEATS WITH A MAN SHE DESERVES NO MERCY?
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That scene where blitzo is like ānooo we canāt kill this gay man who cheating on his wife because itās Christmas and he looks so happyš„ŗā had me let out the most loudest laugh ever like WOW that is so ironic coming from the guy who literally insulted moxxie back in the murder family episode where he didnāt want to kill Martha family yet the gay couple can get away with it because itās Christmasā¦ļæ¼
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The laziness with fem presenting styles is just as annoying as the masc oneā¦
They all have the same fashion senseā¦ if you think about it most of these outfits could be swapped with maybe a few colour tweaks and you wouldnāt see much of a fashion difference. As if it never even was a consideration in developing their personalities.
Practically the same ā¦ and she is considered royalty or at least someone at pop stardom?
BONUS: Iām sure we have all gotten quite sick of the āXās all over the placeā¦ Cherri, Vaggie, Verosika, Carmine
#hazbin hotel critical#helluva boss critical#helluva boss criticism#hazbin hotel critique#spindlehorse critical#vivziepop critique#hazbin hotel criticism#hazbin critical
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design issues. All the same head š¤
Guess whoās who hellaverse edition! This isnāt altered like someā¦ this is straight traced without the hair horns and tails as to make it clear what the huge problem with these designs are.
they arenāt unique. They are dressed up to look unique but at their base level they are exactly the same design just decorated with a billion bips and bops to give the appearance of diversity. When you get rid of all the visual noise you are left with the same personā¦
personally I was quite offended by this because itās used merely to trick and bully critics. First you canāt use someone who isnāt even in the main cast- second you canāt physically alter those characters body shapes to prove a point. That immediately muddles the evidence to your own benefit. (Vaggieās body does not look like that and they used like the only 3 unique designs- shoving in adam to balance out the white and purposefully deliberately changing their colours)
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